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  1. I really felt sorry for Carol, especially over her lamenting prayer for her family. The whole time I'm thinking, I bet it's going to end with Cody fighting for his life or Doctor Claiborne walking out of his room with important news but I enjoyed the sweet ending. I was weary about the Lynette/Greg pairing because it seems unprofessional but that can lead to so many story plot options and it looks like it already is. I also enjoyed the fighting between a broken marriage. Nick work!
  2. A little slower but enjoyable. Ria...boarderline racist? It still was funny because I could see Victoria Rowell as that character. I'm also really enjoying Mike/Jodie's story plot. It's being written very truthfully and as a writer/viewer of soaps, sometimes we try mimicing real life in everyway possible. Keep up the great work and you know I can't wait to read more of Mona! Plus these phone calls...Natti's going to be getting a bad wrap for it I'm sure.
  3. Previously on Point Palace: - Blake helps up Will from the fountain. The two are only mildly hurt from the fall. Will wants to battle it out more, but Blake kicks him out of the office building. - Carrie wakes up. Dylan is excited and happy after almost giving up hope that she wasn't going to pull through. However, she starts to act wierd. She then tells him that she's 10 years old. - C.C. begins to plot by herself to get Carlos. She begins to think that if she does something to her hair to make it red, that she could play the part of Jenny Fremann. - Ginny visits Owen and contemplates telling him that she's not over him. She tries to but he really can't hear her anyway. She leaves and asks herself if she really can go through with it. - Officer Wendell questions Alley and John about the whole Alley trying to kill Alley ordeal. John explains to him that they all have a past. Alley pleads that she did nothing wrong and that it was only an accident. Officer Wendell agrees and lets her go. - London and Myra take care of Blake, until he gets a visit from Nate. Nate asks him for a job. When Nate leaves, Blake tells London that if Nate is the same person, he has a hidden agenda. - Before they go to see Owen, Alexia gets a call from her mother. She skips questions dealing with Owen, until Christina asks where he has been, because he hasn't been answering her calls. - Mika Tomukuzai arrives at the school. She makes a call that reassures her that she’s all signed up. Mika hopes for normality but knows it’s not the case. - Carlos calls in to check on Jenny. Agatha tells him that she doesn't know anything because she wasn't working so she transfers him to Nick. Nick lies to him by saying that Jenny hasn't made a recovery at all. Nick tells Jenny that she got a call from a pestering ex-boyfriend of hers. - Sky tries to clear the awkwardness between her and Ava, but Ava tells her that she has no problem that she's a lesbian. When Ava is alone, she notices her Psychology book and goes back to the bottle after giving in to will power. When she is fully drunk, she draws herself a bath, but then falls in unconscious as the water rises. Episode 84: Caught on Cam Executive Producer & Creator: Matt Politylo Logo Designer: Mary Zimmerman - - - (The water in her bath tub begins to pour on top of Ava, but not completely. It looked as if this could be the end for her. Outside, Sky looks at Ava's dorm room door as she begins to pace back and forth.) Sky:(Justifying herself.) Look I just want to make sure that you and I are still friends. I've lost friends before who can't accept the fact that me being a lesbian is who I am. And I really and truly hope that you're not one of those people. (Sky fixes her hair, shakes her head to agree with herself, and knocks on her door.) Sky:Why isn't she answering? (Sky calls Ava's cell phone which continues to go unanswered.) Sky:Come on Ava. Pick up your phone! I just talked to her a little bit ago. Your car’s here. (Sky hangs up and senses that something is wrong after continuing to knock.) Sky:(screaming) Ava?! (Sky opens the door and lets herself in. She hears the bath tub running upstairs and begins to walk upstairs.) Sky:Hello? (After not getting any answer, Sky walks into the bathroom and sees Ava drowning in the bath tub. She also notices the alcohol around her. Sky quickly turns off the water and pulls Ava out. Her face is turning blue and she isn't breathing.) Sky:Ava talk to me! (Sky begins to give her CPR. It successfully works as Ava chokes up spurts of water mixed with rum.) Sky:What happened? Ava: (still drunk) I'm drunk! If you'll excuse me. I'm all wet and I need to vomit. Sky: What the hell would make you do this? Ava: Noth- Jam- Forget it. (Sky places her hand on Ava’s shoulder. She then wraps her up in a towel.) Sky:Don’t worry Ava. I’m not going anywhere. - - - (At Cody Memorial Hospital, Dylan is sleeping in the chair next to Carrie’s hospital bed. He is woken up by the loud noises of the television.) Dylan:Good morning. Carrie: You again. I thought I already told you that I don't need your help. Dylan: There's something odd about you Carrie. Carrie: Leave me alone. I'm busy with TV. (There is a knock on Carrie's door.) Dylan:Come in. Carrie: Maybe it's mommy and daddy. (Instead it's Alley and John.) Dylan:What are you doing here? Alley: I came to apologize and try to explain to you that what happened was an accident. I had no intentions of hurting her. John: It's good to see that she’s awake. Carrie: Hi. John: Hi Carrie. Dylan: You said your peace and your hellos so now you can say your goodbyes. The door is right behind you. Alley: There's really no need to be rude. John: She said that she was sorry. What else does she have to do to prove that? Carrie: Sorry about what? Dylan: Nothing. Carrie: My name's Carrie. I'm ten years old. How old you are two? Like sixteen? Alley: (confused) Wait. What did you say? Dylan: She didn't say anything. Carrie: (to Dylan) You're so annoying! (to Alley and John) My favorite kind of ice cream is chocolate. Lots of it. They've been feeding me it non-stop. John: Wow. You're like a kid at heart. Carrie: Yep. More like a kid in a hospital. Did I break my arm or something? Alley: This is a joke right? Where are all the cameras? I have to be on a hidden camera show or something. Dylan: (to Alley and John) Please leave. Just go. Alley: Are you embarrassed about something? Dylan: (forced) No. Alley: Yes you are. What's wrong with Carrie that you're not telling us! Carrie: What are you all talking about? Dylan: Nothing. Carrie: Okay cousin Dylan. John: Did she just- Dylan: Fine. She's acting weird and I can't explain why. Now I thank you for your visit and I accept your apology. That’s what you wanted to hear right? Bye. (Alley and John begin to exit, until Alley turns around.) Alley: (to Dylan)Maybe this is your karma for what you and Carrie did to us. However, you better tend to your girlfriend. She's a total mess. - - - (At the 5th Annual teen soap opera awards the next evening, Carlos waits patiently in his seat at the theater it’s being filmed in. Abhram Heller and Elise Brandine from the show Wellington Arbor, walk up to the podium to present.) Abhram:They are the ones who have to be swooning, sophisticated, and heroic. Not to mention have a great fan following or they’d be out of a job. Elise: And they have to be the opposite of you Abhram. (Abhram and Elise chuckle at the scripted comment.) Abhram:And the nominees for best male newcomer are... Elise: Ryan Van Rex, Wellington Arbor. Abhram: Carlos DeViego, Blue Crystal. Elise: Francis Bion, The Stars Above Us. Arden: And Drake Felix, Remembrance. And the winner is... Elise & Arden: Carlos DeViego for Blue Crystal. (Everyone applauds for Carlos. He walks up to the podium and accepts his award.) Carlos:Wow. I really didn't expect this. I first off want to thank Cairina Gautiez for discovering a guy studying pre medicine. Our director Henry Boxwit and my wonderful co-stars, C.C. Chasity and Ian Hadley as well as the rest of the crew and cast. You guys are awesome. I want to thank my parents and I also want to thank one special person. My girlfriend Jenny who couldn't be with me because she’s- back home. I love you and I can't wait to see you when I get back. (Carlos presses the 'stop' button on the hotel VCR. He then takes the tape out.) C.C.:Jenny is going to be so pleased when she watches you winning. Carlos: You should be happy that you won too. I'm actually really pleased that Blue Crystal also won best drama. C.C.: Yeah. Carlos: Are you going to be at the cast party later tonight? C.C.: You better believe it. Carlos: Then I'll see you there. C.C.: I just wanted to congratulate you again. You really did deserve it. You're a great person and a wonderful actor. Carlos: Thank you. (C.C. exits. She then gets on her cell phone.) C.C.:Henry. Yes it's C.C., I was wondering if you could help me out with something. Henry: Sure C.C., what can I do for you? C.C.: I was wondering...what kind of cameras do we use to film the show with? Henry: Tape. Why? C.C.: Because I was wondering if I could borrow one. I want to document something for my website. Henry: Why not use a digital camera. C.C.: Look, I know that you brought one with you for the Blue Crystal site. Now please. I'll be very careful with it. Henry: Fine. I'll give it to you later. C.C.:Thank you so much Henry. (C.C. hangs up with Henry.) C.C.:Lights. Camera. Action! - - - (Back at the hospital, Alexia sits next to Owen. He seems to have made much progress.) Owen:Where's Tanisha? Alexia: Downstairs getting some coffee. She'll be up soon. How is your hearing? Owen: What? Alexia: I'll take that as the same. Owen: I was just kidding. I think that it's slowly coming back to me with the hearing aid that the doctors gave me. I'm just really depressed about everything. Alexia: You're going to be okay. Owen: Let's just talk about something else. Please! Alexia: Mom called me. Owen: And? Alexia: I talked to her for a brief moment but I- I didn’t tell her that you were in the hospital. Owen: (disappointed) Lexi! Alexia: If she found out that you were hurt, again, I don't know what she'll do. Owen: Everything is okay though. You seriously need to tell her what's going on in our lives. I always feel as if you're holding things back from the ones who love you most. Alexia: Why would you figure that? Owen: Because you have so much responsibility in your life. You're the best damn event planner, and you haven't even graduated college yet. You take care of me. You make sure that everything is fine. When it's not! Nothing in this damn life is perfect and will ever be perfect! So when something bad comes along, Alexia Newlan is going to hide it. Alexia: I'm not- Owen: You are. I can tell when you're lying. I thought you've moved past the evil bitch stage. Alexia: I have. Owen: Then what's wrong? What kinds of thing aren’t you telling me? Alexia: (confessing) Mom has breast cancer. - - - (Ginny watches from a far as Alexia talks to Owen from the small glass window of Owen's hospital door.) Ginny:I can't tell you. (Ginny shutters back a tear.) Tanisha:Tell him what? (Ginny turns around to see a perturbed Tanisha.) Ginny:I was just leaving. Tanisha: You didn't heed my warning from the first time you paid Owen a visit. Ginny: What is it with you? It's like de’javu all over again. Tanisha: Owen doesn't want you here and neither do I. Ginny: Save your angry words for someone who cares. Tanisha: I'm serious. This is the last time! Ginny: Or what? You're like a broken record. Tanisha: My threats are worse than any promise you can think of. Ginny: The only thing you're going to do is probably