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Union Creek #8: Eartha and Elijah meet up while Todd has an idea


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Malik4CtHQCN.jpg is at the Davis household home alone.

MALIK: Boredom…boredom. So much boredom.

He looks at his watch.

MALIK: I really should apply for that po po job like Elijah wants me to.

There is a knock at the door.

It is Marah 9pCNsGC.jpg.

MALIK: Hey! This is a pleasant surprise.

MARAH: Happy to hear you say that because I feel like a stalker.

MALIK: A stalker?

MARAH: Well I remembered your family lived here next door to Lily so I tracked you down here.

MALIK: Tracked me down without a phone call? This must be an important visit (smiles) Come on in.

She enters

MARAH: It is. A business visit.

MALIK: Oh..

MARAH: Yeah. I really want to talk to you about something.

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ElijahXi9I7E8.jpg and Earthaqe24dHz.jpg are at the café

Elijah pulls the seat out for her and they sit down.

ELIJAH: I am so glad you could finally meet for coffee.

EARTHA: Yeah I finally had time to get away.

ELIJAH: That hospital keeps you busy.

EARTHA: Yeah we don’t have it easy like the police force.

ELIJAH: Hey now! You would be surprised how crimes have picked up in communities like this.

EARTHA: Nah I believe it. This whole Jack case busts everything right open.

ELIJAH: Tell me about it. How is he holding up?

EARTHA: He started physical therapy so he is recovering there.

ELIJAH: And mentally?

EARTHA: I think he has a long way to go there.

Meanwhile, Sam Manning V6s5vhH.jpg and his new found friend

Zack7kaSYRE.jpg are there as well.

SAM: I don’t know why you had to drag me here. I do not even like coffee.

ZACK: Then get a tea or something.

SAM: No thanks. Water for me.

Zacks crush AnneIgL0Nfj.jpg walks in.

ZACK: Yes…shes here!

SAM: Oh god. This is why you wanted to come here huh?

ZACK: What makes you think that?

SAM: Well it is clearly obvious now.

ZACK: This is fate, my friend.

SAM: Sure.

ZACK: Look at her though. In all her beauty.

SAM: Well this is your chance to actually do something…

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Holden Snyder3jPlPXQ.jpg and Josh LewisIjjM7Uk.jpg are out having a beer.

JOSH: This was a good idea. Even if it is still early in the evening.

HOLDEN: I thought while our girls are out working we could relax.

JOSH: I feel like I have been doing a lot of relaxing while weve been here.

HOLDEN: Yeah me too. A lot. You itching to go out and do something like I am?

JOSH: Yeah I am totally not use to not working.

HOLDEN: I was thinking about helping Lily out at her and Marahs company. I have done business before.

JOSH: That sounds promising.

HOLDEN: Their company has a lot of potential.

JOSH: Yeah and it may be up and running in no time.

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Luke Snyder nPhOwxf.jpg​ is back in town and walks into the Union Creek chronicle.

He goes straight to Garys JG203DZ.jpg cubicle.

GARY: Look who is back! Enjoy the snow?

LUKE: Not particularly.

GARY: Sorry I guess I should have sent you somewhere to get a tan. You do kind of need one.

LUKE: I would like to know why you send me of all people to do a fluff piece on the ski resort.

GARY: Luke you are still fairly new here. You cant have all the hit stories.

LUKE: No I think there was more to it.

Luke looks intensely at Gary.

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Todd 0PuHJLF.jpg is in his office at the chronicle.

He is going over some notes.

TODD: I think this is money.

He looks at his watch.

TODD: A good time to head over to if I can get away from here.

He makes a phone call to the hospital.

TODD: Hello is Jack…well I don’t know his last name. Jack Doe I guess. Is he still at your hospital? Not at liberty to tell me that? I am a good friend…he has no memory of friends? Well he will remember me if he sees me. I am not lying! …yes this is the Union Creek Chronicle calling….fine I will just go down there myself.

He hangs up.

TODD: Ive heard this guy was held captive and now has no memory. This story needs to be covered. And I am going to cover it whether the hospital wants me to or not.

He smirks

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MALIK: Do you want something to drink?

MARAH: No thank you. I cannot stay long.

MALIK: All business today. I don’t know if I like it or not.

