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  1. PLEASE COME BACK!!! I miss this version of OLTL! Want it to continue!
  2. I am only posting this because I wanted to be your 300th comment!!!
  3. I LOVED THIS EPISODE!!!!! IT KICKED SOME MAJOR ASSSSSS!!!!!! I love jow you manage to deconstruct these episodes in term of character. Everyone should be happy with your storiea. I think this cliffhanger was just blowing me away more than Mary LOL. Cane has just gone INSANE!!!!!!!!! I do not know what the hell he was thinking. Malcolm and Neil r written really well. You have them down pat. Wonderful job!!! KEEP IT UP FOR 159 more episodes LOL
  4. PREVIOUSLY ON "ALL MY CHILDREN" JACKSON: Erica my answer to our future is... DIXIE: It is a toss up. But, it does deal with her future. BIANCA: (Sighs) Marisa, my mother's number of marriages are LEGENDARY. NATALIA: I actually wanted to talk to you about the baby thing. KENDALL: I just needed a friend. INT. JAKE AND AMANDA'S HOME - NIGHT Amanda is downstairs with someone else. Amanda: I had no idea that you were coming by. Greenlee: I didn't either. Amanda: What are you doing here? Greenlee: I wanted to just get out of the house. Amanda: I see. Greenlee: Plus, I was in the neighborhood, so stopping here isn't so bad. Amanda: No..., it is not. INT. DIXIE AND TAD'S HOME - NIGHT Dixie crosses her arms. Dixie: Tad, I am not doing this to hurt you or anything. I am doing this so your mom can be safe. (Sighs) There is absolutely no reason for you to go off on me for just making a suggestion. That is all it is. It is just a suggestion. Tad: Dixie, I know it is just a suggestion. I didn't mean to come out cold. Dixie: Then what is going on sweetheart. Talk to me. Tad: (Sighs) I'm scared. Dixie: About what? Tad: I'm scared. INT. MARISA AND BIANCA'S BEDROOM - NIGHT Erica and Jackson come off a hug. Erica: I think you made the right choice, by the way. Jackson: Not in your favor. Erica: Jackson, you did what you had to do. Don't worry about me. I will be fine. (Sniffs) (Sighs) I am just going to get my jacket and my hand bag, and I will be on my way. You don't have to worry about showing me the door, or anything. Jackson: Erica. Erica: Let's just not talk anymore Jack. (Sighs) I have to go. I have a lot of things to do. Jackson: Bye Erica. Erica: Bye Jack, seya around. Erica walks out. Outside of the bedroom, she is on her phone. Erica: I need to see you. Yes I can meet you at your house. Okay, bye. INT. PINE VALLEY POLICE STATION - NIGHT Brot and Natalia sit down. Brot: Can we not talk about this? Natalia: We have to, Brot. Brot: Why? Natalia: Because, we are a married couple, and married couples talk about these things. They talk about budgets, homes, cars, anything and everything. They also talk about their futures. Ours just happens to be a future conversation about babies. Brot: Yes it does. Natalia: (Sighs) Look I know you don't like to talk about this, but we need to talk about it. Brot: No we don't. Natalia: Yes we do. Brot: Why? Natalia hands Brot a pregnancy test. Natalia: Because, I'm already pregnant. INT. JAKE AND AMANDA'S HOME - NIGHT Greenlee and Amanda are sitting on the couch having wine. Greenlee: This wine is excellent. Amanda: Jake and I bought it that year we went to Barbados. Greenlee: Nice. Amanda: So, have you seen the news lately? Greenlee: What news? Amanda: There's this guy in Port Charles. His name is Jake. For months he was just called Jake Doe. Turns out his name is Jacob Barnes. He has a wife and is from Beachers Corners. What a story. Greenlee: Yeah. Amanda: Is everything okay? Greenlee: Well, I have news that tops any old story that comes out of Port Charles. Amanda: Really. What is that? Greenlee: Annie Lavery is out of Oak Haven. INT. TAD AND DIXIE'S HOME - NIGHT