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  1. I must say it sounds great and I cant wait to see what develops Cant wait to see who Sami is going to shoot, I bet Will is in the crossfire.
  2. S.T.E.A.M. Episode:10 Written by: ML Cooks In one of downtown Pasadena's Skyscrapers, resides the headquarters, of the fashion house, S.G. by Sabryn Genet. Sabryn is in her office which is on the The 4th floor of the building. Sitting in her revolving chair she looks out her floor to ceiling windows that has a nice view of the city. Sabryn is reminiscing of the events that occurred last night at Bryan's. She sheds a slight tear. Her personal assistant, Gilbert walks in and closes the door behind him. She looks at him and immediately gets up and hugs him as she lets out more tears. Gilbert "It's ok sweetie." Sabryn "It hurts so bad." Gilbert "I know. I know all about it." He says as he holds her tighter. Sabryn "Once again I was lied too. I was deceived. I got my heart broken again. WHY!!?? Another man has cheated on me. Bryan played me like a fool. Gilbert he promised me wouldn't hurt me. But yet he did. How could I be so stupid?" Gilbert "Well you know what they say, you live and learn." Sabryn (wiping away her tears) "Your right and I have learned a lot. TRUST NO ONE! That's for damn sure. The world is full of liars, and cheaters and people wonder why I am so cold hearted. I can't let no one get close to me Gilbert. Never ever again." Gilbert "I can understand that but don't become a recluse. Don't end up alone and miserable. I mean protect your heart of course but don't shut your self down." Their conversation is interrupted by a "Can we talk?" Sabryn and Gilbert look over by the door way to see its........ In Midtown Pasadena, at Sharan's High Klass Hair Dondre finishes setting up the breakfast table for Sharan. "Perfect. Let me go brush my teeth before the sweet lady arrives." He says pulling out his tooth brush and heading to the back. Meanwhile Sharan pulls up in her car, with- Kevin! They both get out the car Kevin "Let me go inside. The intruder might still be inside. Call my dad for me." Kevin slowly walks in side the beauty shop and is surprised to see the breakfast table. S.G. Sabryn "I can't believe you got the nerve to show your disgraceful face to my office. If your not talking any business that relates to benefiting my company, I suggest you leave now!" Gilbert steps out of the room. Bryan "Sabryn please don't do this. I love you!" Sabryn "Please my ass! You are so pathetic! Love should have brought your ass to that party last night! You love your self." Bryan' "Sabryn I am sorry!" Sabryn "You said a mouthful their. Indeed you are. A sorry Bastard!" Bryan "Sabryn, please can we talk civilized?" Sabryn( Pausing to think about it, then begins to nod her head) "Yes, we can talk" Bryan( Surprised) "We can?" Sabryn "Sure can and I have a lot to say, about my feelings for you." Bryan continues to be stunned. High Klass Hair Kevin and Sharan both look at the breakfast table. Sharan "What is going on?" Kevin "Didn't you say Dondre called you and told you that somebody broke in?" Sharan "Yes." Kevin "It don't look like no one broke in." Sharan "You right." Kevin "It looks like Dondre has something up his sleeve." Just as Kevin says that Dondre walks out from the back and he stop dead in his tracks upon seeing his lady, but she brought Kevin. Kevin "Wasn't expecting me was you Dondre? I guess we know who sent those roses Sharan?" Back at S.G. Bryan "Well I'm glad you want to talk Sabryn so I can explain things." He says as he is about to sit down. Sabryn "No, don't sit. You won't be here that long. You see, I'm going to do the talking. You had a year to talk to me but all you fed me was lies and b.s. and I am not for that no more. It's time you listen to me for once. Loud and clear." She pulls out a remote and presses a button and a big screen TV slides down from the ceiling. She pushes another button and two speakers slide down on each side of the big screen. The song "Love Don't Live Here No More" by Mary J. Blige and Faith Evans begins to play. Sabryn "Listen carefully to the song while I call security. Its very simple Bryan. It's over and I mean that." High Klass Hair Kevin "So Dondre where is this break you called Sharan about? It doesn't look like anything is wrong....Wait.. I take that back. Yes it does. It looks like you planned to romance my woman for breakfast." Dondre "That's until you showed up." Sharan and Kevin are both caught off guard with Dondre's bluntness. Kevin laughs "It's a good thing I did, and those pink roses , please man don't wast your money no more. They went straight to the trash"He says lying to Dondre. Dondre "Nigga please. I don't do pink and if I did send roses they would be red you dummy." Kevin begins to get agitated .He walks up in Dondre's face. Kevin "I see the way you be looking at Sharan. Let me help you out playa, lay your eyes elsewhere. Sharan is mine and we love each other. So stop the attempts to take her from me." Dondre "You straight trippin dude! I don't attempt anything. I get what I want and I do what comes natural to me to make it happen. If I want Sharan, which I do, I will simply take her from you." Kevin sucker punches Dondre in the jaw. S.G. Fashion Outlet Natalia approaches the sexxy man who's girlfriend walks inside the dressing room to try on an out fit. Natalia "How are you sexxy? Oops, I mean I'm Natalia, the manger here, may I help you with something?" It's nice to met you Natalia, I'm Mark." He puts his hand out to shake but she pulls his body next to hers and plants a kiss on him just as his girlfriend walks out the dressing room.
