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Episode 107: The Big Reveal


Matt P.

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Dylan felt daggers go through him as he heard Carrie’s voice on the other end. Speak you fool, was what he thought to himself, but the words couldn’t come out. On the other end, Rebecca didn’t know what to do either as she leaned against her office desk.

Carrie:

Come on you two. I’m waiting for an explanation.

Rebecca:

Unfortunately Carrie I’m not obligated to do such a thing. There are patient confidentiality laws that prohibit me from doing so.

Carrie:

Cut the bull. You were obligated enough to let Dylan know that I wasn’t pregnant so don’t even get me started on who owes who what!

Dylan:

We’ll deal with this now. Rebecca I’ll call you back.

Rebecca:

Okay. I’m sorry Carrie, truly.

Dylan hangs up with Rebecca and walks into his living room. Carrie’s eyes are hurt and were moving back and forth a mile a minute. She was obviously shook up in anger.

Carrie:

You know what? I know what it is that I have to do. I’m going to call Juliana and I’m going to tell her that things aren’t working here. She wants me to be a family with her, then fine. I’ll leave. It wouldn’t be the first time.

Carrie begins to dial numbers on the phone until Dylan retrieves it and hangs up. She turns away from him.

Dylan:

You’re not going to do that Carrie. We both know that the situation’s not that easy.

Carrie:

(turning back to look at him)

Then what is it? What is wrong with you?

Dylan looks away from her.

Carrie:

Of course. It’s like your emotions just go limp. I don’t know even know who you are anymore.

Tears begin to fall down Dylan’s eyes and onto the floor.

Dylan:

I’m sorry. I’m sorry for being distant but…

Carrie:

But what? Just tell me please! Whatever it is, I’m sure I can handle it. Are you gay? Or did you impregnate someone? Just say it.

Dylan:

(admitting)

I have testicular cancer!

Silence rocks the room. Carrie’s mouth slowly dropped.

Dylan:

Yeah. That’s why I didn’t want to make love to you because I didn’t think that I could do it. That’s why I wanted you to leave me alone because I don’t know how to handle this. That’s why I hid everything from you.

Carrie:

Oh my god. Dylan I feel like such an idiot for- I’m the one who’s sorry.

Dylan:

Don’t be. You had no idea and I’ve been treating you like garbage.

Carrie:

I- I just don’t know what to say or what to do.

Dylan:

Just tell me that you’re here for me. Those are the only words I want to hear.

Carrie:

Dylan you know that I will always be here for you. I love you.

Dylan:

I’m scared Carrie. I’m so scared. You go your whole life thinking that nothing will happen to you but boom you find something on your testicle and it ruins everything.

(admitting to himself)

I have testicular cancer!

Dylan falls to the ground and cries. Carrie goes down with him and holds on to him for support. She cradles him in her arms, rocking him back and forth, while he sobbed from his own tragedy.

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Episode 107:

The Big Reveal

Executive Story Consultant & Creator:

Matt Politylo

Logo Designer:

Mary Zimmerman

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Feeling really bad about the way she handled herself, Ava knocks on Nate’s hotel room door to talk to him. After the second knock he answers it.

Ava:

Can I come in? I brought you some breakfast. It’s a peace offering.

Nate:

Really? What else do you have with it? A punch in the face?

Ava:

No. I’m here to apologize.

Nate:

Then by all means.

Ava walks in to his hotel room. She places the breakfast bag on the table closest to the door.

Ava:

Have you thought about moving out of the hotel and into an apartment?

Nate:

This place has been home to me. Not that you care but I can afford it.

Ava:

Right with your school salary and all. That was the main reason why you came here in the first place. Right?

Nate:

That and snatch. Since that got me a nice helping of Chlamydia, I’m looking to other things.

Ava:

Look I’m sorry for what I did. It was out of place for me to hit you. It’s just I don’t like when people say mean words or demean someone because of their sexuality.

Nate:

But what are you?

Ava:

You know, I’ve been asking myself that question since day one. Am I Ava the alcoholic? Am I Ava the lesbian? Ava the mistress? Honestly I don’t know.

Nate:

The only thing that angers me is that I’m willing to give you something that I could never give any girl. I’m willing to give you my heart.

Ava:

It’s just- I-

Nate:

Are you still gay? Do you have feelings for Sky?

