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  1. You know when I wrote this episode, I really didn't think of my love scenes/sex scenes like you compared them Matt. Thanks. Glad you guys enjoyed.
  2. the crazy part is I knew all the answers. wow. I guess I know more about Gl than I thought. I will certainly try this Sunday
  3. Though I don't watch the show I do know about Dolly. This was a story written by B&E To try and compete with Day's outlandish tone at the time.
  4. S.T.E.A.M. Episode:20 Written by: ML Cooks Mike's Pub Mike sits at his own bar and begins to sip on his third tall glass of MGD. Drinking his depressions away. His life is in shambles. Having been suspended from the police force and Jennifer walking out on him, then Ty going after Jenn for himself. Mike continues to drink. "Are you closed?" Mike puts his beer down and turns toward the door to see its Meanwhile, The Descanso Gardens Tyler holds Jennifer in his arms. Jenn "I haven't been held like this in so long...... It feels so good...... Mike never has time for me.... I'm always working in that damn greasy pub." Ty "That is no way to treat a lady. Mike is blind. He's selfish. Jenn I'm telling you I can make your dreams come true. I can offer you a better life. .....Jenn,..".... He says, putting both his hands on her face, so he an look into her eyes. He continues... "I want you." He then draws her into a very deep passionate kiss. Jennifer is loving every moment of it. Ria, in her Honda hangs up her cell phone after getting Dondre's voice mail. Ria then calls Natalia. Ria "Girl Dondre and Sharan got something going on?" Natalia "How do you know?" Ria "Karim was telling me that Dondre was setting up some fancy breakfast for himself and Sharan. He confessed he got feelings for Sharan." Natalia "Wow I can't believe it." Ria "You wont have too because am going to shut it down." Natalia "What do you mean?" Ria "I just called Dre's phone but got no answer so I am going to his house. I told Karim that I was coming over your house to talk about Mark." Natalia "You are treading in hot water. What if some one sees your car at Dondre's house?" Ria "I'm not going to be there long. Just long enough to tell him that I don't want to share him with anyone." Natalia "Ria, you are tripping. How can you tell him something like that and you have Karim?" Ria "I know its sounds crazy. But Natti, girl, I love Dre, and I will not share him with no one....Listen we'll do brunch in the morning. Good luck with Mark tonight." They hang up as Ria pulls up in Dondre's driveway. It's a beautiful woman Mike sees. Mike puts his beer down, gets up and greets her. Mike " Yes,I'm open." Woman "You must be Mike." Mike "How'd you guess?" Woman "This place is called Mike's Pub....It's on the front.... I'm Jodie." Mike "It's nice to meet you Jodie. Very nice indeed." Jodie "It looks like you're feeling good." Mike "I'm sorry. I had a few beers." Jodie "Please don't apologize. I would not mind feeling good myself. I have been on the road all day." Mike grabs Jodie a bottle of MGD. Jodie "So what are we drinking to?" Mike "It's funny you should ask. We're drinking to my miserable life. But no more about my dramas. Tell me about you, pretty. You said you were on the road all day?" Jodie "Yea ...I just got into to town from Cleveland. I have been driving in my car for the past few days." Mike "That sure is a long way. What brings you to Pasadena." Jodie "A fresh start. Far away from Cleveland, where I need to be." Jodie "Sounds like you running away from dramas too." Jodie(smiling) "I guess you can say that." They toast and sip up. Mike "All these beers, I really should put something on my stomach. I had a rough day and no food is not helping. Would you mind some burgers and fries?" Jodie "Sounds great."Mike goes into the kitchen to fix an Amercian Klassic. Natalia gets a knock on her door. She sprays on Chanel' and pushes play on her stereo. The song "Love Scene" by Joe http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2SuCmZHU3dIcomes on. Natalia fixes her lingerie and answers the door. Natalia "Hi baby. I'm so horny for your love." She pulls Mark into the house. They begin to kiss passionately. She puts her hand on his crotch and begins to massage it, erecting it. She unbuttons his pants , unzips his zipper, and pulls out his d!ck. Mark stops the sexual moment by grabbing her arms and he squeezes them. Natalia "Mark you're hurting me. But I like it. I love it rough. Spank Me!, Choke Me! Pull My Hair!" Mark(Shaking her trying to get her attention.) "You are crazy. Let's just get to this and you better release Dahlia. No games Natalia!" Natalia "Relax baby. You can trust me." The Descanso Gardens Tyler moves his mouth onto Jenn's neck. He sucks on it. Jenn is caught up in her feel good moment and she holds Ty tighter, inviting him in, letting Tyler knows she wants him. He grabs her rump and firmly grips it and then he smacks it. They then look into each other's eyes, and kiss passionately once more. Jenn begins to unbutton his shirt as they continue to lip lock under the stars and moon. Natalia's House Natalia "Trust me Baby." She says looking into his eyes, and again stroking his d!ck to make him at ease. Natalia pushes Mark unto the couch. Natalia takes her panties off. "Pu$$y don't fail me now. I gotta turn Mark out. So he don't want nobody else but me and only me." She says to herself as she looks in the mirror, happy and proud as her goal has been achieved. To have Mark's love inside of her. Natalia with her high heels squats over "it" and begins to ride it in a way that Mark will never forget. They both let out moans and ugly faces. Just as, The lights go out at the City Jail. Suga "It looks like your boyfriend didn't save you after all." Dahlia "Look, I did nothing to you. Just leave me alone." Suga "Yea right, I got too much money to loose." Dahlia "Money, ....someone paid you off? I bet it was that dirty Bitch Natalia!" Suga "Bingo!" Suga takes out a knife and stabs Dahlia, 3 times in the stomach. Dahlia clutches her stomach and collapses in pain. Then the crooked guard opens the cell door open, and Suga breaks out of the city jail, leaving stab wound Dahlia behind......
