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  1. Jay can I ask how old u r?
  2. dont miss my edited comments ab ove jay u candelete this post after reading this
  3. So much mystery on FTL. WHO in the hell kidnapped EDmund LMAO My God I love Rufus's dialog. It's so funny. Esp the boys and nick names. I SO LOVE THIS JAY!!! Nice to see that Alan has changed!! I hope it's last. Shayne making Marah "BIB" I am not LIKING THIS ONE BIT. Shayne is leading her on LOL RUe and Shayne, I love it Marinia better back up and Shayne better too. I dont like them getting back together Olivia really is bossing around Harley Letting her know the boundries. WOW I had to laugh at Rafe pulling out the baby bump. It wass funny. So she is faking that pregnacy [!@#$%^&*] BETH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! What the hell? A GREAT SHOCKER NEVER SAW THAT COMING!! Why would she do that
  4. LOVED THAT SCENE WITH HARLEY and Dinah. And how Belinda was looking back at her. GREAT DRAMAS LMAOLMAOLMAO I loved Rufus's dialog in that first scene and it's interesting that he is working with Sandra. I CANT WAIT TO SEE WHERE this goes. When Rufus comes back to Pasdena, he wont forget his springfield adventrue for sure. LIZARD Spaulding I like that one too MEOW Dinah vs Harley. These scenes are BRILLIANT. GREAT JOB JAY> I [!@#$%^&*] love it I am not liking Marah at all! I LOVE RUFUS IN SPRINGFIELD I like his dialog u r giving him. I CANT WAIT TILL I GET HIM back and this story is so fitting sine he was already ceo of Divine Design in Pasadena. Maybe we can hook up and do some more cross overs. Rufus will be jumping back into fashion when he gets back DAMN IT WHAT THE HELL HAPPEND TO COOP AND ASH? Great job in the build up for this. I can't wait to FINALLY find out Ahh poor Mindy and Rick wow i feel so bad for them. I bet She is going to confront Roxie!! LOVE LOVE LOVE this baby drama with Belinda and Harley. It's so emotional. GREAT JOB JAY!!!!
  5. Sorry I havent been reading. I am going through so much right now. It's good to see Michelle and Bill again LOL, Why do all of harley's kids disrespect her like that. How old is Belinda? Rusty and Melinda are hot. I love these kinds of STEAMy affairs. Love that Annie twist. I can't wait till she comes back. SHe isn't even on yet but I can't wait till she is. It;'s going to be huge a I know it Wow Poor Rick, First Beth and Now Mindy. Funny how Rixie was standing there when Rusty walked out. What is the difference between Roxie and Annie? I like the end scene with Belinda though I never knew Harley adopted Belinda. Eithe r I am not paying attetion, I missed it or it'c clear out the blue. Kant wait to see where this story goes
  6. I wonder what Eguniea is up to and y is she clinging to Lucas all of a sudden And I wonder if Victor will go after Stefano now. ANDRE IS VALENTINE”S HUBBY!!!??? OH MY!!!
  7. i show miss VL!!! Paging Redd! Can we get an update on when the next ep will come out?
  8. Yea Greta it sure is a crime wave going on here in Salem. I can’t belive Billie didn’t know what that sound was. SHE was a cop. And yes Kate, when did u become a killer. Of course this is not right what u r doingYou are destroying your grandson’s chances at getting his grand duaghter back YOU big dummy. I can’t wait to see how Stefano will react to Galore shooting PETER and not Tony.
  9. What a great episode. LIS is really getting Violent lately. From Steven and Helena and them to Greta and now Crsytal. WOW. Maybe Val isn’t leaving after all. I HOPE NOT!!!!! I love her. I really feel bad for BO. He I really being takenn advantage of lately. I LOVE GRETA. I can’t belive she stabbed Alexis. She reminds me of Ashley from STEAM. She has realy lost it and I cant wait to see how thi plays out And I already know who crystal shot since some one opened up their yappers to me. So no surprise there!!
