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  1. The Kiriakis family dinner - Very balanced. It's got drama, humor and suspense. Funny exchanges with Victor and Maggie...he will be sleeping in the poolhouse. She is not afraid of him and stands up to Victor in ways not many people have. I like it. Noelle threw shade at Victor and that seems like it's just the beginning. Will is probably feeling the gamut of emotions. Adrienne may be on to something, but nobody is gonna pay her any attention, and I love when soaps do that. Valerie/Jerome - I read her lines out loud with the emotions you wrote down, and I felt her pain. Did something happen to Valerie? In the soap world, we think so, but in the real world, we are tired of racial injustice. More than likely, at one point or another, racial discrimination has happened to a person of color, and what happened to her grandson is very personal. I wonder where this dimension of her is going to take her. And Jerome, being the young ingenue he is, is on the go again. Makes sense that Valerie worries about him. Billie/Jennifer - Billie went looking for something and she found it. I also think Daniel is still in love with Jennifer, and vice versa. Billie knows it, and I can imagine her relief when finding out that Jennifer is dating Liam. Liked the clue that you dropped about remembering Abigail's birthday. And I ALSO enjoy that you are setting up a double date between them, AND that Billie is gonna start investigating Liam as well. What will Daniel and Billie find? JJ/Laura - It's cute that these two are bonding over their concern for Jennifer. Maybe JJs natural cop instinct will kick in and ALSO investigate Liam. lol GOOD EPISODE!!
  2. OH man such a balanced episode. Karynn and Esther are such a great duo. They are so funny together. And the part about Esther telling Katherine to watch over them was fitting. Karynn is such a mess. LOVE HER!! Nikki and Victor was the serious part. Noah is acting like a spoiled brat. Guess that apple didn't fall too far. Nikki telling Victor that Newman was for the children and grandchildren. I like that the conversation was focused on their family and not so much their (toxic) relationship. Scotty and Philip and the "trannies". The whole entire exchange was excellent, and now we start to follow these two on their journey. You know I'm rooting for them, but Rafe isn't, and I REALLY like that he could be the fly in their ointment. Like this triangle brewing here.
  3. Oh it's on now. A lot happening in this episode. I could picture Jennifer and Laura's reaction on TV. So in character for the both of them, and the dialogue very real between them. Yes it is strange for Jennifer to go out with a man when she doesn't even know where he lives. The exchange was good between Sheryl and Lucas, although I do understand this is a cat and mouse game. Kate reminded me of that at the end of that scene. I think Sheryl kind of realizes that, too. I wonder what Stefano has to say to Nick, and I'm glad you told us what Stefano wants...Victor's head on a platter. And Yes, the dinner. I laughed when Will said he needed a double. Then he got tipsy and started saying how he REALLY feels, THEN the appearance of Noelle, with her eye on Victor. She clearly wants to stick it to the patriarch of the Kiriakis family.
  4. CUT OFF ONCE AGAIN Bridget: I’m going to go find Cory. Donna: Jake, is it true? You and Victoria are really getting a divorce? Jake: She signed the papers and gave them to me earlier. All I gotta do is give them to Cass to file and it’ll be final. Vicky and I will no longer be married. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ HOSPITAL Cass is in Maggie’s room when Frankie and Charlie arrive. Frankie: Cass what happened? Cass: Your vibes were right. I found her unconscious in front of the Corys. Charlie: Wow what did the doctors say? Cass: She’s gonna be fine. They took some blood and they’re running tests. Frankie: I had a bad feeling as soon as she left our house. Cass: We gotta find out what happened. Maggie begins to come to. Cass: Maggie. Tell us what happened. Who did this to you? Meanwhile, Brianna watches them through the glass from the door. FREEZE FRAME ON MAGGIE...SLOW FADE OUT...END OF EPISODE 223
  5. ANOTHER WORLD 223 Written by: C. Nathaniel Richardson Consultants: Alex Beeby, ML Cooks, Nick Monarco, DRW50 Party at the Corys continues Vicky expresses her displeasure; Jake and Michael try to reach the twins CORY MANSION ROOM Jake tends to Bridget’s injuries after her fight with Michele in the Cory Mansion gazebo: Jake gives Bridget some ice wrapped in a cloth. Jake: Put this on your lip. Bridget: Ow. Jake: What the hell is going on with you two? Bridget: You see how crazy she is! She attacked me. Jake: Why would she do that? Bridget: I have no idea what goes on in her mind. You guys need to get her some help. Jake: Are you sure you didn’t provoke her? Bridget: Oh my God, dad, are you saying this is my fault? That I am the reason she wanted to fight me? Jake: If there is anything you’re holding back you need to not. I’m gonna ask you one more time. Did you provoke Michele into attacking you? Bridget: Dad what are you talking about? You know something don’t you? Jake takes out his cell phone and shows Bridget the FacePage posts. Jake: These. This is why Michele came after you. You told everyone in America what happened in the hospital. Bridget: She cut herself with those scissors and made it looked like I attacked her. She tried to turn all of you against me! Jake: I remember when you two were close. Your mother and I brought you home from the hospital. So tiny. So perfect. You two did everything together when you were growing up. You wanted to wear the same clothes. What happened to you two? It breaks my heart to see my girls fighting like this. Bridget: Michele needs to get over her anger. Jake: You did some questionable things to your sister, and these are the consequences. She’s mad as hell. Bridget: She needs help. Jake: And you took advantage of it somehow. Jake begins to shake his head. Jake: No there’s got to be more to it than just those FacePage posts. Donna walks in. Donna: I can venture a pretty good guess as to what that is. Michael blots Michele’s eye with an ice pack. Michael: Bridget gave you a shiner huh? Michele: She’s given me much worse than that. Michael: I know. Michele: So you actually side with me on this one? Michael: I’m not on anyone’s side. I don’t want to see this at all. My granddaughters fighting. No I’m not on either side of this. Michele: Why don’t you go talk to Bridget? She started this whole mess. Michael: You’re not blameless in this either honey. Everybody has got to take their own responsibility in this or it will never get resolved. It’s only going to get worse. Michele: Well I have no intention of making amends. Not after what she did. There’s no going back to the way we were. Michael: You don’t mean that. No matter what differences you two have, she’s always going to be your sister. No matter how much you think you hate her, that will never change. Michele: She took great pleasure in humiliating me on social media. She loved flaunting it in my face. Michael: Flaunting what? Michele: Grandma didn’t tell you huh? Bridget and Cory screwed right under your noses. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Donna: I bet you…threw it in Michele’s face. Bridget: Grandma what are you talking about? Donna: You told Michele that you and Cory had sex. Jake: What? Donna: You used that to set her off didn’t you? Bridget: I’m…I’m totally shocked by this. You all are taking her side. You’re trying to say she was justified in attacking me. Jake: No. We just wanna get to the bottom of what’s going on. Donna: Both of you have to share the blame in this. Bridget: What do you want me to do? You want me to go back in time and change what happened at the prom? Do you want to re-seal her acceptance letter to Harvard? Well I can’t, and everyone has gotta get over it, including Michele. Donna: Don’t you at least have some remorse about what it’s done to her? Jake: Donna’s right. You may need to apologize to Michele. Bridget: Why should I do that…when I’m not sorry. The one that should be apologizing is mom. She’s the one who set this all in motion. Donna: What does Victoria have to do with this? Bridget: She loves Michele more than she loves me. Everything I did was to get her attention; to earn her favor, and I never did. I’m not gonna let Michele win. Jake: My God. Listen to yourself. You haven’t taken any responsibility for what you’ve done. Donna grabs Bridget’s shoulders. Donna: Listen to me! This has got to stop tonight! I’m not gonna let you and Michele kill each other. Jake: Neither am I. ------------------------------------------------------ Steven: We like each other a lot and you need to accept it. Vicky: The hell I will! That woman is trouble, and she’s going to hurt you. Steven: She’s a wonderful, sweet, caring woman. Vicky: She’s a homewrecker and God knows what else! Steven: She made a mistake. You of all people should understand after the ones you’ve made. Vicky slaps him. Vicky: Don’t you ever talk to me that way! I forbid you to be with Joy. Steven: I’m a grown man. You can’t forbid to me do anything. I want to be with Joy, and we’re gonna be together. Joy walks up to them with two drinks. Joy: Oh I’m sorry Vicky. Do you want me to go get you a drink? Vicky: Shut up you bitch! If you do anything to hurt my son or my family, you’re gonna have to deal with me, and that’s not gonna be any fun….at all. Steven: Watch how you talk to her! Vicky: Don’t be surprised when she turns out not to be the woman you think she is. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ IN THE LIVING ROOM…. Frankie walks up to Charlie and Kirkland. Charlie: Mom what’s wrong? You look… Frankie: Worried? That’s because I am. Have you heard from your father or Maggie? Charlie: No. Frankie: They should be here by now. Kirkland: I’m sure they’ll be along soon. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Cass walks up to the front door of the Cory Mansion and finds Maggie lying in front of it. Cass: Maggie! Cass tries to get her to come to, but she remains unconscious. Cass: My God what happened to you? Cass picks her up and takes her away. CAMERA PAN ON CASS...SLOW FADE TO THEME SONG ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ PART 2 Michael: I bet you’re angry about that. Michele: Not really. Not just about that. Bridget has been jealous of me for a long time. She admitted it before we fought. Michael: Whatever is going on between you two needs to stop. You’re sisters. Michele: She didn’t think about our sisterhood when she spiked Cory’s punch with vodka at the prom. MIchael (sighing): It’s all in the past. You have to move on from that, or else your anger is gonna eat you alive. You might do something you’ll end up regretting. Vicky walks in. Michele: Do you really think I’m gonna hurt Bridget? Vicky: Of course she wouldn’t. Bridget is the one who started all of this. Everything that she did before. Her jealousy. Michele: And the divorce. It’s all her fault. Michael: What? Michele: Mom and dad are getting a divorce because of Bridget. ----------------------------------------------------- Bridget: How are you gonna do anything when you and mom are getting a divorce? Donna: Jake. You and Victoria are going through with it? Jake: Donna this isn’t the time. Donna: How are you supposed to help Bridget and Michele mend their fences when you and my daughter can’t? Jake: I’m not talking about this with you. Bridget: Everybody needs to be talking to Michele. She’s sick. Donna: You both are playing a part in your feud honey, and you both need counseling. Bridget: She needs to be locked up in a padded room! -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Frankie gets a call on her cell phone. It’s Cass. Frankie: Cass where have you been I’ve been worried sick about you! Why aren’t you here? Cass: I’m at the hospital with Maggie. Frankie: Oh no. Is everything okay? Cass: I’m having her checked out. Frankie: I’ll be right there. Charlie and Kirkland approach Frankie. Charlie: Mom what’s going on? Frankie: Your father’s with Maggie at the hospital. I’m going. Charlie turns to Kirkland. Kirkland: Go ahead babe. Charlie: I’ll call you. Kirkland kisses her and as Charlie leaves, Kirkland gets a text from Eric. It reads: I’m hungry, let me know when u r coming to gimme something to eat. Don’t keep me waiting long. ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Allen is with KC. KC: This is a nice little party. Allen: Yeah I wonder why Carl decided to throw it. KC: I dunno. I’m sure we’ll find out soon. Allen: Hey uh...I’m glad we’re...talking you know? KC gives a half smile. KC: Toni said I should give you a chance. Allen: As soon as I found out about you being my daughter, I wanted a relationship with you. If I’d known sooner… KC: Why are you blaming yourself for that? It wasn’t your fault. Allen: Reginald kept me from my mother, and your mother kept me from you. I want us to be close KC. KC: I’d like the same thing but you need to stop trying to meddle. Allen: You’re talking about Eric Stenbeck. KC: I like him. Allen: Look you’re a grown woman. I can’t tell you what to do. KC: Correct. Allen: But I’m gonna keep an eye on him, because I’m not gonna let anything happen to you. KC: Look I get you want us to have a relationship but you can’t come to me trying to be this overprotective dad. That’s not gonna work. Allen: Gotcha. Whatever you want. KC: I wonder where the rest of our family is. Steven and Joy walk up to them together. Steven: That’s what I was wondering. I haven’t seen my sisters, my brother, anybody. KC: You guys look cozy. Are you dating or something? Joy snuggles up to Steven. Joy: Yep. We are. Too bad Vicky doesn’t approve. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- VIcky: Honey I’m sorry you found out the way you did. Michael: Why are you blaming Bridget? Michele: Because it is. All the problems our family has is because of her and her schemes. Vicky: Our problems were way deeper than Bridget’s machinations. Listen, let’s go downstairs and join the party okay. Michael: Well you better keep her and Michele apart. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Donna: Don’t say that about your sister! Bridget: She’s crazy. Jake: Stop it! Now! Bridget: Michele blames me for you guys divorcing. Do you? Jake: Of course not. Look I don’t wanna focus on that.
