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Episode 74: Will They Tell the Truth?


Matt P.

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Previously on Point Palace:

- Alexia and Owen's stepfather Frank, turned out to be the one who was making threatening phone calls to Alexia. He shows up to her door and begins to strangle her with rope. After letting her go, she tries to escaped but is knocked out. The next day, she wakes up to being tied to her bed, and when

Owen tries to call her, Frank pretends to be her and says everything is fine.

- Tanisha went to apologize to Owen for telling him that she loved him because she knew that he didn't feel the same way. He told her that he was just caught off guard by it. She then, without warning, kisses him. When she leaves, she tells herself that it is time to eliminate the competition. Trella went to

the cafe to confront Ginny. She then told him the truth about Owen not being British.

- Bryan tells the board, except for Blake, that Nan has something that needs to be said. She tells Lanoi and Benjamin that Blake had sexually harassed her and or raped her. Everyone is shocked. Leon calls Blake to find out his statement for the story that he has to write about for the paper.

Blake is appalled, taken off guard, and ecstatic. London slanders Nan's name in vein.

- Dylan began to worry after finding out that Alley is not to be messed with, when she admits to Dylan, that she had gotten revenge on Carrie and John by making a call to the mob. Victor came to Carrie's room and tried to get her back to return to Lexington with him after hearing from Alley that she

wasn't happy with Point Palace. Carrie said that it was petty crap pulled by Alley. John eavesdropped on the conversation and texted a message to Alley's phone saying "nice try." He then busted in on their conversation by telling Victor that Carrie isn't going anywhere.

- Jenny had her first couple of scenes to tape on the set of "Blue Crystal" and they involved Carlos's character and C.C.'s character. C.C. wasn't warming up to her. When the two girls had a different scene with one another, C.C. decided to do a little ad-libing. An unscripted cat fight broke out between the girls. Henry (the director of "Blue Crystal") and the other producers were shocked

But said that it will be used. After Carlos broke up the fight, he was very embarrassed.

- Lenvy decided to look past Will's criminal past, again, and forgave him for not telling him about how he killed Zak. All she asked of him was to try and make things right with Trella. They found Trella on Cemetary Hill at Zak's grave. She wasn't happy to see them and when Will tried to tell her how

Sorry he really was, she didn't want to hear it. Trella thought that it should be Will in the grave, not Zak.

- Ava's trial continued and James was called up to the stand. Davis tried to show how immoral he was but Bryant showed that James was being honest when he was talking about how his marriage was a failure. The last witness was Ava. Ava talked about how she was being honest and that everything was truly an accident. Although Davis tried to make her out to be a lying killing psychopath. Both lawyers gave a powerful ending argument and then the jury went to make their decision. Everyone returned to the court room and a jury member stood up and paused before saying what Ava's verdict was.

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Episode 74:

Will They Tell the Truth?

Executive Story Consultant & Head Writer:

Matt Politylo

Logo Designer:

Mary Zimmerman

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(The jury member clears his throat.)

Juror:

We the jury find the defendant Ava Cecileneli to be...not guilty.

(Ava smiles out of excitement. A huge weight has been lifted off of her shoulders. She can't stop smiling.)

Judge Carnes:

This court hear by states that Ava Cecileneli will be cleared of all charges. Court dismissed.

(Judge Carnes slams down his gavel for the last time.)

Bryant:

We did it. You said you were innocent all along and we proved it.

Ava:

Thank you so much.

(Ava hugs Bryant. Davis makes his way over to the table and shakes Bryant's hand.)

Peggy:

This is a damn travesty!

Judge Carnes:

Ma'am if you don't calm yourself down then you will be personally removed out of this court room.

Peggy: (to the jurors)

How can you let her get away with what she did? What were you people thinking? Did she bribe you before your decision? Or are you that stupid?!

Davis:

Peggy you should restrain yourself.

Peggy:

No. I won't restrain myself!

Judge Carnes:

Did you not hear me before Miss Lowrie?

