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Episode 64: A Sisters Trust


Matt P.

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Previously on Point Palace:


- After thinking that she were being kidnapped again by Patrick, it turned out to be Will, who planned a romantic evening with her. Will asks her if she would let him be her first and she agrees as the two make passionate love.

-The day after Blake was shot and had to go through surgery, London calls all of his friends to come and see him.

- Carrie tells John about Blake and he tells her that he's not going to go and see him because he hates him and thinks Blake would be better off dead.

-Ava questions James on what he told Peggy. James admits to telling her almost everything and Ava worries that the word doesn't get out.

-Alley and Dylan almost leave the hospital when they see Carrie but decide to stay for Blake's sake.

-Jenny reunites with Carrie when she sees Blake

-Carlos finds Nan in front of Blake's room and confronts her about Owen and tells her to leave. Jenny comes out and doesn't do anything about it, which satisfies Nan.

-Owen tells Alexia why he shot Blake and she tells him that Nan made it all up and that she brainwashed him.

-Nan gets questioned about the shooting fromOfficer Wendell and tells him nothing.

-Dr. Quarr comes into the room and London demands to know, in front of everyone, if Blake is going to survive.
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Episode 64:
A Sister's Trust

Executive Story Consultant & Creator:
Matt Politylo

Logo Designer:
Mary Zimmerman


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(Nick looks at London and then at everyone else in Blake's hospital room. Blake's friends look at him intently. He swallows the lump in his throat and prepares to speak on cue but has a lot of pressure since he was put on the spot.)

London:
Anything that you tell me, I think that they all have a right to know.

Nick: (clearing his throat)
Blake has to go through one more type of surgerical procedure on his shoulder. After that he will be fine.

London:
So you're saying that I'm acting scared over nothing?

Nick:
I never wanted to scare you. I'm a doctor, not a bastard.

Jenny:
That's not what some people would say.

Nick:
Excuse me?

Jenny:
Oh nothing.

Alley:
But when will he have to go through with this?

Nick:
I'm thinking that some time today, maybe.

Dylan:
And what would the after affect be? If he does make it out alive that is.

Nick:
The bullet was already taken out. It took a lot of blood out and the first thing that we had to stop was any kind of blood clotting. That was the first part of the surgery.

Carrie:
Then what is the second type of surgery going to be like?

Nick:
It's not servere as the first but all we're going to do is just stich the hole back to the way it was.

London:
Will he be scarred for life?

Nick:
He might just have a small scar but if he's not stressed out about anything and gets a lot of rest and takes it easy then it'll go away. You won't even notice it.

Alley:
Why isn't he awake now?

Nick:
He's on pain killers. This is what he needs just to take it easy.

London:
I just hope that he will be okay for the wedding. Everyone here should know that I'm going to marry Blake, hospitalized or not hospitalized. He's going to be fine and that's all that matters to me!

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(The next morning Lenvy wakes up in Will's arms. She sighs with relief at the morning sun and looks up at Will who is smiling at her as he plays with her hair.)

Will:
Please go back to sleep.

Lenvy:
I didn't think that you would be up.

Will:
I just wanted to watch you sleep. You look peaceful with your eyes closed and I could only imagine what you dreaming.

Lenvy:
I was dreaming about you.

Will:
Last night was amazing for me. It had to have been the best time that I have ever had, with anyone.

Lenvy:
It was pretty good for me too.

Will:
Are you sure? I know that sometimes girls can fake it.

Lenvy:
How could have I faked it if I have never done it before.

Will:
Oh there are so many ways. You could have just been making me think that I was doing good or not hurting you.

Lenvy:
It didn't hurt at all. What we shared was love. That could never hurt me.

Will:
If I just could do it again and again with you I would. A girl never loved me like you did. A girl would never forgive me like you did either.

Lenvy:
You showed yourself worthy of my love. You waited for me and even after we got into a huge fight you didn't give up hope. You saved me. I might have been dead but that didn't happen, because of you.

Will:
I loved every minute of it.

Lenvy:
So did I. I'm glad that you were my first.


(Will and Lenvy kiss and then Lenvy closes her eyes and falls back to sleep.)
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(Alley and Dylan spend time at The Palace Cafe, where Alley seems to be out of it and sickly.)