  10. I love this insane Greta. I have never been a fan of her but he is so interesting as a mad woman with rabies. Every scene she is in I am on the edge of my seat wonder what in the hell she is going to do next. Now her sights are on Alexis. Will she be meeting the secret room as well? That would be fun!! I was kinda of happy when Anna got knocked the hell out. In fact it was funny. I do wonder who held her at gun point. I wonder what Megan is up to. Nice cliffhanger
  11. Forrest is a complete ASS. He is so choked up with this buissness he’s lost sight of what’s really important. He needs to take a brake and rehcarge his battery and make amends with the people he’s hurting and stop being a jerk. He cant take on the Dimera’s by himself. He’ll need held. Like his brother and Billie. Please tell me Valetine is not leaving? I am surprised she is trying to leave anyway. The person I created is gutless and never scared, esp not her washed up sister Vivian. Valetine and PETER would make A NICE COUPLE!!!! I am o sick of Anna and Tony. It’s sickening! And DO I see a Dimera vs. Titian war. THAT WILL BE good and I wonder hhow VIV plans to get it Revenge is rampant there here lately!
  12. I so love that Vivian has taken over Alamin. It's great seeing the rest of them tossed out. I wonder what will ahppen next
  13. Doesn’t greta have rabies, what ever happened to that? And again Love that Vivian took over. Wonder what’s up with Jan being preggos?
  14. -Can’t Belive Jan is preggos. Vivian showing up at Almain was nice and shocking. Can’t wait to see what she pulls. And it’s VERY nice to see that carrie belives in her sister, esp after everything sh’e done to carrie
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    TWO CUTS!

    Good bye and don’t come back!!!!
  16. Good I hope we don’t have to hear about this Helena mess no more. I am not nor have I ever been big fans of steve and Kayla and to be honet I am getting overdosed in seeing them. ERIC is so stupid. Why would he tell Greta all his business and even her name Alexis. He should have been more discrete or make a commercial the next time he does something. Makes wonder if greta will put alexis down in the secret room too. I love Nicholas and I cant belive Billie had the nerver to ask him to help forrest. Yea right. I hope Titian takes over Alamin. Would serve forrest right. And Hes stupid too kuz if he was smart he could have used Belle as a pawn piece against Victor.
  17. I cant wait till this Helena saga is OVER And Crystal is so stupid, if Stefano can have his own son killed, what , u think he wont do nothing to u. I wish crstaly would not be doing this. I don’t know whyt I feel pitty for her. I don’t understand why Jill slpet with Bo
  18. Good episode . I feel so bad for Peter. Why is everyone being so mean to him? I loved the ending scene. I know Helena shot her son. that’s shocking. Andit was so good to See abe and even better to see him bond with bo
  19. Huntington Memorial Hospital Paramedics rush Karim into the E.R. as LaDonna follows closely behind. LaDonna "Please save him!" She shouts to the medical team with tears in her eyes. Just then Kevin and Sister Patterson with Madea right behind them walks up to LaDonna. Sister Patterson "I want to know what happened to my son and you better tell me now!" LaDonna "He was in an accident. Ashley hit his car and Karim was ejected and thrown mid air and Sabryn ran over him." Sister Patterson falls to her knees after all of that registers in her brain, "Lord why? Devil can't you leave me lone'?" Madea, looking at LaDonna, "Where's my grandson son now honey?" Ladonna "He's in the E.R." Kevin has tears in his eyes as he turns around and looks at the wall. "Damn I can't lose my brother too." Madea walks over to Kevin and gives him a hug. "I know it's hard honey. But it's gone be alright. It's gone get worse before it gets better." Kevin looks at his mother with hatred in his eyes. "Everything was just fine until you started sleeping around. I hate you and I wish I was never born to you." After saying that hurtful statement, Kevin walks away. Madea looks at her daughter, "You have single handedly destroyed your family. All the things you've done to me and your family are finally catching up to you. You are a disgrace. An ugly one at that." Sister Patterson "Don't talk to me like that Miss Jenkins. That's why I locked you up in the first place. All those mean and evil things you would say to me on a daily basis. It made me insane." Madea "Honey you are insane and so is your daughter. And you will pay for keeping me cooped up in my own damn house for all these