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  1. The Chancellor Estate is burning after exploding as Karynn on a gurney behind Brock, Karl, Mac, Neil, Devon, Philip, Chance, Nina, Snapper, and Sister Patterson, Katherine’s new neighbor. They are all horrified as they watch Katherine’s house burning. Jill: Where is Esther? The firefighters call in for back up for all surrounding towns and cities. Karynn: The will. The will is gone. Everyone turns around and looks at Karynn. Karynn: What? Jill walks towards Karynn. Jill: I have never met such an ignorant or more detestable old hag. Jill then punches Karynn in the face. Karynn is knocked off the gurney as everyone gasps in amazement. Sister Patterson comes in between the battle axes. Sister Patterson: Now wait a damn minute! Ain’t no time for all this evilness. You just hit an old woman Jill. That is no work of the lord. The flames of hellfire are raging out of control and you instead are doing the work of Lucifer by attacking the elderly. We need to help the flame fighters put this fire out. Everyone get to my house now for buckets of water…. Everyone looks at the newly arrived on the scene mad sister claiming to be Katherine’s new neighbor standing before them wondering what is wrong with her talking to everyone as she is. Sister Patterson: NOW! I said. I am Sister Patterson! An agent of God and you all will do as I say. The lord speaks through me. The devil is at work and we must stop the flames of hell.” Mac looks to Brock Mac: Who is that? Brock: A crazy woman. Snapper: She’s Katherine’s new neighbor I guess. Nina: I’ve’ never seen her before. Sister Patterson: I said NOW! HEAR ME AND HEAR ME NOW!! Sister Patterson shoves Neil and Devon in order to get the crowd going. Every one else follows them to get buckets of water from Sister Patterson’s house. Sister Patterson walks over to Karynn and helps her up off the ground. Karynn brushes her self off. Sister Patterson: Are you ok my child? You was punched in the face lord have mercy. What would drive that woman to do such an ugly thing like that? So unwomanly and unholy. It’s also ugly and my God don’t like ugly. Karynn: With that deep voice Jill has whose to say she is a woman. Sister Patterson: That is no work of the lord. I don’t that honey. I don’t talk about people behind they backs for I shall not sin. I am a solider for the lord. I only do his work. I don’t do ugly. Now let us pray for the welfare of Esther.” Karynn gives Sister Patterson a look. Sister Patterson forces Karynn’s head in a down word position, so they can pray for Esther’s well being. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yHXBDKw-6Wo Created by William J Bell and Lee Philip Bell Episode 155: Karynn burns down the Chancellor Estate! Written and Produced by ML Cooks Creative Consults: Casey Hutchinson, Martin Saenz, C Nate Richardson, Alex Wasington-Beebs, and Rob Wolff Down the Street from the nightclub GC Nights Daniel and Vandalynn stand by an alley way kissing passionately. The mystery person who’s been stalking Vandalynn is snapping photos of Van and Dan’s make out session Vandalynn pulls back from Daniel and looks in his eyes. Vandalynn: You are so handsome. You have this rugged mountain man thing going and I find it enticing. Daniel: Is that right? Van: MMM.. I do. She grabs his privacy again and massages it to arouse him. Daniel: I mean really, right here? Van: Why not? Let’s have fun…. Adventure… I’ve always wanted to have sex outside. You can fulfill my fantasy, tonight. She plants a seductive kiss on his lips. She looks around and sees the alley behind her. Van: Right here. She pulls him into the alley way. Van then leans against the wall of a building and pulls him into a kiss again. As they kiss she takes his hand and places it on her butt and then grabs his hand forcing him to grab her butt. She moans. Van: Grab it. I like that. Dan: You like a lot of things. He grabs a handful of her rump. Then he smacks it. Van: YES. Oh yes. I want you to spank me, choke me and pull my hair Daniel: Damn, you’re a wild cat. Then she takes her panties off. She takes them and slides them across Daniels’ nose. She then throws them down. She unzips his pants and pulls out his rod. She strokes it. She smiles at him and he smiles at her. Daniel is extremely turned on by the scenario of the situation. Van: I want you now. Put it in me.” Daniel moves closer to Van and presses her against the wall and they kiss once again only this time more then Daniel’s tongue is going inside of Van. Van is moaning as the mystery person is still taking pictures is shocked and has had enough and stops taking pictures. The mystery person moves closer to the alley sex duo.   Meanwhile inside GC Nights. Roxanne and Daisy grab seats at the bar. Daisy: It’s been an incredible day. Roxanne: Yes it has. Tyler the bartender walks over to them. Tyler: Hello ladies, what’s it going to be tonight? Roxanne: We are celebrating new jobs so let’s see I think we will have a crown royal and coke. Tyler: Right up. Daisy: You know it really felt great showing up Daniel today at House of Kem. Roxanne: I know right. He was salty when he learned you got a job. As Tyler is making the drinks, overhearing the girls talk he realizes this is the Daisy his good friend Daniel was talking about, the “crazy baby momma”. He continues to listen in as he serves them their drinks. Daisy: Thank you. Roxanne and Daisy then lift their glasses to one another to toast. Roxanne: To new beginnings and to putting your family back together. Before they drink Daisy stops them - Daisy: Wait, what are you going to toast to? It can’t be all about me. Roxanne: Well I’ll toast to finding peace with my long lost mother and my new job. Daisy: Sounds good. They clank their glasses and take a sip of their drink.   Lauren's Apartment Lauren is reading the newspaper and Scotty enters. She stands. Lauren: Hi, sweety. Scotty: Hi mom. Lauren: Is everything okay? You are looking a little bit pale. I hope it is nothing serious. Scotty: We need to talk about something. Lauren: What? Scotty: How you have been weak. Lauren gives Scotty a look of confusion. The Chancellor Estate, the crowd each with a bucket of water walks past the estate taking their turns dumping water on the fire. Fire fighters urge them to get out of the way since they are only making things worse. They walk over by Karynn and Sister Patterson who has just finished praying. A paramedic puts Karynn’s gurney into an ambulance and takes her to the hospital. Another paramedic walks over to Karl who looks tired sitting in his wheel chair. He is wheezing. Karl: I can’t breath. I need my inhaler. The 2nd paramedic places Karl in his ambulance and takes him to the hospital. Nikki: Still no word on Esther? Jill: Dear God no! This can’t be happening. Then a firefighter walks over to the crowd. “How many people were in the house when the house exploded?” He asks. Brock: I think just only one. Firefighter: Ok we retrieved a woman from the house, she has been taken to the hospital. Everyone breathes a sigh of relief. Nikki: I think we should all head over there to make sure Esther is ok. Snapper: Agreed. I have a Suburban I can take about 8 people. Jill: Sounds good darling. Jill and some of the crowd follow Snapper and Jill to his SUV. Sister Patterson: Have no fear the rest of ya’s! I can drive my church bus over to the hospital so we all can check on Sister Esther. Neil: You have a license to drive? Devon: You’re coming too? Sister Patterson: Of course I am. Not only am I coming, I got my bible and my praying oil as well. Paul rolls his eyes and gets ready for the ensuing drama about to take place at the hospital. Sister Patterson: Follow me children to the get on the holy bus. Nina: I’m nervous. Philip looks at her and smiles. Philip: I like her. She’s a much needed relief from the seriousness of the situation. Nina, Philip, Chance, Neil and Devon follow the mighty Sister to her church bus. They are stunned to walk up on a 1975 aqua green Volkswagen van. Nina: Does it even run? Sister Patterson: This is the mighty wheels of the lord. Of course it works. Sister Patterson starts up the bus and a large plume of black smoke is released into the air from the exhaust pipes. Everyone coughs. Chance: I think this thing needs an oil change. Sister Patterson: Damn all that talking. No time for talking we need to get to the hospital to stay prayed up for Sister Esther. We are now prayer warriors. Now hurry and get in.” Chance, Nina, Philip, Neil and Devon get in the van. Before they all can sit down and find seats Sister Patterson peals out her driveway, leaving the passengers struggling to maintain balance in the van. Back at Lauren's Apt Scotty sits down on the couch. Lauren: Weak is not a word I use in my vocabulary. And are you talking about Daisy by chance? It seems like you are. Scotty: I am. Lauren: Moving on. Scotty: Mom... I need to say this. Yes you defended yourself against her but you let her walk all over you sometimes. You need a plan for her. Don't you realize that? Lauren: I do... but I need to stop sinking down to her level. I need to not turn into Daisy. The red hair terrifies me already. It’s not even real, its like an off brand at the dollar store kind of hair. Scotty: Hahaha... good joke. But this is no joking matter. Remember how scared you were about Sara Smythe. You need to get that scared again. I say that because you took action when you were scared of Sara. Lauren: I cannot just live my whole life in fear! Scotty: I know. Lauren: No... no you do not honey. (Sighs) When I think back to what every Carter person has put me through... it worries me for Fen and your's future. I mean Sheila has come back from the dead before, Daisy is out of jail. There is just too much in play for not only me to get hurt... but you too. Scotty: Mom I have been hurt by Sheila before. She fooled me into thinking she was a college student remember? Lauren: Yes, I do. Scotty: Just sit down with me here and let me help. Lauren: Fine... I will. Lauren sits. Scotty: Good. He smiles and walk away, the only thing on his mind i his first true love Kirkland and his wedding to Charlie. He lays down in his bed depressed about his life.       