  5. S.T.E.A.M. Episode:19 Written By: ML Cooks Coordinating Producer: Monique Bitches Pasadena City Jail Dahlia is sitting in her jail cell, silently praying that Mark comes up with a way to get her out of jail. Suga still taunts Dahlia by the repetitive whispers of "Kill...Kill...Kill...Ahh..Ahh...Ahh" the infamous quote by Mike Meyers of Halloween. Mark walks over to her cell. Dahlia "Any news?" Mark "Not yet. But sit tight, I have a plan and waiting on a phone call now." Dahlia "Mark you have to hurry. This woman is going to kill me tonight." Mark "Doll, don't worry about it. I am going to get you out of here. Natalia is going to drop the charges." Dahlia "Why?" Mark "Please no questions. Just trust me." Dahlia "The last time I trusted you I walk out and find you kissing Dragon Breath and I get arrested." Mark "Doll, that was not my fault. Listen, I'll be right back." He leaves. Mike's Pub Jennifer pulls Mike back as Ty rubs his jaw. Ty "Is this how you treat all your customers? I'll have to report this to the paper, and the local news." Mike "Go to hell! You are not welcomed here!" Ty "Mike, I think you better relax. You don't know who you are dealing with. You are really pissing me off." Mike "Is that a threat?"Jennifer grabs Mike and pulls him into the kitchen. Jenn "Mike what is wrong with you? You can't treat customers like that! You can't attack Tyler like that." Mike "I don't believe you. Why not Jenn?... Because you have feeling for him? ...Is that it?" Jenn "Oooh,.. My Gosh! Here we go again! How many times do I have to tell you I don't have feelings for Tyler. I am tired of repeating myself." Mike "And I am tired of you always defending Tyler. You don't make sense. First you tell me you don't like the man but yet you always defending that scum. Actions speak louder than words Jenn." Jenn "Whatever Mike!" Mike "I bet it is whatever. Hell you went to see the Bastard last night and forgot to tell me. That says a whole hella of lot Jenn!" Jenn "I am sick of this!" Jenn takes her apron off, throws it at Mike, grabs her purse and storms out the pub. Mike "Jenn!...Wait!..Come Back!..." Mike says coming out the kitchen but Ty gets in his way and blocks him as Jenn skids off in her car. Mike "Get the hell out of my way!" Ty "Let's see,... first I got you suspended, I am about to take Jenn from you, and o yea, your little pub will be next." Mike "Do you think I am going to just stand by and let you ruin my life?" Ty "Yes. I mean what are you going to do? What can you do? Nothing. You're a light weight Mikey Boy...You know what, I think I'll skip dinner. I got a beautiful dessert waiting on me. Thanks Mike." Ty turns around and walks out the pub. Mike is left standing there, distraught. Westwood Park, Natalia's House Natalia is soaking in her bath tub. She fantasizes about Mark making love to her. Natalia grabs her cell phone and calls her good friend Ria. Karim and Ria's House Karim "Ria, what's wrong with you? Why are you so upset?" Ria is saved by her cell phone ringing, Ria answers Ria "Hello?" Natalia "It's Natalia" Ria "Hey Natti girl, how are you?" Natalia "I am better than to be expected. I got Mark coming over in a little bit and we are going to have sex." Ria "You don't play no games do you?" Natalia "I told you I would get what I want. Listen, I will tell you how good it was in the morning." Ria "Ok girl", Natalia hangs up but Ria keeps on talking. "Yea, girl I want to hear all about it. I'll be over in a few."Ria hangs her phone up "Baby, I'm about to go over Natalia's house. She got some gossip on this new man she met today. I have got to go hear it." Karim "Wait, baby, is everything ok?" Ria "Yes it is. Why do you ask that?" Karim "After I told you about Sharan and Dondre, you acted strange." Ria "It's all in your head baby. I think you need some rest. I'll be back in a little while." She kisses him on the lips, throw some joggers on and leaves the house. She gets in her car and