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  1. Did you see the part where Cameron said "You made me sign those papers"...think back to when he was forced at gunpoint to sign papers divorcing Amanda....
  2. Is Phyllis going down stairs...is that when the producers replace Phyllis with a dummy? LMAO!!! J/K I could see her head bobbing up and down as her wheelchair is going down the stairs...LOL... Good set up with Sofia and her accident.. I like Harmony (I don't want no foolishness LOL)...You're showing that you have a great feel for your characters....
  3. ANOTHER WORLD EPISODE 51 Amanda demands answers ALLEN’S SUITE Allen answers the door and Amanda walks in. Allen: Amanda? Amanda: You’re gonna tell me what the hell is going on, and you’re gonna tell me right now. ----------------------------------------------------------------------- CASS’S HOUSE Cass opens the door. Cass: Frankie. Frankie: May I come in? Cass: Um…sure. Frankie: I have something I need to tell you. Cass: Is it something I should know with Charlie? Frankie: Well I’m going to Emma’s memorial, and I was hoping she could come. Cass: I’m sorry about Emma. Charlie’s not here but I’ll let her know. Frankie: Okay…thanks. Frankie turns around to leave but Cass stops her. Cass: Frankie. That’s not all you came for is it? Frankie: What I go through is none of your concern anymore. Cass: But I know when something’s wrong with you. What else is on your mind? Frankie (sighing): My life has been turned upside down. Cass: How so? Frankie: Right before Emma passed away, she told that she was not my mother. My biological mother’s eggs were implanted in her. Cass: Wow. Frankie I’m so sorry you’ve had to go through this alone. Why didn’t you call? Nicole walks out with towels wrapped around her body and her hair. Nicole: Cass can you tell me where the blow dryer is? Frankie. Hi. Frankie is in shock as she looks at Nicole, and then at Cass. Frankie: What the hell is she doing in here? Nicole: It’s not what you think Frankie. Frankie: Cass, I don’t want this bitch anywhere near our daughter! ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ST CROIX Evan walks into a room with a guard and a gun. He approaches Cameron Sinclair. Cameron: You sick freak. Evan (laughing): You never deserved Amanda. Nobody has ever deserved her. Not Sam, not you, and definitely not Allen Love. Cameron: Allen Love. Evan: You didn’t know? Amanda has moved on. You divorced her remember? Cameron: You forced me to sign those papers! Evan: You’re a two timing bastard. I did her a favor! CAMERA PAN ON EVAN…FADE TO THEME SONG http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E6t7udjee_8 ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ALLEN’S SUITE Allen: Amanda I told you to stay out of it! Amanda: Absolutely not! Not after I posted your bail! You’re not the kind of person who would orchestrate this scheme. Someone had to have helped you! Allen: Amanda I’m so grateful for what you’ve done for me, and being in my life. I didn’t expect…. Amanda: Expect what? Allen: Expect to get feelings for you. You’re so beautiful. You’re so smart. I don’t want to hurt you. The less you know the better. Amanda (getting frustrated): I’m sick and tired of this game you’re playing. If you felt anything for me, you would tell me what the hell is going on! Allen: I told you at the jail. I’m protecting my mother. She will be put in danger if I tell what’s going on. Amanda: Your mother? Who is she? Allen: Amanda you have to go. Amanda: No dammit. I need some answers. Allen grabs her by the arm and escorts Amanda out the door. Allen painfully shuts the door, as he has to keep Amanda in the dark about Reginald and Iris being behind the Cory Publishing takeover scheme. Amanda bangs on the door. Amanda: Allen! Please! Let me help you! Allen opens the door again, pulls Amanda in, and kisses her passionately. -------------------------------------------------------------------------- CASS’S HOUSE Nicole: Frankie let me explain. Frankie: You don’t have to explain anything. You’re an evil witch, and I don’t want you anywhere near Charlie. Cass: Charlie’s my daughter, too. I assure you that Nicole will not hurt Charlie, or anyone else. Nicole: I’m not that person anymore Frankie. Frankie: Well I’m not convinced. You’re capable of anything. You let Felicia take the rap for my uncle’s murder! Nicole: I know I’ve done some horrible things to you and people you care about, and I am very sorry Frankie, but I’ve gotten the help I’ve needed. I’m not that person anymore. Frankie: Cass I don’t know what the hell you’re thinking by letting her shack up in here. Nicole if you hurt my daughter I swear to God I will make you pay! ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Amanda is in Allen’s bed. She wakes up and notices that Allen is gone. “What the hell is going on with you Allen?” she says to herself. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ST CROIX Cameron: She did herself a favor by letting you go. Evan (laughing again): You’re so amusing. You slept with your Josie and got her pregnant didn’t you? And then you kept the truth from Amanda. Cameron: And we still got married. I love Amanda, and she loves me still. Evan: Then why did you just…disappear? Cameron: To find you! You shot Grant, and you killed Paulina’s husband. Evan: And you divorced her! Too bad she won’t be able to move on with Allen Love. He should be facing corporate espionage charges, thanks to the little package I sent Rachel. Cameron (shaking his head): If you hurt Amanda I swear I'll... Evan: You’ll what? Kill me? If you ever get outta here alive. FREEZE FRAME ON EVAN….SLOW FADE OUT…END OF EPISODE 51
  4. GOOD EPISODE!! Every scene drew me in. Love the cute Fenmore/Scotty thing...humorous yet serious... Malcolm and Leslie love their interactions, too...genuine and real... The MWs get interesting...
