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    Episode #12

    I'm sure you've heard this before but beautiful opening and the way you made your blog visually looks astounding. Keep up the good work!
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    New OLTL Opening.

    I love that theme so much and it goes well with a lot of openings, even OLTL's. Good job!
  3. Previously on Point Palace: -Dylan begins to question Ginny on who her last customer was having Alley to be agitated. -Lenvy gets a hold of Patrick's cell phone and calls Will but Nan answers his phone. -Agatha tries helping Carlos who decides to take matters into his own hands and leaves with Jenny by purposely having water spilled on Nick, but did Dr. Quarr see him? -Vicki woke up and realized that she was in the casket with Jake’s dead body. -Ike shot blanks and when it started to rain Ava admitted to Ike that Vicki would drown, when the two begin to fight, Ava is knocked out by the gun handle. -Will gives Nan the deadly items that she needs and they both share their views on morality but Nan still throws out the blackmail. -London said yes to marrying Blake as the night got more romantic for the two in a candle lit canopy. -John thought that London was at her door when he was going to pop the question after having a flashback about one of their dates but it turned out to be someone else. -Alexia tries to have Owen come down safely but he doesn't listen to her as he jumps off his dorm roof. Episode 53: Off the Roof Executive Story Consultant/Creator: Matt Politylo Logo Designer: Mary Zimmerman _______________________________________________________________________ (Alexia begins to scream hysterically after watching her brother fall from the three story dormitory roof. Others who were watching were shocked as well.) Alexia: (in hysterics)Owen no! (Alexia runs towards his body as blood seeps out of his nostrils and his eyes are closed.) Alexia: (screaming)Somebody call an ambulance! (Tears stream out of Alexia's eyes and seep onto his dirt covered shirt.) Alexia:If I only could have been here sooner then this wouldn't have happened. Owen why did you do it? (An ambulance comes and takes Owen away on a stretcher.) EMT:Are you coming along? Alexia: Of course. I’m family! (Alexia goes into the ambulance vehicle. She can only keep her eyes on her brother, hoping that he will be okay. The paramedics around her were doing everything that they could.) Alexia:Will he be okay? EMT: We'll find out. _______________________________________________________________________ (John is shocked to find Carrie instead of London upon opening the door to his dorm room.) Carrie:Expecting someone else? John: Actually I was. (Carrie makes her way into John's room.) Carrie:I got your note and I had to come back to see if it were true. John: You're very hard to try and reach you know. Carrie: I'm glad that you came to Lexington. This is a serious problem. Alley has no right to be with Dylan, he was mine. That girl has become nothing but greedy and selfish when it comes to men. I know that I really don’t have room to talk after the whole Will fiasco but that was the past and Dylan is practically my present! John: That's right he was yours. Carrie: And Alley belonged to you. How the hell did you lose her Johnny Boy? _______________________________________________________________________(Will looks at his cell phone number list as he sits on his bed in his dormitory.) Will:Lenvy, it's been so long since you've left. Hopefully Gloria knows where you are for real. (Will calls Lenvy's mother Gloria in Lexington.) Gloria:Hello? Will: Hi this is Will Pazner. Gloria: You can' t take a hint can you! Will: Have you heard from Lenvy? Gloria: Did you have a hearing problem or are you just stupid? I'm not letting you anywhere near my daughter! Will: Please, just tell me where she is. I know you know something. Gloria: You're right I do and that's why you'll know nothing! (Gloria hangs up on Will.) Will: (to himself)I'm beginning to think you disappeared Lenvy. _______________________________________________________________________ (John feels caught off guard by Carrie's question. Carrie has since made herself comfortable by sitting on his couch in the common area of his room.) John:Maybe if you stayed in town then you would have known why I lost Alley. Carrie: You're a sweet guy. You don't seem like the player type who doesn't know how to hold down a relationship. John: My name is John Snaldry not Will Pazner. Carrie: Thank god for that. Can’t take another crazed obsessed- Too many bad memories, never mind. John: I lost Alley because she started seeing Dylan behind my back. She felt sorry for him whenever you left for Lexington. I just wasn't too pleased to have my heart put in a blender. Carrie: And that's why you want revenge on both of them. John: You're the only thing that can come between them! Welcome