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Another solid episode. The one thing I like to do is to read like two or three at a time. I hate waiting for the next episode. That’s with any series I read. I loved Danny’s scene with his kids. It’s a shame we will never know whom he was going to choose. By the way, what was wrong with Danny? I must compare Danny’s death with Jodie’s. Jodie died with out saying good bye to her loved ones. I thought I would get more bang for my buck if she died suddenly. But I like your version of Danny’s death. Then again, I move my series much faster so I don’t know. Danny’s so was pure soap cliché. What did Colin do and I am a little confused on this whole Liz/Colin, now Jonathan and baby Sarah stuff. I was going to say maybe Sarah was in San Cristobel but not. I wonder what’s down there. Susan has gone to far. Holding her own mom at gunpoint to say good bye. What balls she got. I would have slapped the [!@#$%^&*] out of Susan if I was Harley. I can’t wait till she gets what coming to her. How old is Sarah? So has it really been ten years since Anne was in Springfield. Wow. I remember when Harmon Brown and Estein was writing GL at the time. The last two writers on GL that really gave GL a credible ratings boost. Did u like their tenure? I can’t wait to see what you have planned for Miss Annie Dutton.

SOunds good redd. i didn't write no holiday specials for STEAM. I didn't know how episdoes would air but it would be hice huh. I don't like when writers jump like u say u r going to but U r a great writer and I know everything will be fine. I have been wondering where Novi has been.( A name I do like better)

Thank you Miss lady for the kind words. it's really motivating to read this as you know how hard I am working on this third and potentially last season. You have been a wonderful addition thus far and I would not have offered you a CO EP/HW postion if you didn't fit the mold. Thank you Tara for always listening to me. You are a God send. I can't wait for Matt's comments. LOL Where are you buddy

This epiode had more going on. And i love to read like 2 or 3 eps at a time. I like to print these out and really get into to them. Mariana is so corny rubbing her love she has for Danny all up on Michelle's face. I love this tirangle and I am camp Michelle/Danny already. There seems to be no clear cut evil person in this triangle and that makes it even better. I love how you ended with them looking in on Danny both loving him but both torn and I love how we have yet to hear Danny's decison. Nice twist. I also love the showdown between M&M. Very nice. THis Annie story really has my eye. I remeber that Terri De Marcus from the real show. I can't wait to see what you have planned. And who is reva supposed to be? captain save a hoe? "I know Annie Dutton and I'll find her" Yeah right. If you were fooled once you can be fooled again. I hope Annie one up's reva. Another great episode. Jay. Esp Annie and Reva's part.

This episode was slower but I know u needed to move things from the snow storm and the actual fallout of the snow storm. I remeber you were saying you were going to do the Annie Dutton story and I see it's being set up. THis story has immeditely grabbed my attetion And although this ep was slow, I am able to get into all the storylines and cahracters now. I now know what is going on and I don't have questions this time. I guess that's a good thing right? I kinda knew that danny was going to be the patient, but it was a nice twist. Funny how Michelle is all catty with Marina over Danny but yet when he was banging her, she was such a push over regarding her feelings. Love how all the sotires are effected by the storm

