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Episode 63: Survival of the Fiancee


Matt P.

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Previously on Point Palace:


- London finds Blake's body and freaks out.

- Alley and Dylan patch things up with each other as they yet again make love to each other.

- Jenny sets up a romantic evening for Carlos but it's cut short when he's called into work. Jenny goes ballistic.

- John and Carrie get more serious with one another when John buys Carrie a very nice gift. She begins to feel guilty after thinking about Dylan.

- Nan calls Owen to find out that he completed the mission she gave him but Alexia over hears the conversation and tells her brother that she's going to have to be there for him, even if it means having to get him out of jail.

- Ava has a phone conversation with James, in which Peggy eavesdrops on, and both girls have a little bit of a run in with one another by exchanging very intelligent yet mean words.

- Will informs Lenvy that Patrick was released on bail and she begins to get scared and goes over to Will's room to be with him, but before she even gets inside, her vision turns black as she becomes blindfolded.
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Episode 63:
Survival of the Fiancee

Executive Story Consultant & Creator:
Matt Politylo

Logo Designer:
Mary Zimmerman

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(Lenvy feels a forceful arm pushing her while still being blindfolded. It didn't help much that the darkness from the night was already blocking her vision. She felt her feet hitting a hard floor and she knew that she was being pushed into a room of some sort.)

Lenvy:
Patrick? Patrick is that you?


(Lenvy gets no answer.)

Lenvy:
Who ever you are this isn't funny! Let me go!


(The blind fold comes off and Lenvy sees a candle lit bed room.)

Lenvy: (confused)
What?


(Lenvy turns around to see Will.)

Will:
Surprise!


Lenvy: (hitting his arm)
I thought that you were Patrick and that you came back to Point Palace just to kidnap me.

Will:
I didn't mean to scare you and if I did I'm sorry. I just wanted to surprise you by treating you to a romantic evening alone.

Lenvy:
You went through all this trouble, just for me?

Will:
I can think of a way for you to show me how much you appreciate me.

Lenvy:
Like kiss you or hug you?

Will:
No. I was giving it a lot of thought about love. It's something that can be so confusing yet joyful at the same time. I've done it plenty of times to know that during "it," I might have been happy but not fulfilled. I was missing the whole "love" aspect that was truely there. And with you, it is there and I want to experience it with you.

Lenvy:
Will you never tried to pressure me into anything and I like that a lot. It was even better when you risked everything to come save me when I was in trouble in Ireland. Now all of this is just...It's just breath taking.

Will:
Then is that a yes?


(Lenvy gets a tear in her eye.)

Lenvy:
Yes Will. I want you to be my first. And I can be your first true love.


(Will turns on his music and plays soft jazz. He then makes his way over to Lenvy and places his hand on her hips. They embrace in a kiss. Will picks up Lenvy and as they continue to kiss, he lies her down on the bed)

Will:
I can already feel it. Just kissing you is enough for me.


(Lenvy takes Will's shirt off and kisses his neck. She then kisses the center of his chest and works her way down to his stomach and then kisses his lips)

Lenvy:
I'm a little nervous but I'm ready.


(Will takes off Lenvy's shirt and looks at her with such beauty. He then undoes her bra and kisses her shoulders and then her lips. He can feel her shaking a bit, it makes him smile.)

Will:
I-


(Will pauses.)

Will:
I love you Lenvy.


(Lenvy looks Will straight into his eyes.)

Lenvy:
I love you Will.


(Will takes the covers and swings it over the two lovers as the night goes on.)
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(The next afternoon at the hospital London goes through Blake's phone book and the first person on his list is Alley.)

London:
Great. My most favorite person in the world.


(London presses the call button.)

Alley:
Blake?

London:
Not exactly. Look I know that you don't like me-

Alley:
Who is this?

London:
It's London and I need to talk to you about something that's very important. Are you with Dylan?

Alley:
Yeah I am. What's going on?

London:
As I was saying. I know that you and I really haven't gotten along because of John but aside from that Blake is in the hospital.

Alley:
What happned to Blake?

London:
Someone shot him and the only thing that I know about his condition is that he's breathing but that he has under go extensive surgery.

Alley:
That's awful. I'll tell Dylan immediately and we'll be there soon.

