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  1. Does Roman have Alzheimer's like his mother? The EnerNext story seems like a big story. I see it building and it's got my attention. Jennifer's reaction to Aiden was so Jennifer. Good characterization. GOOD ONE!!
  2. ANOTHER WORLD 151 - The stakes are raised... Created by: William J. Bell and Irna Phillips Written and Directed by: C. Nathaniel Richardson Consults: aMLCproduction, DRW50 and Beebs WINTHROP HOUSE - Cass is on his cell phone… Cass: Frankie it’s me. We have to talk about this. I know things didn’t go the way you wanted them to. Please call me. I’ve had a bit of a change of heart. Cass turns around and sees Charlie. Charlie: About what? -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- LOVE MANSION Donna answers the door and Vicky walks in. Vicky: You know I am so sick of the both of them. I swear they’re out to destroy my family. Donna: Victoria--- Vicky: I caught that little bitch with Bridget. She said “they’re sisters”. I wish Stacey and Lindsay would take the next rocket to Mars and never return! ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- MCKINNON’S HOUSE Jake is with Stacey. Jake: What are you doing here? Stacey: We didn’t finish our conversation the other day. Jake: Stacey I can’t do this. Stacey: I told you that I was still in love with you and never said anything. Jake: What do you want me to tell you Stacey? That I feel the same way? Stacey: Do you? --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Mac’s Children are in Iris’s office. Matthew: Come on Michael, you’re not seriously considering this? Paulina: She doesn’t have any leverage. Let’s arrange for the hearing and get her out. Amanda: You can’t let her take Brava from us! Iris: Michael. The decision is yours. Michael paces back and forth… Matthew: We can’t let Iris have her way. Amanda: Brava and Cory Productions belongs to us! Michael: SHUT UP! All of you! You sound like a bunch of whiny little brats! CAMERA PAN ON MICHAEL...SLOW FADE TO THEME SONG. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Cass: Hey honey. Charlie: I take it Christy didn’t get parole. Cass: Thank God. Charlie: So I wonder what you had a change of heart about. Are you saying that? Cass nods his head. Charlie: Wait a second. You’re actually giving me your blessing? I think we might need to call John to have you checked out. Cass: Your old man is gonna be the one to walk you down the aisle. Certainly won’t be Grant! Charlie: Wow dad. I don’t know what to say. Cass: You better say thank you or I’m gonna change my mind. Charlie (elated): Thank you! Cass: I was in denial about it, but it seems like he really makes you happy. I’m not gonna stand in your way. Charlie and Cass embrace. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------- Donna: Victoria will you calm down and tell me what happened? Vicky: I saw Lindsay and Bridget chatting it up at the Center. I could’ve wrung that wench’s scrawny little neck. Donna: There’s no need for you to panic. Vicky: The next thing you know Lindsay will be trying to ingratiate herself into my family. I’ll tell you mother, I’m NOT gonna let that happen. Donna: The only way you’re going to stop her is telling Jake the truth. Vicky: I wish Stacey never told me that Jake was Lindsay’s father. Donna: You’re giving Lindsay way too much power, when she’s not the one you need to watch out for. Vicky: What do you mean? Of course I need to keep an eye on her. Donna: If she was going to tell Jake, she would have by now, but she hasn’t, has she? The one person you REALLY need to keep away from Jake...is Stacey. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Jake: Stacey that was a long time ago. I am married with a family now. Stacey: It’s a simple question. Do you or do you not still feel that same way about me as I do for you? Jake: I wasn’t even in my right mind. You fell in love with someone I barely remember being. Stacey: You gave me something that I thought I could never have again. I will always be grateful to you. Jake: Whatever it is you thought I gave you, maybe you’re confusing gratitude with love? Stacey: Jake I know what I’m feeling, and I can’t deny it anymore. I never stopped loving you. We could be a family. Jake: Family? Stacey what are you….? I...I think you need to leave. Bridgetwalks slowly downstairs. Stacey: Think about what I said. Bridget: No he doesn’t. He has his family. Me and mom. How can you come in here and try to hit on my dad? Jake: Bridget this doesn’t concern you. Stacey please leave. After Stacey leaves… Bridget: That’s Lindsay’s mom isn’t it? I’m gonna tell mom what she did. Jake: No you’re not. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Michael: I should call you all Mac’s brat pack. The way you’re fighting over this company that he wanted ALL of his children to share equally. Iris: Matt, Paulina, and Amanda really don’t want me here, so I offered a way out. I think it’s a viable solution for everyone. Practically a no-brainer. Paulina: Yeah you would know about having no brains Iris. Matthew: Michael what are you going to do? Amanda: The only logical solution here is twenty percent of Cory Productions between you, Sandy, Matt, Paulina and me. Iris: If that’s the way you’re going Michael, nobody is gonna get a damned thing. Michael takes out envelopes and hands them to all… Michael: I didn’t wanna do this, but I’ll see you all at the hearing. FREEZE FRAME ON MICHAEL...SLOW FADE OUT...END OF EPISODE 151
  3. I was wondering when Percy was gonna come up with GREETINGS!! LOL I am sensing a connection between Victor's press conference and EnerNext... Aiden...and Jennifer??? NICE EPISODE!!!