  3. very good episode Matt. I can't wait for the wedding. I know something or someone will stop it. Can't wait for that. I am also interested on this Tanisha and Owen thing. I love Devvetta Sherwood. They do look good together. Any way I can't wait till the next episode
  4. This week we will meet Sabryn's personal assistant over at S.G. Gilbert, will be played by Blake Berris. Blake has agreed to appear on S.T.E.A.M. since the roll is minor and recurring, so schedule conflicts with Days was very minor. Expect to see Blake show more of his feminine side in this role. Also joining the cast this week will be Ashely's sister, Alexis, being played Days Alumni Alexis Thorpe. The role is recurring as well, but the headscribe hints that this role will be on going. "I am honored to be playing a role that was created just for me" The actress was quoted as saying." ML called me up and said he was a major fan of my stint on Days and wanted me to be on his show. So here I am. It's only recurring but you never know in this business." BEHIND THE SCENES SHAKE UP!! When S.T.E.A.M. premiered, Grand Marquee was very gracious to consult on the blog. It was always meant to be temporary and temporary it is. His last work airs Friday. Replacing him, will be moniquebitches, a Godsend and a newcomer to SON. I am VERY grateful to have her on board and she has been a HUGE HELP. Also, ReddFoxx has also been tapped as a creative consult here on S.T.E.A.M. "Redd is a GREAT writer, and I am also very happy he's on the team." S.T.E.A.M.'s logo was designed by Matt P, we here at S.T.E.A.M. are very thankful for a wonder logo. "I know before S.T.E.A.M. premiered I stated that it would be a five day a week show. Well as you can see it's not and I want to recant my statement. A few reasons why I choose the 3 day a week schedule is I wanted to make S.T.E.A.M. as reader friendly as possible, so I figure 3 days a week was good enough for the reader to maybe check out a few other blogs here at SON as we and be able to digest the high intensity drama that occurs on S.T.E.A.M. In other words I don't want to over load the reader. Or myself. It's a lot keeping up a blog and lead the life I lead. There are some great Blogs out there. You just got to know how to find them." Laughs the scribe "But at any rate you are reading a great blog here and thank you all for making it a guilty pleasure.
  5. "If you thought this past week was intense, you ain't seen nothing yet!" promises top scribe ML Cooks. "The one good thing we achieved this week, was we launched the rest of our main players and story lines. It's hard starting a new project, trying to gain an audience's interest, at the same slowly setting everything up. The time has come and everything is in place. Shoot off some fireworks, pop open a bottle of champagne(or whatever flys your hair back) and relax, because this was the calm before the storm. Get ready for a roller coaster ride!!" The scribe said with a grin on his face. "It's a perfect time too July 4th, means fireworks, and rest assured A LOT will be exploding in Pasadena this week" The next few weeks will be really be big for Mike and Jenn. Their relationship is tested to the core. One of their test will be drug dealer Ty. Ty wants Jenn. He's attracted to her. He's a high roller and wants a woman to stand next to him and he wants Jenn to be that woman. Getting Jenn away from Mike will be a sweet reward for Ty, not only getting him suspended from the police force, but taking his woman too. The stakes are all too high as we learn Ty is bank rolling an elaborate plot against a few citizens of Pasadena. So Ty will do anything, to accomplish his objectives and to him dessert is Jenn. After all, MONEY is POWER. May the best man win... This will be a really drama filled week where Sabryn is concerned. Bryan shows up at her place of employment and begs her to take him back. Sabryn has a message for him and it will be loud and very clear. Ashley also shows up to Sabryn's job, and lets just say it won't be too pretty. I must say the RED ALERT DAY WILL BE July4th! A perfect day for some fire works inside of Sabryn's office Natalia's new "Dream Guy" is not available, but that's not going to stop this vamp. All's I can say is "uh- oh". We also learn a little bit more about this crazy and mysterious stalker, The Lady in Black. We will learn her name, and although I already let it slip in episodes prior,(you really had to catch it{HINT: It was discussed during a convo between Daniel and "LiB"})in case you missed it, it will be officially revealed this week. But what is it about the obsession she seems to have with Sharan? Find out this week....