London:
It would mean a lot to Blake.

Alley:
Thanks for calling.

London:
No problem.


(Alley hangs up with London and wakes up Dylan next to her after making love to him like they always do.)

Dylan:
I was having the most wonderful dream.

Alley:
I just got one of the most disturbing calls of my life and you're not going to like what I had to hear.

Dylan:
Is something wrong?

Alley:
Yeah. London called me on Blake's cell phone. He's in the hospital because someone shot him!

Dylan:
Somone shot him? The only person who I could even think of doing that would have to be...

Alley:
Nan?

Dylan:
Yep. I hope he's alright.

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(Carrie hangs up her phone and turns to John as the two spend time together in John's room.)

John:
What was that all about?

Carrie:
London. That girl is the one you were telling me about right? You're ex girl friend from Ohio who's now with Blake?

John:
Yep that's the one. What were you two talking about?

Carrie:
It turns out that someone shot Blake and he's wounded in the hospital.

John:
Do you remember the last time we went to the hospital for him?

Carrie:
You mean the time when he got drunk and accidentally ran over Nan who was pregnant with Will's baby and then had Jenny try to kill Alley by setting fire to her and then you came to her rescue?

John:
Wow. You have a really good memory.

Carrie:
I have to go and see him. Are you going to come with me?

John:
Do you honestly want to know how I feel about Blake Hammerton?

Carrie:
Sure.

John:
Ever since he has gone out with London, he has sort of shoved it in my face to stay away from her.

Carrie:
Becaue of the baby right?

John:
Exactly. Some time ago London didn't want me around our baby and Blake was sort of trying to enforce it just because he thought it was his right to.

Carrie:
So I take that you're not going to go.

John:
If it were up to me, I hope that Blake dies!

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(James calls Ava on her cell phone. James is sitting at his cozy desk in his office and she is in her room studying Psychology. Once she sees that it's him calling, she puts the book down to answer it.)

Ava:
Are you busy?

James:
Yeah, I'm just grading all of those tests and wanted to take a break from it.

Ava:
We need to talk about something that is very disturbing to me.

James:
Really?

Ava:
Yeah you're good friend Peggy Lowrie. How much does she know about what you and I do?

James:
I don't know.

Ava:
James did you tell her?

James:
I sort of did because I can trust her and I'm sorry if-

Ava:
No it's okay. I just wanted to know, but I'm not so sure if she can be trusted!

James:
Believe me she is very trustworthy.

Ava:
Let's hope that that's true. If the word got out about us then we would both be in lots of trouble!

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(Blake gets moved into a room where he is hooked up to a ventalation system and London sits next to him.)

London:
I don't know what to say. Except who ever did this to you. They're going to pay!


(Carrie walks in and London acknowledges her.)

Carrie:
Hi. You must be London.

London:
Yes and you are?

Carrie:
Carrie Slondsbid. This is a funny story, I'm actually going out with your ex boy friend John Snaldry.

London:
Oh the father of my baby? Well that's good to hear that he has someone in his life.

Carrie:
And I'm happy about you and Blake.

London:
Thank you.

Carrie:
I've seen Blake in worse times then these and he's going to pull through it. He has before and I know that he can do it now. I moved for a little bit and I didn't keep in touch with anybody. He's an awesome friend and he cared about everyone. Good things happen to good people. Blake's going to be fine.

London:
I can only hope.


(Alley and Dylan walk into Blake's room but almost walk out when they notice Carrie, especially Dylan.)
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(Jenny goes over to the hospital and sees Carlos hard at work.)

Jenny:
Do you have time to talk to little old me?


(Agatha overhears Jenny.)

Agatha:
I swear this boy is hard at work all of the time.

Carlos:
That's why I like you so much Agatha. You never quit with the compliments.

Agatha:
How does that saying go? Give credit where credit is due. And you deserve all the credit in the world.


(Carlos begins to walk around as Jenny follows.)

Jenny: (sarastic)
Believe me last night was a fun night for me. The battery operated machine thanks you for it and I forgive you. I was in the mood, you had to work- It's over and done with.
(more serious)
Is something bothering you?


Carlos:
Yeah you remember how I told you about us being invited to a wedding?

