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  1. Believe me I always got excited to see what it was you had to comment on. They meant the world to me. It's very bittersweet for me too since I've been writing this series for so long. I don't know what I'm going to do with myself? Bernard Griff was Tanisha's date in Season 3 when Ginny and Owen were on their date at The River Teal when Owen was pretending to be British to impress Ginny. He's in love with Tanisha and will do anything for her. Like help her not become a criminal. That part was actually inspired by the Series Finale of Santa Barbara. I re-watchted it recently. That is definitely true about Ava and Nate in this episode. It could be true for this season to since their main focus was Nate's amnesia, Bobbie being James's daugther, and the love triangle between the three. In previous episodes they interacted more with other characters. Ava met Blake in Season 1 after Zak died and bonded over his death. Nate had already known Blake from high school and when he originally came to the school, his main purpose was to find a job with his frirend's new success. In the back of my mind, just being there was enough. Ava was also at Blake and London's first wedding and had a little interaction with London. I also didn't want to overhoard it with the brides and grooms. Had I extended the episodes in this season, I was going to have Carlos ask Jenny to marry him before the trial, but question his proposal since she was so wrapped up in taking Nan down in court. One episode would've ended where Jenny is asked to open a ring box where it would either be a ring or emptiness. I was kicking the idea of having Nat and Nan be related. Maybe they're cousins? Nan already has a dead twin and a mentally unstable triplet. Unless Nat got plastic surgery from Lorrister's money to start her own company and Nan decides to get in on the profits or she'll expose her for what she really looks like. Thank you so much!!!! I think Alley summed up this episode the best. "Everyone who deserves to be together, is together."
  2. I always imagined this moment. Writing my thanks after ending the series. I can't believe that it's here already. Thank you so much for all of my readers and fans who have supported Point Palace. This has been my baby for ten years! It's all because of you guys. If time had done it correctly, this series would have ended in 2006. But time and life got in the way of that. Certain seasons like the first season and the fifth had me creatively hyped to get each episode out weekly. Other seasons not so much. When I first created PP, I was a teenager. Jobless. Then I turned 16 and got a job which of course took me away from writing episodes. Everything happens for a reason and I think one of the main reasons why the time factor happened as it did, was to have PP be shown on mySONtv. Let's get to the finale. The ending was something I went back and forth with a lot. The original ending was going to be Alley and Blake standing over London's grave and Blake saying "I won" and Alley sporting an engagement ring. That ending didn't work out since London was brought back from the dead in Season 5. Something I'm happy I did. Then I thought Nan escapes but if she leaves, then her enimes have won. They kicked her out of town. Nan had to make them think that she had the upper hand so if Jenny were ever to visit Nan, she would know the truth that Nan's still out there. Maybe when Nan gets to Japan she'll keep sending her threatening e-mails to make her visit Anna Lee. I also thought of having Bryan escape with her but Nan's selfish. The only thing Bryan was good for was getting back at Blake and sex. Nan needed to do this one on her own. If I had continued PP for ten more episodes or even for a seventh season, this last episode had made me think of some interesting plots. Alley having Blake's baby would've spelled trouble for both of them since Blake's parents aren't too fond of Alley. John would've gotten wind of this and would have done everything in his power to make the Hammertons hate Alley. Meanwhile, London (who's fearful of divorce since her sister just recently got one) has become so insecure that she would want to raise the baby as their own and tell all of their parents that the baby belongs to Blake and London. I also wanted to a volcano disaster and had characters fighting for their lives in the wake of tragedy. It would've been the Season 6 season finale cliffhanger. I'm happy with who ended up together. The couples who started out in the beginning are together, enimies remained enimies, friends reconcilled, and family members were reunited. I did feel like Alexia was a break out character in this episode. Just because she did a lot for her friends and her family. However I always thought she needed to be with someone. I was going to have Victor meet up with Rena at a bar but she was too fragile after the Lenvy & Will send off that Alexia seemed like a good pairing. Even if it's for one romantic night. Who knows where it could lead for those two? One plot that came to my mind while writing this was Lenvy's death and Carrie finding more information out about her sister. Another mystery would have unraiveled and Dylan would've been dragged along too. I do remember one plot a long time ago where Lana reveals that Dylan is actually a woman named Diana but it never panned out. It was very sad to type THE END at the last line, from the original lap top that I created the series from, but all good things must come to an end. It's true that I became lax with my posts but when I felt creative, it really flowed! I ended my other series with a thank you to my fans saying "as always stay tuned." This time, I can only hope that if I were to ever continue to try to make Point Palace a television show, I will be asking you all to "tune in!" -Matt
  3. - - - Tanisha’s finger gripped closer to the trigger. Until she hears someone coming towards her. Bernard: Put the gun down T. Tanisha: You actually showed? Nice tux. Bernard: Could we have a gunless conversation? Tanisha: I need to do this. Bernard: Then what? You get caught? You go to jail? That’s not a life I want to see you lead. Tanisha: What the hell do you care about me Bernard? Bernard: I’ve always cared about you T. Just lower your riffle. We’ll walk away and you and I will be together. How does that sound? Tanisha lowers her riffle. He puts out his hand for her to take. Bernard: You can trust me T. Tanisha: I just want you to take care of me Bernard. Tanisha decides to give into him. She places her riffle over her shoulder and they walk off. Not seen by anyone. - - - Another couple sat at a table that was covered in white. Ava drank water as did Nate. Ava: You stormed out the other day I didn’t get to hear what you thought of my speech. Nate: I thought your speech was beautiful. You almost had me in tears. Ava: You couldn’t have told me that afterwards? Nate: Ava you already had a support group. One in particular. Ava: Referring to James? Nate: One and only. Ava gets a call on her cell phone. She looks at the caller ID. Nate: I bet that’s him right now. Go ahead. Take the call. Ava stands up to take his call. She shields the receiver to tell Nate how she feels about him. Ava: You’re acting