Peggy:

You and the rest of this court obviously didn't hear me correctly! She's a murderer! She deserves to be locked up for the rest of her life.

James:

You're acting ridiculous!

Judge Carnes:

Bailiff, please remove her from the court.

(The bailiff tries to take her by the hand but with a struggle, succeeds to do so. As he does Peggy tries very hard to break free.)

Peggy:

Get your grimy hands off of me! There is no system! This sucks! She killed Laney!

(Peggy is finally removed from the court room.)

Ava:

For a second there I thought that she would have gone crazy and killed us all. Bryant, what do I owe you for your expenses?

Bryant:

It's already been covered.

(Ava turns around and catches a glimpse of Vicki and Ike. They smile at her as they begin to walk out of the court room.)

Ava:

Please excuse me for a moment.

(Ava begins to walk down the isle.)

James:

You're finally free!

Ava:

I'll be right back.

Officer Smith:

I believed in you the whole time sugar.

Ava:

Thanks, Smith. I'll miss you too.

(Ava goes outside and sees Vicki and Ike getting into a tinted-windowed black stretch limo.)

Ava:

Wait! Wait for one second!

(The limo pulls off.)

Ava: (screaming)

Thank you!

(Leon and the rest of the reporters begin to ask Ava questions.)

Leon:

Ava now that your name is cleared what do you plan on doing?

Ava:

Well Leon, I plan on getting my life back to the way it was before any of this happened.

Reporter #1:

What was going through your head before the jury's decision?

Ava:

I could only hope that they saw the truth and they did.

Reporter #2:

Do you plan on continuing to see Professor Vaughne?

Ava:

Please excuse me.

(Bryant pushes a few of the reporters away to end the impromptu press conference. Ava begins to walk back into the court room but before she can, Peggy comes from the crowd of reporters on the steps of the courtyard and blocks her.)

Ava:

Get away from me.

Peggy:

We're outside and no one is going to make me calm down this time. James might have found out that I told Laney everything, but this is just too much. You getting off scott free, was just a stroke of luck. I guarantee you that this won't be over!

(Ava watches Peggy shove her way towards the reporters to grab their attention.)

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(Meanwhile Owen gets a knock on his door while making himself dinner. He licks the sauce from his fingers, quickly wipes his hands, and slings a dish rag around his shoulder.)

Owen:

Alexia? Is that you?

(Owen opens it to find a very upset Ginny.)

Owen:

Ginny.

Ginny:

What happened to your accent? Did you all of a sudden learn how to speak proper English? Huh? Or is it true that you're a big fat liar!

Owen: (in the accent)

I'm sorry for lying-

(stops and goes to his original accent)

I mean…you mean a lot to me and I thought that you liked me for just the accent and that's why I kept doing it.

Ginny:

There are many reasons besides your accent on why I liked you so much.

Owen:

How did you find out?

Ginny:

Besides you just incriminating your self...there's no reason to tell a liar the truth.

Owen:

Sorry. I am so sorry.

(Ginny slaps him across the face.)

Ginny:

You lied to me. Even after I told you that the number one thing I looked for in a guy was honesty! And you still went on and lied to me!

(Ginny exits.)

Owen: (screaming)

GINNY!!!!

(Tanisha watches from a far.)

Tanisha:

It had to be done. Owen belongs to me.

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(Nan and Bryan spend time with one another in Bryan's living room of his expensive mansion. Bryan pours her a glass of orange juice as she reads a newspaper.)

Bryan:

If you stay here any longer, I might just have to start charging you rent if you keep spending as much time here as you have been.

Nan:

Then I would just have to stop sleeping with you and giving you so much pleasure as I know that you get from having me around.

Bryan:

Then we can work something out. Of course you have given me much more then just sexual pleasure. Because of you, I will be the next president of Point Palace University.

Nan:

The first day we met. I told you we could make a great team in getting revenge against the one person who has done us wrong.

(Nan turns the paper around and shows him the front page.)

Nan:

We did it! We made front page of the 'Point Palace Inquiry.'

Bryan:

Go on.

