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I have to agree with ML about the song. It matched not only the scenes but the show perfectly. You really know what you want in your show which makes me extremely happy for you. I love how you write Billy. You really just bring Billy in the right way. It reminds me of how I fell in love with his character when I first started to watch The Young and the Restless. OH JJ! I have a feeling that JJ doesn't know what he is after in life here. He is still trying to find his footing. Which is good. If you are starting a triangle let it develop. This is gonna be good! Derrick? He seems like he is going to set up some good story in the future for your show. I was instantly intrigued by when you put the description of him having shadiness in his eyes. The whole gang thing will get interesting. Chavo and Vin..., interesting names LOL. Just Paradise is slowly starting to seem like no Paradise at all LOL. I continue to love how you do this show. It is neat and fresh each week. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I ADORED THE BIGGER PRINT!!!!!!!!!!!!! This was another amazing episode. I agree with Cary on the balance. It was very well put together. I am worried about Malcolm. He seems to get darker and darker. It makes me think about the future of the character. I wonder where you are going with his whole plot. Verdon Lou just gets better and better. I really don't want that story to end LOL. However, it is reaching an UNBELIEVABLE climax. I cannot wait to see where the story goes from here. I feel like something bad is going to happen to Avery. I just have that feeling LOL!!!!!!!! KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!! This is truly your best work yet.

I LOVED THIS EPISODE!!!!!!!!!!! Everything about it was just so intense and very dramatic. Of course, It all lead up to the whole BIG LILY REVEAL!!! I knew it was Lily LOL. I am interested in why you picked the particular actress you did. But, I know you will make it good. I LOVE SISTER P!!!!!!!! Give me more of her please. She brings that comedic relief to the show. Which I do love. She just brightens up any episode. When you need a joke get Sister P LOL I continue to love the Cane plot. It is just so intense. So many secrets about Cane's life are being exposed. Genoa City is about ready to be rocked by him. And, I will love every moment! I also love the whole Rox/Hillary thingy. They are just drama drama drama. I love how you bring your blacks to the front burner. It makes for some wonderful and enjoyable scenes. The tense terrorist thing was really getting to me. I see some good future set up. GOOD WORK ML!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

What an amazing 200th episode of ANOTHER WORLD! I can't believe it has been long enough for you to have this accomplishment. Congratulations to you!!! I ADORED THE SPECIAL OPENING! I had a tear stroll down my face LOL. I loved the Cass/Frankie scene. I see a future for them. I hope you do to. Rachel and Carl. We are going to have to say goodbye soon. This is just to sad. However, you are managing to do this with the correct balance of drama/romance/mystery. Hats off to you. It is truly a wonderful storyline. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HERE IS TO ANOTHER 200 (and beyond)!

The FIRST thing that I loved about this episode was by far the episode title. It was just so funny. And, I loved how you constructed the episode. I think Eliza is by far one of your most interesting characters. She seems like you can do anything with her. Right now, you are taking her down this whole sexy route. I LOVE THAT!!!!!!!!! But, I do kind of feel bad for Miranda. Emily is qualified Lucas LOL, u r right. She is qualified for a lot of things. I like how you write these business stories. They are very well talked about. It seems like it is going to be good. Oh Emily, just wait until you see what Paul has been up to LOL! Stefano..., I swear! If he did anything to Bo, I will jump through this computer screen, and kill him for the 14th time LOL. I like where this storyline is going. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