MARAH: Well I hope you like what I have to say.

MALIK: Shoot.

MARAH: My company I told you about, Chic Spirt, is doing a modeling contest later today and I think you would be a perfect candidate.

MALIK: Me model? I have certainly never thought about that.

MARAH: I thought about this when I first met you. Trust me you have the features.

MALIK: Are you calling me pretty?

MARAH: Something like that.

MALIK: Thank you…I like this idea. I sure need a job anyway.

MARAH: Great! Its down town at our new place. Hope you will be there.

MALIK: I will. (grins)

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At the café

SAM: Fine if you are not going to go I’ll go ask her for her number for you or something.

ZACK: No. That would be totally lame.

SAM: Then I will wingman you. Lets go.

He tugs Zack up and they walk over to Anne who is near the counter.

ZACK: Hey….Anne

ANNE: Zack hey! You a big coffee drinker?

ZACK: Sometimes.

ANNE: That’s cool. I am an addict. So who is this?

SAM: I am Sam. New at school. Zack has been so awesome and cool for showing me around.

ANNE: Zack is a cool guy.

ZACK: Well thank you. Keep tooting my horn.

SAM: Zack is a chill guy and I appreciate it very much.

ANNE: That is sweet, Zack

ZACK: Well you know..

Sam smirks at Zack

AT ANOTHER TABLE

Elijah sips on his cup of coffee.

ELIJAH: I should really go get a donut to go with this.

EARTHA: (Chuckles) could you be any more cliché officer Smith?

ELIJAH: Donuts and coffee are a great combination.

EARTHA: Gonna start putting on that cop gut.

ELIJAH: You know I work out all the time like I always have.

EARTHA: Anyway, back to this mysterious Jack guy. Do you have any leads on who held him captive In that house?

ELIJAH: Trust me. I wish I did but we are dealing with a professional. We are looking for a new lead.

EARTHA: I was hoping the house would break the case open.

ELIJAH: We all were, but it was complete emptied out.

EARTHA: This is all so insane.

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AT A BAR

Josh is getting a second beer.

HOLDEN: I thought you were only going to get one.

JOSH: I did too, but then I thought about my wife and her newest idea.

HOLDEN: Is there trouble in paradise?

JOSH: No. Reva and I are doing surprisingly well, but she wants to bring a stranger into our home.

HOLDEN: I hope that’s not as kinky as it sounds..

JOSH: No! No! Not like that. There is some guy we helped out who, well he has no memory. Has Amnesia.

HOLDEN: Amnesia is nothing to mess with.

JOSH: You have experience with amnesia?

HOLDEN: Up close and personal. It was a dark time.

JOSH: Sounds awful, but I still don’t know about taking in some stranger with no memory.

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At the hospital

MorrisvrMb2tO.jpg enters JacksoRzx0qr.png room.

MORRIS: How are you feeling today sir?

JACK: Well physically therapy was a literal pain in my ass. My lower back is sore and it is going down to my buttocks.

MORRIS: Your physical therapist tells me you are doing great though.

JACK: I guess.

MORRIS: I have to talk you about that. You are doing really well, and since you don’t have insurance and are going to owe this place a fortune…we will have to release you in the next day or two.

JACK: Sending the amnesiac out with nowhere to go and thousands owed here. What a lovely place.

MORRIS: They will work out your payment I am sure.

JACK: I still have nowhere to go regardless. I just wish I could remember something so I did. It is frustrating doc.

MORRIS: I can only imagine. I wish your memories would start to come back too.

JACK: Will they?

MORRIS: Every case is different, but I would like to think you have a good chance.

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At the chronicle:

GARY: Was the ski resort that bad that you have to hassle me?

LUKE: No. It was actually decently cool.

GARY: Well then see. I don’t know why you always think I am up to something.

LUKE: Because you are usually up to something.

GARY: Well you had a…decent time. So can it.

Luke rolls his eyes

Gary gets a call into Todds office.

Gary walks off and Luke watches him suspiciously as he walks off.

GARY: Todd…I hope you have news on that story we are working on.

TODD: I am working on a story alright. A huge one for the paper. Gonna be money. This quaint town will want to know all about it.

GARY: but what about—

TODD: --I am heading out. You are in charge the rest of the day.