  6. I see you added Dialog. Nice. Is this temporary?
  7. S.T.E.A.M. Episode :9 Written By: ML Cooks Story Consult: Grand Marquee Finally a new day begins in the city of Pasadena Envy Downtown, Natalia is hanging up clothes inside the S.G. Fashion outlet. Her good friend Ria walks in the store. Natalia "Hey girl!"She says as she hugs Ria Ria "Hey Natti girl" Natalia "So tell me about last night" Ria "Girl, Dondre and I had sex up stairs in one of the rooms." Natalia "While Karim was in the ball room?" Ria "Yes. Girl it was such a turn on!" Natalia "Just don't get caught" Ria "Girl never. But enough about that. Girl I want to know why Sabryn was all up in your face last night." Natalia "Well, I feel like Sabryn should give me more than letting me run this store. I want to work at S.G. it self. Have a big corporate office." Ria "I can understand that. You have worked for her since the beginning." Natalia "I know. This store has the highest profits and its because of me.I sell these clothes in here. My own stuff sells really good here too. None of her other outlets sells my designs but this one does, and it's number 1 in the nation. Hello? That should tell Sabryn something. I must know what I'm doing. But yet, she offers Sharan and Kevin some big incentive contract." Ria "That really cooks my last grit. You know Natti, if you feeling froggy, then girl jump. Do something about it." Natalia "Your right, maybe I should go work for the competition. Maybe they will give me the chance I have been looking for." Ria "That sounds good girl. Show Sabryn you can get on her level. You don't need her." Natalia " I plan to knock Sabryn off her pedestal.... Miss high and mighty.... She is so sadity. I can't stand it." Natalia ends the conversation abruptly upon seeing, a sexxy man with his girlfriend, entering the boutique. Ria looks at what Natti is looking at. "Girl you know him?" Natalia "I'm about to get to know him. He is sexxy and look at his body.He is cut!" Ria "Girl I don't know about all that. White men are not my thing. It looks like that might be his girlfriend" Natalia " I don't care about that. I'm trying to be like you, someone's part time lover.I'll call you later. I'm bout to meet "Mr. Man."" Ria laughs as she watches Natalia approach the couple. Dondre unlocks the hair shop, "High Klass Hair" He has some take out with him. He goes to the back of the shop to the break room and pulls out a black table cloth and drags a table from the back of the room into the front lounge, where people get their hair done. Dondre unloads the bags he brought in, and it turns out to be breakfast for Sharan. He then pulls out his cell phone and calls her. Dondre "Ah, Sharan, I hope I didn't wake you?" Sharan "No, I was just about to step out the door to meet with Sabryn. What's going on?" Dondre "Well I just opening up the shop and I it looks like some one broke in." Sharan "O.K. I'll be there soon." Dondre hangs up his phone. "Perfect. Now I have her on the way. It's time to let her know how I feel." In Westwood Park, Mike's house. Jennifer is in the bathroom, looking in the mirror pulling her hair into a ponytail. Mike walks up behind her and holds his girlfriend. Mike "Good morning baby." Jennifer "I suppose...." Mike "What's the matter?" Jennifer "I just don't feel like going to that greasy pub of yours and working today, while you get to be outside and enjoy the nice weather." Mike "Jenn, I'm a cop. I make the streets safe, like arresting that snake Tyler Christopher. A lot of crimes happened last night. Sharan and Kevin have a stalker, Daniel was been shot. It's been crazy. So excuse me if I have to work a little more at the station. All you have to do is sit in that damn pub and tell the employees what to do! What's hard about that?" Jenn "It always work! ...Work!....Work!..Work!.... That's all I ever hear about. Never no time for us. We don't do nothing no more Mike." Mike "Jenn I am sorry, what do you want me to do?" Jennifer pauses and looks at him in utter disgust. She shakes her head at him. "I want you to tell me about Tyler?" Mike "What about him?" Jenn "Is he a criminal?" Mike "It's looking that way." Jenn contemplates within herself if she should tell Mike she met up with Tyler last night at the jail. She decides not to. Mike "Why are you asking about him?" Jenn "He was very nice at the gala last night and I just don't believe he would murder anyone." Mike "Looks can be deceiving. That's what he wants you to believe." Jenn "Are you just jealous because he hit on me last night?" Mike "Jenn it's nothing personal. I'm going to prove to you Tyler is a criminal. I cannot believe we are even having this conversation." Jenn "Believe it." Mike "What is that supposed to me?" Jenn rolls her eyes at him, grabs her keys and just walks out the door, to head to "Mike's Pub" Mike is left standing there, wondering if he is really losing Jennifer. "Tyler must remain behind bars" Mike leaves his house and heads to the police station to make it happen.........