  4. Van's tryna get preggers... Scott needs help... LOL between Victor and Esther Keemo the Cub strikes again. Good episode!!
  5. THank you so much guys for your comments...more to come
  6. I see what you are setting up with Jennifer... You got Nicole's joking self down pat... Lucas better not say anything lol
  7. This is just the beginning for Christy...thanks Beebs!!
  8. ANOTHER WORLD 150 - Dicey situations Created by: William J. Bell and Irna Phillips Written and Directed By: C. Nathaniel Richardson Consultants: aMLCproduction and DRW50 PART 1 MCKINNONS HOUSE Bridget is in the living room on her cell phone. Bridget: Hey I was wondering if you wanted to hang out, grab a latte or something. You’re there now? Okay. See ya in a bit. Jake walks in. Jake: Where ya headed kiddo? Bridget: I’m going to the Center to meet Lindsay. Jake: Seems like you two are becoming friends. Bridget: I’m just grateful to her for helping you get better. Jake: Well have a good time. Bridget leaves and Vicky walks in. Vicky: Where did Bridget go? Jake: She went to the Center to meet Lindsay. Vicky: Oh...you know I just remembered. I need to go see Marley. She kisses Jake and leaves. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ AT THE COURT… Frankie is on the stand at Christy Carson's parole hearing. Frankie: I was visiting her and we wrote letters. I know that she did some horrible things in the past, but from what I can see, she is truly sorry and remorseful for what she had done. She was trapped in a marriage to an emotionally abusive husband. Obviously it took its toll on her, but after the visits and the letters, I could see she was back to the Christy McHale I knew back in college. I want my best friend back. CUT TO Cass on the stand… Cass: This woman had designs on me, but there were two people in her way, Douglas Carson, and Frankie Frame, and she methodically got one of them out of the way. Douglas was on oxygen, and she used his illness to her advantage. She poisoned him, and THEN she tried to get Frankie out of the way by framing her for his death. All because she wanted me, then she tried to poison me also. Your honor, I don’t think this woman should be granted parole. I believe she’s a danger to our family, and a danger to society. I’ve also visited with her, and she threatened my daughter. Christy: That’s a lie! Cass is making it up. Judge Baker bangs her gavel and demands order in the court. She tells Cass he can step down, she heard all she needs, and she says she’s ready to render a decision. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- IRIS’S OFFICE - All of Mac Cory’s natural and adopted children, except Sandy, are there. Iris: Look at this. My brothers and sisters all in the same room. Paulina: What is this about Iris? Iris: Paulina you’re so impatient. Matt: What are you up to? Iris: Matt you, Amanda, and Paulina… Matt: And Sandy. I have his proxy. Iris: Right, well you all want me out of Cory Productions. Michael, what say you? Michael: It depends on what you have to say. Iris (walking up to Michael): I’m gonna give you all what you want. I want nothing to do with Cory Productions. CAMERA PAN ON IRIS...SLOW FADE TO THEME SONG. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ PART 2 BAY CITY CENTER - Lindsay and Bridget sit at their table. Lindsay: How are things? Bridget: They’re great. Lindsay: How’s Jake? Bridget: He looks so much better. He’s walking like a regular person now. All thanks to you. Lindsay (shaking her head): Bridget, you don’t have to keep thanking me. It was my pleasure to help. Bridget: He got hurt because he was trying to move my bedroom around for me. Lindsay: That’s...that’s what dad’s do. Bridget: What about your dad? Vicky walks up and interrupts… Vicky: I’m sure he’s a wonderful guy. Bridget: Hey mom. Vicky: Bridget honey, why don’t you be a doll and go get me a latte. I want to talk to Lindsay. Bridget leaves, and Vicky turns her attention to Lindsay. Vicky: What the HELL do you think you’re doing? Lindsay: Now I can’t spend time with Bridget. Vicky: No you can’t. Lindsay: Who do you think you are? You can’t tell me who I can be friends with. Vicky: My daughter? Lindsay: My sister. Vicky: You stay away from her! -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- COURTHOUSE Cass and Frankie listen to Judge Baker. Judge Baker: Mrs. Christina Carson please stand. I’ve heard the testimony of Mr. Cass Winthrop and Miss Mary Frances Frame. I’ve read the doctor’s reports. You’ve been a model citizen among the inmates, but I am concerned. I am concerned about your past obsession with Mr. Cass Winthrop. Since I don’t see evidence of that being gone, I think you need more therapy, and you still could be a danger to Mr. Winthrop. I cannot grant you parole at this time. Christy: Your honor please. I’m not that person anymore! I’ve paid my penance! Judge Baker: We will revisit this is in six months. Court is adjourned. Please remand Mrs. Carson back to state custody. Judge Baker hits the block with her gavel, and the guards escort Christy out of the back of the courtroom, as Cass and Frankie look at her. Christy: No! No! --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Jake is sitting on the couch when someone rings the doorbell. Jake: Vick did you forget your key? He opens the door and there’s Stacey. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Paulina: Did I hear that correctly? Matt: You mean to tell me that you are just giving up the company? Amanda: I don’t believe it. Michael: There’s gotta be a catch to this. Iris: Come on everybody’s gonna get what they want here. Michael I can appeal any decision you make that I don’t agree with about Cory, and appeal, and appeal. All those legal fees will bleed the company dry, or you can just give me Brava. Amanda: What? You can’t do that! Michael you cannot give her what I helped build! Iris: Print and web. I want full control and ownership of Brava Magazine. Paulina: You’re desperate to hold on to any part of Cory. Just give it up! You’ve lost. Michael is silent. Matthew: Come on Michael, you’re not seriously considering this? Paulina: She doesn’t have any leverage. Let’s arrange for the hearing and get her out. Amanda: You can’t let her take Brava from us! Iris: Michael. The decision is yours. FREEZE FRAME ON MICHAEL...SLOW FADE OUT...END OF EPISODE 150
  9. LMAO at Dru and Sheila. Guess Sheila's a lesbian... Jack slipped at the tongue...and Nikki's guilt is going to eat her up... Chloe was characteristically dismissive of Esther again. What's Van's plan? We'll see....
  10. Cass is just a protective father, and Frankie always seemed more even keeled to me. Yes Allen is working at KBAY, the TV station his aunt Donna once owned. Thanks for reading Case
  11. Carl...I believe Grant loves his son, separate form his other machinations...thanks for the Cass comment...I'm taking this character in a bit of a different direction. I thought Robin Mattson would be perfect for Christy....thanks again
  12. lol Carl...there was only temptation with Donna, they never had an affair, but he did with Joy...Thanks Carl
  13. No happy reunion for Daniel and Jennifer. More realistic than on TV Great that you remembered Caroline's Alzheimers, no pun intended. Who exactly is Nick after this time? Nice cliffhanger!!
