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Episode 59: The Deciding Factor


Matt P.

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Previously on Point Palace:


- A high speed car chase pursues in Ireland when Will purposely speeds to get the police’s attention and when they do, Patrick gets arrested when Will tricks him into stopping. Will gets a small fine and Lenvy wants to leave Ireland as soon as possible.

- Ava joins James’s class but after class they accidentally kissed.

- Alley and Dylan get into an argument over the phone about Carrie.

- Carrie reports the good news about what she overheard to John as they realize they make a good team together.

- Alexia already starts planning for the wedding by giving cake samples to Blake and London.

- Nan shows up to Owen’s door and asks to stay with him, even if it means being Tracie.

- London’s o.b.g.y.n. comes from Ohio to tell London and Blake very important news about her baby as London demands to know what’s wrong with her child.
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Episode 59:
The Deciding Factor

Head Writer & Creator:
Matt Politylo

Logo Designer:
Mary Zimmerman
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(Dr. Harnlo sits down next to London in her hospital room.)

Dr. Harnlo:
It’s…

London:
What is it? Is it something really bad?

Dr. Harnlo:
No. You’re still going to have a healthy baby boy or girl.


(London is happy and relieved.)

London:
You scared me half to death.

Blake:
You had nothing to worry about.


(Blake hugs London.)

London:
I was so scared.

Dr. Carnlo:
I’m sorry if I sounded as if something bad had happened. You’ll be delivering very soon.

Blake: (happy)
Very soon?

London:
I can’t believe it.

Dr. Harnlo:
I just wanted you to know that everything was going to be all right.

Blake: (relieved)
Everything is all right.

London:
Everything works out for us.


(Dr. Quarr returns and makes eyes with Dr. Harnlo who picks up on his nonverbal look.)

Dr. Quarr:
Dr. Harnlo are you done with what you had to say?

Dr. Harnlo:
Yes. London if you have any problems what so ever. You know my number in Ohio so don’t be afraid to call.


London:
Thank you Doctor. I’ll do that.


(Dr. Harnlo looks at her watch.)

Dr. Harnlo:
I have a flight to catch. Good bye you two. Oh and for someone who is so far in her pregnancy, I have never seen someone look so good.


(Dr. Harnlo begins to leave.)

Blake:
Dr. Harnlo before you leave.

Dr. Harnlo:
Yes?

Blake:
London and I are getting married soon. We haven’t set a date yet but I can guarantee it will be sooner than later. It would mean to the world to London and to I if you came. Please bring your family, just as long as you were there.

Dr. Harnlo:
London has my address. Just send the invitation and I’ll be sure to make it.


(Dr. Harnlo exits and Dr. Quarr turns his attention to them.)

Blake:
I suppose you have some important news for us?

Dr. Quarr:
Actually I do.


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(The next day after class Ava walks up to James’s desk.)

Ava:
Professor Vaughne?

James:
Ava please you can call me James.

Ava:
I wasn’t sure. We’re in the classroom you know.

James:
I’m sorry about yesterday.

Ava:
That’s sort of what I wanted to talk to you about.

James:
It was an accident and I-

Ava:
It wasn’t all of your fault because I sort of went in for it too only I didn’t know what I was doing until it happened and then when it did. It was just-

James:
Weird?

Ava:
In a way yes. But it felt a little nice too.

James:
I assure you that it will never ever happen again. If word got out that it did. I could be in major trouble.

Ava:
I know that’s what you’re worried about but I wanted to ask you something.

James:
Ava you’re how old?

Ava:
I’m nine-teen years old.

James:
And I’m thirty. It’s a huge difference and I’m sorry but we can only hold a student slash teacher relationship.

Ava:
That’s totally fine. I just wanted to know if you would like to go out on a teacher slash student date?


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(After settling in to her room Lenvy and Will spend time on her couch. He holds her in his arms, happy to have her back.)

Lenvy:
You were so brave.

Will:
No. I’m really not.

