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What a great show. I loved Jennifer and JJ's scenes. I appreciate JJ championing for Daniel and I understand why. Nice to see that story move. I thought the Billie and Theresea scene was nice and very refrehing for evil ass Theresita. I cant wait to see Billie and Daniels next scene refarding Sita. I had almost forgotten why Sami was so nervous by EJ being there. I always loves the exchanges between Kate and Sami. And Nick and Nicole. loving it bro. They are well matched with the dialog to one another. Good catty stuff. Good job Al. Things are getting good and your show getting stronger n deeper as we move along, I can tell you writing with more confidence.

Nick you rotten cow. I kinda like it though. He has all the power. Again and as always Nicole is the best thing about any show she's in. Jenn and Liam getting close.. Good show. Nick and Nicole are well matched

Also loved the Grant Vicky scenes along with jake and Fankie's

Great show. Every show something seems to happen I like that. Christy Canyon is a free woman. look out BC and I bet she shows up at Grants first. Very nice ending. Stunning the Michele is alive. The flahs back from the accident. Good touch. Wow. So much going on and I wonder how far Reggie is going to go

Connie is alive. i wonder what this will mean for PC. I wonder if Morgan's intentions are as pure as he claims they are. I love how you write Dr. O The series is catching on for me..

　 Warning: Extremely Strong Sexual Content and Strong Language ! Mature Audiences…. Avery’s Place Cane is towering over Avery trying to intimidate her. Avery: Cane please.. you are losing control! This is not like you! The coke has you acting like a mad man. I’m sorry I can’t help you with any monies. You need to get it together. Cane: I can’t believe you would do me like this! Betray me. In a time where I need you most. My kids lives are at stake. Damn YOU BITCH!!! He opens the door and leaves. Avery closes the door behind him taking a sigh of relief. She can’t believe what has just happened. She walks over to her kitchen counter and readies a line of coke for her self. She snorts it and instantly forgets what just happened with Cane. She grabs a strawberry muffin and sits on her couch and turns the TV on. 　 Lauren’s Bedroom Van looks at Scotty who has football gear in his hands. Van: You want me to put that on? Scotty: Yea. I think it’s kinky. Van: But I have a beautiful body, and I’m a blonde bombshell. You want me to cover all of this up with manly football gear. Scotty: Yes. Van: I just didn’t know you were into this kind of thing.” She grabs the helmet and puts it on. Scotty: I like that. Here go ahead put the rest on.” He says looking at his masterpiece. Van slowly and with the least bit of confidence puts on the rest of the football gear. Scotty smiles and then imagines’ it’s Rafe in the football gear it which is easy to do since Van looks like she is a beefy kind of guy with the pads now on her. Scotty takes his pants off and hops on his mother’s bed. Scotty: I like that. I like that a lot. Van: I really don’t. I feel fat. This helmet stinks and I’m sweating already. It’s hard to move in all this musty crap. I don’t understand any of this. Scotty: You talk so much. Let me enjoy I mean let us- can’t we just enjoy this moment. Is that too much to ask for?… Come here sexy.” Scotty flinches his half erected penis at her, as if it was waving at her. Van: I could never say no to that.” She climbs on top of him and they grind against each other. Van: I don’t like this helmet. Smells like sweat and I can’t even kiss you baby. Scotty can only imagine Rafe in the costume. Scotty: Damn you always talk to much. Shut the “eff” up.” The suddenly Scotty rolls Van over and turns her on her stomach so she is face down. He then mashes her helmet into the pillow so he can’t hear her talking. He then thinks of doing it to Rafe and increase and intensifies his sexual stroke. Van(muffled): Scotty slow down. Your hurting me. Scotty: Take this Van…. Take me all the way in… You know you like it… Miss kinky girl. Thas my kinky girl.” Van’s resistance excites Scotty even more and he releases himself deep inside of her. He lays on top on her trying to catch his breath. He smiles Scotty: Damn that was good. So wet. I couldn’t last too long.” Van pushes Scotty off of her. She is breathing heavily Van: Finally I can breath. What were you trying to do to me? You were treating me like the 50 yard line. Scotty: What didn’t you like it? Van: I loved it. Let’s do it again.” She leans in and kisses him. This time she lays him on his back so she can straddle over him. They make love once more. As Van takes slow and deep strokes Scotty’s eye are rolling back in his head from the extra dose of pleasure, he is able to notice that Vandalynn has caught her reflection in a mirror. Van looks in the mirror, smiles and then winks at herself as her mission has been more than accomplished. Seducing Scotty. Twice. Episode 143: Kinky Seduction Written and Produced by ML Cooks Creative Consults: C Nate Richardson with Martin Saenz 　 Cane pulls up to his apartment complex. He thinks of how he can get 500 more dollars to pay off his drug debt to his dealer Sergio. He looks at his watch and the time tells him it’s 11pm. He then gets a text from Sergio. “ 60 minutes and I’m not talking about the show either.” Cane text back: Calm down. You will have your money.” He hits send. Cane thinks of his children. “God please don’t let anything happen to my twins. I did this take me instead.” He prays to the almighty before getting out his car. As he walks up to his apartment he feels a touch from behind. Cane jumps and is scared it’s Sergio. 　 Michael and Sheila arrive at his office. With her gun she instructs him inside. Once they are inside Sheila takes a seat. Sheila: You’ve made some nice changes in here since the last time I was here. Michael: You mean the last time you broke in here. Sheila: What ever you want to call it. Doesn’t matter to me. Now less talking and more action. Get your pen and that Control of Newman document and sign my name on it. Michael: This is a very bad idea. Dumb even. It’s going to come out you own Newman and then what? You’ll be exposed. Sheila : Unlikely. I already told you once I’ve thought of everything. I have all the power here, I’m in control. Michael: You think? Sheila: I know smart ass. Now this is what you are going to do. You are still going to give Newman to Jack Abbott. But you will create a fake Control of Newman document for him to cover up the fact I really own Newman. He will be the front man for Newman until I have everything in place to take it for myself. Michael: What does a psycho ex nurse know about running a multi billion dollar conglomerate? Sheila fires her gun. It misses Michael but bullet shoots through the wall. Michael is fearful and he looks at Sheila with big eyes. Sheila: Keep being an as$hole. Michael: Let me sign that document for you. Sheila: Yes like the Bitch boy that you are. Now I understand why Lauren wants nothing to do with you. You’re a wuss Baldwin. Michael hands Sheila CONTROL OF NEWMAN. Sheila smiles. She gives the document a kiss . She then folds it up and puts it in her pocket. Sheila: In the morning, you are to make Jack believe he is now in control of Newman. Michael: Sure thing Miss Carter. Sheila leaves Michael’s office smiling from ear to ear. She pulls out her phone and sees a text from Van “Seduced Scotty twice.” Sheila smiles. She text back “Good. Mama Bear has control of Newman. Everything is falling into place.” She hits send and then disappears into the night. 　 　 