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    Previously on Point Palace:

    - London finds Blake's body and freaks out.

    - Alley and Dylan patch things up with each other as they yet again make love to each other.

    - Jenny sets up a romantic evening for Carlos but it's cut short when he's called into work. Jenny goes ballistic.

    - John and Carrie get more serious with one another when John buys Carrie a very nice gift. She begins to feel guilty after thinking about Dylan.

    - Nan calls Owen to find out that he completed the mission she gave him but Alexia over hears the conversation and tells her brother that she's going to have to be there for him, even if it means having to get him out of jail.

    - Ava has a phone conversation with James, in which Peggy eavesdrops on, and both girls have a little bit of a run in with one another by exchanging very intelligent yet mean words.

    - Will informs Lenvy that Patrick was released on bail and she begins to get scared and goes over to Will's room to be with him, but before she even gets inside, her vision turns black as she becomes blindfolded.

    Episode 63:
    Survival of the Fiancee

    Executive Story Consultant & Creator:
    Matt Politylo

    Logo Designer:
    Mary Zimmerman
    ______________________
    (Lenvy feels a forceful arm pushing her while still being blindfolded. It didn't help much that the darkness from the night was already blocking her vision. She felt her feet hitting a hard floor and she knew that she was being pushed into a room of some sort.)

    Lenvy:
    Patrick? Patrick is that you?

    (Lenvy gets no answer.)

    Lenvy:
    Who ever you are this isn't funny! Let me go!

    (The blind fold comes off and Lenvy sees a candle lit bed room.)

    Lenvy: (confused)
    What?

    (Lenvy turns around to see Will.)

    Will:
    Surprise!

    Lenvy: (hitting his arm)
    I thought that you were Patrick and that you came back to Point Palace just to kidnap me.

    Will:
    I didn't mean to scare you and if I did I'm sorry. I just wanted to surprise you by treating you to a romantic evening alone.

    Lenvy:
    You went through all this trouble, just for me?

    Will:
    I can think of a way for you to show me how much you appreciate me.

    Lenvy:
    Like kiss you or hug you?

    Will:
    No. I was giving it a lot of thought about love. It's something that can be so confusing yet joyful at the same time. I've done it plenty of times to know that during "it," I might have been happy but not fulfilled. I was missing the whole "love" aspect that was truely there. And with you, it is there and I want to experience it with you.

    Lenvy:
    Will you never tried to pressure me into anything and I like that a lot. It was even better when you risked everything to come save me when I was in trouble in Ireland. Now all of this is just...It's just breath taking.

    Will:
    Then is that a yes?

    (Lenvy gets a tear in her eye.)

    Lenvy:
    Yes Will. I want you to be my first. And I can be your first true love.

    (Will turns on his music and plays soft jazz. He then makes his way over to Lenvy and places his hand on her hips. They embrace in a kiss. Will picks up Lenvy and as they continue to kiss, he lies her down on the bed)

    Will:
    I can already feel it. Just kissing you is enough for me.

    (Lenvy takes Will's shirt off and kisses his neck. She then kisses the center of his chest and works her way down to his stomach and then kisses his lips)

    Lenvy:
    I'm a little nervous but I'm ready.

    (Will takes off Lenvy's shirt and looks at her with such beauty. He then undoes her bra and kisses her shoulders and then her lips. He can feel her shaking a bit, it makes him smile.)

    Will:
    I-

    (Will pauses.)

    Will:
    I love you Lenvy.

    (Lenvy looks Will straight into his eyes.)

    Lenvy:
    I love you Will.

    (Will takes the covers and swings it over the two lovers as the night goes on.)

    _____________

    (The next afternoon at the hospital London goes through Blake's phone book and the first person on his list is Alley.)

    London:
    Great. My most favorite person in the world.

    (London presses the call button.)

    Alley:
    Blake?

    London:
    Not exactly. Look I know that you don't like me-

    Alley:
    Who is this?

    London:
    It's London and I need to talk to you about something that's very important. Are you with Dylan?

    Alley:
    Yeah I am. What's going on?

    London:
    As I was saying. I know that you and I really haven't gotten along because of John but aside from that Blake is in the hospital.

    Alley:
    What happned to Blake?

    London:
    Someone shot him and the only thing that I know about his condition is that he's breathing but that he has under go extensive surgery.

    Alley:
    That's awful. I'll tell Dylan immediately and we'll be there soon.

    London:
    It would mean a lot to Blake.

    Alley:
    Thanks for calling.

    London:
    No problem.

    (Alley hangs up with London and wakes up Dylan next to her after making love to him like they always do.)

    Dylan:
    I was having the most wonderful dream.

    Alley:
    I just got one of the most disturbing calls of my life and you're not going to like what I had to hear.

    Dylan:
    Is something wrong?

    Alley:
    Yeah. London called me on Blake's cell phone. He's in the hospital because someone shot him!

    Dylan:
    Somone shot him? The only person who I could even think of doing that would have to be...

    Alley:
    Nan?

    Dylan:
    Yep. I hope he's alright.
    ________________________
    (Carrie hangs up her phone and turns to John as the two spend time together in John's room.)

    John:
    What was that all about?

    Carrie:
    London. That girl is the one you were telling me about right? You're ex girl friend from Ohio who's now with Blake?

    John:
    Yep that's the one. What were you two talking about?

    Carrie:
    It turns out that someone shot Blake and he's wounded in the hospital.

    John:
    Do you remember the last time we went to the hospital for him?

    Carrie:
    You mean the time when he got drunk and accidentally ran over Nan who was pregnant with Will's baby and then had Jenny try to kill Alley by setting fire to her and then you came to her rescue?

    John:
    Wow. You have a really good memory.

    Carrie:
    I have to go and see him. Are you going to come with me?

    John:
    Do you honestly want to know how I feel about Blake Hammerton?

    Carrie:
    Sure.

    John:
    Ever since he has gone out with London, he has sort of shoved it in my face to stay away from her.

    Carrie:
    Becaue of the baby right?

    John:
    Exactly. Some time ago London didn't want me around our baby and Blake was sort of trying to enforce it just because he thought it was his right to.

    Carrie:
    So I take that you're not going to go.

    John:
    If it were up to me, I hope that Blake dies!
    _________________________
    (James calls Ava on her cell phone. James is sitting at his cozy desk in his office and she is in her room studying Psychology. Once she sees that it's him calling, she puts the book down to answer it.)

    Ava:
    Are you busy?

    James:
    Yeah, I'm just grading all of those tests and wanted to take a break from it.

    Ava:
    We need to talk about something that is very disturbing to me.

    James:
    Really?

    Ava:
    Yeah you're good friend Peggy Lowrie. How much does she know about what you and I do?

    James:
    I don't know.

    Ava:
    James did you tell her?

    James:
    I sort of did because I can trust her and I'm sorry if-

    Ava:
    No it's okay. I just wanted to know, but I'm not so sure if she can be trusted!

    James:
    Believe me she is very trustworthy.

    Ava:
    Let's hope that that's true. If the word got out about us then we would both be in lots of trouble!
    _____________
    (Blake gets moved into a room where he is hooked up to a ventalation system and London sits next to him.)

    London:
    I don't know what to say. Except who ever did this to you. They're going to pay!

    (Carrie walks in and London acknowledges her.)

    Carrie:
    Hi. You must be London.

    London:
    Yes and you are?

    Carrie:
    Carrie Slondsbid. This is a funny story, I'm actually going out with your ex boy friend John Snaldry.

    London:
    Oh the father of my baby? Well that's good to hear that he has someone in his life.

    Carrie:
    And I'm happy about you and Blake.

    London:
    Thank you.

    Carrie:
    I've seen Blake in worse times then these and he's going to pull through it. He has before and I know that he can do it now. I moved for a little bit and I didn't keep in touch with anybody. He's an awesome friend and he cared about everyone. Good things happen to good people. Blake's going to be fine.

    London:
    I can only hope.

    (Alley and Dylan walk into Blake's room but almost walk out when they notice Carrie, especially Dylan.)


    _______________
    (Jenny goes over to the hospital and sees Carlos hard at work.)

    Jenny:
    Do you have time to talk to little old me?

    (Agatha overhears Jenny.)

    Agatha:
    I swear this boy is hard at work all of the time.

    Carlos:
    That's why I like you so much Agatha. You never quit with the compliments.

    Agatha:
    How does that saying go? Give credit where credit is due. And you deserve all the credit in the world.

    (Carlos begins to walk around as Jenny follows.)

    Jenny: (sarastic)
    Believe me last night was a fun night for me. The battery operated machine thanks you for it and I forgive you. I was in the mood, you had to work- It's over and done with.
    (more serious)
    Is something bothering you?

    Carlos:
    Yeah you remember how I told you about us being invited to a wedding?

    Jenny:
    Blake Hammerton's wedding. I remember that. Are you having trouble with what to wear?

    Carlos:
    No. Blake was shot a couple of nights ago.

    Jenny: (shocked)
    That's awful. Completely awful.

    Carlos:
    I think that Nan was behind it.

    Jenny:
    What if she is? She's dangerous. I don't understand why she would do it. Wait...I can, that girl wants what she wants and it's not below her to shoot someone to get it. I'm surprised, she usually has someone else do her bidding for her. At one point that used to be me.

    Carlos:
    Hopefully that's not true!

    (Carlos takes Jenny to Blake's room where she sees Dylan, Alley, Carrie and London.)

    Jenny:
    Hey Alley. Hi Dylan. It's been a while since we last talked.

    (Carrie notices Dylan and Alley.)

    Carrie:
    I didn't know that you two came in.

    Alley:
    It's nice to see you too.

    (Dylan looks away from Carrie and Carrie notices it but doesn't comment on it.)

    Carrie:
    Oh and Jenny. I haven't seen you in forever.

    Jenny:
    How have you been?

    Carrie: (jittery)
    I'm doing good I guess. It's um so nice to see you all. It was nice meeting you London. I guess I should be going. Jenny we should defenitely hang out some time. I hope Blake does better. Bye everyone.

    Alley:
    Please don't leave on my account.

    Carrie:
    Don't flatter yourself.

    (Carrie looks at Dylan and then leaves.)

    Jenny:
    (to London)
    I don't think I have ever met you.

    London:
    I'm Blake's fiancee. It's nice to meet you.

    (Jenny, Alley, Dylan, and London huddle over Blake.)

    Alley:
    I can't believe that he is in this state.

    Dylan:
    I really hope that he pulls through.

    Jenny:
    He is a great guy. In my opinion he never deserved any of this.

    London:
    I bet he can hear us. Inside he's probaby smiling.

    (London begins to break down.)

    London:
    Why him? Why not anyone else? But of course it has to happen to him.

    Alley:
    We all have to be strong. Crying and thinking of bad things isn't going to help anything.

    Dylan:
    I really wish that he can see how his friends will always be there for him.

    London:
    I think he knows.
    _____________________
    (Carlos acknowleges for London to talk to him.)

    Carlos:
    London can I talk to you for a second?

    London:
    Yes?

    Carlos:
    Dr. Quarr will be in here shortly to tell you the status of Blake.

    London:
    Thank you.

    (Carlos leaves and turns around after seeing Nan with a grin on her face.)

    Carlos:
    I thought that I smelled a lying whore.

    Nan:
    That or my wonderfully expensive purfume.

    Carlos:
    What the hell are you doing here?

    Nan:
    I heard the news about Blake and wanted to see if everything was going okay.

    Carlos:
    Everyone in there hates you and you're not wanted so before you even make one step into his room you better think of the concequences.

    Nan:
    I wasn't going to go into his room. I know that I'm not wanted but I just wanted to know his condition.

    Carlos:
    You're up to something aren't you!

    Nan:
    Me? Now come on Carlos if you're trying to say what I think you're saying then no I had nothing to do with Blake's shooting.

    Carlos:
    You are the best liar. You come up with the greatest lies and anyone who you can manipulate will believe you!

    (Jenny comes out to talk to Carlos and notices Nan.)

    Jenny:
    Nan I know that we don't like each other and we're not friends but I'm trying to be sincere as possible by saying that you better go.

    Carlos:
    She doesn't deserve any sort of sympathy that you can give her.

    Jenny:
    But-

    Carlos:
    Why are you defending her?

    Jenny:
    I'm not. I hate her as much as you do but I'm trying to make the situation a lot better then it's going to be by her going in there.

    Nan:
    I'm leaving now.

    Carlos:
    I have to go too. Jenny I feel as if you've changed about Nan.

    (Carlos hugs her and then leaves.)

    Nan:
    That was sort of very nice of you.

    Jenny:
    Just because we have something over on each other doesn't mean that we can't be civil.

    Nan:
    Yeah that is kind of true. You wouldn't want Carlos to know that you and Will kidnapped me and then lied to him about it.

    Jenny:
    I hope we don't cross paths again because even if I do care about how my boy friend feels about my actions, I might not be so fake and nice towards you! Do remember that I know your family's little secret. You tell Carlos then I tell the whole school about how you really are Tracie Sheridan and that Nan Sheridan died some time ago.

    (Jenny goes back into the room but before she does, Nan's words make her turn around.)

    Nan:
    People will probably look at you as crazy. Oh well, at least you're being smart about everything. You wouldn't want to lose Carlos to me!

    (Nan leaves the hospital.)
    ____________________
    (Alexia is in her room with Owen and hangs up her phone.)

    Alexia:
    I just got off the phone with London.

    Owen:
    And?

    Alexia:
    She's devestated because Blake is wounded in his shoulder and hooked up to machines.

    Owen:
    Kind of like how I was.

    Alexia:
    Yeah but you survived what you went through. By the way, how does your neck feel?

    Owen:
    The pain killers really did help me and I can move it from side to side. I'm cured.

    Alexia:
    I still don't know why you would do this to Blake!

    Owen:
    Fine. I'll tell you the truth. I found out from Nan that the main reason why she pretended to be Tracie was because of Blake!

    Alexia:
    That's-

    Owen:
    Oh and there's more. The reason why she went through with it was because he was black mailing her or threatening her with something that she couldn't get out of. So she had to do it. He wanted her to make me pay. And the only thing that I can think of was when you and I first came to this school and I hit on London. I don't think that he could have let it go. And that's why I did it. I wanted him to be physically and emotionally hurt as I was because of him!

    Alexia: (angry)
    You are so stupid!

    Owen:
    Stupid for what? You would have done the same thing if you were in my position!

    Alexia:
    No I would never have listened to Nan. I spent time with both London and Blake after I felt really bad for trying to break them up by drugging Blake and making London think that I slept with him. And I'm glad that I did a complete turn around because they are like my best friends and they don't deserve this. It just seems like after you hang out with Nan she brainwashes you. Did you know that she blew up Blake's boat ride?

    Owen:
    No.

    Alexia:
    Yeah because she's that psycho and wants to get back at him. And obviously she did it through using you once again.

    Owen:
    It's-

    Alexia:
    Just think about it Owen. You're lucky now. Everyone thinks that Nan was the one who pulled the trigger.

    Owen:
    Then maybe I won't get caught.

    Alexia:
    You seriously need to think of what Nan has done to you. She's ruining your life and you tried to commit suicide for her and then you shoot someone that she hates! Think about it Owen. She brainwashed you!
    _____________________
    (In the parking lot of the hospital, Officer Wendell stops Nan before she gets into her car.)

    Officer Wendell:
    It's been a while since we last talked Nancy.

    Nan:
    Yeah well I've been trying to stay out of the law's way and I always make sure that I wear my seat belt and obey the speed limit.

    Officer Wendell:
    I have to question you on something that is more serious then traffic violations.

    Nan:
    Did I do something wrong?

    Officer Wendell:
    Where were you on the night of Blake Hammerton's shooting?

    Nan:
    I was in my room the whole night. Taking a shower actually. Those details might be a bit x-rated for the boys down at the station.

    (Officer Wendell does not find her comment funny.)

    Officer Wendell:
    Did anyone see you?

    Nan:
    I'm not sure. Maybe you can dig around and find out. Who knows what kind of pervs you have running around the campus.

    Officer Wendell:
    Before we do find out who really did pull the trigger, I hate to say it but you are one of our main suspects?

    Nan:
    Just because I have a past with Blake, that makes me a suspect?

    Officer Wendell:
    A lot of his friends-

    Nan:
    A lot of his friends hate me and of course I'd be the number one suspect! This is like a damn crucifixtion.

    Officer Wendell: (surly)
    Stay in town and don't go anywhere. I don't understand why trouble always has to follow you!

    Nan:
    It's the other people who get me in trouble. I would never kill someone or even try to. I bet there are other people who hate Blake. So if I were you, and I'm not trying to threaten you because you are an authoritative figure of the law, I would start to dig up evidence else where. You're not going to find anything here!

    (Officer Wendell shuts Nan's car door as she drives off.)
    ______________________
    (Nick talks to London near the door way of Blake's hospital room.)

    London:
    Obviously it has to be something serious Dr. Quarr.

    Nick:
    It is.

    London:
    Then tell us.

    Nick:
    Why don't we go for a walk? I can maybe take you to the cafeteria and try to interest you in some delecious jello pudding.

    London:
    Jello pudding is not going to help how I feel about my fiancee's condition.

    (London moves closer to Blake's bed.)

    London:
    All I want to know is if Blake is going to survive. Go ahead and tell us all. They deserve to know the truth as much as I do.

    (London huddles over Blake and then looks back at Nick)

    London:
    Is Blake going to survive?
    ===============================================================
    Join Us Next Time For Another Exciting Episode of
    P O I N T P A L A C E

    ©2000-2003, 2007
  2. Matt P.
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CVJeqilifLs
    Part One

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YBU4gNZHwno
    Part Two

    Want to watch how Point Palace started? Watch the Video version of the Pilot Demo that was shot in 2004 and released in 2006. In a private college at Cody, Colorado, it is here where our story begins...

