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    The Diary! #111

    When was Brian replaced??? I swear the whole cast gets changed and I forget who's who. Pretty soon Sister Patterson will be replaced with Whitney Houston. I really enjoy Jasmine Guy's character but can't get "Whitney" from A Different World out of my head when I'm reading her part. Daniel is for sure messed up. Hate to say it...but karma's a bitch Sister Pat. Happy to see a bro ho go. THANK YOU! The ending was surprising so if Abe wasn't Mona's dad...then was he just some random rapist or was he Mona's rapist uncle? Good episode.
  2. SO I had this huge comment posted but it got deleted for some odd reason...here's the short version. Ria's a whore mouth but Lisa has potential to have a heartwarming story with Mike about HIV. Would like Daniel and Sharan (since their past with Mona) instead of Sharan and bro hoe. Alexis is as stupid as her sister. Ha for LaDonna! Can't wait to see a cat fight. Great powerful scene with Sabryn shooting Ash. I don't think she's dead cause that girl is worse than Jason Voorhees.
  3. This episode was very fast paced and I felt so enthralled with it. The Sister Patterson scenes were definitely powerful but she's still a sinner herself. No wonder why Mona's as crazy as she is. Her family is very messed up. What I love about Ria and Kiko is that Kiko knows how much of a cartoony slut Ria is. It's comical. I kind of liked Mark...but I also like a powerful goodbye. Maybe Rufus will find him and leave to be with the one she wanted. Would be bitter sweet but then again this is STEAM and somehow she'll get into trouble. My guess is that Suga will confuse her for Nat and attack her. I loved the ending. Can't wait to read on to see what happens between these two but really Sabryn??? Are you really that dumb??? Ash is like Jason Voorhees, shoot to kill dummy.
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    Amend! #108

    Here's my message to Sister Patterson: "Shut the hell up!" Too funny. Thanks for the mention. Do I think Lauren's still a slut? Yes and no. I'm really enjoying the new casting decisions and I think they've swayed the way I feel about the characters. It was great to see Daniel stand up to Ty the way he did. Daniel is finally getting a backbone after everything that happened to him. Part of which was for sure Ty's fault. Jenn is for sure stupid to trust Ty. That relationship is just a train wreck. Alexis should've went even crazier on LaDonna. Karim really had no right to yell at Alexis, she was only standing up for someone she felt passionate about. I loved the Ria vs. Sharan confrontation. My favorite line was when Sharan told Ria to grow up. (The truth hurts.) Though Ria got in some great comebacks, that made for a great read. The opening and ending scene were superb. Ash is really hitting a breaking point and it always gets interesting when the two go violent on each other.
  5. This was a very special and touching episode. I loved the catfight between Jan and Nicole. Sort of reminded me of the Marlena vs. Kristin fight. I was happy to see Marlena's kids toast her. Her character is a legacy. Any plans to bring her back? It seems no one is ever dead in Salem.
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    2009 PREVIEWS!!

    Very balsy to kill of Marlena but if that means seeing bad girl Sammy reform, then bring her on! I'm rooting for Tony and Anna to reunite. There seems to be tons of exciting stuff coming in 2009. Can't wait to read all about it.
  7. If someone says "I'm so sorry for your loss" one more time...maybe it should've been the episode title. I laughed out loud at the sister schematic between Jasmine and Ria. What's even better is who their mother is. Ria's last line was funny. Mike, Heath, and Lena saying goodbye to Jodie was very touching. I thought that it was for sure about time that Jenn had it coming to her. It's like after Jodie dies, Jenn has a conscious. I think that Sharan and Daniel should end up an item. That way when Lauren comes to after being a fake corpse, she can realize what a mistake she made. AGAIN! Thanks for the PP mention.
  8. Okay I'm going to start from the ending to the beginning. What an ending. I didn't see it coming and it was so shocking! The whole episode was action packed and fast paced. I liked that Natalia's secrets are exposed yet I feel bad for her because of what Ashley did to her baby. Sabryn and Bryan needed to be broken up. Their relationship was nothing but lies. It was awesome to finally watch people stand up to Sister Patterson. The Bro Hoes stepped it up in my book. I loved the confrontation between Patterson and Ria. I'm thinking that Patterson and Jasmine might become best friends very soon. This was the one episode that I kind of felt sympathetic towards Lauren (which is very rare!) How long can she keep with this fake death charade? She needs to face her problems...what she did was very Marli/Hope-ish. Again, one of the greatest STEAM episodes of the season.
  9. Thanks guys for the comments. The Carrie who-done-it was for sure a plot I had brewing ever since the beginning of Season 4. Not only was the finale huge but the reveal of who did it is going to be even bigger. Lenvy Elliot first came on in Season 2 as Carrie Slondsbid's (you're right Tara, the names are funny) look-a-like. Will met her on a website after thinking that it was Carrie playing tricks on him so before she could get the last laugh, he wanted to play a mean trick on her. Lenvy reveals that she isn't Carrie and ends up getting hurt. Lenvy decides to escape Will and the school by going on a vacation to Ireland where she's actually mistaken for Carrie by Irish mob boss Patrick Flannigan. Patrick kidnaps Lenvy and holds "Carrie" for ransom from the DiMarcos. Lenvy was rescued by Will and she fell for him. She makes him admit everything from his past and once he does, she gives him her virginity. Will left out the part that he killed Zak Czececki in Season 1 and it came to haunt him when Zak's ex Trella Lopez was befriended by Lenvy. Trella was on the hunt to search for Zak but was upset to find out what Will did. She threatened to take Will to jail but Trella died from the gala explosion. Lenvy died in Will's arms also. Lenvy will sometimes visit Will in his dreams or thoughts to try to guide him but he obviously didn't listen to her over Alicia. Season 6 will be a rockin' season and it will also be it's last.
  10. - - - The police and an ambulance arrived to the horrible scene of what had just transpired. Jace was taken into handcuffs yet again. Before he’s taken to jail, he looks at Rena. She was in total shock. Jace: Look at what you did…I hope you’re happy. Rena: I never wanted this to happen! Officer: Let’s go! Jace is taken to the elevator, then to the squad car that was waiting for him. He held his head low in shame after being shoved in the back seat. Jace: Wait! Officer: No buddy we’re leaving. Jace watches Alicia get wheeled on to a stretcher with a gas mask placed on her face. Her eyes were closed and skin was already pale white. Jace: Sorry babe. I’m so sorry. The worse was Will. He was flown to Cody Memorial Hospital, at least what was left of his bloody body. Rena sat on edge, waiting for a doctor to talk to her. Three hours later, instead of a doctor, Officer Wendell taps her on the shoulder. Rena: You must be here for a statement. Officer Wendell: Yeah. You’re the only person who I really can talk to considering the circumstances. Rena: All I can say is that Jace hit a breaking point. He pulled a gun on Will, they struggled, and Alicia was shot. Then Will fell out of the window during their fight. Officer Wendell: Any particular reason why the confrontation happened? Rena was silent. She kept thinking of what Jace told her. Rena: They were fighting over Alicia. Both guys wanted her. Officer Wendell: I thought that you and Will were together. Rena: We are. Alicia and Jace are friends of mine. Officer Wendell: Then why was he- Rena: There’s really nothing more to talk about. You’ll have to ask Will when he wakes up. Officer Wendell: Thank you Rena. Rena: What’s going to happen to Jace? Officer Wendell: I’m not at liberty to say. Rena: Please? Officer Wendell: He’s looking at major jail time but that’s very confidential. Rena: Thanks. Do you know anything about Alicia or Will’s condition? Nobody seems to want to tell me anything. Officer Wendell: Alicia is in code blue. Can’t tell you anything about Will. (acknowledging the doctor) Maybe they can. Doctor Shinva: I’m sorry to have to tell you… Rena: Tell me what? He’s going to be okay right? RIGHT?! Doctor Shinva: Unfortunately Will Pazner is deceased. There was really nothing we could do. The impact of the car roof where he landed left little room for survival. Rena couldn’t believe what she just heard. She kept looking to the room, hoping that things would change. Rena: NO! NO! This isn’t happening. I know he’s alive. Doctor Shinva: He’s not. We’re very sorry. Rena collapses into Officer Wendell’s arms. She cries loud sobs and tears of pain. Rena: Can I at least say goodbye? Officer Wendell looks at Doctor Shinva to gage their reaction. She notices Rena’s pain and reluctantly decides to give in. Doctor Shinva: Fine but he’s going to be taken to the morgue shortly. Rena walks into the dark Emergency Room where doctors were cleaning up blood and their operating utensils. On the table, Will was in a body bag. Before Rena could go any further, she noticed another person in the room with him, who wasn’t a doctor or a surgeon. Rena: Lenvy? - - - Episode 124: The Second Wedding (Season 5 Finale) Series Creator & Head Writer: Matt Politylo Logo Designer: Mary Zimmerman Guest Starring: Preity Zinta as Doctor Shinva Jill Larson as Maieve Anderson - - - The next morning, Bryan clicks on his desktop computer. Marli walks in with a smug look on her face. Bryan quickly turns his computer off to shield her from seeing whatever he was working on. Bryan: Good morning. Marli: I’m giving you my resignation. This job doesn’t fit anything for me. Bryan: Actually it does. Did you not forget that I know you’re a felon? Marli: Did you not forget that I have some very important people on my side? It was easy to adapt to Point Palace, just think how simple it will be for me to leave and to start a new. Bryan: Better have your things packed because I’m going to be calling Detective Miltner real soon. I know you ran into S.R. Before he died he told me everything. I actually found an mp3 that he recorded of you and he made sure to keep it by his death bed so that I could find it. Would you like for me to play it? Marli: No. I believe you. Bryan: You’re very insecure to fake your death just because you wanted to see who would come to your funeral. Props to how you did it, with the whole witness protection thingy. Marli: You don’t know me! Bryan: Blake didn’t either. You betrayed him. Marli: Only because you made me but guess what? I found out what you did to get this school and Blake’s going to know too. He’s going to get this school back. Bryan: Bull crap! Marli: The nurse will talk sooner or later. She seems like the type who has a guilty conscience. Though the video from my cell phone will definitely prove more than just her words. Bryan: You won’t be able to tell Blake a thing. I’m having you arrested asap. Marli: Can’t arrest a dead person Bryan. Marli Calloway just got into a major accident. All Blake has to do is open my text message. He also gets to see how I didn’t hurt him in the end. There’s nothing you can do about it. Should’ve thought about who you were messing with! Marli exits Bryan’s office and just like that she was gone. Bryan frantically dialed Detective Miltner’s number to tell him what Marli did but he hangs up. He calls someone else. Bryan: Hey it’s me. I need your help in shutting someone up permanently! - - - At The Palace Café, Nan walks in and finds Jenny sitting, reading a magazine. Jenny notices her and waves to summon her over. Nan: Can we make this quick? I have a manicure to go to. Jenny looks at her with silence. Nan grows impatient. Nan: Come on Jenny! Give me your pathetic attempt to scare me so that I can be on my marry way. Jenny: How are you not shivering? London’s alive, running about this school and you couldn’t get rid of us. If I were you, I’d be pulling my hair out. Nan: See...I always have a plan B and if that doesn’t work, then I think of something else because I’m smart. Jenny: I’m going to do something that no one has ever done to you before. Nan: What’s that? Love me? Jenny: Even better. I plan on taking you to court! Nan laughs out loud but Jenny isn’t amused. Nan: You’re serious aren’t you? You think that you can sue me? For what? Plotting to get Carlos? Oh Jenny you are priceless. I swear you’re still that dumb, insecure girl that used to do all my bidding. Let’s not forget ugly because you are hideous. Jenny: The witnesses will be endless. Anyone who’ve you hurt in the past…which includes me, Carlos, Blake, Owen, London, Alley or whoever else I can think of, will finally bring you down. Every cat fight, every manipulation, every evil maniacal plan you’ve concocted will for sure bite you in the ass. I think that’s called karma. Nan: You have no case and you have no proof. I burned every piece of evidence that I kidnapped you both. For London’s sake, I saved her. She was dying and I brought her back to life. Jenny: Who are you trying to fool? There was no good intention with that. You wanted to get back at Blake. Nan: But I’m such a good actress and I’m an even better liar, even if it’s in a court of law! Jenny: I think that’s just you talking because you’re petrified. You know deep down inside that you’re going to lose. I’ll have my lawyer give you the subpoena. See you in court bitch! Jenny gets up to exit. Nan watches her leave and quickly gets on a cell phone to a lawyer. - - - Later that afternoon, Ava drives to Maieve Anderson’s house. It was a small two story home that seemed quaint. Ava walks up to the door and knocks on it. Maieve answers but is weary of her. Maieve: Yes? Ava: Hi are you Maieve Anderson? Maieve: I am. Who are you? Ava: My name is Courtney Smith. I’m with the Cody Learning Disability United School. Maieve: Do you have ID? Ava: Of course. Ava digs through her purse to pull out her volunteer card but covers her real name. Maieve: What has Bobbie gotten herself into now? Let me guess, she mouthed of to one of the teachers. She gets a lot of that from all of the TV she watches. Ava: That may explain a lot. May I come in to talk to you? Maieve: Okay I guess. Maieve opens her screen door. Ava walks in. She looks around to find pictures of Bobbie, Maieve, and Maieve’s husband. Maieve: Start talking hun. The nightly news is coming on. Ava: Is Bobby here at the moment? Maieve: No. She’s with her volunteer program. Ava: Oh I see. They do such a good job with the program but we wanted to get more information about Bobbie’s immediate family. Maieve: I’m all the family she has and needs. Bobbie is in good care when she comes here. I made sure of that when my husband and I adopted her. Ava: There’s no denying that the living conditions are comfortable but we want to contact her parents. You’re the only person who knows where we could reach them. Maieve is quiet. She turns her television set off so that she can turn her attention to Ava. Maive: Why? Ava: Because of Bobbie’s condition. Maieve: What about her condition? Ava: She’s- Maieve: Dying? Tell me something I don’t know. That’s really not a good enough answer. Maieve looks away from Ava. Ava: Well maybe we could save her if we had some blood records or...I know that you must think that I’m talking crazy but I have hope for this girl. Maieve: Fine. I’ll give you her father’s number. He used to live in Cody but doesn’t anymore. Ava: Thank you so much. Maieve writes down the number on a piece of paper. Ava exits Maieve’s home and looks at the number. She dials it on her cell phone and when she does, she hears a very familiar voice on the end. James: Hello? - - - In Ava’s room, Nate was keeping up his end of the bargain by entertaining Bobbie. He walks into the living room with a board game. Nate: What about this game? Bobbie: Nah that game sucks. Nate: Then I’m out of ideas. Are you into computers? Bobbie: Nope but I’m into other things. Nate: Sure. I’m listening. Bobbie: Stay right here. I have a surprise for you. Nate: Okay. Nate waits for her. A few minutes later, Bobbie walks out in one of Ava’s negligees. Nate is shocked by what he sees. Nate: Oh my god. What are you doing? Bobbie: I want you. Sexually. Nate: No Bobbie this isn’t right. Bobbie: Yes it is. Make it right Nate. Bobbie goes up to him and starts to touch his face. Nate: You need to stop! Bobbie: Why? Because I’m re- Nate: No! I really hope that I wasn’t giving you the wrong idea. Ava wanted me to spend time with you but not like this. Bobbie: I’m dying Nate and I want someone to love me before I go. Nate goes over to Bobbie and hugs her as she cries. Nate: Why don’t you change. Bobbie: Okay. Bobbie goes back into Ava’s bedroom to change. Nate: Hey I’m going to call Ava. I think she needs to be here. Bobbie comes back out, changed into what she originally was wearing, to try to stop him. Bobbie: Please don’t tell her. Nate: Sorry Bobbie. You need to tell her how you feel. Not wanting that to happen, Bobbie instinctively knocks Nate out by hitting him over the head with a large text book. He falls to the ground. He wakes up on Ava’s bed with a throbbing headache. Bobbie: Are you okay? Nate: My head hurts. Bobbie: Sorry but- Nate: (confused) Wait…where am I? Bobbie: You’re in Ava’s room. Nate: Who’s that? Who am I? - - - Alley turns the light on to her bathroom. She looks at herself in the mirror and laughs. She grabs a blue paper bag that she purchased earlier but before she can open it, there’s a knock on her door. Alley answers it to find Marissa with a smile on her face. Alley: Can I help you? Marissa: Just wanted to come and spread some joy. I figured you were out of the loop with your ex so I’d fill you in. Alley: Not interested. Leave! Alley slams the door in Marissa’s face. Marissa opens the door and walks in anyway. Alley: Get out! Marissa: Let’s not fight for once. Alley: You’re afraid I’m going to kick you butt again. Marissa: No. I wanted to let you know that John is over you. Alley: Oh really? Marissa: Yes really. I hooked him up with a lovely girl that I know. Her name’s Jalenda and he is just smitten with her. Alley laughs at her. Alley: Jalenda? You hooked your brother up with a call girl? Marissa: Jalenda is not a call girl! Alley: Yes she is. I met her. Actually I had her admit to me what she does for you and I got it all on tape. Marissa: You’re lying! Alley: Call my bluff then. Marissa: All I have to do is tell my brother that you’re a jealous, petty, do nothing and he believes me. Alley: Go ahead but I think that it would break your brother’s heart to know that his sister is a madam. It really does explain how you tried breaking us up with all of the porn happenings. Marissa: You wouldn’t dare break his heart for a second time! Alley: Didn’t mean to break it the first time. Look Marissa, I’ll make a deal with you. If you pack up and leave this school, I promise to never let John know about your true profession. Marissa: My niece needs me. Alley: I’m sure that John’s happy with all the help you gave him but this is really the best offer. Marissa turns around from her, about to leave, but turns back to her. Marissa: You’re never going to be good enough for John! Marissa exits Alley’s room. Alley goes back to her bathroom to pull out her purchased pregnancy test. She stares at the box. Alley: Not good enough for John? He might be the father of my baby…or it could be Blake’s or I could just be crazy. Guess we’ll have to find out. - - - Before the start of the wedding, Dylan finishes getting dressed in the church changing room, until Blake knocks on the door. Blake: You decent? Dylan: Pretty much man. Blake walks in with Jason and Riley. Jason: Are you excited cuz? Dylan: Damn straight. I’m marrying the girl who I’ve been in love