years. You're going to be behind bars right with Kelis. It's a shame you'll get to know your long lost daughter behind bars." Then the doctor walks out of Karim's room. Sister Patterson "How is my baby boy? Is he ok?" Episode: 111; The Diary Written by ML Cooks and Tara Smith Creative Consult: J. Lee Becker The Jump Off Ria is sitting next to Remy at the bar. Ria "That's a nice name you have." Remy, smiling, "Thank you." Ria "I know just about everyone here in Pasadena. But I don't think I've seen you around here." Remy "You're right. I flew in here to Pasadena for the National Terrorism Training that Police Chief Mike Dietz is hosting. " Ria "Oh yea , like those terrorist attacks in India. I was so mad when they cut into my stories. I was watching Guiding Light in fact. You know the show with the ugly green walls in the hospital. Makes me fee like I am in a jungle." Remy, laughing, "Well I am sorry to hear that." Ria "So you're a cop huh?" Remy "I am indeed." Ria "That's sexy. How long will you be in my city and what city do you come from?" Remy "I'm from Springfield, Illinois." Ria "You a long way from home. I bet it even snows there." Remy "It does. We just had a big blizzard a few weeks ago." Ria "Wow. I've never seen snow before." Remy "Interesting. You'll have to. It's quite nice to look at it fall but it's a bitch to drive in." Ria "So I assume some one as fine as you have a girlfriend already?" Remy, thinking of Blake, and even missing her but realizes she doesn't want him. "Well, I did. But she's not ready for a man like me. I think Blake was too scared to let us be happy with one another. I think me being younger than her was a factor." Ria "Blake? Oh hell naw. That sounds like a white woman's name." Remy "Uhm, she's a human. I don't look at things in color. But yes she is white." Ria "Oh God help me. I can't stand white people." Remy "That's really a shame. " Ria "Chile' please. Do you know how hard the white man makes it for us? The slaves built the white house how many some years ago and look at how long it took to get some one with color in it. Hell Obama is only half white." Remy "This conversation was going good until you just said that. I think we should change the subject. I was raised to respect everyone. This is 2009 It's time to let the racism go." Ria "Uhm hmm. I like you. A lot. Let's order some drinks." They both order another round of drinks from the bartender. Downtown Pasadena, City Jail Sabryn is put into a cell with Mona as Bryan walks up to them. Bryan "Sabryn, what in the hell happened?" Sabryn "I killed that crazy bitch. That's what happened and I am not sorry she's dead. The battle is over; I won the war." Bryan "What about our son? You're in jail and he needs you the most right now." Sabryn "I don't care. I finally ended all of Ashley's madness. She can't get to me no more." Mona, interjecting, "I can't believe Ashley is dead. " Sabryn and Bryan look at her. Bryan "How do you know Ashley?" Mona "We were working together." Bryan "You were working with her while she was stalking us?" Mona "Sure was. I was there when she kidnapped Natalia's baby." Sabryn is reminded that Bryan also fathered Natalia's child. "Oh please don't go there." She turns around and sits on her cot. Bryan "Sabryn this does not look good for you at all. You repeatedly shot Ashley over and over again." Sabryn "It's your fault. She would not leave me the hell alone!.... She tried to take our son away from us. I was not going to let her do that to us. She had to be stopped. She came back from the dead once before so this time I made sure there is no coming back. Now my son won't have to worry about that monster no more." Bryan "Where is our son?" Sabryn "The police took him after they put me in the cruiser. I would assume Children Services has him now." Bryan "I am going to get him. And then find out when your bail hearing is." Sabryn "Bryan give it up. I don't want you helping me. And you better not touch my son." Bryan "Sabryn he is mine son too so you're just going to have to get used to it. I am going to get our son and then I'll be back." Bryan leaves. Sabryn, hollering out after him, "You better not touch my son you dirty Bastard! I don't want my son growing up like you!. A cheating pig!" Bryan ignores her as he walks off. Mona "So you hate Bryan huh? That's the spirit. I hate all men; they are all lying pigs. You should have shot Bryan. Kill all the men of the world." Sabryn turns around and looks at Mona. As the reality begins to set in she drops to her knees and begins crying. "I shot Ashley. She's finally out of my life. I don't have to worry about her no