begins to call Dondre on her cell phone as she is on her way to his house. Pasadena City Jail Suga continues to taunt Dahlia."Kill, Kill, Kill,...Ahh...Ahh...Ahh" "You better hope your hunky boyfriend bails you out tonight, because once the lights go off I'm going to kill you." Dahlia "You'll never get away with it. We are in jail. There are guards all around." Suga "It helps when you know the right people. I do and tonight, you're going to die." Dahlia begins to pray. Mark is doing pushes up, in his home, which also sits in Westwood Park. Doing push ups, to relieve the stress he is under. Awaiting that call that will change his life forever. Mark wonders how did it ever come to this point. He has to sleep with another woman to free his girlfriend from jail. Natalia is controlling Mark's life. The Lady in Black, Mona pulls up to her mountain side home in Sierra Madre. She unpacks all the things she's collected from Dondre's house. Mona then makes a call on her cell. "I got the DNA, and writing samples from Dondre's, Ty." Ty "Great. Good indeed. Things are slowly falling into place. I got Mike bogged down. So he is no longer a threat. Now its time to distract the Williams family. Call me when you need anything." Mona "The body from your hotel will be identified as me so. So Legally Mona Lisa is dead. The stage has been set to achieve our objective." They hang up. Mona studies Dondre's handwriting. Then she picks up a pen, places a very thin piece of paper over Dondre's handwriting and makes a copy. Then she begins to forge a letter. "Dear Sharan....." Tyler's limo pulls up on Jennifer's car in the Descanso Gardens located in La Canada' Flintridge. Ty gets out of his limo and approaches Jenn's car. He can see Jenn is distraught. Ty opens her door. Ty "Are you ok?" Jenn "Actually,... no I'm not." Ty "Let me make it better. Let me take all that pain away." Jenn looks at him. Then she smiles. Ty "Let me at least hold you. You look like you could use a hug. What's the harm in that? I don't bite." Jenn smiles again. She gets out her car. Closes the door and immediately Ty engulfs her in a hug. Sierra Madre Mona puts the letter into an envelope and seals it up. He writes Sharan's name on it. Mona sits back, lights up a blunt and is at ease at everything she has accomplished thus far. Pushing that woman from the 4th story of TC Hotel Changing the identity of that woman to make it seem that Mona is dead, the alias "The Lady in Black" is using. In Co-hoots with Ty Planted a secret camera to watch her victim Sharan in the shower Struck fear into Kevin by ramming off his car door Stalking Sharan, Kevin and now Dondre Shot Daniel and tried to make it look like suicide Drugged Dondre with a "formula filled" dart then breaking into his house Collected DNA and hand writing samples from Dondre And has now forged a letter to Sharan from Dondre. Mona continues to puff, In a moment with her drug stick, she sees she comes back to realityand begins thinking" It's only a matter of time before I have my Sharan. My Nubian Queen" She says as she watches the video of Sharan taking a shower. She continues with her personal conversation "The pieces are falling into place."........
  6. Could you tell us more about this crossover? or pm me What a CLASSIC cliff hanger. Wow. Talk about being on the edge of your seat. I really hope I don't have to wait long but I can't believe how fast it's going (Ava's trial). Your dialog was really great too. Very witty the last two episodes, I loved Tanisha's xchange with Ginny. I didn't think she would blow his cover. I hope she realizes that Owen may be upset with her. The court scenes were GREAT. I also really loved what London had to say to Leon. I am still disturbed that Lenvy is so non shalant over the fact he is a murder and if Ava, now Lenvy, and Trella know, why didn't he pay for his crimes? Why didn't Ava just go to the police from the giddy up? This was an episode of pure GREATNESS!!