  6. Devin Lucas: Yeah. Everyone’s here. Mitch: I guess we’re just waiting for Carl and Rachel. Devin Lucas: He’s probably upstairs. I’m gonna go see about dad. ---------------------------------------------------- Cory and Elizabeth join Carl and Rachel in Carl and Rachel’s bedroom. They see Carl and Rachel hugging. Cory: Mom, dad. Elizabeth starts to cry. Elizabeth: Why do I feel like every moment we spend could be our last? Carl: My darling daughter. I’ll always be here. Elizabeth: I love you so much daddy. Devin Lucas peeks in. Devin Lucas: Don’t leave me out of this. Rachel: We wouldn’t dream of that. Carl: Where’s Frankie? Devin Lucas: I didn’t see her downstairs. Carl: Let’s go face the others...as a family. FREEZE FRAME ON CARL, RACHEL, CORY, ELIZABETH, and DEVIN LUCAS...SLOW FADE OUT...END OF EPISODE 222
  7. ANOTHER WORLD 222 Party at the Corys Michele confronts Bridget; Rachel and Carl brace themselves SUITE Devin Lucas is combing his hair in front of the mirror, and suddenly he stops and has a flashback. (EPISODE 212) Lindsay: I’m Lindsay. Devin Lucas: Good to meet you. Devin Lucas extends his right hand, and Lindsay extends her right hand through the handles of the shopping bag, and they shake. Devin Lucas: You must be shopping for my dad’s party tomorrow night. Devin Lucas smiles, then has another flashback…(EPISODE 208) Devin Lucas: I hate this. You don’t have much time left dad. Carl: I had to make things right for you. I can’t leave this earth knowing that you’re not safe. Lorna: But you are now. We all are. Devin Lucas: Did you tell Cory and Elizabeth? Carl: All of the children know. Lorna: You’re having a party in a couple of days. Carl: Announcing it to everyone else. Devin Lucas: I wish there was...something I could do to give us more time together. Carl: Son, just be strong. You’ll have plenty of support. Lorna: You’ll have your brother and sisters; Mitch, your grandmother, and me. Devin’s smile quickly fades as he flashes back to the present as Lorna, dressed in a fucha glittered dress and heels. Lorna: Are you ready? Devin Lucas: To hear dad tell everyone he’s dying? I dunno if I wanna hear it again. ----------------------------------------------- STACEY’S APARTMENT Lindsay is applying some makeup in front of a mirror when she has a flashback. (EPISODE 212) Lindsay: I’m Lindsay. Devin Lucas: Good to meet you. Devin Lucas extends his right hand, and Lindsay extends her right hand through the handles of the shopping bag, and they shake. Devin Lucas: You must be shopping for my dad’s party tomorrow night. Lindsay flashes back to the present and takes a deep breath. She grabs her purse, opens the front door and there’s Gregory. They look at each other and give each other a hug. Lindsay: Gregory I’m so sorry. Gregory: No. Not it’s me. I shouldn’t have been so pushy. You weren’t ready to talk… Lindsay: I was a complete ass. Gregory: Let’s forget about that, and go to this party. Gregory extends his arm and Lindsay locks hers with his. ------------------------------------------------------------- CORY MANSION Donna and Michael are standing near the double glass doors that lead to the gazebo. Michael is looking around. Donna: What are you looking for? Michael: Looking for our family members. Donna: Are you sure you’re not looking for Stacey? Michael: Oh Donna we’re not gonna do this here are we? Donna: I caught you calling her on your cell phone before we left. Michael: This party is for Carl and Rachel. Can we be civil for their sake? Look there’s Bridget. Bridget walks up to her grandparents. Donna: Hi. Michael: Hey sweetheart. Michael pecks Bridget on her right cheek. Donna: Have you seen your mother? Your sister? Bridget: No. I’m gonna go outside for a minute. Donna: Okay dear. -------------------------------------------------------- GAZEBO Bridget walks out and sits on the bench. Michele quickly comes out and steps in front of Bridget. Michele: You conniving little skank! Bridget: What? You’re wearing the same dress! Michele: It looks better on me doesn’t it? Bridget: I have no idea what you’re talking about. Michele: You posted it on FacePage you bitch! You said that I hope I don't cut myself if I see you and your BF out together. Something like that. Bridget: That’s because you’re not the saint that everybody thinks you are! Michele: I knew it. You’re jealous, and you always have been. Bridget: Ever since you came back, you’ve been plotting against me haven’t you? Did you really think I was gonna sit by and let you get the best of me? ----------------------------------------------------- CORY’S BEDROOM The door is open. Cory sits on the bed and stares up at the ceiling, and Elizabeth comes in and sits next to him. Elizabeth: Thinking about dad aren’t you? Cory: Yeah of course I am. We just got him back you know. Elizabeth: It definitely isn’t fair. Cory: Not at all. Elizabeth: I haven’t seen mom and dad all night. Cory: I’m sure they’re still in their room. --------------------------------------------------------- CARL AND RACHEL’S ROOM Carl walks out of the bathroom and sees his wife Rachel, who is wearing a pinkish white dress. Carl is wearing a matching tuxedo. They hug each other, then Rachel rests her arms on Carl’s shoulders. Rachel: It’s like I have to hear the news again. You have a brain tumor. Carl: My beautiful, darling wife. We’re all going to be fine. We’re strong, we’re resilient. You’ll see downstairs. All the support we have. Let’s go darling. CAMERA PAN ON CARL...SLOW FADE TO THEME SONG. ----------------------------------------------------- PART 2 Michele: Is that why you slept with Cory? Bridget: I slept with Cory because I love him. Michele: You don’t love anyone but yourself. You did that to get back at me. Bridget: Eww I wasn’t even thinking about you during… Michele: That’s the whole reason you did it. When Cory finds out… Bridget: What are you gonna do? You’re gonna take him away, too? Why can’t I have something? You have everything! Michele: I’ve got nothing because of you and everything you did. Bridget: What makes you so damned special? Mom and dad gushing over your grades. You had Cory. I have to scratch and claw to get mom to notice me; to get her to love me! Michele: Looks who’s crazy. Bridget: Mom humiliated me at your memorial service. Do you know how much that hurt? Michele: And I did that to you? Bridget: Yes you did! You did this. Michele: If you hadn’t tried to spike Cory’s drink at the prom; if you hadn’t kept my acceptance letter from me then maybe mom would give you the benefit of the doubt! But you keep pulling stunts. That’s why they’re divorcing! Bridget: What? Mom and dad are getting a divorce? Michele: That’s right, because of you! This whole family has fallen apart because of you. Bridget: No. Michele: I have brain damage. I couldn’t read, I lost Cory...because of you! And I’m gonna make sure you get everything you deserve. Bridget: Yes you’ve lost Cory. Michele: We were supposed to be together. Bridget: But it didn’t happen