lie your way through the relationship which you don’t deserve. (Tanisha slaps Ginny across the face.) Ginny:Did that feel good? Tanisha: Yeah it did. Ginny: Well you stole him from me first. Maybe you can't accept the fact that he wanted me over you to begin with. (Ginnny slaps Tanisha across the face back.) Ginny:You know what? That felt great. Tanisha: That's it bitch! You're going down. (Tanisha lunges at Ginny which she retaliates by strangling her. The two throw each other into the wall by pulling each other's hair.) Ginny:You can't accept the fact that he wants me! Not you. Tanisha: He made his decision! And he's my boyfriend. Not yours! (Ginny forcefully pushes Tanisha. She falls over a medicine cart. Tanisha then gets back up with a pitcher full of water and splashes it in Ginny's face. The two continue to go for each other's throat. Ginny grabs the pitcher and throws it at her, knocking her in the head. Tanisha picks the pitcher back up and continues to bash her in the head. Ginny tries shielding herself from the blows by tugging on Tanisha’s hair. Alexia and a nurse come outside to stop the fight.) Alexia: (screaming)STOP IT NOW! (Alexia pulls Tanisha as the nurse grabs Ginny. Both girls try to go for each other.) Ginny:Tell Owen that I'll be back. Tanisha: Over my dead body! Ginny: Hopefully that’s a promise. (Ginny brushes herself off and exits. Tanisha shakes her head in disgust.) - - - (Numerous reporters and photographers, gather around the outside of the gates of Point Palace. A female reporter looks into a camera to giver her story.) Reporter:We are just minutes away from President Hamerton, who called this press conference, to talk about gala explosion which has now killed a total of fifteen students and has injured many. (Blake walks up to the podium with London. She whispers in his ear.) London: I know that you're going to do fine but remember, don't let them see you sweat. (Blake smiles after swallowing the lump in his throat.) Blake: (speaks into the microphone)I first would like to thank you all for coming here. Members of the press and the school. We're here to discuss what exactly happened the night of the gala. This will forever be a horrific night of infamy. (As Blake is talking, Bryan begins to walk away. He then sees a reporter getting ready to flash his camera. Mark is about a twenty something reporter who seems to want the story. Bryan taps him on the shoulder. Mark turns around to face him.) Mark:Can I help you? Bryan: Yes. But I can help you out even more. Mark: Oh really. How? (Bryan takes out a pen and his check book and motions for him to go to a more private place. Mark obeys.) Bryan:You seem like the type of person who has an eye for reporting and money. I want you to ask some very important questions. Questions that are going to put President Hammerton on the spot. Questions about why he was accused of arson by Detective Miltner when a pair of matches were found falling out of Mister Hammerton's pocket. Questions about Nan Sheridan. Mark: I got it. And yes. I'll do it. How much? Bryan: That depends. Go on. You're up. Blake: So that's why I would like to extend my deepest apologies to the families who have gone through so much. Now we're going to take some questions. (Mark looks at Bryan, who nods back at him.) Blake: (acknowledging Mark)You back there. Mark: Yes Mark M, Cody Chronicle. I was wondering what the connection to you being blamed as an arsonist is since Detective Miltner found a pair of matches falling out of your pocket? Blake: Those matches were planted. I'm not a smoker and it was all a big misunderstanding. Mark: What about Nan Sheridan? She was killed by the explosion. Wouldn't you want her dead? (Blake begins to breathe deeper.) Blake:Next question. Mark: What are you hiding President? Blake: That is a very personal question. (London takes the microphone.) London:My husband is not an arsonist. He was with me the whole time. I'm a valuable witness and he did nothing but make sure that the gala was going to go off perfect. With the help of Alexia Newlan that happened. Regarding Nan Sheridan...we all know what kind of person she was. Whatever happened to her, happened for a reason. Will: She wasn't the only one who died! (Everyone turns their attention to Will.) Will:Why don't you mention Lenvy? Blake: (to himself) Great. (Bryan gets a huge smile on his face.) Bryan:This just keeps getting better and better. Blake: I extend my deepest- Will: Apologies. You already said that. (Will gets up on stage and to the podium.) Will:You don't mind if I speak do you? Blake: Just as long as it isn't ill of me. Will: It's not always about you. Blake: Never said it was. (Will turns his attention to the crowd.) Will:My girlfriend, Lenvy Elliot. She was a beauty. If anyone who didn't know her, you could just imagine an angel. That's what she was to me and to everyone around her. Even the people who hated us the most. She died in the explosion. And it sickens me to think that someone caused it! Blake: Which is why, we're going to find out who did it immediately. (Blake pats Will on the shoulder and looks compassionate.) Will:Nice publicity stunt putz. Blake: This is real. London: I knew that you two would come to closure. There are other things to worry about besides some stupid little rivalry. Will: I agree to that. (Bryan writes a check and gives it to Mark without anyone seeing.) Bryan:You did good. This was what I wanted. Mark: But look at the glory he's getting now. Bryan: It's not that much glory. It's suffering. And it's only the beginning. Get out of my sight kid, we never met before. - - - (Mika settles in her room and opens up her laptop on her desk. She looks over the names of the Gala victims from a news website. She scans the names until her cell phone rings. Mika turns down the volume on her TV.) Mika:Yep she’s on there. Unfortunately that’s why she didn’t call you back. I got your e-mail. I have to say that I haven’t seen him yet. (Mika turns her head and watches the live press conference.) Mika:Wait…yeah I did see him. You’ll send me more information right? Good. Please keep me informed on anything that changes. (Mika hangs up with her caller and looks at the television.) Mika:Now it begins. - - - (After calming herself down and working the late shift at The Palace Cafe, Ginny ties her apron around her waist to start her night. Nate is the first customer that she waits on.) Ginny:What can I get you? Nate: A smile. Ginny: That's not possible. I haven't really been having the best day. Nate: Yeah this place seems pretty dead tonight. Ginny: That's not on the list of my concerns. Nate: What is? Ginny: You don't want to know. (Nate looks behind him.) Nate: (softly smiling)Unless a customer comes up behind me and screams that they want a coffee, then yes...I do want to know. Ginny: Stupid guy problems. Nate: Figures. Ginny: Yeah well if your species weren't so stupid, then maybe everyone would get along. Nate: Maybe you're just seeking the wrong guy. Ginny: Maybe you're right. (Ginny gets him a free mocha latte.) Ginny:It's on the house. Nate: What did I deserve this for? Ginny: (flirting) You made me smile. Surely enough that was your intention from the moment you saw me. Nate: I want more than some free drink. Ginny: Sometimes we can't always get what we want. I know for a fact that I'm not getting- Forget it. His name doesn't matter. Nate: Whoever he is. He's an idiot. Any guy deserves to have a hard working and sexy girl such as yourself. Ginny: You sure are a charmer. (Nate writes down his number on a napkin and hands it to her.) Nate:Call me. We'll have fun sometime. Ginny: I will. What's your name? Nate: It's Nate, Ginny. Ginny: Guess you can read a name tag. (Nate exits with his drink and winks at her. She looks at the napkin.) Ginny:Maybe I should forget about Owen and move on. - - - (Back at the cast party in a hot night club called Cobra, C.C. watches closely as Carlos continues to get drunk at the bar. She didn't even have to do anything. He approaches her while stumbling.) C.C.:I think you had enough. Carlos: I think you're right. C.C.: Do you want to go back to the hotel? Carlos: Yeah. (They drive off to the hotel in a taxi. When they get to the room, C.C. looks to see the camera that she has planted above the TV that overlooks the bed.) Carlos:I need to pass out. I drank too much to forget abut how much pain Jenny's in. C.C.: Then you need to rest. Carlos: I do. (Carlos slips into his bed. C.C. goes into the bathroom and puts on the red headed wig and a sexy pink negligee.) C.C.: Carlos? Carlos? (C.C. slaps him across the face to wake him up.) Carlos:Jenny? C.C.: Yeah. It's me. Carlos: I've missed you baby. C.C.: I'm here and I’m fine. Let’s enjoy the time we have together. (C.C. hits the record button on the remote to start the camera. Carlos kisses C.C. thinking that it's Jenny. He pulls her in tight. The passion between them sizzles. It's what C.C. has always wanted. She begins to kiss his chest and then his abdomen. She seductively looks up into the camera biting her lip. The action continues to sizzle. Carlos’s eyes are slit while C.C. straddles him. Her head tilts back as she lets out a moan of ecstasy.) C.C.:Don’t stop Carlos! I’m all yours! Yes. (C.C. undoes her wig but Carlos is too drunk to notice. The two sleeping together continues to be recorded.)
  4. Thank you for all of the comments! Afte re-editing this episode, it really felt like Season 3 again. I know that this season is a bit slower but it's only to make for better drama and to flesh out the characters more. I'm always trying to stay away from having characters talk the same or act the same. They all have reasons why they do what they do to who they do. In this episode, Ava really shined. She has been hurt way too much in her life so she saw no other way to console herself except for drinking. Though Nan is gone (however it's a soap opera and Nan is Nan so do you really think she's gone?) C.C. has sort of stepped in to take her place. The diva will definitely be sinking her claws into someone who Nan used to fight over as well. C.C. relies on sex whereas Nan relied on explosives, lies, and anything else that's unthinkable for revenge. I can also tell you that in the next episode the GOT love triangle goes into motion even more when the girls square off. Alexia's lying/keeping secrets takes its toll on Owen. Onto another love shape, the Nick/C.C./Carlos/Jenny plot heats up when Carlos returns to find Jenny brainwashed but of course C.C. does something very drastic. The Carrie plot is a huge mystery that I had fun writing and the end twist will leave y'all breathless. As well as Mika who's agenda isn't sought out until later episodes and we all know what Nate pretty much wants. Power and another 'p' word.
  5. I was so happy to see Helena and of course being her Helenic self was a nice treat. However, I was surprised to read so much about SAM. I thought I was reading an In the Light episode but that's another blog/show (just kidding). Good episode!
  6. Very touching episode. This was the first time I was really into the Ria/Karim/Sharan/Kevin quadrangle. I really felt Ria's desperation to keep her man but of course she deserved it which will only complicate things even more when Karim goes after Sharan! The Jodie/Mike plot is very dramatic and I was worried how it was going to be written but it's very classy. This raises tons of story plot oppertunites about Mike wanting to get closer (physically and emotionally) to Jodie. Last but not least, my favorite BIA herself was amazing. Which is funny because another character on PP will be pulling a similar stunt. We must be telepathic or something!