  7. I don't know it's just something about Blue Crystal. I mean the soap opera plot has so many layers and angles, I really enjoy that one. And Like I said, I am really developing a keen interest on Alley/Dylan/Carrie/John and now Vincent. I'ma keep it real, when I first started reading I really didn't care for them and was confused at times at the merry go round that seems to have taken place between them but I don't have that problem no more, and I really find them intriguing now. Let me see what else, Yea Nan surprised me too with the rape thing, I was not expecting her to go there at all. This Alexia /Frank thing has really got me hooked and Tanisha, lol I like her, she's not shy, aggressive and I love aggressive females. GOT triangle has hot chemistry. I love the trio. I am rooting for TO but at the same time wouldn't mind seeing GO.( Ain't these names funny) P.S. Thanks for deleting all those post.
  8. very good first episode, will there be more?
  9. I am really diggin Lowell's storyline. I wonder will he come to GC and cause trouble. Reminds me of Tom. And I can't wait to see what Dru says to Philip, I mean Phylis
  10. Thanks all for the kind words. I got a big surprise coming for Mark/Dahlia/Natalia.
  11. Wow, Frank sure is sick. Another creepy ending. I really Love Carlos/Jenny/and CC and the soap opera storyline. That's proably my fav. And my girl Nan. I love her. I swear she needs to be Natali'a younger sister. I am reallydiggin the Carrie/John/Alley/Dyaln and now Vincent. That is getting pretty interesting as well. The court scenes were great too. So much is going on. I love it.
  12. Whew I can't wait and I am so happy PP won't be gone for long. Y is your blog cutting off some words on the right. have you noticed that? I didn't know this was PP's 4th season.
  13. S.T.E.A.M. Episode:18 Written by: ML Cooks Cooridnating Producer: Monique Bitches In Westwood Park, Karim and Ria's house Ria, wrapping a towel around her, is the first one to exit the bathroom, before Karim, to make sure Dondre is gone. Ria has a sigh of relief when she realizes Dondre has made it out the house. Karim walks up behind her and holds her. Karim "That was a nice shower baby." Ria(turning around to look at her sexxy fiancee) "Yes it was....... Let's light a candle and play a slow tune. I'm in that kind of mood."Ria lays on the bed as Karim finishes lighting up a few candles. He presses play on the cd player and "Turn off the Lights" by Teddy Pendergrass plays. Karim lays on his back in the bed so Ria's can lay her head on his nicely toned chest. Ria "You know, it's been a long time since we did this." Karim "What do you mean?" Ria "Just laying here with you. Feeling your body. Just like we doing now. We don't have a lot of moments like this no more Karim." Karim( Holding her tighter) "Baby I know. I am going to make more time for us. Just as soon as this merger with Sabryn is done." Ria(Disappointed that her fiancee has chosen work over her again, changes the subject) "So how was your day?" Karim "Well you already know how late my brother can be, and today was no exception." Ria "What was his excuse this time?" Karim "You know that barber Dondre who works with Sharan at her shop?" Ria(Very interested) "Uhm... yea, I've seen him a few times. I think I saw him at the hotel party. What about him?" Karim "Kevin tells me that Dondre called Sharan, saying somebody broke in to the shop. So they show up at the shop only to find that Dondre had this fancy breakfast for Sharan. Dondre basically let it be known that he wants to be with Sharan." Ria(Hysterical) "Hell naw. I don't believe this" She says sitting up. Karim ponders Ria's strange reaction. Huntington Memorial Hospital Lauren looks at Daniel's body, hooked up to all the medical devices. Lauren stares at Daniel and begins to go into a daze as the sounds of the medical devices get louder in her head, which leads to a few flash backs,( She remembers how she slapped Daniel several times at the hotel party, then humiliating him in front of the crowd, calling him names and dumping him in front of all the hotel guess) Lauren comes out of her gaze and wipes tears from her face. She pulls up a chair and sits next to Daniel. She holds his hand. "I never wanted this for you Daniel.... This is all Tyler's fault. Getting you involved in his crime syndicate. I promise you, No matter how long it takes. I will seek justice for you. I owe you that much." She wipes more tears from her eyes. "You make it so hard for me to love you.......The drugs have some kind of hold on you....The countless lies and secrets.... But please believe me I never imagined that this could be happening." She gets up, kisses him on the lips and leaves. Mike's Pub Jennifer faces Mike "There you go tripping again. I am tired of repeating myself to you Mike! I love you! That's it that's all. Do you understand that?" Mike smiles as she reaffirms her love for him, well