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  1. Wow! What an awesome episode to return with ML. I really liked the flasbacks during the court room scenes and it actually gave me something to think about in my writing. Mona is such a great conniver! Which is why maybe she should consider becoming a lawyer if she gets out of this. Poor Sharan is just damned for what she did to try and save herself. Judge Hatchett really needed to get the court in order, especially if you have someone as loco as Madea and Sister Pat sitting in the crowd. For once I liked Lauren. She's finally coming to her senses about what to do with Daniel. I still strongly believe that they belong together but I had an itsy bitsy tiny change of heart when I saw how Bro Hoe felt about Lauren when he was talking to Kiko (whom I feel bad for). First I thought Ria was awesome for saving Nat's baby but now she's a racist??? Unless she sees the error of her ignorance, then she really hasn't learned anything at all. Great job man! SONOP is definitely back on the air.
  2. ML thank you so much for all of the comments. You have officially made me want to write more episodes for the show. I do have to admit that this season has been the toughest for plot lines because fans have been back and forth with who they want to see together. Some want to see Alley and Blake be a couple because they always had "something." That would leave London, John, and LJ to be a family. All I have to say is...I've made a decision and it won't be revealed until the final episode. The next episode definitely has a cat fight. Maybe the last one of the season? I'm not sure yet. Ginny and Tanisha will definitely fight til the death for Owen. I think everyone thinks that Bobbie is a little girl but she's not. She's actually 18 only she's been under watch by those cloest (The Andersons and the school) because of her disability. The next episode she really lets it out on what she wants! It's very emotional. Jace is arrested, he was commited for shooting Alicia and killing Will. Alicia is easy to trust Kellan because she feels as if those around her are gone and she has no one. She also blames Rena for that. Yeah I could have Lenvy and Will ride off together but...that would mean Will would've been off the campus? He still very much loves Rena as well as Lenvy so there's a triangle. Even though Lenvy's an angel, she's not stupid.
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    Episode 165

    The whole time I was thinking NO MEL, turn around and walk away. He's a Spualding which is close to the word Scheming. I feel as if poor Mel's going to get her heart broken. Speaking of someone else who's been breaking the reader's heart is Reva. I wish she'll buck up and be strong. She has before in even tougher situations. The way everyone was talking, it was almost as if the series was ending. You're not pulling a CBS on us are you? lol Nice episode.
  4. Congrats congrats congrats on an amazing celebration. You went out with a huge bang. I can't believe that Suga...wait yes I can believe that. You definitely made sure that 400 was going to happen with a bang. Has Jason Voorhees been giving Suga some lessons? I'm also liking that Mimi's back. I always felt as if FF deserved to stay on DAYS. I really liked Vivian's line about setting up Tony for death. She's such an amazing character. Good job and here's to 400 more!
  5. - - - Blake couldn’t believe who was standing before him. He shakes his head in disbelief before getting up in London’s face. Blake: No. I told you Nan. The next time you pull a stunt like this I will take you down. London: I’m not Nan. I’m London. I’m your- Blake: Nice try. Fool me once shame on you, fool me five hundred times…shame on me. Now I have better things to do with my time so you best get out of my face before I call the cops. And I don’t care about the consequences. Blake begins to walk away from her until she tries stopping him. Blake: Get away from me! London: Hear me out. Blake: There’s nothing that I want to hear you say except goodbye. London: Nan helped me. She nursed me back to life so that she could get her hands on the school for Bryan. Her plan was foiled. Blake: And I’m supposed to believe this? London: It’s really me Blake. Blake is hurt and confused. He doesn’t know what to think. Blake: I have to go. I don’t know what kind of sick joke this is but you’re going to be stopped. London: (recites her wedding vows) Blake, I was lost in a school that was new to me. You were the only one who showed me the way. I can remember the first thing we ever talked about, ice hockey, and I still think that the Colorado Avalanches are better then the Pittsburgh Penguins. (stops and laughs) Maybe there’s a few words missing. Blake realizes that it’s not Nan, it’s London. A tear glistens in his eye. Blake: It’s you. You’re really alive! London: Yes Blake I am. I really am. Blake takes London’s face in the palm of his hands and looks at her before kissing her. - - - Episode 127: How I Really Feel Created & Written By: Matt Politylo Logo Designer: Mary Zimmerman - - - James kept staring into her eyes. The one that he hurt. Ava smiled nervously before finding the words to speak. The ex-Psychology professor beat her to it. James: Courtney I assume? Ava: Yeah. I figured that if I told you who I really was you might freak out and not want to come see me. James: You always were a smart one Ava. Ava: Why don’t we take a walk. Ava leads James down the hallway of CLUDS. Ava: I was shocked when I found out that you were Bobbie’s father. James: Yeah can’t believe the odds. Look I have tons of questions for you. Like how you found out and how you know Bobbie? Ava: Well I got involved with Bobbie for my Sociology class. James: Professor Strope I assume? Ava: Yep. She set me up with CLUDS and I was paired with Bobbie. I’ve become really close to her so I did some research to find out about her family. With some sneaky detective work I convinced Maieve to give me the info that I needed. It led me back to you. I didn’t know you had a child. James: It was never brought up. Where is Bobbie? Ava: She’s not here. She’s with- (changing the subject) Is she Laney’s daughter? James: Yes. She was. Ava: You lied under oath. At my trial you said you didn’t have kids. James stops and looks at her. James: I had to lie. We were young and Laney had her out of wedlock. We didn’t have the money back then to support Bobbie and her needs so we gave her up for adoption. From a far we like to check in on her. The Andersons take such good care of her and they understood what we were going through. I could’ve been a good father but I wasn’t ready. Neither was Laney. Ava: Bobbie’s a very special girl. She deserves to know her real father. Somehow I think she deserves to know the truth about her mother also. James: And what about Ava? What do you deserve? Why did you plan a meeting with me? There’s a history between us. Ava: Oh believe me I haven’t forgotten about us. There’s so much I want to tell you but I can’t. This isn’t about us. It’s about your daughter. James: Then what? What’s going on with Bobbie that you had to drag me back to the one place that haunts me? Ava is silent. She looks away from him until he grabs her arm. James: Tell me Ava! Ava: Bobbie’s dying. Her condition is going to worsen soon. You’re daughter doesn’t have much time left to live. - - - A metallic door swings open from the small cell that Ginny was being held in. Surprisingly The Raleigh International Airport had a jail. Alexia walks in and snickers. Ginny: It’s not funny. Alexia: It kind of is. Ginny: I’m not laughing. As a matter of fact I think I’m on the verge of having a heart attack. Alexia: Be glad you’re only call was to me. I bailed you out. Ginny: Thank you so much. Alexia: You’re welcome. How did this happen? Ginny: Your best friend Tanisha cancelled my flight by pretending to be me. Alexia: Wow. You two really must not like each other. Ginny: We’ve been fighting over your brother for a few years now. A guard hands Ginny her luggage. Both girls begin to exit the jail cell. Alexia: So what do you plan on doing? Ginny: I can’t get a flight out of here until tomorrow night. Alexia: That might be a no go. Weather’s supposed to be really bad. Ginny: Have you heard from your brother? Alexia: No. He hasn’t answered his phone. Ginny: Probably because she’s screening his calls. An idea pops into Ginny’s head. Ginny: Alexia you’ve done a lot for me but there’s something that I need you to help me with. Alexia: Go on. Ginny: How much do you miss Point Palace? Alexia: I’ve been meaning to pay my respects. Ginny: Now’s the perfect chance. I’ll get a rental car and we’ll drive. You can have a mini reunion. Alexia: I don’t know Ginny, my mom is still sick. Ginny: Oh someone will be able to look after her. Please? I’m begging you. Alexia: Alright. Let’s have a road trip. Ginny hugs Alexia and jumps up in excitement. Ginny: YEA! I’ll get to see your brother and I’ll get to claw Tanisha’s eyes out! Ginny grabs Alexia’s hands and runs to a rental car business. - - - The next day, Dylan walks around Carrie’s hospital room. He opens the shade to let some light in. The clouds were gray. He kisses her pale cheek. Dylan: I’ve seen you like this before you know. I had faith that you were going to pull out of it. You did. So I know you’re going to pull out of this one too. Once you do, we’re going to be married. There’s a knock on the door. Dylan thinks it will be a doctor or a nurse but it’s not, it’s Juliana. Juliana: Hey. Dylan: Hi. Juliana: How is she? Dylan: There’s no change. She’s still in a coma. She hasn’t woken up. Her brain scan is the same. Juliana: I’m sorry that we had to see each other under these circumstances. Dylan: Me too. But look at what it’s done for your family. Carrie has accepted you into her life. Wish I could say the same for my screwed up parents. Juliana: Just when we thought all was well. This had to happen. Victor busts into the door. He looks at Carrie and then looks at the shocked face of Juliana and the angry eyes of Dylan. Dylan: What the hell are you doing here? - - - John holds onto his baby daughter L.J. in his room. He smiles at her with joy. She was growing up so fast. John: Are you excited that your mother is back? I know I am. Maybe just maybe we can all have that normal family. Then again what is normal. John puts L.J. in her play pen. He walks over to the framed picture of Alley. The first one he ever took of her. John: You’ll never change. You’ll always be that stubborn girl who I fell for. John takes the picture and places it in a box. He takes down other things that belonged to the both of them. Until he finds her digital camera. John: (talking to L.J.) She’s also forgetful. Baby girl should I see what’s in here? (debating) Nah. We’re through. However. John turns the camera on and begins to look through pictures of them. John: She will definitely want this back. John stops when he finds a video of Jalenda. John: What the-? John hits the play button and watches the small screen. Alley: (VO) Say your name and what you want to do with Marissa Snaldry’s company. Jalenda fixes her hair and licks her lips. Jalenda: My name is Jalenda and I want to work with Marissa Snaldry cause I know I’d make tons of money as one of her call girls. John was disgusted. He puts the camera down and calls Alley. John: Hi it’s me. You need to come over here. You have a lot of explaining to do! - - - Victor clinches his fist and is ready for a fight. Dylan’s eyes were burning a hole through him. Victor: I’m here to see Carrie. Dylan: I’m not allowing it. Juliana why don’t you tell Victor to leave. Juliana: Come on Victor. I told you before you’re not supposed to be here. Victor: You couldn’t stop me. I saw her in the church. Dylan: (to