  5. THE 50TH EPISODE OF ANOTHER WORLD GRANT’S HOUSE Grant answers the door, and gets an unexpected visitor. Grant: Toni Burrell. Toni: May I come in? Grant: Sure. Toni: I’m gonna get right to the point. I have to ask you some questions about Dr. Taylor’s murder. Grant: Ask away I…I will do anything I need to do to bring the killer to justice. Toni: Really Grant? Grant: Yes. Toni: Well you can start by telling me why you were depositing large amounts of money in Dr. Taylor’s bank account. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- HUDSONS HOUSE John is there with Gregory. Greg: Any leads on mom? John: The police haven’t said anything. I haven’t been able to sleep. Greg: Well we need to light a fire under their asses and get them looking for her. John: They’re doing all they can I’m sure. Greg: Well it’s not enough dad. Whoever’s got mom could be doing God knows what to her. John: Don’t you think I know that Gregory? I think about that all the time! Whoever killed Dr. Taylor has got her. Why? Someone knocks on the door, and John answers it…it’s Jack Snyder. John: May I help you? Jack (holding up his badge): I’m Jack Snyder, Chief of Detectives at the Bay City PD. I need to ask a few questions about Dr. Taylor’s murder. Greg (wheeling himself to the door): What? My dad didn’t kill anyone! You need to be looking for my mother! --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ROOM Sharlene wakes up, and she’s lying on a bed. She sees a ceiling fan…and a man standing over her with a gun. Sharlene: Where the hell am I? Oh my God. Evan? Evan: Hello Aunt Sharlene. Welcome to St. Croix. CAMERA PAN ON SHARLENE….SLOW FADE TO THEME SONG http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E6t7udjee_8 ------------------------------------------------------ GRANT’S HOUSE Grant: What’s wrong with investing? Toni: We took a lot at a month’s worth of surveillance footage. He didn’t have that many patients, so it’s a wonder how he stayed in business. What did he have on you Grant? Grant: Do you think it’s inappropriate for you come to my home accusing me of something. Toni: I haven’t accused you of anything. I simply asked a question. Was Dr. Taylor blackmailing you or something? Grant: Are you trying to establish motive Lieutenant? Dr. Taylor was a college friend of mine, and I was simply helping him out. Toni: If I was a millionaire I still wouldn’t buy that. Grant: You can choose to purchase anything, but I did not kill Benjamin Taylor. Toni: Can you tell me where you were at the time of his murder? Grant: You don’t know? I was announcing my candidacy for Mayor of Bay City. Toni: It doesn’t mean you couldn’t have hired someone. Grant: If you want to fish, go to the lake, but don’t do it in my house. I had nothing with Dr. Taylor’s death. --------------------------------------------------------------------- HUDSONS HOUSE John: Gregory, why don’t you go in the kitchen? Greg: You didn’t kill anybody dad! They need to be out there looking for mom! John: I can handle this. Just go in the kitchen. Jack (watching Greg go in the kitchen): I know that you’re worried about your wife’s whereabouts. I want you to know that we’re working on finding her. John: I think my son’s right. Have you got any leads? Jack: No. Nothing. That’s why I’m here. John: Wait a second…you think I had something to do with this? I would NEVER do that to my wife! Jack: What about Dr. Taylor? She was seeing him as his patient, and the surveillance footage shows you going in and out of his office a couple of times, and you were NOT his patient. John: I had no reason to kill Dr. Taylor. Jack: Why were you going in and out of his office? Did it have something to do with Sharlene? John: He was treating her, and I didn’t want her to remember. Jack: Remember what? John: Grant was shot a few years ago, and Joe Carlino was murdered, and I didn’t want her ever to remember. Jack: She knows who the shooter is? John: It was buried in her subconscious, and I pleaded with Dr. Taylor to make sure she doesn’t remember. Jack: Why would you even want that? John: Because it’s probably the reason why she’s missing, and the reason Dr. Taylor is dead. You’re barking up the wrong tree. I didn’t kill Dr. Taylor, and whoever’s responsible for his death, may also have my wife. ---------------------------------------------------------------------- ST CROIX Sharlene: Why did you bring me here? Evan: You know why. Sharlene: No I don’t! Evan (looking into her eyes): Look closer. Sharlene: Oh my God. It’s you! Evan: That’s right. It’s me. Sharlene: You killed Joe Carlino. Why? He was a decent man. Why did you kill him? Evan: He was getting too close. He knew about the scheme that I was a part of. Sharlene: A scheme? Evan: Yes. I shot Grant so he can win more votes, and Joe was about to uncover the whole scheme, that’s why I had to get rid of him. I had to carry this plan out. Sharlene: What plan? What are you talking about? Evan: I’m finishing what I started years ago…when I first came to Bay City. Sharlene: Revenge? Evan: That’s it! My mother should not have died, and everyone who turned on her is going to pay. Don’t you want justice for your sister? Sharlene: She was plotting to kill Mac Cory. What does Grant have to do with this anyway? He had nothing with Janice’s death. Evan: My plan was going to cost me, and he’s got money. Sharlene: Whatever it is you’re planning you’ve got to stop it before someone else gets hurt. If you let me go, I can help you. Evan (taking out a pair of handcuffs): No can do Auntie. I’m GOING to finish what I started, and you, Dr. Taylor, Joe Carlino are NOT going to stop me. Sharlene: Dr. Taylor? You killed my therapist, too? Evan orders Sharlene to handcuff herself to the bedpost, and takes out a needle. Evan: I did what had to be done. Evan injects Sharlene with a strong sedative. Sharlene struggles, but quickly falls unconscious. FREEZE FRAME ON SHARLENE…SLOW FADE OUT...END OF EPISODE 50
