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  1. LOVED THIS EPISODE!!! Really well written and fast moving. JJ/Jennifer: I liked that JJ pulled away. Jennifer needs to know who Liam is, before she does anything serious. I just hope that Jenn can get on his trail, before he comes back to interrupt. Laura/Sami: I do love how you write Sami with a true back bone. She spent some of her years with out one. But, you are letting us see a different side to her, that I am enjoying. KEEP THIS UP PLEASE!!! Sonny/Will: I love what you are doing with these two. You are finally giving them a story that means something. Unlike, how the TV version does. You are having Sonny accountable, instead of Will becoming Sami 2.0. I like this route muccccchhhhh better! Brady's Memorial: I loved how you kicked things off. Seeing Chloe back was great! I liked how you let us know where she left off, and what she was doing. Usually DAYS just sweeps her 1 week returns under the rugs LOL. Can't wait to see how the Brady story line impacts Salem in the future. You are doing a really good job with this. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
  2. All My Children - Episode #16 Created By: Agnes Nixon Written By: Casey Hutchison --------------------------------------------- INT. CHANDLER MANSION - NIGHT Adam: What? Stuart: (Laughs) Adam, I know you are working with him. Adam: What is that supposed to mean? Stuart: I know that you are working with David Hayward. Adam: Listen here! Stuart: Don't you talk to me like that. You haven't heard what I am going to say, yet. Adam: What is that supposed to mean? --- INT. CRAFT ROOM - AFTERNOON Greenlee and Ryan enter. Marian is looking out the window. Ryan: Marian. Greenlee: Hello? She turns around. Marian: I know why you are here. Greenlee: You do? Marian: Yes. Please sit. They all sit. Ryan: So, you know what happened with Annie? Marian: I do. But, I need something first. Greenlee: Anything. Marian: You have to promise to believe me. Ryan: Why wouldn't we? Marian: Because, what I am about to tell you, might seem odd. Greenlee and Ryan are wondering what could seem so odd about Annie. --- --- INT. ANNIE'S HOTEL ROOM - NIGHT Emma is sleeping on the bed. Annie goes into the bathroom. Woman: Please let us go. My daughter and I won't speak a word. Annie: You don't get it. Do you? Woman: What do you mean? Annie: You are the mom of my daughter's best friend. Greenlee and Ryan think that Emma is spending a whole week with you guys. That buys me some time. Just think of yourself as an insurance policy. Woman: Lady... Annie: Who knows? I might let you go. Annie shuts the door. --- INT. ZACK AND KENDALL'S HOME - NIGHT Zack and Kendall are on the couch. Kendall: I am shocked that the boys fell asleep that fast. After taking them to see Jurassic World, let's just say that ice cream took their sugar high to a whole new level. It's amazing how fast it can happen. Zack: Yes it is. Kendall's phone rings. Zack: Do you really have to answer that? Kendall: I do. It might be Jackson or Binx, with an update on my mom. Zack: (Sighs) True. Kendall answers her phone. Kendall: Hello? Hello? Hello? (Static on the phone) Listen here, the police are after you. So, whoever this is, I've already taken care of you as an issue. Do you understand me? Kendall hangs up. They both stand. Zack: Dammit! Kendall: I can't take this. I don't have time for this. Zack: I know. Kendall: So, what are we going to do? Zack: We will go to Jesse. Kendall: Okay. I have to call Rosie. See if she can babysit. Zack: Okay. Kendall: Be sure to grab my purse. --- INT. CHANDLER MANSION - NIGHT Adam eats a bowl of bar nuts. Adam: You still haven't said what you need to. Stuart: I thought you would have figured something out by now. Adam: No, I haven't. Stuart: Adam, I'll keep your secret. On one condition. Adam: I'm listening. Stuart: Marian is getting released soon. Adam: Really? Stuart: Yes. Adam: What does my secret have to do with her? Stuart: You are going to keep her here. Let her live at the Chandler Mansion, and your secret is not blown sky high. So, what is it going to be? Will you let me keep your secret, as you keep Marian here? Adam: I'll take you up on that brother. Stuart: Let's shake on it. After all, that's how you do real deals. The two shake hands. --- INT. JESSE'S OFFICE - NIGHT Kendall, Zack, and Jesse enter. They sit down. Jesse: So, the stalker didn't say anything? Kendall: Exactly. Zack: He or she just keeps sending these static, weird calls. Jesse: So, no text? Threatening voice mails or emails? Kendall: Nope. Jesse, it