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Very intresting indeed Good choice

another great eppy. Dylan must got some mad connections becuase his friend is violating HIPPA laws It's getting so good. i cant belive Laney is really dead. Again I just love Nan

This was by far the best eppy of PP so far from what I read. So much is going on. I LOVE Carlos and this teen soap thing I thought Alley was already tested along with Carrie, maybe not, but I got a feeling something is going to happen when they go, like run into each other. I love the British accent thing. I could really imagine all that in my head. and that infamous "O Hell NO!! By Tanisha, I loved it. I am in love with Nan. I swear her and Natalia could be sisters. They act SO MUCH ALIKE. It's is so funny how Nan meets Bryan. Trust me when I say that. And I wonder who really is calling Alexia? And again I love the Trella/will/ storyline. Very entertaining eppy Matt.

S.T.E.A.M. Episode:15 Written by: ML Cooks Story Consult: Grand Marquee Coordnating Producer: moniquebitches Pasadena City Jail Ty "This must be my lucky day. Looks like your in trouble Officer Dietz." Mike lets go of his hold on Tyler. He turns around to face his boss ,police Chief Abe Williams. Mike "Chief Williams, how are you sir?" Abe "I was doing fine until I saw what you just did." Mike "Chief, I can explain..." Abe(cutting him off) "There is no explanation for what you just did. You are an officer of the law. We have a duty to protect and serve the people. Not beat up on suspects!..I will give you an explanation for what happens next though..In my office..NOW!" Mike(embarrassed) obeys his boss's order and comply. Abe "Mr Christopher, I am very sorry about that. Are you ok?" Ty(not missing the opportunity to strike at his enemy Mike) "I'll be doing better when I am released since I am being held under false pretenses. Your officer is trying to railroad me. He has it in for me. He's being very unprofessional" Chief "Is that so?" Ty "Yes sir. This is personal for Mike." Abe "I see sir. Well I'll take care of the situation." Abe walks into his office Ty(thinking to himself) "I got that ass. I got Mike right where I want him. His world is about to come down crashing. I'm going to be released soon, and Jennifer here I come......" Across the room, Mark "Dahlia, I promise you I'm going to get you out of here. Please believe that. I will not let you down." Suga( Dahlia's cell mate) "I suggest you do that. Something might happen to her if she keeps on crying." Dahlia(rolling her eyes at Suga) "I know you'll get me out of here. Its your fault why I am in here in the first place." Dahlia looks at the butched, tattooed pierced out Suga. "Please Mark get me out of here" She whisperers in his ear."This chic is scaring me. She gives me chills." Mark "Doll, don't worry. I'm going to get Natalia to drop these insane charges." Mark grabs Natalia by the arm and drags her outside. Westwood Park, Karim and Ria's bedroom Ria "The reason why it smells like sex in here baby, is because well...I really don't know how to say this... It's so embarrassing" Karim "You can tell me anything Ria. You know that." Ria "Ok baby, I am out of breath because I was playing with myself...masturbating..." Under the bed, Dondre tries to hold back his laughter as he listens to Ria's lame excuse to her fiancée. Pasadena City Jail, Abe's Office Abe "Mike why did you have your hands on Mr. Christopher?" Mike "Sir, I lost my temper." Mike "Is that so? You know, Tyler has told me some very interesting things... He tells me that the reasoning for him behind bars is because you are out to get him. You roughing him up certainly drives that point home. Very unprofessional Mike. You are risking a lawsuit against this department.... Why is he here?" Mike "Tampering with evidence at the hotel, and he probably murdered Mona Lisa." Abe "Mona Lisa? That's a strange name." Mike "I have the lab results on my desk sir that will prove everything I am saying." Abe "Innocent until proven guilty. Look at the results now, and get back to me ASAP!" Mike "I'm on it" Is Ty guilty or innocent? Westwood Park, Karim "Baby don't be embarrassed that you play with yourself. I think it's sexxy In fact I am sorry I interrupted." Karim slides his hand onto Ria's muff and massages it Ria(in her head) " I can't let Karim do this. I just had sex with Dondre. I have to get him out of here.." Pasadena Jail Mike grabs the DNA results off his desk and walks over to Tyler's cell. Ty " Did you come back to put your hands on me officer? A very bold man I must say. Dumb too, considering I am suing this place and I'm going to have your job sir. Did you get suspended, fired? Am I being released" Mike "None of the above. I now have in my hand the proof that you killed Mona at your hotel, which I might add I have managed to keep closed since that night." Ty "See, I knew it was personal. Closing my hotel! You must have really gone out your way officer. It's ok though. Pay backs are a Bitch!. I warned you Mike. Go ahead Mike! What are you waiting for? Look at the results so I can shut you down." Mike "Whatever you say Tyler. Just know you need to give up your thoughts on Jennifer. Your going to be in here along time." Ty "We'll see about that." Mike walks away and into the chief 's office he goes. Mike sits down and opens the envelope. And the results are...... Westwood Park Ria gets up, pushing Karim's hand off her muff. "Baby I can't go no more. I'm tired and feel nasty. Let's take a shower together." Karim "That sounds cool baby." He takes his clothes off and he and Ria head to the shower. Dondre comes out from under the bed. He runs out of the house and gets into his car. He drives off. The Lady in Black ( Mona) is following him...... Pasadena Police Station Abe "You know what you have to do Mike. Get to it!" Mike "Yes sir." He says as leaves the chiefs office. He walks over to Ty's cell Ty "The moment we all have been waiting for. Please tell me Mike, will I be making love to Jennifer tonight?" Mike unlocks Ty's cell Mike(In a low voice) "Your free to go Mr. Christopher." Ty "I'll take that as a yes, I will be making love to Jennifer. You'll be too busy looking for a new job." Ty steps out of the cell Ty "This is war Mike. I am about to counter-attack. Watch your back." Abe "Get in my office now Mike!" Ty "Your fired!" He says to Mike laughing in his face and leaving the police station....... Outside the Police Station Mark "You know you are tripping Natalia. You kissed me. Of course Dahlia was going to be upset when she saw us. You and I both know she did not intentionally steal that outfit." Natalia "I don't know that. I don't know her from a Billy or Bob." Mark "You don't know me either but you just came onto me." Natalia " I am glad I did. Your sexxy and a good kisser. I want more." She says as she caresses his chest. Mark "Your crazy! Drop these charges Natalia and stop playing games!" Natalia "O.K. Mark, I'll drop the charges under one condition" Mark "I am almost afraid to ask" Natalia "I will drop the charges against Dahlia only if you make love to me......"