ridiculous! (to James) Hey what’s up? James: Hey I know this sounds weird but I’m in the area. You’re at this big wedding that’s going on right? Ava: Yeah I am. Ava begins walking. Ava: Where exactly are you? James: Do you know the boat house? I’m parked near there. Ava: Oh I see you. Ava waves to James. He sits on the hood of his car. Ava: What are you doing here? James: I came to say good bye. Ava: What? Why are you leaving? I thought everything was going good here. James: It really was. I reconnected with you and I found Bobbie. But I just think that it’s time to move on. Ava: This seems like déjà vu. Nate overhears the two talking and decides to interrupt them. Nate: That sounds like a great idea James. Pack your things and leave. Ava: (to Nate) Don’t do this. James: I also wanted to tell you that I think you two make an amazing couple. You both have become two good friends of mine. Nate: So you’re not trying to steal Ava away from me? James: Of course not. I’d be lying if I said that there weren’t reacquainted feelings towards her when I came back but seeing you two together just made me realize that I’d only be a burden if I stayed. Nate: I’m sorry for acting like a jerk. James: You were being chivalrous. That’s a good trait to have. Ava: I’ll miss the psycho babble. James: At least this time we’re saying bye on good terms. If you two ever want to hang or if you want to talk about Bobbie or visit her grave together. You have my number. Ava: Definitely. Bye. Ava hugs James good bye. Nate shakes his hand. James gets into his car and drives off. Ava looks at Nate. Ava: So are you done being jealous? Nate: Yep. I’m actually quite secure with myself. I got my job back with the school board and I have probably the prettiest girl in this whole entire town standing right in front of me. Ava: Why don’t you move in with me? Nate: (taken off guard) Huh? Ava: You’ve lived in that damn hotel for so long now. It’s about time you feel right at home! Ava places her arms around his neck and kisses him. - - - Blake’s parents Edmund and Katrina Hammerton find Lana sitting alone by herself. Katrina: Lana you look darling. Lana: Katrina. Edmund. Great to see you. Edmund: Can’t believe our boys had a double wedding. Katrina: They grew up so fast. I can only remember when they were playing in our backyards. Lana: I know. Time is definitely slipping. Edmund: Are you here with anyone? Lana: Unfortunately no. Lana spots Dylan, Vi, Ryley and Jason talking with Sean. Lana: Definitely not. - - - London spends time with her family at their table. She sits down exhausted. Bradley: Looking good sis. London: Better then the first time? Joanie: Much better. You have such a glow to you. Divorce doesn’t do that. I should know. Bradley: Yeah because you pay your divorce lawyer a crap load of money that you can’t afford botox. Patricia: Real funny Brad. And where’s L.J.? Gavin: She’s with her pap pap. Gavin holds baby L.J. and coos at the two-year-old in her party dress. London: My baby girl’s been passed along so much tonight. Patricia: That’s because she’s such a beauty. Ever thought of having another one? London looks over at John and Alley. London: I feel like I already have. Excuse me. London walks over to speak with the both of them but is pulled away by Blake. - - - Sean enjoys the moment he’s sharing with his children and his family. Jason: Tell us more about Cancun Uncle Sean. Sean: It’s a very beautiful and exotic location. I lived there for three years. Vi: Maybe we could take a family trip there. Ryley: Yeah I’m sure that wouldn’t have disaster written all over it. (to Dylan) Dylan you’re such a lucky guy. You have us all here in the same place and nothing’s gone wrong. Jason: Yet. Vi: Don’t jinx it you guys. Mom’s still here…alone. Dylan: Hey could I have a minute with our father? Jason, Vi, and Ryley leave the father and son alone. Dylan: Ryley’s right. This is a nice family moment. Sean: Thank you for inviting me. I didn’t know where we stood. Dylan: You’re my dad and I want to make the effort to get to know you. Carrie convinced me. Sean: She is a fantastic girl. Dylan: Where’s you date? I thought for sure you’d be bringing Kellan. Sean: Kellan and I are no more. Dylan: Oh? Sean: Yeah. He turned out to be a different person from who I met. It just didn’t work out and I’m fine with that. Carrie finds Dylan talking to Sean. Carrie: There you are. There are so many guests here I can’t keep count. Sean you look handsome. Sean: And you look heavenly. Like a picture out of a magazine. Why don’t you two have fun. Enjoy this special night. Sean walks over to Lana. Lana: What do you want? Sean: I’m single. Lana: Great. I’d propose we get drunk and hook up but I have a feeling you would disappoint me in the sack like you did in life. Sean: Lana being bitter gives you wrinkles. Sean extends out his hand. Carrie and Dylan watch from a distance. Carrie: Look at that. Dylan: Too funny. Lana looks at him and laughs. Lana: Let’s dance you old queen! - - - Back at Rena’s dorm, she steps outside to talk with Lenvy and Will. Will: We saw Yvonne leave in a huff. Lenvy: Is everything okay? Rena: Yeah. Better then ever. The good news is that Alicia forgave me. Will you did it. You brought us together. If I could hug you I would. Lenvy: I actually know that the heavens await for him. His good deed has earned him a passage way to the pearly gates. Will: That’s awesome! Thank god. Rena: So I guess this is it? You two can go off into the light together. Lenvy: Unless Will decides that he wants to stay here as a spirit. That was also a possibility. We could float on over to my sister’s wedding. Will: It’s my time to go. Rena I should be thanking you for everything. Lenvy: Me too. You guided Will to be a better ghost. Rena: If he was a better spirit it’s because of you. You really are an angel Lenvy. Go on. Heaven’s waiting. A bright white light begins to shine in the night sky. Will and Lenvy smile at Rena. Rena blows them a kiss and waves good bye. Will: You ready my angel? Lenvy: After you. Will: Yee haw! Will takes Lenvy’s hand and they both vanish into the light. Rena felt relieved. She goes back into her dorm to watch a movie with Alicia. - - - Carlos and Jenny make their way up to the brides' and grooms' dinner table. Carlos shakes Blake’s hand as Jenny kisses London’s cheek. Blake: Where are you two off to? Carlos: I have a surprise for Jenny. Sorry but we have to jet. London: Thank you so much for coming. Jenny: You’re welcome. What an exciting day we had. A victorious one if you ask me. Bye guys. Carlos takes Jenny away. Blake looks at London. Blake: May I have this dance Misses Hammerton? London: Certainly. I was kind of hoping we’d be able to talk with our ex’s. Blake: Now seems like a good time. Blake leads London to the dance floor. They dance close to John and Alley. Alley: So this is going well. John: For sure. The only disaster was hurricane Nan but that just blew away. Blake: John? John: Yeah Blake? Blake: Would you like to dance with the bride? John: Sure Blake. Just as long as I’m not dancing with you. Blake fakes like he’s going to punch him. Blake dances with Alley. Alley: We’re having a kid together. Blake: I know. What happened to the times when we were fighting about petty stuff? Now we’ll have something