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Thanks guys for the comments. Jodie's death was very hard for me to write. I myself sheded some tears. I am so glad everyone liked Patti Labelle. I am going to have run writing for her into season 3. Watch out for her vs Sister Patterson. LOL It's also going to be interesting to see Ria interact with her mother.

Sweet Jay, i wish i could keep my seires written that far in advance. I plan to for season 3 though. Yes I have noticed you scesns have gotten a lot longer and it s great. I love the Wed idea as well. I think it would be sweet actually. Sounds like u got a good plan and i can't wait to see how it all evolves

In an undisclosed Location Mona and Ashley both are at a loss for words as they realize Sharan and Rufus have escaped. Mona "This can't be happening. " Mona falls to her knees. "I can't believe she betrayed me." Ashley "I told you she was playing you." Mona, wiping a tear from her eye, "Why don't you get the hell out of here? Our time together has come to an end." Ashley "Mona, I'm sorry,.. I didn't mean too-.." Mona "I don't want to hear it. My baby has betrayed me. I love her. She told me she would stand by me. It was all lies." Ashley "Mona I am so sorry." Mona, pulling out a gun as she stands back up, "I told you to get the hell out! You are on your own. I am taking no prisoners now. You better hope you catch Rufus." Ashley "Will do, Mona thank you for everything and-" Mona, putting the gun against her Ashley's head, "You think I'm playing don't you? The game is up. It's time to end all of this. I am sick of everything. I am sick of life. I don't want to live like this no more. It all ends here. Starting with you leaving or I'll shoot you and your son." Ashley, holding Bryan jr the 1st closer to her, takes heed to Mona's warning, and leaves the undisclosed location. Mona closes the door behind her. She then sits at the table and pulls out a sac of weed from her afro, as Abe comes too and begins to cough. Abe, barely able to speak "What is going on?" Mona, breaking her weed down as memories of being tied up and molested by her "step father" run rampant through her head. Tears begin to fall from her eyes. She wipes her tears not wanting to show Abe her wet pain. She continues to break her weed down so she can smoke it, "It's time for the big payback. I am sick of this life. I am sick of pain. I am tired of being hurt. I don't even know who I am as a woman thanks to you." She licks up her blunt and lights it up, holding in the smoke, hoping it will ease her pain. Abe "I-..I'm sorry." Mona, inhaling and exhaling "It' too late for all of that Abraham. I don't know my mother, my brothers and now my real father." She continues to smoke as the tears still fall down her face. "It all ends here Abe. Tonight. I am done with all of this and it's time to close the chapter." She ashes her blunt and walks up to Abe and looks into his eyes. He looks back at her. Abe "You're going to kill me? Then do it. I deserve to die." He says with tears forming in his eyes as his guilt haunts him on the inside." Just kill me and be done with it. I am ready to die" Mona, chuckling a little bit "I can't make it that easy. I wouldn't be Mona if I did." She walks over to her black magic bag of tricks and pulls out a large strap on. She smacks the dildo in Abe's face. Abe "What the hell is that?" Mona "It's called a dildo. A strap on. Or I like to call it the golden rule. Do unto others as you would do unto them." Mona pulls out a remote and pushes play on the stereo. The song "The big Payback" by the late James Brown begins to play. Abe, slowly realizing what is about to happen to him, "I know I have no right to ask anything of you, but please just kill me now." Mona, then stuffs Abe's mouth with Rufus's dick that she sees on the ground. "Suck on that bitch. I am tired of talking. No more games.' She says as she rips her clothes of her body to reveal a G-string that she is wearing. Mona then reaches down in her bag of tricks and pulls out a whip. She cracks the whip and then slaps Abe with it, like a slave on a cotton plantation. Abe hollers out in pain. Mona then wraps the strap on holder around her waist and then takes the dildo and puts it in place. She turns Abe on his stomach, who was laying on his back. Abe begins to holler out for his manhood. Mona "Don't holler out now. You deserve this." Mona then gets on top of her stepfather and jams the dildo into his ass. Abe screams so hard, he loses his voice. Mona smiles, as she feels some sort of relief, finally doing something to Abe she's vowed to do to him, raping him ,just like he used to rape her. She begins to burst into a flurry of tears and laughter at the same time on The Season 2 finale of Episode 100!!!!:Ready to DIE!!!! Executive Producer: ML Cooks Co-Executive Producer: Tara Smith Written by ML Cooks Co Head Writer: Durand Saint Hilaire Consults: Monique Cooks, and Matt P Meanwhile, What Mona doesn't know, is that Sharan and Rufus have crawled up into a hole up to a 2nd floor it seems from the undisclosed location. Sharan pulls Rufus, whom is unconscious at this point up through the hole of the floor. Sharan looks around and sees what seems to be like some one's basement. She stands up and sees a stair case. "Rufus, I'm going to get help. I'll be back." She sheds a tear looking at Rufus, who just got his dick chopped off. She hurries up the stairs and opens up the door. The house is darkened with a foul odor. "Smell like death in here" She makes her way around the house to find the front door. She finds it and opens it and steps outside. She realizes she is across the street from the William house. Sharan is stunned that she was so close to the Williams house. She looks back at the house she came out of and she realizes it was Miss Jenkins House, the one Sister Patterson is so protective of. Sharan nearly faints but gets a hold of herself, realizing help is what she needs. She decides not to run over to the Williams house, not knowing what to make of the connection of Sister Paterson, and Miss Jenkins, and being held captive beneath Miss Jenkins basement. She decides to try and find Dondre. Can I get a witness West coast Baptist Church Sabryn is sitting in a chair in front of a mirror while Ria, quietly does her hair. Sabryn looks up in Ria's face and can tell she is upset at Jodie's death. Sabryn "I really am so sorry for the loss of Jodie. She really seems liked a nice woman." Ria "Girl you gone make me cry and mess up my make-up." Sabryn "It feels kind of strange getting married today." Ria "You have been waiting for this day for a long time. God has plans for all of us girl. You deserve this. You have a family with Bryan , so it's time to make it official." Sabryn, smiling "I guess you're right. Bryan and I have been through so much." Ria "But you got through it all. I wish I had a love like that." Sabryn "You did." Ria "I know and I messed up. And now he's with some whi-" She catches her self looking in the mirror at Sabryn. Sabryn "What's the matter? Ria "Alexis. Karim is with Alexis now." Sabryn "Do you still love Karim?" Ria "Karim will always hold a place in my heart. But I've moved on. I got my eye on this doctor, girl." Patti then comes barging in, "Sorry I am late darlings" Sabryn's jaw drops as she sees Patti Labelle. Ria rolls her eyes. Sabryn "Oh my god, It's Patti Labelle. What are you doing here? You're here for my wedding?" Patti "My daughter hasn't told you? " Sabryn, raising an eyebrow "Daughter?…" She looks at Ria. Ria "Sabryn, Patti Labelle is my mother ok?" Sabryn "This is a joke right?" Patti "No, darling. Ria is embarrassed of me." Sabryn, giving Patti a hug, "I had no idea. I just can't believe this. I am a huge fan. You have a great voice." Patti "Thank you darling. So this is the big day huh? Tying the knot. Oh, I am so happy for you." She says giving her another hug. Ria "Ok that's enough, We were busy mother. You can just go out there in the church and let it be known that the great "Patti Patti" is here." Patti "That's right darling" …Breaking into song.."Say my name" Sabryn, knowing what that means and joins in on the song, "Patti Patti…." Patti "Oh Darling, you got you a nice voice as well." Ria "That's enough, I was doing her hair." Patti, looking up at Sabryn's half done hair, "OOh, honey, I hope not." Sabryn "What's the matter? You don't like it?" Ria, sucking her teeth "Excuse me?" Patti "Honey, sit in this chair and Miss Patti will make it better." Patti bumps her daughter out the way to sit Sabryn down. Ria, shaking her head and is about to say something smart until Sister Patterson barges in by screaming "Halleluiah.!!!!" Sabryn, and Patti look at her like she's crazy. Ria, used to Crazy Patterson's outlandish tone is not faded and yawns. Sister Patterson looks at Patti, She slowly walks into the room and over toward Patti Labelle. Sister Patterson sizes up Patti. Patti, realizing what this seemingly psycho woman with a receding hairline is sizing her up and Patti does the same. Sabryn and Ria watch with interest, and wonder what is going to happen between Sister Patterson vs. Patti Labelle. Meanwhile, back underneath Miss Jenkins Basement Mona, getting tired and low on energy, and with blood pouring out of Abe's a$$hole decides to stop her strange justice against her step dad. She gets off of him and takes off the strap on. She sit back down at the table and lights up her blunt again. She laughs, watching Abe laying on the bed, unconscious. As Mona smokes, more memories come back to haunt her and she speaks on them. "Remember the last day we saw one another. It was such a tragedy. You tried to get rid of me. You tired to erase your guilt and hide from the world the true you. A sick child molester." She begins to burst into tears. "I'm crazy because of what you did to me. Every single day, I have memories of you raping me, night after night! I hate you! I hope you rot in hell. " She wipe more tears. "You tried to erase me by burning me alive and then when I didn't die then, you buried a hole in the ground and threw me in there. Well look at me now mutha fu(ker Back from the dead, and alive and well. I survived all of that. All of it, just to do the same thing to you. I want you to know how it feels to have your skin melt. It's a fu(king wrap Abe." Mona throw her blunt down, and lets the anger get the better of her. She reaches into her magic bag of tricks and pulls out