Ava looks away from him.

Nate:

Fine. You don’t know what you are that’s cool. We’ll do a little test then.

Nate takes off his shirt and throws it on the ground.

Ava:

What are you doing?

Nate takes his pants off and throws them on the ground to until he is completely nude.

Nate:

I want to prove to you that you’re attracted to guys.

Ava:

(confused)

What?

Nate:

Do I turn you on? Why don’t you come over here and hold me. Maybe you need touch me to find out that you want it.

Nate grabs her hand and runs it all over his body. He tries pulling her in close to kiss him but she pulls away after finding herself to be caught in the moment.

Ava:

No Nate I can’t!

Nate:

Of course. I’m not trying to force you to do anything that you don’t want to do.

Ava:

You want to know why I don’t want to be with you physically? It’s because of your STD!

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Later on the in the afternoon, Alley and John follow Marissa into a boardroom where John was going to be introduced to one of Marissa’s client. Marissa purposely dressed revealingly because she knew what sold. Especially since the client that she was trying to go after wanted her for the longest time. Marissa opens the door and flirtatiously puts her arms out to hug Antonio who liked her string tube top and long skirt to match.

Marissa:

Antonio, it’s so great to see you again.

Antonio:

It sure is my dear. Now where is that talented brother of yours?

Marissa:

Right here. Antonio meet the next Andy Warhol.

John:

(modest)

Yeah I wish. John Snaldry. It’s very nice to meet you.

Alley clears her throat. Marissa rolls her eyes knowing that Alley wanted to get a mention also.

Marissa:

(unenthusiastic)

This is his girlfriend Alley.

Alley:

Antonio it’s so nice to meet you. I love all of your products. You are the one who definitely has talent.

Antonio:

I like her. Such spunk. It’s nice to have an entourage.

Marissa:

She’s definitely something else.

(changing the subject)

Now I’m sure you’ve seen John’s work. I believe my company forwarded you his portfolio.

Antonio:

I did. It was very edgy. Just like our clothing line.

John:

You really liked my work?

Antonio:

Of course I did. Let me tell you something, you are one hell of a lucky son of a bitch because you have connections with someone like your sister and if I didn’t like your stuff, we wouldn’t be talking.

John:

Thank you so much. Seriously thank you.

Marissa leans in to show Antonio some cleavage which definitely catches his attention.

Marissa:

Now let’s talk about the photo shoot.

John notices what she’s doing and pinches her arm to let her know that he’s on to her. She quickly stops.

Antonio:

Well you’ll be filming models wearing our new summer line. We like to film them doing the most eccentric and sexy things ever.

John:

I hope that I can get the job done. You seriously don’t know how much this means to me to get a chance like this.

Alley:

He can definitely get the job done. I don’t know if he put this one picture in his portfolio but we actually met because he-

Marissa:

Alley may I speak to you for a second outside?

Marissa grabs Alley’s arm to raise her out of her seat as they both go outside into the lobby. John is alone with Antonio.

John:

I’m truly honored…

Back outside, Marissa points her finger at Alley to scold her.

Marissa:

I didn’t ask you to come here and this is the reason why because you would ruin things.

Alley:

I was only trying to help.

Marissa:

Helping? You’re not doing anything to help. This is a very professional business meeting so why don’t you let the professionals do the talking. Okay?

Alley:

Professional? You call that slutty dress, if you can even call it a dress, professional? Do you know how obvious you are? I’m surprised Antonio didn’t start throwing dollar bills at you.

Marissa:

Do me a favor Alley. Shut the hell up or go away!

Marissa turns away from her. Alley was so angry from what Marissa had told her that she wanted to rip her hair out but instead, Alley lightly grabbed onto the tie of Marissa’s top and tugs at it. Marissa walks back into the boardroom topless. John is embarrassed and shuts his eyes but Antonio liked the view.

Marissa:

(not noticing)

Now where were we?

Alley walks in behind her and begins to giggle as Marissa feels the cool breeze.

Alley:

(sarcastic)

Looks like you’re definitely showing off your money makers.

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On the set of “Blue Crystal,” Carlos finishes filming a scene with Ian, and sees Jenny sitting off to the side next to a stage hand. Before he was able to go up to her, Carinia stops him.

