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Episode 91: Pass or Fail


Matt P.

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Previously on Point Palace:

- Will spends time with Mika, after she secretly killed someone for her job, and when he asks her where she had been...she lies to him.

- Ava contemplates being with Sky.

- Alexia and Tanisha take their minds off of Owen when London stops by with L.J. She then tells them both good bye but Alexia knows that London will be fine.

- Alley confronts Blake on the way he treated John over L.J.

- Nate calls a hot line to get tested for STDs and AIDS.

- Jenny remembers everything about Carlos when she's with Nick.

- C.C. spends more time with Carlos to take his attention away from Jenny's memory.

- Mary Ann Slondsbid sees her daughter for the first time but when Victor walks in with Juliana, Carrie's father Michael freezes when she sees Juliana. Dylan notices the tension.

- Blake and London make love for what London thinks will be the last time. When they wake up the next morning, Blake asks London if she's alive.

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Episode 92:

Pass or Fail

Executive Story Consultant:

Matt Politylo

Written by:

Abdul Al-Nakhli

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(Blake calls an ambulance after not getting a response from London. He tries to shake her but she wasn’t waking up. She was taken to the hospital where doctors tried bringing her back to life but it wasn’t enough, she died. Blake went into the room and kissed her forehead one last time as tears spilled from his eyes.)

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(A few days later, Blake, distressed and holding back tears, is standing at the podium as the funeral parlor patrons respond to his pain. He forces a smile and shakes hands, thanking all of the supporters. Dylan stands next to him. Alley holds John’s hand. Alexia and Tanisha talk from a far. Even Nate was there to shake Blake’s hand. Blake was pleased to see the people who meant the most to London. Even London’s family members were there.)

Dylan: (whispers in Blake’s ear)

Are you going to be okay? I’m here if you need me.

Blake:

Only one way to find out.

Dylan:

We’re all here for you.

Alley:

As much as I hate to agree with him but he’s right. Don’t you think so John?

John: (forced)

Yeah.

Tanisha:

We’re sorry for everything.

Alexia:

London truly didn’t deserve this! Neither do you.

Dylan:

Just be strong man.

Blake:

Thanks.

(Blake nods at Dylan as Dylan steps back. Blake stands in front of the microphone, holding back the tears at the site of his dead wife’s picture.)

Blake: (somber and choked up)

I still love her…There is no bigger pain but to stand here and talk about the person you love and they aren’t here to listen. She didn’t deserve to die. Angels aren’t supposed to die.

(Blake starts crying a little bit as Alley walks up to him to rub his shoulders.)

Blake:

I’m okay, I’m okay.

(pauses)

Everyone here has feelings for London, and all loved her. But no we all can agree that she didn’t deserve this.

(Bryan walks in unannounced and interrupts Blake.)

Bryan: (clapping)

Bravo!

Blake: (angry and disgusted)

What the hell are you doing here? You weren’t invited. God knows London wouldn’t want a jackass like you here, you son of a bitch!!!

Bryan:

You don’t know that! You have everyone fooled because you come out looking like the good guy. Always! I was just trying to be nice by paying my respects.

Blake: (running towards Bryan)

I’ll kill you!

(Blake takes a swing at Bryan who gets caught in a shoving match as people scamper around trying to avoid the scene but continue to watch.)

Dylan: (diving in the middle)

Stop! Stop it right now. What is it with you Bryan? Do you have any remorse what so ever?

Blake:

London would not want you here! As a matter of fact, no one does.

Bryan:

You know what? I don’t need this!

Blake:

Say your goodbyes and make sure to keep up with our little deal.

(lowering his voice)

Remember you are an accessory to murder.

(Blake begins to shove Bryan towards the entrance but Bryan turns around glaring at him.)

Bryan:

You know I’ll be back. You’re not so perfect, you do have faults, and you know that I’ll find them out to regain control of this school!

(Blake forcefully shoves Bryan out, slamming the door.)