Cane’s Parking Lot Cane turns around and sees Philip. Cane: Philip. Mate you scared the crap outta me. Philip: Did you think I was your dealer? Cane: My dealer?” He says playing and sounding dumb. Philip: Don’t do me like that. I know what is going on here. I’ve known you too damn long not to know Cane. Cane: Nina huh. Damn it. Philip: Where are your children? Cane: You want to adopt them? Philip: I’m trying to help you. Cane: I need 500 hundred dollars or Sergio is going to harm my children. Philip shakes his head in frustration. He then pulls out some cash. Cane smiles. Philip: No buddy this has strings. Cane: What? Philip: Get in the car. We are going to pay off this Sergio and get your kids. Cane: That is not necessary. I can do this on my own. Philip: Good then go find your own 500 hundred dollars. Philip turns around and heads towards his BMW. Cane is mad. Knowing that Philip is involved there is sure to be an intervention of some kind to follow then exposure of his coke habit. For the time being he also knows his twins lives are at stake so he decides to take one thing at a time. He hops in Philips BMW too. Philip : I knew you would wise up Aussie. Cane: Yea yea ok let’s just go take care of Sergio.” Philip drives off. 　 The Moon gives way to the sun as a new warm day begins in Genoa City. Jack walks into his office. He picks up his phone and orders a meeting with his department heads for a quarterly sales discussion through his new secretary Hillary. Hillary: I’ll set it up for you Mr. Abbott. Then Michael Baldwin walks up. “I’m have an appointment with Mr. Abbott. Hillary: Mr. Baldwin go right in, he’s expecting you. Michael enters Jack’s office and closes the door behind him. He takes a deep breath. Jack smiles and shakes his hand Jack: Michael, I see you’ve met my new secretary Hillary Latham. Michael: Yes she’s easy on the eyes. Jack takes a seat excited with anticipation about Michael’s life changing news. “ Ok so you came here last night with some sort of life altering news of some kind. Michael opens his briefcase. “I do Jack. You are going to be a very happy man. Jack: Why is that? Michael hands Jack the fake Control of Newman document so he can read it. Jack’s face turns red. Jack: This is a joke right? Michael: No sir. Jack my friend, you are now the owner of Newman Enterprises. Congratulations. You’ve finally won over your arch enemy Victor Newman. Jack: How did this come about,… how did this happen? Michael: Jack why question it? I took control of Newman for myself behind Victor’s back. Now I’m giving it to you. Jack : Why? Michael: I’m out of options. Jack: Are you in some sort of trouble? Michael: I have my own demons to deal with. I’m trying to unload one. Ownership of Newman is one of the demon’s I need to get off my back. I want nothing to do with Victor Newman. Jack: None of us do. Now Victor is an ex factor. I own Newman.” He stands up and looks out his ground to ceiling window that over looks downtown Genoa City. He smiles. “I own Newman Enterprises.” He looks up to the sky. “You hear that dad. I won. We own Newman. Victor lost to me dad “ Jack chokes up a little bit thinking of his father John and then of Kay. “I hope you two are taking care of each other.” Michael also has a tear in his eye, seeing how much of a triumph this seems to Jack but its false. Sheila really owns Newman and Jack is just the front man. Michael feels extremely guilty as he thinks of Kay as Jack mentions her. He wonders if he would have came out to the world and admitted to everyone he owned Newman and not Kay some how he might of prevented Kay’s death or at least take the target off Kay that Tucker had on her. Michael gets up quietly and leaves. 　 　 The Jail Victor is escorted to the visiting area. As he walks he wonders who is there to see him. He walks past Daisy’s cell and slows down a bit to study her. She looks up at him and she is unnerved as he stares her down. She turns her back to him. Victor remembers Vandalynn visiting with Daisy. Though he doesn’t know her name. All he knows is she’s a blonde bombshell. The door opens and Victor is surprised to see Keemo. Victor takes a seat. Victor: Keemo my boy. We haven’t had a good chance to catch up now have we? Keemo: No sir. You’ve been in jail since I’ve been into town. Victor: How are things going for you? Keemo: That’s why I’m here. Victor: Oh..? Keemo: Jack is causing a lot of trouble for me. Victor closes his eyes and looks up. “Jack Ass Abbott is scum.” Keemo: I agree. That grabs Victor’s attention. He then looks at him intently. Victor: Go on my boy. Keemo: Jack doesn’t respect me. It began when I was at Jabot Asia. He blames me for the weakened sales over there. But here is the thing, that Jabot by Glo scandal really hit hard over there. It took awhile for consumers to find out but when they did sales and revenue dropped of course. Then came the tsunami and then the nuclear meltdown in Japan. The tide has really been against Jabot over there and he blames me for all of that. Its why he brought me here to GC. Then when I get here I take a romance with Jill. Angry Jack didn’t approve. He basically gave me an ultimatum. Jill or Jabot. So I let Jill go and then came Gloria. Victor: You do understand that Gloria was responsible for that Glo by Jabot scandal. It gave your grand father a heart attack. Keemo: Glo and I talked about all of that. It was an accident. Jack was out to get Gloria which drove her to desperate measures. Just like Jack is out to get me. He called Paul to let him know about my role in Tucker’s plan. Victor: You were working with Tucker McCall? Keemo: No. I only worked for him. Tucker set me up. I’m now saddled with the legal ramifications from what he did. I had nothing to do with anything he had planned for Katherine. I had no idea he had this sinister plot cooked up. But according to Jack. I was the ring leader. Victor: Keemo, Your father is a loser who lives in a reality of his own fancy making. Always has been and always will be. Jack is behind Katherine’s death. He was in cahoots with Tucker at one point. He urged Murphy with his plan. And when I get out of here, he is going to pay. We are going to war and this is the last one we are going to fight. I’ve had it with Jack Ass Abbott and I’m going to put an end to him once and for all. He’s a childish punk. I don’t like his character. His character has to be destroyed. Keemo: I saw how you commanded attention and respect at Kay’s’ funeral. Victor: Well I am Victor Newman. Keemo: Taking out my dad like that. It was a rush for me and it got me thinking Mr. Newman. Victor with a pleased smile on his face as his ego is being stroked by Keemo “What is that my boy? Keemo: I want to help you take down my dad.” Victor: My friend, by the time I’m done, Jack will cease to exist. Do you know what that means? Are you sure you’re ready for that. That character is your father you know. Keemo: In life sir we don’t have choices. I didn’t choose Jack as a father. I’m ready to take out Jack Abbott for what’s he’s done to me. He doesn’t treat me like I’m his son so I’m not going to treat him like a father. Then they are interrupted when John Silva walks in John: Victor. There you are. You are a hard person to locate in this jail. Victor: Well I am Victor Newman you know….John Silva. What’s brings you by? John: It’s time to talk bout your release. Victor’s eyes are wide and he is happy. He looks to Keemo Victor: Did you hear that my boy? Victor Newman is about to be released. And I’ve been keeping a who’s been naughty or nice list and I checked it twice and lots of people are going to pay for what they’ve done to me. Starting with Jack Abbott. Victor gets up and follows John Silva so they can discuss his release from jail. Victor Newman is about to be a free man.