Dylan:
What's bothering you?

Alley:
Nothing.

Dylan:
Was it when you saw Carrie last night at the hospital?

Alley:
Don't even bring her name up.

Dylan:
I won't. I just want to know what's wrong.

Alley:
I'm not feeling too hot.

Dylan:
What do you mean?

Alley:
I just feel like I'm going to vomit.

Dylan:
Then maybe you should go back to your room. Was it something that you ate or do you have a cold? Maybe it was from being at the hospital?

Alley:
What about that one night? What if-

Dylan: (quickly defensive)
Please don't even think that.

Alley:
Then what else could it be? I've been taking my birth control pills and you and I always have safe sex, but I don't just get sick all of a sudden.

Dylan:
Alley, you're not pregnant!

Alley:
Yeah you're right. How could I be so stupid. I swear sometimes I think that I can be so overdramatic.

Dylan:
Something else is bothering you, isn't it?

Alley:
Blake getting married. He's too young and I don't think that London is the right girl for him!

Dylan:
You know that once Blake get's through his surgery that he's going do what he wants and he's in love with her. There's really nothing that you or I could do about it.

Alley:
It just makes me want to-


(Alley covers her mouth and makes a heaving noise.)

Dylan:
Go do that in the bathroom! Quick!

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(Nan and Owen spend time in Owen's room. He is even shakier than before which she notices.)

Nan:
It looks like you are feeling a lot better.

Owen:
Pyshically I am. Emotionally I question that.

Nan:
Do you need any more help with anything? I can maybe do your laundry or-

Owen:
No thanks.


(There is a short pause between them.)

Nan:
Wow you're really talking a lot. What is it with these short word answers?

Owen:
You really don't want to know what I have to say.

Nan:
If there's something on your mind, then say it.

Owen:
Fine. I can't believe that I took a gun and shot someone. No matter who it was, there could have been better ways to have dealt with it. I'm not a murder and I don't feel like going to jail over something to that extent!

Nan:
I think that the person had every reason to do with it. Blake had it coming to him. I could have done it but I didn't because I knew that you had every right to. I even saved your ass because the police were questioning me and I could have point the blame to you. You're lucky that I didn't.

Owen:
I thank you for not turning me in. Even if you did I could have just told them that I got the gun from you!

Nan: (appeasing him)
And I would have gone down with you. You're very clever.

Owen:
It's good to always have a back up plan. Which is why I don't want to talk to you ever again. So you can show your way out to the door and never ever come back here!

Nan:
You're making a huge mistake. Do you know who you're dealing with?

Owen:
I was brainwashed by you. Alexia told me everything. She said that he never did that to me and he never would. After hearing about your past it's obvious that you were lying and just trying to use me. Tracie or not, you have a heartless soul.


(Nan stands up and makes her way to the door. Before she leaves she turns around to face him.)

Nan:
You're a criminal now Owen! There's nothing you can do about it, except for maybe go to jail. I don't care if you go and tell the police that I gave you the gun. You were the one who shot him and you would be the one who would have to pay for it!


(Nan storms off and slams the door behind her.)
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(Carrie lies down in her bed in her new room where John comes in with some chicken noodle soup.)

Carrie:
Stop being so nice to me.

John:
When you said that you were sick I wanted to make sure that I could give you the proper vitamins.

Carrie:
I'm such a big girl and I can take care of myself. This college sort of reminds me of how I had to.

John:
How was your visit with Blake?

Carrie:
It went wonderful, until I saw Alley and Dylan back together, and I wanted to leave right there.

John:
How did they feel about seeing you?

Carrie:
Alley wanted to leave but Dylan stopped her.

John:
Every day that I hear about them, it just seems like they get worse and worse. I think that I'm going to bet by next week that they'll be broken up, and then you and I can rub it in there face.


(Carrie begins to smile.)

Carrie:
But I have to get better first.

John:
You'll be fine by then.


(Carrie stands up and pushes John out of the way when she runs to her bathroom and begins to make vomiting noises.)

John:
Do you want me to hold your hair up?

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(At The Chill Grill, a local eatery for the students, Jenny and Carlos eat lunch together.)

