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Hell Date!!Episode34


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A loud clap of thunder awakes Ashleyash.jpg inside Huntington Memorial Hospital.hospital.jpg

Startled, she turns on the tv and looks at the weather report.

"Severe Thunderstorm warning has been issued for Los Angles County. The worst of the storm will pass right over the city of Pasadena." Ashley turns the tv off as the lights flicker inside her room. She thinks

"Mona said it has to be storming out side in order for the love potion to work. This has to be a sign. I can't pass this opportunity up." She gets up out of bed and get dressed, thinking of a way to get Bryan to go to his house.

In Sabryn's Room,

Diego

"You need to put the brakes on all this fighting you're doing. You have a child to think about now Ms. Genet."

sg.jpgSabryn (in shock)

"No. O my God no. Pregnant. This is the last thing I need. Diego, please tell me this is a mistake. Maybe a mix up?"

Diego

"Ms. Genet please. This is not the Bold and the Beautiful or Days of our Lives. There's never a mistake in my work. Hence I am chief of staff here. I'm a little insulted so if you will excuse me, I have patients to see." He leaves.

Sabryn

"Pregnant....with Bryan's child. This is a might mare..." on

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Episode: 34

Written by: ML Cooks, with MON!QUEB!TCHE$

Outside Sabryn's Room

lroberts_12.jpgBryan approaches Diego

"Dr. Is Sabryn and Ashley ok?"

DiegoS1-1.jpgDiego

"So you're the man these two ladies are fighting over. How did you do it man?"

Bryan

"It's not like that. You don't understand. See, Ashley is crazy, she's a few cards short of a full deck. I was hoping you could recommend a mental institution for her?"

Diego

"Where did you go to medical school?"

Bryan

"I didn't go to any medical school."

Diego

"My point exactly. Look, I didn't see no crazy in Ashley. Both woman are ok. I don't know which one you are taking home tonight, but whomever it is, let them get plenty of rest. Now if you'll excuse me." The doctor walks off.

Bryan enters Sabryn's room as Ashley comes out of her room and sees her "man" going into her enemies room.

"That's what I'm talking about. That Bitch won't quit. But after tonight, it's all going to be over."

Inside Sabryn's room

Bryan sees tears rolling down Sabryn's face. He pulls up a chair and sits next to her

"What's the matter?"

She looks at him. She pauses and shakes her head and then looks away. She contemplates on what to do with the baby news. She remains quiet as Bryan holds her hand.

"Look at me." He says, holding her hand tighter. Sabryn still can't look at him.

Bryan

"Talk to me please. What's going on?"

Sabryn

"Look just leave me alone. I want to be alone."

Bryan

"Sabryn, please don't shut me out. Stop putting these walls up between us. I made a mistake Damn I am human. We all make mistakes. I love you and you know that. I would do anything for you. Let me make things right. Let me turn those tears into smiles and Laughter. Give us another chance. "

Sabryn

"Bryan, just please leave me alone?"

Bryan

"You know, I just wonder do you think still think of me anymore?"

Sabryn

"Bryan please don't do this now. I can't take it. Just please GET THE HELL OUT!! I don't want to be bothered."

Bryan

"Ok I won't push it. I can respect you wanting to be alone. But Sabryn, I love you and I'm not going anywhere. I am going crazy insane without you." He kisses her hand and leaves her room.

Only to run into Ashley

Bryan

"You sure have a way of sneaking up on people."

Ashley

"I'm sorry."

Bryan looks at her face wrapped up in bandages.

"Shouldn't you be resting or something?"

Ashley

"Oh I'm ok. Just a few minor cuts. Nothing major. Look, I just wanted to tell you I am waving the white flag."

Bryan

"The white flag?"

Ashley

"I realized that all this drama and fighting is pointless. It's not worth it."

Bryan

"Really? I don't know what to say. I didn't expect those words coming out of your mouth"

Ashley

"Yes my mouth, that's something your going to miss. No one does it better than me. But enough about that. I want to go to your house to grab all my belongings."

Bryan

"Now? It's storming like crazy outside"

Ashley

"Yes Bryan, the sooner the better. I need to get this done. Put closure to it ASAP."

Bryan

"I can definitely understand that."