STFU!!! LMAO Reggie is alive. GREAT TWIST. Now it makes sense. Wow good job kuz I never guessed that. Wow.!!!! SO we now know know what Janice did. Hmm I still can't figure out how marissa ties into all of this. Wow . Truly a shocker. That'ss the only thing I can say, Things are really going to be good. O Wait. What did reggie promise Joy?

O wow. Such a complete joy reading this episode. It was all great. Lets' begin. Victor's dialog about Nicole and the school system was a good one very Victor. The high light was the scene at the hosital. Anne was GREAT!!! Loved her baiting Jennifer. And Jennifer being all rosey and noble. I just love how you write Anne and she is now part of a major story. Great stuff Another GREAT twist was what Nick learned about Nicole. Was not expecting that one. Nick getting the goods on everyone. Are we headed for a who dun it as well?? Loved all the sneakiness of Nick. Gave this episode mystery, darker feel to it. just diffrent. GREAT READ AND GREAT EPISODE!!! I cant wait to see how this plays out out next!! You really brining all of this into your own.

Good Show. I cant stand Jordan, she is such a wuss. Sherly proves once again she's got balls. And I like how Nick knows who they are. That is a nice twist. Now I wonder what they are going to do. Love how Nick just kept giving them riddles. I love how you write Nicole as always. i think this will be a learning lesson for her. LOL!!! Dig deeper next time. I also loved how Kate just acted smug in the background. And Daniel is so fukking thirsty. He needs a water fountain. Damn new meat in town and he all over it. He just offers to giver Billie a ride. LOL!! Come on dude. LOL Daniel is so lame and nasty. Billie shoulda said hi Daniel, Bye Daniel and kpet it moving. LOL It was funny to me. I enjoyed the show.