is really starting to worry me. Jesse: Kendall, that's normal. Zack: (Sighs) Jesse: Kendall, hand me your phone. Kendall: Okay. Kendall hands over the phone. Zack: What are you doing? Jesse is taking out chips and wires. Jesse: The things I am taking out can be used to track. I am going to see if the same thing can happen with tracking the stalker. It is unlikely, but it just might work. Do you mind if I keep this stuff? Kendall: No problem. I can pick up a burner. Not a problem. Zack: Thanks Jesse. Jesse: Of course. --- INT. PINE VALLEY HOSPITAL - NIGHT Angie is at the front desk. She is looking Opal's chart. She can't help but worry for Opal. Is one of Pine Valley's best really dying? She is worried, but knows she can't stop doing her work. THEN... Angie: What is this? She sees something odd in the chart. Angie: Oh my goodness. Angie gets a phone. Angie: Tad, this is Angie. Get Opal to the hospital, now! --- INT. CRAFT ROOM - NIGHT Greenlee and Ryan are intrigued. Marian: Annie, was released about six months ago. She wanted to revamp her life. I said that I know of this motel on Cryer street. It isn't much. But, it is cheap. So, she thought about it. She would call me. She checked up on the comings and goings of Oak Haven. One day, she told me about her plan to redeem herself, and take what is rightfully hers. But, I..., I..., I, think she has gotten out of control. Greenlee: What do you mean? Marian: She talked about taking Emma. Ryan: What!? Ryan stands with Greenlee. Marian: I hope that I didn't upset you. Greenlee: It is fine Marian. Thank you. Marian: Of course dear. Bye. Greenlee and Ryan go out to the hall. Ryan: We have to go to that hotel room. Greenlee: We can't. Ryan: What do you mean? Greenlee: We have to get the police with us. Ryan: You're right. You're right. Greenlee: We'll get Emma back. And, I'll kill this bitch. I promise you that. Greenlee and Ryan hold hands, and walk down the hall. --- Announcer: On The Next "All My Children" Angie: It is bad news. * Stuart: I'm going to pick her up. * Jesse: What's the news, Brot? * J.R.: I'm here to see my son. * Amanda: I have some news to share with you. --- ---
  3. Loved this episode! It was very built up type stuff. Which is good. Jennifer/Liam/JJ: Liam is still way more interesting on your version than he ever was on television. You are revealing true layers about this character. The call was very good and completely unexpected for JJ to find out. Good Work! Sami/Laura: This scene was riveting. It reveals way more to Sami. The descriptions were spot on. Sami is going to have alot to play on as this plot comes back from the year of 2007. Victor/Sonny: I LOVED THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It was very raw. It was very DAYS. This scene was magic. I love where you take Victor and how you use him. We finally see Victor Kiriakis in his true colors again. Hope/Aiden: I thought this was so funny and cute. It kinda put a smile on my face. I liked how it was written. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
  4. What a drama filled show! I love it!!! Sheryl/Jordan: They keep getting more interesting. Jerome Grant is a great way to keep them moving on up in the whole story line mode. I love how you continue to write them in the way that you do. Sonny/Victor: Sonny..., this could spell trouble for you and Will. I don't like where this is going for them. If Sonny lays on to much, then Victor might want to go after more where Will is concerned. Victor has never wanted to feel defeated no matter if family gets in the way or not. John/Kayla: This was probably the most interesting part of the episode. What did John mean? Will Kayla do this??? Interesting plot twist and some damn good mystery. I can't wait to see this story unfold. Kim/Billie/Daniel: OH BILLIE!!!!!!!!!!! I loved her line in the elevator. I see maybe a catfight coming LOL. Nick/Kate: Kate better watch out! Something might be coming her way that she doesn't want. And that thing is Nick. If Kate digs to deep, then Nick might have something for her, that she can't handle. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