    Alley Robberts is having trouble with her boyfriend Will Pazner and goes to her good friend Blake Hammerton for advice only to have him yell at her about her drinking habits. Blake has other problems when psycho ex-girlfriend Nan Sheridan is trying to seduce Blake's best friend Dylan Colby. Alley's predictions of Will being unfaithful are true because Will is having an affair with Alley's best friend Carrie and Alley meets a stranger named John Snaldry who falls for her. Then there's Nan's only friend Jenny Fremann who is confused by what Nan has planned and knows that whatever it is, can't be good for anyone!
  3. Matt P.
    Previously on Point Palace:

    - Dylan walked out on Alley after they fought over Carrie. He later got drunk and ended up on Carrie's door and began to make love to her. Alley went to confront Carrie and almost opened the door to find them together but stopped after getting a call from John and realized that they were still friends and decided to go back to her room.

    -Carrie woke up in Dylan's arms and realized that he made a mistake by cheating on Alley.

    - Ava meets Jame's colleuge Professor Peggy Lowrie and begins to wonder if Peggy knows abou the affair.

    -Alexia visits Owen but instead finds Nan and a cat fight pursues. Owen breaks it up and Alexia tells him that he should even be around Nan.

    - Blake talks to London about spending time with her but she has to go shopping for a dress with Alexia and tells him that she will be by later. Blake decides to wait up for her with his door unlocked.

    - Nan brainwashes Owen into thinking that Blake set her up into making Owen think that she was Tracie just to have his feelings broken. Owen then gets a nudge from Nan to take action on him.

    - When Blake is alone, he hears a noise and thinks that it's London, but instead it is Owen with a gun. Owen pulls the trigger and shoots him in the arm as Blake falls to the ground.

    Episode 62:
    Sweet Surprises

    Executive Story Consultant & Creator:
    Matt Politylo

    Logo Designer:
    Mary Zimmerman

    _________________________
    (After shooting Blake, Owen runs away as fast as he can. London knocks on the door to see if Blake answers it. After getting no response, London walks into Blake's room after finding the door unlocked.)

    London: (calling out to him)
    Blake? Blake are you awake?

    (London goes into the common area to find Blake's television set on.)

    London:
    Oh Blake you and your television. You couldn't give it up even if you tried.

    (London notices Blake's feet in front of the couch.)

    London:
    Blake did you fall asleep on the floor?
    (sighing)
    You must've tied a few on.

    (London lightly kicks Blake's feet with her foot to wake him but he doesn't budge.)

    London:
    Come on sleepy head it's time to go into your own bed.

    (London slowly begins to bend down on her knees.)

    London:
    I will never be doing this again until I have my baby!

    (London turns Blake over to notice a bullet in his shoulder, where blood is running out.)

    London:
    (Shocked)
    Blake! Oh my god! You've been shot. Who would do this to you?

    ______________
    (Later that night, John and Carrie hang out at The Palace Cafe. Carrie is deep in thought and John notices it.)

    John:
    You look troubled.

    Carrie:
    I've had a lot on my mind lately.

    John:
    Like what?

    Carrie:
    Oh nothing. Just things back in Lexington and stuff like that.

    John:
    I think I know something that will get anything off of your mind. And it it's-

    (Ginny comes to the table to get their orders.)

    Ginny:
    What can I get you two?

    Carrie:
    Nothing for me.

    John:
    Yeah same here.

    Ginny:
    Wow you two are being pretty cheap tonight. Just kidding. If you want anything you know where you can find me.

    John:
    Thanks Ginny. Actually maybe I can get your opinion on something.

    Ginny: (excited)
    Oooh okay. This sounds like fun.

    (John pulls out a small velvet box from his pocket and opens it revealing a ruby covered bracelet.)

    Ginny:
    That must have cost you a fortune!

    John:
    It's settled then. Any girl would like this, right Ginny?

    Ginny:
    Of course. Any girl would be a fool to give it up.

    (John hands it to Carrie.)

    John:
    I was thinking of you when I got it.

    Carrie:
    This is too much. You shouldn't have.

    Ginny:
    Wow you are so lucky. That would take me like four paychecks to get something as nice as that. A girl can dream I guess.

    (Ginny leaves.)

    John:
    I didn't know if we were becoming more serious so I thought that maybe this would push the issue further.

    Carrie:
    You really didn't have to do this.

    John:
    I wanted to. Spending time with you has gotten me through a lot and any girl who can make me feel this good, is a girl who for sure deserves my heart.

    (Carrie begins to picture Dylan and her making love.)

    Carrie: (feeling guilty)
    It's too much. I really don't deserve this.

    John:
    You really do deserve it. You're like my girl friend and I hope that you would accept it.

    (John leans over to kiss her. She closes her eyes and embraces in their kiss.)

    Carrie:
    I guess this means that we're going out then.

    John:
    After that kiss I would think so. And the other one before that.

    Carrie:
    I can't believe that you still would think of us more than just a team.

    John:
    I really don't care what happens to Alley and Dylan, well let's not get hectic, I still have hope that their plagued with something. Hopefully they'll break each others hearts and we can both be happy. I have something that Dylan maybe could have taken back but he can't now.

    Carrie:
    You're right. I'm all-

    (Carrie pauses and flashes him a warm smile.)

    Carrie:
    I'm all yours.
    _________________
    (After getting out of her own shower in her own room, Nan calls Owen while towel drying her hair.)

    Owen: (shakey)
    He-Hello?

    Nan:
    Did you think that I was the police?

    Owen:
    I didn't know what to think.

    Nan:
    Did you pull it off?

    Owen:
    Yeah. I shot him once. He was alone and I used the silencer that you gave me. Click. One bullet went off and it struck him in his shoulder or his arm.

    Nan:
    You should have went for his heart. I think that you might have given him a chance to survive.

    Owen:
    I'm not really a killer so I wasn't aiming for anything special.

    Nan:
    At least you did something about it. He manipulated me. He used me to get what he wanted. It was downright deceitful black mail. And why? He did it just to get back at you. Do you have any idea why he would do that?

    Owen:
    I can only think of one thing. Whenever I first came to this school I wanted his girl friend and I wasn't going to stop until I had her. He was pretty upset about it but then I met you and I forgot all about her. Plus he's involved with my sister and even she did something bad to him.

    Nan:
    Then that's why Blake wanted me to hurt you. I can tell you are shooken up by it. If the police question you, you can use me as an alibi.
    (Alexia walks to Owen's room but hears his phone conversation with Nan.)

    Owen:
    I just can't believe that I shot him!

    Nan:
    You need to get rid of the gun immediately and don't go back to Blake's room. We'll talk later.

    (Owen hangs up with Nan and turns around to see a very stunned Alexia.)

    Alexia:
    Please say that you were joking.

    Owen:
    Joking? What all did you hear?

    Alexia:
    I heard enough to know that you're almost a criminal.

    Owen:
    I shot Blake because I was getting revenge on him! If you can't understand that then I don't know how you can even stand to look at me.

    Alexia:
    Maybe because I'm your sister. I know that I have told you this so many times before. Even if I might have hated you when we were fighting about something stupid, we're still family. I'm just worried about you and Blake. I don't know if I should talk to either London or Blake, if he is even alive at the moment, because I may be caught in the middle and I don't want to be hated because of something that you did!

    Owen:
    Then fine if you don't want to be hated, leave. That's so like you to be worrying about how it involves you! Admit that you put them before me! I don't need you and if you feel as if your reputation with your, quote un quote best friends, who in my opinion is a bastard and deserves to suffer for what he has done to me. Then just go.

    Alexia:
    No. I've stood with you after you almost killed yourself because of Nan. And then when she acts all nice to you, you end up shooting someone. Is this all registering in with you?

    Owen:
    If you're not on my side then go.

    Alexia:
    I am on your side. I just don't know how I can keep you out of going to jail!
    _____________________
    (The next evening, Ava studies at the library.)

    Ava:
    Psychology. I shouldn't even be studying.
    (joking)
    I can get an A no matter what.

    (Ava pulls out her cell phone to call James.)

    James:
    Hello?

    Ava:
    So what exactly do we have to know on this test?

    James:
    I'm surprised that your even studying.

    Ava:
    Are you telling me that it's going to be really easy for just one particular student named Ava who is also kissing slash falling for her professor?

    James:
    If I gave you an A then I think that it would look very suspicious and all of the other students who tried their hardest would begin to wonder a little bit too much. Just study the different theories from the mentioned psychologists.

    Ava:
    That easy huh?

    James:
    There is nothing easy about the human mind or the class that I teach along with it. I'll see you later.

    Ava: (sarcastic)
    Can't wait.

    (Ava hangs up with James and notices that Peggy has been eavesdropping.)

    Peggy:
    I bet you were talking to Professor Vaughne.

    Ava:
    Not that it is any of your business but yes that was who I was talking to. I needed to ask him a few questions about a test that he's giving us.

    Peggy:
    It's very nice to see how active students can be now of days.

    Ava:
    You teach English, correct?

    Peggy:
    Yep I'm just getting ideas for what kind of books we should be reading. There are so many to choose from. Have you ever read the book Lolita?

    Ava:
    I think that I have heard of it.

    Peggy:
    It's all about this young girl who gets involved with an older man. Bad things seem to happen for them.

    Ava:
    Oh. Sounds interesting.

    Peggy:
    It is.

    Ava:
    Have you ever read the book Minding Your Own Business?

    Peggy:
    No I don't think I have ever heard of that one. Who writes it?

    (Ava stands up.)

    Ava:
    I'm not sure who wrote it or if it even exists. But it's a very suggestive title!

    (Ava takes her things and leaves.)
    _________________
    (In Jenny's room, she has set up an evening with romance by dimming the lights for the two of them and having dinner in which she made.)

    Jenny:
    Tonight is our night.

    Carlos:
    It sure is. I don't want anyone or anything to distract us.

    Jenny:
    You're right.

    (Jenny looks at Carlos's cell phone.)

    Carlos:
    What?

    Jenny: (in regards to the phone)
    That thing is going to go off I just know it!

    Carlos:
    No it's not. Look, I'll turn it off.

    (Before he can turn it off, he gets a call from Nick. Jenny knows exactly who it is.)

    Jenny:
    Don't answer it!

    Carlos:
    It's work. I have to.

    (Carlos answers the call. He leaves the room and then returns to Jenny who's not happy.)

    Carlos:
    Can I maybe take a rain check?

    Jenny: (going balistic after throwing a pillow at him)
    You know what? I was going to give it to you. I was going to give it to you so good that you wouldn't be able to see straight! But you know what? Have one of your patients do it for ya because I'm sick of getting let down!
    __________________
    (A completely sober Dylan knocks on Alley's door as she answers it with a big smile on her face.)

    Alley:
    I haven't seen you all day. You didn't call me and I was worried about you. I didn't like sleeping alone.

    Dylan:
    I didn't want to talk to you and I figured that you felt the same way about me.

    Alley:
    Please come in.

    (Dylan walks in to Alley's room as she shuts the door behind him.)

    Dylan:
    Look since we haven't talked in a while I've been thinking a lot.

    Alley:
    So have I.

    Dylan:
    I 'm sorry for what I said about Carrie. I know now that I made a huge mistake. I only said it because I was just trying to give you a compliment and to show you that you're the one for me, not her.

    Alley:
    Yeah I know. And maybe I took it the wrong way but I'm just very touchy when it comes to her. And I know what I did was wrong with the whole making you choose thing because I was going to leave. I'll admit that it was very dumb and very in the heated moment.

    Dylan:
    I'm glad that we always make up after having a fight.

    Alley:
    So am I.

    Dylan:
    Then what do we do from here?

    (Alley takes off her shirt and takes his hand to caress her bare stomach.)

    Alley:
    I can think of something that can result in the both of us not sleeping alone.
    ___________________
    (At Cody Medical Hospital, Blake undergoes surgery and London watches by a window.)

    Nurse:
    Miss, this isn't really a good place to be in.

    London:
    But I want to be here. I don't care about how much blood I see or what they cut open. I just want to make sure that he's all right.

    Nurse:
    Dr. Quarr will be out shortly to tell you how his condition.

    (Officer Wendell comes to talk to London and the nurse leaves.)

    Officer Wendell:
    Blake Hammerton is a wonderful guy. It's just a shame because I've seen him in even a worse situation before. How do you know him?

    London:
    He's my fiancee.

    Officer Wendell:
    Very lucky girl. I know all about how his father won the lottery.

    London:
    I just got out of the hospital too.

    Officer Wendell:
    For what?

    London:
    A long story that I think other police forces are investigating now.

    Officer Wendell:
    Do you know who would shoot him?

    London:
    Blake has so many friends. None of which could or would even do such a thing to him. That reminds me that I have to call all of them, I bet they would like to know what's going on with him. There's only one person that I can think of.

    Officer Wendell:
    Who?

    London:
    His evil bitch of an ex girl friend, Nan Sheridan!
    _____________________
    (Lenvy begins to walk back to her room from The Palace Cafe until she gets a phone call from Will, which startles her since she is a bit shakey because of the recent news with Patrick's releasing.)

    Lenvy:
    Hey you.

    Will:
    What are you doing right now?

    Lenvy:
    Nothing. I was just going to maybe take a hot bath and then do some homework.

    Will:
    Sounds pretty boring. Did you hear the news today?

    Lenvy:
    Is it about my best friend?

    Will:
    Yeah. Patrick got released on bail.

    Lenvy:
    I knew it. I knew that he was going to be free and now that makes even more scared than I was when the rumors about his bail were being talked about.

    (Lenvy begins to walk towards Will's room.)

    Will:
    I really want you to come over to my room right now.

    Lenvy:
    I'm already one step ahead of you. See you in a bit.

    (Lenvy hangs up with Will as she gets to his door she goes to knock on it but hears something. She quickly shrugs it off as nothing.)

    Lenvy:
    Money. It can be used for good but mostly for evil.

    (All of a sudden Lenvy's vision is covered and all she sees is black as she is blindfolded.)
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    On the next episode of Point Palace:

    Alexia convinces Owen to stay away from Nan

    Dylan and Carrie hide what they did from Alley and John

    Ava gets hit with a surprise from Peggy and James.

    London gets a shock of her life

    Is Patrick going to kidnap Lenvy all over again?

    Find out next time on P O I N T P A L A C E
  4. Matt P.
    Previously on Point Palace:

    - Alley didn’t get an answer from Dylan when he felt disgusted with her for doing what she did and left his own room in an outrage.

    - Nan convinces Owen that she wants to take care of him and it seems to be working as the two kissed but what kind of hidden motives does she have?

    - Ava and James begin to fall for each other more on their date at The River Teal.

    - London tells John about the boat explosion and how the baby will be all right and John tells her how he’s found someone else. The only thing John doesn’t know about is the soon to be wedding.

    - As Alexia continues to plan for the wedding, Blake calls his parents to tell them about it and they are excited only Blake is more nervous about how London’s parents will react.

    - Will kept his promise to Lenvy by telling him what she wanted to hear, only he didn’t tell her about how he killed Zak.

    - Dylan goes over to Carrie’s room a little drunk and has intentions of sleeping with her. When she tries to stop him, the two can’t fight temptation will history repeat itself when Alley is at Carrie’s door right about to walk in on everything.

    Episode 61:
    Brainwashed

    Executive Story Consultant & Creator:
    Matt Politylo

    Logo Designer:
    Mary Zimmerman

    ____________________________
    (Alley begins to twist the handle from Carrie's front door but stops.)

    Alley:
    This seems so familiar. Letting myself in and finding her to betray me. I have to tell her how I feel though. She has to know to stay away from Dylan!

    (Alley opens the door slightly until she gets a call on her cell phone.)

    Alley:
    Hello?

    (Alley shuts the door and backs away.)

    John:
    Hey.

    Alley:
    Hey. I’m surprised to hear from you.

    John:
    Why? Because I’m your ex and you cheated on me so I shouldn’t even be thinking of you?

    Alley:
    Basically yes.

    (Alley begins to walk back to her room. She shakes her head, thinking that confronting Carrie could wait.)

    John:
    I just called to say hi. I was thinking about you and I wanted to call to see if everything is still cool between us.

    Alley:
    Yeah everything is cool between us as it should be.

    John:
    Good. So how are things going between you and Dylan?

    Alley:
    I really don’t want to talk about that right now.

    John:
    Why? Are you two fighting?

    Alley:
    It’s nothing.

    John:
    I can tell in your voice that it doesn’t sound like nothing.

    (Alley settles into her room by throwing her keys on the coffee table and plopping down on her bed.)

    Alley:
    John, I’m sorry to cut everything short but I’m really tired.

    John:
    You know my number so call me if you ever want to talk.

    Alley:
    After everything that happened I’m really glad that we can both still be civil to one another.

    John:
    Good night.

    (John and Alley hang up on each other as John gets a huge smile on his face.)

    John:
    Now you know how it feels to be hurt.

    (Alley sleeps alone in her bed and begins to cry. She looks over to find no one sleeping next to her and that makes her feel hurt even more.)

    Alley:
    I’m so stupid for losing the best thing that has ever happened to me.

    ____________________________
    (The next morning Dylan wakes up in bed with Carrie in his arms and with no clothes on.)

    Dylan: (groggy)
    Carrie? Are you awake?

    Carrie:
    No.

    Dylan: (shaking her)
    Wake up.

    Carrie:
    That was the best sleep I have ever had in a long time.

    Dylan:
    My head hurts so much.

    Carrie:
    How much did you drink?

    Dylan:
    I had enough.

    Carrie:
    Last night was wonderful Dylan. I never knew that you felt that way about me. You and Alley seemed so involved with one another.

    (Dylan realizes what has just happened.)

    Dylan:
    Oh my-

    Carrie:
    What’s wrong?

    Dylan:
    Did we just?

    Carrie:
    Were you that drunk that you didn’t remember it?

    Dylan:
    I did only I didn’t know what was going on.

    (Dylan gets out of bed and begins to dress.)

    Dylan:
    It was an accident. I’m sorry. I just-

    Carrie:
    I don’t understand.

    Dylan:
    Neither do I. Look I have to go.

    Carrie:
    Please don’t.

    Dylan:
    We’ll talk some other time.

    (Dylan leaves Carrie’s room.)

    Dylan: (feeling guilty)
    I just cheated on Alley!

    ____________________________
    (James sits alone at The Palace Café until Professor Peggy Lowrie joins him.)

    Peggy:
    Hey Jim.

    James:
    Hey Peggy. I didn’t see you come in.