Inside Sheila’s Cabin, in the town of Verdon Lou. Sharon : What do you mean we are going to be tied together for the rest of our lives? You can’t keep me here for ever Sheila. Sheila: Your right. Don’t worry my dear. You won’t be here for ever. Just long enough for some things to happen. Sharon: What kind of things? Sheila: You will see. In time. Patience will be a virtue in this situation. I’m in no rush. Are you Mary? Mary looks to her mother and smiles. “ No. This is fun. By the way Sharon, your son was great.” Sharon: Don’t you touch my son!” Sharon struggle to break free. Sheila : It’s no use. I just wanted you to meet your new family member. Now my baby girls has work to do. So if you will excuse us.” Sheila escorts Mary toward the door. Sheila: Are you ready? Mary: I am. Scotty and Lauren here I come. Sheila: Ok good. Call me when it’s done. Mary: I will. “ Mary leaves the cabin. Sheila then walks back to the hostage room Sheila: Ok now where were we? Sharon: You were going to let us go. Sheila: Funny. No no. I have something to do.” She pulls out her cell phone and makes a call. 　 　 Jabot Cosmetics Michael walks into Jack’s office. Jack hangs up the phone and stands up to greet Michael. Jack: Baldwin. I haven’t seen you around in a while. Michael: You mean since I was arrested for perjury at Newman’s trial. Jack: Yes that. Why would Lauren sell you out like that? Michael: It’s just been a rough time with the divorce. Jack: I’m sorry to hear that. Well what brings you by buddy? Michael: Jack Abbott, I have something that you have always wanted. It will also cleanse my soul. Jack: I can’t imagine what that would be. Michael: I’m going to change your life Jack Abbott. 　 　 Lauren‘s Place. Lauren is sitting on her laptop looking over her spreadsheets for Fenmore’s. Fenmore then walks out from his room Lauren: What is it honey? Fenmore: I’m hungry. Lauren: Ok sweetie mommy will begin dinner in a minute. Can you ask your brother to come out here and help me? Fenmore: I don’t want to talk to Scotty. I don’t like him. Lauren has a perplexed look on her face and she take off her glasses to really focus on Fenmore. Lauren: He’s your brother honey what makes you say that? Fenmore has a flashback of catching Scotty kissing Rafe at the Glo Worm Gala. Fenmore: He’s just nasty and weird. A freak. Lauren: Oh honey your funny. Then they get a knock on the door. Lauren goes to answer it. Its Vandalynn/Mary. Lauren feels odd looking at the blonde bombshell. Something is unnerving to her Lauren: Yes. Van: Hi! Is my boyfriend Scotty home? Lauren: Boyfriend? I’m sorry I must have missed something. I’m Lauren, Scotty’s mother. Van barges into the place. Lauren is taken aback. Lauren: Yes you can come in. Van: So you are Scotty’s mother. Lauren you said it was? Lauren: Yes. Van: You are so beautiful. Lauren: Why thank you. I appreciate that. Scotty then walks out and is caught off guard seeing Van in the living room. Scotty: Van what are you doing here? Van: Silly billy. I’m here to see my man.” She walks over to him and plants a very dramatic and passionate kiss on him. Lauren looks on in bewilderment. Fenmore is even more stunned. Lauren looks to him. “What’s so nasty about that?” Fenmore: No mom you don’t understand. You really don‘t” Fenmore wonder what is going on with Scotty. “He kisses men and women.” He thinks to himself. 　 Episode 142: The Baldwin’s become a Target Written and Produced by ML Cooks Creative Consults: C Nate Richardson, Martin Saenz. With Philip Connelly 　 Chancellor Estate Chance and Nina are drinking tea the on the patio outside. Nina: Are you feeling better after your bad dream? Chance: No. Mom I don’t know if the girl is dead or alive. The Taliban has her and I have no idea how to get to her back. Nina: You really cared for her. Chance: I did. We had an instant bond because she’s right here from Genoa City. Nina: Son who is she? Chance : It’s not my place yet to say until I’ve told the family what has happened. Nina: So she has family here? Chance: Mom don’t. I know what you are trying to do. Nina: I’m sorry. I’m only trying to help you. Chance: I fell in love with her. Everything about her. Her heart, her soul, mom she was it. I was ready to spend the rest of my life with her. Until she was taken from me. Right in front of me and I couldn’t do anything to help or save her. I failed her mom. I failed the woman I love.” Nina holds Chance again as he sheds a few tears. Nina: Shh baby, it’s going to be ok. Just have faith that she is ok. 　 　 Avery’s Place Avery: Tell me Cane? When did all this start. How did you end up smoking coke? Cane: You’re a coke smoker too. Don’t act like you are better than me or not doing the same thing I am. I need help with my kids damn it! Sergio is going to harm my kids if I don’t come up with another 500 hundred dollar in a few hours. Avery: Sergio? Cane: Yes my dealer here in the city. Avery: I thought you said you get your stuff from back home. Cane: I do but I need a contact person. Sergio is it. Avery: So you need money from me to pay off your drug debt? Cane: Yes. So if you can just hand me the money I’ll be on my way. Avery: Cane this is too much. What is it going to be next time five thousand dollars? Aren’t you working at Chancellor? Cane: I haven’t worked in months. I got my twins to care for. Avery: But yet they are at the sitter right now. This is bad. I have to pay for my own habit. I’m not into paying for yours. I’m having a hard enough time keeping things on my end together so I don’t arouse suspicion. You on the other hand seem to be coming apart at the seams. Cane gets angry and pounds his fist on the counter. Cane: DAMN IT AVERY! I‘m trying so hard to keep calm here but you are really making it hard for me. Don’t you understand my kids lives are at stake? Don’t you care about that? Avery: Cane I didn’t have twins. You are the one who doesn’t care about your twins because if you did you wouldn’t be in this position. You’re really turning into a junkie. Cane looks at her as if something has awoken in him. Cane: What did you call me? Avery is a bit nervous at this point as she has never seen this look in Cane’s face before. He gets up from the counter and walks over towards her. Cane: I don’t think I heard you. What did you call me? Avery rushes over to the door and opens it. Avery: Ok I think it’s time for you to leave. Cane: Oh yea.” He slams the door shut and gets in her face. Avery: Cane what are you doing? Cane: I’m not going any where until I get what I came for.” By this time he is towering over her. He grabs her. Avery: Cane please don’t” She says trembling. 　 Back at Lauren’s Scotty pulls back from Van’s sloppy wet kiss. Scotty: Are you crazy? My family is standing right there. Scotty: Crazy in love with you. It’s just I’ve been waiting to hear back from you on when I was going to see you again. I took matters into my own hands.” She then looks at Lauren. Van: I will do anything for your son Lauren. I love him with all my heart. Lauren: So I see. Listen, why don’t I give you two some privacy. Fen and I are going to grab a bite to eat. Fenmore: I thought you were going to cook. Scotty: Yea mom. It’s ok. Don’t let us intrude.” He says hoping he won’t be left alone with Vandalynn. Van: Scotty don’t be silly. Your mother is trying to give us some alone time. Fenmore: This is just crazy.” Fenmore storms out. Lauren: We’ll be back in a few hours. It was nice to meet you Vandalynn. Such a pretty name. Van: Same to you Lauren. Lauren grabs her purse and heads out the door. Scotty: Van I didn’t ask you here. How did you find out where my mom lives? Van: I told you lover. I will do anything for the man I love. It seems you are doing everything you can to avoid me. It was not like this when we were in Paris but in GC you act so different. What gives? Scotty: It’s just I haven’t told my mother about you yet and here you are ready to take my clothes off in front of my family. Van: Don’t be joker. Now show me where your mother’s bedroom is. Scotty: What? Van strips down to her pink matching bra and panty set. Van: I wanna have sex in your mother’s bed.” She kisses him and takes her right hand and grabs his package to get him aroused. Van: MMM there you go. See you do miss me…. I miss him. It been a while since we made love baby and my body is hungry. Scotty: In my moms bedroom though? Van: Yes, such a turn on. Do I got to find it myself or are you going to lead us there? Scotty leads Vandalynn to his mother’s bedroom. Van pushes him onto the bed and climbs on top of him, kissing his abs and chest working her way up until her lips meets his. They kiss passionately. Scotty: Wait… wait. Since we are getting so kinky, or rather your hot fantasy, I got one too. Van: OOO I like that baby. What do you got in mind? Scotty: Wait here, I’ll be right back. Van: Ok babe but hurry, I’m wet and ready. Scotty jumps up, grabs a few things from his room and then returns. As he gathers the few things, he thinks to himself “Damn I really don’t want to make love to her. How do I get myself involved in these kid of situations? It’s ok I guess. I got just the thing to make this right. At least tolerable for me. The only great thing is Van does have a great mouth.” He walks back to Lauren’s bedroom. Scotty: I want you to wear this. Van’s eyes get big as she looks at a foot ball helmet, a jersey and shoulder and body pads in his hand. Van: You want me to be a foot ball player? 　 　 Back at Jabot. Jack: So you are going to change my life…. And its going to start today?” Jack looks at his Rolex. Jack: The day is about over, in fact I was about to leave Michael. Do you think this can wait till the open of business tomorrow. Michael: I rather not. But I do understand it’s late. I’ll be by in the morning. Jack: Thank you for understanding. Jack escorts Michael out his office. Michael shakes his head in disappointment. He gets on the elevator and heads down to the parking lot. He gets into his jaguar and throws his brief case in the passenger seat. “Damn it Jack! This needs to be done now!” He opens his brief case and looks over the Control of Newman document. “Get ready Jack. I’m going to sign Newman over to you and you would have finally won over Victor Newman. Tomorrow everything will change.” He says aloud to himself. He puts the key in the ignition and puts his car is reverse. When he looks in the rear view mirror he nearly screams out when he sees a pair of eyes looking at him from the back seat. He turns around and sees Sheila, with a gun pointing at him. Michael: What the hell? …It’s really you. Sheila Carter in the flesh. Sheila: Yes sir. It’s nice to see you again. Michael: I’m sorry I can’t say the same thing for you. Sheila: I’m ok with that. I’m not here to hear your thoughts or share personal feelings. Michael: That’s great. How did you find me? Sheila: GPS. I put one on this fancy jag. I knew it would come in handy. I tried to reach you by phone. Michael: I was in a meeting. Sheila: With Jack Abbott, I know you just told me. Michael: What do you want Sheila Carter? Sheila: Yes let’s get to the point shall we? Michael: I’m waiting. Sheila: Start driving. Michael puts the car in reverse and then in drive to drive out the parking garage. Michael: Where are we going? Sheila: To your office. Michael: You want to ransack it again? Sheila: No not this time. But you are going to do something for me. Michael: And what do you think that is? Sheila: There is no thinking here Baldwin . I’ve done all of the thinking. I have the control here, and I got all the power. It’s about action. You are going to sign control of Newman over to me. Sheila Carter is going to own Newman Enterprises and no one is going to stop me.

Cane and his story has received a lot of feedback and I‘m thankful for that. It seems people are forgetting Cane has a past in Australia. He was also in co hoots with Colin with the mafia. So anything is possible. This story is serving a few purposes, number one their is an epidemic where heroin and coke are concerned in this country. I wanted to bring light to it, and to also state the fact, that you never know who could be using behind close doors. Just follow the ride to see how it all plays out.

LOL Rob Wolff Thank you. Cary, Yes sir Cane had an addiction in the past it seems. The story is still unfolding. Alot of people are thrown off by it but take Cane's ride. Owenrship of Newman will be pivotal extremly soon. Thanks for reading guys!

Sam just went in on Nina. Though I don't like Sam or Silas, Nina makes that story intresting. I like the buisness aspect you seem to be developing. I'm always down for a business story. I don't have much to say as for me at leat, I'm learning your serie and GH itself. I don't watch the real show.