  5. I LOVED THAT THIS EPISODE WAS LONGER!!!!!!!!!! You got some things cleared up by it being longer. Jennifer/Sami: I loved this talk. It was good that Jenn and Sami might be looking out for one another. Until Sami finds out the truth LOL. I loved how you wrote EJ's little exit in the scene. It was just like him LOL. Kate/Victor: Victor better start to watch out. Several people are against him now. JUST LIKE OLD TIMES! LOL. Sheryl/Jordan: Oh Sheryl. She has not really discovered what she is getting into. I like how you write these two. They are far more interesting on this version. They have actual story going on, that means something. Billie/Daniel/Kim: I like the whole Billie/Daniel thing. It has potential to be longer lasting. I think Kim is going above and beyond to do something, that really doesn't need to be done. But, I like the whole Mama Bear act. Roman/Kayla: I feel so bad for Roman. His memory loss seems a lot more severe than Caroline's. I hope that Kayla can be one of his hero. He needs to find one. Kayla has the resources to help him. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
  6. Episodes just keep getting better, as I am back to reading! So, let's begin: Marlena/Caroline/Eric: Wow, what a shocker to know that Salem is going ahead with the whole memorial for Brady thing. I feel so bad for Roman. However, this does give him something to do. I love the character, and can't wait to see where you take him. I wonder how Caroline will do with the news. Hope/Nicole/Nick: I was really scared for Hope LOL. But, you showed us that Fancy Face still got it! I loved the whole Nicole/Nick exchange. They do awesome in the scenes. I love the storyline you have for them. And, I loved Nicole's comment to Hope LOL. It is Nicole at her best. The Board Meeting: WOW! What a shocker for John's vote. But, I had the feeling he would say no for the continuation. And Kate..., she is quite the woman after all these decades LOL. I loved her and Victor's encounter in the conference room. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
  7. WOW WHAT A GREAT EPISODE!!! Jen/EJ: FINALLY! Jennifer has some back bone. It is about time she goes after her beliefs again. I feel like Jen may find out soon... the truth. It will be interesting to see how EJ decides to cover some things up in the future. Will/Sonny/Gabi: I loved the whole Will/Sonny spat. It was very real and well written. Plus, you have those characters down pat. I LOVE THAT! I loved what Gabi said about the whole our lives will be good thingy. Obviously she was talking about Nick. But, what does she have planned next for him? Nick/Gabi is by far my favorite story line at the moment. It is full of drama and mystery. The Board Meeting: It keeps building and building. I agree with ML. I for sure thought that John was going to give us a vote in this episode LOL! But, guess I will have to wait on that one LOL. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
  8. I agree with Days22. This episode was SUPER INTENSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVED how you did the party. It was focusing on central plot lines. Things were clearing up. It was defiantly some of your best work yet. It was very hard to read for me. Because, I felt bad for so many people. Especially Lily, this really sucks for her. All she wants to do is come back and get her Genoa City life back. And, I do feel bad for Malcolm. This shouldn't happen to anyone. But, it happened to him. It is also a great way to keep the whole Neil/Malcolm stuff going. I know that your writing is going to shine in the future even more than it already is. And, it is going to shine because of stories like this. I keep telling you how great Sister P. is. She continues to make me have tears, because I laugh so hard. I am happy that you continue to write for her. I think she might actually get more screen time than she already has. And, if she does, then that makes me happy!!!!!!!!!!! The Verdon Lou story continues to be a powerhouse. It continues to be interesting, more than ever now! I also continue to wonder who that damn patient is!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I think that is the most interesting part about the Lou story. Because, it will be a HUGE game changer. ALSO, Cane. There is not enough words to describe him LOL! He is defiantly one of your best characters at the moment. You let him shine through all this dialogue. He is finally getting a real story. Only if he was like this on television LOL. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE DELIVER MORE LIKE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