  7. Previously on Point Palace: - Alley knew that she was caught at the wrong place at the wrong time. Dylan was angry to find that he thought she tried to pull Carrie's life support. The doctors and nurses saved her, yet again, only to have her fall back further in her coma. John tried to stop Dylan from getting Officer Wendell but he couldn't and Alley was taken in for questioning. - Owen got news from Dr. Quarr that he's going to have to stay longer in the hospital to try and fix his deafening ear problem. He complains to Alexia and Tanisha on how he wants to leave immediately. - Carlos is depressed in LA when he can't stop thinking of Jenny. C.C. tries to cheer him up by making a very suggestive pass at him, but he turns her down. - Bryan reads The Point Palace Inquiry with happiness because the lead story talks about the accusations that he caused Blake to have. London pays him a visit to display her disgust for him and shows him by slapping across the face. She warns him to leave Blake alone. - Jenny wakes up to see Dr. Quarr taking care of her. It seems that she has amnesia and can't remember anything. Nick explains what happened to her. She asks who he is to her. He responds by saying that they are lovers. - Nate sleeps with yet another girl named Claudia who he just uses for sex. - Sky visits Ava and the two learn a lot about each other. Sky learns that Ava is an ex-alcoholic and Ava learns that Sky is a lesbian. - Leon promises to print Blake's side of the story. When Leon leaves, Blake thinks that he is the only one in his office building and begins to leave. However he isn't alone. Will is angered by the story he read and wants to kill Blake for supposedly killing Lenvy. The two get into a fist fight and almost destroy the hallway foyer. They both begin rolling down the steps and through the banister railing, landing head first in the office fountain pool. Episode 83: Tempting Habits Executive Story Consultant & Creator: Matt Politylo Logo Designer: Mary Zimmerman - - - (The fountain that Blake and Will fell from had broken both of their fall. Blake is the first one to get out of the pool. He looks at Will who has not come out of it yet. Blake pulls Will out. Will begins to gasp for air.) Blake:I think you've had enough. Are you okay? Will: No. I want to kill you. I wanted to throw you over that balcony and make sure that you cracked your skull open. Blake: (continuing to breathe heavy) Do you really hate me that much? Will: You took away the one thing that ever meant something in my life. Blake: I'm telling you that I didn't do it! Until you find out who that was or who was involved. Go and blame them. (Will lunges at Blake. He pushes him off of him.) Blake:You should leave. This night has gotten worse for the both of us! Will: Do you swear on your life that you had nothing to do with that explosion? Blake: I hate you for what you did to Zak, Alley, and Carrie. And even me! But I would never kill someone! We both know what happened in the past between us. Let’s just leave it at that but you’re going after the wrong person. Will: You’re talking about the time when I crashed your car into a tree when you were drunk and then ran over Nan. Who would've known that her kid would have been mine? That was years ago! Blake: If you only would have listened to me in the first place, none of this would have ever happened! Please just go. Will: (pointing) I'm going to find out who did this. And when I do, they're going to pay. You better hope you’re not lying to me! - - - (The next afternoon at Cody Memorial, Dylan looks over Carrie.) Dylan:I didn't think that Alley was going to do try and do what she did. She probably just ruined the chances of you coming to. I guess I'll go and get a doctor to see how you are. You're probably not going to make any progress. (Dylan looks away from Carrie. He goes to the door and turns around. He sees Carrie's eyes actually flutter open.) Dylan:Carrie? Carrie: Yes? Dylan: Oh my god. You're actually awake. (Dylan begins to hug and kiss Carrie's cheek as he is so happy to see her awake.) Carrie:Hi. Nice to see you too. Dylan: I seriously thought that you were never going to wake up. I was so worried about you. Carrie: Thanks. Where's mommy and daddy? Dylan: Your parents? Carrie: Yeah I want to see them. Where are they? Dylan: I didn't think to call them. I really don't know them that well. Carrie: That's okay. I'm sure they will be here soon. I must have had my tonsils taken out. Dylan: I think that they're still in Lexington. They probably would have been notified if you were actually seriously hurt, but now that's not happening. You had a more serious accident then tonsillitis. I don't even want to think about what happened. You look great. How do you feel? Carrie: Hungry. I want some ice cream and some candy! (Dylan gives her a weird look.) Dylan:We'll go down to the food court later. Carrie: (joyfully screaming) YEAH!!! Dylan: What's wrong with you? Carrie: Nothing. I'm just happy. You don't mind if I watch cartoons do you? Dylan: (confused) Go right ahead. (Carrie turns on the television set and begins to laugh.) Carrie:I love Nickelodeon! Dylan: I didn't think that college girls still watched silly cartoons. Except for Adult Swim or something more mature for our age. Carrie: (even more confused) College girl? I'm not even in junior high yet. Dylan: What? Carrie: I'm only ten years old buddy! - - - (In Los Angeles, C.C. sits on her couch in her hotel room and begins to think.) C.C.:Stupid Jenny. If she wasn't in the picture, I could have Carlos all to myself! It's almost as if he wouldn't touch any other girl, unless it was her. (C.C. stands up and goes over to her mini bar.) C.C.: (twirling the bottles)Look at all this alcohol. It could alter someone's mind and it would be such a shame if it went to waste. (C.C. begins to smile at herself.) C.C.:I am the best actress. That is why I will win my award. If the only girl that he will sleep with is Jenny... (C.C. begins to look at herself in the mirror. She starts playing with her hair.) C.C.:Then I'll play the part of red headed Jenny Fremann! - - - (Back at Cody Memorial Hospital, Ginny visits Owen yet again, only this time she is alone with him.) Ginny:I'm glad to see that you're awake. How are you feeling? (The only thing that Owen heard her say was 'awake' and 'feeling.') Owen:It's nice to see you. Out of all the stuff that I put you through. It's amazing that you will actually come and visit. Ginny: What are friends for? Besides the last time I saw you, you were in a deep sleep. I was worried sick about you. Owen: Yeah. Ginny: So how are you doing? Have the doctors told you anything? Owen: I really can't hear you. Ginny: Why? Owen: No. It's nothing against you at all, but the doctors told me that I'm going deaf. Ginny: Oh Owen...I'm so sorry to hear that. Owen: What? Ginny: (raises her voice) I'm sorry. Owen: It's okay. I'm just a little depressed about it. That's all. Ginny: You're going to be fine. I'm sure they'll find something to cure it. Owen: Now I know how old people must feel. (Ginny smiles at his comment.) Ginny:I should get going. I have to be at work in a few minutes. (Ginny begins to open the door.) Owen:Wait. Ginny: Yeah? Owen: It means a lot to me, to have you here. Thank you. Ginny: And that's why I have to go because of this. (Ginny exits. She looks back at his room.) Ginny:I can't tell you how I feel about you. Not yet at least. - - - (In the Cody Precinct, Alley is in questioning with John by her side. Officer Wendell sits down across from her.) Alley:Is this even necessary? Alan: Unfortunately. John: Is she getting arrested? Alan: That depends. Besides, I'm the one who is supposed to be asking the questions here. So, if you don't want to both be held in contempt, I would suggest that you shut up. (Both are quiet.) Alan:Now please explain to me what you were doing in Carrie's room in the first place. Alley: I found out from Dylan that she was hurt from the explosion. So I went in there and saw that she was unconscious. Alan: If she was unconscious, then how long were you in there for? Alley: Five minutes or so. Alan: What kind of things were you saying to her? Alley: I- I was telling her that I thought she deserved what had happened to her. John: Wendell, they both hate each other. Alan: (to John) And why is that? John: It's a very long story. Alan: That's why were here. To get her story straight. John: Do you want me to tell it or her? (joking) I’m no Stephen King but I’m sure my story will have its entertainment. Alan: I guess since she's the one in here for questioning, her story telling will do just fine. Please begin. Alley: John and I used to go out. You of course knew that. Carrie left town for her ex boyfriend and thus she left her boyfriend, our good friend, Dylan. Then London Tyler came to town. That's John's ex and she told him she was pregnant. John and I grew further from one another. I then cheated on him with Dylan. John and I broke up and then John grabbed Carrie back into Point Palace, just to break us up. Instead they start going out. It turns out that Dylan and Carrie cheated on us. We recently found out and decided to exit the school. Then we returned. Did I leave anything out? John: And Dylan thought that we were both dead because we told them that we were going on a bus to Philly. We didn't know that a bus going to Philly would actually have something happened to it. Instead we went to Florida but had to return once we heard about the explosion. Alan: Wow. I have to tell you that that story deserves to be on either a soap opera or a talk show. Alley, I know you. How did Carrie's condition go from bad to worse? Alley: I tripped over a wire that was connected to her air supply. The alarm went off and then everyone walked in on what looked to be a really bad situation. John: Alley would never do such a thing like that. Alley: Don't you think that if I were to kill her, I would have done something more planned out? Or maybe even spontaneous. Like...suffocating her with a pillow. Not that I have a criminal mind, I'm just trying to give you a- Alan: I understand. You must have been caught in the wrong situation at an even worse time. I'm going to let you two go. Please, for your sake Alley, try staying out of trouble. - - - (The next day, Blake and London sit in Blake's office as Myra pours them some hot tea. Blake doesn’t have some but London begins to eat numerous finger foods.) Myra:That is such a shame about what happened. To think that there were no securities cops here or anything. Blake: They don't come until every other hour. London: I'm just glad that you're okay. (There is a knock on Blake's door.) Myra:You don't have any appointments today. I wonder who that can be. (Myra opens the door. Nate walks in and begins to check Myra out.) Myra: (to Blake)Shall I escort him out? Blake: Nate Mavick! Come in. (Myra exits as Nate walks in and shakes Blake's hand.) Nate:It seems as if you've been in the news lately. (Nate gives him the article of Blake's side of the story.) Blake:Like they say, no news like bad news. Nate, I would like you to meet my wife London. (London shakes Nate's hand.) London:It's nice to meet you. How do you two know each other? Nate: Blake and I were really good friends from back home. Blake: He actually dated Alley. That was such a long time ago. Nate: I see that you two must have a baby on the way as well. I remember when this kid was a virgin for the longest time. London: Actually this baby belongs to another- It’s a long and personal story. Nate: So you two haven't- Blake: I don't kiss and tell. Nate: Yes you do. (Blake laughs at the comment.) Blake:What brings you to Point Palace? Nate: Besides all of the hot girls that want me, I came to see you about a job. Blake: A job? Nate: At first I was going to just stay for a visit but then I found out all about how you're now the president of Point Palace. London: It's almost as if he owns the place. Blake: What exactly would you want to do? Nate: You know how skilled I'm at in the computer field. That would probably be my number one choice. Unless anything else is available. Blake: I'll have my secretary call as soon as possible. Nate: Thank you. You won't regret it. (Nate shakes Blake's hand.) Nate: (to London)Too bad I didn't get an invite to the wedding. However, it was nice to meet you. London: Pleasure. (Nate exits.) London:He seems like a very