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  1. Oh tha infamous arching of Hope's eye brow. I hate when she does that old ass move. Jenn: Right now Mister LMAO!! Gabi did what she had to do and Hope bought it. nice job on Gabi's behalf using the people she loves to gain sincerity. Im glad Marlena fought for John, ar at least tried to get him to tell her what is really going on. Now will he actually go through with telling her the real reason he is doing this.
  2. Ok things picked up in his show and I like it. SO when did Matthew become gay and how did it all come about? Jack is still being an ass. I can't stand him and it seems Victor is going to be a good dad. I didn't like the ABC version of Victor/Todd. Why was Natalie so cold with Vicki? And what is Starr up too? She's another I don't care for so I look fwd to see what you do with her. I hope Dorian is ok. Karen Woleck. Nice. Great job story wise, just again watch those typos.
  3. Ok Nice first show, Got to get a feel of what everyone was doing. Matthew is gay now. Hmm. Interesting. No real drama in this ep but it's ok, I know you got to set things up for the future. Also please be careful of typos. I seen a few and they stick out like a sore thumb. Really takes away from reading and enjoying. I am also thankful the episode was nice and short.
  4. I envy you already. Your contract cast is small and I know everyone. Good choice on the Robert Adamson recast. It will be interesting to see where you take him in the role. Im glad you are starting with a smaller cast. Stories are much better with a more focused vision. You will def see me on my own show Y&R trimming my cast when I return with new shows.
  5. Ok my first time in here. A little advice, hook up your blog where there is an entry box so readers like me can click on your last few entries instead of us looking for it. It would be more reader friendly. Welcome back to the blogs and I hope you stick with this...
  6. Very good show. it is nice to see what the plan for Nick Fallon really is. I wonder if it will work. This plan seems to good to be true. And I can't wait until Gabi tells Hope and then Nick is blindsided. He won't know what the eff is going on. And kate almost ruined everything. Will got him a job with Tyler. I wish it was me lol. He got a fine man, a good job. And John and Mar. I feel so bad for Mar. She won't know why John is leaving her. But then again she can turn back to Roman so that is cool by me. I wonder what would John do next though if he's not going to be with Marlena. Good one Al.
  7. SO John wants a divorce. After everything Marlena had to endure to be with this man, the rift with Sami, Stefano, Roman, Kristen I mea come on Johnny Boy. Loved Ej and Stefano's scene. SO much history thrown into it. The fact that Steffy at one time didn't think EJ was his son, Adelaide. It was all great.!! Nick and Steffy working together. Oh this is not going to be good!! O wow. I think John is going to give Marlena to Roman. WOW. THat's deep. Now I see it. I love how you are kinda reigniting Roman/John/Roman triangle. An injustice was done to Roman. Great work my friend... EJ should be really more grateful though
  8. Those two nasty ass sluts ended up in bed together. Nasty cows. But the second scene was very nice. Daniel is a whore I swear. Big Time. But I do like this budding relationship they are developing.. Loved Anne's scene at the terminal. Please tell me you are not writing her out like this? LOL I just love Anne's dialog. And I knew Abby and Anne would bump inti each other...
  9. Now I see how my confusion came from reading 54 before 53 I was like wait happened to the Hortons showing up at at Abby's room. But any way Who in the hell does John Black think he is. Because EJ is a Dimera Jenn. Yes we know. Jenn sense something about EJ and Abby and Laura regarding that Liam. I wonder how Jenn will react to Abby's news. She's going to hit the roof and ask so many damn questions. Poor Kayla She shoulda plucked Bllie in the lips. They would be hard to miss. Im glad Abby stood up to the big bad british wolf. Take that Elvis you bossy jack ass.
  10. LMAO I dnt care what happens in Salem, John wil ALWAYS blame a Dimera. LOL!! Ok So I am feeling Billie and Daniel, although the are both whores. But its a breath of fresh air. Damn poor Abby. I know she not going out like that. Shame on tat DEVIL EJ. I can't stand him. Why does abby have to uproot herself. What inconvenience does EJ have to go through fukking bastard. Oh My poor Roman. That was a great scene. I had a smile on my face I love these two together and Ira elly feel they have done him so wrong. But John has see the embrace. The story is deepening. And I love every minute of it. Wow man good stuff. Felt like 1993 or 4 all over again. Ty for that. That was a great time for days. So rich in story.