  9. All My Children - Episode #15 Created By: Agnes Nixon Written By: Casey Hutchison --------------------------------------------- INT. ERICA'S HOSPITAL ROOM - AFTERNOON Erica sits up in bed. Erica: How dare you. Jackson: Erica, it is a valid question. Erica: I'll answer it then. I did not drink. Now, get that through your damn head! --- INT. LIZA AND CALEB'S HOME - AFTERNOON Liza throws her hands up. Liza: I don't know. I just don't know. Caleb: Liza, do you really want to feud and feud? Liza: Maybe. Caleb: What do you mean, maybe? Liza: Maybe I want to continue this feud, so you feel the pain I do. Caleb: Pain? What pain? --- INT. OAK HAVEN MENTAL HOSPITAL - AFTERNOON Greenlee and Ryan enter Oak Haven. They proceed to the front desk. Receptionist: Can I help you two? Greenlee: Yes. We are here for visiting hours. Receptionist: Who are you here to see? Ryan: Marian Colby. --- --- INT. CHANDLER MANSION - AFTERNOON Stuart enters. Stuart: (Sighs) Adam enters. Stuart: Adam. I am happy that you are here. Adam: (Whispers) Of course you are. Stuart: What was that? Adam: Oh nothing. What's up? Stuart: We need to talk. Adam: About what? Stuart: David Hayward. --- INT. KRYSTAL'S DINER - AFTERNOON Brot and Natalia sit at a table. Brot: I am glad that the doctor said you were doing good. Natalia: Me too. Our little baby is growing big and strong. Brot: Yes he is. Natalia: (Laughs) And, what makes you think that this baby is a he? Brot: (Laughs) I have that feeling. Either way our baby will be a Cubs fan. Natalia: Yeah, we'll see. There is a short silence between the two. Brot: What? Natalia: I'm so happy. Brot: Me too. He kisses her. Natalia: Thank you for always being by my side. Brot: Of course. I'll love you forever. Natalia: The same goes for me. Brot: Now, get over here. Natalia: (Laughs) They kiss again. --- INT. LIZA AND CALEB'S HOME - AFTERNOON Liza sits down. Liza: I've been through so much in the relationship department. I've been married four times. All to Adam. I've been with Tad. I kissed Gil Barrett. I was with Jake, Jonathan Kinder, Ryan. I've had two one night stands. One with Zack. The other with Damon Miller. And now..., I came to this. Me and you. (SHE STANDS) You were going to propose. I might have said yes. But, then, I come home, and you are right here; in this very room, locking lips with "the" Erica Kane. I see that you want her. From the first time you laid eyes on her, you wanted to be with her. It's fine. Go. I'll get out of your hair. Caleb: It was one time Liza. And, you seem to not want to know the truth. Liza: What truth? Caleb: Liza, Erica never wanted me. She gave me that kiss to make Jackson jealous. Liza: What? Caleb: (Sighs) Erica came here. She was upset. Very upset. Apparently, her and Jackson got into a fight at Bianca and Marisa's. I just tried to comfort her, without the kiss. As soon as we started talking, she kissed me. Liza: And, I'm supposed to believe that? Caleb: Believe whatever you want. But, this is the truth. Liza checks her watch. Liza: I need to go. I have a deposition to go to. Caleb: Will you think about what I said? Liza: Sure. I'll give it some thought. Caleb: Thank you. Liza: Don't mention it. Seriously, don't. Liza walks out. Caleb: (Sighs) --- INT. CHANDLER MANSION - AFTERNOON Adam pours himself a scotch. Adam: We don't need to worry about David Hayward. Stuart: Actually, we do. Adam: Why is that. Stuart: Oh my lord! Adam: What? Stuart: (Laughs) Adam, I know you are working with him. Adam: Excuse me? Stuart: You didn't think I would notice the two million dollars taken from the bank. Now, tell me brother, why would you work with such an evil person? And, I know you are lying to Brooke. So, tell me. Why would you do this? --- INT. ERICA'S HOSPITAL ROOM - AFTERNOON Jackson is out of the room. Erica is laying in her bed. Erica: I know I didn't take a drink. --- INT. CRAFT ROOM - AFTERNOON Greenlee and Ryan enter. Marian is looking out the window. Ryan: Marian. Greenlee: Hello? She turns around. Marian: I know why you are here. Greenlee: You do? Ryan: Really? Marian: Yes, you want to know everything about Annie. Ryan: Yes, yes we do. Marian: Where do I even begin? --- INT. ANNIE'S HOTEL ROOM - AFTERNOON Annie sits on the bed. Annie: I've kidnapped my daughter. I've kidnapped a mother and a daughter. I've sent mysterious phone calls to Kendall. And, I poisoned Erica's drink and dinner with alcohol. Oh, Annie, you get better at this all the time. --- Announcer: On The Next "All My Children" Marian: You have to promise to believe me. Adam: Listen here! Annie: I might let you go. Angie: What is this? Zack: Dammit! --- ---