All My Children - Episode #14 Created By: Agnes Nixon Written By: Casey Hutchison ---------------------------------------------------------------- INT. ERICA'S HOSPITAL ROOM - MORNING Jackson enters. Erica: Jackson. Jackson: Good morning. Erica: What are you doing here? Jackson: I actually came, because Joe called me. Erica: What? Jackson: Erica, your results are in. Joe enters. Joe: She isn't okay. --- INT. LIZA AND CALEB'S HOME - MORNING Liza comes down the stairs with a suitcase. Caleb enters. He shuts the door behind him. Caleb: Oh! Liza, you scared me. Liza: I am here to get my things. ​Caleb: I see that. Do you think that is necessary? Liza: I don't know. Did you think it was necessary to kiss Erica? --- --- INT. PINE VALLEY HOSPITAL - MORNING Opal and Tad come out of the hospital room. Tad: You okay, ma? Opal: I am dying. I know that. Angie: WHAT?! Opal: Angie. Angie: Opal..., what did you say? --- INT. LIZA AND CALEB'S HOME - MORNING Caleb sets his to-go coffee down. Caleb: Are we really going to do this again? Liza: We will do this as many times as we need too. Caleb, I don't think that you get it, yet. Relationships are all about discussing and working through obstacles. But, you don't want to talk about this. You don't even want it to be discussed by Erica. And, she was the one who was a partner in this whole thing. Why are you doing this? This doesn't seem like you at all. What gives? Caleb: (Sighs) I made one mistake. You can't blame me, for not wanting to talk about it. I admit that it was a mistake. I just want to move on with you, and only you. Can you do that with me Liza? Can you forget my ghastly mistake? Can you do that? So, we can move on? Liza starts to think, silently. --- INT. KRYSTAL'S HOME - MORNING Kevin (FAKE J.R.) has his feet on the coffee table. Krystal comes down the stairs. Krystal: Get your feet off my table. Kevin does so, and stands. Kevin: Do you always have to be so... Krystal: What? Kevin: You know. Krystal: (Sighs) We need to get some things straight. Kevin: Like what? Krystal: Some ground rules. Kevin: Oh, really? I hate ground rules. Krystal: Listen, you are a doppelganger. You are not the real J.R. You are helping me get rid of him. You listen to me. You do not go outside. In less than five seconds, I can have David on the phone. One call to him, and you are finished! Done! S.O.L. Do you hear me? Kevin: Loud and clear. Krystal: Good. Now, breakfast is ready. Krystal walks off. Kevin: This is going to be a long day. --- INT. HOSPITAL ROOM #2 - MORNING Angie, Opal, and Tad walk back into a hospital room. Angie: Opal, what gives? Tad: We need to get some things straight around here. Angie: What? Opal, are you dying? What is going on? I know I sound pushy, but I am worried about you. No one just comes out of a hospital room and says that. Opal: Angie, before I tell you this, you have to promise me something. Angie: What? Anything. Opal: I need you to keep this a secret. Tad: We mean that. Angie: (Laughs) Of course. Opal: Angie..., I have a brain tumor. Angie: What did you just say? Opal: It's true. Angie: When did this happen? Tad: We found out about a month ago. Angie: I see. Do you need me to do anything? Who has the case? Opal: I am fine. Joe has the case. Angie: Opal, listen, if you need me to be brought on as a consultant, I can talk to Joe. I will do anything that you need done. Do you hear me? Opal: Yes I do. Thank you Angie. Angie: Of course. Come here. They hug. Tad: Anyways, ma needs plenty of rest. We probably need to get her home. Angie: Yeah. Opal: Thanks again. Angie: Good luck. Opal: Bye. Angie: Bye. --- INT. ERICA'S HOSPITAL ROOM - MORNING Erica is startled. Erica: Joe, what is it? What is going on? Joe: Erica, it turns out that you blacked out. Now, this goes back to when you admitted back in 2003 and in 2004. Do you remember that? Erica: Joe, that was because of my drinking. I haven't had a drop since. Joe: Actually you have. Jackson: Joe, I don't want to be disrespectful, but that is absolutely ludicrous. Joe: We tested her blood. It appears you had a drink with dinner, last night. We tested your blood as soon as you were admitted. It was .01. Erica: That is insane! How dare you! Joe, I can't believe you are telling me this. I want you out! I want you out of my hospital room, now! Get out! Get out! Joe: Okay. Joe exits. Jackson: Erica, tell me the truth. Did you take a drink? --- Announcer: On The Next "All My Children" Liza: Maybe. Erica: How dare you. Natalia: I am happy. Marian: Where do you want me to begin? Stuart: Oh my lord! --- THIS EPISODE IS DEDICATED TO THE MEMORY OF ANNE MEARA: --- ---

