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  1. Enjoyed the dialogue with Theresa and Jennifer. Sonny seems worried that Sami IS crazy lol EJ is also very paranoid..And Abby lied to protect ANNE... Good one....
  2. Thanks guys...this is a dry run pilot...if I get enough "ratings" I will continue with GH...
  3. GOOD EPISODE... I loved Karynn and Karl's entrance, Jack's self preservation, Roxanne being caught, And the mystery of the family that Chance, Nina and Philip were talking about.... Your last two episodes have been very very good!!
  4. GENERAL HOSPITAL By C. Nathaniel Richardson GENERAL HOSPITAL FANFIC PILOT 1 Part 1 GENERAL HOSPITAL Michael walks up to a door that says “Dr. Monica Quartermaine, Chief of Staff.”, knocks on the door, and sees Monica. Michael: Grandmother. Monica: Michael! Hi honey. How are you? Michael: I’m good. I came to give you the good news. Monica: Oh…I already heard! Michael: So…you know? ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- PRISON The guards escort Ava Jerome to the visitors’ area, where Kiki is waiting on the other side of the glass. They simultaneously pick up the phones. Ava: Kiki I thought I told you I didn’t want you to see me like this. Kiki: Sorry mom. I had to come see you. Ava: I already know that I’m a horrible mother. You didn’t have to come all the way to the penitentiary to tell me. Kiki holds up her left hand, and Ava is shocked. Ava: Oh my God. He asked you. Kiki: Michael and I are getting married. Ava: Wow that’s…that’s wonderful. Congratulations. When’s the wedding? Kiki: This week. Monica: Congratulations! I will be more than happy to help with any planning. Michael: That would be great, if you’re up to a fight with my mom. METROCOURT HOTEL - BALLROOM Carly: You put that over there by the table. And I want the threshold overrrrr here. Carly continues to dole out orders and Franco walks in. Carly: Hey you. I’m real busy. Franco: I can see that, but can I borrow my lovely girlfriend for a minute? Carly: Franco I’d love to but I just can’t. I gotta… Franco silences her with a kiss and Carly smiles, but she’s focused… Carly: I really needed that, but I gotta finish planning Michael and Kiki’s engagement party. I don’t want anything going wrong. Franco: It won’t. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------- MEANWHILE, Carlos Rivera is in the back alley of the Metro Court, and it’s dimly lit. He looks around, and starts walking. Suddenly, Shawn appears in front of him, and pointing a flashlight, and a shiny silver Smith and Wesson, at Carlos. Shawn: What the hell are you doing here? QUICK CUT TO… ------------------------------------------------------------------------ Ava: Well I’m...happy for you honey. Kiki: Well you don’t seem like it. Ava: Because I’m here. I would rather be supporting you. Kiki: I don’t think the Quartermaines would want you around after what you’ve done. Ava: There’s nothing that would keep me from supporting you. Kiki: I know mom. I...wish you could be there, too. Ava: I’m so grateful that you’ve stood by me, despite everything that I’ve done. Kiki: You’re always gonna be my mother. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Carlos: I had to go to the bathroom. Shawn: You’re a terrible liar. Carlos: Looks nice in the ballroom. Looks like Sonny’s son and Ava’s daughter are gonna have a nice engagement party. Shawn: Julian sent you didn’t he? Carlos: I don’t work for him. Shawn: Yeah right. Carlos: I took the rap for Sonny because Ava threatened my Sabrina. It’s her fault Sabrina left! Shawn: I don’t give a damn about your vendettas. Carlos: Well I can’t get to Ava and Sonny. They’re locked up. Shawn: So you’re going after their kids? I can’t allow that. Suddenly, someone knocks out Carlos. Shawn: Jason? Thought you were done. Jason: Old habits die hard. Let’s get him outta here. I’m not gonna let him hurt Michael. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Monica: Your mother IS something else. Guess I better lay off. Michael: Thank you grandmother. I appreciate it. Monica smiles. Monica: I’m so happy. For you. For all of us. For our family. I’ve got all of you back again. I’ve lost Alan, Emily, Edward, A.J., but Jason’s back, and I’ve got you. Michael: Don’t forget Aunt Tracy. Monica: I couldn’t if I wanted to. Michael: I gotta get back to the office. Jason and I are working on a project. Monica: Okay. You have a good evening. After Michael leaves…Monica walks to her desk, sits back down, and looks at a picture. Monica: Alan, oh how I wish you were here. Everything is better than I ever could have dreamed. Michael and I have gotten close, and Jason’s back...with us. Then she sighs and pulls up something on her computer. Monica: There’s just one more thing that will make everything complete. Monica looks at a DNA test showing that Jason is Michael’s biological father. END OF GENERAL HOSPITAL PILOT 1