  11. Caroline is such a warm soul to have around. ALWAYS positive. I love that about her. Kims scene with her daughter was gut wrenching. I could see all of that in my head. It was nice admitting to some of the things in the past. Her remorse then in came Billie bitch what. Who the fukk are you? I Lisa Rinna Playing this? I assume she is. She and her fukking lips better sit down some where. This has to be a trick. I know Anne aint bout to give in like that. Come on now. Oh don't be stunned Billie that yo face got cracked.
  12. Wow six months pregnant already. Damn. I know Abby not about to cave inti his demands of going to Italy. I don't think she will but what is very exciting that she is already at six months. Yes Theresa was in that car accident. I hope she wakes up feeing like Patti Labelle, a new attitude. And it seem Marlena knew something was off about EJ... OO and Gabi is that girl. Makin moves. I wonder what the pills were..
  13. A good show. KC is hard headed and is going to run into trouble.I just know it. Its nice seeing Allen trying to est a relationship with her. SHe's going to br spitfire. I love any scene Christy is in and when Felicia is in it too it is icing on the cake. I love that Chrsty gets so many people riled up. Vicky is in denial about Michele. SHe needs to wake up. ANd I wonder what this gas thing is all about for Linds....
  14. SO is Iris going to but CP 2.0? She always has a plan and it was nice seeing her again. Also nice to see Allen. KC and Joy wow. These two don't lik eeach other. It was also cool seeing some of the other stories too...
  15. Jake is still angry. He is not going home. THings have slowd down some what but it needs to so all the beats and follow ups can play out. Again the stores still moved. I do enjoy Vicky and Jacks platonic relationship....
  16. Wow another power house. I love that each show moves the story. Frolicking LMAO. I loved it. Paulina wasn't Carl's door know. Im glad she grew a pair. though I was expecting Paulina to be more reserved. I SO LOVE Christy. The best casting move ever .I can hear RM reading those lines in my head. She has the best ones. The episode construction was also great. You really showcased how intermingled and inter generational your show is. Its about family, love and relationships and you show case that so damn well. I do enjoy Linds and Greg..
  17. I just love the exchanges between Felicia and CHristy. I loved that entire scene. ALso love the drama at the Love Mansion. THis was a well constructed episode. Kirk senses something. I was team Christy. it was nice to see Jack get in on some of the action esp where Stenbeck is concerned. nice that you pulled him in though it was only natural. Each show pops bro. Something happens, everything moves fwd yet you capture all the moments. Great job.
  18. Another great show and cliffhanger. I love big events where big things happen and you are certainly delivering the goods. I got the answer to my question regarding Michele. I do like the story unfolding. I was kinda against you brining her back but it's turning out to be some good drama. There is so much to go through. BUt I do like how complex the Mckinnons are at the moment. I loved at the end where every one was stunned to see Christy Canyon. I can see and imagine all the gaps in my head now. Another great show bro...
  19. Wow a powerful episode. I loved how everything was so tight knit. Moment for moment. Sharlene was drunk and made a show. Making a fool of her self really. It really brought back memories of their story back in the 90's I love how the set was had at how everyone ended up at the police station to see Michele. SO much going on in the house of Mckinnon. It's truly a whirl wind. SO did Michele actually get plastic surgery? I don't remember if she did or not?...
  20. The scenes with Will and Sonny were very nice. It's was also nice to see how Tyler is being worked in via Maggie and now Will. I really do enjoy Tyler and Maggie. I do feel a connection between the two. Wonder what EJ will do now that He knows. Looking forward to that nect conversation. Good show!
  21. WOW!!!!! GREAT CLIFHANGER!!! Michele is back and she is out for blood. The greatest joy was having read all those orginal scenes when your show first started. I remember them all. Grant is not gonna win Pualina's heart unless he uses dirty tricks. Lina made that ver clear. Too bad we couldn't see Spencer. I can't wait for the next show to see this showdown between the girls. Your cliffhangers have been awe some Cary!!