bigger to argue about. (beat) Four parents to raise L.J. and baby…? Alley: I know the sex of our child. London and John overhear them. London: She does? I mean you do? John: I know too. Alley: I take it you’d all like to know what I’ll be having? You don’t want to be surprised? Blake and London shake their heads. John: Let’s throw out some baby names. Blake: Presley if it’s a boy. Vivi if it’s a girl. John: Those names suck! London: What about Matthew if it’s a boy? And Jessie if it’s a girl? Alley: I like London’s idea. Baby Matthew will be proud to be a gift from god. Blake: A baby boy? Blake hugs Alley and John. John: (sarcastic) Dude don’t make me slap you. I need to dance with my woman. John bows to London and goes back to dancing with Alley. John: Are you happy with the way things turned out? Alley: I am. I’m even happy for Dylan and Carrie. It seems everyone who deserves to be together, is together. John: What do you think of all this wedding stuff? Alley: Not really my thing. You know me John. I’m a simple girl. For me, getting hitched in Vegas would be fun. Because it would be unexpected. John: So if I were to maybe slip a ring on your finger. You’d say yes to eloping? Alley: Always and forever Mister Snaldry. John takes out a wedding ring from his jacket and slips it on her finger. John: (joking) Eloping will save us so much money Misses Snaldry! Alley laughs at his joke. The two gaze deep into each other’s eyes and share a kiss as a secretive married couple. - - - Carrie was being doated on by Michael and Mary Ann. Mary Ann had tears of joy in her eyes. Mary Ann: Oh you look so pretty. Michael: The decorators really knew what they were doing. Carrie: Thanks you guys. I feel like the second time around, I was supposed to have my dream wedding go this way. I sort of wish that Lenvy was here to enjoy it. Mary Ann: We didn’t really know her but I’m sure she’s looking over you right now. Carrie: You’re right. I bet she is. A woman and a male’s voice are heard arguing. Carrie: What’s going on? Carrie goes to investigate. She steps off of the dance floor to find Juliana and Victor. Carrie: Victor you’re here? Juliana: He was just leaving. Victor: Juliana it’s not what you think. I came to congratulate you. I want to be sincere. I promise. Juliana: Carrie if you don’t want him here, say the word. I’ll have one of my men escort him out. Victor: I’m family Juliana! I know how important that is to you. Carrie: It’s okay mom. We can talk. Juliana: I’ll be watching. Juliana leaves them alone. She hopes it wasn’t a mistake. Victor: Always the protector. Carrie: Thanks for coming? Victor: You look pretty. And alive. That's always a good combination. Carrie: Look we both know our situation is tainted. So…I don’t know what else to say...let’s maybe try to move on from what happened. Victor: Yeah I agree. Which is why I wanted to get out of here quickly. I just wanted to say. I’m sorry. I should’ve acted differently whenever I found out the truth about us. Instead I went into a downward spiral. I’m a different person. I’ve changed Carrie. Carrie: I believe you. I kind of hope that you do stay. Don’t worry about Dylan. If he sees you, I’ll handle him. Victor: Yeah…no…maybe it’s best if I go. Carrie hugs Victor and smiles. Victor turns to leave but accidentally bumps into Alexia. Victor: So sorry. Alexia: Hey no problem. Victor: (nervous) Are you free to dance? Alexia: I planned this whole wedding. But yeah. I’m free to take a break. I sure as hell need one. Victor and Alexia dance together. - - - Carlos leads Jenny to the chapel set on "Blue Crystal." Her eyes were closed and her hands were trying to feel anything or get a clue of what was going on. Carlos: Keep your eyes closed. We’re almost there. Jenny: What are you doing? Carlos: Okay. Open them. She opens her eyes and sees a chapel. Sitting in the alter is Agatha and Ian Hadley. A minister stands in the middle. Henry and Carinia stand to the side ready to film. Jenny: What is all of this? Carlos: Jenny Fremann. Will you marry me? Here today? Carlos gets down on one knee to propose with a diamond ring. Jenny: Of course I will. But…why are we filming it? Cairinia: We’re writing your character back into the show. Henry: Your first scene is your marriage to Miguel. We’ll edit the dialogue when the time comes. Minister: And I’m a real minister. But I’m also an actor. This marriage will be binding. Ian: I'm just happy to be here and begged Cairinia to put me in the scene. Agatha: I get to play your mother. Eek. I’m super excited. My grand kids are going to be so happy to see me on TV! And no one knows it better then me how much you two have gone through to get to this day. You two deserve this. Carlos: Jenny I love you so much and I don’t know I just thought spur of the moment we could do it here. The fans will love it but we’ll have this memory for life. Jenny is silent. She walks away from him. Carlos: What’s wrong? Jenny: It’s a little overwhelming. And maybe a little sudden? Carlos: We could just film the scene and get married another time if you want? Jenny: No. I’m just worried about something. I’m worried about Nan. Carlos: You need to forget about her. Jenny: She keeps warning that she’s going to do something. And I need to know what that something is! Carlos: So what if she does? She’s out of everyone’s lives, especially ours. Henry hands Carlos and Jenny a script to look over. Carlos: I wrote the script myself. Feel free to add anything. Some of it is in Spanish. Hopefully you’re okay with that. (reading) I couldn’t think of anyone else who better suits me then you. (in Spanish) Usted es mi vida. Jenny: There is something that I would love to add. Carlos: What’s that? Jenny: (in Spanish) Te amo chico! Tú eres mi perfección. Carlos smiled at how good her Spanish was. The two hugged and kissed before walking on the set of their soon to be wedding. - - - At the bride and groom’s wedding table, Blake and Dylan stand with champagne flutes in their hand. They clink the glasses at the same time with a silver fork. Leon comes around to snap a photo of the couples. Leon: Picture perfect! Dylan: We would like to make a toast. All four of us. Carrie: The reason we made the wedding ceremony so short was so that we could say our vows to each other now. London: (joking) And also because Blake was hungry. The band drums the joke. Blake: John wrote that. Good one. Carrie: I didn’t get to do this at my first wedding and I’m glad I get to do it now. I get to tell you Dylan how much I truly love you. You stood by my side in my most darkest times. Now I get to spend my most happiest times with you. My knight. My hero. My love. Dylan takes Carrie’s hand into his. Dylan: Carrie and I met on this campus. She was troubled and I was lonely. I remember when I first looked at her and thought. Dang. That girl is beautiful. I was really nervous to ask her out. It took me about three tries to do it. The way she answered me was pinning me down to the ground with a kiss. That kiss was one of many. London turns to Blake and smiles. London: For me I came back to life. Literally. When I did there were pieces in my life that were missing. Things changed. The one thing that didn’t change was the love that I have for you Blake. Which is why I get to share my love with eve