  5. Lisa didn't discuss anything specific with Felicia. Good catch of that MLC MLC, Beebs...the John and Gregory mess is only gonna get messier. Vicky has had enough... Thanks for reading guys
  6. Rachel is not involved with Cory Productions anymore... The confrontation begins... Thanks guys for reading and your comments
  7. ANOTHER WORLD 159 - Stacey gets hard evidence Created by: William J. Bell and Irna Phillips Written By: C. Nathaniel Richardson Consultants: aMLCproduction, DRW50, and Beebs ALLEN’S SUITE Amanda is buttoning up her blouse in the mirror while Allen walks up behind her shirtless. He then starts kissing her neck. Allen: Hey beautiful. You sure you can’t stay a few more minutes? Amanda: Oh I’d...love to, but I’m gonna be late for the hearing. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- LOVE MANSION - Michael is putting folders together as he is dressed in a suit in the living room. Donna walks in. Donna: You’re getting ready for the hearing? Michael (sighing): Yeah uh...I gotta figure this whole thing out. Donna: Well you probably only have about an hour to do that. Michael: After this, we’re gonna talk about what you told me last night. Donna: Look just focus on this proceeding. I promise I’ll tell you what happened. Michael: I gotta tell ya, I love my new brothers and sisters, but they’re like a bunch of ravenous lions, and Cory Productions might as well be a zebra carcass. They all want a chunk of it. I’m gonna need all the energy I can muster to get through it. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- IRIS’S SUITE - Iris is in a pink terrycloth with a towel on her head when someone rings the doorbell. Iris opens and Paulina walks right in. Iris: I didn’t invite you in here Paulina. As you can see I’m getting ready. Paulina: I’m giving you one last opportunity to pull out of this. Iris: Not a chance! --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- BAY CITY CENTER - Vicky is walking and looking at her cell phone when she bumps into someone. As she drops her purse, all the contents spill out of it. “Dammit!” She says as she as she’s puts her stuff back in her purse. She looks up and sees Lisa Grady McCleary looking down at her. Lisa: Vicky? Vicky: Wow oh wow. It gets better. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Meanwhile, from a short distance away, Lindsay continues her conversation with Bridget. Lindsay: Are you sure that’s what my mom said? Bridget: I know what I heard. She stood in our living room and told my dad that she was still in love with him. You need to tell her to stay away. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- STACEY’S APARTMENT - Stacey is vacuuming near Lindsay’s bedroom and notices Lindsay’s wastebasket. Stacey: I guess I’m the only one who sees this thing is full. In going to pick it up, Stacey accidentally kicks it over and notices a ripped piece of paper which has a letterhead that reads: LABORATORY COMPANIES, INC., and she wonders where the other half is. Stacey: My God is something wrong witih Lindsay? CAMERA PAN ON STACEY...SLOW FADE TO THEME SONG https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QCBSkI6rms0 ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ PART 2 Allen: I’d better stop. We need to save our energy for after the hearing. Do you have any idea which way Michael’s gonna decide? Amanda: I don’t even know if Michael knows, especially what Iris is trying to pull. Allen: It’s weird that she would only want Brava. After all the scheming she did when she got out of prison. Amanda: As much as I hate to admit it, she’s the key to swaying Michael’s decision. Allen: I say give her what she wants. Amanda: What? How can you say something like that? I worked very hard to get Brava where it is now. I’m not gonna just give it up to Iris. Allen: I’m sorry beautiful, but you might not have a choice. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Iris: You all have really lost your minds. Paulina: It’s the only logical thing to do. Why do you insist on fighting us? Iris: Do I really have to explain that to you? Paulina: We all are entitled to what our father built, not just you. Iris: Why do you think I proposed to have control of Brava? Paulina: And you expect us to believe that you did that out of the goodness of your hollow heart? Iris: You should be at the Love Mansion trying to convince Michael to do the right thing. I’m not Mac’s firstborn. I’m not even Mac’s biological daughter. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Michael: Off to the hearing. Donna: I’m gonna go to the club and finish up some work. Michael: We’ll talk later honey. Love you. They kiss and Michael leaves. Donna gets a phone call. Donna: Hello? What? Oh no! I’ll be right there! ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Lisa: What is that supposed to mean? Vicky: Nothing. I gotta get somewhere. Vicky runs away, and Lisa notices a hairbrush. Lisa: Vicky! Vicky you forgot something. Lisa picks it up, and her hand begins to shake. Lisa: Oh God. It’s happening again. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Lindsay: Wait a minute Bridget I can’t control what my mother does. Bridget: You can talk to her can’t you? My parents are good again. Lindsay: Well then if they are as strong you say they are, then what you say my mother said shouldn’t affect anyone. Jake approaches the girls. Bridget: Dad. Lindsay: Hi Jake. Jake: Hey Lindsay. Kiddo have you heard from your mother? Bridget: No. Lindsay: What’s going on? Jake: Damn! I was hoping I could stop her here. Bridget: Stop her from doing what? Lindsay: Seeing my mom. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Stacey puts together the DNA test that Lindsay ripped in half. Stacey: Lindsay was holding on to this? She decided not to say anything. My God. Suddenly, Vicky knocks constantly on the door… Vicky: Stacey open up! Open this door! Stacey opens the door with the DNA test in her hand, and Vicky walks in. Stacey: What is wrong with you? Vicky: I know what you told Jake. You better stay the hell away from him! FREEZE FRAME ON VICKY...SLOW FADE OUT...END OF EPISODE 159
  8. Thanks Carl... Sharlene won't be blase too much longer...but i'm not going the alter route for a while. Gregory's mind seems to be going to far out places...but could he be right? and Vicky is not having it anymore
  9. Abigail better not say anything to Nick... I liked that little "funny" moment between Jennifer and Liam And I understand if Sami doesn't wanna marry EJ.. Your Brady dialogue is vintage Brady... Good episode
  10. ANOTHER WORLD 158 - Vicky decides to take action Created By: William J. Bell and Irna Phillips Written By: C. Nathaniel Richardson Consultants: aMLCproduction, DRW50 and Beebs INSTITUTION John and Gregory are with Sharlene and Steven in an office with a leather couch, a desk, and a chair across from the couch. John is standing in front of Steven’s desk with Sharlene and Gregory, and Steven is sitting at his desk across from them. John: Are you ready honey? Sharlene: As ready as I’ll ever be. Steven: I will take good care of her. Gregory gives a menacing look to John as he flashes back to what he saw at Felicia’s place. Steven notices this look. Gregory: Mom you’re gonna come out of this stronger than ever. I’ll be there every step of the way. I’m not gonna let anyone else hurt you. John: We’ll be right outside. Gregory: We sure will. John and Gregory leave the office, and after Gregory shuts the door... Gregory: You can go. I’ll stay with mom. John: I’m not going anywhere. Gregory: Well that’s surprising. I thought you would go running straight to that your side piece like you did the other day. John: I beg your pardon. Gregory: I saw you and Felicia...together again. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- AT THE BLAKE’S...someone rings the doorbell incessantly as Felicia is working on her laptop... Felicia (putting it down and going to the door): Alright alright I’m coming. After she opens the door… Felicia: Lisa? Lisa walks in rubbing her hands together… Lisa: Hi Aunt Felicia. Felicia: What’s going on? You look worried. Lisa: Something is terribly wrong, and I can’t figure out what it is. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- BAY CITY CENTER Lindsay is sitting sipping a coffee when Bridget comes up and sits across from her. Lindsay: Hey Bridget what’s up? Bridget: I have to talk to you about your mom. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- AT THE MCKINNONS...Vicky sits on the couch and flashes back to what Bridget told her in the car (in episode 156) as Jake comes downstairs. Vicky: I’ve gotta stop that bitch. Jake: Vicky stop. I know what you’re about to do. Vicky: What do you mean? Jake: You’re talking about Stacey aren’t you? CAMERA PAN ON JAKE...SLOW FADE TO THEME SONG https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QCBSkI6rms0 ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Part 2 Steven: I know you’re scared, but you have nothing to worry about. Sharlene: I know nephew. How’s your father? Steven: He’s great. His practice is thriving in Paris. He’s loving it here. Sharlene: What made you wanna come back? Steven: You. I’ve come to help you. We’ve gotta establish something. During these sessions I’m not your nephew, I’m your doctor. I also want you to know that what we say during these sessions is completely confidential. Sharlene: I know about the doctor/patient confidentiality stuff. I’ve done this rodeo before. Steven: You know I’ll be honest with you though...on the record. Sharlene: About what? Steven: There is some serious tension between Uncle John and Gregory. Sharlene: I don’t know for sure, but those two always have something going on between them. Par for the course I suppose. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Gregory follows John into an empty office, and John shuts the door. John: What the hell are you talking about? Gregory: You went to her place didn’t you? I saw you two hugging. John: You’re following me now Gregory? Why don’t you install a damn GPS tracking device the next time? Gregory: You think this is a joke dad? It’s happening again. John: For the last time I am not involved with Felicia! Gregory: Not yet. I’m not gonna let you do it again. John: I would not hurt your mother like that again. Gregory: You say one thing and do something else! You’re such a liar! John: I am becoming very concerned about you. You’re angry at me for no reason. Felicia and I are friends. That’s it. Gregory: You wanted Dr. Taylor to keep her from remembering what happened the day the Center opened. John: That was for her protection. Gregory: And look where mom is now. I don’t want to see mom the way I saw her twenty years when you cheated on her with that homewrecker, and you’re gonna do it again. I guess once….always… Gregory walks out. --------------------------------------------------------------------------- Felicia: Why don’t you sit down so we can talk? Lisa: I didn’t know who else to call. Felicia: Honey you can always call me. So what’s bothering you? Lisa: It’s one of my patients at the Cavanaugh Clinic. I got a chill when I touched her. Felicia: A psychic vibe. Lisa: Yes. My vibes are still jumping all over the place. Felicia: Do you have any idea what it could be? Lisa: I get an eerily familiar vibe from Marissa. Felicia: Marissa? That’s her name? Lisa: Yes. Felicia: Well there was a woman named Marissa LaSalle that came to Bay City around the same time you were here. She was really Mary McKinnon. Turned out she had lost her memory. Lisa: Why do they have the same name? Felicia: That is a bit odd. Lisa (getting up, pacing, frustrated): Goodness why can’t I figure this ouuuuut! Felicia: You said the vibe you got was familiar. Could she be connected to someone you already know? ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Lindsay: My mom? Bridget: I overheard their conversation. Lindsay: Wait a minute. What exactly did my mom say? Bridget: That she was still in love with my dad. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Vicky: Whatever gave you that idea? Jake: Bridget told you didn’t she? What Stacey said. Vicky: About her still being in love with you? Yes, and I don’t like it one bit. Jake: I remember what happened back then. Vicky: And when did you start recalling your affair with that woman? Jake takes a deep breath. Jake: A while ago. Vicky: Wow really? And you’re just telling me now? Jake: Details were coming to me little by little, but I didn’t wanna tell you until I was sure. Vicky: You remembered this amnesiac affair with this woman, who is still in love with that guy, and you weren’t sure? Jake: Vicky please try to understand. Vicky: Do you love her? Jake: How can you ask something like that? Vicky: We know that Stacey loves you, but do you love her? Jake: Of course I don’t Vicky! I love you! Vicky: Is that what you told Stacey when she poured her heart out to you? Jake: Not exactly. Vicky (shaking her head): That’s...that’s not the answer I wanted to hear Jake. She fought to have Mikey taken away from my parents years ago. It destroyed them, and now she’s trying to destroy my family. I’m not gonna let her. Vicky grabs her keys. Jake: Where are you going? Vicky no. Stacey knows where I stand. Vicky: Someone’s gotta take a stand for this family. If it’s not gonna be you, it will be me. That bitch is not gonna get a second chance to tear my family apart. FREEZE FRAME ON VICKY...SLOW FADE OUT...END OF EPISODE 158