more. I can now sleep in peace at night." Mona "Ashley may be dead, but now what about your son? You may be behind bars for the rest of your life. That means Bryan will have a chance to raise BJ to be just like him." Sabryn "That will never happen. I will get out of here. I won't spend the rest of my life in here and away from my son. I'm the good one here." Mona "Do you think the judge will say that after you shot Ashley 7 times?" Sabryn "It doesn't matter, as long as I know Ashley won't be taunting me no more. Ashley is gone forever.!" Huntington Memorial Hospital Jasmine is in her brand new office, and Daniel walks in, ready for his first appointment. Jasmine "Daniel, so glad you could make it. Please, take a seat." Daniel, going to sit down on the sofa, "Thanks." Jasmine, sitting down on a chair and taking a clipboard, "Now…tell me, how did Lauren's death affect you?" Daniel "I…I don't know how to describe it. Doctor, my life has been a living hell. And I'm not kidding. I have been tortured so much, but…Lauren was the one bright spot. And she was pregnant. Both of them were my last hope, the last thing that made me happy in life. And maybe they were the first thing…but now they are gone…Lauren's death broke me." Jasmine "How about you tell me a little about that past of yours? It seems to be a great burden on you." Daniel "I don't think you want to know. Listen, this is pointless-" Jasmine "No, Daniel, you need this. I'm here to help you. Trust me." Daniel "I can't trust anyone. I'm sorry, but I can't. Not after my father, Ty…" Jasmine "Your father? How about you tell me about him, then? Why you can't trust him?" Daniel "Because he was never around…my mom died in child birth, so I never even got to know her. I lived with my dad, but he was hardly ever there…when he did, he was always drunk, and I don't think I ever had a tender moment or anything with him. I don't know if I can even say I had a father. " Jasmine "I never got to know my father, either…in fact I don't even know who he is." Daniel "Don't act like you understand or sympathize, because you don't. You just don't. No one can. NO ONE. No one knows what I went through, no one knows how much I have been tormented. I've always been alone, no one was ever there until I met Ty. And in the end, he showed his true colors. And then there was Lauren. She's dead. Have you ever been thrown in a dungeon by a crazy woman?" Jasmine "Well, no-" Daniel "Ever been presumed dead? Ever had a man go to death row and get EXECUTED when you really were alive?!" Jasmine, sighing, "No, I haven't." Daniel "Yeah, I thought so. I really should get going-" Jasmine "No, you're not going anywhere. Daniel, after this talk, I am even more determined to help you. So now, tell me more about this Ty person." Daniel "Well…Ty's a crime lord…when I first met him, in rehab, he was the one person I think I could consider a friend. No, not a friend, a brother. The first real family member I had…we met while we were both in rehab for addictions, because all my life since my dad did drugs, I didn't know any better…I didn't know that doing drugs was so wrong until it was too late…or so I thought. Ty was there too, we swapped our life stories, and found comfort in each other…we were bro's… but then I figured out he was just tricking me the whole time, because after we got out he made me his right hand man…he just wanted me for his dirty work in the mob. Ty is nothing but a malicious pig, a criminal. But Lauren was enough for me…and then she died." Jasmine "It seems like you've been through a lot…but you've survived a lot, so that means you can get through this." Daniel "No, no, I'm on the edge of my rope." Jasmine "Daniel, think about what Lauren would want…I never knew her, but would she really want you like this? Depressed?" Daniel "But-" Jasmine "But nothing! Lauren's up there, watching down on you, and she, and I, know you can get through this…so I am going to make sure you get through this, no matter what it takes!" Westwood Park, Dre's House Kiko walks inside his brother's house. Kiko "Lauren, it's me Kiko." Lauren comes out from the back bedroom. Lauren "It's so good to see someone. It's lonely here. I don't know if I can remain hiding until my baby is born." Kiko "You're gonna have too. Our lives are at stake. You and Dre involved me in this fake death plot. I had no choice in it. And now there is no going back. We could die. Tyler will kill us!" Lauren "I know and I am sorry. You have no idea what this is doing to me. I miss Daniel so much. I think he's already moving on with some one else." Kiko "Can you blame him? I hope you don't think