Huntington Memorial Hospital Daniel walks over to the nurses station and asks to see Lauren. Dr. Diego Serrano walks over to him. Diego “You’re here for Lauren ?” Daniel “Yes Serrano. I received a phone call saying was shot.” Diego “She’s brain dead. We have her on life support. She’s not going to be able to come back from this.” Daniel “What about the baby? Can you save the baby?” Diego “The baby won’t make it either. It will be up to you to say when we can pull the plug.” Daniel, a little overwhelmed, voice fades in and out, “Can I see her?” Diego “Of course.” Daniel walks into the room where he sees his fiancée, Lauren, laying in the hospital bed. He walks over to her with tears in his eyes. He caresses her cold and pale face. “I can’t believe this is happening!. I…can….not…believe it! Why!? How is it that God didn’t let me be the blessing that you deserve? I promised him I was going to be good to you. It’s too late. It’s always the fu(k too late.” Daniel gets angry and pounds his fist on the table. “Who did this to you?…I am so sorry Lauren…… I don’t want to live without you. It’s because of you I am alive. I would have raised this child like it was my own. I’d give my life to have either of you two here. You were the one who got me through Mona’s torture chamber. The love I feel for you kept me hanging on to hope…. And this precious baby. The last part of Chris gone. Thanks to Mona. I bet she did this to you. “ His mind goes blank as he looks up into Lauren’s face. “Why did you have to leave me Lauren? Why did God do this to you? Why didn’t he take me? Is this my punishment? Is this what I deserve? Not having you in my life.” He puts his head back down on her chest as he realizes he’ll never see the love of his life again. Episode: 102, Who’s the Momma? Written by ML Cooks with Felicia A. Howard Lavender Hill, Sabryn’s Mansion Sabryn, who was holding Bryan Jr, puts him down when her cell phone rings. She knew who it was, being that she set a special ring tone for Gilbert. “Hello Gilly? Are you outside?” Gilbert “Yes I am. It’s pure madness out here. WABC, Fox, E! MSNBC, Glamour magazine, and The LA Times are all camped outside the front lawn.” Sabryn, looking out her door panel to see the mass media, “I’m going to let you in. Hurry up and run in as soon as I open the door.” Sabryn opens her front door as Gilbert rushes in. Reporters and news crews try to get a word in with Sabryn but she slams the door in their faces. Sabryn ,walking into her living room as Gilbert follows, “I don’t think it will ever stop.” Gilbert “About it tell me. It’s just one thing after another. Where’s Bryan?” Sabryn, getting tensed up, “He’s in the shower.” Gilbert “Have you two talked about Ashley?” Sabryn “I haven’t said not two words to him. I am on fire with my emotions. I don’t want to say anything I will regret.,,, Are you thirsty or hungry? I can have one of the maids get us something.” Gilbert “No I am ok. Listen, I got some financial reports on SG.” Sabryn “I know it’s bad considering my brand new wedding line launch was a total flop yesterday.” Gilbert “Indeed. SG had everything riding on this wedding yesterday. But it was a complete disaster thanks to Ashley.” Sabryn “I know the reporters had a field day with pictures of me and Ashley rolling around in my wedding cake.” Gilbert “They did, it’s on the front page of all the major newspapers across the country. Several even took it as far as calling you and Ashley the real-life Krstyle and Alexis off of Dynasty.” Sabryn “My life is now being mocked. Great!… What is the financial damage so far?” Gilbert “SG stock is now closing at an all time low. Our stock plunged 52 percent at the close of the business day yesterday. And opening shares today are doing no better.” Sabryn shaking her head in disgust, “For a long time, outside forces have been controlling my life.” Gilbert “I think it’s Bryan. His fling with Ashley has caused you a world of pain on so many levels. I really say you just cut your losses now Sabryn.” Sabryn “Easier said then done. I share a child with Bryan now. “ She looks into his eyes. “Are you telling me this as my best friend, or the person who has romantic feelings for me?” “Isn’t this interesting?” They both hear Bryan say as he walks down the stairs. Bryan “You have feelings for my fiancée Gilbert?” Sabryn, jumping off the couch, “Don’t you dare come down here and question people. You have a child with Ashley for goodness sake.” Bryan “Don’t say that. We don’t know what is going on. We don’t even know if its really Ashley, let alone if that’s my child she has.” Sabryn, breaking into tears, “This is too much for me Bryan! Why does this relationship have to hurt me so bad? Why do I always get the short end of the stick? I am sick and tired of this. You slept with that low class skank over a year a go and the ramifications are still being felt to this very day. This very moment. What did I do to deserve all of this Bryan? I want you to tell me.” Bryan “Honey, just calm down. Wait until we get proof of who this woman really is. I don’t believe it’s Ashley. I ran her over. There’s no way she could have survived something like that, let alone have a child on top of it. It’s just some sick game somebody is playing.” Sabryn “It’s too late to wait. The damage has been done. The entire country and the world for that matter had a front row seat to our disastrous wedding yesterday. My company is on the verge of bankruptcy. Why am I going through all of this by myself? Why is nothing happening to you? You are the one who cheated and yet me and our son has to pay. Bryan Jr will have to grow up and bear witness to your foolishness.” She slaps him, letting her emotions get the better of her. Then they hear a pounding on the door. “Open up! It’s Ashley. Bryan, your son needs to meet his father and he needs some baby wipes. Come on and open up this door!” Bryan looks at Sabryn. Sabryn “The cheap Bitch has the nerve to show her hideous face on my door step.” Bryan Jr begins crying and Sabryn walks over to the crib and picks him up and holds him, looking at Bryan. Sabryn “Let her in. Let’s solve this mess. I hope God gives me the force not to kill this Bitch. I hate her with every fiber in me.” Bryan opens the door and in walks Ashley with her Bryan Jr in a stroller. She sees Sabryn and can tell she is upset. Ashley decides to rub salt in the wound. Ashley “Looks like we are going to be one big blissful family Sabryn. Who would have guessed it?” She says smirking at Sabryn. Sabryn just rolls her eyes, still rocking BJ in her arms. Downtown Pasadena, Pasadena City Jail Sister Patterson, along with her two sons walk up to a sergeant. Sergeant “Yes Sister Patterson?” Patterson “I want my husband and I want him now! Where is he?” Sergeant “We’ve been paging him all night and we have not heard nothing yet.” Karim “That’s not like pops.” Kevin “I’ll try calling his cell phone again.” Sister Paterson “Well I want to see the woman that was brought in here last night. She was acting a damn fool in my God’s house. I got something for her though.” Sister Patterson pulls out her bible and her Holy water. “I am armed and ready to do the work that needs to be done. I got my third eye and we are ready for the battle field of sin.” Kevin, clearing his throat, “Let’s not forget about you and DC.” Sister Patterson “Don’t talk to me like that boy! I am still your mother. This isn‘t about me right now!” Sergeant, not wanting the sister to get loud and cause a scene, leads her to the prisoner. Mona walks up to the bars that separate her from her family. Kevin and Karim really look at her and wonder how could a woman do so many heinous crimes. Sister Patterson, pointing her long fingernail in Mona’s face, “Uhm hmm. Now look, I am only going to say what I have to say the only way I know how to. I only know how to speak the truth. My third eye and I have 3 simple words for you. ……..Who are you?” Mona “I’m your daughter.” Sister Patterson, acting as if she is about to faint putting her hand on her forehead, “Lord Have Mercy, the devil is a lair.” Kevin “How? Then what Sharan told me is true? Did my father really makes us all believe you were dead?” Mona “Yes that sick son of a bitch did!” Sister Patterson throws holy water on her daughter, “Thou shall not sin. Don’t talk about my husband like that!” Mona, wiping her face, “Some husband. I know Abe was not my father. He told me. He told me his brother was. Don.” Karim , looking at his sister getting closer to the bars of separation, “How do you know all of this?” Kevin, looking at his mother, “Ma is this true?” Sister Patterson “Lord have mercy. This can’t be happening. Could you be my baby girl?” She says wiping tears from her eyes. “My third eye is telling me you are speaking the truth. But I know my God wouldn’t do this to me. Lord why did he do this to you? Lord, wait till Miss Jenkins find out.” Karim and Kevin both roll their eyes at the mentioning of Miss Jenkins. Karim “Here we go.” Mona “I know who Miss Jenkins is.” Kevin, Karim and especially Sister Patterson look at Mona in shock. Kevin “Say what?” Karim “Miss Jenkins is real?” Mona “I know everything. I’ve been watching my family for a while.” Kevin “Right, you were the one who were stalking me and Sharan then you kidnapped Sharan! Why?!” Mona “ Just look at her. She’s every black man’s dream. But she’s mine now. I love her.” Sister Patterson, falling back into Karim’s arms, “Lord!