Juliana) Wait? He was at the wedding? Victor: Of course I was. Go ahead and tell him sis. Juliana: He was but he went away. I told him that- Victor: I was forbidden to see her. Dylan: You son of a bitch. Did you do this to her? (screaming) DID YOU? Before Victor could speak Dylan lunges for Victor. He grabs his collar and shakes him around. Victor grabs onto his shirt as both guys begin to violently shove each other. Juliana: STOP IT! Dylan get off of him. Juliana pulls her brother away from Dylan. Juliana: Let’s hear his story Dylan. Victor: I didn’t do it but yes I had words with Carrie. Victor starts into a flashback at the wedding. After being confronted by Juliana, Victor hides behind a wall in the church. He watched as the door to Carrie’s bridal chamber was open. No one was in there. It was his time to strike. Carrie puts on her veil in the mirror and hears someone walk in. Carrie: That better not be you Dylan. Victor: It’s not. Carrie: (gasps) Victor? Oh my god. How did you get in here? Victor: You have such tight security in this place. Your mother, my sister, already got to me. Carrie: You can’t be in here. Victor: I’m sick of people telling me that. Carrie: Well…it’s true. What we had was in the past. That’s where it’s always going to be. Victor: You can’t be with me because of what happened. Because your father took advantage of my sister. No one knew about it. You and I certainly didn’t. We were happy then. Hell I even whisked you away once from this place. I was hoping to do it again. Carrie: You’re my uncle. Our love isn’t…right. Victor: This was supposed to be us. This was supposed to be our day. Carrie: Please just go. I promise I won’t tell anyone if you leave quietly. Victor: I’m not to be silenced. I still love you. Victor slams the door and leaves her. He stands behind the door and fights back tears. The flashback ends. Dylan: You’re sick! Victor: I’m honest. I can’t get over her. Juliana: Somehow you must. Dylan: I want to thank you Victor. You’ve given me enough evidence to take it to Detective Miltner who I’m sure has a lot to elaborate on with you. (to Juliana) I don’t care if he’s your brother or not. He’s a suspect! - - - At the Cody County Courthouse, Hayley sits with Carlos and Jenny in a private boardroom. Hayley: They’re going to try to settle. Is there an amount you would be willing to take Jenny? Jenny: No. I want to see her get the justice that she deserves. Carlos: I agree. Jenny takes Carlos’s hand and smiles at him. Jenny: Thanks for being here. It means a lot to me. Carlos: I know chica. I’m always here for you. The door to the boardroom swings open and in walks Nan followed by her lawyer Bryant Barrone Cranston. The best lawyer in Kensington Way that even helped to free Ava when she was in court. He smiles at Hayley before helping Nan to her seat and then to his. Bryant: Hayley it’s finally nice to put a voice to the face. Hayley: Likewise. Bryant: My client would like to know what exactly she is being sued for. Hayley: Your client has committed several crimes that have been overlooked. Arson. Bribery. Faking death. And her most recent kidnapping. Bryant: I ask you again. What exactly is my client being sued for? Psychological damages? Stealing boyfriends? If you ask me it seems so petty and childlike. Hayley: Your client is being sued for malice. Would you like for me to read you the definition? It fits what Miss Sheridan has done quite well. Bryant: No I went to law school. Hayley: Nice to know. Bryant: Nan has been cleared on many of those so called crimes you brought up. Hayley we’re willing to settle for twenty thousand. Hayley: Please Bryant don’t make me laugh. My client won’t settle. We’ll be seeing you in court. Bryant: Then we’re prepared to see you very soon. We did give you an offer. Just remember that when a judge reaches a decision. Bryant and Nan exit together. Jenny just sat there biting her nails. Jenny: Please excuse me. Hayley: Jenny whatever you do, don’t talk to her. Jenny exits the boardroom and walks into the hallway to find Nan taking a sip of water from the fountain. Carlos follows her to mediate. Jenny: I can’t believe you thought I could be bought out! Nan: I’m advised not to speak to you. Jenny: Too damn bad. Carlos: Come on Jenny you heard Hayley. Let’s just go. Jenny: NO! I want you to know that there is not a prayer in the world that’s going to save you if you tangle with me in a courtroom. Nan: My lawyer is pretty damn good. And damn good looking. Jenny: You know what you did to us. At least what you tried to do us. Nan: I don’t know what you’re talking about. (to Carlos) It’s always a pleasure to see you Carlos. Carlos: The feeling isn’t mutual. Nan: I have a feeling that this going to be a lot of fun for all of us. Jenny I think you’re wasting your time. Not to mention a lot of money. I do have a heart and wouldn’t want to see you go on welfare because you lost. Nan laughs in Jenny’s face. On impulse Jenny tries slapping her but is stopped by Carlos. Carlos: Don’t do it chica. Nan turns her head towards Jenny. Nan: Go ahead Jenny. Make my face black and blue. Jenny wanted to so bad but couldn’t. Instead she was the bigger person and walked away. Before completely leaving, Jenny stops and kisses Carlos to rub it in Nan’s face that she didn’t break them apart. - - - Alicia waited in front of The Cody Memorial Hospital for a taxi. She didn’t have anyone to call and wanted to be by herself. Until a black Lexus pulled up. The window rolled down and she saw Kellan behind the wheel. He takes off his sunglasses. Alicia: Hello there. So this is what the medical bills are paying for. Kellan: I’m glad to see you’re all recovered. I’m actually done with my shift. You look like you need a ride. Alicia: This is true. I’m waiting for a taxi. Kellan: Save your money. Let me drive you. Alicia: Are you sure? You already did enough for me. I- Kellan: Nonsense. I don’t mind at all. It’s not against a doctor, patient practice if I give you a ride. Alicia: Okay. If you insist. Kellan: I do. Kellan gets out of his car and holds the door for her. He places her things in the back seat. Alicia slowly sinks into the seat. He gets back to the driver side and pulls out of the hospital parking lot. Alicia: Thank you doctor. Kellan: Please you can call me Kellan. All of my friends do. Alicia smiled as she looked at him. She trusted him. She liked him. Alicia was falling for him. Alicia: Thank you…Kellan. - - - Blake kept holding onto London’s hand. He just stood there smiling. It was really her. Blake: I’m not going to stand here and tell you that I don’t know how it’s possible but miracles happen. I knew in my heart you were never dead. Even if Nan did what she did. London: It’s true. I’m alive and well. Blake: But…oh forget it. I’m so happy you’re here. You have to see L.J. she’s getting so big and- London: I already have. Blake: When? London: After I escaped from Nan’s lair. I visited John. Blake: Um...Nan’s lair? London: Yeah. She was holding me and Jenny hostage. That’s a long story in itself. Jenny’s taking her to court though so I’m sure we’ll be called for testimony. (changing the subject) I missed this Blake. I missed us being a team. Blake: Me too. But why did you go to see John first? Why didn’t you come to see me? London: I did. You were busy. Blake: Busy with what? My dead wife comes back to life a second time and it’s for real this time, I would probably drop whatever I was doing just to recognize that. London: I…I saw you with Alley. I know about you two. Blake was speechless. The other girl he was currently with. Things were complicated. London: You don’t have to say a word. You moved on and I understand. Blake: But- London: No buts Blake. I will graciously leave you two alone. It was great to see you though. London tries leaving but Blake tugs on her arm to stop her. She turns back to him with a tear in her eye. His face was almost gray. He went from being ecstatic to hurt. Blake: Where are you going? London: I’m living with John so that I can be with L.J. Blake: What? London: I’ve kind of moved on too. Hopefully I’ll see you around. We can do some more catching up. London let go of Blake’s hand. He didn’t know what to do. He watched her walk away. - - - John opens the door to find Alley standing in front of him with a smirk on her face. She rolls her eyes a bit. Alley: Two days of confrontation. Or should I call it ‘Johnfrontation?’ John: Nice to see that my comedy genes are wearing off to you. Alley: Well if the ass fits. John: Unfortunately. Alley walks into John’s room. She looks around. Alley: Something seems different about your room. John: Oh there definitely is and you’ll find out soon enough. Alley: Is that why you called me over here? To rub whatever it is that I don’t know about in my face? Seriously John it’s become lame. John: No. I need you to explain something to me. John hands her a box of her things. He then hands her the digital camera. Alley: I was looking for that. Forgot that I left it here. John: Now I’m usually not one to pry over exes but…I was tempted to go through the pictures and little did I know that I was going to find a movie. Mind explaining to me why Jalenda is saying that my sister is a madam? Alley was stunned. She gave her word to Marissa but it was broken. Alley: About that…I found out something about Marissa and- John: And what? You tried hiding it from me? Alley: For your own good. I knew how highly you thought of her and that this would crush you. Yes I despise her but I didn’t want to see you hurt. John: Is that all you did? You just filmed one of her workers for blackmail? I’m assuming that’s what it was filmed for. Alley: Yes. I made a deal with Marissa. I told her that I wouldn’t show you the video if she went away. John: I don’t know who I’m more mad at. My lying prostitute skank selling sister or you! Alley: John I’m sorry. I didn’t want you find out. Ever. John: Now it’s my turn to ask you to leave. Alley puts her hand on her stomach. Her face was becoming sickly. John: Go on. Get out! See I can say it too. Go run to Blake and cry to him. Alley: Wait! John: Are you deaf? Alley: I have to use your bathroom. Alley runs to his bathroom and shuts the door. John hears vomiting noises and begins to wonder. John: Wait a minute. No. She couldn’t be! Could she? - - - The next day, Tanisha finds her cell phone in her purse and dials Owen. She sinks onto her bed after hearing his voice on the other end as he lays on the already made bed at The Palace Hotel. Tanisha: Hey you. Owen: Hey yourself. That date last night really made me think about cooking again. Tanisha: If you want I could give up my kitchen for you. Owen: Hmmm…in exchange for what? Tanisha: In exchange for my bedroom. Owen: I like the way you think Miss Jones. Tanisha: Hey Owen I’m sort of throwing this out there but have you had any thoughts about staying in town for good? I’m sure you could get a job here. Owen: Yes Tanisha I’ve thought about it plenty of times. Except the reality is my mom is still dying and Alexia can’t be there by herself. Tanisha: That’s true. I just sometimes have dreams about us living together. Owen is silent on the other end of the phone. Tanisha senses it and knew to change the subject. Tanisha: So what are you thinking of making me? Owen gets a knock on his door. Owen: Hey hold on somebody’s at the door. Tanisha: Okay. Owen opens it and it’s his sister Alexia. Owen: Lexi? Tanisha: (shocked) LEXI?! Owen are you there? Owen: Yeah and you won’t believe who showed up. Tanisha: I’m on my way. Tanisha quickly hangs up with Owen. She grabs her purse and rushes to the door. When she opens it she finds Ginny who isn’t happy. Ginny: Hello bitch! Ginny punches Tanisha in the jaw. Ginny: I’m back! - - - Rena sits in her bedroom. She gets up to open the door to the