Hello Matt I am so glad to see a few eppies posted in my absence. Another great eppy, GREAT CLIFFHANGER. I really love Nan. I loved how she walked into the café and she cut Ginny off and she called her a Bitch. I am so thrilled that Carlos finally told that ass Quarr off. He is a miserable Bastard for sure. Welcome to California Blake and Laney, stay away from Pasadena, we got a crazed stalker on the loose.

Again I loved the mixer/McGregor scenes. George seems like a shady character. An imposter. He's really selling him self as a polished onion.

Wassup Redd, I have been away but I'm back. Great episode. I really felt Chester should have did or said more than what he did. I mean damn, my wife up and leave like Vette did and I find out she lied, you best belive it's going down when she get back. My wife lied to me and just up and left.I would be super pissed. I really hope we can dig into that a bit more. Then I would be even more insulted by her non shalanting of of what she did. LOL, Vette crazy.... Love the McGregor storyline.

It's been a long time, since I left you, but rest assured ya boy is back. Your late night guilty pleasure will pick up right where we left off, All the sex, catfights, murders and twist will return in tonight's episode. Me and my team have been working very hard on storylines, and it's going to be intense. I also see a lot of new blogs out there that I will mos def check out. Hello to Matt and Redd and all my readers. Thanks for your support and I won't let you down Be prepared to be entertained.

As a writer you're not really supposed to have favorites. These are like all my children, lol BUT, I do enjoy writing for Natlia and Ty and they both have HUGE storylines coming up. They are going to cause a lot of trouble.