nice and interesting character. Blake: Unless he's changed, which I doubt, then he's still a man whore with a hidden agenda! - - - (Before they go to the hospital, Tanisha waits for Alexia to get ready.) Tanisha:Hurry up. Alexia: I have to look really good. Tanisha: For your brother? You're not me. Alexia: No. For the cute, single doctors whose eye I might catch. Tanisha: Good luck with that sister. (Alexia goes into her bathroom to get ready. Her phone rings.) Tanisha:Are you going to get it? Alexia: Not at the moment but you can get it. (Tanisha answers Alexia's phone.) Alexia:Hello? Christina: Lexi? Alexia: No this is Tanisha. May I ask who's calling? Christina: This is Lexi's mother. You're not by chance the same Tanisha who is going out with my son are you? Tanisha: Yes I am. Christina: It's so nice to meet you. Tanisha: You too. Christina: You and Owen will have to come out to Raleigh some day to meet me in person. Tanisha: Will do. Do you want to talk to your daughter? Christina: Sure. It was nice meeting you. Tanisha: You too. (Tanisha hands the phone to Alexia.) Alexia:Who is it? Christina: It's your mom. (Alexia shoots Tanisha a worried look.) Tanisha:Just talk to her! Alexia: Hi mom. Christina: What took you so long to answer your phone? Alexia: I was getting ready for something. Christina: Oh. Like what? (Alexia begins to envision what the response to telling her the truth would be like.) Alexia:Well mom. Owen was in an explosion and he's in the hospital. Oh and he's practically going deaf as we speak. Christina: WHAT?! I'm having a heart attack! Call me an ambulance! Now! (The vision ends.) Christina:Lexi? Lexi are you there? Alexia: Yeah. Sorry. Christina: Well? What do you have planned for today? Alexia: I'm just going to go out with some friends. Christina: Have fun. I really don't mean to burden you but I care. Alexia: How are things going for you? Christina: Things are looking up. I have good days and bad days. I'm going to fight the cancer no matter what! Alexia: I'll pray for you. Well I'll talk to you- Christina: By the way. Where has Owen been lately? He hasn't answered his cell phone. - - - (In Cody Memorial, Agatha answers the phone.) Agatha:Cody Memorial, fourth floor. How may I help you? Carlos: Hey it's Carlos. Agatha: Carlos. What are you doing calling me? You're supposed to be on vacation. Carlos: Yeah kind of. Agatha: Have you gotten your award yet? Carlos: No. It's later tonight. I'm just really nervous. Agatha: Don't be. You're going to win. I can feel it. Carlos: Thanks. I just wanted to call and see how Jenny was doing. Agatha: I wasn't working yesterday but let me go and check. (Agatha finds Nick.) Agatha:Carlos is on the phone and he wants to know how Jenny is doing.) Nick: Sure. I'll take the call. (Nick picks up the phone and begins to talk.) Nick:Carlos how's Los Angeles? Carlos: How's Jenny? Nick: Unfortunately she hasn't made much of a recovery. She's still in a coma. Carlos: Oh. Thank you. Nick…please take good care of her for me. Nick: No problem. Will do. (Nick hangs up with Carlos and goes into Jenny's room. She's eating her dinner.) Jenny:This isn't the best food. Nick: It's hospital food. What do you expect? Jenny: It makes me miss wherever I'm from. Nick: You go to Point Palace University in Cody, Colorado. Jenny: Then how did you and I meet? Nick: At the Palace Cafe. I accidentally spilled your drink and then I bought you a new one. We've been talking ever since. Jenny: Love at first spill I guess. Nick: It was. You actually had someone call for you. Jenny: Who? Nick: Just one of your loser ex boyfriends. He's really nothing to worry about. You dumped him along time ago. - - - (In another part of the school, a black Eclipse drives up in front of the school. After finding a nice parking spot, a very attractive tall Asian female appears. She takes off her sunglasses and looks up at one of the dorm rooms. She pulls out her cell phone and begins to make a call.) Mika:Yes I’m here. It’s a very nice school and the plane ride was smooth. Can’t believe that it’s private. It seems too big. Send me all the information that you have. I’m all signed up? Good. Class schedules and such? Great. Hope that it wasn’t too expensive for you but then again, nothing ever is. It’s going to be fun to be a normal college student. (Mika hangs up with her caller and walks on.) Mika:If that were only the truth. - - - (Ava is walking along the streets of Point Palace and looks into the windows of stores. She then gets a call on her cell phone.) Sky:Hey. Ava: Hi. Sky: Look. I wanted to make sure that you weren't freaked out by what I told you the other day. Ava: I'm not but you are who you are. Sky: Thanks. We're still friends right? Ava: Nothing's going to change that. I have to go. Sky: Wait- (Ava hangs up with Sky. She then looks into the window of a liquor store. It was almost as if it was calling out to her. She couldn't resist and walks in. She goes directly to a bottle of Spiced Rum.) Ava:I’ve missed you. No I can’t do this! (Ava places the bottle back onto the shelf until picking it up again and without thinking purchases it. She walks back to her car and opens the bottle. The smell tingles her nose. Ava looks around to find no one and takes a long swig.) (Ava drives back to her dorm room and continues to drink some more. She finds a Psychology 101 book on top of her coffee table. Ava picks it up and examines it.) Ava:Taught by the wonderful, the married, the exiting Professor James Vaughne. (She then begins to have a flashback of when she almost got into a car accident with James. It was the first time they met. She thought he was handsome and charming. That was the first time he saved her. And then she was possessed by Jake and wreaked havoc on Vicki and Ike. It was the second time James had saved her. And it was the first time she fell in love with him.) Ava:Looking at this book makes me think of him. (Ava takes another sip of the bottle which was a quarter of the way gone. She throws the book against her wall and makes her way upstairs.) Ava: (to the bottle)You were my hope when Will left me to come here. You were my hope when Zak died. You're going to be my hope once again because of James! (Ava continues to drink the bottle. Gulping the heavy liquor.) Ava: (tears pour out of her eyes)Things are always taken away from us…especially me! (As time wears on, Ava gets drunker and drunker. Until she becomes completely plastered, she starts herself a bath out of her drunken stuper.) Ava:I- love you James! I absolutely do. I- (She doesn't even know that she's talking to her drunk self into a mirror. She then keels over and passes out in the rising water of the bath tub.)
  8. The dialogue in this episode was razor sharp! We must be in tune because I totally was thinking I bet Jodie has an STD, but it's much worse. Poor Jodie and poor Daniel. Damn that guy never gets a break.
  9. Whoa chilling ending! I was really happy to see Ashley back alive because she's such a fun psycho to read about. Or this could be Bryan's mind playing tricks on him out of guilt. Daniel's in even more trouble now that Mona will be "taking care of him." I can't believe how much toruture he's endured throughout the series. Seriously Jody and Ty make a better pairing then Jenn and Ty. Jenn's too goody-good where as Jodie's a whore. Literally. Awesome ending. Sorry I've been distant on my postings, I was blocked from the blogs for sometime but I'm back.
  10. Finally Chris and Lauren hooked up! I was so happy to read that and when I did read it, I had my mouth covered in shock and said to myself "oh my god!" Then again, it is geared towards Cinemax. Poor Natalia, everything seems to be against her. Mark, Dahlia, now Suga! Suga's not one to be messed with and on top of that Diego's going to be blackmailing her. I'm sure she's going to up and kill someone because that's too much stress for a scheming vixen to handle. Who I also feel bad for is Daniel. I imagine his desperation and how he feels tied down to insanity because of Mona. Plus on top of that the one he loves is smoking stogies. (Which I've never heard it called that before). Awesome episode! Seduction definitely!
  11. This episode was the best so far! There was so much action and drama behind it. I really felt like Chester should've been there more for Yvette but surely this could be signs for love falling apart because Yvette is a woman on a mission. Definitely like Cassandra's character and the casting of Marj Dusay was emmy gold. Can't wait to read what happens next.
  12. Previously on Point Palace: - The familiar students that returned were Alley and John who were believed to be dead by Carrie and Dylan. They are both happy to see Blake and London. The reason why they returned was because of the explosion and its impact on their friends. Officer Wendell and Detective Miltner arrive to talk to Dr. Quarr. Blake overhears everything and demands to know how many people have died so far. Trella, Brandon, and others were involved. Blake accidentally has the matches fall out of his pocket and Det. Miltner picks it up for further examination. - Carlos takes Agatha's advice on deciding to take a break from the hospital. He gets a visit from his coworkers from "Blue Crystal." They have some good news for him. C.C. and him have been nominated for awards for their work on the show. It means that Carlos would have to go LA They also try to convince him to rejoin the show. Can he disobey Jenny and leave her behind? - Alexia admitted to Tanisha that when Owen comes to, if he does, that they might have to leave because their mother has breast cancer. Ginny makes a visit to see Owen, and Tanisha confronts her to tell her that he chose her so maybe she should get over him. Ginny asks why she is gloating. Ginny also tells her that she may have Owen but has no dignity. - Victor calls in to check on Carrie through Dylan. Dylan warns her that she's going to be fine and there's no need to call again! - Nate runs into Chordelia at the Palace Cafe. She wants to see him again but he wants nothing to do with her. He tries explaining to her that the previous night was nothing but just "fun." - Ava goes to classes. Her one male professor reminds her too much of James so she excuses herself to leave. When no is around in the hallway, she breaks down in agony. - Blake sits alone in his office to reflect upon everything that has happened. Bryan pays him a visit and tells him very bad news. It turns out that Nan died. Bryan then threatens him by saying that he will take over Nan's place and will be ten times worse than Nan ever was. - Gloria comes in to see Lenvy. Her condition seems to be stable. She is sort of talking but is burnt/cut badly. There are bandages all around her. Will tells Gloria that it may be their last time to see her. Gloria tells her daughter that she will always love her no matter what. Then Will says a tearful good bye to Lenvy. She asks "how could you love a monster?" Then her IV monitor flatlines while Gloria has doctors rush in to help her but it's too late because she dies. Episode 80: When the Opportunity Arises Executive Story Consultant & Creator: Matt Politylo Logo Designer: Mary Zimmerman - - - (The scene of when Lenvy dying was playing through Will's mind as he watched her casket lowered into the ground. Gloria was by his side and gave him a lot of the support that he needed. The flight to Lexington, Massachusetts was not one that he wanted to take. The cold windy air began to sting his face. Gloria begins to nudge on his arm.) Gloria: Would you like to say anything about Lenvy? Will: It's okay. I don't really know anyone that well. Gloria: Are you sure? Will: Yeah. I've already said my peace with her. Gloria: I think that I need to speak about my little girl. Will: You'll do fine. (Gloria stands in front of the soon to be grave.) Gloria: (to Lenvy's family members and other friends) I want to thank you all for coming. It's sad that we have to be here because of these tragic events. In my mind I want to believe that everything happens for a reason. This however, was certainly not fair at all. I don't want to sound selfish but my daughter was taken away from me. I'm never going to be able to see Lenvy grow up anymore then she did. She made me so proud, but now there's no way that she can make me any prouder. (She begins to break down in tears.) Gloria: She's gone. My baby is gone. (Will