a can of gasoline and pours it all over Abe. "Son of a bitch! Sweet revenge. I love it. " Mona grabs Abe's body and drags it outside, through the tunnel that leads up to the ground. Back at Can I get a witness West Coast Baptist Church Bryan stands in the mirror fixing his tie as Kiko stands in the back of him, sipping on champagne. Kiko "Congratulations Bryan." Bryan "Thanks man. This has been long in the making. Sabryn and I have gotten over some very rough times but we've made it and I could not be happier." Just then Dre barges in. Kiko and Bryan are both surprised to see how well Dondre cleans up in a suite. Dre is not to thrilled to see his brother. Kiko "You look handsome Dondre. I don't think I've ever seen you in a suite before." Dre "Well this aint nothing big man. Don't make a big deal out of it alright?" Kiko "You're acting strange. Why are you sweating like that?" Dre "Nothing is the matter man. Can you leave me the hell alone!?" Kiko "Something is not right with you man. ..Bryan, I just came in here to wish you luck and a congratulations" Bryan "Thanks man it means a lot to me." Kiko then looks at his older brother one more time before leaving. Once Kiko leaves, Dre breathes a sigh of relief. Bryan, also notices that Dre is acting strange. "I don't want to keep harping on you but are you sure you ok?" Dre "Yea man, everything is ok. I just get uncomfortable being in a suite and it's hot as hell in here." Bryan "I guess it's time. You got the rings?" Dre "Oh sh!t bruh, I pawned them" Bryan's jaw drops in shock, "Tell me your joking." Dre ,smiling "I am playing man. Sh'mone, lets do this. Let's make you a husband bruh." Bryan takes a deep breath and walks into the church to meet and greet the guest which include, Alexis ,Ladonna, Karim, Kevin, Daniel, Ty, and Jenn. Mona is driving her car on the highway with Abe in the passenger seat. She pulls up to the area where her bunker once stood. She puts the car in park and then looks over at Abe. He wakes up. His body is going into shock and begins to shiver. He slowly looks around and has a feeling in his soul that this is it. He leans his head back and closes his eyes. "I know this means nothing to you, but I want you to know I am sorry." Mona continues to sit in silence, eyes watering up again. She wipes her cheek and then gets out of the car. She walks around the passenger side and pushes Abe toward the driver's seat. After positioning her step father firmly in the drivers seat she steps back and takes in the scene. Abe, about to meet his maker. Mona is about to deliver her ultimate payback to Abe. Once she lets the scene marinate on her mind, she then walks over toward the car. She reaches in and puts the car in drive. As the car slowly drifts toward the cliff, Mona lights up a match and throws inside the car so it can land on Abe. Abe immediately lights up into a fire. The car makes it to the cliff, going to slow for Mona, she runs over and gives the car a little push. The car finally falls of the cliff and lands 200 feet below, crashing back into earth, bursting in a ball of fire. Mona looking over the cliff, watches with a smile on her face, as the car burns with Abe in it. Mona is so over whelmed with emotion, she falls back onto the ground. She looks up toward the sky, "Thanks you." She burst into tears as she continues to look up at the heavens. "Thank you. It's over. It's all over." She stands back up and walks over toward the cliff to get one last look at Abe's fiery death. Being complete, having come full circle, Mona casually walks away, headed back to Pasadena on foot. Back at the Church Sister Patterson stops looking at Patti and looks at Ria. "Slut" Patti "Say what?" Sister Patterson "Miss, Labelle, I do like your music. You should join my gospel choir. If you don't mind, this is my God's house, and he doesn't not like jezebels like this tramp here. You should not surround yourself with such trash any way. It's time go to work." Sister Patterson grabs Ria's arm but Patti then pulls the sister off of Ria. Patti "Darling, I don't know who you think you are, but if you talk about my daughter like that again, there will be smoke in the city." Sister Patterson "Your daughter?" Ria "Yea you crazy bat, this is my mother. How you like them apples?" Sister Patterson "I can see it now. You two got that same big forehead." Patti gasps Ria "Girl Please, you have to wear wigs to keep up with that receding hairline." Sabryn "Alright stop. This is getting out of control." Patti "You can say that again. Sorry darling. It's a shame we had to be subject to some crazy woman's charade." Patti heads out of the room. Sister Patterson "I don't care who your mother is…" Sabryn pushes Ria out the room and then Sabryn runs out as well and closes the door behind her. She locks the door, locking Sister Patterson in the room. Ria "Girl you are crazy. Some one need to lock that wild bat up." Patti "She messing with Miss Patti and Miss Patti doesn't go for that. She ought to be a shamed of her self for acting like that." They walk down the hall, as Sister Patterson bangs on the door "You dumb devils. How dare you do this to me? I'll get all of yens!" Miss Jenkins House Rufus is laying on the basement floor. He can hear some one slowly walking down the stairs with a bright flashlight. Rufus tries to open his eyes to see who it is. The person gasps at seeing Rufus's bloody "nub". Rufus, whispering "Help me." Person responding back, "How the hell did you get in my house?" Rufus "Please help me, who are you?" "Miss Jenkins. Mable Madea Jenkins honey. " Rufus passes out again. Back at the church Kiko, who is sitting next to Daniel, notices that he keeps checking his watch. "Is everything ok?" Daniel "I hope so. Lauren told me she would meet me here. I just thought she would be here by now." Kiko "You try calling her cell phone?" Daniel "No, I mean, she dropped hers last night in the toilet." Kiko frowns up. Daniel "Don't ask. But she was out getting a new one." Kiko "There probably busy at the cell phone place." Daniel "You're right" Standing by the minister are Bryan and Dre. Dre notices Daniel looking at his watch repetitively. Dre begins to sweat a little more and tries to avoid making eye contact. Kiko, watching his brother, knows something is wrong with Dre. "My brother, sure is acting strange." Daniel, now looking at Dre "Why do you say that?" Kiko "Something is way off, I just can feel it." Meanwhile Karim is sitting in the middle of LaDonna and Alexis. Alexis, who doesn't understand why Karim's secretary is here as well decides to ask him about it. "Can I talk to you?" Karim "Are you going to keep lying to me?" Alexis "How many times do I have to tell you, it was my TV. And I was in the shower." Karim "I know what I heard. I heard you arguing with someone and I heard a baby crying. You are hiding something from me. I don't think we have much else to say to one another." Alexis shakes her head in frustration and feels like she could shoot her self in the foot for dealing with Ashley and her schemes. Ladonna gives Alexis a low key smile, she's smiling because she is happy that her sexy boss and his girlfriend are having yet another problem. Ty, sitting by himself wonders where Jenn is. Santino then walks in and comes over toward him, grabbing a seat. "Seems like you have been gone forever." Santino "Sorry boss. Something came up." He has a flashback of sleeping with h is boss's woman. Ty "Things have changed. I need you to take care of this now." Santino "You got it boss. What do you need?" Ty leans in towards his henchman's ear and whispers a few things in his ear. In the front of the church, Karl is outside smoking a cigarette. He sees Jenn running up toward the entrance. He steps in her way, stopping her. "In a hurry?" Jenn "I am actually Karl now if you will excuse me" Karl "Why are you late? You had to clean your self up I suppose?" Jenn "What the hell are you talking about?" Karl "I know what you did." Jenn "You know nothing you jerk. Just stop trying to cause trouble." She tries to brush aside him but then he whips out a photo he took of Jenn and Santino and their 69. Jenn's face turns red. "Bastard" Karl "Slut." He laughs. "I knew you were sleeping with that Latin boy. Now I have proof." He laughs in her face. Back inside, Kiko gets up to go to the men's room. Ty looks at Santino and nods his head, giving him the signal it's time. Santino gets up and follows Kiko. Once Kiko is inside the men's room, Santino comes up behind with a gun. "Don't say a fu(kin word word pretty boy. Just walk out of this church peacefully. You got that?" Kiko "Whatever you say man." Santino jams the gun into Kiko's back and escorts him out of the church. Ty gets a text on his phone that reads "Done". He smiles as he looks at Dre. "Check mate" Ty says aloud. The wedding FINALLY begins as the cue music for the bride to walks down the aisle plays. Everyone stands up and looks toward the back of the church. The media all takes snap shots of Sabryn's gorgeous self designed wedding dress. Bryan and Sabryn make eye contact and smile at each other. Sabryn slowly begins to walk down the aisle. Westwood Park Natalia "This is a sick joke right?" Diego "I kid you not. Your baby is alive. He didn't die." Natalia "How do you know this?" Diego "Because I helped planned all of this out." Natalia "Plan, help, who are you working with ?" Diego "Ashley. Ashley has your baby. She took him from you and is passing him off as her own." Natalia is stunned. Back at the Church. The minister is speaking, "If there is anyone who feel this young couple should not be wed, speak now or forever hold your peace." Bryan gets a little nervous. Then suddenly, the back doors opens and Ashley barges in with Bryan Jr the 1st. "I do!!!" Everyone looks at Ashley in complete disbelief. Bryan nearly pisses his pants looking at Ashley and Sabryn is fired up with shock and anger, knowing her wedding day is now ruined. Just before any one else can react, Sharan barges in. Kevin is speech less Sharan "Help me!" Kevin slowly walks over to her. Then Daniel gets a call on his cell phone. "Oh my God know!" He hangs up the phone "Lauren has been shot! I have to go." He leaves the church. As he is about to leave he is stopped as Mona walks in with a machine gun. "Aint no one going no mutha fu(king place." Everyone in the church continues to look on in shock. The citizens of Pasadena are about to finally and officially meet Mona.

