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Matt P.

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  1. I really enjoyed this episode. The imagery from the first scene was what truly drew me in because you could feel Ashley's insane desperation towards Bryan. Bryan is stupid to think that she's going to leave him alone and poor Sabryn...I'm hoping that Ashley plans on doing some sort of tampering with her pregnancy. After all, Ashley would love to be pregnant with Bryan's baby. If Ashley's truly over Bryan then why doesn't she just move on to someone else, like Gilbert, who obviously has a big crush on the blond.

    Daniel's entrance was sort of surprising and wierd at the same time. Mona has turned him delusional and it's taking its toll on Lauren and Chris. I'm really hoping to see those two together but Lauren's past with Daniel is still looming.

    Keep up the great work!

  2. Very nice episode! Loved the major twists and turns. Something that I found very odd was the second picture of the High Kiss Hair Salon. Very freaky looking.

    Can't believe that Dondre's dead on top of that Ria's being blackmailed! Dang was that good. I was thinking that Sabryn and Ashley would have turned out to be sisters but to find out that Sabryn's pregnant took me for a loop. Poor Ashley will never learn but people do crazy things when they are in love, even if the other person just doesn't understand. Sounds like a Final Thought from The Jerry Springer Show.

  3. Yeah there will be many cast shake ups and many shocks along the way. I'm glad to see that there is a mixed reaction to Joy Bisco. For Mika's character (pronounced ME-KAH) I couldn't picture anyone else but her. Brenda Song was considered but I felt like she was too young and Kelly Hu is too old. Especially since Mika's paired with someone very important.

  4. The series keeps getting better and better. Poor Jodie is obviously in for a whirlwind of trouble if she gets caught up with Ty but I'm enjoying her naitevity.

    I felt really bad for Chris who was getting his heart broken from Lauren. I think that Lauren and Chris should be a couple. He seems genuine (so you must be doing something right with your male characters!!!) This love triangle sort of reminds me of the G/O/T love triangle on PP. Our writing styles are very similar.

    Mona is just plain creepy and I love it. You never know what she's going to do next and reading what she was doing to Danny was just plain scary. She reminds me of a cross between Helena Casadine meets James Stenbeck.

    Can't wait to read what happens next and I can't wait for SONOP to premiere!

  5. The one thing I've noticed from this episode is that the females seem to have more power than the males, with the exception of Ty. I think that the guys need to have more emotion instead of being sex toys...which could be an interesting plot.

    Other than that, I'm liking how Mona's storyline is coming to place. The ending was eerie but exciting. And Alexis and Mike remind me so much of Alexia and Owen.

  6. Uh oh Sabryn made a big mistake firing Natalia. Knowing her mantality, the claws are going to come out and things are going to get dirty.

    I really am hoping Mona and Ty become enemies. The only way I could see the two being friends if they\'re working to destroy something or someone.

    The title btw, was funny. I was expecting it to be a sexual charged episode but it was still good.

  7. Here are a few previews that I can give you for the next season. Without giving anything away of course...James's exit was storyline driven because with no Peggy or Laney then it would just be the two of them and I thought that it was boring. However, his exit will affect her heavily.

    The GOT drunk catfight scene was written in last miniute because originally it was just O and T dancing together and that wasn't exciting. So I thought to maybe give Ginny a backbone and what better way to do it other then getting her drunk.

    John McCook seems very interesting as a choice for Benjamin. I could see that with the Susan Flannery planning.

    John's character, ever since the first episode, is a smart alec photographer. I always stayed true to his character so any funny lines or sarcastic lines that I can give him, I do. That was thanks to someone who played him in the demo showed me how much of a comical relief the guy can be amongst all of the drama.

    Dr. Harnlo has her reasons for hiding what she's hiding as it is a huge secret. She's a better doctor than Dr. Quarr persay as she has a lot more ethics.

    I thought the 'B' scene was comical because Brandon just wants to beat the hell out of Will and of course Will would be ready to throw down. A Trella/Lenvy pairing actually does sound pretty interesting and could be pursued.

    Out of all of the cliffhangers I've written this one was my favorite. (I always imagined Will flicking the cigarette in slow motion.) I think that what's great about it is that every character could be affected by Nan's plan, including herself. A lot will be happening the next season thanks to the resident's number one bitch.

  8. Ewwwie Mona is one nasty biatch! The episode was short and this is funny coming from me because of the length of episodes that I write, shorter is always better to read. Mona's threat at the end was chilling and the scene played out very well. Mona's graphic was well done and easy to picture.

    As I said before, I'm really liking the Lauren and Chris pairing. They have the makings that make me think that they could be a powerful supercouple. Plus, Chris seems to be getting more lines then other dayplayers.

    Good job! Keep up the good work.

  9. Hey Josh! I'm glad to see you back at the writing and like I said before, I miss All or Nothing! This is the first time I peeked at your blog and I love it. The openings are creative as are the plots. Love the young generation of friends storyline, it makes me think of what 2003 should have been. Keep up the great work.

  10. Hey the longer the better in my opinion.

    I enjoy writing circle scenes. The Alexia/Frank scene was very exciting because Alexia is the type of person to call someone's bluff, she acts on impulse. Like I said before, they treated Frank like crap. It was seen in a prequel that I wrote in 2001 called Before Their Time. Other stories featured were Nan's cheating on Blake, Zak and Trella, Ike/Vicki/Jake, and there was another one but I can't remember what it was at the moment.

    In the episode with Frank, he makes dinner for them but Alexia throws it in his face. Owen purposely crashes his car. Frank admits to killing their father to be closer to their mother. He kidnapped them but their mother saved them by shooting him in the shoulder. He went to jail but was released on good behavior.

    Trella isn't a lesbo but in Season 4, someone else is, she feels vengeful towards Will as does Brandon who just wants to kill him! Yeah Benjamin and Lanoi never had this many problems when Howard was president but Bryan feels betrayed. Jenny always does that to Carlos, she's thrown many ultimatums at him but he knows deep down inside it's just her being insecure because from the beginning (ever since she was friends with Nan) she's always been.

    The next two episodes should be good!

  11. I think that was the longest comment you've ever left me.

    So yeah Alexia is tortured and although he's feeding her, she hasn't bathed because Frank thinks she'll escape if she does. Frank is completely creepy and he's very dark. Frank also feels like he can't do any wrong but Alexia & Owen were real bastard kids to him which pushed him over the edge.

    The Blue Crystal scenes are fun because it's supposed to sort of be like a behind the scenes to a teen soap kind of plot. Originally Point Palace was going to be called Blue Crystal so that the tagline would read: "What if life were clear? As clear as a Blue Crystal."

    Peggy's character was actually written in as a teacher who at the time asked to be in the story. She said make the character a bitch and I did. In the upcoming episodes, her true colors show.

    Last but not least is Lenvy...good, used to be virignal Lenvy. Lenvy is an angel, a flirt, and is supposed to be the nicest soul this school has to offer. Like I said before, what she feels for Will is true love, because she sees the good Will who's changed for her. Not the bad Will that came out because of Trella's arrival.

    I can't wait for the season finale...only 3 more episodes!

  12. Thanks for the comments. I used Adobe After Effects for the opening and the actors who represent Alley, Will, John, Dylan, and Nan were all actors who starred in the web version of Point Palace which can be found on Youtube.

    Point Palace has not gone on hiatus yet...that won't happen until Episode 77, the only reason why I've been putting off getting a new episode out was because I wanted to use the proper HTML coding but it won't let me so oh well.

    Enjoy the upcoming episodes!

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