What an great episode! Sharlene/Frankie: These were some good relaxing scenes. It was very nice to just go ahead and listen to what they have to say. I wonder what is going on with Frankie though. I started to wonder if you are working up a Fax Newman return??? Mitch/Felicia: First of all, Christy get over yourself LOL!!! Anyways, I love how you write them. When they are in the episodes, I just see how much you love this soap opera for some reason. You do well with their stories. Carl/Rachel/Russ: I can't tell you how much this truly does break my heart. I can't believe that Rachel is going to have to say goodbye to another love. I feel so sorry for her. I also feel sorry for Carl. I can see that he doesn't want to leave Bay City and his family behind. I can't wait to see what happens at this party. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!!!!!!!!! CAN"T WAIT TO SEE WHAT YOU HAVE FOR US IN THE NEXT EPISODE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (200)

CONGRATULATIONS HERE IS YOUR 200TH COMMENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

What a WONDERFUL episode! Felicia: She has some big choices to make these days about her stories. I am glad that you kept on with the core of her character, which is to write. But, judging by the title of this episode, we all know that Iris is up to something!!! Joy/Iris: Both interesting phone calls. Joy, such a crazy character. I am still trying to figure her out. I wonder who is coming to Bay City. This should be interesting. I am sooo ready!!! LOL! Tyrone/Donna/Marley/Michele: I am so worried for Michele and her future with Bridget. We can all see why Donna was so worried. She has every right to be! I am worried myself! Great episodes lately!!! KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Now, stuff is picking up!!!!!!!!!! Stefano..., what is he up too? I think you are trying the classic Stefano. If you are, then I am up for it! "HENRY: Probably not long enough. I do not like the sound of this BRO resurrection.", interesting. I wonder what is going to happen there. This line kind of just stuck with me. I wonder what will happen. Love how you write Henry/Barbara. It was classic Henry. I love Katsu. It is because, he is interesting. He is like classic interesting soap characters. You are doing a wonderful job with this! KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I LOVED THE MONTAGE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It was probably one of my favorite parts it was very well written! This was a good episode. It was putting me in the soap opera mood! The ATWT characters are very well written. My favorite storyline currently probably goes to Paul. It is really well written. I also liked the whole JJ/Miranda thingy that went on in this episode. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ALL MY CHILDREN - EPISODE 13 WRITTEN BY: CASEY HUTCHISON CREATED BY: AGNES NIXON TIME OF DAY: AFTERNOON RYAN AND GREENLEE'S: Ryan and Greenlee are cleaning up from Emma's birthday. RYAN: Do you feel safer now? GREENLEE: What do you mean? RYAN: Annie didn't show up. GREENLEE: No, she didn't. Anyways, are you going to put the cake away? RYAN: Yeah. I can take care of it. As Ryan walks off, Greenlee sees a gift. GREENLEE: What's this? She opens it. GREENLEE: Oh my god! Oh my god! Ryan! Ryan! Ryan runs to Greenlee. RYAN: Babe, what is it? He sees the gun. RYAN: What the hell? -------------------------------------------------------------- ANNIE'S HOTEL ROOM: Annie sits on the bed. ANNIE: (Sighs) I hope Ryan and Greenlee got my present. Do you think it was a good present? Come on, you can tell me what you think. But, be honest. Please, be honest. The camera pans over to Emma. She is sitting in a chair, drinking a juice box. EMMA: That was a good gift mommy. ANNIE: Excellent. --------------------------------------------------------------- ---------------------------------------------------------------- DAVID’S PENTHOUSE: Adam and David are drinking coffee. DAVID: So, Adam Chandler is going to make my day. You have been here for about ten minutes. All you have done is drink my coffee. So, are you going to make my day yet? Because, I really don't have all of it to waste. Go ahead, Adam. The floor is all yours. ADAM: Fine, I guess I will tell