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#128: D!ck!


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Natalia puts her son Mark Jr. in his crib when she hears her door bell. She walks over to the door and opens it and happy to see its Ria.

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“I got a little nervous answering my door. I had flashbacks of Suga shooting my son. But you saved my sons life girl. I will be forever grateful.”

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“It’s nothing. I am sure you would have done the same thing for me.” She walks in Natalia’s house and gives her a hug.

Natalia

“I am so blessed to have you as a best friend.”

Ria

“Girl what you got to eat in here I’m hungry. I didn’t want to stay at my house for breakfast. Miss Patti and my sister are working my nerves. I can’t take much more of this. Patti and her music tales from the 80’s. All she says is somebody loves you baby. Her and her new attitude. Girl she is going to drive me to drink.”

Natalia

“Maybe you need some sex. You sound so stressed out.”

Ria

“Ooh girl you ain’t never lied. I do need some dick. But on some real sh!t, it’s a new year, 2011. I’m not getting any younger. I want a husband, I want kids. I want a family Natti. It’s time to stop playing games. I want more out of life then some good ass dick.”

Natalia

“I think your mother’s new attitude has rubbed off on you.”

Ria, chuckling

“Girl you crazy. I just been doing a lot of thinking lately. Looking at my life, I feel empty. I have no one to come home to all night. I have no one in my corner. I want to build something with somebody. Tired of being alone.”

Natalia

“I know how you feel. I used to spend a lot of lonely nights pondering over Mark. I have my son now; a lot of things have changed.”

Ria

“How does it feel Natti? Being a mother? What is that like?”

Natalia, smiling, walking over to Mark Jr’s crib

“It’s the most beautiful thing in the world. Knowing you created another human being. I mean words can’t even express the feeling honestly. It makes me want to fight harder. I want to make sure M J has the best possible life that I can offer.”

Ria

“This is going to lead into something with Sabryn and or Bryan I know.”

Natalia, looking up at RIA

“You’re right. Bryan is unfit to raise MJ. He’s made comments how he wants to sue me for sole custody of our son. I' m not going to let him. I am going to beat him to the punch.”

RIA

“Oh lord, sounds like you are about to hatch one of your plans.”

Natalia

“You know me so well. I’m a lioness now I have to protect my family. I have to stop playing games. I have a son to think about now. MJ needs a father figure so I will offer Bryan to be a father to his son with Sabryn and his son with me under one roof. We can be a family.”

Ria

“I see you on the same stuff I’m on. You want you some in house kind of dick. I got ya girl.”

Natalia

“The dick is good. But this is for my son. Bryan having a nice dick is an added bonus. But if he refuses, I’ll sue him for sole custody of his son with Sabryn and our son. “

RIA

“Hell naw girl. Sabryn is not going to let you raise her son.”

Natalia

“She’ is going to jail. She isn’t going to have a choice. I’ll have the family she’s always wanted.”

Ria

“I know that’s right.”

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Episode:128, D!ck

Written by ML Cooks

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Bryan with Bryan Jr in a stroller walks up to Sabryn’s cell. Sabryn smiles at her son.infant-baby.jpg

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“He gets more beautiful every time I see him. How is he?”

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“He’s good. He misses you. He needs his mother.”

Sabryn

“Well I wouldn’t be in jail if you would just keep your dick in your pants. This is your fault.”

Bryan

I am so sick of you always blaming me. I didn’t tell you to shoot Ashley several times.”

Sabryn

“And I didn’t ask you to have an affair with Ashley. Now what? You had the affair. Not I. I did what I had to do. I had to put a stop to Ashley’s reign of terror. She’s insane. She kidnapped our son that led to me shooting her. Have you forgotten that?”

Bryan

“No I have not.”

Sabryn

“Good. Then you won’t be too upset when I get out of here, which I will, I will be fighting for sole custody of my son.”

Bryan

“Sabryn, you can’t mean that. I am his father.”

Sabryn

“I know and it makes me sick. I will not let a cheating pig bear any influence on my flesh and blood. BJ will be raised with value. Unlike you. He will be taught to think with his head and not his pant.”

Bryan

“You’re taking this too far.”

Sabryn

“Probably not. I am going to erase you from BJ’s life. He is never going to know you are his father. “

Bryan

“I never thought it would come down to this between us. Sabryn I love you. We can still be a family.”

Sabryn

“NEVER! You have ruined that! You have a child with my enemy. Bad breath Natalia. She would always be there, scheming and plotting because that’s what losers do. I don’t want to spend the rest of my life fighting with her. I have a son to raise now. I have to think of him. I’ve given this a lot of thought and I just think it’s best if you didn’t raise him. You are unfit.”

Bryan

“You know, you shot a woman like 6 times. I don’t see how you’re going to get out of that.”

Sabryn

“You’re wrong. You’ll see that. Enjoy the time you have with BJ now. It’s not going to last long.”

Bryan

“I bring BJ down here to see you and this is the thanks I get?”

Sabryn

“See you in court Bryan.”

And with that Bryan takes his son and leaves the jail, thinking about his children.

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Dre and Kiko are escorted to their mother, Lynn’s room. Lynn is sitting in a wheel chair looking out the window. Dre walks in front of her and kneels down with tears in his eyes

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“Momma it’s me Dondre.”

Lynn looks at her first born son and looks back outside.

Dre

“Momma what happened? How did you end up in here?”

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“Your father did this to me. He cheated on me. He had an affair and had children with another woman out of wedlock. And one of those spawn is here. And I swear to God I am going to kill her.”