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(Will and Mika are laying in his bed. Will’s arms are wrapped around her as she lays on his chest, smiling with her eyes closed.)

Will: (kisses Mika’s head)

I love you. I mean…I like you. A lot.

Mika: (stares at Will smiling)

Really?

Will:

Of course, I wouldn’t say it if I didn’t mean it.

Mika: (kisses his lips)

I like you too, Willy?

Will: (confused)

Willy?

Mika:

Yeah.

Will:

As in Free Willy? The Whale?

Mika:

No! It’s a nickname I made for you.

Will: (confused)

Wait, we have nicknames now?

(laughing)

Since when?

Mika:

I’ve always come up with nicknames for my friends and I just never told you until now. You don’t like Willy?

Will:

No, no…Willy’s…cool I guess…

(curious)

Who all knows that you call me Willy?

Mika:

Oh no one really, maybe some people of my friends. Does it matter?

Will:

No, just curious is all, nothing major.

(scoffs)

Willy. So I have to make a nickname for you now.

Mika:

If you want, you don’t have to. It’s not etched in stone or anything.

Will: (sarcastic)

Yeah, okay…wow, there are things that still confuse me about you and I just can’t put my finger on it.

Mika:

(nervous)

What?

Will:

Oh, nothing, forget I said it.

Mika: (confused)

No no tell me. What are you talking about?

Will:

Nothing it’s just. Some things you do, how you act around me, you’re so exotic and mysterious.

Mika:

Really? What kind of things are you talking about?

Will:

Like every time we hangout or do anything we never go to your dorm room, we always come back here, and then you leave.

Mika: (faces away from him and gets worried look)

How long have you been thinking about that?

Will:

To be honest, since we’ve started dating. If I want to get closer to you, I want to have all of you…not bits and pieces.

Mika: (looks more worried, but covers it with a laugh)

Is that really a big deal to you? That we don’t go to my room?

Will:

A little bit. To be honest, all I know is the building you live in, that’s it. I don’t know the room or if you have a roommate? It took me a while just to learn your name. Like where do you come from?

Mika:

Listen Cotton Eyed Joe, you don’t want to know all that.

Will:

Oh I don’t?

(laughing scoff)

See, that makes me want to know more now.

Mika:

Look, I’ll put it this way, if you were in my room, we couldn’t do this. You couldn’t be holding me and we couldn’t be so touchy feely.

(kisses him gently)

Or this

(kisses him deeper)

And especially not this…

(Mika kisses him even deeper before crawling on top of him.)

Will:

Whoa. You’ve never done this before.

Mika:

And you’re complaining?

Will:

No its just…

(Mika takes her shirt off and throws it across the room.)

Mika: (puts her finger on his lips and whispers in his ear)

For once, let me do the talking and you just enjoy.

(While still being on top, Mika kisses him deeper and puts Will’s hands on her lower waist smiling as she bits her lower lip.)

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(Carlos is sitting inside his living room with C.C.in the kitchen getting herself a bottled water.)

C.C.:

I hate your kitchen with a passion.

Carlos: (somber)

Why is that?

C.C.:

You must not be in here that much, otherwise you’d know what I was talking about. This place is a dump. Whoops, did I say that out loud?

Carlos:

Thanks Martha Stewart.

C.C.:

Excuse me?

Carlos: (angry)

You heard me! I didn’t ask you over here in the first place, and within an hour you have given me insult after insult. What the hell is your damn problem? What me and Jenny had was great and ever since she left you have sent me so many signals, it’s almost like you’re glad over what happened to her. I’m not stupid, I know how to read people.

C.C.: (yelling)

What’s my problem? I’m the only one who has been there for you and you’re asking me what my problem is? You can be so ungrateful! It’s not like she’s coming back to you, if you’re soooo good at reading people then read those signs!

Carlos:

I don’t need this bullshit.

(Carlos and C.C. hear the doorbell ring and look at the door.)

Carlos: (turns and looks at C.C.)

Did you bring someone to help you out with the insults?