with ever since I set forth on this school. Ryley: You should put that in your vowels. (joking) You should also put in there 'I am a douche bag!' Dylan flicks off his brother but laughs. Jason: Dude you’re in a church. We want this day to go off without a hitch. Blake looks at his phone and notices that he has a text message from Marli. Dylan: Blake you’re not trying to get the school back when I’m getting married are you? Blake clicks on the ‘Delete’ button. A message asks if he wants to permanently delete the message. Blake: No. This is your time. Let’s do a shot for the man of the hour. Blake puts away his cell phone. Blake, Jason, Riley and Dylan lift their shot glasses of whiskey in the air. Ryley: To Dylan and Carrie. They all repeat Ryley’s speech and down their shots. Ryley looks out the window and notices Lana dressed in black approaching the church. Ryley: Jason we need to go take care of something! Jason sees his aunt approaching. Ryley and Jason exit to stop Lana. Blake pats Dylan on the back and walks out of the changing room. He looks at his cell phone with the question of wanting to delete Marli’s message flashing back at him. Blake: (debating) Should I erase you from my life? - - - Ginny walks along the path of the school’s courtyard. She pulls out a printed e-mail from Owen. Before making it to her destination, she paused, wondering if what she was doing was a mistake. Instead of finding Owen, she runs into Tanisha, who has a smug look on her face. Tanisha: Looking for someone? Like maybe…Owen? Ginny: Actually yes I am. He wrote me and told me to meet him here. Tanisha grabs the e-mail out of her hand. She reads it out loud. Tanisha: Ginny, I think it’s time to hang out. I’ll be in town. She crumples the piece of paper up and throws it in Ginny’s face. Tanisha: You’re so gullible. Owen let me onto his computer a few nights ago when we were together and I got bored. Ginny: You wrote this? Tanisha: That’s what I said. Owen never came back. Even if he did, there’s no way in hell I would have let him see you. Ginny: Why? Why are you so spiteful towards me? Tanisha: Because I want you out of his life for good. I also wanted to prove a point that you’re still in love with my man. Ginny: Maybe if you weren’t so insecure with your relationship, I’d actually have some sort of sympathy for you but you’re the one who has no heart what so ever! Tanisha slaps Ginny across the face. Ginny kicks her in the shins. Tanisha grabs for her neck as Ginny latches onto her hair. Both girls begin to struggle back and forth, until Ginny pushes Tanisha off of her. Ginny: NO! This is so stupid. It needs to stop. I’m sick of fighting with you over him. You’re not worth it. Tanisha: You know you’ll lose bitch ‘cause you’re a loser! Let’s go. Tanisha lunges for Ginny but Ginny pushes her again. Ginny: I’m not going to fight you but I will fight for him. Tanisha: Owen wants nothing to do with you. You’re a distant memory to him. Ginny: He’s going to want to know how evil his bored girlfriend gets. Thanks for making this so much easier for me. Tanisha: What are you going to do? Fly all the way to Raleigh to tell on me? Ginny: Yep. He’ll be in my arms by tomorrow night. I truly deserve him. You never have! Ginny walks away from Tanisha with a victorious grin on her face. Tanisha watches her leave. Tanisha pulls out her cell phone to call Owen. He answers his cell phone from a hotel room. Owen: Hey you. Tanisha: Hey. I was wondering when we were going to have dinner later? Owen: Soon. I’m just kind of happy to be back. Tanisha: Not as happy as I am. Can’t wait to see you. Tanisha hangs up with Owen. All she could do was laugh at the thought of her enemy going on a wild goose chase. - - - Carlos opens the doors to the Cody Prescient. He goes through a security check point before finding a male officer at the front desk. Carlos grabs his attention. Carlos: Hi. I’m here to see Detective Miltner. Officer: He’s not in right now. Your name? Carlos: Carlos DeViego. The officer looks through a folder. Officer: I can actually help you. Please follow me. You’re not in trouble. Carlos: Yeah I think I know why I’m here. She’s absolutely crazy. Officer: She sure is. The officer takes Carlos to room where convicts were allowed to converse with others. C.C. sits across from him. Carlos was shocked to see her. C.C.: Hello Carlos. Long time no see. Carlos: What the hell is going on? C.C.: I had them call you down here. It was important for me to see you. Carlos: I have nothing to say to you. C.C.: You wouldn’t believe how much I’ve learned from jail. Fake catfights on Blue Crystal, really came in handy. Carlos didn’t find her joke funny. He was annoyed and tried keeping minimal eye contact with her. Carlos: This is ridiculous. Did you get bored? I can’t believe that Detective Miltner would call me down for this. C.C.: He did it for good reason. Carlos: Save it! After everything you did, you can rot in here for all I care. Carlos gets up to leave until C.C. says the one thing that makes him stop. C.C.: I’m pregnant with your baby. - - - Dressed in all black, Lana was pushed outside by her own son and nephew. Lana: How dare you manhandle family like that! Ryley: You’re not allowed in here mom. I’m just following Dylan’s orders. Lana: That’s crap and you know it. I want to watch my son get married to the person who ruined our family. Jason: Where’s uncle Sean? I'm sure if he were here that he'd say differently. Lana: That freak left town. All because of Dylan’s bride to be. Now let me in so that I can crack her one. Ryley and Jason shield the door from Lana. She tries to push them away but she’s overpowered and gives up. Lana: Fine! I’ll remember this. You all took her side. Carrie tore apart our family. She brought Sean’s secret to light and she doesn’t deserve to have the Colby name! (screaming) YOU HEAR ME CARRIE? THIS WEDDING WON'T HAPPEN!!! - - - While Lana was trying to find other ways inside the church, another scorned person walked into the church unnoticed. Inside the bride’s dressing room, Juliana, Vi, and Mary Ann helped Carrie with her veil. Mary Ann: You look absolutely beautiful. Carrie: Thanks…Mary Ann. Mary Ann: Yeah I know you still don’t know what to call me. Hell I don’t know what I’d call me either. Vi: My brother’s marrying a knock out. I’m sorry about the rest of the family. Carrie: Hey it’s okay. I’m glad that you’re going to be my sister in law. Vi: Me too. There’s a knock on her door, Juliana opens it to find Michael with a smile on his face. Michael: It’s almost time. He notices his little girl all grown up. Michael begins to tear up a bit. Michael: Carrie…I- Carrie: I know dad. I can’t believe it either. Michael: You look stunning. Juliana: Please excuse me. I’ll let you three have this moment. Juliana went outside to escape the Slondsbid sob fest. She notices her brother Victor in desperate search of Carrie. Juliana grabbed his arm and pushed him away from the dressing room. Juliana: What are you doing here? Victor: I’m here to confess my love to her. There might be some chance that she feels the same way. Juliana: It could never happen between you two. You’re her uncle, she’s your niece. It’s impossible Vic. Victor: What’s impossible is to think how low you’d go for someone who you tried to destroy so many times. How could you drug me? I woke up in Lexington, knowing full well what you did. Juliana: I’m sorry but I had to stop you. Maybe my methods aren’t ethical but I had to do something. I was really scared for you. You seem so unstable. Victor: You can’t do this to me. (breaking down) Please…just let me see her. Let me say hi. Let me have some sort of interaction. Juliana: Just go. Victor: NO! I’m not leaving until I tell her everything so I suggest that you go and grab your daughter before I storm in there when they the preacher asks who has reason to break up this marriage! Victor exits the church. Juliana quickly gets on her cell phone to make a call. Juliana: Who let him out? Well he’s free and he’s going to ruin everything so I want him stopped at any cost! - - - John spends time with baby L.J. in his room. He looks at his daughter and smiles. John: It looks like it’s just you and me kid. God you look more and more like your mom every day. I’d be shocked if you looked like me. He begins to pat her back. She lets out a small burp. John: That a girl! Now I wonder what’s taking your aunt so long. With baby L.J. in one hand and his cell phone in the other, he gives Marissa a ring. He gets her voicemail. John: Hey just wanted to know where you were and if you’re at work, then tell Jalenda that maybe we should just be friends. Later sis. John hangs up his phone. He stares at the first photo he took of Alley. John: (to L.J.) What do you think I should do? Forgive her and give her another chance? Someday you’ll probably have to face the same problems. Unless you’re smart and you move out of Cody. There’s a knock on his door. He holds onto L.J. as he answers it. His mouth dropped when he saw who it was. London smiled at him and at her daughter. London: Hi John. I’m so happy to see my daughter. - - - The band plays the music to start the wedding. Dylan, Blake, and Ryley waited patiently for Dylan to get married. Next came Vi and Juliana. Everyone stood up when the band played “Here Comes the Bride.” The doors swung open and Michael walked out with no one. He has a confused look on his face. Dylan: What happened? Where’s Carrie? Preacher: Shall we continue? This isn’t normal tradition. Dylan walked down the aisle until Carrie appeared in the upper balcony where the choir normally would sing. She turned and faced the crowd in her beautiful wedding dress. Dylan: Carrie come down from there. We have to get married. Carrie smiles and when she does, blood spurts from her mouth. She opens her arms to reveal that she’s been stabbed. She falls over the banister and lands flat on her back in the aisle. ========================================================================== Point Palace returns for its final season in March! Look out for a Season 5 video opening to debut soon.
