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  1. Wow what a bold woman. How didn't she know Jim was a police officer or something. I am asuming Jim slept in because he got drunk. Another good episode. Again and as always you have such a strong cast. I would love to write for novi.
  2. Poor Poor Jim. I really feel so bad for him. Loved how Sterling is holding all the cards and not Carol and nem.( Loved tha name by the way...Sterling) Reminds me of the person from the Tom Jouyner Morning Show, that soap opera they be having, it's your world. LoL. Very good epiode and I didn't think the Mc Gregor's would be voted out.
  3. Very solid episode. Very good. The Grant storyline seem very interesting. Still loving the Shayne/Rocky/Reva slumber party story. And that damn Susan. She is by far you're most interesting character you have. Kep up the great work
  4. Downtown Pasadena S.G. Building Sabryn sits behind her desk and enjoys her rose. The door opens. Lucien, the founder and owner of Red Haute, a successful online magazine, enters the room. Lucien “Wow!” Sabryn gets up from her chair. Sabryn “Lucien, you’re right on time.” She extends her hand to shake his as she walks around the desk. Lucien “Look at you. You look great. And my dear, may I ask...who are all these flowers from?” Sabryn “The men in my life. Shall we start?” Lucien “Absolutely.” Sabryn and Lucien sit down on the sofa. He pulls out his note pad and pen. Lucien “First and foremost, how's your little one?” Sabryn “He’s just adorable. Words can’t describe...” Sabryn's eyes begin watering with tears of joy. Sabryn “I can’t think of a time in my life when I’ve been happier. He is a miracle...my miracle.” Meanwhile back on Lavender Hill Sabryn‘s mansion Ashley picks up a pillow from the sofa and stands over the baby. Ashley “You know, I really don't want to do this. If there was any other way, trust me, it’s...it’s nothing against you. It’s just that your bitch of a mother and you...you’re obstacles... I mean, I know, you’re just a baby...there’s no way you know what I’m talking about, but let me try to explain anyway...obstacles, well, they must be eliminated, you know, dealt with. It’s too bad that you happen to be one of them. She touches the baby's face. Her cold finger gives him a chill. He moves and rolls on his back. Slowly he opens his gorgeous brown eyes. Ashley “I want to show you something.” Ashley pulls out a picture of Bryan Jr., the 1st. Ashley “See this little boy. He’s your brother. You want your brother to be happy, don’t you?” The baby smiles. Ashley “Yes, I know you do. Forgive me...” She pushes the pillow as hard as she can on the baby's face. Suddenly, the door knobs turns. She stops and looks back at the direction of the door. Ashley “Daddy's coming...” Ashley throws the pillow on the sofa. The picture of her baby falls into the crib as she races out of the window. Bryan walks into the room. Bryan looks at the baby picture. He doesn’t realize that he is looking at his other son. Bryan “What the hell?” Back at the office, Lucien wraps up the interview with Sabryn. Lucien “So what do you and Bryan talk about in bed?” Sabryn (smiling) “Lucien... you know I can’t tell you.” Lucien “One last word...the wedding dress...can I see it?” Sabryn “That my dear, you’ll have to wait and see tomorrow. But I will tell you one thing...I’ve never been prouder of a collection than I am of this new line. I know this will put some new life and excitement into the fashion world and I can't wait for its unveiling!” Sabryn stands up. Sabryn Now, off the record, do you have time for lunch...to catch up? Lucien “Yes, it would be my pleasure.” Lucien gets up and folds his note book. Together they head toward the door when Gilbert walks in. Gilbert “Hi...” Sabryn stops cold and looks Gilbert directly in the eyes. There’s tension and Lucien notices the odd stares between them. He senses there's something going on, something wrong. Lucien “My, my... this is turning out better than I thought!” Episode 95: Low Budget Affair Written by ML Cooks, Durand Saint Hialire and Tara Smith with Miou Slater The Williams House Sister Pat is still sitting on the floor crying while she holds the Bible in her hands. DC is gone. Sister Pat “Miss Jenkins, Miss Jenkins, please speak to me. I’ve got no one else to turn to!” Kevin bursts in, steaming with anger. Sister Pat looks at him. Kevin “I can’t believe you did this!” Sister Pat “What are you talking about?! I don’t have time for you right now!” Kevin “Make time. Pops walked in on you and DC. So you did sleep with him again, even after how you tried to make me and Karim think you were all sorry for it.” Sister Pat “Lord have Mercy, I know I have sinned. I keep praying to the Lord and Miss Jenkins for forgiveness.” Kevin “I don’t want to hear about Miss Jenkins! Now, because of you, Pops hates me and Karim! He wouldn’t even listen to what I had to say. It’s all your fault!” Sister Pat “Oh Lord, what have I done…” Kevin “You don’t need to wait for the Lord to tell you. Let me tell you what you’ve done! You took yet another thing away from me. I didn’t tell him to protect you... and you went off and did this. I don’t know where Sharan is... and now I don’t have a father. He was one of the last people I still had. And now, he’s now gone! All because of you screwing up. You are such a hypocrite. You’re always judging everyone in town, preaching for them to repent! What right do you have? You’re no better than anyone else!” Sister Pat “Boy, you can’t speak to me like this!” Kevin “I’ll speak to you whatever way I damned well please, Sister Pat!” Sister Pat “So, now I’m not your mother?” Kevin “No, you’re not. My real mother...she’s not a complete psycho like the pathetic excuse of a woman that stands in front of me.” Sister Pat “How dare you! Yes, I did sin, I sinned a lot. But don’t think you can speak to me like this in front of the eyes of God and of Miss Jenkins!” Kevin “Miss Jenkins?! Stop it, stop it right now with your Miss Jenkins rambling crap! You sound like a psycho every time you say her name, do know that? Do you realize how nuts you sound? You are the craziest of the crazy in this town. People have been calling you a crazy bat for a long time. And you know what? Now, I agree with them.” Sister Pat grabs her Bible. Sister Pat “That’s it. You won’t talk to your mother like that.” Kevin “You’re absolutely right about that. I won’t because this is the last time I’m ever going to set eyes on you. Goodbye, Sister Patterson.” Kevin, still angry, turns his back to her and leaves. Sister Pat cries in horror as she watches him leave. She has lost her husband and her son. Downtown Pasadena, Ivory Inc Karim is in his chemistry lab. He is mixing chemicals for his new low-budget cologne line for low-end retailers. He takes a sniff of the test tube. Karim “That smells damn good, if I do say so myself. Now to think of the right name for it.” Ladonna, his secretary, walks in. Ladonna “Sorry to bother you, but..” He interrupts her. Karim “Come over here. Smell this.” Ladonna walks over to him and takes a sniff of the test tube Ladonna “Smells good, but I’ve got to be honest, it smells cheap.” Karim “Indeed it does. My uncle said he wanted a fragrance named after him and here it is, DC.” Ladonna laughs. Ladonna “This just arrived for you.” She hands him a card. Karim “Thank you. I’m just about done here. You can take the rest of the day off if you want.” Ladonna “Thank you, Mr. Williams.” She leaves. Karim opens the card and reads it. “I had a wonderful time last night, chocolate daddy. Wanting you, Alexis” Karim smiles as he flashes back to the passion he served up to Alexis. His sexual thoughts are interrupted when DC walks into the lab. Karim “It’s a good thing you’re here. I made a fragrance, just for you.” DC “That’s nice nephew, but I have something to say.” Karim “I’m not going to like this, am I? OK, I’m listening.” DC “Your old man knows about your mother and me.” Karim “What do you mean? How would he know?” DC “He walked in on us when we were...” Karim “You nasty bastard.” Karim swings at DC. DC instinctively ducks. He’s beginning to get good at predicting when one of his relatives is about to hit him. DC “Didn’t know an old man could move so fast? I’m too quick for you. Ya’ll need to stop hitting on an old man.” Karim “Quit trying to destroy my family! Why don’t you leave us alone? Just leave Pasadena and never come back. You have done nothing but become a nuisance to everyone since the day you stepped foot into this damned