    Peggy:
    I don’t think you would have seen a car come through the window.

    James:
    A lot is on my mind.

    Peggy:
    Like what? You know that you can tell me anything that is on your mind.

    James:
    Can you keep a secret?

    ____________________________
    (Owen sleeps in his room as Nan begins to clean up. When she walks in she notices him dozing and wakes him up by loudly opening the windown curtain to bring in some sunlight which shines on his sleepy eyes.)

    Nan: (joking)
    By taking care of you I didn’t think that I was going to have be doing maid work.

    Owen:
    You were the one who wanted to be put to work.

    Nan:
    Well I just want you to get better.

    Owen:
    Cleaning up is going to help.

    Nan:
    Guys are pigs.

    Owen:
    We do what we can.

    (There is a knock on Owen’s door.)

    Nan:
    Would you like me to get that for you?

    Owen:
    If you don’t mind have them go away, I need to shower.

    (Nan opens the door and sees Alexia who isn't happy to see her.)


    __________________
    (James moves in closer to Peggy as the two continue their conversation.)

    Peggy:
    Do you have some really good gossip to tell me about one of the other professors?

    James:
    No.

    Peggy:
    Then do you know who’s getting a raise or a pay deduction?

    James:
    No it’s nothing like that.

    Peggy:
    Then what is it? I bet it’s really good.

    James:
    Oh it is.

    Peggy:
    Who is it about?

    James:
    Myself.

    Peggy:
    You? What’s going on James?

    (Ava walks in and spots James sitting with Peggy.)

    Ava:
    Hi James.

    James:
    This has just got to be my day. One of my good colleagues joins me and then one of my favorite students come as well. Peggy this is Ava, Ava this is Professor Lowrie.

    (Peggy and Ava shake hands.)

    Ava:
    Pleasure.

    Peggy:
    Charmed.

    Ava:
    (to Peggy)
    What exactly do you teach Professor?

    Peggy:
    English. Maybe I’ll have you for a semester.

    Ava:
    That would be nice.

    Peggy:
    Well I’ll leave you two alone. I bet you want to find out when you can make up a test you have missed or what not.

    (Peggy gets up and hugs James as she whispers in his ears.)

    Peggy:
    I’m putting two and two together about your gossip piece. And don’t worry you’re secret is safe with me, if it is what I think it is.

    (Peggy exits.)

    James:
    She’s a nice woman isn’t she?

    Ava:
    Yes and hopefully she’s a very clue less woman as well!

    ____________________________
    (Will and Lenvy spend time in Lenvy’s room while Lenvy reads The International Reporter on her couch, Will puts down his book from studying.)

    Will:
    Are you all of a sudden taking an interest in traveling?

    Lenvy:
    After everything that happened in Ireland, I don’t think that I’ll be traveling for a long, long, long time.

    Will:
    Then why are you reading The International Reporter? I could give you my Geography book in hopes of you teaching me this stuff because I'm not paying any attention to it.

    Lenvy:
    You're SOL on that one but I was just seeing if there was any news about Patrick.

    Will:
    He’s long gone and he’s never going to hurt you again!

    Lenvy:
    That’s not exactly true!

    Will:
    What do you mean?

    Lenvy:
    It says right here that Irish Mobster Patrick Flannigan was released out of jail by bonds close up to one million dollars.

    Will:
    It means nothing!

    (Lenvy throws the paper down on the floor.)

    Lenvy:
    I really hope so!

    (Will hugs Lenvy to put her at ease.)

    Will:
    If anything I’ll protect you!

    Lenvy:
    You’re too much. I think that I-

    Will:
    You don’t have to say it if you don’t mean it.

    Lenvy:
    But I want to. I love you Will.

    ____________________________
    (Alexia gets a mean look on her face.)

    Nan:
    Hi. Can I help you?

    Alexia: (upset)
    You!

    Nan:
    Do I know you from somewhere?

    Alexia:
    What the hell do you think you’re doing here!

    Nan:
    Owen let me live with him. I’m taking care of him because he’s hurt.

    Alexia:
    He’s hurt because of you.

    Nan:
    And who exactly are you?

    Alexia:
    I’m his sister!

    Nan:
    Well I’ll tell him that you stopped by he's in the shower and doesn't want to be bothered. Goodbye.

    (Nan tries to shut the door on Alexia but can’t because she stops it with her hand.)

    Alexia:
    You bitch!

    (Alexia pushes Nan into the room as they both fall on to Owen’s couch and begin pulling each other’s hair. Nan pushes Alexia off of her as she knocks into Owen's coffee table. Alexia slaps her across the face as Nan slaps her back while the two stand up to strangle each other.)

    ____________________________
    (Blake calls London on her cell phone as he walks in the courtyard.)

    Blake:
    Hey.

    London:
    Hey. What are you doing?

    Blake:
    I just got done with my classes and wanted to know if you wanted to get something to eat.

    London:
    Oh I would love to but I can’t.

    Blake:
    Oh why not?

    London:
    Alexia and I are going to go and shop for my wedding dress.

    Blake:
    That’s wonderful. Whatever you pick out will make you look so beautiful.

    London:
    Thanks. Hey I was thinking we never met each other’s parents.

    Blake:
    We must telepathic or something because I thought the same thing the other day and Alexia convinced me to call my parents and tell them.

    London:
    And the verdict was?

    Blake:
    They’re happy about it and they want to meet you as soon as possible. Now that only leaves your parents.

    London:
    Don’t worry about them. They’ll love you as if you were the son they never had.

    Blake:
    I hope. Tonight if you want to come and see me when you’re done buying the dress, you can come and visit me in my room, I might not be there but I still want to see you.

    London:
    I don’t have a key though.

    Blake:
    I’ll leave the door unlocked then.

    London:
    Then maybe I will. Love you.

    Blake:
    You too.

    __________________
    (Owen notices Alexia and Nan fighting as he breaks it up.)

    Owen:
    Alexia get off of her!

    (Owen pulls Alexia off of Nan.)

    Owen:
    Now what in the hell is going on?

    Nan:
    She just started to attack me. You can’t blame me for defending myself.

    Alexia:
    Why is she here Owen? She’s bad news!

    Nan:
    I’m here because I care.

    Alexia:
    I didn’t ask you.

    (Alexia begins to leave.)

    Owen:
    Lexi where are you going?

    Alexia:
    I came to check on you but obviously you don’t need any help. Come back to me when you’ve come to your senses.

    (Alexia leaves as she slams the door behind her.)

    Owen:
    I’m sorry about that.

    Nan:
    It’s okay.

    Owen:
    Look if you want I can understand if you just want to leave. You don’t need any of this.

    Nan:
    The reason why I came here was because I felt bad for the whole “Tracie” thing.

    Owen:
    But that wasn’t your fault!

    Nan:
    I know it wasn’t. Somebody put me up to it.

    Owen:
    What?

    Nan:
    Yeah. It was all a ploy. Blake Hammerton did. He black mailed me and said that if I didn’t do it that he would spread rumors about me.

    Owen:
    You’re telling me that Blake made you break my heart on purpose?

    Nan:
    Yep he’s evil like that. I didn’t want to do it but I felt overpowered by him.

    (Nan begins to fake cry.)

    Owen:
    I can’t believe him!

    Nan:
    I tried to get back at him. That whole explosion thing was my doing. I was trying to kill him for what he did to you!

    Owen:
    That was too much.

    Nan:
    It wasn’t enough.

    (Owen goes over to her purse and gets out a heavy paper bag.)

    Nan:
    Here. There’s something in here that I think would be very useful.

    (Owen takes it but doesn’t look in, he can feel what the item is through the bag.)

    Nan:
    I think that you’re the only one who can get the revenge that is truly needed.

    ____________________________
    (Later into the night Blake sits alone in his living room as he watches television)

    (The door opens and it grabs Blake’s attention.)

    Blake:
    London? Is that you?

    (Blake doesn’t get a response.)

    Blake:
    London?

    (Blake gets up and walks towards the front door and notices Owen.)

    Blake:
    What are you doing here?

    Owen:
    Something that I should have done along time ago.

    Blake:
    What?

    (Owen reaches into the bag that Nan has given him and pulls out a gun with the gloves that he has.)

    Blake:
    Owen put the gun down!

    Owen:
    Go to hell!

    (Owen shoots the gun as a bullet strikes Blake in his chest while he falls down to the ground.)

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  5. Matt P.
    Previously on Point Palace:

    -London’s o.b.g.y.n, Dr. Harnlo, only came to check up on London to tell her that her baby will be fine but Dr. Quarr knew that she was covering up something and Dr. Harnlo tells him that it’s none of his concern because they’re happy.

    -James tells Ava that they can only hold a student/teacher relationship and Ava agrees and asks him out on student/teacher date.

    -Carlos gives the papers to Blake and London to release her out of the hospital and Carlos recognizes Blake because of Jenny. Carlos and Jenny get invited to the wedding but Dr. Quarr overhears the invitation but plans to have him work on that day to purposely upset Jenny.

    -Lenvy begins to fall back in love with Will but asks him to tell her everything about his past and he promises to do so but Lenvy wonders to herself if he can truly keep his promise.

    -Carrie and John celebrate their plans of revenge against Alley and Dylan, which leads to John pulling her in for a kiss.

    -Alley goes over to Dylan’s room and demands for him to choose Carrie or her, he has a flash back of when Carrie made him choose her over Tracie, and Alley informs him that if he chooses Carrie that she’ll leave the school. It’s all up to Dylan to decide who he wants.

    Episode 60:
    Walk Out Wanted

    Executive Story Consultant & Creator:
    Matt Politylo

    Logo Designer:
    Mary Zimmerman
    ____________________
    (Dylan looks at Alley with disgust as the two continue to argue in his room. Standing at arms length, Dylan looks at Alley with angry, tiresome eyes.)

    Dylan:
    I’m not going to answer your question!

    Alley:
    Why not? It’s probably because you know deep inside that you want Carrie.

    Dylan:
    That’s not it at all. I just can’t believe you would do this to me. You knew that Carrie did it to me with Tracie and it led to Tracie’s death.

    Alley:
    There you go again, talking non-stop about Carrie. That’s all that’s on your mind.

    Dylan:
    Do you even know what kind of a burden I have over my head because of Tracie?

    Alley:
    Oh hell let’s bring Tracie into this too. Not only do you want to talk about your ex girl friend after we make love but when we’re fighting you want to bring up another one!

    Dylan:
    Tracie and I were never an item nor were we even together. I was going out with Carrie at the time and-

    (Dylan stops and shakes his head at her.)

    Dylan:
    Forget it.

    Alley: (sarcastic)
    Please continue. I want to know everything else about how Carrie and Tracie affect your life.

    Dylan:
    I’ve already told you about the things that have happened in my life when we started to have our affair behind John’s back!

    Alley:
    I understood you then and I felt sorry for you.

    Dylan:
    I just-

    Alley:
    Just what? Don’t think that I understand you?

    Dylan:
    No because if you did understand me then you wouldn’t try to pull a desperate stunt to make me choose between you and my ex! Come on Alley, it’s a bit dramatic with the whole I’ll leave the school for good routine!

    (Dylan begins to leave.)

    Alley:
    Where are you going?

    Dylan:
    Since this is where you and I practically live, I don’t care if you’re here when I come back or not.

    Alley:
    You’re going to see Carrie aren’t you?

    Dylan:
    I’m leaving to get away from you!

    (Dylan leaves his own room and slams the door behind him leaving Alley by herself.)

    _____________________
    (After making dinner for the two of them, Owen and Nan have a date in Owen’s room later that evening.)

    Nan:
    Do you do this for all of the girls?

    Owen:
    I think you have asked me that before because you’ve had my special treatment a long time ago.

    Nan:
    I’m sorry, but I just don’t remember.

    Owen:
    I would have done this for Tracie a lot. Treated her like a queen.

    Nan:
    Look I’m sorry about that.

    Owen:
    I guess that I’m very forgiving.

    Nan:
    You are to let me in here and to stay with you for a while.

    Owen:
    Not to sound rude but don’t you have your own room?

    Nan:
    I do but I don’t want to go there. I wanted to be with you and make sure that you’re okay.

    Owen:
    You’re here to take care of me?

    Nan:
    Of course I am. How is your neck doing?

    Owen:
    It’s getting better day by day. I’m also getting use to taking painkiller medication.

    Nan:
    I never meant for you to jump off of the roof.

    Owen:
    How did you find out about it?

    Nan:
    I read about it in the school paper.

    Owen:
    That’s even more embarrassing.

    Nan:
    Well you didn’t have to cook for me.

    Owen:
    It’s what I’m studying so I need as much practice as I can get.

    (Nan takes a bite out of the meal that Owen has made.)

    Nan:
    This is absolutely delicious.

    Owen:
    Thanks.

    Nan: (sipping her drink)
    I want to take care of you Owen.

    Owen:
    There’s only one thing you can do for me?

    Nan:
    What’s that?

    (Owen leans in and kisses Nan tenderly.)

    Owen:
    It’s time for my medication.

    Nan:
    Do you need any help?

    Owen:
    No your company has helped me enough.

    (Owen exits.)

    Nan:
    Tracie gets treated like a queen and Nan gets what she wants!

    ____________________
    (Ava and James have their date at The River Teal. She has dressed up and so has James. James seems tense and nervous that people are looking at them but Ava is the opposite, she is quite calm.)

    Ava:
    So who do you think should be the one who pays. The guy or the girl?

    James:
    My father always raised me to be a perfect gentleman. So I would have to say the guy should pay.

    Ava:
    What about who asked who out?

    James:
    It would be nice if the girl paid once and a while. Maybe even pay for the tip or something like that.

    Ava:
    There is so much that I have been learning about you.

    James:
    As a person or as a professor?

    Ava:
    A little bit of both.

    James:
    This was supposed to be our teacher slash student date.

    Ava:
    And it is.

    James: (easing up)
    I’m having fun.

    Ava:
    Yeah so am I.

    James:
    I’m sort of glad that we almost collided with each other that one day.

    Ava:
    That should have never happened.

    James:
    At least it brought us together.

    Ava:
    Remember you’re my teacher.

    James:
    And you’re my lovely student.

    (Ava smiles at the compliment.)

    __________
    (London and John hang out at The Palace Café, while sitting down the awkwardness has almost slid away.)

    London:
    We need to talk.

    John: (sarcastic)
    Yeah. I sort of feel like a divorced couple who needs to see each other on a daily basis.

    London:
    That’s such a great analogy to think of. I just wanted to see how things were with you.

    John:
    You wanted to see if I was still mad at you about how you made up with Blake, right?

    London:
    Yes and I wanted to tell you something really important.

    John:
    I’m not mad at you because I’ve found someone else.

    London:
    Really? That’s great I’m so happy for you.

    John:
    I am too.

    (John gets a call on his cell phone.)

    John:
    Please excuse me.

    London:
    Go right ahead.

    John:
    Hello?

    Carrie:
    Hey.

    John:
    Hey you. What’s going on?

    Carrie:
    Nothing, just wanted to know if you wanted to get together tomorrow. And about the other night, I enjoyed it.

    John:
    Yeah sure that would be great. I’ll think of something for us to do.

    Carrie:
    I can’t wait. See you then.

    John:
    Bye.

    (John hangs up and turns back to London.)

    John:
    Now what is it that you wanted to tell me? I don’t think it talking about my new love life or how civilness is the real object of the conversation.

    London:
    Blake and I were on a boat and it turns out that Nan Sheridan rigged it with bombs.

    John:
    That girl doesn’t know when to stop.

    London:
    I take it you’ve had a run in with her before?

    John:
    Along the way yes.

    London:
    Anyway, the boat exploded and the next thing I knew Blake and I were swimming and then I got really tired.

    John:
    Were you rushed to the hospital?

    London:
    Yes and then Dr. Harnlo from Brunswick came in.

    John:
    Isn’t that your-?

    (John begins to realize.)

    John: (concerned)
    The baby! Is the baby all right?

    London:
    That’s what I wanted to tell you. The baby will be fine.

    John:
    That’s wonderful to hear. Look I need to go and take some pictures of library hall with Leon Kain.

    London:
    Don’t be late to that.

    John:
    And don’t be a stranger.

    London:
    I won’t.
    (John exits as London looks at her engagement ring which she kept hidden from him.)

    London:
    I’ll tell you soon enough about the wedding. I wonder how you’re going to take it.

    ____________________
    (Lenvy and Will talk to each other in Lenvy’s room. The two are watching television together on her couch in her common area.)

    Lenvy:
    I didn’t know whether or not to take bets on if you would come here tonight.

    Will:
    I’m a man of my word.

    Lenvy:
    I respect that.

    Will:
    So what is it exactly that you want to know?

    Lenvy:
    I want to know everything about you. Your past. The good and the bad.

    Will: (turning off the television)
    Are you sure that you’re ready for it?

    Lenvy:
    The reason why I was angry with you was because I felt as if I was falling for someone who I had no idea about. I don’t care what you’ve done. I just want to know.

    Will:
    I don’t want know where to start.

    Lenvy:
    Start with when you came here.

    Will:
    Fine. I came to Point Palace a few years ago. I started going out with Alley Robberts and then I had an affair with her best friend Carrie Slondsbid.

    Lenvy:
    Which is why you thought that I was Carrie playing tricks on you?

    Will:
    You two have the most striking resemblance.

    Lenvy:
    Don’t remind me. Please continue.

    Will:
    I cheated on Alley even before Carrie with this evil devil named Nan Sheridan. She got me drunk and convinced me that Alley was having an affair with her good friend Blake Hammerton. Then I met up with Nan’s best friend Jenny Fremann who made an alliance with me to get back at Nan. She knew that she was pregnant and Blake was driving drunk so I got in the car with him and made him crash his car into her. It made her lose the baby. Only the baby turned out to be mine.

    Lenvy:
    That’s terrible.

    Will:
    She didn’t even tell me.

    Lenvy:
    I’m sorry.

    Will:
    That’s not the half of it. It was somebody else’s doing and I got my revenge. I left town after giving Alley a nasty note and vowed never to return. Then I got a call from Jenny who needed help with her boy friend and I was going to help her and just be on my way. Instead got into a fight with John Snaldry, which landed him in the hospital, it was purely accidental.