GC Nights Tyler pretends to be busy cleaning shot glasses as he stands within earshot of Roxanne and Daisy’s conversation. Roxanne: So girl you got to tell me, how did things go wrong with you and Daniel? Daisy: It was my mother, my family. I was brainwashed by my Aunt Sarah to do all these horrible things to Lauren, Daniel and Jana Hawkes. All in the name of revenge. Justice for what Laruen did to my mother. Roxanne: I don’t have the best mother either. In fact I just met my actual birth mother. Daisy: You were adopted or something? Roxanne: I recently found out I was. My mother had an open leg policy. Daisy: I don’t get that. Roxanne: A slut. A tramp. A whore. A hooker. Streetwalker. Daisy raises an eyebrow in shock by all the names that just rolled off Roxanne’s tongue to describe her mother. Even Tyler raises his eyebrow and has to look at Roxanne. He turns back to appearing to be busy. Daisy: Wow you are not shy about it. Roxanne: It is what it is. Leslie was a college hooker. I was the product of one of her rolling stone johns. Daisy: Wow. I don’t know who’s childhood was worse mine or yours. We have something in common. Roxanne: We do. I don’t have many friends in this city. There’s a new Bitch in town named Hillary trying to take my man. Daisy: I had that problem once. In fact she was a whore too named Amber Moore. Roxanne: That rhymed. They both laugh and take sips of their drinks. Roxanne: What did you end up doing? You are referring to Daniel? Daisy: I am. I got my man but not in the best way. Roxanne: What did you do girl tell me? Daisy: I basically raped him. Roxanne looks at Daisy in shock. Daisy wonders what her new found friend will think of her.     Out in the alley way behind GC Nights Vandalynn has her hands wrapped around her ankles as she is bent over. Daniel is pounding away from behind. As sweat runs down his face he climaxes letting out loud moans. Vans: Yes. ..Oh yes fill me up. The Mystery Person walks up on them and takes the camera and hits Daniel in the head from behind. Then the person snaps a photo of Daniel, caught with his pants down knocked out in the alley way. Vandalynn is scared as she puts her panties back on and fixes herself back up. The mystery person looks at her. Van: You are the person that’s been stalking my sister and me. The mystery person speaks: Mary Carter. How dare you? Vandalynn: You know me? Wait I know that voice. That accent. Oh my god it can’t be. They mystery person takes off their mask and it is revealed to be James Warrick. Vandalynn: Dad, you caught me by surprise. James: No I caught you being an alley cat type of whore. You slept with your sister’s baby’s father, in an alley. What did your mother do to you? No daughter of mine is going to act this way. Mary: She’s dead. Sheila is dead! James: No she isn’t my dear. I know Sheila is alive and you are going to take me to her now! This madness is going to stop now! Right after you tell your dear half sister what Slutty deeds you were doing in the alley. Shame on you.…. Tonight Sheila’s reign of terror is stops permanently. No more “back from the deads“, no more plastic surgeons. It’s OVER! Van is very nervous as James points his gun at her.  
  2. Glad we seeing more fall out of The Whole Lindsay drama. It went away for a few weeks but thats cool, its right on time now. Man that scene was sharp. Bridget not feeling linds at all and it's gonna be a long time before she do. Now all they need is a man to fight over lol. I'm glad Jake reached out to Lindsay. and The casting is spot on for this role of Linds. Loving how you pulling out all your strong stories and highlighting them during the wedding... Christy, Fefe and nem, Michele's return, and The Linds saga. Good strategy on ur part. SPENCER Yes. Nice mention, ANd Michele cant read, Oh my, Thats quite the twist. Im wondering if she will inadverently stop this wedding..
  3. Wow!!! INCREDIBLE Scene with Scotty and Kirk. That was powerful and so raw. all of it I can relate to it on so many levels. Great job on that and you really deepend both characters and in fact gave me a lot to work with for Scotty. The corss over was very fun and helped propell story on boths shows. It wasn't forced at all, it was all kinda natural. Im so amazed right now. And I love this " Vandalism" business. I'ma have to use that. I do wonder if Krik can keep his feelings at bay or his past in the past. It also makes me wonder if Charlie is hiding something. Another good and sweet episode. Nice build up to the wedding. You hitting on everything. Wonder what Christy has planned..
  4. The big day is here. The episode construction was very well put together.. I liked how you touched upon The whole John/Felicia/Sharlene Mitch quaderangle. I love each character in it and it has very interesting dynamics. I do feel everyone being to hard on my girl FeFe. Its truly a tangled web and it plays into history and I love that. It affects so many people. Greg really didnt need to take that jab at his dad lol. Ass. The desciptions were very nice, gave you a real sense of the scene in my head. And Michele is back on the home stead. Vicky wants Jake out after the wedding. No more sugar coating or hiding anything. Good show bro!
  5. Loved Vic's response to Hope as he learnend the news. Nick is such an ass but he is about business. His comments about Brady were crazy yet funny. So Nick "ish" LOL!!!! Anne slapped Ej over and over again Loved it. I would be mad as hell to and I myself always have this fear of elevators. It's time for Anne to channel James Brown and get some " The Big payback" Al look on you tube for this song for some inspiration. Anne really got to go big to top everything EJ been doing to her. Nice to meet Frank and Ralphie May. Now it's about to come out that Abby is pregnant kuz some one's nosey ass on the hosptial staff will know and everyone is connected. Aww shoot. Another good show. The flow so nicely esp reading 4 back to back. I'm very big on episode to episode flow and episode construction it self and you do both very well!!
  6. Brady sure do got a lot of people after him. Nick is silly for pulling out his trusty tablet with his text. This story with Brady sure is paying off in spades and it just keeps coming. I love how the news is traversing through out the town and affecting everyone in different ways. Things are slowing down. I feel so bad for ANNE being in that small ass space and finding out about the news of Brady's accident. What is werid though is the news report being played in the elevator as if some one set it up. Hmm..
  7. I meant to comment on the last show that I do see soemthing in Maggie and Tyler. I think Maggie is very smitten by him and I think old man Vic better put on a pair of glasses. Again love the buisness aspect of that scene. OMG Abby is having a baby. I'm glad you took that route kuz this will be interesting to see how you play this out. Theresea is able to be in a wheel chair vs a gurney after darting out that car? A nice follow up episode from the last one. All the scenes moved stories.
  8. LOVED EJ and Annes showdown. I loved EJ's excuse and Anne's remark about the cookies. Funny stuff and I love these two together. They have a great chemistry. This war betweeen them is great. Loved Sami's emotion about Johnny. It is so sad. But great at the same time. I am so thankful you are going balls deep into this forgotten story. it's powerful stuff.This could be Sami's biggest confliction to date. Nice construction of this episode. EJ's first scene was talking about pills I'm like "yea ok" but then I saw Gabi but I must admit my smile turned into a frown when I saw her name but then it got interesting with LIAM. NICE!! This is getting good. All your stories are deepening and straying away from the NBC version finally and I do like the direction things are going in!! And wow what an ending. But i am laughing right now Thereresea thought it was cool leaping out a car at 90mph. Wow what an incredible scene and a great cliffhanger. I knew the accident was coming but I didn't know that Theresea would leap out so good one for that. At this point I feel bad as hell for Brady. All his feelings came out. It finally hit him, litreally!! A great show. Off to read the next one I must find out what happens.