  4. I bet it's Ria, that would be sick!
  5. Well LaDonna just handed her man over to Alexis. Good going dummy! Lynn is such a strong character. DC deserves not knowing about his daughter because Lynn's right. She would be tainted by the messed up family. I really am stoked about Rufus's mystery man reveal. I thought that I had glanced through and saw that it was Karim but I was mistaken and so glad that I was. I want to be surprised.
  6. Nat has been hanging around Ria way too much. She turned disgusting. What a family woman she is. The LaDonna/Kevin/Alexis triangle reminds me so much of the Ginny/Owen/Tanisha triangle on PP. If that's where it's going, then I hope to see LaDonna get her man. However Alexis better switch the results or better yet promise Rufus more from her company to do her dirty work for her. Well Lauren kind of deserved that!
  7. Jasmine is my new favorite character. She's not giving up on her sister. Maybe after she helps get Ria's life back on track, she can clean up her mouth too! Lauren confuses the hell out of me. The things she does is just so out in left field. Sharon and Daniel belong together. She beglongs with a Bro Hoe (whichever one is alive). I'm also liking Maxine. She should've punched DC's arrogant smugness right out of him! So many mysteries are building up. Love it when there's not just one.
  8. This was the STEAM that I know and love! It focused on characters who weren't obsessed with sex. I get why Sabryn needed a trial. Ash has every reason to defend her psycho sister. If Sabryn gets out we know she'll go after Nat and Bryan but what about Ash? Will she try to get Ash out of her life for good too? Lauren's such a bitch!!! Since Sharon is so good at slapping everyone, I hope she slaps her real good. Daniel is such a romantic gentleman who didn't deserve to have his plan ruined by his ex. Knowing that DC fathered so many Bro Hoes, it's not surprising that they're acting the way they did at the bar. We still don't know who Rufus's lover is. Can't wait for the big reveal.
  9. Maybe Steam should be called DICK? I swear it's all anyone ever talks about in this town. Especially Rufus. If she's looking for love then sex isn't the answer. Maybe it should be a new character who falls in love with her. One who can share the same problems and have the two fight the town together. Is Ty out of the series?
  10. I can't believe Alexis crumbled liked that. Rufus is very powerful but Alexis shouldn't let her know that. Soap characters always think they're right and they have the upper hand. Which Rufus totally does here. Jenn can be really childish. Santino throwing his drink at her reminded me of an episode of Basketball Wives. Life does imitate art. Kiko's smart enough to see that Ria is still a nymph at heart...hopefully he sees that.
  11. The dialouge in this episode was kind of raunchy! I don't know who I would give a ranchy award to Rufus or Ria. Probably Ria. Karma's a bitch isn't it? She's in a state where her family is grieving for her and she doesn't want them there. What the hell? Get off your high horse and start letting people in your life. How many slaps were in this episode? Three or Four? Good for Kiko to stand up to Don the way he did. Even though Kiko made a mistake, he's still a good person who has a heart! That's what makes him a very interesting character. I felt sorry for Sister Pat. She's all alone with no one to hear her plea.
  12. Matt P.

    S4 Episode 8

    The same thing happened to me. Instead of individually posting pics, I had to add them all into one jpeg to make the size smaller. This episode was so action packed and well written. I thought for sure Aubrey was going to take the baby and run butg was shocked when she changed to save Lizzie. Makes me wonder has she changed for good or did she do it just to be on Lizzie's good graces? Her and Annie together? Double A's equals Double Trouble!!! I was thinking the same thing when Blake stopped Ross's advances. It's not the time, not yet at least. I know they'll get back together sooner or later. Sooner hopefully then later. Spencer jumping will bring a family together. It was so suspenseful! Vi is just completely psycho. But a good one if that! Very devious. Ashlee will never learn. I hope that Eden causes more problems for Coop and Ashlee's friendship. She was always a favorite character of mine.
  13. You're going to make me cry and it's not even the finale yet! I always love viewing your comments. They mean the world to me. I'm definitely putting a rush to the end. However when I was writing this episode I sort of thought of other plots that would allow me to extend the series 7 or 9 episodes. But that would take tons of time to do. (I'll mention those plots in the afterword after the finale). That's the same actress who plays Alexia, different photo. That picture is from MTV's "Spyder Games" where she played Daphne. It's how I picture Alexia. As a fiery red head. Blue Crystal is Carlos's job as he still has a contract with the show. Roger Hogwarth is a recurring character from season 3. When I get a chance I'm going to post more character photos in the block since it's up and running. (I think I have it saved somewhere). I can't give too much away but the ending will be good!
  14. Lauren's day of reckoning is finally here! Wonder how she'll react to the news that her sister is Alexis and Ashley. Poor Rufus. No wonder he's so vengeful. Even the townspeople are mean to him. I thought for sure Ladonna would've offered Santino a bribe to make him lie to say that he impregnated Alexis is Miami. The whole time I was thinking Brian should have this same talk with Ria when she gets out of the hospital. Nasty Nat hasn't changed at all. Still cunning, still slutty, still desperate. So reminds me of Nan or C.C.
  15. I have to agree with Jay. There's definitely a lot of character development going on. Was that slap for Karim a wake up call or a how could you do that skank? Maybe a little bit of both but I'm sure Ladonna won't stop to prove that that baby isn't Karim's. Maybe she'll switch the paternity test? Make a good girl go bad. Sharan and Daniel are a nice couple. I like them together. So much better then Lauren and Daniel. Torture brought them together. It's kind of sweet. Oh Ria...I really don't know what to say about her.