living room. She finds Alicia sitting on the couch. Alicia notices her. It was awkward for both of them. Rena: Hey. I was just wondering if you needed anything. Alicia was giving her the silent treatment. Rena: Are you feeling okay? Alicia: I’m not ready to speak to you yet. Rena: I understand that but- Alicia: But nothing. You know what happened and you know what you did. Alicia storms off to her bedroom. Rena shivered when she heard the slam of the door. Rena sat on the couch and hides her face in her knees. She wanted to cry. Rena: I really messed things up. Lenvy: Not everyone thinks that. Lenvy makes herself seen. Rena looks up and their eyes connect. Rena: My roommate might think I’m crazy. Our relationship is already strained. Lenvy: She can’t hear us. Rena: You mean me. She’d think I was talking to myself and- Well I don’t want to think about what would be said. I’ve already gone through that. Lenvy: So I heard. We met your mother the other day. Rena: She’s not too keen on the idea of me talking to the dead. Lenvy: She’s your mother and she loves you. At least you’re able to talk to yours. Rena: Is Will with you? Lenvy: No. I know why you can’t see him. He hasn’t crossed over yet. Until he does, then you two would be able to speak. Rena: Why hasn’t he crossed over? Lenvy: He’s under review. Things aren’t looking too good. Rena: If you do see him, tell him that I’m sorry. I didn’t think that this would happen. Lenvy: He was at his funeral and he heard what you said. He knows. Rena: It just doesn’t seem enough. Now my mother is going to cause problems and Alicia hates me. I just wish I could talk to him myself. Lenvy: Then prey that he does good things as a spirit. Because I have a feeling that he’s going to go back to his bad ways. Alicia opened her bedroom door ever so slightly to hear what was going on outside. She knew that something was off with her roommate. - - - Later in the night, Yvonne turns off the light in her hotel room at The Palace Hotel. She puts her head on the pillow before finding her nightcap. Will watches as she takes a sip of her drink. Will: You claim that you love your daughter but I don’t see it. I see someone who is a total bitch. Will floats in through the window. The drapes begin to dance. Yvonne looks at the window and laughs. Yvonne: Damn wind. Yvonne gets out of bed and shuts the window completely. Yvonne: Of course it would be a cold night for my visit. Yvonne gets back in bed and puts the covers over her body before taking another sip. Will: The only thing that’s cold is your soul. You’re a heartless witch. Not letting your daughter be who she truly is. A medium. Will turns the television set on. Which makes Yvonne jump. Yvonne: What the-? Yvonne grabs the remote and turns it off. Yvonne: This place is giving me the heeby geebies. God please protect me from evil. Will: Oh honey you haven’t seen evil yet. Then again you haven’t looked in a mirror. Will makes the lights flicker on and off. Before Yvonne could get up, the television set kept flickering on and off, and the sink in the bathroom began to run hot water. Yvonne: (screaming) GET AWAY FROM ME EVIL! Will: You stay away from us! Yvonne runs to the bathroom and shuts the water off in the sink. Everything stopped for a minute until the heat of the water evaporated into a large ‘X’. Yvonne: You hear me? God’s on my side! Get away! Will: You drunken hypocrite. For Will’s final act, he made the drink on her table fly back and forth, until it spilled onto her bed. Yvonne couldn’t take anymore. She just collapsed on the floor. - - - Marli parks her car in front of Abigail’s dormitory. Marli took a good look in her rearview mirror. There were no traces of Hope or Marli. She had a short blond wig on, a prosthetic nose, and a fake mole. No one would recognize her. Marli walks up to her dorm room and knocks on her door. Abigail opens it and looks at Marli. Abigail: Can I help you? Marli: Yes you can. My name is Nina. You work for Howard Ballinger correct? Abigail: Yes I do. Marli: That’s why I’m here. Abigail: Look it’s late and I have an exam in the morning. If you want to employ me then I suggest finding me at an earlier time. Goodnight Nina. Abigail tries shutting her door in Marli’s face but Marli stops her. Marli: Maybe I should be more direct. I know what you did. Abigail: I’m sorry? Marli: I know the deal you made with Bryan Daniels and I have proof. Abigail: I don’t know what you’re talking about. Marli: Would you like me to show you the video I filmed on my cell phone? It’s very interesting. It’s of you in his office with a guilty conscience. Abigail: What do you want from me? Marli: Tell the truth. If you turn Bryan in for what he did, then you’ll get off. If you don’t, then I’ll make sure you’re arrested. Plus you would probably be sued by The Ballinger family. Abigail you’ll lose everything so do the right thing! Marli walked away from Abigail who almost fainted. - - - Nan rolls off of Bryan and places her head on his naked body. He kisses her head. Bryan: I didn’t think that the deal would mean countless sex. Good sex might I add. Nan: You helped me out. Bryant Cranston is working wonderfully. Bryan: Glad to hear that. Are you spending the night? Nan: If you don’t mind. Bryan: What does this mean for us? You always come and go when you please. With me...well you know I feel about you. Nan: I’m not the type of girl to put labels on anything but we could have an open relationship. We’ll sleep together and have fun. Bryan: Sounds good to me. By the way, I’m going to take your advice. Nan: Good! Bryan gets out of bed and pulls out his cell phone. After three rings, the other person answers their phone. Bryan: Hey it’s Bryan. Long time no see but I heard you were in town. If you’re looking for a job, then I’m looking for someone to get whacked. Meet me tomorrow so that we can discuss some more. Goodnight. Bryan hangs up with his caller. He looks over at Nan. Bryan: Are you going to join me in the shower? I might feel the need for a second time. Somehow being bad makes me horny. Nan seductively licks her lips and laughs. Bryan grabs her legs to drag her out of the bed so that he can kiss her some more. - - - Nate walks up to the room where he first found Bobbie. Little did he know or remember that it was Ava’s place. He knocks on the door and Bobbie answers. Nate: I figured you would be here. This room seemed familiar to me. I looked everywhere for you. Bobbie: I don’t live here. Nate: Funny. If you hadn’t told me that I was staying in a hotel room, I wouldn’t know where my home was. Bobbie: It belongs to a friend of mine. She’s no where to be found but I kind of snagged a set of keys. Nate: We have to talk. May I come in? Bobbie: Are you going to yell at me? Nate: No. Bobbie: Then come in. Nate walks in and suddenly gets images of Ava. Bobbie notices that he’s starting to remember something. Bobbie: Are you okay? Nate: Yeah. I just…had pictured your friend. Is her name Ava? Bobbie: Yeah. Nate: About the other day. I wanted to thank you. You stood up for me. I didn’t get why that girl was being such a jerk to me. Bobbie: You rejected her and she’s pissed. You’re a stud around campus. Somehow I ended up with you and I’m happy about that. Nate you complete me. Nate: She said you weren’t my girlfriend. Bobbie: She’s a jealous you know what! She doesn’t deserve a wonderful guy like you. Nate smiles at her. Bobbie kisses his cheek. Bobbie: You can thank me in other ways. Bobbie lays Nate down on Ava’s couch. She looks into his eyes. He suddenly gets a flashback. Nate: No Bobbie this isn’t right. Bobbie: Yes it is. Make it right Nate. The flashback ends but it didn’t phase Nate. He kept looking at her. Bobbie: Why don’t we take it to another level. We’ve always talked about it. Nate unbuttoned his dress shirt. Bobbie couldn’t believe that it was finally happening. She was going to get what she wanted. Bobbie touched his chest. She became a little giddy after the touch. Bobbie: Make love to me Nate. Nate: Okay. Let’s do it. The front door swings open and Ava walks in on Bobbie about to kiss Nate.
  6. Go Kristen go! Bad girl vs bad girl. I love it. I hope that we get to see a good catfight between these two. Vivian really seems to be up on her villainous ways. The ending was awesome! In a way I like how Kristen is being in the background to help the situation. Dorian vs Vivian. Wow this woman has so many enemies! Victor must feel lucky to have all of the psychos going after him. Are we going to see a revival of the cake fight between Carrie and Sami? I actually interviewed Christie and she said that she enjoys the stunts...Alison on the other hand, does not. Good episode!
  7. Matt P.

    Episode 163

    This episode was nice. I love everything that's going on. I was wrapped into Roxie and Ashlee's scene. I saw Rosana with bi polarness. Poor Ashlee, she's always been used. The three women trying to take over Springfield is a nice touch to the vixens we don't see on the show. These are all women who are bad and they want something. I love that on a soap opera. We see it so much on all of the telenovelas. I could so see Marcy Ryland playing Lizzie like this. She's never been believed by anyone. Ever. I could see her desperation coming out. It's so wierd not seeing Bill with Lizzie. I don't know how I feel about him and Michelle's upcoming marriage. I always thought Michelle deserved to be with Danny. Poor Reva. This time I really do feel bad for her. I was sort of expecting an old GL ending where everyone was focused at one time with some sort of music playing in the background and fade to black after we see her.
  8. Well Kellan is definitely a mysterious character. Just like any mysterious character he has ties and a past that's connected to Alicia. Originally I was planning on scrapping Alicia and having her die from the shot but she admitted to doing something in Season 5 that spurred a fun plot. I really like the dysfunction of The Colby family. Dylan and his siblings are very tight. It's fun to write. You'll see the Carrie stabbing come to light through the suspects. There's a lot of time to cover before the disaster happened and it'll be covered through flashbacks. The only reason why I cast Victoria Rowell was because I had the two actresses who played her on screen daughter from Y&R. I knew she'd be compared to Ria but she is for sure like Miss Pat. Will is a character that I love to write for but he is the hardest. The reason he's the hardest is because he started out as a villain, then he became refined, then went back to being a villain, and now he's trying to be an angel in heaven. Well I need for him to do some BAD stuff because that's who he is, it's in his blood. Bryan and Nan are for sure a powerhouse duo. Unfortunately they're lives are going in such different directions they hardly have time for each other. Unless of course they need each other or want some off each other. Tanisha's plot against Ginny to not have her see Owen has been playing quite well. I loved the humor in the scene. I've said this before about Marli but I couldn't get rid of her because it seemed too redundant. It seemed like PP has characters who stepped in did what they had to do and was gone for a season. I didn't want Marli to be one of those characters. So I thought why not have her go after Bryan. The next two episodes showcase Bobbie's reasons for what she did. Nate will be regaining some sort of memory but that's all I can say. C.C. is for sure a bitch. She's sort of Nan number two but no one can hold a candle to Miss Sheridan. I do agree with you that the John & Alley scene was a bit overshadowed. There's so much going on. However, this is why the two fight with each other. It's out of love. Next episode will be good because true feelings will be expressed.