  6. ANOTHER WORLD EPISODE 49 Cass covers for Nicole PI FIRM Jake and Frankie talk about their trip to Pinehaven. Frankie: Are you gonna go to Rachel with the information? Jake: I’m not sure. It’s like someone was putting Allen up to doing what he did. Frankie: Yeah, he couldn’t possibly afford that bill working at Cory Publishing. Jake: I’m gonna get outta here. Frankie: Where are you going to go? Jake: Umm…not sure. Frankie: You should be going home, and working things out with Vicky. Jake: I’ve thought about that. Paulina walks in. Jake: Paulina. Paulina: Hi Jake. Frankie can I talk to you for a minute. Jake: I was just leaving. Frankie (watching Jake leave): Hey Paulina. What’s going on? Paulina: I’ve been waiting for you to get back. There’s something I need to tell you. It’s about Sharlene. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- BAY CITY CENTER Vicky sits at a table thinking about her last argument with Jake, and seeing him hugging Frankie, and her eyes well up…and Jack walks up. Jack: Looks like you could use a friend. --------------------------------------------------------- CASS’S HOUSE Cass is there with Nicole Love, who has popped up on his doorstep. Cass: Your son? Who? Nicole gives him a newspaper article. Cass: Allen Lovett? He was just arrested for corporate espionage at Cory Publishing. He’s your son. The whole time we were together you never told me you had a child. Someone knocks on the door…Reginald. Reginald (from outside): Cass open up! It’s Reginald. I really need to talk to you. Nicole: My God. He can’t know that I’m here. He’ll put me back in Pinehaven. You’ve gotta get rid of him Cass. CAMERA PAN ON NICOLE….FADE TO THEME SONG ------------------------------------------------------------- P.I. FIRM Frankie: What about Aunt Sharlene? Paulina: I was downstairs at the Center with the kids, and she looked distraught. Frankie: What happened? Paulina: We brought her home and she went on about knowing who killed my husband, and who shot Grant. Frankie: What? Wow. Paulina: And the therapist that she’s been seeing, Dr. Benjamin Taylor, he was murdered, and all her psych notes were missing…and for that matter, so is Sharlene. Frankie: Oh my God. I wonder what happened. Paulina: The person who killed Dr. Taylor has to be the same person who killed Joe. Frankie (looking at the picture of St. Croix): I think you’re right Paulina. You’re on to something. Paulina: What’s been going on with you? Frankie: My mom, um, Emma, is gonna have her memorial service so I’m going. She told me before she died that she wasn’t my real mother. Paulina: Did she tell you who your real mother is? Frankie: She died before she could get the words out, but I have a strong feeling that the answers I’m looking for….are in St. Croix. --------------------------------------------------------------------------- BAY CITY CENTER Jack gives Vicky a coffee. Jack: Coffee? Vicky: Thank you, but I wonder if this will make me more jumpy. Jack: Oh…right. I’m sorry. Vicky: It’s alright. Jack: This is the second time I’ve run into you and you’ve looked sad. Has everything…gotten better? Vicky: No…no they haven’t. Jack: I’m sorry. Vicky: Don’t be. Jack: For what it’s worth, however bad it might be for you, I think things will work out. Vicky: You think so? Jack: You’ve lost a daughter. I can’t imagine my daughter dying. Vicky: You have kids? Jack: Yep. I have a daughter Sage, and two sons, Parker and J.J. Vicky: Where are they? Jake: Oakdale. Vicky: That’s about an hour from here isn’t it? Jack: I’m commuting back and forth. Vicky: Good luck with that. These roads can get pretty dark at night. So…are you married? Jack: Engaged. Vicky: What’s her name? Jack: Carly. I’ve loved her for so long. We wasted so much time with disagreements and differences; being at each other’s throats; being apart. Even when we separated, deep down I always loved her, and it seems that way with you and your husband, and I think you two will work it out. Vicky: I hope so. Jack: If you love him, and he loves you, then you will work it out. Vicky: Thank you. You’ve actually cheered me up a little bit. Jack (smiling): Glad I could help. In fact, if you ever need a friend, call me. Jack gives Vicky his business card, and Jake witnesses the exchange from a short distance. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ CASS’S HOUSE Reginald and Cass are in the living room. Reginald: I’d hate to drop in like this but it’s really important. Cass: What is it Reginald? Reginald: I’m sure you’re well aware of the history that my daughter has had. Cass: Donna’s sick? Reginald: Come on Cass, you know that I’m talking about Nicole. I mean, she’s had a tough time recovering since she killed Jason Frame. Cass: That bastard deserved to die anyway. Reginald: You know how she reacted to it, and she was making great progress, until she escaped. Cass: Escaped? From where? Reginald: She was in Pinehaven Hospital. She was getting the help she needed. Cass: So the first place you looked was here? Reginald: You two were engaged to be married. Cass: And we haven’t been for over twenty years. Is there a point to this? Reginald: If she tries to contact you, will you please call me? Cass: Sure thing. Reginald leaves and Nicole re-emerges. Nicole: Thank you Cass. Cass: I don’t know what’s going on, but for me to help you, you better tell me what’s going on. FREEZE FRAME ON CASS…SLOW FADE…END OF EPISODE 49
  7. Love the Kirkland and Scotty interactions....this is an UNPRECEDENTED crossover story... I wanna hug Paul, and I can see a bit of descent into madness for him. What will the MW use Nate for? Good episode as usual