GARY: I think you should--

TODD: --Adios!

He exits and Gary is frustrated.

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AT THE CAFÉ

ANNE: I have to go to my friend Mandys. Nice running into you two.

ZACK: Nice running into you too. Tell Mandy I said hi.

ANNE: See ya

Sam nudges Zack with his elbow

ZACK: Wait a second Anne. You should give me your phone number.

ANNE: Okay cool. Ill write it on a napkin.

She writes it and hands it too him.

ANNE: See you at school

ZACK: Goodbye Anne

Zack cant help but smile wide.

SAM: I am an epic wingman!

ZACK: Thank you. Even though you laid it on a little thick.

SAM: Hey it worked!

ZACK: It did.

Zack looks down at the napkin.

Across the room…

ELIJAH: so how are you and Morris these days?

EARTHA: Is that really any of your business?

ELIJAH: That bad huh?

EARTHA: Things between me and my husband are just fine.

Elijah gives her that big eyed look like he knows shes not being honest.

ELIJAH: You lyin’

EARTHA: How dare you accuse me of lying.

ELIJAH: I can see right through you. Always have. Things must be rocky…again.

EARTHA: You do not even know what you are talking about.

ELIJAH: It just makes me think about high school…and how we should have stayed together after it.

EARTHA: You say something similar every time we meet up, Elijah.

ELIJAH: Well it is true. We made the best couple.

EARTHA: I better head to work.

ELIJAH: Oh come on, don’t leave like this.

EARTHA: I really do just have to head back. My lunch break is over.

She gets up and leaves

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AT THE BAR

HOLDEN: Maybe you should consider your wife's idea.

JOSH: I just cant

HOLDEN: The man will probably need help.

JOSH: I just don’t like it for safety reasons.

HOLDEN: Well good luck either way, man.

JOSH: Yeah, luck is what has always gotten me by with Revas ways. (chuckles)

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At the chronicle:

Gary is still in Todds office alone.

He is snooping around.

GARY: I don’t see much work on his assignment. Any at all!

Gary slams his hand down onto Todds desk annoyed.

He takes out his cell phone and calls someone.

GARY: Hello boss….no. Todd is still not complying. Yeah I know. I promise to get Todd on track.

Gary looks on…

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Jack is in his hospital room thinking hard.

JACK: Why can’t I just remember my life before being locked up and held captive?

He puts his hand over his face in exasperation.

There is knock at the door

JACK: Haven’t I seen enough nurses and doctors and therapists today?

Todd Walks in.

TODD: How about a journalist?

JACK: I cannot say one of those have been by.

TODD: I want to ask you a few questions.

JACK: What you are going to do a story on lil ol me?

TODD: Yes. Yes I would like to. Doing a story on you could go national. Someone who knows you could see it!

JACK: I know the press are piranhas…but I’ll answer what I can…

Todd is pleased to hear this

FADE TO BLACK

Credits roll

*I do not know any non original characters nor any pics.

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The plots are thickening. I was able to follow the lil teens in this ep. I would have rather gave Sam my number not Zak lol..

SO I like how Jack is revertabraing through out the whole town.

Josh and Holdens scenes was very nice.

Eartha is wanted woman. Elijah better watch out Morris look like he could do some damage.

I love Todd. Also like Jacks witty dialog. I wonder how big this story will go...

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Interesting episode...

Jack's amnesia is driving stories here, and I like to see that in soaps. Todd is now brought into it.

The teens are being teen agers...I like the realism you show with them, although I think Anne would have punched the number in her cell phone rather than write it on a napkin.

Morris was doing his job, but dang you gon put Jack out of the hospital? He got long money from his adoptive father Harper lol

Good use of history with Holden's amnesia..I remember that when he returned to Oakdale...

Good one!!

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Awesome. I'm glad Jack's amnesia is so central to things. It's a very good way to go to bring the drama. Love Elijah and Eartha. Good chemistry between them. Gonna get messy there! The teens were good this episode. Wonder if Anne left her real number though ;) I have to say I missed seeing Reva go after Blair this episode. Ha-ha. Oh well. Loved seeing Holden and Josh connect. You're doing a great job building the friendships. Keep at it. Dialogue keeps getting better and better. You have SUCH a good handle on Todd. I love it. GREAT work!!

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