Carlos:
I feel like a broken record with you.

Jenny:
This stuff that we are eating is pretty good. I don't want you to ruin it for the both of us.

Carlos:
Would you like for me to put it away?

Jenny:
It might cause a food fight between us.


(Carlos snickers.)

Carlos:
I just want to know something.

Jenny:
Let me guess. You want to know why I'm not fighting with Nan anymore.

Carlos:
Then you read my mind.

Jenny:
And what have I told you before?

Carlos:
That you wanted to forget all about her.

Jenny:
And even though we both have, she still somehow comes up in a lot of our conversations.

Carlos:
You've changed a lot. A couple of months ago you were so hell bent on getting back at her.

Jenny:
And now I'm not, so please just let it go.

Carlos:
I feel like you're hiding something from me.

Jenny:
I'm not. I'm the most honest person with you. You are like my best friend in the whole entire world. I would you tell you anything.

Carlos:
You are so right. I've learned so much about you and I think that I can read you like a book. If you are hiding something from me, I'll find out!

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(Ava sits down on a chair next to James's desk. He puts down his gradebook to give her his attention.)

James:
How was the test?

Ava:
It wasn't all that bad. You didn't make it that easy for us though.

James:
You kids are in college now. Not high school, junior high, and I would never make it as easy as grade school tests.

Ava:
"You kids." I hope you don't think of me as a kid.

James:
I really don't. You're much more mature then most young adults your age. You've been through so much already.

Ava:
And plus none of those young adults are sleeping with the teacher.


(Ava sits on James's lap. The door is partly open.)

Ava:
How about it? You shut the door and lock it. If I can keep my mouth shut and just breathe heavy, then we won't disturb anyone.


(James and Ava kiss but he pulls out of it.)

James:
Maybe in your room but not here.

Ava:
Where is your sense of adventure?

James:
I'll be right back I need to talk to another professor about something.


(Ava gets off of him and sits back down on her chair as James leaves.)

Ava: (frustrated)
Great. Just great.


(Peggy walks in with another woman about her age.)

Peggy:
Ava, what are you doing here?

Ava:
Oh I'm just waiting for James.

Peggy:
Don't you mean Professor Vaughne?

Ava:
Yeah.

Peggy:
I don't think that you have ever met my friend here. She's a Math professor. Ava this is Laney, Laney this is Ava.


(Laney puts out her hand.)

Ava:
How do you know Professor Vaughne, Laney?

Laney:
I see him every day.

Ava:
That's cool, does he help you out with your teaching or something?


(Both women begin to laugh.)

Laney:
No. I'm his wife!

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(Alexia and London sit down at a table in the hospital cafeteria.)

Alexia:
So how's Blake doing?

London:
He's going through his second part of surgery and then he'll be fine.

Alexia:
I was thinking that maybe you should bump up the wedding.

London:
I think so too. We have almost everything done.

Alexia:
You're right. And you are so lucky to have me as your wedding planner. We already have your dress, your cake is being worked on, booked a chapel, have almost all of the invitations done and that's about all that I can think of.

London:
That is pretty good. I can only hope that Blake will live through it.

Alexia:
He will and you know it.

London:
There's something else that I wanted to ask you about. I don't have a bridesmaid but I want you to be it, because you are like my best friend.

Alexia:
I would love to be your brides maid slash wedding planner.

London:
That's wonderful and one less thing for me to worry about. Well I haven't been eating much since the shooting so I guess that I should maybe get something.


(London gets up to go and get some food and Alexia gets a call on her cell phone.)

Alexia:
Owen? Listen London still doesn't know that you were the one who did it.

Owen:
I really don't care anymore. I came to my senses about Nan and I kicked her to the curb. She says that she might go to the police about it. I don't know what to do.

Alexia:
Do you think that I should tell London about the shooting.


(London overhears the conversation and interrupts her.)

London:
What do you know about the shooting?

Alexia:
I-

London:
Do you know who did it? Please if you do, tell me. Who shot Blake?


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Will Alexia tell London the truth find out on another exciting episode of
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Keep up the good work Matt. I'm gonna try to catch up this weekend on everything so far.

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