stands up and hugs her.) Will: This will end the ceremony. If you are all interested, we'll have be having a wake at the house. (People begin to exit. Will turns to the already buried casket.) Will: Goodbye Lenvy. - - - (Back at the hospital, where Jenny has not waken up yet, Carlos talks to the only person that truly understands him at this point.) Agatha: She has made some progress. Carlos: By progress do you mean not waking up from her coma? Agatha: She's still breathing. It's almost as if she's taking a long nap. Carlos: Is that how you sugar coat things for your family members? Agate: Pretty much. In my opinion I have seen much worse, and I have faith in your girlfriend. Carlos: Thanks. Agatha: Anything else that's bothering you? Carlos: I have tons of problems. We all do. Which one would you like to talk about? The fact that the person who hates me the most holds the life of the one that I love in his hands and at any point could turn the tables on me. Agatha: Nick would never do that. He's a professional. Carlos: Yeah right. Also, I was offered some pretty good news. Agatha: Oh yeah? Like what? Carlos: My character was nominated for an award for some show. Which means that if I wanted to I would have to go Los Angeles. Agatha: That really doesn't seem like a problem to me. More like a blessing. Not a lot of people get jobs as an actor and then to get nominated for something, well that's just a blessing. Carlos: It would mean that I would have to leave Jenny behind. Agatha: She's going to be okay Carlos. You have to believe in her. Carlos: So you're saying that I should go? Agatha: Like I said, believe. Carlos: Thanks. (Dr. Quarr begins to eavesdrop from far behind like always. He then gets an idea. He sneaks into Jenny's room and over looks her.) Nick: Carlos will be going away. I'm going to have to do everything in my power to make sure that you're all right. Your little boyfriend just gave me a great idea. And you're the prize! - - - (One of the most heated meetings was yet to start when Blake slams his fists down on the table to calm everyone down.) Bryan: Where's our new Presidential Assistant? Dylan I believe his name is. Blake: He may have some of his own personal problems to attain to. Lanoi: Or he could have died along with the others. Benjamin: Let's not think negative. Surely enough he's okay. (Dylan makes his way through the door.) Blake: Dylan. Thank you for coming. I'm glad to see that everything's all right. Dylan: Sorry for being late. Bryan: And why were you late? Dylan: Because my girl friend is in a deep sleep at the hospital! Any more questions? (Dylan sits down and the meeting begins.) Blake: We have a serious problem on our hands. Numerous students have died and many more, like Carrie, are injured. Lanoi: Then what are we going to do about it? We can't just send them some sort of gift basket or a bouquet of flowers! Blake: That's already been done. I wanted to hear some of your ideas. Dylan: Why not see if we can pay for all of the hospital damages. Benjamin: That could be a possibility, but then that would leave many clubs and organizations, to be unfunded. Which would be a bad situation on our part. Lanoi: What exactly caused this explosion in the first place? Blake: Detective Miltner and Officer Wendell are looking into that. Bryan: In speaking of Detective Miltner, he actually told me some very interesting information that I'm allowed to discuss with you all. Blake: How exactly did you come across this information? Bryan: That's really none of your concern. Lanoi: Please go on Bryan. Bryan: Well, it turns out that, someone is thinking that it was arson! Benjamin: Arson?! Bryan: Yep. He also found a pair of matches that came out of Blake's pocket. You don't smoke Blake, so why the hell would you have them? Dylan: What exactly are you implying? Bryan: I'm implying that I think Blake had something to do with it. Blake: That's just down right wrong and just typical of you! Bryan: Don't worry about trying to tell me that I'm wrong. I've already gave Leon Kain the story of the century. Maybe the headlines should read, President Accused of Arson. Leon is probably waiting for your story as we speak. Blake: I would like everyone to know how much of a liar Bryan Daniels really is. This is just his ridiculous efforts to try and out me. It's becoming very pathetic. Bryan: I'm just fighting for Nan's sake. It's what she would have wanted. Rest her soul. - - - (In one of her classes that she has been skipping lately due to her circumstances in which she would be excused, Alexia begins to walk out. She plans on going to the hospital to visit Owen, before she does, she pulls out her cell phone to call Tanisha.) Tanisha: Hey. Alexia: Just wanted to let you know that I'm on my way back from class. If you want to go you're more then welcome to. Tanisha: I might do that but I have some good news. Alexia: Yeah? Tanisha: Owen woke up a few hours ago. Alexia: Really? When did this happen? Tanisha: A few hours ago. Dr. Quarr informed me. He's sleeping now though. Alexia: Great. I'll be there as soon as possible. (She accidentally bumps into someone. It turns out to be Nate.) Alexia: Sorry. Nate: It's okay. (She begins to walk away from him. He checks her out and likes what he sees.) Nate: (calling her attention) Excuse me? Alexia: Yeah? Nate: I'm new here. My name is Nate Mavick. And you are...? Alexia: Alexia. I actually have to get going though. Are you lost or something? Nate: Yeah. I'm looking for the President's quarters. Alexia: If you're looking to speak to Blake Hammerton, then you're going to be waiting for a long time. He's really busy because of what happened. Nate: You must be talking about the explosion. Alexia: You're either really smart or really observant. Nate: So I've been told. I think that it would be a smart idea if while I'm waiting to talk to him, that maybe you and I could go and have some fun. (Alexia is appalled by his comment. She responds by slapping him across the face.) Alexia: That was the worst and most vulgar pick up line ever! Nate: I was only asking for a date...and possibly more. Alexia: You're getting turned down. Nate: No girl has ever turned me down before. Alexia: Then I'm more than happy to be the first. (Alexia gets in her car to go to the hospital. Nate looks on. She's probably someone that he'll have to conquer or just a leap to someone else.) - - - (Later in the evening, Ava decides to actually go out. She could have stayed within her home but instead she wanted to be near some people. Ava goes to the Palace cafe.) Ava: Ginny it's good to see that you're working. Ginny: Yeah. We've been kind of busy lately. Where have you been? I haven't seen you here in weeks. Ava: I've been around. How's life treating you? Ginny: The fact that I was dumped for another girl, pretty crappy. What about you? Ava: Same. Guys suck don't they. Ginny: Yep. Ava: I'll just get a Double Grande Mochaly please. Ginny: Coming right up. (Ava finds a quiet place to sit down. She waits for her drink to arrive. While she is waiting she notices a musician playing Indie rock that is appropriate for a college coffee house café she thought to herself. Then her drink is laid down on her table.) Ava: Thanks Ginny. (Ava turns around to find that it's not Ginny but someone else. A thin brunette girl who was standing in line behind her.) Ava: Why do you have my drink? Sky: It's on me. Ava: You paid for it? Sky: Of course. I heard your story about what happened and I felt bad for you. Sky Safford. (Sky extends her hand to greet her.) Ava: My name's Ava. (Ava shakes back with a smile.) Sky: Cecilenelli. I've read about you in the paper. Ava: Guess I've been pretty famous around here. Sky: You seemed pretty interesting so I thought that this would be the best way to get to know an interesting person such as yourself. Ava: It's a start. You really didn't have to. Sky: I wanted to. Which man left you? Ava: Professor James Vaughne. He left me high and dry. You probably read about him in the papers or you may have even had him for class. Sky: Look at it this way, you won't have to get into any scandalous situations anymore. Ava: That's a good way to look at it. You really got my mind off of him. Lately, even I couldn't do that. Sky: What are new friends for? (Ava raises her drinks.) Ava: To hating men. Sky: To hating men. (They clink their glasses and sip to the start of a new friendship.) - - - (Dylan looks at Carrie who still hasn't woken up yet. The heated meeting was just that, heated.) Dylan: Guess what happened today. Bryan blamed Blake for the explosion. He's the new Nan Sheridan in town. Or at least that's what he's trying to make himself out to be. (She doesn't respond to him talking.) Dylan: (to himself) What's the use? (Dylan goes to get some fresh air. He opens the door and notices John and Alley standing in front of him. For a second, he thinks that he is hallucinating. He touches both their arms and their faces.) Alley: (annoyed) What are you doing? Dylan: (amazed) You're real. You're actually alive! John: Of course. We left before the explosion happened. Dylan: We all thought you were dead. Alley: How? Dylan: Carrie got a text message on her phone. It was some sort of news update or something. It said that a bus going to Philadelphia had crashed into a lake and there were no known survivors. Alley: (realizing) Oh. And you thought that Dylan: You and John were on that bus. John: We only told you that we were going to Philly because we thought that if anyone was trying to look for us or try to contact us that they wouldn't find us. We went to Florida instead. Dylan: Pretty clever. Alley: We heard about Carrie. Dylan: It's very sad. And you two have the most reason to gloat over it. After all that happens. John: Now what kind of a person would that make us? Dylan: Human. It's not like you wouldn't have thought about it or anything. John: I'm sorry. Alley: You don't mind if I go in to talk to her do you? Dylan: She won't listen but you can try. (Alley walks into the room and looks at unconscious Carrie.) Alley: For once you get to listen to every damn word I'm going to say because you have no where to go! - - - (On another floor, in another hospital room, Owen wakes up from his nap. Tanisha is standing in front of him.) Tanisha: Hey you. Owen: Hey. Tanisha: Alexia's on her way. Owen: Good. Tanisha: How do you feel? Owen: What? Tanisha: I asked how you felt. (Owen looks confused. The reason is because all he hears is ringing when she's talking. He does however catch what she's trying to say.) Tanisha: Are you okay? Owen: I feel fine. (Dr. Quarr comes in to check on Owen.) Nick: (to Owen) You know that this girl has been here almost every day. You're pretty lucky to have her. Owen: Yep. Nick: I just wanted to let you know that we're going to run a few tests. Then you'll be free to go. (Owen shakes his head. He really can't hear what exactly Dr. Quarr just said. Hopefully the whole hearing thing is just temporary Owen thinks to himself.) - - - (Back in Carrie's room, Alley looks over Carrie. Her air supply breaks the silence that is between them.) Alley: How is that you get to look like the victim once again? I should have stopped talking to you whenever I found out that you were seeing Will behind my back! I forgave you way too easily. Then you left Dylan and you left me as a friend. You didn't even say good bye to anyone except for him. At least when John and I wanted to leave, we told you. The circumstances were different though. (Alley begins to shake her head.) Alley: I hate you so much. We could never be friends again. It's because you take everything that's mine. You took Will and then you had to take Dylan. Even though you claimed that you didn’t want them, deep down inside I know you did. Maybe I should take something away from you. Like your life. That's my number one fantasy right now! (Alley touches her air supply tank that is keeping Carrie alive.) Alley: It's so tempting. This would be the best opportunity to do it too. (Alley places her hand back to her side and shakes her head.) Alley: But it's not worth it. (Alley turns to walk away but accidentally gets her foot caught on one of the wires that's hooked up to the air supply machine. She tries letting it loose but the alarm begins to go off as Carrie's IV wires also fall out. A doctor, a nurse, John, and Dylan walk in to what looks like Alley trying to kill Carrie.)