Dre

“Momma what are you talking about?”

Lynn

“Your brother tells me her name is Mona. Her father is DC and her mother is Sister Patterson.”

Dre

“This is crazy.

Lynn

“I am not crazy.”

Dre

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Lynn, with tears forming in her eyes

“Yes son. Don DC Williams is your father. He cheated on me. I had a nervous breakdown after he did that. That’s why I was never there for you Dondre. I am so sorry for letting this happen.”

Dre

“It’s not your fault momma. DC did this. He did this to you. I swear I’ll make him pay for this.”

Lynn

“Dre, I’ve missed you so much? Why? Why did you run away when you were younger? Do you know how many sleepless nights I had worrying about you? It was only me and your brother. Don left us after I found out he was sleeping with his brother’s wife. He left his family. Oh Dre I am so sorry for not being there for you. I am sorry for making you run away so young.”

Dre

“Momma I don’t blame you so don’t blame yourself. I love you.” He leans in and hugs her and Lynn wraps her arms around her son.

Then Police Chief Mike Dietz walks into the room.

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“Dondre Whitfield?”

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“Mike, please not now.”

Mike

“Justice waits for no one Kiko. Dre know what he did and it’s time to pay.”

Lynn

“What I going on?”

Dre

“Momma I am in some mess but don’t worry I’ll take care of it.”

Mike

“Dondre Whitfield, you are under arrest for assaulting a police officer evading the law. Tyler is also accusing you of killing Lauren Romoan.”

Kiko

“Did you have to do this in front of my mother? They just reunited after many years.”

Mike slapping the cuffs on Dondre

“You can continue your reunion downtown.” Mike escorts Dre out the room. Lynn is in tears as Kiko shakes his head in disgust.

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Sister Patterson is sitting in her living room just staring at the wall.

“This is the home I raised Kevin in. It’s so hard to be here. This house that once had a loving family in it is now empty. Where did I go wrong? How did it get to this point?” Her thoughts are interrupted when she hears a pounding on her door.

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“Only the devil knocks like that damn it. Got me cussing.” She swings the door open and is a little surprised to see the police Chief Mike.

Sister Patterson

“I’m sorry brother Mike. The bible meeting is canceled for tonight. I am going through so much. Too much actually. I’ve lost everything.”

Mike

“I’m sorry; I’m not here for the bible meeting. I’m here to arrest you. I have a bench warrant for you.”

Sister Patterson

“Do you know who I am?”

Mike

“Yes I know who you are that’s why I am here.”

Sister Patterson

“I am Sister Patterson and I will not be arrested. I do God’s work and it’s his work that I only do. You are here on a mission from for the devil. On what grounds are you arresting me?”

Mike

“Judge Hatchet wants you to get a mental evaluation.”

Sister Patterson

“So the judge thinks I’m crazy huh?”

Mike

“We all do.”

Sister Patterson

“I beg your pardon?”

Mike

“Can we just do this peacefully?”

Sister Patterson

“What will every one say? Sister Patterson has been arrested again. What will the church think?”

Mike

“There going to praise the Lord that you are confined to a mental hospital for a long overdue evaluation.” Sister Patterson slaps Mike. Then Mike spins the Sister around and slaps cuffs on her.

Sister Patterson

“Get these cuffs off of me. You can’t lock up an agent of God. Have you lost your cotton picking mind? How dare you? I just lost my son and you are here to take me to a crazy hospital?”

Mike

“Yes” He says escorting the sister to her car. Sister Patterson is outraged as Mike drives to the mental facility.

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Lauren walks into the ER where Kiko is.

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“My baby please, help my baby!”

Kiko turns around and is stunned to see Lauren

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“Lauren, what are you doing what is going on?”

Lauren

“I can’t keep this charade up any longer. I’m coming out of hiding. My baby needs medical attention.”

Kiko

“Kiko takes Lauren’s baby and instructs a nurse to get a bed ready and the nursery.

Lauren

“Oh please Kiko, please save my baby.”

Kiko

“We’ll do the best we can.”

Then Daniel walks into the hospital. He sees Lauren.

Daniel, almost speechless

“No it can’t be. Lauren?”

Lauren

“Yes it’s me Daniel.” She runs up and gives him a hug.

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Daniel learns that Lauren has a child with Kevin

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The opening scene seemed more fun than the usual opening scenes. But it was still good and I like the friendship between Ria nad Natalia.

Ooh can't wait to see where this story goes with Sister Pat.

WOW good ending!!! Can't wait to see what happens next with Lauren.

Already excited for the next one lol. That's what happens when you read a bunch in a row and then realize you have to wait again.

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jay the next episode will rock your socks. esp Lauren and Daniel. You will be surprised for sure. I dedicate it to u. I also wrote Sister's Pat next story with you in mind. I think you're really going tolike it. Funny you should ask where does she go from here. You will surely find out. Stay tuned

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Refresh my memory. Who was it that got the death penalty for supposidly killing Lauren? It was a character I really liked. Now I remember why I hated Lauren. But the reunion was nice.

Ria and Natti are nasty. They talk way too much about sex. At least one of them is trying to grow up. It was nice to see Natti go into attack mode. Such a schemer. Which equals love.

Why wasn't Sabryn convicted of self defense? She doesn't deserve to be in jail.

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It was Chris that was set up to take the wrap for Daniels faked death. LOL, Matt Lauren got a lot of big stuff coming up.

This is a soap opera Matt, come on, of course Sabryn has to be in jail

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