that way did it? I had him, and you didn’t. Doesn’t that make you...mad...crazy? Michele: You bitch! Michele grabs Bridget’s hair and pulls her to the ground. Bridget manages to pull Michele to the ground. The two are wrestling, and rolling. Michele manages to get on top of Bridget and punches her in her face. Bridget then scratches Michele, and they roll over again. Bridget is on top of Michele, and starts slapping her. Michele grabs Bridget’s hair again, and pulls her to the ground again. Michele grabs Bridget’s head, but before she can bang her head on the ground, Jake grabs her, effectively stopping the fight. Donna, Michael and Vicky walk out, and the other guests look on. Jake has subdued Michele and Michael has grabbed Bridget. Bridget and Michele are both bloodied and kicking. Jake: Stop this you two! What the hell is going on here? Michele: I’m gonna get you bitch! Bridget: Come and get me! Donna: Oh my God. Vicky: Michele are you okay? What did you do to her Bridget? Bridget: Of course you take her side. She started all of this! Michele: You started it! Michael: Let’s get em outta here. Jake and Michael escort Bridget and Michele out of the gazebo in opposite directions. ---------------------------------------------- CORY MANSION LIVING ROOM Dr. Russ Matthews walks in and looks around. Sharlene is with John and she notices him. Sharlene: Is that Russ Matthews? John: Yeah he just got a job at the hospital. Sharlene: Oh. ---------------------------------------------------- FOYER Steven and Joy walk in. Steven: Take your jacket? Joy: Thank you. Steven goes to the closet, and Joy quickly takes out her phone, and pulls up the camera view of Tyrone and Marley’s living room. She has a flashback. (EPISODE 174) Back at the Monticello Police Station Interrogation Room, Reginald gives instructions to Joy... Reginald: You don’t want Thomasina to get sick again do you? Get me my great grandson. As she flashes back to the present, Steven rejoins her. Steven: Where were you just now? Joy: Oh. Thomasina sent me a text. Donna and Vicky walk into the foyer talking. Donna: When are we going to do something about the girls? Look what happened out there. Vicky: That’s why Bridget is living with you. I think she needs help. Donna and Vicky both stop when they see Steven and Joy. Steven: Hey mom. Grandma. Donna: Honey. Hi it’s good to see you. Joy. Joy: Donna Love? You were the owner of that club that burned down right? Donna: The Harbor Club? Joy: Steven you didn’t tell me Donna was...your grandmother. Vicky: This night just gets better and better doesn’t it? Steven: Good evening to you, too mom. Donna: Joy, why don’t we go into the living room? Vicky takes Steven to the side. Vicky: What the hell are you doing here with her? After what she did to Marley? Steven: We’re gonna be together mom. Vicky: You can’t be serious! -------------------------------------------------------------- Devin Lucas and Lorna walk in, and Felicia and Mitch greet them. Lorna: Mother. Felicia: Honey you look fabulous. Lorna: Thank you. Devin Lucas: Hi grandma. Felicia: Hi sweety. Mitch: Looks like everyone’s here huh? Devin Lucas looks across the room and sees Gregory and Lindsay laughing.
  8. CONTINUED FROM ABOVE (CUT OFF) Grant: Don’t worry about Paulina. All you need to do is leave Bay City and never come back. Jack: She’s gonna come running to your waiting arms now right? Grant: I don’t see you packing. Jack: Paulina loved me; she loved Jake; she loved Joe Carlino, but not you. Grant: She did once. She can love me again. Jack: Paulina told me alllll about that. She was obligated to you. Especially after you were shot. She was sneaking around with Jake most of the time that she was with you. That’s not love Grant. Grant: The faster you go the better. If I see your face in this town again, I will expose you for the baby seller that you are. Jack: She’s gonna ask questions. Grant: And I’m going to tell her. You need to leave and resign from the Bay City Police Department. Jack: She’s not gonna love you Grant. --------------------------------------------------------------- AT THE FRONT OF THE CORYS Paulina and Jake walk slowly toward the front door. Paulina: You sure the papers will be fine in your car? Jake: Paulina: I know this hurts. Jake: Yeah. Years of marriage...over. Paulina: You raised Steven and Kirkland, and had two daughters. You should be grateful for that experience. Dante was a teen ager when Joe died, and I never got to raise Remy. You and Vicky had a wonderful life together. Jake: And now it’s done. Paulina: Come here. Paulina hugs Jake. Paulina: You will be fine. Everything will work out for you. Vicky opens the door, observes Jake and Paulina’s embrace, then goes back into the mansion. Jack (V.O. to Grant): She will never love you! Nothing you do will ever make her. If I’m out of the picture, someone else will come and steal her heart again, and you’ll be left out in the cold...wondering...wishing. FREEZE FRAME ON VICKY, JAKE AND PAULINA...SLOW FADE OUT...END OF EPISODE 221
  9. ANOTHER WORLD 221 Party at the Cory’s Part 6 Christy leaves Cass no choice; Jack vs Grant; A slippery slope begins for Vicky CORY MANSION Vicky walks in wearing an off white glitter dress with a matching purse, heels. ..and an envelope. Guests are mingling as Amanda, who is wearing a sky blue dress, and Allen greet her in the foyer. Allen: What’s up cuz? Vicky: Hey. Hi Amanda. Amanda: Hi you look great. Vicky: Thank you. Likewise. Allen: Did you hear the news? Vicky: No what? Allen: Uncle Peter called me earlier. He said that my mother is cancer free. Vicky: Wow that’s wonderful! That is such great news. Amanda: That is. I’m gonna go outside and call Alli. Allen: Okay. They kiss on the lips and Amanda goes upstairs. Vicky: That is the greatest news Allen. I’m so happy for you. Aunt Nicole beat cancer. Allen: I’m so happy. I get to spend more time with my mom. So...what’s in the envelope? Gift for Carl and Rachel. Vicky: No it’s…it’s for Jake. Allen looks past Vicky and sees Jake. Jake: Is that right? Vicky turns around and looks at Jake. Allen: I’ll leave you two alone. Vicky: Let’s go outside and talk. ------------------------------------------ FRONT OF THE CORY MANSION Jake: Is that what I think it is? Vicky gives him the envelope and Jake opens it and reads the contents. Jake takes a deep breath. Jake: Yep. Vicky: I’ve already signed it. All you have to do is sign and turn it to the courts. Jake: This is final. Vicky: This is what you wanted right? A divorce? Well you got it. Michele walks up to them. Michele: A what? You guys are getting a divorce? It’s because of Bridget isn’t it? ------------------------------------------- MEANWHILE...