  9. Part one was great full of funny lines. I loved it. Cass's line to Ceceil, Grants line to Chrissy,... I do like how Jack was aggresice with Pualina over their date for the wedding Wouldnt take no for an answer. I like that. Through love Kirk realizes how it changed him for the better. Charlie and Kirk setting up to be quite a strong and rootable couple. Damn Cecil just drops a bomb like that and boucnes. I bet Maggie on her way back. Wonder how Charlie will feel about this and Rachel too. Grant is getting impatient in his wait for Pualina. His true colors r creeping back out like the Grant I know. He is so good at being bad and I love Christy. They r a good duo. This is a great triangle playing out. Reggie still got plans. I know he will be back sinister as ever. Again a lot of great lines in this ep and as always a good show.
  10. I really could feel for Allen in scene one. And KC's confusion. Reggie did all his crimes well most of his crimes in BC so how does him being a citizen of Tanquir enables him to espcape charges on the things he did in BC or did I miss that? Very nice scene with Frankie and Cass but for only Ceclie to spoil it lol Toni being a little selfish and almost vindictive at this point esp saying those thing about Allen in front of KC. Allen wanted to find his mother, Toni had hers. Toni cant play god and decide Allen cant and shouldnt be a father. I love Donna she is about action. I love it yes. Another good show!!
  11. Series Update: Something unusual is going on. There have been no new episodes posted on The Young and the Restless. Readers are wondering if Vandalynn aka Mary Carter will betray her sister Daisy by sleeping with Daniel. Daisy is on a mission to put her family back together, and under one roof, with Daniel and their daughter Lucy but it seems Daisy’s sister has other ideas. Also The Chancellor Estate has exploded and Esther is no where to be found. What about the “Will”? And just exactly who is Sister Patterson? All these questions will have to remain on hold for now as Headwriter ML Cooks is taking some time off. You can expect new shows soon but no exact date can be announced at this time. ML previews there will be lots of movement in some very long running storylines mostly the “Verdon Lou” situation. Not just one but SEVERAL big events propel the “Verdon Lou Story” when the series returns.   ML also teases that a few more cast members will meet their maker this fall. “I continue to trim down the large cast. So some major players will be making their way out of GC when the show returns.” Could Esther Valentine be one? When asked, ML teased, “ Stay Tuned!” ML did preview though in the first episode back, the mystery person that has been stalking the Carter girls will be revealed! Can you guess who it is?
  12. Gabi just leave town. LOL Brady about to check Theresea and I can't wait for this show down. I hope Brady don't think just becasue he knows Theresea sold him out it will make things better for him at Titan. Nice car Brady. Why did Anne need to be such a sour puss to the tech? Looking rwd to the next one with Brady and Theresea
  13. Nice fast paced show. FINALLY Brady it all caught up to you and you can't be mad at no one but your self. Love it Can't wait to see what happends next. Nice to see Stefano actually be a part of something. EJ is really in a bind. losing all controls of his life. Serves him right. How did Anne know it was Antrax? nice way to scare Ann lol I wonder what she is going to do to get revenge.
  14. LOL Nick coming in on Jordan and Rafe' s scene. I love it, lol!! I am really loving this front story with Theresea and Brady. They are entralling in it and boy oh boy Victor might stroke out when that video coverage of Brady gets out. Lights camera action. Liam is def up to something and it's shady. it seems this story gonna start to pick up. With his bright as smile. Sinister is more like it. Loved Rafe and Nick's scene. Nick is an ass and he over played his hand as Gabi is on to him. HA HA. THis was a great show because the only two things I felt needed addresing were addressed now your firing on all cylinders and I can't wait to see it all unfolds
  15. Very good show, a lot came together. What is KC going to say to Toni and Allen and even Etta Mae? I'm liking her and I wonder who she will be paired with romatcially once she hits BC. Cecile came through for Reggie. Idk y but I am kinda glad. Reggie in jail would be boring. Who is Thomsina to Joy? ANd Reggie wants his grandson, sounds like another campy plot which will be fun to see unfold.. Marley's craving and her scene with Vic and Tyrone was very nice. I'm excitedd for Tyrone and Marley and their baby. A very good show. Fast paced and I liked it.
  16. The Chancellor Estate Jill is looking at her brother William aka Snapper in the foyer. Nikki and Paul also look at William and are thrilled to see him. Each of them walks up to him and gives him a hug. Paul: Been a few years William. Wheres Jennifer? William: My daughter is on an internship. At least that what shes tell me. Nikki: Well its good to see you Snapper. What brings you to town? William looks at Jill. There is an odd tension in the air. Jill: Katherine asked him here. Nikki: Katherine? What are you talking about? Snapper: Brock called me. And- Katherine wanted William to be here today for Jill. Everyone hears looking at Brock walking over to them. Brock: Katherines will specifically states that it will be a life changing day for everyone in Genoa City but especially for Jill. Jill: What on earth is Katherine up to? Even from the grave that old bat knows how to put on a good show.   https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OYAatw0fKzM Episode 154: Karynn does the Unthinkable!! Written and Produced by ML Cooks Creative Consults: Martin Saenz, C. Nate Richardson, Robb Wolff, Alex Washington-Beebs, with Casey Hutchinson     GC Nights Daniel walks inside and grabs a seat at the bar. Tyler, the bar tender walks over to him after finishing cleaning the last glass beer mug. Tyler : Whats up man? A little early in the day to be at the bar dont you think? I havent seen you this upset since 2001, remember when we played Fairlawn High. The biggest game of the season that year, I was the star quarter back. Daniel: And we freaking lost. Tyler: One of them type of days? Daniel: Even worse. My crazy babys momma just got a job at some start up fashion house. Shes trying to get custody of my daughter. Tyler: You mean that girl Daisy you was telling me about? Daniel: Yes that would be that one. Certified whack job. Tyler: She got a job so what. Daniel: Well we were at this job fair at House of Kem. Daisy walks out and says shes hired. So when it was my turn to walk in for my interview I informed Mr. Abbott of what kind of person Daisy really is. He instead shows me the door. He didnt hire me but yet hires her. I dont understand what she said to him for this to happen. Im mad because it proves she is on a mission to take Lucy from me. She pulled the wool over Keemos eyes and there is no telling who will be next. Tyler: Ah yea man. Not good. So you tried to tell this Keemo guy Daisy is a bad person and instead he shows you the door. Daniel: Yes, he says I represent to much negativity and drama and his new company is about some garbage about second chances. Tyler hands Daniel a double shot of Hennessey. Daniel drinks it up. Tyler: You needed that bro. Its all bad for you. Daniel: And my loud mouth mother has decided to move in my house. Its so frustrating. Let me get another one of those. Tyler fixes Daniel another double shot of Hennessey. Tyler: Sounds to me you need to pound some cakes. Daniel : Pound cakes? Tyler : Ah man come on. You know what I mean. You need a lady in yo life. You know knock some boots. Youre tense. Daniel: Yea it has been a while. Maybe I can release some of this tension Ill have a clearer head. Tyler: Now youre talking. Daniel: I know you got some ladies in your black book. You had a new girl every week in high school. Tyler smiles. Tyler: I did. Some good some bad. But bro, I dont hand out my bunnies. Daniel: Bunnies? Tyler: Thats what I call them. They both laugh as Tyler fixes Daniel another drink.       Outside the bar. Van is sitting in the car looking at her make up making sure everything is ok in her compact mirror. She has a flashback of Daisy telling her she went to see Lauren and now Daisy thinks Lauren is stalking them. Vandalynn realizes that if Lauren is stalking them her cover as a Carter may have been blown. Im going to do this to teach you a lesson Daisy. You ruined things for me. Now you must pay. But in the end it could help you. So its not all bad. Its a win-win She says out loud. Then her personal conversation with herself is interrupted when her cell phone rings. The caller id says Momma Bear. Vandalynn: Hello mother. Sheila: Hows my baby girl? Van: Im ok and things are progressing well. I have to keep Daisy in line. In fact youre interrupting me. Sheila: Daisy? What is going on Mary? Van: Mom I really cant talk now. I promise I will call you as soon as Im done. Van hangs up the phone. If momma bear finds out that Lauren may be stalking us she will go ballistic. I have to get things back on track. For the family. She says still talking to herself. Van gets out her car and walks inside GC Nights bar.     Back at the Estate Jill: William do you know what is going on? William: No I dont. Only what Brock has told me. Jill: Well Brock surely you must know what Katherine is up to? Brock: I only saw the guest list. I have not looked in the will. When I read it, it will be the first time for me just like for everyone else. Jill looks at Nikki. She hides her fear by launching an attack on Nikki. Jill: Whats the matter Nikki? You looked worried. Afraid Ill get everything. Nikki: You would be the one to think about the material things at a time like this. Jill: But isnt that why we all are here? Nikki rolls her eyes at Jill and then walks into the living room with Paul. Then Chance walks in the front door. William turns around and sees his nephew. William: My God boy. I dont even recognize you. Come here you handsome devil you. Greg engulfs Chance in a hug. Chance: Its good to see you too great Uncle William. William So you home here for awhile? Not over there in the Middle East? Jill: And I am glad about that. Iraq is a mess. It so dangerous. To bad I wasnt able to talk any sense into Billy. William: Yea in your last letter you were telling me he went to Sochi Russia? Jill: Ill never understand it. But Ill support my son in any decision he makes. William: So Chance how long you here for are you going back? Chance: No, Im on r and r. Theirs been a compromising situation. So- Nina then walks over to save her son from explaining any further his situation with his missing woman in Iraq. Nina: Chance, Im sorry to interrupt. But I need to speak to you privately. Jill: Uh Nina youre being rude. My brother was having a conversation with him. Nina: Oh Im sorry Snapper. Please forgive me. Nina ushers Chance off the scene. Jill: I never did like her. I dont know what my son saw in her. William: Be nice Jill. You seem to argue with everyone.     