Dixie and Tad sit down. Dixie: Tad, what is this really about? Tad: (Sighs) I'm scared. Dixie: I know you are scared. But, what about? Tad: (Sighs) My mom has a disease. Dixie: A disease? Tad: Yes. Dixie: Why didn't you tell me about this? Tad: Because, I had to process it. I just found out in the last twenty four hours. Dixie: What disease does she have? Tad: She has a brain tumor. INT. CALEB AND LIZA'S HOME - NIGHT Erica enters. Caleb: Erica, you are here now. You can tell me what's wrong. Erica: Everything. And I need you now. Caleb: What? Erica KISSES Caleb. Liza enters, and is caught off guard. Liza: What the hell is going on here! Erica and Caleb turn off of the kiss... shocked. JOIN US AGAIN FOR ALL MY CHILDREN. THIS EPISODE STARRED: Chrishell Stause AS Amanda Dillon Martin Rebecca Buding AS Greenlee Smyth Lavery Cady McClain AS Dixie Martin Michael E. Knight AS Tad Martin Susan Lucci AS Erica Kane Walt Willey AS Jackson Montgomery Shannon Kane AS Natalia Fowler Monroe J.R. Martinez AS Brot Monroe Michael Nouri AS Caleb Cortland AND Jamie Luner AS Liza Colby
  5. SHERYL - She is becoming more interesting than I would've hope. But, who does she want in Salem??? DANIEL/MAXINE - Daniel is just being classic Daniel to me. Maxine knows something is up. Gotta LOVE HER!!! Kate - It will be interesting to see how this story ends up with the station. Kate wants everything to always go her way. I think that will all change very soon for her. KIM/AIDEN - Kim is just taking that next step. This will make for some damn good drama!!! JENNIFER/JJ - At least JJ can say he tried LOL!!! Jennifer is going to get a shock HOPEFULLY SOON. Very wonderful show!!! I hope that you continue this! WELCOME BACK!!!!!
  6. I AM SO HAPPY U R BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! So Wow you are back with a bang! I am really worried for Lindsay. It is scaring me to think she could have cancer. And what is up with that crazy stunt Michele pulled? Reginald really did a number on her LOL. I think Donna is just worried. She is worried that Stacey is still playing those games. And she has every right to be worried. I did like all this family talk. It moved in a modern/traditional soap twist. These were well thought out scenes. PLLLLLLEEEEEEAAAAAASSSSSEEEE KEEP THEM COMING!!!!!
  7. PREVIOUSLY ON "ALL MY CHILDREN" RYAN: Greenlee, Annie has been released from Oak Haven. JACKSON: I knew I heard a familiar voice. GREENLEE: I am glad you said conquered, because that is exactly what we did. ERICA: (Laughs) Okay. Then I will start by calling you a slimy, belligerent, bastard. --- INT. MARISA AND BIANCA'S BEDROOM - NIGHT Jackson looks offended by Erica's previous words. But, yet he expects it. JACKSON: What you just said was completely expected of you Erica. ERICA: What is that supposed to mean Jackson? JACKSON: It means that even after being shot, you still have not realized that you act the same way. You only care about yourself. This is why I left Erica. This is why I left Pine Valley. This is why I left you. I was done with the selfishness. ERICA: Let's face it Jackson. You were ultimately done with me. --- INT. BIANCA AND MARISA'S FAMILY ROOM - NIGHT Marisa and Bianca come off a hug. MARISA: Bianca, you have to realize that what your mom wants, she does get. So, if she wants Jackson then she will get him. We just have to let her go, and realize that she can do what she want. And, if you feel hurt, then you can come to me. BIANCA: Marisa, you know that every time they have been together, they have failed. MARISA: I know that. BIANCA: Then I don't understand why you want them together. So, why do you want them together so badly. Because, I have a feeling that it isn't just because my mom is in her 60's, and she can do what ever she wants. So, why? --- --- ALL