I love how Steven described Joy. As a mystery he wants to crack. I like that The men's scene with Jake and the boys was great. Good hearing about pass times and messy kirk. neat Steven. Seem true to Character. I LOL when Chrusty called her self a Bitch. Yea Bitch you right about that. I could hear her saying that in my vocie with her semi deepend voice. The kind of vocie where its tired from drinking beer all day and than you hollering and fight all night. So funny. I like Charlie pondering her name. It was Cool Jake was able to be there for the boys. I wanted to give Frankie my cover when she got Chilly. I wonder what Eric was going to tell her. This seem like a longer show Nice to see the wedding become the forfront. I'm ready.

Amazing. Your best show yet. I love how you built everything up to this and it was a great payoff. I love anytime the whole cast gets together for a big event. You played the dynamics very well for the nay's and yays' It was so good seeing Adreinne and Justing in on the action as well. I also loved how you showcased Salem in a way that has never been presented before. Nicole's line of questioning was great. Brady's reaction to learing it was her was great. This show made me really vested now in this Enernext story and to see where it goes. I hope this is only the begining. I must admit i wasn't to hot on it at first as it confused me some what but you really pulled it together. Percy's interjection great. Theresea well I'm still mad she was so rude at her big momma at the end. Theresea referred to a "her', who is that? I get the other parts of the story but the "her" threw me off. Pls dont get mad at me I'm just trying to understand it. GREAT SHOW!!!!