Back at GC Nights Vandalynn takes a few seats down from Daniel. Tyler walks over to her and thinks he remembers her. Tyler: What is a pretty woman like you doing here this time of day? Van: Oh, Im just on the hunt. Besides, the sun is starting to set so its not to early. Tyler: What can I get you? Van: Long Island, light ice. Tyler: Right up. As Tyler makes her Long Island Daniel looks at Van. Van looks at him. She smiles at him, and he smiles back. Then they look away from each other. Tyler hands Van her drink. Van: Thank you. Tyler: You know I know just about every face that comes in here. You been in here before? Van then has a flashback of meeting with Noah here at the club then taking him to her car and having sex with him. Van: No this is my first time being here. And If I was here before I would remember your face. Tyler: My face? Whats that supposed to mean? Van: Your sexy silly. Those eyes, they just draw you in. I never been with a man of color but I would certainly let you be my first. Tyler: Wow. You dont be around the bush. Van: Im sorry. I tend to come on strong. Besides this long island is great. Can I get another? Tyler: Sure. Tyler makes up another Long Island. Van looks at Daniel. Daniel can sense she is looking at him and he looks at her. This time she winks at him. She smiles as Tyler hands her the 2nd long island of the day. Tyler: I make it a policy not to sleep with the customers. It can get messy and I aint got that to do. Van: I understand. Tyler walks over to Daniel. He leans in closer to him so he can whisper to him. Tyler: Yo bro. Shes hot. And shes hungry. Daniel: Hungry? Really? Tyler: Im telling you bro. Shes hungry. She wants the D. This is yo chance. Give her what she wants. You got to release some of that stress. Daniel looks at Van again. Daniel: Send her another drink on me. Tyler smiles at Daniel and then fixes Van her third long Island. After Tyler serves the Long Island, Van grabs her drink and takes the seat next to Daniel.     Back at the Estate Nina and Chance are off in a corner by themselves. Chance: Thanks for saving me. I really didnt want to tell great Uncle William about my situation in Iraq. Nina: Its ok honey. Are you ready to talk to me about it yet? Philip then walks up to them. Philip: What is going on here? Nina: Greg is here and was questioning Chance about Iraq. I know Chance is going through something so I pulled him aside so he wouldnt have to deal with it because its obviously very uncomfortable for him. But your mother of course had things to say. Philip: Yea I bet she did. Ill talk to her. So son, everything ok or what? Chance: No dad. The woman I love is missing. But I finally did tell the family. So that part of the mission is accomplished. Nina: Well good honey. That is a good thing. Does that mean you are ready to talk about it? Philip: Nina dont push him. Nina: Philip this our son. I love him and I want to know what is going on. Chance: Will you two stop? You are making it worse. Im going through so much right now. Listen, after the will, we will sit down and we will talk about it. Philip: Son are you sure? You dont have to because your mother is nagging you about it. I respect the time you need. Nina: And what the hell are you trying to do, compete with me for brownie points with Chance? If he wants to tell us then let him. We have to help our son. Philip: Nina Im just saying we should not push him if hes not ready. Chance: You guys are treating me like Im 16. Relax. When this will reading is over we will talk. Everyone begins to hear sirens blaring up the drive. It catches everyones attention. Fire trucks appear in the distance as Paul, Nikki, Jill, William, Nina, Philip, Chance, Neil, Devon, Brock and Mac pushing Karl in his wheel chair walk outside to see what the commotion is all about. The Neighbor lady runs across the yard and approaches Jill. Jill: Mrs. Ackerman what is going on? Mrs: Ackerman: That was the old neighbor my child. I am Sister Patterson, an agent of God. With the no burning ordinace here in the city due to this devil induced drought, I knew something vial was at hand.I saw the devil's smoke over here in your yard and I called the crime stoppers to come here and put the devil's smoke out. It's evil here. I am on the battlefield for my God. We must stop this evilness. I got my holy water and I'm ready to douse the flames from lucifer. Jill gives the sister a crazy look Jill: Uh yea ok. Sister Patterson: We all need to battle these flame of evilness. Start praying my child. I'm going to help these firemen make a holy water concoction, that regualr water won't help. I have the tools of mass holiness for this situation. Lawd have mercy." Sister Patterson walks away towardss the firefighters and Jill rejoins the other house guests standing in a group watching the scene unfold wondering what kind of neighbors did Katerine have. The fire trucks pull up and the fire fighters rush to the back of the estate where the smoke is rising from. Everyone wonders what is going on as they rush to the back of the Estate. They are stunned to see Karynn sitting on a big rock grilling hot dogs over a make shift fire pit while using a shopping cart as a grill. In her hand is half empty bottle of gin. In the other hand is a cigarette, She takes a swig of her gin and a puff on her cancer stick and decides her fire needs some spicing up, so she douses the make shift fire with her gin. The fire flares up and it and it knocks Karynn to the ground. The gin bottle shatters near the fire as she makes impact on the ground. The liquor trail then catches on fire, following the surrounding grass with help from the still lit cigarette. All of this happens in an instant of a few seconds. Everyone screams out as fire fighters rush over to get Karynn out of harms way. The fire men grab the hoses and begin to put out the flames.     GC Nights bar Van sips on her long Island sitting next to Daniel. Van: Thank you for the drink. Daniel: Youre welcome. Ive never seen you around here. Pretty thing like you I would never forget. Your like a blonde bombshell Van: Im new into the city. Making a new life for myself. Im just so lonely here. I have no friends. She says with a seductive smile as she puts her hand in his lap so she can squeeze and feel on Daniels manhood. Daniel almost chokes on his drink at the sudden surprise. Van: I see you are excited to meet me. Daniel: Wow. You go straight for it huh? Van: What are you trying to say? A girl gets hungry some times if you know what I mean. Daniel: I do. I just never met a woman who is so- Van: Sure of herself. Daniel: I guess you can say that. Van: What can I say? Im not ashamed of sex. Isnt that what all men think about? Daniel: Not all men. Van continues to massage his erected penis getting a good feel for the length and width. She is turned on. Van: I like what you have in there. Daniel: What do you want to do with it? Van: Follow me and I can show you. Daniel nods his head, thinking of what its going to be like to release his soldiers of love that have been trapped for so long inside of this beautiful blonde bombshell before him. He smiles at her as she gets up, a little wobbly at first but gains her composure. Daniel: Too many Long Islands? Van: I want your long Island. She grabs his hand and then drags him out the bar. Tyler smiles at the situation happy his good buddy from high school bout to knock some boots. He thinks about Van and is sure he saw her there before.   Just as Van and Daniel walk out Roxanne and Daisy walk in and grab a seat at the bar.   Van and Daniel decide to walk hand in hand as the sun is setting in Genoa City. Van: Im so horny that Long Island has me feeling some type of way. This happens every time I drink. She stops their walk and talk and faces him. He looks at her and then she grabs him and kisses him passionately. As they kiss, the mystery person, out of their car and on foot this time is watching Vandalynn kiss Daniel. This time we know for sure its not Daniel who is stalking the Carter girls. The mystery person begins to take pictures of Vandalynns make out session with Daniel.   Chancellor Grounds The fire has spread so quickly thanks to the alcoholic accelerant and with mother nature at play with very dry ground due to a recent drought in the state, the fire has now caught up to the Chancellor House itself. Fire fighters call in for support as the estate is quickly becoming engulfed in flames. Everyone is just stunned as they watch the Chancellor Estate burning. Karl: I have oxygen tanks in the house. I hope they put those flames out. And wait a minute, where is that old maid? Karynn: Esther! Jill: Esther! Oh my God Esther! Where is Esther? Then The Chancellor Estate explodes!. aMLCproduction
  17. Oh no. As much as I despise Eric Marstolff's Brady I now feel bad for him but in a way he brought this on himself. Good episode. This is gonna be big. I can't wait to see this fall out. I really enjoy that JJ's onto Liam. Liam is def hiding something and it was nice to know that Laura is moving back to Salem. I love her. I also liked how Maggie tried to reason with Victor. Again I like both sides of the angles being played. It really gives Vic and Magg real conflict and you are also making me care for the company itself, Great job AL!!. Stefano's laugh. It was great opening up the show with him. it's was kinda eerie. Gabi, a bore.