MY CHILDREN CREATED BY: Agnes Nixon WRITTEN BY: Casey Hutchison --- INT. DIXIE AND TAD'S HOME - NIGHT Dixie comes down stairs. DIXIE: Hi honey. She kisses Tad. TAD: Hi sweetheart. How has your day been? DIXIE: It has been wonderful. You? TAD: Good. is everything alright? DIXIE: Well, actually we do need to talk. TAD: About what? DIXIE: Your mother. --- INT. PINE VALLEY POLICE DEPARTMENT - NIGHT Natalia goes up to Brot. NATALIA: Brot. BROT: (Laughs) Natalia, what in the world are you doing here on your day off? NATALIA: (Laughs) I just wanted to come and visit the best husband in the whole damn world. BROT: I am glad you are here, then. They kiss. BROT: So, what really brings you by? NATALIA: I actually wanted to talk to you about the baby thing. --- INT. KENDALL AND ZACK'S HOME - NIGHT KENDALL: Thank you for coming here, as soon as I called. GRIFFIN: No problem, but is everything okay? KENDALL: I just needed a friend. GRIFFIN: Is everything okay? KENDALL: Everything is fine. I have just missed you. GRIFFIN: Then I can deliver. --- INT. BIANCA AND MARISA'S FAMILY ROOM - NIGHT Marisa sits. MARISA: I have no other reasons Bianca. I just think you are getting paranoid. BIANCA: I am not paranoid by this! Marisa stands. She goes to Bianca. MARISA: You are paranoid, Bianca. I can see it. I know you by now. So..., tell me. You can tell me anything that you want to. So, what is it? What is it that is truly bugging you about this? Erica and Jackson's break ups can not be the only reason. BIANCA: Wow! I cannot hide anything from you. MARISA: No you can't. BIANCA: (Sighs) I just don't want my mom to get hurt again. MARISA: Now, there is a better reason. BIANCA: (Sighs) Marisa, my mother's number of marriages are LEGENDARY. And, they have all ended in a big way. She not only gets hurt, but so do the men. So, do you understand now, why I don't want my mom to turn eleven marriages into twelve. Until..., she is ready. MARISA: Bianca, it would've been easier if you would have said that in the first place. BIANCA: (Sighs) I know. MARISA: I will help you out. BIANCA: Thank you. --- INT. DIXIE AND TAD'S HOME - NIGHT Tad sits. TAD: This seems serious. Dixie sits next to him. DIXIE: It is a toss up. But, it does deal with her future. TAD: What do you mean? DIXIE: I am just saying that the house she has is too much for her at that age. Maybe, she should just go into a smaller place. I think it would be best for all of us involved. It would be the best decision for Opal. Please tell me that you agree. --- INT. MARISA AND BIANCA'S BEDROOM - NIGHT Erica sits on the end of the bed bench. ERICA; Jackson I am going to lay down the law with you. I want you back. I at least want to start things again. If we start things again I will show you that I have changed one hundred percent. Just give me a shot. JACKSON: Erica... ERICA: After all the years we have spent in one another's lives, you just can't give up on me. On us. ERICA: So Jack, after all we've been through are you really going to tell me that we are TRULY and COMPLETELY over? I need an answer. I need an answer for us. I need an answer so I can move on with my life. JACKSON: Erica my answer to our future is... --- JOIN US AGAIN FOR: 2015 COPYRIGHT S.O.N. ---