Jenny:
Blake Hammerton's wedding. I remember that. Are you having trouble with what to wear?

Carlos:
No. Blake was shot a couple of nights ago.

Jenny: (shocked)
That's awful. Completely awful.

Carlos:
I think that Nan was behind it.

Jenny:
What if she is? She's dangerous. I don't understand why she would do it. Wait...I can, that girl wants what she wants and it's not below her to shoot someone to get it. I'm surprised, she usually has someone else do her bidding for her. At one point that used to be me.

Carlos:
Hopefully that's not true!

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(Carlos takes Jenny to Blake's room where she sees Dylan, Alley, Carrie and London.)

Jenny:
Hey Alley. Hi Dylan. It's been a while since we last talked.


(Carrie notices Dylan and Alley.)

Carrie:
I didn't know that you two came in.

Alley:
It's nice to see you too.


(Dylan looks away from Carrie and Carrie notices it but doesn't comment on it.)

Carrie:
Oh and Jenny. I haven't seen you in forever.

Jenny:
How have you been?

Carrie: (jittery)
I'm doing good I guess. It's um so nice to see you all. It was nice meeting you London. I guess I should be going. Jenny we should defenitely hang out some time. I hope Blake does better. Bye everyone.

Alley:
Please don't leave on my account.

Carrie:
Don't flatter yourself.


(Carrie looks at Dylan and then leaves.)

Jenny:
(to London)
I don't think I have ever met you.

London:
I'm Blake's fiancee. It's nice to meet you.


(Jenny, Alley, Dylan, and London huddle over Blake.)

Alley:
I can't believe that he is in this state.

Dylan:
I really hope that he pulls through.

Jenny:
He is a great guy. In my opinion he never deserved any of this.

London:
I bet he can hear us. Inside he's probaby smiling.


(London begins to break down.)

London:
Why him? Why not anyone else? But of course it has to happen to him.

Alley:
We all have to be strong. Crying and thinking of bad things isn't going to help anything.

Dylan:
I really wish that he can see how his friends will always be there for him.

London:
I think he knows.

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(Carlos acknowleges for London to talk to him.)

Carlos:
London can I talk to you for a second?

London:
Yes?

Carlos:
Dr. Quarr will be in here shortly to tell you the status of Blake.

London:
Thank you.


(Carlos leaves and turns around after seeing Nan with a grin on her face.)
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Carlos:
I thought that I smelled a lying whore.

Nan:
That or my wonderfully expensive purfume.

Carlos:
What the hell are you doing here?

Nan:
I heard the news about Blake and wanted to see if everything was going okay.

Carlos:
Everyone in there hates you and you're not wanted so before you even make one step into his room you better think of the concequences.

Nan:
I wasn't going to go into his room. I know that I'm not wanted but I just wanted to know his condition.

Carlos:
You're up to something aren't you!

Nan:
Me? Now come on Carlos if you're trying to say what I think you're saying then no I had nothing to do with Blake's shooting.

Carlos:
You are the best liar. You come up with the greatest lies and anyone who you can manipulate will believe you!


(Jenny comes out to talk to Carlos and notices Nan.)

Jenny:
Nan I know that we don't like each other and we're not friends but I'm trying to be sincere as possible by saying that you better go.

Carlos:
She doesn't deserve any sort of sympathy that you can give her.

Jenny:
But-

Carlos:
Why are you defending her?

Jenny:
I'm not. I hate her as much as you do but I'm trying to make the situation a lot better then it's going to be by her going in there.

Nan:
I'm leaving now.

Carlos:
I have to go too. Jenny I feel as if you've changed about Nan.


(Carlos hugs her and then leaves.)

Nan:
That was sort of very nice of you.

Jenny:
Just because we have something over on each other doesn't mean that we can't be civil.

Nan:
Yeah that is kind of true. You wouldn't want Carlos to know that you and Will kidnapped me and then lied to him about it.

Jenny:
I hope we don't cross paths again because even if I do care about how my boy friend feels about my actions, I might not be so fake and nice towards you! Do remember that I know your family's little secret. You tell Carlos then I tell the whole school about how you really are Tracie Sheridan and that Nan Sheridan died some time ago.


(Jenny goes back into the room but before she does, Nan's words make her turn around.)