  8. I don't know the first two questions but I know the bonus is Joan Collins
  9. pretty interesting. I will mos def be reading the next episode. It was easy to follow along at episode 65, beings it was the first time I read it. So kudos for you for making new readers like me easy to follow what was going on in the middle of storylines.
  10. S.T.E.A.M. Episode:8 written by: ML Cooks Officer Mike Dietz walks into Huntington Memorial Hospital. He walks over to the information desk and ask the clerk to page a Dr. Diego Serrano. The clerk complies. Diego who was not far from the information desk walks up to Mike Diego "Mike, what is going on?" Mike "There was a body brought in here tonight from TC Hotel. I need to get an i.d. on the woman as well as an autopsy done.' Diego "Follow me to the morgue. I have all the info you need." Lauren , with her good friend Kevin burst into the e.r. and Lauren immediately approaches a nurse "Please tell me you have some information about Daniel Cosgrove!" Nurse "I'm sorry I can only give information to immediately family. You are-..?" Lauren(Lying) "His wife!" The nurse rolls her eyes at Lauren as she looks in her computer. "Mr. Cosgrove is still in emergency surgery. That's all we know at this time. Why don't you have a seat and I am you should hear something soon?" Lauren fights back tears as Kevin holds her. "Kevin this can't be happening. I really do love him. Daniel has his faults but he doesn't deserve to die." Kevin "Just pray Lauren. God will take care of it." Down in the morgue. Mike looks over the dead woman. Diego "The autopsy did not show anything. I have already ran her fingers prints, and her name was Mona Lisa." Mike "Mona Lisa? That's strange.And no signs of a struggle?" Diego " Well It seems she was pushed from the window at TC hotel. There are bruises on the body indicating a struggle did take place." Mike "This woman was murdered. OK Thanks Dr. Serrano. One more thing. I need to talk to a Daniel Cosgrove so can you see to it that you call down to the station as soon as he can talk." Diego "Will do. Now if you'll excuse me I have patients to see." Diego leaves and so does Mike. Affairs In West Wood Park, Bryan's House Bryan holds Ashley back as she tries to physically attack Sabryn. "Calm Down Ash! There is no need to fight!" Sabryn "Exactly! I don't need to fight over no man." Ashley "Well fine." She regains her composure. "Bryan choose! Who do you want me or her?" Bryan on the spot again just looks at Sabryn and Ashley dumbfounded. Mystery Huntington Memorial Hospital. Dr. Serrano walks into the chapel. He sees Lauren and Kevin praying. He clears his throat. "Excuse me. I don't mean to interrupt." Lauren and Kevin both immediately gets up and approach the doctor. Lauren "It's OK. Please tell me you have news on Daniel. Is he OK?" Diego hesitates before answering. "Daniel is.....-" Back in Westwood Park. Ashley "So Ryan, or whatever the hell your calling yourself, choose, either you want me or Sabryn." Sabryn "Let me make it easier for everyone involved. It's obvious Bryan, which is his real name by the way, made his choice when he slept with," Looking at Ashley firmly. "I will not be with some one who is a lair, a cheater, a deceiver, or a heart breaker. I deserve much better. SO Bryan you can be with Miss Blue Light Special. Love don't live here no more." Sabryn grabs her purse and leaves as Bryan tries to stop her Bryan "Sabryn, wait!!!!.... I love you!!!.. Please don't go!!!" To no avail Sabryn skids out of Bryan's drive way Mike walks in to prayer chapel after seeing Diego do the same thing. They all await for Diego's word on Daniel. Lauren' "Dr. Serrano please! Don't keep me in suspense. How is Daniel?" Diego "Mr. Cosgrove pulled through the emergency surgery." Lauren exhales. The doctor continues. " He was shot point black in the chest. A few inches from his heart. We were successfully able to remove the bullet, but he's now on a ventilator and has slipped into a coma. Frankly, I don't know when or even if he will wake up. And if he does, there might brain damage. Daniel was dead for a couple of minutes." Lauren really breaks down and Kevin continues to console her. Mike whispers in Kevin's ear "I'm going to Daniels car to collect evidence. So wait a little bit before you take her back home. Also, tell her that I will need to question her as soon as possible." Kevin nods his head as Mike leaves. Attack West wood Park. Ashley(looking at Bryan) "You son of a Bitch! ...You told me you love me too!... You can't love two woman Bryan!... So tell me, who were you going to choose any way?" Bryan "To be honest Ash, I was going to choose Sabryn. My heart belongs to her. I love her." Ashley(wiping tears) "But you told me you loved me too? Telling me everything I wanted to hear. Whispering sweet nothings for what Bryan?.... To get in my panties!?" Bryan "Ashley I am so sorry for dragging you into this. I apologize for hurting you..... I'm sorry..... I don't love you. This was just a lust thing. I was being selfish in pleasuring my sex drive." Ashley "You're not sorry!. You played me form day one. You knew what you were doing. The only reason I found out is because you got caught. Were you ever going to tell me the truth Bryan!!!?..You led me to believe we had something really going on. Like we were working towards something. You have made a fool of me." Bryan "Ashley I really am sorry. You are a great person. You were there in my time of need. I hope we can remain friends." Ashley is shocked at Bryan's non-shalanting of the situation. Brushing off her feelings like its nothing. Suddenly, Ashley grabs Bryan's crotch and begins to yank on it. Bryan lets out a girly scream. Bryan is paralyzed from such sever pain he cannot attempt to fight off Ashley's firm grip on his nuts.! Ashley, looks him dead in the face. "You used me for sex! You have made me feel low, like a common hor. But rest assured you will pay for this. Pay backs are Bitch!" She touts as she yanks his crotch even harder, then hocker's in his face. Ashley grabs her clothes, and things and leaves Bryan's house. Bryan collapses to the ground.