  11. Natalia can so take on Sabryn and Ashley. It's funny that the two enemies who hate each other the most are going after one of Passadena's biggest villain. I wonder what will happen next. This was something I always wanted to do between Jenny and Nan. I wanted to have someone be badder than the both of them so that they can team up to take them down but still hate each other. The episode was a bit slower but that's a good thing because it gives you time to build plot and especially character development. I'm liking Madea but that's a given because she's as cartoony as her daughter.
  12. Did Lauren get plastic surgery to look like someone else because if that's the case then I might like her and be happy that she's alive. When I read the ending I was like "damn...why isn't she dead?" Then again is anyone really dead in any soap opera for that matter? I'm hoping that Jasmine will give Ria a run for her slutty money. She obviously has the mouth but does she have that whorey aspect that Patti has unknowingly created? Maybe they'll both vie for the affection of Kiko because the only pus he seems to be getting is his own but that's because he's dealing with his bro ho! Though he's so unlike any of them and that's why I like him. I'm rooting for LaDonna if there's a LaDonna/Karim/Alexis love triangle. Alexis is kind of pathetic but that leads to desperation which equals entertainment.
  13. Matt P.

    Episode 115

    That was such a bombshell ending. I'm sort of torn about what Marina should do. Yeah it would be great to have Shaynocky raise her child but she is the mother. The baby is the only living memory she would have of Danny. Wow Rocky is a pig. How can he cheat on Shayne whenever his better half is off making future plans for their relationship. If Kevin doesn't know what he's getting into then BACK OUT NOW! The confrontation between Lizzie and Jonathan is definitely a story that I'm willing to get involved with. I love seeing Lizzie go off the deep end because truly she is kind of crazy. I can only hope that Jonathan goes a little crazy too. When he's bad he's interesting, but when he's good he's boring. Keep up the good work!
  14. - - - Jenny wakes up in Carlos’s arms on her couch in her own room, the room in which she so dearly missed. He plays with her soft red hair and looks at her with a smile. They are both fully clothed. Carlos: You fell asleep. Jenny: Being kidnapped makes you tired. Thanks again for saving me. Carlos: No problem chica. You know that deep down inside, I knew you never left me. Jenny: We’re way too strong for that. By the way… Carlos: Yes? Jenny: Remind me to slap you when you least expect it. Carlos: Slap me? What did I do? Jenny: You kissed the devil herself! Carlos: Hey I was drunk, desperate, and- Jenny: Stupid? Carlos: Yes. I was very stupid. Jenny playfully slaps him across the face. She giggles after doing it. Jenny: There. I forgive you. Carlos leans in and kisses her tenderly. It was one of their many infamous kisses in which they shared and it felt like time never kept them apart. Their kiss was interrupted short by a knock on Jenny’s door. Jenny opens it to find London standing in front of her with a sad look on her face. Jenny: London what’s wrong? London: I think it’s time for me to leave. Jenny: Please come in. London walks in and finds Carlos on the couch. London: I’m sorry if I was interrupting something. I can come back and- Carlos: No you weren’t interrupting anything. London: Are you sure? Jenny: Positive. So what’s got you down? We survived Nan! London: Surprisingly she has nothing to do with it. I went to go and see Blake and when I did…I found him kissing Alley. Jenny gasps in shock. Carlos’s mouth dropped also. Jenny: NO! London: Yeah. He’s obviously moved on. I think that I’m going to grab my baby and move back to Ohio. My family needs to know that I’m alive anyway. Jenny: You can’t give up. Blake is…or was your husband. I agree that it’s good for your family to know your existence but you would come back to Point Palace right? London: No. If Blake’s moved on, then so have I! - - - Episode 123:Traffic Stop Series Creator & Head Writer: Matt Politylo Logo Designer: Mary Zimmerman Guest Starring: Mackenzie Mauzy as Nurse Abigail - - - The kiss that happened in the courtyard minutes early had lead to a hot encounter between Blake and Alley. The darkened bedroom was blasted by a beam of light that came from the door opening. Blake and Alley continued to kiss each other. Heavier and more passionate. Blake: I can’t believe we’re doing this! Alley: Then don’t think about it. Just do it. Blake: But- Alley: Just kiss me Blake. Blake obeys. She throws him down on the bed and takes charge. She straddles him and kisses his neck before unbuttoning his dress shirt to reveal his chest. Alley runs her lips down the center of his chest to his stomach. Blake: More…yeah…just like that. Blake moans in ecstasy at the pleasure that was happening before him. All of the rules were thrown out the window for them and they didn’t seem to care. Blake: It’s my turn. Alley: Yeah? What are you going do to me stud? Blake: I’m going to make you say my name. Alley laughs a bit but stops, knowing that her “friend” was serious. She is turned onto her side. Blake nibbles on her ear as he runs his hands up her thigh and unbuttons her jeans. He kisses her shoulder and caresses her naval. Back and forth, light strokes, he felt her stomach quiver. Alley: Oh…Blake! Don’t stop. Please don’t stop. Blake stands up from his bed and continues to strip for her. The pants come down and she does the same thing. They both look at each other with curiosity. Alley stands up and pulls him into a fierce kiss which leads to an afternoon delight. - - - Ava is on her cell phone while sitting in front of her laptop. After three rings, Professor Strope answers her office phone. Ava: Professor it’s Ava Cecileneli. Professor Strope: Hello Ava. What can I do for you? Ava: I was hoping you could give me the contact information to whoever is looking after Bobbie. Professor Strope: She’s being watched by a caretaker who’s very ill. Bobbie has always thought of her as a grandmother. Ava: Well what’s her name? Professor Strope: I’m sorry Ava I don’t think I can give that kind of info out. Ava: Why not? Professor Strope: It’s…it’s just…that I don’t think you should worry about having to contact her. If Bobbie is having any issues then her school will deal with it, not you. You’re just a volunteer. Ava: But- Professor Strope: See you in class tomorrow. Professor Strope hangs up with Ava who becomes very discouraged. Nate walks up behind her and begins to massage her shoulders. Ava: I definitely need that. Nate: Is there anything I can do to help? Ava: If you can get me the name of Bobbie’s caretaker, then I’d like you even more than I already do. Nate: Why do you need to see her? Ava: Because I want to see where Bobbie comes from. I also want to contact some of her family members to tell them about her condition. Nate: Maybe Bobbie should be told about her condition first. Ava: Yeah and when the time comes she’ll find out. I’d rather it come from a friend, then some doctor. Nate: I think I can for sure help you. You do know that I’m a wonderful computer hacker? Ava: Um…no. That sort of was never mentioned. Nate takes Ava’s laptop from her and clicks on the internet. Nate: Even though I’m out of a job because of our new school board President, I still can access every e-mail account on the campus. Especially the staff’s. Ava: So you can find out if she’s been in contact with anyone from the hospital. Nate: It’s worth a shot. Don’t worry…they can’t trace it back to me. Nate types frantically on her laptop. He clicks the enter button and he pulls up previous e-mails from Professor Strope. Ava: Look up Bobbie’s name. Nate: Found three. Which one are you most interested in? Ava: The one from E. Rammey, she’s the volunteer coordinator at Bobbie’s school. Nate clicks on the e-mail. E. turned out to be Elle, who did in fact send information to Professor Strope about Bobbie. Ava: Here it is right here. The caretaker's name is Maieve Henderson. I’m sure she can give all the answers I need. Thank you so much Nate. Nate: I think I deserve a kiss. Ava kisses him on the cheek but he turns around just in time for her to kiss his lips. Ava: I’m going to pay a visit to Maieve and I need you to entertain Bobbie for me. I’m going to make sure that the ones that mean the most to her, are going to be ones who say goodbye. She won’t die alone. That’s for damn sure. - - - Later at The Palace Café, Ginny closes her register to end her shift. She grabs her coat but before she’s out the door, Ginny bumps into Tanisha. Ginny: I’m not in the mood. Get out of my way. Tanisha: I don’t come in peace. Ginny: When would you ever? Please just go away or stay here. My day's over so I won't have to see you. Tanisha: Ginny I wanted to tell you how admirable I think it is that you’ve moved on to bigger and more lesbian things. Ginny: What the hell are you talking about? Tanisha: I saw you with your, ahem...lady friend. It looked like you two were meant for each other. It really does explain this whole Tina Fey dyke look you have going on. Ginny: You are absolutely nuts. She's just a friend. I have tons of those. Tanisha: Not from where I was standing. Maybe I shouldn’t say this but I overheard you two…she was hardcore hitting on you. Ginny: That would be great for you wouldn’t it? You can call up Owen and tell him how I’m a lesbian. Surely you’d make up a lie that it must’ve been his doing. Tanisha: You know I didn’t think of that but thanks for giving me a great idea. Ginny: You’re really pathetic! Ginny tries going