city. You are not welcome here.” Karim storms out of his lab. Don is left standing alone. He reflects on what just happened. In an undisclosed location. Ashley walks into the room where Mona, Sharan and Bryan Jr., the 1st are. Mona “It’s about damn time you got back here. What happened?” Ashley “I saw the man that I love and his bastard baby with Sabryn. That child, he’s so ugly. I almost killed it until my man walked in.” Sharan “You were going to kill an innocent baby?” Ashley “No one’s talking to you?” Mona “Don’t speak to her like that.” Ashley “You’re a fool” Mona “Say what?” Ashley “I see right through Sharan’s phony concern for you. She’s lying through her teeth so she can plan her escape. Isn’t that what you’re doing Sharan? You don’t really love Mona. Admit it.” Sharan face gets hot. She knows Ashley is telling the truth. Sharan “Why don’t you ask Kelis if she thinks I love her.” Mona “That’s enough. I have too much to do. Sharan loves me.” Ashley “Untie her then. If you really think Sharan loves you, then you should be able to trust her. Go ahead, untie her.” Ashley’s suggestion stuns Sharan. Mona slowly moves to untie Sharan from the chair. She wants to prove that she does trust her. Ashley, looking at Sharan “I’ve got my eye on you. Don’t try any funny business.” Mona “Listen to her baby. I have to run a few errands.’ Sharan “Wait! What about confronting your father and meeting your mother? That’s what we talked about on the island. I told you that I would stand by you.” Ashley “Give it up.” Mona “I need to take care of a few things first.” Sharan “Let me come with you.” Mona “I’ll be back” Mona leaves the room. Ashley (looking at Sharan) “Drop the act. It’s just me and you here now. You’re playing games with Mona and I’ll prove it.” Back at S.G. Sabryn “Lucien, thanks for coming. I will see you in the morning, at my wedding.” Lucien hugs Sabryn Lucien “Indeed, you will.” He leaves. Sabryn (speaking to Gilbert) “I am glad you came by. We need to talk.” She ushers him into her office. Gilbert “Congratulations on your new baby.” Sabryn “Thank you. About what you said before my water broke...” Gilbert “Yeah, about that...listen, I’m sorry. Just forget it. I don’t know what I was thinking. I shouldn’t have said anything.” Sabryn “You’re sure full of surprises. One minute you confess that you love me. Now you’re saying it was a mistake.” Gilbert “Again, I apologize. That’s the reason I’m here right now. I’m willing to hand in my resignation.” Sabryn “No, you can’t do that. You are my good friend, Gilly. You made a mistake, an error in judgment. I’m willing to move on if you are.” Gilbert (smiling) “I am.” Sabryn “Good. I have a favor to ask of you.” Gilbert “Shoot.” Sabryn “Well, since Sharan is still missing in action, will you be my bridesmaid? I can’t do this with out you.” Gilbert “This is a joke, right?” The Jump Off Abe drinks his 5th Heineken as he thinks of the day’s events. The image of his brother getting it on with his wife...in his own house. Learning that not only had they been having an affair for years but that Kelis, the daughter he thought of as his own, was actually his brother’s...it all started to make sense to him. Pat pushed him away when she became pregnant with Kelis because she felt guilty. Abe remembered every detail...no sex, no passion, no romance when Pat found out about her last pregnancy. Abe realizes he blamed Kelis for nothing. Everything he did was for nothing. “Looks like you lost your puppy.” When he hears that familiar voice, chills go up Abe’s spine and his hair stands up on end. He turns to his right and sees his daughter. This time, no black veil covers her identity. Mona “Surprise, I’m home.” Abe remembers how dangerous his daughter can be. Abe (chugs the last of his beer) “I am done with this. I’m ready.” Mona “Ready for the big payback?” Abe “There’s no escaping it. I’ve lost everything. I am ready to reap what I have sown.” Mona “You’re making this too easy. How boring! I won’t be able to try out my new weapon on you. But that’s OK, I’ll save them for later, pops.” She pulls out a gun and jams it into his side. Mona “Move quietly.” Abe gets up off the bar stool. He’s complicit in his own kidnapping. The time has come for Mona’s big payback.
  5. On the West Coast of the United States, Ashley walks up to the beaches of California. She sees Mona walking out of the water like swamp thing used to do back in the 80’s. Ashley “It’s about time you decided to come back to Pasadena. Things have to be done. We are losing time. Abe,…. Sabryn.” Mona “I had to get Sharan to fall in love with me. You know Miss Lady comes first.” Ashley “Well I hope mission was accomplished” Mona “Indeed. But no need to worry, I got Sharan to love me and it’s now time for the final phase of my plans, the last chapter, the last hurrah.” Ashley “Sound like you’re going to die?” Mona “I can’t guarantee that, but people will die in Pasadena. That’s for sure. It’ time for the big payback. “ Ashley “That’s what I like to hear? Where do we start first?” Mona “First I need updates on everyone. And we got to find a place to lay low. Daniel and Ty are after me. And I need to plant a Mary Garden. “ Ashley “A who?” Mona, heading towards Ashley’s car “Nothing, just drive.” Ashley “Wait a minute, where is Sharan?” S.T.E.A.M. Episode: 94, Swamp Thing Written by ML Cooks, and Durand Saint Hilaire Westwood Park, Kevin’ House Abe pounds on his sons door. Kevin, opening his door “Pops, what’s going on?” Abe enters the house, “I know about your mother and Don.” Kevin “Oh no, how did you find out?” Abe “I walked in on them.” Kevin “Pops I am so sorry.” Abe “Are you really? You know what hurt the most? The fact that you and your brother knew about this and did not come and tell me’ Kevin “I was torn. Either I hurt my mom and tell you she’s cheating or hurt you and not say anything. I was stuck between a rock and hard place. I was put in the middle here” Abe “It’s not that hard. You should have come to me when you first found out. I can’t believe my whole family ha betrayed me like this. Everything I knew is no more. Did you even know the sister you lost at birth was my brother’s child?” Kevin “That I didn’t know. Pops I am sorry. I didn’t mean to keep this from you. This has been eating me up on the inside since I first found out…… I didn’t do this. I didn’t cheat on you, moms did. What would you have done if you were in my shoes?” Abe, ignoring his son’s question “How long have you known about this?” Kevin “For a few weeks.” Abe “A few weeks! I can’t believe this. My family….. What is happening? I can’t believe this is happening. My wife and my brother. All these years.” Abe shakes his head as a tear forms in his eye. Kevin “Pops I am really sorry you have to deal with this.” Abe “I don’t want to hear anything you have to say. You should have come and told me when you first found out. I don’t know my own family anymore.” Abe begins to walk out the house. Kevin “Pops, man I am sorry. Listen to me.” Abe does not want to hear it and leaves his son’s house with out saying another word. Kevin “Damn Pat and DC.” He says grabbing his keys, getting ready to head to his mom’s house. Lavender Hill Karim, who was taking a swim in his indoor pool, gets out upon hearing his door bell ring. Wearing a seedo, he opens the door to see Alexis. Alexis eyeballs his nicely cut body and can‘t help but to notice his bulging family jewels. Alexis “Just want a woman fresh out of jail wants to see.” Karim, smiling “How’d you know where I moved to?” Alexis “It was not that hard to find you. You are a public figure after all. And I love you Karim. May I come in?” Karim, hesitantly lets her in. As she walks in she looks around and admires the beauty of his new mansion. Alexis “I see Ivory must be really doing well. With this lovely mansion, you would never be able to tell the U.S. economy was in shambles right now.” Karim “I had some money put aside. I used what I saved for my wedding with Ria and the honey moon that was to follow. But we all know how that turned out.” Alexis “She cheated on you with Dondre.” Karim “She lied to me just like you lied to me.” Alexis “Karim, I did not lie to you. In time you will come to see that.” Karim “Make that time now. Tell me why you didn’t fess up that you killed your own sister? You let Sabryn sit in jail needlessly for that crime.” Alexis “I didn’t know what I hit that night. I was in a huge u-haul, it was dark and stormy and I thought it was a curb or something. The courts believe me, otherwise I would not be here right now talking to you.” Karim “I’ve been deceived by the women I know and loved to many times. Ria, you, my own mother.” Alexis “Sister Patterson? What is going on?” Karim “It’s something I can’t talk about right now. Not until the right people know.’ Alexis “See there. We have something in common. I can’t tell you , or I should say I can’t talk about my innocence just yet. Some things need to happen before I can speak. “ Karim “See, that just don’t sound right. What kind of things?” Alexis “I don’t want to talk about that.” She says walking closer to him. “I am a woman in need. My body is yearning.’ She says seductively caressing his chest and abs. She then cups his crotch in her hand. “I need you daddy. I want you inside of me.” She kisses him and he gives in to her passion and kisses her back. He picks her up and she wraps her legs around him. “I’ve missed you chocolate daddy.” Karim “I’ve missed you to.” He says kissing her continually. Back on the Beach Mona “She’s right over there?” She says pointing toward a palm tree Ashley “Why do you have her tied up to a tree?” Mona “I don’t know if I can trust her yet. I was afraid as soon as she realized she was in Pasadena, she would take off and my plans for revenge would be ruined. I will not chance anything at this point.” Ashley “It looks like she is dead.” Mona “Not at all, just my special potion, I call sleep aid. Bring the car over and lets go. I need to smoke.” Ashley shakes her head but goes get her car as Mona walks over to Sharan and unties her from the palm tree. TC Hotel Dre walks into Ty’s office. Ty “Is Lauren dead yet?” Dre “Things have changed.” Ty “Your assignment did not. I paid you for a job.” Dre “Lauren is pregnant. I can’t kill a pregnant woman.” Ty “Pregnant? That was fast. Daniel wasn‘t plying no games.” Dre “It’s not even Daniel’s child.” Ty “Chris is the father?” Dre, keeping the info on Lauren and Kevin for himself “Yea man.” Ty “How does Daniel feel about this?” Dre “He’s pretty hurt.” Ty “Is he going to stand by Lauren?” Dre “It seemed that way.” Ty “Then she has to die. I don’t care if she’s having a baby. She has brainwashed Daniel against me and she has to be taken out. She has been a thorn in my side for far too long.” Dre “I’ma keep it real, I don’t feel comfortable killing a pregnant woman.” Ty “You either kill Lauren, or I am going to kill you.” Dre “Why don’t you kill Lauren yourself if it’s that serious?” Ty, reaching into his desk drawer and pulling out a gun and aiming it at Dre “How about I kill you right now?” Dre, smiling, pulling out a gun from is coat pocket and aiming it at Ty, “It aint going down like that homey” Ty is stunned that one of his own henchmen is holding a gun on him. In an undisclosed location Mona is about to light up her drug stick when Ashley stops her, “Please don’t smoke in front of my baby.’ Mona “You’re baby?” Ashley “The baby ok? It doesn’t matter, this child will make Bryan and I a family.” Mona “Men are so overrated.” Ashley “Then you need to see what Bryan has in his pants.” Mona “Say that to me ever again and I will cut that tongue out and shove it up your ass!.” Ashley “Sorry. I forget about your father.” Mona “No, Call him Abe. He is no father to me. What kind of man takes his daughter and molest her years and years on end? He took me away from her, making her believe I was dead. I don’t even know my own mother. I don’t know what having a family is even like. That Bastard took that chance away from me. And for that, he will pay.” Sharan, laying on a bed, begins to wake up. She opens her eyes and is stunned to see Ashley. She screams. Mona covers Sharan’s hand with her mouth as Bryan Jr the 1st begins to cry. Ashley “See what you did?” Mona “Its ok baby. Calm down.” She says as she removes her hand from Sharan’s mouth. Sharan “Ashley? I thought you were dead. Bryan ran you over with his car. I went to your funeral.” Ashley “Surprise!” Sharan “So you two are working together?” Ashley “It doesn’t matter.” Sharan “Mona, how can we begin to get serious if you can’t trust me enough to tell me what’s going on? Where are we anyway?” Mona “Pasadena” Sharan’s heart stops as her chances of freedom has just been served to her on a silver platter. She tells herself to still play cool and not alert Mona to any suspicion. She has to keep this game up as Ashley leaves the ecret compound. Westwood Park Ria opens her door after hearing her door bell and she is stunned to see Karl Hutchins at her door step. “What is a rich man like you doing in these parts?” Karl “Victoria Winters. It’s nice to formally meet you. May I come in?” Ria, wondering what Karl is up to, and a little weary , “Yea that would be nice. You can help me eat this chicken and dumplings I made.” Karl, laughing, following her into the house “Some soul cooking. Sounds great” He says grabbing a seat at Ria’s breakfast nook. Ria serves his food and she grabs a seat. Ria “So this is strange, you here in my neck of the woods. You got some money?” Karl “Come again?” Ria “You hard of hearing man? Can I have some money? I know you and Ty are loaded.” Karl “Maybe.” Ria “What is that supposed to mean?” Karl “I won’t waste your time or mine. I need some info.” Ria “Well my lips don’t give out info unless you show me the money or maybe if you got a big dick.” Karl, stunned by her aggressiveness but pulls out a wad of cash, “Will you talk now?” Ria “Sho nuff. What you want to know” Taking the money from his hand. Karl “Jennifer.” Ria “Hmmph… that Bitch. What you want to know about her? You should know more about her than me. Aren’t you living with her and your son?” Karl “That doesn’t matter right now. See, you took this little trip to Cleveland with her a while back.” Ria “We on that again?” Karl “Yes, what I want to know is if Jennifer and Santino had anything going on.” Ria “Did they? Hell yea they did. They were kissing and flirting.” Karl, smiling “I knew it. Thank you for your time Ms. Winters.” Ria “Call me Ria and tell your son I am available cause I know he is about to leave Jenny. I wouldn‘t mind having you as a father in law.” Karl, laughing “I‘ll tell my son that. You‘re quite charming….Ria.” Ria “ Anyways,….I hope Ty leaves Jenn high and dry. She was wrong for what she did to Jodie. Blackmailing Jodie about her HIV status. That’s just sick. Ol white devil.. If there is anything I can do to right the wrong Jenn caused, I’m there.” Karl “I’ll keep that in mind. Hate to chat and run, but I really have to get going.” he says getting up and leaving. Ria “Looks like Jenn is in trouble.” Sabryn walks into the main lobby S.G.. She is wearing a beautiful red sexy fitting dress, sleeveless, high heels, showing off her back to normal body shape after having a baby, holding a black folder in her left hand , and holding the phone with the other. SABRYN “How is he? I miss him already.” The conversation cuts to her mansion on Lavender Hill, as she steps in the elevator... Back in the nursery, Bryan is leaning over the baby crib, and touching JR's face. BRYAN “Sweetie, he is fine... sleeping like an angel.” Back in the office, Sabryn has her hand on the door knob. SABRYN “Ahh... I promise, I will be home within an hour.” BRYAN “No no no... you do your thing, and we'll see you later.” SABRYN “I just have a few phone calls to make and I'll -” With that she opens the door and stop dead in her tracks. The room is full with flowers, all over the room, beautiful fresh white roses embellished with alchemillia mollis.... Sitting in beautiful heart custom vases. Sabryn slowly enters the room, and closes the door behind her, within minutes, her eyes are full with tears. BRYAN, still on the phone, “Hello?... Earth to the most beautiful woman in the world.” He said stepping toward the window, and looking outside to the yard. SABRYN “I am here... I'm - I don't know what to say?” BRYAN “Well, I take it you got my surprise.” SABRYN “I love you…” BRYAN “I love you too... Now, go enjoy your flowers while I go take a shower, before JR wakes.” SABRYN “Give him my love…” BRYAN “I will.” Bryan hangs up the door, and he returns to the baby's crib, and leans forward and kisses his forehead. From outside the window, Ashley dressed in all red, plaster leather pants, fitting red boots, with very thin high heels, is watching Bryan's every move. She watches as Bryan walks out of the baby's room. Ashley pulls open the windows, and steps in the room. She slowly makes her way toward the baby's crib. ASHLEY “Hello Brat!” She says with a devious smile, looking at the baby...