Nan:

Headline reads. Presidential assistant claims foul play. Oh this is great.

Bryan:

What else does it say?

(Nan begins to read.)

Nan:

Nan Sheridan who was recently appointed Presidential Assistant has claimed that President Blake Hammerton, sexually harassed her. Vice President Bryan Daniels quotes that foul play will not be tolerated.

Bryan:

Like music to my ears.

(Nan begins to read on and giggles.)

Bryan:

What's so funny?

Nan:

Listen to this. Blake was too upset to comment but his wife, London Tyler Hamerton, says that Nan is a dirty liar and slanders her name in vein.

Bryan:

It's obvious who wears the pants in that marriage.

Nan:

Pretty soon, we'll get Lanoi and Benjamin to vote Blake out. With him gone you can be President and I can be Vice! Too bad for Blake, his reputation is so tarnished and it's going to cost him everything.

(Bryan and Nan clink their glasses.)

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(The next day at the Palace Cafe, Ginny hands a drink to a customer, they leave and she is alone. Owen walks in and sees that she is sort of busy. He sits down in a table, his back to the counter.)

Ginny:

What can I get you?

Owen:

Possibly forgiveness for being such an ass.

Ginny:

I could maybe go and check in the back for those, but we don't sell them here.

Owen:

Do you have time to talk?

Ginny:

For a little bit.

Owen:

Then my plea will be short.

Ginny:

Before you say anything, I want to apologize for something.

Owen:

You have nothing to be sorry about.

Ginny:

The way that I acted yesterday was ridiculous. I didn't mean to slap you. It's just-

Owen:

I pissed you off...royally. You had every right to do it.

Ginny:

Why didn't you just tell me the truth? Then none of this would have happened.

Owen:

Because you were obsessed with the British guy. It was fun to the play the role because it made you happy. When you were happy, I was happy. In my mind that was all that mattered.

Ginny:

What matters most is honesty.

Owen:

And that's all that is being shown right now...honesty.

Ginny:

There's a few customers, I have to get going and help them.

Owen:

I said that I was sorry.

(Owen stands up and begins to walk out of the cafe.)

Ginny: (shouting to him)

And maybe…you deserve a second chance.

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(London is alone in her room. She is beginning to pack a few things, until there is a knock on her door. She opens it to find Tanisha.)

Tanisha:

Hey London, you don't mind if I talk to you for a second?

London:

Not at all, please come in.

(Tanisha walks into the room and London shuts the door behind her. Tanisha begins to notice all of the boxes.)

Tanisha:

Are you moving anytime soon?

London:

Yeah. Blake and I are going to rent a nice little town house that is right next to the campus.

Tanisha:

What are you doing moving everything? Do you need help?

London:

No but thank you. I'll be fine. So what do you need?

Tanisha:

Thank you for even seeing me. You must be busy with Blake's new position as president and because of all the bad stuff that has been going on lately.

London:

With out you Tanisha, my wedding probably would have never gone off as great as it did. And yeah I've been busy but you've done a lot for me and I'm always here for anyone who has helped me out with anything. I guess you've read about what's been going on with the paper.

Tanisha:

Nan is a bitch and I don't believe a word that she says.

London:

Wish everyone else would see it that they way.

Tansiha:

I was wondering if you heard from Alexia lately. She hasn't been to any of her classes and I really need to talk to her about her brother.

London:

Aren't you two an item, you looked pretty close at the wedding.

Tanisha:

That's a long story and it's why I'm trying to find her but I can't. I figured that her best friend would probably know.

London:

Come to think of it, I haven't seen her in awhile either.

Tanisha:

Do you think that everything is alright?

London:

It's not like her to not answer her phones. If she would have gone anywhere, she would've told us. Maybe Owen knows where she is.

Tanisha:

No! Like I said...I can't talk to him.

London:

I'll give her a call.

(London picks up the phone and dials the numbers.)

London:

Hopefully she'll answer. I doubt that she's tied up with anything.