for the door until Tanisha turns around to face her. Tanisha: I wouldn’t have to call him. Owen’s coming back for a visit. The words made Ginny freeze in her footsteps. Without looking at her, Ginny slowly shook her head. Ginny: Here’s a tip bitch. Keep him away from me because I’ll go after him. I guarantee that he won’t ever want to see you again! Tanisha: Bring it on! Ginny exits The Palace Café in a huff. Tanisha watched her leave but had a worried look on her face. - - - At The Palace Hotel, Lana Colby sits alone at the hotel’s bar. She pays her tab, grabs her jacket and begins to walk out. When she goes into the hotel foyer, she runs into Sean, who’s holding some luggage. Lana: Going somewhere? Sean: No thanks to you dear. Lana: Actually the person you can blame is yourself but I’d also point those perfectly manicured fingers at our son’s fiancée! Sean: Believe me…Carrie’s on the top of my list for all of her digging. Lana: I still plan on going to that wedding. Sean: You would. Lana: What? Sean: You’re so typical Lana. You want to know another reason why I wanted to leave you? Lana: Because you were doing the paper boy? Sean: He was eighteen and the fact that you’re a bully. You push people because of your ignorance and unfortunately I got caught in it. Lana begins to point her index finger into her ex-husband’s chest. Lana: You listen here. I had a reputation to uphold. There was no way in hell that I was going to let anyone, including my kids, know about your sick ways. Sean: Correction Lana, our kids. Lana: Why don’t you just go away Sean? Go to San Francisco or whatever city’s holding a gay pride parade. Sean: Seems like that’s what our son wants from the both of us. Lana: That little bitch will be stopped because mama knows best. I did after all protect them from you. Sean: No…you lied to them and got exactly what you deserved. Desertion. Lana was red in the face. Sean shakes his head as he walks away. - - - Nan walks to the deck from her dormitory. She starts a bon fire and smiles. Nan: Time to burn all traces of evidence. Nan takes her computer, her video cameras, and any other pieces of clues that she kidnapped the girls. Nan: My plan was solid. Now they can’t say a thing. Lie and deny. Nan throws DVD’s into the fire. It reeks a horrible plastic burning smell. Nan proceeds to burn some more evidence until her cell phone rings. Nan: Hello? Jenny: Nice to see you have the same number. Nan: What do you want? Jenny: I want to discuss your future with you. Nan: Does this entail the cops? Jenny you’re so predictable. Jenny: Not saying yes or no. Tomorrow meet me at The Palace Café. I’ll let you know what I have in store for you then. Ta ta dear. Jenny hangs up with Nan. Out of anger Nan grabs a shotgun microphone and snaps it in half. Nan: How dare that bitch get the upper hand! - - - Marissa strolls baby L.J. around the courtyard. She finds John taking scenic pictures. Marissa: Look at you hard at work. John: Yeah it’s for the school paper. I needed to make some extra cash. Marissa: Are you really hard up for money? John: No. I’m too proud to admit that. Marissa: How did your date with Jalenda go? John: Where did you find her? Marissa: Um…like I said she works with me. John: She was definitely interesting to say the least. Marissa: So you like her? John: I don’t know. Marissa: Oh come on. She’s a pretty girl who has a career and a goal in life. What did you have with Alley? You had some whiney problematic liar. John: That’s not fair. Marissa: You’re right. What she did to you was very unfair. John: I can’t stop thinking about her. Look I gotta go. See you sis. John continues to walk away from her. Marissa: You’re making a mistake if you try to go back to her. (screaming) A MISTAKE!!! - - - Night falls on the students at Point Palace. At the Administration Wing, Bryan and Marli were still hard at work. Myra walks in to Bryan’s new office. Myra: You have a visitor Bryan. Bryan: (correcting her) No, no. Myra it’s Mister Daniels. Myra rolls her eyes in utter disgust. She lets the female guest in. He smiles at her and looks over at Marli. Bryan: Myra you can leave. Marli will you please step outside for a moment? We need some privacy. Marli exits. Myra collects her things from her desk to leave. Myra: That guy is ridiculous. Marli: Tell me about it. Myra: Why are you even working for him? I thought- Marli: Yeah it’s a long, complicated story. Myra: Have a good night. Marli: You too. Mari begins to eavesdrop on Bryan through the crack of the door. Abigail: I haven’t received my payment like you promised. Bryan: Then would you like it right now? Abigail: That would be nice. Mari instinctively pulls out her cell phone and begins to video tape the transaction by slowly opening the door. Bryan: You did make sure that Howard received his correct medication? Abigail: I am his nurse so yes. Bryan: Good. Wouldn't want him dying. Bryan writes a personal check to her. Bryan: Hopefully this will be enough for you to never tell anyone about what you did. Abigail: I don’t feel right about switching his meds. Bryan: But you do feel right about getting paid? I’m the President of Point Palace all because of you! If you hadn’t poisoned him, then you wouldn’t be a very rich woman. We both know that man is so straight laced and by the book that he never wanted me to have this school even when he was President! Abigail: Then I guess I should say thanks. Abigail takes the check and places it in her purse. She exits. She walks right past Marli who pretends to be reading a file. She almost cringes when she hears Bryan’s voice. Bryan: Marli you can come back in now. Marli walks back into his office. Marli: Am I done yet? I honestly don’t even know what this job entails. Bryan: It entails you to be my bitch. To back me up whenever I need a vote. To do whatever is that I need. Which reminds me…I’m thinking of upping the tuition bill for students. If they pay more, then we get more. Marli: That’s greedy. Bryan: That’s business politics honey. Marli: Don’t call me that! Bryan: What should I call you then? Hope Crayno? I can’t do that because she’s dead and I do know for a fact that Detective Milter wants to speak to you about S.R.'s death. Marli grabs a glass pitcher of scotch and pours it on his crotch. Marli: Go to hell Bryan! Bryan: If you’re trying to get fired, then try harder. Please don’t waste my good alcohol. This stuff is expensive. - - - Dylan hangs out with Blake at The River Teal. He enjoys a drink with his best man but Blake is quiet about his previous tryst with Alley. Dylan: Any wedding advice? Blake: Just breathe and take it easy. I think that’s what you told me on my wedding day. I’m glad to see that it’s finally happening for you. You two deserve it. Dylan: Thanks Blake. I’m sort of worried about what my income is going to be now that Bryan has control of the school. Blake: We’ll get it back. You shouldn’t worry about that, worry about saying ‘I do.’ Dylan gets a call on his cell phone. It’s from Carrie who’s hanging out with her bridesmaids at The Cue Ball. Dylan: It’s the future wife. Excuse me. (answering) Hey sweetie. Carrie: Hi. Just wanted to see how your bachelor party’s going. Dylan: Since the job firing we cancelled the party. It’s just me and Blake at the moment having a drink. Jason and Riley are on there way. Carrie: Yeah your sister’s here. Dylan: Anyone else from my family there? Carrie: No. Just Juliana and Mary Ann. One’s boozed up already. Guess which mom it is. Dylan: My bet’s on Mary Ann. Sounds like fun. Carrie: You know what’s going to be even more fun? When I wake up the next morning and I’m you’re wife. Dylan: It’ll be here before you know it. Dylan spots Riley and Jason walking out of the glass elevator. Dylan: The rest of my so called party is here. I love you. Carrie: I love you too Dylan. Dylan hangs up with Carrie to be with the guys. Little did Carrie know that the whole time someone was watching her from a far. They clinch their gloved hands in anger. - - - Will steps out of the fifth floor elevator of the Ballinger Hall Building. All of the night classes were done and privacy was all he needed. He walks into the skywalk that overlooked the busy traffic in Point Palace. Instead of finding Alicia like expected, he sees Jace. Jace: Looking for someone? Will: Your girlfriend sent me a note telling me to meet her here. Jace: Nope. That was me. You were dumb enough to believe it. Will: Bravo. You tricked me. I’m going to go if you don’t mind. Jace: You’re not going anywhere. Will: Who’s going to stop me? Jace: I know what you did to get my girlfriend. I found out how you faked your fall all for Alicia’s eyes. Will: It worked. Jace pulls out his hand gun that he borrowed from a friend. He aims it right at him. Jace: It ends tonight! The elevator opens. Rena and Alicia hurriedly step out to find Jace threatening Will with his gun. Alicia: Jace stop! Rena: Please don’t do it. Put the gun down. Jace: Why? So you two can swoon over him? Alicia: Jace you know you’re the one that I want. Not Will. Jace: He doesn’t seem to think so. He thinks- Will goes after Jace. Both of them struggle for the gun. Jace has a better grasp on it and shoots two bullets. It ricochets off of the wall and hits Alicia in the stomach. She falls to the ground. Rena gasps in shock. Rena: Alicia! Rena tends to her wounded roommate. Will: You heartless bastard! Jace stops fighting with Will after realizing what has happened. Jace: Baby? What- Oh no. Will goes to help Alicia. Jace jumps on top of him to stop him. Jace: SHE’S MY GIRLFRIEND! DON'T TOUCH HER! The struggle continues again but it ends with Jace throwing Will out of a window. Will screams as he freefalls into the traffic.