Ashley

"I bet you do"

Bryan

"What is that supposed to mean?"

Ashley

"Nothing. You paranoid."

Bryan

"Look I'll meet you at my house in 45 minutes."

Ashley

"Great" She leaves.

Bryan

"This is almost to good to be true. No more crazy Ashley in my life. Things are looking up"

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Lauren and Chris are slow dancing to "Can I Take You Home" by Jamie Foxx

They look into each others eyes. As they hold each other tighter. Chris leans in closer to her lips and kiss Lauren on her sweet and soft lips. She looks at him and smiles. The song ends and they go back to their table to wait on their food.

matt_cedeno_04.jpgChris

"You know, I've been looking forward to this date."

5a6e.jpgLauren

"Me too. I could not stop thinking of you. Your colgnoe. Your beautiful smile."

Chris

"O yea" Smiling at her

Lauren

"Yes, your smile makes me smile. It makes me feel warm."

Chris

"I'm glad I can do that for you." The waiter brings their food to the table

Lauren

"Thanks you Pierre"

Chris

"You have a beautiful restaurant here."

Lauren

"Thank you. We've been open for two years now. Business is pretty good bu could be better."

Chris

"So tell me, how was your day."

Lauren (Biting into her chicken parm)

"You know the craziest thing happened today. Jenn told me she is developing feelings for Ty."

Chris

"That is crazy."

Lauren

"What's even crazy was when she told me, I had a mouthful of tea in my mouth and I spitted it out all over her."

Chris

"Woah."

Lauren

"I know tell me about it. She's a little upset with me, but she'll be ok. I just hope she thinks twice before getting involved with a man like Ty. " They continue to eat.

Lauren

"You know that new Halloween movie comes out this Friday."

Chris

"Are you asking me back on a date?"

Lauren

"Yes I am"

"Naw Naw Naw, That wont be happening." Chris and Lauren turn around and are astonished to see Daniel

Lauren

"Daniel, what are you doing here? What are you doing out the hospital.?"

justin-hartley-20060725034634446.jpgDaniel

"I have to save you."

Lauren (confused)

"Save me, from what?"

Daniel

"She's going to get us. But I can protect you."

Chris

"Hold on man. Something isn't right"

Daniel (drooling)

"Man who are you supposed to be? For all I know you could be working with her. Come on Lauren" Daniel grabs her arm

Lauren

"Daniel, let go of me! You're hurting me."

Daniel

"Lauren please don't make a scene. Let's make this as discrete as possible. We can't draw attention to ourselves" He says tightening his grip on her.

Lauren

"Daniel, let go, you are really hurting me."

Chris

"She said let go." Chris lands a right hook on Daniel's jaw. Daniel collapses to the ground. Lauren instructs Pierre to call the police.

Chris

"Something is definitely wrong here. I have never seen Daniel act like that."

Lauren

"You're right, something is very wrong....."

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I really enjoyed this episode. The imagery from the first scene was what truly drew me in because you could feel Ashley's insane desperation towards Bryan. Bryan is stupid to think that she's going to leave him alone and poor Sabryn...I'm hoping that Ashley plans on doing some sort of tampering with her pregnancy. After all, Ashley would love to be pregnant with Bryan's baby. If Ashley's truly over Bryan then why doesn't she just move on to someone else, like Gilbert, who obviously has a big crush on the blond.

Daniel's entrance was sort of surprising and wierd at the same time. Mona has turned him delusional and it's taking its toll on Lauren and Chris. I'm really hoping to see those two together but Lauren's past with Daniel is still looming.

Keep up the great work!

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Don't you mean Sabryn instead of Ashley when you're talking about Gilbert? And why do I have to it full edit to read all of your comments? It keeps cutting them off.

I think I have set up a pretty strong triangle where CDL is concerned. I am proud how it is developing and am excited to tell this emotional story.

The status quo in Pasadena is about to shake up. The past 35 episodes having been building up to what everyone is about to read. It's going to be one hell of a ride as S.T.E.A.M. barrels toward it's 1st season cliffhanger. Buckle up ;)

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I don't know why my comments always seem to do that but yes...I mean Sabryn instead of Ashley. Brain crash I guess.

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