  22. Down the street from GC Nights a reunion and a confrontation between a mother and father takes place. Daniel is still knocked unconscious on the ground with no pants on from the camera blow to the head from James Warrick. James: I watched you this whole time young lady. Mary: Did you like what you saw you pervert? James: You will not speak to me in that tone. Not after what I caught you doing. Having sex with your sister’s baby’s father. Why would you do such a thing? What has Sheila done to you? What is she doing to you? Mary: Sheila is dead. That bitch Lauren killed her. James: You know as well as I do that is not very true. I’ve been caring for Sheila for years. She’s not dead. But she did escape my care. I know she’s near Mary, or is it Vandalynn? Mary: It’s only Vandalynn when I’m being naughty. I like Vandalynn, she let’s loose. James: I don’t like Vandalynn. She seems she’s all about Vandalism’s. Mary: Ha ha that’s cute. Vandalism. James: Young lady we are going to your place right now so you can wash the stench of alley and sex off of you. He grabs her arm and tries to drag her off but Mary resists. Mary: Keep your hands off of me! I’m not going anywhere with you! James aims his gun at Mary. James: You wanna try that again Mary Margaret? Mary: You’re aiming a gun at your own daughter? James: And you were being a salacious slut in the back of an alley. Mary: I don’t understand why you are calling me all these horrible names. James: Because of all the horrible things you are doing. Now enough of this charade. This madness stops now! After you wash that whore off of you, we are going to go see dear mother, Sheila Carter. He jams the gun in Mary’s back and she obliges to his demands. They walk off leaving Daniel in the alleyway. He slowly comes to. He regains his composure and looks around. He feels a cool draft on the lower part of his body and sees a pair of jeans lying next to him. He looks down and sees he is naked in his glory. He grabs his jeans and stumbles towards the door way of GC nights. He opens the door trying not to fall out as he is dizzy from the blow to his head. He stumbles inside the bar and then collapses. Daisy, Roxanne and Tyler all look on in shock. Daisy runs over to him as Tyler picks up the phone and dials 911. Roxanne: Since when do naked ass men walk into bars? I don’t know if it’s a new trend or not but I like it. Tyler chuckles at Roxanne.   https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sY5fhF-Lth8 Created by William J Bell and Lee Philip Bell Episode 156: James Warrick Arrives and vows to stop the Carter Plan Written by ML Cooks and Casey Hutchinson Creative Consults: Cary Richardson, Alexander Washington-Beebs, Martin Sanez, and Rob Wolf     GC Nights Roxanne rushes over to Daisy and kneels down next to her as Daisy is checking for a pulse on Daniel. Tyler rushes over with a blanket. To cover him up. Tyler than throws the blanket on Daniel. Roxanne: I’m so stunned at penis walking into the club. Who does that? Tyler: Daniel surely doesn’t. Something is wrong. Blood is coming from his head. He was with some one earlier this evening. Daisy: Like who? He was here before? A woman? I’ll kill her. Daniel is mine. We have a family. Roxanne: Hold on girl. Can’t kill nobody remember you done with that crazy life. You not about that life no more. Daisy: I love Daniel. We share a child and no woman or anything will keep us apart. Tyler: I think I said too much. The paramedics arrive and rush over to a still unresponsive Daniel. They put him on a gurney and hook him up to an IV. The ambulance then rushes off. Daisy stands up. She then thinks of Lucy. Daisy: My daughter… Daniel is injured then who has my daughter? I have to go find out. Roxanne: You want me to come with you? I can’t have my new friend out here on the streets killing folks. Daisy smiles. Daisy: I’ll be ok. Thank you. I’ll call you soon. Roxanne: Seeing all this makes me want to make things right with my new found father. So that’s where I’m headed if you need me. They hug and they both leave the club. Tyler continues to think of the blonde bombshell Daniel was with at the bar earlier and contemplates the fact she has something to do with Daniel’s injury.     