Hey guy I really love your seires but sometimes I really feel that u should go deeper into some stories. Like Ashlee and her buliam i would hae like to see that go farhter and shayne's sexuality still should have been bigger and more in depth allof a sudden josh is cool with it. It would have been nice to u go deeper into ti but it's rolly cuz the cast is too big and dont have time which i do understand. just writer to writer comments but i will say ur scenes r getting so much better and they are more deeper. great job. I would not even mind writing a scne or two for this series which i love very much

Wow Jay greatness. Ava calling that hit our for Marah is really intresting. Coop and Ashlee's scenes were very nice. Wow Poor Gus. ANd what a Bastard Alan is. Another nice scene was Ava getting to know her real dad and confronting him on his past deeds. I love susan's new look.. THat damn girl is always up to know damn good in the neighboor hood. I hope this all catches up to her soon. SHe is always causing trouble

WOW!! Loved the wedding. WOW i am in total shock right now. Susuan of all people. She's really a bad little number. What is Gus and Nat going to do now that the cat is out the bag. I see the ground work is being laid for some exits so sad to see Ash and Coop go. I don't give 2wo cents about Frank and his girl so good bye to them. I have to echo's Greg comment Terell is so damn fine

Wow another great episode. I dont feel bad for Ava one bit. I am glad this is all heppening to her. GO marah. I wanrted to comemnt on an ealeir episode bout a convo Josh and Shayne has. I have a friend who belives thaat bi sexual people are just confused and I am glad that Shayne touched off on that. I was shocked to see that Alan was not the baby's father. I thought for sure you was gonna role with Alan on this one. But now Cyrus has some info so lets see what he does with this. And coops engangement was so nice on the show Very nice. Jay you have been doing some great wreiting for sure. It's getting better and better.

Welcome home Ava, Wow what a way to come back. I love Light talk it was so nice AHH I wonder who the father of Nat's baby is?!!! That damn susan is up to know famn good again. I love the newer pics you are using. It's getting very good. The scenes are much fleshed out these days. Keep up the good work Jay. THere also seems to be more a focused or a more cnetral story base. Congrats on that. These exits will really help.

WOW a great episode. I am so glad Ashlee wants to go on tv with all of this. It gives me a warm feeling. Or is this some kind of trick? I again loved Vi at the cheerleading camp. Evilness. Loved the girls chat at the Parlor. It was really nice and sweet and gave the episode so much. It helped me learn more about them. Again loved the scen with SHayne and Josh but I thought for sure this would turn into a big issue for Josh but I guess not. It's good he come to terms with it though. Olivia and Bill getting it on again. I hope they can reunite. Ava is really in for some surprises. ANd poor Jefferey Cant wait for the paternity test. GREAT JOB JAY!!