  9. Heck yeah this is startling. I can't believe Thao and Leeann are leaving. I really enjoy Sarah Buxton. Makes me think why I didn't cast her on my show. Congrats on 400 episodes. Before you know it, it'll be 4000.
  10. Matt P.

    Episode 162

    Oh wow! There's so much going on in Springfield right now and this is why I love your show. I miss so many episodes and I'm glued in. Unlike the real show where you can stop watching for two months and still know what's going on! Again you and Tara are like the best posters on mySONtv. Seriously. Wow. Reva's cancer has come back. At first I thought she was paralyzed but wow. This is some major drama on the Lewis family. Another highlight is Mel marrying AM. She just likes to climb families. First Bauers and now Spauldings. I really enjoyed the teaming and scheming of Dinah and Olivia. Those two are vixens and it's good to see them going back to there bad roots. These are women who want power. Poor Mel. Loved the Lizzie scene where she told everyone that Marina's baby is alive. She's kind of the town wierdo so will they believe her? Awesome job! You should've had DK's job in a heartbeat. You would've saved the show.
  11. First off Tara I have to commend you for writing so many episodes so fast. I'm jealous. It really does show talent and dedication. This episode was fun. Suga is an okay fit for LIS because she may be as crazy as some of Salem's villains/vixens. She's of course being herself, maybe a bit tame, but at least she's blackmailing a powerhouse. In speaking of tame vixens, Jan is for sure calming down and as a writer I understand why. You need to give her all shades and depth. That's exactly what you're doing by making her understanding to Lucas. The topping was for sure the ending. I love Kristen so any plot involoving her has me hook, line, and sinker. It was so cleverly written that she's trying to team up with Bo and of course Hope is paranoid. It reminded me of classic DAYS if they were to write a story as good as this. Nice episode!
  12. - - - Alicia was breathing heavy and coughing. Kellan, out of panic, puts his gun back into his lab coat. Alicia’s heart monitor was going off the charts, which had prompted the machine to make a loud alarm noise. He put his hand on her head to calm her down. Kellan: It’s going to be okay. Just calm down. Breathe. Alicia obeys Kellan. She breathes in and out. Her heart rate was back at a normal rate. A nurse rushes in to check on the situation. Nurse: Doctor is she okay? Kellan hides his face from the nurse. Kellan: Yes everything is fine. Nurse: Do you need any help? Kellan: No…no I don’t. Thank you. The nurse leaves. Alicia looks at him. Kellan: Welcome back Alicia. Alicia: Thanks doctor. Kellan: Do you remember what happened? Why you’re here? Alicia: Yeah. I was shot. Kellan: Well you’re not in a state of confusion. That’s a good thing. Removing the bullet during the surgery was a success. How do you feel? Alicia: Like I’ve just been shot in the stomach. Kellan snickers at her sense of humor. Kellan: Now you just lay in bed and let this hospital take care of you. Alicia: Jace? What happened to Jace? And Will? And Rena? Kellan didn’t know all of the complete details. He pretended to look at his charts. Kellan: I couldn’t tell you but I’m sure the police could. Alicia: Did you take care of me the whole time I was out? Kellan: (lying) Yes. Yes I did. Alicia: What’s your name? Kellan slyly glances down at his stolen name tag. Kellan: Doctor Ronson. Alicia: Thank you doctor. For everything. Kellan: I’ll let the staff know that you’re awake and I’m sure you’ll be needing pills. My shift is unfortunately over so someone else will be taking watch of you. Feel better Alicia. Kellan exits her hospital room. He makes his way over to a hospital closet where he walks inside. He finds the real doctor (who he stole his coat from) passed out and places the coat over his head. Kellan: Sleep tight doc. I’ll get her sooner or later. - - - Episode 126: Welcome Back Home Executive Story Consultant & Head Writer: Matt Politylo Logo Designer: Mary Zimmerman Guest Starring: Patrika Darbo as Bonnie Texas Battle as Airport Employee Wally Kurth as Agent 332 - - - On another floor at Cody Memorial Hospital, Dylan wakes up from a tiresome nap. Vi offers him an apple to eat. Vi: Are you hungry? You know you have to put something in your stomach. Dylan: Maybe later sis. Vi: Well you better. Ryley and Jason are on their way. Aunt Catherine and Uncle Lou might be coming too from what Jason said. Dylan: Tell them they don’t have to come. I’m fine. You too. Go back home. Vi: Home. Funny how home’s such a messed up place. Dylan: There’s only one person to blame for that…our mother. Vi: Guess what? We have a father. How exciting is that? Somehow, maybe we could all be a family. Dylan: That’s a fantasy world Vi. Vi: It’s one that I’m hoping for big brother. Detective Miltner walks up to Dylan and Vi. Detective Miltner: Hello Dylan. Sorry for not coming sooner. We’ve been really busy down at the station. Dylan: I just want whoever did this to get the death penalty. Detective Miltner: Hopefully we can solve this case soon. Michael and Mary Ann walk up to Carrie’s hospital bed. Dylan: Actually we could start the questioning right now. Michael here was the last person to see Carrie. Detecitve Miltner: Is that true? Michael: Well hello to you too. Mary Ann: Are you trying to imply something Dylan? Michael: No it’s okay. I did see my daughter last. A flashback to the wedding begins. Michael knocks on the door to the bridal chamber. Carrie was dressed in her wedding gown and was ready to walk down the aisle. Michael: It’s time. You look beautiful. Carrie: Thanks dad. I can’t believe it’s finally here. You plan and plan and this is it. Carrie sniffles a bit. Michael: If you start tearing up then I’ll cry. Carrie: Happy tears. I’m ready to get married. Michael moves into give his daughter a tender hug. Michael: I’ll meet you out there Misses Colby. The flashback ends. Detective Miltner continues to write down the facts. Detective Miltner: Then what happened? Michael: I waited for her to come out but she didn’t. So I went back to check on her and she was gone. Dylan: You didn’t see her go upstairs? Michael: Not at all. Mary Ann: The stairs were right next to her chamber. I know because I had to go up and down them to make sure the decorations looked right. Vi: So why would she go up there? Mary Ann: Maybe someone lured her. It just doesn’t make sense. Dylan: I’m going to get the person who stabbed the love of my life! When I do there will be hell to pay. Detective Miltner: Dylan you shouldn’t get involved. You’re way too emotional to be dealing with this. Just let the professionals handle it. Dylan gets up in Detective Miltner’s face. Dylan: The hell I will! Tell me Detective if your family member was stabbed and there was nothing you can do, wouldn’t you want to put every ounce of your energy into finding out who did this so that you can confront them. So that you can make them see the anger and the pain they made you feel. Detective Miltner and everyone else was silent. Dylan looks around. Dylan: Yeah I didn’t thinks so. I’m not going to sit still. Not in the least! - - - A buzzing noise goes off and Carlos is led to the visitors section of Cody County Jail. The rows were empty. He was the only one until a guard on the other side of the clear bullet proof glass leads C.C. to sit across from him. She smiles when she seems him and notions for him to pick up the phone. C.C.: Hello sexy! Carlos: Shut up. I want you to know something. I’m not stupid. C.C.: Never said you were. Rude maybe but not stupid. C.C. places her hand on her large stomach. C.C.: I’m due any day now. They’ve been taking such good care of me here. I’m placed in solitary confinement until the baby is born. Carlos: That’s nice to know. C.C.: Carlos I want you to know that whole heartedly I believe this child is yours. When we slept together that one night, I kind of purposely made it for you to impregnate me. Carlos: What you did was take advantage of me! C.C.: Call it what you want but I’m having your baby. Carlos: I want a paternity test done. I want proof that this child is mine. C.C.: And if it is? Carlos: Then I’ll raise it as my own. C.C.: It would be nice to know that my child would be in such a loving home. In speaking of Jenny, how is she going to take it? Carlos is silent for a moment knowing full well the answer to Jenny’s reaction. C.C.: She still doesn’t know does she? Carlos: I’ll deal with that myself but not until I know the truth. Carlos gets a call on his cell phone. The guard pulls him away from C.C. as Carlos goes off to the side to answer it. Carlos: Hello? Jenny: Hey you. I have a meeting with Hayley in about an hour so I thought maybe we could, you know, get together. Maybe for a quickie. Carlos: I wish that I could but I’m kind of busy. Jenny: Doing what? Carlos looks over to C.C. who blows him a kiss and continues to rub her stomach. Jenny: Carlos? What is more important then us being together? You said we should spend more time and for once I’m actually going to put all of my avenging on hold. That’s sort of rare for me. Carlos: (lying) I’m…I’m on the set. I’m about to film a big scene with Ian. Jenny: Oh. I understand that work takes precedence. I’ll see you when I see you. Bye hun. Carlos: Bye. Carlos hangs up with Jenny and sits down from C.C. C.C.: Tisk tisk Carlos. You shouldn’t lie to your girlfriend like that. Carlos: You give me what I want and I’ll- C.C.: No. I want to be the one to tell her. You let me break the news to Jenny or this child will be sent to a foster home where you’ll never be able to touch one hair on their tiny head. - - - Nan opens the door to Bryan’s office and sees Myra. She puts on a fake smile for the secretary. Nan: Hello Myra. Myra: Nan. Nan: Is your boss by chance in and available? Myra: Unfortunately he is. Go right ahead. Nan: (sarcastic) Thaannks dear. Myra opens the door to Bryan’s main office. He smiles when he notices who his visitor is. Bryan: Well this is definitely a surprise. To what do I owe the pleasure? Nan: Can’t I just drop by and see an old friend without wanting anything? Bryan: It’s good to see you Nan. He kisses her cheek. Nan: Maybe I’m too transparent but I do need something and since you have so much power, I figured you might be able to help me. Bryan: Go ahead. Spill it. Nan: Okay. You remember the last time we talked