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  1. The first girl I've never heard of but she's quite pretty. You know I'm happy to see Chris and Jody getting bumped up to contract status. I always thought they should've been up there with the dayplayers because they were getting tons more scenes then other contract players.
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    Casting News

    Though some cast members may be departing from the series, three are getting contract roles. Andrew Levitas plays Blake's past friend Nate Mavick who seems to have one thing on his mind. Heather Papinchak last seen playing Carrie in the Pilot of Point Palace, has rejoined as lesbian Sky Safford. Sky will be hooking up with another cast member. Days of Our Lives star Joy Bisco joins the cast as the mysterious but sexy Mika Tomukuzai. Other cast members who might be taking a leave of absence include Sarah Lancaster (Carrie & Lenvy), Lacey Chabert (London), Ryan Gaus (John Snaldry), Dani Rowley (Alley), Matt Di Angelo (Owen), and Lorena Chacon (Nan Sheridan). All are having their contracts reviewed. Check out these new cast members when Point Palace returns September 4th with all new cliffhangers that will leave you wanting more!
  3. The series keeps getting better and better. Poor Jodie is obviously in for a whirlwind of trouble if she gets caught up with Ty but I'm enjoying her naitevity. I felt really bad for Chris who was getting his heart broken from Lauren. I think that Lauren and Chris should be a couple. He seems genuine (so you must be doing something right with your male characters!!!) This love triangle sort of reminds me of the G/O/T love triangle on PP. Our writing styles are very similar. Mona is just plain creepy and I love it. You never know what she's going to do next and reading what she was doing to Danny was just plain scary. She reminds me of a cross between Helena Casadine meets James Stenbeck. Can't wait to read what happens next and I can't wait for SONOP to premiere!
  4. This was an action packed episode! I LOVED it. The second catfight between Sabryn & Ashley was so much better than the first. You could really feel the animosity between the two enemies. When Bryan entered to break it up, wow was that a good cliffhanger ending!
  5. The one thing I've noticed from this episode is that the females seem to have more power than the males, with the exception of Ty. I think that the guys need to have more emotion instead of being sex toys...which could be an interesting plot. Other than that, I'm liking how Mona's storyline is coming to place. The ending was eerie but exciting. And Alexis and Mike remind me so much of Alexia and Owen.
  6. Uh oh Sabryn made a big mistake firing Natalia. Knowing her mantality, the claws are going to come out and things are going to get dirty. I really am hoping Mona and Ty become enemies. The only way I could see the two being friends if they\'re working to destroy something or someone. The title btw, was funny. I was expecting it to be a sexual charged episode but it was still good.
  7. Here are a few previews that I can give you for the next season. Without giving anything away of course...James's exit was storyline driven because with no Peggy or Laney then it would just be the two of them and I thought that it was boring. However, his exit will affect her heavily. The GOT drunk catfight scene was written in last miniute because originally it was just O and T dancing together and that wasn't exciting. So I thought to maybe give Ginny a backbone and what better way to do it other then getting her drunk. John McCook seems very interesting as a choice for Benjamin. I could see that with the Susan Flannery planning. John's character, ever since the first episode, is a smart alec photographer. I always stayed true to his character so any funny lines or sarcastic lines that I can give him, I do. That was thanks to someone who played him in the demo showed me how much of a comical relief the guy can be amongst all of the drama. Dr. Harnlo has her reasons for hiding what she's hiding as it is a huge secret. She's a better doctor than Dr. Quarr persay as she has a lot more ethics. I thought the 'B' scene was comical because Brandon just wants to beat the hell out of Will and of course Will would be ready to throw down. A Trella/Lenvy pairing actually does sound pretty interesting and could be pursued. Out of all of the cliffhangers I've written this one was my favorite. (I always imagined Will flicking the cigarette in slow motion.) I think that what's great about it is that every character could be affected by Nan's plan, including herself. A lot will be happening the next season thanks to the resident's number one bitch.
  8. Hey it was the first time I checked out your blog and I'm a fan. Novi reminds of me of what "Generations" would be if it were on today. I do like the B.P. storyline, very intriguing.
  9. Ewwwie Mona is one nasty biatch! The episode was short and this is funny coming from me because of the length of episodes that I write, shorter is always better to read. Mona's threat at the end was chilling and the scene played out very well. Mona's graphic was well done and easy to picture. As I said before, I'm really liking the Lauren and Chris pairing. They have the makings that make me think that they could be a powerful supercouple. Plus, Chris seems to be getting more lines then other dayplayers. Good job! Keep up the good work.
  10. Yep you're right Ashley is very much like Peggy...which gives me an idea!!!! Other than that the episode was nice and the writing felt the same.
  11. Previously on Point Palace: - Peggy was hauled off to an insane asylum but before she went, she admitted to James that she was always in love with him and how jealous she was of both Laney and Ava. James and Ava wants her gone and when she is put in the back of the truck, she screams how "she'll always be misses Peggy Vaughne." Officer Wendell gets the whole story and finds out what really happened to Laney. James informs Ava that the saga with Peggy is officially over. - London and Tanisha try to convince Alexia to tell her mom about what happened. She was reluctant to do it but got good news when Blake called and offered her a job to plan the gala. She willingly accepted only if Tanisha would help her. - John and Alley decide to want to leave "Point Palace" just to get away for sometime, but Dylan tries to stop them. He then brings in someone who could...Blake. Blake tries to reason with Alley and threatens John by telling him that if he leaves and takes Alley with him, then he won't see his child when the baby is born. - Carlos didn't listen to Jenny's ultimatum to leave the show so she watches from a far as both C.C. and Carlos have a bed scene together. Carlos tries to talk to Jenny but is interrupted by C.C. who unveils a sexy bikini for their next scene. Jenny leaves the set and Carlos is left confused and hurt. - While shopping with Lenvy, Will runs into Carrie and for the first time Carrie and Lenvy see each other. They both faint but then regain conciseness and meet each other. Both want to be friends with one another and Carrie tells Will that although she despises him, she likes his taste in woman. - Nan finds out about Blake's plans for the gala and begins to have flashbacks of all of the battles they had. From the time until they broke up to the most recent incident of the boardroom battle, she is determined not to give up. She then gets an idea to have one last battle! - After calming down about Frank kidnapping Alexia, he then goes back to his love triangle with Ginny and Tanisha. Ginny makes plans with him but then Owen also agrees to go out with Tanisha at the same time. And both girls live next door one another. When the time comes, he asks himself. Which door will he choose? Episode 78: Heartbreak, Exits, and Nan's Revenge (Season 3 Finale) Executive Story Consultant & Head Writer: Matt Politylo Logo Designer: Mary Zimmerman ____________________________________ (Owen walks into the door and looks at Ginny. She is happy to see him there.) Owen: You know how I feel about you. Ginny: And you know how I feel about you. For someone who lied to me, I forgave you, easily. Owen: And I appreciate that. I love you. (Owen disapears and Ginny wakes up in total darkness. She hadn't even gotten ready for her date with Owen. He was a little late. There is a knock on her door. Ginny looks in the mirror and mats her hair down a bit. She looked fine enough to just hang out, and if that lead to other things, so be it. Ginny opens the door and Owen stands in front of her with a stoic look upon his face.) ________________________________________ (Later that night, Ava rings James's doorbell. Wearing a jacket and jeans, he answers it. The night is a bit chilly and Ava folds her arms in her chest and clings on to the thin sweater she has on.) Ava: May I come in? James: Sure. (Ava walks in. She looks around and sees luggage everywhere. The house is practically bare.) Ava: You sounded so serious on the phone. James: That's because I was. Ava: Do you seriously think that this is the best thing to do? James: My reputation is tarnished. My colleagues, the ones that respected me, talk about what happened behind my back. Ava: Screw them. How do you think I felt? All of my friends and the students looked at me differently because they thought I was a killer. James: Then you have a hell of a lot more guts then I do to stay here. Ava: Where did all of your stuff go? James: Right after Peggy was hauled off and you had left, I decided to give my house to someone who actually needed it. Ava: Like who? James: The name doesn't matter, what matters is, it sold at market value. Ava: What? That is absolutely crazy! It takes like months to sell a house. James: You are such a smart girl. Someone will eventually buy it. I just want to leave as soon as possible. The rest of my stuff is in a van. Ava: Shouldn't you be here for the buyer? James: Would you want to buy a house where someone died in? I think not. The doors will be locked and the neighbors will watch the house from time to time. (James proceeds to take some boxes and luggage to his car. Ava follows.) Ava: Just like that? What happened to the smart psychologist professor who helped me when I needed him the most? Everyone is gone and out of our lives. You and I can live happily ever after! Why won't you let that happen? (James continues to pack his things in his car.) James: Ava you're living in a fantasy world. I know how you feel about me and I can't say that I don't feel the same way, but it just would never work out. Ava: The age difference is obviously bothering you. It didn't when we were messing around behind your wife's back. James: Then Laney died. Here. In this house. Ava: Please don't leave me here. I'm lost without you. James: Ava you are the smartest girl I know. One of the best student's ever. I know for a fact that you're not in the least bit lost. (James puts the last box into his car and goes back to the door. All of the lights are off except for one that lights up the curtains in the inside of the house. Just to look like someone is in the house. James turns the key and locks it.) Ava: What about a job? Where are you going to stay? Have you thought that through? James: If I gave you the keys to the house do you want it? Ava: Are you serious? You would do that for me? James: Of course. Ava: There are too many memories here and I'm sure that your dead ex-wife would haunt me in my sleep. James: Then you know why I'm leaving. But, when everything was going down, I applied to a bunch of colleges and offices. I found somewhere that was in dire need of someone. I jumped at the opportunity. Ava: You mean to tell me that you knew all this time that you were going to leave Cody and Point Palace? So then I was left in the dark. James: I was going to tell you eventually. Ava: When? In a postcard? (James leans in and kisses Ava one last time.) James: The house is locked up and I suggest that you go home and get some sleep. Ava: So that's it? You're leaving. Was I just some mistress to you? James: You were special to me. Goodbye. Ava: (pleading) Please don't go! (James opens the car door and starts the car. He looks at her as he starts his car up. He then drives away, passing Ava's truck. Ava freezes and can't believe that he is leaving her. She watches with tears streaming down her eyes. She then falls to her knees crying.) _____________________________ (Owen hasn’t made himself quite at home in Ginny's room. The mood is tension filled though. He continues to lean against the door frame, crossing his arms.) Ginny: What's wrong? Owen: It's funny. You know when something is wrong, even when I don't say a word. Ginny: Wow. What an introduction. Not even a simple hi or hey or I missed you so much. Owen: We need to talk. Ginny: This doesn't sound good at all. Owen: How did you feel when I lied to you about not being British? Ginny: I was upset. I slapped you across the face. You deserved it. Owen: You hated me at that point. Ginny: This is my dream all over again. Owen: You had a dream about me? Ginny: Yeah but it's not the way that I dreamt it. You and I aren't going at it. (Owen snickers.) Ginny: It was in the past. We can forget about it and move on. Owen: Do you want to hit me again? Ginny: No. What is going on? Owen: I just feel as if you and I should just be friends. Ginny: Fine. Then I feel the same way. Owen: Good. (Owen swoops in for a hug, but Ginny declines.) Ginny: Don't touch me. Like you said...we're just friends. Owen: Then I'll see you around campus. Or in the cafe. I'm sorry. I seem to say that a lot to you. Ginny: No. Don't apologize. I feel the same way. Just didn't see it coming. Owen: I'm- Ginny: Don't apologize. Just go and sever up your dignity. Be a man about it. Don't worry about me Owen. I'll be just fine. Besides, what are friends for? (Owen feels weird but smiles at her wanly. He then leaves and looks at Tanisha's door.) Owen: And the winner is. Door Number two. (Back in Ginny's room. She hugs herself and begins to eat some ice cream.) Ginny: Of course. I get hurt once again. (Owen knocks on Tanisha's door. She opens it and smiles.) Owen: I just broke up with Ginny. I realized that you're the girl I want. Tanisha: Just shut up and kiss me. (Tanisha pulls Owen in for a romantically entwined kiss. They almost fall over but Owen kicks the door behind him.) _ (Alexia is on her phone with a clip board in her hand. People are frantically moving around placing decorations everywhere.) Alexia: Tanisha if you get this message, when you're done with trying to go after my brother, please call me back. The decorating committee is staying late and if you could maybe swing by later to help then that would be awesome. Everything is looking nice and I hope that you're having fun. (Alexia hangs up with Tanisha's answering machine.) Student: Where do you think I should place these banners? Alexia: Just place them along the wall. Except for the welcoming one. That should be in the upper middle balcony. Please be careful putting that up. (The student exits. Alexia turns around to find Blake in front of her. Lanoi, Benjamin, Bryan, and Dylan are behind her.) Blake: And here is our decorator future wedding slash party planner, Alexia Newlan. Alexia this is Secretary Lanoi Dickson, Treasurer Benjamin Cliffside, the new presidential assistant who came up with this idea, Dylan. And vice president Bryan Daniels. Alexia: It's nice to meet you all. Dylan, it's good to see you again. Lanoi: Do you mind if we can get a tour of what the gala will look like? Alexia: Sure thing. Bryan: I thought I read somewhere that you had an assistant with you. Is he or she around somewhere? Alexia: She will be here later. She’s busy. Benjamin: I like it already. It's hip and trendy. It's what the kids want these days. Great idea Dylan. Dylan: This is only half of it. I'm sure after we talk to Alexia, she will make it sound and look even better. Blake: Alexia, please lead the way. Alexia: Follow me. (Alexia and the others walk off. Bryan looks around before he leaves and spots Nan. She nods at him as they go off. A student hands her a box.) Student #2: What are you doing standing around? Get to work. Here why don't you go place some napkins around the table. Nan: Sure thing. (The student exits. Nan throws the box on the ground.) Nan: Yeah right. (Nan begins to snoop around. She walks toward a giant waterfall. It's empty, but sure enough, it would be filled with rushing water. She then goes into the back of kitchen. The light is on.) Nan: What's this? (She finds a switch to turn the waterfall on, it has varying speeds. Nan lightly touches it. Nan also notices a line of gas ovens.) Nan: This is going to be perfect! __________________________ (The next morning, John and Alley begin to pack their stuff into John's car. Alley has all of her stuff with her. Only a suitcase and a duffel bag as does John.) John: Are we doing this or what? Alley: It's not like we're leaving for good. Just for a few weeks and if that turns into a few months and maybe a few years so be it. John: It will feel good to be out of here as soon as possible for as long as possible. We should go to a place that's not full of...petty bull- Alley: Deception. Somewhere where we can't get hurt. John: Plus you and I can reconnect again. Alley: Look, I'm not sure if I have said this before, but if I haven't, I'm going to say it now. I'm sorry. I'm sorry for that stuff that I did to you with Dylan. It was a mistake and I apologize. John: You're already forgiven. Remember I’m cutting the tough guy act? Alley: Then I guess that's it. (John's cell phone rings.) John: Hello? Carrie: Hey. What's this I hear you're leaving? John: You and your ex pushed us to do it. Or whatever he is to you now. Everyone has tried to make us stop but guess what we're not. Our classes have been postponed, our rooms will still be here if we decide to come back and retrieve some more stuff. We need a break from this whole lying scheme of things. It's so bad that I even think the bathroom mirrors are two faced. (Alley grabs the phone off of John.) Alley: Why do you have to call him? Carrie: Trying to make you two see that- Alley: That what we're doing is some sort of mistake? Save it. Everyone's been preaching that one. I'm surprised that London hasn't yet. Carrie: Could you just be rational for once? Alley: Rational? Were you being rational when you slept with Dylan? (John grabs the phone back off of Alley.) John: Carrie, look, Alley and I have a bus to catch and we're going to somewhere in Philadelphia. You basically know our plans and there will be no need to go and look for us. So don't call back because I'll ignore all of your phone calls! Bye slut. (John hangs up the phone.) Alley: You ready? John: Are you? Alley: Wait. (Alley pauses and looks around the room.) Alley: Yeah I'm serious about it. John: Let's get the hell out of here! For a short time or forever. Just as long as we're gone. (Alley walks out first and John shuts the door behind him.) __________________________________________ (London is alone in her room. She dials a number on her cell phone and calls Dr. Harnlo.) London: Hi Doctor Harnlo, it's London Tyler Hammerton. Dr. Harnlo: London. How are you doing? London: I'm doing fine, but I needed to talk to you about something. Dr. Harnlo: Please go on. London: I've been having sharp pains in my stomach. At first I thought it was the baby kicking, but it wasn't. Dr. Harnlo: Are you having any signs of bleeding? London: No. I wouldn't want to have you make a house call. Dr. Harnlo: I would love to, but I'm so busy in Ohio. London: Then that's fine. How about next week I'll fly in to see you? Dr. Harnlo: I advise that you do. Any time is fine for me. You're one of my special patients. London: Doctor Harnlo, you were one of the first people I told about my pregnancy. I couldn't tell my parents but if it wasn't for you, I wouldn't even be where I am today. Dr. Harnlo: Just being a good person as well as a good doctor. London: Everything is going great in my life. My marriage is top notch, he's the president of the school, my parents respect us. This beats sitting in Ohio waiting for John to come back to me with opening arms just because we weren't smart one night. Dr. Harnlo: It seems as if your happy with your new hubby. In speaking of John, are you two still friends? London: Yes. It's weird but we are sort of supportive of one another. He has his new life and I have mine. Dr. Harnlo: What do you plan on doing about the issue of who is going to be the father, because I remember how you told me that you wanted to strip John's parenting rights away from him, have you changed your mind at all? London: I...I don't know. Only time will tell. Dr. Harnlo: (stern) London. London: In the end, it'll all work out. I just hope and pray that my baby is okay. (London hangs up with Dr. Harnlo who buries her face in her hands.) Dr. Harnlo: You’re too happy and time’s running out to tell you the truth. ________ (Later that night, everyone is gathered at the gala. The ambience is beautiful. Dimmed lighting, nice decorations, and updated music. All of the students that attend are dressed up fancy, as if they were at a homecoming dance or a prom. There are people on the dance floor dancing and people sitting down on the side of the tables. Everyone seems to be enjoying themselves. The waterfall is in full stream. Blake is in the center of the entrance greeting everyone, with London on his left side and Alexia on his right, making sure that everything is going as planned.) Blake: Alexia you really outdid yourself this time. Alexia: Thank you. It took so much damn work and I can't wait to have a long sleep. London: You deserve it. (Alexia's cell phone goes off in her purse.) Alexia: Please excuse me. (Dylan comes up to greet them, with Carrie at hand.) Dylan: This. This is just awesome. Blake: You were the one who came up with the whole idea. Dylan: I have some bad news though. London: Great. Just what we need. Carrie: It's not that bad, but I know you'll freak out Blake when you hear it. Blake: Then what is it? Dylan: John and Alley left for supposedly Philly. We don't know if they're coming back or not. (Blake is angered by what Dylan has just told them.) Blake: You know I thought that acting like a brat would sink in to her. This is all his fault. Sorry London...and Carrie but John is truly ridiculous. He probably put it through her head. (to London) I'm glad you're not letting him see your child when they're born! ____________________________________________ (Nan and Bryan walk in together, but do not go directly to Blake.) Bryan: Do you have what you need? Nan: Of course I do. Bryan: Shouldn't we taunt Blake a little bit? Nan: I've done that enough over the years. It's time to get payback in the most drastic way possible! _____________________________________________ (Alexia goes off to the side and talks on her cell phone.) Alexia: Hello? Christina: Lexi? Alexia: Yeah. Mom is that you? Christina: Yeah. Where are you at? Alexia: A gala that I planned. Christina: I'm proud of you. Plus I heard about Frank. Alexia: You did? How? Christina: Owen. Alexia: That son of a bitch! Christina: I'm just happy that your safe and Frank's dead. Whenever Owen got hurt, what was the first thing I told you both. Alexia: You said- Christina: To call me anytime you were in trouble, but under the circumstances you were in, I know that it was impossible. Alexia: Wonderful. Anything else? Christina: Yes. Would there be a chance that you and Owen might be able to come home? Alexia: Not really sure. Classes are getting heavy and, I've just been busy. Is there something wrong? Christina: Yeah. I- I have breast cancer. _________________________________ (Ava walks in alone. Some people begin to look at her but she ignores them.) Ava: Whatever. (Ava walks up to Blake and London. She hugs both of them.) Blake: How is everything going for you? Ava: Got my heart broken. James left for good because of everything that happened. It turns out that he had it planned the whole damn time. London: And you were the last to know? Ava: Basically. London: There are tons of single college guys here. Surely you'll find someone. Ava: And maybe one of them will slip something into my drink and I can wake up with them zippering their pants back up and kicking me out of their frat house. Blake: Be nice. London: Most guys are ass holes. I totally agree with you and I hope that you’re safe. Ava: See Blake, us women understand each other. (Ava walks away. A female student walks up to Ava and taps her on the shoulder.) Female Student: Aren't you-? Ava: No I'm not who you think I am. Female Student: No. No. You're Ava Ceceleneli or however you pronounce your name. Ava: You pronounced it correctly. Female Student: What was it like to have an affair with a professor and then get involved with the whole murdering scandal? It is so deliciously scandalous. Ava: You're apart of the newspaper aren't you? Female Student: Gossip Columnist. Ava: Then you must work very closely with Leon Kain. I know him personally. If you don't leave me alone, I'll guarantee- More like promise, that you will not have a job anymore. Female Student: Sorry. Ava: It's okay. You're just doing your job. Let me ask you something. Have you ever had Professor Lowrie? Female Student: Yeah I had her for English 22. Why? Ava: Then I'm sure you, as well as the school. Cody, Colorado. And maybe even America, will know that Professor Peggy Lowrie, was the one who had planned to frame me. To make it look like I was the one who hurt her. She wanted to hurt her but Laney was killed accidentally. You already knew that though. She was hauled off to a mental institution yesterday. Admitted to always being in love with Professor Vaughne. Female Student: Thank you for that vital information. (Ava begins to walk away from her but then turns around.) Ava: Here's something that I want you to put in the Point Palace Inquiry. I should have taken a regular or maybe even a failing grade, because Professor Vaughne was lousy in bed. _______________________________________ (Carlos and Jenny begin to slow dance with one another.) Carlos: You're still mad about something aren't you? Jenny: Maybe. Carlos: Just let the music take us away. Jenny: You are so lucky that I even agreed to come here tonight. Carlos: I know that you like to dress up and go out. You always complain that I never take you out enough. (Jenny snickers.) Jenny: Listen to you. Carlos: (smiling) What? Jenny: You're making us sound like a married couple. Carlos: I also know another thing that you're complaining about. Jenny: Really? Carlos: Yeah and I did something about it. Jenny: Sure you did. Carlos: Actually I did. I decided to make a decision about your little ultimatum. Jenny: You quit the show? Carlos: I'm not saying that I did and I'm not saying that I didn't. Jenny: Then where's the proof? Carlos: I have a tape of the episode. You can see what I did. _____________________________ (On the back deck, Lenvy and Will lean over and look at the moon together.) Will: This is a romantic night. Lenvy: Are you being sarcastic? Will: In a way yes. And in a way...yes. Lenvy: I still can't get over the fact that I met Carrie. She looks just like me. What if we're like really twins or something. There's no way that would happen but, it would be kind of cool. Will: Yeah. (Trella and Brandon come from behind to talk to them.) Trella: Well, well, well. Don't we