back. _______________________________________________________________________(Ike begins to hold Ava's arms behind her back as she begins to come too. The rain has since picked up, making the cemetery grass wet.) Ike:Who are you? Ava: It's Ava. I've come back. Ike: How do I know that you're not trying to play me for a fool? Ava: You're hurting me. Let me go. Please let go of me. Ike: I don't trust you Jake. Ava: Smarter then you look you son of a bitch. Ike: Ava, I know that you're inside some where. How can we fix this problem? Ava: She can't help you! (Ava turns her head to the side.) Ava:Call James. Ike: James who? Ava: James Vaughne, he's a psychologist professor at the school. He knows what- (Ava's neck begins to twitch.) Ava:Said too much already, but it doesn't matter. Vicki's probably suffocating, soon to be drowning if I can’t help it. Why are you bothering with me? Ike: You're right I have to save Vicki. Ava: But you can't do that with only one hand! Ike: Oh shut up Jake! Forgive me Ava. (Ike takes the gun handle from Ava and knocks Ava out again.) _______________________________________________________________________ (Jenny and Carlos spend time in Carlos's room. The rain is breaking the silence but Jenny’s non-verbal anger is glowing.) Jenny:Carlos you have some explaining to do! (Carlos begins to kiss Jenny's shoulder.) Jenny:I'm not in the mood. Start talking. Carlos: Fine, I was late because of Doctor Nick Quarr. He purposely made me stay later in the hospital because he knew all about our date. Jenny: The man I met seemed to be very nice. Carlos: It's all a cover up. He's pure evil and what worries me most is that he's a doctor. Tons of people put their lives in his hands. Jenny: Let me guess he kills all of them because he's an evil doctor. Is he taking a page from jack Kevorkian? This isn't making any sense. Your excuses are lame. Carlos: I'm telling you the truth. Nick is out to get me. I guess that he's trying to go through what matters most to me, you. Jenny: (giving into him) You Latin heart throbs always know what to say to smooth out the toughest situations. Carlos: We talk fast for a reason you know. (Carlos begins to kiss Jenny's neck. He then slides the strap of Jenny’s dress off of her shoulders. Before he goes further he stops.) Carlos:This means that you believe me, right? Jenny: You also know how to serenade the ladies. (Jenny jumps on Carlos and kisses him fierecely. Jenny tears off his shirt revealing his chest. He slides down the rest of the dress. Jenny undoes his belt and throws it against the wall. The two begin to kiss even heavier. Carlos takes Jenny’s firm body into both of his hands and tosses her so that he can be on top.) Carlos: (continuing to kiss her neck)I'll take that as a yes. _______________________________________________________________________ (Alley sits on Dylan's couch in the common area of his room. She's studying for a test but stops when she sees Dylan deep in thought looking out at the rain.) Alley: (joking)You know if you open your mouth and go outside that you could drown? (Dylan isn't paying attention to her.) Dylan:Huh? Alley: What's going on? Dylan: Nothing. I was just- Alley: (sarcastic) What? Admiring the rain? It's water that falls from the sky, big whoop. Dylan: No I was just thinking that's all. (Alley rolls her eyes.) Alley:Obviously about Carrie. Dylan: Should I admit that to you? Alley: You shouldn't lie to me and you pretty much already did. Dylan: I'm sorry. I know how you feel about her but I can't shake this feeling off that she's come back. Alley: I have to study. See I can focus on things other than a played out damzel in distress who's had way too many chances of forgiveness. Dylan: Wait! Alley where are you going? (In a huff, Alley places her books into her book bag and heads for the door until Dylan stops her.) Dylan:Don't go anywhere. Alley: (upset) Why should I listen to wha- (Dylan pulls her in and kisses her to shut her up.) _______________________________________________________________________ (Patrick comes down to the basement of his place and brings Lenvy some warm food. It wasn’t much but it was enough to satisfy her he thinks to himself after handing it to her on the floor.) Patrick:I hope that you’re enjoying your stay here. None of the DiMarcos have budged yet. Lenvy: I guess that being a dungeon slave is first class royalty for Carrie Slondsbid, even though I'm not her! Patrick: You're getting better at that whole "I'm not Carrie" thing. Lenvy: Please let me go. I did nothing wrong. Patrick: We're not going to hurt you but we're not letting you go either. (Lenvy takes the food and shoves it in Patrick's face and makes a run for it. He screams because it slightly burns him.) (In the hallway near the locked room a bigger thug stops her by picking her up.) Thug:Boss she didn't go far. (Patrick returns with food all over his face. He quickly begins to wipe it up with the napkin he had already placed for her.) Patrick:Just