  15. Matt P.

    Episode 109

    OMG when did you kill off two of my favorite characters: Danny and Julie? I was shocked by reading the opening scene. It was truly poetic and emotional. Sort of web emmy material if we ever had an award show. I also enjoyed the confrontation between Lizzie and Aubrey. If these two fight over Jonathan...that would be very entertaining. Maybe a little cat fight? It's been a while since Springfield's had one.
  16. I really enjoy the complex mother/daughter dynamic that Anna has with Yvette. It's almost like Kay and Jill on Y&R. You want them to hate each other but enjoy it when they actually act like a family. Good episode and I'm with everyone else. I loved the name Novi but I for sure like the new VL logo. It's so sleek and sharp.
  17. I still don't like the Bro Hoes and since Bro HO number two killed Lauren, give him the electric chair just like it was given to Chris! I really didn't know why Tyler was beating up Kiko. Was it to show Bro Ho that he's not to be messed with or to make it look like he's a touch motha in front of Santino? At least he's not like his abusive father. I swear hitting Jenn isn't right. Yeah she's a bad person, inside and out, but she doesn't deserve that. She does deserve the blackmail that Karl is dealing. If I were Diego I'd run and hide. He's in a boat load of trouble. For once we actually feel remorse for Natalia but then again the one I felt the most bad for was Gil. Go after Sab already. He really needs to make her see that Bryan cheated on her and he's the one for her. Grow a pair already. Mona so had Daniel gloating in front of her. This scene was one of the best scenes ever written on STEAM. I was rooting for Danie this whole scene.
  18. Daniel's scene with Lauren were very touching but the whole time I kept thinking...she played you the whole time. She gave up hope when you were "alive" and went from guy to guy. Daniel is one of my favorite characters but he comes off as very vulnerable at times. Most of the guys do...well at least the ones that slept with Lauren...all seem to have a sweet spot for Lauren. (Thought it was still a good scene to read.) About time Mona revealed who she really was to Mama Patterson. Let's face it, both girls aren't right in the head. Screw physical genes, they both have the same messed up emotional genes. Abe was killed because for his sins and it's going to be interesting to see how the rest of the family will react. Will this make the Bro Hoes get drunk and screw a skank? It's looking so! I was waiting for a slap across the face from Sabryn and Ashley but I'm sure love sick Gil would've probably helped also. He so needs to stand up to Bryan and admit how he feels for Sab. Look out because Nat's going to be giving everyone in the town a verbal knockdown.
  19. I'm so sorry I wasn't able to comment sooner but I've been hella busy and so have you! This Season Premiere was so action packed. The wedding from hell was for sure halarious and intense. The cat fight between old enemies was nice but I would've rather had the original Sabryn in the part. In speaking of recasts, I do like Nia Long in the role of Sharan. The quote of this episode definitely belongs to Ria with her Y&R line. It for sure had me cracking up. Mike's scene with missing Jodie was very touching but I'm sort of wondering what's going to happen with Lena and Heath. There's so much potential for so many outrageous things that I know only you can deliver. I am for sure loving Miss Jenkins!!! Great episode. All I have to say about Lauren is that I will not miss her in the least. I hope that she still feels stupid for what she did over having Chris killed. Then again that was all Mona/Kelis's fault. It was a good cliffhanger though.
  20. I have to admit that this episode was probably the hardest episode so far that I have written. I just found myself putting it off and not wanting to write but deep down inside knowing that I have to get it done. There was so much stuff that went on in this episode and it would've been too much to have Detective Miltner question Marli about S.R.'s death. I just wanted Blake to break it off with Marli because she's been hiding so much from him and he's at a breaking point. That and losing the company really pushed him to Alley. Alley lost John so these are two people who need each other and they found each other in the moment of need. Originally the ending was just going to be them kissing but I thought...why not have London witness it. The reason Carlos, Jenny, and London didn't make a huge deal about escaping is because they didn't want Nan to wake up. They know how dangerous she is and if she sees that her victims are leaving, well that's like waking up a grizzly bear from hybernation. Now Nan has her "oh my god, what am I going to do?" moment. I thought it was about time to let the girls go. They were supposed to be there to the season finale where Carlos opens the door and CLICK will the place blow up? Well I figured let's just speed up the story and have Nan get caught. I really enjoyed Dylan's scene with Sean. It was very touching and dramatic. I can't reveal what's going to happen but for a preview it's Sean vs. Lana in the next episode as they dive deeper into why Lana did what she did. There's a huge reason why Bobbie's on the canvas but now she knows that she's going to die...well she's going to live life to the fullest. Now that Bryan's in control of the school this makes for a few plot openings. Can Bryan be an ethical leader or will he fall into the trap of doing whatever he can to get ahead. He already has the school. Of course Blake and Dylan will fight for their positions but Dylan's worried about getting married and Blake's off kissing his friend. Their relationships sort of take precendence over their job. I did think that it was nice to finally have Bryan get his way and he did it by being underhanded. I love your comments M.L. keep them coming!
  21. After reading Alley's "I'm from Colorado" it's so her. She would say something like that. I've been toying around with a final catfight between Ginny and Tanisha.