  16. Who's the actress playing Dottie? That scene between her and Lynne was funny. Crazy is as crazy does. If Jasmine was smart, she'd have half a brain to save Sister Pat before everyone kills her. I also think Jasmine and Kiko would be a great pair together. I also think Mona might be developing feelings for Jasmine which would cause trouble with Apple.
  17. Kiko has become the most likeable character to me. He's noble, he's heroic, and he's nice. I feel bad for him that Ria is such a bother. She doesn't even have remorse that she attacked a pregnant woman! She's disgusting. I think Ladonna sees it too. Nat is a better fit to be Ria's friend because she understands her. Ladonna not so much. Sister Pat is losing it all. Now even the church is against her. Is Apple the devil? Is that what she meant by she senses me? Look out Jasmine! She can't be that hard up for a job or money.
  18. The catfight was well deserved between Ladonna and Alexis but Ria had no freakin business getting involved.I hope that she does have breast cancer, is on the verge of death, and becomes a better person in the process. One who isn't racist! Daniel slapped Lauren??? That's so out of character for him! I thought it was so clever that Sister Patterson's new home is the place where her enemies want to get revenge on her. Really Mona?! You're just now realizing your lover's off her rocker?
  19. Matt P.

    S4 Episode 7

    So happy to be back and reading FTL. This was such an action packed episode. Loved the ending with Cyrus being Belinda's father. How the hell is Marina going to react to that? Ashlee is still the fragile character that DK made her out to be when he brought her on the canvas. She's someone who's trying so desperately to fit the mold into today's society. Who knows? Maybe this tragedy can bring Cooplee together. The return of Aubree. Sweet! I bet she's changed and Lizzie is just freaking out. That would be a nice twist. Are we going to see a catfight between Vi and Maureen? Fingers crossed. Nice episode and good luck with the Melrose Place reboot.
  20. finally finally finally posted Episode 136

  21. - - - The light from the train was nearing the station. This put a smile to Kellan’s face. He held on to a very drunk Alicia. Kellan: It’s time to pay for what you did to my brother! Rena ran as fast as she could. She could hear the train coming. Rena: (screaming) ALICIA! Kellan looks to see Rena running towards them. Alicia: Huh? The train was getting closer. It pulls into the station. Rena catches up with Kellan and Alicia. Rena: Get off of her! Kellan: This has nothing to do with you. Rena: Let her go. The two struggle over Alicia’s drunk body. With all of her might, Rena pulls Alicia back. Kellan loses his grip and falls onto the tracks. Kellan: NOOOOOO!!!!! The train sweeps by and runs him over. Killing him. - - - Episode 136: I Think I Love You Series Creator & Head Writer: Matthew Politylo Logo Desginer: Mary Zimmerman - - - - - - Across town, the boardroom meeting at Point Palace University was heating up. Everyone was confused to what was going on. Bryan walks in to clear things up. Bryan: (to Marli) Surprised to see me? She’s silent. Howard: Someone call the police. This son of a bitch must be arrested! Bryan: Au con traire old man. If you’re going to try to take me jail then you have to take that conniving bitch with me. She isn’t who she says she is. Lanoi: What the hell is going on here? Benjamin: I would like to know myself. Blake comes running into the boardroom to get in on the action. He brushes past Bryan. Blake: I got here as fast as I could. Myra called me. Myra: Bryan Daniels was accused of drugging Howard. Howard: Which is why I made the mistake of handing over the president position to this snake. Blake: How did you get this information Howard? Bryan: Yes Howard. How did you find out? Howard: Because of this caring girl. Nina. Bryan: You mean Marli. Or Hope. Marli Calloway. Who once dated Blake. Which name do you prefer? They all look at Marli. Blake: Marli? We all thought you died. Bryan: That’s what she wanted you to think. All the while she’s been stalking me. Marli: Shut up Bryan! Marli walks over to Blake. Marli: The reason why I was so secretive with you was because I had a past and Bryan knew all about it. He blackmailed me. He threatened to expose me to you. Bryan: Let’s talk about track records. Marli: Please Bryan. Just stop. Bryan: I’m just getting started. Blake this is Hope Crayno. She witnessed a crime to fake her own death just to selfishly find out who would come to her own funeral. I don’t know if Blake remembers S.R. He helped Hope but Hope was scared which lead to S.R.’s death. Then she kidnapped me. That’s a crime or crimes! Marli: Yes. To make you pay for what you did. I found out that he hired Howard’s nurse to drug him so that Howard would make Bryan president and Blake fired. I had a plan to let Blake know what was going on just so he could get his job back. Blake deserves to be president. Blake charges after Bryan but is stopped by Benjamin and Lanoi. Benjamin: Slow down. Blake: (to Bryan) You ruthless bastard! Lanoi: Someone call the cops now! Myra: That was my second call. They’re already here. Myra opens the door for the police. Officer Wendell busts in with two officers. Officer Wendell: Bryan Daniels you have the right to remain silent. Anything you say can and will be held against you in a court of law. A police officer places Bryan in handcuffs. Bryan: (to Blake) You think you could run this school?! You can’t. You don’t have the guts or the balls to do what I could have done. You play by your heart and I play by brains! Blake: You’re a crook and I hope you rot in your cell. Bryan is taken to a police car. Officer Wendell walks over to Marli with handcuffs. Officer Wendell: It’s time. Marli: Wait. Can I have one moment with Blake? Officer Wendell looks at Blake who agrees to let it happen. Marli takes Blake’s hand. Tears were forming in her eyes. Marli: I knew that nothing could ever come between us. But. I wanted to see you get what you deserved. Which was this school. I went about it the wrong way. Maybe I should have been more honest with you. Just please…understand why I did what I did. Blake was a little bit overwhelmed. Blake: Thank you Marli. Marli: Hope. My name’s Hope. I’m ready Officer Wendell. She turns around. Officer Wendell escorts her to the same car that Bryan was in. Bryan: Looks like we both struck out. Marli: Actually I didn’t. Blake forgave me for everything. I could tell. Bryan: Why don’t we just the crap Marli. Admit that you did what you did because you’re attracted to me. He laughed. The police car drives them away to their new homes. - - - The next day, Jenny gets a knock on her door. Not knowing who it was, she