  18. Reggie is revealing secrets and was expecting the po po to show up. I bet he is not done. I wonder how KC will handle the truth. I loved how Ceceil came onto the scene. I had to LOL at Carl's foundness of Rachel's hair. I mean she been wearing that same style forever and he's entranched with it. ANd them kaing love, did any of them need a viagra or soemthing. Sorry CaryU know how I feel about Rachel but it was nice to see them explore their romantic side. And i wonder how will Michele's return to town will affect Vicky and Jake.
  19. Wow. Cary outsanding. I have a lot of comments so with out further delay The epiosde construction itself was great. It was so nice to see the Wintrop family come together for Charlie. The stipper was a nice surprise. It was nice seeing Felicia and Frankie bond. I love that new opening. A lot better than the high school edition. The scenes with Sharlene and John were powerfull on the scale that Jake and Vickys were a few weeks ago. Sharlene is at her wits end and threaten to end her marriage. I'm glad she is getting the courage to stand up and deal with the truth. John needs to be truthful esp if that what Sharlene wants. Than the angle wit Mitch. Very good stuff. Felicia and Mitchs scenes were great. I loved their exchange. I hope this is the start for FEFE's new story Nice touch with the Vanity 6 song. Really went well with the scene. I could hear the song in my head and imagine what that "nasty girl" was doing" Kirk didnt seem to mind. I thought he would get all weird about it. And a very touching scene at the end with Vicky covering up Jake. So very nice and so impactful. Another packed episode of AW and I loved every minute of it cary Great job bro!!
  20. Wow another home run. I really enjoyed the catty exchanges between Theresea and Chloe. Spot on. I am really enjoying your version of Theresea and I think I am starting to root for her. Chloe needs to mind her own damn buisness. Gabi/Nick/Will/Sonny- I think this story needs a punch. I'm a little tired of Will and Sonny always berating Gabi. Its like the rest of your stories are moving but this one seems a bit on a puase button. I enjoy Nick more in his story with the ener next. I dont know what you are going to do with Gabi and Nick but I never been a huge fan of Gabi. ALso very much enjoyed Maggie and Victor's scenes. It is so good to see him actually taking care of his company loved it and the tension it cuased with Maggie with her stance on things. It was great!! I love JJ and I love Laura. JJ pointed out some small but very important tidbits about Liam. I bet it comes into play later. Al ur series is really picking up. It's always the first one I read in my marathon
  21. Chancellor Estate, Karls Room, Bathroom Karl is sitting in a warm bath enjoying the clean surroundings and the feel of a hot bath. Mac turns on the power jets. Karl moans and continues to relax. Karl : This feels good. Thank you my angel. Mac: Youre welcome. Mac watches the frail old man relax. She decides to start her line of questioning. Mac: So I think we should get to know one another since you and Karynn claim you are grandmas brother and sister. Karl: Its true angel. Katherine is our older sister. Im the youngest of the three. Mac: How were you all separated? Grandma never told us she had siblings. Karl: Our parents, Walter and Edna Mae could only afford to take care of one child. Walter was injured in the last year of the war in France that rendered him disabled. Edna Mae and Walter had Kay in 1928 a year before the depression. The financial strain of Walters disability and raising Kathy put a strain on them. By the time Karynn and I came along, there was no hope for us. They kept Katherine, and gave up both me and Karynn. We learned about it when we were about 21. We were so busy, caught up in our own lives, and didnt understand how our birth parents kept Kathy but gave us up. Mac: Kathy? Karl: Thats what we called her over time. We, especially Karynn resented the fact that our parents chose Katherine over us. Its how she feels. Mac: Wow, I dont know what to say. Was there no help from the government to help you and the family out? Karl: Angel we are talking different times. We didnt have things like social security or programs, or even veteran benefits. Karynn and I were born after the depression hit. There was no money anywhere. Mac: Incredible. So much history here. Karl: Yes. Army wages arent what they are now back then. Not only that, I learned that Edna Mae was also taking care of her sick mother and brother as well. So with all of that, they gave us up unable to afford to care for us. Not to mention the depression hit. We were born a few years fresh from the depression. Edna Mae and Walter sold Karynn and I for money just as the depression tighten its grip on the family into the black market in order to pay for surmounting medical bills and just to barely get by. Mac: Im very sorry to hear. Karl: So am I. Our adoptive parents were killed back in the bayou when we were just about ten, Karynn was 11, shes a year older than me Mac: The bayou you mean New Orleans. Karl: Correct. Karynn and I remained very close ever since, we had to fend for ourselves in foster care. Though she got married and had a family of her own as I did too, we remained close, through everything her divorce and then losing my wife to hurricane Katrina. Angel weve been through a lot. Mac: It shows.     http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sY5fhF-Lth8 Episode 153: Karl Sheds Light on his Connection to Kay Written and Produced by ML Cooks Creative Consults: Martin Saenz, Nate Richardson, with Alexander Washington Beeby and Rob Wolff and also Casey Hutchinson     Newman Tower, House of Kem Daisy walks into the lobby where Mason greets her. Mason : Ms. Carter, thank you for stopping back in today. Im very sorry about what happened when you came yesterday, as you can see this job fair has turned up a lot of prospects. Daisy: No problem. I thank you for taking the time out to hear my story. Mason: If you will have a seat over there- He says pointing to where other job seekers are sitting. Mason: Ill tell Mr. Abbott you are here. Daisy: Thank you Mr. McCreedy. Mason: Please, its Mason. Daisy smiles and looks for a seat next to the other job seekers. In the crowd she sees Roxanne, Noah and Scotty. She grabs a seat next to Roxanne. They smile at each other. Daisy begins to make small talk to pass the time up. Daisy: I was here yesterday and you could barely get in. Roxanne: I know. I came in too. I hear they are hiring for everything. Daisy: I hope so. I need a job so I can get my daughter back. Roxanne: Where is she? Daisy: My babys father has her and wont let me see her. Roxanne: Im sorry to hear that. I wish you all the luck here today. Daisy: Thank you. Noah makes small talk to Scotty. Noah: Scotty its been a long time since Ive seen you. Where you been? Scotty: Oh here and there. Protecting my mom from a crazy criminal. He says as he shoots Daisy a look. Daisy rolls her eyes at Scotty. Noah: Ah I get it now. Hows your mom doing? Scotty: Shes good. Tough as ever. Noah: Im surprised you are here considering your mother runs her own fashion house at Fenmores. Scotty: Well I want to branch out and make a name for myself. Noah: Yea same reason Im here. To do my own thing. You got designs or something? Scotty: No but I was hoping to model or do some executive works. Then Daniel walks in. He looks at the job applicants. Noah gets up to greet him. Noah: Danny boy, how you been bro? Daniel: I was ok until my psycho baby mothers decided to foot loose it from jail. Daisy stands up in outrage. Daisy: I have a right to be here! Im trying to get my life together for my daughter. You are harassing me Daniel. I came in here like a respectful adult and look at you, acting childish. You too Scotty. Scotty: Yea well you just better leave my mother alone. Daisy: Your mother attacked me! But Im not here for that. Roxanne: Whoa guys. I think we all need to relax. Daisy here was minding her own business. Daniel: Roxanne you have no idea what this crazy ass Bitch is capable of. Roxanne: Now thats enough! Im not going to sit here and let you disrespect her like that. Like she said she came in here peacefully and respectfully. Shes trying to get her life back on track, but your not giving her a chance to do that and how dare you call the mother of your child a bitch? Daniel: And who the hell are you? Roxanne gets up out her chair and approaches Daniel. Noah jumps in front of the two. Noah: This has gotten outta hand. Daisy pulls Roxanne back. Daisy: Please dont get in trouble for me. I can handle Daniel. Im just going to ignore him and let him look like an ass by himself. Roxanne: Its ok girl. Sounds like you need some team mates on your team. These men trying to bully you. Mason walks out Keemos office. Mason: Ms. Carter, Mr. Abbott will see you now. Daisy looks at Noah, Danny and Scotty and smiles. Daisy: Wish me luck boys. Roxanne: Gone head girl. Ill be waiting for you. Daisy: Thank you. Daisy enters Keemos office as Daniel looks at Roxanne. Roxanne: Problem? Daniel: Keep your nose out my business. Roxanne: Stop harassing my friend. Daniel: Oh shes your friend now? Roxanne: Thats right. So stay the hell away from her! Daniel scoffs at Roxanne and takes a seat a few rows further back and Noah follows.     