  8. ANOTHER WORLD EPISODE 48 Allen’s mother is revealed CASS’S HOUSE Cass, Charlie, and Lindsay are in the living room. Cass is at his desk reviewing files while Charlie and Lindsay greet Cass and sit on the couch. Charlie: Hey Dad. Lindsay: Hey Uncle Cass. Cass: Girls. Charlie: Don’t mind us. We’re just talking. Cass: Keep it down I’m doing some work. Lindsay: My mom has a home office. You should probably invest in one. Cass: I am, but not right now. Lindsay: She kept it under lock and key. I was never allowed in there. Charlie: Well at least your mom was around, because mine wasn’t. Cass: Charlie? Charlie: It’s true dad. Mom didn’t want us. Lindsay: Well my relationship with my mom definitely isn’t perfect. Charlie: You know why don’t we go out to the Center and get an ice cream. Cass: Careful. There’s gonna be another press conference down there. Lindsay can I talk to you for a second. Lindsay: Hey what’s up? Cass: Why don’t you tell me what’s going on between you and Stacey? ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- CARLINOS HOUSE Paulina is dressed in a silver evening gown as she goes to answer the door. Paulina: Kirkland. Kirkland (walking in without shutting the door): Can I talk to you? Paulina: Sure. Is everything alright? Kirkland: You look great. Paulina: Thank you. I’m going out to dinner with your dad. Kirkland: That’s what I came to speak to you about. You’re making a big mistake. My father is going to hurt you. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- BAY CITY CENTER People and press are walking about, and Rachel is preparing for her press conference backstage, and Reginald arrives. Reginald: What do you want me to do? Rachel: When I make the announcement, you just come up and join me at the podium. Reginald: There are going to be a lot of people that are going to be furious with you. Rachel: I don’t care. I’m doing what has to be done right now. CAMERA PAN ON RACHEL….FADE TO THEME SONG http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XcTTSbojfsQ&context=C44dc34cADvjVQa1PpcFPgdE9CsoLomsKal6pRxJbwpuUCtQ4Egeo -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- CARLINOS HOUSE Paulina: What do you mean? Kirkland: You were married to one of the most upstanding, honest guys I’ve ever known. My father is the polar opposite. Paulina: I miss Joe. Kirkland: Of course you do. Maybe you’re rebounding. Paulina: I appreciate your concern Kirkland, but I’m a big girl and I can take care of myself. Kirkland: If you think my father’s changed, he hasn’t. He’ll never change. He’s always gonna be up to something. He’s always gonna have his hands dirty. Grant, dressed in a tuxedo, walks up to the open door. Kirkland: You are too good for my father. He tried to hurt my mom, and I think he’s gonna do the same thing to you. Grant: Paulina. I apologize. Kirkland I’d like to have a word with you outside. Kirkland: What’s the matter dad? You can’t face the truth. You’re running for mayor, and that means you’re gonna be doing the same old dirty tricks and schemes that you used to do. Grant grabs Kirkland escorts him outside. Grant: I understand that you’re mad as hell, and you probably wish that I drop dead, but you don’t get to poison other people’s minds against me, especially not Paulina. Kirkland: If she knew what was good for her, she’d get far away from you, before she becomes your latest casualty. Everything you love, you destroy, and if you’re falling in love with Paulina, then God help her. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- CASS’S HOUSE Lindsay: What do you mean? Cass: You haven’t talked much about her. I notice your reactions every time we bring her up. Lindsay: Why would you think something was wrong? Cass: Listen I love you and my sister, and if there’s something wrong between the two of you I’d like to help if I can. Lindsay: Mom and I are fine okay. I mean we’re just two people who just don’t see eye to eye on things. Cass: So you must be stubborn like she is. Lindsay: You could say that. Cass: Go to the Center. Have fun with Charlie. Lindsay: Thank you for understanding. Cass: Of course. Lindsay walks out of the door, and before Cass can close it behind her, a woman approaches the door, wearing a set of scrubs. The top has “Pinehaven Hospital” written on the left breast pocket, and Cass is shocked. Cass: Nicole? Nicole: I’m sorry Cass but I didn’t know where else to go. You’ve gotta help me save my son! -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- BAY CITY CENTER Rachel is at the podium. She makes eye contact with Amanda in the audience, and starts her speech… Rachel: Thank you all for coming. I’m not gonna drag this out any further than it has to. As you know, I have previously announced that Cory Publishing is for sale, and now I’ve found a buyer. Introducing the new owner of Cory Publishing…Mr. Reginald Love. Amanda runs up to the front. Amanda: Mom have you lost your mind! Reginald Love! How dare you spit on my father’s grave! Rachel: Amanda please don’t do this here. Amanda: I’m doing this right here! She grabs the mic… Amanda: I will make sure that Cory Publishing STAYS in the family! FREEZE FRAME ON AMANDA…SLOW FADE…END OF EPISODE 48
  9. Vandalynn needs to get a life LOL Like the scenes between Jack and Nikki. I can visualize them in my mind. And Daisy's getting out...uh oh!!! Good dialogue once again. I can capture the emotions of the characters better