    Lenvy:
    He didn’t mention that.

    Will:
    He never would. Then I saw another ex girl friend of mine named Ava Cecilenelli who was in tons of trouble and then I met you thinking that you were Carrie and realized what kind of a fool I was when it turned out that you weren’t.

    Lenvy:
    And that’s it?

    Will:
    Up to this point yes. This is me or was me.

    Lenvy:
    You sounded like a horrible person.

    Will:
    I was. I was nothing but a dog. But you changed all of that.

    (Lenvy hugs Will.)

    Lenvy: (hopelessly romantic)
    Oh Will. You didn’t break a promise with me. I’m beginning to love you even more then I did when I first met you.

    Will:
    That’s good to hear.

    Lenvy:
    You’re beginning to change my mind on a big issue that I once told you about.

    Will:
    Oh really? I think I know what you’re talking about.

    Lenvy:
    I’ll get back to you on that one!

    (Lenvy and Will kiss each other. Before Will can go further with her, she stops kissing him to turn the television back on.)

    ___
    (Alexia and Blake go over some more things for the wedding in the school’s library.)

    Alexia:
    What about both of your parents?

    Blake:
    What about them?

    Alexia:
    Don’t they know about it?

    Blake:
    No not yet.

    Alexia:
    Then call them and tell them.

    Blake:
    But-

    Alexia:
    Now!

    Blake:
    Fine.

    (Blake calls his parents via his cell phone as his father Edmund Hammerton answers it at their home in Pennsylvania.)

    Edmund:
    Hey you.

    Blake:
    Hey dad.

    Edmund:
    Hold on your mother’s going to get on the other phone.

    Katrina:
    Hey cho-

    Blake:
    Mom!

    Katrina:
    What’s up?

    Blake:
    I found someone special.

    Katrina:
    That’s wonderful when are we going to meet her?

    Blake:
    When we get married, which is very soon.

    Edmund: (stunned)
    What? You’re getting married?

    Blake:
    Yes and I want you to be there.

    Edmund:
    I’m shocked!

    Katrina:
    But I’m happy for you. We both are.

    Edmund:
    I can’t believe it. You’re getting married!

    Blake:
    Yeah dad.

    Edmund:
    When are we going to meet this girl’s parents?

    (Blake holds the phone and talks to Alexia.)

    Blake:
    Do you think you can make a dinner reservation at The River Teal?

    Alexia:
    Sure thing and right after London and I go over the dress selection and I need to decide on what kind of flower arrangement there should be. We also need to decide on what kind of a church.

    Blake:
    Mom, Dad, we’re all going to have dinner so I want you to fly into Colorado in a few weeks.

    Edmund:
    We love you.

    Katrina:
    And we’re so happy for you.

    Blake:
    Seeya.

    (Blake hangs up with his parents.)

    Alexia:
    Was it that bad?

    Blake:
    Now I’m worried about how London’s parents will react.
    _______________
    (Dylan stumbles to Carrie’s new room in the middle of the night. He knocks on the door once before pounding on it loudly.)

    Carrie:
    Dylan? What are you doing here?

    Dylan:
    Going against Alley’s wishes. We need to talk.

    Carrie:
    You’re drunk.

    Dylan:
    No! Yeah maybe a little.

    Carrie:
    What do you want to talk about.

    Dylan:
    I want you and I know want me.

    Carrie:
    But-

    Dylan:
    No buts. Just you and I. Tonight!

    (Dylan kisses Carrie as they both fall on top of her bed.)

    Carrie:
    But you’re with Alley and I’m with John!

    (Dylan takes Carrie’s shirt off as he does with his.)

    Dylan:
    But I want you. You can’t fight temptation.

    (Dylan and Carrie continue to kiss each other as they get more intimate with each other.)

    (Outside Alley decides to talk to Carrie as she stands in front of her door.)

    Alley:
    It’s time you get a piece of my mind Carrie!

    (Alley puts her hand on the door handle and slowly begins to turn it)

    ===============================================
    Join Us Next Time For Another Exciting Episode of

    P O I N T P A L A C E

    ©2000-2003, 2007
  6. Matt P.
    Previously on Point Palace:

    - A high speed car chase pursues in Ireland when Will purposely speeds to get the police’s attention and when they do, Patrick gets arrested when Will tricks him into stopping. Will gets a small fine and Lenvy wants to leave Ireland as soon as possible.

    - Ava joins James’s class but after class they accidentally kissed.

    - Alley and Dylan get into an argument over the phone about Carrie.

    - Carrie reports the good news about what she overheard to John as they realize they make a good team together.

    - Alexia already starts planning for the wedding by giving cake samples to Blake and London.

    - Nan shows up to Owen’s door and asks to stay with him, even if it means being Tracie.

    - London’s o.b.g.y.n. comes from Ohio to tell London and Blake very important news about her baby as London demands to know what’s wrong with her child.


    Episode 59:
    The Deciding Factor

    Head Writer & Creator:
    Matt Politylo

    Logo Designer:
    Mary Zimmerman
    _____
    (Dr. Harnlo sits down next to London in her hospital room.)

    Dr. Harnlo:
    It’s…

    London:
    What is it? Is it something really bad?

    Dr. Harnlo:
    No. You’re still going to have a healthy baby boy or girl.

    (London is happy and relieved.)

    London:
    You scared me half to death.

    Blake:
    You had nothing to worry about.

    (Blake hugs London.)

    London:
    I was so scared.

    Dr. Carnlo:
    I’m sorry if I sounded as if something bad had happened. You’ll be delivering very soon.

    Blake: (happy)
    Very soon?

    London:
    I can’t believe it.

    Dr. Harnlo:
    I just wanted you to know that everything was going to be all right.

    Blake: (relieved)
    Everything is all right.

    London:
    Everything works out for us.

    (Dr. Quarr returns and makes eyes with Dr. Harnlo who picks up on his nonverbal look.)

    Dr. Quarr:
    Dr. Harnlo are you done with what you had to say?

    Dr. Harnlo:
    Yes. London if you have any problems what so ever. You know my number in Ohio so don’t be afraid to call.

    London:
    Thank you Doctor. I’ll do that.

    (Dr. Harnlo looks at her watch.)

    Dr. Harnlo:
    I have a flight to catch. Good bye you two. Oh and for someone who is so far in her pregnancy, I have never seen someone look so good.

    (Dr. Harnlo begins to leave.)

    Blake:
    Dr. Harnlo before you leave.

    Dr. Harnlo:
    Yes?

    Blake:
    London and I are getting married soon. We haven’t set a date yet but I can guarantee it will be sooner than later. It would mean to the world to London and to I if you came. Please bring your family, just as long as you were there.

    Dr. Harnlo:
    London has my address. Just send the invitation and I’ll be sure to make it.

    (Dr. Harnlo exits and Dr. Quarr turns his attention to them.)

    Blake:
    I suppose you have some important news for us?

    Dr. Quarr:
    Actually I do.

    __________________
    (The next day after class Ava walks up to James’s desk.)

    Ava:
    Professor Vaughne?

    James:
    Ava please you can call me James.

    Ava:
    I wasn’t sure. We’re in the classroom you know.

    James:
    I’m sorry about yesterday.

    Ava:
    That’s sort of what I wanted to talk to you about.

    James:
    It was an accident and I-

    Ava:
    It wasn’t all of your fault because I sort of went in for it too only I didn’t know what I was doing until it happened and then when it did. It was just-

    James:
    Weird?

    Ava:
    In a way yes. But it felt a little nice too.

    James:
    I assure you that it will never ever happen again. If word got out that it did. I could be in major trouble.

    Ava:
    I know that’s what you’re worried about but I wanted to ask you something.

    James:
    Ava you’re how old?

    Ava:
    I’m nine-teen years old.

    James:
    And I’m thirty. It’s a huge difference and I’m sorry but we can only hold a student slash teacher relationship.

    Ava:
    That’s totally fine. I just wanted to know if you would like to go out on a teacher slash student date?

    ___________________
    (After settling in to her room Lenvy and Will spend time on her couch. He holds her in his arms, happy to have her back.)

    Lenvy:
    You were so brave.

    Will:
    No. I’m really not.

    Lenvy:
    Yeah you really were. You didn’t give up hope on me whenever you could have. You could have just thought that you and I were through and went to the next girl.

    Will:
    I told you that I really liked you and I was being an ass for thinking that you were Carrie.

    Lenvy:
    I called you once before.

    Will:
    I never received the call there was an unknown ID that came up, it must've been you.

    Lenvy:
    That’s because some girl answered the phone. Only I didn’t want to talk to her. I thought that you were over me.

    Will:
    Wait a minute. Another girl answered my phone? Oh yeah...now I remember. That girl was sort of a…

    Lenvy:
    What is she to you?

    Will: (looking away)
    A friend I guess.

    Lenvy:
    Will, I feel as if you hide so much from me.

    Will:
    I know but-

    Lenvy:
    No. No buts. I want the truth Will. Yes you saved me and I’m totally thankful for a guy like you. I just want to know everything about you.

    Will:
    Fine. I have a few classes to go to but I’ll tell you everything that you want to know another day.

    Lenvy:
    Tomorrow! I want to know everything about you tomorrow!

    Will: (flirting)
    Now I don’t know. If you want to know everything about Will Pazner then you’re going to have to give something to receive.

    (Lenvy kisses Will’s cheek.)

    Will:
    You’re going to have to do better than that.

    (Lenvy softly kisses Will’s lips.)

    Lenvy:
    There, then that means that I get everything I want tomorrow.

    Will:
    I-

    Lenvy:
    You what?

    Will:
    I promise.

    (Will exits.)

    Lenvy:
    Can you keep that promise?

    _____
    (Dr. Quarr continues to talk to Blake and London who is anxiously waiting to be discharged.)

    Dr. Quarr:
    All you have to do is sign a couple of papers and you will be on your way home.

    Blake:
    That’s wonderful doctor. When will we be receiving them?

    Dr. Quarr:
    Soon enough. I’ll have somebody send them in very shortly. Please excuse me.

    (Dr. Quarr exits to find Dr. Harnlo jotting on her files. He stops her.)

    Dr. Quarr:
    Why didn't you tell them the truth?

    Dr. Harnlo:
    Because those two are happy in there. When the time comes, she'll find out and they will deal with it in their own way!

    Dr. Quarr:
    But-

    Dr. Harnlo:
    But nothing Nick! There is a time and a place for everything. I have a flight to catch and you have a hospital wing to run.

    (Dr. Harnlo exits, leaving Nick to feel frustrated.)
    ___________________
    London:
    None of this should have happened.

    Blake:
    I know and I feel as if it’s all my fault.

    London:
    No don’t say that what. It’s not true what so ever! I don’t know Nan all that well but from what I got she’s one psycho bitch and obviously isn’t over you or has put your relationship that you once had with her back in the past.

    Blake:
    It’s sort of stupid and childish. Trying to better each other and make the one feel as if they’re destroyed.

    London:
    I told you that Point Palace acts like a game.

    Blake:
    I know but with Nan it’s like as immature as it is, I just feel as if I want to see her crying or…

    London:
    Dead?

    Blake:
    If I ever heard about Nan being dead then I would probably throw a surprise party and invite everyone who has ever known her.

    London:
    I don’t think that we should be worrying about Nan. We have something much more expensive to think about.

    Blake:
    Of course. Our wedding.

    London:
    I’m so glad that we have Alexia as a wedding planner.

    Blake:
    She’s changed for the best and in the end is going to give us what we want.

    London:
    I love you.

    (Blake kisses London’s forehead.)
    _____________________
    (Carrie and John celebrate at The River Teal. They sit across each other with smiles on their faces.)

    John:
    Tell me again what happened?

    Carrie:
    It was great. I went to the door and all I heard Alley screaming was “why is it that after we make love you compare me to Carrie!”

    John:
    That’s like music to my ears.

    Carrie:
    To think that we were going to be the broken hearted ones. I didn’t think that you were being serious when you said that you wanted to celebrate.

    John:
    What you did has put me in the greatest mood and I thought that we just had to. Let’s make a toast.

    (Carrie and John lift up their glasses of champagne.)

    Carrie:
    What should we celebrate to?

    John:
    Revenge and how sweet it is that it’s going our way.

    Carrie:
    I’m all for that.

    (Carrie and John clink their glasses then drink.)

    Carrie:
    I have to go use the ladies room to fix my makeup so I’ll be right back. I'm sort of having a good time tonight. Thank you.

    (Carrie stands up and goes over to kiss John on his cheek. He pounds the champagne flute and then pours himself another glass.)

    John:
    Is that all I get?

    Carrie: (turning around caught off guard)
    What?

    (John pulls Carrie in tighter for their lips to lock further.)

    John:
    This might be the bubbly talking but it should be said at least, I want you!

    __________________
    (Alley knocks on Dylan’s door in the middle of the night. She shivers from the cold.)

    Dylan:
    It’s a chilly night. You might want to come in.

    Alley:
    I wasn’t planning on staying long.

    (Alley comes in as Dylan shuts the door behind him.)

    Alley:
    I have been thinking a lot about what has happened recently.

    Dylan:
    What happened recently wasn’t all that of a big deal.

    Alley:
    To me it is!

    Dylan:
    Seriously?

    Alley:
    How can you not see it as that? That’s like me calling you John after we made love. How would you feel about that?

    Dylan:
    Yes I would be a little upset but I would have quickly realized it was a mistake and let it go.

    Alley:
    Sure you would.

    Dylan:
    You misunderstood me.

    Alley:
    No I understood you perfectly.

    Dylan:
    Well obviously you didn’t because what I said was that Carrie would never be as sexual as you are and I love that about you.

    Alley:
    You bringing up her name was enough for me! I’m sick of her and that you’re still thinking of her.

    (Dylan becomes frustrated.)

    Dylan:
    What do you want from me?! You’re the one with a problem so tell me Alley, tell me what is it that you want to do!

    ______________
    (Carlos comes in to Blake’s room and hands him the papers.)

    Carlos:
    Here you go this is all you have to sign and when you’re done just give it to the front desk secretary and she’ll handle it from there.

    Blake:
    Thank you very much.

    Carlos:
    You’re name is Blake Hammerton right?

    Blake:
    Yes, but how do you know me?

    Carlos:
    I think that you might know my girl friend.

    Blake:
    What’s her name?

    Carlos:
    Jenny Fremann.

    Blake:
    Yes I know Jenny, she’s a good person, and I’m sure you know that too.

    Carlos:
    She is.

    Blake:
    And this is my fiancé London Tyler.

    Carlos:
    Nice to meet you London.

    London:
    Same here.

    Carlos:
    My name is Carlos DeViego and I’ll tell Jenny that you said hi. It was nice meeting the both of you and good luck in the future.

    Blake:
    Carlos I was wondering if you and Jenny wanted to come to our wedding.

    Carlos:
    That would be our pleasure. My room number at Point Palace is 26 A just send me an invitation there.

    London:
    You’ll get an invitation soon.

    (Dr. Quarr overhears their conversation.)

    Dr. Quarr:
    A wedding? Why Carlos you won’t be able to go to a wedding, because you’ll have to be called in to work on whenever the date is.

    (Dr. Quarr begins to giggle evilly.)

    Dr. Quarr: (being sarcastic)
    Jenny would absolutely love that!

    __________________
    (Alley and Dylan continue to work out their problems in Dylan’s room.)

    Alley:
    I want you to choose!

    Dylan:
    I’ve heard this all before.

    (Dylan begins to have a flash back)

    Carrie:
    Dylan it’s either me or her!

    (Dylan sees himself holding on to Tracie’s hand as her and Carrie dangle over the cliff. Carrie begins to slip and time is running out.)

    Tracie:
    Dylan please help me I would always love you!

    (Dylan can’t hold on to Tracie much longer and drops her as she screams all the way to her death)

    (The flash back ends.)

    Alley:
    And if you choose her over me then I’m gone. I don’t mean gone as in breaking up in our relationship. I’ll leave this town for good. I’ll never come back and I’ll never ever see you again. Sort of like what Carrie did! Only you didn’t have a choice, except for now. At least I'm giving you that.

    Dylan:
    Alley you can’t-

    (A tear begins to gleam in Alley’s eye.)

    Alley:
    Obviously I must. Break free from the ties that bind you. What’s it going to be Dylan? Carrie or me?
    ========================================
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    P O I N T P A L A C E

    ©2000-2003, 2007
  7. Matt P.
    Previously on Point Palace:
     
    - Vicki and Ike said their final good byes to Ava as they truly believe that they can be happy off campus. 
     
    - Jenny and Carlos begin to celebrate with one another over Nan’s disappearance.  Jenny begins to have a guilty conscience over the blackmailing issue that her and Nan had.
     
    - Owen gets released and Alexia tries to calm her mother down who was worried about her son.
     
    - After making love Dylan upsets Alley by accidentally calling out Carrie’s name.  Carrie reports it to John when she eavesdrops on the two.
     
    - Will begins to investigate a noise over his neighbor and finds Lenvy after she convinces Patrick to let her go back to the hotel room to retrieve some things.  A plan that worked all too well as Lenvy and Will quickly united, Patrick was hot on their trail.  A high speed chase in their cars begins.


    Episode 58:
    The Roads of Ireland

    Head Writer & Creator:
    Matt Politylo

    Logo Designer:
    Mary Zimmerman
    ____________________
    (Will drives across the roads in Ireland high trying to ditch car after car but mostly Patrick's who has been gaining on them.)
     
    Lenvy:
    He’s still behind us.

    Will:
    Who is he?

    Lenvy:
    If we make it out of here alive I’ll tell you everything I promise.

    Will:
    Is he some ex who’s really pissed off at you?

    (A gunshot shoots a speed sign which is close by them. It makes Lenvy scream and duck her head.)
     
    Lenvy: (while still ducking)
    It’s a long story. What are you going to do?

    Will:
    I just thought of something.

    Lenvy:
    Can you think and drive at the same time?

    Will:
    Real funny. Obviously I can if I haven’t gotten us killed yet.

    Lenvy:
    Well what are you going to do James Bond?