… Frankie is on her cell phone out near the gazebo. Frankie: Cass where are you? I’m waiting for you to arrive and I’m getting worried. Frankie hangs up and Felicia walks up to her. Felicia: Frankie? Is everything okay? Frankie: I don’t know. Cass said he was on his way. Felicia: You know how Cass is. I’m sure he’ll be here any minute. Frankie: That was about a half hour ago. I can’t shake this feeling that something is off. I wish he’d get here. ------------------------------------------- WAREHOUSE… Christy reaches into her pocket and takes a small cup out. Christy: When I got taken away to that facility, I wondered how it would ever happen, but here we are. Cass: Get to the point Christy! Christy: It’s time Cass. It’s time for me...to have a baby. Cass: A baby? You stayed in Bay City to get pregnant? That doesn’t make any sense! Christy: I went to Oakdale to see Dr. Weston. Cass: Dr. Weston? He’s the guy from that Swiss Clinic… Christy: Yes he tried to speed up the aging process for Carly Snyder, Rose D’Angelo, and Emily Stewart. Cass: I don’t think you wanted to see him because you wanted to get old. Christy: No Cass, I want to get pregnant. He gave me fertility treatments, and I circled this date ever since. He told me it would happen around this time. I would experience cramping. Cass: Christy for God’s sake will you tell me what’s going on? Christy: Are you really this stupid? I’m ovulating! Christy shows Cass the cup. Christy: And all I need to get pregnant...is sperm....your sperm. Cass: What the...you’re out of your mind if you think that I’m gonna give you my sperm so you can get pregnant! Christy extends the cup to Cass. Christy: Sorry but you really don’t have much of a choice. Maggie’s freedom depends on it. Cass: So that’s your huge plan. Your whole reason for staying in Bay City? Christy: You got it. Now go give me a sample. I don’t have any books. Think of Mary Frances. Or better yet, think of me. Cass: No way… Christy: If you want to see Maggie again, you’ll do this….now! ---------------------------------------------------------------- OUTSIDE OF THE MANSION… Jake: Honey it’s nobody’s fault okay. Vicky: Honey let’s go inside. Your dad and I are done here. Michele: Mom you...you can’t let this happen. Vicky: Sometimes...it’s better to let some things go. Vicky and Michele enter the mansion. As they open the door, Paulina is there. Paulina: Vicky, Michele. Vicky: Excuse us Paulina. Paulina turns to look at Jake holding the papers in his hands. Paulina: Is that? Oh. Jake I’m so sorry. Jake: Don’t be. It’s time. Paulina: Did Vicky just give you those? Jake: Yes, but I don’t wanna focus on this right now. Where’s Jack? Paulina: Jack should be on his way. He had to stop at the station real quick. ------------------------------------------------ POLICE STATION, JACK’S OFFICE Jack: I laugh because you’re one huge joke. Why should I look at anything you have to give me? Grant: Because your future depends on it, especially if it went viral. Jack: Is this your latest ploy to keep me away from Paulina? Grant: You will thank me. Go ahead. Take a look. Grant gives Jack the jump drive. Jack smiles. Jack: If this gets you out of here. He sticks it in the USB of his desktop and is shocked. Jack: What? Where the hell did you get this? Grant smiles deviously.CAMERA PAN ON GRANT...SLOW FADE TO THEME SONG ------------------------------------------------- PART 2 Grant: I don’t see you chuckling now. I knew you would enjoy the slideshow. Jack: This isn’t real. Grant: Oh it is real. Jack: This was… Grant: A part of your past? Those things have a way of coming back don’t they? Jack: I wanted to help her. Grant: Paulina? You didn’t help her at all. Jack: You think this is gonna make Paulina love you? Grant: I have to remove the obstacle keeping me from her, and that’s you. Jack: So you’re gonna put this all over the internet? Grant: Well the statute of limitations has long run on out on that...crime you and Paulina committed, but if I put it on the web, you would be out of a job. In fact you would never work in law enforcement again. You wouldn’t even be able to get a job as a security guard! Jack: You claim to love Paulina? You want to hurt her like this? Grant: Of course not, that’s why I’m not going to let it go viral. That decision really is up to you. Jack: How is that? Grant: Carly, your daughters in Oakdale. That’s where you should be. Jack: So you had my family in mind when you got a hold of this? Spare me the concern. Grant: Go and work things out with your wife. Jack: Or you’ll post this on FacePage? You’re pathetic. Grant: No. What’s pathetic is that you’re a baby seller. Did you see the last page? Jack slides to it and is further shocked. Jack: DNA test. Grant: What would everyone think? Your family, your friends in Oakdale...that you sold an infant girl on the black market? What would they think if they found out...that the little baby you sold to Scooter Carruthers on the black market that night...turned out to be Remy Woods? Jack: Remy Woods. Grant: Yes. Remy Woods. The girl that grew up in Foster homes, and came to Bay City as a con artist. Jack: Shut up! Grant: Remy and Paulina don’t even know who her father is, and that Remy’s father...is right here. Right in front of me...you! ---------------------------------------------------------- Frankie: It’s not like Cass not to call if something has happened. I gotta go and find… Felicia touches Frankie’s wrist. Felicia: No...don’t do that. I’m sure Cass just got held up. He will be here. Frankie: Felicia you’re shaking. You’re sweating, too. Are you okay? Felicia has a flashback (EPISODE 219) As they walk to the decorated living room, they notice Felicia at the liquor table. Felicia is staring down at the liquor. Now both of her hands are shaking, she’s sweating, and taking deep breaths. Then she flashes back to the present. Felicia: Hot flashes more than likely. Felicia stares inside and looks directly at the liquor on the table. ----------------------------------------------------- Cass gives Christy the cup, and Christy examines it. Christy: Hmm. Okay. Cass: Now where’s my daughter? Christy: You’ll have to go back to the Corys to see her. Cass: She’s been at the Corys the whole time? Christy: You should go now. I’m sure Mary Frances is worried about you. Cass: If you’ve done anything to hurt my daughter, I will come after you. Christy: Oh Cass, and don’t think about calling the cops. You have no proof that I did anything. Besides, Maggie has staged her own kidnapping before. Cass rushes off and Christy makes a call to Brianna, whose back is turned to a bound, gagged, and unconscious Maggie. Christy: I got it. Brianna: Wow really? Christy: You can drop Maggie off at the Corys. Your secret remains safe. Christy hangs up and makes another call. Christy: Dr. Weston it’s me. I have what we need...to make a baby. -------------------------------------------------- ROOM Brianna hangs up and notices Maggie is starting to come to. Brianna grabs another needle full of a sedative and runs over to inject Maggie. Brianna: No. Maggie is unconscious again after another injection by Brianna. ------------------------------------------------- Grant: What’s the matter Jack? Nothing to say? Jack: You think Paulina’s going to love you after this?