  11. Great casting choice. Ashely or Brooke will Look good with him
  12. Great casting choice. Ashely or Brooke will Look good with him
  13. S.T.E.A.M. Episode : 7 Written by: ML Cooks Story Consult: Grand Marquee Mike and police Chief Abe draw there gun approaching Daniels car, just as Lauren opens her front door to see what's going on. Mike "Get back inside!" Abe sees Daniel with a gunshot wound to the chest. Abe calls 911. Lauren runs down to Daniels car and sees Daniel's blood covered shirt. She screams out and Mike holds her, escorting her into the house. Abe checks for a pulse on Daniel, there is none! In Bryan's House. Sabryn slaps Bryan "Answer me! What is this thing doing here in your house wearing cheap underwear Bryan?" Ashley "Thing? No honey, refer tome as a woman. Your eyes are not deceiving you." Sabryn laughs "A woman? Chic please. Your in my man's house, well let me rephrase that .I meant my ex man's house, wearing a cheap bra and pantie set. Looks like you got it from the clearance rack at Wal-Mart. Hell, your lucky I didn't call a nasty Bitch which is exactly what you are! Ashley "Your man!? No. Ryan is mine." Sabryn (cutting her foe off) "Oh and you even have a nick name for him. Gag me!" Ashley "Uhm NO!. Ryan is his name" Sabryn(looking at Bryan) "Bryan you better start explaining before one of us leaves in a coffin tonight!" Bryan just looks dumbfounded. The paramedics arrive on the scene in front of Lauren's house. Abe Williams, tells the medics that Daniel has no pulse. The medics immediately begin CPR and first aid as they load him unto the ambulance. The medics, begin to shock Daniel's body, trying to revive him as the ambulance drives away. Abe walks into Lauren's house and sees Mike comforting a distraught Lauren. Mike signals for Abe to take over the comfort zone. They switch position so Mike can call Jennifer. Mike(on the phone) "Listen Jenn, its going to be a long night. Some one was shot." Jenn "Is Lauren OK?" Mike "Yea, Look I'm going to drop her off by our place. I don't think she needs to be alone. You can keep her company while I'm gone." Jenn "But Mike-" The phone clicks. Jenn "How does Mike know I want to baby sit Lauren tonight. I am tired of this.Always pulling this stunts and expect to be there all the Damn time. What do I get? Nothing.!" Mike approaches Abe "Listen, can you drop Lauren off at Jennifer's. I'm going to go to the hospital to meet with Dr. Serrano about Daniel." Abe "Yea, go ahead. I am going to investigate here." They all split ways. Jennifer begins to run a bubble bath awaiting Lauren's arrival. Jenn has some thoughts to herself. ( I am tired of Mike pawning problems up on me. I am so sick of all the late nights he works, and then expects me to work in his greasy pub all by myself. I don't want to to work. I want to be catered too.) She thinks of Tyler, then continues her thoughts. (Ty, said he would take care of me. That sounds good. Plus he's very attractive and got this mysterious edge that I like. Lord help me. What am I to do?) Her thoughts are interrupted when Lauren arrives. Back at Bryan's House Ashley "Breezy please. You're not going to hurt a fly in here tonight." Sabryn puts her purse down and slowly walks over toward Ashley. "Shut the hell up. Your not being spoken too. Bryan I'm not going to say it again! What is going on? Why is this woman in your house wearing the K-Mart blue light special" Bryan "Ok..Ok.. Look! I lied to you both. I've been playing you two." Sabryn "So you've been cheating on me?" Bryan "Yes!... I lied to Ashley, telling her I have a twin brother named Ryan." Sabryn "I don't believe this! Why did you cheat on me?!" She says as she pounds on his chest. Bryan "Look,... I don't know..It was a mistake..... I am sorry! It was stupid!" Sabryn "You're right!... You are a sorry Bastard and yes you were stupid for cheating on me with Miss Martha Stewart!" Ashley "Look breezy, I about had it with that mouth of yours! I have not disrespected you in any way and I demand some respect!" Sabryn "I'm sorry. I think you need to make an appointment with your ear doctor. At no time did I disrespect you! I told the truth. You're a K-mart shopper. Don't be mad about it. Now if I called you a tramp or a slut, now that would be classified as disrespect,....MAYBE! Now get it together!" Ashley goes after Sabryn. Treachery The lady in Black pulls her black in to her mountain resort in Sierra Madre. She walks into her house with a ziplock back that contains, some of Daniels DNA, a few hair strands and some blood. She sits it down next to the tv. She turns it on and lights her blunt up as she sees Sharan taking a shower via the secret camera the Lady in Black has installed in the pink roses she sent Sharan. Sharan has put the rose in the bathroom, unknowingly, she is being watched by the woman who rammed Kevin's car door off. "My beautiful lady. Such a nice body." Sharan gets out of the shower and leaves her bathroom. The lady in black ashes her drug stick and looks at her walls where many pictures of Sharan are hung up. "Soon Sharan, I will have you. Very soon." The lady in black grabs shovel, goes to her basement, and begins to dig a pit.......
