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  1. ANOTHER WORLD 175 Cass gets an uninvited guest Created by: William J. Bell and Irna Phillips Written by: C. Nathaniel Richardson Consultants: aMLCproduction, beebs, DRW50 PART 1 MONTICELLO POLICE STATION Allen has just discovered KC, his daughter. Toni and Etta Mae are with them. Allen slowly walks up to her, seemingly not knowing how to react to seeing K.C. for the first time. Allen: My God. It’s really you. My daughter? K.C. backs away. K.C.: I don’t...know you. Etta Mae intervenes… Etta Mae: You’re scaring her. Allen: We were robbed of all those years together. Toni and Etta Mae did that. Etta Mae: This isn’t the place to talk about this. Why don’t we go home? Allen: Why? So you and Toni can figure out more ways to keep me from my daughter! Toni: KC you need to give your statement to Casey. K.C.: Will you all stop it? I’m not a toy in your sandbox! ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Meanwhile, Jack and Casey discuss Reginald. Jack: This isn’t happening right now. He murdered Evan Frame; kidnapped Bridget McKinnon and K.C. Burrell, and you mean to tell me he’s gonna get away with it? Casey: Reginald and his accomplice Margaret are citizens of Tanquir, so all we can do is have them deported. Cecile interrupts. Cecile: That’s correct gentlemen. So it’s time for you to release my clients into my custody. Jack and Casey look at Cecile, knowing that they have no choice but to comply. Casey: You will get a police escort to the airport. Cecile: The flight plan has been filed, and I can assure you that Reginald and Margaret will be flown to Tanquir. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- WINTHROPS HOUSE - Cass walks into the living room and sees Frankie. Frankie: Everything is clean. All the trash is by the door, but you’re gonna have to take it out. I’m not taking out the trash. Cass: I will take out the garbage. Frankie: You don’t have to do it right now. Cass: What do you want me to do now? Frankie smiles. Frankie: Do I have to show you everything? They kiss passionately. --------------------------------------------------------------------------- AT THE MONTICELLO AIRPORT - Reginald, Cecile, and Margaret on Cecile’s jet. Margaret: I’m going to the ladies’ room. Cecile: I hear there’s a storm coming. Why is the Monticello Police outside? Reginald: Detective Casey Stoner is just making sure that I don’t try to give them the slip. Cecile: It’s just as well. It’ll give me the chance to… Cecile stops herself… Reginald: Do you want to finish your sentence or should I? Cecile: I was gonna go make sure that the Monticello Police did everything they were supposed to do. Reginald: Oh come on. We both know you’re going to Bay City to see your former love slave...Cass Winthrop. CAMERA PAN ON CECILE...SLOW FADE TO THEME SONG. ------------------------------------------------------------------------- PART 2 AT THE BLAKES, Mitch confronts Felicia about what Gregory said at the institution... Felicia: What are you talking about? Mitch: I heard you were running around town helping John find Michael. Felicia: Who did you hear that from? Mitch: That’s not important. Felicia: John is a friend. Mitch: Just friends? Felicia: I can’t believe you’re actually asking me that! Mitch: Are you having an affair with him? Felicia: No! I am not cheating on you with anyone, and I am hurt that you would even think that I am having an affair with John again. It happened over twenty years ago. Mitch: You didn’t even tell me about it. Felicia: Just like you failed to mention the fact that Sharlene was confiding in you about one of her alters. Mitch: That’s completely different. I’ve never had an affair with her. Felicia: So you’re throwing my past in my face! Felicia sighs with exasperation.. Felicia: My god-daughter is getting married tomorrow. I need to rest. Mitch: Good idea. Mitch tries to follow Felicia into the bedroom but she stops and turns around. Felicia: You can sleep on the couch tonight. The blankets are in the linen closet. She then slams the bedroom door. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Cass is holding Frankie in bed after having made love. Cass: Wow. This time tomorrow, Charlie will be married. Frankie: I’m still a little surprised that you gave your blessing. Cass: I guess I felt better about it after... Frankie: You can say it. Cass: Charlie’s safety and well being are my only concerns. Frankie: Mine, too. I thought Christy had changed, but the judge didn’t see it that way, but it shouldn’t come between us. I’ve always loved you Cass. I always will. They kiss, and then Frankie reminds him of something. Frankie: This would be a good time for… Cass: The trash. Frankie: Yeah you don’t want it smelling up the living room. Cass: You’re...you’re… Frankie: Right? Cass: Yeah yeah you’re right. Cass gets up and puts his robe on. He grabs the trash by the front door, and opens it, and his eyes widen as he is shocked by what he sees. Cass: Cecile? What the hell are you doing here at this hour? ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- AT TONI’S APARTMENT - Toni, K.C. and Etta Mae walk in. K.C is quiet. Etta Mae: Keneisha aren’t you gonna say something? K.C.: What do you want me to say? That I understand why you kept me from my father all my life? Sorry I can’t wrap my head around that. Toni: You may not understand right now, but I do need you to try. The situation was impossible. K.C.: You had to know that he was looking for me. He was looking for me right? Etta Mae and Toni look at each other. Etta Mae: We told him that you were dead. K.C.: Oh it gets better. Etta Mae: He left. It wasn’t like he was going to the military. He had no excuse leaving Toni pregnant! K.C.: So you told him that I was dead. Toni: We told him that I lost the baby. K.C.: Why did he leave? Toni: He went looking for his mother. K.C.: I guess she would be my grandmother right? Toni: I couldn’t raise you by myself. I was in school. Etta Mae: That’s when I stepped in. Toni needed to finish school, so I took care of you. Toni: We didn’t want to confuse you. Etta Mae: So we let you think that Toni was your sister. Toni: I was devastated when he left. He didn’t even come back. Allen didn’t, and still doesn’t, deserve to be your father. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- PLANE - The rain is beating up against the plane with claps of thunder in between as Reginald is being served a plate of food. Reginald: This isn’t poisoned is it? The servant looks at him puzzled by his statement. Reginald: Never mind. The servant walks away. Reginald: I wish this storm would pass so we can get the hell out of here. Allen walks onto the aircraft. Allen: I second that. Reginald: Well well. If it isn’t my grandson. Did you come to see me off? Allen: I wanna know why you didn’t tell me about my daughter. Donna and Michael join Allen. Michael: You’re not gonna get a straight answer from him Allen. Why don’t we just pound it out of him? Reginald laughs. Reginald: Look at this. Our mini-family reunion. FREEZE FRAME ON REGINALD...SLOW FADE OUT….END OF EPISODE 175 ------------------------------------------------------------------------------
  2. Stories moved.... Liam? Who did he call? Why did he get so angry? What is he hiding? And I like that you are pulling JJ and Laura into that story. Looking forward to seeing where that's going. Victor has NO IDEA what's in store for Titan after that leak by THOTresa. Kim softens Theresa a bit, but not that much. Theresa is still a bitch to her core. I really like the conflict of emotions that you give her. And Gabi knows what Nick is not completely sincere. I wonder what she's going to do. (There's your story lol).... GOOD ONE!!
  3. This episode started kind of slow, then all of a sudden moved, but the ending was climactic. Like the natural conversations between Tyler and Daniel. I wonder how long before Chance explodes like the mansion did at the end. And is Esther in the house? Vandalynn is looking like a ho, but it seems there's a method to the madness... And Karynn is funny being drunk all the time, but I'm almost wondering why and how she got like that. Maybe you'll explore that..