  22. - - - Marli rushed into The Palace Café to find Blake sitting at a window table. He kept looking outside. Marli picked up on the fact that something was wrong. Marli: I came as fast as I could. You sounded so urgent on the phone. What’s up? Blake turns around to face her. Blake: Have a seat. Marli sits across from him. Marli: This reminds me of grade school. Am I in trouble Mister Hammerton? Blake: He’s dead. Marli: Who’s dead? Blake: The guy you got into the accident with. S.R. died. Marli: Oh my god. That’s terrible. Blake: It really is because now the police will continue to ask us questions on top of questions. Marli: It was an accident. I didn’t mean for any of this to happen. We both lost control of our cars and…that’s…that’s how it happened Blake I swear. Blake: He knew you as Hope. Just tell me the truth Marli. Who are you? Marli is quiet for a moment. She swallows the lump in her throat before answering. Blake: Answer me! Marli: You know who I am. I’m your girlfriend. Blake: Not anymore. Marli: (hurt) What? Blake: I don’t want to go out with you. I don’t know you. You hide things from me and I need someone who’s honest. Marli: I haven’t lied about anything. I’m- I’m hurt that you would say that. Blake: I have a lot going on and maybe a relationship can’t fit in with my hectic schedule. Marli: Yes it can. Please don’t break up with me. Blake: I’m sorry Marli. Thank you though for getting me through some tough times. I mean…I’m really sorry. Marli: Is it someone else? Because if it is, I have a right to know! Blake: No. I’ve felt this way for a long time. Bye Marli. Blake forces a smile and gets up and leaves. Marli stands up and walks after him. Marli: Blake? Blake exits The Palace Café and all Marli can do is watch him. She gets a call on her cell phone. Marli: Now is not the time! Bryan: Of course it is. There’s going to be a very important board room meeting today and you’re going to be there. Remember dear, if you’re not…you’ll be exposed! Bryan hangs up with Marli as Marli sinks into her chair. - - - Episode 122: A Bushel and A Peck Created & Written by: Matt Politylo Logo Designer: Mary Zimmerman Guest Starring: David Canary as Howard Ballinger Jaslene Gonzales as Jalenda - - - Carlos wakes up in bed next to Nan. He crawls out of the sheets fully clothed. Just to make sure she was still alive, Carlos listens to her breathing. He looks to the empty drink next to her. Carlos: Sleep tight Nan. Carlos rummages through his pockets and pulls out a bottle of sleeping pills. He places it next to her drink. He exits downstairs to the door that was bothering him with curiosity. Carlos opens the door and finds Jenny awake. Jenny: Carlos? Am I dreaming? Carlos: Jenny?! London wakes up to find that they have a visitor. Her eyes light up. London: Oh thank god. Carlos: Wait…aren’t you? London: Dead yeah I’ve heard that one a lot. Carlos: What the hell is going on? London looks at Jenny. London: He’s your boyfriend. Why don’t you tell him. Jenny: Nan kidnapped us! She’s been hiding London for her vendetta with Blake and made you think that I left. London: She’s been videotaping everything and showing it to us. Carlos: I knew something was up. Jenny: Where is Nan? Carlos: Out cold. I drugged her. I knew she was hiding something. It’s Nan we’re talking about. Carlos hugs Jenny tightly. Carlos: I’m just happy to see you. After everything that happened. I’ve missed you. Jenny: Believe me, I wanted to talk about the baby. Carlos: Let’s just move on by first getting out of here. London: I’m all for that. Carlos, Jenny, and London run out of Nan’s room. When they get outside, the two girls breathe in the fresh air. London: Thanks for helping me out Jenny. I think I have somebody waiting for me. Jenny: No problem. I kind of enjoyed the company. London: So what’s next? Jenny: Next we take down that bitch for all she’s worth. She won’t get away with this. I’m going to need your help but go enjoy your family. London hugs Jenny and exits. Jenny looks at Carlos. Jenny: You’re my hero. Again. Carlos: I didn’t believe for a second that you left and that’s why I got close to Nan. Jenny: Don’t say her name. Just shut up and kiss me. Carlos leans in and tenderly kisses Jenny. - - - Dylan sits alone in his office. He looks to his computer screen but all he sees is the blinking of a typing cursor. He just can’t stop thinking about the other night and the chaos that ensued. A knock on the door gets his attention. Dylan: Come in. Sean walks in and Dylan quickly pretends to be busy. Sean walks up to his son’s desk to drop off a folder. Dylan: Wish I could chat but I’m sort of busy. Sean: That’s fine. I’ll make it short. I’m giving you my resignation. Dylan: I’ll take a look at it when I get a chance. Sean: Boy for someone who should be worried about his position with his company, you’re doing a fine job under pressure. Dylan: I’m sure that everything will be okay. Bryan is a bad guy and good always conquers evil. Please if you don’t mind. Sean begins to walk to the door but he stops. Sean: I know that sorry isn’t going to be enough to make up for the past. I really wanted you to know that I’m proud of you. I was so very proud of you the moment I laid eyes on you as a baby and as a Vice President. Dylan: You and mom lied to me! All I wanted was the truth. Sean turns around to face him. Sean: The truth that I’m gay? Dylan: I don’t care what you are. I wouldn’t care if you were a woman or an animal. You’re my father. That’s what would’ve mattered most. Sean: Maybe this wouldn’t have happened if your girlfriend didn’t go snooping around. Dylan: She’s the only person who loves me at this point. She’s honest with me. That’s something that you and mom will never be. Good bye dad. Sean shakes his head and exits. He walks across the hallway, past Carrie who was eavesdropping. Carrie is right about to open the door to Dylan’s office until she’s stopped by Lana. Lana: Eavesdropping? Is that something that your messed up family taught you? Carrie: Hello to you too Lana. Lana: Look Carrie, I wanted to make amends for the way I acted the other night. Why don’t we all have a nice talk about what transpired and who’s really sorry for what. Carrie: Seriously? (sarcastic) It’s very fortunate to do it in front of Dylan’s eyes. Lana: My heavens, whatever do you mean? Carrie: You drove his father into a life of shame. He doesn’t want to see you and he doesn’t want to forgive you. Lana: There’s still a wedding that’s going to take place. Believe me, I’ll be there one way or another. Carrie: No you won’t. Dylan has thrown both of your names off the guest list. I’ll make sure to have someone be on the look out for you if you dare come near us. You hurt him once already Lana. I’m not going to let it happen again. Carrie quickly walks into Dylan’s office. He can see Lana standing in the hallway with her mouth dropped as Carrie shuts the door in front of the scorned mother. - - - Ava hangs out with Bobbie in her own room. The two play a board game. Bobbie: I win! Ava: Yeah you definitely did. Good job. Bobbie: You want to watch a movie? Ava: Wow you’re actually kind of being fun to hang out with today. Bobbie: Sometimes I can be mean and other times I can be nice. I can have a change of heart. Ava: Why be mean? Life’s too short. Ava is caught off guard from her comment. Ava: We’ll watch a chick flick. Bobbie: Sounds good. Ava rummages through her bookshelf and looks at some of her DVD’s. There’s a knock on her door, Bobbie answers it. She finds Nate standing in front of her. Nate: Hi is Ava around? Bobbie: Depends. Nate: I really need to talk to her. Bobbie: (hollering) Ava dufus is here. Ava comes to the door and smiles at Nate. Ava: Hi dufus. What’s up? Nate: It’s kind of cold. Can I come in? Ava: Sure. Nate walks in and looks at Bobbie who’s sitting on the couch watching the movie. Nate: Can we go somewhere private? Ava: Yeah I think that would be best. Ava leads Nate to her bedroom. She shuts the door behind her. Nate: I’ve been doing a lot of thinking lately and I hope that what I'm about to say doesn’t sound too forward or too quick but…I want you. Ava: Really? Nate: Yeah. Sky’s out of the picture and you really have matured with Bobbie. I’ve always had feelings for you but I just felt that I had to be stubborn because I didn’t want to get hurt again. Ava: Nate you know that I’m sorry about what happened. I wasn’t trying to hurt you, I was trying to get rid of Sky! Nate: Don’t mention her name. Ava: Okay. Nate: Now all we have to do is get your friend out there to like me. Ava: I’ll have her lighten up to you. Poor girl. Nate: What’s wrong with her? Ava: When I called you, I found out that Bobbie has a deadly disease and she doesn’t have a lot of time to live. Which is why I want to make sure that every day counts for her. Outside of Ava’s bedroom door, Bobbie eavesdrops and is shocked by what she just found out. - - - In John’s dormitory, Marissa walks out of her part of the dorm with a more conservative dress for Jalenda. Jalenda: That dress looks ugly. Marissa: You’re going to wear it. My brother doesn’t date skanks. Jalenda: Am I getting paid for tonight? Marissa: Yes but I’m not paying you as much. Jalenda: Why not? Marissa: You messed up missy. You weren’t supposed to tell anyone what you do for me. Jalenda: Next time tell me that you don’t have an assistant and I won’t. Marissa: By the way, I’m not paying you to have sex with my brother…I’m paying you as a call girl. Jalenda: If he’s hot, I just might not be able to help myself. Marissa: If you want cast in a porno I can arrange that. The door opens and John walks in. He notices Jalenda and smiles. John: Hi. Marrissa: John this a girl from my office. Jalenda this is my brother John. Jalenda: Nice to meet you stud. Marissa secretly tugs at her hair to calm her down. John: You too. Marissa: John I was hoping that you’d be able to take Jalenda out tonight. John: That’s so short notice. Jalenda: I’m free if you are. John: Sure. Just give me a few minutes to change. John goes to his bedroom and shuts the door. Jalenda: Damn girl! He’s fine. Marissa: If you lay a hand on him, then you won’t get paid. Have fun. - - - Nan wakes up in her bed feeling groggy. She shakes her head and looks out her window. It was already nighttime. Nan looks back at her empty