  8. PREVIOUSLY ON "ALL MY CHILDREN" ANNIE: I better make a list of people I want to get through when I decide to show my face again. Here we go. Number one..., Erica Kane. LIZA: What exactly were you going to do last night Caleb? CALEB: Dammit Liza! I was going to propose to you! MARISA: Erica, he just got back into Pine Valley last night. How do you know he is here? ERICA: I have my ways. Opal drove by my home last night. On the way there she saw Jackson on your door step. --- EXT. BIANCA AND MARISA'S HOME - AFTERNOON Erica walks up to the porch. She breaths, and flashes back to EPISODE 4: ERICA: When in the hell were you and my daughter going to tell me that Jackson is back? (PRESENT TIME) ERICA: I am so ready to get Jackson back. She rings the doorbell. --- INT. GREENLEE AND RYAN'S APARTMENT - AFTERNOON Ryan comes down the stairs, with a home phone in his hand. RYAN: Hello, this is Ryan Lavery calling. I was calling to talk to a patient. Annie Lavery. She is what? Are you sure? Doctor Jamenson never alerted me about this. I am sure if you talk to him, that he would say something else. Alright, fine. Thank you. Bye. Greenlee comes down stairs. She can see that Ryan is not alright. GREENLEE: Ryan, is everything okay? RYAN: I'm afraid not, Greenlee. GREENLEE: What's wrong? RYAN: Greenlee, Annie has been released from Oak Haven. --- OPENING CREDITS: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LRLdUq-A79I --- "ALL MY CHILDREN" SEASON 1 EPISODE 5 EPISODE TITLE: DAVID'S HIDING SOMETHING CREATED BY: AGNES NIXON WRITTEN BY: CASEY HUTCHISON --- INT. BIANCA AND MARISA'S HOME - AFTERNOON Erica is now inside. ERICA: Hello Bianca. ANNOUNCER: The role of Bianca Montgomery is once again being played by Christina Bennett Lind. BIANCA: Hi mom. I assume you are here to see Jack. ERICA: You have still got that smart brain inside of you. BIANCA: Actually it is because my wife doesn't keep secrets from me. ERICA: Please don't be mad. BIANCA: How else do you expect me to act? Jackson enters. JACKSON: I knew I heard a familiar voice. --- INT. GREENLEE AND RYAN'S APARTMENT - AFTERNOON RYAN: Are you okay? GREENLEE: Do you want to take a guess? How could the well-qualified-doctors of Oak Haven find that bitch sane! Ryan it makes no sense. I am telling you that there must be something in the water at that place. I mean, seriously. RYAN: We will get through this. GREENLEE: How? RYAN: Annie is not a worry for us. We conquered her once before. GREENLEE: I am glad you said conquered. That is exactly what we did. RYAN: Me, you, and this baby will be perfectly fine. GREENLEE: (Sighs) I hope so. --- INT. BIANCA AND MARISA'S BEDROOM - AFTERNOON Erica and Jackson step in. ERICA: I am glad you decided to speak with me. JACKSON: Don't we just have a lot to talk about. ERICA: We do. --- INT. BIANCA AND MARISA'S FAMILY ROOM - AFTERNOON Marisa and Bianca have a moment. BIANCA: I'm not sure I can take this anymore. MARISA: What do you mean? BIANCA: My mom and Jackson bouncing back and forth. MARISA: I hear that. BIANCA: It's just way too much Marisa. In fact, I don't even think they should be together. MARISA: Now, Binx. You don't mean that. BIANCA: I do. --- INT. BIANCA AND MARISA'S BEDROOM - AFTERNOON Erica steps closer. Then, sits on the bed. ERICA: What do you want to talk about? JACKSON: Is true feelings alright? ERICA: Fine by me. JACKSON: I know how much you like to start first. ERICA: (Laughs) Okay. Then I will start by calling you a slimy, belligerent, bastard. --- INT. PRIVATE HOSPITAL ROOM - AFTERNOON David enters. DAVID: Good afternoon, are we enjoying the accommodations? --- JOIN US AGAIN FOR: 2015 COPYRIGHT S.O.N. ---
  9. "ALL MY CHILDREN" SEASON 1 EPISODE 4 EPISODE TITLE: ERICA'S BURNING QUESTION CREATED BY: AGNES NIXON WRITTEN BY: CASEY HUTCHISON INT. CALEB AND LIZA'S HOME - MORNING Liza comes down the stairs. She is dressed for the day. She is on her phone. LIZA: I need you to tell Jillian that she needs to plead guilty. The D.A. is an old friend of mine. He is prepared to make a plea bargain. If you can get her to plead guilty, than she will not get life. She will get ten years; plus probation. Alright, see you then. Bye. She moves over to her coffee maker. Caleb comes up behind her. She turns around. CALEB: Hi. LIZA: Hello. CALEB: Anyways, we need to talk about last night. --- INT. CHANDLER