at least she made it sound good. "Yes I understand." He says as he pulls her toward him and hold her. "I love you to."They kiss. Their tender moment is interrupted when they hear the pub door slam shut. They turn around and see Ty. The Lady In Black(Mona), pulls down the street from Dondre's house. Mona puffs on a blunt, in a moment with drugs she sees, she comes out her moment and waits for the lights to go out at Dondre's house. Since it's already 11:55 pm, Mona doesn't have to wait long. The lights go out and that's Mona cue. She puts her blunt out and gets out her all black Mercury Marauder. Blending in the with the darkness easily, with her all black attire, she flawlessly approaches Dondre's house. She looks in side a few windows to see what she can see inside the house. She can Dondre is sleep on a recliner in his living room. The window is cracked and Mona shoots a "formula" filled dart into Dondre's neck. Mona then opens the window even more and climbs into his house. Pasadena City Police Station The Guard escorts Suga back to her cell with Dahlia. Suga stares Dahlia down. Dahlia getting nervous, gets and looks at Mark, down the hall talking to bail bondsmen. Suga "You better hope lover boy comes to your rescue because tonight, I'm going to slice you up." Dahlia does not respond and her heart rate increase. Mark walks over to her Dahlia "What's going on, any luck?" Mark "I'm sorry not yet." Dahlia begins to shed a tear. "Mark you have to get me out of here. Now. Please I am begging you. My cell mate has threaten to slice me up tonight." Mark is stunned at what her hears. "I will get you out of here baby." He walks away, leaving a fearful Dahlia. In the lobby of the police station, Mark tells Natalia to come out side. Natalia "Did you bring me out here to kiss me again?" Mark "NO!....." Natalia "Then what's going on?" Mark ".........To tell you......Yes!. I will have sex with you to free Dahlia." Natalia smiles as her plan to change Marks mind by paying off Suga has worked. Outside the Police Station Natalia(gloating) "I'm sorry, what was that?" Mark "You heard me. Don't play games with me! Yes I will have sex with you, so you can drop these outlandish charges against Dahlia." Natalia "I am glad you came to your senses. I knew you would be a reliable boyfriend to Dahlia. Your so cute." Mark "Whatever. I am only doing this to free Dahlia. She is scared for her life." Natalia "I would be too if I had a cell mate that looked like hers. She looks crazy. But anyway, I need to go home and get ready for our love session. Give me your cell number and I'll call you when I'm done." Mark writes down his number "Don't be all damn day. This is just a random roll in the hay. Nothing fancy. Time is of the essence." Natalia "This is everything for me. I'll call you when I'm ready." She hugs and kisses him, but he shrugs her off. She walks off. Mark pauses for a minute, realizing he just made a deal with the devil. He knows this will come back to haunt him but at the moment, what other choices does he have. Mark walks back inside to reassure Dahlia he is going to come through for her. Mike's Pub Jenn and Mike look upon a smiling Ty. "Can I get some service, or are you just going to be starring at my good looks all night Mr. Ex Cop?" Mike "You dirty Bastard! How dare you show your face here!" Jenn "Mike... what does Ty mean "ex cop"? Ty "Ahh, Mike you haven't told your pretty lady the bad news? I can help you with that. Sorry Jenn, Mike got suspended from the force today." Jenn "What,... Mike why didn't you tell me? Why did you get suspended?" Ty "Don't be embarrassed Mike. Tell her the reason." Mike knocks Ty's smirk off his face, by punching Ty in the jaw. Back at Dondre's House In the quiet darkness, Mona pulls out a few items from a black duffle bag. Using her night vision goggles, Mona collects DNA samples, including fingerprints, and hair samples. Mona even draws a vial of Dondre's blood. Mona puts all the DNA in her duffle bag. She then pulls out an envelope and lays it on Dondre's lap. Mona leaves out the front door and creeps back into her car. She lights up her mary stick and peels off from Dondre's house......
  14. PP has really picked up the pace. Lord Have Mercy. lol Good episode. Trella treats Lenvy or she was speaking of her as if her and Levny were dating. The Palace cafe reminds of The coffee shop on Y&R. Your cast has also exploded as well. I was very suprised about the twist with Jenny going on the soap and only to find out Carlos is the one behind it. I just know CC is up to no good. Bryan sure is a sexxy bad boy. Great casting choice. I also am shocked we are into Ava's trial already. I think it would be nice to see the effects of James wife dying has on James and how much of a scandal it is or should be concerning his job and school and the fact this is light weight James's fault. How long will PP be on hiatus? O yea super creepy ending. Loved it.