    Will:
    Drive fast enough to get some police person’s attention and have them pull us over. You’re angry friend will be sure to follow!
    ______________________________________
     
    (One minute before Psychology class, Ava walks in and takes a seat. She looks around to see if there is anyone she knows but since Psychology isn't really her major, there are only new faces around her.)
     
    Ava: (to herself)
    He’s helped me before.
     
    (James walks in and goes over to a podium. He rumages through his bag to pull out the class textbook and his notes. The freshmen girls in the front row giggle, he smiles to appease them, and Ava rolls her eyes at their obvious flirting.)
     
    James:
    I would like to welcome you to another semester of Psychology. This class will be fun and exciting for many of you who want to learn how the human mind really works.
     
    (James notices Ava.)
     
    James:
    It seems we have a new student joining us today.
     
    Ava: (nervous)
    Hi Professor Vaughne.

    James:
    Class I would like you to meet a very special person who has an interesting story to tell.

    Ava:(embarrased)
    No I don’t. My name is Ava Cecilenelli. I just joined this class because- 

    (Ava pauses.)
     
    Ava:
    Because I guess I want to learn more about the bad things that humans go through.
     
    (Other students are caught off guard by what Ava has said.)
     
    James:
    Actually Ava is a prime example of a lecture we will be learning about in a later part of this class. Ava you don't mind if I discuss it, do you?

    Ava:
    No, go right ahead.

    James: (continuing)
    See Ava just went through something called multiple personality syndrome. Basically it’s when voices go through a person’s head and makes them act differently or however they want that person to act.

    Ava:
    I’m glad that a psycho who was controlling my inner thoughts is gone now, for good.
    __________________________________________

    (The next day, Carrie and John spend time at The Palace Café.)
     
    John:
    You sounded really excited on the phone the other day.

    Carrie:
    I had a reason to.

    John:
    What happened? Did Dylan throw his loving arms at you and welcomed you back into his life and realized what a mistake it was to fool around with my girl friend at the time?

    Carrie:
    Sort of.

    John:
    Sort of?

    Carrie:
    I was going to talk to Dylan when he was with Alley. I knew that they would be together because it seems like they are conjoined at the hip or at least the pelvis. I heard Alley screaming about something and it had to do with me!

    John:
    No offense but I doubt that Alley would be in a jealous rage over you.

    Carrie:
    None taken and I know why you think that.

    John:
    Because she has Dylan and you don’t.

    Carrie:
    Exactly, but I made out what she was screaming about.

    John:
    She does have a little bit of a huge mouth.

    Carrie:
    It was something juicy.

    John:
    Like what?

    Carrie:
    He mentioned my name after they were making love.
     
    (John seems surprised.)
     
    John:
    Then our plan is working out wonderful.

    Carrie:
    I hear a celebration coming up.

    John:
    So do I. You and I make a good team.
    _____________________________________
     
    (Alley spends time alone in her room. She turns on the television but switches it after the teen soap Blue Crystal comes on. Love stories or anything near it was something she didn't want to deal with.)
     
    Alley:
    Men. Stupid men. You can’t live with them and you can’t live with out them.
     
    (Alley’s phone rings and she answers it to find out that it’s Dylan.)
     
    Dylan:
    Are you still mad at me?

    Alley:
    I have every right to be.

    Dylan:
    Yeah you do. It’s not like you weren’t in the same situation I was in a little while ago.

    Alley:
    What? Usually if you’re in the doghouse with a girl you don’t make her even madder by-

    Dylan:
    I’m sorry Alley but you always think that you're right and I had to go through you trying to get over John after the break up.

    Alley:
    I broke up with John because of you. And if you think that I’m not right about a lot of things then maybe I’m not right enough to go out with you!
     
    (In a rage, Alley hangs up on Dylan and throws the remote across the room.)
    ________________________
     
    (Alexia brings up a plate full of wedding cake samples and pictures of the designs to London's room. She was in a joyful spirit and it was pressing off on the married couple to be.)
     
    Alexia:
    Now I want to get an early start on this wedding so I thought that it would be a great idea to decide on what kind of wedding cake you two want.

    Blake:
    Sounds delicious.

    London:
    All you think about is food.

    Alexia:
    I have picked out at least five cake choices that would look great for a wedding.

    Blake:
    We get to sample them right?

    London:
    Of course we do.
     
    (There are five different cake slices displayed on the table.)
     
    Alexia:
    Cake number one is half and half. Cake number two is chocolate. Cake number three is Vanilla. Cake number four is carrot cake. Cake-

    Blake:
    Scratch that one out.

    London:
    Yeah that sounds kind of gross.

    Alexia:
    I have to agree. The last cake is marble.
     
    (Blake puts a sliver of the first cake in London’s mouth.)
     
    London:
    This tastes absolutely delicious.
     
    (London puts a piece of the same cake in Blake’s mouth.)
     
    Blake:
    You’re right.

    Alexia:
    So do you want this cake?

    Blake and London:
    We’ll take it!

    Alexia:
    With this design?

    Blake:
    The cake looks beautiful and the plastic bride and groom will resemble us fine.
     
    (The doctor walks in to talk to Blake.)
     
    Blake:
    Doctor, London will be going home soon right?

    Dr. Quarr:
    She’s fine but I want her o.b.g.y.n. to check on her before she leaves. She’ll be in shortly.
    (Dr. Quarr leaves.)
     
    London:
    What did he say?

    Blake:
    We’ll find out.

    _____________________________________
     
    (Settling in his room, Owen relaxes until he gets a knock on his door.)
     
    Owen:
    Lexi is that you?
     
    (Owen opens it to find Nan.)
     
    Nan:
    I was wondering if we could talk.

    Owen:
    I thought you hated me.

    Nan:
    I never said hate.

    Owen:
    You’re considered to be missing. A lot of people are rooting for you to be dead.

    Nan:
    I’ve cleared everything up with the police. To think that Blake and London tried saying I wanted to blow them up, I explained to the police that the boat hit a rock and next thing you know, it was kaboom. Plus the captain was obviouly smoking dope. They knew that I’m back and I don't get in trouble. I just wanted to scare everyone and make them think that I was gone for good. Did you?

    Owen:
    I don’t know what to think about you.

    Nan:
    I know what I think about you.
     
    (Nan leans in and kisses him.)
     
    Owen:
    You told me that I fell in love with Tracie. Don't do this to me if you really don't mean it!

    Nan:
    I can be Tracie if you want me to be. I want to take care of you Owen so please let me do that!
    _____________________________________
    (Class has ended and Ava talks to James alone.)
     
    Ava:
    I guess that wasn’t too embarrassing.

    James:
    It’s fun to pick on students.

    Ava:
    Thanks for everything. You really didn’t have to save me.

    James:
    I wanted to. The first day we met I always told you that if you needed anything then you can come talk to me. I’m glad that you remembered.

    Ava:
    You’re a good teacher.

    James:
    And you’re a good student.
     
    (Ava gives James a hug which then turns into an accidental kiss.)
    _______________________
    (Alexia has left Blake and London alone. London is a bit jittery while laying freely in her hospital bed.)
     
    London:
    I’m scared.

    Blake:
    There’s nothing to be scared about. I’m sure that they’re just going to tell you that they want you to fill out some papers before you go.

    London:
    I can only hope.
     
    (London’s o.b.g.y.n. walks in)
     
    London: (surprised)
    Dr. Harnlo.

    Dr. Harnlo:
    London I haven’t seen you since-

    London:
    Since I last visited you in Ohio.

    Dr. Harnlo:
    I came up on a special call just to see you.

    London:
    Why?

    Dr. Harnlo:
    While you were sleeping I ran some tests to see how you’re baby was doing, I wish I would have told you that I was here sooner but you were unconscious and the doctors didn't want to worry you. And I have some news to report about it.
     
    (Blake looks at Dr. Harnlo.)
     
    Blake:
    Is it good news?

    Dr. Harnlo:
    It’s important news that London must know about.

    London:
    What is it Doctor Harnlo? Will my baby be all right?
    ========================================
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    ©2000-2003, 2007
  8. Matt P.
    Previously on Point Palace:

    -Days have gone by and London wakes up to a very concerned Blake who is happy that she has come back to him.

    -Will checks into the room next to Lenvy's when he thinks he hears her returning.

    -Carrie gives John back the ring and they both explain to each other how they are heart broken which brings them closer together.

    -Dylan's cousin Jason calls and asks if he got his message about Carrie which Alley remembers erasing and she covers it up with sex.

    -Owen wakes up to Alexia who meets Carlos and they talk about Nan when Jenny comes to visit, Carlos delivers the news that Nan's body can not be found.

    -Vicki and Ike decide to use Ava's "skills" when Vicki claims that there is only one way for her to be happy.  By driving Ava's banged up truck off of the outskirts cliff and crashing all the way to the bottom.


    Episode 57:
    Goodbyes That Are Put to Rest

    Executive Story Consultant & Head Writer:
    Matt Politylo

    Logo Designer:
    Mary Zimmerman
    __________________________________________

    (Ava calls Leon Kain from her dorm room. Leon wiggles his glasses before beginning to type away on his laptop.)

    Ava:
    I know the whole scoop on Vicki Wallace.

    Leon:
    She's hot breaking news that she has turned up dead. Before we start the interview, you don't mind if I quote you?

    Ava:
    No, just as long as my words aren't twisted around.

    Leon:
    I'm a reporter. Not a liar.

    (Ava snickers at his comparison.)

    Ava:
    It could be two of the same. Vicki's death is a shame. She was a wonderful friend to everyone, and never deserved the heartbreak that was caused by her ex boy friend Jake Teneski.

    Leon:
    Didn't he die too?

    Ava:
    Yeah. It was an accident though but he deserved everything he got and is probably rotting in hell as we speak.

    Leon:
    How exactly did Vicki die?

    Ava:
    She couldn't take the pain of losing her ex boyfriend. She couldn't sleep and she couldn't eat.

    Leon:
    She didn't die of starvation.

    Ava:
    No she was grieving because Ike wasn't there for her and she couldn't take it. She said that she wanted to go for a drive in my truck. I didn't think that she would have driven it off of the outskirt cliff.

    Leon:
    Ike Landly was her boy friend but didn't he die some time ago?

    Ava:
    Yes and she never really handled it well. That time whenever you saw her freaking out in the hallways of the school was caused a lot by stress, he died the same exact time that Jake did.

    Leon:
    In your opinion. Do you think that she committed suicide?

    Ava:
    Vicki was better than that. In my opinion. I truly believe that she lost control and it was too late to back out of whatever was going on.

    Leon:
    I'm sorry about your friend but I'll write a good story about her that will do her well.

    Ava:
    Thanks Leon. I'm sad about her death too.

    (Ava hangs up and looks at a picture of Vicki which begins to sadden her.)
    ________________________________

    (Alexia drives Owen home from the hospital. The two begin to talk on the way back and the mood seems to be joyful at least from the smile on Alexia's face.)

    Alexia:
    You're so lucky to be alive.

    Owen: (apeasing her)
    Yeah I know.

    Alexia:
    Why is it that I'm your younger sister yet I feel as if I have to watch out for you?

    Owen:
    There have been plenty of times whenever I have looked out for you.

    Alexia:
    I'm just glad that Nan's gone.

    Owen:
    Me too. I guess it means that she can't do any damage to anyone any more.

    Alexia:
    What do you want me to tell mom?

    Owen:
    I'll talk to her.

    Alexia:
    You know that she'll be upset but relieved about all of this.

    Owen:
    Then it's a good thing that she can't see me, because I don't know how I would be able to explain my neck brace.

    Alexia:
    It's coming off soon right?

    Owen:
    That's what Carlos told me.

    (Alexia dials up her mom and puts her on speaker phone so that she can concentrate on driving.)

    Alexia:
    Mom hi it's Lexi. I just wanted to let you know that Owen got seriously hurt.

    Christina:
    What happened? Is he okay?

    Alexia:
    He just got out of the hospital today.

    Christina:
    What? He was in the hospital? Why wasn't I informed about any of this?

    Alexia:
    Mom I didn't want to worry you. I handled everything and this college has a wonderful insurance policy.

    Christina:
    What kind, don't tell your mom so that you won't get in trouble?

    Alexia:
    No. It's something to do with it being small and a private school.

    (Owen signals to want to talk to their mother.)

    Alexia:
    I love you mom and here's Owen.

    (Owen takes the phone off of her and places her off of speaker phone so that the two could talk privately.)

    Owen:
    Hey mom.

    Christina:
    Sweetie. What happened?

    Owen:
    Nothing mom. I slipped and fell off a balcony and I uh um. I just fell.

    Christina:
    Were you drinking?

    Owen:
    No mom. I was late to class and I lost my balance.

    Christina:
    Then we're going to sue!

    Owen:
    Mom no! I'm fine. I love you.

    Christina:
    I love you too. Do you want me to come see you two?

    Owen:
    No we're at college for a reason.

    Christina:
    Bye. Owen before you go.

    Owen:
    Yeah?

    Christina:
    Tell your sister this too. The next time any of this happens where one of you gets hurt, I want to be the first to know!

    Owen:
    Fine. Bye mom.

    (Owen hangs up with Christina and looks at Alexia as they pull up to Owen's room.)

    Owen:
    I just wanted to let you know that I'm glad you're my sister but you better hope that one of us doesn't get hurt again or we'll be reading a headline that reads 'Mother Slays Private School!'
    __________________________________________

    (Carlos and Jenny spend time alone in Jenny's room.)

    Jenny:
    I can't believe you have a day off for once.

    Carlos:
    And I want to spend every minute of it with you.

    Jenny:
    Maybe we should celebrate.

    Carlos:
    I'm thinking about it.

    (Jenny stands up and looks into a mirror. Behind her Carlos takes off his shirt and opens the velcro from his shorts. She seems to be deep in thought.)

    Jenny:
    She's missing and no one is going to find her.

    Carlos:
    No one wants to find her.

    Jenny:
    It's just totally something that Nan would do.

    Carlos:
    Of course she'd pull a stunt like this. Maybe we should be happy that she can't come between us ever again.

    Jenny:
    It's not like she's dead. I bet anything she's just trying to scare and surprise all of us.

    (Carlos kisses Jenny's neck. Lightly brushing her shoulders with his lips.)

    Jenny:
    Is this your idea of celebration?

    Carlos:
    Of course it is. I love kissing you and I love touching you. I love being with you.

    (As he continues to seduce her, Jenny begins to have a flashback of Nan.)

    Nan:
    I'll tell Carlos everything. I'll tell him how you and Will kidnapped me! We'll see who will end up with him.

    (The flashback ends.)

    Jenny:
    And I love you.

    (Jenny and Carlos continue to kiss each other passionately.)
    _________________________________________

    (Patrick comes in with a suitcase full of clothes in which he throws on the floor of his dungeon.)

    Patrick:
    How's this Carrie?

    Lenvy:
    It's not enough.

    Patrick:
    What do you mean it's not enough?

    Lenvy:
    It's not what I needed.

    Patrick
    We went into your hotel room, and we took exactly what you wanted.

    Lenvy:
    There's something that you forgot to get.

    Patrick:
    No. I'm not falling for it. You pulled a cute little act with the cell phone. I don't trust you.

    (Lenvy gets on her knees to plead with him.)

    Lenvy:
    Please Patrick. Please help me out. It'll better further your ransom with me.

    Patrick:
    What is it that you need?

    Lenvy:
    A ring.

    Patrick:
    A ring?

    Lenvy:
    Yeah. Yeah a ring given to me by that Vinnie DiMarco guy.

    Patrick:
    Don't you mean Victor DiMarco?

    Lenvy:
    Yeah Victor or Vinnie whoever. But if I get it, I'll let you take me back here, and you can mail it to him. Vin- I mean Victor would pay so much to save me. The ransom could be upped big time!

    Patrick:
    That's good thinking.

    Lenvy:
    You'll be so rich. Please?
    _________________________________________

    (Ava goes over to the office of Detective Miltner. The decor was dull and had a man's touch. She stands in front of him obviously bothering him.)

    Ava:
    Hi I'm the one who talked to you over the phone.

    Detective Miltner:
    What's your name Miss?

    Ava:
    That's not important.

    Detective Miltner:
    Sure it is. I can't really remember voices all that well so unless I know your name then it'll come back to me. If you don't want to tell me your name, then I have a delicious steak hoagie waiting to be eaten by me.

    (Detective Miltner stands up to greet her.)

    Ava:
    I called about Ike Landly and Vicki Wallace.

    (Detective Miltner sits back down.)

    Detective Miltner:
    Now I remember. Please go on.

    Ava:
    I found out that none of it was true.

    Detective Miltner:
    You lied about the fraud issue?

    Ava:
    No. What I found was that somebody was feeding me misleading information. You didn't hear about what happened to Vicki did you?

    Detective Miltner:
    Actually I did.

    Ava:
    Then you know that both of them are gone. Which means that you and your men have no reason to be digging around.

    Detective Miltner:
    Thank you for the advice.

    Ava:
    I don't know who the mansion is going to, but she's told me that she was once pressured by your team of "police."

    Detective Miltner:
    The only reason why we pressured Miss Wallace was because of your call.

    Ava:
    Like I said I thought-

    Detective Miltner:
    I know what you said, misleading information. Why would you even call me to incriminate your friends anyway?

    Ava:
    Vicki and I at the time were having a big fight. I heard a rumor about it and thought that we were never going to speak ever again. So, I wanted to get back at her and decided to call you.

    Detective Miltner:
    I take it that your grieving for your friend now and you want to feel good about your self. Did you two ever make up?

    Ava:
    Of course we did and maybe if you had any friends you could understand that through the hard things a friend will always be there for you and even if you fight or don't fight, you never really understand what you have until it's gone.

    (Ava stands up and begins to head for the door.)

    Ava:
    Enjoy your steak hoagie.

    Detective Miltner:
    I'm sorry about your friend and believe me I will enjoy it.

    (Ava opens the door but then stops and turns to Detective Miltner with a tear in her eye.)

    Detective Miltner:
    Oh and by the way, I do have friends.

    Ava:
    So do I but the ones that were most important to me are gone. Ike Landly and Vicki Wallace are dead now. They're never coming back.