Cane leaves the pawnshop, having just cashed in on Malcolm’s Michael Jordan autographed basketball. He re counts his 500 hundred dollars. He just received for it. Cane: This isn’t enough.” He gets a text. “Time is ticking and time is money. Will need one stack for the product you received on credit. Remember your twins are at stake, we know where they are.” Cane is upset. He tries to come up with a plan to gather another five hundred dollars before the night is over or his dealer is going to hurt his twins. He thinks he has an answer when he hops into his Honda Accord and drives off in a rush. 　 The Chancellor Estate Nina walks into the living room area and sees Philip looking on his IPAD. She clears her throat to gain his attention. Philip looks up at her and notices something is wrong from the dread on her face. Philip: What is it? Nina: It’s Cane. I’m really worried about him. Philip: What makes you say that? I did notice he was not at Katherine’s funereal. In fact I have not seen him at all since I got back into town. Nina: Neither have I so I went over there to check up on him and it was so messy, I mean trash every where, busted tv screens. Cane looked sick and he was all sweaty. I’ve never seen him like this. Maybe you can talk to him, you are very close to him. After all you made a deal with him to make us believe he was you at one point. Philip: Nina I don’t want to go there. Nina: I wasn’t going there. I am just worried about Cane. Philip sits back and thinks for a moment. Knowing Cane for a long time, he knows at one point Cane had a drug habit and he wonders if Cane is using again. Philip: I’ll talk to him. Nina: Thank you Philip. Philip gets up and grabs his keys and leaves. Nina decides to go upstairs and check on Chance. 　 Cane knocks on a door. On the other side is Avery. Avery: Cane, this is unexpected. Cane: Avery I really need your help. I’m in trouble. 　 　 　 Just South of Genoa City is the small town of Verdon Lou, Dru hollers for her freedom as she hears a knock on the door. The monitors in the back room begin to chime and beep from the excitement taking place. Upstairs Sheila is stunned and caught off guard. Sharon looks around to see if she can grab anything to hit Sheila with while she is caught off guard by an unannounced visitor. Sheila notices this and then back hands Sharon then spins her around and jams the gun back into her back. Sheila: I know you were not going to betray me? Sharon: No, no I- Sheila: You better not even think about it. I have all the power here. Now get your ass walking down the stairs. Sharon obliges having a gun in her back. Dru is still screaming for her freedom. Sheila ties Sharon back up to her chair then walks over to Dru. Dru looks at Sheila. Dru: Yea bitch! It’s a wrap. Yo time is done. I done told you kidnapping a sista’ was a mistake. Now you bout to find out. Sheila grabs her duct tape and slaps a big piece over Dru’s mouth. Dru is still trying to talk and mumble. Sheila then takes her gun and walks over to the door to see who her visitor is. Dru and Sharon look at each other. Sharon: Dru I hope to God this is our miracle. The only thing Dru can do is mumble and make sounds. Sharon: Dru I can’t understand you. Dru just looks at Sharon and shakes her head. She just lays her head back down and stops all activities. Sharon: I wonder who’s at the door. I don’t hear anything. 　 　 Episode 141: Cane begins to loose Control Written and Produced by ML Cooks Creative Consults: C Nate Richardson, Martin Saenz with Philip Connelly 　 　 GCAC Gloria takes it upon herself to grab a seat next to Michael. Gloria: I’m your mother or have you forgotten that? Michael: No Gloria. Its just not a good time for me right now. Gloria: Well I can see that Michael. This is about Lauren and the divorce isn’t it? Have you tried talking to her? Michael: Many times but she’s so angry with me. I don’t know how I even got to this point. Gloria: Is something else going on? Michael: More than you know. Gloria: Michael tell me. What is going on I can help you? Michael: No one can help me. I did this all on my own. Now my actions may put my family at risk. Gloria: You have to tell me. I have a stake in this too. Michael hesitates. He takes a sip of his scotch. Michael: I resorted back to my old ways. Gloria: What do you mean? Michael: It all started with Victor. A while back he had me draw up some papers, handing Katherine Chancellor control of Newman if Victor was ever incapacitated from running Newman. Gloria: Ok sounds perfectly fine to me. What’s so bad about that? Michael: Well I never filed that paper work. I put my name down instead. Not Kay’s and I filed those papers. Gloria: Oh my God Michael do you know what this means?! Michael: Keep your damn voice down. I know what it means Gloria! I have defacto control of Newman. 　 　 The Chancellor Estate As Nina walks up the stairs she can hear screams coming from Chance’s room. Nina is alarmed and calls out to him. She rushes up the stairs and opens his door and sees Chance is asleep. Chance is talking is his sleep. “ No!! STOP!!! DON’T DO THIS!!” Nina walks over to him. She sits down on the bed next to him and caresses his face. Chance continues on with his nightmare. Kabul Afghanistan, Chance is patrolling his camp as the sun beats down on him with his full military uniform on weighing no less then 9 pounds. He stops and talks to a woman who’s face is blurred in the dream that approached him. He embraces her with a hug and kiss. Chance: Ready for today’s training? Woman: Ready to give it all I got. Chance: Today I am going to verse you on what a patrol is. Now A few things before we start. Only step behind me where I step. I step on a path already carved out by our foot traffic. This way- Woman: We don’t step on any IED’s I did my home work. Chance: I’m impressed. That’ what I love about you solider. Alright you ready? Woman: Yes. Chance begins his patrol of his assigned area and the woman follows behind. With his gun in hand and his senses focused on the foot path and possible enemy attacks from the Taliban he assumes the woman is still right behind him until he hears a scream from behind . He turns around and sees a masked person, or a jihadi fighter holding the woman at gun point from behind. Chance: You don’t want to do this. “American Infidel Devil Go Home!” The jihadi fighter stumbles out with his thick Pashtu accent. “امریکی کافر شیطان کے گھر” He says again only this time in his mother tongue of Urdu. “This is for ALLAH! Jihad to the infidels. ALLAH ALLAH!” Then a second person sneaks up behind Chance and restrains him so he can’t respond as the first jihadi fighter takes the woman away. The woman screams Chance’s name as she is taken away. Chance tries to break free of the seconds man hold but is unsuccessful. The second man pistol whips Chance as he hears Chance’s comrades coming to his aid after hearing the screams of the woman. Chance hollers out and then sits up awoken from his dream. He is sweating and is caught off guard when he sees his mother on his bedside. Nina: Honey it ok. I’m here for you. Chance embraces Nina and lets his emotions go through his tears. Chance: I let her down. They took her from me. I don’t know if she’s dead or alive. Nina: Shhh it’s ok my son.” She says as she holds him. 　 　 Avery’s Place. Avery gives Cane a disturbed look. Avery: Well come in I guess. Cane enters and enjoys the smell of strawberry muffins fresh from the oven. Cane: Those look good. Avery: Well I didn’t make them for you. They are for Phyllis. Cane: You seem a bit cold. Is everything ok? Avery: Cane I’m just surprised you are here. I thought we agreed we would only meet at your place since it’s more low key. Cane: I know I’m sorry. I’m just in a bit of a bind. I was hoping for some help. Avery: It’s getting late Cane, where are the twins? Cane: I know where my kids are I am their father you don’t need to worry about them. You’re not their mother. I’m so tired of everyone worrying about my kids. Avery: Excuse the hell out of me Cane! I was only trying to help. Cane: Help how? Were you trying to help when we had sex at my place while my kids were there? That’s not helping. Avery: Are you high? What is going on with you? Why are you talking to me like this? Cane: You are just acting different and I don’t like it. I thought we were having a good time. Something special. Avery: By the looks of how you are acting you can’t handle it. You look like you haven’t slept in weeks. Cane: I don’t care about any of that! I’m in trouble. I need help! Are you going to help me or not!? Avery: With what Cane? How did you get like this? When did all of this start? Cane takes a deep breath and sighs not really in the mood to have such a serious discussion while his twin’s well being is on the line. 　 　 　 Back at The GCAC Gloria’s eye are big. If they could show case dollar signs they would. Michael: Keep your damn voice down! I don’t people to know I own Newman. Gloria: Oh my. Wait a minute. Michael. I just realized. Something. Michael: That it never rains in southern California? Gloria: No Mr. smarty ass. If you really own Newman then Kay didn’t really have control over Newman and therefore you coulda saved Katherine Chancellor. Michael: You know your right. Gee thanks Gloria. Thank you for making me feel even worse. On top of what I did to Phyllis. Gloria: Phyllis? Michael what have you done? What is going on with you? Where is all this darkness coming from? Michael: Victor did this to me. Gloria: Well you better do something. I’m sure the investigation in Kay’s death will uncover what you did. Michael: Damn Glo! You are supposed to lift my sprits. You just made me feel a hella lot worse. Go find your cub Keemo or something! Michael gets up and storms out of the club. Gloria ponders the knowledge of knowing her son owns Newman. Her phone chimes and she looks at it. Its another voice mail from Keemo. Gloria: My cub, ha that’s funny.“ Not wanting to talk to him she hits delete and puts her phone back in her purse and leaves the club as well. 　 　 Back in Verdon Lou, Sheila’s Cabin Sheila opens the door with a gun pointing right at the visitor. Sheila takes a sigh of relief when Vandalynn walks in. Van walks in and closes the door behind her. Sheila hugs her. Sheila: You scared momma bear half to death. Van: Did you forget you asked me to come here? Sheila: Yes I did Mary. It’s a lot going on here. I got one beast of a hostage who is making things difficult. I may need a tranquilizer on this swamp monster. How are things with you? Is everything going to plan? Mary: Yes. As you know I already seduced Noah. Sheila: That’s momma’s girl. Now you know what you have to do next right? Mary: How can I forget mother? You tell me everyday. It’s time to make my move on Scotty and then Lauren. Sheila: Very good. Did you go see your sister Daisy yet? Mary: I did. She’s hanging tough. But I’m not so sure she is as focused as we our in our plan. Sheila: What do you mean? Mary: She’s really about her daughter Lucy. She act’s as though she wants nothing to do with what we trying to do. Sheila: I see. It’s ok. When she is freed, she will come to her senses. Always remember, momma bear has everything under control and I have all the power. Mary: I know I trust you. Sheila: Daisy will have everything she wants. We all will if we just stick to the plan. Mary: Speaking of the plan, how is the mystery patient? Sheila escorts Mary to the front room where this mystery patient is. Mary: Wow. I really can’t believe he‘s actually here. This is the trump card. Sheila: Oh I know. I knew nursing him back to health would pay off for me. A great investment. If all else fails we still have him. Mary: And no one knows right, not even the hostages? Sheila: No way. In fact come to the back I want you to meet Sharon Newman in particular. Mary follows Sheila to the back room. Sharon sees Sheila with a younger blonde woman walking in behind her. Sharon: What is going on? Sheila: Sharon, I wanted you to meet the newest member of our family. This is my baby girl Mary Carter. Sharon: She seduced my son. Leave my son alone! Please don’t do this! Stop this madness! Sheila: Stop all that crying. I’m trying to be nice here and let you meet your family. Since we are going to be tied to each other for the rest of our lives in more ways then one. Sharon: NO!! What have you done? What are you going to do!? Just please leave my family alone. Sheila: This is only the beginning my dear Sharon. We will be tied together for the rest of our lives.” Sheila laughs as Mary just waves at Sharon.

WoW another fanstatic show. THe smaller things in the show put a smile on my face. Like with the way kirk informed Grant he wanted him to stand up for him. That was so nice considering everythign they've been through. I was very happy to see that. Then of course sour puss ass Christy Canyon had to ruin it. Loved Donna's scene with Mike. He wanted to go upstairs but she gave him a twist and said why go up there and no one's home lol, I liked that... Joy sure is evasive. I loved Vicky calling Jake out on everything he's done. I had not even considred his actions but boy what a game changer. She really turned the tabels around on him. Their back and forth exchanges were eletricfying Cary. Very sharp and well thought out. Gripping... Outstanding. Very GREAT SHOW bro. That climax of the linds' Paternity story has been supreme!!

OMG what a cliffhanger. Wow. Love it. First off I want to say to Jorda STFU. I cannot stand this lady. I like sherly better she got balls. I like how it seem you are feat more scene and characters in each of ur eps. And now Abby about to work with EJ and Sami. This is not going to be good. Oj the Theresea story is starting to confuse me, who is Philip? Kirakis? and what is this other woman? I can't tell if Thereseatia was sexaully assualte or what. I hope for some clarity on that. Also like Billie's advice to kate and also hoe you clarified kate' motive for doing what she is doing. She feels she created this messs so she got to clean it up. nice Great show.