WOW!!! A great episode. Jenny's and London's scene was so damn funny."Id rather be taking drugs" I was rolling. I love that storyline. It's so campy and is being well done. I am even learning a few things here. Nan is so bonkers. I alos laughed when Lana and Juliana had that exchange and was shocked to see Jules quick come back withj you old. Good one. I really like Lana. IJace hates WIll so much. THese two hate each others so much. I really feel bad for Jace at this point. Alicia, she is so blah to me. I loved how Marli scremaed out in pain when Wendell was trying to question h er. So I assume Tanisha will be leaving? I also liked the scene with Byran and Nate. ANd boy oh BOy Alley and Marissa keep working each other. I am so glad ALley was qucik on her feet at the client. Good thinking. Marissa is so sick. Why does she insist on trying to break up her brother and his girl friend. Good job ALley it's about time you one up Marissa. A very good episode for sure!!

I knew the writing was on the wall for sky. I will keep my eye on her and Ginny.

Jim is sa dummy, he should have waited until his drunk and hgh worn down before he went to see Lynntte but now sheis aware that something is not right. The M.I. drama keeps getting so good. I wonder if John will will find something on that disc. It's getting good Redd!!

Jim conitunes down his bad path. I was surprised Gregg offered Lynn to stay with him. This is a very well written triangle and I saw that because I am rooting for Lynn/Jim and Lynn/Gregg. So great job on that one. THat truly takes skills to pull something off. And It's a triangle with all good people. THose are another hard trianlge to write. It's your other hottest story redd. I can't wait to read more. Again more M.I. drama I truly love it and I keep repeating myself, but you really have some of the clearest cut dialog on SONOP. Another good one.

Sup Redd, Sorry its taking me so long to read. Things are so hetic. But I see you Changed the blog name..Why SO/ The new Logo looks nice. Another good episode. This batle for the take over is really heating up and involving so many people. I love the storyline esp now since Andrew is back. One night of pleasure can leave u with a life full of pain as Andrew is finding out. I am also glad Steven is talking some sense into Edmund. I hope he toakes heed to it. Another great episode Redd and as always the dialog was top notch.

Good episode. Lots of movememnt with Marli . Loved the "secret keeper" I found that scene kinda of odd for me, I don't know. A lot of new faces and stuff. I can't belive London is alive and what a great choice. I've always felt London is the main heroine of PP and was so shocked that she was killed off. Nan is straight tripping. It's only going to be a matter of time before she's exposed. and I bet Anna Lee will be the one that outs her. I can't belive Nata played Ava like that. It cracked me up I see Lena wised up and staked her claim in WIll. Nice twist. And tyhat story got more interesting. Oh and I hope Bryan outs Marli as well. Suck on that Blake

Jay I write Jodie as being in her late 20's. As far as the casting of Ria's mom, I had so many diva's in mind. I had a lot of suggestions from the team. Like TIna Turner, Diana Ross, Sherly Lee Ralph amounst others. I felt Patti would be best fir the role. I hope everyone enjoys

Sorry I h ave been away Jay. But a great episode. I am so glad Ashlee is staying put in that hospital. She needs help and I hope she gets it. SO sad to see her leave. And I really wonder if natalia is really fakiong h er amnesia or not. The Cross Creek was beatiful I love how Alan keeps rocking the boat