  13. Previously on Point Palace: - Nan's revenge had many people injured and some already dead. The gala had turned into a sight of horror. - Lenvy was rushed to the hospital with Will by her side who was freaking out at the fact that she was hurt so badly. He calls Gloria to tell her about her daughter's mishap condition. - Dylan has a dream about seeing John and Alley drowning in a lake. They blame him for their death. He was in the back of the head with a rock. When he comes to he tries looking for Carrie, and then finds her flung in a tree unconscious. She falls out of it, straight into Dylan's arms. - Jenny is another one of Nan's victims. How ironic is it that her enemy had again done her harm? Carlos wants to use his old medical skills to the test but Dr. Quarr stops him. Agatha has to stop a fight that breaks out between them and tells Carlos to trust Nick. - After skipping early from the gala, Ava tries reaching James, but can't because he changed his number. - New student Nate Mavick gets finished "sleeping" with a girl named Chordelia who is taken back by him. Nathan is good friends with Blake. He then finds out from Chordelia that Blake is the President of the university. The title gives Nate more of a reason to stay. - Blake and London visit the hospital to see if there is anything that they can do, but there really isn't. They run into Bryan who looks for Nan who can't find her. - Owen is another unfortunate victim. Tanisha is by her new boyfriend’s side as well as Alexia. - Everyone seems to have some sort of new sorrowing pain to them. At the hospital, someone familiar walks in and stuns the people who are waiting in the lobby. Episode 79: Leaving Lenvy Executive Story Consultant & Creator: Matt Politylo Logo Designer: Mary Zimmerman - - - (The hospital doors fly open and Alley and John come rushing in. Blake and London are surprised to see them. Especially Blake. Without even saying a word, Blake and Alley hug each other. As does London and John.) Blake: You came back! Alley: We heard about what happened. The explosion was all over the news. When I heard it, I just...thought about you and I was worried that you were involved. London: We're all okay. Except we don't know yet, but a few students are not doing so well. John: (to London) What about you? The first I thing that I was worried about was how our baby was doing. Are you okay? London: Yeah everything's fine. We’re doing great. Blake: She's a trooper. Then again, we were the furthest ones away from the explosion. Others weren't so lucky. John: Unbelievable. Blake: (to John) I'm sure you were wishing that I was blown away, but nope, not me! John: You know how I feel about you. Words don't have to express it. Alley: (sarcastic) It's good to see that some things haven't changed. London: Some things will never change. Blake: Besides you weren't even gone that long. Alley: We might not be returning for good. (Detective Miltner and Officer Wendell walk in to the hospital. Officer Wendell notices Blake.) Blake: Wendell. What's going on? Alan: The sight is bad. It can't even be explained how much of a disaster this truly is. Workers are still cleaning everything up. Det. Miltner: If you'll all excuse me I'm going to have to find Doctor Quarr. (Det. Miltner exits.) Alan: Everything that has happened brings back some bad memories. Blake: If I'm thinking what you're thinking then, yeah...bad memories. (Alan was thinking of the time in the past when Blake got drunk, ran over Nan who was supposedly pregnant with his baby, but turned out to be Will's and then it was exposed that Jenny had Will get in the car with Blake and purposely run over Nan so that she could make Nan miscarriage.) (Det. Miltner returns with Dr. Quarr by his side. They both speak to Alan.) Det. Miltner: (to Alan) It's not looking good at all. Blake: Then tell us all. We have a right to know. People have died right? I knew that it was coming. So please tell us all who is dead! (The others overhear Blake, including Will, and begin to crowd around Dr. Quarr.) Nick: Fine. I'm just going to warn you that this is just the beginning, but so far this is all we have. (reading) Trella Lopez, Christy McGillis, Brandon Alvaro, Danny Smith, a worker by the name of Wesley Nahn, Hannah Reed, Marie Lynne Sparington, Brandon Griph and Carrie... Blake: Please don't say Slondsbid. For Dylan's sake. Nick: The last person who died was named Carrie Yates. I'm going to guarantee you that there are many more. Will: (to himself in a reassuring manner) Trella and Brandon are dead. They can’t bother us anymore! (Will returns to Lenvy’s room.) Blake: Thank you for that information. Once everything blows over, I'll make sure to send fruit baskets and flowers to the family of their loved ones. (Blake shakes the doctor's hand. Everyone begins to break away. When Blake puts his hand back to his side, he taps one of the pockets in his suit jacket. It was almost like hitting a booby trap. The matches that Bryan placed fell fast to the ground. No one really notices it. Except for Detective Miltner who bends down to pick it up.) Det. Miltner: Well, well, well. What do we have here? - - - (The next day, while in his own dorm room, Carlos lies on his bed. He can't stop thinking about Jenny. He took Agatha's advice to trust Nick in what he was doing. She also told him that he needed to relax and be away. Suddenly, there is a knock on the door. He opens it to find Henry Boxwit, Ian Hadley, Carinia Gartiez, and Charissa "C.C." Chasity before him.) Carlos: What are you all doing here? Henry: We actually have some very good news for you. Carlos: I need good news right about now. C.C.: We're also happy to see you alive. The explosion is all over the news. An episode of “Blue Crystal" was interrupted because of it. Henry: Now on to some better news. (to C.C.) Do you want to tell him or should I? C.C.: You and I are up for Teen Soap Opera Awards! Carlos: (forced) I'm happy to hear that but I left the show. Cairina: And that's why we were here to ask you if you would return. There are some definite upcoming story plots that your character could be involved in and- Carlos: The reason why I left was because of Jenny. Now she's in the hospital because of the explosion. She's badly hurt. I'll try to attend the award show but I don't know about returning. Ian: Man this is a great experience. You can't pass it up! C.C.: What if you win? Then will you return? Carlos: We'll just have to wait and see. When would we have to leave? Henry: It's in a few days. We're all flying out to Los Angeles. You do have some stiff competition but I have faith that you're going to win. Cairina: Besides, there's no way in hell that Miguel Alejandro was going to be recasted. You are the only person who could play him so well. I know that you have the fire and the passion. I saw that in you when you were telling off that doctor. That's why I have faith in you. C.C.: We all do. Jenny would want you to go. It's what you want that counts. (They all leave to go back to the set. Carlos begins to think to himself.) Carlos: This is an opportunity of a lifetime. I can't leave Jenny though. - - - (Dylan gets a call on his cell phone as he sits in Carrie’s hospital room. It's Victor DiMarco, which doesn’t please him.) Dylan: How did you get this number? Victor: There are many ways. I wanted to call to see how- Dylan: I can't tell you at the moment how Carrie's doing. She was thrown in a tree. Now she's unconscious and hasn't woken up since the accident. Victor: Do you think that maybe I should come and visit her? Dylan: It's not that bad. Victor: Are you just trying to stop me from seeing her? Dylan: Why would I do that? I'm not an inhumane, selfish, bastard! Victor: Never said you were. I took her away from you before but you took her right back. Somehow we're even and it's safe to say that we both want what's best for Carrie. Dylan: I didn’t take her back. She came back and you can thank John Snaldry for that. Who…might be dead as we speak! Victor: Oh yes that's right. She was going out with that one kid. Funny how you Point Palace kids like to swap your girlfriends around. Dylan: That was under different circumstances but now Carrie and I are back together so deal with it! Victor: Sorry to hear that. If there’s anything that I can- Dylan: Then just worry about your own life Victor. If I do need you, I'll be the one who calls. (Dylan hangs up with Victor. He walks over to Carrie and begins to lightly touch her face.) Dylan: Just around the time we were beginning to reconnect with one another...I might lose you all over again. (He then takes her hand. For a quick second he could have sworn that she grabbed back.) - - - (At the Palace Cafe, Nate finds a comfortable seat to sit in. He begins to think to himself on what his agenda is for the day. Chordelia notices him and sits down across from him.) Chordelia: (angered) You didn't call me last night! Nate: Was I supposed to? Chordelia: Well, you said that you were going to. Nate: I'm sorry, I got side tracked from a little thing called sleep. Chordelia: Fine. You're forgiven. Nate: Good to know. Chordelia: What are you doing tonight? Nate: I really have no idea. I haven't gotten around to doing what I planned on doing, so...I have no clue. Chordelia: You never told me the reason why you came to Point Palace. Nate: I came to the town of Cody. I haven't decided on enlisting in Point Palace University. That's a different story. Chordelia: You're avoiding my question. Nate: Didn't we have this conversation last night? I'm here to see a friend. He's been busy. I've been having a lot of down time lately. Chordelia: Just trying to make conversation. Do you want to get together tonight or not? (Nate stands up and places his seat in.) Nate: Chordelia. That is your name right? Chordelia: Of course. Nate: It's hard for me to remember girls names. But yours is very special. What we did the other night, it was fun. That was it. Just fun. Now I don't mean to break your heart and if I do, I simply want to apologize, but I'm not looking into anything serious. Chordelia: (disappointed) What? Nate: I'll call you if I need you. (places his hand on her thigh) And when I do call you, you’ll know what for. (Nate leaves Chordelia wondering what exactly just happened. Was she being warned not to get involved? However it was, Nate had a smile on his face. Controlling women like Chordelia, was what he did best.) - - - (Back at the hospital, Alexia and Tanisha begin to decorate Owen's room while he is still sleeping.) Tanisha: You seriously have a knack for this sort of thing. Alexia: That's why I was hired to plan Blake and London's wedding, planning the whole gala, and anything else that needs to be done. Tanisha: Then you're going to have a lot to look forward to when you graduate. Alexia: Hopefully. There's something that I need to tell you. Tanisha: Spit it out. Alexia: My mom called me during the gala. She told me some pretty bad news. Tanisha: Like what? Alexia: Like the fact that she has breast cancer. And Owen and I are in college. Which means that we're so far away from North Carolina. She wants us to go home, but I don't want anything to happen to Owen! (Ginny walks in after over hearing Alexia's conversation.) Ginny: Nothing will. Alexia: (surprised) Ginny. What are you doing here? Ginny: I heard about what happened to Owen. I wanted to visit him. (Alexia hugs Ginny out of friendship as Tanisha begins to grovel at her unannounced visit.) Alexia: Thank you for coming. Ginny: He needs all of the support that he can get. Did the doctors say what's wrong with him? Alexia: They don't know yet, but they're going to run some tests and see how he is tomorrow. Only thing we know is that, he's just bloody and bruised. Tanisha: (to Ginny) You don't mind if we chat outside do you? Ginny: Not at all. (Tanisha and Ginny go outside of the room to talk to one another.) Tanisha: Why the hell are you here? Owen broke up with you, which means that he didn't want to see you anymore. Ginny: We left it as being friends. That's exactly why I'm here. Friends supporting friends. Now if you'll excuse me- (Tanisha blocks Ginny from going back.) Tanisha: What would you say to Owen if he were awake? Ginny: Quite frankly that's none of your business. If it wasn't for you, we probably would still be together. What gives Tanisha? You already have him. Why do you feel as if you have the right to gloat? Tanisha: I'm looking out for my boyfriend! Ginny: Like I said before, you already have him. But there's one thing you don't have and will never have. Dignity. (Ginny exits leaving Tanisha to scowl.) - - - (Ava goes to one of her classes. Surprisingly they had not been canceled or delayed because of all the action that happened. She sits in the same seat that she sat in when she met Professor Vaughne. It was in the same class room