opened it with a smile, which quickly dissolved. It was Nan. Jenny: Aren’t you supposed to be in a white padded cell with a matching jacket? Nan: Not yet. Carlos around? Jenny: No. Which means you can’t sink your claws into him. Nan makes her way into Jenny’s room. Jenny: Excuse you! Nan: I’m not here to see Carlos. I wanted to pop that smug cloud you’re riding on. Jenny: There’s lots to float about. Or should I say gloat about. You lost. I won. Nan: Is that so? Jenny let’s talk about why we hate each other. Jenny: Because you’re a conniving bitch whose main goal in life is to destroy anyone who defies you. You tried controlling me but it didn’t work. Nan: That might be true but the reason why I did everything was because of the mistakes that you made. Jenny: Mistake? Nan: We were best friends. We did everything together. Jenny: You manipulated me your whole life. Nan: I never wanted anything to do with Carlos. The only reason why I went after him was to teach you a lesson. That you never should have went against me in my quest for Blake. Jenny: My god this is like freshman year all over again! You’re obviously delusional. GET OUT! Nan: Are you getting mad Jenny? The only reason why you’re so upset is because you are weak. You’re that scared pathetic girl who used to do my bidding. Nan places her hands in her purse. Jenny: Shut your mouth before I shut it for you. Nan pulls out her cell phone and waves it in front of Jenny. Nan: What did you say to me? You’re getting so violent. Jenny goes to swat the phone out of her hand until she stops. Nan puts her phone away. Nan: Don’t you love technology? I’ll make sure to show this to Judge Valencia if need be. Jenny: You’re a loser. Nan: I’m the loser? (she laughs) Back then you were my bitch! Jenny: Oh I’ll show you a bitch. Jenny grabs Nan’s hair and pulls it like a rag doll. Nan grabs onto her hair and does the same thing. The two struggle before throwing each over the couch and onto the floor. Nan stands up until she’s tripped by Jenny who gets on top of her. Jenny takes her head and pounds it on the floor. Nan elbows her in the face and grabs her neck. Nan slaps her across the face twice before getting punched by Jenny. Nan: So violent. Such great evidence. My new lawyer will e mail you the pics later. Jenny: Here’s evidence for you. Jenny charges at Nan. The two push each other back and forth. Nan throws Jenny into the wall, knocking down framed photos. Jenny grabs Nan’s arm to swing her against the wall. Jenny grabs Nan’s neck and begins to strangle her. Nan does the same thing. Both girls dig deeper with their grip. They almost kill each other, until they both let go of each other. Jenny: GET OUT NOW! JUST GET OUT OF MY LIFE! Nan: (out of breath) I’m going. But…I…want you to know something. Come pay me a visit doll! You’ll see who the real winner is. Jenny opens the door and motions for her to leave. Nan blows her a kiss as Jenny slams the door in her face. - - - Vi: What’s going through your mind? Dylan: I’m on the edge of giving up hope. Vi: Why? What happened? Dylan: The doctor told me that they can’t leave her on life support forever. If we take her off of it…there’s a chance she could die. Vi: Sounds like you need a miracle. Dylan: Yeah. One of those would be nice. Dylan opens the door to Carrie’s hospital room and enters. He’s shocked to see that her bed is empty. Dylan: (frantic) What the hell? Where is she? Where’s Carrie? Dylan’s vision is covered by hands. Carrie: Turn around. Dylan opens his eyes to find Carrie awake and well. Dylan: I’m dreaming. This can’t be true. Carrie leans in and kisses him. Carrie: You’re not dreaming and I’m as healthy as could be. Dylan touches her face and brushes her hair. Dylan: This is really happening? Carrie: I was hoping the kiss would’ve convinced you. Vi: Surprise Dylan. Here’s your miracle. Dylan: How did this happen? Carrie: I…I woke up last night. I felt well rested. The doctor’s gave me some meds and said that I was going to be okay. Dylan: But you were stabbed. I…thought we lost you. Forever. Carrie: I know. Dylan: And I fought to find out what Anna Lee did to you. She’s already been brought to justice! Carrie: Good. All I remember was pleading with her to listen but she wouldn’t. Then it happened. Vi: Dylan I wanted to tell you the good news sooner but I figured you’d want to be surprised. Dylan: This is definitely a great one. Carrie: And…all I can think of is how bare my wedding finger looks. Dylan: Then we’ll fix that. Looks like the wedding’s back on. Dylan pulls out his cell phone and calls Blake. Blake: Hello? Dylan: Dude I have the best news ever. Blake: So do I. Dylan: Mind if I go first? Blake: Go ahead. Dylan: Carrie woke up for her coma and she has wedding fever. Blake: DUDE! That’s amazing. Dylan: I know. What’s your good news? Blake: I’m president of Point Palace again! Dylan: What?! How?! Blake: Because Bryan Daniels is a corrupt crook and was exposed by Marli Caloway. Which is an even longer story. That also means that you are back in as vice president! Dylan: Thank you. This has been like the best day of my life! We’ll be in touch. Dylan hangs up with Blake. Vi: What’s the good news? Dylan: Blake’s president again. I’m the vice president. Carrie’s alive! This is so surreal! Carrie: Maybe it’s time you shared with others in your life. Like your family. Vi: She’s right Dylan. What are you going to do about mom and dad? In the matter of seconds, one question turned Dylan’s smile upside down. - - - Owen and Ginny take a nap together on Ginny’s couch. Owen’s cell phone wake up him. He looks at it and turns it off. Ginny notices his discomfort. Ginny: Do I even have to ask who that was? Owen: She keeps calling me. Left five messages and like seven missed calls. Ginny: That’s borderline harassment. If you want I’ll go and pay her a visit to- Owen: No that’s not necessary. I think Alexia said she wanted to talk to her. Ginny: Alexia’s still in town? Owen: Yeah. But not for long. Ginny: Oh? Owen: She informed me about my mom’s condition. She’ll be going through chemo soon. Ginny: I’m sorry to hear that. She’s in my thoughts and prayers. Owen: Thanks. Ginny: Are you going to visit your mom? Owen: Actually I plan on moving back to Raleigh. Ginny: Really? Owen: Yeah. I don’t know how you feel about that since you have the café and classes here. Ginny: My life is here but you need to be with your family. Owen: You should come with me. It’s a lot to think about. Ginny: Yeah it is. (nonchalantly) Makes me think how we could work out if I stay here? Have lots to think about. - - - At The Palace Café, Blake and Alley sit at a booth with John and London at the other end. John twiddles his fingers loudly on the table. It annoys Blake. Blake: Must you? John: Yep. Since you don’t like