  10. I have to agree with ML about the song. It matched not only the scenes but the show perfectly. You really know what you want in your show which makes me extremely happy for you. I love how you write Billy. You really just bring Billy in the right way. It reminds me of how I fell in love with his character when I first started to watch The Young and the Restless. OH JJ! I have a feeling that JJ doesn't know what he is after in life here. He is still trying to find his footing. Which is good. If you are starting a triangle let it develop. This is gonna be good! Derrick? He seems like he is going to set up some good story in the future for your show. I was instantly intrigued by when you put the description of him having shadiness in his eyes. The whole gang thing will get interesting. Chavo and Vin..., interesting names LOL. Just Paradise is slowly starting to seem like no Paradise at all LOL. I continue to love how you do this show. It is neat and fresh each week. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
  11. I ADORED THE BIGGER PRINT!!!!!!!!!!!!! This was another amazing episode. I agree with Cary on the balance. It was very well put together. I am worried about Malcolm. He seems to get darker and darker. It makes me think about the future of the character. I wonder where you are going with his whole plot. Verdon Lou just gets better and better. I really don't want that story to end LOL. However, it is reaching an UNBELIEVABLE climax. I cannot wait to see where the story goes from here. I feel like something bad is going to happen to Avery. I just have that feeling LOL!!!!!!!! KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!! This is truly your best work yet.
  12. I LOVED THIS EPISODE!!!!!!!!!!! Everything about it was just so intense and very dramatic. Of course, It all lead up to the whole BIG LILY REVEAL!!! I knew it was Lily LOL. I am interested in why you picked the particular actress you did. But, I know you will make it good. I LOVE SISTER P!!!!!!!! Give me more of her please. She brings that comedic relief to the show. Which I do love. She just brightens up any episode. When you need a joke get Sister P LOL I continue to love the Cane plot. It is just so intense. So many secrets about Cane's life are being exposed. Genoa City is about ready to be rocked by him. And, I will love every moment! I also love the whole Rox/Hillary thingy. They are just drama drama drama. I love how you bring your blacks to the front burner. It makes for some wonderful and enjoyable scenes. The tense terrorist thing was really getting to me. I see some good future set up. GOOD WORK ML!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
  13. What an amazing 200th episode of ANOTHER WORLD! I can't believe it has been long enough for you to have this accomplishment. Congratulations to you!!! I ADORED THE SPECIAL OPENING! I had a tear stroll down my face LOL. I loved the Cass/Frankie scene. I see a future for them. I hope you do to. Rachel and Carl. We are going to have to say goodbye soon. This is just to sad. However, you are managing to do this with the correct balance of drama/romance/mystery. Hats off to you. It is truly a wonderful storyline. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HERE IS TO ANOTHER 200 (and beyond)!
  14. The FIRST thing that I loved about this episode was by far the episode title. It was just so funny. And, I loved how you constructed the episode. I think Eliza is by far one of your most interesting characters. She seems like you can do anything with her. Right now, you are taking her down this whole sexy route. I LOVE THAT!!!!!!!!! But, I do kind of feel bad for Miranda. Emily is qualified Lucas LOL, u r right. She is qualified for a lot of things. I like how you write these business stories. They are very well talked about. It seems like it is going to be good. Oh Emily, just wait until you see what Paul has been up to LOL! Stefano..., I swear! If he did anything to Bo, I will jump through this computer screen, and kill him for the 14th time LOL. I like where this storyline is going. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
  15. All My Children - Episode #14 Created By: Agnes Nixon Written By: Casey Hutchison ---------------------------------------------------------------- INT. ERICA'S HOSPITAL ROOM - MORNING Jackson enters. Erica: Jackson. Jackson: Good morning. Erica: What are you doing here? Jackson: I actually came, because Joe called me. Erica: What? Jackson: Erica, your results are in. Joe enters. Joe: She isn't okay. --- INT. LIZA AND CALEB'S HOME - MORNING Liza comes down the stairs with a suitcase. Caleb enters. He shuts the door behind him. Caleb: Oh! Liza, you scared me. Liza: I am here to get my things. ​Caleb: I see that. Do you think that is necessary? Liza: I don't know. Did you think it was necessary to kiss Erica? --- --- INT. PINE VALLEY