Carinia:

Carlos that scene was amazing.

Carlos:

Thanks Rin.

Carinia:

Look we need you to screen test with some new potential actresses. Since C.C. was arrested, we’ve decided to recast her. And who knows? If it doesn’t work out, we could always fire them at the last second but that’s not up to me. That’s up to the people who I like to call the powers who pay my bills.

Carlos:

That’s great. I can’t wait.

Carinia:

I’ll let you know what time we need you.

Carinia smiles and exits. He walks over to Jenny who looks tired and distraught.

Carlos:

Hey chica.

Jenny:

You did a really good job out there. Are we able to leave?

Carlos:

Yeah I think so.

Jenny:

I’m surprised that you were able to not let the situation affect your work.

Carlos and Jenny exit to the studio parking lot. They get into Carlos’s car but before Carlos starts the car, he looks at Jenny.

Carlos:

Let’s just get it all out in the open right now.

Jenny:

How are you so calm and collected?

Carlos:

Because deep down inside I believe that baby belongs to us.

Jenny:

You’re very optimistic.

Carlos:

I am and you should be too.

Jenny:

How can I be optimistic, let alone happy? I was raped by your worse enemy. There’s a huge possibility that this baby could be Nick’s.

Carlos:

No! There’s no way possible.

Jenny:

(screaming)

STOP IT! STOP THINKING THAT IT’S NOT A REALITY!

Carlos looks away from her out of frustration. His flaring anger got to him. He repeatedly punches the steering wheel until his fists turn red.

Carlos:

Damn it!

Jenny:

Please just calm down. You scare me when you get angry.

Carlos:

I’ll call Agatha today. She can tell us what to do. We’ll get a paternity test and we’re going to find out whose baby it is. I just pray to god, that it’s ours because I’m so sure that it is.

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Nan and Bryan sit in questioning at The Cody Prescient. Officer Wendell and another cop sat across from them.

Officer Wendell:

I wanted to let you both know that your bail was received but you’re not free to go just yet.

Bryan:

We’ve been here for almost a day. You haven’t told us anything.

Officer Wendell:

That depends upon how cooperative you two will be. Now Nan where were you during the time after the explosion? You were ruled as dead.

Nan:

I can tell you where I was before and after the explosion happened. I walked back to the kitchen to leave because it was so boring and I noticed a worker was throwing gasoline everywhere. He was trying to start matches and…I had to stop him. For once, I wanted to be the hero. Instead there was fire everywhere and I was flown into some bushes. When I woke up, I was at the hospital and my memory was erased because I hit my head.

Officer Wendell:

Can you please tell me which doctor took care of you?

Nan:

Yes. It was Doctor Nicholas Quarr.

Officer Wendell:

He has since been deceased.

Nan:

I’m sure he has some sort of records.

Bryan:

When I found out that Nan was alive I wanted to make sure that she was given the proper rest that she needed before making a recovery.

Officer Wendell:

President Hammerton says that he has a confession note from you Nan and that you Bryan had helped planted the matches which I specifically remember finding.

Officer Wendell plops down the note on the table. He motions for the two of them to look at it. Nan quickly eyes it up and down before pursing her lips to talk.

Nan:

First off it’s typed and second did you ask Blake where he got this from?

Officer Wendell:

No we didn’t. Care to share?

Nan:

I was worried that if the worker was alive he might come after me so I had put in a security device in my room, which Bryan watched over for me, when I was in the hospital. This was prior to me getting my memory back. So we watched the tapes and I have Blake and his wife London, breaking into my room. Your partner over there has that piece of evidence.

Nan smiles at the other officer. Officer Wendell takes the partner to the side and he hands him a DVD.

Bryan:

You can watch that and then you can free us.

Officer Wendell:

Not yet.

Nan:

Come on Alan!

Officer Wendell:

Nan how many times have we been through this?

Nan:

Too many and you want to know why? It’s because Blake and his little gang hate me so they will do whatever it takes to bring me down. I’m innocent.

Officer Wendell:

That’s why Alley was witness to you pretending to be Blake’s dead wife? The owners of a Parisian chateau claim to be talking to someone who said she was London Tyler! How do you explain that?