Hillary arrives home from work and is looking forward to relaxing after being in stilettos and business attire all day. Her smile turns into a frown when she sees her apartment door has been kicked in. She panics and runs up to the door and looks inside her place and sees it is totally trashed. From inside her apartment she looks across the hall at the door to Roxanne’s apartment. Hillary thinks to her self that Roxanne did this. She shakes her in disappointment and pulls out her cell phone to make a call. Hillary: Hello is this a bad time? Male Voice: No who is this? Hillary: Oh come it’s been that long since you’ve heard from me you don’t know my own voice? Voice: Hillary how great to hear from you, are you in town? Hillary: I am. I came here to help you but instead I’m in need of some help. Voice: 2212 Kingston dr. apartment 2b. Come right over. Hillary: Thanks, I’ll be over in a bit. Hillary hangs up her phone and is flustered still looking at her trashed place. Hillary: Roxanne you are going to be sorry for this. Hillary then leaves the apartment building.     GC Memorial Snapper with Jill, Nikki, Mac and Brock all rush into the hospital. Right behind them storms in Sister Patterson and her church bus full including Devon, Neil, Nina, Chance, and Philip. They see Nate and walk over to him. Sister Patterson barges onto the front of the crowd. Sister Patterson: We are hear my child to do the work that needs to done. Nate: Come again? Sister Patterson: We are ready, willing, abled and equipped with the tools to do the job that needs to be done Brother Hastings. Nate: I’m assuming you are here about Esther, Karl and Karynn. Jill: No Dr. Hastings, Esther only. Sister Patterson turns to Jill. Sister Patterson: Now see that is the ugly I’m talking about. We don’t need all that evilness from you Jill. We need to care and pray for all God’s chillrens‘. Jill: You’re getting so annoying and tired. Who are you really? Sister Patterson takes out a bottle of cooking oil out of her oversized bag and unscrews the top. Nate: Sister we are not frying nothing here this is a hospital. Sister Patterson: Won’t be no cooking’s today brother. This oil is special. You see… Sister Patterson pours some in her hand. Sister Patterson: This oil here is special like I said. Sister Patterson throws it on Jill’s for head then puts the palm on her hand on Jill’ head and pushes her back. Sister Patterson: This is the lord’s oil. This praying oil. Jill has a nasty ass spirit in her and we need this oil here- you see to fight it. Drive this demon out my GOD! Yes! We ask of you to give Jill the strength she needs, oh lord yes, to fight that vile demon that makes her spew such careless remarks. This demon made her attack the elderly my god!! In the name of Jesus we pray. Amen. Sister Patterson then pushes Jill backward and Snapper catches her. Paul: Ok I’ve seen enough. Nate this woman needs a mental evaluation. Nate: Paul it’s ok. She’s new at my church. Sister Patterson: I am not insane. I am a commander of my army. We are soldiers for the lord and I got the tools right here. Brother Nate I got my prayer warriors right here. Lead us to the right areas of our loved ones and we will make it an oh happy day. Then Sister Patterson jumps for joy. Sister Patterson: YES HALLUEJIUAH!! AMEND!!!! Everyone needs healing Brother Nate, we can do this right here. Join me in song choir. Sister Patterson pulls out her baton from her holy bag and turns to the crowd but in her mind the church choir. She begins to sing Oh, Happy Day, very loudly and out of pitch. Some wouldn’t even call it singing. Sister Patterson: (singing) Oh happy day. … Oh happy day… Sister Patterson is angered when her choir doesn’t respond to her commands. Sister Patterson: Hear me and hear me now! I am a commander on the battlefield of sin. I only do his work and I only know how to speak the truth. That’s all I can do. I am an agent of God and when I begin to sing this oh heavenly tune again I’m going to need all abled bodied souls, to join in. We need to sang this song, oh lord, to heal all this evilness and this sickness in this hospital. Nate: Sister Patterson Please not right here. Sister Patterson: Never mind all that Brother Nate, you hear? We are doing his work. We are at war and don’t you stop us. Now choir let me hear thy voices. “Oh Happy day…..Oh Happy day.” Everyone slowly joins in with Sister Patterson. “ When Jesus washed…Oh yes you did lawd, you washed…You washed our sins away.” Sister Patterson then steps up the song and she begins to clap. As the crowd sings she hollers over them “ Yes sing it. Let me hear it!” The emergency room has come to a complete halt as everyone looks on at the impromptu church vigil .           