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(In Alexia's room, Frank comes out of her bath room, wearing a long blue terry cloth robe. He looks at her and she is in the same clothes as the previous days, sweat beads dripping from her forehead. Still tied up to the four corners of the bed.)

Frank:

Your shower was pretty relaxing. Cleansing. Very cleansing. You must be attracting the flies. You filthy girl. You haven't bathed all day or even the day before that.

(Alexia murmurs from the duct tape that is across her mouth.)

Frank:

Alexia you have to speak up. Can't hear a word you're saying. But I must warn you though. Once I tear off the duct tape you have to promise me something. Agree?

(Alexia shakes her head yes.)

Frank:

That must be one of the perks of being a victim. You would just agree to do about anything. Well, you have to promise me that you won't scream like a crazy banshee. If you do scream then I'll blow your head off. The gun is over on the table, mind you. Promise not to scream?

(Alexia again shakes her head yes.)

Frank:

Okay. This is going to sting a bit, but it's just like tearing off a band-aid. Fast and painless. Except I hope that it's as painful as possible for you.

(Frank quickly tears off the duct tape.)

Alexia:

Ouch.

Frank:

Told you. Are you hungry?

Alexia:

Of course I am. Please feed me.

Frank:

You're not even supposed to be living today. My plan was to just plan two bullets in- How do you kids say it these days? Bust a cap in your ass and split. But I realized that you're going to draw me to Owen. He'll come by sooner or later and I need you to have him come over, so that the two of you

can die together. That's why, for the time being, the time that you are alive. I made myself at home and packed a few things. Thought you wouldn't mind at all.

(Frank goes over to the table. He begins to dangle the gun and smiles at her. He then cuts apple slices for her.)

Frank:

I could have made a wonderful father. But no. You and your pesky brother had to go and snoop around. Everything would have been fine if you hadn't known the truth.

Alexia:

My family would have found out sooner or later that you killed our father just so you can be selfish and have our mother. Not caring about anybody else but yourself-

(Frank aims the gun at her. She begins to gasp with fright.)

Frank:

It's so tempting to pull the trigger but I can't do it. Not yet at least.

(Suddenly there is a call on Alexia's cell phone.)

Alexia:

As you can see, it's kind of hard for me to answer it. Go and see who it is.

Frank:

Shut up. I'm the one who gives orders.

(While still aiming the gun, Frank looks at the caller I.D.)

Frank:

London's calling!

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(John sits alone in his room reading a paper.)

John:

Sounds like Blake is in deep water. Good.

(John's cell phone rings. He answers it.)

John:

Hello.

Guy:

Hey bro.

John:

Guy, how are you doing?

Guy:

Pretty good. Just wanted to check up on you.

John:

Very nice of you. Things are going absolutely perfect.

Guy:

That's good to hear then.

John:

Is that the only reason why you called?

Guy:

Of course. The only two people in Colorado that I talk to are you and London.

John:

Why do you still talk to her?

Guy:

Because she's my friend.

John:

Then why didn't you get an invite to her wedding?

Guy:

What wedding?

John:

She's now married to Blake Hammerton who's rich father bought him the whole damn school and made him president.

Guy:

You're kidding me?

John:

About the wedding or about the school, because I hate to tell you, it all happened.

Guy:

How are you taking it?

(With his cell phone in hand, John begins to walk out the door and to his car.)

John:

Absolutely fine.

Guy:

What about the baby? Has she had it yet?

John:

Oh so that's why you called. Your mom and dad's little spy, aren't you?

Guy:

No.

(John gets in his car and starts the ignition.)

John:

No the baby is not born and London and me are just friends. I am even civil with Blake. As much as I hate him, she's happy then so am I.

(John begins to drive away.)

Guy:

You really do sound it.

John:

There's this new girl, named Carrie. She's amazing. She really has turned my life around. Look, it was nice to hear from you but I have to go and see her actually.

Guy:

Bro's before hoes, literally since I'm your brother, but whatever...I understand.

John:

Bye.

(John hangs up the phone but then slams the breaks when he notices Carrie's car in front of Dylan's room.)

John:

What the hell are you doing with Dylan?