you. DAVID: Oh yay! ADAM: David, I am going to fund Orpheus for you. David spits his coffee out. ------------------------------------------------------------------ CHANDLER MANSION: Colby walks in. Asher is behind her. COLBY: Did you follow me here? ASHER: I did. COLBY: Wonderful! ASHER: Colby, I just want to talk to you. COLBY: I don't want to talk to you! ASHER: Why not? COLBY: You don't get it. Do you? ASHER: What are you talking about? COLBY: You left here. You threw us away. I didn't. ------------------------------------------------------------- RYAN AND GREENLEE'S: Ryan comes back outside. RYAN: (Sighs) I called Andrea's mom. She said her and Emma are playing up in her room. GREENLEE: Good. RYAN: (Sighs) GREENLEE: What the hell is this? Is this Annie's doing? RYAN: Do you think it is. GREENLEE: I do. RYAN: I hope it isn't. GREENLEE: I know who we have to go and see. RYAN: What do you mean? GREENLEE: if we want to find out if this is Annie's doing, then we have to go to Marian. I say that, because when Oak Haven was set on fire, a lot was uncovered about who is a team in there. I remember that Marian and Annie were a team. RYAN: But..., GREENLEE: They still are, and I know it. Now, let's go. ------------------------------------------------------------------- ANNIE'S HOTEL ROOM: Annie stands. ANNIE: Stay here honey. Annie goes into the bathroom. Andrea and her mom are sitting in the bathroom. They are tied up. ANNIE: Thank you for faking your voice. -------------------------------------------------------------------- CHANDLER MANSION: Asher sits. COLBY: Of course you are sitting. He stands. ASHER: What is that supposed to mean? COLBY: You just sit when big things are thrown your way. You always do that. AHSER: Colby, tell me your true feelings. COLBY: You want to know how I truly feel about you. ASHER: YES! COLBY: I hate you. I hate you! I hate the fact that you decided to leave me. You left me alone. You promised me that I could always be here with you, in Pine Valley. But, the first college that you accepted to is out of state. And, you take it. You leave me! You leave me here! You leave me here to deal with my issues alone. You left me alone to go through J.R.'s trial. You didn't even fly back to comfort me. A five hour flight. That is all it took to support me. ASHER: I'm sorry. Colby throws a tea cup. Asher goes to Colby. AHSER: Calm down! CALM DOWN! COLBY: NO! NO! I am done with you. There will be no us. That is a promise. Now, get out! ASHER: If that is what you want. Then I will. I'll leave. Colby shuts the living room doors. She shuts off the lights and lays on the couch. (PLAY MUSIC AND FLASHBACKS AT SAME TIME) Colby: Where do we stand Asher? Where do we stand? ------------------------------------------------------------------ ON THE NEXT ALL MY CHILDREN: ANGIE: WHAT?! LIZA: I am here to get my things. JOE: She isn't okay. OPAL: I am dying. I know that. (GUNSHOT) ----------------------------------------------------------------

This episode was lengthy! LOL! Abby and Hillary are quite interesting. I think they will be good as friends, however friends aren't really in Genoa City LOL. Sister Patterson..., there is not enough words to describe that woman. I like how Days22 said that she is larger than life. I guess you can describe her that way LOL. That is very true. I am glad you showed Jill. I have missed her. I am very worried with Phillip. I hope you don't kill him off!!! I love him!!! Verdon Lou, is finally reaching the end. But, that kind of makes me sad. Because, this means that Sheila Carter is coming to an end... AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Things are really starting to heat up! Can't wait to see your show move into the future. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Interesting episode. I have to say I think my favorite storyline has to be the Matthew gay thing. It gives a character some new layers, that we really haven't gotten a chance to see. And Nora, is completely playing all the emotions that she should be. It is interesting that David throws his opinion in on some things. He always has to say something LOL. I feel so sorry for Blair. Anyways, Olivia Carson. Investigating Todd's death. I wonder what is up with that. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!