Ok sorry I have no idea who Levi is. The only levi i know is the jeans brand. Any way I think what dante did for LuLu was very sweet. Does Maxie like Levi or what?

Dru puts a plan in motion to defeat Sheila Carter, as Cane is reduced to desperate measures to pay for his coke habit…. Warning: Strong Language Evening is becoming in Genoa City. Cane’s Place Nina awaits an answer from Cane. Nina: Tell me Cane, why weren’t you at Katherine’s funereal?” Cane has a flashback of doing lines of coke. He begins to sweat, struggling to answer Nina’s question. Cane: As you look around this place, all my time is consumed taking care of my twins. With Lily still in Japan, it’s not easy being a single dad of two. Nina: If you would have called some body we would have helped. We think of you as family and I personally think it’s a shame you didn’t pay your respects.” Nina notices how Cane is sweating profusely. Nina: Are you ok? Just then Cane’s cell phone rings. “Ok thank you for calling. I’ll be there to pick him up.” Cane: Nina, if you can excuse me I have to take care of an emergency. Nina : Cane I’ve never seen you like this before. I hope you are ok.” She leaves. Cane closes the door behind her, relived Nina is gone. “People are getting suspicious.” He thinks to himself as he grabs his keys and puts the twins in a stroller and heads out the door. 　 　 Verdon Lou Sheila turns the television off. Sheila: It’s a shame about Katherine Chancellor. Sharon: Yes it is may she rest in peace. They look at Dru, awaiting her mourning response but realizes she can’t say anything due to the grey duct tape on her mouth. Sheila smiles at her. She then walks over and yanks the tape of Dru’s lip. Dru screams out. Then monitors from the back room begin beeping. Sheila: See what you did? You always are so loud. Now you’ve disturbed my mystery patient.” Sheila walks to the back room to make sure the mystery patient is ok. Sharon: Dru you ok? Dru: No Bitch! My damn lips hurt! She tore the skin of my damn lips. Sharon: Who do you think Sheila has back there? Dru: How many times are you going to ask me that! It’s a man. That’s all I know. Now the question you need to be asking is do you think Sheila want you girl? She be feeling all up on you. Looking at you in that way. Like you a two piece and a biscuit. Sharon: Mmm biscuits sounds so good gosh I’m so hungry. I don’t know what she wants from me. I’m just going to play nice so we do not get hurt. Dru: No bitch. That means you scary. Sharon: Well I don’t want to get shot in the back and then paralyzed like you Drucilla. I’m playing it smart. Dru: Girl please. Sharon Newman being smart? Sharon: Just what is that supposed to mean? Dru: My point exactly. Damn all that girl, we got to get the hell out of here. Sharon: Well how do we do that since you have all the brains? Dru: No you didn’t. Girl don’t you come for me. “ Then Dru begins to lift her legs up and exercise them. Sharon is stunned. “Oh my god, you can move your legs. That is so wonderful! Dru: Shut yo ass up. I don’t want Sheila to know dummy!… Damn! Sharon: I’m sorry. But I am so happy for you. Dru: If I can keep doing this, build my strength up, I can over power the crazy ass psycho and knock her crazy ass into next week so we can leave this place. Just you wait Sharon, Drucilla got us. We are going to be free. MMM hmm” She says as she continue to do leg crunches. Episode 140: Cane’s Coke Habit/ Drucilla’s plan Written and Produced by ML Cooks Creative Consults: Martin Saenz, C Nate Richardson, with Philip Connelly 　 　 GC Nights Bar Cane walks over to the new sexy Bartender in Town, Tyler. Cane: Thanks for calling me Ty. Where is he? Tyler points in the direction of Malcolm’s passed out body slumped over the table. Tyler: He’s pretty messed up. He comes in here often but I’ve never seen ya boy like that. Cane: Thanks again, I’ll take care of him.” Cane walks over to Malcolm and tugs at him. “I’m going to kill Nate and Neil. They took my son away from me” he mumbles. Cane tugs at Malcolm a little harder. Malcolm sits up but feels very dizzy. Malcolm: I got to throw up. Cane grabs Malcolm and escort him to the restroom. Malcolm: I’m going to get those mutha fukkas.” He chants over and over again. Cane wonders what Malcolm is talking about. 　 　 Michael walks into the GCAC and grabs a seat at he bar. He takes a sip then thinks about his life and how messy it is. He thinks about the divorce papers from Lauren, he then begins to think about how this will affect his son. He then thinks about Lauren selling him out at Victor Newman’s trial for which he was arrested for perjury. He shakes his head in disappointment. He then thinks of Phyllis and the mystery person. He has flashbacks in his mind: Michael goes to his law office and sees it has been ransacked. He begins to worry if this “intruder” got a certain document. He looks for it. He doesn’t see it. “ Damn it. This can’t be happening. How could I be so stupid? Who is this person messing with us. Now I know there something definitely wrong“. Episode 63 Paul says so this is a person and it started in Jamaica. “Well that means this person,” this woman” flew back with you somehow” Michael says it is possible. We did fly on a private jet. Paul says he wonders if this mystery woman is Sheila Carter. Michael says secretly he has been wondering the same thing. Then a fax comes in. Michael gets it. He sees it is a copy of the missing file, sent from the mystery woman. Michael says Oh my God. I think it is Sheila! Episode 64 Michael knocks on Lauren’s door. She opens it and is not happy to see him. She asks him what is he doing there. Michael tells her that some strange things have been happening since we heard “the voice” in Jamaica. Lauren inquires. Michael tells her that it seems some one has attacked Phyllis and broken into his office and stolen something very important. “Then the sicko is now taunting me with this missing file by faxing it to me.” Lauren asks him what does this have to with her. Michael hesitates before answering her. He then says he and Paul thinks this could be the work of Sheila Carter. Lauren says that’s impossible. “ I shot the bitch” They mystery woman calls Michael on his cell as he pulls up to Phyllis’ house. The mystery woman is using a voice disguiser. Michael thinks its Sheila “What do you want this time Sheila I know it’s you?” “Money and lots of it. If you don’t want you secret document on the front page of Restless Style then you will do as I say or people will get hurt.” Michael: I’m not falling for this again Sheila Carter. I’m calling the Police right now. Enough is enough.” Michael hangs up the phone and walks inside and finds Phyllis in the door way unconscious on the floor. He screams out as he dials 911. “Sheila has struck again!” He says…Episode 66 Michael is in his office trying to prepare for his case of divorce and custody with Lauren when he gets a call on his land line. It’s the Mystery Woman “I have something you want” She says using a voice disguiser. Michael: Just give your self up Sheila I know it’s you!” “Is it?” Michael: Who else would play these sick games and attack Phyllis?” “And now I have your prized document. Do you want me to keep quite about it?” Michael: So what are you going to do black mail me Sheila?” “If you want to keep your plan against Victor Newman a secret than you will do what I say.” Michael pauses as he is frustrated knowing he is in a tough situation. “What do you want me to do?” “Wire me some money into an account. And don’t even worry about tracing it. You do that and you will be in for the shock of your life. Also I need you to stop helping Phyllis and stop anybody else who is helping her.” Michael: Why? Why are you doing this to her? This is my best friend. You want me to stand by and let you kill her? “If you want your devious and deceitful plan against Victor Newman to remain quiet than yes. “ She tells him the account number. “I’ll be expecting payment within the hour. “ She hangs up. Michael slams the phone done and buries is face in his hands. “Oh God what am I going to do?” Episode 68 At Phyllis'. Michael and Phyllis have both fallen asleep from watching a movie. The mystery woman is lurking outside checking to see if Phyllis’ apartment is under surveillance. Oddly at the moment it is not. The mystery woman pulls something out of her car and approaches Phyllis’s apt again. She lights a homemade firebomb on fire and then throws it in Phyllis’ apt window. The apt immediately begins to catch on fire. The mystery woman just stands outside watching the apartment become engulfed in flames as Phyllis and Michael laid sleep in the house Episode 70 Michael is ashamed of his actions and then finishes his drink. Then Gloria walks up to him. Gloria: Michael what’s the matter? Michael: Great just what I needed. 　 Verdon Lou Dru stops her leg crunches when she hears Sheila walking back into the front room. Sheila: Dru you are mighty quiet. What gives? Dru: My damn lips hurt. Sheila: Well good maybe you have learned to keep that big mouth of yours shut. Dru: Mmm hmm” She says rolling her eyes at Sheila Sheila then walks over to Sharon and unties her. Sharon: Are you letting me go? Sheila: Of course not. It won’t be that simple. It’s time to wash you nasty bitches up. Stinks in here. Dru: Wait bitch you bout to wash us up? Sheila: There’s that disrespectful mouth again. You’re gonna piss me off. I’m trying to help you two. Dru: You can do that by letting us go. Ain’t no one got time for all of this foolishness. Sheila: I got time. Now it’s time to get cleaned up.” Sheila pulls out her gun and forces Sharon to walk up the stairs to the bathroom by jamming the gun in her back. Dru then gets back to her leg crunches. The only thing on her mind is her motivation for freedom and out of Sheila’s clutches. Dru: Yea Bitch. I’m going to whoop yo ass and be freed. Treating me like me like a slave. 　 GC Nights Bar Malcolm is done vomiting and Cane helps him outside the bar. Malcolm is still chanting: Moses is my son and they took him from me. Malcolm gets into Cane’s car. Cane gets in too and begins to drive listening to Malcolm. Cane: Malcolm can you hear me man? Malcolm: Yea bro. I hear you. They told me Moses is my son. I got to find Nate. He did this to me. Nate took my son. I’m going to kill him. Cane: No way bro. I think you had way to much to drink. Malcolm: Maybe I did. But I know what I saw. Cane: Saw? I don’t understand. Malcolm: I’m having a hard time remembering. I was talking to this pretty girl. I don’t think I even got her name. She told me Moses is my son and that Nate switched the paternity results. Cane: So a complete stranger came to you and told you that Moses is your son? Malcolm: I think so. I’m dizzy bro, I can’t think right now. Please don’t make me think. Cane pulls up to Malcolm’s place. He escorts him upstairs and then lays him on the couch. Cane: I’ll be back to check on you. Get some sleep. The alcohol playing tricks on you. Cane then gets a text. He looks at it. It reads “ If you don’t have the money by the end of the night, I’m going to take your twins. They are at the sitters. “ Cane panics. “I don’t have any money to pay these guys. They are threatening my children. What have I done?” Stressed he pulls his paraphernalia out his pocket and sits on the floor next to Malcolm’s coffee table. He prepares a line of coke and snorts it for an instant high and in his mind relief from the stresses of life. He begins to think of how he can make a payment for his coke by the end of the night as he packs back up his paraphernalia. He looks around and tries to find things of value in Malcolm’s place. The only thing he can think to grab that might be worth anything is an autographed basketball from Michael Jordan. Cane: I can sell this on EBAY. No no that will take too long, a pawn shop.” He looks back at Malcolm who is passed out on the couch. “Sorry Mal. Your too damn drunk to even know.” Cane then leaves. 　 　 Verdon Lou Sheila fills a bath tub up with warm water and bubbles. Sharon: Bubbles? Isn’t that a bit extreme for a hostage? Sheila: Not for you my beauty.” Sheila then lights some candles and dims the lights. Sheila points the gun at Sharon and tells her to undress. Meanwhile Dru is still doing her super woman self therapy crunches. Then shockingly Dru hears a knock at the door. Dru: Oh my God he’s answered my prayers. IN HERE HELP! WE BEING HELD CAPTIVE BY CRAZY ASS SHEILA CARTER SAVE US PLEASE, HELP PLEASE, FREE US!!!!…..