Daniel’s House Daisy pounds on the front door. Phyllis opens and Daisy is shocked to see Phyllis there using a walker. Phyllis: What in the hell are you doing here crazy Bitch? Daisy: As old as you are and I should add crippled, why are you so childish? Phyllis: I can do that, I don’t like you, you are a physco. Why are you here? Daisy: Where is Lucy? Phyllis: You are not getting any where near her! Daisy: Well then you need to get over to memorial. Daniel has been hurt. Phyllis: You are lying! This is a ploy to get Lucy. It’s not gonna work. You can do better than that surely. Daisy: I’m not lying. I saw it. Roxanne and I were having drinks at GC Nights and then in walks Daniel with no pants on and blood coming from his head. He collapsed. Phyllis: Do you know how crazy that sounds? Lucy then begins to cry in the background. Daisy: My daughter needs me. I can stay here while you go to Daniel to make sure he’s ok. Phyllis: Daisy don’t let this walker fool you. You try to enter this house so help me God I’ll beat the hell out of you with this damn walker! Daisy: Yea right you crippled bitch! One kick from me to you and it’s over. Now step aside or I’ll have to escalate this and we don’t want that. Phyllis: I think we do so then you can go back to jail. Daisy: Phyllis just move please. Can’t you hear my daughter crying? She wants her mother please I’m begging you I haven’t seen her in a couple of years. You are a mother you know what that is like. Phyllis walks away from the door just enough with her walker so she can slam the door in Daisy’s face. Daisy is stunned and then hurt. She then pounds on the door. Phyllis walks over to Lucy and gives her a bottle. Daisy is still pounding on the door. Daisy: I will break this door down Phyllis and then I’m going to shove that walker up your ass! I will get my daughter no one will stop me! Daisy then begins to kick at the door trying to bust it down. Phyllis picks up the phone and calls over to Memorial to find out if Daisy’s story checks out. Phyllis gasps when she learns it’s true. Phyllis hangs up the phone and looks at the door realizing that Daisy has stopped attacking the door. She wonders if she’s left. She slowly walks over to it and opens it. She sees Daisy smiling and dangling a set of keys. Daisy: It seems your son is having an emergency and you have no means to the hospital. As a good mother like myself you would want to get down there right? Phyllis: I don’t care Daisy you are not going to be left alone with Lucy. Daisy: To show you I’m the bigger woman here let me suggest a compromise. I’ll drive you to the hospital and you can bring Lucy. You can keep an eye on her or us. As long as I can see my daughter. Just until you are done. Phyllis: Damn it Bitch! You try anything I swear you will regret it. Daisy: I want to earn your trust. Phyllis: Yea after acting like a big bad wolf trying to break the damn door down! Phyllis sits in her wheel chair and she grabs Lucy. Daisy pushes them out to her car. Phyllis is on edge and tense as she wonders if she can really trust Daisy.     Back at the Hospital Nate is at the nurse’s station doing some charting when Devon walks up behind him Devon: You make it all look so good don’t you? Nate turns around to look at Devon. Nate: I was waiting on this. You going to hit me again? Devon: I wouldn’t want to mess up your pretty white doctor’s coat there” Devon says brushing off Nate’s should and fixing his white coat. Nate: Are you going to make a scene? This really isn’t the place nor the time. Devon: It wasn’t your place to be sleeping with Roxanne. My woman. The woman I want to marry. Nate: I never slept with Roxanne. Had you stayed that day you caught us in an embrace Roxanne would have explained that to you. Devon: Actions speak louder than words family. Nate: Yes we are family and that’s why I wouldn’t hurt you like that by sleeping with Roxanne behind your back. Devon: Than what was it? Nate: I had an attraction to Roxanne. We have been fighting it for months. Devon: Months? So you’re saying Roxanne has feelings for you too then? Nate: I don’t want to speak for Roxanne. I also won’t share with you the things Rox and I talk about. Devon scoffs at Nate. Devon: Rox? That’s a joke. So I caught you two at the park in an embrace and you both lied to me then. You told me that embrace was nothing. Yet since that time and I assume even before that you two had this attraction to one another. You and I even talked about it. You told me there was nothing between you and Roxanne. That was a lie to so why should I believe you now when you say you didn’t sleep with Roxanne? Nate: You just have to take my word for it. Ask Roxanne. Devon: Have you spoken to Roxanne since I caught you two? Abby then walks over to Devon seeing the two getting more intense. Abby: Devon come on let’s not do this here. Devon: No no Abby I want to know. Nate answer the question. Have you spoken to Roxanne since the day I caught you two in an romantic embrace at your apartment? Nate: Have you? Devon is about to punch Nate but catches himself. Abby pulls Devon away. Nate takes a deep breath turns around and gets back to his paper work.     