C.C.:

Who knows it could be a crazed fan of mine or yours.

(Carlos walks over to the door and opens it to find Jenny in front of him.)

Jenny:

Carlos, we have to talk! I…

(Jenny stops upon noticing C.C.)

Carlos: (shocked and confused)

Jenny?!

Jenny: (interrupts lifting a finger to Carlos)

C.C. can you give me and Carlos a few moments alone? This is kind of personal.

Carlos:

Wait, what is? Quit playing games Jenny I can’t take this drama anymore.

C.C.:

It sounds like you’re not wanted here. Bitch you better get the steppin’!

Jenny:

What did you say to me?

Carlos:

Please just let us be.

(C.C. pouts before walking outside.)

Jenny: (pauses and stares at Carlos)

I know.

Carlos:

You know what?

Jenny:

I have my memory back…I’m slowly regaining memory about you.

(As C.C. is slowly walking away she hears Jenny’s words and gets a shocked expression before continuing to eavesdrop.)

Jenny: (pause and shocked)

I mean at first I thought it was just a hallucination, but, this…it’s just too clear!

(rapid)

But me and you have to talk now, I’m scared I might lose this, please!

Carlos: (calmly)

Okay, okay. Come over here, just try to relax.

(C.C. gets on her cell phone, nervously dialing the numbers, trying not to be heard.)

Nick: (voice on the other line)

Dr. Quarr speaking, how may I help you?

C.C.:

It’s me. We might have a problem. Jenny supposedly remembers everything about Carlos, she’s over here now.

Nick:

I see, my office twenty minutes.

C.C.:

Okay, see you there.

(closes her phone and walks back into the room)

Carlos, I got a call from my agent, I have to go. I’ll let myself out. Bye!

(C.C. shuts the door and drives off.)

Carlos:

So, what do you remember?

Jenny: (stares down at the table)

To be honest, I don’t know if what I’m about to tell you is true.

Carlos:

What are you talking about? You just said you got your memory back.

Jenny:

The memory I think I have. I’m not sure what’s real and what isn’t anymore. When I woke up from my coma, nothing was there. Anything we went through, the show, nothing. It was hard to remember my name. But then, I saw a billboard of you and then I got all these, I don’t know if I can call them memories, or just thoughts. But I saw images of us.

(gets angered in the face then relaxed)

C.C. is standing beside you during a scene and I ask you to leave the show after I got fired.

Carlos:

(starts rubbing her back gently as she stares up at him)

What happens next?

Jenny:

That’s really all I know. I mean…your old boss took really good care of me. I don’t know if he did something with my brain that he had me under the impression that everything me and you had meant was nothing or that it was just a fling but it wasn’t!

Carlos:

Wait! So you know what Nick was doing?

Jenny:

Yes. He must have taken my condition as a way to try to make it like you were using me and I wasn’t meant to be with you.

Carlos:

What about the videotape? The tape you were talking about.

Jenny:

I don’t know! I know there was a tape made with you accepting some sort of award and an episode of Blue Crystal.

Carlos:

Amazing.

Jenny:

I love you Carlos!!!

Carlos: (looks away shocked and bewildered)

You love me?

Jenny:

Baby please, I would not make this up. If I could give you proof I would, but please, for once, trust me and believe in me. I know I’m frail right now, but I need you to help pull me us through!

(grabs Carlos hand like they used to do)

I don’t want to forget this, or lose it.

(Jenny stares at him with the deepest emotion and gently kisses him on the lips.)

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(Ava and Sky are side by side near Ava’s dorm after having dinner downtown.)

Sky:

Did you have fun tonight?

Ava:

Yeah, I had a blast. The food at the restaurant was good. I can’t believe there’s a place that nice this close to campus.

Sky:

Yes, it’s better when you’re there with someone though. You know what I mean?

(Sky goes to grab Ava’s hand as they walk but Ava slyly checks to see if there’s anyone looking around.)

Sky: (scoffs)

Forget it. You’re not ready yet? Are you?