  4. ANOTHER WORLD 174 - Reginald is captured, but is he finished? Created by: William J. Bell and Irna Phillips Written By: C. Nathaniel Richardson Consultants: aMLCproduction, beebs, and DRW50 MONTGOMERYS HOUSE - Tyrone opens the door and it’s Vicky. Vicky: Hey Tyrone. Tyrone: What’s going on Vicky? Vicky: Where’s my sister? Tyrone: Right there on the couch. Vicky: Looks like you’re headed out. Tyrone: Marley wants pickles and vanilla ice cream. Vicky: Cravings. I know what that’s like. Tyrone: Yeahhhh. I’ll be back. Tyrone leaves and Vicky goes to sit next to Marley on the couch. Vicky: How’s my nephew? Marley: He’s giving me a sore stomach. Did your babies do that? Vicky: Kirkland was a frequent kicker. Marley: What about the twins? Vicky: I think my boys gave me good practice so I knew what to do when I got pregnant with the girls. You know Steven’s back. Marley: Oh wow, and I know Kirkland’s about to get married. Vicky: Yes he sure is. Marley: Dad’s back with Donna. I mean everything seems to be falling into place for the family, although I haven’t heard from Allen in a few days. I wonder what he’s up to. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ BAY CITY POLICE DEPARTMENT - Toni has just made a shocking revelation to Allen about K.C. Toni: Yes. Allen: You...kept my daughter from me? Out of spite? Toni: I couldn’t take care of her by myself. Allen: So you gave her to Etta Mae to raise. If K.C. thinks that Etta Mae is her mother, and you her sister, then you lied to her, too. I wonder what she’s gonna think of you when she finds out. Toni: She’s not gonna! Toni’s cell phone rings and she answers. Toni: Oh my God. You found her? Alright. Allen: Who was that? They found my daughter? ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- BAY CITY CENTER - Joy sits a table sipping a coffee, but she can’t get something off of her mind as she flashes back to her encounter with Reginald. (EPISODE 165) CAVANAUGH CLINIC - Joy faces Reginald in his office. Joy: Does your word mean anything? Reginald: Just because you did me a couple of favors doesn’t mean anything. Joy: What are you talking about? I dove into the river and retrieved the gun that Donna shot you with. I burned down the Harbor Club. What more could you possibly want? Reginald: Oh, there is something else. Joy: What did Thomasina Todd ever do to you? She’s one of the sweetest, kindest people I know, and you made her sick. Who do you think you are? What makes you think you can play God with people’s lives? Joy flashes back to the present and her flashback prompts her to make a phone call. Joy: Thomasina it’s Joy. You sound a lot better. What did they give you? Well that’s...that’s almost miraculous. You just made my day. Thank you. Joy hangs up and looks up and utters “thank you”. She then gets an alert on her phone and it reads “Breaking News: Reginald Love captured in Monticello.” Joy: Wow. They got him. I gotta see this for myself. Then Tyrone walks up behind her with a brown bag, and she turns around to face him. Tyrone: See what? --------------------------------------------------------------------------- MONTICELLO POLICE STATION - Two officers escort K.C Burrell into the precinct, and then right after her, a handcuffed Reginald Love is brought in by two more officers. Reginald has a seemingly confident smirk on his face as Margaret, Cecile, Jack, and the other officers look at him. CAMERA PAN ON REGINALD...SLOW FADE TO THEME SONG. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8jZ4Rj06W6Y&list=UUfhLlxU9gPVviSwFAwlLsCA ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ PART 2 Vicky: He just got a job at KBAY. Marley: See I didn’t know that. I thought we were close. Vicky: Maybe he’s just busy. I’m sure he’ll call you. Marley: I wonder if he’s met dad. Vicky: I’m not too sure. Marley: Did you get these cravings? Vicky: Of course I did. I remember when Jake… Vicky stops and gets up and takes a few a few steps away from the couch. Marley immediately picks up on Vicky’s mood. Marley: Vicky? Vicky: Marley? Marley: Something’s wrong with you and Jake isn’t it? Vicky: Whatever would give you that idea? Marley: We’re twins remember? I feel it. Vicky: Just like I felt it when you were gonna leave town, and I convinced you to stay. Marley: I remember that, so now let me help you. Talk to me. What’s going on? Vicky turns around and faces her sister again. Vicky: Everything’s wrong. Jake and I are in trouble. Marley: What kind of trouble? Vicky: I hope you and Tyrone’s marriage stays strong; something for me to look to, because I don’t know if Jake and I are gonna make it. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Joy: Now that isn’t any of your business now is it? Tyrone: No, but if you’re up to something, I wanna know about it. Enemies gotta stay close. Joy: I wasn’t your foe when we were sleeping together was I? Tyrone laughs and shakes his head. Joy: Listen you’re fine and sexy and all, but this has nothing to do with you...not directly anyway. Tyrone: Just like I thought. I’m gonna be watching you. Joy gets face to face with Tyrone, and leans over to Tyrone’s left ear... Joy (whispering): Careful, I might like that. Joy looks at Tyrone seductively, smiles, and walks away. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- MONTICELLO POLICE PRECINCT...Jack approaches K.C. whose arms are folded, and looking down at the floor. Jack: We’re gonna need to take your statement Ms. Burrell. K.C.: Okay. At that moment, Toni and Etta Mae walk in and run to K.C. Etta Mae: Oh my God. My baby! Are you alright? Toni: Did Reginald hurt you? KC: No he didn’t. Etta Mae hugs KC, but KC does not hug Etta Mae back, and Toni picks up on KC’s lack of response. Etta Mae: I was so worried about you! When you didn't come home… KC: That’s...real sweet of you. Toni: We both were worried. KC: I’m not coming back home. I’m not goin’ anywhere until you tell me the truth. Toni: Tell you what? Allen walks in. KC: Reginald said that he and I were family. Is that true? Where’s my father? Allen: I’m right here. KC, Etta Mae and Toni are shocked as Allen approaches KC… Allen: My God. It’s really you. My daughter. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- INTERROGATION ROOM...Cecile confers with her client Reginald. Reginald: Toni wanted to see her daughter again. Cecile: Yes I got on the jet as soon as she called. Reginald: I’m glad you’re coming through for me. Cecile: Yes I am. If it weren’t for you I wouldn’t be where I am. Reginald: You’d still be broke. Cecile: Maggie’s trust fund money helped me become Queen of Tanquir again. Reginald: So when are we getting outta here? Cecile: Should be any minute now. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Meanwhile, Casey approaches Jack outside the interrogation room with a paper and shows Jack. Casey: I got this fax. Jack: No. This can’t be. Casey: I called them and spoke to a contact there. I had to do a double take my self. Jack: After everything he has done, you mean to tell me we can’t hold him? Casey: There’s only one thing we can do. Cecile approaches the disappointed detectives. Cecile: Gentlemen, should I call my pilot? Meanwhile, Joy sneaks past everyone and gets into the interrogation room to face Reginald, and shuts the door. Reginald: Joy Joy Joy. Joy: Did you do it? Reginald: The antidote? Joy: Thomasina said she’s feeling better. Reginald: Yes I called and they gave her the antidote. Joy: Then we’re even. Reginald: No we’re not. I can get to her whenever I want. Joy: So what does that mean? What else do you want me to do? Reginald: I don’t have to tell you. I want to raise the next patriarch of my family, and you’re going to get him. Joy: Where the hell am I supposed to get...no. You can’t make me do that. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Meanwhile, at the Montgomery’s, Tyrone walks in with his brown bag. Tyrone: Hey babe I got your pickles and ice cream. Marley: Thank ya hun. Vicky: I’ll give you two some privacy. Tyrone: No it’s okay I got some work to do. I just wanna see how my little guy’s doing. Tyrone sits next to Marley and rubs her stomach. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- Back at the Monticello Police Station Interrogation Room, Reginald gives instructions to Joy... Reginald: You don’t want Thomasina to get sick again do you? Get me my great grandson. FREEZE FRAME ON REGINALD...SLOW FADE OUT...END OF EPISODE 174