I enjoyed this episode very much! The Brittany and Billy story is one of my favorites. I like the pace. However, my favorite part is that the dialogue is very rich and ready to go. Steve is probably one of the best written characters. You stay very true to him. I can't wait to see how the whole mission plays out. That will be good! I know it will be. Jennifer..., poor Jen. I kind of feel bad. I like as cnathaniel said that things are starting to move. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

What a WONDERFUL episode!!! I LOVED every scene. I think my favorite scene was the whole Nikki/Victoria scenes. It was soooo true to who Nikki is, in a very short time. We saw her staring at the glass of wine. Is she really that down? Maybe she is. Keep that up! I loved Esther/Karynn. I hope that maybe they can become freniemies like Kathrine/Jill 2.0! LOL that would be awesome! And of course the colonnade room!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I loved it. Patterson always is a great laugh. And her and Leslie were awesome and hilarious. AND..., who is the mystery woman? Why was Lauren with her??? Can't wait! KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

What a well constructed episode!!! Eric/Christy: I loved these scenes. It was nice to see Eric. And, we know his feelings now. We know how he truly feels about Christy. Felicia/Charlie: I enjoyed the conversation these two had. What was even better, was when Felicia and Christy got into it. HOWEVER, that does really worry me. But, Felicia can overcome anything. I liked that last minute look between Charlie and Eric. Rachel/Carl: Oh Carl, please tell Rachel. Yet, at heart I think he is protecting her. I just don't want Carl to leave Bay City and his family in a rut once he dies. I would like to see more of the others. I miss your other characters. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK ON:

ALL MY CHILDREN - EPISODE 12 WRITTEN BY: CASEY HUTCHISON CREATED BY: AGNES NIXON TIME OF DAY: MORNING RYAN AND GREENLEE'S: Ryan, Greenlee, and Emma are eating breakfast. RYAN: How do you like your birthday breakfast? EMMA: I love it daddy! GREENLEE: Do you want more syrup? EMMA: Yes please, Greenlee. Greenlee pours more syrup on Emma's pancakes. EMMA: Thank you. GREENLEE: Of course. Hey Ryan. RYAN: Yes? GREENLEE: Can I talk to you about something? RYAN: Sure. They stand up, and go somewhere private in the apartment. RYAN: What is this about. GREENLEE: The baby. ------------------------------------------------------- ANNIE'S HOTEL ROOM: Annie is looking at baby pictures of Emma. ANNIE: I miss you. Happy birthday my little girl. --------------------------------------------------------- DAVID'S PENTHOUSE: David is reading the morning news paper. The doorbell rings. DAVID: Be right there! He gets up to answer it. DAVID: Well..., Well..., Well. Can I help you with something? ADAM: I am going to give you the best news you will receive all year. ------------------------------------------------------------- ------------------------------------------------------------ CONFUSION: Colby pays for her to-go coffee. As she turns around, she bumps into someone. COLBY: Hey watch it! MAN: Oh, I am s... COLBY: It's you. ----------------------------------------------------------- KRYSTAL'S DINER: Jackson is also reading the morning news paper. Someone walks up to him. ERICA: We need to speak. JACKSON: There's not a lot to talk about. After what you said. ERICA: We are going to talk anyways. JACKSON: You kissed another man, because I wouldn't take you back. Erica sits. ERICA: I admitted that to you. JACKSON: You still don't get it. Do you? ERICA: What do you mean? JACKSON: You do this every single time. ----------------------------------------------------------- RYAN AND GREENLEE'S: Ryan hugs Greenlee. RYAN: Are you okay? Is the baby okay? GREENLEE: We are perfectly fine. RYAN: Then, what is it. GREENLEE: Ryan, we found out that Annie is here. She is out of the hospital. It is Emma's birthday. She knows that, of course. I just think that she might come here. Don't you? RYAN: It is a possiblity. Annie wouldn't risk coming here though. Anyways, on the other hand, what does this have to do with our baby? You can tell me anything. GREENLEE: I know that. (Sighs) Ryan..., if she comes here, I think bad things will happen where this baby is concerned. I mean, she is crazy. I wouldn't put it past her. RYAN: If it makes you feel better, I will watch for her. GREENLEE: Okay. RYAN: Now, let's finish our breakfast, so we can get the decorations hung. -------------------------------------------------- KRYSTAL'S DINER: Jackson puts his paper, in his briefcase. ERICA: What do you mean by I do this every time? JACKSON: You bounce from man to man. ERICA: That is not true. JACKSON: (Laughs) ERICA: What? JACKSON: Never mind. You know what I mean. ERICA: Jackson, you don't get it. I was honest with you! I still love you. JACKSON: I'm not sure that is possible. ERICA: Will we ever be the same? JACKSON: I don't think so. Jackson stands. JACKSON: Goodbye Erica. Erica stands. ERICA: Jackson! You can't just walk away from me! Everyone is stunned. THEN... ERICA STARTS FLASHING BACK: ERICA: Not again. Erica is short of breath, then she faints. Jackson rushes to her. JACKSON: Erica! Erica, are you alright? Wake Up! Someone call 9-1-1! ---------------------------------------------------------- FADE OUT: --------------------------------------------------------- ON THE NEXT ALL MY CHILDREN: Colby: We need to talk. Adam: Money! People: Happy Birthday Emma! -----------------------------------------------------