  6. Jay, I have an email for you but your pm is tunred off? How can we go about this?
  7. I agree with Susan comment yes shes been through a lot but damn, this girl is a rotten brat.
  8. I wonder y i didnt get a warm reception when I joined last December. Hmm....LOL
  9. Not a big fan of spoilers. I liked to be surprised.
  10. Another great episode and I see the scenes were longer through the whole episode. A definate plus. Keep up the great work. Your charactercs and stroies are really coming trhough. I loved hos Sandra kep calling Reva bitches. I can't for their eventual showdown. I like these two working together and can't wait to see what they do. Alan Micheal got balls for calling ol dude( i think Dylan a bumb ass. pretty funny. And Vi, her man's brother. Wonder what he say about this Jeff just told his duaghter something big and he just left her, lol wow Very good episode. SO many juicy triangles
  11. Loved the episode( though the first hal was a bit choppy esp before part two0 BUT Remy and Blake are so [!@#$%^&*] hot together. There are so happy right now but I know something i bound to happen. I really wonder if it was really Ross. Edmund sure is a jerk. But I like him. Please explain to me Dinah being shot in the head. Wow. That's mad crazy!! Seems Dinah has been through a lot. I am so glad Reva has reached out to Shayne and Rocky. That really was a nice cene to read. It's nice to know they have some one in their corner. i wonder who is the top and bottom? Care to enlightned us?( I have my own conclusions) I also noticed the scenes were longer and deeper and done really nice. I hope to see more scene likew that. I was able to get into it more and really get into what was going on. Great episode Jay
  12. WOW It sounds sound good. I wonder who the new family will be. Cant wait to see that. I just casted my own new family on S.T.E.A.M. (Stay tuned for that news) I can't imagine what the twsit is going to be with Anna and Cassandra. And Jim's additicion sound really good. Also nice casting. Seems like Novi will be getting a slew of new folks.
  13. Back at the railroad tracks, Dahlia continues to scream and breathe heavily as the train heads right towards her! She looks back at Ashley with a desperate look in her eyes that are pouring tears out every second. Dahlia "Please, if you have an ounce of decency in you, you'll help me! I can't die, not now of all times! We can work something out, I promise you, I- " Dahlia is stopped as the train is now only centimeters away, and a loud, long scream is heard as the train runs right over Dahlia!!! Ashley laughs maniacally, as Dahlia's screams are heard miles and miles away. Ashley continues to laugh as the scream is muffled after only a few seconds, and she grins as pieces of what's left of Dahlia go flying all over the place, even a piece of meat hits Ashley in the face. After the train passes, all that is left is a devoured corpse. Ashley smirks as she crosses her arms and walks over to it and kicks it a little. Ashley "Well, looks like one bitch is down, two to go. I'm really sorry it had to end like…this, but that's what you get for trying to interfere in my plans. But if you can still hear me at all, wherever the hell you are, take comfort in the fact that your enemy Natalia will suffer even more than you did. " Ashley then looks at the small remnants of Dahlia, with some skeletal parts showing that remained intact, one last time before turning and walking away, still with a huge smile on her face. Ashley, muttering to herself "And soon, Bryan will be mine." Episode 93: Tidbits Of Dahlia Written by ML Cooks, Tara Smith and Durand Saint Hilaire The Williams House, Abe is stunned as he looks upon his brother, getting it on with his wife "What the hell is going on?" He says furiously, slamming the door; as he steps inside the house. DC looks up at Abe as he gets off of his brother's wife. Sister Patterson than stands up to look at her husband. Abe: You and my brother; in my Home? Sister Pat is speechless; fixing her clothes, as she tries stepping in between Abe and DC. Abe "What's the matter, can't talk now? "After 25 years of marriage, and after everything you and I have been through – and – and this is – Sister Pat: Abe, it is not what it looks like – You have to believe – what's just happened here - was nothing – DC: Woman please – PAT: Husband, Abe look at me; your brother had his dirty fat sloppy hands on me… DC: Now you are tripping – Abe: Shut the hell up, DC! Sister Patterson, wiping tears from her face "Are you blind or what? What does it look like? Ever since he came to town he has been all over me, pushing me, and tempting me… Oh Gosh, Lord knows I hate him; I hate him for what I have become… Abe: "What will Miss Jenkins say about this?" DC: "Don't tell me you buy into this Miss Jenkins hoopla." Abe grabs his brother by the chest and slams him against the wall, and with a punch straight in the jaw. Sister Pat: Stop it! DC laughs as he spits blood from his mouth to the ground. "You boys gone quit hitting an old man now." Abe: "What is that supposed to mean?" DC: "Your damn sons. All you boys have been hitting up on me." Sister Pat: "Give it up. Listen Abe, I can't do this no more. I have sinned. Lord have Mercy I have sinned" she says breaking in to a whirlwind of tears, almost becoming hysterical "God, strike me down now, Lord have Mercy." She looks up into Abe's eyes "I cheated on you with Don. Our daughter, Kelis, was his child. Don was the father of Kelis. But God punished you by taking her away from us. Lord I am so sorry." DC pushes Abe away from him, Abe is taken aback as a flood of flashbacks enter his mind. He remembers, being at the hospital, and kidnapping Kelis. He then remembers, having her tied up to a bed, then molesting her for years on end. Abe: "Kelis wasn't our child?" Sister: "No. That's why I shut down from you Abe. That's why I pushed you away. I couldn't give myself to you no more knowing what I caused, the death of a child. I am sorry' She says wrapping her arms around his legs, still crying hysterically. Abe looks at his brother with hurt and anger in his eyes "Why would the two of you do this to me? DO you know what you've caused? I can't take this. And My sons knew, and didn't say anything to me? My whole family" Abe shrugs his wife off him. He looks at his brother and wife "You two can have each other. I'm done." Abe then walks out the house with out saying another word. Sister Patterson is still sitting on the floor crying and praying "Lord have Mercy. Miss Jenkins is not going to like this. I lost my family." DC: "It was bound to happen." Pat: "And don't you start with me. DC: You kept my child, my child! Away from me! I didn't have time to mourn her." Sister Patter stops her water works upon hearing DC speak again and she gets up. She grabs her bible off the coffee table and begins to beat DC with it. Pasadena Police station Alexis is put back into her cell after coming from morning chow, when Rufus and Lisa approach her cell. Rufus "You look so down Lexie. Cheer up, honey! Today is a good day!" Alexis "Look I don't want to talk about Natalia……. Why is she dead?" Rufus "Not yet… Soon I hope" Lisa: "I don't know about all of that and it sounds like I don't want to; but we came down here because we have good news." Rufus: "Welcome to freedom" Alexis: "I'm being released?" Lisa: "Yes ma'am." As she says that, the guard opens the cell door to release her. Alexis: "Finally. It's about time. How did you do it Lisa?" Lisa: "I was able to get the D.A. to drop the charges due to lack of evidence.. Like you said, it was a dark and stormy night' They all laugh as Alexis gives her a hug "Thank you so much. " Rufus: "Just in time too. Divine Design needs some damage control." Alexis: "Not