MANSION - MORNING Madison and Scott are talking in the living room. MADISON: I hope you know that I am not mad over the whole J.R. thing. I understand why you did not want to tell me about him. You did not want me to think about that night. That terrible night when Erica was shot. SCOTT: I still should have came forward. MADISON: I do not want this affecting our relationship. It is just J.R. SCOTT: I don't think you know what you just said there. --- INT. KRYSTAL'S - MORNING Marisa is ordering at the counter. She goes over to a table, and bumps into Erica. MARISA: Erica, good morning. ERICA: When in the hell were you and my daughter going to tell me that Jackson is back? --- OPENING CREDITS: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LRLdUq-A79I --- INT. ANGIE AND JESSE'S HOME - MORNING Angie glares over at a photo of her and Jesse. Jesse comes up behind her, and kisses her. ANGIE: I miss those days. JESSE: I do too. ANGIE: But..., look where we are now. JESSE: And, I bet you would like to keep it that way. ANGIE: I would. JESSE: Let's eat some delicious breakfast. JESSE: Let's. --- INT. CHANDLER MANSION - MORNING Scott pours himself some water. MADISON: I know that J.R. wants to reclaim his life here in Pine Valley. But, we are not going to let that bother us. I will not let him harm our relationship in any way. We are stronger than ever Scott. You know that. I know that. The whole world knows that! SCOTT: You are so right. MADISON: I know I am. Please, put this behind you. SCOTT: Okay. MADISON: Okay. --- INT. KRYSTAL'S - MORNING Marisa moves closer to Erica, so barely anyone can hear them. MARISA: Erica, he just got back into Pine Valley last night. How do you know he is here? ERICA: I have my ways. Opal drove by my home last night. On the way there she saw Jackson on your door step. MARISA: I see. ERICA: Did you think that I would NEVER find out. BARISTA: Order for Tasker! MARISA: I gotta go. Come by the house. Anytime. Marisa walks off for her order. Erica pulls out her phone. She looks at a photo. --- INT. CALEB AND LIZA'S HOME - MORNING Liza kisses Caleb on the cheek. LIZA: I am so sorry about last night. CALEB: I am too. LIZA: What do you mean? That was like a cryptic message. CALEB: (Sighs) Well..., Liza I had something planned for us. LIZA: What do you mean? CALEB: I was going to tell you my true feelings. You were going to find out how much I truly do love you. But, I get it. You wanted time alone. You wanted to grab a drink, and do some work. Even though, you knew that we planned this night, a whole month in advance. LIZA: And I am sorry! But, you have to know that I have things to do. CALEB: And you know that we have a relationship. LIZA: Listen, I love you Caleb. We have been together for three years, and three months now. I know how much this relationship means to us. But, I am trying to defend a woman who is being prosecuted for murder. CALEB: That is great to hear. LIZA: What exactly were you going to do last night Caleb? CALEB: Dammit Liza! I was going to propose to you! --- INT. ANNIE'S HOTEL ROOM - MORNING Annie gets out a piece of paper. She gets out a pen. Annie begins writing. ANNIE: I better make a list of people I want to get through when I decide to show my face again. Here we go. Number one..., Erica Kane. ANNIE: Number two..., that is BY FAR Kendall. One of the things she did was tell Ryan I was hiding something. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7qCk7b_tibE ANNIE: Number three..., Ryan. ANNIE: Finally, Greenlee. She stole Ryan from me. --- JOIN US AGAIN FOR: 2015 COPYRIGHT S.O.N. ---
  10. I enjoyed the episode, but my only complaint is that I couldn't imagine enough. I think a script would work better. I say that because of the type of show DAYS is. Again, WONDERFUL job!