  15. Yeah, it's going to be a lot of drama. I promise you that. But at the same time, we are going to be slowing down a tad, to flesh out characters, and storylines. But don't worry, the goods will still be delivered
  16. S.T.E.A.M. Episode:17 Written by: ML Cooks Cooridnating Producer: Monique Bitches Outside Pasadena Police Station Mark "You have lost your mind woman! No I will not have sex with you. I love Dahlia and I am not going to cheat on her or hurt her." Natalia "You can't love her like you say do if your willing to let her sit in jail. I am offering you help, to get Dahlia released." Mark "You're not offering me help. You're black mailing me. I love Dahlia so much , that I will not cheat on her. Case closed. You are a twisted person. I'll find some other way to free Dahlia from these outlandish charges you brought against her." Natalia "Good luck." She says as Mark walks back inside. Natalia thinks to herself(I will find a way to get Mark to sleep with me. On to plan B.) She walks back inside the station to talk with Suga, Dahlia's cell mate. This can't be good.... Huntington Memorial Hospital Ty "What are you talking about Lauren? I am so sick and tired of being falsely accused. " Lauren "If that's how you feel, than don't do the things that you do. You wouldn't have this problem if you just stop all the illegal activities. You can stop all this, by not letting Daniel work for you no more. Stop having him sell drugs. He has become a drug addict because of you! He was doing so good the last time he got out of rehab until you showed up once again. Then it was down hill from there. Daniel can't be you're friend. What kind of friend would let someone go down the wrong path? Now he's in a coma, and we don't know if he will ever wake up. How do you feel about that you snake? Daniel's blood is on your hands." Mike's Pub Jennifer closes her mouth and pull her thoughts together. She thinks fast to get the heat off of her. "I can't believe you asked me that." Mike " I can't believe that I have to ask you. Answer the question, do you have feelings for Tyler?" Jenn "The answer is no. I don't have feelings for Tyler." Mike "Then why did you go to see him behind my back?" Jenn "You make it sound like I am out to get you. It's not like that Mike. I just wanted to see him. What's wrong with that?" Mike "You must be kidding me. He has a thing for you Jenn! By you going to see him, will drive his attraction for you. It may lead him to believe that you actually have feelings for him." Jenn "So what! It don't matter what Tyler thinks. It's about what I think Mike! I am thinking of you. I love you. Stop being insecure about Tyler. You have nothing to worry about." Mike "I wouldn't be so sure..." Treachery Pasadena Police Station A guard unlocks Dahlia's cell, as Mark walks back over to them. Dahlia "I'm being released. Thank God!" Guard "Wrong. I am not here for you. I am here for your cell mate." Suga(Surprised) "Damn, am I being released?" Guard "No! You have a congical visit" Suga smiles and lets the guard escort to the private room. Dahlia " I can't believe this. I thought she was a lesbian. Do they allow lesbian congicals? " Mark "I don't know. Suga is very butch." Dahlia "You're right and she scares me. Mark, please get me out of here." As Mark listens to Dahlia's plea, he thinks of Natalia's offer of sex, for Dahlia's freedom. The Guard pushes Suga into the private room. Suga is surprised to see Natalia. Natalia winks at the Guard "Thanks. I owe you one." The Guard smiles and nods his head. Suga "What is going on?" Natalia "I have on offer you can't refuse." Suga "Do you now? And what is that?" Natalia "I can offer you freedom and 1 million dollars waiting for you." Suga "That's a nice offer. What do I have to do to get it?" Natalia (cheesing really hard) "I thought you'd never asked. Those words warm my soul...." What is Natalia going to pay Suga to do... Huntington Memorial Hospital Tyler (Striking back at Lauren's scolding) "Lauren, I am very sorry for what happened to Daniel and I understand your are in grief. But please think before you speak. I only hear rubbish coming out of your mouth. None of this is my fault. I did not hold a gun to Daniel and tell him to be associated with me. He made that decision on his own. He is his own man. Daniel came to me on his own free will." Lauren "Shut the hell up Tyler!" Ty (Knowing he got under Lauren's skin, laughs) "Thanks for playing Lauren." Ty begins to exit out the room. Lauren "You sorry Bastard!" She picks up a phone and tries to hit Ty but misses and the phone hits the door instead as it closes and Ty is already gone. Mike's Pub Jennifer "What do you mean you're not so sure?" Mike "Now that Tyler is free, he has already told me he's going to take you from me. He wants to be with you Jenn." Jenn "Mike please, Don't start tripping again." She says as she tries to minimize the situation. Unable to contain it, she turns her back toward Mike, and lets out a big smile. Mike "Jenn, do I have anything to be worried about?..."