…Lord.....Oh God NO!!!. Lesbianism. My baby girl is a gay. Lord No. Don’t do this to me. Where is Abe damn it? He needs to be here. He needs to answer all of this. What is happening to my third eye? It didn‘t see none of this!” Mona “Abe has already answered for his crimes. You won’t be talking to him no time soon.” Karim “What the hell are you talking about?” Kevin, grabbing the bars and yelling at her, “What did you to our pops?” Then the sergeant walks up to the Williams family. “I’m sorry but I have some horrible news. A few of my officers found Abe’s body.” Kevin “Found his body…..? What does that mean? Is my pops ok?” Sergeant “I’m sorry, but Abe was found dead.” Sister Patterson faints as Mona smiles. Kevin and Karim look at Mona in disbelief. Their whole family has been turned upside down. The Blue Note Daniel grabs a seat next to Mike at the bar. Daniel “Looks like we are two mourning souls about to get drunk.” Mike “It looks that way. I am not even going to ask how you are doing. I read the newspaper this morning and read about Lauren. I am so sorry.” Daniel “ I am regretful for you too. I heard about Jodie.” Daniel orders whatever is on tap. Mike, taking a sip “Why us? What did we do to deserve this man?” Daniel “Well see, Jodie, and Lauren died two different ways. Lauren was shot. And now she’s brain dead. I want to know who in the hell did that to her. She was pregnant for Fu(k’s sake. She was carrying Chris’s baby. This baby was going to carry on Chris’s spirit. He died for nothing. Thanks to Mona. I bet she is the one who shot her. Before she showed up at the church.” Mike “The church? Mona is in town?” Daniel “Yes that crazy nut is. I would have killed her had it not been for Sister Patterson jumping on me. She is purely crazy. I see where Mona gets it from.” Mike “I have to agree that Sister Patterson is not the sharpest tool in the shed.” They toast up on that one. Mike “You know, I am really having a hard time trying to put together a funeral for Jodie.” Daniel “I can’t even bring myself to get around to doing something like that. It’s like I just saw Jodie. We were supposed to meet up Sabryn and Bryan’s wedding. I just proposed to her. I mean I just got Lauren back in my life and now’s she’s been ripped from it again. Forever.” Daniel then gets a phone call. He answers it. “Are you sure?…. Don’t we have anymore time?….. I understand.” Daniel hangs up his phone and finishes the rest of his beer in one swallow. Mike “Is everything ok?” Daniel “The hospital pulled the plug on Lauren’s life support. It’s official. She’s gone. “ Mike “I feel your pain. I was throwing a surprise birthday party for Jodie, but when I showed up, she was already gone.” He says, getting choked up. He takes a sip of his beer. Mike “I just had a thought. Why don’t we plan Lauren and Jodie’s funeral together. It will make it easier for us to get through it. We are going through the same thing.” Daniel “You’re right. We can get Sister Patterson to help.” Mike “Sounds great. Two great woman, Gone forever.” Just then, Mike’s cell phone rings. He pulls it out his pocket and answers it. “Hello?” “Is this Michael Dietz?” “It is who’s calling?” “Mayor Ray Nagin. Mike we have a crisis on our hands and I need to speak with you right away.” Mike “You want to speak to me about it?” Ray “Yes I do. Abe has been found dead and a city wide crisis is looming. Their has been a crime wave here in Pasadena and I need you help.” Mike “Ok sir, I’ll be down at city hall in thirty minutes.” Mike then hangs up the phone. Daniel “City hall? What’s going on?” Mike “Abe was found dead.” Daniel “Everybody is dying. What the hell is going on?” Mike “Mayor Nagin wants to talk with me. I’ll keep you updated. I got a feeling he wants me to join the police force again. I may need your help. Too many crimes here in Pasadena have gone unanswered for.” Daniel “You’re right on about that one. I know just where to start, Mona and Tyler.” Mike “My thoughts exactly. And that’s why I will need your help. I’ll be in touch.” Mike leaves. Daniel keeps sipping on his beer. “I will find out who killed you Lauren, and I promise you I will make them pay!” Back on Lavender Hill, Sabryn’s Mansion Bryan, taking control of the situation before things get out of hand. Bryan “Don’t start nothing Ashley. I think you have done enough. We want some answers.” Sabryn “I sat in jail because of you. You were alive this whole damn time! Even your own sister Alexis sat in jail for your supposed death.” Ashley “Well, I am sorry for the inconvenience. But I am here and alive and I bore Bryan a son.” She looks at Bryan. “Come meet Bryan Jr.” Sabryn “Bryan Jr? No ............no, that’s my son’s name.” Ashley “My son is older and it’s on his birth certificate. So I guess my son gets to keep his name.” Sabryn “I can’t believe this. It keeps getting worse.” Bryan looks at Ashley’s son, “He does have my facial features. He looks like Bryan Jr too.” Ashley “You mean your son with Sabryn? Isn’t it ironic that both your sons have the same name.” Sabryn “I’ll say. And you just knew when to tell us all about it. At my wedding huh? I bet this was all set up! “ Ashley “No it was no set up. Thanks to Dr. Serrano and his health facility in the Bahamas, I was nursed back to health. At the time I was runned down, I was already with child. Thanks to Diego and his excellent team of doctors, I was able to survive with Bryan’s child.” Sabryn “Well isn’t that all so convenient?” Ashley “Is is Sabryn? I did not asked to be mowed down by Bryan.” Bryan “Correction, Alexis was driving a u haul truck during that dark and stormy night that rammed into the back of Sabryn’s car. It does sound like a set up. You were being to nice back at the hospital thank to your physical attack on Sabryn, waving the white flag. Even Sabryn told me it was too good to be true. I bet you and Alexis had this planned from day one huh?” Ashley “Such a vivid imagination. Did I ask mother nature to make it rain?” Sabryn “Then why where you at Bryan’s house that night of the storm? Standing in the rain no less.” Ashley “I had forgot some expensive lingerie at Bryan’s house and I wanted to get it back.” Sabryn “I bet your broke ass did.” Ashley “Grow up Sabryn. You would think mother hood would have changed you but I see it has not. You’re still that bitter bitch with a smart ass mouth. By the way, I had fun rolling around in that cake getting your million dollar dressed ruined. Did you see the papers? We look so good on the covers, covered up in cake.” Sabryn, putting her son back down in the crib, “There she goes Bryan! That’s the sh!t I am talking about. I can’t deal with this.” Bryan, walking over to stand in between the ladies before the claws come out so soon again, “There is no way I am going to believe this is my child with out a paternity test. This could be more trickery your trying to pull.” He says looking at Ashley. Ashley “I have no problem with that. Shall we go now?” Then, they hear another pounding at the door. Sabryn “Who the hell is it now?” “Natalia! Let me in. I need my baby!” Ashley is taken aback. Her face begins to get warmer. She wonders if Natalia knows that she stole her baby. Sabryn “What the hell is that extreme Bitch talking about?” Bryan, also confused, “Did she say her baby?” Gilbert “Yes she did. Should I open the door?” Sabryn “Why the hell not? The more the merrier I suppose.” Gilbert opens the door and in barges Natalia. She sees Ashley and walks over to her. Sabryn “Natalia, what the hell are you doing here?” Natalia “Ashley has my baby and I would like my son back.” Ashley “Have you lost your mind? This is my son!” Natalia “Diego told me everything. You stole my son from me and I want him back now!” Sabryn and Bryan are stunned! Ashley wonders how she is going to get out of this one. Bryan wonders if this is true, and if it is, is it his child with Natalia, which would mean Sabryn is about to find out he slept with another one of her arch enemies, Natalia! Next time on S.T.E.A.M.: Lauren’s Killer is revealed!