Ava:

Ready for what? Does it happen this fast?

Sky:

Nooo, not that. You’re not ready to come out yet are you. What is it? Are you too embarrassed to admit you have feelings for me?

Ava:

NO! That’s not it at all! I don’t know, you are seriously the first person that I literally want to be with. I guess I’m not used to this kind of thing.

Sky: (interrupts ignorantly)

What thing? That my name isn’t Ralph or Frederick or I don’t have a penis in between my legs? You know I can’t take this anymore Ava, I care about you too much to go through these games!

Ava: (whining)

Please don’t go there! I’m not saying any of those things, I care about you too, and I’m not playing any games. This is just all so new to me. I never had anything like this, even when I was well you know…

Sky:

Straight?

(Ava nods gently.)

Sky: (sighs looking up at the sky of the moon as people walk past, then looks back down at Ava)

Have you even kissed a girl yet?

Ava:

Huh?

Sky:

Have you kissed a girl? Had the true feeling of what it’s like?

Ava: (gets an embarrassed face)

I’ve only held a girl’s hand before. Yours!

Sky:

Then you never kissed a girl before. Holding hands doesn’t count.

(Ava shakes her head and looks to the ground.)

Sky:

So, how do you know if you even like it?

Ava:

I think I will. I mean it’s kissing, what’s the big difference.

Sky:

Okay, kiss me now.

Ava: (shocked look then smiles)

Kiss you? Right now?

Sky:

Yeah, prove it to me.

Ava:

But we’re outside, my friends live two blocks down the street, they might see!

Sky:

What’s the matter? You just said it’s kissing. Who cares what they’re going to think?

Ava: (gets nervous expression and starts rubbing her arms)

Are you going to hate me if I don’t?

Sky:

If that’s what it takes to get your lips on mine…

(walks over directly in front of her causing Ava to trip and fall on the steps with Sky on top of her)

Then yes.

Ava: Um…

(Sky interrupts her by kissing Ava gently before kissing deeper as Ava starts sighing under her breath rubs Sky’s sides. Then Ava sees people across the street starting at them, and forces Sky off of her instantly.)

Sky: (grunting)

What was that about?

Ava:

My neighbors were looking.

(Ava looks across the street and sees the neighbors are no longer watching them).

Sky: (scoffs and sighs)

You know what, I don’t know what it is about you that can make me hate you, I almost feel bad for you. So I’ll tell you what. You know you enjoyed it, I sure as hell did but if other people’s perceptions of us are going to bother you, maybe we should forget this. It’s your choice.

(Sky gets up and starts walking back to her room until looking back at Ava, shaking her head.)

Ava:

Maybe I did kind of like it.

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(Alley and John are standing near the back of the funeral parlor as she is adjusting his suit and tie, trying to calm him down.)

Alley:

Now John, what are you going to focus on with London?

John: (cold tone)

The truth, that’s all I know anymore.

Alley: (looks up at John)

You’re not going to make a scene are you? Why can’t you put the thing between you and Blake in the past?

John: (muffled anger)

He hurt me Alley! Now I’m supposed to come and speak to these people and pretend like nothing is wrong?

Alley:

Would London want you to do that?

John:

I guess we’ll never know will we?

Alley:

Don’t say it like that! You know London wouldn’t.

(John scoffs at her as they walk back inside.)

Alley:

John, for once please for your sake be the bigger man! Look at me! Promise me that you will not make a scene up there? Please!

John:

Fine, I won’t.

Alley:

Okay, good. You’re up.

(John stands up to the podium where Alexia has finished her speech.)

Alexia:

And now John Snaldry will say some kinds words on London’s behalf.

(John is slow to come to the microphone and looks out into the crowd to see the stone faces at his appearance, except Alley.)

John: (sighs into the microphone)

I’m going to save everyone some time today, and cut right to the chase. I just made a promise to my wonderful girlfriend that I wouldn’t make a scene about me and Blake, and I’m not. But what I did say was I am going to tell the truth.