I told you that I was focused on someone else? It went just as planned until something went wrong. Now she’s suing me. Bryan: If you want me to be a witness to attest to your character…I’ll think about it. Nan: I need more than that. Bryan: Oh? Nan: You see the fake reality show that I had created and then burned for evidential purposes, it ran me into a deep money hole. This girl is coming me at all ends and I need the best lawyer out there. Could you please hire one for me? Bryan: Funny. We’re sort of in the same position. While you’re being sued I may be losing everything I worked so hard at getting. Nan: Is Blake wising up? Bryan: Not in the least but someone on his side is. Someone knows the truth on how I really acquired the company. It’s being held against me. Nan: Then do something about it. Fight for what you won! Make the bad people go away. Make a call or two. I’m sure you have connections. Bryan: Believe me I do. Nan: Then help me and maybe I can help you. Bryan: How can you possibly help me if you’re going to trial? Nan takes off her tight shirt and lets it fall to the ground. She then undoes her bra. Nan: It’s been awhile Bryan. If you want me to help you, then buy me a good lawyer. Nan starts to undo her skirt but stops to gage his reaction. He smiles at her seductively and walks over to her. He pulls her hair to make her face his lips. Bryan: Deal! He picks her up in his muscular arms and throws her onto his desk. He begins to kiss her neck and her chest until she grabs him and gets on top. Nan helps him strip down and kisses his abs. He pulls her back up and continues to kiss her, using a lot of his sharp tongue. - - - Marli turns on the light to her hotel room. It wasn’t a dingy motel room but it wasn’t a five star resort. It was comfortable. She looks at the mirror and takes off her wig. Next came the sun glasses. She looked at herself. Marli: How did you let yourself go with so many lies? Marli’s startled when she gets a call on her cell phone. It was a FED who was checking up on her. Marli: Hello? Agent 332: It’s 332. Marli: I guess it’s time for our weekly check in. Agent 332: Yes it is. You know that you will be moved very soon. Marli: But I dawned a new disguise. Not even my own mother could recognize me. Agent 332: That’s not good enough. We already faked your death twice now. Hope and Marli are nonexistent. Marli: Nina exists. That’s the name you gave me. I have some unfinished business here. Agent 332: I’m sorry- Marli: Please. You all have been taking care of me so much. If you let finish what it is that I need to do, I’ll…I’ll leave this town and never come back. Agent 332 is silent on the other end. Marli: Please? Agent 332: Is there anything we can help you with? Marli: Yes. I need some information on a… Marli scans past copies of The Point Palace Inquiry until she finds the picture of Howard Ballinger and his nurse. Marli: Nurse Abigail Hunter. An address or a telephone would be nice. Agent 332: We’ll e-mail you right away but if she recognizes who you are, then we can’t help you anymore. Marli: I’ll be careful. I promise. Marli hangs up with the agent and looks at the picture of Abigail. Marli: You may be the only person who can tell the truth. I pray that you have a conscience. Bryan’s going down! - - - A young male waiter pours Tanisha a glass of Chablis. She swigs it around, smells it, and tastes it. She looks over at Owen who’s still deciding. Owen: (to the Waiter) If you could give us a few minutes that would be great. The waiter politely smiles and exits. Owen: God this makes me want to become a chef even more. Tanisha: I bet you’re dying to have a kitchen in your hotel room. Owen: Yeah I’ve been itching to make something special. Tanisha: Maybe go to one of the classrooms. They might let you use the facility. You are sort of an alum. Owen: That’s a good idea. You might just be trying to get a good meal out of me. Tanisha: I guess I’m found out. A reminder on Tanisha’s phone goes off. Owen notices it and looks at her. Owen: Busy girl. Tanisha: You know me. I’ll be right back babe. Tanisha excuses herself and walks over to the glass elevator. She dials the number to The Raleigh International Airport. Tanisha: Vance Airways please. Departures. A Vance Airway employee answers the phone. Bonnie: Thank you for choosing Vance, my name is Bonnie. How may I help you? Tanisha: Hello Bonnie I have to cancel a flight. Bonnie: Do you have the flight information? Tanisha pulls out a piece of paper from her purse and looks at it. Tanisha: Of course. It’s Flight 29 leaving for Cody. Bonnie: Miss that flight departs in less than an hour. Tanisha: I know but I need to cancel it. Bonnie: I need a confirmation number. Tanisha froze. That was something she didn’t have nor planned. Bonnie: Hello? Your confirmation number please. Tanisha: I’m sorry but I don’t have it with me at the moment. I don’t even think I was given one. Bonnie: Okay. It’s under strict orders that I’m not allowed to go any further until- Tanisha: Miss if you would please hear me out. I’ve decided to follow the love of my life. I was supposed to leave to go home but I’ve decided that he means the world to me. Would you please help a girl out? A girl who’s in love! Bonnie: (reluctant) Oh I do love a good romance story. Tell you what, I’ll look past it and cancel. Can I have your name please? Tanisha: Ginny Coy. Employee: Thank you Ginny. Your flight has been cancelled. Good luck! Tanisha: Thanks Bonnie. Luck is definitely on my side. Tanisha hangs up with the airlines and returns to her seat. Owen: You were gone for a long time. Tanisha: I had to make a very important call. Just to secure things over babe. Tanisha takes a big sip of her red wine. The taste of victory was growing sweet in her mouth as she couldn’t hide an evil smile. - - - Rena wakes up from a nap when she gets a knock on her door. She feels groggy but her mood changes when she sees that it’s her mother. Rena: Mama! Yvonne: Hi baby. Rena: Come in. How was your flight? Yvonne: It was easy. I’m all checked in at The Palace Hotel. Now we are going to get to the root of your problem missy. Yvonne checks Rena’s forehead to see if she is feeling okay. Yvonne: You look good. Do you feel good? Rena: Physically yes. Emotionally no. Yvonne: Then we have to get rid of all this negative energy. Rena: Mama I know for a fact that it’s starting up again. I’m seeing ghosts. They’re trying to contact me. Yvonne: I’m going to pretend like I didn’t hear that. Rena: It’s true mama. My ex died and now I’m seeing the one he used to be in love with. Her mouth moves, words come out, and she’s trying to contact me! Yvonne: Do you remember what this did to you as a child? How all the kids at school laughed at you because you claimed you talked to ghosts? It was a time in your life that I wish I could stop because you were hurt. You cried yourself to sleep every night and I was there for it all. Rena: But… Yvonne: But nothing young lady. You are not and I repeat…NOT…a ghost whisperer. Rena: Yes I am! It’s what I was born to be. When daddy died- Yvonne winds up and slaps her daughter across the face. Rena holds her cheek to console the pain. Yvonne: Now I’m going to make us a good dinner. I don’t want to hear nothing about ghosts, spirits, psychics, or any other relic bull crap. I’m going to call a priest tomorrow because you need an exorcist and you need to see God! Yvonne exits to Rena’s kitchen while Rena looks on, hoping not to see Lenvy. - - - Lenvy got the gist that her presence wasn’t wanted in Rena’s dorm. Lenvy takes Will’s hand and walks through the wall to go outside. Will: I don’t like Rena’s mom. Lenvy: You shouldn’t judge Will. Will: Did you hear her? I mean did you see her? She slapped her own daughter because she has a gift. So that’s it? I’m correct in saying that you two can talk to each other. Lenvy: Seems like it. She can see me but she can’t see you. Don’t ask me why because I’m not the big man up there and I don’t have all of the answers. Will: Believe me I’m confused enough. I’m still getting used to flying through doors and walls. Lenvy: I know what you’re thinking. Will: So you’re psychic as well? I thought you said that wasn’t on our ghostly agenda. Lenvy: You can’t touch her. Will: You know me all too well but I wasn’t thinking about Rena. I was thinking about her bitch of a mother. Lenvy: You have to be on your best behavior. I kind of want to see you get ahead in the end. Lenvy begins to walk away from him. Will: Where are you going? Lenvy: I have to go visit my mother. She cries every night over my death. She thinks of you too. Will: Well…why don’t you let Rena do it for you. She can send messages for us! I can send one to Alicia and Jace. Lenvy: After seeing that display it would be risky. Just...just be good. I’m begging you. Lenvy vanishes in thin air. Will looks through Rena’s window and sees how scared Rena was of her mother. Will shakes his head. Will: Maybe I can be bad for just one more time. - - - Ginny walks up to Vance Airways with her suitcase and ticket. There are two employees but Ginny gets the male employee. He types in his computer and looks at her. Male Employee: I’m sorry Miss Coy but your flight has been cancelled. Ginny: No it hasn’t. There’s no way. Please check again. The Male Employee types again in his computer. Male Employee: Yes it was cancelled forty two minutes ago. Ginny: (upset) WHAT? Who the hell would authorize such a thing? I wish to speak to a manager. Male Employee: Sure thing. Please hold. The Male Employee exits. He returns with Bonnie who’s nametag couldn’t be any bigger. Bonnie: Thank you for flying- Ginny: Save it Bonnie. I want to know why my flight was cancelled. Bonnie checks the ticket information. Bonnie: Miss Coy you just called it in. I talked to you on the phone. Remember? Ginny: You must be kidding me. Bonnie: No but I must say that your voice sounds different. Ginny: (realizing) Oh…my…god! That bitch. Bonnie: Excuse me? Ginny: Somebody just committed a crime and I know exactly who it was. The Male Employee gets on the intercom. Male Employee: Flight 29 departing to Cody, Colorado is now leaving. Please make your way to Gate 6. Ginny: I have to get back home so you better let me on that plane! Bonnie: Miss you would have to reactivate your ticket and that will take twenty minutes. The plane won’t wait for you dear. Ginny: Listen to me you twit. You just let someone else use my identity. Now you better get me on a flight