LOL Felon no Fallon I LOVE IT!!!! O wow we got into the heart of Thersea finally, i kinda felt bad for her. Who is uncle Eric am i missing something? So Thersita was losted or exaully abused?? i cane see why she would be mad at kim. Good story at hand. i really enjoyed the episode. everything moved for me. I also like your epiode to episode continuation of scenes. They r briged very nicely. Looking wd to this press confrence.

O how I just love Niocle. You write her better than the show does. Shes def ur star power. I like maggie protesting to Victor's plan and I love how you told us about the dire straits of Titan. I finally understnad the Enter next story after this show... And yes, the only thing Kim was missing in her scene was that wire hangar. Theresita is busted and digusted. I liked Kate's scene too. I dont know why she was so surprised that it was Billie. Glad to see got her a condo. Can we see the inside please? Good show Alex, every scene moved. It gets better and better.

Absouletly stunning. Emmy worthy for writing and show. Superp. Cary I loved it bro . You really got into the thick of it all. Their emotions, their feelings, the story. So perfect. You lived up to my high expectations and then some. ive beenw aiting for this moment a long time and it was truly worth it. Esp being a reader from day one and seeing them go through the death of their daughter. Thank you bro.

Nice twist at the end. Alex i really want to slap you now, since kim wont slap her damn daughter. The wya her mouth is omg. I cant take it. I REALLY enjoyed Rafe's scene talking about his family. makes me want to meet them. nice job on fleshing out his history.

Cary you are on fire. it was nice to see Cory and Bridgett bond about their parents. I love kajes reactions and could see him yelling in my head like only Tom Eplin could. Enjoyed when Vicky went to Donna. And Donna already knew by the look on her face. T This Marissa and Lisa shady Mcgrady story really puzzles me. Anxious to see where that is headed. Great job and I cant wait to see Vicky and jake convo. Very good Cary keep it coming