Nan:

Oh yeah like I had the time to look like London. That’s such a bull story and I don’t know anyone from Paris. I’ve been in recuperation and Bryan’s my witness. Now that we’ve cleared up everything, can we go now?

Officer Wendell is silent.

Officer Wendell:

Yes. You’re free to go but I don’t want to see you in here again.

Nan:

Clear as a bell but I’d look out for the liars who will try to prosecute me.

Officer Wendell’s partner takes the two out of the interrogation room to leave him alone to think. His partner returns to talk to him.

Officer:

What do you think?

Officer Wendell:

I never know what to think with her. Her stories always check out. We have to find Blake Hammerton because if there’s evidence of him breaking and entering, then he could be in big trouble.

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Across town at the bar of The River Teal, Blake celebrates his victory alone.

Blake:

(to the bartender)

Another glass of the good stuff please.

The bartender nods and hands him a champagne flute. Before Blake can take a sip, Marli sits next to him.

Marli:

(to Blake)

Wow you look like you’re celebrating.

Blake:

I am. Can I buy you a drink?

Marli:

Since you’re in the generous mood I would love to have whatever it is you’re drinking.

Blake:

(to the bartender)

Some bubbly for the lady please.

The bartender pours Marli a glass of champagne.

Blake:

What’s your name?

Marli:

Marli Calloway and you?

Blake:

I’m Blake Hammerton.

Marli:

(star struck)

Oh my god. You’re the president of the school!

Blake:

That’s me.

Marli:

I mean I heard of the name but I thought you were so much-

Blake:

Older?

Marli:

Yeah.

Blake:

Hey I’m young and I’m successful. I wouldn’t have it any other way.

Marli:

What are we toasting to Blake?

Blake raises his champagne flute as Marli raises hers.

Blake:

To the good guys winning and to the bad guys getting what they truly deserve.

Marli:

Cheers!

Blake and Marli’s glass clink. Blake takes a long sips of his champagne and shoots a flirtatious smile to who he was hoping would be a new friend. Before he could take another sip, Blake’s cell phone rings.

Blake:

Excuse me.

Marli:

Sure thing.

Blake answers his cell phone.

Blake:

Blake Hammerton.

Officer Wendell:

Blake it’s Officer Wendell.

Blake:

Yes, Alan what can I do for you?

Officer Wendell:

We need you to come down to the station. The sooner, the better.

Knots were tying in Blake’s stomach after hanging up with Officer Wendell.

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Later in the night, Alicia and Jace were arguing in Jace’s room. Will wanted to hear every word so he decides to walk upstairs to eavesdrop in front of Jace’s door.

Jace:

What is your problem?

Alicia:

My problem is that you seem to like two things, beer and boobs.

Jace:

I’m a guy. What do you expect? I just wanted to have some fun and if you want to talk about having problems, maybe we should discuss who you’ve been hanging out with.

Alicia:

Oh of course Jace. The world revolves around you so whatever or whoever I hang out with, has to reflect you.

Jace:

Damn straight. You’re my girlfriend. People are reflections of yourself.

Alicia:

Reflections? Maybe you should take a long look in the mirror or is it too blurry for you because you’re drunk all the time?

Jace:

Way to go. I love how you try changing the subject when you know you’re wrong!

Alicia:

Wrong? How am I wrong?

Jace:

You’re hanging out way too much with Will and I really don’t like that lesbian girl you’ve taken under your wing. God knows what else you’ve taken her under.

Alicia:

He’s a friend of both of ours and Sky’s a nice girl.

Jace:

You don’t think I know. I see the way he looks at you.

Alicia:

Whatever. Are you jealous?

Jace forcefully grabs onto Alicia’s arm and pulls her into him.

Jace:

I have you! You got that? Me!

Alicia slaps Jace across the face.

Alicia:

I am not your possession. You understand?

Jace is silent. Alicia looks at him up and down. She then pulls his hair and pushes him onto the ground. Jace picks himself up and charges towards her but stops inches in front of her.

Alicia:

Hit me! I dare you.

Jace:

You’re lucky I’m not drunk.

Alicia:

That’s the only thing you hide behind but let me tell you, it doesn’t make you a man at all!

Alicia exits the room. Will smiles with delight. He walks back downstairs to his room and makes a phone call to Sky.

Will:

I should be thanking you.

