-- Slater is fine, I guess. I'm still a blockhead on breakdowns. None of them seem bad to me and I didn't know what's good.
-- Danielle Paige's dialogue is still a problem, I think, not because she's bad at it but because her characters speak in a different voice than the characters of the other scriptwriters.
Paige did it again today. She worked in cultural references, pop culture, slang, etc. The other writers do not go to the lengths she does, and it's obvious.
I think the other writers need to do the same or she needs to pull back.
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