Back at the Chancellor Estate Nina walks into Karls room. Nina: What is going on around here? People are beginning to show up for the will reading and Karynn is still asleep down stairs on the couch snoring up a storm. There is an empty bottle of Tequila in her lap. Philip: Shes passed out. We found Karl up here by himself sitting in his bodily fluids. Mac is in the bathroom now trying to get him cleaned up while getting to know him. Brock then enters the bedroom with the wheel chair. Nina: This is absolute madness. So while Karynn is drinking bottles of Tequila downstairs Karl is up here left to fend for himself? Brock: It looks that way. Nina: This has to stop. We have to do something. Brock: Mac wants me to ask for blood test. Nina: I think its a good idea. Philip: I do to Brock. This whole situation is bizarre. Katherine never mentioned having a brother or sister ever. Brock: But Esther knows them. She knew exactly who Karynn was when she arrived. Nina: So what does that mean? Brock: Esther knows more about Katherine then we do I guess I dont know. Then their conversation is stopped when Mac opens the door. Mac: Hes ready to get back in his chair. Brock: Ok then I have it right here all cleaned up. Brock pushes the wheel chair into the bathroom as Philip follows to help Brock lift Karl back in it. Nina can do nothing but look on in disbelief.     Outside in the driveway Nikki and Paul steps out of a black limo as Jill gets out her Lexus as both cars have arrived at the same time. Nikki: Thank you Paul for coming here with me for support. I couldn't get through Kays will reading alone. Victoria has her hands full and- Paul then engulfs Nikki in a hug. Paul: You dont need to make excuses. I had to come anyway. I have the final report on Katherine and Tuckers death and Ive been asked to share the details here. But the limo was a bit much; I could have driven my truck over here. Jill walks over to them Jill: Who do you think you are Krystal Carrington or something pulling up in a limo? Nikki: A bad day Jill, again? Jill: Funny how timely you are here but you took your sweet ass time getting to the hospital after I told you Kay was on her deathbed. Paul: Jill thats enough. We dont need that today. Jill: When Kay needed Nikki, where was she? Drinking at the club. Nikki: I wasnt and am not drinking Jill. You got a lot of nerve showing your face here. How many husbands of Katherines did you sleep with? Jill: What happened to Jack? Youre with Paul now? Moving fast Nikki. Slow down on those drinks. Nikki: Its none of your business what goes on in my personal life. Youre the one who needs a man, maybe you wouldnt be such a bitch if you had one. Come on Paul lets go. Nikki and Paul walk off. Jill chuckles as she follows them inside.     House of Kem Daisy takes a seat in front of Keemos desk. Keemo: Thank you for stopping back in today Ms. Carter. I was not expecting such a turn out for our job fair yesterday. Daisy: I just thank you for giving me this opportunity to speak with you. Keemo: Great, let me tell you about what House of Kem is. Its a start up fashion house that plans to rival Jabot, Forrester Creations, and Fenmores. Daisy: Fenmores does have nice fashions and accessories. Keemo : Im glad you think so. Im aiming to make young people look beautiful. This is sort of like a second chance for me and its why Im considering hiring you Daisy. Daisy: Really? Keemo: I read your letter. I was touched and I really sympathize with your plight to put your family back together. Im sorry to hear about what Lauren did to your family. Daisy: Its ok, Im just trying to move past it and get my life back together. Keemo : I have many various positions open. Do you think you can help make the designs? Daisy: I will do just about anything you want me to do as long as its legal. Keemo: Everything is legit here. Tell you what, I have your information here, and I need to put a new team in place as we are starting from just about scratch. So let me do these last few interviews and talk over with Mason Ill be in touch soon. Daisy: So Im hired? Keemo : Yes. Daisy is so overwhelmed with joy she has tears in her eyes. Daisy: Youve answered my prayers Mr. Abbott. Im sorry forgive me. Keemo : Its ok. Im glad I can give you this chance. I believe in you Daisy. Daisy: Thank you so much. I wont let you down. Daisy gets up and heads out the office with tears in her eyes. Roxanne, Noah, Nick, and Scotty look at her. Daniel: Well looks like you didnt get the job. Scotty: I knew this place wouldnt hire a psycho like you. Roxanne gets up and walks over to her and put her arm around her. Daisy daps her eyes dry and looks at all three of the guys. She smiles. Daisy: I start Monday. Roxanne screams out in joy and hugs Daisy. They jump around in excitement. Scotty: They hired you? This place must be desperate. Daniel: No worries Scotty, after I get done talking with Mr. Abbott, Daisy will be out on her ass before she even gets started. Roxanne: You a hater! Forget him Daisy. She says looking at her. Roxanne: Im up next and once I get hired, cuz I know I will, well go have a few drinks. Daisy: Sounds good. Roxanne looks at all three men and rolls her eyes at all three of them and then walks into Keemos office for her interview. Daniel gets up and approaches Daisy. Daniel: This little sympathy act your pulling right here, yea well its not going to work. You are not going to get my daughter. Never. Ever! Not in a million years. Daisy: You also said I was never getting out of jail yet here I am. Your life could be so much easier. Lets just be a family under one roof for our daughter and end all of this fighting. Lets do whats best for Lucy. Daniel: Whats best for Lucy is you as far away from her as possible. Im not going to let a lunatic like you raise a child of mine. Noah approaches Daniel Noah: Back off a little Daniel. Scotty: Noah you have no idea what this girl is capable of. Shes the daughter of Sheila Carter. That name alone is enough to tell you that Daisy Carter is bad news. Daisy: Kick me while Im down. Its all ok. I got a plan and I will get what I want. My family under one roof that includes you Daniel. Me, you and our baby girl. Daniel: I hope they drug test here because you are surely smoking something really good. Roxanne then walks out of Keemos office with a million dollar smile. Roxanne: Lets go party. Daisy smiles and with Roxanne they begin to walk out to the lobby where the elevators are. Back inside H.O.K Mason walks out of Keemos office. Keemo: Daniel Romalotti, Mr. Abbott will see you now. Daniel looks to Scotty Daniel: Good now I can put a stop to Daisys insane plan. Scotty: Good luck bro. Daniel walks into the office and the door closes behind him. Scotty and Noah are the only ones in the lobby. Scotty is looking at Noah, studying him. Noah can sense that Scotty is looking at him but is too afraid to get confirmation to find out for sure. Noah decides to glance at Scotty and he sees Scotty looking at him. Scotty winks at Noah. Noah frowns at Scotty and then he turns away so his side is facing Scotty. I dont think Noah is gay. Too bad, I would give him a good go. Scotty thinks to himself.     Back at The Chancellor Estate Devon, Neil, Nikki, and Paul all mingle in the foyer. Nina walks down the stairs and barges into the living room. Nina: Where the hell is she? Nikki: Karynn and Esther? Paul: I havent seen any of them since we got here. Something wrong? Everyone gasp when they see Brock and Philip carrying Karl down the stairs. Devon: What happened? Nina: That drunk Karynn. Has anyone seen her? Then the door bell rings. Jill standing closest to the door opens it. She nearly faints when she sees who is at the door. Jill: Snapper, big brother is that you? Snapper : Its me. Jill: Come here you. They hug. Jill: So good to see you where is Jennifer? Snapper: Dealing with her internship. Jill: This is a wonderful surprise what brings you here? Snapper: I was asked by Katherine. Jill: Wait, Katherine asked you here, she summoned you from the will? Snapper: Yes. Jill: Why on Gods green earth would Katherine summon you of all people to the will reading? Snapper: Brock told me you were going to need me. That something big was going to happen. Jill: What in hell is Katherine up to?