Sky:

Were they already fighting so soon?

Will:

It was amazing. Alicia just stormed out. She called him an alcoholic.

Sky:

She’s only telling the truth. All I did was say that how awesome you are in front of them. Jace was freaking out but he didn’t show it. I’ll see if I can find her so that I can talk you up.

Will:

Do tell me though, are you sure you’re not in this for the same reason why I am?

Sky:

Oh I am. I just want to do her and I’m pretty sure that’s why you want her too but I’m worried about getting back at my ex. Since you and I are such good friends, we’ll discuss the details on that later. You’re welcome by the way.

Will:

Thank you.

Will hangs up with Sky and falls down to his bed. He could only think of Alicia until he sees Lenvy shaking her head back and forth out of disgust.

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After a long and tiring day of being arrested for numerous accusations, Nan makes her way back into her own room. Before getting the keys out, she notices that the door on the lock had already been opened.

Nan:

What the- ?

Nan twists the handle and slowly walks in. She begins to scan the scene, until she sees that her room had been ransacked. Clothes and papers were everywhere. Without saying a word, Nan tip toes over to a kitchen drawer and pulls out a small, silver hand gun. She heard noises coming from her bedroom and knew that someone was there. Nan runs to the room and pulls out her gun for the intruder to see.

Nan:

Hold it right there scum bag!

Nan notices that the intruder is someone she knows very well.

Nan:

(shocked)

What are you doing here?

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Good episode. You're one liners are so hilarious. PP has becoming comical. I love it.

Oh so now Becky wants to abide by her code of ethics, give me a break. But I loved Dylan's reveal. My balls starting hurting when I read that scene. I really felt his pain. I really feel bad for him. This is something I've never expected and look forward to learning about his. Great choice in a social issue storyline and I think all men on here need to read this.

I see you re casted Nate. I was shocked. I am willing to give this new Nate a chance. But I must say that scene where he took his clothes off, I really pictured the other guy doing that. And boy if this was on real tv, what a way for a recast to come onto the show. First scene, get naked, LOL. Why did you recast?

I loved Alley's and Marissa scene. I was like hell naw Rissa giving it to my girl Alley but she had that come back, exposed her boobs. Loved it. "Money Makers" LOL!!!!

I was so glad Nan turned the tables on that damn Blake. I ALSO LIKE WHAT I SEE IN BLAKE AND MARLI

They look REALLY good together. I hope they go some where.

I really love Jace's character. I have a good Friend who acts just like him. To drinking to always a arguing with his baby momma. In fact he called me and said he was going to kill her. I hope Jace is longterm. I have to say Jace looks way better than Will.

I am so loving this Skye and Will pair up and her dialog to Will was so funny. I am finally liking her!!

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I'm really happy that you enjoyed this episode. I wanted to make sure that the "never been done before" story plot, was something social and this is an issue that I have done extensive research on. To my knowledge, I don't think any soap opera has explored it. So PP's the first.

No Nate hasn't been recasted, I just updated his photo because the link to his old picture wasn't working. The actor's name is Andrew Levistas and he will be playing Nate for a long time. If anyone's ever recasted, you'll read about it in the Point Palace Inquiry.

Marissa and Alley's scene was originally going to be a slap match but...I thought that it would be funny to let the twins come out.

Originally Sky wasn't supposed to be on contract. She was going to be cut out of the cast but there's so much potential for her because she feels scorned. Hell hath no fury like a lesbian scorned.

I'm glad you like this season, to me, it feels like the Point Palace I created way back in 2000.

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WOA -WAIT A MINUTE - Testicular cancer; "Now I really need to go see a doctor" - That thing is CRAZY!!!!! ORIGINAL; A deliciously scary scene, frightening, thrilled in a minute... The opening scene of the "Big Reveal" was amazing, well move, well doonneee. Love it...

As the story progresses, I found myself falling for Nate, and AVA... These two are hot; such ashame that AVA, is letting fears stand between of what could be, if not the best thing of her life. I think Nate can really make her happy, and they have a great thing going here, I really hope to see these two blossom to something marvelllllllous.

BLAKE/NAN Saga... I feel like it, its going to be go gone, until one is stay standing, let the best man or woman win.

Love every moment of it...

GOOD JOB!!!!!!

FIVE STARS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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