he will not move on with his life." Lauren "I don't expect him not to. It's just hard thinking about the man I love being with some one else." Kiko "Well let me ask you this, how did Daniel take it when he found out you moved on with Chris and is having his baby?" Lauren "He was hurt. And I felt so bad so I guess I can't expect him to wait for me. And I can't even say that. He thinks I am dead. I feel so bad for doing this to him. But I have to." Kiko "No you don't. Just turn Ty into the police and end all of this now. How do you think Daniel will feel when he finds out that you faked your death? If I was him I would be furious. All the pain I would have gone through in burying the woman I love." Lauren "Setting up Ty isn't the only reason why I faked my death." Kiko "I don't understand." Lauren "Kiko, right before Daniel came back from Mona's dungeon, I had a one night stand with Kevin." Kiko "Wow. " Lauren "And I really don't know if this child I am carrying is Chris's or Kevin's" Kiko "I can't believe I am hearing this. That's why Sister Patterson kept saying you weren't a slut at the funeral." Lauren "Oh I heard it all. I am just glad her third eye didn't realize that I was really alive in my coffin." Kiko "So ok, I don't understand how not knowing who's baby this is helped you to decide to fake your death.' Lauren "If this is Kevin's child, I am going to give it up. I don't think Daniel can handle finding out I slept with Kevin and bore him a child. It would devastate him." Kiko "How do you know that? You haven't even given him a chance to handle it. Lauren, you are playing with peoples lives and you will get burned. I can't believe I just heard you say you are going to give up this precious child if it doesn't turn out the way you want. It's sad and almost sick, and I have lost respect for you." Lauren "I know it's wrong Kiko. You don't have to read me the riot act. I am on an emotional roller coaster. I am so depressed that all this is happening. I take no joy in doing what I am doing." Kiko "Then you have the choice to end it." Lauren "It's too late. We are in this to deep." Kiko "I just came here to give you a check up. I really need to leave here." He sits her down and pulls out a few things from his medical bag. Kiko "I got some equipment coming over here. It's a mammogram and a few other medical devices so we can check on this baby." Lauren "Thank you so much. I am 6 months pregnant and I've never had a mammogram or nothing. We need to know if my child is ok." Kiko "Is there a reason why it would not be?" Lauren, pausing, feeling guilty about what she is about to say, "I was drinking heavily early in the pregnancy. Before I knew I was with child." Kiko, shaking his head back and forth, "That's not good at all." Back at the Hospital Alexis walks up to LaDonna, Madea, Sister Patterson and Kevin. Ladonna stepping out from the crowd to confront her. "It's because of you! You did this!" Sister Patterson "What you talking child?" LaDonna "Alexis was arguing with Karim. She thinks I want her man. She has been arguing with Karim for weeks about me. I've told her each and every time I don't want Karim. But you don't listen and now look at what you've done. You made Karim so upset, he stormed out of Ivory. I hope you're happy now Alexis. I hope this gives you the proof you need that I don't want your man. Are you happy you caused this accident?" Alexis then slaps Ladonna across the face. Before Ladonna could attack Alexis like she has been wanting too for the last few weeks, Sister Patterson jumps in Alexis face. "I knew it! I knew you were evil. And I can't believe I am out here without my bible or my Holy water. I would just drench you right now in that holy water if I could. My son is not a liar. The devil is; just like you. My son says what he means and means what he says. I know for a fact you are hiding something from my son. And it will come out, and when it does, may the Lord let me have Mercy on your soul. " Madea "That's enough. This is about Karim right now. You always got to make everything about you don't you?! All this ring-a-maroe don't make no sense. Now doctor, tell us how my grandson is?" Doctor " Karim has suffered blunt force trauma to his head. He's lost massive amounts of blood and he will need a blood transfusion immediately. I assume you are his family members?" Madea "We are doctor and I want to be the first one to offer my blood. Where do I go?" Doctor "I have a nurse waiting in room 111. " Madea, looking at her family, "Well come on. Let's go save Karim. " Kevin, with tears in his eyes, "I can't lose my brother. I can't take much more of