look all nice. Lenvy: You do look very pretty, Trella. Will: Hello again. Trella: This might just be the last time that you actually will see us ever again. Will: Why? Are you leaving? Trella: Not if you're life depended on it. Brandon: Trella, why don't you tell Lenvy and Will your great news. Trella: With pleasure 'B.' Will: 'B?' Is that 'B' as in 'bitch?' Brandon: No. It's 'B' as in I'm going to break your face if you don't shut up. Lenvy: Can't you two just get along? Every time you see each other it's like a damn fight has to break out. Trella: I've decided to take action against you Will. Lenvy: What? Trella: Lenvy you didn't follow what I said. I was willing to drop everything. Just to forget about it and move on. If and only if you left Will. We could have had the perfect friendship. Will: What kind of action? Brandon: This part is good. Trella: I've decided to tell the police about how you killed Zak. By tomorrow you'll be locked up and hopefully, someone's prison bitch. Maybe that's what the 'B' should stand for. __________________________________ (Back inside, Owen has a good time dancing with Tanisha. Ginny watches from a far. She smiles at the guys who give her an affectionate eye. Being legal enough to drink, she goes over to the bar and downs another drink. Before making her way to the new happy couple, she gets another drink.) Ginny: Let’s make this interesting. (Ginny walks over to Owen and begins to dance with him.) Tanisha: Excuse you? Ginny: It’s a party and we’re friends. Tanisha: Get off my man bitch! Ginny: Bitch? You’re callin me a bitch? Owen: Alright girls that’s enough. Ginny: Was it enough when you told me how he wasn’t a sexy British gent? Owen: (shocked) You told her? Tanisha: Um…yeah…maybe. She had a right to know. Ginny: All I know now is how selfish and pathetic you really are. (Ginny throws her drink at Tanisha who in turn slaps her across the face.) Owen: Girls! Stop it! You’re embarrassing me. (Both girls are ready to fight each other until a co-worker from The Palace Café pulls Ginny away. Owen looks at Tanisha who is drying herself off.) Tanisha: Don’t look at me like that. (Owen shakes his head and walks away.) __ (Blake takes a microphone and has a spotlight on him.) Blake: May I have everyone's attention. If everyone would follow me. We are going to have a fireworks presentation on the outside balcony. (All of the students and guests follow to the outside balcony. Lenvy, Trella, Brandon, and Will still are fighting.) Lenvy: This is so stupid and ridiculous! Will: I'm going to go and have a cigarette. As always...Trella, Brandon. Go to hell. Trella: See you there first! (The fireworks start. Everyone is mesmerized by them.) Carrie: Dylan, it's beautiful. Dylan: You're the one who is beautiful. (Carrie's cell phone goes off.) Dylan: Who is it? Carrie: Not a who, more like a what. It's some sort of stupid news alert that I get with my cell phone plan. Someone probably won the lottery or something dumb like that. It even picks up our school’s newspaper. (Carrie opens it and begins to read. She freezes with horror.) Dylan: What is it? Carrie: You're not going to believe this. A bus going to Philly, just crashed off of a bridge. There are no known survivors. Alley and John were taking a bus to Philly! They could have been involved! ____________________________________ (Behind them is the dark kitchen. One by one, Nan begins to turn on the gas pedals to all of the stoves. Nan then sneaks in further and finds the switch to the waterfall.) Nan: This is perfect. The room will be flooded. And everyone will think that Blake tried to have them all killed! This will teach him to mess with Nan Sheridan. (Nan fiddles with the switch until it's under full pressure. The waterfall begins to flood everywhere. Some wires begin to catch on fire, but not a lot of people are aware of it.) Nan: Goodbye Point Palace! (Nan gets a small gasoline can out of her big purse. She splashes it around everywhere.) Nan: Once the fire from the inside reaches back here. Everyone will be toast. Electrical fires are so much fun. Oops, someone turned all of the ovens on. That Blake Hammerton is so dangerous. (Nan goes through her purse again and calls Bryan.) Nan: What are you doing? Bryan: Watching everyone enjoying the fireworks. Nan: Did you do what I asked? Bryan: No, but I'm on it. (Bryan walks up to Blake who is watching the fireworks like everyone else. He then slips a packet of matches into Blake's suit pocket. It grabs Blake's attention.) Bryan: Just wanted to say that although we dislike each other, you sure did well for this school. Blake: Somehow I don't believe you mean that but thank you. _____________________________________________________ (Nan begins to walk away, until her dress becomes caught on the part of the stove. She tries so hard to turn off the stove, but can't reach it.) Nan: What the hell? (Nan begins to struggle with her dress, but it's still stuck. From a distance, Will is sitting on the front door step to the back kitchen. He watches Lenvy as she argues with Trella and Brandon.) Will: (to himself) She's fighting for me. Now that is true love. (Will flicks his cigarette out and walks away. The wind however blows it back into the kitchen. In slow motion, Nan notices it coming towards her.) Nan: (struggling even more) Oh no! (The path of the electrical fire, the open gas ovens/grills, and the gasoline trails meet with the lightly lit cigarette. Suddenly there is a gigantic explosion that engulfs all parts of the gala.) _______________________________________________________________ Who will survive? Find out next week on the season premiere of Point Palace.
  12. Hey Josh! I'm glad to see you back at the writing and like I said before, I miss All or Nothing! This is the first time I peeked at your blog and I love it. The openings are creative as are the plots. Love the young generation of friends storyline, it makes me think of what 2003 should have been. Keep up the great work.
  13. That Ashley is one conniving biatch! For some reason I'm not a big Jenn & Mike fan, I'd like to see him with Jodie. She seems to be more understanding to him other then Jenn who whines and moans to him. Nice episode!
  14. Previously on Point Palace: - Dylan decided that it was time to let John and Alley know the truth about what they did. Dylan tells them all about it and Alley freaks out at Carrie. The two begin to physically fight, while Dylan and John, try to break it up, a fist fight breaks out between them. John and Alley left together, but Alley had the final word by slapping him across the face and telling him that it's through. Later on, both couples thought of getting back together with their exes. - Jenny was bummed out while watching an episode of "Blue Crystal," and Carlos wanted to make her happy. The only thing that would make her happy is if he left the show for her. - Nan and Bryan got a shock of their lives when they found out that Nan was out as presidential assistant, from a 2 to 1 vote. Nan began to scream at everyone until Bryan calmed her down. They both said that they won't let Blake win. Blake however, told everyone that the right choice was made, and Dylan Colby (who has an idea to throw a gala) will be the new presidential assistant. - Lenvy and Trella had a run in at the cafe. Will told Trella that she doesn't know what Lenvy sees in her and Trella felt the same way. Both Brandon and Will almost went at it, but the girls wanted to be left alone. Trella gave Lenvy an altimatium, asking her to dump Will so that they can be best friends. - Alexia called Frank's bluff and told him that if he was going to kill her, he would have already done it. Owen found out what was going on and was worried about his sister's safety. Detective Miltner, Owen, London, and Tanisha all wanted to save her. Detective Miltner had a stakeout van and could see through the window that Frank was near. Using his parascope gun, he took the shot, and right before Frank could shoot Alexia, he colapsed to his death. Alexia was saved by everyone. - James and Ava spent an evening alone in James's upstairs bedroom that overlooked the living room. James went to brush his teeth and Ava thought he had returned when it was Peggy dressed in all black. She admitted to being in love with James and to accidentally killing Laney because they had something planned all along. Peggy then reveals a golf club and tries attacking Ava with it. James comes up from behind her and pushes Peggy. She falls over the railing and lands on top of the coffee table. <object width="425" height="350"><param name="movie" value=" name="wmode" value="transparent"></param><embed src=" type="application/x-shockwave-flash" wmode="transparent" width="425" height="350"></embed></object> Episode 77: Owen's Choice Executive Story Consultant & Creator: Matt Politylo Logo Designer: Mary Zimmerman ______________________________________ (The police are parked outside of James's home. Officer Wendell and other police men are searching around. Peggy is put on a stretcher. James and Ava watch as she is being put in.) Peggy: (to the male EMT) Wait! (The EMT stops wheeling her.) Peggy: James. James please come here. (Both James and Ava walk over to her.) Peggy: I just wanted you to know something. Only you but since she's here, she can hear what I have to say too. James: Words can't even express how angry and confused I am. Peggy: Of course you’re angry. You have every right to be. I'll clear up everything for you and make sure that you're not confused anymore. Ava: Tell James exactly what you told me. How you planned everything with Laney but accidentally brought her to her death. Peggy: Shut up. Please just shut up and let me talk for once. You always wanted to be in the spot light. (mocking) Oh James I need help, come save me. Oh James let's have an affair that I want everyone to find out about, so that they can talk about me and only me! Oh James I'm on trial for something that I didn't do- James: If this is what you wanted to tell me, then save it. Peggy: Just wanted to mach her, but no. I want to tell you that I've always been in love with you. I was always jealous of Laney. It should have been me. I should have been misses James Vaughne. James: It would have never worked out. You and I are only friends. Peggy: We'll still be friends right? (James is silent.) Peggy: Right? James: Whatever. Peggy: I know that someday you'll come find me. I'll still be in the hospital for that accident that was caused. I forgive you for pushing me over the railing. My love. You can do no wrong. Ava: You're insane. Peggy: And as for you...I will always hate you for coming between me and my man. James: (to the EMT) Take her away. (The EMT rolls the stretcher into the ambulance.) Peggy: (screaming) I am Mrs. James Vaughne! I will always be Mrs. James Vaughne! ________________________________ (London, Alexia, and Tanisha hang out in London's room. They are all dressed in their pajamas eating ice cream and watching TV.) Tanisha: Where's your hubby London? London: He's actually doing research on a new house or condo or apartment. Whatever we decide on what we're going to live in. Alexia: Which means that he's probably at a strip joint with Dylan. Nighttime isn’t usually when someone goes house hunting. London: He already had a bachelor party. He doesn't need another one. I told him that I wanted a girl's night out. I want you to get your mind off of everything that has happened to you. Tanisha: Exactly we're here for you. Alexia: Frank is dead for good and is probably rotting in hell. London: Did you talk to your mom yet about it? Alexia: Um... London: That's a big no. This has happened before. You and Owen hide so much from your mom that she's not going to trust you. Alexia: I'll tell her. I don't know how she's going to handle the fact that her ex-husband kidnapped and almost killed her daughter...again. Tanisha: He's dead, so that's a plus. Alexia: Now what’s going on with you and my brother? Tanisha: Well after your whole fiasco, we’re talking. Alexia: You know I’m rooting for you. (The phone rings. Alexia quickly answers it.) Alexia: Hello? Blake: Hey. Alexia: (Jokingly) Why Blake, what are you doing calling? I think your wife is getting suspicious. (London takes the phone off of Alexia.) London: How are the new living arrangements looking? Blake: There's this beautiful house that will be great for you, me, and the soon to be baby. I found it on a realtor site. It had a nice virtual tour. London: I'm getting closer and closer. Blake: I found it on a realtor site. It had a nice virtual tour. London: I’m sure it’s beautiful. Blake: Remember what I was telling you about earlier? Now that Nan's out, Dylan's in. Ask Alexia what we discussed. London: Sure thing. Love you. Bye. (London hangs up with Blake.) London: Blake wanted me to ask you something. Alexia: Oh yeah? London: It turns out that Dylan is the new presidential assistant and he suggested that the school has a gala. Blake wants to know if you will handle the decorations and such. Alexia: (to Tanisha) The wedding went off perfectly. What do you say? Tanisha: Let's do it! Alexia: London, you tell your husband that he has himself a deal! _________________________________________ (In James's living room, Ava sits down on the couch and sips on water. James and Officer Wendell walk in.) Officer Wendell: (to Ava) Please tell me again what happened. Ava: Why should I? You didn't believe me the first time when I was accused of killing Laney, so why would you believe me now? James: He's only trying to help. Ava: Fine. Basically James and I were alone, or at least we thought we were. Then Peggy came up and said that James was locked in the bathroom and that I was trapped. James: She put a chair in front of the door