it, I think I might do it even more. Alley: How many times do us girls have to say stop it? London: Probably like a thousand. John: I thought I was the one with jokes. You two are becoming a comedy duo. Blake why are we all here? Blake: First I wanted to tell you all that Carrie’s out of her coma. She had a speedy recovery. London: Glad to hear it. John and Alley are silent but nod to agree. Blake: Second…Bryan Daniels is a crook which made me president of Point Palace again. Alley: That’s amazing. Congrats…again! John: (sarcastic) Wa-hoo! Blake: Also…it’s time we decide who wants to be with whom. That’s still up in the air. We all have feelings for each other. John: Blake I don’t have feelings for you. Alley: STOP IT! John: One down. Nine hundred and ninety nine to go. London: Blake’s right. But how? How do we decide who ends up together? Alley: Why don’t we write it down. Like a game. We’ll read it out loud and that’ll be that. Blake places two engagement rings on the table. Blake: And with that we could get married. London and I were married at one point and you two have been together forever so it seems right. Alley: That’s a little too much don’t you think? John: Yeah a little pushy. Blake: I already talked to Alexia and she said she could plan a great double quickie wedding. London: I’m actually down for this. We all don’t want to be awkward anymore. We don’t want to sneak around or hurt each other’s feelings. The truth should be out in the open. Either it’s Blake with me or me with- John: We get the quandrangled picture. London digs through her purse and pulls out a pad of paper with four pens. John: You really keep that for occasions like this? London: STOP IT! She hands it to Blake, Alley, and John. The four of them look at each other. They write down who it is they want to be with. John: Who reads it? It should be an impartial person. Blake: London should. Alley: I agree. She’s not impartial but she seems to be the nicest one here. London: Thank you. London looks at the papers and the two rings. She seems shocked by the outcome. - - - Tanisha sits on her bed, looking at a framed picture of her with Owen. She uses her cell phone to call Owen but it goes straight to voice mail after three rings. Tanisha hangs up. There’s a knock on her door. Tanisha gets excited thinking that her calls triggered a response. Tanisha: Owen? Is that you? Tanisha opens it but her smile doesn’t completely fade away when she sees Alexia. Tanisha: Hey. Alexia: I heard about what you did. Tanisha: Would you like to come in so that I can explain myself? Alexia: Sure. Alexia walks in to her room. Tanisha shuts her door. Alexia: It’s taking everything inside of me not to slap your face! Tanisha: That’s definitely a fair statement. Alexia: But I want to know why? Why would you go so far as to use my brother’s past against him? Tanisha: It wasn’t like that. Alexia: Sure seemed like that. Tanisha: It wasn’t. Ginny was becoming close to him and I freaked. I didn’t want to see them together. When I found out that Owen shot Blake, I wanted to make it one final warning to leave him alone. I didn’t actually plan on telling the police. Alexia: You did so much against those two, I really doubt that. Tanisha: You have to believe me. It was only a threat. Alexia: What I think is the worst thing about the whole situation is that you and I were good friends. Tanisha: So you’re telling me that you never did bad things to anyone? Or made any bad choices? From what I remember, didn’t you try breaking up Blake and London by drugging Blake to make it look like you slept with him? Alexia: Tops off for throwing that in my face. No one’s done that in over a couple of years. Tanisha: Well it’s true. I feel horrible because of this moment right now. I lost Owen and I’m pretty sure I lost you. Alexia: The sad part is that I think there’s going to be a huge wedding and I would’ve loved to have planned it with you. You really messed up big time! Stay away from my brother and me. Alexia exits. Tanisha shuts the door quietly. Tanisha grabs her cell phone to call a new friend. While the phone rings she digs through her closet in her bedroom. Her friend answers. Tanisha: Hey Bernard. It’s Tanisha. Yeah I know it definitely has been a while. Hey I might need a wedding date and I was hoping we could rekindle what we started. Sounds good. Bye. Tanisha hangs up with Bernard. She puts together a sniper rifle and peeks through the telescope lens. Tanisha: If I can’t have him, no one else can! - - - On campus, students from Professor Strope’s Sociology class take their seats. Before the class begins, Ava begins to breathe in and out. Nate: You’re not nervous are you? Ava: I hate public speaking. James: Just think of Bobbie and I’m sure that it’ll come from the heart. Ava: Yeah. Definitely. Professor Strope walks over to Ava to speak with her. Professor Strope: Gentlemen thank you for coming. James: Jo Ann it’s great to see you again. Professor Strope: Likewise. (to Ava) No matter how you do on your speech today, you’re still getting an A plus. The journey you took was an amazing one. Ava takes one deep breath before approaching the podium. She looks around at her classmates. They all stare back at her. She opens her mouth to speak into the thin microphone. Ava: Good morning. Differences. We are all told that we are different or unique at a young age. In actuality, we’re all normal. I look around and I see people with normal faces, normal eyes, normality. I want you to meet a friend of mine. Ava clicks on a power point picture of Bobbie. Ava: This is Bobbie. For my volunteer work I was assigned to CLUDS. It’s a school for mentally challenged students. That’s where I met Bobbie. In the beginning we didn’t really get along. She was so smart because she knew that I was only doing this for a grade. It wasn’t until I witnessed an incident where someone felt sorry for her that I really saw a person, more then just a grade. We became friends. However she did a few things that some of you might find…disturbing. Not to go into detail about it but I found out that she wanted to be normal. She wanted to fit in. She wanted to be a teenager. One of us. Someone who goes to parties, who experiences love. Someone who lived! Ava pauses as she looks up at Bobbie’s picture. She stopped herself from getting emotional and focused on her speech. Ava: I found out that Bobbie had a disease and that she was dying. That’s why she went to such extreme measures to live a full life. The life that we wake up to every day. So what did I learn from all of this? I learned that we judge things or laugh at things that are different from us because we’re scared. Bobbie was a different kind of person with a disability. She got weird looks or pity but she never wanted that because