THank you guys for the nice comments. This was a hard episode to write because I had two major drama going on at the same place at the same time. That was surely a challenge. jay it's ok to laugh at ister Patterson. Hell she cracks me up and I love writing for her. Jay shoot me an email on any ideas of a cross over. I know who I want from GL and that's Remy. Ria is in need of some hot sex and it would fit in perfectly for her storyline she' got this season. Ashley/sabryn/and Bryan will be hot and front burner. LOTS OF TWIST coming up for these three as the last leg of their story plays out. SIster Patterson and her family will also be front burner this season as Mona's next chapter begins. She's not done yet it beliveve it or not

WOW Lots of changes and I can't wait to see how all this plays out. It is funny, how we debated for months weahter or not to kill off marlena and here she's leaving the real show. Ironic isn't it? I will really miss LIS

Can I Get a Witness West Coast Baptist Church Mona holds her machine gun in her hand as Ashley, who just officially revealed herself to be back from the dead, Sabryn, Bryan, Dre, Daniel, Tyler, Ria, her famous mother Patti Labelle, Sharan, and Kevin all look at Mona in shock. Daniel and Ty are even more stunned from the others. Daniel has flash backs of Mona shooting him and making it look like an attempted suicide, then he remembers Mona drugged him with Meth to keep him from exposing what she did, then he remembers Mona kidnapping him and holding him hostage in her dungeon then torturing him day after day. Then he remembers Mona leaving him there for dead when Mona tried to bomb her dungeon. Daniel has this raging fire inside of him. He hollers out, and not even phased by the machine, gun he charges after Mona, jumping on top of her and tackling her to the ground. Daniel then begins to choke Mona, as Mona gags, and coughs. Daniel "Fu(king Bitch! I am going to kill you!" He then grabs Mona's neck and lifts it off the ground so Mona's head is off the ground as well then Daniel begins to pound Mona's head into the ground. Then out of no where, they hear a scream come from second floor balcony. A person, climbs up on the chandelier and swings across the air like George from The Jungle. Patti "Look, it's bird!" Ria "Naw, momma, that's a bat!" Kevin "It's my mother!" Sister Patterson jumps off the chandelier and lands on top of Daniel, knocking him off of Mona. Sister Patterson "Damn you devils! All this violence in my God's house. The devil is a lair. Every one stop this madness NOW!…. Yens all going to hell!" Dre hurries up and grabs Mona, so she can't get away. Tyler is stunned beyond words by all the action. He tries to think of what should be his next move , always in need to be in control of every situation he comes into. Realizing he won't control this one to his benefit, he slips out of the church. Kevin, looking at Sharan, "What is going on here?" Sharan "Kevin, you're about to find out. That's Mona. That's the one who kidnapped me. She's your sister. Kevin, Mona is your sister." ^^^Brand New Season 3 opening!! Episode:101, The Devil is a Liar Written by: ML Cooks The Blue Note Mike is out on the patio that sits over the pond. He drinks his 5th beer, looking out into the water, thinking of Jodie. He thinks of the very first time he met her in his pub. She was a lost soul who wanted to be loved. His thoughts are interrupted by a, "Mike, we've been so worried about you." Mike turns around and sees Lena and Heath standing before him. Mike "Well here I am." Heath "You're pretty wasted man. Let's go grab some coffee or something." Lena "That's sounds like a great idea." Mike, leaning back against the railing, "I don't want no damn coffee. I want Jodie back." He says with a tear forming in his eye. He continues "I didn't even have a chance to say good bye." Lena hugs Mike, "I know how you feel Mike." She pulls back from him. Heath "Mike, I think there is something you might like to know." Mike "I pretty much doubt that." Heath "I was with Jodie the night before she died. She called me on the phone and wanted me to come see her. She told me some things, some things you should know." Mike "It should have been me their with her. I'll never have that chance again." Heath "Mike, she really loved you. Jodie wanted you to know that. She did not want you to see her, the way she looked. She felt ugly on the inside and out." Mike "That doesn't matter to me. I love Jodie. For who she is not for what she isn't. It doesn't even matter now. My baby is gone." Lena "At least she is not suffering. I know she is looking down on us with a smile Mike. You know that?" Mike "She is. I will never forget her and no one could ever replace her in my heart. And I think it's time to get the people who did her wrong." Lena "Mike, what are you talking about?" Mike "Jennifer! What she did to Jodie can't go unpunished." Lena and Heath look at each other with raised eye brows. Back at the Church Sabryn, looks at Bryan then at Ashley, "Wait a minute! This is supposed to be my wedding day. " Bryan, looking at Ashley in disbelief, "Ashley? Is that really you?" Ashley "It's me baby. I'm back." Sabryn "Are you serious? This has to be a dream!" Ashley, flipping her hair, "This is not a mirage sweetie. I'm Ashley Jones, and I approve of my latest stunt. Check mate Sabryn." Sabryn hollers out in agony and runs after Ashley. Ashley charges after Sabryn. They have so much hate for each other that it transform into their energies , once they collide into each other they fall onto the ground from each other's force. Sabryn is quick to react and hops on top of Ashley, punching her in her face with right and left hooks. Bryan grabs Sabryn and pulls her off of Ashley. Ashley stands back up and then kicks Sabryn in her stomach. Sabryn then elbows Bryan in the gut to break free of his hold to tackle her arch enemy again. Ashley, not really paying attention as she looks for her son is caught off guard when Sabryn pushes Ashley into her wedding cake. Ashley falls right into it. Sabryn "Damn you! You can't just leave me alone can you?" Sabryn then charges at Ashley again, hopping on top of her. Sabryn's million dollar self designed wedding dressed is now ruined as both women roll around in the cake, throwing it at each other. Sister Patterson , with a garden hose turns it on and begins to spray down Sabryn and Ashley. "Let this Holy water cleanse thy souls. Everyone is tripping in my God's house. I have my bible and I am ready to use it. I am a solider for my lord and he don't like ugly. That's what all yens are, ugly. The devil is a lair and everyone must know that. What if Miss Jenkins finds out about this!? I think it's time we bow our heads and pray. This aint nothing a good prayer will help." The police arrive on the scene and immediately arrest Mona! Kevin, looking at Sharan, "What do you mean she's my sister? " Sharan "Ask her Kevin. Ask Mona for the truth. For that matter ask your father." Kevin walks up to the police and stops them before the police haul Mona off. Mona looks at