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(Blake stands alone in his dim lit office. The lights are off but he continues to stare out the covered blind slit. Sun light pours in. Myra then enters.)

Myra:

Lanoi Dickson and Benjamin Cliffside are here to see you.

Blake:

Please send them in.

(Lanoi and Benjamin walk into Blake's office. He pulls the shade open, and everything is now well lit. Blake turns to face them.)

Myra:

Also, a reporter called and wanted an interview with you.

Blake:

Do you know what it pertained to?

Myra: (forced)

The situation.

Blake:

If it's not Leon Kain, then tell them, no comment.

Myra:

Sure thing.

(Myra exits.)

Blake:

Thank you so much for coming here.

Benjamin:

Where's Bryan?

Blake:

He's not invited to this meeting.

Lanoi:

And what about Nan?

Blake:

Same for her as well. This situation as my secretary called it, is a travesty. It shouldn't have even happened.

Lanoi:

Then why did it happened? It's not right what you did!

Benjamin:

Lanoi, please calm down. Let him speak.

Blake:

It never happened Lanoi.

Lanoi:

Where's the proof?

Blake:

First off, I never drank on the job. Her telling you that I was drunk is a lie. Second, Myra was here the whole time. She was here when Nan and I were working together. Myra said that she heard no screams coming from Nan or me. She is an honest woman, I'm sure if she did hear something, then she would have gone straight to the police. But since this meeting is all Nan's fault, it wasn't

necessary.

Benjamin:

That is some pretty strong evidence. I must admit that when Nan was telling us about it, in the back of my mind, I never thought that you would do that.

Lanoi:

This is just absurd. It's like petty kids playing games. You must know that you are a professional.

Blake:

I already knew this. Nan and Bryan are the ones who pulled this, not me! Lanoi you and Benjamin were sucked into the spider web known as Nan Sheridan. Her lies have woven her way into your mind. She needs to be stopped.

Benjamin:

What do you plan on doing?

Blake:

Nan isn't the only one. Bryan has been after my position since day one. He needs to be replaced. I want to fire him as soon as possible.

Benjamin:

You can't exactly do that.

Blake:

I'm the President am I not?

Lanoi:

Benjamin's right. You can't fire any one of us. Bryan, Benjamin, and I are all under contract with the school. You are too.

Blake:

Fine. Tomorrow I want you two and even Bryan to vote for whether or not Nan stays. All I'm going to say is this. We were doing just fine with out her coming to the board. Without her, the lies that she has created, would not even be a reality for all of us involved. Lanoi you might like her because of the

womanly bonding, but she is trouble. Look at her records. And Benjamin, she has made so much chaos that it's something you will have to clean up all by yourself! Making comments to reporter after reporter. This school will go down in flames, literally because she is capable of doing something like that. The only thing we should clean up is the deception!

(Blake pounds his fist on the table.)

Blake:

I am counting on the both of you to make the right decision!

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(Frank holds the gun to Alexia's head and puts the phone next to her.)

Alexia:

Hello?

London:

Alexia. Tanisha's here and she and I are jut wondering what you've been up to.

Alexia:

I'm doing...just fine.

London:

Where are you?

Alexia:

Around.

London:

Around where? What's going on?

Alexia:

No- Nothing.

London:

Why are you speaking with one word syllables?

Alexia:

Everything is great. I have to get going now.

London:

Wait!

Alexia:

Yes?

London: (lowering her voice)

Just say yes or no. Are you in trouble?

(Alexia pauses. She looks at Frank, who stares back at her with an evil glare. He obviously can't hear the conversation, but he can hear only what Alexia is saying.)

Alexia:

Yes.

(London hangs up the phone.)

Tanisha:

Is everything okay?

London:

No. Alexia's in trouble and we have to help her!

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(On the set of "Blue Crystal," two make up artists work on Carlos and Jenny. Both characters are placed in the Crystal Café. They quickly finish and the two take their places. Henry's voice comes through the intercom.)

Henry:

"Blue Crystal," scene twelve, take one and...ACTION!