HOSPITAL - MORNING Opal and Tad come out of the hospital room. Tad: You okay, ma? Opal: I am dying. I know that. Angie: WHAT?! Opal: Angie. Angie: Opal..., what did you say? --- INT. LIZA AND CALEB'S HOME - MORNING Caleb sets his to-go coffee down. Caleb: Are we really going to do this again? Liza: We will do this as many times as we need too. Caleb, I don't think that you get it, yet. Relationships are all about discussing and working through obstacles. But, you don't want to talk about this. You don't even want it to be discussed by Erica. And, she was the one who was a partner in this whole thing. Why are you doing this? This doesn't seem like you at all. What gives? Caleb: (Sighs) I made one mistake. You can't blame me, for not wanting to talk about it. I admit that it was a mistake. I just want to move on with you, and only you. Can you do that with me Liza? Can you forget my ghastly mistake? Can you do that? So, we can move on? Liza starts to think, silently. --- INT. KRYSTAL'S HOME - MORNING Kevin (FAKE J.R.) has his feet on the coffee table. Krystal comes down the stairs. Krystal: Get your feet off my table. Kevin does so, and stands. Kevin: Do you always have to be so... Krystal: What? Kevin: You know. Krystal: (Sighs) We need to get some things straight. Kevin: Like what? Krystal: Some ground rules. Kevin: Oh, really? I hate ground rules. Krystal: Listen, you are a doppelganger. You are not the real J.R. You are helping me get rid of him. You listen to me. You do not go outside. In less than five seconds, I can have David on the phone. One call to him, and you are finished! Done! S.O.L. Do you hear me? Kevin: Loud and clear. Krystal: Good. Now, breakfast is ready. Krystal walks off. Kevin: This is going to be a long day. --- INT. HOSPITAL ROOM #2 - MORNING Angie, Opal, and Tad walk back into a hospital room. Angie: Opal, what gives? Tad: We need to get some things straight around here. Angie: What? Opal, are you dying? What is going on? I know I sound pushy, but I am worried about you. No one just comes out of a hospital room and says that. Opal: Angie, before I tell you this, you have to promise me something. Angie: What? Anything. Opal: I need you to keep this a secret. Tad: We mean that. Angie: (Laughs) Of course. Opal: Angie..., I have a brain tumor. Angie: What did you just say? Opal: It's true. Angie: When did this happen? Tad: We found out about a month ago. Angie: I see. Do you need me to do anything? Who has the case? Opal: I am fine. Joe has the case. Angie: Opal, listen, if you need me to be brought on as a consultant, I can talk to Joe. I will do anything that you need done. Do you hear me? Opal: Yes I do. Thank you Angie. Angie: Of course. Come here. They hug. Tad: Anyways, ma needs plenty of rest. We probably need to get her home. Angie: Yeah. Opal: Thanks again. Angie: Good luck. Opal: Bye. Angie: Bye. --- INT. ERICA'S HOSPITAL ROOM - MORNING Erica is startled. Erica: Joe, what is it? What is going on? Joe: Erica, it turns out that you blacked out. Now, this goes back to when you admitted back in 2003 and in 2004. Do you remember that? Erica: Joe, that was because of my drinking. I haven't had a drop since. Joe: Actually you have. Jackson: Joe, I don't want to be disrespectful, but that is absolutely ludicrous. Joe: We tested her blood. It appears you had a drink with dinner, last night. We tested your blood as soon as you were admitted. It was .01. Erica: That is insane! How dare you! Joe, I can't believe you are telling me this. I want you out! I want you out of my hospital room, now! Get out! Get out! Joe: Okay. Joe exits. Jackson: Erica, tell me the truth. Did you take a drink? --- Announcer: On The Next "All My Children" Liza: Maybe. Erica: How dare you. Natalia: I am happy. Marian: Where do you want me to begin? Stuart: Oh my lord! --- THIS EPISODE IS DEDICATED TO THE MEMORY OF ANNE MEARA: --- ---
  16. What an great episode! Sharlene/Frankie: These were some good relaxing scenes. It was very nice to just go ahead and listen to what they have to say. I wonder what is going on with Frankie though. I started to wonder if you are working up a Fax Newman return??? Mitch/Felicia: First of all, Christy get over yourself LOL!!! Anyways, I love how you write them. When they are in the episodes, I just see how much you love this soap opera for some reason. You do well with their stories. Carl/Rachel/Russ: I can't tell you how much this truly does break my heart. I can't believe that Rachel is going to have to say goodbye to another love. I feel so sorry for her. I also feel sorry for Carl. I can see that he doesn't want to leave Bay City and his family behind. I can't wait to see what happens at this party. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!!!!!!!!! CAN"T WAIT TO SEE WHAT YOU HAVE FOR US IN THE NEXT EPISODE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (200)
