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Bo and Jill huh. We’ll see where this goes. I love the argument with Kate and Vivian these two ladies are my fav and I’ve waited for this for like some years now. I hope to see more of this from them. I really feel for Aleixs. He really want to try and make Jemres understand but it jusst is not working. I’d still be mad too if I was him. I am not a big Anna fan. I really never have been.
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I had to read Rufus's scene sreal fast. I loved it. SO FAR. Cant wait to see what happens. WIll read the rest of the ep later Poor Dinah. It's sad the was she feels OMG ROXIE. She snapped photo of her half naked brothe. SHe is sick and I can't belive she would do that, LOVE THIS BABY TWIST with belinda. Now its coming back to me and make sense. WOW I cant wait to see how this plays out When did Edmund get kidnapped. I bet it's Annie I can't wait to find out what happend to Ash and Coopp Looks Like There will be a fight for baby Melinda Roxie dont give a [!@#$%^&*]. She wanted to be there while Rick confronted Mindy. LOL. Mindy would have beat that ass i am sure AN AWESOME ENDING!! I LOVE IT. I am off for thenext ep cant wait to see what happends
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I love the that Annie is coming back And I love the Bree Williamon is coming. A little sad over Roxie and Rusty Dusty leaving
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Another good episode. I can’t belie Rusty kissed Mindy and Mindy not only kissed him back she enjoyed it. Total shocker there. I LOVED THE RAZOR SHARP EXCHANGE between Gus and Olivia in you ropening scene. Had me craxking up. I can’t belive Gus talked to her like that. Glad to see Ash is happy with herself but There is trouble brewing with her and Coop. I can’t wait to find out why they broke up or what is going on. It’s funny how you got a diary for a plot device as I got one too coming up. I also got a woman in a mental hospital just like fuax Annie Dutton. Great minds think a like though. I love Faux’s dialog. I pictured it in my head as her sounding like a robot. I loved that scene. The title to this episode should have been called Bitch, LOL. Another great episode!!!
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This was a great episode. So well written and good from start to end and so much is going on and I have to a lot to say so lets get right to it. I love Kevin/Rocky/Shayne/Marina quad. I am rooting for Rocky and Shanyne but after this ep I don’t think they can last much longer. When did Kevin become so head over heels for Rocky? I kinda of feel them as a couple but its like damn Rocky and Shanyne have been through so much to be together and how dare Marian give Shanyne that kiss. That’s deep and shocking. This is not looking good. I LOVE LIZ!!!! I love her convo with Marah.s SO cattty I loved it. I love Roxie and Rusty and it’s a shame they are leaving, They will be missed. Is cassie going to die of her brain tumor? A GREAT READ FOR SURE and I think my fav storyline is the gay quad. Great job Jay
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The Blue Note Daniel greets Sharan and Dre at the door. Sharan "Hi Daniel, how are you doing?" She says giving him a hug. Daniel "I'm making it. Had some counseling with Jasmine. I got a lot of my built up emotions out. I feel better." Sharan "Jasmine? Ria's sister?" Daniel "Yup, but she is nothing like that loud Ria. " Sharan, looking at Daniel's, white suite, admiring it, "You look like you work here?" Daniel "I own this place now. " Dre, thinking of faking Lauren's death and hiding her at his house, "That's a good thing man. I am sure Lauren would be happy." Daniel "It's the only thing I have left of her. So…. are you two here on a date?" Neither one of them answer at first. Then Sharan decides too, "We are here for dinner. This place has good food and I need a good meal. Besides, Dondre and I have a lot of catching up to do." Daniel "Then right this way." He leads them to their table. Dre pulls Sharan's seat out so she can sit down and then he sits. He looks into her eyes. She looks back at him. Sharan, smiling "Is there something on my face?" Dre "Yes it is." Sharan, reaching into her pure to get her compact, "Oh my goodness I am so embarrassed." Dre grabs Sharan's hand before she could make it all they way into her purse. "Beauty." Sharan "Say what?" Dre "It's beauty on your face shawty. It feel real good to be able to look at you again. Do you know how much I've missed? I haven't been right ever since you disappeared. And then like damn, here we are." Sharan "Here we are. I am glad to see you're doing ok too." Dre "I'm even more good now that you're here. So tell me something, what's the deal with you Kevin? I picked up on some ill vibes on that situation right there." Sharan "I can't be with Kevin right now. He has a lot to deal with. His family is falling apart and I don't want to be so close to Mona. I can't be with a man who's sister kidnapped me and raped me. I just can't do it." Dre "I feel that. I do feel bad for the man." Sharan "That's very compassionate of you." Dre "You bring that out in me." Sharan, pausing for a minute, "I have to tell you something. Dre "You can tell me anything gurl." Sharan, looking into his eyes, "The last night I was free, the night Mona kidnapped me, Kevin and I were making love and I called out your name." Dre, smiling, "Word? I know Kevin was heated." Sharan "He was. I never saw him so angry before. Even before that, I couldn't get you out of my mind. Thoughts of you made me happy and all the times we've kissed constantly replayed in my mind." Dre "I didn't even know I got to you like that. You kept dissin' me. I was starting to think I had no chance with you." Sharan "I had to act like that. I had to ponder what was I doing and why am I having these feelings for you when I was engaged to Kevin?" Dre "Cause you want to be with me." Sharan "I think I do Dre. I am ready to connect with you on a more personal level." Dre leans over to her and kisses her on the lips as Kevin walks in The Blue Note and sees the kissing action take place. Kevin is not thrilled at all seeing the woman his heart belongs to kiss another man. S.T.E.A.M. Episode: 110;A Highway to HELL!! Written by Tara Smith and ML Cooks The Jump Off Lisa meets with Ria over at the bar. Lisa "Hey girl, sorry I am late." Ria, sipping on her double shot of 151, "It's all good girl. I am feeling lovely." Lisa "What you sipping on?" Ria "Some 151 girl." Lisa "Damn, you're trying to commit suicide." Ria "No..no. Just drinking some stress away." Lisa, ordering a drink as well, "What's been going on?" Ria "My mother and older sister have to decided to move into my house without so much as asking me." Lisa "Do they need help?" Ria "Chile' no. My mother is Patti Labelle." Lisa "Oh girl.. Shut yo' mouth." Ria "For real. " Lisa "I had no idea. I would love to have Patti Labelle staying at my house." Ria "Live with her for a few days and I bet that's won't how you feel." Lisa laughs and sips on her drink. Ria "So how's work been?" Lisa "Busy as ever. Over worked and underpaid. This crime wave that's coming to a close here in Pasadena has my work cut out for me. I've been working closely with the new police chief." Ria "You mean Mike huh?" Lisa "Yes ma'am." Ria "He fine as hell to for a white man. He is single now." Lisa "Didn't he lose Jodie to HIV?" Ria "Yea girl. Such a shame to." Lisa "I assume Mike doesn't have HIV then too right?" Ria "Girl I don't even know. I'll have to ask him that." Lisa "You're going to ask him?" Ria "Uhm yea." Lisa "Just like that?" Ria "How will I know if I don't ask? I have a right to." Lisa "Girl you is too much. So how's your love life. You got that Kiko guy yet?" Ria "No. Damn him! That's another reason why I am stressed. I need some d!ck girl. Some good ass strong d!ck. Some d!ick that will make u give a n!gga yo car keys" Lisa "I know that's right. I got me some last night. The kind that makes your face glow the next day.. No forget that. It