Carlos:

Heather look you and I, we can never be.

Jenny:

Are you trying to break up with me?

Carlos:

It would never work out between us.

Jenny:

Why? Because of Melanie?

Carlos:

It wouldn't be fair to you if I kept on acting like I don't have feelings for her.

Jenny:

Miguel, these past couple of days have been wonderful. You and I can learn so much about each other. And we can make it work I know we can-

Carlos:

Please. Let's just be friends.

(Carlos kisses Jenny's cheek and then exits, stage left.)

Henry:

Fade in to Heather.

Jenny:

Fine. Then there's nothing else for me to do. You win Melanie.

Henry:

And cut. A teary goodbye for Melanie's character. Print that.

(A little depressed Jenny, walks off of the set and back to the dressing room. Carlos follows her.)

Carlos:

I'm sorry about what they did to your character.

Jenny:

It's okay. Obviously she had nothing going for her and the fans want to see Miguel with Melanie.

Carlos:

They might bring you back. Maybe Melanie will cause mischief for the both of them you never know.

Jenny:

The writers would have told me that and as nice as that would be, no one has said anything to me yet.

Carlos:

I have to go and film some more scenes. I'll see you back at your room.

(Carlos kisses Jenny's cheek.)

Carlos:

Even though the fans didn't love you...I still do.

(Carlos exits. Cairina and Ian come in.)

Cairina:

Jenny. How are you doing?

Jenny:

Everything is fine. Everyone's acting like I'm dying or something.

Cairina:

It was a true pleasure working with you. It's a shame that you couldn't have lasted longer.

Ian:

Yeah. Maybe you'll find other work.

Jenny:

I doubt that but thanks.

Ian:

We'll still all hang out.

(Jenny hugs Ian and Cairina. They exit. The last person to see her is C.C.)

Jenny:

You're here to rub it in my face, right?

C.C.:

Would I ever do that to you?

Jenny:

You're a stuck up wannabe diva, so of course you would.

C.C.:

It's such a shame that the fans absolutely hated you! Maybe they hated you as much as I did. Have a fun exit, I'm sure that no one will be crying for you. By the way, you should thank your lovely boyfriend for your short stint. Goodbye sweetheart, and we won't do lunch!

(C.C. closes the door and Jenny hurls a glass at the wall, breaking it. She begins to cry.)

Jenny:

Go to hell!

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(Back at the café, Lenvy and Will share a coffee at a table near the window.)

Will:

Trella hates me even more then she already does.

Lenvy:

At least you made an attempt to say you're sorry for what you did. You poured your heart out to her and if she can't realize that then...then screw her.

Will:

But she's your best friend.

Lenvy:

If she can't see that someone that I love is one of the most important people in my life then, maybe I should reconsider who's a friend and who isn't.

Will:

You really are something else.

(Lenvy begins to giggle.)

Lenvy:

Oh you.

(Lenvy leans in and kisses Will. Trella pops up in front of the table, with a guy about their age, dressed in somewhat ghetto clothing.)

Trella:

Sorry to interrupt.

Lenvy:

Not at all. It's good to see you.

Trella:

Wish that I could say the same thing. This is a friend of mine from back home. Brandon this is Lenvy Elliot and Will Pazner.

Brandon:

Will Pazner? The one I've heard so much about.

Trella:

Brandon's in to see Zak's grave.

Brandon:

You're the one who killed my best friend?

Will:

We don't want any trouble so please go back to your trash can.

(Brandon takes Will by his shirt and lifts him out of his seat.)

Brandon:

Excuse me?

(Will brushes Brandon's hands off of him and pushes him.)

Will:

You want to fight? Because I have a half a mind of throwing you out that window or at least to make you have a black eye!

Lenvy:

Trella make this stop.

Trella:

In my opinion, Will deserves it.

Brandon:

What are you going to do? Kill me like you did to my best friend?

Will:

Hopefully.

(Ginny comes over to the action.)

Ginny:

What's going on?

Trella:

Nothing we were just leaving.