to Cody within the next hour or your job will be history. Bonnie: The next flight goes out tomorrow ma’am. Ginny throws her suitcase on the ground in frustration. Ginny: I’m going to kill her! IF I SEE HER SHE’S MINE. SHE’S DEAD! Bonnie: Miss calm down! Ginny: NO! Bonnie grabs the intercom. Bonnie: Security. SD10 at Gate 6. Ginny watches the flight to home and to Owen fly away. Ginny: You idiot! You stupid moron! Bonnie you don’t want you did. I want you fired you dumb ass. Bonnie: You’re crazy. (into the intercom) SD10 NOW! Ginny tries jumping over the counter but is stopped by two police offers who drag her away kicking and screaming. - - - On a planned date with Nate, Bobbie walks around the courtyard of the campus. Both of them are eating ice cream cones. Nate: So is this is my flavor? Bobbie: Yeah sure it is. I’m having a good time. Nate: I am too. Bobbie notices that some people are staring at her. Others smile out of sympathy. Nate: How do you handle the looks? Bobbie: It’s like looking in a mirror. Sometimes you just don’t care. Nate: Bobbie I have to be honest…I don’t remember you. I feel as if I know you but I don’t. Bobbie: Baby you’re just being dramatic. You always were. Nate snickers at her comment. They continue to walk until Stephanie notices him and she isn’t happy. Stephanie: Excuse me Nate! Nate turns around to notice her. Bobbie stays silent, she remembers her from their previous run in. Nate: Do I know you? Stephanie: Oh so that’s how it’s going to be huh? Nate: What are you talking about? Stephanie: How dare you stand there and deny what we did. We had an amazing time in that limo. Nate: Excuse me? Stephanie: Yeah but what you didn’t tell me was that I was just second fiddle. I was just someone who you wanted to get your mind off of your girlfriend. I’m not a whore but you obviously are. Bobbie quickly steps into Nate’s defense. Bobbie: Listen I suggest you best walk away. Nate is a wonderful person so maybe that’s why he’s not with you. You have to love yourself before you can love someone else. Judging by what you wear, you must be full of hate. Nate: This is my girlfriend. Bobbie smiles back at Stephanie. Stephanie: No it’s not. Nate: What? Stephanie: I know your girlfriend. We met before and I did the research when you didn’t call me back. This isn’t her. As a matter of fact, this girl hangs out with her. Nate: (to Bobbie) Is what she’s saying true? Bobbie just stood there shaking her head, wanting to cry. Bobbie throws her ice cream at Stephanie and runs away. - - - John knocks on Alley’s door. She opens it and shoots him a weird look. Alley: What are you doing here? John: I’m here to say hello. Alley: Yeah right. You said you never wanted to see me again but here you are. John: Am I not allowed to have a change of heart? Alley leads him into her room. Alley: How’ve you been? John: I’ve been okay. I hear you’ve been busy. Alley: Busy with what? John: With Blake. Alley: How did you find out about that? John: Unnamed sources. I need to protect the innocent. Especially from you. Alley: Good to see you still have a sense of humor. John: I’m not joking about what I know. Alley: Yes John, Blake and I are an item. Are you happy? Are you jealous? You moved on so did I. John: Bravo Alley. Alley: It happened after your sister broke us up. John: Of course it did. Then again you haven’t changed and you never will. You’re still blaming someone else for whatever mistake you made. Alley: Did you come here to be smug John? Congrats. You did it. You can walk your sorry ass home. John: By the way, Marissa’s gone. Alley: That’s such a shame that she didn’t leave when we were going out. Maybe we’d still be together. John: I’m sure you’d find something new to lie about. Alley: Get out! John begins to leave her room until he turns back around to her. John: Alley there’s something going on that I can’t wait for it to bite you in the ass when it all comes to light I’m pretty sure that things are going to change around here. John walks out of Alley’s room and slams the door behind him. - - - Ava walks through the electric sliding doors of Cody Learning Disability United School (CLDUS). She couldn’t turn back. She needed to see James but before she did, Nate popped into her head. Ava turned around to go back outside. She dials Nate but gets his voicemail. Ava: Hey it’s me. I haven’t heard from you in a few days and I’m getting worried. Are you okay? Or are you mad at me? There’s some heavy stuff going down and don’t think I’ve forgotten about you because I haven’t. Call me back. Bye. At the same time, Blake was at the café on the phone with Myra, sipping a latte. Blake: Yeah I miss you guys too but it’s been kind of nice focusing on other things than Bryan trying to scheme. I know he’ll run the school into a hole. Hopefully I’ll be there to pick up the pieces again. Bye Myra. Ava hangs up with Nate and walks back in. She could see him sitting on one of the chairs watching TV in the foyer. His back was to him but he was just like she remembered. Ava: Mister Vaughne. James: Yes? Blake hangs up with Myra and cleans up his table. He walks out the door and a familiar face breezes right past him. James turns around and realizes who ‘Courtney’ really was. Ava: Hello James. Blake gets a tap on his shoulder and turns around to see that it was no stranger. It was his alive ex-wife. London: Hi Blake.
  13. ML I'm so happy to see you've commented back. I didn't want to continue with my series until I saw what you had to say! Dylan's dream was supposed to throw the readers off but it was only a nightmare and a way to have Carrie still be in the mix. As she fights for her life, the past will come to light. I took a gamble with Will's death. I can only justify it until the end of the series. Which will be 12 more episodes left to go. The next episode should be out sometime next week. Hopefully. Cross your fingers that it'll be done. Originally Marli was to part from the cast but I thought, I needed to stop writing characters who are only there for one season and then leave. Which is why Marli and Alicia are staying. Carlos confronts C.C. about the pregnancy claim in the next episode. Yvonne is for sure not like Ria but she'll definitely be close to Miss Pat! So look out because the sass is a comin! I'm looking forward to writing a lot of reunion scenes. The James/Ava scene will come along very nicely. As always, stay tuned!
  14. Thank you so much for all of the comments. I really hope that ML is doing well and do tell him that he's in my prayers. I know he'll comment when he's ready and of course I can't wait to read it. This is actually Victoria Rowell's first appearance on the show as Yvonne Arington. I know that the Rena/Lenvy/Will plot is very Passions-esque but PP has always dove into that territory. After all in Season 2-3, Ava was possessed by Vicki's dead evil ex-boyfriend Jake so it's sort of nice to go into the supernatural territory. (Maybe it's in the range of Port Chares, what do you all think?) Bobbie's reasoning for doing what she's doing will eventually come out within the next episodes. Alexia used to be on the show from Season 2-Season 4. She's Owen's sister and when they first showed up they tried betting each other to see who can find someone they could fall in love with. Owen went after London and Alexia went after Blake. Alexia drugged Blake and made London think they slept together. Eventually she gave up, made amends with the couple, and they became best friends. Owen had already moved onto Tracie (it was really Nan with amnesia) and when Nan came to she broke his heart. Owen's suicidal and Alexia is always there to pick up the pieces. Like not telling their mother Christina about everything. Alexia is then appointed London's wedding planner and her maid of honor. However she has another problem...having to fess up to knowing that her brother shot Blake after he was brainwashed by Nan. Not only did Blake and London forgive him (because of their hatred for Nan) but they had him in the wedding. Once the wedding went off without a hitch, Alexia started getting wierd calls which turn deadly. It was Alexia's step father Frank, who she had arrested when her and Owen found out that he killed their father to be with their mother. Frank kidnaps her and he's shot down when Owen, Tanisha, and London find out that she's in trouble. In Season 4, Owen goes deaf after the gala explosion and tries committing suicide. Alexia tries very hard to help him but he's taken from his hospital bed. Alexia and Tanisha make it a point to find Owen before her mother finds out the truth. The only leads they had to go on was a nurse named Ivory Goldie whom signed him out. They track her down and realize that she's from Alexia's hometown of Raleigh (which means they're closer to their mother). After being shown the door by Ivory, Alexia breaks in the house and finds a number with Owen's name. She almost gets caught by Ivory but is saved by Tanisha who fakes an injury. They find Owen is placed in a specia hospital, but who was the one who took him there? Alexia finds out that it was their mother who tried teaching her a lesson. Owen decides to stay in Raleigh as does Alexia to help take care of their mother. Wow that was a lot of info and Fred may become a recurring character. I do see some potential for him.
  15. GO JAN GO! You know we've had this conversation plenty of times about rooting for the villain/vixen/psycho and this was one episode that I was screaming at my computer screen for Jan to do her worst. I also enjoyed the catfight and the homage to The Secret Room plot. (Very etertaining). For a second there I thought that Lucas was going to tell Eugina that he couldn't go through with it but Jan trying to stop it was a much better ending. Great job!
  16. Matt P.

    Episode 154

    OMG I'm enthralled with this series right now. Seriously man, your writing could've saved GL with countless recasts and good story telling. The character who I love the most has to be Aubrey. The girl is psycho and so much fun to read. How could Marina be that naieve to trust her? She's a Randall for crying out loud. That's awesome that Susan is going after Gus. You have the perfect character representation for this plot because I really couldn't see Bonnie Dennison pulling it off properly. The Springfield prom was nice as well. I sort of thought that was what Vi would've been hinting at. All and all this was a good episode and what GL should truly be.