this." Madea once again holds her grandson as Sister Patterson looks on in envy, wishing it was her being there for her son. She walks off quietly to donate blood for Karim. Alexis walk off some ways from the mourning family wiping tears that are falling down her face. She is spun around by LaDonna. LaDonna "I really hope when Karim pulls through this, he leaves you high and dry. I hope he realizes what kind of person you really are." Alexis "You did a great job turning Karim's family against me." LaDonna "You did that all by yourself. You and your pathetic accusations. Are you that jealous of me? Are you that insecure?" Alexis "I wouldn't have to be if you would just keep your hands off of him. Every time I walk into a room, you're gazing at him or massaging his shoulders. You do want Karim just admit it." LaDonna "You're just so pathetic. I agree with Sister Patterson, you are hiding something and it will come out." Then Mike walks up to Alexis. Mike "Ashley, I am so sorry for your loss." Alexis "I'm not following you. Karim is not dead." Mike "You must not of heard yet." Alexis "Heard what?' Mike "Ashley has been killed. Ashley hit Karim's car on the highway." Alexis "What? My sister is dead? Who killed her?!" Mike "Sabryn." Alexis begins to bawl her eyes out, "This can't be happening. What the hell was Ashley doing?" Mike hands Alexis a book. Alexis "What's this?" Mike "We found this in Ashley's car. It's her diary. I thought you might like to have it." Alexis is stunned, not thinking her sister was that deep to keep a diary. Alexis instantly wonders if her helping out her sister is in it. Alexis "Thanks Mike." Mike "Let me know if you learn anything." Alexis "I will." LaDonna, under her breath, "Yea right." Mike "How's Karim?" Alexis "Not good." Mike "I'll keep him in my prayers. I got to get down to the station." Mike then leaves. Alexis turns around and sees Ladonna still hovering around her. Alexis "Would you please stop stalking me!?" LaDonna "Never. Not until I find out what you are hiding. And I bet it's in Ashley's diary." Back at The Police Station Mona is sitting in her cell, thinking about how great it would feel to smoke some weed right now. Then her thoughts are interrupted when she hears "Hello daughter" She stands up and sees her real father DC. Mona and DC are about to meet for the first time, A father and his long lost daughter reunited……….
  20. YES YES for Steve. I bet Kayla was horrified. She should have been called the popo instead of saying it. Dummy and now look Helena is there with a gun. It was nice to see Will and Destiny. In fact it is always nice to see them and now Stefano is going to make a deal with Crsytal to kill Tony. Uhm Hmm.
  21. It’s about damn time Steve. I cant wait until this story is over / It was a long time coming. I cant stand Forrest. He is an ass. I think they all should elect a new ceo. Almain is still spining out of control. They need a new leader
  22. -Glad to see Sami is not going to walloww for herself. She is going to fight. I’ve always loved the feistier side of Sami. I hate how She is now on DOOL. When Stefano was going to the K Mansion I thought he was going to meet Vocitr and a showsown was next. But he met with Kate and instead and now is going to take out Tony. I cant belive Kate is doing this. When did she become a renegade. Bout time Steve makes his escape
  23. -Glad to see Sami is not going to walloww for herself. She is going to fight. I’ve always loved the feistier side of Sami. I hate how She is now on DOOL. When Stefano was going to the K Mansion I thought he was going to meet Vocitr and a showsown was next. But he met with Kate and instead and now is going to take out Tony. I cant belive Kate is doing this. When did she become a renegade. Bout time Steve makes his escape
  24. -Glad to see Sami is not going to walloww for herself. She is going to fight. I’ve always loved the feistier side of Sami. I hate how She is now on DOOL. When Stefano was going to the K Mansion I thought he was going to meet Vocitr and a showsown was next. But he met with Kate and instead and now is going to take out Tony. I cant belive Kate is doing this. When did she become a renegade. Bout time Steve makes his escape
  25. Agood episode. SO Stefano and Kate are teaming up huh. This will be good. I like d Stefano in this ep. He reminds of TGVN. Alexis and Eric, I like and what a surprise. But damn they just met, and she was just trying to get in Jermey good graces, Now she going home with him. Miss hot pants. Jill has other plans I see, Wonder how this will unfold…
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