  22. Thank you for you feed back. Please tell me which characters and which lines where out of character? Choppy?...
  23. Really good show I was able to understand everything. But who is Traci and Nina to each other? Nina said no bums aloud lol I like what you did with Levi's story. Maxie's feelings for him, Lulu's reservations and now the phone call. Levi is def up to no good, that weird fellow. How did he come to town? Brad wrong for teasing Felix the way he is with his " Coulda been you." I liked felix kuz he held it together. What is the reason they are not together anyway?
  24. WOW!!! OUTSTANDING SHOW THey keep getting better and better, It really appears you are starting to make this show your own. And I am loving it. SO much to talk about Le'ts begin I liking Theresea more and more latley. Those club scenes were great and I just KNOW that vid of Brady doing coke will play a major part very soon. I hope Brady get's caught big time. Roman oh how I feel for him. It was cool he is able to understand that his memory isn't what it used to be but still a fighter at the end of the day. Such a heart breaking story. It could be a great story for Roman and Lord knows he needs something. It makes me feel something for Josh's Toman that I've never felt before. I can't explain it but its a good feeling. OO and Anne and Dumb ass Dan. Excellent writing those scenes. You really captured the moment and the intestiy of the moment. I felt everything Anne felt. Things are getting better and better and it shows that sticking to your gut, moving slow has really payed off in spades. These smaller mini explosing you are setting off are so meaningful and look at this shows numbers. GREAT WORK AL. You in there now!!!
  25. Chancellor Estate Brock and Mac descend the stairs together. Mac: A big day. Brock: Katherine’s will reading. I just know we are in for some surprises from Kay. Mac: I hope nothing bad. Brock: You never know.   http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I5esA39JvCk Episode 152: Meet Karl Sheppard, Kay’s Younger Brother Written and Produced by ML Cooks Creative Consults: Martin Saenz, Cary Richardson with Alexander Washington-beeby and Rob Wolf   Brock and Mac walk into the living room and see Karynn passed out on the couch. “Help! Help ME! Please anybody!” They both hear. Mac and Brock look at each other. Mac: That sounds like Karl. Mac then runs up the stairs and into Karl’s room. She immediately stops dead in her tracks when the essence of urine and feces attacks her nose. Karl turns his wheel chair to see who has entered his room. Karl: Please help me young lady. Where in the hell is my sister Karynn? I haven not eaten anything since lunch time yesterdee‘. I got medication to take. I’m dirty, I’m tired, and my back is killing me sitting in this wheel chair all day and night. Can you please help an old man like me out? Mac is flabbergasted looking at Karl and his condition. She’s feels extreme sadness and compassion. Mac: Karynn forgot about you? Karl: Yes that old drunken fool did. Tell me, is she passed out some where? Mac: In fact she is. Down stairs. Karl: Damn her. Mac: Let me go get some help. Mac leaves the room and calls out for Brock. She walks back into Karl’s room and opens a window. She then goes into the bathroom and fills the tub up with warm water. Mac: Don’t worry Karl, my dad and I will get you all fixed up. And I’m going to see to it, this doesn’t happen again! Karl: Thank you kind heart. It’s nice to be around some one who has compassion. Karynn is a bitter old drunken money hungry mess.       Mary Carter’s apt. Mary is in the full bath in her bedroom putting on make up and styling her hair. As she does she admires her own beauty. She remembers the nights of great sex with Noah in her car and Scotty in his mother’s bedroom. She feels victorious at her tawdry seductions. She then thinks of Daisy and her situation. Mary remembers she has a plan to help Daisy obtain her goals which is to reunite her family which includes Daniel. “I need to do this for Daisy so she can help in momma bear’s plan. She won’t focus on anything else but Daniel and Lucy. Once I do what I need to do to help Daisy in her cause only then can she get back on track with the Carter family plan.” She thinks to herself. “She may be mad at first but in time she will understand I did what I did for her.” She then says out loud as Daisy walks in. Daisy: Who are you doing what for? Mary looks at Daisy in the mirror and smiles. Daisy: What are you doing, transforming into Vandalynn mode? Mary: You could say something like that. Daisy: Well what are you up to now? Mary: Oh, I just need to help you get your family under one roof. Once I help you do that then you can switch your focus on momma bear’s plan. This is important for our family Daisy. We need you to help. Daisy: I know I know Mary, but I have a child now. I just want to be a good mother. Simply put. Besides we have other things that we need to worry about. Mary turns around to look at her. Mary: Like what? Daisy: Some one is stalking us.       Daniel’s House Phyllis is awoken when baby Lucy begins to cry. Phyllis: Daniel! She pauses and waits for a response. Phyllis: Damn it Daniel don’t you hear your daughter crying? Phyllis struggles to get up and put herself in her wheel chair but she manages using the techniques the physical therapist taught her in the rehabilitation facility. She wheels her self to the nursery and picks up baby Lucy and holds her. Lucy begins to quiet down. Phyllis calls out for Daniel again. She struggles but manages to push herself out into the living room with one hand on the baby the other on the wheel of the chair. She realizes Daniel is not home. Phyllis: Where the hell is Daniel at?       Neil’s Penthouse Neil answers a knock at the door. He opens and sees Devon. They hug. Neil: Devon my man, how are you? Devon: I’m ok. Today is the reading of Katherine’s Will. Neil: Yea I know I got your text last night. Devon: I appreciate you coming with me. I don’t know what to expect. Neil: Well what ever it is you take it and hold on to it. How was the service with Brock and Mac.? Devon: It was nice. We all needed that closure. Neil: Yes I agree. Brock and Mac were cool this time? Devon: Very. Brock explained things. He’s just not used to me be being a Chancellor. I can understand that beings that he really doesn’t live in Genoa City so he couldn’t see it everyday you know what I mean? Neil: I do son. I’m glad you were able to reach an understanding with your uncle and cousin. You have a lot of people that care about you. You will always be my son. No matter what. Devon: Thank you Neil. I do appreciate that. I take comfort in that. Knowing what Tucker did to Kay I just can’t imagine we have the same blood in our veins. I’m nothing like him and for him to be so cruel as to want to take out his own mother for material gain. It makes no sense to me. Neil: Let’s thank God you have no traits like Tucker McCall. Devon: Then that leaves Harmony. She’s not to much better. Neil: She did blow out of town kind of fast. I thought we were building something then poof- she’s gone. With a hand written good bye. Devon: But you moved on though, with Leslie? Neil: Well, I guess you can say we are dating. Malcolm isn’t to happy with that but what can you do about that? Malcolm hasn’t been happy in a long time. Devon: Sophia’s death really crushed him. I think a lot of his anger comes from that and your affair with her. Neil: And our son Moses. Devon I really do feel bad about that. I’m not proud of what I did to my little brother. But I don’t regret my son. Devon: I’m just saying I can understand Malcolm’s pain. Having the one you love cheat on you. Neil frowns at Devon picking up that Devon is talking about something else. Neil: Everything ok with you and Roxanne son? Devon: No offense Neil but I’m not trying to talk about Roxanne today. I just want to make it through this will reading and that crazy woman at the Chancellor Estate. Neil: What crazy woman? Devon: A woman claiming to be Katherine’s sister, Karynn. I’m telling you Neil she’s obnoxious and ignorant. Neil: I never knew Kay had siblings. I guess today we will learn more about Katherine then we ever knew. Devon: Your right.” They both leave his penthouse to head over to the Chancellor Estate.     