from you fruit cake" Rufus: "Excuse me?" Alexis: "Your services are no longer needed. You're dismissed. Too many cooks spoil the broth. Now get lost." She starts walking away. Rufus: MMMM- Not so fast sweetie; I still have control of your shares, remember?" Lisa and Alexis stop Alexis: Excuse me? Rufus: Yeah, remember that piece of paper you had me sign? Alexis: Lisa? Lisa: I am sorry; I was just doing you what you asked? Alexis: Well, reverse it. Rufus: "I'll give you two days to work it out… in the meantime you know where to find me;" Rufus starts walking away, and she stops. "And by the way if you need a place to stay, let me know; the penthouse is big enough for two people, oh here's a key just in case you change your mind." She hands the key to Alexis, and Lisa takes it; and Rufus heads out. Alexis: Fu(king bitch! That beast in a dress will not best me." Huntington Memorial Hospital Dr. Kiko Whitfield walks into Natalia's room. He sees Ria's watching Life in Salem's new spin off, Affairs of the Heart on TV sitting next to Natalia. Ria: "Well hello. Usually I would cuss anyone out for interrupting my stories, but for you cutie, I'll make an exception" Kiko: "Good to know you have a sense of humor" With that Kiko heads towards Natalia on the bed. "How are you feeling?" Natalia: "I want to die." Kiko: "I am really sorry for your loss." Natalia begins to have tears come to her eyes, "Some one killed my baby. I can't believe some one shot me and killed my innocent child." Kiko: "I know this must be hard for you. I am prescribing some sedatives. I trust you will keep an eye on her Victoria?" Ria: "You sounded sexy when you said my name. Can you say it again papi?" Kiko: "I'll take that as a yes. Listen, Natalia, It would help to speak someone; preferably a counselor, I can recommend some good people for you; if you wouldn't mind." Kiko begins to walk out of the room when Ria jumps in front of him "Why are you being shady? You don't like women or something? I know I am a pretty young thang out here." Kiko: "You've already been with my brother. And I don't keep it in the family. Now if you'll excuse me" He says before walking out. Ria: "Whatever. I will get me some of him. Fine ass. And he is a doctor too. He just don't know, I would rock his world!" She then looks at Nat. "Girl you ready? Let's go back to my house and I'll fix up something good. You look like you can use a good meal." Natalia looks into Ria's eyes "My baby, the one thing holding Mark and I together; is gone Ria. And Mark didn't even have the decency to come over to check up on his baby." Ria: "He was here girl. He knows the baby is dead." Natalia: "And he didn't even come to see how I was doing. I am grasping at straws here." Ria: "Girl what you talking about? I know you are not about to concede to defeat." Natalia: "I just see everything so clearly now. Mark is never going to love me. I have no chance with him." Ria: "Well girl, it could have been Bryan's baby. Oh and You know Sabryn just gave birth." Natalia: "I don't want to hear nothing like that. It's time to take control of all these people that are after me. I have to find out who shot me. I want to find the person that killed my baby." Ria: "I hate to say it but there is a lot of people who hate you." Natalia: "Tell me about it, Sabryn, Rufus, Suga. This is war. I am back bitches." Ria gives Natalia a big hug, 'That's what I am talking about." Natalia pulls back from Ria's hug. "That means you too Ria" Ria: "Excuse me?" Natalia : "Did you get revenge on me by shooting me for not letting you in the fashion?" Ria is appalled and slaps Natalia Down the hall, Kevin walks into Lauren room. Kevin: "Is everything ok? Why are you here?" Lauren: "Well I fainted at Ty's mansion arguing with Jennifer. I found out I am pregnant Kevin." Kevin's heart stops. "Damn! So what does this mean? Am I the father?" Lauren, wiping a tear "I don't know . It could your's or Chris's. I feel like such a whore? " Kevin holds her. Kevin: "Don't feel like that. " Kevin is so stunned he is at a loss for words. "Does Daniel know?" Lauren: "He thinks it's Chris's" Kevin: "Lauren I am so sorry. What are you going to do?" Lauren: "What do you mean, what I am going to do?" Kevin: "Are you going to keep it?" Lauren: "Of course I am. How could you ask something like that?" Kevin: "Lauren, think about it. Having this baby is not good for anyone; If the baby turns out to be Chris's, well Chris is dead. He would not have a father. And if it's mine, then..?" Lauren: "Then what?" Kevin: "I love Sharan….. You love Daniel right?" Lauren: "Yes I do, but regardless who's the father, I am going to love this baby no matter what. I can't really believe you were trying to suggest I get rid of it. What has gotten into you?" Kevin: "I am just trying to do what is best for everyone. If this child is mine, it would hurt so many people. Lauren, we crossed the line. We made an error in judgment. Let's not put this baby through the pain of not having a family." Lauren, wiping tears "This baby is just an inconvenience for you. Don't worry about it Kevin. This is a gift from God. I am not going to alter that…. This child will have a family, two people who will love him and care for him for the rest of his life – Daniel and I will raise this child, no matter who's the father is… We don't need you and if you can't deal with that; I suggest you go to hell. Kevin: "Lauren please don't be like that. Look I am sorry." Lauren: Just get the hell out… When did you become so cruel?" Kevin: "It's not even like that. Lauren we have been friends since high school. You know me better that that." Lauren: I can't even look at you right now; just please – Just leave… Kevin: Lauren; Lauren: You are stressing me and my child… Please – Kevin, obliges and leaves Lauren alone for the moment. He leaves Lauren in peace and as he leaves, she grabs her pillow and hugs it, bursting into tears. Sabryn' s Room, Bryan walks in and smiles at his new family. He watches Sabryn hold their new born son. Sabryn: "How nice of you to join us. Are you sure you're not going to pass out are you?" Bryan, chuckling, "No I am not and I am sorry I did. It was all so over whelming." he says walking over to her and kissing her forehead. "Our son is handsome. Looks just like his dad." Sabryn: "No no, he gets his looks from his mother." Bryan: "Can I hold him?" Sabryn: "Yes you can." Sabryn hands Bryan Jr. to his dad." Bryan is overjoyed at holding his son for the first time. "Hey little guy. I love you so much. I am going to do right by you and give you the kind of home I never had." He kisses his son on the forehead as Dr. Kiko Whitfield walks into the room. Kiko: "Mr. Dattilo, nice of you to join us this time." Bryan: "Sorry doctor." Kiko: "It's quite alright. It happens a lot. And how is the new mother doing?" Sabryn: "I am fine." Kiko: "Good. I am here with your release papers." Sabryn: "Thank you so much. Bryan and I have a wedding to plan." Kiko: "I hope I get the first invitation. I did deliver you a baby." Bryan: "Of course doctor. We are inviting you right now. It's in two days." Kiko: "Congratulations. " Kiko says leaving. Sabryn: "Let' take our baby home." Bryan: "Good because I got a surprise for you." Westwood Park Natalia steps out of the shower when her door bell rings. She wraps her towel around her and goes to find out who it is. She opens the door and is not too pleased to see Mark. "Oh how nice of you to show up now. Where the hell where you at when I needed you? I had to mourn the loss of this baby all by my damn self." Mark: "Please Natalia. I told you this baby was the only thing binding us together. The baby is gone and that means it's a wrap between you and I. I never loved you and I told you that repeatedly.' Natalia: "I got the