Kevin. Kevin, looking at her facial features, "Who are you?" Mona "I'm your sister." Sister Patterson hears this and is stunned and walks over toward Kevin. "What did you just say?" Mona "I'm Kelis. I'm your daughter. Hello mom." Sister Patterson "The devil is a liar! Wait till Miss Jenkins hear about this!" Miss Jenkins House In the Basement. Rufus floats in and out of consciousness. But he is able to make out a large, beastly woman, chewing and popping gum, and smoking a refer joint standing a few feet away from her. Miss Jenkins "What the hell you doing in my house? And who's gonna pay for that big ass hole in my floor?" Rufus, weak but still tries to speak, "Please help me." Miss Jenkins "Damn, I thought I had a deep voice for a woman, your's is even deeper honey." Madea looks at this strange woman and she notices a of pool blood surrounding Rufus's groin area. Madea "Looks like you've been rapped honey. You wait right ch'here and I'll get the po po over here." Madea walks back upstairs as Rufus smiles, that he is about to get help. He then becomes freaked out again upon having flashbacks of Ashley using a chain saw to cut off his penis. Back at the Church The police escort Mona in a cruiser and is driven off. Sister Patterson looks at her as she drives off. She then looks at Sharan, "Girl, I want to know what are you talking? I want to know it now! Don't you forget we are still in God's house so you better not be lying. I got my holy water right here and I am not afraid to do his work." Patterson says aiming the garden hose at her. Sharan "Sister Patterson, it's so good to see you again. I have missed your crazy outburst." Sister Patterson "I beg your pardon." Sharan "Mona, is the one who kidnapped me. She kidnapped Daniel too. She used a clone to make everyone think Daniel was dead. She made it look like Chris stabbed Daniel. She's the one who was stalking me." She looks at Kevin and continues, "She's the one who sent me those pink roses. It wasn't Dondre. She's the one who rammed off your car door. Right around the time Daniel was shot." Kevin "I remember all of that. We were coming home from the TC Hotel opening gala." Sister Patterson "Ok enough, when are we going to get to the good part? I buried my sweet precious innocent daughter 25 years ago. And what you talking about right now is a bunch of hoopla. How is this crazy person my child?" Sharan "Abe. It was your husband. He is the one who faked Kelis's death. He did all of this. He made you believe Kelis was dead. Abe chained her up and molested her night after night for 15 years. Then he tried to set her on fire and bury her alive, hoping Kelis would die. But she didn't! She survived!" Sister Patterson, is totally stunned, "Lord have Mercy the devil is a lair." Everyone in the church are stunned. "I think I need to sit down. My chest is feeling heavy." Sharan "I am so sorry to be the one doing this. But this is the reason why Kelis kidnapped me. She wanted to make the Williams family pay. Especially Abe." Kevin "Sharan are you sure? I know you would never lie about something like this." Sharan "I am sure.. Mona is harboring a lot of secrets. A lot of pain and resentment." Sister Patterson "You talking out the side of ya neck girl! Aint no way in hell my Abe could be that despicable. And how dare you trash my family in front of all these God loving people? In my God's house none the less. My God shall strike you down right now." Kevin "Ma stop it! Mona does have that Williams family resemblance." Sister Patterson "Please tell me you are not listening to this ring-a-maroe." Kevin ' Let's go down to the police station, and find pops and we can see what is going on." Sister Patterson "I will not. I know my husband is no molester. He could not have done nothing so vial. Nothing so sinful. Sharan you are sick and you ought to be ashamed of yourself." Sharan "If you went through the things your lesbian daughter put me through, you might be sick too. Your insane daughter rapped me!" Sister Patterson, chuckling, "Now I know your lying. Aint no child of mine is going to be a gay." Kevin grabs his mother and puts her into his car. Sister Patterson "You better take your hand off of me boy! I brought you into this world and I'll take you out. Don't you know no good boy?" Kevin with his mom drives off. Ria, then gives a round of applause, "Thank God that crazy bat is out of here." Patti, looking at her daughter, "You will not be disrespectful like that. Don't embarrass me girl." Ria "Whatever. Don't you have a concert to sing at?" Bryan grabs Sabryn and takes her into the back room. Daniel leaves to go see about Lauren. Ashley tries to wipe her self off, being covered in cake. "That was some wedding." She says to herself. Ria walks over to her. Ria "Ashley Jones? Girl is that really you?" Ashley "Yes it is." Ria "This reminds me of The young and the Restless girl. When Drucilla was pushed off the mountain by Phyllis with all those cheesy effects. It's like people know home girl survived. We all know she will be coming back from the dead one day." Ashley "This is no soap opera, let me tell you that." They both look over as they hear Bryan jr. the 1st cry. Ashley walks over to him to try and calm him down. Ria "Back from the dead with a baby." Ashley "It is a miracle isn't it?" Ria "Who's ya baby daddy girl?" Ashley "Bryan." Ria "Oh damn. Sabryn won't be happy about that." Westwood Park Natalia pounds on Mark's door. Mark opens it and is not to pleased to see Natalia. Natalia walks inside his house and notices how everything is packed up in boxes. Mark "I'm kinda busy right now. I'm in the middle of packing up all my things. Dahlia and I are leaving this damned city once I find her." Natalia "Dahlia? She's dead. She died when her body was dumped in the "Stink SO Good Landfill" trash compacter." Mark "No! You would like for her to be dead don't do? Guess what?! You're wrong. I saw her. She walked in on me and-" Mark pausing, having a flashback of Dahlia walking in on Rufus sucking his duck. He catches himself before he tells Natalia. Natalia "She saw you doing what?" Mark "It was right after you got shot. " Natalia "Are you smoking crack Mark?" Mark "No I am not. I have to stay sober or you'll take advantage of me again." Natalia "As if. You didn't have to sleep with me. It was a choice." Mark "If you call black mailing a choice then by all means." Natalia "All that means nothing right now. We have a child together Mark." Mark "Are you the one hitting the pipe? Our child died when you got shot." Natalia "It was a set up. Our child is alive and Ashley has him." Huntington Memorial Hospital Daniel rushes over to the nurses station. He asks a nurse about Lauren "I got a phone call telling me my fiancée' Lauren Roman has been shot. Can you tell me anything about her? Is she ok? Is the baby ok?" Diego than walks up to him. Daniel, turning around to face him, "Any news on Lauren?" Diego "I'm sorry Daniel, we were unable to save her. Lauren is dead!"……………Next time on S.T.E.A.M.: Fireworks and fists fly between Natalia/Ashley and Sabryn!