    (Ava leaves slamming the door behind her.)
    ____________________________________________

    (John calls Carrie on her cell phone as she has just gotten out of class and he is waiting for his class to begin.)

    Carrie:
    How sweet of you to check up on me.

    John:
    I just wanted to know what you're up to.

    Carrie:
    I'm going to talk to Dylan.

    John:
    You know that he's probably going to be with Alley.

    Carrie:
    Then fine. It'll be even better. I don't think she can stand me anymore but if she is, then she knows how to act.

    John:
    You came back to this town and to this school for a reason.

    Carrie:
    I was brought back because of you.

    John:
    And because of Dylan and Alley.

    Carrie:
    If it's any conciliation, I really don't think that you deserved to be hurt out of going out with her.

    John:
    I won't be hurt this time if you do your job right.

    (Carrie and John hang up with each other.)
    _____________________________________________

    (Alley wakes up in Dylan's arms. Mid-afternoon was about the time they kept waking up in each other's arms.)

    Dylan:
    You're too much.

    Alley:
    No you are.

    Dylan:
    This was one thing that Carrie could never do.

    Alley:
    Carrie? What the hell does Carrie have to do with anything?

    Dylan:
    I was just-

    Alley:
    Thinking about Carrie.

    Dylan:
    No.

    Alley:
    I can't believe that after us making love you would think, let alone talk, of your ex girlfriend!

    Dylan:
    I was trying to give you a compliment.

    Alley:
    By comparing me to her!

    Dylan:
    It slipped. I'm sorry.

    Alley:
    Don't let it happen again!

    Dylan:
    Little demanding today aren't we?

    (Alley gets up and puts a robe on and begins to walk towards the front door and screams.)

    Alley:
    Just sick of the bull that I have to put up with between you and Carrie!

    (Carrie overhears Alley's yelling from outside fand calls John back.)

    Carrie:
    Our plan is going just fine and I know just how to make them even more miserable!

    _________________________________

    (Ava gets a call on her cell phone as she walks around the campus until finding a private spot underneath a gazebo.)

    Ava:
    The number you're using is blocked right?

    Vicki:
    Of course it is. I just wanted to say thank you for everything. You are a genius in the field of disguise and I know that not one person will be bothering us ever again.

    Ava:
    You did what I said right? What kind of look did you go for?

    Vicki:
    I cut of most of my hair and changed the color to strawberry blond.

    Ava:
    I bet that look will go good for you. I have been thinking about dying my hair black and cutting it a little shorter. You don't think that it would look, well you know?

    Vicki:
    A little boyish?

    Ava:
    Like I give a damn on who thinks I'm a lesbian or not.

    (Both girls begin to laugh.)

    Vicki:
    The dummy you used was so lifelike too.

    Ava:
    If any cops go to dive in deeper about your case. They will find some sort of your DNA by the means of what we put into it. Surely enough, the dummy didn't survive the crash.

    Vicki:
    You were always a true friend to me.

    Ava:
    I'm glad to see you happy.

    Vicki:
    Ike wants to talk to you. Seeya.

    (Ike takes the phone from Vicki.)

    Ike:
    You pulled it off once again, but you know that Jake has left behind some things you might have to clear up.

    Ava:
    Yeah I know and don't worry by the end of the day everything will be fine. Vicki's parents know that she is alive right?

    Ike:
    Oh yeah we explained to them the whole thing. And my parents are cool with my situation too. Just Point Palace will think that we are dead.

    Ava:
    So this is it. This is good bye to both of you.

    Ike:
    Not exactly. Look at it as if-

    Ava:
    Let me guess some sort of new chapter?

    Ike:
    Yeah. Don't worry if you want to come over to the mansion at anytime and if you want anything from us we're always here for you.

    Ava:
    It's been fun.

    Ike:
    Good bye Ava.

    Ava:
    Bye.

    (Ava hangs up)

    Ava:
    Only you two won't be at the school anymore and I can't visit. That's what will be different.
    _____________________________________

    (After putting on a baseball cap and sunglasses Patrick and his thugs lead Lenvy to her hotel room with a gun behind her back.)

    Lenvy:
    I'll only be a second.

    Patrick:
    We're going in with you.

    (Lenvy walks in with a thug behind her as Patrick stays in the hallway.)
    Lenvy:
    Hey can you help me with my cap. It doesn't seem to want to stay on my head.

    Thug:
    What's wrong with it darlin?

    Lenvy:
    I think that it's on too tight ass hole!

    Thug:
    What?

    (Lenvy gets a vase from the dresser and smashes it over his head, knocking him out.)

    Lenvy:
    Thanks for the gun darlin.

    (Lenvy takes his gun and goes outside shutting the door behind her while hiding the gun.)

    Lenvy:
    You're man in there isn't feeling too well.

    Patrick:
    What happened?

    (Patrick goes into the hotel room with his other thug and sees his man lying unconscious)

    Patrick:
    (Screaming)
    CARRIE!

    (Will opens his door and sees Lenvy with a gun.)

    Will:
    Hey don't shoot! I'm sorry about everything but I don't think it's worth trying to kill me!

    Lenvy:
    I'm glad you're here. Do you have a car?

    Will:
    Yeah.

    (Patrick and his thug returns and begins to open fire.)

    Will:
    I see your point.

    (Will and Lenvy run down to the parking lot while Patrick and his thug follow)

    (Will and Lenvy get into his rental car and begin to speed away.)

    Patrick:
    (To his thug)
    Follow her!

    (Patrick begins to follow Will as a high-speed chase begins.)
  9. Matt P.
    Previously on Point Palace:

    - Alexia tries to warn Blake and London that Nan has rigged the boat but she breaks up until Blake sees Nan for himself.

    - Carrie and John feel broken hearted because of Dylan, Alley, and London. John throws the engagement ring in the air and Carrie catches it.

    - James saves the day for Vicki, Ike, and Ava by having Vicki tell Jake the one true thing that he would hate
    to hear, that she doesn't love him and it worked as Ava came back to her true self.

    - Alley stakes her claim on Dylan sexually.

    - Jenny feels second fiddle again to Carlos's job when he has to work another late night.

    - Lenvy calls Gloria but gets disconnected when Patrick retrieves his phone.

    - Gloria contacts Will and tells her that Lenvy needs her help and that she is in Ireland.

    - Nan tells Blake that once she leaves the ship that she'll blow it up by a push of the button. Blake and London try to get out of the boat as quick as possible and then it exploded.



    Episode 56:
    From Day One

    Executive Story Consultant & Head Writer:
    Matt Politylo

    Logo Designer:
    Mary Zimmerman
    ___________________________________________
    (London wakes up in the hospital and sees Blake looking at her. He smiles to find her alive.)

    London:
    Was it all a dream?

    Blake:
    I wish.

    London:
    What happened?

    Blake:
    Whenever we got you on land you just passed out on us. It scarred me so I decided to take you to the hospital. It's been four days since the boat explosion.

    London:
    I've been gone for that long?

    Blake:
    You were just getting some well deserved sleep.

    London:
    What about you?

    Blake:
    I went to some classes, but mostly came to see you.

    London:
    You didn't have to do that.

    Blake:
    I wanted to and of course I had to. You are my wife to be and I wasn't going to let anything happen to you.

    London:
    Nan did this to us.

    Blake:
    Yeah but the only thing she tried to do was kill us and it didn't work.

    London:
    Either that or just make sure that we pay a hefty fine for a damaged boat. You heard the way she was talking. The girl is obviously messed up in the head but she meant business.

    Blake:
    I'm glad to see that you still have your sarcastic humor.

    London:
    It's a gift.

    Blake:
    Don't worry about the boat, I already got it squared away and they knew that it was an accident, and we didn't have to pay a single scent for it. I'm really glad to see you back to normal, and awake for once. Plus the guy who was originally supposed to be driving still has his job.

    London:
    You can't get rid of me so easily and neither can Nan.
    ______________________________________
    (On the other end of Cody Memorial Hospital, Owen wakes up to Alexia by his side. He is a little bit in pain but tries not to show it.)

    Owen:
    Hey sis.

    Alexia:
    You're awake!

    Owen:
    Awaken to a lot of pain is more like it.

    Alexia:
    You did a very stupid thing! You could have died!

    Owen:
    It was what I wanted to do.

    Alexia:
    Don't say that.

    Owen:
    I can't speak the truth?

    Alexia:
    Just don't say dumb things like you wanted to die.

    Owen:
    Then what do you want me to say? Oh I wanted to live another day, with another broken heart, and another suck ass life!

    Alexia
    Why are you being so negative?

    Owen:
    Why are you so being caring all of a sudden?

    Alexia:
    I have always been caring. I'm sorry if I was busy working on other things, but because of you I'm a better person. I have a lot of friends who like me for me. You have been always been my inspiration to do anything that I wanted to do, and I will always care for you. Never doubt that!

    Owen:
    If you cared then you would have known what the problem is.

    Alexia:
    Fine what's the problem then? What made you try to commit suicide?

    (Carlos walks in after overhearing their conversation.)

    Carlos:
    Go ahead and tell her Owen. I know why...Nan Sheridan.

    ________________________________
    (John sits at The Palace Café and reads a textbook when Ginny comes by to check on him.)

    Ginny:
    You never seem happy.

    John:
    Thanks for the observation. I guess it's true.

    Ginny:
    You may not believe what I'm about to tell you but life will get better. At least for a salk like you.

    John: (respectfully ignoring her)
    Thanks Ginny.

    Ginny:
    You still don't believe me do you?

    John:
    I never said that.

    (Carrie comes to join him.)

    Carrie:
    I was wondering if I could get a-

    Ginny:
    Hinsu Ginsu Mocha?

    Carrie:
    Yeah how did you know?

    Ginny:
    You sort of pick up on these things but I have to admit that two of your friends were asking about you and that was when I remembered that you always got that drink.

    Carrie:
    Two friends of mine?

    Ginny:
    Yeah Alley and Dylan.

    Carrie:
    My ex and my so-called best friend. What were they asking about?

    Ginny:
    Just wanted to know if it was truly you and if you had come back to the school or not. Your drink will be coming right up.
    (to John)
    See...I told you life was looking up. Always does when a pretty girl joins your table.

    (Ginny exits.)

    Carrie:
    That book can't be that good.

    John:
    I don't feel like talking to anyone.

    Carrie:
    Too bad cause you're talking to me rather you like it or not. Who upset you now Alley or Dylan?

    John:
    No my other ex girl friend. Even if I told you the whole story. You probably wouldn't understand.
    (Carrie digs through her purse and pulls out the engagement ring.)

    Carrie:
    Well maybe you should get her a nice present or something. In speaking of expensive gifts, look what I found.
    _________________________
    (Dylan and Alley spend time together in Alley's room, specifically in her bedroom.)

    Alley:
    I'm so glad that we can finally be alone together.

    Dylan:
    What are you talking about? We are always together.

    Alley:
    Yeah but now we have no distractions. No café. No classes. No Carrie to be bothering us.

    Dylan:
    No John.

    (Dylan gets a call on his cell phone.)

    Alley:
    No cell phone.

    Dylan: (upon looking at the caller I.D.)
    Jason?

    Jason:
    How you doing cousin?

    Dylan:
    I haven't heard from you in like I don't know forever?

    Jason:
    Yeah it has been a while. I tried contacting you a long time ago but you never returned my call.

    Dylan:
    You tried calling me?

    (Alley begins to bite her lip as she has a flash back.)

    Dylan's Answering Machine:
    Hey Dylan it's your cousin Jason. I'm in Lexington and I have to tell you that you're ex girl friend is in major trouble. Please call me back as soon as possible.

    Alley:
    You had your chance Carrie.

    (The flash back ends when Alley takes the phone off of Dylan.)

    Dylan
    What are you doing?

    Alley:
    Hi Jason yeah um Dylan is a little too busy right now to be talking to anyone so he'll call you back.

    (Alley hangs up Dylan's cell phone and tosses it on the bed.)

    Dylan:
    Why did you do that?

    Alley:
    Because I'm bored, horny, and you’re turning me on!

    (Dylan throws Alley on the bed as they begin to fiercely kiss each other. He takes off his shirt and looks at her seducitively.)

    Dylan:
    Again?
    _____________
    (Alexia turns around and acknowledge Carlos in the doorway.)

    Alexia:
    Hell raiser Nan Sheridan?

    Carlos:
    Yep and she's up to her old tricks again with your brother.

    Owen:
    Alexia this is my good friend Carlos DeViego he works at the hospital.

    Carlos:
    I have great news for you Owen.

    Owen:
    What's that?

    Carlos:
    After talking to Dr. Quarr you will be released tomorrow.

    Owen:
    That's great.

    (Alexia hugs Owen.)

    Alexia:
    I'm so happy for you.
    (To Carlos)
    But are you a doctor, I mean what do you do here?

    Carlos:
    I'm going to be one day hopefully. It's what I'm studying at Point Palace University and I started out as a sort of candy striper slash room cleaner but then I got bumped up to be partnered with Dr.Quarr as a sort of intern position.

    Alexia:
    I'm impressed.

    Carlos:
    Not only am I updated on the medical field but my girl friend and I know a lot about Nan Sheridan.

    Owen:
    Something that they tried to warn me about but of course I didn't listen.

    Alexia:
    Owen what exactly did she do to make you try to kill your self?

    Owen:
    I fell in love with Tracie Sheridan, her supposed twin sister, and then she just broke up with me right whenever I thought we were getting serious.

    Carlos:
    That's exactly what Nan does. She is so manipulatively evil and what she has done is just wrong.

    Alexia:
    I'm just happy that my brother is all right.

    Carlos:
    I am too. Do you plan to stay with him until tomorrow?

    Alexia:
    Yeah I do.

    Owen:
    You don't have to if you don't want to.

    Alexia:
    I owe you.

    Carlos:
    Please excuse me it's time for my lunch break.

    (Before Carlos gets out of the door Jenny comes in to Owen's room with a smile on her face.)

    Jenny:
    Hey you.

    Carlos:
    I thought you were mad at me.

    Jenny:
    I got over it pretty fast. Anyway I'm just happy to see that Owen's looking healthy.

    Carlos:
    I have some more great news that I think everyone in here will be celebrating over.

    Alexia:
    What's that?

    Carlos:
    I overheard the police talking about what happened at the river docks and something interesting caught my ear.

    Jenny:
    What?

    Carlos:
    Our favorite hot topic has gone missing. Nan’s body can’t be found.
    ____________________________
    (Back at The Palace Café, John is marveling at the ring in which he thought he had gotten rid of.)

    Carrie:
    As I was saying. I was walking in the rain after walking in on Dylan and Alley and it just fell from the sky.

    (Ginny comes by with her drink.)

    Ginny:
    Here you go and if you want anything else you know where to reach me.

    Carrie:
    Thanks.

    (Ginny leaves to help more customers.)

    John:
    That ring is mine.

    Carrie:
    It's quite expensive and exquisite. Why isn't it on some lucky girl's finger?

    John:
    Because I called this so called lucky girl and she was with some other lucky guy.

    Carrie:
    We have so much in common with each other.

    John:
    All that I can think of is that we just want to see Dylan and Alley broken up for good. Anything else is beyond me.

    Carrie:
    We both got our hearts broken today.

    John:
    I don't see why you would have gotten your heart broken. You moved on.

    Carrie:
    I tried to move on, but somebody had to write me a letter, which caught my attention to bring me back to my past and to see my best friend-

    (Carrie pauses.)

    Carrie:
    I'm just upset and I see that you are too.

    John:
    I'll admit that having you here does make my aching heart a little better.

    (Carrie places her hand on John's shoulder.)

    Carrie:
    Me too.
    ________________________________
    (Vicki, Ike, and Ava spend time together in the living room of Ike's mansion.)

    Ava:
    Look I wanted to apologize for everything that happened.

    Ike:
    It wasn't your fault.

    Vicki:
    Ike's right we could never nor would we ever blame you for any of it.

    Ava:
    It's just an awful feeling knowing that someone else was inside me, controlling me. It's just so-

    Ike:
    Sort of unreal isn’t it?

    Ava:
    Yeah that's it. I do remember everything that happened and one thing that Jake can't do now is get between you two. Knowing what he has done just sickens me but I'll fix everything.

    Vicki:
    There's something else that you can help us out with.

    Ava:
    Like what?

    Ike:
    Vicki and I have been talking and came up with a great plan. All we need are your awesome skills. Hell you helped me out before. It’s Vicki’s turn now.
    __________________________________________________
    (After checking in at the Dublin Supreme, Will settles in the room next to Lenvy's.)

    Will:
    Lenvy if you're not here then I don't know where I can find you.

    (Will goes out to the balcony to take in the scenery. He breathes in the fresh air which didn’t smell like the soap Irish Spring as he would have expected it to.)

    Will:
    Why would you want to leave this? It's not like you. If you were to escape then you would probably stay in a place where you thought no one would find you. Especially not me.
    (Will goes back into his hotel room.)

    Will:
    I miss you so much. This isn't like you. I have a bad feeling about this.

    (Will overhears a door slam in Lenvy's room.)

    Will:
    Lenvy?
    __________________________________________________
    (Vicki drives Ava's banged up truck to the edge of the outskirt cliff.)

    Vicki:
    This is the only true way that I can be happy.

    (Vicki drives off of the cliff and crashes all the way to the bottom.)
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  10. Matt P.
    Previously on Point Palace:
    -Blake and London begin to worry about the weather so they call Alexia and ask her to check on the boat, but they also find out the bad news about Owen. Alexia leaves to get her mind off of Owen who is not awake.

    -Carrie walks in on Dylan and Alley kissing.

    -Ike and Vicki reunite and decide to help an unconscious Ava by talking to James Vaughne someone who she once had a friendly run in from her past but feels as if is the only one who could help her because of his psychological background.

    -Carlos finds out about Owen and is furious over what Nan did to him. Jenny feels bad because she can't do anything about it but wants to.

    -John calls London in hopes of seeing her but gets his heart broken when he finds out that she is with Blake.

    -Alexia finds the drugged captain to wake him up and she finds out that someone else is on the ship with some deadly explosives and warns Blake and London that they have to get off the boat or it will explode.



