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#54 Monday, November 12th


ReddFoxx

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#54 Monday, November 12th

At the hospital

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Carol: You're absolutely sure you felt someone push you?

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Cody: Yes, there's no doubt. That photograph makes sense now.

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Trish: What photograph?

Cody: I've got to get a hold of Wilkins.

Carol: What was in this photograph?

Cody: If I told you, you'd think I was crazy. I just need to get in touch with Wilkins.

Cody tries to get up, but starts coughing.

Carol: You need to stay right where you are, you aren't strong enough.

Cody: Somebody tried to kill me, I can't just sit around!

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Wilkins and Norm return to Wilkins' office

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Wilkins: I figured Peters had already skipped town.

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Norm: It was worth a try.

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Linda: He didn't skip town.

Wilkins: What do you mean?

Linda: The police picked him up in Detroit at the airport on some charges, big charges related to fraud.

Norm: Well, this is interesting.

Wilkins: What?

Norm: If he's in jail on big charges, he might start talking. He's going to need a lawyer

Wilkins: You're going to represent the guy who tried frame your brother?

Norm: Right now, all I'm concerned about is finding out who tried to kill Cody and I think Peters is

my only chance at getting the whole story.

Wilkins: Perhaps.

Norm: I'm going to get over to the police station, if there's anything new, call me on my cell.

Wilkins: Sure.

Norm leaves.

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At B.P.'s compound, B.P. is in his office when Detective Lewis come rushing in.

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B.P.: What going on?

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Lewis: Peters was nabbed, he's in jail right now.

B.P.: Nabbed for what?

Lewis: Something about fraud.

B.P.: Damn.

Lewis: He could easily dime you out.

B.P.: And he could do the same to you.

Lewis: No one can trace my involvement in all this, I've made sure of that. I've got a family, I can't afford to go down.

B.P.: I don't think so, If I go down, everyone goes down.

Lewis: You can't do that.

B.P.: Oh, I can. You should have made sure Peters got out of town without being caught, you knew he could be a problem.

Lewis: What was I supposed to do?

B.P.: Never mind, you just make sure that I can get out of here with no trouble.

Lewis: What about Donahue?

B.P.: Well, he's not a problem anymore.

Lewis: You didn't hear?

B.P.: What?

Lewis: He survived that little accident you set up for him.

B.P.: This day just keeps getting worse and worse.

Lewis: What are you going to do now?

B.P.: I can't worry about that now, I've got to get out of the country.

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At the police station, Evan is in the interrogation room. A guard is by the door. Another guard comes through the door.

Guard: Your lawyer is here.

Evan: What?

Norm comes into the room holding a briefcase. Fade to black.

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The casting for Lewis was so dead on! And of course it was so very nice to see Laura Bryan Brin. Is she even still on Y&R? I'm really enjoying Cody's story and his need to find out who's trying to kill him. When all he really has to do is open his eyes. Good job.

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The casting for Lewis was so dead on! And of course it was so very nice to see Laura Bryan Brin. Is she even still on Y&R? I'm really enjoying Cody's story and his need to find out who's trying to kill him. When all he really has to do is open his eyes. Good job.

Thanks for the comment, glad you liked episode. Laura Bryan Birn isn't on Y&R anymore, I don't think she's appeared since 2004.

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Redd you do have some of the best casting choices. Trish is stunningly beautiful. Liked the Lewis casting. He seems very fitting.Wish Bell would do more with him on B&B)

Is Linda New?

Again I love your causal flow of your writing.

I do feel this big mystery is coming to a head, the walls are closing up around

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