message. Loud and clear. You don't have to worry about me chasing you or trapping you no more. I am done. I've wasted my time fighting to be with you for the past year and look at where it has gotten me? Heart ache and pain." Mark: "That's no one's fault but your own." Natalia: "And you don't even give a damn. Why the hell are you here?" Mark: "To tell you I know exactly what you did to be with me. You paid Suga to stab Dahlia in jail, thanks to you having her arrested. You are the reason why she could not have children." Natalia: "How did you find out? Suga told you?" Mark: "Dahlia her self did. In fact I am looking for her. Have you seen her?' Natalia: "Dahlia? What do you mean she told you?" Mark: "She's alive. She did not die in the trash compacter and she told me everything you did." Natalia: "This can't be happening." In an undisclosed location, Ashley is holding a baby as she sits in a rocking chair. "Mommy got rid of an enemy today little guy. Mommy is fighting for our family." Then Diego walks in. "I got some interesting news for you.' Ashley: "Which is?" Diego: "Sabryn named her on Bryan Jr." Ashley: "That bitch can't do this. My son is named Bryan Jr. Oh well, it will be settled at the wedding." Diego: "Kiko released them today. The wedding is in two days." Ashley: "Did you hear that Bryan Jr? You're going to meet your daddy in two days" She says kissing the baby. Then Ashley's cell phone rings "Hello,…. It's about damn time. I'll meet you down there in a few minutes." She hangs her phone up. Diego: "Who was that?" Ashley: "The Lady in Black. Mona is back in Pasadena…"
  14. It seem Phil got a lot to answer for. Olivia proved she is not to be played with. My girl. And that damn Susan at it again but damn she is causing so much trouble.
  15. Wow u already got a big cat and I am still trying to get the who and what and why. I hope u don't bring on too many more. But I am so glad to hear about WSPR. I am REALLY looking forward to see how u do it. I also cant wait to see how this age difference between liz and Colin play out. Shayne and Rocky, really h ave not seen much of them but I hope there i more fall out from their coming out. It was like the got caught and that was it. But I am sure you're going to work it out. THis is another tory I can't to see you play out. Remy Remy Remy, I know he he going to smack hims elf in the end for not telling Blake. Just her Rem Rem. have faith Sounds like u got a lot fo good stuff coming up Keep up the great work
  16. ANother great episode. I really feel so bad for harley. I know she is in total shock. I also can't belive she walked out like that. Poor Susan, I love Remy and Blake but what in the hell is going on Ross is alive if so I hope Remy tells Blake. He dont need to keep the secret. I mean come on, old geezar Rossy Tossy or fine ass chocolate daddy Remy. It's on the wall. I ALSO LOVE HOW REVA asked Blake to be the talk show host. This WSPR is really grabbing my attetion. LILLIAN btw is so beatiful too. Great Job Jay
  17. WOW!! Just wow. My opinion of Susan has just chamged. Kuz I sure had a lot to say about her before I read she shot that girl. This changes everything and explains a lot and really makes things all the more interesting. Good job with that one. Lord We have Nata pregnant and Dinah, who jut got pregant finally is nnot gonna know who the father of her child is. THis show should be GL: Secret Lovers, lol Cant wait to see thee two play it. I hope they each be different though I think Liz( who i so damn sexxi) and COlin are great together. Ashlee is bulimaic? Poor girl. I really feel bad for her. I think coop really do love her and yes men out there do like big girls. GREAT EPISODE SO Much goings on.
  18. A slower episode but we all have them and I am sure this is the build up to something bigger I do however like the Reva running WSPR. It's like a new adventure for her and me. We can take this journey together and get to know Wspr. I feel really bad for Olivia. I think it's a shame though she keep trying to be part time lovers with her daughters man and she having his child. maybe Olivia can fond another man. BUt it also seems Bill want Olivia too. Lol Funny emotions. This is one of my fav stories.
  19. Huntington Memorial Hospital Ashley and Dahlia stare at each other. Ashley's face reddens as she realizes that Dahlia has caught her trying to inject something into Natalia's I.V. Ashley "Welcome to the back-from-the-dead-Club." Dahlia "I can't believe it. You're alive. What are you doing?" Ashley "What do you think? I'm taking out the enemy." Dahlia "So, you're going to kill Natalia?" Ashley "Why not? You know, it's quite a coincidence . . . Natalia is shot on the same day you decide to return from the dead. You shot her at the fashion show, right? Dahlia "Nah, I'm looking at the person who shot Natalia. And now you're here to finish the job." Ashley "Perhaps." Dahlia "Good luck with that. I'm outta here." Ashley "Just one moment missy. Do you really think I am going to let you walk out of here, knowing that you know I'm alive? Hmmm, I don't think so. You're not going anywhere. I have too much riding on this. So let's make this easy . . . you're coming with me. " Dahlia "Look Ashley, I don't care what you're doing, OK? I see nothing, I know nothing. I'm leaving. You don't have to worry about me saying anything." She tries to leave. Ashley grabs her arm. Ashley "I told you, you're not going anywhere." Dahlia "Let go of me! If you think I'm going with you, you're nuts. What in the hell do you think you're going to do to me?" Ashley "Funny that you ask that question. Allow me to show you." Episode: 92, Death Express Written by: ML Cooks, Tara Smith, and Durand Saint Hilaire with Miou Slater Meanwhile, Lina walks up to Heath who is standing outside Jodie's hospital room. She is carrying two bottled water's ; she stops next to Heath. Lina: Here… Heath: Thanks Lina: Any word? Heath: No; the doctor is still with her. Mike is making his way toward the room; just as he stops at the door, Dr. Diego walks out of Jodie's room. Mike: Doctor; how is she? Diego: "She's stable. But very weak; Mike: "What caused this?" Diego: "Jodie's white blood cell count is extremely low… below three hundred, which means she is now developed full blown AIDS. Mike: Why didn't I see this coming? Diego: There isn't anything you could have done; she admitted to me she hasn't been taking her medications since she arrived here in Pasadena… All the stress from the fashion show - She needs lot's of love and support right now… Mike: Can we go in? Diego: I am allowing one visitor at a time." (Diego's pager goes off) "Now if you will excuse me, I have other patients." He says walking away. Mike, looking at Jodie' friends. Heath: You go ahead." Mike: Thank you all for showing Jodie your support." Lina: "We'll be out here waiting if you need anything. Tell Jodie we are here for her and she has our love and support." Mike: "Will do." He says before entering Jodie's room. He enters her room and tears immediately begin to fill up his eyes, watching the woman he loves hooked up to I.V.'s and heart monitor's. He walks over and sits down next to her and holds her hand as he talks to her, "Diego told me you haven't been taking your meds. I don't understand why you wouldn't. Don't you know how dangerous that is; it's like you're trying to commit suicide. Jodie, at this point, I really don't know what I would do if I lost you." Jodie, slowly opening her eyes, looking at Mike; she forces a small smile. "Mike, it's something that is inevitable. My time here is not unlimited." Mike: "I know that but you're making it so much quicker by not taking your meds. Why would you do something like that? No one's time here is unlimited." Jodie, pausing before answering "There are so many reasons; for one the side effects. Every time I put those toxic pills in my body I become so sick. I vomit and that takes all of my energy. Not only that, I wasn't able to find a doctor to get my meds transferred out here in Pasadena. And I felt fine with out them." Mike: "Well look at you now? DO you feel fine now?" Jodie: Why are we fighting? Mike: "Jodie, I love you. I love you so much. I don't want to loose you. When I look at you, I don't even think of you having AIDS. I just see the woman I love." Jodie: "Mike please stop. You are delusional. You're acting like I am going to live forever. My expiration date is soon." Mike "Jodie, stop saying that! How do you know? " Jodie "I don't. I am trying to save you the pain." Mike "Let me worry about how I deal with my pain. I want to be here for you and support you. You have to let me do that. You have to tart taking your meds. " Mike walks over to Jodie and holds her. She holds him back with tears running down her face "Mike, I'm so scared. I am not ready to die" Diego walks into Lauren's hospital room, Daniel and Lauren both look at him. Diego "How do you feel Lauren?" Lauren "Fine. I'm a little nauseous." Daniel "Doctor, what's the matter? Do you know why Lauren fainted?" Diego "Congratulations Lauren, you are 4 months pregnant." Lauren's and Daniel's jaws drop simultaneously. Daniel realizes he's been gone for four months. He is hurt and angry. He gets up and walks toward the door. Lauren realizes that Chris or Kevin could be the father of this child. It then dawns on her that she was heavily drinking 3 to 4 months ago. Lauren "Oh my God, this can't be happening." Diego "Wow, I thought you would be happy about having a baby. Your release papers are at the nurse's station. Have a good day." Diego leaves. Lauren wipes tears from her face as she looks at Daniel's back Lauren "I am so sorry." Daniel turns back around. He gives her a cold stare. Daniel "I really need some time to myself right now.' Lauren "Where are you going?" Daniel "I am not going to do nothing stupid, don't worry. I need to clear my head. This is overwhelming. I fought so hard to get you back. And now I find out you're carrying a dead man's baby. This changes everything Lauren." He says before walking out. Lauren wipes the tears streaming down her cheeks. She picks the up phone and dials. Lauren "Hello, Kevin. We need to talk." In the E.R. Kiko guides Sabryn through the delivery of her baby. Sabryn screams her lungs out. Bryan watches as his baby comes out of the love canal slowly but surely. He is overjoyed that he is about to become a father. Sabryn "I'll never do this again, I swear! Son of a Bitch, son of psycho. Make the pain stop!" She continues screaming as Bryan, unable to take the sight and smell of birth, passes out onto the floor. Sabryn "You Bastard! I'll get you for this." Kiko "Keep pushing. One more push. Come on, you can do it." Sabryn pushes again with all of her might. The baby finally arrives. A crying baby boy. As Kiko wraps towels around the newborn, the baby pees in Kiko's face. Kiko "Well thank you for letting me know you're here." Kiko puts the baby in Sabryn's arms. Tears begins to roll down cheeks. Sabryn "My beautiful baby boy." She looks over and sees Bryan still passed out onto the floor. "Your daddy is a sissy, little one. You're so beautiful. I think I will name you Bryan Jr.' She kisses the forehead of her newborn son. The Jump Off Daniel grabs a seat at the bar and orders a beer. He looks over to the left and realizes Dondre is sitting next to him. Daniel "What's up Dondre? I haven't seen you since I came back from the dead." Dre "Please bruh, don't use my government name. Just call me Dre. It's a little bit strange seeing you here after everyone thought you had been stabbed." Daniel "Well, I have no one to blame about that, other than that crazy ass Bitch Mona." He takes a gulp of his beer. Dre "Yeah, Mona. I keep hearing that name. She's the one who set me up for the kidnapping of Sharan." Daniel "That's a joke. She kidnapped Sharan." Dre "Word?" Daniel "Fu(k yeah dude. She tortured me and had Sharan tied up as her sex slave." Dre "Sex slave? That's some freak ass sh!t man." Daniel "Mona is freaky and crazy. Psycho bitch had me hooked on meth. She's the one who shot me and made it look like I tried to kill myself." Dre "Damn. Why she do all that?" Daniel "I don't want to get into that right now. There is a time and place for everything. Our paths will cross again. And you know what? I am going to shoot that Bitch on sight." He finishes his beer. Dre "I'd wanna kill that broad too. You don't know where Sharan is now?" Daniel "No. She wanted to take Sharan away from Kevin." Dre "At least some one feels where I am coming from." Daniel "You still have feelings for Sharan?" Dre "Yes sir." Daniel "Listen, I know you and Chris were really close. I feel guilt every day knowing he is dead for a crime he did not do." Dre "Damn straight. That's fu(ked up what Mona did to my boy. I need to have a few words with this Mona myself. Chris was a brave heart. He didn't deserve that. Ain't no way he could have stabbed you regardless if Mona was in the picture. He wasn't on no sh!t like that" Daniel (pausing and ordering another beer) "Chris lives on." Dre "What you mean by that?" Daniel "Lauren is having Chris's baby." Dre almost chokes on his beer "Yo girl pregnant?" Daniel "4 months." Dre is stunned. Then he remembers overhearing Lauren and Kevin talking about their one night stand. Dre wonders if the baby really belong to Chris or is it Kevin's. Huntington Memorial Hospital Ashley clutches Dahlia's arm tightly, and Dahlia tries to push her way through Ash but fails. Ashley smiles at Dahlia as she pulls her back over to Natalia's bedside. Dahlia "What the hell do you want? Let me go and we can pretend like this never happened. " Ashley "Don't be in such a rush, Dahlia! Don't worry, I just have to get something and we can leave. " Dahlia We? Ashley "Yes, "we". You really think I'm just going to let you walk out of here like nothing happened? Oh no, I have plans for you. " Dahlia "Just leave me alone, damnit! I'm not going to do anything to you! " Ashley "Of course not, you won't be alive long enough for that. " Dahlia "Wh-what do you mean? No…NO… " Ashley, laughing "YES, Dahlia! " Ashley then grabs a needle off of a tray near Natalia's bed, and then makes sure it is filled up with drugs, before pulling Dahlia's arm closer and injecting it into her! Dahlia tries to scream, but she falls unconscious before she can make another sound… Ashley "I'm really so sorry about this , but its gotta be done. Now, we better get going, the train's waiting!" Sister Patterson, again dressed in her bank robber's attire, walks up to the dark house that is Miss Jenkins' house. She opens the door with a Bible in one hand and a picnic basket in the other. Sister Pat "I got to make things right with Miss Jenkins. She's not pleased with my work for the Lord anymore. " Before Pat can go inside, she's grabbed! She instinctively turns around and tries to slap whoever has a hold of her. Then she sees that it's DC. DC "Girl, what are you doing at some random house?" Sister Pat "None of your business, boy. Now go away. And for the Love of God, get you're fat ass hands off of me. They smell like chicken wings." Before Pat can break free of his grip, DC begins to drag her back to her house. She tries to hit him with the Bible but he ignores it. Sister Pat "The Lord will punish you for this! What is Miss Jenkins going to say. I can't believe you did this, you fat ass bastard. Lawd have Mercy! Don't get me in here cussin'." DC "Yea yea old woman. What do you have in that basket? We'll have a little romance real fast, before Abe gets home. Just like in the