S.T.E.A.M. Episode:14 Written by ML Cooks Pasadena City Jail Mark "Dahlia, I am sorry. I didn't mean for any of this to happen." Dahlia "Look at what you've done! You kissed another tramp, and I'm the one who gets thrown in jail. You cheated on me. You need to have your sorry ass in here." Suga "Shut the hell up! Your giving me a headache with this victim role your playing. Isn't it obvious your man don't want you!" Mark "Dahlia, I did not cheat on you!" Dahlia "Then what do you call it? You certainly didn't try to push that hor off of you did you? And the nerve of that Bitch waving good bye and blowing kisses at me. I am going to ring her neck!" Natalia walks in the city jail and she over hears Dahlia last comment. "Not only did you steal from my store, now your threatening to attack me? Well I never!" Mike "Your lying you scum!" Ty "You would like for me to be. But sorry to tell you, I'm not. Don't be mad Mike. Most of all don't be in denial. Your sexxy girlfriend came to see me last night and she told me she don't believe I'm a criminal." Mike "You dirty Bastard! You stay the hell away from Jenn. She is off limits to you!" Ty "Let me help you out officer. Your girlfriend went out of her way to come and see me. She sought me out. I didn't come find her. She came to me. Get logical Mike. I can't see how Pasadena hired such a dumb ass cop. Use common sense." Mike grabs Tyler's shirt through the jail bars, and bangs him up against the bars of the cell door. Just as Mike does that, Police Chief Abe Williams walks in and sees the drama taking place between Mike and Tyler. Westwood Park, Victoria's bedroom Ria lays on the bed, sweating and out of breath as Karim walks in. Karim "Baby are you ok?" Ria "Yes. I just didn't expect you home from work yet." Karim "I wanted to surprise you.... Well I was horny baby. I wanted to get some early evening sugar. Get a love session going on but it already smells like sex in here. Ria what is going on?" Meanwhile Dondre is hiding under the bed listening to the conversation. He thinks to himself. <Ria and I are fenna be caught> Treachery Pasadena Jail Dahlia "Go to hell!! You got a lot of nerve showing your face here. You was kissing my man but yet, look at where I'm at! And what the hell is that smell?" Natalia "You stole a dress from my store. A dress I designed myself....-" Dahlia(cutting Natalia off) "It figures why the dress was ugly." Natalia "It could not have been to ugly if you tried it on! It didn't look right on you anyway. It's simple. You walked out my store with item that was not paid for. That's called theft. You do the crime, now your going to do the time." She says laughing. Dahlia "I walked out that corny ass store after I saw you putting the moves on Mark. You had that filthy mouth on my man. And I figured out what that smell was. It's your breath Bitch! Please put a mask on." Natalia "Mark didn't complain about my breath. In fact, Mark is a good kisser. He knows how to work that tongue." Mark "It was not like that. It didn't happen like that and you know it!" Dahlia "You are one sleazy tramp you know that? I swear to God you are lucky I am behind these bars Natalia!" Natalia "Your right. I am lucky."( She whispers to Dahlia) " Now I can take your man" Dahlia(screaming) "Let me out of here!!!" Exposed! Westwood Park, Karim and Ria's bedroom. Karim "Here you are, bucket naked, in bed, sheets messed up, your out of breath and sweating. sweating. What's going on Ria?" Ria(sweating bullets) "I'm so embarrassed. But I'll tell you what's going on?......" Under the Bed Dondre(thinking to himself) <She's mad crazy. She's about to tell Karim that we been creepin'>..........