so I couldn't get out. Officer Wendell: How would she have even known that you were in there? How could she have even gotten into the home? Don't you have an alarm system? James: She knew the code. She was probably spying on us and waited for the perfect time to attack. Officer Wendell: Then what happened? Ava: When we were alone, she kept her hands behind her back the whole time. She was saying something about how I was always ruining everything for her. Officer Wendell: Ruining what exactly? Ava: Her chances with James. Officer Wendell: It's already been established that she is in love with James. Ava: After she confessed to setting something up with Laney to make me look bad, Peggy took out a golf club. Started to swing at me. Missed a few times and even hit a vase. James came from behind, pushed her, and she fell over the balcony. It was all out of self defense. James: I'm not an abusive person. Officer Wendell: Most psychologists aren't. Anything else Miss Cecileneli? Ava: Yeah. She didn't want Laney to die. She only wanted her to get hurt. In the end, I was the one who got hurt. I had my life torn to shreds. Everyone looks at me differently. Thinking did I kill Laney Vaughne or am I really innocent? Hopefully this will show everyone who the real psycho is. Officer Wendell: I have to owe you an apology. I had to arrest you because of the physical contact that you had with Laney. Everything was against you and I will admit that you shouldn't have gone through everything that you did. As for Peggy. She is being locked in a mental institution. Peggy Lowrie will get the proper help that she needs. James: To be honest with you. I don't ever want to see her again and I probably never will. She will be erased from our lives. Officer Wendell: Please have a good night. And hopefully we won't be seeing each other anytime soon. (Officer Wendell exits.) James: I should have known that Peggy wasn't all right in the head. Ava: Why is that? James: Because when she blinked...it was never often. Usually people that don't blink are what we like to call "mildly distorted." Ava: Hopefully it's all over now. Hopefully. _______________________ (The next day, John and Alley are in John's room, packing.) Alley: This is something that we seriously need. John: Yep. We can spend quality time with one another. Get to know each other all over again. (There is a knock on John's door. He answers it to find Dylan in front of him.) John: If you're here to try and win your ex back. Fat chance. It's even fatter then you lip. Dylan: No. I came to talk some sense into both of you. John: Leave. Alley: Let him in. (Dylan makes his way into the room and sees the half empty bags being packed.) Dylan: What the hell is this? Alley: What does it look like? John and I are fed up of this school and we want to leave. John: So if you will please excuse us. We have some more packing to do. Dylan: Please. I know that everything happened was hard but it doesn't mean that you have to go away from it. We can all work it out- Alley: And be friends? We tried that once and it doesn't work. Being civil didn't work either. Then that means that we'll remain enemies. Dylan: I knew you were going to be stubborn. If you're not going to listen to me, I know someone who can get through to you. John: Who? Carrie? London? (Blake walks into the room.) Blake: Her best friend! __ (On the set of "Blue Crystal," Carlos is half naked in a bedroom set with C.C. who is equally undressed.) C.C.: Miguel that was the best ever. Carlos: Every time is good with you. C.C.: And no girl or guy will come between us. Or between this. Henry: Cue Ian. (Gary opens the door and storms in.) Gary: Melanie, what the hell is this? (Everyone is shocked.) Henry: And cut. Print that. Take five people and we'll film Scene one of tomorrow’s episode. (Carlos shakes Gary's hand and puts a robe on. He then notices Jenny and walks over to her. He kisses her on the cheek and they sit down on one of the prop chairs.) Carlos: How are you doing? Jenny: Okay. Although it's hard to be here. A lot of people were nice to me though. Carlos: Well that's good. Jenny: I'm guessing that you didn't think about what I told you. Carlos: Why would you say that? Jenny: Maybe it's because you're still here. You're character is still in the show. Carlos DeViego is still playing Miguel Alejandro! Carlos: Jenny, you asked me to leave the show. This is something that means so much to me. It's a job that I absolutely love. Plus there's that little thing called a contract that I'm signed to. Jenny: Oh and I loved seeing you in a bed acting with your little slutty co-star. Carlos: It's- Jenny: It's only acting. We've already had that discussion. Carlos: Why can you just support me? I'm happy and I wish that you were too. Jenny: I feel really selfish and terrible for asking you. The reason why is because I'm worried of what this show will do to you and to us! Carlos: There is nothing to worry about. (C.C. walks over to join Carlos and Jenny. She is wearing a short robe.) C.C.: Hey you two. (Jenny ignores her.) C.C.: I hope that I'm not interrupting you but Carlos I needed your opinion on something. Carlos: Like what? (C.C. unveils her robe and has on a two piece tanned bikini on. It almost looks like she is naked.) C.C.: For the next scene, this makes the illusion of me being in the nude more realistic, right? Carlos: (taken aback) Yeah...I definitely think so. C.C.: Good. We need to rehearse. See you in a bit. Carlos: Now I need to go and practice for my next couple of scenes. Jenny: Why don't you both get some clothes on and stop running around like a pair of models in heat! Carlos: What? Jenny: Whatever. (Jenny storms off the set and slams the door behind her. Carlos is confused yet hurt.) ___________________________________ (Lenvy shops at a store in a local mall. She looks at shirt after shirt. Focused into what she wants to buy. Will follows behind quite bored.) Will: Do I really have to be here? Lenvy: You killed my best friend's boyfriend. She's not talking to me. Will: Don't you have some other girlfriends? Lenvy: Yes...but not as important as she. Will: Forget her. Lenvy: She gave me an ultimatum. Will: Her or me? Lenvy: Yep. Will: Do you know who you're going to choose? Lenvy: I'm not going to choose anyone. Life shouldn't be about ultimatums. And I will be sure to have both of you in my lives. Regardless of the past. Besides...you didn't have to come here. Will: It's not like I was forced. (Lenvy and Will walk further down the aisle. A girl not paying attention accidentally bumps into her.) Lenvy: Sorry. (It turns out to Carrie. Will looks at both of them and sees their resemblance.) Carrie: No problem. (They face each other and freeze.) Lenvy: You? Carrie: You? (Both girls faint after seeing one another.) ________________________________________________ (In Trella’s apartment, she looks over all of the information that she collected on Zak. Brandon comes up behind her with an upset look on his face.) Trella: What’s wrong B? Brandon: It pisses me off to know that Zak’s killer is walking around free. Trella: Believe me I feel the same way but Lenvy’s my girl. I just wish she’d see what a bastard he is. (Brandon pulls out a switchblade and begins to swipe at the air.) Brandon: Just one cut that’s all I want! You know that Zak would do the same for me, just like he did over Qwerty and your bro- (pausing) I’m sorry for bringing that up. Trella: It’s okay. Paco was never my true brother because that’s not family. Maybe that blade would work back in Queens but we’re at Point Rich Bitch! We need to get Will at his own game! _________________________________________________ (Nan sits alone in her room. Her hands are folded and she is in deep thought.) Nan: There is no way in hell I am going to let you win this battle! (Nan begins to have flashbacks of her past with Blake.) Nan: I cheated on you and I am sorry. Blake: Get out! Nan: I'm pregnant. Why don't you tell him Dylan considering you could be the father as well. Blake: I killed our child! Or at least I thought I did. It wasn't even mine! Nan: Let's try again at a better relationship. Blake: Yeah. I made you fall in love with me just to hurt you. The way you hurt me! Nan: This ship is going to blow up. And the only survivor is going to be me! Blake: I hate you! Nan: Have fun letting a no good rapist who killed our child and plays mind games to get what he wants, running your school. (The flashbacks of Nan and Blake's past ends when the phone rings. Nan answers it.) Bryan: What are you doing? Nan: Bored off of my mind. Bryan: You're always invited here. Nan: Just let the sex thing go. We can't do it all the time. Bryan: Bummer. Want to hear some news? Nan: I already read the Point Palace Inquiry. The story about me getting kicked off only made page three! Some murderer’s trial made front page! Bryan: Dylan Colby was made the new presidential assistant. Nan: (not surprised) Blake's right hand man. Bryan: Yeah and there's going to be some sort of gala thing. Nan: And? Bryan: If you're there as my date then the night will be a lot more interesting. Nan: Where is it being held at? Bryan: At the rec center. So what do you say? Nan: I'll say yes only on one big condition. Bryan: What's that? Nan: I'll go with you but I need to make. No no. Not make. I will make the biggest scene that will have Blake Hammerton look like the low life he really is! Guaranteed front page material. _____________________ (Alley is shocked and surprised to see Blake walk into John's room.) John: You're not welcome here. Blake: Damn shame. John: Do you plan on seriously being rude or would you like for me to have you thrown out? Alley: Stop it! Dylan: Yeah. We have more important issues to discuss. Blake: (to Alley) You really want to leave? Alley: Yes. Very much so. I found out that your best friend cheated on me with his ex-girl friend. John and I decided to get back together and I'm sure that it was the same thing for the lying duo over there. Dylan: Yeah we are. Two can play this game. John: And obviously you two did! Blake: John, I don't like you. John: We've already established that. Through London and through my baby! Blake: This is going to take everything in me to say it, but if you two decide to go out then I wish you would stay. Even you John. Alley: Look, just because you're the president, and you think that you can do whatever it is you want. You can't always get your way. We're going to get away and that's that! John: The girl has spoken. Now if you'll excuse us- Dylan: We're already leaving. Just tried to be caring and sincere. John: Maybe you should have thought of that before you slept with my girlfriend. And your now current ex! History sure has a funny way of repeating itself, especially with your track record. What gives Dylan? Can’t keep it in your pants? Dylan: Get over it. (Dylan exits.) Blake: The school board is throwing a gala for all of the students. It's in a couple of days. If I don't see you both there, then...then don't ever call me again! (to John) Once London has your child. They won’t even know who their real father is! ___________________________________ (Back at "Fashion Boutique" at the mall, Will helps up Lenvy and Carrie comes to as well.) Will: Lenvy meet Carrie Slondsbid. Carrie: Will? What are you doing here? Will: It's a mall. Being a bored boyfriend. Lenvy: You're the girl who everyone has compared me to. Carrie: Who are you? Lenvy: I'm Lenvy Elliot. You're supposed twin. Will: You two do look so much alike. Carrie: Might I ask what you're doing with Will Pazner? He's scum. Will: That's a compliment coming from you. Lenvy: Oh yeah that's right. You two did have some sort of past. Carrie: That was a long, long time ago. Lenvy: Everyone from this damn school has thought that I'm you. Dylan Colby. Alley Robberts. John Snaldry. Even Will thought that I was you playing a trick on him. Carrie: That would have been a good idea. Will: Now that you two have met. We should get going. Carrie: (sarcastic) I'm sorry that you were blessed with such good looks. Hey try to keep in touch, maybe we can play some games on people. Just kidding. It was nice meeting you and Will, although I don't like you. (smiling at Lenvy) I do like your choice in women. (Carrie leaves.) Lenvy: Do you suppose that somehow we are related? Will: Not in a million years. If you were, I'm sure that you wouldn't find me in the least bit attractive. ________________________________________ (Owen gets ready in his room for a special occasion. His cell phone rings.) Owen: Hey. Ginny: Hey you. Are we still on for tonight? Owen: You better believe it. Ginny: Great. Then I'll see you at eight? Owen: Sure thing. What room number? Ginny: Number twenty. Remember I want to get to know the real you! Bye. (Ginny hangs up with Owen. Owen's phone rings again.) Owen: Hi. Tanisha: So are we still on for tonight? Owen: I guess. Except- Tanisha: Except what? Owen: Nothing. (Owen begins to walk outside of his door,) Tanisha: Then I'll see you at eight. That'll actually be very soon. Owen: What room number are you? Tanisha: Twenty five. Don’t be late. Let’s not make this awkward between us anymore. Let’s just…see where it goes, ya know? Later stud. (Tanisha hangs up with Owen. He stops as he looks at both doors.) Owen: Tanisha or Ginny. Which door will I choose? _______________________________________________________________ The Ginny, Owen, and Tanisha love triangle finally comes to a close. Find out who Owen chooses on the Season Finale of Point Palace. Also, much more exciting things, with an ending that you won't want to miss!
  15. I was wondering where Ashley has been, she has that I don't take no for an answer attitude, that's likeable in a character. Same with Sabryn but all together a nice episode.