old days. Remember that girl?" Sister Pat "Excuse me? I got to do the work of the Heavenly Father. That means you don't have anything to do with it. And Miss Jenkins will not be happy. How dare you come in here and disrespect my family this way." DC (walking up close to her) "I don't give a damn about no Miss Jenkins. It's about time you think about actual people than Miss Jenkins. Crazy ass woman. But that's what drive me crazy about you girl. You need some good lovin' to shut ya up. My brother ain't giving it to ya, right?" Sister Pat "I'm not gonna tell you again: Don't no one talk about Miss Jenkins like that! Boy, I should just bathe you in Holy Water for all your sins. " DC "Sins of passion girl. How about we take a shower together? " Sister Pat "Oh please. I'm not gonna be impure with you anymore, DC. This is over. We can't do this. That's why God took our baby Kelis. It's wrong and Abe had to pay for all of it." DC grabs her and pulls her into a kiss! Sister Pat once again tries to slap him with the Bible. She stumbles away from DC after the kiss ends. Sister Pat "Don't you ever do that again! " DC "You know you loved it, girl". DC then gently grabs Sister Pat again and kisses her. She tries to slap him once, but then stops as she and DC fall onto the couch. He begins to slowly try to take her clothes off. Pat almost pulls back but decides to give in to her temptation. She kisses DC's neck as he continues to slip off her clothes. Both of them look up when they hear the door open. It's Abe, looking on in astonishment! Ashley has Dahlia tied down to a set of rail road tracks. Dahlia nervously tries to struggle out of the ropes. Ashley sits on the side of the tracks and watches in amusement. Ashley "You know, there's really no use in trying to break free. Even if you do, I'll tie you right back down again. You know that I will. I'm sorry, but this is the end, Ms.Salem. This time The Garbage Lady will die" Dahlia "I cheated death once. I can do it again, bitch! You shouldn't underestimate me." She says still trying to break free, Ashley (laughing) "That's the difference between Natalia and I. I get the job done. She never could. That's why you survived her attack on you, You know, paying Suga to stab you. That made you barren, didn't it? What a shame! Sucks to be you. And that lame attempt to kill you at the hospital, but ended up at a landfill. Honestly, who dies like that? That's why you shot her, isn't it? The garbage lady wanted revenge. You shot her and she lost that poor baby. Now it's your turn to meet your maker. Time to die!" Dahlia "I don't like Natalia anymore than you do, you psycho! If you wanted me to die, why didn't you just shoot me, like you did with Natalia? Ashley "Me, shoot Natalia? I'm above that !@#$%^&*]-footing. If I had tried to kill Natalia, her remains would be lying right next to where you are right now. We all know you shot her, which is why she didn't die. You aren't an expert like I am. " Dahlia "I didn't shoot Natalia! I wasn't even there when she was actually shot! " Ashley "Says you?" Dahlia ""Come back into the real world, Ashley. You're nuts. You're living in some sort of twisted fantasy world." Ashley "No my dear, I think the person living in a fantasy would be you. You've never thought that I had the capability to get what I want, what I deserve!" Ashley then leans forwards and grabs a hold of Dahlia's chin, clutching it tightly. Ashley "But I'll tell you something. Soon I will have exactly what I want. Sabryn and Natalia will have nothing!" Dahlia "Sabryn? What in the hell are you talking about? " Ashley "Oops, I think I may have leaked some information to you. You definitely need to die now. What a pity. …..NOT!" Ashley lets go of Dahlia and gets off of the railroad tracks. The sound of a train approaching is in the distance. Ashley "Ooooh, what's that? Sounds like The Death Express" Dahlia quickly turns and looks as she watches the large train come into sight. She screams and tries harder than ever to break free of the ropes. Dahlia "Somebody PLEASE help me!" Ashley "Scream all you want. It will do you no good Dahlia! No one can hear you. Buh bye!" Dahlia cries out as she watches the train get closer and closer. It's only a few inches away. Ashley wraps her arms around herself and lets out a loud laugh. She's thoroughly enjoying the little scene playing out in from of her. Dahlia, her victim, facing her last peril. Ashley "When I'm good, I'm bad, But when I'm bad, I'm better."
  20. Wow It's so good to have my favorite blog back. This was a great episode and I have a lot to say so let's get it cracking All that talk about dicks. And Dickish, I was cracking up, I never heard that one and I'll have to use it. I bet Jace do got a big one, lol, looks like he do. But I know you don't like talk like that so I'll keep it moving, Ava and Skye and Nate. Skye got what she had coming to her and I loved every minute of it. It was also good for Nate because in reality she played him to get back at Skye so in a sense she killed two birds with one stone. I wonder if Skye will try and get revenge and I wonder how Nate will react to being played for once. I think this would be a good time for James to come back and shake things up. What kind of name is SR. And I wonder it Marli honestly does not know WHO SR is. This is starting to get interesting. And of course Bryan is always at the right time and right place. That's what I love about him But question, it would be nice to know where does Bryan get all his money from. And I see Alley is about to turn the table on Marisa. Bout damn time. Aggie is so stern, it cracked me up and it was such a treat to read all about my favs in this ep. Ginny was smart in tying in T's relations hip with Owen with the café. I wonder what T is going to do now. I loved T's comment about the senses and what not,. She has the best things to say at times. I do miss Owen and Hope he can return. Nan is so crazy. I so love this plot with Jenny in the lair. I do to wonder who is in the other room. I also am kinda of surprised Carlos is taking to Nan so fast. He know she always up to know good. Very good job, very well written, and I wonder how long we gone have to wait until the next ep. And yes we can do a cross over. Let me know what you talking. PS How to you ever so quietly pound on a wall?" LOL May be she can dig into the wall with the fork. BUT VERY GREAT READ.....
  21. Oh my. Bill and Olivia. I love them and I am so happy for Mallet and his girl. There are so many triangles or affairs going on. Wow!. Another solid episode Jay. how long have you been writing and what else have you written and may I ask how old r u?
  22. Another great show. Wow Again Poor Rocky and Shayne. I think Buzz may be willing to understand. I am glad Reva is willing to accecpt this. I am so pissed at Susan. She is so wrong. for what she did. I love CC as Olivia. FTL has such a sexxy cast adn I love your balance. It's very good. You're a great writer Jay!
  23. OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG!!!!!!! WOW What a shocker!! Great episode. Susan was sodirty for doing what she did. To her own family. I feel so bad for shanye and rocky. Wow. Put on blast like that Y does susan have so many prolbems I really feel bad for Ashlee Ana know he wrong. GREAT EPISODE JAY!!!
  24. wow another great episode. I feel so bad for Rick. I wonder if He and Beth will ber ok. And I am glad Susan will Keep Shayne's secret. But he should have denied it. And I love how the eps first starts and u always say like a calm day in springfield or a crazy day etc. I also like how Olivia wa woman enough to let Josh go. Great Job Jay
  25. I hope it's not to late I may have some more, for ur male role too
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