  10. ANOTHER WORLD EPISODE 47 Felicia gets a pleasant surprise FELICIA’S APARTMENT Mitch and Felicia lie on the couch and have a discussion. Felicia: I can’t believe it’s so close. Mitch: Our second wedding. Felicia: I get the feeling the second time is going to be the charm. Mitch: It will be. I can’t wait to make you my wife. I’ve always loved you Felicia. Felicia: Me, too. Mitch: Oh so you’ve always loved you, too huh? Felicia (tapping Mitch on his chest and chuckling): You know what I mean. Did you tell Matt? Mitch: Rachel called him. Felicia: And? Mitch: He said he’s not going to be able to make it. Felicia: Oh honey I’m so sorry. Mitch: Me, too. I wish my son could see us get married. Felicia: I called Jenna, and she can’t make it, but she sends her congrats. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- LIMOUSINE Reginald is on the phone. “How the hell did you let that happen? I’m gonna have all of your jobs at Pinehaven. Don’t worry, she’ll probably come directly to Bay City, but I’ll deal with you all when I’m done dealing with her." --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- POLICE STATION JAIL Allen is in his cell when Tyrone walks up to him. Allen: What happened? Tyrone: The judge set bail. Allen: How much? Tyrone: Fifty thousand dollars. Allen: How the hell am I gonna come up with that kind of money? Tyrone: You’re not. Someone posted bail. Allen: What? Who? Amanda walks up to the both of them. ---------------------------------------------------------------- PINEHAVEN HOSPITAL The big orderly corners Frankie in Room 1030. Frankie: What do you mean? Orderly: You don’t work here. You’re trying to get information on the patient. As the orderly approaches Frankie, the sprinkler system is activated, and the water gets in his eyes. Frankie uses this opportunity to escape. SLOW FADE TO THEME SONG…. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5HyLw8QGX8Y&feature=relmfu -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- CAR Jake and Frankie are riding. Frankie: Quick thinking with that sprinkler system. Jake: I hadn’t heard anything from you so I lit a match. Frankie: Whoever was supposed to be in Room 1030 wasn’t there. Jake: Really? Frankie: But I saw newspaper clippings of Allen Lovett’s arrest on the bed. Jake: Allen’s mother was staying in Room 1030. He’s been paying for his mother’s care. She must have escaped when she read about his arrest. Frankie: And she’s probably headed right to Bay City. It looked like a lot of money on that bill you gave me. You’d have to be rich to afford it. Jake: I think someone with a lot of money was helping him pay that bill. Frankie: Wonder who that might have been. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- JAIL Tyrone: Amanda? You posted bail? Allen: Amanda, you didn’t have to… Amanda: I wanted to. Tyrone: I’m gonna go check on the paperwork. Allen (watching Tyrone leave): You didn’t have to do this after what I’ve done to your family. Amanda (looking around for guard, and sees none in earshot): I care about what happens to you. Allen: Same here, that’s why I don’t want you helping me. You should move on with your life. I’m not worth it. Amanda: You couldn’t have done this on your own. Someone had to have forced you to do this. Allen flashes back to Reginald threatening Allen’s mother. Allen: It was all me Amanda. I am behind this entire operation. Amanda: Allen you are covering up for someone. Tell me who it is so I can help you. Allen: You should not get involved Amanda. For your own good, you need to forget that you ever met me. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- FELICIA’S APARTMENT Mitch: What about Lorna? Felicia: You know she never returned my phone call. Hope everything is okay with her. Mitch: That’s certainly not like her. Have you tried texting her? Felicia: It’s easier to just push a button and call. Mitch: You know she’s very busy. I’m sure she’ll get back to you. Felicia: But the wedding is approaching fast, and I still haven’t heard from her. Someone knocks on the door. Mitch (watching Felicia going to open the door): It’s 2012. Everybody texts now. Felicia (opening the door): You’re calling me old fashioned now huh. Felicia opens her mouth in complete surprise as she sees a familiar face...Lorna. Felicia: Oh my God! Lorna: Did you really think I would miss my mother’s wedding? FREEZE FRAME ON LORNA…SLOW FADE OUT...END OF EPISODE 47
  11. That's interesting...the hunter has become the hunted...Phyllis is completely clueless, she thinks it's Avery!!! LOL The MW BOINKED Nate in the eyes!! LOL... Good episode...the MW2 is quite a twist....
  12. ANOTHER WORLD EPISODE 46 Jake and Frankie are hot on the trail of Allen’s mother PINEHAVEN HOSPITAL Jake, dressed in a shirt, slacks, and tie, walks up to the receptionist, an older woman with a lab coat on. Frankie hides unseen close by. Jake: Hi. Receptionist: Umm…hello? Jake: Can you tell me where the Human Resources office is? I was supposed to have an interview today. Receptionist (curious): For which position? Jake: Security. Receptionist: Oh. That’s on the fifth floor. The elevators are right down the hall. Jake: Oh can you show me where the stairs are? Receptionist: You’re gonna take the stairs? Jake: I’m claustrophobic and…I can’t ride elevators. Receptionist: The stairs are right next to the elevators. Jake: I’m sorry…I have no sense of direction whatsoever. Can you walk me to the stairs? Receptionist: I can’t leave this desk sir. Jake: Come on it will only take five minutes. Receptionist: Look I told you where they were. I can’t leave the desk. Jake: Well then let me speak to your supervisor. Receptionist: No…no…I’m already on a written warning, and one more complaint and I could be fired. Jake: I won’t complain if you walk me to those stairs. The receptionist gets up and walks out of the office with Jake, but leaves her computer up, and Frankie quickly runs in and brings up the account number on the bill that Allen had, but it does not tell her the name of the occupant. “Room 1030.” She says. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Allen is with Tyrone in the interrogation room alone. Allen: How’s everything going bro? Tyrone: We haven’t spoken in years. Now all of a sudden you need my expertise? Allen: That’s on you. Your anger is misdirected. You’re angry at dad for having another child outside of his marriage to your mother. Tyrone: You’ve been in Bay City all this time and you haven’t bothered to contact me til now. Why? Allen: Because you’re gonna help me beat these charges. Tyrone: And if I don’t? Allen: Well then God help you. Tyrone: What the hell are you talking about? Allen: You’ve been seeing Donna haven’t you? Tyrone: What are you suggesting? I would never cheat on Marley. Allen: Well, bro, I’ve got evidence that would suggest the contrary. Tyrone: You leave Marley out of this!!! Allen: I will…if you represent me. Tyrone: What are you up to? Allen: Don’t worry about all dat. Just get me out of here…or you can worry about your marriage being destroyed. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- JACK’S OFFICE Jack and Toni Burrell review the evidence. Jack: This is getting interesting. Toni: The bullet casings are all the same, and now Sharlene Hudson is missing. Jack: And all her psychotherapy notes are gone along with Dr. Taylor’s computer. Have you been able to look at the surveillance footage? Toni: Yep. Jack: What did you come up with? Toni: Dr. Taylor didn’t have a whole bunch of patients. I wonder how he even stayed in business. Jack: Someone is bankrolling his operation. Toni: I can venture a guess….Grant Harrison. CAMERA PAN ON TONI…SLOW FADE TO THEME SONG http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E6t7udjee_8 ------------------------------------------------------------------------------- JACK’S OFFICE Toni: I had his bank records pulled, and I see several deposits to Dr. Taylor’s bank account. Jack: You’re talking about the guy who’s gonna run for Mayor right? Toni: Yep. Jack: I just looked at the footage myself. I saw the guy that was just in here. Toni: John Hudson? Jack: Yes. Toni: You’re considering John as a suspect? Jack: I won’t know until after I question him. Toni: Guess we’re gonna be a tag team huh? Jack: Why you say that? Toni: I’m going to go question Grant as to why he has deposited several dollars into Dr. Taylor’s bank account. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ INTERROGATION ROOM Allen awaits another visitor, and not one he really wants to see…Reginald. Reginald: So you got pinched. Allen: Bail hasn’t been set yet. Reginald: Who said I was posting it? You were stupid enough to get yourself caught. Allen: I was careful. Reginald: Well not careful enough apparently. Allen: After all I’ve done for you, you’re gonna just leave me here? Reginald: Why should I help you, when I don’t have any guarantees, except that your mother will stay at where she is. Allen: I’ve done everything you’ve asked! Now let her out! You and I both know she’s not sick, and she shouldn’t even be staying in that hospital. Reginald: Well then you better keep quiet about my involvement, because if you don’t, your mother will NEVER get out of Pinehaven. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- PINEHAVEN HOSPITAL Frankie, disguised as part of the cleaning crew, and they head right for Room 1030. She encounters a big, burly orderly in front of the room. Frankie: I need to clean. Orderly: I’ve never seen you before. Frankie: I started recently. Orderly: How come we weren’t told? Only certain people are allowed near this room. Frankie: I’m sorry if you weren’t informed in a timely manner, but they did tell me to clean this room. Orderly: I’m gonna check. I’ll be right back, and don’t go in there. When the orderly leaves, Frankie uses the master key she stole with the uniform, opens the door, and walks in. Frankie: Nobody’s here. She notices something on the bed. They’re newspaper clippings of Allen’s arrest. Frankie: Whoever this person is, they must have gone to Bay City. The orderly returns… Orderly: I thought I told you not to come in here! You’re in big trouble. CAMERA PAN ON FRANKIE….SLOW FADE….END OF EPISODE 46
  13. LMAO!!! Especially the Sophia/Leslie barbs..... Malcolm, too...the dialogue brings it alive!!! I'm intrigued by the Scotty story....
  14. The pictures are in the theme song....LOL....it's so much easier to post than pictures LOL Thanks...more twists and turns ahead... Surely Rachel wasn't going to choose Iris. She made sure Iris can't get her hands on Cory Publishing...
  15. ANOTHER WORLD EPISODE 45 Rachel chooses a buyer for Cory Publishing! HOSPITAL Lindsay is doing physical therapy exercises with Gregory. Gregory: You know I…I never apologized to you. Lindsay: For what? Gregory: Losing it over my cousin’s death. Lindsay: Oh you have nothing to be sorry for. I understand. Gregory: I was using steroids so I could get an advantage on the football field at school, and I got rages because of them. Lindsay: We’ve all made mistakes. Gregory: Without my mom and dad I don’t know where I’d be. Where’s your mom? Lindsay: Not sure. I guess she’s fine. Gregory: I haven’t heard you once talk about her. Lindsay (avoiding the subject): Why don’t we work on flexing your legs. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- CORY MANSION “I need you to come here now. It’s about Cory Publishing.” Says Rachel. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ POLICE STATION Toni is on the phone as she’s looking at the evidence found in Dr. Taylor’s office. Toni: John it’s Toni Burrell I really need to talk to you. Please call as soon as you get this message. It’s very important. Jack Snyder walks in. Toni: Jack Snyder huh? You’re the new Chief of Detectives. Jack: Yep. Toni: Welcome aboard. Here to give me your first order. Jack: We need you to question the client about the corporate espionage. Toni: Alright I’m on it. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- INTERROGATION ROOM Toni walks in with Jack and Toni is shocked. Toni: What the? Allen what the hell are you doin’ here? Jack: You know him? Toni: Yes! He’s my ex-husband. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- HUDSONS HOUSE John hangs his cell phone after checking his voice mail. He wonders why Toni wants him to come to the station. He walks in the house and is horrified by what he sees. The living room has been ransacked. He calls out for Sharlene, but gets no answer. John: Can’t be Gregory’s steroid rages. He’s at the hospital. My God. Has she turned back to Sharly? CAMERA PAN ON JOHN….FADE TO THEME SONG http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E6t7udjee_8 ---------------------------------------------------------- HOSPITAL Lindsay walks in with a cup of coffee and approaches Greg. Lindsay: How many did leg flexes did you do? Gregory: A few. I notice you didn’t want to talk about your mom. Lindsay: We need to focus on your therapy. Gregory: Lindsay. You’re helping me get better, in more ways than just physical therapy. Why don’t you let me help you? Lindsay: Because you can’t. Gregory: Try me. Lindsay: Look you can’t do anything about it. My mom and I don’t speak and that’s it! As Lindsay takes a sip of her coffee, she accidentally spills some on Greg’s right leg, and he flinches and kicks. Gregory: Geesh that’s hot! Lindsay: Did you see what just happened? Gregory: You spilled hot coffee on my leg. It hurt. Lindsay: And you kicked your leg. You’re getting feeling back! --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- CORY LIVING ROOM Reginald walks in and Rachel approaches him. Rachel: I’m glad you could make it. Reginald: You said this was about… Rachel: Cory Publishing. Reginald: And how do I fit into this equation? Rachel: I want to sell it to you. Reginald: Wow Rachel. That’s kind of huge. Rachel: Not really. I think you’re more than capable of handling it. Reginald: So you’re just gonna sell the company that your late husband Mac built from the ground up? Rachel: This wasn’t an easy decision to come to, but this is business. Rachel gives Reginald a thick envelope. Rachel: Why don’t you have your lawyers review these contracts…I can tell you one stipulation that’s in it. Reginald: What would that be? Rachel: If I sell this company to you, you cannot turn around and sell it to Iris. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- POLICE STATION Toni (shutting the door): What’s going on with you? Allen: Nice to see you, too. Toni: You were involved with corporate espionage? What have you gotten yourself into? Allen: I’m trying to protect my mother Toni. I’m doing this for her. Toni: Is somebody threatening her? Allen: I’m gonna wait till my lawyer gets here. Tyrone walks in, and he, too, is shocked, as is Toni. Toni: Tyrone Montgomery? You’re representing Allen. Tyrone: I don’t know if I should not. Allen: I called you because you’re good, and you’re gonna get me out of here. Toni: Y’all know each other? Tyrone: Why should I do that? Allen: That’s what brothers do. Toni: Okay what’s going on here? Tyrone: You didn’t know Toni? He’s Clayton Montgomery’s other son. Toni: Wait a minute. That’s your father. So y’all are…really brothers? Allen: Guess you kept it in the family huh? JOHN APPROACHES TONI Toni: John you got my message? Oh my God. John: Yes, and I’m afraid something’s happened to Sharlene. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- PRIVATE PLANE A person with black gloves on their hands is sitting on a couch, reviewing Sharlene’s psychotherapy notes, and places them next to Dr. Taylor’s laptop, and then they look over at an unconscious Sharlene, who is lying on the couch. FREEZE FRAME ON SHARLENE…SLOW FADE….END OF EPISODE 45
  16. Wow you've got some backstory to give us. I'm sure that's coming soon. Good start though. Carrie helping Sami? The devil better get his ear muffs lol...EJ must have really gone rogue and Sami didn't miss this time in killing him. WHere's Stefano?
  17. GOOD EPISODE...I can visualize every single scene in my head...LOVE YOUR DIALOGUE. I like this format that you're using... WInk wink at the Malcolm/Leslie scenes...I can definitely see Malcolm saying what you write... And good "near miss" with Nate and the MW
  18. Thank you both for reading. I, too, actually look forward to seeing how Jack meshes with the residents of Bay City. One already knows him...
  19. OMG FeliciasKid...you are so right!!!! I gotta change this one....she's a recovering alcoholic...
  20. ANOTHER WORLD EPISODE 44 Iris and Paulina exchange barbs BAY CITY CENTER Paulina is walking out of the coffee shop, and Iris is walking toward it, and they run into each other on the way. Iris: Hi sis! Paulina: Iris I’m glad I ran into you. Iris: Are you now? Paulina: My son told you talked to him a while ago. Iris: I see that you poisoned his mind against me. Paulina: I told him the truth about you. Iris: Your truth…but does he know about you? Paulina: You stay away from my son you conniving bitch! --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Vicky meets a new boss BAY CITY CENTER A few yards away, Vicky is distraught after having seen Jake and Frankie in an embrace. She’s walking but not really concentrating, when a man bumps into her from the side. Vicky: Oh I’m sorry. Man: Wait a minute. Have I seen you somewhere before? Vicky: I don’t believe so. Man: Are you alright? Vicky: Well...actually I’m not. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- GRANT’S HOUSE Grant opens the door and John walks in. John: Need to talk to you. CAMERA PAN ON GRANT…FADE TO THEME SONG http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5HyLw8QGX8Y&feature=youtube_gdata ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Vicky and the Man sit at a table in Bay City Center Man: Look I don’t wanna get in your business but… Vicky: My whole family is coming apart, and I can’t seem to stop it. Man: Wow I…I don’t know what to say. Vicky: I’m sorry…I’m spilling this on you. Man (looking at Vicky as if to recognize her): You’re Michele McKinnon’s mother right? Victoria McKinnon. Vicky: How did you know? Man: Sorry…I should introduce myself. I’m Jack Snyder. I am the new Chief of Detectives at the B.C.P.D. Vicky: So you know about my daughter’s death? Jack: I’m sorry about your loss. I know it was an accident. Vicky: And my family has fallen apart since she died. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Grant: What business could we possibly have John? John: I’m sure you heard of Dr. Taylor’s murder. Grant: Yes I did…and I didn’t do it. John: I don’t know what your agenda is, nor do I care, but in a way, I’m glad he’s dead. Grant: What are you saying? You wanted him to die? John: Of course not, but Sharlene’s memories can’t be recovered if she’s not seeing him. Grant: Well that’s a good thing isn’t it? John: If Sharlene remembers, I’m afraid of what’s gonna happen to her. Grant: You think she’s gonna turn back to Sharly? John: I can’t be sure, and I don’t wanna take that chance. Grant: The noble husband. You’re protecting her, but what if she finds that you didn’t want her to remember? She might go over the edge anyway. John: I’m gonna get back home to my wife, and have a romantic dinner. Grant: How sweet. I hope to do the same with Paulina soon. John: Paulina? Wait a second, you and she are dating? Grant: You could say that. I wonder what she’s doing now. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- BAY CITY CENTER Iris: I bet you haven’t told him. Paulina (walking toward the fountain, with Iris following): Told him what? Iris: That when you came to town you were nothing but a golddigging tramp after daddy’s money. Paulina: Shut up. Iris: I’m getting warm huh? Paulina: You were the one who was always after Cory Publishing. You even tried to take it over from dear old dad. Iris: You didn’t tell Dante that you shot Jake either did you? Yeah you told your version of events to him. Paulina: What I advise my son is none of your concern! Iris: He’s family! Paulina: And you had family shot at a wedding, and then you ran around acting like you were getting help, when you were the one behind it! Iris: You talk about Dante, but what about Remy? Do you know who her father is? Have you tried to look for him? Paulina: You leave my children out of this! Iris: You laid up with a man, gave Remy up for adoption, and you STILL don’t know who the daddy is. That’s what TRASHY people do! Paulina slaps Iris, the two tussle and fall into the fountain, and they both get wet, and Jack comes along and manages to separate them. Jack: Alright ladies, break it up! As Jack separates them, he and Paulina make eye contact. Paulina: Jack Snyder? FREEZE FRAME ON PAULINA...SLOW FADE…END OF EPISODE 44
  21. RECAP EPISODE OF ANOTHER WORLD The takeover of Cory Publishing – Rachel and Amanda hired Allen Lovett, who has been working with Reginald Love to force Rachel to sell Cory Publishing. It was also revealed that Iris, Rachel’s ex-stepdaughter, was masterminding the whole takeover from prison. As part of the plan, Reginald got Iris’s release hearing moved up quickly, so there was no time for Rachel and Cass to form a strategy. Rachel decided not to testify against Iris to keep her incarcerated, so Iris was released. Allen has been leaking information to Reginald about the sale of Cory Publishing. Rachel got wind of it and Allen was arrested for corporate espionage. Allen did not count on developing feelings for Amanda. Rachel has decided to sell due to declining financial standing and growing debt. Who will she sell it to? Michele’s death The McKinnons suffered a great loss when Michele McKinnon died as a result of injuries due to being struck by a car. Bridget, her twin sister, schemed against her to make her jealous. Bridget stole vodka out of Reginald’s cabinet, brought it to the prom, and spiked Cory’s drink. Bridget kissed Cory Hutchins and Michele saw them. As Vicky, Jake, and Reginald arrived, Bridget and Michele’s fight went on to the street, where Michele stumbled and was struck by an oncoming vehicle. After her heartfelt goodbye, Vicky has banished Bridget from the house, and this has caused a major rift between her and Jake. Will their marriage survive? Grant’s shooting/Sharlene’s memories Grant was shot while announcing his candidacy for Senate some years ago, and Sharlene saw the shooter. This same person also killed Joe Carlino, which brought Frankie Frame back to town. Frankie vows to find who killed Joe, who was a good friend of hers. Sharlene does not remember the person who committed the crimes, but her memories have slowly been returning, much to the dismay of Grant, John, and the perpetrator. Sharlene was seeing Dr. Taylor to help unlock these memories. Grant knows who shot him. He did to win sympathy votes. Reginald and Iris also know about Grant’s scheme, and the person who shot him. John and Grant implored Dr. Taylor not to allow Sharlene to uncover these memories. Apparently, neither did the perpetrator, because Dr. Taylor was found dead in his office. Toni Burrell returned to investigate his murder, and learned Sharlene’s notes and Dr. Taylor were both missing, and she deduced that Sharlene is in danger. They also learned the shell casing from the bullet that killed Dr. Taylor is the same from the day Grant was shot. Toni feared that the killer will come after Sharlene. Will the killer get to Sharlene? OTHERS Grant and Paulina agreed to go to dinner together. Bridget is coming between Dante and Elizabeth’s relationship. Mitch and Felicia are getting married. Cameron Sinclair was held at gunpoint to sign divorce papers, ending his marriage to Amanda. Iris tried to poison Cory and Elizabeth’s minds against Rachel. Gregory became paralyzed after his car accident. An indirect result of his steroid abuse. Lindsay Winthrop, Cass’s niece, is his physical therapist. Charlie returned after flunking out of school, and she resents Frankie for staying away for a number of years. Tyrone and Marley had problems in the beginning, but he and Donna have dealt with temptation, which seems to be growing, and Allen has photos of his brother Tyrone and Donna is positions of temptation.
  22. LOVE the interactions....as brought alive through the dialogue. Makes it so much more alive and real....and Lauren want it all!! LOL
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