S.T.E.A.M. Episode:12 written by: ML Cooks Mark stops Dahlia outside of S.G.Fashion Outlet. Dahlia "I can't believe you kissed her. What is your problem?" Mark "I didn't kiss her. I put my hand out to shake and like I said she just grabbed me and before I knew it she was kissing me. It all happened so fast, right before you came out the dressing room." Dahlia "Yea, o.k. But you two didn't stop kissing until I came out the dressing room!" Natalia walks outside. Dahlia looks at her. "How dare you kiss my man? You knew he was off limits when we walked in the store! You knew we was together!" Natalia (lying) "Look, I'm sorry! But I did not know he was with you. Honestly." Dahlia "Yea right. And I was born last night .We were holding hands and hugged up! How did you not notice that Mark was not my man?" "Dahlia Salem?" Everyone turns around and sees officer Mike Dietz. "That's me, what's going on officer?" Mike "Dahlia Salem put your hands behind you back, you are under arrest." Natalia has a big smile on her face. Mark "Mike there must be a mistake." Mike "Dahlia is being charged with theft." Dahlia "I'm not a thief. I don't steal!" Natalia "Uhm.. Yes you did. You walked out this store with that outfit on and its not paid for. You broke the law." Dahlia is arrested and is put into a cruiser. As Mike drives off, Natalia waves at her. Natalia even has the nerve to blow her a kiss! Mark "You are a devil!" Mark leaves to bail Dahlia out of jail. High Klass Hair Looking into Sharan's pretty brown eyes, Dondre answers her question honestly. "Yes Sharan. I do have feelings for you other than friendship. I'm tired of denying them. I know you are with Kevin, and I've tried to fight the way I feel , but I can't." Sharan immediately feels uncomfortable and moves away from Dondre. "Wow, I didn't know you felt like that. Dondre, you have to know that I love Kevin and nothing is going to change that. " Dondre "Sharan, I don't want this confession to ruin our friendship." Sharan "Dondre, I really don't know. I mean I think it may be odd for you to work here with your attraction toward me. I already told Kevin that you don't harbor feelings for me. But now that's not true." Dondre "What you saying Sharan? You told me to be honest and I did that. Now that you know I have feelings for you, what happens now?" Attack! S.G. Headquarters Sabryn charges after Ashley, grabbing her neck .Sabryn starts to choke Ashley as they land up against a wall. Ashley's faces is turning red, due to her oxygen source being cut and she tries to pry Sabryn's hands from her neck. In a last ditch effort, before passing out, Ashley takes both her hands and yanks Sabryn's hair to the left causing Sabryn's head to tilt. Ashley then takes a fist and begins to bang into Sabryn's cranium repeatedly. Sabryn then releases Ashley's neck to avoid further blunt blows to the brain. Sabryn hijacks Ashley in her knee with her heel of her high heels. Ashley then punches Sabryn with a right and then a left hook. Blood begins to gush from her mouth. Sabryn loses her balance from the two tko's and falls back on her desk. Ashley not wanting to miss the opportunity to an easy victory, and to teach her foe a good lesson, jumps on top of the desk, sitting on Sabryn. Ashley gets a firm grip on Sabryn's head and begins to bash Sabryn's head onto the desk, until Sabryn's passes out, unconscious. Bryan sits at his bar inside his club,"The Jump Off" Part time Bartender Chris greets him. "What will it be boss?" Bryan "Get me a ." Chris "What's going on man? You look stressed out." Bryan "I messed up Chris. Big time. I did something stupid." Chris "You cheated on Sabryn?" Bryan "Yes. And she caught me man. I don't know what I was thinking." Chris "What