was the kind of d!ck that made me had orgasms at work today every time I thought of his name." Ria "Oh girl. Get it while the getting is good." Lisa "I say forget Kiko and find you some one else. It's obvious Kiko is just sleeping on you or he is gay." Ria "I don't know girl. I don't understand how he can turn some one like me down. No one does that. So he must be gay. But he keep giving me this hoopla about his brother and I messing around and how he don't do sloppy seconds. " Lisa "Next!. Move on." Ria "You're right." She finishes her double shot of 151 and spins her bar stool around to see who can she see in the club. Lisa does the same. Lisa "You scouting?" Ria "Yea, I don't see no one grabbing my eye." Just then a tall dark-skinned handsome brotha walks in and over to the bar and orders a beer. Ria "Girl you see him. I never saw his face round here before." Lisa "Could be some fresh meat." Ria "Uhmm hmm. I'ma go holla at him. I'll get with you later." Lisa "Do ya thang. I ain't mad at you. I'm headed home. I have a case from the state to prosecute. Call me with details." Ria "I will." They hug. Lisa "You be safe driving home." Ria "I will." Lisa leaves as Ria walks over to the sexy stranger. Ria "How are you cutie?" Man "I'm good. How about your self?" Ria "I'm real good. Just out having a few drinks. I'm Ria" Man "I'm Remy." Pasadena Highway Ashley is driving down the expressway, laughing . She looks back at both BJ's, and smiles in victory. Ashley "Oh, my two boys….we're gonna get you're daddy soon…I promise…but for now we've got to get away before the Witch of the West Sabryn gets us…although she could be dead by now…after I gave her that delicious stab. Ooooh, I bet she is! Sabryn is dead!!!! SABRYN IS DEEEEEEAAAAAD! Yes, yes, I killed that bitch! I killed her, I killed her, and now she's dead dead dead!" Ashley begins chanting about how Sabryn is dead as she drives across the highway, but suddenly, a bullet goes flying through the back window and then goes flying out the front window as Ashley ducks! Ashley "WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT?!" She looks back to see a bloody Sabryn driving a car, right on her tail, and she has a gun in hand! Ashley's eyes widen. Ashley, yelling out her window as the babies begin to cry, "I thought you died!" Sabryn, taking another shot but missing, "Well, if I'm going down then you're going down with me!" Ashley, laughing. "HA! I'd like to see you try!" Ashley speeds up her car and goes flying past many others as Sabryn follows, and while chaos rises, both BJ's scream. Sabryn "Don't worry, Bryan Jr., mommy's coming!" Ashley and Sabryn's cars go zooming down the highway, a high speed chase ensuing… Ivory Inc. LaDonna is working with Karim in his office, both of them about to finish up for the day. Both of them look up when Alexis walks in. Alexis, looking to LaDonna, "Get out! I need to spend time with my boyfriend." LaDonna "Uh, but we were working." Alexis "Yeah well now you're not." Karim "Alexis, its alright." Alexis "No, send your lackey out of here!" Karim, sighing in frustration and looking at LaDonna, "Alright alright, we'll finish up tomorrow." LaDonna nods and then leaves, glancing at Alexis as she does. Alexis, furiously approaching Karim "Why the hell are you always with her?! You spend more time with her than you do with me! " Karim "She is my secretary, I have to talk to her. Alexis, I really don't know why you are complaining about LaDonna so much." Alexis "Because its like she is your girlfriend more than I am! She is always coming onto you, Karim, can't you see that?!" Karim "No, no I don't…and how dare you accuse LaDonna of so much when you are the one keeping secrets?" Alexis "You still think I am hiding things from you?" Karim "My mother's third eye isn't stupid, as crazy as she is, and you've been acting weird ever since you got released from jail." Alexis "Your mother is a nutjub! I promise you I am not keeping secrets from you!" Karim, slamming his fist down in anger, "I trust my gut, too. I still remember hearing that baby crying at your apartment, but you said it was the TV when I know it wasn't. I won't have no more women keeping secrets, not after Ria and my mother." Alexis, groaning in frustration "For the last damn time: I am not Ria, I am not like Ria! Or Sister Patterson! And that was the TV whether you like it or not! You seem to think that all women are like Ria…oh wait except LaDonna. Oh, no we always have to defend the lovely LaDonna. Heaven forbid anyone insult her." Karim "Alexis, I love you. I really love you…but, I know you. And you are lying through your teeth right now. I'm getting fed up with everyone keeping secrets. My mother kept secrets from me, my pops did too. No more. I want to have everything out now." Alexis, growing nervous, "There's nothing to have out!" Karim, looking up at Alexis with his eyes bursting in anger at the back and forth game going on, "LIKE HELL THERE ISN'T! That's it. I'm not gonna sit around and listen to this, because we're not getting anywhere." Karim angrily storms out of his office as Alexis's eyes widen, and she runs out into the hall. Alexis "Wait, Karim, come back!!! KARIM, COME BACK!!! Please!" Karim simply ignores her and stomps off…. Pasadena Highway Sabryn and Ashley are still chasing each other while the kidnapped babies cry very loudly, and Sabryn holds off from firing anymore shots at risk of hitting one of them. The police are now right behind Sabryn, and she looks behind her as more and more flashing lights show up. Sabryn "I don't care how many cops are after me, I'm going to get my son back and kill Ashley myself. I'm not stopping for anybody, its time to put an end to this and all of her madness." Ashley, in her car, "Oh Sabryn…you're so pathetic. Really think you can start your little chase and somehow catch me? I think not! You're so stupid, and I think its time I show you how pathetic and stupid you are once and for all!" Ashley floors her car and it goes even faster, as numerous other cars rush to pull over for their own safety. Sabryn, scowling, "You won't get away that easily, psycho bitch!" Sabryn floors her own car, and she catches up with Ashley, while police cars try to keep up with them. Ashley, looking back to the screaming infants, "Hush little baby don't say a word…momma's gonna kill that annoying bitch. If that annoying bitch don't die, momma's gonna torture her till she cries!" While Ashley sings the twisted song to the BJ's, she keeps the car floored. She briefly looks up at Sabryn's car right behind her's and grins evilly and waves before going back to singing, completely keeping her eyes off the road. However, suddenly…her car slams into Karim's car and Ashley's eyes widen and she looks up and nearly loses control. Ashley, grabbing the wheel and trying to keep the car on track while it spins out of control, "DAMN IT! I won't let this stop me!" Sabryn hears her son crying even more now, and is only more determined. She gasps when she sees Karim's body come flying at her car, coming from the car Ashley rammed into, and before she can even stop she runs over it, but keeps going. Sabryn "HOLY CRAP! That's it, this ends here!" Meanwhile, Ladonna who was also in the same area of the expressway where Ashley hits Karim's car, pulls over as she sees Karim's body being ejected from his car. She quickly gets out of her car and rushes over to where his body lands after flying in mid air, having fallen into a ditch, and she screams when she sees…KARIM lying down, unconscious with blood pouring out of his head. LaDonna, leaning down, "Karim, no…NO…no this can't be happening…" Back on the road, Ashley is constantly trying to keep her car from going haywire. She looks in the rearview mirror every few seconds and Sabryn, as well as the police, are still on her tail. Ashley "I've come too far…I have two wonderful sons, I've done so much…SHE WON'T WIN! SHE CAN'T!" Ashley keeps on going, and Sabryn keeps up with her, but eventually Ashley finally loses control and her car skids off the road, and Sabryn intentionally drives off the road