bed. Nan: I must’ve been that good Carlos. Carlos you here? There's no answer so she shrugs it off. She makes her way downstairs and goes over to her computer. She turns her camera on and records. Nan: Good morning bitches. Just wanted to let you know Jenny that Carlos and I had an amazing night in bed last night. I’m still tired from all of the hot humping. Don’t believe me? Of course I have the proof. Nan clicks on some folders in her desktop and finds the latest web cam file. She plays it and sees Carlos leaving her bed. Nan: Can’t show that. Let’s get to some juicy stuff. Nan pulls up a later video file of Carlos opening the door to Jenny and London. Nan: WHAT THE- ? Just to make sure Nan runs to her lair and finds it’s empty. Nan begins to freak out. She throws things at the wall, until getting a grip. Nan: What am I going to do? - - - Rena finds Jace sitting alone at The Cue Ball’s bar. She sits next to him. Rena: I want to you buy a drink. Jace: Make it a double shot. Rena motions for the bartender to come over. Rena: Two waters please. Jace: Guess you’re deaf. Rena: You need to sober up pal. Jace: What are you doing here? Shouldn’t you be walking the sunset with your bastard of a boyfriend? Rena: I want to make sure that you and Alicia stay together. You’re not going to keep her by being a drunk. That’s what drew her to Will in the first place. Jace gets up in Rena’s face. Jace: How dare you! You have no right to judge me. I know that you relationship with Will’s a hoax. Rena: It isn’t. Jace: Prove it! Rena: Fine. I want this quadrangle to end. You want to get back at Will and have him stay away from Alicia, then inform her that you know the truth. Jace: I do know the truth. That you two aren’t anything. Rena: He faked his fall. He smashed a bottle off his head so that it looked like you did it. Jace: I knew it! Rena: Tell Alicia and she’ll stay away from Will for good. Jace: You really do care for him don’t you? Rena: I wouldn’t have done this if I didn’t. Hopefully you care for your girlfriend too. Jace: Oh I do. Rena pats him on the back and finishes his drink for him. She exits. Jace watches Rena leave. Jace goes to the corner of the bar, away from the others playing pool, so that he can’t be heard while he makes a call. Jace: Hey Rob it’s Jace. I was wondering if you could help me out with something. Instead of going through registry, I need to borrow your gun. It’s kind of an emergency. - - - At The Palace Café, Will orders a drink off of Ginny. Ginny: Coming right up. Ginny exits to fix him his drink. Alicia enters and goes over to him. Alicia: Hi. Will: What’s up? Can I get you a drink? Alicia: Sure. Ginny comes by with Will’s coffee. Ginny: Anything else? Will: Whatever the lady’s having. Alicia: Mocha latte please. Ginny exits again. Alicia: Thanks again for what you did. Will: Even though he attacked me twice, I thought of you. Alicia: I promise that Jace will leave you alone. It sucks that the two of you won’t be friends but I’m sure you can manage. Will: I’m not moving out of my apartment anytime soon. Alicia: Neither is he. Will: Maybe he should. Alicia: Why? Will: He’s dangerous. I don't want him coming after me for a third time. If you can’t see that then you’re blind. Alicia: I know he has his moments but I trust him. I- Will: What? Love him? Alicia: Yes. Will: What do you feel for me? Will places his hand on her shoulder. She looks deep in his eyes before shying away from him. Alicia: I feel as if you should just stay with Rena. You two are meant for each other. Not us. Ginny returns with Alicia’s drink. They move to a table to sit down. Will: So that’s it? I bail your boyfriend out of jail and you go back to him? Even though he's a drunken maniac! Alicia: Yeah. Look if I knew you had other intentions then I would’ve came up with the money myself. Will: You’re making a mistake with him. Alicia: And you’re making a mistake if you keep pursuing me. You don’t want to lose what you already have. Will: I don’t want to lose you! Alicia: You never had me. Will: So where is Jace? Why aren’t you with him now? Alicia: He’s at The Cue Ball. I’m actually going to get him. Will: To do what? Pick him off the floor when he’s drunk? Alicia: No! Maybe I should go. Will: Yeah that’ll be best. Alicia stands up to exit but Will isn’t through just yet. Will: Alicia if Jace doesn’t evict himself, then I might just do it for him. Those charges can be brought back up. That’s just something to think about when you talk to your drunk of a boyfriend. - - - The next afternoon, Blake sits in his seat as the board room meeting started. He looks at Dylan who nods to him in reassurance that everything was going to be okay. Blake didn’t get the same look from Lanoi and Benjamin. They seemed nervous. Bryan walks in with a smile on his face and behind him is Marli. Blake is stunned to see her. Blake: What are you doing here? Bryan: I was sort of the one who called the meeting. Blake: Not you. Marli this isn’t the time or place. Bryan: She’s here under my business. Blake: (confused) What? Marli: I’m sorry again. I wish I could explain but...I just can't. Benjamin: Where’s the guest of honor? Everyone looks to the door when a nurse wheels in Howard Ballinger. He still looked regal but it was obvious that he was on the verge of death. Benjamin: Hello Howard. Lanoi: It’s great to see you. Howard: I’m not happy to be here under these circumstances! Blake: If everyone’s ready we’ll start the meeting. I’ll open the floor to new business. Bryan we’ll open to you. Bryan: Thank you Blake. I have called upon this meeting because there is a contract dispute among the power of the school. I have in my hands the original contract that Howard Ballinger signed with one Edmund Hammerton and within the fine print, it states that Mister Ballinger is able to revoke his offer of sale if desired. Dylan: Then let’s find out from Mister Ballinger himself. Would you like to take back the school? Howard: I would! I’ve been hearing stories upon stories about how this school has changed from when I was running it. Blake: With all due respect sir, the school has been in the best shape in years. Howard: I may be senile but I’m not stupid! I gave your father ownership and he guaranteed me that you’d run it with dignity but you obviously let us both down. Lanoi: I guess that means that Howard is the president again. Howard: Actually Lanoi, I would like Bryan to take the place of president. Bryan: And I happily accept. Blake: This is ridiculous! He fed you some sort of bull story and lied to you. Do you even know who you’re letting run this place? He’s a criminal! Howard: He’s now the president. Bryan bends down to sign a new contract. Howard signs it as well. Howard: My lawyer drafted this yesterday. The decision was already made a long time ago. Bryan here only furthered it. Blake: You’re making a huge mistake. Everyone here knows it but they won’t admit it. Dylan: I'll admit it! This is very wrong. Bryan: (ignoring them) First order of business is that I would like to ask Blake and Dylan to step down from the board. We won’t be needing your services anymore. Dylan you should be happy to know that Marli here is my new VP. Blake: NO! Bryan: Yes. Marli: I…Blake it’s not what you think. Blake: I’m glad we broke up because how dare you betray me like this. Bryan good job on finally getting your way. Can’t wait to see what a mess this school will turn out to be. Bryan: Goodbye Blake. Don't call us and we won't be calling you. Blake shot daggers at both Blake and Marli on his way. Blake and Dylan exit. - - - Blake walks alone in the courtyard of the school he used to run. He bumps into Alley. Alley: Hey. Blake: Hi. Alley: You look like hell. Blake: I lost my company. Alley: I lost my boyfriend. Blake: I’m not sorry to hear that. Well I also lost Marli and then she betrayed me. Alley: You seem to have lost a lot more. Blake: Yeah. We both built up something…just to watch it fall. Alley: Did someone take it away from you? Blake: Yep. Alley: Yeah me too. I was going to grab a coffee if you want to join me. I’ll buy. Blake: No. I kind of want to be alone. Seems after losing a wife, a girlfriend, and a school that I’m not much of a winner. Alley: Suit yourself. Alley begins to walk away. Blake: Alley? Alley stops to face him. Alley: Yeah? Blake: Thanks. Thank you for always being there for me. Alley: What are friends for? Blake looks deep into Alley’s eyes as she looks into his. For once there was something different between them. They didn’t see each other as just friends. They both lean in and tenderly kiss each other but they don’t know that London has witnessed everything. ----------------------- Only one more episode until the exciting Season Finale!
  23. There has been talks in recent episodes about the return of the ex-President of Point Palace University and now the character is coming to light. All My Children star David Canary tackles the role of Howard Ballinger. Canary's character will be the deciding factor over a plot that has taken over the show for the past two seasons. Canary will be on guest starring basis but is possible to be upgraded to recurring. Find out who will take control over the school because it will not rest on a cliffhanger! Three more episodes are left until the season finale and Point Palace creator Matt Politylo dishes over the excitement. "The upcoming episodes are riviting, surprising, and of course dramatic. This season's season finale is the best. The readers will truly be shocked!" The fifth season opening is in the works and Politylo says that it keeps with season five's theme of a blue background and colored stills. Look for that to come out very soon.
  24. Matt P.

    Episode 93

    Seriously man. I always have to start my comments by saying that you need to contact GL. (I do know a few people there so, if you don't I will. This episode was very powerful. I loved the scene between Michelle and Danny. You really felt Michelle's desperation. It was like I felt the fall wind brustling through Springfield. Kevin reminds me a lot of Rafe, what with his troubles, but it was great to see interaction between Dinah and Blake. Poor Blake. She's always had a hard life to live. Cady and Petyon are awesome cast adds. Keep up the good work!
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