whenever I thought that I was warming up to you, you have to go and shove food in my face. (Patrick throws the plate against the wall shattering it into numerous pieces.) Patrick:You can finish that mess and we're going to keep a closer eye on you. (Lenvy is thrown back into the cell) Lenvy:Won't anyone get me out of here? _______________________________________________________________________ (Blake shields London's vision with his hands back at the lakeside canopy.) Blake:I have one more romantic surprise for you. London: It can't be any better then what you have already given me. (Blake opens his hands to have her see a small private yaught.) Blake:This boat is ours for the whole night. I thought that we could spend some more alone time. (Blake and London enter the boat and make their way towards the bed room quarters.) Blake:We have nothing to worry about. The captain of the ship or whoever is driving won't bother us at all. (Blake shuts the door behind the captain's quarters.) Blake: (to the captain)We’re going to need our privacy. (The captain turns out to be Nan.) Nan: (to herself)Welcome to UssNan! A round trip to revenge. (Nan begins to laugh evilly.) Join us next time for another exciting episode ofP O I N T P A L A C E Next on Point Palace: - John tries contacting London to tell her how he feels. - Carlos learns about Owen's accident and is not pleased to find Dr. Quarr taking care of his friend. - Carrie makes her presence known to Dylan and Alley. - Alexia finds out that Blake and London are in danger but can't leave Owen's side. - Nan puts her revenge into action! © 2000-2003, 2007
  4. Previously on Point Palace: -After Ava taunted Ike to pull the gun trigger, Ike pulls it in hopes of saving an unconscious Vicki who is trapped in Jake's casket. -Juliana doesn't care about Lenvy and tells the Irish thugs that she's not paying the ransom. -Nan blackmailed Will to get some deadly items to use against Blake, London, and Alexia. -Jenny sat alone at her table until she was joined by Dr. Quarr, when Carlos left work early to go on his date he arrived to The River Teal to find them together placing him in a bad position. -Owen tried to get back Nan who denied him. He then tried to talk to Alexia but he felt ignored by her so he decided to take matters into his own hands as Alexia sees Owen about to jump off his room roof. -Dylan tells Alley that he thinks Carrie has returned as he thought that he saw her walk out of the cafe. -John began to fall back in love with London and is confused on rather or not he should ask her to marry him. -Blake fixed everything with London and wooed her by a candle lit dinner at the river banks with Alexia's help. He wanted to never have her leave him so he got down on one knee and asked her to marry him. Episode 52:Answer to My Question Creator & Head Writer: Matt Politylo Logo Designer: Mary Zimmerman ________________________________________________________ (London is shocked by his question as Blake stands on the wet grass with his knees. The wind from the cool night rustles through London's hair, while the river's water lightly laps next to them.) Blake: Will you? London: Yes I'll marry you. (Blake slips the ring on her fourth finger) Blake: You don't know how happy you have made me. London: I love you. Blake: And I love you. (Blake and London kiss) London: It's beautiful. This ring is truly beautiful. Blake: Just like our love. This symbolizes how much we mean to each other. I know that we are young but I don't want to lose you. London: You won't lose me. Blake: Maybe I should say nothing will come between us. London: Please don't jinx us. Blake: This time everything will go right for us. London: We can only hope. (Blake and London hug each other) _________________________________________________________ (Carlos hides behind the wall of the fancy restaurant and calls Agatha from his cell phone.) Agatha: Hello Cody Memorial Hospital, this is fourth floor. How may I help you? Carlos: Hi it's me. Agatha: Hey you. How is your date going? Carlos: It's right about to go straight to hell. Agatha: Why? Carlos: Dr. Quarr is here. Agatha: He is? Carlos: Yes and he is sitting with my girl friend which makes it worse. Agatha: Carlos calm down. Carlos: What should I do? If I go over to confront him then he could have me fired but if I don't go over then my girl friend will be so mad at me. Agatha: I have an idea. Carlos: What? Agatha: Nick is a doctor so of course doctors do get pages from the hospital. Carlos: That's a great idea but wouldn't it seem suspicious if you paged him and there wasn't an emergency? Agatha: Yeah you're right but it's the only thing that I could do. Carlos: Actually I have an idea. Agatha: One that is nonviolent? Carlos: Yep, let's just say that it might put a damper on whatever he's trying to pull. (Carlos hangs up.) ______________________________________________ (Dylan and Alley begin to talk to Ginny at The Palace Cafe.) Dylan: What did that girl get? Ginny: The one who just was here? Dylan: Yeah. Ginny: She ordered a Hinsu Ginsu Mocha. Alley: Those names are really funny. Ginny: Funny, corny, and appetizing to the common teenage yuppie. Alley: Oh so we're yuppies. Ginny: Not you two. You two are like my favorite customers. Dylan: Thanks Ginny. Ginny: Why do you want to know what that girl got? Do you know her or something? Alley: Dylan thinks that it's his ex girl friend and my ex best friend who left this town some time ago. Ginny: Oh. Dylan: And she always used to get Hinsu Ginsu Mocha. Ginny: I don't remember seeing her here before. Dylan: It was some time ago. Ginny: I've only worked here for about five or six months. Dylan: That was the time she left. Ginny: Then that's why she doesn't look familiar. Alley: Dylan why can't you just let it go? Dylan: Because. Alley: Whatever. Dylan: I seriously believe that Carrie has come back to Point Palace! ________________________________________________________ (Patrick comes back into his secure dungeon to check on Lenvy who is sitting on the ground with her head curdled between her knees.) Patrick:You're still alive so that's a good thing. Lenvy: Who was that woman? Patrick: Oh I'm not falling for the whole "who was that girl" trick. Lenvy: I'm serious. (Patrick turns his back to her which makes Lenvy notice a cell phone hanging from his waist.) Patrick:You're making this so difficult for all of us. (Lenvy moves in closer to Patrick.) Lenvy:I can make things a lot more comfortable for you. Patrick: Unless you have money to pay for your own ransom then I seriously doubt it. (Lenvy places her hands on his neck and moves them down to his hips and slowly grabs the cell phone) Patrick:We can't do this. Lenvy: (flirtatious) Too bad. (Patrick turns around as Lenvy hides the cell phone behind her back) Patrick:You're up to something but don't worry your trapped in Ireland forever darlin’. (Patrick leaves.) Lenvy:Sure I am. Darlin’! (Carlos begins to follow a waiter to Jenny and Nick's table, making sure not to be seen.) Nick:It looks like your date didn't show. Jenny: Are you sure you are not a detective? Nick: I'm just observing. At least you have somebody here. Jenny: One is the loneliest number. Nick: Except for there's two of us. (Nick begins to place his hand on top of Jenny's) Jenny:Two people who don't even know each other. (Jenny quickly pulls out of his grasp) Nick:We haven't even received our drinks yet. (Jenny notices the waiter) Jenny:Actually here they are. (The waiter begins to place the drinks on the table until Carlos covers his face with a napkin that he grabs from a close table and knocks the waiter over, having the drinks spill all over Nick) ________________________________________________________ (Nan begins to collect her stuff in a backpack when Will's cell phone rings as Will is getting more stuff for her from the closet in his dorm room.) Nan:Your phone is ringing. Will: Then answer it. Nan: Okay. Hello? (There is no answer on the other line.) Nan:Hello? (Nan hangs up the phone) Nan:Fine then don't talk to me. (Will returns as Nan hands him back the phone.) Will:Who was that? Nan: No one said anything on the other end. ________________________________________________________ (Lenvy stares at Patrick's cell phone) Lenvy:You're my only hope Will, only what girl are you with? ________________________________________________________ (Vicki wakes up to total darkness.) Vicki:Hello? (Vicki begins to scream and bang on her concealed area) Vicki:Anyone out there? (Vicki begins to feel the top) Vicki:Can anyone hear me? (Vicki begins to move around.) Vicki:Yeah like anyone can hear me. What the hell feels so lumpy? (Vicki begins to squirm around until she feels that there's another person with her which makes her scream with terror when she opens up the flashlight that Ava gave her. She moves it around and places it on the object she was feeling.) Vicki:No...no way! Jake! __________________________________________________________ (John sits alone in his room, looking at his engagement ring for London.) John:I'm crazy for doing this, but I know that she would say yes. How could she not refuse? A life with me and a healthy family. (John begins to have a flashback of a date that he once had with London in Ohio as they begin walking back to John's house) London:What was all of this for? John: Dinner and a movie wasn’t all that special. London: It was for me. John: It should be it cost me an arm and a leg! London: You're too cute. John: I love being with you. London: I know that we have had this conversation before. John: We probably have. (They reach John's door.) John:My parents are out of town. My brother's here but he's leaving soon. London: I don't think that they would mind if I stayed the night. That is if I stay the night. John: You don't expect me to sleep alone do you? London: Believe me you'll have wonderful sleep. (The flashback ends leaving