building. It felt as if it were just yesterday. Sometimes she wished that it was, so she could either stop herself from being a stupid fool in love or at least have something right with James. A male professor, named Professor Baltly, who Ava pictures as James, starts his class.) Prof. Baltly: Now if you will all turn your books to page 341, we'll begin. (to Ava) It's so nice of you to join my class again Ava. Ava: It is. You saved me once. That's why I'm here. I'm now more interested. Prof. Baltly: (confused) Excuse me? (The other students begin to chuckle and Ava realizes what an embarrassing mistake she has made.) Ava: If you don't mind. Can I be excused? Prof. Baltly: You're free to go whenever you want, but make sure you're up on your homework. Ava: Sure thing. I apologize. (Ava takes her things and leaves the class in embarrassment. She walks out into the hallway. A student walking further down from her, turns the corner, and she's all alone. Students were in their classes or wherever they had to be. Either with their friends who were in the hospital with physical pain. It didn't matter, she was all alone. Ava leans up against the wall and slides down to the floor, crying.) Ava: Everyone has someone. I thought I had James. He left me. (She wipes her eyes.) Ava: That's exactly what he did. He left me. He wants nothing more to do with me. (Ava stands up and begins to rip off all of the flyers that are on the bulletin boards. It made her feel good. She then falls to her knees in a pile of papers.) Ava: (screaming) WHY!!! - - - (Blake sits in his darkened office, looking out the window. He's thinking to himself how one little thing could have gone wrong. Simply Nan must have had something to do it. Where could she be? If she did, then she would be parading around his office, bragging about how she ruined his life. Strangely enough, it hasn't happened...yet.) (Blake's secretary buzzes his phone.) Myra: Mister Hammerton, a reporter wants to have a word with you. Would you like for me to tell them to make an appointment? Blake: No. Tell them that the only reporter I want to talk to is Leon Kain. Myra: Sure thing. Also Mister Daniels just walked in and would like to see you. Blake: Send him in. (The doors swings open, bringing some light in to office as Bryan walks in and sits down. Blake does not move out of his position.) Blake: To what do I owe this pleasure? Bryan: Let me ask you something. Blake: I already asked you a question first. It's only fair that you could answer mine. And if you're here to argue with me or insult me. I'm not in the mood. Bryan: I'll leave that for another time. What would be the happiest piece of news that you could ever get? Blake: That this was all a nightmare. Bryan: That would be nice. What about Nan? Blake: (repeating) What about Nan? Anything that anyone says about her to me is just plain bad. Even when her and I were trying to act civil with one another, she had to go and pull her stupid psycho bitch stuff on me again. Bryan: She's dead. (Blake turns around to face him. For once in his life, he actually saw the hurt in Bryan's eyes.) Blake: No she isn't. This is some joke. You're just putting me on so that- No she isn't! Bryan: I wish I was, but it's no joke, it's no plot, and it's no plan. She died in the explosion. Blake: How do you know? Bryan: Her name was added on to the list. There's going to be a short ceremony for her in Denver. She'll be buried next to her sister. I don't think that you're planning on attending. Blake: I'm sorry. Bryan: No you're not. You're happy because one of your sworn enemies died. Blake: I would never wish that upon anyone. Not even Nan. (Bryan stands up and makes his way to the door. Before opening it, he turns around to face Blake.) Bryan: She didn't want this. She wanted to beat you in everything. I know that you said that you didn't want me to insult you or to argue with you, but don't take offense to when I say this. I'm going to fill in for Nan's place. If you thought she was bad. Then you have no idea what you're messing with when it comes to me! (Bryan exits. Blake is shocked.) - - - (Later on that night in Lenvy's hospital room, it seems that she is not in the best condition. The other students, like Carrie her supposed look a like twin, was just unconscious. They were sleeping. Lenvy's wrapped up all around in bandages. She was burnt badly. Will looks over her.) Will: How are you feeling baby? Lenvy: (mumbling) Go- Goo- Good. Will: Don't talk Lenvy. Just lie there and look pretty like you always do. Like you always will be. (The door opens and Lenvy's mother Gloria walks in to see her daughter in pain. Will gets up to hug her.) Will: Thank you for coming. Gloria: Sorry to see you in these circumstances. How is she doing? (Will begins to shake his head and cry. Slow tears drip from his eyes. Tears that he couldn’t hold back anymore.) Will: She's not going to make it, but she's awake, and can talk, but barely. (Gloria puts her hand on Lenvy's bandaged wrists. Lenvy tries to grab it back.) Gloria: Honey, I just want to let you know one thing. No matter what happens to you. I want you remember that I will always love you. And good things are going happen, you're going to be just fine. (to Will) Maybe you should say whatever's on your heart. (Will takes Lenvy's hand and nods in agreement.) Will: Lenvy. I can still remember the first day I ever saw you. I felt so stupid for putting you through what I did. You forgave me. Then when you found out all those bad things about me. You forgave me again. You are one of the kindest, most sweetest, loving person I'll ever know. It's because you saw the good in me that I never saw. (His tears begin to trickle on to her bandaged face.) Will: I don't want you to leave me. I want you to be strong. You complete me. If it wasn't for you, I never would have known what true love was. Lenvy: How- How could you love a monster? (Lenvy turns her head slowly to the side and closes her eyes. Her I.V. monitor begins to drop. Faster and faster.) Gloria: I'm going to get a doctor! (Gloria storms out of the room.) Will: NO! NO!!! WE DO HAVE TRUE LOVE!!! YOU'RE NOT THE MONSTER...I WAS!!! But because of you...I'm a better person! I'M BETTER!!! (Doctors and nurses come rushing in. Will is being dragged out of the room by Gloria but continues to try to reach Lenvy before falling on his knees.) Will: (sobbing) Don't take her away! Don't take her away from us! (The I.V. monitor flat lines and Lenvy dies.)
  14. I'm really hoping for Lauren to be rid of Daniel and go out with Chris. Chris and Lauren seem to have a deeper connection then Lauren and Daniel. So I'm really sad to see Ashley go but I figured that it was going to happen. Not that it's a bad thing but Alexis jumped the shark. Very shocking and sad episode.
  15. Redd I was so worried that you weren't coming back and I'm so glad you did. I like the B.P./Detective Lewis plot and I'm loving Anna. She's a true patriarch and reminds me so much of Stephanie Forrester from B&B. I'm actually thinking that the tantalizing relationship between Lynette and Greg can go two ways: work out well or turn out sleazy! He's a professional and she's in need. Can't wait to read more. Our team is complete!
  16. Wow! Wow! Wow! I knew something was going to happen but I never thought that it was going to end like that! Great job. I loved all of the confrontations espeically between Jodie and Jenn...it was about time. It was great to see Natalia again, I sort of forgot all about Dahlia and Suga so it was great to see them too. Can't wait to find out what happens next.
  17. Thank you so much for all of the comments and of course I always have to explain myself to M.L. but it's well worth it. The reason Blake and London think that it's an accident is because Bryan accused Blake so they're already pondering sabotoge. The next episode is very tragic and the cast really gets refined in the next few episodes. You'll have to stay tuned to find out who returns and who goes.
  18. Previously on Point Palace: - Owen decided to end the love triangle with Tanisha and Ginny by breaking things off with Ginny and choosing Tanisha. - James left Ava but she pleaded for him to stay because she's lost without him. He told her that she was never lost. He drove away, leaving her in despair. - Alexia gets news that her mother has breast cancer, which means that her and Owen may have to go back to Raleigh. - London begins having pains so she calls Dr. Harnlo who makes sure she sees her immediately. - Carrie and Dylan try to make John and Alley stay, but they leave for Philly. Later on at the gala, Carrie gets the news that a bus going in Philly has crashed over a bridge and into a lake. She worries that they were on it. - While slow dancing, Carlos tells Jenny that she's going to have to watch a tape of "Blue Crystal" to see if he left or not. - Trella and Brandon inform Will and Lenvy that they plan to go to the police about Zak's cold case file. Lenvy argues with them and Will watches as he sees that he has true love. - The night seems to be going well for Blake. He impresses the school board members and Dylan makes an astonishing entrance as the new presidential assistant. Nan however can't accept that and begins to plan for revenge. - When Blake has everyone gather outside to watch fireworks, Nan goes into the back and begins to overflow the fountain in the main hall, which starts an electrical fire. Meanwhile, Bryan does his part by putting matches in Blake's pocket. Nan can't stop with the fountain when she turns on all of the gas grills in the back kitchen as well as pour some of her own gasoline all over the floor. She then begins to walk away to light the place up, but her dress gets caught. Will (who is smoking while watching Lenvy) flicks a cigarette and the wind blows it into the path of the gasoline trails and the electrical fire meet into one. THE GALA BLOWS UP WITH A HUGE EXPLOSION!!!! Episode 78: The Aftermath (Season Premiere) Exectuvie Story Consultant & Creator: Matt Politylo Logo Designer: Mary Zimmerman - - - (Everyone's attention went from the fireworks to what was going on in the supposed empty building behind them. Some thought it might have been a firework explosion but it wasn't in the least. Some of the guests were lying on the ground after being injured. Thrown through glass or other places, it was obvious that many were injured and possibly dead.) - - - (A roaring ambulance, numerous fire trucks, and police cars arrive at scene. Guests are trying to exit. Some are screaming and crying in pain. It was a horror scene, but it was slowly becoming reality for the students of Point Palace.) (Will was one of the closest people to the explosion. He heard the sizzling of what he thought was air. It was almost as if he were lifted through the air. He covered his face with his jacket. His landing was soft. The only thing he could scream was "LENVY!") (That was the only thing that was on his mind. Lenvy is rushed into the emergency room of Cody Memorial. They were one of the first people to leave to the site.) (Will begins to pace left to right, back and forth. Trella and Brandon’s threats to bring him down were the last thing on his mind, all he could think about was Lenvy. Dr. Nicholas Quarr begins to rush into the room. Will tries getting his attention.) Will: Doctor...Doctor! Nick: I'm really busy right now. Will: What's going on with Lenvy? Nick: She's not the only one who was hurt. Will: Please just tell me what's wrong with her! Nick: The only thing that I can say is that she's severely burned. Now if you'll excuse me, my staff and I have to operate. (Nick exits into the emergency room. Will feels as if he were just shot in the chest. He puts his hand on the door and tries to look into the circular window, but it's no use.) Will: (praying) Please be okay. (Will pulls out his cell phone and calls Gloria Elliot, Lenvy's mother.) Gloria: Will what a surprise. How are you doing? Will: Not so well. Neither is Lenvy. There was an explosion and she was hurt badly. Gloria: An explosion?! Oh my god. What...how...did it happen? Will: No one knows, but I suggest that you might want to hop a flight from Lexington to Cody. She needs the ones she loves most around her. - - - (Dylan sees a light shinning. It turns out that he his in a lake or some sort of body of water. He then sees Alley and John's body. They're floating towards him.) Alley: You killed us. John: The guilt shall come over you! Alley: How does it feel to push someone over the edge? John: The guilt shall reign supreme! Alley: Was it really worth it to sleep with Carrie? John: Was it worth all the guilt? Alley: You'll pay. John: Need I say more! (Dylan wakes up after being hit in the back of the head by a huge rock. He is weary and can see people running frantically as he picks himself up.) Dylan: It was