More Breaking News The upheaval on S.T.E.A.M. continues. Many industry insiders wonder what is going on. Here’s the latest Many cast exits will take place as the new season premiers. First with Diego. “Diego’ is no longer needed in Pasadena.” The series creator told reporters at press time. “Kiko is now firmly in place as the prominent doctor in Pasadena and Kiko is tied to a major character, Dondre. Kiko plays Dondre’s brother . “In a time where I want to broadened the story base and cut the fat, Diego was an obvious choice as his story never picked up. We thank Diego for his time and talent for the pat two season’s and we wish the actor well.” ML said. No last air date has been set. Also slated to leave is Mark Mortimer, who plays Mark. “Mark is another casualty of the fat cut. Mark was never a major character in Pasadena. His storyline has come to an end. After coming to terms, with Rufus, Natalia, and Dahlia, Mark will simply leave town.” Mr. Mortimer played Nick on NBC’s now defunct Another world before joining S.T.E.A.M. Sanaai lathan OUT as Sharan!! “We felt the need to recast the role with a stronger actress. Sanaai really never caught on with the readers and Sharan’s role will be more prominent this season o the decision was made to let Sanaai go. IN NIA LONG as the new Sharan! Ni Long is the third actress to tackle the role of Sharan. The first being Sharon Leal from Guiding Light. “ We are so happy and honored to have the beautiful Nia Long join the ranks of S.T.E.A.M.” Ml was quoted saying. Nia Long’s Sharan will debut in the season premiere, episode 101. Also, another casting coup. IN JASMINE GUY!! Jasmine Guy has been casted in the original role of Ria’s sister. Ria’s family is growing as Ria will be featured in a major storyline this season. Ria will really need her family very soon. “ IT was good to finally have Ria in a front burner storyline of her own. Her family will be needed to tell Ria’s new storyline.” Tara Smith, the series Co EP and CO HW told reporters at press time. “It’s been a long time coming” Actress Victoria Rowell said on her blog. “ I almost left the series. I was tired of being in a supporting role. But ML has pitched this wonderful storyline to me and I could not resist.” No previews were available on Ria’s new Storyline. As if these cast changes were not enough, rumors still persist that more cast changes are on the way.

I know what u mean by not wanting to write but still got too I go through with S.T.E.A.M. Damn i can't wait till it come back. I got some great [!@#$%^&*] coming up and my writing has grown so much. It has more depth . But n e way, ur finale are always sweet and exciting and u now got me curious as to what bobbie's conecction is. I will submit ideas to u on season 6 soon.

A slower epiode but still good. I was so happy to see Blake and Remy get their sex on. I love them and love their forbiden passion. nothing like some hot passion to get waremd up My question, what happeded to the abilical cord. Who cut it. But very nice scenes with harley/alan/gus and Natty. Nice cliffhanger as well. i could picture all of it happening in my head Why would Rocky cheat on Shayne after everything they've been throug? I alo liked danny's soul searching scenes and can't wait to see whom he chooses. Another great one jay

I did not get ur email jay and thanks for the explanations. What a great fu(king episode. jay u r a great writer, in fact so good are u i am taking notes from u. Take ur bow becasue UR blog is the hottest thing out here, that is until S.T.E.A.M. returns, lol Damn where do I begin One THing I've noticed in reading again i that ur storylines are much more tighter and a lot easier to follow. That's a def plus I am mad at how Micehlle is o blah about this choice danny has to make. Girl get ur man. Then on top of that they had ex to make thing smore complicated. She needss to act like she want him. It could not be me Another story that is super hot is the Kevin.Rocky.Shayne tirangle. WOW is all I can say. I can't elive Rocky kissed Kevin. And now Kevin i dealing with the foot ball macho man thing. I love it. I SO LOVE IT and I hope this tory continues. This is huge!!! GREAT JOB ON THAT ONE!!!!!!! Now I see why kevin hit him. WOW. I can't stop saying it I smiled instanlty once I knew Remy and Blake were in the ame scene. U can feel there passion, their desire fopr one another and I truly hope they get back together. I love Remy. I wish I was at Blake at times. lol. I am so glad they kissed THe scenes where Natalia was exposed as to not being pregnant were shocking, And their first scene wasn;t even a cliffhanger. Very big scene for it to be midway through the episode. I was on the edge of my seat. Shayne and Marina used to date right? All these great stories admist the back drop of a snow storm was pure genuius. Ur series is on fire man for real. I love how the stories are interwining so beaftifull and naturally. Great Job Jay!!!!