  17. - - - A beam of sunlight breaks through the chapel. Dylan smiles at his soon to be bride. The music plays and Carrie walks down the aisle with Michael. Everyone in the chapel stood up for her. This was it, this was her day. Reverend: We shall begin. We’re here in holy matrimony to witness the gathering of Dylan Colby and Carrie Slondsbid as they begin their life a new. Please take each other’s hands and repeat after me. Dylan looks into Carrie’s eyes. He can’t help but be cheerful. His bride is so beautiful. Dylan: I Dylan Colby, take thee Carrie to be my lawfully wedded wife. To have and to hold in sickness and in health, til death do us part. Reverend: Carrie…repeat after me. Carrie: I Carrie Slondsbid take thee Dylan to be my lawfully wedded husband. To have and to hold in sickness and in health, til death do us part. Reverend: In the power invested in me and in the eyes of god, I now pronounce you husband and wife. You may kiss the bride. Dylan leans and lifts Carrie’s veil and lends her a tender kiss. Carrie: You did it. I’m now Carrie Colby. Dylan: I love you babe. Carrie: You know I love you hubby but you’re living a dream. When is reality going to sink in? Dylan watches Carrie run away from him. He tries catching up with her but is blocked by Blake, Mary Ann, Michael, Vi, Jason, Ryley and Juliana. Dylan pushes his way towards his bride. Dylan: Let me see her! I want my wife! (screaming) CARRIE! Dylan wakes up in his opened tuxedo at the hospital waiting room. The weird position he fell asleep in put pain on his neck but that didn’t matter to him. Blake backs away after being startled by his best friend’s freak out. Blake hands him some water to drink. Dylan takes a sip. Blake: Hey man. You were having a dream. Dylan: Someone tried killing her. Blake was speechless. He didn’t know how to respond. Dylan stands up and looks into Carrie’s hospital room where doctors were checking her vitals. He puts his hand up to the cold window, hoping that things would change for an unconscious Carrie. Dylan: Someone wanted her dead. Someone wanted to make me feel pain and they did it by physically hurting the one person who meant the most to me in my life. Dylan looks at Blake with tired and strained eyes. Dylan: If I have to spend every dollar or go nights without sleeping to figure this out I will. Blake: You know that I’m here for you. Whatever I can do to help, say the word and it’s done. Dylan: I’m going to find out who did this. And when I do…someone’s going to pay dearly! - - - Episode 125: Moments Later Series Creator & Head Writer: Matt Politylo Logo Designer: Mary Zimmerman Guest Starring: John Driscoll as Fred Kayhill - - - John was stunned to see who was standing in front of him. He just couldn’t believe it. London notices it but all she can do is smile. John: London? It can’t be. London: Yeah it’s me alright. John: Everyone thinks your dead. London: May I come in? I have a lot to explain to you. John: I want proof. London: What do you want from me John? I have the scars from my caesarian to prove it. John: Those are the magical words. London walks into his room. She looks deep into baby L.J.’s eyes. London: She looks more like a Snaldry than a Tyler. John: She’s actually due for a nap. John walks their daughter over to the crib and puts her down. He looks at London, still baffled. John: How are you alive? London: You wouldn’t believe who nursed me back to life. John: I can’t believe you’re here. London: Sometimes neither can I. What have I missed? Hopefully you and Blake have gotten along. John: Actually we have. Ever since your video will, we sort of called a truce. He called off the war over our little angel. London: That will is now null and void since I’m…well you know. John: And my sister came to town. She was looking after L.J. but she’s decided to go back home. London: How is Marissa doing? John: She’s quite busy with her life. London: And how are things with Alley? John is silent. London: You actually don’t have to say anything. John: Why’s that? London: I know you two aren’t together. Your ex-girlfriend is with my ex-husband. I saw them kissing. John’s mouth dropped wide open in shock. - - - In Ava’s car, she had to speak. She had to think of something fast to say. Talk you idiot say something, she thought to hersef. James: Hello? Ava holds her nose to disguise her voice by making it nasally. Ava: Hi my name is Courtney and I’m calling from the CLDUS. James: How did you get this number? Ava: Our records showed that you are the parent to one of our students here. James: Yes I am. Is Bobbie okay? Ava: That’s actually why I’m calling. Are you in Cody sir? James: No I’m in Denver. Ava wanted to punch the steering wheel. She couldn’t believe how close he really was. James: Hello Courtney? Ava: Sorry…we’re busy over here. Um would be able to stop in so that we can talk more privately? James: I don’t think that will be possible. Ava: (quickly) Why not? (calmer) Is there a specific reason? James: Have you contacted Maieve Anderson? She’s the one who has full custody of Bobbie. Not me. Ava: We have tried but she’s…been…busy. James: Fine. Would you like me to meet you at the school? Ava: Yes we could do that. Say afternoonish tomorrow? James: I’ll see you then. James hangs up the phone. Ava kept looking at her phone. Ava: Oh my god. He’s Bobbie’s father! What the hell am I going to do? - - - Later that night, Nate walks into The Palace Café. He walks up to the counter and finds Agatha. Agatha: Hi what can I get ya? Nate: Just a coffee please. God my head hurts. Agatha: Long night? Nate: Something like that. Agatha exits to make him his coffee. He looks around. Everything seemed unfamiliar to him. He knew where he was and who he was but that was about it. Who were these people staring back at him? Agatha hands him his cup and he sits down. Bobbie walks inside and sits across from him. Bobbie: Did you forget about me? Nate: Yeah I did. Sorry. Bobbie: Don’t be. So how’s your head? Nate: Fine. I guess. Now tell me again. How do we know each other? Bobbie: You’re my…boyfriend. Nate: Really? Bobbie: Yeah we’ve been going out forever. It’s not because I’m a charity case or something. Nate: How did we meet? Bobbie: Online. Nate: Figures. Nate’s cell phone goes off. He pulls it out of his pocket to answer it but Bobbie stops him. Bobbie: Let me get it hun. Bobbie answers the phone. Ava: Hey Nate, you won’t believe this- Bobbie: Hi Ava. How are you? Ava: Bobbie? Where’s Nate? Bobbie: We’re having a good time. We’re at the café. We should be back soon. Bye. Bobbie hangs up with Ava and returns the phone to Nate, who seems confused. Nate: Who were you talking to? Bobbie: A friend of ours that's all. But that's not important. Now…let’s plan our next date. Bobbie takes Nate’s hand into hers. Bobbie: Lover. - - - Blake walks into Alley’s room to find her in pajamas, sitting on her couch. She just sat there contemplating telling him what was needed to be said. The truth. Except he just walks right past her. Blake: Hey. Alley: How was the wedding? Blake: A disaster. Someone stabbed Carrie. Alley: Oh my god. Is she okay? Blake: She’s fighting for her life. Alley: Tell Dylan that I hope she’s okay. Blake: I will. I’m pretty tired. Alley: Thanks for stopping by. Blake: You down for some cuddling? Alley: Are we a couple? Blake: Where did that come from? Alley: Just answer the question. Blake: I…I don’t know. Maybe. Alley: Things have been happening so fast for us. Blake: Yeah they have been. Alley thinks back to the pregnancy test that she kept hidden in a drawer. Alley: There’s something I have to tell you. I’m- Blake interrupts her by putting his finger over her lip. Blake: Don’t say it. He moves his finger and kisses her softly. Blake: It’s too fast to use the ‘L’ word. Alley lets out a nervous laugh of relief. Alley: That wasn’t what I was going to say. Blake: I’m going to go to bed, will you be joining me? Who knows, I may be in the mood. Alley: Yeah. Give me a minute though. Alley goes back into her room and rummages through her drawer to find the pregnancy test. It was still there. Positive. She was still preganant according the test. Alley: I’m not in love with you. I might be having your baby. - - - The next day, Nan gets a knock at her door. She answers it to find a younger man dressed in business attire holding a sealed envelope. Nan: I don’t remember ordering a stripper. He giggles at her comment. He motions to give her the folder. Fred: My name’s Fred Kayhill. I work with Myers and Stephens Associates. May I come in? Nan: Fine. Fred walks in and tries handing her his envelope. Nan: What is this you’re trying to give me? Fred: It’s a subpoena. You’re trial date and information is all in here. If you do not appear then you will be subjected for arrest. Nan: Are you Jenny’s lawyer? Fred: No miss I’m not. I’m an assistant with the plantiff’s law firm. Nan moves closer to Fred. Nan: Fred do you think this could be dropped? Fred: I don’t see that happening miss. Besides you’d have to- Nan takes the envelope out of her hand and places it near his belt. Nan grabs his neck and looks in his eyes. Nan: I won’t tell if you don’t. However I'm a firm believer of the penile system. Fred smiles at her. He was obviously attracted to her. He grabs her arms and places them at her side. Fred: Seduction could possibly work against you if I let my boss know you tried making a pass at me. Nan: So you basically have nothing to do with the trial, correct? Fred: I’m practically an errand boy. Just doing my job miss. Nan walks over to her kitchen counter and grabs a glass. Nan: Then get the hell out of my room you bastard! By the way, send a message to your higher ups. My name is Nan Sheridan. And I never lose! Nan throws the glass at Fred. He quickly ducks as it smashes against the door. Fred places the subpoena on a table and exits. Nan just stands there shaking her head. - - - On a sunny day in Raleigh, North Carolina…Ginny rings the doorbell to Owen’s house. She smiles when Alexia answers it. Alexia: (surprised) Ginny? I’m so shocked to see you here. Ginny: Yeah I can sort of say the same. Alexia: What can I do for you? Ginny: I’m looking for Owen. It’s kind of important that I see him. Alexia shoots Ginny a confused look. Ginny: Can you please get him for me? Alexia: He’s not here right now. Ginny: Oh? Is he out or something? Alexia: Yeah he’s out of town. Ginny: That’s great. I flew all the way out here to…yeah…that would happen to me. Alexia: I thought that you would’ve run into him by now. Ginny: What are you talking about? (snickering) Now I’m the confused one. Alexia: He went back to Point Palace with Tanisha. Ginny’s mouth drops in shock until realizing what Tanisha has done. Ginny: I really hope I’m not imposing but you don’t mind if I crash here for a little bit? It seems I’m going to have to book an earlier flight to kill Tanisha! - - - Back at Point Palace, Owen opens the door to his hotel room. Followed by Tanisha who plants herself on his bed and smiles. Owen: You know I’ve missed you babe. Tanisha: Then show me! Owen smiles at her and jumps on the bed. He begins to passionately kiss her. Tanisha: Oh Owen. I’m so happy you’re back. Owen: I’m not back for long. Mom’s still not doing well. Tanisha: Then we’ll just have to savor the time we have now. Owen: I’m going to take a shower. Maybe you can join me. Tanisha: Maybe I will. Get naked stud! Owen playfully takes off his shirt and throws it at her. He starts the water in the shower. Owen’s cell phone begins to ring. She quickly looks at the caller ID and notices that it’s Alexia calling. Owen: Just let it go to voicemail. Tanisha: Sure thing. Before it can go to voicemail, Tanisha hangs up the phone, and deletes it. Tanisha: I’m sure Ginny has already found out by now! Too bad Owen will never know. - - - On the set of “Blue Crystal,” Carlos tries concentrating on his lines in his dressing room but can’t. As Ian gets his hair done, he notices his co-star dazing. Ian: Dude what’s up? I know the whole Miguel’s into drugs story line is a little far fetched but- Carlos: No it’s not that. Just have a lot on my mind that’s all. Ian: Make sure to find me if you want to read lines later. Carlos: Sure. Carlos gets out of his chair and pulls out his cell phone. He dials Jenny who is sitting in the office of Hayley Stephens, her new lawyer. Jenny: Just give me one moment. Hayley: Sure thing. Jenny answers her phone. Jenny: Hey Carlos. Carlos: Hi chica. Jenny: How are you? Carlos: I’m…okay. I guess. Jenny: You don’t sound it. Carlos has a flashback of what C.C. told him. C.C.: I’m pregnant with your baby. The flashback ends and he comes to. Jenny: Hello? Carlos: We need to talk like now. Jenny: I’m actually in a meeting with Hayley. You won’t