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That's certainly true. I'm glad you gave him some strength here, which he deserved to have.

Iris has bad taste in men!

Nice crossover writing.

I would point out that Cass couldn't be a family with Kathleen because she "died" soon after they married.

I love Iris' line about Rachel's office. You have fun dialogue for the bitchy characters.

Just desserts!

I guess Cory is talking to Carly's daughter.

Great chapter. Suspenseful. Bridget still has those blinders on. I'm glad Nicole has another chance.

Vicky's reactions were so believable, as were Jake's. I like the Rachel/Reginald scene, that she wasn't going in there yelling and waving a gun. And I'm so worried for Sharlene.

The Bridget scene was truly frightening. Great work.

Whoo hoo, it's Peter! Holy crap, it's Peter! I can't believe it. I'm so glad we talked about him.

Poor Nicole.

Love the Mitch/Felicia scene. And great dialogue for them and for others.

Surprised at how judgmental John is.

So is EJ still alive or was that a fantasy?

I'm looking forward to who the mystery man is.

I'm interested in seeing what happens with Sami. It's nice to see Marlena and Maggie in a scene together.

I think, beyond double-checking for punctuation and for spelling errors, you should put some type of break between scene changes, as they all run together and that makes it difficult to figure out what's going on.

Wasn't expecting that with Bridget. I'm glad you remembered her relationship with Reginald.

Wonderful chapter. I'm so glad Marley hasn't lost the baby yet. Good story movement with everyone. Reginald has great taste in music.

Action-packed episode! Good story movement, great range of characters. The Paulina/Iris scenes were sublime.

Paulina, he's married! Tsk tsk.

Wasn't expecting Jake to start getting his memory back.

Great to see more of Cindy. Grant is still her weak spot. I hate when he's mean to her. You write them so well.

Great twist with Reginald. I wasn't expecting that. You know how to twist stories. The makeup scene with Charlie/Frankie and the talk with Greg and Lindsay also had good dialogue and moments.

Wasn't expecting that at all. Wow. You certainly built up to this well.

I hope Reginald isn't going to cause Marley to have a miscarriage.

Good intro to Mrs. Wilson. Very suspenseful.

You switched to first person for a bit.

Poor Nicole I hope you might bring Peter back for this.

I'd forgotten about Bridget's bond with Reginald.

Poor Marley too.

Your Frankie/Cass dialogue is true to them.

This is great. I like getting to know more of the characters, and most of the dialogue doesn't feel like endless exposition or reminding people.

This was a great chapter! Such a wonderful surprise to see Cindy, and I love the dialogue for Rachel - tough, not the Shakespeare's Sister stuff.

Great chapter. Nice to see that once again Donna is hysterical and involved in a budding murder investigation.

Great episode. I really really enjoy how Reginald keeps circling around the Loves and how they react. And the scenes with Paulina and Rachel are well done.

Good chapter, especially the Vicky/Stacey scenes. Stacey is sanctimonious as always.

Kind of sad, if not unrealistic, that Bay City will elect (again!) someone who killed their own brother and committed many other crimes, but not someone who is gay.

This was great! So much drama in one chapter. Your dialogue for Amanda sounds so much like her. I was shocked that Sharlene now has Janice as an alter. I find that very believable, somehow. I like all the conflicts in this and the use of history.

I never got to read this until now. Thanks for letting me know, I'm sorry for the delay.

I like the way you keep pushing the class divide - it adds so many layers to your story, without feeling forced. I also thought the dialogue was very natural.

You used "you're" instead of "your" a few times, but that's not a big deal.

Marley's pregnant. This was her dream for so many years. And now when Tyrone has feelings for her mother. That won't end well.

I like all the corporate intrigue which keeps on going.