At the Estate Brock walks into Karl’s room and is stopped when Karl’s body odor slaps his nose. Brock covers his face with his hand. Brock: What in God’s name happened in here? Karl looks down and begins to cry. Karl: I’m so sorry. I hate living like this, being like this. I can’t do for myself. Please forgive me. Mac gives Brock a “Shut your big mouth up” kind of look. Mac walks over to Karl and puts her arm around him. Mac: Karl we are gonna get you cleaned up and back to new again. Don’t worry about anything. Don’t feel like that please. Karl: Look at me. I’m a helpless shitty cripple. I got sh!t and piss all over me, I can’t clean myself. That is no way to live. I have to depend on a moody drunken old crow for my lively hood and half the time Karynn is passed out. I don’t want to go on. Please help me end it. Mac is overwhelmed and has tears in her eyes. She looks at Brock not believing what she is hearing. Brock: Karl I’m going to get Philip and we can help you get cleaned up. We will lift you into the tub and you can then relax. Mac: How does that sound Karl? Soak in a nice bubble bath and get the bloods flowing. We’ll get you some fresh clothes, and I’ll personally make you something to eat. I’m kinda of hungry myself. Everything is going to be ok I promise you. Karl cries. He holds her hand. Karl: Angel. Oh my angel. You are a sweet girl. I’m sorry I’m like this. Never get old you hear. It’s not nice. I can’t breath, I can’t hear, I can’t walk, I can’t control my bodily fluids, I ache all the damn time. It’s terrible. I don’t know what ever I did in life to end up like this. Mac thinks this could be an opportunity to talk with Karl to learn about who they “The Sheppard’s” really are. Mac: Maybe we can talk about it as I help you wash up? Karl: You wanna listen to me? Karynn always tells me to shut up. Mac: I’m going to take care of Karynn to. Don’t you worry about her. Philip and Brock walk back into the room. They push Karl into the bathroom and takes his shirt of. With Brock on the right and Philip on the left they both reach under Karl’s arms to stand him up as Mac undress his lower half of his body. Karl: I’m so sorry. A man who can’t control his body. You all are to kind. Philip: It’s ok Karl. We all need some help some times. Philip and Brock walk Karl over to the tub. They ease him into the nice bubble bath. Karl let out a few moans. Philip: Is the water to hot? Karl: No sir. It’s wonderful. You are all too kind. I am so grateful. Mac ushers Philip and Brock out of the bathroom Mac: Thank you guys so much. I got a plan. Philip: A plan for what? Mac: He’s much easier to talk to unlike that old crusty bat Karynn. He’s very vulnerable right now. I’m going to pick his brain just to find out what he and that monster is all about. I’m going to help him wash up and you know, chat with him. Brock: Sounds good. Philip: Yea, hear his side of everything. Maybe you can find out if they are imposters and then we can end this charade. Mac : Exactly. Philip: We’ll be right out here when you ready to put him back in the wheel chair. Mac: Tell you what, why don’t you clean and sanitize the wheel chair. We don’t want to put a clean body into a dirty wheel chair. Brock: I’ll take care of it. Mac then enters the bathroom with her mission for intelligence on the so called “Sheppard’s“.     Back at Mary’s Mary: Stalking us? Daisy: Yes, when I came home last evening I caught some one in a black car with binoculars looking up in the window at you. When I called out to them they just sped off. Mary: Watching me? Do you think it’s Victor? He did say he’d be watching us. Daisy: That old mumbling fool. I don’t think that’s Victor’s style. I bet you it was that Bitch Lauren. Mary: Why would you say that? Daisy: It would be like her to do something so sneaky yet cowardly like watching us. After our incident the other day, there is no telling what she will do. Mary: Damn it Daisy I told you not to go see her! I told you not to do anything rash. We don’t want people to know we are sisters. It would blow the lid off my cover. Scotty and Lauren doesn’t know I’m really Sheila’s daughter. I need to keep it that way for a bit longer. If it is Lauren then now she knows we are connected. Damn it! Daisy: Look I’m sorry. I had to let her know she didn’t win and she is going to pay for what she did to our family. Mary : You over played your hand. Momma bear is not going to like this. For someone who wants to only focus on her selfish ass plan instead of the Carter family plan you sure made one hell of a mess of things Daisy: I’m so sick of it always being about momma bear. I’m a mom too damn it! Look I have a job interview to get to and I can‘t be stressed or late. I’m taking your car thanks in advance and be careful. They both look out her bedroom window and look down at the street and see the black car with tinted windows. The person looking through their binoculars see that both Daisy and Van are looking at them and then speeds off from the scene once again. Daisy and Mary look at each other. Daisy: What did I tell you? Mary: Do you really think its Lauren? Daisy: Yes! Mary: Well you be careful going out then too. Daisy: I’m not worried about the red head this time. I got my stun gun and I’m going to fry that bitch. Daisy pulls it out and hit’s the on button. Mary jumps back with the loud flickering noise from the mini bolts of the electricity which scares her. Mary: I’ll be ok. I’m going to look the door until you get back. If any one is dumb enough to come up here then I got my gun. Daisy: Good girl. Carter girls always prepared. Daisy leaves as Mary locks up. She wonders if her cover as Vandalynn is compromised. Mary: Damn you Daisy! If you ruined things for me I swear I will get you back! She says out loud.     Lauren’s Apt The phone answers and Fenmore answers it. “No my mom is not here. I thought she was down there at the store. She was supposed to take me to summer camp at the “Y” Clerk: Strange. Lauren was supposed to open up this morning but we have not heard from her. We thought she overslept. Fenmore: That is odd, when I woke up she was not home. Then Lauren barges in with binoculars strapped around her neck. Fenmore looks at her in bewilderment. Fenmore: Never mind she just showed up. Fenmore hangs up the phone. Fenmore: Mom where have you been? What have you been doing with those binoculars? That was the store and you haven’t been there all morning. I’m late for summer camp we were supposed to leave an hour ago. You didn’t answer your cell. Lauren: Honey I’m sorry. I lost track of time. No time for questions. Let’s just get you to your summer camp. I’ll explain on the way to the Y. Fenmore follows Lauren out the door and onto the elevator. Fenmore studies his mom as the elevator travels down to the first floor. Fenmore: Mom are you ok? You look like you ran a marathon this morning. You’re distant. Lauren: There’s just a new store opening up down the street from Fenmore’s. I was trying to get a peek at what they were doing. Fenmore smiles as the elevator doors open and the walk over to Lauren’s car. Fenmore stops. Lauren: What’s the matter honey? Fenmore: The windows mom. When did you tint them and why are they so dark? First the gun, now the windows, the binoculars. Something is way off here. You’ve been acting very strange since Daisy showed up. What’s going on mom what are you doing?
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