  11. "ALL MY CHILDREN" SEASON 1 EPISODE 3 EPISODE TITLE: CALEB GOES ALL OUT FOR LIZA CREATED BY: AGNES NIXON WRITTEN BY: CASEY HUTCHISON --- INT. CALEB AND LIZA'S HOME - NIGHT Caleb is straightening his tie in a mirror. He turns around, and we see a romantic dinner planned out. CALEB: Anytime now, Liza. --- INT. GREENLEE AND RYAN'S APARTMENT - NIGHT Greenlee turns away from Ryan. RYAN: You think you are pregnant? GREENLEE: I do. RYAN: How can you be so sure? GREENLEE: (Sighs) Please don't hate me. But, I did go to a doctors appointment. They..., they..., they confirmed my pregnancy with in a couple of minutes. I kept it from you, because I am still worried about Annie, and the whole mental institution thing. RYAN: It is okay. You do not have to be worried. --- OPENING CREDITS: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LRLdUq-A79I --- INT. CHANDLER MANSION - NIGHT J.R. comes down the stairs. Scott is waiting for him at the bottom. J.R.: Quite the snow storm out there. SCOTT: I am well aware of that. Are you done? Did you get all of your stuff packed up? J.R.: I did. Why are you in such a rush to get me out of here? SCOTT: Because, everyone is away. Madison is still at work. Adam had a late night business meeting. That's the only reason you are here getting your stuff. So, I suggest you hurry it up a little bit. Can you do that, J.R.? J.R.: My pleasure. SCOTT: Glad to hear that. --- INT. BIANCA AND MARISA'S HOME - NIGHT Bianca and Marisa kiss. BIANCA: I am so excited that we got this night to ourselves. It took us forever. (Sighs) But, here we are. MARISA: Yes..., here we are. Bianca I love you so much. Ever since, our wedding. MARISA: That was a SPECIAL night. BIANCA: And ever since then, we have been totally solid. Just as they are about to kiss again, the doorbell rings. BIANCA: I wonder who that could be. --- INT. GREENLEE AND RYAN'S APARTMENT - NIGHT Greenlee sobs. GREENLEE: Are you sure you are not mad? RYAN: I am not. And I promise that first thing in the morning I will call Oak Haven. I will make sure that Annie is still locked up. I know she is not going anywhere, except the craft room. I promise you, that everything will be fine. GREENLEE: You are right. I know you are. RYAN: Listen, I am going to go call Triple Deck, and have them send us a large mushroom and green pepper pizza. GREENLEE: (Laughs) That will be wonderful. Ryan walks away. But Greenlee begins to think about her past with Annie: --- INT. CHANDLER MANSION - NIGHT Scott is drinking a glass of scotch. Madison enters. MADISON: Hey baby. Madison kisses him. MADISON: How are you? Is everything okay? SCOTT: Not really. MADISON: Scott? Scott? What's wrong? SCOTT: Some one stopped by here today. MADISON: Who? (FLASHBACK TO THE 2011 FINALE) (PRESENT TIME) SCOTT: You do not want to know. MADISON: Yes I do. Who was it? SCOTT: I will give you one guess. MADISON: Colby. SCOTT: Nope. J.R. Madison is caught off guard. --- INT. CONFUSION - NIGHT Liza is sitting at a table. She proceeds to pick up her phone. She dials. She then puts it up to her ear. LIZA: Hey Caleb, I am grabbing a drink at ConFusion, and then I have to go to the office. I am sorry I can not make our dinner. But, I am sure anything you need to tell me can wait. Please, call me back once you get this message. Love you. Bye. --- INT. CALEB AND LIZA'S HOME - NIGHT Caleb is sitting at the table drinking champagne. He looks at his phone. CALEB: Finally Liza. He listens to the voice mail. He puts down the phone. CALEB: (Sighs) How did I know that this was going to happen. He pulls a box out of his pocket, and opens it. CALEB: I wished you would have came home tonight. --- INT. BIANCA AND MARISA'S HOME - NIGHT Bianca steps closer to the door. MARISA: Everything okay? BIANCA: Well, I was hoping they would go away. It looks like that is not happening. MARISA: (Laughs) That will not happen. Bianca opens the door. BIANCA: Oh my gosh. JACKSON: Hello honey. --- INT. HOTEL ROOM - NIGHT A woman steps into a hotel room, and shuts the door behind her. WOMAN: It is not exactly the Hilton Hotel, but i have to look on the bright side. I'm back. The woman is revealed to be................................................................... --- JOIN US AGAIN FOR: 2015 COPYRIGHT S.O.N. ---