herself, and stops her car. Sabryn, again grabbing her gun, "Okay….this is it. Time for Ashley's era to end, and me to get my son back." Sabryn begins to get out of her car, but she looks up when she sees the battalions of police cars arriving. The new chief of Police Mike gets out and rushes up to Sabryn, and cuff her! Mike "Sabryn Genet, you are under arrest for attempted murder and evading police." Sabryn, furious, "EXCUSE ME?! I am the one trying to stop that crazy psycho Ashley! She kidnapped my SON!" Mike "Let us deal with that, Sabryn." As Mike tells one of his officers to escort Sabryn to a squad car after retrieving Sabryn's gun, many of the other officers take out their own guns and turn towards Ashley's car. Ashley, peeking out and seeing Sabryn, "Awww, you lost again, didn't you?! You poor woman, just get used to it: You can never beat me!" Mike, using a megaphone as both BJ's continue crying out due to all the chaos, "Ashley Jones, come out with your hands up! Surrender now or we will be forced to take drastic action!" Ashley, beginning to laugh crazily, "Oh please! I'm not Sabryn! And you're not taking me…alive or dead! My sons and I are going to get out of this safe and free!" Mike "Miss Jones, we will be forced to shoot if you don't surrender now!" Ashley "Oh you can't do that…you could hit my precious boys! You've already made them so upset!" Mike "This is your last warning, Miss Jones, or we will open fire! " Ashley "Fine, shoot me! But you wont win, because I always win! I took on Natalia, Dahlia, Sabryn, I can take on you all!" The officer makes a nod to the other officers and they hold their guns up, and are about to fire…but out of nowhere, Sabryn getting a burst of beastly energy breaks out of her handcuffs and jumps forward, tackling Mike and shoves him down! She grabs his gun before he can stand, and she literally darts towards Ashley's car! While the officers are distraught and don't know what to do, Ashley sees Sabryn in her rear view mirror and again grins as she finally gets out, and she looks at Sabryn! Sabryn, holding Ashley at gunpoint, "Alright, no more games. This ends here." Ashley "This is almost funny. You really think you can kill me? I don't think my sons, both of them, will take too kindly to that!" Sabryn, hearing the cries from the car, "Don't worry, Bryan Jr., your true mommy is coming! Right after I do something that should have been done a long time ago! Do you know how much you've tortured me?! How much I've been put through BECAUSE OF YOU?!" Sabryn takes a shot at Ashley, and it hits her right in the chest, and Ashley stumbles back! Sabryn "That was for sleeping with Bryan!" Ashley, gasping for breathe, "Damn…damn…you…Bryan….lo-loves…me…" Sabryn, shooting her again, "That was for stalking Bryan and me." Ashley coughs up some blood, and Sabryn fires again while the police rush towards her. Sabryn "That was for stealing another baby and trying to pass it off as your's and Bryan's." Sabryn takes yet another shot as Ashley begins to crumble to the ground. Sabryn "That was for crashing my wedding." Sabryn shoots Ashley AGAIN. Sabryn "That was for kidnapping my son!" Sabryn fires another bullet and it hits Ashley's back. Sabryn "That was for me." Sabryn once again shoots her this time in the head. Sabryn "And that-that was just to kill you." Ashley is surrounded by a pool of blood and literally riddled with bullets. She uses the last strength she has to look up and give her arch rival a deathly glare, and she sees the police approaching, and manages to smile one last time, knowing Sabryn will get arrested for this. Ashley "And…now…..I have….my revenge." Sabryn, leaning down to Ashley's ear, "No….I have MINE." Ashley finally collapses, dying from the critical wounds sustained. Sabryn notices she's stopped breathing, and knows that finally, Ashley Jones is dead. She tosses the gun to the ground and gets into Ashley's car, and she notices both babies are still screaming to death, and she grabs her son and shushes him as she heads towards the police with Bryan Jr. in her arms, meeting them halfway to Ashley's car. Sabryn "She's dead. Ashley's finally dead…and I have my son back. I don't care what you do to me…arrest me, whatever…now that I have my son and Ashley can't wreck my life anymore…" One of the policemen take the baby and they rush up to Ashley's car…while one of them reaches in the backseat and gets the other BJ. A little ways away, an officer once again handcuffs Sabryn. Mike "Sabryn Genet, you are under arrest for the murder of Ashley Jones! "
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You have to thank Tara for those Sister patterson scenes in this ep. SHe really did a great Job. Thanks Redd. I am so glad u r enjoying the series. Where's Varied Lives? I just want to give Tara a special thanks in her first solo STEAM episode.
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Who the hell is Jill Kate is all over the place. I guess she wants Tony. a Tony/Anna/kate triangle would be nice. And I cant wait to read the confratation between my two fav ladies, Kate and Vivian Alamain
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Forrest is on a power trip I hope Nicholas getsd him. Wow it been almost a year since I wrote Kristen's rape? Where has time gone Very nice episosd.e I love the Almain infighting. Tehy r their worse enemy. I loved the endig too and glad to see Kristen and Bo getting closer.
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Sorry about Matt. I didnt realize everyone was saying it that much. THis is a triple funeral though Matt I like how Sharan and Daniel look too. Keep your eye on them, I'm, already one step ahead of yoou. Thanks Redd. It's a little hard writing for them at this point as their story develops but it's picking up. Ria's story is about to explode. I am just setting things up( more slower this season) We'll get there. It was only fitting that Lena and Heath be there. They were Jodie's friends. I see they are fan favs so look for them in the future. I have stories for both characters.( Minor though) Rufus will get her day. She's going over to springfield for some time but she will be back. In fact I am setting up her return to STEAM( I am about 6 weeks ahead) Rufus will be come a froce to be reckoned with. A lot of my inspiration for Ashley comes from Sheila Carter from Y&R/B&B. I love writing Ash and her story is not done by a long shot. It will invole many more people and have far reaching efffects. I love my Daniel Durand. Holla at me about him And again thanks to you all these comments are really rewarding for me
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Thanks guys for the very nice comments. Natalia got a hard road ahead. her past will still hautn her. Look out for another twist you never saw coming. It does seem the odds are stacked against Bryan and Sabryn. THis story got lots more twis tto it too. You guys say you know wehre Ashley is headed but come on, this is S.T.E.A.M. do you really? I got you all right where I want you. LOL Thank you Jay esp for the nice comments. I am working really hard in flehing things out. I do what to know why you dont like Sabryn. Your a first and its very interesting as to your reasoning. You like Bryan huh, he got a lot of stuff coming up to. Having babie by two rivals wont be easy at all. I wish you could have seen Ashley in the frist seaon of STEAM Ask Matt. She was crazy then too. I CANT WAIT TO SEE WHAT RUFUS DOES> I MISS HER!!
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HA HA suck on that aubrey. Why don't they just tell Sarah hwo her real mommy is . Why don't Liz just take legal action What is beth getting treated for? Loved the fight between Rocky and Shayne and I feel where Rocky is coming from. Shayne should support him. Im going through something like this in my life right now lol Wow Roxie. She aint plAAyin gno games. Her own brother. She's sick. TELL IT LITTLE SARAH. Help expose your faux mother. Aubrey is a true bitch and i dont like her Hope Sandra is ok. Dont know much about edmunds story yet but nice ending.