believe what news I have for you. Carlos: Just put that way for a second. Please! I have- Jenny: Carlos I can’t do that. I’ve invested too much time and effort. Nan is going down and it’s going to be because of me. I’ll see you later tonight. Bye. Jenny hangs up with Carlos who out of frustration throws his scripts on the floor to storm off. Jenny puts her cell phone away and looks at Hayley. Hayley: I take it that he will be a witness? Jenny: Of course. Actually I’ve written up lists of numerous witnesses. Jenny hands her a folder. Hayley scans the names. Hayley: My this is a long list. I can’t believe that one person can do so many diabolical things to this many people. Jenny: It’s going to be a long fight! One that I intend to win. - - - At his office, Bryan paces back and forth. His nerves were getting the best of him. He can’t get off of his mind what Marli had told him before she left. Bryan: There’s no way Blake can find out the truth. I deserve this damn school. He didn’t! I schemed my way and he had it handed to him. She won’t take this away from me. Bryan picks up his office phone and dials Detective Miltner. Detective Miltner: Miltner. Bryan: Hello detective, it’s Bryan Daniels. Detective Miltner: Ugh…hello mister president. What can I do for ya? Bryan: I was hoping to help you. First with solving the S.R. Reardon case by reporting a crime. Detective Miltner: His death is a closed case. Bryan: Marli Caloway ran into him. She admitted everything to me. Detective Miltner: That’s a damn shame because Marli Caloway is dead. She was involved in a plane crash after not following strict orders that she couldn’t leave this city. We already had a warrant out for her arrest but it’s not necessary. Thanks for helping though. Detective Miltner hangs up with Bryan. Bryan: That clever girl. Myra knocks on the door and comes into his office. Myra: You have a call on line two. Bryan: Tell them that I’m busy. Myra: They said it was urgent. Someone named Hope. Bryan freezes. Bryan: Yeah I’ll take it. Bryan answers the phone. Marli: You think you could get rid of me that easily? Bryan: You have huge balls to be calling in after everything you did. Marli: You forget Bryan…I have the feds on my side. So one false move on your part and you can lose everything. If you haven’t already. Bryan: Listen you little bitch. If you want to play games, I don’t back down! Marli: Of course I want to play a game. I’m going to torture you for my pleasure. Ta ta dear. Bryan: Marli? Bryan can still her hear breathing on the other end. Marli: My name is Hope! Marli Caloway died. Bryan: Well Hope, Blake is going to find out everything and he’ll loathe you for every lie you told him. So that text message you sent him, he won’t believe it for a second! Bryan heard her hang up. He smiled to himself, knowing that he hit a nerve. - - - Rena holds herself close as only a few people have showed up to the outside funeral for Will Pazner. They were mostly Will’s roommates. Not even Will’s parents were to be found. Reverend: Now we will hear a few words from someone who cared about Mister Pazner. Rena makes her way up to the podium. She looks around to all of the people who obviously felt bad but knew the rumors she was faced with. Rena: Hello. Thank you all for coming. It would’ve meant a lot to Will. She looks over to the urn with Will’s framed picture standing in front of it. Rena: Will didn’t have a lot of friends. I don’t understand why because he was always a…complex person. Maybe not so much complex but compassionate. He cared for people. I know he cared for me. Deep down inside I believe that to be true. Roommate: Then why was he after Alicia? Rena: I guess we’ll never know that. Roommate: (sarcastic) Of course we don't. Rena: I just want this to be in his remembrance. Isn't that enough? So goodbye Will. Tears stream out of her eyes as she touches his picture. Rena: (whispers) It’s my fault. I’m sorry. Rena turns back to the rest of the funeral patrons. Rena: Thank you reverend. That’s all I have to say. The reverend excuses everyone to go. They shake each other’s hands. Rena walks off. Until she notices from far away someone who used to be close to Will. It was Lenvy Elliot. She saw her again. Rena: Lenvy? Rena grabs her phone to call her mother who was making dinner. Yvonne: Hey baby. Rena: Hi mom. I…I need to tell you something. Yvonne: Sure thing honey. What’s on your mind? Rena: I think it’s happening again. I need you mama. Will you come visit? Yvonne: Of course baby. I’m on my way. Don’t worry, mama’s going to fix everything! - - - Will jumped up and down. He waved his hands in front of Rena but nothing. Will: Hey I’m not dead! I’m right here! Come on Rena. Hello? Lenvy: She can’t hear or see you. Will: She thinks she saw you so obviously something’s up. Lenvy: Yeah silly your dead, that’s what’s up. Will: So this is it? That’s me in that urn? Lenvy: Yep. It was too expensive to hold a closed casket. Will: Nice turn up. I’m surprised people haven’t shown up to spit on my grave. Lenvy: Trella has. Will: She isn’t going to see me is she? Lenvy: She’s already crossed over. Will: Wonderful. I’m dead. So when do I crossover? Lenvy: You’re kind of not at that stage yet. Will: What? Lenvy: You’re under review. Will: Look I was sorry for everything I’ve ever done. You of all people know that! Who do I have to say this to? St Peter? Lenvy: But you have done some good. Will: Thanks to you. Lenvy: I tried warning you about getting involved with Alicia and Jace. Will: I should’ve listened. So what are we? Like psychics? Can we see into the future to warn people and stuff? Lenvy: No. We’re spirits. Will: Well this spirit wants to go to heaven. Lenvy: That’s going to be hard. Your track record ranks up there with Nan Sheridan. Will: (surprised) It’s that bad? Lenvy: Almost worse. Will you might be going to hell! Lenvy floats away from him and vanishes. In a flash he tries going after her. Will: Hey! Don’t leave me here. I can’t go to hell. I just can’t! Whatever it is that I have to do, I’ll do it! (screaming) LENVY?! - - - Later that night in Alicia’s hospital bed, she lies there, unconscious. She was hooked up to a breathing apparatus that was keeping her alive. The door opens and Kellan Etano enters. Kellan is dressed in a doctor’s coat. He looks over Alicia and smiles. Kellan: Hello Alicia. My sweet Aussie babe. He begins to touch her forehead. She makes no response to him. Kellan: Don’t worry. You’ll be dreaming before we know it. I could just pull the wire but that would be too easy. You deserve much better than that. Kellan places a hospital pillow over her face. Kellan: Soon my dear…soon you’ll be dead. Kellan digs through his pocket and pulls out a gun with a silencer on the tip. Kellan: Either way it will be sweet and painless. He aims the gun at Alicia and blows her a kiss as his finger gets closer to the trigger. Before he can shoot her, Alicia wakes up.
  18. You know I can't wait for these episodes. It's about time mySONtv heats back up with it's two hottest primetime sudsers returning.
  19. Congratulations go out to four characters who took home awards from The 2008 SOFF Awards brought to you by SoapWEB. Matt Bible (Dylan Colby) won for his dramatic performance dealing with testicular cancer. Dylan's on screen mother Kim Zimmer (Lana Colby) rounded up votes for being the mother in law from hell. Ex-ATC band member Joey Murray (S.R. Reardon)'s threatening ways gave him the gold as Deborah Zoe (C.C. Chastity) was the only character nominated. "I'm so thankful for everyone who voted. I was shocked and surprised that Point Palace took home anything. I want to share the awards with my wonderful staff who has made Point Palace so special. Thank you!" says PP creator Matt Politylo. An opening has been made for Season 5. It can be viewed by logging on to: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8Q5j1dW6bho Look for season 6 to premiere on May 17th. It will for sure be the final season but the show is debating extending the last 13 episodes to a possible 20. New character photos along with a few fan favorites (as seen from the season finale) will be coming onto the creative canvas.
  20. You and your family are in my prayers.
  21. Jack Nick on STEAM??? Insanity but I love it and can't wait to see what he brings to the courtroom table. There seems that there should be five upcoming court room battles. First Suga should fry ten times forward for what she did. That was just uncalled for and quite frankly inhumane. I don't even think Sheila Carter would do something like that...or Nan Sheridan for that matter. If Chris died for supposidly killing an adult (which he didn't do) then Suga should get everything she deserves. She's definitely the most hated character on the show. Probably the most repulsive. Nat for sure should've scratched her eyes out when she had the chance. I thought Sabryn's scene was touching too. Mike really is a nice guy to show that he has a heart in her case but shouldn't it be his job to be impartial? Let's talk about Jasmine and Patti's scene. I really like Jasmine. Her story with Daniel kind of reminds me of what's going on in Varried Lives with the whole doctor falling for the patient thing. I kind of like them together but I'm still pulling for a Sharan and Daniel pairing. I don't know what it is about the older folks in Passadena but they all have histories that are just plain ugly. Like Mama Labelle. Did she really sleep with D.C.? He's just as disgusting as Mona (like father like daughter). I'm kind of hoping that he isn't that much of a sperm pimp/spimp. Glad that Sister Pat got slapped by Madea. She deserved that one but I hope that Madea slaps Ria. Ria is so selfish...why is she worried about bro hoes when she's going after Kiko? It doesn't make sense. Yeah she was likeable when she did an unselfish act with Nat's baby but she still did it to make herself look good. (Probaby to score some panty points around town). So in a way, she kind of deserves to have slept with her father. In the words of Becky Buckwild "If it looks like a hoe, smells like a hoe...then it's probably a hoe!" Very fast paced yet interesting episode. I was hooked.
  22. Matt P.

    Sex Me! #113

    Wow I really don't know how I feel about that ending. It was very unexpected but just downright crude. Suga has to be the most hated character in SONOP history! After doing something like that...I'm speechless. It definitely shook me to my cure but if Ria was going to get shot so that she can brag about sleeping with Remy, I'm all for that but a baby??? Come on! The sex scene was boarderline pornographic but...it works for this show. You should consider writing romance novels. he he. Though I lost all respect for Remy. If he gets her pregnant, then he's screwed...literally! Lauren kind of grew on me since she's growing a backbone to plan an attack against Ty. I'm sure Tino will get invovled and get hurt. No one's going to let Mona out of that jail cell. Not even Sharan's testimony.
  23. Oh gosh I just noticed the title to the next episode. I'm sure there will be plenty of "!'s" replacing "i's" for body parts.
  24. So much happened in this episode. I loved the dialogue...some of the jokes I caught onto and others went past my head but it's all good chile. The confrontation between Mona and Abe was absoulutely fantastic. Pure emotion. Mona is such a well rounded character. I also liked her interaction with Madea. At first I was worried that Madea was going to be cartoony (she is) but not too much after this scene. Maybe Mona should thank Sabryn for everything she's done. She just did some of Mona's dirty work. Alexis is so stupid. Come on Alexis? How can your sister not, not survive something like this? She's a freakin' zombie. Maybe it's Dahlia playing Ash? Just a wild guess but if Santino's looking to get some, it seems like the women of STEAM are all panty droppers when it comes to showing remorse. I love it when Natti goes after the people who do her wrong. Take action and take control. That's the kind of girl I love to see. Go after Bryan and take him for all he's worth, though I do think good will win over evil. (IE. Blake vs Nan) One of those slutty PD's are Ria. Remy run like hell! Hopefully he doesn't get an STD. Wear a rubber. Total Karma hit Sister Patterson and I'm loving it. Her glass window is definitely being broken by the stones she once threw. GOOD EP!
  25. Matt P.

    The Diary! #111

    Well...judging from how arrogant they act between each other. One used Lauren when she was emotionally confused. The other slept with Ria (enough said.) To me, they're just not appealing characters. They're all about sex and being used.
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