  10. ANOTHER WORLD 220 Party at the Corys Part 5 Cass gets an ominous text message; Michele is further infuriated by Bridget LOVE MANSION Allen walks downstairs dressed in a black tuxedo, white shirt, and a black bowtie. He gets a phone call on his cell. Allen: Hello? What? Oh man that’s...that’s the best news. My mother is cancer free. Thank you unc. He hangs up smiling and Michele opens the door with her key. Michele is also wearing a sequin dress. Allen: Hey Michele. Michele: Hi Allen. You look nice...and happy. Allen: Your Aunt Nicole is cancer free. That’s the best news. Michele: Wow that’s...that’s wonderful. Allen: Hey if you’re looking for Donna and Michael you just missed them. They left for the party about twenty minutes ago. Michele: I actually was looking for Bridget. Allen: No Bridget went with them. What are you doing here? Shouldn’t you be heading to the party? Michele: I left something here. I just came back to get it. Allen: Oh well...I’m gonna hurry up and go meet Amanda. See ya later. Michele: Sure. Michele immediately goes upstairs and heads straight for Bridget’s room. ----------------------------------------------------------------------- BRIDGET’S BEDROOM. Michele looks around and goes straight for Bridget’s laptop. She sticks a USB in the side, presses a few buttons, and begins to download information. Michele: What are you up to Bridget? ----------------------------------------------------------------------- CORY MANSION Cory is in his bedroom fixing his bowtie when Bridget peeks in. Cory turns around and his eyes widen as Bridget is wearing a sequin dress with black heels. Cory: You look...so beautiful. Bridget walks up to him and wraps her arms around him. Bridget: Thank you Mr. Handsome. After their embrace, Cory turns back to the mirror and continues to adjust his bowtie. Bridget: What’s wrong babe? Something on your mind? Cory: Tonight’s the night. Bridget: For what? Cory: I’m not supposed to tell anyone. I’ve been keeping it to myself since I got the news. Bridget: Cory? What’s going on? Is everything okay? Cory: You can’t breathe a word of this to anyone. Bridget: Of course not, but you’re scaring me. Cory: It’s the reason my dad is throwing this party. He’s gonna tell everyone that he’s dying. Bridget: Oh....oh no...I’m so sorry. Bridget throws her arms around Cory. Bridget: Is there anything I can do? Cory: You’re...doing more than enough. Bridget: Does anyone else know? Cory: Well Devin already knew. Bridget: Devin? Who’s Devin? Cory: My half brother. Long story. Mom and dad told Lizzie, Matt and Amanda. I don’t think they told Paulina or Frankie though. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Frankie walks up to the front door of the Cory Mansion and she is talking on her cell phone with Cass who is in his car. He is talking through the car’s bluetooth. Frankie: When do you think you’re gonna get here? Cass: I’m on my way. I had to stop at the office for a quick minute. Frankie: Well...please hurry. I...I need you. Cass: Frankie what’s going on? Frankie: I’m not feeling great about...anything. Ever since Maggie left the house. Cass: Honey just go in, mingle a bit. That should take your mind off of whatever it is you’re feeling. Frankie: I’m real nervous about tonight. Some things are going to happen, and they won’t be good. Cass: Go inside. I’ll be there in a minute okay. Frankie: Love you. Cass: Love you, too. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------- WAREHOUSE Brianna has a cell phone, and a picture of Maggie, who is bound, gagged, and unconscious lying on a cot. She sends the picture, along with text, to someone. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Cass, who is walking toward the front door of the Corys, gets an alert. Cass: What the…? It’s the picture of Maggie, and a text that says: If you want to see your daughter again, come down to the warehouse downtown...alone. Cass: No...Maggie? CAMERA PAN ON CASS...SLOW FADE TO THEME SONG. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- PART 2 LOVE MANSION Michele is on Bridget’s computer sifting through the information that she downloaded onto the USB she stuck in the side of the laptop, and she is shocked what she sees. Michele: That...bitch! ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Bridget: They told the family first. Wow I’m so sorry. I know you just got your dad back. Now you’re gonna lose him again. I don’t know what to say. Cory: It isn’t fair you know? Bridget: It’s not. Cory: My dad fought so hard to come back to us, and now he’s gonna be taken away again, and he’s not coming back this time. Bridget: I wouldn’t even know what I’d do if I lost my dad. Cory: You would do what I would do; be there for you. Bridget: I wish there was something I could do to keep your dad for you. Cory: His brain tumor is spreading rapidly. There’s nothing anyone can do. Bridget: Oh Cory. I’m so sorry. Cory: I would have told you sooner but my mom and dad didn’t want us to tell anyone. Bridget: I understand. Hey maybe if we....go downstairs it’ll help you feel a little better. Cory: I’ll think I’ll...stay up here for a minute. Bridget: Okay. I’ll go to the gazebo. ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Meanwhile, downstairs in the foyer, Matt is on his cell phone facing the living room. Matt: Hey Nurse Brianna. It’s Matt Cory. Just givin’ you a call, and see when you want that personalized Bay City tour we talked about at the hospital. Talk to you later. Gimme a call back. Matt hangs up, turns around and greets Frankie, who flashes a pensive smile. Matt: Frankie hey. Frankie: Matthew. Matt: Oh no, something’s definitely on your mind. Frankie looks around. Frankie: Hey have you heard from Maggie? Matt: No, but I’m sure she’ll be along shortly. Why? Frankie: I don’t...I don’t know how to explain it. Something’s wrong. Matt: Oh...come on she’s probably just taking her time getting dressed. Call her. Frankie: Good idea. Frankie takes out her cell phone and calls Maggie’s phone. ------------------------------------------------------------------------ ROOM Brianna looks at Maggie’s phone vibrating. Brianna presses “ignore”. Brianna: Maggie’s not available to take your call right now. -------------------------------------------------------------------------- Frankie: No answer. Matt: Frankie you seem really nervous. Frankie: She came to our house earlier, and ever since she left, I haven’t felt right. Something is wrong. Matt: Have you talked to Cass? Frankie: He said he was on his way. He should be here by now. -------------------------------------------------------------------------- WAREHOUSE Cass walks into a dimly lit room, looks around. Cass: Maggie! Maggie where are you? Suddenly, Christy, dressed in all black, walks into the room behind Cass. Christy: You don’t get to see