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Downtown Pasadena, Pasadena City Jail Mona is standing, pacing in her cell, trying to devise a way to get out of there and back to terrorizing all of her enemies left in Pasadena. However, she looks up when she sees the guard approaching. Guard "You got a visitor. Someone equally as crazy as you: Sister Patterson Williams." Mona "Great, so momma finally decided to come see her daughter." Sister Patterson then walks in , and she has Holy Water and the Bible in hand as the guard leaves. Mona "What the hell do you want?" Sister Pat "Child,…. I could beat you so hard…you are disgracing the Lord and Miss Jenkins is not too pleased with you. I'm your mother, I don't have to want nothing!" Mona "From what I hear, Miss Jenkins isn't happy with you either?" Sister Pat "How did you know about that?! Don't know one talk about Miss Jenkins!" Mona "I hear things. Now if you didn't bring me no weed get out of here." Sister Pat "Kelis, you are my daughter, and the most sinful of my children. You killed my husband, Abe, in one of the most brutal ways possible, you kidnapped my son's girlfriend Sharan, and you committed a great sin coming onto her like you did." Mona "Sharan loves me." Sister Pat "You sinful woman! How did one of my children get so filled with evil?! You are an abomination, as God declares!" Mona "Is that why you let Daddy Dearest rape me?" Sister Pat "Excuse me? That was all Abe, I would never endorse something so sinful and against my Heavenly Father's Holy Word! And for the record, Abe is not your father." Mona "Oh, yea, that's right…so why are you lecturing me? I'm sure God isn't so happy with you either, cheating on him and all…I can't believe for years, I went around thinking that disgusting pig was my father. Then of all people, HE was the one who told me that dried up wanna be pimp DC is my father! So don't get high and mighty on me, Bitch Pat." Sister Pat "I should just come in there and give you the beating you deserve right now!" Mona "I was so excited to meet you…I couldn't wait…Sharan and I were gonna do it together. But she betrayed me and you turned out to be just like Abe! " Sister Pat "I am not like him at all, Kelis-" Mona "That is NOT my name! That is the name of a baby, a little girl, who got raped, raped by a man who thought he was her father! A girl who was raped night after night, day after day!" Sister Pat "But that is no excuse-" Mona "So you'd love men if that happened to you?! They are all pigs! That man who was called Abe made a ritual out of it, he arranged it, he made a ritual out of RAPING HIS DAUGHTER! I don't care if I'm not,….. he thought I was his daughter, so that makes him just as sick! He destroyed me! He made my life a living hell! " Sister Pat "My husband was a dirty, disgusting sinner…and if he was still alive, I would give him some good ole fashion punishment, I would do the Lord's work and show him the consequences…but-" Mona "There is NO buts about it! What did you ever see in that man?! But you could have found me, you could have stopped it! You didn't, though, and now its going to haunt us all, and me, forever! I WILL NEVER FORGET THAT! He deserved to die! You blame me for being gay but what else can I be?! Everytime I'd lie with a man I'd think of him, I'd see him…I'd remember those dark nights…and I didn't get to split into different people like Victoria Lord or Kimberly Brady did…I had to lie tied to that bed…all day, I cried, because I knew that night he'd come. And start it again…" Sister Pat "There's still hope for you, Kelis…repent, repent to God! The Lord will have mercy, to save your soul. You can turn around…We can pray the gay away!" Mona "No. Abe got what he deserved, I don't regret killing him. And I still love Sharan, she's my baby…I will never give her up. I don't regret nothing." Sister Pat "Then you aren't better than Abe at all…" Sister Pat turns and walks away, leaving Mona to sulk in anger… S.T.E.A.M. Episode: 109, Gravely Breakdown Written by: Tara Smith and ML Cooks Huntington Memorial Hospital Kiko walks into Rufus's room. Kiko "You seem to be unable to stay away from hospitals. First you penis got sawed off now you were in a pile up on the highway." Rufus "I was trying to avenge the crimes against me." Kiko "I would really hate to be you now. " Rufus "You're right. I would hate to be me now too. I came to Pasadena, hoping to get may man back but my quest for that has been side tracked by the crazy people of this city." Kiko "I suggest a vacation. Look, I have your release forms here. Get some rest." Kiko then leaves the room. Rufus take a seat on the bed and has flashbacks on the things he's done in Pasadena. The battle he's fought so far, with Ashley, and Natalia. Then Mark walks in the room. Rufus stands up and smiles at him. Mark "I heard about your accident. I came to see if you were ok." Rufus "I am ok. Thank you for coming to see me. That means a lot to me." Mark "I came here to tell you a few things before I leave town." Rufus "You're leaving Pasadena?" Mark "I need to. I can't take living here no more. I need a new beginning. I need to get away from the bad curse that has a hold over me here." Rufus "That's funny, I was just thinking of leaving Pasadena. Maybe we can leave together?" Mark, taking a pause to think about what Rufus said, he then looks into Rufus's eyes, "I've lost everything here in Pasadena. Dahlia, a child I thought was mine. I lost who I was. I am trying to leave my past in the past. Rufus, you know what we had was a one time thing. But I will always remember it….. I need to find out who I am." Rufus "Mark I love you and there isn't anything I would not do for you. But I respect how you feel and maybe hopefully, we can be together one day." Mark "Maybe. You be safe. And I want us to stay in touch." Rufus, smiling, "You do?" Mark "Yes, I'll post a on my myspace in a few weeks on where I am at." Rufus "I'll make sure to check it out." Mark gives Rufus a hug to her surprise. She holds him tight, savoring it because she knows this will be the last hug she receives from the man of her dreams. He pulls back and even kisses Rufus on the lips and then turns around to leave the room and Pasadena. Rufus stands there watching him walking away, wanting to just go out there and stop him. She wipes a tear, and gathers her belongings to. Rufus, talking to himself, "I'm leaving Pasadena too. But I will be back. One day. I still have unfinished business here. Springfield here I come!" Westwood Park, Natalia's House Natalia paces around her living room, trying to process all that's happened in the past few days. Natalia "That bitch Ashley stole my baby…I won't let her get away with this. I've lost everything, I've lost Mark, I lost my son for months, I have lost so many friends…so she's going to lose everything too! " Natalia grabs her coat and goes over to her front door, but as she opens it, she sees Suga in the doorway. Natalia, scowling, "Suga, you are still in Pasadena? Why don't you just leave? You have nothing left here. " Suga "You ain't going nowhere, miss lady. I need more money! I've run out and can't get drugs without it, and let's not forget I stabbed Dahlia for you." Natalia "Oh hell no! You are not getting anymore of my fortune. Dahlia lived. After all that trouble we went to, she lived. And Mark knows that I paid you to stab her, he knows everything, and is out of my life. So you have done nothing for me, in fact because of you I am probably worse than I'd be if I hadn't ever hired you. " Suga "I tried, and that deserves more cash than you shelved out when you first paid me." Natalia "Suga, I am giving you nothing. I have too much on my plate right now without you begging for more money. Just get out of Pasadena before they throw your ass back in jail. " Suga "They ain't gonna throw me back in jail because you are gonna give me my money so I can hide. And if I go down, you go down with me. " Natalia "You just said you wanted it for drugs! You can hide without money, trust me." Suga "I need that money. That man, woman, or whatever that one guy is promised me a lot of money if I came back to this rat hole but I got nothing." Natalia, starting to laugh, "You thought RUFUS would pay you for ratting me out?! You really are stupid. I don't know why I ever hired such a worthless, drug dealing- " Suga grabs Natalia by the arm and pulls her close. Suga "Watch your mouth, miss lady. " Natalia, pulling away, "Get your hands off of me, and step aside! Suga, our partnership is over. You are not getting anymore money, nothing, so leave me the hell alone! " Natalia pushes Suga out of her way and storms off, as Suga growls and clenches her fist. Suga "You're gonna pay for this, nasty Natti. And you're gonna pay good. I'll make sure of that!" Greater Yonders Cemetery Abe Williams' grave is out in the middle of the cemetery, only recently made when he was buried after being killed by Mona. It is dark, quiet, and most of all empty. However, then Sister Patterson emerges, with the Bible and Holy Water in hand. Sister Pat "Hello, Abe…my husband. The man I took vows with in the Holy Church of my Father. The man I had children with. The man I lived happily with for years…the rapist of my daughter." Sister Pat slowly puts the Holy Water down, but keeps the Bible in hand, and leans down in front of Abe's grave and looks at it, specifically where his name is inscribed. Sister Pat "Why did you do it, Abe? How could you do it? How could you do that to my Kelis, our Kelis?! A baby girl, a baby who you stole from me?! " Tears begin flowing down Sister Pat's cheeks. Sister Pat "You made me think she was dead….and you raped her! You molested her! And turned her into the monster she is today! And you did it for years! You cheated on ME, Abe! You cheated on me with my own daughter! I thought I knew you, Abe! I thought I loved you!" Sister Pat stands as she begins to have a complete meltdown, and pours Holy Water all over the gravesite as she continues to scream. Sister Pat "She was just a little girl! Just a baby! YOU