    Episode 55:Explosive Revenge

    Executive Story Consultant & Head Writer:
    Matt Politylo

    Logo Designer:
    Mary Zimmerman
    __________________________________________
    (Blake is confused. The boat continues to sail somewhat smoothly but the communication was not going so well.)


    Blake:What did you say?

    Alexia:
    A bomb-

    (Alexia's signal begins to break up.)


    Blake:You're not coming through.

    (Blake turns the radio off and looks at London who is just as concerned as he is.)


    London:Did she just say what I think she said?

    Blake:
    It sounded like it was some sort of warning.

    London:
    There's no way that anybody else can be on this ship besides the captain.

    Blake:
    Maybe she was just confused. I'll talk to the captain.

    (Blake opens the captain chambers door to see the person standing in front of him.)


    Blake:Excuse me.

    (The captain takes off their hat to reveal who she really is.)


    Nan:Surprised to see me?
    ________________________________
    (Vicki and Ike lay Ava down on the couch of Ike’s living room in his mansion. She wakes up with listless eyes.)


    Ava: (angry)I thought that I killed you.

    Vicki:
    It didn't go that way you bastard!

    Ava:
    I was so close though.

    Vicki:
    Not close enough.

    Ike:
    Where's Ava?

    Jake:
    She's right here, but I don't think that she wants to talk to you.

    (Ava jerks her head to the side.)


    Ava:What do you want Ike?

    Ike:
    You told me something about James Vaughne. What's his number?

    Ava: (pleading)
    555-7980. Call him immediately.

    (Ike dials the number and walks out of the room, leaving the two to be alone.)


    Ike:I'm calling him now.

    Vicki:
    You'll be okay.

    Ava:
    I just want him to leave.

    (A few minutes later, )


    Ike:He's on his way. Hopefully Jake will be gone for good after tonight.
    _______________________________
    (Alley looks up to see her “best friend” in Dylan’s door way. She gets up to hug her.)


    Alley:Oh my god. You're back!

    Carrie:
    Yeah, and I see that I've missed a lot.

    Alley:
    I missed you. You left without saying good bye to me. I had no idea why you left, but I found out.

    Carrie:
    Hi Dylan.

    Dylan:
    Hey. I thought that I saw you at the cafe.

    Carrie:
    Yeah that was me.

    Alley:
    Are you staying for good?

    Carrie:
    I'm not sure yet. Look I just stopped by to say hi but I guess you guys are busy.

    Dylan:
    Don't be a stranger. We didn’t even hear you come in.

    Carrie:
    I'll try not to. I thought that I would surprise you but seeing you two together was definitely an unexpected surprise for me. Bye.

    (Carrie exits. She leans against the front door of his dorm after shutting it.)


    Carrie:Seeing is a lot harder then hearing about it!
    _________________________________________
    (Alley looks at Dylan after Carrie leaves.)


    Alley:I guess that you must be happy.

    Dylan:
    And why is that?

    Alley:
    You were right.

    Dylan:
    I don't always gloat, that's just not my style. It was really weird seeing her. I just wanted to ask her why she left me, even though I already know the answer.

    Alley:
    Maybe you shouldn't ask her anything. Whenever Carrie left she knew what she was leaving, I guess that it was just her own mistake.

    Dylan:
    Yeah I guess you're right.

    Alley:
    Plus you can shove it in her face that we are together. You're mine, not hers!

    (Alley throws Dylan back on the bed and continues to kiss him.)
    _________________________________________
    (Jenny calls Carlos while he is on a break. He sneaks away to a quiet nurse’s station at Cody Memorial Hospital to talk to her.)


    Jenny:I know that work has been really hard for you lately, but I just wanted to tell you that I'm here for you.

    Carlos:
    That is sweet of you to call.

    Jenny:
    Do you want to spend the night with me after your shift?

    Carlos:
    That sounds like a very tempting offer but I can't.

    Jenny:
    (disappointed)
    Why not?

    Carlos:
    Because I'm going to be here until about one o'clock in the morning, and plus I keep checking in on Owen.

    Jenny:
    Did they say what was wrong with him?

    Carlos:
    He might have a fractured shoulder. He hit the ground pretty hard because blood was shooting everywhere.

    Jenny:
    Now you're getting too technical for me. These are things that you and Nick should be discussing.

    Carlos:
    Nick doesn't talk to me unless he wants something done. I get all the medical mumbo jumbo from Agatha because she hears it directly from Dr. Quarr himself.

    Jenny: (agitated)
    There you go. If you're not going to come to my room then I guess I won't wait up for you.

    Carlos:
    I'm sorry.

    Jenny:
    Whatever. In speaking of disappointments I might not be able to visit Owen today but I'll try soon.

    Carlos:
    Maybe that's a good thing. He's hooked up to machines and he isn't talking. He probably wouldn't even know you were there.

    Jenny:
    Then I'll see him in a few days or something like that whenever he gets better. Maybe I'll see you then.

    Carlos:
    Look I said that I was sorry about my schedule. My break is over so I'll see you later, and Jenny I truly am sorry.

    (Carlos hangs up on Jenny.)


    Jenny:Yeah, you should be.
    _________________________________________
    (Using Patrick's cell phone, Lenvy calls Gloria while still being kept captive in his basement.)


    Gloria:Hello?

    Lenvy:
    Mom hi it's me. Whatever you do please don't hang up and make sure that we don't get disconnected!

    Gloria:
    Why? What's going on?

    Lenvy:
    It's funny how in such a little time period everything can go wrong for one person.

    Gloria:
    Honey you need to slow down, just take a deep breath, and slowly tell me what's going on.

    Lenvy:
    I come to Ireland and everything was beautiful. The hotel was grand, the scenery absolutely amazing, and my trip was going wonderful.

    Gloria:
    So what's the problem?

    Lenvy:
    Once I came here I was-

    (Patrick retrieves his phone and hangs up with the person on the other end.)
    _____________________
    (James comes over to Ike's house. Ike leads him into the living room to Ava who is still awake.)


    Ike:Please help her.

    James:
    I will see what I can do.

    Vicki:
    To sort of brief you on who she thinks she is or whoever is controlling her, it’s my psychotic ex boyfriend Jake Teneski.

    Ike:
    He used to be my best friend too, but he died and somehow came back through Ava.

    James:
    Very strange.

    Vicki:
    The whole situation is so unbelievable. We all just want him gone for good. Especially Ava.

    Ike:
    She seems to have suffered almost as much as we have.

    (James looks Ava in the face. Who puckers her lips and gives him a very displeasing look.)


    James:Ava can you hear me?

    Ava:
    I won't let you talk to her.

    (Ava jerks her head to the left.)


    Ava:I need to talk to him.

    James:
    Ava stay with me.

    Ava:
    I'll try.

    James:
    How did Jake get through you.

    Ava:
    After seeing you and seeing that Vicki and Ike were happy, I went back to the accident and found the pictures of those two.

    (James looks at Ike and Vicki.)


    Ike and Vicki:Don't ask!

    Ava:
    I was just feeling so sad that I had a part of this. I closed my eyes and next thing I know, Jake's living inside of my head.

    (Ava jerks her head to the right.)


    Ava:There's no way that I'm leaving either. You can never kill me. My body might be dead but my soul has always been alive. I will always live over their heads. When they sleep I hope that I'm in their nightmares. Thinking of how I ruined their lives for what they did to me!

    Vicki: (angry)
    Make him stop.

    (James turns his attention to Vicki and Ike.)


    James:She's suffering from multiple personality syndrome. I'm not a doctor but the only way to get rid of it is to say one thing that would make Jake's soul fly away for good.

    Vicki:
    I think that it has to be me who puts him away.

    (Vicki looks Ava straight in the face.)


    Vicki:I never loved you nor will I ever love you Jake Teneski.

    (Vicki slaps Ava across the face as Jake screams and shrieks with pain.)

    (Ava falls to the ground but James helps her up.)


    James:Ava?

    (Ava wakes up again.)


    Ava:James? What happened? I feel so tired.

    James:
    I'll take you home.

    (James begins to leave with Ava.)


    Vicki:Thank you Professor Vaughne.

    Ike:
    Yeah thanks for everything. Just remember one thing.

    James:
    What's that?

    Ike:
    Once you leave these doors, erase everything out of your memory. You never saw me and I never saw you.
    _________________________________________
    (Gloria calls Will who is driving back from one of his classes, trying to concentrate through the rain.)


    Gloria:Hi Will it's Gloria.

    Will:
    I'm surprised that you called me.

    Gloria:
    So am I. I got a call from Lenvy and she sounded like she's in trouble of some sort.

    Will:
    I told you that something was wrong. I felt it.

    Gloria:
    She needs your help and I'm really busy with my job and I just can't fly out to Ireland to get her.

    Will:
    I didn't think that she would be that far. Ireland?

    Gloria:
    Yeah she's in Dublin and staying in the Dublin Supreme. I want you to go and get her out of whatever mess she's in. The number came up as unidentified. I tried to retrive it but couldn't. You just do your best to bring my girl back home!

    Will:
    Thanks. It means a lot to have your permission to do that.

    Gloria:
    Just remember that if you break my little girl's heart again, I will personally come down to Point Palace and break your legs!

    Will:
    It won't happen again because I get to be her knight in shining armor.
    _________________________________________
    (In the rain John begins to walk outside by himself, thinking of London.)


    John: (to himself)Whenever you are depressed and you walk through the rain sometimes you can't even feel it hitting your body. Sort of like how you can't feel your hear being broken until you've been hurt.

    (Carrie walks in the rain as well not far from John’s position.)


    Carrie:I never thought that coming back to Point Palace could bring such heartbreak. Getting out of Lexington was something that I had to do. I just didn't want to come back to this, to the hurtful truth.

    (John holds up the ring and examines it.)


    John:To think that for a day I could fall back in love with someone that I put behind me.

    Carrie:
    I am so stupid to think that Dylan wouldn't move on. It's just-

    John:
    It's just-

    Carrie:
    Why do I always end up hurt?

    John:
    Why me?

    (John throws the ring up in the air behind him as Carrie catches it.)
    _________________________________________
    (Patrick puts his cell phone back in his pocket.)


    Patrick:I was looking for this.

    Lenvy:
    How much did you hear?

    Patrick:
    Up to the point where you were about to say that you were kidnapped.

    Lenvy:
    This is getting old and I want out!

    Patrick:
    I haven't received my money yet so you're staying here until I do. I'm not letting the DiMarco's screw me over once again. Got it?

    Lenvy:
    If I knew who they were or if I knew who you think I am then maybe I could give you some sort of answers. But like I said, I have no clue to what the hell you or your goons are talking about!

    Patrick
    You are a royal pain in my ass but I love torturing you!
    _____________________
    (Blake is shocked by Nan's presence.)


    Blake:What the hell are you doing here?

    Nan:
    Funny I've heard you say that to me a lot before.

    Blake:
    What have you done?

    Nan:
    You're going to love this part. I set up C4 bombs, not telling where I got them, but I will say that with a push of a button. Boom. You're dead and I will have my revenge, I'll give you a head start though.

    Blake:
    Wouldn't you die with us?

    Nan:
    No, because I'm going to push the button once I get off the ship. Clock's ticking or at least I'm beginning to feel a little trigger-happy. You know Blake you’re the one who turned me into a cartoony bitch. You and your precious fiancé, oh yeah I know about that throat gagging information, did this to me. I want to show you that things can be taken away from you because you two like to take things away from me! Did you think that I wouldn’t be hurt by finding out that you were pulling one over on me just to get back at me? I fell for you a second time and you ripped my heart out! Well guess what? You’ve done that for the last time.

    (to London who has just overheard her speech)

    I was you at one point. Being the spoiled princess gets old.

    (Nan slowly begins to make her exit towards the front side of the boat.)


    Blake:London come with me.

    London:
    Blake what's going on?

    (Alexia breaks through on the walkie talkie.)


    AlexiaYou two have to get off or you're going to be blown to bits! Get off-

    (Alexia breaks up again.)


    Alexia:Damn it! Please be okay!

    Blake:
    There's no time to explain. We have to swim to shore, do you think you're up for it?

    London:
    I don't think I have a choice!

    (Blake and London go outside to the back part of the boat in the drenching rain.)


    Blake:We have to escape. There's no time!

    (The boat explodes.)
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    Next on Point Palace:
    - The aftermath of the explosion creates many questions and a disappearance.
    - A few characters may be leaving!
  12. Matt P.
    Previously on Point Palace:
    -Dylan begins to question Ginny on who her last customer was having Alley to be agitated.


    -Lenvy gets a hold of Patrick's cell phone and calls Will but Nan answers his phone.


    -Agatha tries helping Carlos who decides to take matters into his own hands and leaves with Jenny by purposely having water spilled on Nick, but did Dr. Quarr see him?


    -Vicki woke up and realized that she was in the casket with Jake’s dead body.


    -Ike shot blanks and when it started to rain Ava admitted to Ike that Vicki would drown, when the two begin to fight, Ava is knocked out by the gun handle.


    -Will gives Nan the deadly items that she needs and they both share their views on morality but Nan still throws out the blackmail.


    -London said yes to marrying Blake as the night got more romantic for the two in a candle lit canopy.


    -John thought that London was at her door when he was going to pop the question after having a flashback about one of their dates but it turned out to be someone else.


    -Alexia tries to have Owen come down safely but he doesn't listen to her as he jumps off his dorm roof.


    Episode 53:
    Off the Roof

    Executive Story Consultant/Creator:
    Matt Politylo

    Logo Designer:
    Mary Zimmerman
    _______________________________________________________________________
    (Alexia begins to scream hysterically after watching her brother fall from the three story dormitory roof. Others who were watching were shocked as well.)


    Alexia: (in hysterics)Owen no!

    (Alexia runs towards his body as blood seeps out of his nostrils and his eyes are closed.)


    Alexia: (screaming)Somebody call an ambulance!

    (Tears stream out of Alexia's eyes and seep onto his dirt covered shirt.)


    Alexia:If I only could have been here sooner then this wouldn't have happened. Owen why did you do it?

    (An ambulance comes and takes Owen away on a stretcher.)


    EMT:Are you coming along?

    Alexia:
    Of course. I’m family!

    (Alexia goes into the ambulance vehicle. She can only keep her eyes on her brother, hoping that he will be okay. The paramedics around her were doing everything that they could.)


    Alexia:Will he be okay?

    EMT:
    We'll find out.
    _______________________________________________________________________
    (John is shocked to find Carrie instead of London upon opening the door to his dorm room.)


    Carrie:Expecting someone else?

    John:
    Actually I was.

    (Carrie makes her way into John's room.)


    Carrie:I got your note and I had to come back to see if it were true.

    John:
    You're very hard to try and reach you know.

    Carrie:
    I'm glad that you came to Lexington. This is a serious problem. Alley has no right to be with Dylan, he was mine. That girl has become nothing but greedy and selfish when it comes to men. I know that I really don’t have room to talk after the whole Will fiasco but that was the past and Dylan is practically my present!

    John:
    That's right he was yours.

    Carrie:
    And Alley belonged to you. How the hell did you lose her Johnny Boy?
    _______________________________________________________________________(Will looks at his cell phone number list as he sits on his bed in his dormitory.)


    Will:Lenvy, it's been so long since you've left. Hopefully Gloria knows where you are for real.

    (Will calls Lenvy's mother Gloria in Lexington.)


    Gloria:Hello?

    Will:
    Hi this is Will Pazner.

    Gloria:
    You can' t take a hint can you!

    Will:
    Have you heard from Lenvy?

    Gloria:
    Did you have a hearing problem or are you just stupid? I'm not letting you anywhere near my daughter!

    Will:
    Please, just tell me where she is. I know you know something.

    Gloria:
    You're right I do and that's why you'll know nothing!

    (Gloria hangs up on Will.)


    Will: (to himself)I'm beginning to think you disappeared Lenvy.
    _______________________________________________________________________
    (John feels caught off guard by Carrie's question. Carrie has since made herself comfortable by sitting on his couch in the common area of his room.)


    John:Maybe if you stayed in town then you would have known why I lost Alley.

    Carrie:
    You're a sweet guy. You don't seem like the player type who doesn't know how to hold down a relationship.

    John:
    My name is John Snaldry not Will Pazner.

    Carrie:
    Thank god for that. Can’t take another crazed obsessed- Too many bad memories, never mind.

    John:
    I lost Alley because she started seeing Dylan behind my back. She felt sorry for him whenever you left for Lexington. I just wasn't too pleased to have my heart put in a blender.

    Carrie:
    And that's why you want revenge on both of them.

    John:
    You're the only thing that can come between them! Welcome back.
    _______________________________________________________________________(Ike begins to hold Ava's arms behind her back as she begins to come too. The rain has since picked up, making the cemetery grass wet.)


    Ike:Who are you?

    Ava:
    It's Ava. I've come back.

    Ike:
    How do I know that you're not trying to play me for a fool?

    Ava:
    You're hurting me. Let me go. Please let go of me.

    Ike:
    I don't trust you Jake.

    Ava:
    Smarter then you look you son of a bitch.

    Ike:
    Ava, I know that you're inside some where. How can we fix this problem?

    Ava:
    She can't help you!

    (Ava turns her head to the side.)


    Ava:Call James.

    Ike:
    James who?

    Ava:
    James Vaughne, he's a psychologist professor at the school. He knows what-

    (Ava's neck begins to twitch.)


    Ava:Said too much already, but it doesn't matter. Vicki's probably suffocating, soon to be drowning if I can’t help it. Why are you bothering with me?

    Ike:
    You're right I have to save Vicki.

    Ava:
    But you can't do that with only one hand!

    Ike:
    Oh shut up Jake! Forgive me Ava.

    (Ike takes the gun handle from Ava and knocks Ava out again.)
    _______________________________________________________________________
    (Jenny and Carlos spend time in Carlos's room. The rain is breaking the silence but Jenny’s non-verbal anger is glowing.)


    Jenny:Carlos you have some explaining to do!

    (Carlos begins to kiss Jenny's shoulder.)


    Jenny:I'm not in the mood. Start talking.

    Carlos:
    Fine, I was late because of Doctor Nick Quarr. He purposely made me stay later in the hospital because he knew all about our date.