made you do it then? You always talk about how much you love Sabryn?" Bryan "I was being selfish. Between me running this club, and her at S.G. and all her travels around the globe, we didn't have a lot of 'us' time. And I like to have sex on a nightly. She would be to tired, or to stressed out. Man we would go weeks without having sex." Chris "Maybe you should have talked to her instead of cheating?" Bryan "Chris, I tried. She just wasn't listening. So I met this chic named Ashley. You know,... she was willing to have sex on the regular and I just got caught up with her." Chris "So now what are you going to do?" Bryan "I don't even know Chris. I think I might have lost Sabryn for good" He finishes his beer. In another one of downtown Pasadena's Skyscraper resides Ivory Inc., a cosmetics and fragrance company owned by Kevin Williams, and co owned with his younger brother Karim Williams. Kevin walks into the conference room and sees Karim sitting alone at the table. Karim "Where the hell have you been? I have been fending off this meeting and b.s. for over an hour. You could have at least called man?" Kevin "I apologize Karim. Sharan and I had to sign the contract for the tie in with Sabryn's company. Then get this man. You know Dondre right?" Karim "Yea, the dude who works with Sharan at the shop right? Yea what about him?" Kevin "He calls Sharan's phone as we was leaving S.G. and tells Sharan that there was a break in at the shop. To come find out when we get there, I guess he didn't know I would be coming with Sharan, this nigga had a romantic breakfast set up for he and Sharan." Karim "Word? For real?" Kevin "Yes man." Karim "That sound like an ass whoopin' then man" Kevin "I knocked his ass out and let him know he crossed the line." Karim "And Dondre is still at the shop?" Kevin "Yea man. I am not worried about him. Sharan has reassured me she loves me and I have nothing to worry about. I trust her. You know that." Karim "Yea I know that. But it couldn't be me man. I'd go crazy if someone tried to take Ria away from me...." In West wood Park, Karim and Ria's house Ria slams the phone down. She picks up back up an dials some numbers. Dondre's voice mail comes back on. Damn it Dre! I am tired of hearing your voice mail. What the hell are you doing papi? Karim is at work and I need my kitty played with papi. Please don't keep me waiting any longer." She hangs up and wonders where and what Dondre is doing. High Klass Hair Sharan, reaffirming her securities with Kevin, once again holds the ice pack on Dondre's jaw. "Dre, I'm in love with Kevin. I don't want to hurt you but you have to know my heart belongs to him. I cannot see my self with no one else." Dondre "And I respect that Sharan. That's why I tried to fight these feelings because I know how you feel about Kevin. But Sharan, I can no longer fight this. I know in my heart, I can make you happy. I know Kevin can't and wont be able to love you the way I can. Baby girl I just need a chance to prove it to you. Let me prove to you that I can make you the happiest woman in the world. Will you give me a chance Sharan?" Treachery In Sierra Madre The Lady in Black's phone rings "Hello" "Mona, it's Ty. Is everything going according to plan?" Mona "Everything is falling into place."(She leaves out the part she shot Ty's right hand man Daniel) Ty "Good I will be out of her soon" They hang up.<Yes folks, Ty and The Lady in Black, who now has a name, Mona are Ty working together.> Mona lights up a blunt . In a moment with drugs she sees She comes back to reality and looks at her pit she has dug in her basement. She then looks at a picture of Sharan. "Soon my sweet I will have you, and no one will ever be able to find you.".........