In an undisclosed location A gunshot is heard after Mona tells Sharan to shoot Abe, and Sharan screams, and Mona grins after a moment. Mona "That's my baby…" Mona looks at her step-father, who has suffered a wound to the shoulder, and is only slightly conscious. Abe, trying to look at Sharan, "How…how…could you do this to me?" Sharan "I'm so sorry, Abe…" Mona "Don't apologize to this bastard! You did the right thing. But don't worry, I'll take it from here, honey. You just relax until I'm done." Sharan "What are you going to do to him?" Mona "Don't worry about it." Mona walks over to Abe, who is lying on the ground helplessly and bleeding, She presses down on the bullet. Abe groans in pain, and Mona smirks. Mona "Wow, she really has learned from me…she really did a nice number on you, Abe." Abe "Shut up…" Mona "But this is only the beginning. Daddy or not, I'm not gonna go any easier on you. You never showed me mercy, always on top of me, so now its time for you to be the one who gets all the pain. All the hurt. All the sting." Abe "Then stop yapping and do whatever the hell you are going to do." Mona, grabbing Abe by the chin "First, we got some things to settle. You told me another man was my father." Abe "That's true…my brother, DC. You're dirty mother cheated on me with him." Mona, slapping Abe "Don't talk that way about her. I don't know her, yet, but I can see why she'd cheat on you. Is that why you molested me? Because I wasn't your own." Abe "No…no…it wasn't like that, I-" Mona "I don't want to hear your excuses. I got all I need to know, now its time for my special torture to begin, then my Sharan and I can go meet my mother" Episode 98: "69" Written by ML Cooks, Durand Saint Hilaire and Tara Smith Santino drives the limo off an exit on the highway, now entering South Pasadena. Jenn "So what is this surprise you got for me? Why are we in South Pasadena?" Santino, making a few right and left turns, "I want to make you feel good. I want to show you how I really feel about you. I want us to continue what we started back in Cleveland." He pulls into a motel parking lot. He continues "I know you want me just as much as I want you. I've been watching you watching me." Jenn, with a seductive smile "I want you too Tino." He gets out the limo goes to reserve a room for few hours. Jenn pulls out her mirror and checks to make sure her make up and hair are ok and she does a breathe check by cupping her hand in front of her face and then blowing into it. " A little funky" She says as she pulls out a mint and pops it into her mouth as Santino opens her door Santino "Are you ready?" Jenn "Yes." He puts his hand out and she grabs it as she gets out the limo. They walk to their room, Room 69. Tino slides the key into the slot, and then he opens the door and they walk inside. Karl parks his Bentley in the motel parking lot. He pulls out a camera from the back seat and walks over toward room 69. "A cheap place for cheep people I suppose" Inside, Jenn and Santino are kissing passionately. He grabs a hand full of Jenn's rump and massages it as she bites down on his bottom lip, feeling good from Santino's soft touch. He then picks her up and lays her down onto the bed and climbs into the bed with her. They begin to kiss once again as he runs his fingers up and down her leg, ever so slightly, sending chills through her body. She begins to unbutton his shirt and run her hands all over his chest. Santino goes up a little further, up her thigh, still caressing, making Jenn tremble. He then leans down and begins to lick on Jenn's thigh. She falls back onto the bed as he opens up her legs, going further up her thigh getting closer towards Jenn's muff. As he continues to lick and suck on her inner thigh, he takes one hand and pushes her panties to the side so he can play around with Jenn's canal. He slides his finger inside and his finger is drowned is Jenn's natural juices. Jenn lets out a moan. He then pulls his finger out and does the test of freshness. He indiscreetly runs his wet finger past his nose to get a whiff of what he is about to eat. Once his senses tell him Jenn is smelling yummy, he goes in for the kill by ripping her panties off and burying his face into her pu$$y. Jenn not expecting such a rush lets out a heavy sigh. She then wraps her legs around his head as Santino licks on her clitoris and then slides his tongue in and out of her. Jenn's body quivers which turns Santino on and he adds intensity to his tongue action. He slowly unbuttons his pants, now being hard and turned on, listening to Jenn call out his name as he pleasures her. He begins to massage his dick. Jenn, surprising Santino, take over the show by sitting up and pushing Santino onto the bed. she looks at Santino's gorgeous Latin uncut dick and smiles. Completely turned on, she begins to crawl over toward him and she positions her body so her face is at his dick and her pu$$y is in Santino's face and they both knew what time it was. Santino initiates the sixty nine by pushing down on Jenn's waist so she was sitting on his face. Jenn put her mouth on the tip of Tino's penis, enjoying the taste. As Santino makes love to her pleasure box, Jenn slides her mouth all the way down his 8 and a half shaft till his pubic hair was touching her face and she could smell the slight mustiness of his manhood. As their 69 grew in the intensity of passion, Karl was taking pictures of the entire sin of passion through the window, unbeknownst to the sinners. Westwood Park, Lauren's House Lauren hangs up the phone when she gets a knock on her door. She opens it to see Daniel. Lauren "I have been worried about you. You didn't come home last night." Ushering him to come in. Daniel "I'm sorry. I had a lot on my mind… I had some things I had to sort through. And no, none that had anything to do with Ty or drugs." Lauren "That never crossed my mind. I know you are done with all of that." Daniel "How are you? The baby?" Lauren "We are fine." Daniel "Lauren, I love you with all my heart. The only reason I am here today standing before you were thought of coming back to you while Mona held me captive. Each and every time she did some sick torturous thing to me, I just said to myself, I will make it through this. God has showed me the error of my ways. And I am a changed man. And I want to prove all this to you. Mona has messed with all of our lives and it's a shame Chris died for something he did not do. I do not blame you for moving on with him, I know you were hurt and confused. So I want you to know, I would be honored to be a father to this child and be a family with you. I want to do it for Chris. " Lauren wipes her face as the water works are in full swing. She hugs him, unable to look at him any longer, knowing that this baby could be Chris's or Kevin's. She tries to think of what she should do. Daniel pulls back from Lauren "Are you ok baby?" Lauren "I'm sorry, I guess this baby has my emotions going. I'm ok." Daniel "Good because there is something else I want to say." Lauren "This doesn't sound good" Daniel, smiling then slowly bending down on one knee, pulling out a ring box. "Lauran Romoan, will you marry me?" Lauren "Yes…." Huntington Memorial Hospital Heath quickly opens the door, of Jodie's room. Jodie turns and sees her good friend Heath. The room is very dark, just the street lamp coming through the window. JODIE "Heath, you came." Her voice is dried, you can barely make out her face due to the limited light in the room. JODIE "Waited all night…" HEATH "I am sorry - I was out of town. " Heath slowly closes the door behind him, and starts walking toward the bed. He has this frighten look on his face, he knew what was coming next. HEATH "Diego called me... He said you wanted to see me." Heath about was to turn on the lights, to reveal something more frightening than he could have imagined; she lost quite a bit of weight, her face was pale, and cover with gray rings. around her eyes JODIE "Leave the lights off! …Come closer; I want to see you." Heath pulls up the chair closer to the bed. JODIE "What time is it?" HEATH "Its eleven fifty five pm." JODIE "Almost midnight…" HEATH "Almost Christmas…" JODIE "Its my birthday…" HEATH "Happy Birthday…} JODIE "Its not my birthday yet silly…" She looks away from Heath, and fixes her gaze out toward the ceiling. JODIE "What's your favorite holiday?" HEATH "I don't have one…" JODIE "You should…" She smiles, and closes her eyes... JODIE "Mine is Christmas…" HEATH "Its just a few months away - we should start planning something, a big party -" JODIE "Yeah - I would love that... We can have everyone there - and Mike too... Oh Christmas, the time of new beginnings. Jodie looks at Heath, then she places Heath's hand on his face. JODIE "You are so beautiful, so pure, I have feeling Christmas is coming early for me this year - " Heath remains quiet, as Jodie's voice is gets weaker, and more faint. He tries to keep his eye on her, but he can't with out choking up with tears. HEATH "Keep talking to me... Say something." JODIE "I know what you are about to do…" HEATH "And what is that? Come on, keeping telling me. What am I trying to do?" JODIE "Can you hear it?" Tears starts coming from Heath's eyes, as he watches Jodie. JODIE "Just listen... " Jodie closes her eyes, and opens them again. JODIE, closing her eyes and then opening them again "Have yourself, a Merry Little Christmas" - "Come on sing with me." HEATH "I have to warm you, I am not a good singer." JODIE "Look at the time - Its my birthday." Heath smiles. He leans on the bed, and looking at Jodie and starts singing." Have yourself a Merry little Christmas". Jodie is looking at the ceiling and listening to the song, thought to herself. JODIE, looking up at the ceiling once more, listening to Heath sing, as some thoughts fill her head and she speaks on it, "Oh Mike; my darling Mike - Where-ever you are; just hear me... I am so sorry, so sorry... I love you so much; trust me; I am trying; fighting to hold on; But I am too weak - I can't fight this anymore; hope you understand…" Heath finish the song, and threre's a long silence in the room. For a moment there, he thought she was dead... And finally she speaks without looking at him. JODIE "That was beautiful." Heath looks up to her, there's this drastic change in her. JODIE "You should go…" HEATH "No, I want to stay…" JODIE "Will you watch me, until I fall asleep?" HEATH, his voice trembling "Yes…Just don't sleep to long." He said with a smile JODIE "No…"(SHE STARTS COUGHING) "I just need a second." HEATH "Yes, and tomorrow we are going to the garden." JODIE "Yes... I would love that…" HEATH "Its a date... You and I - tomorrow…" Jodie cant keep her eyes open, she closes them and opens them again. The image of Heath is getting blury more and more. Heath can feel her hand falling away from him, but he manages to hold a little bit tighter. Heath "You can show me how you do it on the catwalk - I heard great things about the show... I'll take you to the studio, and dance for you - for you only. You'll be the first judge that auditions this piece…" He looks at Her, and Jodie's eyes were closed, He looks away for a second, and looks back, and her eyes were still closed, ... From there, Heath pretended she was still listening, and continues on with the dialogue. HEATH "Don't you give up now - Not without Mike! You hear me! He is on his way - I know it - you, your one second is up…" Jodie slowly moves her fingers, and Heath looks at her; and he burst out of tears, joys, and shock. JODIE "You are making too much noise…" Heath gets up. HEATH "Forget sleeping... We are going to have a slumber party... Right here, and right now... Its your birthday; remember." He moves to the phone, and starts dialing numbers. Greater Yonders Cemetery Dre walks up to Chris's resting place, torn shirt, barefoot, and drunk like hell. He stumbles a couple of times before reaching the grave. DRE "Hey... Its funny how things are.." He leans against a headstone directly across from Christ DRE "I sometimes wonder why you are in there, and not out here... It's just another sign that life is not fair; we spend most of our time worrying about things that will never change, its not that they don't change; they just can't change - like most people... I am sure we all tried our best to be different; to change the world and mark our marks-and it just can't happen; not to people like me. I-I am so lost; and so confused at times - and I - I don't know where did I go wrong…" He kneels down in front of the grave. DRE "Why is it that nothing ever works out for the better... You are dead, Lauren is pregnant; and I have to kill her - Life is fucked up!!! It aint right man" He gets up from the ground, and begins screaming at the headstone. DRE " - Is it so wrong of me for wanting to make end meet?, That for keeping myself out of the streets at night; Wanting a roof over my head...I have to kill Lauren. What happened to my American dream - what happened to what I want? What about me?!!!" He punches the headstone so hard, his fist start bleeding, and he quickly turns around, and he looks up and there's Lauren standing with a flower arrangement. She stands cold looking at him without a word. Undisclosed Location Ashley walks into the room where she has Rufus tied up. Rufus "Please, let me go." Ashley "Oh I'm gonna let you go alright." She says laughing. Rufus "What does that mean?" Ashley "Relax girlfriend "She says snapping her fingers. Rufus "Look, if you going to let me go then do it, or what ever else you have planned for me just get it done and get it over with." Ashley "Ohh, why the rush? This is such joy for me to watch you squirm faggot. I'll get it on with it. I want answers damn it. Why do you want to be a woman?" Looking at his package, since Ashley did strip him naked when he first arrived. "Such a shame too. All that man gone to waste." Rufus "Yea I know it's big, but it doesn't matter. I am who I am and I will be who I want to be ok? I don't have to tell you anything. Why should I? It's not like you actually care." Ashley "No see I was really trying to be a friend. But I see you don't give a damn. With that attitude I think I won't have no regrets of what I am about to do to you." Rufus "Yes, thank God. Here it comes. Come on you crazy ass bitch. Bring it on." Ashley, laughing "So think you are big and bad huh. Tough guy huh? Or Tough girl? Who the hell cares?" She walks over to the door and opens it up and reaches down to grab something, which Rufus sees it's a chain saw Rufus "Get the fu(k outta here! You have got to be shittin me right?" Ashley, laughing uncontrollably this time, she revs up the chain saw, and gets closer towards Rufus, letting the smoke and loud noise taunt Rufus. Ashley "Who's bad now?" Rufus, sweating, finally showing her fear, "Have you lost your mind, what are you going to do with that?" Ashley "You want to be a woman right? Well I am here to help" Ashley revs up the chain saw again and swings towards Rufus, cutting off Rufus's dick. Rufus lets out a deathly scream as blood gushes every where. The Blue Note Ria is sitting at a table that is set for two. She looks at her watch then at the front entrance. She finally sees her friend Lisa. Ria raises her hand up in the air, getting's Lisa's attention, letting her know where she is. Lisa walks over to her. Lisa "Hey girl, sorry I am late." Ria, standing up to hug her "I know that's right. How have you been doing?" Lisa "Still busy as hell. We've seen a rise in criminal activity, murder theft, that kind of thing. It's the effects of the economy. People are getting desperate out here." Ria "You aint never lied." A waiter brings over drinks. "I took the liberty of ordering us some starters, hope you like cosmos." Lisa "I do.. thank you. They toast and sip up. "So what's going on in you life girl, I haven't seen you in a while?" Ria "Well me and my home girl of some years fell out over something stupid." Lisa "You mean Natalia and that whole Jodie HIV fiasco?" Ria "Girl yea. I got caught up with that Bitch Jenn. I wasn't thinking straight." Lisa "Everything happens for a reason." Ria ""Yes they do. I'm trying to get at this new doctor in town." Lisa "Oh I know Kiko right? Dre's brother?" Ria "Yea. Girl it's something about him. I don't know what it is., I have got to have him." Lisa "Then girl do what you do." Ria "It's not that simple right now." Lisa "Make it simple. What's going on?" Ria "He doesn't want to be with me because I've already been with his brother." Lisa "Damn" Then they here an announcer come the loud speaker, "Every one, put your hands together for tonight's special guest star,…Miss Patti Labelle" Ria spits out her drink at hearing the name. Patti "Good evening Darlings. It's so good to be here. Everyone, give a round of applause to my daughter. Victoria" Patti points at Ria. Lisa is stunned. Patti "Girl don't be shy now. I know you would surprised. You wasn't answering momma's phone calls so I had to come here. I thought something was wrong with my baby" She laughs as the audience laughs to. Patti begins singing" If only you knew,…How much I do…do love you" Lisa "Patti Labelle is your mother?" Ria "Yes. Aint this bout a bitch!" She says gulping down her drink and her mother continues to sing her hit song……