Nan:
People will probably look at you as crazy. Oh well, at least you're being smart about everything. You wouldn't want to lose Carlos to me!


(Nan leaves the hospital.)
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(Alexia is in her room with Owen and hangs up her phone.)

Alexia:
I just got off the phone with London.

Owen:
And?

Alexia:
She's devestated because Blake is wounded in his shoulder and hooked up to machines.

Owen:
Kind of like how I was.

Alexia:
Yeah but you survived what you went through. By the way, how does your neck feel?

Owen:
The pain killers really did help me and I can move it from side to side. I'm cured.

Alexia:
I still don't know why you would do this to Blake!

Owen:
Fine. I'll tell you the truth. I found out from Nan that the main reason why she pretended to be Tracie was because of Blake!

Alexia:
That's-

Owen:
Oh and there's more. The reason why she went through with it was because he was black mailing her or threatening her with something that she couldn't get out of. So she had to do it. He wanted her to make me pay. And the only thing that I can think of was when you and I first came to this school and I hit on London. I don't think that he could have let it go. And that's why I did it. I wanted him to be physically and emotionally hurt as I was because of him!

Alexia: (angry)
You are so stupid!

Owen:
Stupid for what? You would have done the same thing if you were in my position!

Alexia:
No I would never have listened to Nan. I spent time with both London and Blake after I felt really bad for trying to break them up by drugging Blake and making London think that I slept with him. And I'm glad that I did a complete turn around because they are like my best friends and they don't deserve this. It just seems like after you hang out with Nan she brainwashes you. Did you know that she blew up Blake's boat ride?

Owen:
No.

Alexia:
Yeah because she's that psycho and wants to get back at him. And obviously she did it through using you once again.

Owen:
It's-

Alexia:
Just think about it Owen. You're lucky now. Everyone thinks that Nan was the one who pulled the trigger.

Owen:
Then maybe I won't get caught.

Alexia:
You seriously need to think of what Nan has done to you. She's ruining your life and you tried to commit suicide for her and then you shoot someone that she hates! Think about it Owen. She brainwashed you!

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(In the parking lot of the hospital, Officer Wendell stops Nan before she gets into her car.)

Officer Wendell:
It's been a while since we last talked Nancy.

Nan:
Yeah well I've been trying to stay out of the law's way and I always make sure that I wear my seat belt and obey the speed limit.

Officer Wendell:
I have to question you on something that is more serious then traffic violations.

Nan:
Did I do something wrong?

Officer Wendell:
Where were you on the night of Blake Hammerton's shooting?

Nan:
I was in my room the whole night. Taking a shower actually. Those details might be a bit x-rated for the boys down at the station.


(Officer Wendell does not find her comment funny.)

Officer Wendell:
Did anyone see you?

Nan:
I'm not sure. Maybe you can dig around and find out. Who knows what kind of pervs you have running around the campus.

Officer Wendell:
Before we do find out who really did pull the trigger, I hate to say it but you are one of our main suspects?

Nan:
Just because I have a past with Blake, that makes me a suspect?

Officer Wendell:
A lot of his friends-

Nan:
A lot of his friends hate me and of course I'd be the number one suspect! This is like a damn crucifixtion.

Officer Wendell: (surly)
Stay in town and don't go anywhere. I don't understand why trouble always has to follow you!

Nan:
It's the other people who get me in trouble. I would never kill someone or even try to. I bet there are other people who hate Blake. So if I were you, and I'm not trying to threaten you because you are an authoritative figure of the law, I would start to dig up evidence else where. You're not going to find anything here!


(Officer Wendell shuts Nan's car door as she drives off.)
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(Nick talks to London near the door way of Blake's hospital room.)

London:
Obviously it has to be something serious Dr. Quarr.

Nick:
It is.

London:
Then tell us.

Nick:
Why don't we go for a walk? I can maybe take you to the cafeteria and try to interest you in some delecious jello pudding.

London:
Jello pudding is not going to help how I feel about my fiancee's condition.


(London moves closer to Blake's bed.)

London:
All I want to know is if Blake is going to survive. Go ahead and tell us all. They deserve to know the truth as much as I do.


(London huddles over Blake and then looks back at Nick)

London:
Is Blake going to survive?

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