RAPED A BABY, AN INFANT! You disobeyed the Lord, you disappointed Miss Jenkins, and betrayed me! I did betray you Abe and I ask for forgiveness of my sins everyday for that, but you are just a sinful little liar! You never confessed it, you never acted like you regretted it! You don't even deserve the water of the Lord! " Sister Pat tosses the cup holding the Holy Water away, and she clenches her fist. Sister Pat "Did you enjoy it, Abe?! Did you have fun?! Lord have mercy! LORD HAVE MERCY! " Sister Pat then begins furiously beating his tombstone with the Bible. Sister Pat "For years, it was men like you I condemned! Little did I know one of those men was my husband! And I never knew! How could I be so stupid?! My Third Eye failed me, Miss Jenkins never even told me! And I was dumb enough to think my daughter was dead, and I trusted you, Abe! I trusted you with the life that God bestowed onto me! Night after night, I never wondered where my husband was…oh he was just molesting Kelis! She could have been a sweet, servant of the Lord, Abe! But now she isn't, and she won't repent! And you caused all of this!" Sister Pat puts the Bible down and actually begins beating the tombstone herself, with her fists, as she breaks down crying. Sister Pat "There are so many dirty pigs, dirty SINNERS, in Pasadena…but you are one of the worst, and the worst man in Pasadena was my husband and the DAMN POLICE CHIEF! And all this got me cussing, but… my own husband RAPED MY BABY, MY ONE DAUGHTER! YOU BASTARD, YOU BASTARD!" Sister Pat continues beating his grave, until she slumps down entirely, her face stained with tears, nose running, and she continues crying and screaming. Sister Pat "I'm sorry, Kelis, I'M SORRY! I'm sorry I couldn't stop him….I'm so sorry…." Downtown Pasadena, Pasadena City Jail Mona sits in her cell, but looks up when Ty walks in. Mona "About damn time. Where have you been?" Ty "Excuse me? I am a busy man, and I didn't exactly know you wanted me down here." Mona "Don't be playing dumb with me! You heard about me getting thrown in here, I'm sure, and its taken you this long to haul your rich ass down here?" Ty "I have had other people to take care of…Lauren Roman won't kill herself, you know." Mona "Oh so you killed Danny boy's hoochy?" Ty "Yes, she turned Daniel against me and for that she had to die." Mona "Speaking of dying, that pig Abe is dead. I did it for my own reasons but you should consider it a favor. You wanted him out the way." Ty "Well they replaced him with Mike. So my ultimate goal of having my own person be the chief of police failed." Mona "Oh boohoo…remember in prison I hold all these cards and would have no problem giving them all to the police. I can expose you for all the crimes you've done, I can expose Ashley…." Ty "You were working with that psycho?" Mona "Yea, I was. But that's none of your business. Now you see, you wanted the Williams family taken out, so do I…but yet none of them have died except Abe who I had to kill myself. You had enough time to kill Lauren, you can at least kill one of them, or get me out of this hell hole. I am going to get rid of them all and get my Sharan back. I think I see what happened to her now, why she wouldn't love me: My mother brainwashed her." Ty "Oh please, don't go on and on to me about your crush." Mona "Sharan is more than just a crush, you bastard! You are just like all those other men. Sharan is my baby, my true love, but after talking to my mother I see that she, and probably my brother Kevin, have brainwashed her, and I need to get out of here so I can break it." Ty "Alright, alright, I'll see what I can do." Mona "No, no you won't "see what you can do". You WILL get me out of here. Or else everyone will know about your crimes, and I also won't mind telling them that you killed that Lauren girl." Ty "Fine, just shut the hell up and stop making empty threats." Mona, scowling, "You don't talk to me like that. " Ty "I don't have time for this…but I'll figure out a way to get you out." Mona, as Ty walks away, "You had better. And next time you decide to pay me another stupid visit ,at least bring me some weed. " The Blue Note Ria and Kiko are on a date, having dinner. Ria will occasionally make moves towards Kiko but he'll stop her. Kiko "You know I don't want funny business here. Not tonight, at least." Ria "I know, I know, I just can't resist you…maybe just a lil piece?" Kiko "NO!" Ria "Fine, but I just don't get why you resist me so much. I attract any and all men. I'm like the black Blanche Devuruax from the Golden Girls" Kiko "Because you slept with my brother Dre. Behind your fiancée's back." Ria "Dre gives some good sex, but I'd much rather you-" Kiko "How your and Dre's affair happened is one reason, another reason is that I can't steal my brother's woman. I don't get down with sloppy seconds" Ria "Excuse me? I am not Dre's woman! And ain't nothing sloppy here. " Kiko "But you can't be stealing your bro's woman. Its like that, you don't take their ex." Ria "I don't care about Dre no more, and I don't think he'd care either." Kiko "No, just no. And Ria, I'm sorry, but I just can't trust you." Ria, spitting out her drink "Say what now?" Kiko "You sleep around with men all the time…and you cheated on Karim while you were engaged to him…who's to say you won't do that to me?" Ria "Now I love some good sex, but I'll get all I need with you. " Kiko "So you'd only be in it for the sex?" Ria "No, would you stop tearing apart my words?! Kiko, you're special to me. Really special. You're a one of a kind man. " Kiko "You've said that about Karim, too." Ria "I won't lie: Karim has a special place in my heart, he is special. But I am over him, and you are even more special than Karim. Kiko, if you were just some random man, I wouldn't have pursued you for so long." Kiko "You make a good point." Ria "Listen, Kiko, I want you. For more than just some one night stand. I want you for life. And don't go all disagreeing either, I got enough problems with my momma and sister." Kiko, chuckling, "Oh, I heard Patti LaBelle was in town." Ria "She's not all that. She's just a nosey old bat who needs to go back to Hollywood or wherever the hell she came from. Or if she stays in Pasadena she needs to stay away from me and stop flaunting around singing with that other old crow Sister Pat. I am so sick of her." Kiko "Com on now, I think your mother loves you." Ria "Says you. You know your momma, Kiko?" Kiko, pausing for a moment, "Yeah…but lets discuss that another time." Ria "Ooooh, look like my man's got a secret." Kiko, almost laughing, "Nah, nah…no secrets here. Now, lets just finish eating." Ria shrugs and they both finish up their dinner as Ria wonders if Kiko has any secrets indeed. He seems too perfect… Lavender Hill Sabryn and Ashley are both still for a moment as they look at each other after one of them groans in pain, and Sabryn looks down to see if either one of them are hurt, but Ashley suddenly kicks Sabryn, and Sabryn goes flying back! Ashley "I knew you'd fall for that! You're so stupid, Sabryn!" Sabryn screams and then charges at Ashley, and grabs her by the neck, and shoves her up against the wall. She begins to strangle Ashley, and Ashley tries to break free but Sabryn has a deathly grip on her, and Ashley begins to gasp for air. Sabryn "I am not letting you escape this time!" Ashley becomes desperate as she continues gasping, and she puts all her strength into it and tosses Sabryn to the ground, and she then leans against the wall as she breathes heavily. Ashley "Out of all the people I hate in this damn town…I hate you the most….you are the worst out of Natalia, that man who pretends to be a woman, Rufus, Dahlia, everyone! You got Bryan, you got a son, you got a huge mansion, a company…YOU HAD EVERYTHING I DON'T! WHY DAMNIT?! WHY DID YOU, QUEEN SABRYN, GET EVERYTHING YOU EVER WANTED?!?!?!?!?!!?!?!?!?" Sabryn, getting up and looking at Ashley, "I'm not listening to this. I don't care about your pity party anymore or whatever crap you dish out. All of this is your fault, no one else's, and I am done! No more games!" Ashley "Fine then, you don't want anymore games, then lets get serious!" Ashley once again rushes towards Sabryn and grabs her by the hair and throws her towards Bryan Jr's crib as the baby begins crying, and Sabryn manages to catch herself and she comes back at Ashley, and she begins slapping her and punching her uncontrollably! Ashley tries to block her but Sabryn's rage is untamed, and she punches Ashley right in her mouth and finally, Ashley trips and falls to the ground, and after a moment it seems that she is finally unconscious. Sabryn, taking a breath, "Finally…at last…" Sabryn begins to walk towards Bryan Jr's crib to see if her baby is alright, but before she does, suddenly Ashley's eyes shoot open and she trips Sabryn, and Sabryn begins to fall as Ashley jumps up and laughs, successfully tricking Sabryn again. As Sabryn goes flying down Ashley takes her knife and grabs Sabryn by the hair and twirls her around, and sends her knife flying into Sabryn's stomach! Sabryn screams like a banshee and crumbles to the ground, as Ashley goes over to Bryan Jr. and picks him up. Ashley "Shhhh…Momma's here…ding dong the witch is gone! You thought you could beat me, Sabryn?! Its my time, I now have two wonderful children and soon Bryan will be mine! YOU'VE LOST! I WIN! I WIN! It is true what President Obama said, YES I CAN!!! AND I DID!!!" Ashley then walks out smugly with Sabryn's son in her arms, and she leaves the mansion effectively kidnapping Sabryn's son. Shortly afterwards, however, Sabryn regains consciousness and she looks into the crib, and tears begin to pour out of her eyes, and she silently walks throughout the halls of her mansion, and then slowly as she clutches her stomach, she walks down the stairs, and once she is downstairs, she approaches a cabinet, and as she opens it…she takes out…a gun!!!! Sabryn "This is it…the last straw…I'm ending all of this…ALL of it…this is the end…" Next on S.T.E.A.M.: A FINAL showdown leads to DEATH!!!!!