LOL, thanks for thinking of me, my net was cut off, lol, damn gas porices but I will be back on this evening and steam will post, I just wrote 99 and let me tell u, i can't wors can't express.

Thanks guys for the very inspiring comments. I want to again thank Durand and Tara who have been a tremendous help to me these last few weeks. 3 more episode before the finally(It seems all the SONOP shows are about to air finales, sweet) I am so damn happy. I am so tired and exhusated. I need a break. I promise you though(esp the long time readers) this finale will be everything you have been waiting for, Miss jenkins, Mona and Pat, WHo's baby does Ash have, and so much more. I am going to leave no stone unturned. I''ve been building up all these stories since day one and it's all about to come crashing down. I am truly going to out do myself this time around. Thanks for reading everyone and it has been a joy to tell my stories and receive so much feed back. Matt, Bryan didn't ask Kiko because he barely Knows him. Also Chris and Bryan were very good friends and so was Dre and Chris so Dre was the next best thing. I am so glad everyone is waiting to find out who Miss Jenkins is. We've talked about her all season and in the next few eps, we will see what this Miss Jenkins is all about and I promise you it will blow your socks off. Sister Pat is now Mainstream with SONOP. Casting her was one of my most genius ideas yet. I LOVE WRITING FOR HER and I am considering doing a comedy spinoff starring her, her holy water and bible along with her antics. Stay tuned for that. Also I am trying to soften up Ria just a bit but I see it's not happening. LOL. It's kool, I got BIG plans for RIA. She's about to be thrusted to the front burner FINALLY. I have a big story for her going into the third season that really gets into who he is and why she i the way she is. Alright enough with m y babbling and hoopla.

WOW thank for the comment, it's been ages. Feels like our work goes unnoticed. But any way Sami/Stami comes to a huge conclusion very soon.