just a dream. What the hell is going on? (Dylan stands up. He touches the back of his head. He winces in pain. He slowly walks around to look for Carrie.) Dylan: (screaming) CARRIE!!! CARRIE!!! (He can't find her anywhere. Until he begins to scan the area. He thinks that sees a girl that looks just like her, but the girl is stuck in a tree, like a cat. It's Carrie hanging over a heavy branch.) Dylan: CARRIE! (Carrie doesn't move, until she begins to slip forward. Dylan sees it and all of a sudden she falls off of the branch. Dylan catches her in his arms. She looks bloody and beaten.) Dylan: Somebody help me! - - - (Another one of the many victims of Nan's explosion was her sworn enemy, Jenny Fremann. Carlos rushes Jenny to the emergency room and tries to remember what he knew before he became a soap opera actor. Treating people was his main passion, but he was disgusted about the way he was treated by Dr. Quarr. His path has changed, until it now sort of come back to haunt him. Before he can get into the emergency room, he is stopped by Dr. Quarr.) Nick: We can take it from here. Carlos: Let me in! Nick: You quit your job. Which means that only staff is aloud back here. And that's not you. Carlos: You bastard. You let me in so I can take care of my girlfriend! (Agatha stops the almost soon to be fist fight.) Agatha: You two we have more problems to worry about! (to Carlos) I'm sorry about Jenny. She's in good hands. Isn't that right Nicholas? Nick: There are other patients that need my help. Carlos: There's no way in hell that I want you to operate on the one that I love. You hate me so much, I bet that you would kill her. Nick: Get out of my sight. How dare you call me a murderer! Carlos: (angered) That's what you are. You're also a liar and a sorry excuse for a human! (Agatha grabs Carlos after he lungs for Dr. Quarr who exits until turning around.) Dr. Quarr: Even though we don't get along, I have a heart, and I'll make sure she's okay. Carlos: I don't believe you at all! Agatha: Carlos you need to calm down. (A tear begins to drop from his eye.) Carlos: Jenny has to be okay. She just has to. - - - (Ava skipped the party early. She wasn't having fun because she was alone. The news of the explosion hasn't hit her yet. The only thing that she can think of is James. She begins to have flashbacks of what happened.) James: You're my student and we shouldn't be doing this. I'm older and you're younger. I'm your teacher and you're my student. (Ava and James kiss each other.) Peggy: How dare you get involved. I know what's going on with James! Laney: I'm James's wife. It's nice to meet you. (After getting into a nasty cat fight, Ava pushes Laney down a flight of steps accidentally killing her and having Peggy walk in to witness it all.) James: I don't know what's going on. Madame Juror: We find the defendant, Ava Cecilenelli, to be not guilty. Peggy: I wanted you to suffer. I wanted you out so I could have James to myself. Once you got Laney out of the picture you were supposed to go to jail, but you didn't. Now it's time to end it all. (Ava produces a 7 iron golf club and begins to swing at her. James comes from behind and pushes her over the railing. She hits the coffee table. She is later hauled off to a mental institution.) Ava: Please don't leave me here. I'm lost without you. James: There's nothing for me. I found another job and that's the new life I'm going to follow. Believe me...you're never lost! (James drives away and the flashback ends.) Ava: We went through so much. He wanted a better life and I guess I couldn't give it to him. He saved me from when Jake possessed me and caused problems for Vicki and Ike. Anytime I had a problem, he was always there for me. Until now. (Ava picks up her room telephone and begins to dial James's cell phone number that she knew off by heart. After a ring or two, the operator begins to speak.) Operator: I'm sorry the number 310-555-6928 has been disconnected. Will you please try your call again. (Ava hangs up and slams the phone off of the floor.) Ava: Great. He changed his number. He wants to erase me out of his life forever. - - - (New student, Nathan Mavick can't really sleep in his hotel room, and notices the girl next to him. He just met her last night, but it didn't matter. She was attractive in his book and the sex was good. That was all that mattered.) Nathan: That was pretty good. Chordelia: Yeah it was. We should do it again sometime. Nathan: Yes. Yes we should. (Chordelia kisses Nathan. He gets out of bed and begins to get dressed. She however continues to lie there.) Chordelia: So what do you have planned for tonight? Nathan: You really don't know me that well. My plans are nothing to worry your pretty little head about. Chordelia: You're sweet. I thought that you wanted me to spend the night though. Nathan: I have to wake up early in the morning, so I'm taking you home. Chordelia: I live in the dorms. You're lucky that I got away from that stupid gala. The drink I was having was so much more entertaining then what was going on there. That bar full of losers was not my kind of crowd. Nathan: Then there's high class people like me who just come up and sweep you off of your feet. And what we did was much more interesting. Chordelia: Then let me stay the night and we can make it so much more. Nathan: I would love to but I can't. I have to meet with my old friend Blake Hammerton. Chordelia: (surprised) Do you know who that is? Nathan: Yeah. He's the reason why I came to this school. Chordelia: Then you know that he's the President of the University. Nathan: That I did not know. Guess you learn something new everyday. And if you're ready, I'll escort you out. - - - (Later that night, Blake and London go to the hospital. London seems to be okay as is Blake. They were the ones who were furthest from the explosion. Unlike the others, they were lucky. Blake rushes to the nurses station with London by his side.) Agatha: Can I help you? Blake: My name is Blake Hammerton. I need to know if there's anything that I can do for me and my wife to help out. Agatha: Sir there are so many wounded patients in here that it's impossible to find out. At least until tomorrow. Blake: Thank you. (Blake turns his attention to London.) Blake: What about you? Are you okay? London: Never been better. Blake: How the hell did any of this happen? London: You're guess is as good as mine. Blake: There's only one person who could be capable of doing something like this. London: We must be thinking of the same person. (Blake then notices Bryan wondering listlessly around. It was almost as if he was searching for something or someone.) Blake: Actually, make that two people. Bryan: (to Blake) How the hell could you let something like this happen? Where was the security? Tell me. Tell me Hammerton! Blake: Why don't you tell me. It's obvious that you and Nan probably did something to rig it. Right? You two have a wonderful vendetta against me. It seems pretty logical. London: First she had to blow up our private yaught and then the two of you tried to out Blake's position of President. Do you want to be President that bad? Or is the position of being under him as VP not up with your expectations? Bryan: Why don't you mind your own business. Let the men do the talking. Blake: Don't you speak to my wife like that! She has a point. Bryan: There are news crews, the police, the fire department, everyone is going to want an explanation. Blake: Then I need your help to give them one. Bryan: Yeah right. You and Dylan wanted this stupid gala, so make your own bed! Excuse me. (Bryan scoffs his way to Agatha.) London: (to Blake) It's bad enough that they tried saying you sexually harassed Nan. This is her up to her old tricks. It's so obvious. Blake: Somehow I'm going to have to prove you right on that one. (Bryan has a horrid and shocked look on his face when he returns to talk to Blake and London.) Blake: What is it? London: Cat got your tongue? Bryan: I can't find Nan anywhere. I thought that she would have been listed as a patient but she isn't. She's no where to be found! - - - (Some time has passed since the explosion. People have been calmed down. Others have been worried about the ones involved. Alexia stands by her brother's side with his new girlfriend Tanisha sitting next to him. Alexia looks at the chart and reads it out loud.) Alexia: Owen Newlan. Bruises. Possible Fracture. Scrapes. Cuts. Tanisha: Did you see what happened? Alexia: Can't say that I did. (She puts the chart down and walks over to Owen who is sound asleep and covered in bandages.) Alexia: Did you see anything? Tanisha: Yeah I was with him the whole time. It was pretty bad. (Tanisha begins to wince as she touches her own arm. She had a tourniquet wrapped around it. Her injury was nothing compared to Owen's.) Tanisha: We were admiring the fireworks at least trying to. We sort of got into an argument but I'm not going to talk about that. Then all of a sudden I turn around and see this huge flame of fire coming at us. The boom was so loud. It was deafening. Owen saw it too. He pushed me out of the way. My arm hit the ground hard, but then the explosion threw him back. He was thrown through a glass window. Alexia: He's been through so much worse. I don't know if he would want me to tell you this, but one time, he tried committing suicide over Nan when she brainwashed him into thinking that she was her twin sister. I don't know all of the details. He almost died when he jumped off the dorm room roof. He's going to be okay. He'll get through this. (Alexia tugs on Owen's hand.) Alexia: He's a Newlan. (Alexia begins to think of what her mom told her about her having breast cancer.) Alexia: We're the strongest people ever. - - - (Back at the gala sight, it's pretty much empty. Except for a few police officers who are looking over a few things and investigating.) (At the hospital, the tension begins to mount. Blake and London sit in the waiting room for any news to happen. Bryan continues his search for Nan with no luck. Carlos waits as Jenny is operated on. Dylan begins to rest on Carrie's shoulder as he hopes that she wakes up soon. Alexia begins to cry without Tanisha watching so that she could be strong. Even Ava who was in her dorm room, felt lonely and hurt because of the loss that she occurred. Dr. Quarr walks out of the operating room with a disappointed look on his face. No matter what the outcome was for anyone...pain was eluding them all.) (The hospital doors open and Blake and London are shocked to see who has returned to Point Palace.)
  19. Very nice! Hopefully their guilt will reign over them. Loved Karim's playing with yourself quote. Each episode is getting better and better.
  20. I don't know why my comments always seem to do that but yes...I mean Sabryn instead of Ashley. Brain crash I guess.
  21. I really enjoyed this episode. The imagery from the first scene was what truly drew me in because you could feel Ashley's insane desperation towards Bryan. Bryan is stupid to think that she's going to leave him alone and poor Sabryn...I'm hoping that Ashley plans on doing some sort of tampering with her pregnancy. After all, Ashley would love to be pregnant with Bryan's baby. If Ashley's truly over Bryan then why doesn't she just move on to someone else, like Gilbert, who obviously has a big crush on the blond. Daniel's entrance was sort of surprising and wierd at the same time. Mona has turned him delusional and it's taking its toll on Lauren and Chris. I'm really hoping to see those two together but Lauren's past with Daniel is still looming. Keep up the great work!
  22. Very nice reference to Point Palace! Can't wait for SONOP to premiere. The Mona/Daniel scenes are still creepy but you can feel Daniel's desperation to escape. Of course loved me some Ria being pure diva bitch on Sharan.
  23. Very nice episode! Loved the major twists and turns. Something that I found very odd was the second picture of the High Kiss Hair Salon. Very freaky looking. Can't believe that Dondre's dead on top of that Ria's being blackmailed! Dang was that good. I was thinking that Sabryn and Ashley would have turned out to be sisters but to find out that Sabryn's pregnant took me for a loop. Poor Ashley will never learn but people do crazy things when they are in love, even if the other person just doesn't understand. Sounds like a Final Thought from The Jerry Springer Show.
  24. Matt P.

    Casting News

    Yeah there will be many cast shake ups and many shocks along the way. I'm glad to see that there is a mixed reaction to Joy Bisco. For Mika's character (pronounced ME-KAH) I couldn't picture anyone else but her. Brenda Song was considered but I felt like she was too young and Kelly Hu is too old. Especially since Mika's paired with someone very important.
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