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What a great episode. I loved what Destiny did for Will And I love how Abe got an ornament. I alos loved the catfight. They r dumb for fighting though and I love the scene wehre carrie reached out to Sami. This may be a good time for them to patch things up. Funny how u get more comments after I leave this sereis, lol.
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Episode#279: The Nightmare Couple Before Christmas
aMLCproduction commented on daysfan's blog entry in Life in Salem
I love how everyone is catching onto Greta and starting to wonder where the hell are nicole and Jan. I also really like Justin and Belles scene. It was very nice -
WOW couldn'ty Elvis just stop the wedding with words. He wanted to blow up the church. WOW. Loved the Jeremy scenes.
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LOL You just answered my quetion. It is Annie. I paid close attetion to your previews. PS there a lot of typos in these last few entries
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I like the idea of Rocky becoming a cop The Ice skating date was cute but they came out of now whre. i think its taking too long to fit in all your characters. Like weeks. Kuz some of these folks I am like who in the hellis this. Is david black mixxed or white? A NAKED GUS LORD HAVE MERCY. He must be packing if Olivia i more drawn to him. I loved that poker game. So Aubrey will enlist Sandra's help? Ol dirty Bitch
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It does really sound good. I am most concered for Rocky and Shayne Seems like they r headed for a break up I bet Annie will end up the CEo of Spaulding/\......
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I dnt think Doris is new but damn her story came out of no where where has she been? Good job rafe. ha take that Aubrey. Tiwst of fate. Looks like you wont be scheming to keep Jon after all. Slut bucket I love the scene witht he power coupkles and I cant wait for thi tory to unfold. I loved Mel's and Beth's catty exchange LOL i knew Olivia and Gud were headed to strip poker. I was i WAS olivia right now. Gus is fine I remeber him on Another World Oh come on Rafe and Aubrey Two losers. get a life. Whos baby is that really Liz's? Welcome back Ash. So glad u r back
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I am not to keen on Jefferey and Marah pairing He looks like her dad DAMN BLAKE why are you so scared of Remy. You better claim your man before Ria does How did Rusty become cheif of police so fast. Didnt he just arrive in town? And is this Mayor a new character? OOh that Aubrey I would have slapped the taste out her mouth if I was Liz. Wow what did Doris do and what a great way for Ash and sexxy Coop to come back to springfield A shorter epiode and I loved that. i am reading so many blogs these day it getting harder to keep up. Haven't seen you in my neck of the woods lately. What's good. You're going to Miss Remy's cross over
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Thank God Brooke is not worried about a peice of D!CK no more. It's about time she realizes she dont need a man at all times adjouned to her on her hip What is Tawny and Scamber up to? And she's even posing as Pauls sister? Good one. Nice to see Jack and Paul in this series And Paul needs Ash to marry him; I like that and they would look goo together!! I hope Brooke holds true to her words and dont run back to Nick PLEASE LET THEITR BE A GOD! Don't be a slut no more Brooke!! And how can Donna plan her sisters life like that. Brooke said no more men! Another good episode
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Night Falls on Pasadena Lavender Hill Ashley pulls into Sabryn's driveway. She looks in the baby seat and sees Bryan Jr. asleep. "You wait right here little one. Mommy is going to grab your brother." Ashley gets out her car and creeps over toward the mansion. Just like last time when she broke in, she lucks up as the patio door has been left open. Ashley walks insides the darkened house. She creeps toward the stairs as she pulls out a butcher knife. She slowly walks up stairs to get closer to Sabryn's son's room. Once she finally reaches her destination, she looks around to make sure the coast is clear. She opens the door slightly and slowly and steps inside. She sees the baby crib and walks over to it and sees Sabryn and Bryan's son sleeping peacefully. Ashley speaks to the baby, "We are going on a field trip sweet face. You are going with me, your new mother and your brother. We are going to be one happy family." As Ashley is about to lean down and pick him up, the door swings open with the light coming on. Ashley, startled, jumps as she turns around and sees Sabryn. Sabryn "What the hell are you doing here Ashley?" Ashley "I was going to kidnap your son. But I think killing you first will be much better." She says with a smile, pulling out her butcher knife from her purse, frightening Sabryn. S.T.E.A.M. Episode: 108 Amend! Written By: ML Cooks and Tara Smith with JL Becker Can I Get A Witness West Coast Baptist Church As Lauren lays in her coffin pretending to be dead, Jenn walks up to her with a saddened look in her eyes. Jenn "I don't know how this happened to you Lauren. It was so sudden. I hope Ty didn't do this to you. I hope he didn't kill you. However, I want you to know I'm sorry for hurting you; I hurt you by being with Ty. You warned me over and over again about Ty. You kept telling me he was a criminal and he's no good. Well you were right. I am just so sorry it took me so long to realize it . I wish you were still here so I could really tell you. I bet you would have been happy. Well, I at least hope so. .. "She pauses, getting a little teary eyed. She wipes a tear. Jenn "I guess I've done some horrible things lately. Do I feel bad for what I did to Jodie? I don't know. I really don't. I am sure there is a spot in hell for me. I love you Lauren and may you rest in peace." She turns around and sees Ty standing there, having overheard everything she said to Lauren. Jenn gets shivers in her body as Ty has this blank look on his face. Jenn "You scared me." Ty "I should. Let's step outside. I want to talk with you in private." Jenn takes a deep breath as she wonders if Ty will beat her once she gets out side. Against her gut feeling, she follows him outside anyhow. Sitting down, Santino has his eye on Jenn and Tyler and wonders what Ty is going to do to Jenn. Caring about her, he decides to keep a low profile and follows them. Ria walks up to Sharan. Sharan "The last time I saw you, we almost got into a physical confrontation at Ashley's funeral." Ria " Yeah because you opened you big mouth about Dre and I. All because you wanted Dre for yourself. You're a fake and a phony. I hope you told Kevin about the kissing incident with you and Dre." Sharan "Don't worry about Kevin and I." Ria "Trick please. You was all up in mine with Karim. I loved him and you took that away from me." Sharan "You did that all by yourself, you cheated on Karim with Dre, not me." Ria "Well what do you call kissing Dre? Oh, wait, there's a double standard going on here." Sharan "Kissing Dre was wrong. I know that. I never meant for it to happen. It was a mistake. But there is a difference between you and I. A few in fact. first of all, you wanted to cheat Karim. You intended to. My escapade with Dre was spontaneous. Second of all, I didn't get caught. I'm not sloppy with mine." Ria "I oughta slap the sh!t out you Bitch. I was trying to mend the fences with you but I am good on all that. Miss Saditty. Don't think you're better than me." Sharan "Never said I did. But for you to think that says a lot, Thanks Ria." Ria "Girl, you better pump your brakes. Don't test me in here. I will put my pimp hand to that face." Sharan "Ria, grow up." Ria "I did. Right after I told Kevin I saw you and Dre kissing." Ria winks her eye at Sharan and coolly walks off. Sharan, face cringing, "I can't believe her." Outside the Church Jenn and Ty walk around the garden with Santino discretely following them. Ty "So why do I have to over hear your conversation with a dead woman to really know how you feel about me?" Jenn "Ty I am sorry. We never have time to talk anymore and when we do, you don't want to talk or something always comes up." Ty "I am busy making you happy. Buying you expensive things. Giving you the things you want. I have an empire to run. I have to fight to keep the cops off my back." Jenn "But Ty I told you, all those material things don't mean anything to me. I just want you. You make me happy. Not clothes and vacations. We are engaged to be married; We have been engaged for months now and we haven't said nothing about a