  17. "It's another intense week" says top scribe ML Cooks. "Mike and Jenn really dig into the fabric of their relationship, it's been a long time coming. There's going to heartbreak, can Jenn and Mike survive Ty trying to come in between them?" "Our mysterious Mona, has begun to stalk Dondre. She goes even further by breaking into his house. What does the dangerous woman have up her sleeve now?" "Suga continues to taunt Dahlia. Dahlia's predicament goes from bad to worse as Natalia teams up with Suga. She wants Mark to make love to her and will stop of nothing to make it happen." -Ria gets upset when She learns Dondre has a thing for Sharan. "Everything is building up for a red letter week next week. It's going to be hot, sexxy and nasty, mixed in with HUGE PLOT TWISTS!!!It can't be missed that's for sure" promises head writer ML Cooks
  18. I am so saddened to find out the PP is ending I didn't know it was on a season run. STEAM is too. Damn what am I going to do? Love all the new characters except Charles "Bad Breathe" Divins. How many eppies are in one season and I am glad that you have had a very successful season. What is Kensington Way? It sounds familiar
  19. S.T.E.A.M. Episode: 16 Written by: ML Cooks Cooridnating Producer:moniquebitches Newly released from jail, Tyler Christopher walks into Huntington Memorial Hospital wearing a suite by S.G. Tyler sees Dr. Doctor Diego Serrano making rounds. He pulls the doctor aside "Diego, can you tell me what room Daniel is in?" Diego " 702." Ty "Thanks man. Can you tell me how he is or what happened?" Diego "No I cannot I'm sorry. It's now a police matter?" Ty "Police?" Diego "If you will excuse me, I am busy" The doctor says walking away from Tyler. A bewildered Ty gets on the elevator to go to the 7th floor. On his way up, he wonders why the police is involved, and for that matter what really happened. Who shot Daniel? Tyler gets off the elevator and walks into room 702. He looks at his right hand man Daniel laying in his hospital bed. He grabs a chair and sits down next to him. He starts talking to a comatose Daniel. "Man, I cannot believe this happening to you. When my contact told me you was shot, I just could not believe it. But here you are. Danny boy, I'm going to find out who did this too you and they will pay with their life. I promise you that. You're like a brother to me and you need to hurry up and come back to life, back to reality." Ty's conversation stops when he hears the door close. "What the hell are you doing here?" Ty stands up and turns around and sees Lauren. In Midtown Pasadena, Jennifer is wiping off tables inside of Mike's Pub. The owner himself walks in. Jennifer sees Mike and walks up to give her sexxy boyfriend a hug. Mike does not return the hug. She looks at him and senses something is wrong. Jenn "Mike what's the matter?" Mike "Why didn't you tell me you went to see Tyler last night?" Jenn is a bit taken aback, not knowing what to say..... Outside of the Pasadena City Police Station Natalia "I will drop the charges against Dahlia, only..if you make love to me. It's that simple." Mark "You are crazy! Do you do this to everyone you first meet?" Natalia "Nope, only you." Mark "You don't even know me. This is the first day we meet and your blackmailing me to sleep with you to get my girlfriend out of jail. This is insane." Natalia "Don't say that baby"(caressing his face)" I want you. I need you. I want to feel you inside of me." Mark "I love Dahlia. We are in a relationship. Having sex with you is not an option. It would destroy her." Natalia " So your going to let Dahlia sit behind bars then?" Treachery Dondre pulls up to "The Jump Off" He gets out his car and walks inside the club just as The Lady in Black, who has been following pulls into the parking lot to further pursue Dondre. Dondre sits at the bar and his good friend Chris greets him. Dondre "What's good Chris?" Chris "Nothing man. Same ol' same ol' " Chris says as he fixes Dondre's usual, a double shot of . The Lady in Black, has crept into the club easily thanks to the dimly lit establishment. She gets close enough to Dondre to over hear his conversation. Dondre downs his shot "Chris it was a crazy day." Chris "Why do say that?" Dondre " I set up a little romantic breakfast for Sharan but Kevin showed up. But I got rid of his punk ass. Then I told Sharan that I had feelings for her." Chris "How did she take it?" Dondre "She in love with Kevin and that's not going to change basically." Chris "I could have told you that." Dondre "After she told me that, I went to Ria's and I was banging her guts out until Karim showed up." Chris "Don't tell me you got caught?" Dondre "Naw man. But it was close." Chris "So what are you going to do about Sharan?" Dondre "I don't know. I just know I want to be with her. I want to settle down with her..." Mona, having heard the entire conversation, has a plan. "Dondre, Victoria and even Kevin are going to help me get my beloved Sharan. I can use Dondre's affair with Ria and his attraction to Sharan to my advantage......." Huntington Memorial Hospital Ty "I beg your pardon" ( Not losing his infamous "Be Cool" attitude) Lauren "Again, since you must be hearing impaired. What the hell are you doing here?" Ty "I heard Daniel was shot and I wanted to see for myself. He is like a brother to me Lauren" Lauren "Daniel tried to commit suicide. Mike called me earlier today to tell me that his,.. Daniel's own prints were on the gun. He tried to take his life because of you. So called brother. Some brother you are." Mike's Pub Mike "You're speechless huh? Did you think I would not find out?" Jenn "There's nothing to find out." Mike "Nothing!.. You went to see the man who made it very clear to you that's he's attracted to you and you didn't tell me. I would not call that nothing!" Jenn "So what I went to see Ty last night?!" Mike "What do you mean by that? " Jenn "I just wanted to find out what happened at his hotel on opening night. I just didn't think he was guilty of pushing that woman from the window." Mike "You're right. He was innocent. DNA proved it. And now I look like an ass. He's taunting me. And you didn't help by taking his side before the evidence even came out. That's really low Jenn. It's like I don't even matter to you. I almost feel stabbed in the back. You're supposed to stand by me, not go behind my back to see Ty. Its very obvious to me now." Jenn "What are you talking abut now?" Mike "You have feelings for Tyler don't you?....."