  16. Hey the longer the better in my opinion. I enjoy writing circle scenes. The Alexia/Frank scene was very exciting because Alexia is the type of person to call someone's bluff, she acts on impulse. Like I said before, they treated Frank like crap. It was seen in a prequel that I wrote in 2001 called Before Their Time. Other stories featured were Nan's cheating on Blake, Zak and Trella, Ike/Vicki/Jake, and there was another one but I can't remember what it was at the moment. In the episode with Frank, he makes dinner for them but Alexia throws it in his face. Owen purposely crashes his car. Frank admits to killing their father to be closer to their mother. He kidnapped them but their mother saved them by shooting him in the shoulder. He went to jail but was released on good behavior. Trella isn't a lesbo but in Season 4, someone else is, she feels vengeful towards Will as does Brandon who just wants to kill him! Yeah Benjamin and Lanoi never had this many problems when Howard was president but Bryan feels betrayed. Jenny always does that to Carlos, she's thrown many ultimatums at him but he knows deep down inside it's just her being insecure because from the beginning (ever since she was friends with Nan) she's always been. The next two episodes should be good!
  17. Previously on Point Palace: - Ava was cleared of all charges and could go on to live her normal life. She briefly saw Ike and Vicki in disguise but wasn't able to thank them. Peggy was upset about everything and was thrown out, when she sees Ava outside, Peggy tells her that everything wasn't over. - Ginny decided to maybe give Owen another chance after finding out that he wasn’t British. - Tanisha went to find Alexia in London's room but both begin to worry when she is no where to be found. London calls her and while she is still being tortured by Frank, and Frank warns her that if she does anything stupid then she'll have her head blown off. He points the gun to her head and London can tell that something is wrong. London tells Tanisha that they have to help Alexia. - Nan reads Bryan the paper and how the story made front page. They believe that it's the end of Blake's term and soon Bryan will be president and Nan will be made vice president. - Going behind Nan and Bryan's back, Blake has a secret meeting with Lanoi and Benjamin. He tells them that nothing happened, Nan's a liar, and that Blake's secretary Myra heard nothing and would prove it to everyone if she had to. Blake wants to fire Bryan but can' because the four members are under contract. He then decides to hold a three person vote (Bryan, Benjamin, and Lanoi) to decide whether or not Nan will stay. - Jenny films her last scene for "Blue Crystal" and makes an exit as Miguel breaks up with Melanie. Carlos, Cairinia, and Ian try cheering her up but she is still hurt. C.C. taunts her and tells her that the fans liked her as much as she did. When C.C. exits, she throws a glass at the wall, and out of hurt, begins to cry. - Lenvy and Will try to have a nice day at the cafe but can't when Trella comes along with a visitor. The thug looking, Brandon, turns out to be Zak's best friend from back home. He and Will almost get into a fist fight but Lenvy stops it and pleads with Trella to end what ever kind of war that could go on. She tells her that Will deserves to be brought down and that's exactly what Trella is determined to do! - John gets a phone call from his brother Guy and the two catch up on old times. John however almost crashes his car, when he sees Carrie's car in front of Dylan's room. - Carrie sees Dylan in his room, and he tells her that he needs to stop feeling guilty for what they did. Alley walks in on them and wants to know what is going on. Dylan claims that he has something that they need to tell them. John pops in too, and Alley asks "do you have something to tell us?" Will they tell the truth? Episode 76: Over Edged Executive Story Consultant & Creator: Matt Politylo Logo Designer: Mary Zimmerman _____________________ (Tension runs through the room. Carrie looks at Dylan with begging eyes.) John: Can somebody please tell me what the hell is going on! Alley: That's exactly what I wanted to know. It seems as if these two have been hiding something. At least that's what I got out of their conversation when I walked in on it. So do you need to say something? (Dylan looks at Carrie. She has a scared look on her face.) Dylan: Yes. Yes we both have something to tell you. Carrie: Dylan, there are other ways around this. John: Carrie, what are you talking about? Alley: Just spit it out? Are you throwing a surprise birthday party for one of us or what? Dylan: It's something that is much worse and much more serious then some party. Alley: Then what is it? Dylan: One night. It was the night when you and I were fighting. I walked out on you and ended up getting drunk. Alley: This isn't sounding good. Carrie: It gets worse. John: And how does it involve all of us? Dylan: That night, when I was still drunk. I went over to Carrie's room. We accidentally, kind of, sort of...slept together. ____________________________________ (Alone in Carlos's room, Jenny sits on his bed and watches television. Surprisingly "Blue Crystal" is on. Carlos walks in and sits next to her.) Carlos: It's weird watching yourself on television, isn't it? Jenny: Couldn't tell you. I'm not in this episode. Carlos: It was filmed two weeks ago, so you would be in at least one of them. Jenny: Great. (Jenny turns off the television.) Carlos: Getting boring for you? Jenny: Not at all. Carlos: What's bothering you? Jenny: Why would you even ask that question? Carlos: I'm sensing that it has something to do with the show. Jenny: If you only could have put that thought in your mind before you asked that stupid question. Carlos: Just trying to be the nice and respectable boy friend, but if you obviously don't want my help, then I'll just be leaving. Jenny: No. Sorry for being in a bad mood. Carlos: There was no way that I was going to leave. Never have and never will. Jenny: And I'm happy that you are here. For once you have a day off and you're not filming or spending any time with her. Carlos: Charissa? Jenny: (mocking) C.C. However the hell she wants to be known as. She mentioned to me that you had something to do with me getting on the show. Carlos: Yeah, I put in a good way for you. That’s all. I just wanted you to have something to do. Jenny: That’s great to know that Cairina didn’t want me, she was trying to help you out. Carlos: You don't have to deal with C.C. ever again. The only reason why I talked to Cairina was because I knew deep down inside you have talent. Jenny: Yeah okay…you're right by the way. I don't have to see that tramp, but you do. Carlos: What do you want me to do? Jenny: Leave the show...for me. ___________ (In the school's board room. Lanoi, Benjamin, and Myra wait patiently inside. Blake is outside talking to Bryan and Nan.) Bryan: What exactly do you think you're doing? Blake: It's not what I'm doing but what I did. Bryan: And that is? Blake: You went behind my back and pulled a little stunt so I went behind yours. Nan: Whatever you did was probably not as effective as what we did to you. Your reputation is ruined and your job is as well. Blake: The only thing that I was doing was being a president, a damn good one if that, and no way would I let you two try to get in the way. We'll just see about whose job will be ruined. (Blake enters the board room. Nan and Bryan come in behind them.) Blake: Lanoi, Benjamin, and Bryan have all voted on weather or not Nan stays on as Presidential Assistant. Nan: Why wasn't I informed about any of this. Blake: The same reason why I wasn't informed that you two were going to do what you did. Now I- Bryan: Wait a minute. I thought that it was only a survey. Blake: Unfortunately, you thought wrong. Myra would you please read me the results. Myra: Sure thing. (Myra opens the lid to a small box full of three papers.) Myra: Nan in. (Myra picks up another piece of paper.) Myra: Out. (Myra picks up another one.) Myra: The third vote...Out. A two to one vote that claims Nan Sheridan is fired from her job as Presidential Assistant. Nan: What? This is outrageous! Bryan: (to Lanoi and Benjamin) You two voted against her! How could you? Benjamin: Blake made a very convincing point, we were just expanding our new horizons and seeing that this new team, was working well together. Then you brought Nan into the mix and all of a sudden chaos pursues. Lanoi: Nan it was wonderful working with you, but Benjamin and Blake made me realize that maybe this isn't exactly something that you want to do. Also, lying is not a big thing to me. We know the truth. (Nan stands up.) Nan: This is bull! You all can just go to hell! Blake: Bryan, do you mind escorting the ex-Presidential Assistant out of the premises, or should I be forced to call security? Bryan: (to Blake) Good job. (Bryan takes Nan out as she is screaming her head off.) Nan: Have fun letting a no good rapist who killed our child and plays mind games to get what he wants, running your school. Blake: That's actually you Nan but please have your things packed by five o'clock today or they will be terminated. (Bryan takes Nan out of there.) Bryan: Everything will be okay, you just need to calm down! Nan: How could he? This! There is no chance in hell that I’ll let him win! (Back in the office, Blake and the others are cooling off from the recent scene.) Lanoi: What are you going to do as a replacement? Blake: Since, we didn't know the outcome of the votes, the person isn't here. His name is Dylan Colby and he is a fellow student and a great friend. He also has the best idea to throw a gala for the students. He is someone who is the most trustworthy and honest person you will ever meet. __________________ (In Dylan's room, Alley has her mouth wide open from what Dylan has just told her. Carrie is tearing up and John is flat out mad.) John: What did you just say? Dylan: Carrie and I- Alley: We heard you the first time. I told you that you should never double cross me and you both did. Carrie: Alley, I'm so sorry. Alley: I heard that pathetic 'I'm sorry' line the first time when you and Will had a little affair behind my back. What a friend you were then. Carrie: It was an accident and we have been feeling guilty about it ever since. John: Why? Is that why you had me drive you the hospital? You didn't think that you were pregnant by Victor, you thought that it could have been Dylan's! Alley: Dylan had me go to the hospital too. Bet you had a nice scare going on. Surprised that you even slept at all. Dylan: It was hard for everybody. Alley: Sure it was. I'm so sure that it was hard to look at Carrie and- I can't even think of it. Just can't believe this! Why would you do it? Dylan: It's because she wanted me at a time when I needed someone. Carrie: And John we weren't even that serious. When I told you that you didn't deserve me, I meant it. John: You're damn right I don't. Alley knows how I feel to be cheated on. It hurts. Alley: (to John) Yeah but you didn't hate Dylan as much as I hate Carrie. (to Carrie) I do hate you so much! (Alley lunges for Carrie as they both fall to the ground. Alley is on top of Carrie strangling her as does Carrie.) Dylan: Stop fighting! (Dylan and John try to break up the fight. John pushes Dylan off of her.) John: Haven't you had your hands on both of these girls enough? Dylan: We're trying to be as civil as possible. (Everyone stands up. John punches Dylan square in the jaw.) John: I've been wanting to do that for the longest time. You smug son of a bitch. It felt pretty good. (Dylan elbows John in the face. Alley gets in between them.) Alley: Let's just leave. Dylan: Fine. Alley: I was talking to John. Carrie: (to John) Please forgive me. John: You know what I told you the other day! Anyone who does me wrong, doesn't get a second chance. You're nothing but a slut to me. (John exits.) (Alley looks at Dylan and shakes her head.) Alley: John's right. Being cheated on really does hurt but what hurts even more is who you cheated on me with! A whore! A dirty rotten whore! (Alley begins to leave but then turns around.) Alley: One more thing! (Alley winds up and smacks Dylan across the face.) Alley: We're through! (Alley exits and slams the door.) _______ (Tanisha calls Owen on his cell phone with London and Detective Miltner by her side.) Owen: Hello? Tanisha: Owen, what are you doing right now? Owen: Nothing really. Why? Tanisha: London is here in my room and there is a detective who wants to talk to you. Owen: (shocked) What? Tanisha: It's about your sister. Owen: What about Alexia? Tanisha: Just come over here and we'll explain everything to you. (Tanisha hangs up the phone and turns to the others.) London: Did he have any idea? Tanisha: He's shocked as ever. Detective Miltner: Basically, I've hired some men to take pictures of her room. A few glances here and there, and we only got one photo of someone other than Alexia. London: Why can't we just ask one of the RA's to open the door. Detective Miltner: You and Alexia both called me saying that she was in some sort of trouble. The pictures clearly show that a psychopath is in there with her. We don't even know that she's still alive, but hopefully she is! So if we did bust down the door and went in there then there's a huge possibility that the guy could open fire on everyone, even hurt and or kill Alexia! London: Point taken! (There is