    Jenny:
    The man I met seemed to be very nice.

    Carlos:
    It's all a cover up. He's pure evil and what worries me most is that he's a doctor. Tons of people put their lives in his hands.

    Jenny:
    Let me guess he kills all of them because he's an evil doctor. Is he taking a page from jack Kevorkian? This isn't making any sense. Your excuses are lame.

    Carlos:
    I'm telling you the truth. Nick is out to get me. I guess that he's trying to go through what matters most to me, you.

    Jenny: (giving into him)
    You Latin heart throbs always know what to say to smooth out the toughest situations.

    Carlos:
    We talk fast for a reason you know.

    (Carlos begins to kiss Jenny's neck. He then slides the strap of Jenny’s dress off of her shoulders. Before he goes further he stops.)


    Carlos:This means that you believe me, right?

    Jenny:
    You also know how to serenade the ladies.

    (Jenny jumps on Carlos and kisses him fierecely. Jenny tears off his shirt revealing his chest. He slides down the rest of the dress. Jenny undoes his belt and throws it against the wall. The two begin to kiss even heavier. Carlos takes Jenny’s firm body into both of his hands and tosses her so that he can be on top.)


    Carlos: (continuing to kiss her neck)I'll take that as a yes.
    _______________________________________________________________________
    (Alley sits on Dylan's couch in the common area of his room. She's studying for a test but stops when she sees Dylan deep in thought looking out at the rain.)


    Alley: (joking)You know if you open your mouth and go outside that you could drown?

    (Dylan isn't paying attention to her.)


    Dylan:Huh?

    Alley:
    What's going on?

    Dylan:
    Nothing. I was just-

    Alley: (sarcastic)
    What? Admiring the rain? It's water that falls from the sky, big whoop.

    Dylan:
    No I was just thinking that's all.

    (Alley rolls her eyes.)


    Alley:Obviously about Carrie.

    Dylan:
    Should I admit that to you?

    Alley:
    You shouldn't lie to me and you pretty much already did.

    Dylan:
    I'm sorry. I know how you feel about her but I can't shake this feeling off that she's come back.

    Alley:
    I have to study. See I can focus on things other than a played out damzel in distress who's had way too many chances of forgiveness.

    Dylan:
    Wait! Alley where are you going?

    (In a huff, Alley places her books into her book bag and heads for the door until Dylan stops her.)


    Dylan:Don't go anywhere.

    Alley: (upset)
    Why should I listen to wha-

    (Dylan pulls her in and kisses her to shut her up.)
    _______________________________________________________________________
    (Patrick comes down to the basement of his place and brings Lenvy some warm food. It wasn’t much but it was enough to satisfy her he thinks to himself after handing it to her on the floor.)


    Patrick:I hope that you’re enjoying your stay here. None of the DiMarcos have budged yet.

    Lenvy:
    I guess that being a dungeon slave is first class royalty for Carrie Slondsbid, even though I'm not her!

    Patrick:
    You're getting better at that whole "I'm not Carrie" thing.

    Lenvy:
    Please let me go. I did nothing wrong.

    Patrick:
    We're not going to hurt you but we're not letting you go either.

    (Lenvy takes the food and shoves it in Patrick's face and makes a run for it. He screams because it slightly burns him.)

    (In the hallway near the locked room a bigger thug stops her by picking her up.)


    Thug:Boss she didn't go far.

    (Patrick returns with food all over his face. He quickly begins to wipe it up with the napkin he had already placed for her.)


    Patrick:Just whenever I thought that I was warming up to you, you have to go and shove food in my face.

    (Patrick throws the plate against the wall shattering it into numerous pieces.)


    Patrick:You can finish that mess and we're going to keep a closer eye on you.

    (Lenvy is thrown back into the cell)


    Lenvy:Won't anyone get me out of here?
    _______________________________________________________________________
    (Blake shields London's vision with his hands back at the lakeside canopy.)


    Blake:I have one more romantic surprise for you.

    London:
    It can't be any better then what you have already given me.

    (Blake opens his hands to have her see a small private yaught.)


    Blake:This boat is ours for the whole night. I thought that we could spend some more alone time.

    (Blake and London enter the boat and make their way towards the bed room quarters.)


    Blake:We have nothing to worry about. The captain of the ship or whoever is driving won't bother us at all.

    (Blake shuts the door behind the captain's quarters.)


    Blake: (to the captain)We’re going to need our privacy.

    (The captain turns out to be Nan.)


    Nan: (to herself)Welcome to UssNan! A round trip to revenge.

    (Nan begins to laugh evilly.)



    Join us next time for another exciting episode ofP O I N T P A L A C E

    Next on Point Palace:
    - John tries contacting London to tell her how he feels.
    - Carlos learns about Owen's accident and is not pleased to find Dr. Quarr taking care of his friend.
    - Carrie makes her presence known to Dylan and Alley.
    - Alexia finds out that Blake and London are in danger but can't leave Owen's side.
    - Nan puts her revenge into action!

    © 2000-2003, 2007
  13. Matt P.
    Previously on Point Palace:

    -After Ava taunted Ike to pull the gun trigger, Ike pulls it in hopes of saving an unconscious Vicki who is trapped in Jake's casket.

    -Juliana doesn't care about Lenvy and tells the Irish thugs that she's not paying the ransom.

    -Nan blackmailed Will to get some deadly items to use against Blake, London, and Alexia.

    -Jenny sat alone at her table until she was joined by Dr. Quarr, when Carlos left work early to go on his date he arrived to The River Teal to find them together placing him in a bad position.

    -Owen tried to get back Nan who denied him. He then tried to talk to Alexia but he felt ignored by her so he decided to take matters into his own hands as Alexia sees Owen about to jump off his room roof.

    -Dylan tells Alley that he thinks Carrie has returned as he thought that he saw her walk out of the cafe.

    -John began to fall back in love with London and is confused on rather or not he should ask her to marry him.

    -Blake fixed everything with London and wooed her by a candle lit dinner at the river banks with Alexia's help. He wanted to never have her leave him so he got down on one knee and asked her to marry him.




    Episode 52:Answer to My Question

    Creator & Head Writer: Matt Politylo

    Logo Designer: Mary Zimmerman
    ________________________________________________________
    (London is shocked by his question as Blake stands on the wet grass with his knees. The wind from the cool night rustles through London's hair, while the river's water lightly laps next to them.)


    Blake: Will you?

    London:
    Yes I'll marry you.

    (Blake slips the ring on her fourth finger)


    Blake: You don't know how happy you have made me.

    London:
    I love you.

    Blake:
    And I love you.

    (Blake and London kiss)


    London: It's beautiful. This ring is truly beautiful.

    Blake:
    Just like our love. This symbolizes how much we mean to each other. I know that we are young but I don't want to lose you.

    London:
    You won't lose me.

    Blake:
    Maybe I should say nothing will come between us.

    London:
    Please don't jinx us.

    Blake:
    This time everything will go right for us.

    London:
    We can only hope.

    (Blake and London hug each other)
    _________________________________________________________
    (Carlos hides behind the wall of the fancy restaurant and calls Agatha from his cell phone.)

    Agatha:
    Hello Cody Memorial Hospital, this is fourth floor. How may I help you?

    Carlos:
    Hi it's me.

    Agatha:
    Hey you. How is your date going?

    Carlos:
    It's right about to go straight to hell.

    Agatha:
    Why?

    Carlos:
    Dr. Quarr is here.

    Agatha:
    He is?

    Carlos:
    Yes and he is sitting with my girl friend which makes it worse.

    Agatha:
    Carlos calm down.

    Carlos:
    What should I do? If I go over to confront him then he could have me fired but if I don't go over then my girl friend will be so mad at me.

    Agatha:
    I have an idea.

    Carlos:
    What?

    Agatha:
    Nick is a doctor so of course doctors do get pages from the hospital.

    Carlos:
    That's a great idea but wouldn't it seem suspicious if you paged him and there wasn't an emergency?

    Agatha:
    Yeah you're right but it's the only thing that I could do.

    Carlos:
    Actually I have an idea.

    Agatha:
    One that is nonviolent?

    Carlos:
    Yep, let's just say that it might put a damper on whatever he's trying to pull.

    (Carlos hangs up.)
    ______________________________________________
    (Dylan and Alley begin to talk to Ginny at The Palace Cafe.)


    Dylan: What did that girl get?

    Ginny:
    The one who just was here?

    Dylan:
    Yeah.

    Ginny:
    She ordered a Hinsu Ginsu Mocha.

    Alley:
    Those names are really funny.

    Ginny:
    Funny, corny, and appetizing to the common teenage yuppie.

    Alley:
    Oh so we're yuppies.

    Ginny:
    Not you two. You two are like my favorite customers.

    Dylan:
    Thanks Ginny.

    Ginny:
    Why do you want to know what that girl got? Do you know her or something?

    Alley:
    Dylan thinks that it's his ex girl friend and my ex best friend who left this town some time ago.

    Ginny:
    Oh.

    Dylan:
    And she always used to get Hinsu Ginsu Mocha.

    Ginny:
    I don't remember seeing her here before.

    Dylan:
    It was some time ago.

    Ginny:
    I've only worked here for about five or six months.

    Dylan:
    That was the time she left.

    Ginny:
    Then that's why she doesn't look familiar.

    Alley:
    Dylan why can't you just let it go?

    Dylan:
    Because.

    Alley:
    Whatever.

    Dylan:
    I seriously believe that Carrie has come back to Point Palace!
    ________________________________________________________
    (Patrick comes back into his secure dungeon to check on Lenvy who is sitting on the ground with her head curdled between her knees.)


    Patrick:You're still alive so that's a good thing.

    Lenvy:
    Who was that woman?

    Patrick:
    Oh I'm not falling for the whole "who was that girl" trick.

    Lenvy:
    I'm serious.

    (Patrick turns his back to her which makes Lenvy notice a cell phone hanging from his waist.)


    Patrick:You're making this so difficult for all of us.

    (Lenvy moves in closer to Patrick.)


    Lenvy:I can make things a lot more comfortable for you.

    Patrick:
    Unless you have money to pay for your own ransom then I seriously doubt it.

    (Lenvy places her hands on his neck and moves them down to his hips and slowly grabs the cell phone)


    Patrick:We can't do this.

    Lenvy: (flirtatious)
    Too bad.

    (Patrick turns around as Lenvy hides the cell phone behind her back)


    Patrick:You're up to something but don't worry your trapped in Ireland forever darlin’.

    (Patrick leaves.)


    Lenvy:Sure I am. Darlin’!

    (Carlos begins to follow a waiter to Jenny and Nick's table, making sure not to be seen.)


    Nick:It looks like your date didn't show.

    Jenny:
    Are you sure you are not a detective?

    Nick:
    I'm just observing. At least you have somebody here.

    Jenny:
    One is the loneliest number.

    Nick:
    Except for there's two of us.

    (Nick begins to place his hand on top of Jenny's)


    Jenny:Two people who don't even know each other.

    (Jenny quickly pulls out of his grasp)


    Nick:We haven't even received our drinks yet.

    (Jenny notices the waiter)


    Jenny:Actually here they are.

    (The waiter begins to place the drinks on the table until Carlos covers his face with a napkin that he grabs from a close table and knocks the waiter over, having the drinks spill all over Nick)

    ________________________________________________________
    (Nan begins to collect her stuff in a backpack when Will's cell phone rings as Will is getting more stuff for her from the closet in his dorm room.)


    Nan:Your phone is ringing.

    Will:
    Then answer it.

    Nan:
    Okay. Hello?

    (There is no answer on the other line.)


    Nan:Hello?

    (Nan hangs up the phone)


    Nan:Fine then don't talk to me.

    (Will returns as Nan hands him back the phone.)


    Will:Who was that?

    Nan:
    No one said anything on the other end.

    ________________________________________________________
    (Lenvy stares at Patrick's cell phone)


    Lenvy:You're my only hope Will, only what girl are you with?
    ________________________________________________________
    (Vicki wakes up to total darkness.)


    Vicki:Hello?

    (Vicki begins to scream and bang on her concealed area)


    Vicki:Anyone out there?

    (Vicki begins to feel the top)


    Vicki:Can anyone hear me?

    (Vicki begins to move around.)


    Vicki:Yeah like anyone can hear me. What the hell feels so lumpy?

    (Vicki begins to squirm around until she feels that there's another person with her which makes her scream with terror when she opens up the flashlight that Ava gave her. She moves it around and places it on the object she was feeling.)


    Vicki:No...no way! Jake!
    __________________________________________________________
    (John sits alone in his room, looking at his engagement ring for London.)


    John:I'm crazy for doing this, but I know that she would say yes. How could she not refuse? A life with me and a healthy family.

    (John begins to have a flashback of a date that he once had with London in Ohio as they begin walking back to John's house)

    London:What was all of this for?

    John:
    Dinner and a movie wasn’t all that special.

    London:
    It was for me.

    John:
    It should be it cost me an arm and a leg!

    London:
    You're too cute.

    John:
    I love being with you.

    London:
    I know that we have had this conversation before.

    John:
    We probably have.


    (They reach John's door.)

    John:My parents are out of town. My brother's here but he's leaving soon.

    London:
    I don't think that they would mind if I stayed the night. That is if I stay the night.

    John:
    You don't expect me to sleep alone do you?

    London:
    Believe me you'll have wonderful sleep.


    (The flashback ends leaving John with a comforting feeling of hope.)


    John:She has to say yes. She just has to!

    (Someone knocks on John's door.)


    John:That's probably her now.

    (John opens the door and John seems shocked.)
    ________________________________________________________
    (Nan collects her belongings from Will's room and begins to leave.)


    Will: You need to keep this stuff on the down low. If you get caught with it I could seriously be expelled, let alone arrested.

    Nan:
    Yeah like I would just walk around with all this stuff.

    Will:
    Who are you using this against?

    Nan:
    That's none of your business.

    Will:
    Fine, but if you get caught-

    Nan:
    The word "if" is not a part of my vocabulary.

    Will:
    I'm sure you have used it before.

    Nan:
    I'll use it in this sentence. If I get caught I'll bring you down with me.

    (Nan takes the backpack and heads for the door before she leaves she turns around to face him with glaring eyes.)


    Nan: Will, I always get what I want.

    Will:
    Even if it means destroying the lives of others?

    Nan:
    I have heard so many people say that to me before. Somehow it doesn't really phase me. Why am I getting a lecture from you Will? You've done worse things then I have. You've killed someone, that's something that even I haven't done...yet at least. I think you need to ask yourself how many lives you've ruined!

    (Nan leaves Will's room slamming the door behind her.)
    ___________________________________________________________
    (Nick stands up, drenched in water.)


    Nick:You fool!

    Waiter:
    I'm sorry it was an accident.

    Nick:
    You should be fired.

    Waiter:
    I'm sorry sir but someone bumped into me by accident.

    Jenny:
    It wasn't his fault!

    Nick:
    Whatever.

    (Nick leaves to go and dry off in the bathroom and Carlos turns around to face Jenny.)


    Jenny:Do you know how late you are?

    Carlos:
    Do you know who you were eating dinner with?

    Jenny:
    Obviously not you!

    Carlos:
    We have to leave.
    (Carlos takes Jenny's hand as they both make an exit for the glass elevator.)


    Jenny:Carlos you have some explaining to do!

    (Nick comes out of the restroom after quickly drying himself off and sees Jenny leaving with another person.)


    Nick:That better not be Carlos!
    _____________________________________________________
    (The rain comes down on Blake and London as they begin to dance slowly with one another.)


    Blake:The rain can sometimes make things so romantic.

    London:
    It's not raining that hard.

    Blake:
    We could go over to that canopy.

    London:
    You knew that this was going to happen didn't you?

    Blake:
    I had a hunch.

    (Blake and London run to the canopy which is lit with candles that Alexia had set up for the two of them.)


    London:This is seriously way too much.

    Blake:
    This is only the beginning.
    ________________________________________________________
    (Ike looks at the casket and realizes where Vicki is but the night was making the cemetery hard to make out.)


    Ike: (to Ava)I hate you.

    Ava:
    Bring it.

    (Ike and Ava begin to strugle over the casket.)


    Ava:You're going to be in there with it.

    Ike:
    You would have to kill me first before that happens.

    Ava:
    It'll be arranged.

    Ike:
    Try it. I guarantee you don't have the guts!

    (Ike takes the gun and bashes Ava in the head with the handle as she slides into his arms unconscious.)
    ________________________________________________________
    (Alexia begins to plead with Owen while others join to watch him standing on the roof of his dorm.)


    Alexia: (screaming)Owen don't jump!

    Owen:
    Get away from me. You have no time to care. You’re too busy planning your social life to care about what your own brother’s going through!

    Alexia: (pleading)
    Please just safely come down from there.

    (Others watch Owen as Alexia goes into a panic state.)


    Alexia:Somebody go and get the police, IMEDIATELY!

    Owen:
    There's no need for them. If I can't have Traci, then I don't to deserve to live!

    Alexia:
    That's not true!

    (Owen jumps off of the room roof, while Alexia screams. His body hits the wet ground with a thump. Alexia runs over to him and holds on to his body as she sobs.)



    Join Us Next Time For Another Exciting Episode ofP O I N T P A L A C E

    © 2000-2003, 2007

    Next on Point Palace:
    - John and Carrie discuss the future for Dylan and Alley.
    - Dylan's obsession with Carrie annoys Alley even more.
    - Nan puts her plan into emotion with London and Blake as targets.
    - Vicki's still trapped but Ike needs Ava alive.
    - Carlos hets up his response to Jenny with sex.
    - Will tries looking for Lenvy but her mother won't budge.
    - Alexia worries over her brother who could very well be dead.
  14. Matt P.
    In Cody, Colorado lies a private college where students are anything but studious.
    Lies, love, and murder are the main subjects that will be taught!
    College Never Looked This Good!

    Debut: November 10th, 2000

    SONBC Debut: May 4th, 2007

    Current Season: Season 5 debuting on August 24th, 2007

    Creator & Executive Story Consultant/Head Writer: Matt Politylo

    Logo Designer: Mary Zimmerman

    Copyright 2000, 2007 MP Productions
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