(Trella and Brandon begin to leave. Lenvy stands up.)

Lenvy:

Trella, wait!

(Trella turns around.)

Lenvy:

Please make this stop! Why can't we all just be civil with one another and let the past be what it is...the past!

Trella:

Because this isn't some ordinary past. Your boy friend is a killer and he deserves to be brought down!

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(Dylan and Carrie spend time alone in Dylan's room. Dylan looks out the window to make sure no one is around, not knowing that John is out front.)

Carrie:

Aren't you afraid that Alley might walk in and freak out when she sees us together.

Dylan:

That's what I wanted to talk to you about.

Carrie:

Save your breath. I'm out-

Dylan:

The guilt has been building up. I feel horrible for what we did. What happened was a mistake.

Carrie:

By the way, thanks to her she might have put everyone in danger because Victor is looking to stay! He's dangerous.

Dylan:

Alley was just retaliating because of what you and your boyfriend did!

Carrie:

We've already talked about this before! What we need to focus on is our mistake.

Dylan:

You were the one who was sober, you should have stopped it!

Carrie:

I wanted it as much as you did.

(Alley walks in to Dylan's room and freezes.)

Dylan:

Hi.

Alley:

What the hell is she doing here?

Carrie:

I was just about to leave.

Alley:

Good.

Dylan:

No she can't leave.

Alley:

And why is that?

(John then walks into Dylan's room.)

Alley:

This just keeps getting better and better.

Carrie:

John, what are you doing here?

John:

Carrie’s car was out front and I figured who you were talking to and I wanted to know what about.

Carrie:

It was about nothing.

Dylan:

No...Carrie let's just give up.

John:

Give up on what?

Alley:

Do you have something to tell us?

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What a great episode. Very entertaining. It was good from start to finish Matt. The dialog was great and the scenes really flowed nicley. You know what is scary though, maybe not in a bad way, we have very similar writing styles, I could identify so many layers between STEAM and PP. It's creepy but great.

When Frank was telling Alexia she hadn't washed in two days the first thing i thought of was EWW that must mean her muff is not fresh, lol I loved there scenes though. Very creepy.

I am really taking a liking to Peggy as much as she is a bitch. I loved the court scenes and was shocked at the verdict. Great action with Peggy. A true classic.

I also had to chuckle when Frank said, "Bust a Cap in that ass" Good one!!

I am very intrigued with this Guy character . I love the name and I loved his comment Bro's before Hoes. lol Will we be seeing more of him?

You know, as much as I told you i like the Blue Crystal storyline, but by the time I got to it and I even felt like this in the last episode, it feels isolated from the rest of PP. You ever though of doing a spin off, a special or something just featuring Blue Crystal? Anyway, I also loved CC's razor sharp dialog with Jenny.

And I am really feeling Trella on how she feels Will needs to pay and I don't like how the fact that Lenvy is still so passive about it and expects Trella to let it go. yea right. I wouldn't

Again Matt PP is getting VERY GOOD I am completely addicted.

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I think that was the longest comment you've ever left me.

So yeah Alexia is tortured and although he's feeding her, she hasn't bathed because Frank thinks she'll escape if she does. Frank is completely creepy and he's very dark. Frank also feels like he can't do any wrong but Alexia & Owen were real bastard kids to him which pushed him over the edge.

The Blue Crystal scenes are fun because it's supposed to sort of be like a behind the scenes to a teen soap kind of plot. Originally Point Palace was going to be called Blue Crystal so that the tagline would read: "What if life were clear? As clear as a Blue Crystal."

Peggy's character was actually written in as a teacher who at the time asked to be in the story. She said make the character a bitch and I did. In the upcoming episodes, her true colors show.

Last but not least is Lenvy...good, used to be virignal Lenvy. Lenvy is an angel, a flirt, and is supposed to be the nicest soul this school has to offer. Like I said before, what she feels for Will is true love, because she sees the good Will who's changed for her. Not the bad Will that came out because of Trella's arrival.

I can't wait for the season finale...only 3 more episodes!

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