A very good and solid episode jay So why doesn't harley want Gus. I know when he was with nat she had feelings for him I really can't wait till Susan getst whats coming to her. She's nothing but a big bag of bad ass. She need a good ass weapon from harley. Where is Gilieupsue from? And is he wanted with the law? Why are Kevin and Rocky beefing/ becasue Rocky'sd gay? Rafe is new right? He seems like he's got something up his sleeve So what does Annie Dutton being in town going to do? i do remeber her when he wa under paul rauch's term as ep. Why did Kevin snap like that in the 2nd scene . Was he just kissing Vi to [!@#$%^&*] with Rocky? And boy oh boy, Jefferey leaving that secret in his desk drawer spells trouble for real Some one, the wrong one will find it I'm feeling the Danny/michelle /marina love triangle but I think michelle is too kool about her man unable to choose whom he wants. But a GREAT EPISODE. A goo read!!

It almost seems there was an episode missing from 121 to 122. The begining was kind of slow and off but the episode did pick up as it wen ton. I would have though when Carlos found Jenny and London, it would have been more dramatic. It just seemed off. I don't know. Was just expecting more. But I love how Nan watched the video and and found out that Carlos found the girls. She shrugged it off at first. Dylan's scene with Sean was very nice and needed. THough again I wish they would have gone deeper. Like why did him and Lana do this. I wish some one would just give it to Lana. It's not about here. It's about her son and his happiness. But I love her character though I love how Bobbie is able to say what ever she wants and she can get away with it. But I find this Bobbie/Ava story so odd. I don't know. Then here comes Nate. They keep going back and forth. Now he wants her back. I laughed at Hot Humping. I loved the scene with Jace and Rena. How she ordered water and said it wa drinks. Now Rena isx plotting against will to keep him not good. I still love this quaderangel. now it seems all four are plotting and planning. I really can't stand Alicia. She playing games. Now jace gone get a gun. And the finale is coming up,...hmm. Will is getting lame to me. He should have left Jace in Jail if he really wanted an uniterrputed acess to Alicia. Now he trying to black mail Alicia with it. Come on now. I love how Bryan got Blake FINALLY> I loved this scene. Ha ha blake knuckle head. And wow that marli. She is so.. I don't know. And I loved how at the end Blake kissed Alley. Reminded me of Lauren/ Kevin But wow, the drama continues. GREAT Cliffhanger and as always another good episode. Kant wait to see the catfight with G/T.

WOW I AM SO MAD I MISSED that wedding with Susan stopping it. Again jay after reading 102 compared to earlier episodes, It's like night and day. The scenes are so fleshed out and the dialog is great. Good job. I will keep my eye open for Remy's new triangle. And I like what u r going to do with Blake. I am glad I was able to inspire you. The email would be nice and again I am sorry i was away. I was hoping u didnt think I stopped reading., I had a lot of issues with S.T.E.A.M. and co writing Life In salem really took its toll on my series. But I have a clear mind now and more energy to put into my series so expect great things and a bit of a difference. I am excited about what is going to happen. Sorry for talking about my seires in your blog. I'm just so excited. Natalia hiding from Alan is very interesting. PS. I am I have learned a lot from you to as well just by reading your series. You really take your time with plotting and it's great. All your storeis intertwine and I love that and that iss key to a great series. Jay you are a great writer and I would like to work with you some time. Weather it be GL or S.T.E.A.M. come holla at me

i am so so on Canary's casting. Does this mean Blake Knuckle Head will be stepping down from his postion? cant wait for the foloow ep to theone I wrote. I also cant wait till SONOP comes back in full force. I am thinking I'll ba back in Dec. Was shooting for Nov 5 but S.T.E.A.M. is undergoing massive changes.lol but like u i got my new opening done.

Well This was a great ep but I did write it so I guess I can't judge. I wish some of the readers would have commented. Feed back would have been nice. I was so glad to FINALLY be able to write my for my fav series. I was a little intimadated at first but it was all good. I was very happy to write that catfight scene with Marissa and Alley. It was so funny when Alley said I am from coloroado. When I wrote it, I used "I'm from the Bronx. I used that to give Alley a little hoodness to her. It is a common hood phrase so when I read it I was dying laughing. I also used Shelia a the nurse, a take on Shelia Carter of B&B and Y&R That's why Blake said she looked familiar. I would love to write a show down between Nisha and And Ginny. I am really looking forward to that story

Very Good episode. Very good indeed. The dialog was great and I have missed Gl so much. I just started my own production company and getting that off the ground was a massive feat. And I am working on a play for black history month and working on S.T.E.A.M.’s third season has been very time consuming so please forgive me Jay. I am saddened to see Blake and Remy have broken up. I am already rooting for them to get back together. So what happened with Natalia? Why isn’t Alan in jail for the crimes he’ committed? Did Gus find out about Alan and Natalia? I am back Jay and will read every ep and post comments. GOOD JOB BUDDY!!

May I ask what surgery do u have to have for a heart attack. i hae a small background in the medical field, so i was just cusious. I loved the animosty between Elnaore and Lynnette. Another solid episode.

May I ask what surgery do u have to have for a heart attack. i hae a small background in the medical field, so i was just cusious. I loved the animosty between Elnaore and Lynnette. Another solid episode.