  14. "The story lines will continue to build in week 3 on S.T.E.A.M." reveals Head writer, ML Cooks. "Sabryn finds out why Bryan stood her up at the Hotel Gala. And She's not to happy about it!" "She's hot with rage and anger, hurt that she has been played. She put her heart into this man and He stomped on it. She's not going to take it, being the strong woman she is. Ashley and Sabryn both will let Bryan have it. It will come down to a decision that will lead up to an unavoidable showdown between Sabryn and Ashley" "The mysterious, Lady in Black continues with her agenda. It was revealed that "LiB" and Daniel were working together. I also reveled another accomplice, did you catch it? I slipped it in, but if you did miss it, it's going to come out soon any way. He has lost Lauren and now maybe his freedom being a person of interest in the crime at the Hotel. So Daniel will try to save his own skin, by backing out of his unholy alliance."LiB" , feeling this is double crossing her, makes an example out of Daniel, sending a clear message….She is not to be double crossed. We also learn about the identity of the woman who was pushed from the 4th floor window of TC Hotel. It's part of a bigger mystery" the writer reveals. "The dots will begin to connect. Clues and hints are all over the place. Can you pick them up?" Other tidbits this week Dondre makes a play for Sharan, which backfires. Natalia meets the wrong man of her dreams. Is Jenn developing feelings for Ty?
  15. Another great episode. It's getting very interesting. SO B.P. got the DA and some cops in his pockets?
  16. "Is there a Doctor in the house?" "We're going to need one" says Head writer, ML Cooks. "As you have read, events and characters will be requiring medical attention in Pasadena, so yes a resident Doctor has been hired in the form of Diego Serrano. Diego Serrano was born in Quito, Ecuador, on February 5, 1973. He has appeared on The Young and the Restless as Diego Guttierez (2001-2003) and the long-running, defunct soap opera, Another World as Tomas Rivera (1993-1997). He appeared in the 2005 gay-themed film The Mostly Unfabulous Social Life of Ethan Green playing Kyle Underhill, a professional baseball player who comes out as gay and authors an autobiography. Serrano played the role of Richard in the film ODE (2007) based on the novel Ode to Lata by Ghalib Shiraz Dhalla. Retrieved from "http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Diego_Serrano" He debuts next week, episode 8 June 27th in this recurring role. Stay tuned for more news....