John with a comforting feeling of hope.) John:She has to say yes. She just has to! (Someone knocks on John's door.) John:That's probably her now. (John opens the door and John seems shocked.) ________________________________________________________ (Nan collects her belongings from Will's room and begins to leave.) Will: You need to keep this stuff on the down low. If you get caught with it I could seriously be expelled, let alone arrested. Nan: Yeah like I would just walk around with all this stuff. Will: Who are you using this against? Nan: That's none of your business. Will: Fine, but if you get caught- Nan: The word "if" is not a part of my vocabulary. Will: I'm sure you have used it before. Nan: I'll use it in this sentence. If I get caught I'll bring you down with me. (Nan takes the backpack and heads for the door before she leaves she turns around to face him with glaring eyes.) Nan: Will, I always get what I want. Will: Even if it means destroying the lives of others? Nan: I have heard so many people say that to me before. Somehow it doesn't really phase me. Why am I getting a lecture from you Will? You've done worse things then I have. You've killed someone, that's something that even I haven't done...yet at least. I think you need to ask yourself how many lives you've ruined! (Nan leaves Will's room slamming the door behind her.) ___________________________________________________________ (Nick stands up, drenched in water.) Nick:You fool! Waiter: I'm sorry it was an accident. Nick: You should be fired. Waiter: I'm sorry sir but someone bumped into me by accident. Jenny: It wasn't his fault! Nick: Whatever. (Nick leaves to go and dry off in the bathroom and Carlos turns around to face Jenny.) Jenny:Do you know how late you are? Carlos: Do you know who you were eating dinner with? Jenny: Obviously not you! Carlos: We have to leave. (Carlos takes Jenny's hand as they both make an exit for the glass elevator.) Jenny:Carlos you have some explaining to do! (Nick comes out of the restroom after quickly drying himself off and sees Jenny leaving with another person.) Nick:That better not be Carlos! _____________________________________________________ (The rain comes down on Blake and London as they begin to dance slowly with one another.) Blake:The rain can sometimes make things so romantic. London: It's not raining that hard. Blake: We could go over to that canopy. London: You knew that this was going to happen didn't you? Blake: I had a hunch. (Blake and London run to the canopy which is lit with candles that Alexia had set up for the two of them.) London:This is seriously way too much. Blake: This is only the beginning. ________________________________________________________ (Ike looks at the casket and realizes where Vicki is but the night was making the cemetery hard to make out.) Ike: (to Ava)I hate you. Ava: Bring it. (Ike and Ava begin to strugle over the casket.) Ava:You're going to be in there with it. Ike: You would have to kill me first before that happens. Ava: It'll be arranged. Ike: Try it. I guarantee you don't have the guts! (Ike takes the gun and bashes Ava in the head with the handle as she slides into his arms unconscious.) ________________________________________________________ (Alexia begins to plead with Owen while others join to watch him standing on the roof of his dorm.) Alexia: (screaming)Owen don't jump! Owen: Get away from me. You have no time to care. You’re too busy planning your social life to care about what your own brother’s going through! Alexia: (pleading) Please just safely come down from there. (Others watch Owen as Alexia goes into a panic state.) Alexia:Somebody go and get the police, IMEDIATELY! Owen: There's no need for them. If I can't have Traci, then I don't to deserve to live! Alexia: That's not true! (Owen jumps off of the room roof, while Alexia screams. His body hits the wet ground with a thump. Alexia runs over to him and holds on to his body as she sobs.) Join Us Next Time For Another Exciting Episode ofP O I N T P A L A C E © 2000-2003, 2007 Next on Point Palace: - John and Carrie discuss the future for Dylan and Alley. - Dylan's obsession with Carrie annoys Alley even more. - Nan puts her plan into emotion with London and Blake as targets. - Vicki's still trapped but Ike needs Ava alive. - Carlos hets up his response to Jenny with sex. - Will tries looking for Lenvy but her mother won't budge. - Alexia worries over her brother who could very well be dead.
  5. In Cody, Colorado lies a private college where students are anything but studious. Lies, love, and murder are the main subjects that will be taught! College Never Looked This Good! Debut: November 10th, 2000 SONBC Debut: May 4th, 2007 Current Season: Season 5 debuting on August 24th, 2007 Creator & Executive Story Consultant/Head Writer: Matt Politylo Logo Designer: Mary Zimmerman Copyright 2000, 2007 MP Productions
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