(Alley looks worried as she looks back at the others. Blake is continuing to hold in his anger.)

John:

London, god bless her soul, there is not one person that probably wants me here. To let alone tell you what I think, about London. And why would you? I’m John Snaldry. The guy who got her pregnant. I’ve never been the greatest man that was the most liked or the guy that sat in the cafeteria at school by himself because no one wanted to care what I was feeling or what I was thinking.

(The mic echoes and then pauses until John gets a somber tone in his voice.)

John:

Then, there was London.

(starts to shed tears as he talks, and gets a little choked up at the podium)

London, was the girl that no matter what people thought, she looked right here.

(points at his chest)

She looked past the outside and went right to their heart. She was a genuine woman, that looked at people like me, and could see that there could be something there.

(starts to break down at the podium)

She didn’t care what you would think, if she could be here, she would want me to say how I felt about her, she would want me to be here. London was my friend and my ex. God I miss her, I miss her so much. So Alley there you go, I didn’t make a scene.

(Alley comes and meets John at the podium she holds him in her arms as the crowd gets sympathetic faces at John’s message. Even Blake, who walks up and shakes his hand.)

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(Later that night, Alexia is buried face first in a computer screen, annoyed at the machine.)

Alexia: (angry, and rigid)

Damn it! How can there be nothing about this nurse.

Tanisha:

Are you sure you’re spelling the name right? Come on we’ve been here since we got back from the service.

Alexia:

This is life or death Tanisha.

Tanisha:

But is this the really the way you want to do it? Think of the legal issues.

Alexia:

I don’t care, I have to get some info on her. Besides, she’s the one who did something illegal, she kidnapped Owen!

Tanisha:

It’s so late and you’ve been sitting there with NOTHING! Not a name, a phone number, an address, NOTHING! Obviously this isn’t working, so for the both of us, let’s try something else.

Alexia:

And what should we do? Go to the police, nope, sorry can’t!

Tanisha:

Or Detective Miltner.

Alexia:

That is my last option. As I told you before.

Tanisha:

Come on.

Alexia:

I can’t go to him.

Tanisha:

I’m sure he’d be able to solve this case.

Alexia: (pulls out a piece of paper that reads in jagged letters and hands it to Tanisha)

Read this! We know everything already.

Tanisha: (stares down at the paper and gets somber in her voice and worried)

But…

Alexia: (ignorant, blunt, and sarcastic)

So if you don’t mind, I’m going to get back to this, because I love my mother! That’s why I’m doing this, that’s why I can’t go to Miltner, and that’s why I’m going to keep my family alive!

(Tanisha looks worried as Alexia rapidly types on the keyboard.)

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(Dylan blasts into the hotel room where Juliana is staying getting Juliana annoyed.)

Juliana:

Damn it Dylan, what are you doing here?

Dylan:

We have to talk. I know there’s something up with you Carrie’s family that you’re not telling me, but I think I deserve to know. What is going on?

Juliana:

You’re not welcome here.

Dylan:

NO! I came from the opposite side of the city through three freeways to talk about this, we are going to get to the bottom.

Juliana:

Why is it always your way? It’s your doing we’re all here, it’s you’re girlfriend, and it’s always about you.

Dylan: (calm)

Because we need your help.

Juliana:

Stop jumping to conclusions.

Dylan:

What conclusions?

Juliana:

Nothing. The only person who needs help is your blond screw up.

Carrie: (walks into the room clutching an old teddy bear)

Why are you two fighting? Mommy, said it’s not good to fight.

Juliana:

Jesus, you brought Carrie too?

Dylan:

She wanted to come see you. I still don’t know why she still cares about you or your brother.

Juliana: (scoffs)

LOOK, you both have to leave right now!

Carrie:

But Julie, we were supposed to go to the fair, remember? You, me, and Victor.

Juliana:

Stop it Carrie! Just stop it, you’re not ten you’re a goddamn grown woman. I don’t believe this act!!!