LOVED THIS EPISODE! THIS IS THE Y&R I'VE BEEN WAITING ON!!!!!!! Karynn/Nate: I kind of feel bad for Karynn. She is a good woman. I know she is. She will get through this whole thing. Abby/Devon/Roxanne: These were some good scenes. I LOVED Abby's nickname! That was hilarious. Avery/Phillip: I hope he is okay!!!! I am soooo worried. Avery will save him LOL. Nikki: Poor Nikki. That limo driver looked like the one from Dynasty that Fallon had the affair with LOL! Anyways, I do feel bad for Nikki. Heaven help her!!! Keep up the GREAT work on:

Your show seems to get better as it goes on. I am sooooo worried for some of you characters. They seem to get themselves into some bad situations. I wonder if Elijah is going to make trouble in the town. He looks like he will not be the person who just wants to sit back and watch. Dani is still standing some ground. I like that though. It stays true to her. Keep up the great work!!!

This was a GREAT episode! Mitch/Felicia: It is great to see them running smoothly. Can't wait for them to really take off!!! Cass/Frankie: At least Frankie is kind of taking a stance for some stuff. I absolutely loved how you wrote in this episode. Paulina/Grant: Still can't believe Grant showed up. Paulina was strong. You go girl!!!

Interesting. Good start and great way to bring in the ATWT stuff Can't wait for it all to unfold again