In an undisclosed location, Ashley walks in the room with Rufus. Rufus, looking at Abe, Sharan and Mona "Looks like we are gonna have a party." Mona, jumping up "Who in the hell is this?" Ashley "He walked in on me talking to Alexis." Mona "You dumb Bitch. He is not apart of the plan. Why can't you be careful? Everything that is going to happen is plotted out to a tee and here you go with this woman." Sharan "That is no woman. Like at his Adam's apple." Mona, looking closer "You're right?" Rufus "Give me a break. It's not that big. I'm a woman thank you very much." Ashley "Oh yea?" Ashley then rips off Rufus's skirt and panties and out flops his manhood. Rufus's face reddeneds with embarrassment. Mona and Sharan are stunned. Mona "Wrap that sh!t up. I don't want to see that needle." Mona turns her face and begins to vomit on her father's face. Rufus , looking at Ashley "You ignorant Bitch. I can't believe you just did that." She says with a tear running down his face. Mona, wiping her mouth "It's ok. I don't blame you for wanting to be a woman. Men are pigs. They are a waste of space." Rufus "At least some one feels my plight. Does this mean you'll tell this crazy Bitch to let me go.' Mona "Sorry sister girl, no can do. I can't risk you out there on the streets of Pasadena after what you saw." Rufus "Please let me go, I won't say nothing." Mona "Ashley, you know what to do with him." Rufus "No Please!" he says pleading as Ashley drag him away. S.T.E.A.M. Episode:97, Unleash the Dragon! Written by ML Cooks, Durand Saint Hilaire, and Tara Smith Huntington Memorial Hospital Ria walks up to the nurses station with a rose and some take out. Nurse "Can I help you?" Ria "Dr. Whitfield please?" The nurse pages Kiko as Ria takes an inhale of the Chinese food she's brought. Kiko walks around the corner and is a little surprised to see Ria. Kiko, with a slight smile on his face "All this for me?" Ria "It looks that way cutie." Kiko, shaking his head, "I guess I can take an early lunch." He then looks at the nurse in charge "Forward my calls to Diego." Kiko escorts Ria to his office. She walks in and is impressed to see his decked out office with art pieces and exotic plants. Ria looks at his awards and achievements hanging on the walls. She sets the food down on his desk and looks at one. "Harvard. I'm impressed." Kiko, sitting down unpacking the food "Not as impressed as I am with this stunt you pulled." Ria, turning around and looking at him "Is that what this is? You know I usually don't do these kind of things. ." Kiko "Why start now?" Ria "Because I want to. Is that ok with you?" Kiko, laughing "Yes." Ria, beginning to eat "You're nothing like your brother." Kiko "You're right….. My brother,…. I believe I told you that I don't keep it in the family." Ria "Pump your brakes. I just brought lunch down here to you to get to know you more. I know everyone is this city but you, you're a stranger. I just thought I'd be a good neighbor. Is that a crime?" Kiko "No not at all. Just ass long as you know nothing will ever become of us." Ria "You better eat this damn food. DO you know how much I paid for this, no no wait, do you know much I had to put into my tank to get over here?" Kiko, laughing "I'm glad you did all that for me." Ria "Uhm hmm." Rolling her eyes. The JUMP OFF Bryan is setting up the club when the door opens and Dre walks in. BRYAN "Dre…" He closes the door behind him. BRYAN "Can you lock the door behind you... We are not open yet." DRE "I kind of miss it here... Haven't been here in a month of Sundays…" BRYAN "Yeah... last time you were ; when Chris was here? Wanna a drink? Its on the house." DRE, grabbing a chair, and Bryan grabs a bottle of liquor... "Man, I can't believe Chris is really gone; I mean... there's Daniel walking free. Beat on hi girl, smoked drugs and Chris, a true brave heart" BRYAN "It's was a sad real lost... He was a good man... A great man -" DRE "The system is to blame… Believe me I should no." BRYAN "I think we should do something - in his honor…" DRE "Like what?" BRYAN "Go after the state... The police, and everyone involved on that case did a lousy job…" DRE "You can just save it... It ain't going to work…"They drink. DRE "I guest congratulations - how's the youngen?" BRYAN "He is growing up so fast...Hey... you know Sabryn and I are getting married... And I'm still looking for a best man." DRE "Are you asking me?" BRYAN "Well, if you think you got what it takes - and you can handle the toughest job in a best friend's life. Chris was my first obvious choice, but you and him were like brothers so I would want you there to represent him in spirit." DRE "Can I take a rain check?" BRYAN "Nuah, this is it man... I am doing it once... I want to do it right." DRE "Well; sho rite then- what do I have to do?" BRYAN "Show up on time…" DRE "Fair enough... Do I got to wear a tux?" Bryan "Yes sir." Dre "I'll see what I can throw together….Well, got to run... I'll holla at you later. BRYAN "Should I call you a cab?" DRE "No need too.." With that he exits the room, and Bryan's cell phone rings, and he answers it. BRYAN "Hello…Natalia - Don't call me." With that he hangs up the phone. Miss Jenkins House Karim looks inside the very dark, pitch black house after he kicked the door open, and can't see one thing and notices how it smells horrible. Karim, to himself "What the hell is this pla-…?" Karim turns around when he hears an ear-rattling scream, almost like a battle cry, and sees his mother rushing towards him! Sister Pat jumps high into the air, and tackles Karim to the ground, and both of them fall onto the cement of the porch. Sister Pat "DON'T KNOW ONE, ever EVER, DISRESPECT MISS JENKINS LIKE THAT!!!!! Do you hear me, Karim?! Don't know one talk about, don't know one disrespect Miss Jenkins like that!" Karim "Mom, what are you doing?!?! Calm the hell down! All I was trying to do was go see what was in that damn house, because it obviously makes you insane! I can't believe you are so obsessed with one woman that no one knows about but you!" Sister Pat "You think you can just barge in on MISS JENKINS?!!?!?!? This is Miss Jenkins's house, boy, and Miss Jenkins don't take none of that! I don't care who you are, you don't be messing with Miss Jenkins!" Karim "What has happened to you?! Mom, what's happened to you?! All you ever say is Miss Jenkins…look at yourself! LOOK AT YOURSELF! Tackling your own son and pushing him to the ground just because he tries going into a house that you go into every day! I just want to know who, or what, this Miss Jenkins is!" Sister Pat "Miss Jenkins is Miss Jenkins, don't ever forget that! Its dangerous to mess with Miss Jenkins, and I don't want you to get hurt like I did!" Karim "Wait, what?" Sister Pat "Miss Jenkins is Miss Jenkins! Listen to my words!" Karim "That's it. I'm sick of this…forget it, mom, forget it! I won't even bother to try to find out about Miss Jenkins. And you've showed me today how crazy you really are." Karim shoves Sister Pat off of him, and then stands up angrily, and quickly walks away, while Sister Pat lies on the ground and watches, and then turns and looks around Miss Jenkins's house… The Blue Note Kiko walks up to the bar after seeing his brother Dre, having a drink. He grabs a seat next to him. Kiko "What's going on with you?" Dre, think of the tragic fate Chris has suffered "Chillan man. Got some stuff on my mind." Kiko, ordering a club soda "What's on your mind?" Dre "Oh yo ass actually care now?" Kiko "Don't start that mess. We are brothers. It's a given I care for you. Now what is going on?" Dre "I am trying to make paper." Kiko "Paper? You chopping trees down now?" Dre "naw man. Paper…money." Kiko "Excuse me if I am not up to date on your slang. I thought you were a barber or something." Dre "I was till the shop was closed down. Mona's crazy ass kidnapped Sharan." Kiko "Well get a job some where else." Dre "It's not that easy. I need fast money man. A job won't cut that." Kiko "So what are you trying to do? Return to the street life? Sell drugs?" Dre "Actually yea. I am or I should say I was working for Ty. He offered me a job with cash up front." Kiko "I heard nothing but bad things about Ty. What the hell are you doing for him?" Dre "He wanted me to kill some one man. The chic is knocked up. I've done a lot of bad things but that's something I don't do." Kiko "That's serious. I don't know if we should be having this conversation. I don't want to know nothing like that." Dre "Oh, my bad Mr.' Goody Two Shoes. I don't have a medical degree from some expensive school." Kiko "The choice was yours. I didn't ask you to leave home to run the streets." Dre "I'm not going to run these streets for ever. I just need some quick cash man. I'm behind on my