Very great episode Matt. The best I've read yet. I was really PRAYING NAN would stop the wedding. She in the bushes so I don't know what's about to happen. But I love her. I fell in love with her in this episode. She reminds of Natalia on STEAM. And they do look alike. Hmm.. I guess right now I am impartial with the cliffhanger. Although. it is very interesting. I know tension will rise between every one. I was also hoping for more drama between the parents, I love Linda Dano, and "Edmund". But it is also nice they came together for the wedding. And again I cannot wait for the next episode and I hope I don't have to wait long

To Natalia, it's a game, a chess board if you will, To Mark, it's about getting his girlfriend out of jail for something so outlandish And this week For Dahlia, it will be a matter of Life and Death As Suga, makes an attempt on her life! The Lady in Black begins to stalk a new victim.... The DNA results are in this week. Is Ty innocent or guilty of the murder at TC Hotel. The war heats up between Ty and Mike.

Friday, July 6, 2007 S.T.E.A.M. Episode: 13 Written by: ML Cooks High Klass Hair Sharan, removing the ice pack from Dondre's jaw. "Dre, I'm sorry, I'm already happy with Kevin. I don't mean to hurt you and I hope you understand. I also hope this doesn't change our friendship." Dondre "It's cool Sharan, I respect how you feel. If you don't mind, I'm going to take the rest of the day off. My lip is looking ugly." Sharan( Chuckling) "I agree." Dondre "Thank you for the ice pack treatment and the TLC." Sharan "Anytime." Dondre gets out of the barber chair, grabs his cell phone and his belongings and leaves the shop. He looks at his celly, which has been on silent and he sees Ria called 5ive times. Dondre "Bet, it's time to bust a nut after a stressful day." He heads to Ria's house. S.G. Headquarters Ashley stops pounding Sabryn's head into her own desk. Blood begins to drip from Sabryn's head. Ashley gets up off her and dusts herself off. "I hope you die you rotten Bitch!. And if you don't then I hope this teaches you a lesson about that smart ass mouth you got." Ashley, having won round one with Sabryn, gracefully walks out of her foes office. Next mission, to find Bryan. Sex "Yes!....Oh Yes!...Put it in me!....Don't stop!", Ria says in her and Karim's bedroom But only, it's not Karim that is in his bedroom. Ria is laying on her back, with her legs on DONDRE's shoulders as he moves in and out of her. Ria, because it's feeling so good, takes her hands and puts them on Dre's waist and she helps him hump her harder. Dondre's sweat is dripping onto Ria's body. Dondre is really putting in work. He pins her legs down even more by leaning down and licking her nipples. "I'm about to cum papi" Just as she says that, the front door unlocks and opens. Ria "Its Karim!" Dahlia is out in a cell with a butch female inside of Pasadena City Jail. "This isn't fair damn it! I didn't steal anything!" Mike "Dahlia I'm sorry. You were wearing articles of clothing out side of the outlet without paying for it" Dahlia begins to shed tears Butch-Woman "Cry me a freakin' river!" Mike "Suga relax." Dahlia "I just can't believe it. I catch some sleazy skank on my man but yet I am the one who gets arrested. This is insane." Mark finally shows up. Dahlia "You Bastard! This is all your fault!" Treachery S.G.Fashion Outlet Natalia is sitting at the check out counter blowing off her freshly painted nails. She thinks to herself <I could not have planned this better myself. Dahlia walked right into a trap. Now she's in jail and her man is all alone. This is the perfect time to snatch his sexxy ass up.> She grabs her purse, locks the store up and head to the city jail to cause more trouble. Pasadena City Jail Mike walks over to Ty's jail cell Mike "Good evening Mr. Killer" Ty "Go to hell! You have no proof and you won't find none. I didn't kill no one at my own hotel." Mike "My..my..aren't we a bit on edge this evening?" Ty "That usually doesn't happen, but you have me in this cell for no reasons but your own. We both know the real reason I am behind these bars." Mike "Do we now?" Ty "Your jealous and insecure." Mike "Is that right?" Ty "Only you would know but you know it is" Mike "You're right. Only I would know so let me feel you in on a little something. Your locked up because I caught you tampering with evidence, trying to cover up the fact that you pushed that woman out the window. Soon the DNA results will come back and prove it." Ty "It's too bad your girlfriend believes otherwise." Mike( smile decreasing) "Excuse me?" Ty "Well Mister know it all, you seem to know everything, but you don't. I bet you didn't know Jennifer came to see me last night, right here, and she told me she believes I'm innocent. How do you like them apples Officer Dietz?" Ty coolly says with a smirk on his face. Mike's face turns red with anger. Affair "Ria, I'm home baby" Karim says as he closes the front door. Inside the bedroom, Ria and Dondre are looking intensely at each other Ria "Were caught!" Dondre "Yea right! What do we do? I'm not going out like this" Karim slowly opens the bedroom door and sees-..............

That was real slick. Good episode. I just be so mad when it ends. George is obviously up to something. He's now playing games with Cassandra. And I wonder how far Yevette will go to keep Cassandra quiet. Although It's bound to come out any way. I just hope I don't have to wait a long time for another episode.

Hot off the presses, It's Official. Missy Elliot will be joining in on the crazy of Pasadena starting in the very next episode to air. "She plays Suga, and she will be involved with Dahlia and Natalia" Reveals head scribe. ML Cooks. It is said that the role is recurring and will be on-going. No further information was made available. Stay Tuned....