Lenvy:
Yeah you really were. You didn’t give up hope on me whenever you could have. You could have just thought that you and I were through and went to the next girl.

Will:
I told you that I really liked you and I was being an ass for thinking that you were Carrie.

Lenvy:
I called you once before.

Will:
I never received the call there was an unknown ID that came up, it must've been you.

Lenvy:
That’s because some girl answered the phone. Only I didn’t want to talk to her. I thought that you were over me.

Will:
Wait a minute. Another girl answered my phone? Oh yeah...now I remember. That girl was sort of a…

Lenvy:
What is she to you?

Will: (looking away)
A friend I guess.

Lenvy:
Will, I feel as if you hide so much from me.

Will:
I know but-

Lenvy:
No. No buts. I want the truth Will. Yes you saved me and I’m totally thankful for a guy like you. I just want to know everything about you.

Will:
Fine. I have a few classes to go to but I’ll tell you everything that you want to know another day.

Lenvy:
Tomorrow! I want to know everything about you tomorrow!

Will: (flirting)
Now I don’t know. If you want to know everything about Will Pazner then you’re going to have to give something to receive.


(Lenvy kisses Will’s cheek.)

Will:
You’re going to have to do better than that.


(Lenvy softly kisses Will’s lips.)

Lenvy:
There, then that means that I get everything I want tomorrow.

Will:
I-

Lenvy:
You what?

Will:
I promise.


(Will exits.)

Lenvy:
Can you keep that promise?


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(Dr. Quarr continues to talk to Blake and London who is anxiously waiting to be discharged.)

Dr. Quarr:
All you have to do is sign a couple of papers and you will be on your way home.

Blake:
That’s wonderful doctor. When will we be receiving them?

Dr. Quarr:
Soon enough. I’ll have somebody send them in very shortly. Please excuse me.


(Dr. Quarr exits to find Dr. Harnlo jotting on her files. He stops her.)

Dr. Quarr:
Why didn't you tell them the truth?

Dr. Harnlo:
Because those two are happy in there. When the time comes, she'll find out and they will deal with it in their own way!

Dr. Quarr:
But-

Dr. Harnlo:
But nothing Nick! There is a time and a place for everything. I have a flight to catch and you have a hospital wing to run.


(Dr. Harnlo exits, leaving Nick to feel frustrated.)
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London:
None of this should have happened.

Blake:
I know and I feel as if it’s all my fault.

London:
No don’t say that what. It’s not true what so ever! I don’t know Nan all that well but from what I got she’s one psycho bitch and obviously isn’t over you or has put your relationship that you once had with her back in the past.

Blake:
It’s sort of stupid and childish. Trying to better each other and make the one feel as if they’re destroyed.

London:
I told you that Point Palace acts like a game.

Blake:
I know but with Nan it’s like as immature as it is, I just feel as if I want to see her crying or…

London:
Dead?

Blake:
If I ever heard about Nan being dead then I would probably throw a surprise party and invite everyone who has ever known her.

London:
I don’t think that we should be worrying about Nan. We have something much more expensive to think about.

Blake:
Of course. Our wedding.

London:
I’m so glad that we have Alexia as a wedding planner.

Blake:
She’s changed for the best and in the end is going to give us what we want.

London:
I love you.


(Blake kisses London’s forehead.)
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(Carrie and John celebrate at The River Teal. They sit across each other with smiles on their faces.)

John:
Tell me again what happened?

Carrie:
It was great. I went to the door and all I heard Alley screaming was “why is it that after we make love you compare me to Carrie!”

John:
That’s like music to my ears.

Carrie:
To think that we were going to be the broken hearted ones. I didn’t think that you were being serious when you said that you wanted to celebrate.

John:
What you did has put me in the greatest mood and I thought that we just had to. Let’s make a toast.


(Carrie and John lift up their glasses of champagne.)

Carrie:
What should we celebrate to?

John:
Revenge and how sweet it is that it’s going our way.