  17. What a WONDERFUL episode! Felicia: She has some big choices to make these days about her stories. I am glad that you kept on with the core of her character, which is to write. But, judging by the title of this episode, we all know that Iris is up to something!!! Joy/Iris: Both interesting phone calls. Joy, such a crazy character. I am still trying to figure her out. I wonder who is coming to Bay City. This should be interesting. I am sooo ready!!! LOL! Tyrone/Donna/Marley/Michele: I am so worried for Michele and her future with Bridget. We can all see why Donna was so worried. She has every right to be! I am worried myself! Great episodes lately!!! KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
  18. OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Now, stuff is picking up!!!!!!!!!! Stefano..., what is he up too? I think you are trying the classic Stefano. If you are, then I am up for it! "HENRY: Probably not long enough. I do not like the sound of this BRO resurrection.", interesting. I wonder what is going to happen there. This line kind of just stuck with me. I wonder what will happen. Love how you write Henry/Barbara. It was classic Henry. I love Katsu. It is because, he is interesting. He is like classic interesting soap characters. You are doing a wonderful job with this! KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
  19. I LOVED THE MONTAGE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It was probably one of my favorite parts it was very well written! This was a good episode. It was putting me in the soap opera mood! The ATWT characters are very well written. My favorite storyline currently probably goes to Paul. It is really well written. I also liked the whole JJ/Miranda thingy that went on in this episode. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
  20. ALL MY CHILDREN - EPISODE 13 WRITTEN BY: CASEY HUTCHISON CREATED BY: AGNES NIXON TIME OF DAY: AFTERNOON RYAN AND GREENLEE'S: Ryan and Greenlee are cleaning up from Emma's birthday. RYAN: Do you feel safer now? GREENLEE: What do you mean? RYAN: Annie didn't show up. GREENLEE: No, she didn't. Anyways, are you going to put the cake away? RYAN: Yeah. I can take care of it. As Ryan walks off, Greenlee sees a gift. GREENLEE: What's this? She opens it. GREENLEE: Oh my god! Oh my god! Ryan! Ryan! Ryan runs to Greenlee. RYAN: Babe, what is it? He sees the gun. RYAN: What the hell? -------------------------------------------------------------- ANNIE'S HOTEL ROOM: Annie sits on the bed. ANNIE: (Sighs) I hope Ryan and Greenlee got my present. Do you think it was a good present? Come on, you can tell me what you think. But, be honest. Please, be honest. The camera pans over to Emma. She is sitting in a chair, drinking a juice box. EMMA: That was a good gift mommy. ANNIE: Excellent. --------------------------------------------------------------- ---------------------------------------------------------------- DAVID’S PENTHOUSE: Adam and David are drinking coffee. DAVID: So, Adam Chandler is going to make my day. You have been here for about ten minutes. All you have done is drink my coffee. So, are you going to make my day yet? Because, I really don't have all of it to waste. Go ahead, Adam. The floor is all yours. ADAM: Fine, I guess I will tell you. DAVID: Oh yay! ADAM: David, I am going to fund Orpheus for you. David spits his coffee out. ------------------------------------------------------------------ CHANDLER MANSION: Colby walks in. Asher is behind her. COLBY: Did you follow me here? ASHER: I did. COLBY: Wonderful! ASHER: Colby, I just want to talk to you. COLBY: I don't want to talk to you! ASHER: Why not? COLBY: You don't get it. Do you? ASHER: What are you talking about? COLBY: You left here. You threw us away. I didn't. ------------------------------------------------------------- RYAN AND GREENLEE'S: Ryan comes back outside. RYAN: (Sighs) I called Andrea's mom. She said her and Emma are playing up in her room. GREENLEE: Good. RYAN: (Sighs) GREENLEE: What the hell is this? Is this Annie's doing? RYAN: Do you think it is. GREENLEE: I do. RYAN: I hope it isn't. GREENLEE: I know who we have to go and see. RYAN: What do you mean? GREENLEE: if we want to find out if this is Annie's doing, then we have to go to Marian. I