  11. Robin Mattson played Heather Webber on GH, YRbiggestfan. Thanks for reading Case!!
  12. Yes Carl...what would AW be without Donna in trouble? LOL... Thanks again...
  13. Wow robbwolff and BEEBS!! THANK YOU BOTH FOR Reading. I'm glad you enjoy and I got more great stuff coming!!
  14. Thanks for reading guys... Yes, robbwolff...Lisa married Quinn McCleary. She is Felicia's niece, and was involved with Jamie Frame, and lost Jamie to Vicky. This episode does tap into Lisa's psychic powers. Thanks again for the clarification robbwolff
  15. ANOTHER WORLD 157 - Carl wakes up Created by: William J. Bell and Irna Phillips Written by: C. Nathaniel Richardson Consultants: aMLCproduction, DRW50, and Beebs Christopher Norris guest stars as Karen CORY PRODUCTIONS - Amanda and Paulina discuss Iris. Paulina sits across from Amanda, while Amanda looks at her computer, as if she’s trying to make sense of something. Amanda: I can’t get it out of my head. Paulina: Operation Loco. Amanda: Iris approved all this funding for that project before she hired me, but it’s just an usually large sum of money, and then the deposits just stopped. I don’t get it. Paulina: The only way you’re gonna find out is finding out where those deposits went. Amanda tries to access the “Loco” file on her computer… Amanda: What? Paulina: What happened? Amanda: The file is locked, and I’m sure only one person has the password. Paulina: Iris. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- SPAULDING ENTERPRISES A sign on the door reads “Alexandra Spaulding, CEO.” Inside, Alexandra slides an envelope to Iris. Iris: I’m almost scared to open this. Alexandra: I’ve never known you to be afraid of anything. Iris: What does it say? That I’m out of Cory Productions forever? Alexandra: There’s only one way to find out. Open the envelope. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- CAVANAUGH CLINIC - Rachel is with Carl, who just woke up. Rachel is overjoyed. Rachel: My God darling you’re back! Oh God. It’s a miracle. Carl: Told you I wasn’t goin anywhere. Rachel: We gotta...gotta get you checked out. I’m gonna go get Lisa. Rachel goes to the door and Karen, the nurse, appears. Karen: Lisa’s not available. Rachel: I’m sorry? Karen: Lisa’s otherwise occupied. I’ll be your nurse for today. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Lisa knocks on a door, and asks if anyone’s in there. Suddenly the door opens, and she walks in. The office is filled with dark blue strobe lights. Lisa: Hellooo? Karen told me I could find you here. I need to talk to you about Marissa. Meanwhile, someone is watching Lisa on surveillance. SLOW FADE TO THEME SONG ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Amanda: What the hell is she up to? Paulina: No good apparently. Amanda: Something’s definitely wrong here. Paulina: Why doesn’t she want you to see that file? Amanda: If it’s something I could use against her, I could save Brava. Paulina: I’ll help you. It’s time we brought that bitch down once and for all. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Iris is shocked after reading what was in the envelope... Iris: I can’t believe this. How did this happen? Alexandra: According to Alan’s will, he left me in charge of his safety deposit box in the event of his death. Iris: So you’re just coming across this now? Alexandra: I’ve been so preoccupied with Spaulding Enterprises, and trying to fend off and Phillip and Alan-Michael, the corporate predators that they are. I haven’t even had a second to go over and see what was in it. I promise you, as soon as I found out, I called and told you. Iris: This changes everything. Alexandra: It should help you tremendously at your upcoming hearing. Iris (sighing): Truer words. What would I do without you? Alexandra: Hopefully you’ll never find out. Iris’ eyes well up. Iris: You’re truly my best friend. Alexandra: Don’t you forget it darling. They hug. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Karen is in the hallway on her cell phone. Karen: Hutchins woke up. The antidote worked, and it wouldn’t have without you. Dr. McCleary, though, is becoming a problem. She’s getting too close to Marissa. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Lisa goes into Marissa’s room, and goes over to her bed as she sleeps. Lisa: Karen gave you way too much propofol. Why would the boss want you sedated so heavily? I’m gonna help you. Lisa touches Marissa’s arm, gets a chill, and jumps back in horror. Lisa: Oh my God! ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Carl is now sitting up in his bed... Rachel: Karen says you’re doing great. That means we’ll be able to go home soon. Do you remember anything? Carl: I recall was taking a drink. The police were holding you for Reginald’s murder. Rachel: Boy where do I start with that? Carl: Sharlene was talking to me. Rachel: No it wasn’t her. Carl: Was it an alter? Rachel: Yes Carl: She accused of me leaving Janice to raise Evan and Frankie alone, and then I had trouble breathing. Rachel: She had poisoned the liquor. I figured out that she had planted it in my sweater to make it look like I killed Reginald Love. She had an elaborate plan to destroy us. Carl: I wonder why her alter wanted to kill Reginald. Sounds like she was out for some type of revenge. Rachel: Well Sharlene is getting the help she needs, as for us, I’m looking forward to going home. Carl: Where am I Rachel? Rachel (sighing): We’re in Monticello. Carl: Where? Rachel: Honey that’s not important right now. You’re up and well…. Carl: Why won’t you tell me where we are? What are you hiding? FREEZE FRAME ON RACHEL…SLOW FADE OUT...END OF EPISODE 157
  16. THe slippery slope for Maggie... Glad you are showing us that Liam is actually with Jennifer (unlike the TV version). Anne better be very careful...she could end up swimming with the fishes. Sami is becoming a basket case.. You explore characters very well...keep it up
  17. WOW this was a power packed GREAT episode...loved each and every dialogue and every scene. Esther to Victor, Karynn to Karl, Nate and Roxanne, and Cane and Malcolm... I could picture the scene at the end when everyone was wondering who was gonna be arrested....