a knock on Tanisha's door, she opens it to find Owen. He is out of breath and scared.) Owen: What's wrong with Lexi? ___________________________ (Will and Lenvy walk out of the café as Tanisha and Brandon begin to walk in. Trella begins to walk away.) Lenvy: So is that how it's going to be? Trella: What do you mean? Lenvy: Are you just going to ignore me and ignore the fact that you're like my best friend? Will: Maybe you should ignore her. Trella: (to Will) No one asked you. Will: Sometimes I like to interpret what I see. Brandon: I like to interpret with my fists. (Trella stops him as Lenvy holds back Will.) Lenvy: Will, I'll meet you in the car. Will: (to Trella) She sees something in you that even I don't see. Trella: Funny because that's something I tell myself every day of my damn life! (to Brandon) Can you grab a seat for us? Brandon: Sure. (Brandon walks into the cafe. Will exits as well. Lenvy and Trella are alone with one another.) Lenvy: There are no stupid guys here to fight. Trella: It has been a while since it was just us girls. Lenvy: Look...I know what happened is very hard. Best friends fight and that is what you are to me. Trella: You are the nicest person in the world and I don't know how or why you can be with someone who is a murderer. Lenvy: That was his past. Maybe you should look past that and you can see the beauty that I see within him. Trella: I feel bad because of who you go out with. If you still want to be my best friend, then drop the baggage. Lenvy: What? Trella: You heard me. (Trella begins to walk into the cafe, until she turns around.) Trella: If you do stay with him, then you're one naive girl. ___________________________ (John and Alley sit at a table in the café. They both seem depressed. Ginny comes over to greet them.) Ginny: How are you two doing today? (Ginny notices their frowns.) Ginny: That good huh? John: I'm going to have a double latte please. Extra foam. Alley: Apple shakamata. Ginny: If anyone is going to be moppy it should be me. Relationship troubles. John & Alley: (same time) Us too. Ginny: Be right back with your drinks. (Ginny exits.) (At the same time, Dylan and Carrie are alone in Dylan's room. They seem just as depressed if not more depressed.) Dylan: What do you think we should do? Carrie: You spill everything and then ask me what we should do? I have no idea. (John looks at Alley.) John: (to Alley) I was thinking of something. Alley: Oh really? Carrie: (to Dylan) Should we fight for the people that we feel so strongly towards? Dylan: Maybe. John: (to Alley) They're obviously going to try to fight for us. Alley: So. Dylan: So what if we made a few mistakes. John: (to Alley) They made so many huge mistakes that they have dug a hole so far down, that their coughing out dirt clouds. Carrie: (to Dylan) Then what do you think we should do? (John puts out his hand and touches Alley's.) (Carrie puts out her hand and touches Dylan.) John: (to Alley) I know I’m not being mister tough guy but you might get a second chance with me. Maybe... Carrie: (to Dylan) Maybe we should get back together. ________ (London, Tanisha, Owen, and Detective Miltner begin walking to a white van.) Owen: You're telling me that Alexia might be kidnapped by someone in her own room? Tanisha: Basically. Owen: (to Tanisha) This isn't a stunt to spend time with me is it? London: Of course it isn't! Tanisha: Yeah. What she said. Detective Miltner: We're going to stay low in the van. (He opens it to reveal television sets, computers, and a desk. A detective's dream come true.) Owen: Could have fooled me. London: Me too. Owen: Who has Alexia? Do you know? (Detective Miltner opens up a manila envelope and takes out three black and white photos.) Detective Miltner: They've been enlarged. This is the closest that we can get. (Owen looks at the picture and is shocked.) Owen: It's...it's him! Tanisha: Who is he? (Owen begins to have a flashback of a conversation that Frank and Owen once had.) Owen: All I have to do is tell my mom that you've been doing it with one of your STD ridden prostitutes that you pick up on the corner of the streets. Frank: She wouldn't believe you. Owen: She would and you would be out of our lives for good. Frank: Since you don't like me so much and I can't send you little brats to boarding school, then you're in for a treat. Owen: What are you talking about? Frank: You know the story of how your father was shot on the job. I pulled the trigger and shot him! I killed your father. (The flashback ends.) Owen: Our ex-step father, Frank Varcuza. He's dangerous and Alexia is in serious trouble. ________________________ (Outside of James’s home, Peggy sits in her car and spies on Ava walking into the house. She pulls out her cell phone and calls him.) James: Hello? Peggy: Hi. Look I was wondering- James: I really don’t want to talk to you right now. Peggy: Please just understand why I did what I did. James: That can take sometime to do and it’s something that I don’t want to wrap my brain around. Good bye. Peggy: Do you have any remorse over Laney’s death? James: (appalled) What did you ask? Peggy: It’s no secret that you’re parading around with your mistress. James: And how do you know that? Peggy: Just answer my question! James: I’m grieving in my own way. Thanks to you I poured my heart out to strangers about how my marriage went to hell. You have the nerve and the audacity to ask me if I have any remorse over my wife’s death? (beat) We both know that she didn’t deserve it and I’m a good person who needs friends right now. Which obviously is not you! (James hangs up with Peggy. Peggy looks at the house with evil eyes. Peggy takes out a picture of her, James, and Laney.) Peggy: This ends tonight! ______________ (Frank peers out the window. It seems empty. A few students pass by but quickly exit.) Frank: It's been days on end and yet you're still alive. (He looks at her. Her mouth is free to talk.) Alexia: If you're going to do something, then why don't you do it. You were so certain that you wanted to kill me that night when you chased Owen and me around the house. Frank: I was so close to doing so. You're actually right. Alexia: Then what are you waiting for? Frank: Do you want to die? Alexia: Just calling your bluff. Frank: For a girl who's tied up and for a guy who's been waving a weapon around, I don't think it's so wise to do so. But if you insist. (Frank raises the gun. Alexia is scared and breathing heavy.) Frank: Remember. No screaming! (Frank gets closer to the trigger.) (Back in the van, Detective Miltner watches with binoculars. He speaks into a walkie talkie.) Detective Miltner: We just caught a glimpse of the suspect and he seems to have not left the window. Owen: Shoot him! London: I agree. Detective Miltner: The suspect is armed and dangerous! Permission to open fire? Owen: Take the shot! (Frank leans over the bed.) Frank: Before I kill you. One last thing. (Frank kisses Alexia but she is disgusted and repulsed by it.) Frank: That's the kiss of death. It'll be your last. (Frank goes back to aiming the gun at her.) Owen: (screaming) Take the shot or I will. (Owen goes through a cabinet underneath the desk.) Tanisha: What are you doing? Detective Miltner: We have a periscope gun, you're going to do nothing! Owen: Then shoot the bastard down. (Frank gets closer to the trigger again.) Frank: Good bye. (A bullet runs through the window and hits Frank in his back. Alexia is screaming.) Frank: You're family- (Frank chokes up blood.) Frank: Will...suf...suffer! (He collapses dead on the floor.) Alexia: (screaming) Somebody help me! (Owen and Detective Miltner bust through the door. London and Tanisha behind them.) London: Thank god you're alright. Tanisha: We were worried about you. Detective Miltner: It's all over now. (Detective Miltner begins to talk on his walkie talkie.) Detective Miltner: Could I please have a unit come to Van BCA. I also need a coroner unit. The suspect is dead. Time of death eight twenty nine p.m. (Detective Miltner leaves. London, Tanisha, and Owen untie Alexia and help her up out of her bed.) Alexia: You all saved me. Thank you. London: Of course we would. Tanisha: We knew something was wrong. Owen: Glad to see you alive sis. And I'm so glad to see him dead. That's one bullet that he's not going to be able to survive. Alexia: I just want to take a long hot shower and forget all about this. I need to get out of this room. Tanisha: You can use my room. London: Why don't we all stay with you tonight? Alexia: Good idea. Owen: Have fun with your little slumber party, but this is going to be one hell of a story that we're going to have to tell mom! (to Detective Miltner) Thanks for saving her. (Owen looks at Tanisha and smiles at her before he leaves.) _________________________________ (Later that night, Ava spends time alone in James's bedroom of his house. She is dressed in a green robe. He is also in a blue satin robe.) James: How does it feel to be a free woman? Ava: It feels absolutely wonderful. Free to do what I want and who I want. (Ava kisses James. James seems hesitant.) Ava: How are you still able to live here? James: (looking around) I'll probably sell the house. The memories here are unbearable. They’re just very eerie. Ava: I'd imagine. James: However, I have this outlook on life. That you need to move on from tragedy and have the brain feel at ease. Stress can do a lot to a person’s physical and emotion- (noticing he’s being too Psychological) I'm going to go and brush my teeth and get ready for bed. Please excuse me. (James kisses her forehead and exits. Ava gets off of the bed and walks over to the railing. It over looks the dark living room which makes Ava shiver a bit. The door creaks open. She doesn't turn around.) Ava: James? Peggy: Try again. (Ava turns around to see Peggy dressed in a black trench coat with her hands behind her back. She has a wicked smile on her face.) Ava: What are you doing here? Peggy: Ending it all. Ava: Does James know you're here? Peggy: He'll know soon enough. Except he'll just think that you had an accident. He's locked in the bathroom anyway. Ava: What? (Peggy reveals a seven iron golf club which belongs to James. She holds it firmly with black gloves.) Ava: Peggy put it down! Peggy: I told you that it wouldn't be over. Why couldn't you have just gone to jail like you were supposed to? You were so lucky to slip out of that. I tried way too hard to bring you down. Ava: Just calm down. (Peggy swings once at Ava but misses.) Peggy: Laney was only supposed to get hurt. That's all we wanted out of it. She was going to have a bruise or a concussion or something. Then she would have taken you to court for battery. We wanted to teach you a lesson on morality. But she died. It was such a shame. She never deserved it, not like that. Except with her out of the picture, that meant that James was free. Ava: (realizing) You-? Peggy: I always loved James Vaughne! Too bad you won't even get to see your wedding day. It would have been nice if he would remarry. But not you. Better me then you! (Peggy begins to violently swing the golf club at Ava but misses and hits a glass vase smashing it. Ava takes the club and they both struggle as Peggy gets closer to Ava’s throat. Ava pushes Peggy off of her, making her fall onto the bed. Peggy regains her composure and continues to swing the golf club at her, coming very close to striking her.) (James comes up behind her and pushes Peggy. Ava moves out of the way and Peggy goes over the railing, shrieking and screaming. She lands flat on her front side onto the wooden coffee table.) _______________________________________________________________ Join Us Next Time For Another Exciting Episode of P O I N T P A L A C E
  18. I think that was the longest comment you've ever left me. So yeah Alexia is tortured and although he's feeding her, she hasn't bathed because Frank thinks she'll escape if she does. Frank is completely creepy and he's very dark. Frank also feels like he can't do any wrong but Alexia & Owen were real bastard kids to him which pushed him over the edge. The Blue Crystal scenes are fun because it's supposed to sort of be like a behind the scenes to a teen soap kind of plot. Originally Point Palace was going to be called Blue Crystal so that the tagline would read: "What if life were clear? As clear as a Blue Crystal." Peggy's character was actually written in as a teacher who at the time asked to be in the story. She said make the character a bitch and I did. In the upcoming episodes, her true colors show. Last but not least is Lenvy...good, used to be virignal Lenvy. Lenvy is an angel, a flirt, and is supposed to be the nicest soul this school has to offer. Like I said before, what she feels for Will is true love, because she sees the good Will who's changed for her. Not the bad Will that came out because of Trella's arrival. I can't wait for the season finale...only 3 more episodes!
  19. I like the new updated logo, it reminds me of Edge of Night. And was this the scene (Ric & Alexis) you and Jen were talking about?
  20. Hey this was the first episode I read and I have to say that I'm enjoying it. My favorite plot is having Olivia & Dru against each other. That makes it feel like the 90's again!
  21. I'm liking Jodie's character and I really enjoyed the bar scene with Lauren & Chris. Maybe a possible love connection could be in the works. Again with the raunchy love scenes! This show wouldn't be on network television, it would be on Cinemax.