wedding. I feel as if sometimes you don't love me." Ty "I do love you Jenn. Do you know how much I had to go through to be with you. Getting rid of Mike. That was no easy task." Jenn I am not a prize Ty. I am a woman who wants to be loved. It was so great in the beginning. So passionate. So romantic. All that has disappeared. You've become this person I don't know anymore. " Ty "What are you saying? You're going to leave me like all them other suckers did?" Jenn "No Baby." In a distance, Santino is a little hurt and confused. He wonders how Jenn could tell Tyler she cares about him yet, days ago she told Santino she cares about him as well. Having enough with the reunion of Jenn and Ty, Tino walks back into the church. Jenn "I love you and I want this to work out. But I am scared of you at times." Ty "I already know what you are about to say. The time I shot you and I beat you when you came back from Cleveland." Jenn "Yes. I have never really dealt with those things. I feel uneasy when I am around you at times. If you truly love me, I shouldn't have to feel like that. I want this to work. But we have to make some changes." Ty "What kind of changes?" Jenn "I want you to show me you love me. I want to feel it. Actions speaks louder than words Ty. I just want to be loved." Ty grabs her and holds her. Ty, looking into Jenn's eyes, with passion and remorse, "I am so sorry Jennifer. I'll be a better man to you. I promise I will love you better. And I won't put my hands on you ever again." Jenn, pulling back and looking into his eyes "You really promise?" Ty "I do." They lean in and kiss, Jenn, fearing what will come next, hesitantly kisses him. Back inside the church Alexis walks up to Karim. Alexis "How are you holding up?" Karim "Not good at all. My pops is in heaven or maybe even hell at this point. I miss my pops." Alexis holds him. Karim, continuing "And I can't get what my mother said to us at the door." Alexis, rolling her eyes knowing where Karim is about to take this conversation. Karim "Alexis, I am going to ask you again. Are you hiding something from me? Just about every one in my life has lied to me. Including my mother, my dead pops and my ex fiancée. I hope I don't have to add you to the list." Alexis "I am not hiding nothing, I can assure you that." Karim "I can't believe I am about to say this. And I know it's going to sound strange even coming from me. But in some sick way, my mom's third eye never lies. Since I was a child, that eye of hers, always saw things that no one else did. She said you were hiding something." Alexis, thinking of how she knew Ashley was alive this whole time and that Ashley has been working with Karim's half sister, public enemy number one, Mona, still lies to Karim's face. "I don't want to be disrespectful. But there is a first time for everything. I am not hiding anything from you. I know how many people have hurt you in your life with lies. I am not going to do that to you . I love you. With all my heart." Karim "I just don't know. You act like you're having an affair. Late night phone calls, and your strange actions. Those are the same things Ria did. You're acting the way she did when she was cheating on me." Alexis "What do I have to do for you to believe me? Would you like me to take a lie detector test. I am more than willingly too." Karim "There's no need for that. We shouldn't even have to take it there. You should be able to convince me that you're not cheating. My heart is telling me something else and no test is going to change that. Only you can. Your actions. In any case, if you are hiding something, it will come out, just like my mother said." Before Alexis can respond, she is brushed aside by LaDonna, who hugs Karim. Ladonna "I am so sorry for you loss Karim." Karim "Thank you LaDonna. I really appreciate you being here." Alexis "Excuse me! We were in the middle of a conversation. And you're just gonna be rude and barge right in." Karim "Alexis please. Why are you always attacking LaDonna?" LaDonna "It's ok Karim. It just goes to show you how shallow Alexis is." She says turning around and smirking at Alexis, "Get a hold of yourself woman. This is a funeral and the only thing you're worried about who is trying to rub up on your man. It' all about you huh? Why are so jealous of me? I barely even know you. You're paranoid. I almost feel sorry for Karim that he has to be with you. May God be with you Karim." And with that so boldly spoken, LaDonna walks away. Alexis "Karim, I don't like her! Why do you let her talk to me like that?" Karim "You attacked her for no reason. She was defending herself. Grow up and worry about your secrets." Karim walks away from Alexis, with a look of disgust. Ty walks back in the church with Jennifer and sees Daniel and then looks at Jenn. Ty "I am going to have a chat with Daniel. Can you grab us a seat, I think this funeral is finally going to get started?" Jenn "Ok." She walks away, with a puzzling look on her face. Ty walks over to Daniel. Daniel visibly unhappy to see Ty, "I know you are not here to mourn Lauren. You hated her." Ty "I am really sorry for what's happened." Daniel "Give me a break, I really don't need your fake pity right now." Ty "What has gotten into you man? You're on the defense. We used to be like brothers. And now you act like you don't even know me anymore. What gives? Have I done something?" Daniel "Getting involved in your lifestyle was the biggest mistake of my life. I got hooked on drugs, treated Lauren horrible and we all know what Mona did to me. I almost died several times thanks to Mona. And it stems from you. We were all working together And you're the one who told me to help her out. Well I couldn't. She took it as double crossing her and that's the reason she did everything she did to me." Ty "Wow, I had no idea. Why are you just now telling me? We could have put a stop to Mona months ago. She wasn't supposed to do all those thing to you, we were only to take out the Williams family." Daniel, looks at Ty with disgust in his eyes. "She's an unstable mess, I've lost to much working with you Ty. I lost the woman I loved. I bet it's because of Mona. Mona probably killed Lauren before stopping Sabryn and Bryan's wedding. And to be honest, I think it's time you experience some losses to ." Ty looks confused at what Daniel said. "Come again?" Daniel "You're not invincible Ty. One day, you will be caught and exposed. Your dirty deed will come to light, you can bet on that." Ty "You say that as if you wish it would happen sooner rather than later." Daniel "You're right." Ty "Wow, Thanks…Brother." Daniel "Don't call me that ever again. You were just brainwashing me. A brother wouldn't have done what you did to me." Ty "I can't believe I am hearing this. You really want nothing to do with me?" Daniel "I thought you understood that the last time we met. I almost knocked the living sh!t of you Ty until the wannabe Santino stepped in the way." Ty "And to think, I came over to lend a hand. I was going to offer you some work since you lost Lauren, it would have taken your mind of things. I was going to help you find out who shot her. But clearly you don't want that. I'll just be on my way then. But you remember one thing Danny boy, you're either with me, or against me. You have chosen your path so may God have Mercy on your soul when my people come for you." Ty walks off as Daniel thinks of Tyler's words. Sister Patterson walks up to the podium to get the funerals finally started. She looks out at all the mourners who have come to pay their respect for either Jodie, Lauren, or Abe. She wipes a tear falling from her face as she begins her sermon. Sister Patterson "Oh Happy Day!" She looks out into the crowd waiting for a response but she doesn't get one so she says it again, only louder. "CAN I GET A OH HAPPY DAY IN MY GOD"S HOUSE!?" Everyone hesitantly responds with it, not knowing how this could be a happy day. Sister Patterson "We are here dear Lord to pay our respect for Sister Lauren. Sister Lauren was a dear soul. Many people have these misconceptions about her but I want to set the record straight. I'm gonna do it right HERE! And I want to do it right now! Can I get an Amend!" A few people say it back. Sister Patterson, wanting more fire and passion from the crowd says it again, "CAN I GET AN AMEND IN MY GOD"S HOUSE?" Crowd AMEND!" Sister Patterson "Sister Lauren, when she thought she lost Daniel to my baby girl Kelis, Lord Have Mercy, I still don't understand how or why. But Believe me. My God will give me the answers I seek. I will not render evil for evil. Dear Sister Lauren, yes, she moved on with Chris, another departed soul, thanks to my daughter-" She pauses, as she realizes just how truly demented her