  18. Rachel heard that name before...Marissa...and Carl woke up... I gave love to Guiding Light and Springfield.. Thanks for reading MLC
  19. ANOTHER WORLD 156 - Revelations Created by: William J. Bell and Irna Phillips Written and Directed By: C. Nathaniel Richardson Consultants: aMLCproduction, DRW50, and Beebs SPECIAL APPEARANCE BY Marj Dusay as Alexandra Spaulding PART 1 AT THE MONTGOMERYS - Michael, Donna, Marley, Tyrone, Vicky and Bridget are in the living room. Vicky: Dad where have you been? Are you okay? What happened? Your car crashed on that icy road because you thought I was with Shane. This...this can’t be. Michael: That guy who died was my twin brother Martin. Marley: Twin? Grandma Clara had twins? Tyrone: Plot thickens huh? Michael: I promise all of you that I will tell you everything. I just want to celebrate. I’m with my family again. Michael turns to Bridget. Michael: Look at you. My granddaughter. Look at all of you. I’ve missed so much time with you. Donna: We can’t live in the past anymore. It wasn’t your fault about what my father did. Vicky: You’re telling me Reginald had something to do with you being gone for twenty years? Bridget: What did Grandpa Reginald do? Marley: He held your grandfather hostage. Bridget: Oh my God. You were all right about him. Vicky: Dad he kept you from all of us. Reginald deserved exactly what he got. Michael: I heard about it...and good riddance I say. Vicky: How long have you been back? Michael: A little while. There’s a reason I couldn’t tell you all right when I returned. Marley: I don’t understand. Michael: I found out that...I’m Mac Cory’s son, and because of that, I am the owner of Cory Productions. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ CORY PRODUCTIONS- Paulina knocks on the door to Amanda’s office. Paulina: You called? Is it about the hearing? Amanda: No. Actually it isn’t. It’s about Iris. Paulina: Our dear old sister. Amanda: Turns out our dear old sister is up to something. I’m gonna find out what it is. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Meanwhile in Springfield - SPAULDING ENTERPRISES Iris and Cory walk up to an office door, and the name plate reads “Alexandra Spaulding, C.E.O.” Iris: This is my best friend. Cory: She’s gonna tell us where my dad is? Iris: Of course. Alexandra opens the door. Alexandra: Well hello. Iris and Alexandra air kiss each other on each side. Alexandra: Good to see you dahling. Iris: Yes dahling it’s been a long time. Oh let me introduce you to Cory Hutchins. Cory this is my best friend, Alexandra Spaulding. Alexandra: How are you doing young man? Cory: I’m good Ms. Spaulding. Alexandra: Please dear call me Alex. You’re young enough to be my grandson, my grandchildren don’t call me grandma. Iris: You’re right about that. I had to teach Sarah and D.J. to call me nanna when they were younger. Alexandra: Please come into my office. I’ve got some news...for both of you. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- MONTICELLO - CAVANAUGH CLINIC Rachel watches as Lisa check Carl’s vitals. Then she backs away and says nothing. Rachel: Lisa what’s going on? Is my husband making progress? CAMERA PAN ON RACHEL...SLOW FADE TO THEME SONG. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2KO8AxqQ9Qg ----------------------------------------------------------------------------- CAR - Michael is driving Donna… Michael: I have to go see John and Sharlene. Donna: John and Felicia came to the house and told me that it was a possibility that you were alive. Michael: Wow...he was looking for me this time like I was looking for him over twenty five years ago. Wait a minute. You said John and Felicia? They’re not... Donna: I don’t know. They said they’re not having an affair so… Donna checks her cell phone and is horrified when she reads a text that says “You shot Reginald.” She tries to sigh silently, but Michael catches her. Michael: Donna what’s wrong? Donna: It’s nothing. Michael: We just found each other again, and you’re gonna start us off again by not telling me the truth. Donna: I’m not…! Michael: I’ve known you practically my whole life. I know when something’s wrong with you, and I know when you’re lying. Donna: I shot Reginald. Michael: What? But he was poisoned to death. Donna: Before he ingested it, I shot him. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- CAR - Vicky is driving Bridget.. Vicky: How does it feel? Bridget: It’s weird seeing my grandfather for the first time. I know you, Aunt Marley, and Grandma Donna talk about him. Vicky: It’s a miracle. I mean we all thought he was dead, and he just appears to us. I wish he could’ve met your sister, too. Bridget: Yeah me, too. Bridget takes out her phone and sends a text. Vicky: You and your texting. Bridget: I was texting Lindsay. Vicky: Honey I want you to stay away from her. Bridget: I need to find out what was up with her mom coming to the house. Vicky: Stacey? She came to the house? Bridget: Yeah. I heard her. She told dad that she was in love with him. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Paulina: I wonder if it’s something that could get her out of the company. Amanda: I’m not too sure, but there is a lot of money that Iris sent to this project named Operation Loco. Regular payments, then they just stopped. Paulina: You’re officially still working for her. You think she’d run something like that by you. Amanda (shaking her head as she clicks her mouse): What is this? What is it for? Paulina: She’s definitely hiding something. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Iris: So did you find out what room Carl is in? Alexandra: I called Dr. Rick Bauer. I had him look for me. Cory: So let’s go see him. Alexandra: He’s not there. He’s not at Cedar’s, or any other hospital in the city. Cory, disappointed, gets up, and Iris touches him on his shoulder. Iris: I’m sorry hun. I heard your mother say that she was taking Carl to Springfield. Cory: So mom lied again. I gotta get some air I’ll be back. Iris: Cory. Alexandra: Let him go Iris. I need to you to sit down. I could’ve told you about Carl over the phone. Alexandra opens her drawer and takes out an envelope. Iris: What’s that? Alexandra: Oh dahling, you have no idea. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Rachel: Lisa? Is something wrong? Lisa: He’s fine. He’s doing great. Rachel sighs in relief. Rachel: Don’t scare me like that. Lisa: I didn’t mean to do that. I’m just amazed at the progress he’s made. Rachel: Lisa, a young girl came here while I was talking to Carl about Cory, and then two big orderlies took her away. Lisa: Marissa. Rachel: That’s her name? Lisa: Yes I’m gonna go check on her. Lisa leaves… Rachel: That name sounds familiar. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- MARISSA’S ROOM A nurse is disposing of a needle when Lisa confronts this nurse, while Marissa sleeps soundly. Lisa: Karen. What did you give her? Karen: Propofol. The boss wants her heavily sedated. Lisa: She’s my patient! Karen: Apparently you’re not doing your job. Lisa: Too much of this is going to impede her progress. Karen: Well you can talk to the boss about it. Lisa: Oh believe me, I will. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- CARL’S ROOM Rachel has her back turned to Carl. Rachel: The last time I heard that name, was Marissa LaSalle, but she turned out to be Mary McKinnon. Suddenly…. Carl (mumbling): I remember...that name, too. Rachel turns around in shocked elation. FREEZE FRAME ON RACHEL...SLOW FADE OUT...END OF EPISODE 156
  20. Gregory's uncle Jason Frame the pimp.. I hope Sharlene can see Charlie get married... Thanks Carl!!
  21. lol Carl...thanks...i had to dig into Gregory's psyche a lil bit...and Eric seems creepy to me
  22. Dante is supposedly working with Jack at the Police Station. Paulina is overreacting as usual. Thanks for the other comments MLC...more to come with Christy...trust that...
  23. LOL @Karynn and Karl...Malcolm is spiraling downward quickly. Liked the scenes between Malcolm and Phyllis. You didn't forget that they were friends. And I wonder where Paul's investigation is going to lead him now that he knows how Tucker died. And I see the seeds for Nikki's upcoming story being sown. Good one.
  24. Thanks Beebs....I'm gonna take full advantage of Christy's growing evil lol
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