when she looked in the mirror…she saw someone who was beautiful. Thank you. Ava steps down from the podium. She brushes her eyes to stop herself from tearing up. The whole class clapped for her. James gives her a big hug. James: You did it! Bobbie lived through your touching words. Good job. Ava: Thanks James. Nate notices the connection between the two. He flashes her an awkward smile. - - - Anna Lee walks around her jail cell. Waiting to be saved. A guard walks by. She grabs his attention. Anna Lee: Hey. You’re the one right? The guard nods his head yes. Anna Lee: You get to watch me do the deed. Anna Lee takes the white frail bed sheets off of her tiny bed. Anna Lee: Is this how it’s normally done? I’m not really sure. I’m just…so new to this. I’m not a criminal. The one who killed my sister, now he’s a criminal. But he’s not in here. I am. I’m the one who’s getting punished. Anna Lee begins tying knots. Anna Lee: I want you to glorify this. Can you do that for me? Make sure that no detail is left out! Anna Lee wraps the bed sheet around her neck. Anna Lee: Let everyone know that I died with glory. I died for my family! - - - On the set of Blue Crystal, Carlos was in the middle of filming a scene. He’s on the set of a hotel room lobby on the phone. Carlos: It’s Miguel. The plan is going down in full effect but I need to make sure you’re here to see it. If you’re not here Ian then it won’t work it out. Carlos hangs up the phone. Carlos: It has to work out. It just has to. Carlos looks off with evil eyes. Henry: And cut. Nice take Carlos. A bell rings. Carlos walks off of the set to a food table. Henry and Cairina walk over to talk to him. Cairina: We have a big surprise for you Carlos. Carlos: Oh yeah? Cairina: (to Henry) You want to tell him or should I? Henry: You’re the writer. Cairina: We want to bring Jenny’s character back on the show. Carlos’s face lights up. Carlos: That’s amazing! I’m sure she would say yes. Henry: After everything that happened with C.C. and the bad press the show received, it would be nice to have a likable face back on set. Carlos: Henry C.C. had nothing to do with you or the show. What happened was in the past and I’m just happy to be moving on. Cairina: If there’s anything we could do, let us know. Carlos: Actually there is. Henry: Oh? Carlos: I have an idea for a new story line. One that’s going to up the ratings! - - - Rena stands outside her apartment, rethinking her decision to talk to Alicia. She turns around to find Will and Lenvy in front of her. Will: How's Alicia? Rena: I don't know. She was sleeping when I left. Lenvy: I'm just happy that we got there in time. If you hadn't been there, she could've been dead. Will: I kind of need you to do me a big favor. Please make her forgive you or understand or which ever one you can come up with. Lenvy: Will! Will: What? I have a lot riding on this. Lenvy: Just go in there and tell her the truth. I'm sure everything will work out just fine. (to Will) You need to be patient! Lenvy and Will vanish. Rena opens the door and walks in. Alicia was still sleeping on the couch in the living room. Rena shuts the door. It wakes Alicia up. Rena: How are you feeling? Alicia: (groggy) I have the worst hangover ever! Rena: Do you remember anything about last night? Alicia: I remember drinking a lot of wine with my boyfriend. We were waiting for a train and then I woke up here. You know what? Last night was none of your business! Rena: Last night I saved you. Alicia: You what? Rena you really have lost your mind. Rena: It's true. Kellan tried killing you. Alicia: Oh that's ridiculous. Is this stemming from jealousy? Rena: Not at all. It's stemming from me wanting forgiveness. And I saved you with the help of Will. Alicia: What the- Rena: Yeah. Just...go with me here. Will told me that Kellan wanted you dead. You did something to his brother and he wanted to avenge him. Alicia: Prove to me that this quote un quote gift is real. What bad thing did I do to Kellan's brother? Rena: You shot him. Alicia was silent. Rena: He was abusing you and you shot him. That's what Will told me. And that's why Kellan was plotting to kill you. He was going to push you in front of the train and make it look like you slipped because you were drunk. Alicia: (stunned) Only one other person knew about that. Jace. It was self defense! Rena: You don't have to explain anything to me. All I want is for once and for all to finally forgive me. So will you? Before Alicia could answer, Alicia's cell phone rings. She answers it. Yvonne: Hello Alicia. Hopefully you're free to chat. Alicia: Yes Yvonne, I can. Yvonne: Funny story. I was sitting in my hotel room with every newspaper that I could find in Point Palace and I didn't see a mention, not a blurb about my daughter being a looney tune! Mind explaining why that is? Alicia: I've been busy lately. Yvonne: Just like my daughter was busy ruining your life. We had a deal. So are you going to go to the press or not? - - - In mid afternoon, the sun was beginning to set on the outskirts of Point Palace. An orchestra plays "Here Comes the Bride," as a double wedding begins. Two brides walk down the aisle in the private outside ceremony that Alexia had beautifully created. Two grooms waited patiently to say "I do."  
  22. Matt P.

    #128: D!ck!

    Refresh my memory. Who was it that got the death penalty for supposidly killing Lauren? It was a character I really liked. Now I remember why I hated Lauren. But the reunion was nice. Ria and Natti are nasty. They talk way too much about sex. At least one of them is trying to grow up. It was nice to see Natti go into attack mode. Such a schemer. Which equals love. Why wasn't Sabryn convicted of self defense? She doesn't deserve to be in jail.
  23. I'm 10 episodes behind. Crap I have a lot of catching up to do. There was a really nice theme in this episode. Messed up parents and messed up kids. Seems Apple messed up Ash, Sister Pat messed up all of her kids, and of course Nan was a product of messed up parents too. What's Nat's execuse? Does she just like being mean? I appreciate when characters talk about the past so that I can remember things. It works for catching up. Had a feeling that Lauren or Jenn was the long lost sister. Was kind of hoping that it was going to be Jenn just because she's done a few mean things in her past that would be great for the coo coo family.
  24. Matt P.

    Coming Soon

    Point Palace breaks its final hiatus and things are heating up for the ending! -Two rivals get into one last catfight! -A scorned ex goes to extreme measures. -Criminals are brought to justice. -Decisions are made on who belongs to who! Don't miss an all new episode of Point Palace this week on mySONtv
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