ALL MY CHILDREN - EPISODE 11 WRITTEN BY: CASEY HUTCHISON CREATED BY: AGNES NIXON TIME OF DAY: NIGHT THE CHANDLER MANSION: Brooke walks into the mansion. BROOKE: Adam! Adam! Come here please! Adam comes down the stairs. ADAM: What is wrong my dear? BROOKE: We need to have a serious talk. -------------------------------------------------- CONFUSION: Liza is eating dinner and drinking wine. She is also going over some paper work. LIZA: (Sighs) As she drinks some wine, it slips out of her hand. It spills on the papers. LIZA: Dammit! A man comes up to her. He hands her a napkin. CALEB: Will this help? LIZA: What the hell do you want? -------------------------------------------------- --------------------------------------------------- KENDALL AND ZACK'S: Kendall and Zack are sitting on the couch. They are kissing. KENDALL: I am happy that our nanny took the boys. ZACK: I am happy she did too. KENDALL: I bet you are. They continue to kiss. ZACK: What's wrong? KENDALL: (Sighs) I just keep thinking about that phone call. ZACK: Kendall..., everything will be fine. KENDALL: Zack, I have lived in this town for over twenty years. Nothing is ever fine. ----------------------------------------------- ERICA'S PENTHOUSE: Erica is pouring some wine. ERICA: Any moment Erica. The doorbell is rung. ERICA: Here he is! Erica goes to answer the door. JACKSON: Erica, why did you call me over here? ERICA: I need to tell you what I did. ------------------------------------------------ CONFUSION: Liza stands and wipes off her dress. LIZA: I don't need anything from you. So, just back off. CALEB: I can see that you do need some help. You have wine everywhere. LIZA: I will take care of it. CALEB: And, I'll help you. LIZA: NO!... (Sighs) No you will not. You will not help me. You want to know why? Because, you made the choice to help some one else. You made the choice to help Erica. CALEB: Come on Liza. LIZA: What? What? Low blow? Is that what you think? CALEB: Liza... LIZA: You haven't apologized. You haven't said one damn word. CALEB: I am sorry that I kissed Erica. LIZA: Go to hell. Liza walks off. --------------------------------------------- KENDALL AND ZACK'S: Kendall brings in two cups of coffee. She hands one to Zack. KENDALL: I just don't think everything will run smoothly. ZACK: Kendall do you have the evidence? KENDALL: You know I do. ZACK: (Sighs) KENDALL: Just look at my past with Erica. To this day, some things aren't fine. ZACK: I know a lot has happened with you two. KENDALL: But, this time is different. Erica never stalked me. This is a stalker. This is some one coming after me. I know it was just one phone call. But, these things always turn into something more than that. You know they do. But, I will be prepared. I will be prepared for anything that is thrown my way. ----------------------------------------------------------- THE CHANDLER MANSION: Brooke crosses her arms. ADAM: What do we need to talk about, that is serious? BROOKE: Liza, Dixie, all of that. All of that needs to be discussed. Be honest with me Adam. Are you going to do something that is going to be frowned upon? FLASHBACK TO EPISODE 2: ADAM: I am going to fund Orpheus. FLASHBACK TO EPISODE 10: DIXIE: My son thinks that David is plotting against him. Are you helping him? (END OF FLASHBACKS) ADAM: You know, I am not the only one who has done bad stuff, that is frowned upon. BROOKE: What are you talking about. ADAM: You cheated on me nineteen years ago. Or did that slip your mind? BROOKE: It is not about me right now. Once again, are YOU doing something that will be frowned upon? Be honest Adam. If you are not honest, I will leave you. ADAM: Brooke, I am not doing anything that will be frowned upon. BROOKE: Okay. Okay. (Sighs) Good. Now, come here. Brooke hugs Adam. He is thinking about what he has just done. ---END OF EPISODE 11---

Hmmmm interesting episode. Jack/Paulina: I LOVE where this is going. I love them together. It gives them a whole new start in life. The Cory Family: I love that you mentioned the stalker. Very few things get mentioned like that. And if they do, then it is a quick one. But, you explained the stalker and Frankie and Fax. I really enjoyed that. It was nice to hear that all over again. Great Job! Christy/Grant: I wonder what Grant found exactly. Christy... she is a type of bitch that is special LOL. LOVE HOW U WRITE HER!!!!!!! AS ALWAYS KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK ON:

This is improving now! Emily is written very well in this version. We get to see more of her true colors than we did. I am also loving how you write Barbara. She still has that whole I-will-get-what-I-want thing going on. Oh JJ, look what you are up to now LOL. Maybe he can't leave those Salem roots after all. I wonder who is ahead of Steve. Are we going to work an even bigger story into an already huge one??? Interesting! Loving it! Keep up the good work!!!