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I cant belive that cliffhange. I feel so bad for Jim. damn. He is really going through the wire. I so loved the press confrence scene. I was well done and I can't wait to see how cassandra plans on getting out of this one. Did george did not really know what ASsandra was doing? Again I feel so bad for Jim damn that is so sad

WOAH, Now Lynntte knows the truth. Oh snap. This was another good episode. Sorry it took me so long to read., I just started my own production company and that is a massive undertaking. But what I don't get is why the bank would call just for a purchase at the liquor store. I can understand the large atm transaction(s) but not the liquor store. And finally Anna and nem finally found something on cassandra and party. Now let the peices fall where they may. Great dialog again.

Season 2 will probably go down as the campiest ever to hit the blog scene. From, the pre transsexual Rufus getting his manhood sawed off by psychotic Ashley, to Mona raping her step father with a dildo. To all the outlandish stunts that Sister Patterson pulls, to the erotic sex scenes between Jenn and Santino or Mark and Rufus, to the mysterious Miss Jenkins, to Jenn’s rivalry with Jodie which led to Jenn black mailing Jodie about her HIV status, to Mona holding the deziens of Pasadena at gun point inside her mother’s church, to The Lady in Red and to Chris's shocking death by the gas chamber. Some ask where does it go from here? It goes, and a lot will be going on. So many storylines are at the climax and they all will be intertwining within one another. Readers can also a expect to see changes when the third season kicks off. First off, this season will be more about character and emotionally driven stuff if you can believe that. S.T.E.A.M. will always be campy but things will be more toned down as we learn who these people really are, where they come from and where are they going. Almost everyone on the canvas is at a major cross roads. The look of the series will change some what. I am aiming to make the episodes more reader friendly as possible, so the pictures don’t distract from what’s happening. There are also some new creative forces behind the scenes. Tara Smith, the Creator of Life in Salem, has been promoted to Co Executive Producer and will now also serve in the capacity of co head writer as well. Some may find this decision odd considering I just left Tara’s series due to conflicting visions of “Life in Salem“. To say the least, Tara and I are good friends, and she brings a breath of fresh air to this series. Welcome Tara. Also on to some more shocking casting news: SABRYN RECASTED! The decision has been made to recast the role of Sabryn G. Davidson. Sabryn Genet, who originated the role of Sabryn was informed she taped her last scenes back in early August. “We are taking Sabryn in a new direction” ML was quoted saying. Christina Applegate has been tapped to take over the role of Sabryn. “We are pleased to have her” Co Ep Tara Smith told reporters. “We understand she is going through personal struggles and we will not impose on her health what so ever. We were able to work out a nice contract.” Details of the contracts were yet to be made available. Christina’s Sabryn debuts in episode 101, a date yet to be announced. When Christina was asked how did she feel about returning to work, she was quoted as saying “I’m getting better and stronger everyday. When Marlin approached me about playing Sabryn, I was over whelmed. I watch S.T.E.A.M. faithfully and now to be a part of it, it’s amazing. Marlin has some great stuff coming up for Sabryn.” Another Role has been Recasted! Neo soul singer D’angelo, has been released from his contract. The singer is currently going through some trouble with law and is believed to be the reason he has been fired. “We thank D for his time in the role of Dre. When D’ Angelo was casted, Dondre was going in a different direction. Once again, Dondre is going in a different direction and D no longer fits in the form of that.” Series Creator ML Cooks was quoted saying. D’Anglo’s last air date was in the Season 2 Finale, August 15th. D’ Angelo was the 2nd actor to tackle the role of Dondre. Dondre t. Whitfield was the fist actor to do so. Now meet the third Dondre (Dre) Whitfield Rapper T.I. has been casted as the 3rd Dre. “It certainly was a coup” Sources were heard saying. “T.I. is a perfect match for Dre’s new direction. We are glad to have T.I. join our already diverse list of performers.” T.I. debuts in the season 3 premiere. As we saw in the finale, Patti Labelle has joined the show in the role of Ria’s mother. Expect to learn of some secrets from Ria’s past as her mother mixes it up in the crazy city of Pasadena. Also casted is Tyler Perry’s Madea in the role of Miss Jenkins, Sister Patterson much talked about “persona” .“Miss Jenkins now has a face. Expect a few surprise where Madea is concerned. She knows a few secrets about Sister Patterson. Mable Madea Jenkins will be on as a recurring character. Her stay is short term the head writer confirms. Sounds like a lot of up heaveal and mayhem going in front and behind the scenes. I just ask everyone be patient as we make this series even better. Stay tuned for a premiere date and story previews!!!! ~Rumor also has it that season 3 could be S.T.E.A.M.’s last….~ P.S. I would like to hear from you! Tell me what was your favortie storyline from Season 2 and your least favorite and why.

What a great episode matt. SO much drama and a lot is goings on. Lets get right to the good part I loved the Sean coming out and Juliana and Lana going at it. I so love Lana. It’d really a shame sweet cheeks had to come out the closet like that. I would be so mad at Lana for keeping my dad away from like that and then lie about it saying he died. My own dad is dad o that really hits home for me. I can’t wait till London returns so marli can get the boot. I am so over her. I will be glad when she leaves and I know she will. I love the Bobbie character. I work with the mentally retarded o that is right up my alley. She is very high functioning and got a mouth. She need to be slapped. Alicia, another flake first she wants Will than she really loves Jace. Girl come on. It’s to the point where I don’t think she deserves Jace or Will. And Rena overhearing Will’s scheme. I really do love this quadrangle. It has may layers. I wonder what Rena is going to black mail will with. That will be good. I thought it was so nice when Bryan tried to get back with Nan. I really like them as a couple and it’s a shale she didn’t go back to him. I can’t believe Alley and Jon broke up. That damn Marissa. I feel so bad for Jon. With a sister like Rissa who needs enemies. I know Alley is going to have it out with Lady M. She is a devious one aint she? And what a nice cliffhanger. I think the jig is up and can’t wait to see it play out. Great job Matt a good read for sure.