daughter really is. She bows her head for a moment so she can pull herself back together again. She looks up and continues "Lauren, was lost, confused and lonely. She got with Chris thinking Daniel was really dead. Some people call her a slut." Everyone gasps at Sister Patterson using that tone in her God's house. Sister Patterson "She is no slut I tell you! She is to be liked and loved. And I don't want to hear it no other way. We lost Lauren and her new child and it's so sad that an angel was taken away from us so soon. But at least we can take to heart that she is in a much better place, safe with our God away from the hurt and pain here on Earth, and I ask our heavenly father to keep her safe up there with him. God needed an Angel, so he took her from us. So if any one see a man named Matt P on the streets, you tell him that I said, Sister Lauren is no slut. " Daniel, standing up in an outrage "That's enough DAMN IT There is no need for you to be talking like that about Laruen!" Sister Patterson, looking at Daniel and grabbing the microphone out it's holder and walks around the podium to confront Daniel, grabbing a bible she tosses it at Daniel but it misses. "Brother Daniel, I don't want to hear that kind of talk in this house. There were some myths and misconceptions about sister Lauren and I wanted to set the record straight. I'm trying to help you're slut- oops I mean Lauren out! But I'll move to sister Jodie." Sister Patterson walks into the crowd, over to Jenn. She looks at her sternly. "Everyone see this face here?" She looks around and waits for an answer. Once again she has to act a fool to get attention from the crowd. "I said, DOES EVERYONE SEE THIS FACE OF UGLY AND EVILNESS?" Crowd "YES!" Jenn's face begins to turn red, "Sister Patterson, please don't do this." Sister Pat "I don't want to hear that you evil devil. What you did to Sister Jodie was horrific. How could you black mail Jodie with her HIV status. Then you tried to expose it and call her hoe card in front of everyone at the fashion show!" Jenn tries standing up and walking out the church but Sister Patterson pushes her back down. Sister Pat "No. I don't think so. You need to hear this. You will not render evil with evil, Lord Have Mercy. You will pay for your sins one way or another. Everyone here in this house knows what you did. Jodie was already fighting the battle of her life and you made things no better." Jenn "Please, you hypocrite! Didn't you cheat on your husband with his own brother?" The church becomes silent. Sister Patterson is caught off guard for a moment and the church goers wonder how will the sister respond. Sister Patterson looks into Jenn's eyes "Should I tell this church, right here and right now, what my third eye knows? You know that I know that me and you know and that we all could soon know what latest sin you've committed." Sister Patterson then looks at Ty "When you get home son, ask your fiancée here about her and Santino." With that said Sister Patterson walks back up to the podium. Jenn is absolutely flabbergasted as Ty looks at her with bewildered eyes. Santino who is sitting behind them, begins to sweat as Ty looks at him wondering what the Sister is talking about. Sister Patterson, looking out onto the crowd, "A lot of yens been trying to throw rocks at my glass house. Well yens know what? I got something to say! And Guess What? Crowd "You're going to say it and you're going to say it now!" Sister Patterson "Amend! Now listen carefully. I only know how to speak the truth! Yes I've committed a sin. Yes I hurt my family and YES I am SORRY. We are all human and temptation does get the better of us. I had the devil in me. Yens hear me? Can I get an Amend!" Crowd "Amend" Sister Patterson "I will not have it no more. I am still on the battlefield of sin, fighting the devil at every turn and corner. I rebuke you devil! Devil I SAID GET THE HELL OUT OF HERE!!! DO YOU HERE ME?!" She says jumping up and down. Sister Patterson "I break all curses that have been placed against me. The devil was inserted into my late husband and the devil had fun. I don't understand why or how this is happening to my family. But Lord I want you to know I bind, rebuke and bring to no effect, all division, discord and disunity within my family. The Williams have a lot of healing to do but I know Lord, through you and my third eye, we will beat that devil. May God rest all these precious souls in peace. One last thing Lord I need to address." Everyone in the crowd rolls their eyes. Sister Patterson "I want everyone in this house to know that I break the power of negative words and attitudes coming out the mouths of the people in my house. Ria, you're a dirty slut and I now declare this funeral over. Can I get a witness?" Then Patti Labelle comes out from the back and begins to sing "Oh Happy Day" as Sister Patterson gets the Holy ghost and periodically joins in with Patti Labelle, singing the song with her infamous wolf howls. Lavender Hill Ashley and Sabryn stand face to face, beside Bryan Jr's crib, and Sabryn looks like she is about to explode. Her anger has boiled over with Ashley and everything that has happened. Sabryn "I am so sick of you! For how many years now, you have tried to screw up the relationship between Bryan and I? You crashed my wedding. You tried to steal Bryan from me. You stole Natalia's child. You stole my son's name, and now you want to steal my son! I don't know who's worse: You or Natalia." Ashley "You should be thanking me, I got rid of Natalia for you. " Sabryn "Excuse me? " Ashley "I shot her at the fashion show. " Sabryn "What the hell? That was you?! You shot her?! I'm on the suspect list for that, you probably wanted me to go to jail for shooting her! " Ashley "Ha! I wanted to deal with you myself, and I have my own problems with Natalia. My only regret is that she didn't die. But I made up for it with Dahlia. Poor girl. " Sabryn "Dahlia Salem? What the hell did you possibly do to her? " Ashley "She tried to foil my plans, so I killed her…it was so fun. Watching that train crush her bones…" Sabryn, widens her eyes with a disturbed look on her face. "Are you kidding me? That's it, I've had enough of you flaunting around this town. You are truly sick, Ashley. You have become so severed from reality." Ashley "I think you have confused me with yourself." Sabryn "You somehow think that having Natalia's baby and claiming it as yours will help you get Bryan back. You think he's just going to fall in love with you? Bryan is a pig but you… you have gone totally nuts! You just think that you can kill me and get Bryan, get my son, and Natalia's or whoever the hell's baby that is?" Ashley "Bryan Jr. is MY baby, Sabryn, MINE! He is not Natalia's, he is mine, and your son will be too! I am their mother now! And you are the crazy one, you think Bryan is yours, when he's mine!! ALL OF THEM ARE MINE DAMNIT! " Sabryn "I don't give a damn about Bryan but you will not steal my son. Never. Ashley, you are so pathetic its almost sad. You have no one, you have to take other people's children to give yourself a family, and scheme your way into getting Bryan. I almost, almost feel bad for you. " Ashley, getting very angry as she holds the butcher knife , "I…AM…NOT….CRAZY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU BIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIITCH! " Ashley takes a huge leap at Sabryn with her butcher knife in hand, and tackles Sabryn to the ground! Ashley laughs crazily as she pins Sabryn down and holds the knife over her head, about to stab her, but Sabryn lifts her knees and kicks Ashley off of her, and Ashley grunts as she hits the ground as Sabryn gets up and grabs Ashley by the hair, pulling her up. Sabryn "You want a fight?! I'll give it to you, psycho!" Ashley elbows Sabryn in the stomach and then turns around and takes a stab at her, but Sabryn grabs a hold of the knife at the last minute. A struggle ensues for the knife, and they both begin pulling it towards each other, and it only gets more intense, and then one of them suddenly groans in pain! Next on S.T.E.A.M.: Sister Patterson has a gravely breakdown!
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Poor Taylor. It's a shame how Nick was talking to her. I can't stand Brooke. I hope you undo the unjust things BEll does in your version. I also like the scene with Jackie and Eric and Eric wanting the compnay back That Amber is always sceheming I am sure Karm will come back to her Wow Massimo is going to die. Why is Brooke seeing James? Good episode I hope we get to see more. It makes its very hard to read the way you write it. Very hard on the eyes. If you like maybe bolden the character's name before the speak that would be so awesome