  17. S.T.E.A.M. Episode :6 written by : ML Cooks Story Consult: Grand Marquee Inside the Pasadena City Jail. Treachery Jennifer "You wanna do what?" ...Taken aback with Ty's blunt statement. Ty "I wanna make love to you. Let you feel me in side of you, let you feel my passion. I want to make you feel they way you need to feel, happy, complete and satisfied." Jenn "You are a bold man Mr. Christopher." Ty "But you like it though." Jenn( trying to fight an upcoming blushed filled smile) "What makes you say that?" Ty "You're still here aren't you? I mean you came all this way to come and see me. So there must be something you like about me." Jenn "No... I just came to ask you about what happened tonight at your hotel." Ty "I'll tell you what should have happened, we should have been making love in one of those rooms. Jenn, I can give you everything. I'm rich." Jenn (Flattered) "Maybe be someday Tyler." She says as she smiles and leaves the jail. Ty "Yea, someday soon. Mike is really gonna piss his pants now." he says with a smirk on his face. Back in Westwood Park, Bryan's House Sabryn's loud banging begins to wake Ashley up. "You better open this damn door! I see you're car here!" Sabryn spits out. Ashley comes out from the bedroom and asks "What's going on baby? Who is that woman banging on the door." Bryan, being caught up thinks ( O my damn. I am about to be exposed. I don't know how to get out of this.) He opens the door and upon seeing Sabryn, she sucker punches him dead in his jaw. Outside of Kevin and Sharan's House Sharan "Kevin are you OK?" Kevin "I'm fine, just a little startled." Kevin looks around to see if he sees any one or cars. Sharan "It's like that car came out of nowhere." Kevin "It did didn't it. I'm going to call my pops." Sharan "This sure has turned out to be a crazy night." They both get out of the car cautiously . Kevin pulls out his cell phone, as Sharan in hale her pink Roses. "Baby I'm going inside to take a shower and put these roses in some water. I don't know who sent them but they are so beautiful." They kiss and she walks inside their house. Lauren is laying on her bed with a picture of Daniel laying next to her. Lauren continues to wipe the tears from her eyes. Her phone rings. "Lauren,... it's me Jenn." "Hey Jenn." Lauren says as she sniffles. Jenn can sense that her good friend is upset "Lauren, sounds like you been crying. Are you still upset over Daniel?" Lauren "I'm so hurt Jenn. Daniel has broken my trust time and time again. He has tried to be a good person but Ty has got an evil influence on him. Ty's influence causes Daniel to lie to me and he's strung out on drugs. I am tired of going in circles with him I can't do it more Jenn." Jenn( Taking in Lauren's negative words of Ty) "You deserve so much better. You don't need Daniel. You are a great person. I know its going to hurt but in time the pain will go away." Just as she says that. Jenn can hear a loud gunshot on Lauren's end of the phone. Jenn "Lauren, what was that? Are you OK?" Lauren "Sounded like a gun shot." Jenn "Lauren stay there, I'm going to call Mike for you." They hang up and Lauren debates if she should look out the window. Mystery Abe pulls up to his son's car. "Son are you OK? Kevin "Yes pops. I was about to get out of the car when a car out of the clear blue drove up and just rammed my car door off." Abe "Did you get a look at the car or the license plates?" Kevin "It happened so fast the car was already down the street and made a right." Abe looks down the street, as Sharan comes out side "Son, this is has been a strange night. I'm going to have a cruiser sit outside the house tonight. I want you to be careful." Kevin "I will." Abe looks at Sharan "Sharan, did you happen to get a look at the car or the plates? Sharan "A very brief look. It was an all black car, or a very dark color. The car had no lights, so I could not see the plates. I know the windows were tinted too." Abe "Interesting. Who ever did this know what they are doing and they don't want to get caught. Has anything else strange happen to you two tonight?" Sharan "No." ( Not thinking of the roses) Abe "I'm going to drive around and see what I can see." Abe embraces his son, then they hear a gunshot and a car screeching off just as Mike arrives. Abe tells Kevin to walk Sharan inside his house. Abe,.. and Mike now go down the street and makes that right. the sound of the gunshot. They see Daniels car. Affairs Sabryn rushes inside of Bryan's house when she hears the gunshot. Bryan rubs his jaw as Sabryn looks at Ashley. Ashley wearing lingerie, gives Sabryn a nasty look. Sabryn "Bryan who in the hell is this?! Your cheating on me?!".......
  18. Right, I am glad to see you doing B&B. It just came out of no where. Nothing pre aannouced so does this pick up from the 6/20 epiosde
  19. Love the episode. Cant wait to see what BP is up to, It obvious he's out to get Cody