rent, bout to get evicted. I can't keep gas in my car with these damn gas prices. I can't eat. I got to do something." Kiko pulls out his check book and begins to write out a check "Here, you should have been come to me." Dre "naw man. You can keep that. I don't need your money. I'm a grown ass man. I can take care of myself." Kiko "Let your pride go. I rather give you this money then see you dead or working with Tyler." Dre "I'm good man. I can take care of myself. You wasn't thinking of me all those years after I left home, so don't start now doctor." Kiko "Why do you have to be like that? We are brothers. Let me help you." Dre "You can help by taking me to momma. I want to see her." Kiko "She does not want to see you. Besides, she wouldn't even remember you." Dre "I bet she knows who you are, The favorite son, the good one in the family." Kiko, handing the check "Here, just take this to get you by for a while." Dre grabs the check and rips it up, "I told you I don't want your money! Now leave me the hell alone! I can take care of myself." Dre finishes his beer and then leaves. In an undisclosed location Mona opens the door and walks in... she places the key in her back pocket. MONA "Sharan!" MONA , after hearing no answer, she calls out to her again, "Honey!" Still silent, and she makes her way to the room where she keeps her. She opens the door, and just as she does Abe grabs her, and throws her across the room. MONA "Bitch!" On the small chair in the corner is Sharan tied up to the chair, with masking tape on her lips... MONA "What the fu(k did you do? " Abe rushes toward the door, and Mona rushes after him, and pushes him against the wall, slamming his face on the wall... Abe turns around and Abe slaps Mona, across the face, and she falls backward toward where Sharan is sitting. MONA, looks back at Sharan, and she smiles. "Hey love…" Throwing a kiss to Sharan as she quickly unties one of Sharan's hand. ABE "I am going to finish what I should have done long time ago." Abe is making his way toward Mona, and Sharan starts shaking her head in horror, and just as Mona looks back, she was served with another slap. ABE "Come on get up! …..GET up!" MONA "You shouldn't have done that Abe…" ABE "I am just getting warmed up… You have hurt to many innocent people, Chris, Daniel, Sharan, Your brother Kevin, and Dondre" Mona gets up from the floor and wipes off the blood from the corner of her mouth. SHARAN "Mona... No!!! Don't! - That's not why we are here!" MONA, looking back at Sharan, and was working on freeing her legs. "No one hurts my baby... and gets away with it." Mona launches a range of insults to Abe, punches coming left and right, and Abe is walking backward, and throwing couple punches of his own. ABE "Your baby? The woman you kidnapped, and held hostage." MONA "Well, I learn from the best! Isn't that right daddy? - Daddy knows best; thats what they say - Did you enjoy yourself, [!@#$%^&*] your own daughter night after night?" Abe grabs Mona by the throat and pushes her against the wall, MONA "Made you feel like a real man; didn't it - all powerful - Just like now, come on take your best shot." Mona opens both of her arms rested them against the wall. MONA "Come on Kill me!" ABE "You are nothing! You just like the whore for your mother!" Abe squeezes more and Mona hits him in his groin, and he stumbles backward, and she reaches for her gun in her back pocket SHARAN "Mona no!" Mona looks back at her, and Abe kicks Mona in her knees and the gun goes flying across the room in the corner... Mona falls on the floor, and Abe gets on top of her. ABE That's what you wanted; right? He rips opens her blouse, and Mona is fighting him. MONA "Get of me you scum!" Abe over powers her, and he rips opens her pants. Her hands and nails goes to his face, and scratches him. SHARAN "Get off her!" ABE "Shut up!" SHARAN grabs the chair. "Abe get off of her now!' Abe turns to Sharan, and she serves him across the face with the chair, and Abe falls out of consciousness on the ground. Mona and Sharan are looking at each other, Mona quickly gets up from the ground, and goes straight to Sharan, and she holds Sharan on the face. MONA "You did good honey…" SHARAN "Is he dead?" MONA, looking back at him, and she fixes his clothes, and kneels down and checks for a pulse. "No... The bastard will live, but no for long." She drags him across the room to small metal pole in the corner of the room , and Sharan is watching nervously. MONA "Help me with this will you?" SHARAN "What are you doing?" MONA "Hand me my bag…" Sharan remains standing. MONA "Now!!!" She startled Sharan with abrupt command. MONA "I am sorry... Please." Mona watches as Sharan grabs the bag, and Sharan looks back at Mona, and looks at the gun on the ground. MONA "Hurry up…" Sharan heads toward Mona with the bag, and Mona removes hand cuffs from the bag, and hand cuffs Abe at the pole in a sitting position with both hands cuffed to the pole. Without looking at Sharan, she speaks. MONA "Go ahead pick it up…" SHARAN "What?" MONA "The gun... I know you want too." SHARAN "What make you so sure? MONA "So the thought, never crossed your mind?" SHARANS, lies. "No…" MONA, gets up, and she makes her way toward the gun, and picks it up, and she walks back toward Sharan. "Have you killed someone?" SHARAN "Excuse me?" MONA "Its a simple question…" SHARAN "There's nothing simple about that - and no." MONA "But you would if you had too…" SHARAN "I don't like where this is going - and I am not a murderer." MONA "I think everyone is capable of murder. MONA, Mona places her hand on Sharan's shoulder. "Earlier... You wanted to kill him, I saw it on your eyes -" She hangs her the gun. MONA "Go ahead... shoot him! If you love me, you would kill my father. Prove to me you love me" Sharan looks at Mona, and looks back at the gun, and Abe. MONA "Come on... Do it!" Sharan slowly takes the gun from Sharan. Abe slowly opens his eyes. MONA "That's it... nice and slow. " Mona moves back, and pulls out something to smoke from her purse, and she lights up drug stick, and laughs out loud, and Sharan looks back at her. SHARAN, tears in her eyes "Please don't make me do this…" MONA "Kill him! If you say you love me then prove it to me by shooting him!" She yells, and Sharan brings her attention to Abe, and slowly Abe is opening his eyes. His eyes try to focus on the image in front him, little by little his focus is getting clearer, and there's Sharan standing in front of him with the gun. ABE "Sharan! Don't listen to her." MONA "Shut up Abe!" Mona places her hands on Sharan's shoulder. MONA "He's a monster... he doesn't deserve to live for all the things he did - to me, his own daughter... Think about love!" ABE "Don't!!! - She is setting you up!" MONA kicks Abe in the face with the bottom of her heel "Don't poison's my loves head -" SHARAN "Shut up!!!! Both of you!" MONA "That's my love! Now Kill him!" ABE "Wait wait wait! - Kelis;" MONA "Sorry dad... I can't save you now." She turns and starts walking away. ABE "Sharan wait! Mona - I am not your father." Mona stops. ABE "Your mother... She - she had an affair... With my brother; and you were the result that affair." MONA "You would say anything wouldn't you? Do it!" Sharan's hand starts sweating, and she can't hold back, she sees her hand pulling the trigger, and suddenly her head is full with images; visions of how Mona introducing her to Mona Island , and all the pains Abe caused her Mona. Tears starts pouring from Sharan's eyes, and everything starts moving in slow motion, Mona takes another puff from her smoke, and Abe is trying to say something, but all you see his mouth moving, and couldn't make out the words, Sharan looks back at Mona, and she wanted to aim the gun at Mona's head, and blow her head away, but she stops herself... She returns her attention return to Abe's direction, and Mona claps her hand, and the Gun goes off...

I mean for real Lynnette u have to ask how yens got to this point? BECAUSE YOU CHEATED.!!! I hope Jim won't be that forgiving. Ok now I get who Andrew is and WOW. FIREWORKS will explode when he gets back. I can't wait for this take over to play out and I jut know Cassandra and team will loss. I can't wait for Andrew to come back to Novi and give poor Anna answers, Another great meeting

Again, I was waiting for that scene with Greg and Jim. VERY GOOD!! I don't know what the connection is with Jon Amos but I am so glad you casted him. Again the dialog was great as always. I love Novi beacsue of it's simplicty and the slow pace. Slower paced plots are the best Your cast has really grown lately. You have so many great characters, I hope we get to see them a little more When ever you want me to write some scenes get at me. I would really like too