  20. Damn I can't wait. Peggy is a real Bitch. In the perfect sense, It's like I don't know how u want her to be or how u write her, but to a reader she's not like a Nan Bitch but a uhm how can I say it, A nosy and overstepping type Bitch. Yuck I can't stand her. Thanks for exp laing that tidbit with Ava and nem.
  21. OMG!!!!!!!!I am at a loss for words, GREAT ENDING!!!!Again it was a surprise to me. I was not expecting Trella to find out about Will so soon. So Lenvy doesn't know that Will did this? And if so, why did Ava spill her guts out like that? Peggy is really starting to piss me off. She is so damn annoying. Should James be the one suing and not her. LOL Peggy is crazy Wouldn't it be funny if Dr. Ralma started to black mail Dylan It was good to see Roger Howarth and Kimberlin Brown also as well as Bryton McClure. I am a major fan of his and YES he did deserve that emmy imo!! I just love Nan, she is like a younger Natalia. I was sick to see Charles Divins. I don't blame Tanisha for not wanting to be there with him. I can't believe she kissed, it looks like CD has bad breath. YUCK I am starting to Like Tanisha more and more. I can't wait for the next ep, it is getting so good
  22. WOW I can't believe Laney is Dead. I am shocked as hell!! I can't wait to see what Alexia is going to do and again I am shocked as hell at the developing GOT triangle. I was not expecting that but I can't wait. It's a matter of time b 4 Will is exposed. And again I am going to say again I think it is so strange that Nan and Bryan slept together. And that's all I can say right now.
  23. During S.T.E.A.M.s week long absence, my producers and I have have been hard at work, bringing the best entertainment possible. We will begin to see changes now, two roles have been recast Blair Underwood joins the blog, playing Patriarch of Pasadena's first family, Police Chief Abe Williams. It is a joy and a pleasure to have Mr Underwood joining the cast. The role is now contract as we take Abe in a different direction. In saying that, I regret to inform you that James Reynolds, best known as Abe Carver on Days of our Lives, and I have come to a mutual understanding. "James, wanted to leave when I offered him a contract, sighting his recent health and a desire to focus his first love Days. I am glad because Days need all the help it can right now." Look for Abe's storyline to pick up. Also out is Lauren Romoan, Lauren Woodland In "It was nothing personal" says the HNIC," Again we are taking Lauren in a different direction and I felt that Lauren Woodland would be better suited for they type of material coming up for the character of Lauren. Ms. Woodland is best known for her role as Brittany Hodges on the venerable and my personal favorite, The Young and the Restless. I would also like to take this to time to welcome a new writing consult to my team. I am honored to announce that the extremely talented and gutsy writer, Mr. Ian H, has now join the S.T.E.A.M. team. "Ian was a great fit for the type of storytelling of S.T.E.A.M. Look for his work to debut around episode 28 or so. Again I am also happy to announce that Ian is a newcomer to SON. I really try to stay away from a lot of recycling that has happened here at SON. "You haven't seen nothing yet!!" prmoises headscribe ML Cooks
  24. Glad you liked that explanation Ria gave Karim. My producers were meh on it. LOL, A new episode will pemiere tonight. For some reason I am baffled why you like Suga so much. Keep your eyes glued to Natty/Mark/Dahlia, something is big is about to happen. Also Ty's agenda begins to enfold more and more people. Keep your on him. He may just meet his match very soon.
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