Roxanne is about to knock on a door when she hears heels stomping towards her. She pauses and wonders who it could be walking so fast. Up the corridor is Hillary looking down on a business card. She looks up and sees Roxanne. Hillary: What the hell are you doing here? Roxanne: I got business bitch and you? Hillary: No class at all. Is that how you really speak? Roxanne: To a bitch I don’t like I sure do. Hillary: And why don’t you like me Roxi? Roxanne: Get my name right tramp! I’m only going to say it once. Hillary: So petty. You’re mad because I slept with Nathan. Roxanne: You mean Nate and no I’m not,.. I love Devon. Hillary: If that makes you sleep better at night then by all means. And I bet it was you who trashed my place. Roxanne: Prove it. Hillary: You just seem like you would do something so low class. Your speech is low class. Roxanne: Oh yea Bitch? So you put two and two together and you got four or what? Hillary: No I got Nate and I know you want him. That’s why your acting like this,.. you’re mad. Sorry Roxi you can’t have both Devon and Nate. Roxanne grabs Hillary’s neck and slams her head against a door. She does this several times. Between each pound Roxanne speaks: “I told yo bitch ass (pound) to get (pound) my damn (pound) name right (pound)” Hillary grabs Roxanne’s ponytail and yanks it very hard while using her other hand to claw Roxanne’s face. Roxanne screams and let’s go of Hillary’s neck. She backs away from Hillary unable to bear the stinging pain of open flesh wounds on her face. Hillary then stomps on Roxanne’s foot with the heel of her stiletto. Roxanne’s hollers out in pain and in anger grabs Hillary’s neck again to pound it against the door. Only this time the door swings open and they fly into an apartment. They crash onto the ground. It just happens to be Spencer’s new apartment. Spencer: Hillary, Roxanne. What the hell is this? I just moved here damn it you two going to get me put out! Roxanne regains her composure and sits on top of Hillary still choking her. Hillary is trying to break out of Roxanne’s grip. Spencer grabs Roxanne and pulls her off of Hillary. Hillary chokes and coughs catching her breath. Roxanne: Let me go!! I’m going to whoop dat’ ass!! Roxanne says as she struggles to free herself from Spencer’s hold. Spencer: No Roxanne!! I can’t have you fighting your half sister. Hillary and Roxanne both pause what they were doing and look at him. Hillary: Say who? Spencer: Roxanne this is my daughter Hillary and Hillary this is my new found daughter Roxanne. Now stop all this fighting and tell me what is going on? Roxanne and Hillary are stunned just learning they are half sisters….
  23. I love the animalistic exchanges between Amanda and Iris. Very great lines. I loved it. I also enjoy the more buisness"y" side of your show. So Is Mike not a Cory or what? I also liked how you kept having Bridgett tap into her twin sister thing. ESP I think it's called. And what a way to end the show. A freeze frame on Michele. I could really see that in my head. I honestly thought she was going to stop the wedding. It was also nice once again seeing all the couples and you showcasing their respective dramas. Great work. Another great episode. And I cant wait to see what happens next. Bay City is hot and is the place to be. These Wedding shows have been great Cary!! You are at your best right now..
  24. EJ knows Abby is pregnant YES!!!!!! Can't wait to see his reaction. GABI KILL HIM!!! Jenn scenes were great too with Laura. Things continue to build and grow
  25. Thank you for the prompt respones. Sister Patterson is outragous. She is not slated to be a main character, only recurring. Karynn has a lot of things to navigate through. We are going to see more of who she is this season. James has arrived to give the Carter girls some heat. He will fill in gaps as far as Sheila is concerned. James has a gun because he wants Mary to know he is about business. I'm really glad you all enjoyed. The hardest thing for me was to decide and balance out the funny parts. I guess it worked.
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