Pretty good episode Matt. Although it was a bit slower, Good build up to the wedding. But i can understand with the parents anf family coming and getting them into the episode. Will any of the family stick around. Hey I live in Ohio too. I love the parents arguing. That was great! I bet Nan is going to stop the wedding. Is she your resisdent villian? This Lenvy, Trella and Will thing is VERY interesting!!

Ahh, I see what your saying. And she does seem more like a Queen's tough girl. I am thinking of recasting a certain role myself.opps, did I just say that here?

Here is a summary of appearances on S.T.E.A.M. In June 2007, 9 episodes were aired Mike..........8 Luaren.......7 Sabryn......7 Ty............6 Daniel.......6 Jenn.........6 Kevin........5 Sharan......5 "LiB"..........4 Abe..........4 Bryan........4 Karim........3 Ria...........3 Natalia......3 Ashely.......3 Dondre......2 Deigo........1 As with any show, I tell stories in cycles, so these numbers will shift dramatically in coming months. ****RUMOR MILL ALERT**** It been has leaked out a big name celebrity will be joining in on the crazy in Pasadena. "An announcement should be made soon" sources close to the story report, who are not authorize to talk to the media and therefore these sources remain anonymous.

I really can't wait for this wedding. I know something big is going to happen. I forgot all about PO5. Wow. I don't know the older people, and I am suprised you recasted trella. I like Sylvnia(sp) in the role. Why the sudden change?

I am very glad about her return. I wish she would come back to the real show though. She really is needed. I feel like LML is using to much white out in her scripts

LOL Me to. Every show needs a good catfight now and again. And belive me, someone will be demolished.