Maggie yet. Cass turns around. Cass: You! What the hell have you done with my daughter? Christy: Don’t worry, Maggie’s safe...for now. Cass grabs Christy’s arms and shakes her. Cass: If you hurt Maggie I’ll kill you.. Christy: Let me go! Cass: Where’s Maggie? Christy: You will see Maggie again, provided I get what I want. Cass: I knew you were up to something. Christy: And now you’re gonna find out. The whole reason why I stayed in Bay City after I got out of that criminal mental facility. Cass: I don’t care. I wanna see Maggie. Christy: Maggie is safe. Cass: I’m gonna have you arrested for kidnapping. I’m calling the police. Christy: If you want to see your daughter, you will put that phone away. Cass: Tell me where she is! Christy: I’m not telling you yet, not until I get what I dreamed of ever since I was committed. It’s why I killed Douglas. I had to get him out of the way. Cass slowly puts his phone away as Christy begins to tell a story. Christy: All of his attempts to get me to see reality; telling me that I shouldn’t be in love with you. I got tired of him telling me that. Doesn’t he realize that the heart wants what it wants! Cass: You didn’t love me. You were obsessed with me! Christy: When I danced in Mary Frances’s wedding dress, I envisioned you and I...married. Then we would do the things that married people do. A house; black picket fence. I hate white fences. They get dirty way too easily and they’re too much maintenance. After all of that, we would have a child. Christy reaches into her pocket and takes a small cup out. Christy: When I got taken away to that facility, I wondered how it would ever happen, but here we are. Cass: Get to the point Christy! Christy: It’s time Cass. It’s time for me...to have a baby. FREEZE FRAME ON CHRISTY...SLOW FADE OUT...END OF EPISODE 220
  11. ANOTHER WORLD 219 Party at The Corys Part 3 Grant confronts Jack Carl and Rachel are in their bedroom. Carl walks out of the bathroom, and sees Rachel on her laptop wearing a white sequin dress. Carl: You look exquisite...as always. They hug and Rachel lets out a deep breath after the embrace. She looks her husband in his eyes. Rachel: You were great with Elizabeth. Carl: That wasn’t easy at all. You know how our daughter can be. Rachel: I almost understand it. Carl: She had to know that you are not the blame for this. Rachel: Thank you. I was hoping this...day would never come. This party; this evening; none of it. Carl: We’ve gotta tell everyone and I’m at peace with it. Rachel: Well I’m not. The people we love are gonna be hurt. Carl: We can’t let this get the best of us. You are the rock...for all of us. Rachel: I hate that we have to tell our friends and the rest of our family. Felicia… -------------------------------------- AT THE BLAKE’S… Mitch walks into the living room, where Felicia is looking at her laptop. Mitch: Hey we gotta go to the Corys soon right? Felicia: Yeah right. I’m just checking to see if there’s any movement on my movie deal. Mitch walks over, slowly closes the computer, and kisses Felicia on her forehead. Mitch: Let’s...go to the Corys, and you can worry about the movies later, and you’re sweating. Felicia: Oh it’s just...nerves I guess. Mitch: Stress about the movies? Felicia: You could say that I suppose. We’ve been invited to a party and I haven’t told Rachel that I accepted Iris’s offer. Mitch: I’m sure she’ll understand when she finds out. Let me go get the keys. Mitch walks back into their bedroom and Felicia looks at her right hand, and it’s shaking. ---------------------------------------- Rachel: (V.O.): Paulina… ---------------------------------------- AT PAULINA’S Paulina walks downstairs in a white slightly glittered dress and matching open toed heels. Jack: My my. You look great. Can you take it off? Paulina: As much as I’d love to do that, we gotta get to the Corys. Jack: Do I really have to go to this party? Paulina: Yes you doooo. Jack: Darn. Paulina: Rachel and Carl are the parents I never had. You know how I grew up. Jack: Foster homes. I know. Paulina: Well if...you don’t want to go… Jack: Come on Paulina. Of course I wanna go with you. Paulina: Are you sure? Jack: I’m ready to let Bay City know that we’re together, but first I gotta go to the station. Paulina: Work work work. Jack: No I’m just checkin up on Dante. Paulina: He texted me and told me that he’s enjoying the job. Jack: Yeah it’ll be something real quick. Gonna check over his work, then I’ll get dressed and be on my way to the Corys. Paulina: I wish Dante could finish his training in Bay City. Jack: He doesn’t have that long to go. He’ll be back home before you know it. Paulina: You’re gonna bring my son home to me. Jack: That’s not all I’m gonna bring to you. Paulina smiles. Paulina: Hmmmm. They kiss. ---------------------------------------------------------- Rachel: (V.O.) Donna, Michael. --------------------------------------------------------- LOVE MANSION...Donna, dressed in a baby blue glittered dress, walks into the foyer. Donna: Bridget we’re leaving soon! You’ve got five minutes! Bridget is upstairs in her bedroom and she’s applying her lip gloss, then she stands up and looks in her vanity mirror. As she primps her hair, and admires her light green dress, she notices something in the background….the used condom. Bridget: How did that get over here? -------------------------------------------------------- IN THE LIVING ROOM... Michael, who is wearing a navy blue suit, white shirt, and sky blue tie and black dress shoes, is on his cell phone. Michael: Hey Stace it’s me. Just thought I’d check on ya. Hope you and Lindsay are doin’ well. I’ll speak to you soon. Michael turns around and sees Donna. Michael: You look great. Donna walks up to him and slaps him. Michael: Hey what was that for? Donna: Stacey Winthrop? Really? CAMERA PAN ON DONNA...SLOW FADE TO THEME SONG ------------------------------------------------------- PART 2 Michael: Donna… Donna: We’re about to go together to a party for Carl and Rachel and your’e calling Stacey Winthrop? Michael: She’s trying to get through a difficult time. Donna: And you just have to be there for her huh? Michael: Donna you’re jealous for no reason. Donna: No reason? You two dated years ago. Michael: Exactly Donna...years ago. Donna: She has Cass and Frankie to help her get through whatever she’s going through with her daughter. Michael: How can you be so cold? Stacey needs a friend. Bridget interrupts them. Bridget: Ummm...are we ready to go? Donna turns around, gathers herself, and smiles. Donna: Of course we are honey. Let’s go to the Corys. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Carl: I just can’t help but to think about Cory and Elizabeth. Rachel: I don’t want to worry about them. They’re in good hands. Carl: I know. I take comfort in that. They’ve got a whole family to look out for them. Rachel: We’re all gonna miss you, but we’re going to get through it. Carl: You’ve got such a...strong support system. Matthew, Amanda, the children, your friends. Rachel: I’ve been blessed, especially with Felicia. I am so grateful that we’ve been friends for such a long time. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Meanwhile, Mitch and Felicia arrive at the Cory Manse. Matt answers the door. Felicia: Matthew hi. Matt: Felicia...Mitch. Mitch: Hey there. Felicia walks to the living room. Mitch: So this is the night of the big party huh. Wonder what prompted Carl to do that. Matt: It’s...it’s a celebration. Felicia leaves them as they finish. Mitch: You know Jasmine texted me. She wants a new tablet. Matt: I told her she needs to focus on school right now. Mitch: Well… Matt: Mitch tell me you didn’t...come on. Mitch: She’s my granddaughter I can’t say no. Matt: I said I would get her a new tablet once she picked her grades up. Mitch: She promised me she would do better. Matt: Promises promises. As they walk to the decorated living room, they notice Felicia at the liquor table. Felicia is staring down at the liquor. Now both of her hands are shaking, she’s sweating, and taking deep breaths. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Carl: I also worry about Paulina. She’s become like a daughter to me. Rachel: Me, too. Just wondering about how things are gonna end up for her with Jack. He’s still married to Carly. I really hope she doesn’t get her heart broken. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Paulina walks into the foyer of the mansion and Matt greets her. Paulina: Matthew hi. Matt: Hey you look great. Paulina: Thank you. Where’s your mom and Carl? Matt: I think they’re still upstairs. Paulina: This big party. Matt takes a deep breath. Matt: Yeah. Paulina: What’s going on? Is everything alright? Matt: Yeah uh...I just laid into my father about Jasmine. Paulina: Oh. How is my niece doing? Matt: She’s giving me gray hairs and she doesn’t even live here. Paulina: Oooh Matthew. The joys of being a parent. Matt: Oh the worries. Paulina: I was blessed to raise Dante, but I didn’t get that chance with Remy. I wish she didn’t have to grow up the way I did. Matt: The important thing is that you were there for her when you could be. As soon as you knew who she was you were in her life, and she loves you. Paulina: I love her, too. I love both of my children. Matt: Where’s Jack? Paulina: He had to stop at the station, but he should be along soon. ------------------------------------------------------------------- POLICE STATION...Jack is wearing a dark gray suit, white dress shirt, with no tie. He’s sitting at his desk on the desk phone. Jack: That’s good Dante. I’m hearing that you’re picking up things quickly. Soon you’re gonna be good enough to take over the BCPD. Talk to you soon buddy. Someone buzzes Jack. Jack: What’s up? Okay send him in. Seconds later, Grant walks in. Jack: What are you doing here? Grant: Ohh Detective Snyder, this has been long overdue. Time for us to have a talk. Jack: About what? Grant: What do you think? Paulina. After this you’re not gonna be involved in her life anymore. Jack laughs while Grant takes out the jump drive. Jack: Grant don’t you have something else to do? Grant: Oh you think this is funny. You won’t be laughing after you see what’s on this. I can’t wait for you to take a look at it. FREEZE FRAME AT GRANT...SLOW FADE OUT...END OF EPISODE 219 --------------------------------------------------------------------------------
  12. YES YES YES!! EVERYTHING HIT IN THIS EPISODE Valerie going off in the police station was epic. She unleashed her anger about racial profiling and injustice now happening to her grandson, and the reference about David to STING Hope...Yes yes yes.... Kate and Gabi's conversation. Stroke of genius...Kate COMMENDING Gabi for the plan to get Nick addicted to pills. LOVED THAT...Great idea to put those two in cahoots again. Will meet my brother Alex (the one you've been wildly attracted to since he arrived in Salem). A sibling rivalry has begun. Oh this dinner is going to be epic. You set it up beautifully in the beginning with the phone call, and even the conversation at the door before Henderson opened it. WOW OH WOW.. You are firing on all cylinders with these last three I just read...keep em comin!!!!
  13. What a great follow up from 83. I could FEEL the anger from Jerome and the tears from Valerie after his arrest. Hope's conflict, and Rafe's indignation born out of feeling insulted. Victor and Tyler's conversation i could see on TV. Tyler stuttering out of intimidation and Victor just putting the hammer down. LOVED IT Billie realized that Daniel still loves Jennifer. I could see it and feel it as she pulled over and cried. Gabi making deals with the devil to get rid of Nick. I like how Liam was menacing in a sense. And to top it all off, Eric's proposal to Nicole. Very thoughtful and romantic. LOVED THIS ENTIRE EPISODE. Once again you capture character so well that I can see all these people in my mind as I read the lines. EXCELLENT JOB!!!
  14. YESS It has BEGUN... Tyler now KNOWS he's been infatuated with the boss's wife Maggie... Liam has broken into Marlena's office, but Marlena and Laura see Will outside of the office, and with Laura's history of mental illness, one could easily think that she mistook Liam for Will. EXCELLENT play on history there. Valerie noticing that Roman's file was missing....she will keep digging....LOVE THIS! Jerome Grant has been ARRESTED off of a seemingly abstract description, and nice line about "always a black man." To balance all the suspense, Eric has a nice romantic evening planned for Nicole. GOOD ONE!!
  15. Lots of different emotions in this one. Noah's reaction was natural and I'm glad he pointed out Nick for what he did in the past. Good history recall with Esther and then Philip having used in Australia. Good set up for Philip doing a row in the bathroom, and Scott finding him...hmmm could be the start of something beautiful!! LOL Karynn and Esther are becoming quite the pair, and this trip to Chicago is going to prove very interesting
  16. What an episode!! Story moved and you stuck to your style of writing...I enjoyed it a lot. My girl Karynn is BACK..and it's GREAT to see her ingratiate herself with her family, because those relationships (good or bad) will help her in the future. Avery sung like a canary and told everything. I wonder what this will mean for her. The twist of SHEILA being the owner of Newman instead of Jack was great!! Part of Sheila's master plan. Another layer uncovered. AND Michael and Victor's scenes were great, and Victor is FREE!! UH OH Michael!! He's about to be crushed.
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