  14. ANOTHER WORLD 149 Iris makes an important decision Created by: William J. Bell and Irna Phillips Written, Produced and Directed by: C. Nathaniel Richardson Consultants: aMLCproduction and DRW50 PART 1 AT CORY PRODUCTIONS… Iris sits at her desk and takes out one of the CDs she received from Cory, and it’s labeled “Play me”, so she puts it in her laptop….It’s Tucker McCall. Tucker: Hello darlin’ if you’re watching this, I’m probably dead, or playin’ dead. I know what happened with your new and old younger brother, and I’m here to give you one last push. I gotta admit, you’re gonna have to think of something quick, because you know it’s just a matter of time. Michael is gonna request a hearing to try and getcha out, but I got all the confidence in you. I always have. You’ll come out of this smellin’ like a fresh rose. Go get em girl. Iris (looking up): Oh Tucker what the hell am I supposed to come up with? Michael can kick me clean out of Cory Productions, and I’m sure Matt is pushing him. She notices a copy of Brava Magazine on her desk and smiles. ------------------------------------------------------------------ AT PAULINA’S… Dante is preparing for work. Paulina: Honey you didn’t finish your breakfast. Dante: I gotta get to the station. Can’t be late on my first day. Paulina: You’re gonna need all your strength and concentration so you need to eat the rest of your food. Jack will understand. Dante: You used to say that when I was a kid, but I’m not anymore mom. Paulina (sighing): You’re right. My baby’s all grown up, but I’m still your mother, and I’m not gonna stop being that. Dante: And I appreciate it so much. Wish me luck. Paulina: You’ll do great. I love you. Dante: Love you, too. Dante kisses Paulina on her cheek and walks out the door, but Paulina notices something…. Paulina: Dante honey you forgot your bag. Paulina opens the door and there’s Matthew. Paulina: Matthew. Hi. What’s going on? Matthew: May we come in? Paulina: We? Who else is with you? Michael appears. Paulina (shocked): Oh my! -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- BAY CITY CENTER Amanda sits at a table and flashes back to Operation Loco, and seeing Iris and Cory hug in Iris’s office. Then Allen touches Amanda’s shoulder. Allen: Hey beautiful. Amanda: Oh. Hey. Allen: Wow, I thought I’d get a warmer reception. Something on your mind? ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- MEANWHILE, ACROSS THE CENTER AT ANOTHER TABLE...Charlie and Lindsay talk…. Lindsay: You must be excited about the wedding. Charlie: Yes I most certainly am. Lindsay: How did your parents take the news? Charlie: Mom was good about it. Dad? Not so much. Lindsay: How are they doing? Charlie: It seems like they’re coming together, but I don’t know what’s gonna happen after Christy Carson’s hearing today. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- CASS’S CAR - Cass is in the driver's seat with Frankie in the passenger’s seat. Cass: Here we are. Frankie: I can see that. Cass: Frankie you can still change your mind. Frankie: About what? Cass: Vouching for that lunatic. Frankie (looking out the window): There’s nothing for us to discuss as far as that’s concerned. Cass: You didn’t say much on the way down here. Frankie: Cass we can’t agree on anything these days, and I don’t like it. Cass: Do you think I’m enjoying this? I went to see her yesterday. She hasn’t changed at all. She’s still as conniving as she ever was. Frankie: We’d better get in the courtroom or we’re gonna be late. CAMERA PAN ON CASS...SLOW FADE TO THEME SONG. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3KQ9WWkvoe0 ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- PART 2 INSIDE PAULINA’S HOUSE... Paulina: Michael? What? When? Michael: Long story. I promise I’ll explain to you later. Paulina: Have you seen Donna? Vicky? Marley? Michael: Donna knows, but my daughters don’t. I don’t want them to until this is over. Paulina: Til what’s over? Matthew: Getting Iris out of Cory Productions. Paulina: I’m all for that, but what do you have to do with this Michael? Matthew gives Paulina the birth certificate. Paulina: What? You? Michael: I’m Mac’s eldest child. Paulina: Wow. This means that according to the will, you would be awarded full control of Cory, right? Matthew: That’s correct. Paulina: Wait a minute, weren’t you and Iris… Michael: Iris is adopted. Matthew: Before we schedule the hearing, we need to have your vote to get her out. Paulina: Hmm let’s see. Let me think about it. Okay, you’ve got it. Let’s get that bitch out of our father’s company. Matthew: She threatened to tie the company up in litigation for years. Paulina: That will is binding. She’s not gonna have a leg to stand on. Michael: And we need to get the hearing soon, because for some reason, I don’t think we can count her out. She’s gonna try and fight back. Suddenly all their cell phones chime one after the other. Michael: What’s this? Paulina (looking at her phone): From Iris? Matthew: She wants to meet us at her office. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Amanda: Nothing. Allen: Uh huh. Amanda: It’s just some...stuff at work. Nothing I can’t handle. So how did everything go? Allen: You’re looking at the new Executive Director of Programming at KBAY. Amanda: Well congratulations babe! Donna will be thrilled. Allen: Even though she doesn’t own the station anymore, she still was able to put in a good word for me. I was wondering if we could...celebrate tonight. Amanda: Of course. Amanda’s cell phone vibrates... Amanda: It’s from Iris. She’s summoning me to her office. Allen: Duty calls huh? Amanda kisses Allen. Amanda: See ya later babe. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- COURTHOUSE - Cass and Frankie sit as they look forward at the judge’s bench. Cass (leaning to his left toward Frankie): We’re not on the same page with Charlie marrying Kirkland either. Frankie (leaning to her right toward Cass): You’re not willing to let go. Charlie’s not ten years old. Cass: She’s not thirty either. She’s still young and she’s got her whole life ahead of her. Frankie: We’re going to have to let her make her own mistakes. All we can do is support her and be there for when she needs us. The bailiff walks out to the court. Bailiff: All rise! The Honorable Judge Blake will be presiding over this proceeding. The State of Illinois vs. Christina Carson. Judge Blake takes his seat and then the side door opens, as two guards escort Christy out, and Christy makes eye contact with Cass and Frankie. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------- Amanda walks into Iris's office and sees, Matthew, Paulina and Michael. Amanda: What are you all doing here? Paulina: We got Iris’s text. You don't seem shocked to see Michael? Amanda: Yes Matthew told me all about it. Matthew: This wreaks. Michael: She’s up to something. Iris walks in. Iris: Thank you all for coming, because you are going to want to hear what I have to say. FREEZE FRAME ON IRIS...SLOW FADE OUT….END OF EPISODE 149
  15. This was a very good episode...You hit on a lot of stories that you let lag previously (Keemo and Gloria, Scotty, Rafe), and moved others. (Avery, Murphy) and old faves (Brock, Chance, Philip, Mac, JT)... GOOD JOB!!
  16. I like the twist with Kate. She was so sure she had checkmate, but she didn't. You have Sami so down pat. It's almost like Alison told you how to write her lol
  17. Thanks guys...appreciate you reading...and your comments...
  18. ANOTHER WORLD 148 Amanda’s suspicions are aroused Created by: William J. Bell and Irna Phillips Written and Directed by: C. Nathaniel Richardson Consultants: aMLCproduction and DRW50 PART 1 BAY CITY CENTER - Joy is in line at a coffee shop, and is behind one person, when Steven comes up and waits behind her. Then a handsome barista approaches the counter. Barista: We’re sorry but the coffee machine is down. Joy: What do you mean, down? Barista: It’s been doing this frequently. I’ve called the repairman. I apologize. Joy turns around and talks to Steven. Joy: Isn’t that the most ridiculous thing you’ve ever heard? The coffee machine in a coffee shop doesn’t work. I mean really? Steven: Yeah I was really looking forward to my cappucino. Joy: Are you familiar with this town? Steven: You could say that. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- CORY PRODUCTIONS - Amanda is in her office when Cory knocks on the door. Amanda: Hey kid. What are you doing here? Cory: We...were supposed to have breakfast. Amanda: Oh...oh no I’m so sorry Cory. There’s so much that has to be done here. Can I take a raincheck? Cory: Sure sis. Have you heard from mom? Amanda: No she hasn’t called me. Cory: Me neither. Amanda: She probably hasn’t had the chance. Why don’t you give her a call? Cory: I’ve tried already. It just goes directly to voicemail. Well I guess I’ll just have those pancakes and bacon by myself. Amanda: I’m sorry kid. I promise I’ll share my eggs and bacon with my little brother. Amanda grabs an envelope. Amanda: Can you give these to Iris for me on your way out? Cory: If you promise to get me an extra stack of pancakes when we go for breakfast. Amanda (smiling): Of course. After Cory leaves, Amanda checks the computer, and notices something. Amanda: This is a lot of money. Operation Loco? What is this? ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Meanwhile, Iris is sitting at her desk and she flashes back to (EPISODE 111)CORY PUBLISHING A name tag is placed on the door of an office that reads: Iris Cory, C.E.O. Iris walks up to it and admires it. Iris: Iris Cory, C.E.O. Looks great. She walks into her office, runs and sits in the office chair, spins around and lets out a joyful scream. Iris: This office looks so drab, so gloomy, so Rachel. Someone familiar walks in… Iris: Well if it isn’t the famous Tucker McCall. I was just thinking how you should come down after I had this mausoleum redecorated. Tucker: Hey there beautiful… After they hug… Tucker: You’re finally the CEO huh? Iris: Yep and I couldn’t have done it without you. (credit – MLC Productions - Young and the Restless “Tucker goes after Katherine”) Iris flashes back to the present. Iris: That’s right. I couldn’t have done this without you. You always gave me the confidence that I could succeed in business. I’m gonna need it again. Cory knocks on the door. Iris: Hi what’s that in your hand. Cory: Amanda told me to give you this. Feels like it’s a bunch of CDs. I didn’t know you all were into music like that. Iris (smiling): Are you trying to call me old? Cory: No that’s not what I meant at all. Iris: Have you heard from your mother? Cory: No unfortunately not. Iris: How could she not? You must be worried to pieces about your father. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- CAVANAUGH CLINIC - MONTICELLO - Rachel is holding Carl’s hand at Carl’s bedside as he lies hooked up to a machine. Rachel: Lisa says you’re making progress. The twins have been texting and leaving me messages. I don’t want to tell them anything until you’re all better. I don’t want them to spend all their time worrying about you, and I know you don’t either. We can’t lose you again. You’ll be back again, stronger than ever. Suddenly Rachel feels a squeeze… Rachel (smiling): Carl? CAMERA PAN ON RACHEL….SLOW FADE TO THEME SONG. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3KQ9WWkvoe0 ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- PART 2 Steven: I grew up here. Joy: In this little drab town? Steven: It has it’s advantages. Headed to work? Joy: The only thing that’s on my mind right now is my morning cuppa joe. Steven: Well the nearest one besides this one is on the other side of town. Do...you need a lift? Joy: I don’t know you. Steven: How rude of me. I’m Dr. Steven Frame. Joy: Joy. Steven: Now that we know each other, I wouldn’t mind giving you a ride there. The alternative would take you an hour. Joy: A little exercise never hurt, right? Joy tries to walk past him, but… Steven: I understand your trepidation. How do you like your coffee? Joy: One cream and two sugars. Wait a minute. You’re not… Steven: I will go across town, get your coffee, and bring it back here for you. If you’re willing to wait. Joy (smiling): It’ll be cold by the time you get back. Steven: Hopefully their microwave still work even if the coffee machine doesn’t. They both smile at each other. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Iris: Rachel went to Springfield right? Cory: Yeah that’s where she took dad. Iris: What kind of mother does that? Oh...I’m sorry. Cory: It’s okay. I just wanna know my dad is doing. Iris: Tell ya what. I have a friend who lives in Springfield, Alexandra Spaulding. I’ll give her a call and she’ll find out for us. Cory: Are you sure? You know you don’t have to… Iris: I WANT to...now stop before I change my mind. Cory: Thank you. Thank you so much. Cory spontaneously hugs Iris, meanwhile Amanda comes to the door and observes Cory and Iris’s embrace. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- Lisa examines Carl while Rachel watches… Rachel: How is he? Lisa: There’s no change. Rachel: But he squeezed my hand. Lisa: That was just a reflex. I’m sorry. Rachel: I just want him to come back. I put everything on the line. I took risks for him to come here and get treatment. Lisa: And he is getting stronger, but it’s going to take some time for his body to rid itself of the poison. If you’ll excuse me, I’ve gotta go check on a patient. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Lisa enters the patient’s room with some medication and a cup and she calls out for her… Lisa: Marissa? How are you feeling? It’s time for your medication. Marissa: Better all the time. Lisa (giving Marissa a pill and a cup of water): That’s great. The boss wants you to take this. Marissa puts the pill in her mouth and drinks the water. Lisa: I’ll be back to check on you later. Lisa leaves and Marissa takes the pill out of her mouth, and places it in her drawer, with many other pills identical to the one she just took out of her mouth. Marissa: The boss is not gonna get his way. FREEZE FRAME ON MARISSA...SLOW FADE OUT...END OF EPISODE 148
  19. Oooh what a twist at the end!!! Kate was just so sure she had that in the bag! Nick and Christy Carson may have attended the same school of trying to convince those you have hurt badly that you've changed.. I am now starting to see the stringing together of your stories. KEEP IT UP!!
  20. Kim is back! Again, you are doing WONDERS with Jordan. Nick the psychopath is roaming around.
  21. You have made Jordan more interesting than Gary and Chris have in a lot less time lol.. I could see Abby and EJ scrambling as you described it. Enjoyed the dialogue also, especially Sami and Kate's exchanges
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