  20. S.T.E.A.M. Episode 5 Written: by ML Cooks Out side TC HOTEL Mike closes the door on his cruiser, with Tyler in the back seat. Mike walks back inside the hotel. Jennifer walks over to him Jenn "What is going on? Why did you arrest Ty?" Mike "A person fell from the fourth floor, that's all I can really say right now. It's an ongoing investigation. Listen, I'm going to the station to book Tyler. Why don't you go home? It's going to be a late night." He kisses her on the for head and walks back to his cruiser without Jenn saying a word. She gets in her car and drives to the house they share in Westwood Park. Police Chief Abe Williams walk over to Natalia and Sabryn. "Ladies, I know its getting late and your probably stressed out so please go home and get some rest. Thank you for your statements and we will be in touch." Abe walks away Natalia "Sabryn, can we talk?" Sabryn "No!" Sabryn bumps in to Natalia as she walks out of the hotel to find her man Bryan. Ria walks over to Natalia after seeing Sabryn push Natalia. "Girl are you ok? Are you going to let her do that to you? What is going on?" Natalia "I'm ok. She was just being a Bitch. Nothing I cannot handle. One day Ria, I swear that bitch will eat her words." Ria "Ok Natti girl, well you call me in the morning, I got something to tell you." She whispers in her ear " Girl, Dondre beat my nana' up" Natalia begins laughing, as Ria leaves the hotel as well with her fiancee Karim. Police Chief, Abe Williams stops Daniel as he is trying to leave the hotel. "Mr. Cosgrove..A word with you please? Daniel slowly turns around to face the chief. Abe "I understand you may know about some drug activities going on here?" Daniel "No sir I don't" Abe "That's funny because you look high and I can smell the stench of marijuana on you." Daniel "I don't know what you're talking about chief." Abe( giving Daniel a piercing look) "Is that so? Prove it to me, come down to the police station TONIGHT and take a drug test." Daniel(getting nervous) "You just can't order me to take a drug test out of the blue. I did nothing wrong chief. I didn't kill no one." Abe(intrigued with Daniel's's last statement) "Kill? Now who said anything about murder.?" Daniel "Look chief I just wanted to let you know I had nothing to do with nothing." Abe "Come down to the police station for a drug screening tonite and That's an order! You are now a person of interest with what transpired tonight." Abe walks away. Chris immediately walks up to him "What's going on Daniel? First someone falls from the fourth floor, then Tyler gets arrested and now you are a person of interest. " Daniel "Damn it I don't know. I don't know what is going on. I lost Lauren, and maybe now my freedom." Daniel pulls out his cell phone as he walks out side of the hotel and into his car. Treachery In Sierra Madre, a small suburb of Pasadena which sits in the foothills of the San Gabriel Mountains, ]The Lady in Black is smoking a , watching Sharan on a tv screen in her mountain resort.In a moment with drugs, she sees Her moment is interupted witha phone call on her cell phone. "Yes" Its Daniel on the other end. "I'm out. I can't do this no more. Ty has been arrested and now the police want me to come down to the station to take a drug test, which I'm going to fail and that's going to make me look suspicious in the crime." LiB "So your telling me your backing out of our deal?" Daniel "I have lost Lauren because of you and Ty and now my freedom might be next. I can't do this no more" LiB "You can add your life to that list." She hangs up the phone, puts her blunt out and gets in her black mercury marauder and heads back into Pasadena."I hate Men!" Back at TC hotel. Kevin "I don't know who would of sent the pink roses. This has been one crazy night." Sharan "It sure has. Lets go home. I am very tired and I would like a night cap before we go to sleep baby"She says as she holds him Kevin "That's sounds nice." They walk out the hotel, along with Sharan's pink roses which conceals a secret camera that the Lady in black has set up. Mike locks the key to Ty's cell, inside the city jail. Mike "I'm going to make sure that you are in here a long time." Ty "And I'm going to make sure you lose your job after I sue this damn police station." Mike goes to the hospital to get some info on the body that was pushed from the window. Jennifer walks into the precinct and walks over to Ty. Ty "This is a bit of a surprise seeing you down here." Jenn "Is it? I saw Mike arrest you. You didn't have nothing to do with that woman being pushed out the window did you?" Ty( turning the tables on her) "Do you think I did?" Jenn "I hope you didn't.' Ty "I'm a lover, not a fighter. Jenn "Is that right?" Ty "Let me prove it to you." Jenn "How do you want to prove something like that to me?" Ty "I want to make love to you!" Sabryn pulls up to Bryan's house which sits in the West wood Park housing complex. She bangs on the door. Inside, the loud banging awakes Bryan, who is laying in the bed with another woman. Bryan looks at his watch. He then looks in the peep hole in his door and sees its Sabryn. Bryan "Damn. I was supposed to meet Sabryn at the hotel party. That banging is going to wake up Ashley and I'm going to be caught." Kevin and Sharan pull up to there house in West wood Park. The lady in black is down the street still watching their every move. Kevin opens his door, as the Lady in black puts the pedal to the medal and rams off Kevin's car door and keeps on driving. The Lady in Black makes a right, and she can see Daniels car parked out side of Lauren's house. The Lady in Black parks her car and gets out to creep towards Daniels car. Inside of Daniels car, Daniel is drinking heavily on a bottle of whiskey. He has a gun laying on the passenger seat. He looks at Laurens house and begins to sob. "I messed up again. I lost Lauren and my freedom." He downs some more alcohol, as he drinks, the Lady in Black, wearing a black glove, reaches in the passenger seat window, grabs the gun and shoots Daniel point blank. The lady in black flees the scene leaving gun shot victim Daniel to die........
  21. Wow King you are are full of surprises. I am happy for you and wish you all the luck in the world. Shake them haters off. I'm sad to see u leave SON but you know whats best. Will you still post here in the forums?
  22. double post sorry, but any way What company doess Henry own?
  23. Very good episode. It flowed very nice. It was verey easy to get into it, being that I havent read the first eppy.
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