  22. Previously on Point Palace: - Alexia and Owen's stepfather Frank, turned out to be the one who was making threatening phone calls to Alexia. He shows up to her door and begins to strangle her with rope. After letting her go, she tries to escaped but is knocked out. The next day, she wakes up to being tied to her bed, and when Owen tries to call her, Frank pretends to be her and says everything is fine. - Tanisha went to apologize to Owen for telling him that she loved him because she knew that he didn't feel the same way. He told her that he was just caught off guard by it. She then, without warning, kisses him. When she leaves, she tells herself that it is time to eliminate the competition. Trella went to the cafe to confront Ginny. She then told him the truth about Owen not being British. - Bryan tells the board, except for Blake, that Nan has something that needs to be said. She tells Lanoi and Benjamin that Blake had sexually harassed her and or raped her. Everyone is shocked. Leon calls Blake to find out his statement for the story that he has to write about for the paper. Blake is appalled, taken off guard, and ecstatic. London slanders Nan's name in vein. - Dylan began to worry after finding out that Alley is not to be messed with, when she admits to Dylan, that she had gotten revenge on Carrie and John by making a call to the mob. Victor came to Carrie's room and tried to get her back to return to Lexington with him after hearing from Alley that she wasn't happy with Point Palace. Carrie said that it was petty crap pulled by Alley. John eavesdropped on the conversation and texted a message to Alley's phone saying "nice try." He then busted in on their conversation by telling Victor that Carrie isn't going anywhere. - Jenny had her first couple of scenes to tape on the set of "Blue Crystal" and they involved Carlos's character and C.C.'s character. C.C. wasn't warming up to her. When the two girls had a different scene with one another, C.C. decided to do a little ad-libing. An unscripted cat fight broke out between the girls. Henry (the director of "Blue Crystal") and the other producers were shocked But said that it will be used. After Carlos broke up the fight, he was very embarrassed. - Lenvy decided to look past Will's criminal past, again, and forgave him for not telling him about how he killed Zak. All she asked of him was to try and make things right with Trella. They found Trella on Cemetary Hill at Zak's grave. She wasn't happy to see them and when Will tried to tell her how Sorry he really was, she didn't want to hear it. Trella thought that it should be Will in the grave, not Zak. - Ava's trial continued and James was called up to the stand. Davis tried to show how immoral he was but Bryant showed that James was being honest when he was talking about how his marriage was a failure. The last witness was Ava. Ava talked about how she was being honest and that everything was truly an accident. Although Davis tried to make her out to be a lying killing psychopath. Both lawyers gave a powerful ending argument and then the jury went to make their decision. Everyone returned to the court room and a jury member stood up and paused before saying what Ava's verdict was. <embed width="448" height="361" type="application/x-shockwave-flash" wmode="transparent" src="http://i15.photobucket.com/player.swf?file=http://vid15.photobucket.com/albums/a352/Witchblader/94519fa8.flv"></embed>Episode 74: Will They Tell the Truth? Executive Story Consultant & Head Writer: Matt Politylo Logo Designer: Mary Zimmerman ______ (The jury member clears his throat.) Juror:We the jury find the defendant Ava Cecileneli to be...not guilty. (Ava smiles out of excitement. A huge weight has been lifted off of her shoulders. She can't stop smiling.) Judge Carnes:This court hear by states that Ava Cecileneli will be cleared of all charges. Court dismissed. (Judge Carnes slams down his gavel for the last time.) Bryant:We did it. You said you were innocent all along and we proved it. Ava: Thank you so much. (Ava hugs Bryant. Davis makes his way over to the table and shakes Bryant's hand.) Peggy:This is a damn travesty! Judge Carnes: Ma'am if you don't calm yourself down then you will be personally removed out of this court room. Peggy: (to the jurors) How can you let her get away with what she did? What were you people thinking? Did she bribe you before your decision? Or are you that stupid?! Davis: Peggy you should restrain yourself. Peggy: No. I won't restrain myself! Judge Carnes: Did you not hear me before Miss Lowrie? Peggy: You and the rest of this court obviously didn't hear me correctly! She's a murderer! She deserves to be locked up for the rest of her life. James: You're acting ridiculous! Judge Carnes: Bailiff, please remove her from the court. (The bailiff tries to take her by the hand but with a struggle, succeeds to do so. As he does Peggy tries very hard to break free.) Peggy:Get your grimy hands off of me! There is no system! This sucks! She killed Laney! (Peggy is finally removed from the court room.) Ava:For a second there I thought that she would have gone crazy and killed us all. Bryant, what do I owe you for your expenses? Bryant: It's already been covered. (Ava turns around and catches a glimpse of Vicki and Ike. They smile at her as they begin to walk out of the court room.) Ava:Please excuse me for a moment. (Ava begins to walk down the isle.) James:You're finally free! Ava: I'll be right back. Officer Smith: I believed in you the whole time sugar. Ava: Thanks, Smith. I'll miss you too. (Ava goes outside and sees Vicki and Ike getting into a tinted-windowed black stretch limo.) Ava:Wait! Wait for one second! (The limo pulls off.) Ava: (screaming)Thank you! (Leon and the rest of the reporters begin to ask Ava questions.) Leon:Ava now that your name is cleared what do you plan on doing? Ava: Well Leon, I plan on getting my life back to the way it was before any of this happened. Reporter #1: What was going through your head before the jury's decision? Ava: I could only hope that they saw the truth and they did. Reporter #2: Do you plan on continuing to see Professor Vaughne? Ava: Please excuse me. (Bryant pushes a few of the reporters away to end the impromptu press conference. Ava begins to walk back into the court room but before she can, Peggy comes from the crowd of reporters on the steps of the courtyard and blocks her.) Ava:Get away from me. Peggy: We're outside and no one is going to make me calm down this time. James might have found out that I told Laney everything, but this is just too much. You getting off scott free, was just a stroke of luck. I guarantee you that this won't be over! (Ava watches Peggy shove her way towards the reporters to grab their attention.) _________________________________________ (Meanwhile Owen gets a knock on his door while making himself dinner. He licks the sauce from his fingers, quickly wipes his hands, and slings a dish rag around his shoulder.) Owen: Alexia? Is that you? (Owen opens it to find a very upset Ginny.) Owen: Ginny. Ginny: What happened to your accent? Did you all of a sudden learn how to speak proper English? Huh? Or is it true that you're a big fat liar! Owen: (in the accent)I'm sorry for lying- (stops and goes to his original accent) I mean…you mean a lot to me and I thought that you liked me for just the accent and that's why I kept doing it. Ginny: There are many reasons besides your accent on why I liked you so much. Owen: How did you find out? Ginny: Besides you just incriminating your self...there's no reason to tell a liar the truth. Owen: Sorry. I am so sorry. (Ginny slaps him across the face.) Ginny: You lied to me. Even after I told you that the number one thing I looked for in a guy was honesty! And you still went on and lied to me! (Ginny exits.) Owen: (screaming) GINNY!!!! (Tanisha watches from a far.) Tanisha: It had to be done. Owen belongs to me. _______________________________________________ (Nan and Bryan spend time with one another in Bryan's living room of his expensive mansion. Bryan pours her a glass of orange juice as she reads a newspaper.) Bryan:If you stay here any longer, I might just have to start charging you rent if you keep spending as much time here as you have been. Nan: Then I would just have to stop sleeping with you and giving you so much pleasure as I know that you get from having me around. Bryan: Then we can work something out. Of course you have given me much more then just sexual pleasure. Because of you, I will be the next president of Point Palace University. Nan: The first day we met. I told you we could make a great team in getting revenge against the one person who has done us wrong. (Nan turns the paper around and shows him the front page.) Nan:We did it! We made front page of the 'Point Palace Inquiry.' Bryan: Go on. Nan: Headline reads. Presidential assistant claims foul play. Oh this is great. Bryan: What else does it say? (Nan begins to read.) Nan:Nan Sheridan who was recently appointed Presidential Assistant has claimed that President Blake Hammerton, sexually harassed her. Vice President Bryan Daniels quotes that foul play will not be tolerated. Bryan: Like music to my ears. (Nan begins to read on and giggles.) Bryan:What's so funny? Nan: Listen to this. Blake was too upset to comment but his wife, London Tyler Hamerton, says that Nan is a dirty liar and slanders her name in vein. Bryan: It's obvious who wears the pants in that marriage. Nan: Pretty soon, we'll get Lanoi and Benjamin to vote Blake out. With him gone you can be President and I can be Vice! Too bad for Blake, his reputation is so tarnished and it's going to cost him everything. (Bryan and Nan clink their glasses.) _______________________________________________________ (The next day at the Palace Cafe, Ginny hands a drink to a customer, they leave and she is alone. Owen walks in and sees that she is sort of busy. He sits down in a table, his back to the counter.) Ginny:What can I get you? Owen: Possibly forgiveness for being such an ass. Ginny: I could maybe go and check in the back for those, but we don't sell them here. Owen: Do you have time to talk? Ginny: For a little bit. Owen: Then my plea will be short. Ginny: Before you say anything, I want to apologize for something. Owen: You have nothing to be sorry about. Ginny: The way that I acted yesterday was ridiculous. I didn't mean to slap you. It's just- Owen: I pissed you off...royally. You had every right to do it. Ginny: Why didn't you just tell me the truth? Then none of this would have happened. Owen: Because you were obsessed with the British guy. It was fun to the play the role because it made you happy. When you were happy, I was happy. In my mind that was all that mattered. Ginny: What matters most is honesty. Owen: And that's all that is being shown right now...honesty. Ginny: There's a few customers, I have to get going and help them. Owen: I said that I was sorry. (Owen stands up and begins to walk out of the cafe.) Ginny: (shouting to him)And maybe…you deserve a second chance. _____________________________________________________ (London is alone in her room. She is beginning to pack a few things, until there is a knock on her door. She opens it to find Tanisha.) Tanisha:Hey London, you don't mind if I talk to you for a second? London: Not at all, please come in. (Tanisha walks into the room and London shuts the door behind her. Tanisha begins to notice all of the boxes.) Tanisha:Are you moving anytime soon? London: Yeah. Blake and I are going to rent a nice little town house that is right next to the campus. Tanisha: What are you doing moving everything? Do you need help? London: No but thank you. I'll be fine. So what do you need? Tanisha: Thank you for even seeing me. You must be busy with Blake's new position as president and because of all the bad stuff that has been going on lately. London: With out you Tanisha, my wedding probably would have never gone off as great as it did. And yeah I've been busy but you've done a lot for me and I'm always here for anyone who has helped me out with anything. I guess you've read about what's been going on with the paper. Tanisha: Nan is a bitch and I don't believe a word that she says. London: Wish everyone else would see it that they way. Tansiha: I was wondering if you heard from Alexia lately. She hasn't been to any of her classes and I really need to talk to her about her brother. London: Aren't you two an item, you looked pretty close at the wedding. Tanisha: That's a long story and it's why I'm trying to find her but I can't. I figured that her best friend would probably know. London: Come to think of it, I haven't seen her in awhile either. Tanisha: Do you think that everything is alright? London: It's not like her to not answer her phones. If she would have gone anywhere, she would've told us. Maybe Owen knows where she is. Tanisha: No! Like I said...I can't talk to him. London: I'll give her a call. (London picks up the phone and dials the numbers.) London:Hopefully she'll answer. I doubt that she's tied up with anything. _____________________________________________________________ (In Alexia's room, Frank comes out of her bath room, wearing a long blue terry cloth robe. He looks at her and she is in the same clothes as the previous days, sweat beads dripping from her forehead. Still tied up to the four corners of the bed.) Frank:Your shower was pretty relaxing. Cleansing. Very cleansing. You must be attracting the flies. You filthy girl. You haven't bathed all day or even the day before that. (Alexia murmurs from the duct tape that is across her mouth.) Frank:Alexia you have to speak up. Can't hear a word you're saying. But I must warn you though. Once I tear off the duct tape you have to promise me something. Agree? (Alexia shakes her head yes.) Frank:That must be one of the perks of being a victim. You would just agree to do about anything. Well, you have to promise me that you won't scream like a crazy banshee. If you do scream then I'll blow your head off. The gun is over on the