say that, because when Oak Haven was set on fire, a lot was uncovered about who is a team in there. I remember that Marian and Annie were a team. RYAN: But..., GREENLEE: They still are, and I know it. Now, let's go. ------------------------------------------------------------------- ANNIE'S HOTEL ROOM: Annie stands. ANNIE: Stay here honey. Annie goes into the bathroom. Andrea and her mom are sitting in the bathroom. They are tied up. ANNIE: Thank you for faking your voice. -------------------------------------------------------------------- CHANDLER MANSION: Asher sits. COLBY: Of course you are sitting. He stands. ASHER: What is that supposed to mean? COLBY: You just sit when big things are thrown your way. You always do that. AHSER: Colby, tell me your true feelings. COLBY: You want to know how I truly feel about you. ASHER: YES! COLBY: I hate you. I hate you! I hate the fact that you decided to leave me. You left me alone. You promised me that I could always be here with you, in Pine Valley. But, the first college that you accepted to is out of state. And, you take it. You leave me! You leave me here! You leave me here to deal with my issues alone. You left me alone to go through J.R.'s trial. You didn't even fly back to comfort me. A five hour flight. That is all it took to support me. ASHER: I'm sorry. Colby throws a tea cup. Asher goes to Colby. AHSER: Calm down! CALM DOWN! COLBY: NO! NO! I am done with you. There will be no us. That is a promise. Now, get out! ASHER: If that is what you want. Then I will. I'll leave. Colby shuts the living room doors. She shuts off the lights and lays on the couch. (PLAY MUSIC AND FLASHBACKS AT SAME TIME) Colby: Where do we stand Asher? Where do we stand? ------------------------------------------------------------------ ON THE NEXT ALL MY CHILDREN: ANGIE: WHAT?! LIZA: I am here to get my things. JOE: She isn't okay. OPAL: I am dying. I know that. (GUNSHOT) ----------------------------------------------------------------
  21. This episode was lengthy! LOL! Abby and Hillary are quite interesting. I think they will be good as friends, however friends aren't really in Genoa City LOL. Sister Patterson..., there is not enough words to describe that woman. I like how Days22 said that she is larger than life. I guess you can describe her that way LOL. That is very true. I am glad you showed Jill. I have missed her. I am very worried with Phillip. I hope you don't kill him off!!! I love him!!! Verdon Lou, is finally reaching the end. But, that kind of makes me sad. Because, this means that Sheila Carter is coming to an end... AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Things are really starting to heat up! Can't wait to see your show move into the future. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
  22. Interesting episode. I have to say I think my favorite storyline has to be the Matthew gay thing. It gives a character some new layers, that we really haven't gotten a chance to see. And Nora, is completely playing all the emotions that she should be. It is interesting that David throws his opinion in on some things. He always has to say something LOL. I feel so sorry for Blair. Anyways, Olivia Carson. Investigating Todd's death. I wonder what is up with that. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!
  23. I enjoyed this episode very much! The Brittany and Billy story is one of my favorites. I like the pace. However, my favorite part is that the dialogue is very rich and ready to go. Steve is probably one of the best written characters. You stay very true to him. I can't wait to see how the whole mission plays out. That will be good! I know it will be. Jennifer..., poor Jen. I kind of feel bad. I like as cnathaniel said that things are starting to move. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
  24. What a WONDERFUL episode!!! I LOVED every scene. I think my favorite scene was the whole Nikki/Victoria scenes. It was soooo true to who Nikki is, in a very short time. We saw her staring at the glass of wine. Is she really that down? Maybe she is. Keep that up! I loved Esther/Karynn. I hope that maybe they can become freniemies like Kathrine/Jill 2.0! LOL that would be awesome! And of course the colonnade room!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I loved it. Patterson always is a great laugh. And her and Leslie were awesome and hilarious. AND..., who is the mystery woman? Why was Lauren with her??? Can't wait! KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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