Carrie:
I’m all for that.


(Carrie and John clink their glasses then drink.)

Carrie:
I have to go use the ladies room to fix my makeup so I’ll be right back. I'm sort of having a good time tonight. Thank you.


(Carrie stands up and goes over to kiss John on his cheek. He pounds the champagne flute and then pours himself another glass.)

John:
Is that all I get?

Carrie: (turning around caught off guard)
What?


(John pulls Carrie in tighter for their lips to lock further.)

John:
This might be the bubbly talking but it should be said at least, I want you!

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(Alley knocks on Dylan’s door in the middle of the night. She shivers from the cold.)

Dylan:
It’s a chilly night. You might want to come in.

Alley:
I wasn’t planning on staying long.


(Alley comes in as Dylan shuts the door behind him.)

Alley:
I have been thinking a lot about what has happened recently.

Dylan:
What happened recently wasn’t all that of a big deal.

Alley:
To me it is!

Dylan:
Seriously?

Alley:
How can you not see it as that? That’s like me calling you John after we made love. How would you feel about that?

Dylan:
Yes I would be a little upset but I would have quickly realized it was a mistake and let it go.

Alley:
Sure you would.

Dylan:
You misunderstood me.

Alley:
No I understood you perfectly.

Dylan:
Well obviously you didn’t because what I said was that Carrie would never be as sexual as you are and I love that about you.

Alley:
You bringing up her name was enough for me! I’m sick of her and that you’re still thinking of her.


(Dylan becomes frustrated.)

Dylan:
What do you want from me?! You’re the one with a problem so tell me Alley, tell me what is it that you want to do!


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(Carlos comes in to Blake’s room and hands him the papers.)

Carlos:
Here you go this is all you have to sign and when you’re done just give it to the front desk secretary and she’ll handle it from there.

Blake:
Thank you very much.

Carlos:
You’re name is Blake Hammerton right?

Blake:
Yes, but how do you know me?

Carlos:
I think that you might know my girl friend.

Blake:
What’s her name?

Carlos:
Jenny Fremann.

Blake:
Yes I know Jenny, she’s a good person, and I’m sure you know that too.

Carlos:
She is.

Blake:
And this is my fiancé London Tyler.

Carlos:
Nice to meet you London.

London:
Same here.

Carlos:
My name is Carlos DeViego and I’ll tell Jenny that you said hi. It was nice meeting the both of you and good luck in the future.

Blake:
Carlos I was wondering if you and Jenny wanted to come to our wedding.

Carlos:
That would be our pleasure. My room number at Point Palace is 26 A just send me an invitation there.

London:
You’ll get an invitation soon.


(Dr. Quarr overhears their conversation.)

Dr. Quarr:
A wedding? Why Carlos you won’t be able to go to a wedding, because you’ll have to be called in to work on whenever the date is.


(Dr. Quarr begins to giggle evilly.)

Dr. Quarr: (being sarcastic)
Jenny would absolutely love that!

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(Alley and Dylan continue to work out their problems in Dylan’s room.)

Alley:
I want you to choose!

Dylan:
I’ve heard this all before.


(Dylan begins to have a flash back)

Carrie:
Dylan it’s either me or her!


(Dylan sees himself holding on to Tracie’s hand as her and Carrie dangle over the cliff. Carrie begins to slip and time is running out.)


Tracie:
Dylan please help me I would always love you!


(Dylan can’t hold on to Tracie much longer and drops her as she screams all the way to her death)


(The flash back ends.)

Alley:
And if you choose her over me then I’m gone. I don’t mean gone as in breaking up in our relationship. I’ll leave this town for good. I’ll never come back and I’ll never ever see you again. Sort of like what Carrie did! Only you didn’t have a choice, except for now. At least I'm giving you that.


Dylan:
Alley you can’t-


(A tear begins to gleam in Alley’s eye.)

Alley:
Obviously I must. Break free from the ties that bind you. What’s it going to be Dylan? Carrie or me?

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