S.T.E.A.M. Monday July 2, 2007 Episode:11 Written by: ML Cooks In Westwood Park, Ashley's House. Ashley is on the phone talking to her sister Alexis, while at the same time cleaning under neath her nails with a butcher knife. "Remember I was telling you about that guy I was seeing... Ryan?" Alexis "Yea...?" Ashley "It turns out that Ryan is not even his real name, and was cheating on me and used me for sex." Alexis "I can't believe that. Are you ok?" Ashley "O yea I'm fine. If I can't have Bryan. I'm going to make sure no one else gets him either." Alexis "You be careful. Maybe you should come here to New York and visit. A little vacation is what you need." Ashley "Soon. Listen I gotta go. Love ya and take care." They hang up and Ashley puts the butcher knife in her purse and leaves her house. Treachery S.G.Fashion Outlet, downtown Pasadena, Natalia grabs Marks hand and pulls his body next to hers and slides her tongue in his mouth. Mark's girlfriend, Dahlia walks out of the dressing room and sees Natalia kissing her man. "Mark what the hell is going on?" Mark pulls away from Natalia. "Dahlia, Natalia just started kissing me. She came up to me introduced herself, I put my hand out to shake, and then she just started kissing me." Dahlia "You were kissing her too. You only stopped because I said something. It did not look like you was trying to stop her from kissing you." Mark "Dahlia, trust me it was not like that!" Dahlia "Go to hell!" She says as she walks out the store. Mark walks outside and follows her. Natalia walks over to Ria Ria "You go girl. You ain't playing no games are you?" Natalia "I get it from you. They say first impressions are everything. I know I made one on Mark. And you know what I'm not done yet." Natalia pulls out her cell phone and makes a call... S.G. Headquarters The song "Love Don't Live Here No More" By Mary J. Blige and Faith Evans fades on the stereo system. Bryan "So what are you saying, you don't love me no more Sabryn?" Sabryn "Are you deaf? Like the song said, you abandoned me, so love don't live here no more!" Bryan "You can't just fall out of love with in one night. Love is not a switch you turn on and off." Sabryn "Yes it is. If it was simple enough for you to cheat on me and lie to me about it, then it is simple enough to not love you no more within a matter of hours. You made it very easy Bryan. My love for you is gone, done, canceled! You have betrayed me, lied to me only Lord knows how many times! You had your mouth and other body parts on and in that cheap skank and then have the nerve to do the same thing to me with no regard!..... You dirty Bastard!..... I hate you and I never want to see your face again! So don't look back, get the hell on!" Bryan "I love you Sabryn and that's not going to change." Sabryn "You didn't love me enough to not of had an affair behind my back. So their can't be too much love there. Now this conversation is over." She picks up the phone and calls security. Bryan "I am not going anywhere with out you Sabryn. You didn't give me a chance to talk or explain anything!" Sabryn "Actions speak louder than words Bryan! You cheated on me! Explain things to your on the side Bitch! Tell her she's no longer the part time lover. Ashley can have you full-time because theirs a vacancy. I quit!" Bryan is grabbed by two security guards and is dragged out of Sabryn's office. "No Wait! Sabryn, I love you. Let me talk to you!" Bryan is thrown out the building. Sabryn sits on her couch and buries her face in her hands and cries her heart out. Suddenly the door slams shut and Sabryn looks up wiping away tears. It's Ashley..... High Klass Hair Kevin sucker punches Dondre in the jaw. Sharan runs up from behind Kevin and pushes him outside. Dondre( getting a grip on things, rubbing his jaw) "Yeah, get yo' punk ass outta here before we bang." Kevin "You won't do nothing" He touts back as he goes outside. Sharan "Kevin I can't believe you hit him." Kevin "What you mean? Sharan he is trying to take you from me. I'm not having that. I have to check that before it gets out of hand." Sharan "No Dondre is not. He told me himself he is not attracted to me. And besides even if he has feelings for me other than friendship, he's wasting his time. I love you! Don't you know that? You have my heart, so don't let Dondre work you like that. And baby he can press charges on you for assault." Kevin "Baby, I'm sorry" He says as he holds her."Are you going to be ok?" Sharan "Yes" Kevin "I need to get to work. Just be careful ok?" He tells her as he kisses her. Kevin gets in his Lexus and heads to Ivory Inc. Sharan walks back inside her shop. "Are you ok Dondre?" Dondre "Yea, I think my jaw is on swoll mode though." Sharan goes to the break room and fixes an ice pack. She tells Dondre to sit in one of the barber chairs so she can apply the ice pack to his jaw. Dondre sits back and enjoys the pampering from Sharan. "You went to a lot of trouble for this little breakfast this morning Dre. Especially for someone who claims they don't have a thing for me." Dondre doesn't respond, so Sharan continues, "Dondre, I'm going to ask you again, and please be honest. Do you have feelings for me other than friendship?" Attack S.G. Headquarters Sabryn (standing up off the couch) "What they hell are you doing here!?" Ashley(walking towards Sabryn's desk) "I just wanted to let you know that Bryan may love you, but I love him." Sabryn(chuckling) "Ok. Good for you. Did you want a prize or something?" Ashley "You know,I am surprised you run your own company with that smart ass mouth you got." Sabryn "I bet you are surprised. I don't imagine you know much of anything. I run a fashion house, this business is not about making friends. So next time don't worry about my mouth or my company." Ashley " oh don't worry I won't. As long as you stay away from my man." Sabryn "Clue! Bryan was mine to begin with and now that I know he's a hor, you can have your hor and now he can assist you at those blue light specials at K-Mart. Two hor's deserve each other." Ashley puts her purse down and walks up in Sabryn's face. "You know, that sharp tongue of yours is going to get you into trouble, maybe even hurt." Sabryn(arching an eyebrow) "I doubt that. Trust me I am not worried. I have not failed or lost at anything thus far and trust,.. the fact will not change. Now you are in my personal space and you need to back the hell up!" She says as she pushes Ashley out of her personal space. Ashley "Don't touch me! Keep your hands off me!" Ashley says pushing Sabryn back. Sabryn then slaps Ashley across the face. Ashley "Bitch!"Ashley slaps her back....Girl Fight!!

Sorry for the confusion, lol. but yea I love Sabryn. She is central to the series. Thanks for reading Matt.

EXCELLENT EPISODE!!!!I hope I don't have to wait long for the next one