  5. Ugh I can't stand Theresa. Good way to write her.. The flashback caught us all up to speed. Now Laura is pulled into the Jenn/Liam storyline. I think she and JJ are gonna work together to bring him down. Loved the Stefano/EJ scene. I could definitely see him saying that to EJ.. I see you found your story for Gabi, Will and Sonny. I knew you would, and it's plausible...It's going to be fireworks if they antagonize Nick And as always, you captured Victor Kiriakis in full character. Good episode
  6. I see the set up here with Daisy and all of them. I figured Roxanne and Daisy would become friends after seeing her being ganged up. Roxanne knows what it's like to have the odds against her. Nice bonding moment between Karl and Mac. He seems sincere and Mac seems to be taking a liking to him. And the biggest setup of them all is Kay's will reading. I know you will deliver the drama.. GOOD EPISODE
  7. ANOTHER WORLD 173 - Truths are revealed Created by: William J. Bell and Irna Phillips Written By: C. Nathaniel Richardson Consultants: aMLCproduction, beebs, DRW50 Special Appearance by Don Hastings as Dr. Bob Hughes and Walter Fauntleroy as Detective Casey Stoner OAKDALE MEMORIAL HOSPITAL - Dr. Bob Hughes and Michele walks up to Rachel and Carl. Rachel: Dr. Hughes thank you for doing this. Bob: Mac was a good friend of mine. It’s my pleasure to help. Carl: So what did you find? Bob gives them a paper. Bob: I made some phone calls to my colleagues at Bay City General. Here it is. Rachel and Carl look at the paper as Bob walks away. Carl: It’s true. Michele: What’s true? Rachel: You are really Michele. Michele: Now can you take me home? Rachel straddles Michele’s hair. Rachel: I think we’ve all had a long night. Let’s get a couple of rooms at the Lakeview and we’ll head to Bay City in the morning. Michele: What if my great-grandfather finds us? Rachel: He’s not gonna do anything. I won’t let him. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- MONTICELLO POLICE STATION - Detective Jack Snyder walks in the precinct and Detective Casey Stoner greets him. Jack: Detective? Casey: We got her. Jack: Where is Margaret? Casey turns around and shows Jack where she is. Margaret is sitting handcuffed to a desk. Casey: She was about to inject Lisa McCleary with a strong sedative when we stopped her. Jack: Where is Lisa? Casey: She’s unconscious. She can’t answer any questions, but she’s in a safe place now. The detectives turn their attention to Margaret Allen. Casey: You can question her if you want. Jack: I don’t want to intrude on your jurisdiction. Casey: It’s no problem. The suspect hasn’t been too cooperative. Margaret: Don’t I get a phone call? I get one phone call. Jack: You’re gonna call your boss? Margaret: I hope you don’t think I’m gonna give him up because I’m not. I’m not saying a word without my attorney present. Jack: Go ahead . Make your call. The three stare at each other. Margaret: May I have some privacy please? -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- BAY CITY POLICE DEPARTMENT - Toni is on the phone with her back turned to the door with Etta Mae next to her. Toni: He told me to call you. How fast can you get there? Okay. You can’t tell anyone that about this. Thank you. Etta Mae: Who was that? Toni: Ma we’re gonna get KC out of there. Etta Mae: You can’t guarantee that. Toni: Nothing in life is mama, but I’m doing everything I can. Etta Mae: Get my granddaughter back. Toni: And she’s my daughter. We’re gonna get her back. I promise. Toni takes a key off of her key ring. Toni: Go to my house and get some rest. I will be in touch as soon as I hear something. I’ll walk you out. Toni walks Etta Mae to the front, and Allen walks in. Allen: Toni we gotta talk right now. Please. Etta Mae: Baby you ain’t gotta say nothing… Toni: No mama. We have to talk. It’s long overdue. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- CAVANAUGH CLINIC - Reginald comes up to KC, who is still bound and gagged. He takes the gag off, and unties her. Reginald walks back to his desk, sits down, and watches as KC makes a run for the door, but can’t get out. Reginald: As you’ve just figured out, the door’s locked. K.C.: Let me out of here….please. Reginald: Why are you so quick to leave? Don’t you wanna get to know your great grandfather? K.C.: What the hell are you talking about? Reginald: I suppose Toni and Etta Mae never told you. We’re family. K.C. gives Reginald a puzzling look as Reginald shoots a smug smile back. CAMERA PAN ON REGINALD...SLOW FADE TO THEME SONG https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6aWlAfmcN9c ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ PART 2 LAKEVIEW HOTEL - Rachel, dressed in a white nightgown, and Carl, wearing gray silk pajamas, are in their room. Rachel is at the vanity mirror brushing her hair while Carl lies across the bed, gazing at his wife. Carl: Did I ever tell you? Rachel: Tell me what honey? Carl: I absolutely adore the way you brush your hair. Rachel chuckles. Rachel: After all these years you still make me blush. Carl: I guess I always thought you were beautiful. Rachel: Did you now? When did this begin? Rachel puts the brush down, and walks to the bed. Carl moves over to the left side of the bed, and gets under the covers. Rachel gets under the covers on the right side. Carl wraps his arms around her, and Rachel snuggles comfortably in them. Carl: Uh I don’t know. Rachel: Oh you know. You just don’t wanna tell me. Carl: I’m not afraid to tell you. You know how beautiful you are. Rachel: I know that, but it does help to hear it from my husband. Carl: And you’re gonna hear it for the rest of your life. Rachel: Why don’t you show me how beautiful you think I am? As Carl gets ready to kiss Rachel, someone knocks on the door. Rachel: Did you call room service honey? Carl: No. Suddenly, they hear Michele as she knocks. Michele: Mr. and Mrs. Hutchins it’s Michele! Rachel and Carl look at each other with waiting for the other to get the door, and a bit frustrated as their attempt to make love is interrupted. Rachel puts on a terrycloth robe and opens the door. Rachel: Michele honey are you okay? Michele: No. I couldn’t sleep. Can I come in? Rachel: Um...uh...sure. Come on in. Michele walks in and notices Carl, and then makes a realization. Michele: Oh...Oh I’m so sorry. Carl: No my dear it’s okay. Rachel: Carl’s right. You’ve been through a terrible ordeal. Of course you can stay honey. Michele: I’m afraid. Rachel: Of what? Michele: That Reginald is gonn try to take me away again. I heard he tried to kidnap my sister. Rachel and Carl look at each other wondering whether they should tell Michele what Reginald did. Rachel: Hey are you hungry? I can call room service. Michele: I’m not hungry. Did Reginald try to kidnap my sister? Rachel: Yes...yes he did. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- MONTICELLO POLICE STATION - Jack walks up to Margaret. Jack: Are you done? Margaret: Yes I’m done. My attorney should be showing up soon. Jack: In the meantime we’re gonna hold you. I’m gonna call Casey. Margaret: After my lawyer gets here, I’ll tell you where my boss is. Well, there she is. A woman with red high heeled shoes, and a matching red sparkled dress, sashays into the precinct. Margaret: Your highness. It’s a honor to be graced with your presence. Jack: Are you an attorney or royalty? Margaret: Both. She’s not only my attorney, she’s the queen. Pay your respects! The woman is Cecile DePouglinac. Cecile: You don’t know who I am? Jack: Um...no. Margaret: You must live under a rock detective. Cecile: I am the Queen of Tanquir. It’s not too far from Montega. Sierra and I have fostered a great working relationship between our two countries. Jack: Sierra Montgomery? Cecile: Yeah duh. Margaret: I will tell them where my boss is. Cecile: No need for you to do that. I’ve already called the police, and they’ll be picking him up any minute now. Jack: Not so fast. How am I gonna verify who you are? Casey walks up to them. Casey: I’ve made all the phone calls. It checks out. She is who she says she is, and I’ve got men on the way to the Cavanaugh Clinic to pick up Reginald Love now. Cecile smiles with apparent victory. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Toni shuts her office door after Allen enters. Allen: Have you heard anything? Toni: No, but we both know you’re not here to talk about the kidnapping. Allen: I’m here to talk about K.C. Toni: Why? You don’t know about anything about her! Allen: Toni you dont’ have to be hostile toward me. Toni: Yes I do! You left our marriage because you wanted to find your mother. I was devastated. I had to stay with my mother because of what you did! Allen: I thought you understood. I thought I had a lead on Nicole. Toni: Instead you found your bastard of a grandfather, and he made you his lackey just like he did to his own son. Allen: He said he knew where my mother was. Toni: Oh yeah the same woman he was keeping locked up at Pinehaven! He used it against you! You left your family behind, and I’m still mad as hell about it! Toni’s eyes being to well up with anger. Allen: Toni I am so sorry for hurting you, but you knew I grew up in boarding schools, and then in the Montgomery’s house with Priscilla. I needed a sense of family. Toni: I was your family. We were your family. Allen: We? Who else? You said you lost our baby. Toni: I lied. Allen: You what? Toni: I lied Allen! I had our baby, and now your sadistic, crazy ass grandfather has her! Allen is shell shocked and his eyes are welling up. Allen: That girl...K.C. I saw you in the Center with..she’s our daughter? Toni: And if we don’t find Reginald, we might never see her again. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- K.C.: What the hell are you talking about? I don’t know you. Reginald: No you don’t know me. K.C.: I’ve heard of you, here and there. Reginald: Apparently, you haven’t heard the truth either. K.C.: The truth from whom? Reginald: Your mother. K.C.: What would my mother lie to me about? Reginald: You young people need everything spelled out for you huh. I often had to do that with your cousins Bridget and Michele. K.C.: What is in this for you? Why are you all mysterious? Just ell me. What did my mother and my sister not tell me? Reginald: You see that’s what they didn’t tell you. Your mother and your sister lied to you. They’re not your mother and your sister. K.C.: What? You’re deranged. You’re crazy, now let me the hell out of here! The Monticello police kick the door in with their guns drawn. Reginald stands up, puts his hands where the officers can see them, and smiles. Reginald: Oh...Monticello Police. I’ve been expecting you. FREEZE FRAME ON REGINALD...SLOW FADE OUT...END OF EPISODE 173
  8. I like how you have Lauren turning the tables on the sisters. SHE'S the stalker. Karl painted Karynn in a bad light, but somehow I think he really is a good person being taken care of, sort of, by a drunk, and he is funny, too. Warming how Mac and Brock bonded with Katherine's brother Karl. Neil and Devon's scenes were deep as well. Discussing the people that are closest to them. Good episode...
  9. GOOD ONE BUDDY!! I'm anxious to find how this vote for Titan TV is going to affect Salem. Good story there. It's a big story that can affect many characters... Just when I felt for Theresa, she reverts back to being an uberbitch, and playing herself in the process... Maggie did not bite her tongue. She is so good for Victor. I also LOVED the family moment between JJ, Abigail and their grandmother Laura. Without Jack, I think Jenn, Abigail and JJ need another family member there with them. And now JJ's got Laura suspicious of Jenn's latest choice of men. Also, you got me wondering exactly what Liam's past is.
  10. Lots going on here...good movement... I liked Stefano's re-appearance. Roman now realizes his memory's failing. Now we have to find out why. I trust Nick as far as I can throw him. He ALWAYS has an agenda. His with Gabi is no different. And you are actually getting me to feel for Theresa a little bit. Her insecurity is over the top, but knowing what happened to her in the past, I feel for her some. And Anne is grossly underestimating EJ...She'd better watch her back. Once again, you captured the characters very well and it was easy for me to delve into..GOOD EPISODE
  11. ANOTHER WORLD 172 Can Sharlene handle the truth? Created by: William J. Bell and Irna Phillips Written by: C. Nathaniel Richardson Consultants: aMLCproduction, Beebs, DRW50 WINTHROP’S HOUSE The Winthrop women (Charlie, Lindsay, Stacey) are with Felicia and Frankie. Felicia and Frankie are off to the side as Charlie, Lindsay and Stacey are gathered around the couch. Frankie: Did you call them? Felicia: Yeah they should be here any minute. Frankie: Felicia, listen. You don’t know how happy it makes me that you’re here for Charlie. Felicia: I wouldn’t miss this for the world. Frankie: And I’m happy that we’re friends. I know we had a lot of differences in the past. Felicia: That was a lonnnng time ago. Frankie’s eyes well up. Frankie: I was so self righteous about what happened with Aunt Sharlene. I’m...I’m sorry. Felicia: Honey...I forgave you a long time ago. Forgive yourself. Tonight and tomorrow will be about Charlie. That’s who we’re here for. Frankie: Of course. The two join the three Winthrop women at the couch. Stacey is sitting on couch, while Charlie and Lindsay are sitting on the floor leaning on the couch. Stacey: So we’ve got two of them. Lindsay: Something old and borrowed. Frankie: I think Emma’s wedding dress would qualify those. Felicia: So we need something new and blue. Someone rings the doorbell… Frankie: I’ll get it. Frankie opens the door, and it’s a hunky man in a Bay City Policeman’s uniform holding an envelope. Man: Is Cass here? Frankie: No. Why? Man: I have to deliver this to him. Frankie: I’ll make sure he… Frankie stops as the man walks in and Felicia approaches him. Felicia: I didn’t hear her invite you in. The man opens the envelope and a blue blindfold drops out. Charlie walks over and picks it up. Man: Put it on. Lindsay brings over a chair and Charlie looks back at Lindsay. Charlie: So this must be something new and blue. Lindsay: Have a seat girl. Lindsay helps to plop Charlie in the chair by her shoulders. Felicia gets the remote and turns on rock music on the MP3 dock. Charlie takes off her blindfold and the hunky man, complete with a six pack stomach, chiseled chest and arms, and only wearing a speedo, starts to gyrate his hips in front of her, and the other ladies root him on. Meanwhile, Frankie tells something to Felicia… Frankie: I wonder what my Aunt Sharlene would think of this. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- AT THE MENTAL INSTITUTION, MItch confronts John in front of Gregory and Sharlene in Sharlene’s room. Sharlene: Mitch. Gregory: No mom I wanna hear what dad has to say about this. John: I am not having an affair with Felicia. I told you she was helping me find Michael. Sharlene interjects. Sharlene: Yes Mitch. That’s what he was doing. He was trying to find his brother. Mitch: He’s still alive? Michael’s been dead for years. Sharlene: No he’s not. He’s alive. Mitch: John you could’ve had anyone else help you. Why my wife? She’s happily married. John: Well maybe not. You knew what my wife was going through with the D.I.D. and you said nothing. Mitch: You didn’t need Felicia’s help in finding your brother. John: And you should’ve told me about Sharlene. Sharlene: Look this isn’t getting us anywhere! Gregory, Mitch, I need to talk to my husband...alone! Gregory: But mom--- Sharlene: Go Gregory! After Gregory and Mitch leave... John: What’s going on with us? You confided in Mitch about what you were struggling with instead of coming to me? Sharlene: Is there anything else you have to tell me John? John: What does that supposed to mean? Sharlene: Let’s do it! Let’s get everything out on the table! Because if you walk out that door with any more secrets, our marriage is over. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- MCKINNONS HOUSE - Kirkland walks in and all the lights are off. Subsequently, he turns them on and, much to the surprise of Kirkland, sees a tanned, slightly petite, beautiful, blonde haired woman dressed in a two piece bikini. She slowly and seductively walks up to Kirkland and unbuttons his shirt. Kirkland: What are you doing? Jake and Steven appear… Jake: What do you think this is? Steven cues “Nasty Girl” by Vanity 6 on the MP3 dock, and the girl starts dancing seductively as Jake and Steven root the girl on. Kirkland (to himself): So glad my dad didn’t come. ------------------------------------------------------------------------ GRANT’S HOUSE - Grant sits on his couch reading his tablet, then Christy enters his home, and he takes off his reading glasses. Christy: I’m baaaack!!! CAMERA PAN ON CHRISTY…SLOW FADE TO THEME SONG ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ PART 2 Felicia walks into her and Mitch’s apartment, turns the lights on, and finds Mitch sitting on the couch, staring at the wall. Felicia: Hi honey. Felicia puts down her keys on the end table, and sits next to her husband, and Mitch continues to stare off away from Felicia. Mitch: How was the party? Felicia: Oh it was great. We had so much fun. You should have seen the look on Charlie’s face. She had no idea we got her a stripper. Mitch: You mean you didn’t tell her? Felicia: Well of course not. That would’ve ruined the surprise. Mitch: Surprises you are full of huh? Felicia: She enjoyed that, and so did we. Felicia leans on Mitch’s left shoulder and he is unresponsive. Felicia: What’s going on? Are you okay? Mitch gets up from the couch and turns his back to Felicia. Mitch: I wonder if I should tell you. Felicia: Tell me what? Mitch: Don’t you hate to be kept in the dark? Felicia: Apparently you like to sit in it. Tell me what’s bothering you. Mitch: How’s Michael? Felicia: Michael? Mitch turns around and faces his wife. Mitch: I hope you and John found him...together. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ John: What do you want me to tell you? Sharlene: The truth. What else are you hiding from me? John: You’re my wife. Why would I hide anything from you? Sharlene: Because that’s all you’ve done for these past few weeks. Or has it been longer? John: Sharlene--- Sharlene: What else? John: That’s not important--- Sharlene: What else John?! John: Okay. Dr. Taylor. Sharlene: What about him? John: I told him...I told him to not let you remember anything about the day Grant was shot at the Center opening. Sharlene starts shaking her head in apparent disbelief. Sharlene: Why? Let me guess...for my protection. John: I didn’t want you to end up in a place like this! Listen, all I want is for you to come home, and we can be the family that we’re supposed to be. Sharlene: I...I have to think. I need time to think. John: Whatever you think about, please always remember that I love you. John slowly walks out and Sharlene breaks down crying. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Grant: Did you do it? Christy: Oh it’s done, all thanks to you. Grant: What else are you going to do? Christy: Oh Grant, that’s for you to find out isn’t it? Grant: Do I want to? Christy pauses. Christy: I hate having to do this to Mary Frances. Grant: You have a conscience? Christy: Yes I do as a matter of fact. Mary Frances is the only friend I’ve ever had. What I’m about to do is going to hurt her very much. Grant: Whatever this plan is that you have, you better leave my son out of this. Christy: Don’t worry. I’m not targeting Kirkland. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- MCKINNONS HOUSE - The stripper has left as Jake, Steven, and Kirkland are at the couch, and they’ve had a few drinks. Jake: Okay that’s enough. Steven: You said that three shots ago. Kirkland: Jake’s right. I don’t wanna be hung over at the altar. Jake: Yeah that...that wouldn’t be good. Kirkland and Steven look at each other, and then look at Jake as they heard a slur. Steven: He’s drunk. Jake: No I’m not. Kirkland: Come on Jake you gotta stand up for me tomorrow. Jake: I am gonna stand up for you. I wouldn’t miss...your big day. Steven: Of course, but Jake you can’t have any more. Jake: Kirkland, I hope your marriage turns out better than the one I have with your mother. Vicky and Bridget walk in. Vicky: I see you guys had a lot of fun. Bridget: Did you guys get a stripper? Kirkland: Mom. Bridget: And it’s a shame that this is the first time I get to see my eldest brother. Steven: Comere kiddo. Steven and Bridget hug. Steven: I’m gonna….head out. Bridget: And I’m goin’ to bed. After Steven and Bridget leave, Kirkland turns his attention to Vicky. Vicky: Well honey you should go and be ready for your big day. Kirkland: Not until I find out what’s going on between you two. They both look at Jake, who has passed out on the couch. Kirkland: Whatever is going on, swallow your pride and solve it. I know you believe what you did was for the right reasons. Vicky: Oh you think you know me so well. Kirkland kisses his mom on her left cheek. Kirkland: I’ll see you tomorrow mom. I love you. Vicky: Love you, too. Kirkland leaves, and Vicky locks the door, turns around, and looks at Jake, who is sleeping on the couch. She takes the throw blanket that is on the arm of the couch, spreads it out, and lays it gently on Jake. Vicky turns off the light, and walks upstairs. SLOW FADE OUT...END OF EPISODE 172 -------------------------------------------------------------------------
  12. GENERAL HOSPITAL FAN FICTION (as in not real) EPISODE 10 - Nathan overhears a mysterious conversation ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- NINA’S HOUSE - Sebastian is on his tablet with headphones on, lip synching words to music, and Nina, who is dressed in a tan power suit, pulls back one of the earphones and yells “helloooo!” Sebastian: Mom! Nina: Oh no you’re not gonna sit around here day after day on your tablet like you did at your grandmother’s. You either work, or go to school, but I’m not gonna let you be a bum. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- AT THE HOSPITAL - Brad is talking to Lucas at the sixth floor elevators. Brad: How’s your mom? Lucas: She landed safely at Sea-Tac. Brad: Good. You didn’t forget our picnic today right? Lucas: Not at all. I’m heading to Kelly’s now. Brad: That’s what I do for my babe. I’ll meet you at the park later. They kiss as the elevator doors open, and Lucas leaves. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------- PARK - The day is bright and sunny while Lulu sits on a bench with her son Rocco in his stroller. Maxie is sitting next to her. Lulu: You’re gonna come to my housewarming right? Maxie: Why wouldn’t I Lulu? Of course I am. Lulu: Because I’m ordering twenty slabs of ribs from The Floating Rib and mac and cheese. Maxie: So you’ve got jokes about Levi huh? You know he doesn’t eat any of that, and he doesn’t encourage me to eat it either. Lulu: Come on Maxie. This isn’t even you. You love ribs and mac and cheese. You don’t see what he’s doing to you. Maxie: You don’t even know him. None of you do. Not like I do. He’s caring, he’s tender, and he’s changed my life. Lulu: He cost you six more months with your daughter. What kind of a man does that? ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- MAXIE’S APARTMENT - Levi is in the living room stretching out when his cell phone rings. He stops his yoga routine, sighs nervously, and answers it. Nathan, who just took a shower, walks to the living room unseen by Levi. Levi: Hello father. CAMERA PAN ON NATHAN...QUICK CUT TO THEME SONG... ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- PART 2 NINA’S OFFICE - Nina is sitting at her desk on the office phone, and she flashes back to what she said to Sebastian. Tracy knocks on the door and seems to snaps Nina out of it. Tracy: I got what you want. Nina is still staring off into proverbial space. Nina: Tracy. Tracy: Where were you just a minute ago? Nina: I just brought my son to town, and I already see he’s gonna be a handful. Tracy: You seem concerned. Is there anything I can do to help? I have two sons of my own. I think I know a little bit about mothering. Nina: Don’t worry about it. I’ll handle Sebastian. Tracy: Listen. If you’re worried about him getting it right, he will. My son Dillon did. I’m sure he will, too. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ HOSPITAL 6TH FLOOR NURSE’S STATION - Felix is there typing something in one of the computers when Brad walks up all smiles, and in plain clothes instead of his lab coat. Felix, dressed in blue scrubs, stops typing and focuses on Brad. Felix: Where are you off to? It’s early for you to be getting off. Brad: Lucas and I are going out. Felix: Well that’s...that’s good. Felix refocuses himself on whatever it is that he was inputting into the computer. Brad: Could’ve been you ya know? Felix: Are you with Lucas just to stick it to me? Because if that’s true, it’s not gonna last. Go have your picnic. Lucas is far from stupid. He’s gonna notice it, and it’s really not fair to him. Brad: You wanted to know why I was leaving early, and I told you. Have a good day. Brad leaves and Epiphany walks up to Felix from behind. Felix: The patient in 621. I put all their charts in the system. The doctors shouldn’t have a problem finding it. Epiphany: Chile please I ain’t worried about that. I know you do good work. Felix: Thank you. Epiphany: But you ain’t doin’ so good with hiding your feelings for Brad. Felix: However true that may be, he’s with Lucas, and I’ve gotta respect that. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- KELLY’S...Lucas walks to the door with two bags in each of his hands. He leans on it so he can open it, but as he leans, Sebastian opens the door with his left hand, and puts his right hand to Lucas to stop him from falling. Lucas quickly turns around, and seems captivated. Lucas: Thank you. That would’ve been bad if I’d fallen and spilled this. Sebastian: You’re welcome. You must be having a party. I don’t think you’re gonna eat that all by yourself. Lucas: No it’s for me and… Sebastian: Your boyfriend? Lucas: Yeah. Sebastian smiles. Sebastian: Lucky him. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Maxie: That was a while ago. He’s tried to make it up to me ever since. Lulu: Maxie I can’t believe how blind you are to him. He told the judge that Nathan lied on your behalf, and you have to wait to see Georgie because of it. Maxie: If I hadn’t thrown away the court notice, nobody would have had to lie. It was all my fault. Lulu: Let me guess, Levi got you to see that, right? Put the onus back on you. Maxie: It was my fault Lulu. Why can’t you see that Levi is good for me? Lulu: Because he’s not. Any man who will cause a woman to lose their kid is no good for anyone. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Levi just answered his cell phone while Nathan listens. Levi: You’ll have to give me more time. I’m doing what I can do. I think I’ve done well considering the circumstances. Things are coming together. Nathan steps back behind a wall, still unseen by Levi. Nathan: Who’s his father? CAMERA PAN ON NATHAN..QUICK CUT OUT...END OF EPISODE 10 ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- IN THIS EPISODE - Michelle Stafford as Nina Clay Justin Gaston as Sebastian West Parry Shen as Brad Cooper Ryan Carnes as Lucas Jones Emme Rylan as Lulu Spencer Falconeri Kirsten Storms as Maxie Jones Ryan Peavey as Detective Nathan West Zachary Garred as Levi Dunkelman Sonya Eddy as Epiphany Johnson
  13. Roman is slipping terribly in the memory department. Anne vs EJ. Anne though seems like she's gonna be a formidable opponent. You reminded us that Theresa is a total bitch, as evidenced by her treatment of Chloe. And a realistic interaction between Sonny and Will. Hopefully Will won't do something impulsive, given his history...and his mother...LOL GOOD ONE!!!
  14. Anne is quite audacious She'd better watch her step. Nicole and her continuance of lying... JJ needs to start digging because he's gonna need proof as to why he thinks Liam is creepy. And Roman forgot that he called Billie to town...uh oh...channeling his inner....Caroline? LOL Good episode..
  15. We finally got the backstory on Leslie's past. Roxanne was harsh...geesh LOL. But still I like to see that she has softened a bit and wants to know what happened. Katherine's relatives are all bonding. Karynn is a great character and I can't wait to see what she does next. I wonder who's watching the girls. It must not be Phyllis as I previously thought. Maybe it's Drucilla..LOL
  16. So Phyllis is stalking the girls? Makes complete sense... Karynn steals the show again. Long overdue scene between Roxanne and Leslie. Lauren needs to not come between Fenmore and Michael's relationship... Good episode!!
  17. GOOD EPISODE BUDDY!! You showed a bit of a softer, more human side of Karynn and Roxanne. I liked that... The House of Kem (keem)...I will see how that plays out. I hope Fenmore is not a homophobe. Maybe he just wants his brother to be himself and stop lying. And the mystery person at the end with a gun...
  18. ANOTHER WORLD 171 Amanda makes an important decision Created by: William J. Bell and Irna Phillips Written by: C. Nathaniel Richardson Consultants: aMLCproduction, DRW50, beebs Amanda sits in the living room and flashes back to her and Paulina’s confrontation with Iris about Operation Loco... Iris: Tucker was a dear friend of mine, but I don’t know what that has to do with this Operation Local or whatever it is you’re talking about. Amanda: You’re gonna go with that Iris? Paulina: Of course she is Amanda. She’s a world class liar. Iris: Aww you two are such a force together. Daddy would be so proud. Iris turns around and puts two more folders in her box, and turns back around to face the sisters. Amanda: No daddy wouldn’t. Tucker tried to kill his own mother with poisoned paint, and you helped him. Iris: First of all, I resent the fact that you are talking one of my dearest friends like that, and second, I would never have helped Tucker kill his mother. That is the most ridiculous thing I’ve ever heard. Amanda: I wonder how stupid you think it would be if I turned the evidence I had over to the police. Iris: They’ll laugh you right out of the precinct. You don’t have anything. Paulina: I wouldn’t be so smug if I were you. You’re finally gonna get what you’ve long deserved. Iris walks up to Paulina’s face. Iris: Yeah because that’s worked so well for you hasn’t it? I mean, didn’t you hit Kirkland with your car while you were all doped up on pills? ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- AT THE CARLINOS...Paulina opens the door about to leave, and Kirkland, who was about to ring the doorbell, is there. His appearance causes a bit of awkwardness on Paulina’s part. Paulina: Umm...Kirkland what can I do for you? I was about to go out. Kirkland: Do you have a minute? I don’t wanna keep you. Paulina: Uh...yeah sure. Come in. There’s a silence between the two and Paulina breaks it. Paulina: Congratulations are in order huh? Gonna be a husband. Kirkland: Yep in a couple days. Paulina: That’s really wonderful Kirkland I’m happy for you. Do you need some help or anything? Kirkland: No. If it weren’t for you, I wouldn’t even be here to be able to get married. You see that’s what I came here for. I wanted to thank you. Paulina: Thank me? Kirkland: If you hadn’t hit me with your car when I was a kid, I wouldn’t be alive today. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- BACK TO AMANDA’S FLASHBACK Paulina: Is that how you’re playing? Because you don’t wanna get dirty with me. Iris: Yes Paulina, pigs do wallow in mud. Paulina: You bitch! Amanda then gets between them and continues to come after Iris. Iris: Is that all you got Paulina? How many times are you gonna call me a bitch? Amanda: You’re avoiding the subject. Insults aren’t gonna save you. Iris: You know Amanda, what’s insulting, and just downright offensive, is your choices in men. Well, with a mother like Rachel, it stands to reason that you have mostly screwed up in this area. Evan Frame, Grant Harrison, Cameron Sinclair, and now Allen Love. I’ll give you credit for Sam Fowler because you two had Alli, but the others prove that you seem to gravitate toward men who have once hurt you or tried to hurt people in your family at one point or another. Your latest one is a mystery inside an enigma. Allen Love, he turned out to be another one of Reginald’s puppets like Peter was. My my, you sure know how to pick em don’t you? ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- IN FRONT OF THE LOVE MANSION - Toni has just received a text from Reginald Love, and showed Etta Mae, who is horrified. Both are beside each other, facing the door. Etta Mae: Oh my God. Toni: Don’t panic mom. I don’t think he’s gonna hurt her. Etta Mae: How can you be so sure? Toni: Come on. Think about it. KC is his great granddaughter. He’s not going to do anything to her. Etta Mae: That doesn’t mean he won’t take her someplace we might never find her. Toni: We just gotta give him what he wants. They turn around, and to their surprise, Allen is standing there, looking at both of them as if he’s caught them doing something. CAMERA PAN ON ALLEN...SLOW FADE TO THEME SONG ------------------------------------------------------------------------- PART 2 AMANDA’S FLASHBACK CONTINUES… Amanda: This isn’t about anyone’s past here. This is about you and what you’ve done. I’m giving you a chance to explain yourself before I decide that to do with the evidence. Iris: You’re bluffing. Paulina: I say send it Amanda. Call the Genoa City Police Department as soon as possible and tell them you have evidence. Amanda flashes back to the present, looks at her cell phone as if she’s a bit conflicted, then makes the call. Amanda: Hi may I speak with Detective Paul Williams please? ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Paulina: That was a...very difficult time in my life. Kirkland: My mom told me all about it. She told me what dad had done, too. Paulina: I don’t blame Grant for my addiction to diet pills, and I certainly don’t blame him for what I did to you. Kirkland: But if you hadn’t hit me with your car, they would never have found the aneurysm that was in my brain. Don’t you see? You saved my life. I couldn’t be happy if you never did what you did. Paulina chuckles nervously. Paulina: Kirkland you really don’t have to… Kirkland: I know that my dad was supplying you with diet pills, and set your house on fire. Paulina: I’ve forgiven him for all of that. Kirkland: As have I, but you see everything fell into place. I’m marrying Charlie in a couple days. I’ve never been happier than i am now. None of this is possible without you. Paulina: You give me way too much credit… Kirkland: You don’t get enough credit. If I hadn’t told you before, I have no ill will toward you for that accident. Paulina’s eyes well up… Paulina: You don’t know how much it means to me to hear you say that. Kirkland: I hope it means that you will come to my wedding. Paulina (smiling): Of course honey. The two share a warm embrace. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Toni: Allen what are you doing here? Allen: I suppose I could ask you the same thing. Etta Mae: That ain’t none of your business. Toni: Mom it’s okay. We’re here on police business. Allen: Etta Mae when did you start working for the BCPD? Etta Mae: Toni let’s go. Allen: No why don’t you go, because I want to speak to Toni alone. Etta Mae: Toni.. Toni: Mom go to the car. I’ll be right there. Etta Mae leaves. Allen: You care to tell me what’s going here? Toni: I told you. Police business. Allen: Are you really gonna stand there and lie to me? I heard what you and Etta Mae were talking about? Toni folds her arms with exasperation and curiosity. Toni: Detective Snyder is inside and I came with him to tell Michael and Donna… Toni stops herself, realizing what this conversation might lead to. Allen flashes back to throwing the gun that Donna used to shoot Reginald into the river. Allen: Tell them what? Toni: Well you know I can’t tell you that. It’s police business. Allen: If it’s a family matter, then it involves me. Whatever it is, maybe I can help. Toni: The police is handling it. If you’ll excuse me, I have to get to the station. Toni walks away and Allen looks at her wondering what Toni knows, then Donna comes out of the mansion. Donna: Hi nephew. I’m glad you came by. Allen: I just saw Toni leave. What’s going on? Donna: She didn’t tell you? Allen: Tell me what? Allen lowers his voice a bit. Allen: Was it about the gun? Donna: No. It’s much worse. He’s the one taunting me. Allen: So they found out who’s stalking you? Donna: Yes...it’s my father. Allen: Reginald? He’s dead. Donna: No. He’s very much alive. Allen: I heard Toni and Etta Mae talking about K.C. Donna: K.C.? Isn’t she Toni’s sister? Allen: She said that KC is his great-granddaughter. Donna: K.C. Burrell is Reginald’s great-granddaughter? Peter and Etta Mae had an affair? They don’t even know each other. Allen: Not that we know of. Toni and Etta Mae were saying something about giving him what he wants, and he would never hurt her. Oh no. I’m...I’m going to the police station to see if I can help. Donna: Do you think Reginald has K.C.? Allen: Sounds like it, and I’m gonna find out why. FREEZE FRAME ON ALLEN...SLOW FADE OUT...END OF EPISODE 171
  19. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- GENERAL HOSPITAL 9 New arrivals at the Quartermaines Written by: C. Nathaniel Richardson KELLY’S DINER - Carly and Josslyn walk in and take their seats with Josslyn facing the window… Carly: What do you want honey? Josslyn: I might have been in Australia with daddy, but nothing has changed. Carly: Okay okay, you want those curly fries. Josslyn: With ketchup on the side. Carly: Great. Josslyn: And what else? Carly: Oh I forgot. A pickle. Josslyn: Right. Thanks mom. Carly: You’re welcome honey. Stay right there. Carly walks up to the counter and Shawn approaches her from behind it. Shawn: Josslyn’s gotten big huh? Carly: Yeah and her mouth has gotten fresher. Shawn: Usual for the kid huh? Curly fries, ketchup on the side, and a pickle. Carly: Thanks. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- OUTSIDE OF KELLY’S - Levi and Maxie are arm in arm walking slowly, then they stop in front of the window. Levi’s back is to the window. Maxie: I don’t know what’s going on between you and Nathan. Levi: I don’t either. Maybe he’s jealous. Maxie: Oh I don’t think that’s the case. Levi: Come on Maxie. You can’t be that blind. The guy likes you. Maxie: Well I don’t feel that way about him. I reserve that for you. Levi: That’s why...I want to take you on a trip. Mac and Felicia[attachment=1065:FeliciaGH.jpg] approach them. Felicia is wearing a distinct piece of jewelry. A row of three red and three green jewels line the necklace. Mac: The hell you are! ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- MICHAEL’S OFFICE AT ELQ - Michael sits at his desk when Kiki walks in. Kiki: Where’s Jason? Michael: He wanted to be home to greet my cousins when they get here. Kiki slowly closes the door and gets seductive… Kiki: Oh so you’re telling me that we have the office all to ourselves. Michael: Yep. Sure do. Kiki and Michael approach each other and kiss. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- QUARTERMAINE MANSION FOYER - Tracy is on her cell phone. Tracy: How is he? Who? Luke Spencer. I’ve only called a hundred times to check on him over the past few weeks. No change? Okay, but you will keep me posted on his condition, please? Thank you. Tracy hangs up. Monica comes to the top of the stairs unseen by Tracy, and observes her. Tracy sighs to hide her sadness at Luke’s condition, then she makes her way to the living room. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ QUARTERMAINE LIVING ROOM - Jason has his feet up on the coffee table on his tablet. He reads an article that reads “Bid for waterfront property acquisition heats up.” Tracy walks in, and goes to pour herself a drink. Tracy: Shouldn’t you be at the office? Jason: I don’t answer to you Aunt Tracy. Tracy: You need to be working on acquiring that waterfront property. You never know who else is trying to get it. Jason: Michael’s there. Tracy: You leave Michael to do everything don’t you? Jason sighs with exasperation as Monica walks in. Jason: He’s doing a great job. Tracy: You know I almost liked you better when you were a mobster. Monica: You leave my son alone. Tracy then turns to Monica. Tracy: Here comes mommy to the rescue. You defend this laziness! Monica: Jason can do whatever he wants to do. Tracy: Oh my goodness. I bet daddy and Alan are turning in their graves. Monica: ELQ is in great shape. And besides how are you going to criticize my parenting? Where are your sons? Tracy: Off living productive lives, unlike Jason! Monica: At least I didn’t ship him off to boarding school because I couldn’t be bothered! Tracy: You think you know everything! Jason (still looking at his tablet): Here comes an argument. Monica: I know that I’m here for my children and grandchildren whenever they need me! You should try that sometime! Tracy: Oh you’re just mother of the year aren’t you? Monica and Tracy start talking over each other and an argument indeed ensues as Maya and Sydney walk in with their suitcases. Maya and Sydney look at Tracy and Monica arguing, look at each other. Maya: Heeeyyy!!! Monica and Tracy stop arguing and look at the girls. Maya: We’re here! CAMERA PAN ON MAYA AND SYDNEY. QUICK CUT TO OPENING… https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-4VCltqMz1Y ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- PART 2 Michael and Kiki are lying on the couch covered by a blanket after having made love. Michael: That was the best break I could have taken. Kiki: You sound like you’re satisfied. Michael: Everything I eat doesn’t have to be filling. Kiki: As long as it’s tasty, you shouldn’t want for anything else right? Michael: Oh it was definitely a delectable treat. Kiki: It’s a good thing Jason isn’t here. Michael: Why? Kiki: Because I wonder what snacks you have to offer. Michael: Some jerky maybe. Kiki: Beef jerky huh? Michael: It’s definitely no turkey. Kiki: Hmmm where you are hiding this. Michael: I think you know where to find it. Kiki puts her head underneath the blanket. --------------------------------------------------- BACK AT THE Qs, Maya and Sydney have arrived, and Tracy approaches them, along with Monica and Jason. Jason: Hey welcome back. Maya: Thank you cousin. Jason: I’ll take your bags to your rooms. Sydney: Don’t you guys have maids for that? Tracy: You think you’re entitled? Monica: Welcome, both of you. Maya: Thank you Monica. Monica: You two must be hungry. I can have cook make you something. Maya: Thanks Monica. I’ll probably eat later. Sydney: No I’m hungry now. Maya: Syd I was gonna take you to Kelly’s. Sydney: I don’t want any diner food. Monica, I’ll have a tossed salad with crisp lettuce, tomatoes, and fresh cucumbers, and light Italian dressing. Monica: Sure, I’ll let cook know. Monica leaves and Tracy starts on Sydney. Tracy: Monica’s not your waitress Zoe! Sydney: Do not call me Zoe. I hate that name. I go by my middle name Sydney. Tracy (turning to Maya): And why did you change her name to Ward? Maya: I don’t have to explain to you Tracy. Syd do you wanna go to Kelly’s with me? Sydney: I’ll catch up with you. Maya, sensing what might happen, makes a veiled plea to Sydney. Maya: Sydney? Let’s go. Tracy: Yeah Zoe, go with your sister. Sydney: After I eat my salad. Maya: Okaaay. Maya gives up trying to get Sydney to come with her and leaves. Tracy: I’m gonna tell you something young lady. Being Maya’s sister is not your saving grace. Sydney steps past Tracy and looks around. Sydney: Maya told me allll about this place. Her descriptions didn’t do it justice. This is a palace. Can you take me on a tour? Tracy: Excuse me? Sydney: You’re loaded aren’t you? Tracy: You’re a piece of work. Sydney turns back to face Tracy. Sydney: My big sister also told me how much of a bitch that you were, and justice wasn’t served there either. Tracy: Is that right? Sydney: Because you’re more than she described. Monica returns with a tray and a plate of salad. Monica: Here you are Zoe. Sydney: Thank you. It’s Sydney. I don’t go by Zoe anymore. Tracy: You’re not gonna come in my father’s house and talk to me like that! Monica: It’s my house. Tracy: Thank God you’ll be going back home after Michael’s wedding. Monica: Wrong again Tracy. Tracy: What? Monica: Maya and Sydney are staying in Port Charles, and they’ll be living in this house. Sydney: Oh that’s gonna be so much fun, right Tracy? Tracy knocks the tray out of Sydney’s hands, causing the salad to spill on the carpet, and Sydney sighs in frustration. Sydney: You old bitch! Look what you did! Tracy: Why don’t you clean it up, and go get a salad from Kelly’s. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------- AT KELLY’S… Shawn: How’s everything coming with Michael’s wedding? Carly: So far so good. Shawn: I know that you wish Sonny could be here. Carly: Yeah, but he can’t. Shawn: I’m lookin’ out for Michael. Carly: Thank you. I really appreciate that. Shawn: I’ll be right over with Joss’s curly fries. Carly walks back over to Josslyn, who is coloring, and sits back across from her. Josslyn: Are the curly fries gonna be ready soon? I’m hungry. Carly: Yes honey. Josslyn looks up and sees Levi’s long hair out the window, but she can’t see his face. Josslyn: Why do guys have long hair? I thought that was for girls. Carly: Well some guys have long hair. Hey some girls have short hair, too. Josslyn: Oh. That guy out there looks like Joey. Joey has long hair. Carly turns back and sees the same thing Josslyn sees. Carly: Who’s Joey? ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- OUTSIDE KELLY’S - Mac confronts Levi with Felicia and Maxie… Levi: Excuse me. I think that’s your decision. Felicia: He’s right Mac. Mac: Where the hell do you think you’re talking Maxie? Maxie: It’s a romantic getaway, and he’s right. It’s my decision. I’m not a little girl anymore. Mac: I don’t trust him. Maxie you don’t know him well enough to be going away with him. Felicia: Mac why don’t we go in and get our food. Levi: Wait a minute. Felicia if I may ask, what is that you’re wearing? Felicia: It’s an Aztec artifact. Mac: It’s none of your business. Let’s go. Mac and Felicia leave Maxie and Levi outside, and Maxie notices Levi’s attention to the necklace, and secretly wonders why he’s taken by it. CAMERA PAN ON MAXIE, QUICK CUT OUT...END OF EPISODE 9 ....IN THIS EPISODE Carly Jacks - LAURA WRIGHT Josslyn Jacks - HANNAH NORDBERG Shawn Butler - SEAN BLAKEMORE Levi Dunkleman - ZACHARY GARRED Maxie Jones - KIRSTEN STORMS Mac Scorpio - JOHN J. YORK Felicia Scorpio - KRISTINA WAGNER Michael Quartermaine - CHAD DUELL Lauren “Kiki” Jerome - KRISTEN ALDERSON Tracy Quartermaine - JANE ELLIOT Jason Quartermaine - BILLY MILLER Monica Quartermaine - LESLIE CHARLESON Maya Ward - ANNIE ILONZEH Sydney (Zoe) Ward - LAURA HARRIER
  20. I'm glad Lauren fought back. I didn't think she was gonna let Daisy punk her. She didn't let Sheila punk her. I was gonna ask you where Roxanne was, but there she was...at her mother's doorstep. Interested to see where this leads. I'm glad you are taking things slow with Chance and Victoria. Michael is going to join Nikki in the abyss after MORE bad news...lol And Spencer still gunning for Leslie, and making no bones about it. Good episode...I see the set up of future stories here
  21. The Carter girls discussing their evil plans. Like mother like chirren. Old relationships and new friendships. Love it. Jill/Gloria/Keemo (old) triangle reforming. Keemo being true to his cub character. Chance and Victoria (new)... LOVED LOVED LOVED the Nikki scene. Your description of the scene was detailed. This is a very creative path to take Nikki. Not the traditional fall-off-the-wagon story. I am looking forward to see how deep into the abyss Nikki is going to fall. good one!!
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