table, mind you. Promise not to scream? (Alexia again shakes her head yes.) Frank:Okay. This is going to sting a bit, but it's just like tearing off a band-aid. Fast and painless. Except I hope that it's as painful as possible for you. (Frank quickly tears off the duct tape.) Alexia:Ouch. Frank: Told you. Are you hungry? Alexia: Of course I am. Please feed me. Frank: You're not even supposed to be living today. My plan was to just plan two bullets in- How do you kids say it these days? Bust a cap in your ass and split. But I realized that you're going to draw me to Owen. He'll come by sooner or later and I need you to have him come over, so that the two of you can die together. That's why, for the time being, the time that you are alive. I made myself at home and packed a few things. Thought you wouldn't mind at all. (Frank goes over to the table. He begins to dangle the gun and smiles at her. He then cuts apple slices for her.) Frank:I could have made a wonderful father. But no. You and your pesky brother had to go and snoop around. Everything would have been fine if you hadn't known the truth. Alexia: My family would have found out sooner or later that you killed our father just so you can be selfish and have our mother. Not caring about anybody else but yourself- (Frank aims the gun at her. She begins to gasp with fright.) Frank:It's so tempting to pull the trigger but I can't do it. Not yet at least. (Suddenly there is a call on Alexia's cell phone.) Alexia:As you can see, it's kind of hard for me to answer it. Go and see who it is. Frank: Shut up. I'm the one who gives orders. (While still aiming the gun, Frank looks at the caller I.D.) Frank:London's calling! _____________________________________________________________ (John sits alone in his room reading a paper.) John:Sounds like Blake is in deep water. Good. (John's cell phone rings. He answers it.) John:Hello. Guy: Hey bro. John: Guy, how are you doing? Guy: Pretty good. Just wanted to check up on you. John: Very nice of you. Things are going absolutely perfect. Guy: That's good to hear then. John: Is that the only reason why you called? Guy: Of course. The only two people in Colorado that I talk to are you and London. John: Why do you still talk to her? Guy: Because she's my friend. John: Then why didn't you get an invite to her wedding? Guy: What wedding? John: She's now married to Blake Hammerton who's rich father bought him the whole damn school and made him president. Guy: You're kidding me? John: About the wedding or about the school, because I hate to tell you, it all happened. Guy: How are you taking it? (With his cell phone in hand, John begins to walk out the door and to his car.) John:Absolutely fine. Guy: What about the baby? Has she had it yet? John: Oh so that's why you called. Your mom and dad's little spy, aren't you? Guy: No. (John gets in his car and starts the ignition.) John:No the baby is not born and London and me are just friends. I am even civil with Blake. As much as I hate him, she's happy then so am I. (John begins to drive away.) Guy:You really do sound it. John: There's this new girl, named Carrie. She's amazing. She really has turned my life around. Look, it was nice to hear from you but I have to go and see her actually. Guy: Bro's before hoes, literally since I'm your brother, but whatever...I understand. John: Bye. (John hangs up the phone but then slams the breaks when he notices Carrie's car in front of Dylan's room.) John:What the hell are you doing with Dylan? _____________________________ (Blake stands alone in his dim lit office. The lights are off but he continues to stare out the covered blind slit. Sun light pours in. Myra then enters.) Myra:Lanoi Dickson and Benjamin Cliffside are here to see you. Blake: Please send them in. (Lanoi and Benjamin walk into Blake's office. He pulls the shade open, and everything is now well lit. Blake turns to face them.) Myra:Also, a reporter called and wanted an interview with you. Blake: Do you know what it pertained to? Myra: (forced) The situation. Blake: If it's not Leon Kain, then tell them, no comment. Myra: Sure thing. (Myra exits.) Blake:Thank you so much for coming here. Benjamin: Where's Bryan? Blake: He's not invited to this meeting. Lanoi: And what about Nan? Blake: Same for her as well. This situation as my secretary called it, is a travesty. It shouldn't have even happened. Lanoi: Then why did it happened? It's not right what you did! Benjamin: Lanoi, please calm down. Let him speak. Blake: It never happened Lanoi. Lanoi: Where's the proof? Blake: First off, I never drank on the job. Her telling you that I was drunk is a lie. Second, Myra was here the whole time. She was here when Nan and I were working together. Myra said that she heard no screams coming from Nan or me. She is an honest woman, I'm sure if she did hear something, then she would have gone straight to the police. But since this meeting is all Nan's fault, it wasn't necessary. Benjamin: That is some pretty strong evidence. I must admit that when Nan was telling us about it, in the back of my mind, I never thought that you would do that. Lanoi: This is just absurd. It's like petty kids playing games. You must know that you are a professional. Blake: I already knew this. Nan and Bryan are the ones who pulled this, not me! Lanoi you and Benjamin were sucked into the spider web known as Nan Sheridan. Her lies have woven her way into your mind. She needs to be stopped. Benjamin: What do you plan on doing? Blake: Nan isn't the only one. Bryan has been after my position since day one. He needs to be replaced. I want to fire him as soon as possible. Benjamin: You can't exactly do that. Blake: I'm the President am I not? Lanoi: Benjamin's right. You can't fire any one of us. Bryan, Benjamin, and I are all under contract with the school. You are too. Blake: Fine. Tomorrow I want you two and even Bryan to vote for whether or not Nan stays. All I'm going to say is this. We were doing just fine with out her coming to the board. Without her, the lies that she has created, would not even be a reality for all of us involved. Lanoi you might like her because of the womanly bonding, but she is trouble. Look at her records. And Benjamin, she has made so much chaos that it's something you will have to clean up all by yourself! Making comments to reporter after reporter. This school will go down in flames, literally because she is capable of doing something like that. The only thing we should clean up is the deception! (Blake pounds his fist on the table.) Blake:I am counting on the both of you to make the right decision! ___________________________________ (Frank holds the gun to Alexia's head and puts the phone next to her.) Alexia:Hello? London: Alexia. Tanisha's here and she and I are jut wondering what you've been up to. Alexia: I'm doing...just fine. London: Where are you? Alexia: Around. London: Around where? What's going on? Alexia: No- Nothing. London: Why are you speaking with one word syllables? Alexia: Everything is great. I have to get going now. London: Wait! Alexia: Yes? London: (lowering her voice) Just say yes or no. Are you in trouble? (Alexia pauses. She looks at Frank, who stares back at her with an evil glare. He obviously can't hear the conversation, but he can hear only what Alexia is saying.) Alexia:Yes. (London hangs up the phone.) Tanisha:Is everything okay? London: No. Alexia's in trouble and we have to help her! ___ (On the set of "Blue Crystal," two make up artists work on Carlos and Jenny. Both characters are placed in the Crystal Café. They quickly finish and the two take their places. Henry's voice comes through the intercom.) Henry:"Blue Crystal," scene twelve, take one and...ACTION! Carlos: Heather look you and I, we can never be. Jenny: Are you trying to break up with me? Carlos: It would never work out between us. Jenny: Why? Because of Melanie? Carlos: It wouldn't be fair to you if I kept on acting like I don't have feelings for her. Jenny: Miguel, these past couple of days have been wonderful. You and I can learn so much about each other. And we can make it work I know we can- Carlos: Please. Let's just be friends. (Carlos kisses Jenny's cheek and then exits, stage left.) Henry:Fade in to Heather. Jenny: Fine. Then there's nothing else for me to do. You win Melanie. Henry: And cut. A teary goodbye for Melanie's character. Print that. (A little depressed Jenny, walks off of the set and back to the dressing room. Carlos follows her.) Carlos:I'm sorry about what they did to your character. Jenny: It's okay. Obviously she had nothing going for her and the fans want to see Miguel with Melanie. Carlos: They might bring you back. Maybe Melanie will cause mischief for the both of them you never know. Jenny: The writers would have told me that and as nice as that would be, no one has said anything to me yet. Carlos: I have to go and film some more scenes. I'll see you back at your room. (Carlos kisses Jenny's cheek.) Carlos:Even though the fans didn't love you...I still do. (Carlos exits. Cairina and Ian come in.) Cairina:Jenny. How are you doing? Jenny: Everything is fine. Everyone's acting like I'm dying or something. Cairina: It was a true pleasure working with you. It's a shame that you couldn't have lasted longer. Ian: Yeah. Maybe you'll find other work. Jenny: I doubt that but thanks. Ian: We'll still all hang out. (Jenny hugs Ian and Cairina. They exit. The last person to see her is C.C.) Jenny:You're here to rub it in my face, right? C.C.: Would I ever do that to you? Jenny: You're a stuck up wannabe diva, so of course you would. C.C.: It's such a shame that the fans absolutely hated you! Maybe they hated you as much as I did. Have a fun exit, I'm sure that no one will be crying for you. By the way, you should thank your lovely boyfriend for your short stint. Goodbye sweetheart, and we won't do lunch! (C.C. closes the door and Jenny hurls a glass at the wall, breaking it. She begins to cry.) Jenny:Go to hell! _______________________________ (Back at the café, Lenvy and Will share a coffee at a table near the window.) Will:Trella hates me even more then she already does. Lenvy: At least you made an attempt to say you're sorry for what you did. You poured your heart out to her and if she can't realize that then...then screw her. Will: But she's your best friend. Lenvy: If she can't see that someone that I love is one of the most important people in my life then, maybe I should reconsider who's a friend and who isn't. Will: You really are something else. (Lenvy begins to giggle.) Lenvy:Oh you. (Lenvy leans in and kisses Will. Trella pops up in front of the table, with a guy about their age, dressed in somewhat ghetto clothing.) Trella:Sorry to interrupt. Lenvy: Not at all. It's good to see you. Trella: Wish that I could say the same thing. This is a friend of mine from back home. Brandon this is Lenvy Elliot and Will Pazner. Brandon: Will Pazner? The one I've heard so much about. Trella: Brandon's in to see Zak's grave. Brandon: You're the one who killed my best friend? Will: We don't want any trouble so please go back to your trash can. (Brandon takes Will by his shirt and lifts him out of his seat.) Brandon:Excuse me? (Will brushes Brandon's hands off of him and pushes him.) Will:You want to fight? Because I have a half a mind of throwing you out that window or at least to make you have a black eye! Lenvy: Trella make this stop. Trella: In my opinion, Will deserves it. Brandon: What are you going to do? Kill me like you did to my best friend? Will: Hopefully. (Ginny comes over to the action.) Ginny:What's going on? Trella: Nothing we were just leaving. (Trella and Brandon begin to leave. Lenvy stands up.) Lenvy:Trella, wait! (Trella turns around.) Lenvy:Please make this stop! Why can't we all just be civil with one another and let the past be what it is...the past! Trella: Because this isn't some ordinary past. Your boy friend is a killer and he deserves to be brought down! _______________________________ (Dylan and Carrie spend time alone in Dylan's room. Dylan looks out the window to make sure no one is around, not knowing that John is out front.) Carrie:Aren't you afraid that Alley might walk in and freak out when she sees us together. Dylan: That's what I wanted to talk to you about. Carrie: Save your breath. I'm out- Dylan: The guilt has been building up. I feel horrible for what we did. What happened was a mistake. Carrie: By the way, thanks to her she might have put everyone in danger because Victor is looking to stay! He's dangerous. Dylan: Alley was just retaliating because of what you and your boyfriend did! Carrie: We've already talked about this before! What we need to focus on is our mistake. Dylan: You were the one who was sober, you should have stopped it! Carrie: I wanted it as much as you did. (Alley walks in to Dylan's room and freezes.) Dylan:Hi. Alley: What the hell is she doing here? Carrie: I was just about to leave. Alley: Good. Dylan: No she can't leave. Alley: And why is that? (John then walks into Dylan's room.) Alley:This just keeps getting better and better. Carrie: John, what are you doing here? John: Carrie’s car was out front and I figured who you were talking to and I wanted to know what about. Carrie: It was about nothing. Dylan: No...Carrie let's just give up. John: Give up on what? Alley: Do you have something to tell us?
  23. Thanks for the comments. I used Adobe After Effects for the opening and the actors who represent Alley, Will, John, Dylan, and Nan were all actors who starred in the web version of Point Palace which can be found on Youtube. Point Palace has not gone on hiatus yet...that won't happen until Episode 77, the only reason why I've been putting off getting a new episode out was because I wanted to use the proper HTML coding but it won't let me so oh well. Enjoy the upcoming episodes!
  24. Mark is so dumb! He should've had confirmation first that Dahlia's charges would be dropped but I guess Natalia's ::changepurse:: was more important to save his woman.
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