(Carrie drops her bear and goes running out the room crying loudly.)

Dylan: (disgusted)

You’re a piece of work! This is why we need your help because there’s something going on and it’s taken its toll on her.

Juliana:

Get out!

Dylan:

I’m sure the Slondsbids will tell us what it is because you people can’t hold guilt for all of your lives.

(Dylan goes running off with Carrie’s bear trying to catch her, as Juliana gets an angered face and slams the door in a huff.)

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(Next morning, Nate is sitting in the doctor’s office praying under his breath and breathing hard, as the door flies open and the specialist comes in with a stern face.)

Doctor Ralma:

Hello Nate, having some personal time with the Lord.

Nate:

Yeah, I’m just scared that I’m going to have to see him soon. I figure we should get acquainted with each other.

Doctor Ralma:

Is that why you spent the money on our three day response program? Lot of money for something like that.

Nate:

Is that a bad thing?

Doctor Ralma:

You could’ve given that money to a children’s shelter or something to that extent but you’re worried and that’s where I come in.

Nate:

Wait, so are you saying that I- ? Oh, God the test came back positive didn’t it?

Doctor Ralma:

I didn’t say anything yet, you could’ve waited is all.

Nate:

Doctor?

Doctor Ralma:

Yes Nate?

Nate: (gasps loudly)

I need to know. I can’t keep living without knowing. Please Doctor, don’t keep me this emotional. If I have an STD or worse don’t apologize just give it to me straight.

Doctor: (sighs)

Well, I guess if that’s the case…

Nate: (wide eyed)

No! No!

Doctor Ralma:

Your test results are right here.

(Doctor Ralma pulls up a folder with his name on it.)

Nate:

What does it say? You have to tell me doctor! What do my results say?!

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These are some very well done cliffhangers.

You need to hurry up and let us know what the results say. Stop with the waiting! :lol:

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Very interesting episode that's for sure.

The dialog was much more aggressive as well as a lot of characters.

I read the first scene and I have experienced a true and 1st wtf moment on PP. Damn, London not only died but we at the funeral in the 2nd scene. I was like damn, I didn't have time to digest that she may or may not live and BAM like a nuke bomb. I am still tripping over it. And I was even more shocked when Bryan had the nerve to show up. I love Bryan but as a reader, I thought he was a pure Bastard for showing and causing that scene. I ABSOLUTELY LOVED Jon's emotions, and dialog and inner struggle. And loved how Alley came up to hold him and what not.

I loved Mika's aggressive sexual side she seems to had. The scene made Will look very weak, and I don't know if I like that. I have always known Will t be a bit more aggressive than what he was in this episode and come to think of it this season so far. But then again it could be because of Lenvy's death.

I have no idea what Alexia and Tanisha were doing or the nurse, or what.

I was shocked that Juliana cussed out Carrie. LOL Did Dylan and Juliana know each other b 4 she came to Cody and where was Vince when all this happened?

Still a good episode. Moved EXTREMELY FAST. NATE"S RESULT have me on the edge of my seat. The scene was very well written.

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Yeah this episode was much different from the rest. London's "quick" death was a choice on both of our parts but there's a reason for it. Will has definitely mellowed this season because of Lenvy's death. He feels as if he lost her because he was bad so he's trying so hard to be good.

Here's the backstory on Carrie/Dylan/Juliana/Victor:

Carrie and Victor originally grew up together in Lexington. They were high school sweet hearts before she moved to PP and he always wanted her back. In Season 1, Victor returns to reclaim her from Dylan so she goes back to Lexington to be with family and him. While there, Juliana didn't want Carrie around Victor so she did whatever she could to get them away. Like hire Dylan's cousin Jason Colby to seduce Carrie, had her kidnapped, and then when John went to retrieve Carrie (in Season 2) to get revenge on Dylan and Alley, Juliana made sure to let Carrie know that she was needed elsewhere. Once Carrie left, Juliana lied to Victor by giving him a fake note saying that Carrie didn't love him anymore.

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