  12. Can't wait for this. I love when others want to write a DAYS fan fic.
  13. "ALL MY CHILDREN" SEASON 1 EPISODE 2 EPISODE TITLE: GREENLEE'S DREAM CREATED BY: AGNES NIXON WRITTEN BY: CASEY HUTCHISON --- INT. GREENLEE AND RYAN'S APARTMENT - AFTERNOON Greenlee is looking out the window. Ryan comes up behind her, and kisses her neck. She turns around. RYAN: I am so happy that you are up. GREENLEE: I just had to sleep in, today. I didn't end up going to sleep until like four A.M. RYAN: Why is that? GREENLEE: I had a dream... about Annie. RYAN: Come again? --- INT. DAVID'S APARTMENT - AFTERNOON Krystal sits down on the couch. KRYSTAL: I'm begging you David. I need my little girl alive. I need her back in my life. DAVID: And you will get her back. Krystal gets up, and hugs David. KRYSTAL: Oh my gosh! Thank you! DAVID: But..., I have a condition. KRYSTAL: (Intrigued) What would that be? DAVID: I want you to kill J.R. Chandler. --- INT. HOSPITAL ROOM - AFTERNOON Erica is sitting on the hospital bed. Joe extracts a needle from her skin. He puts the needle into a safety bag. Joe goes over to the trash can, and takes off his latex gloves. Erica stands up from her hospital bed. JOE: I will try and put a rush on this blood work. ERICA: Thanks Joe. JOE: Of course. Now, this was one out of four routine check ups for the year. You will have to make another appointment. Erica, you are probably wondering if you should worry or not. You do not have to worry. Your blood work will come back 100 percent perfect. As always. ERICA: I know it will. JOE: Have you talked to Jackson, lately? ERICA: I have. He says he is enjoying his law practice in L.A. JOE: That is good to hear. Well, I better get this to the lab. ERICA: Alright, bye. JOE: Bye. Joe exits. A tear strolls down Erica's right eye. ERICA: I miss Jackson so much. --- OPENING CREDITS: http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=LRLdUq-A79I --- INT. CHANDLER MANSION - AFTERNOON Liza steps into the living room. LIZA: Hello Adam. ADAM: What the hell are you doing here? LIZA: (Laughs) I was in the area. ADAM: Something tells me this is not a social call. LIZA: Did you get smarter? ADAM: History, is what has gotten me smart about YOU Liza. LIZA: Fine! Fine! Fine! You are right. I did stop here for something else. I had a short breakfast with your wife, Brookie, this morning. We talked about you. She feels that you might kill David Hayward. I promised her I would warn him, but I'm not sure I agree with that. I might be in agreement with you. If you want to go ahead and kill David..., then sign me up. You know what? I will even hide the body. Anyways, this was a lovely chat. But, I have to get home to Caleb. ADAM: How about you sit down, and we'll talk about what you just said to me. --- INT. ERICA'S BEDROOM - AFTERNOON Erica enters her bedroom. She goes up to a table. She pours herself a glass of water. She gets a bottle of Asprin out, and takes a pill. She swallows it. Erica goes to the bed, and lays down. The camera zooms in on her. ERICA: Dear God, it has been so long since we last had this one on one conversation. I just want you to know, that I will get Jack back. He is not through with me..., yet. I am not through with him! This is not over. Not by a long shot. --- INT. KRYSTAL'S HOME - AFTERNOON Krystal is drinking scotch on her couch. She hears David's voice in her mind. DAVID: Kill J.R.! Kill J.R.! Kill J.R.! KRYSTAL: I cannot kill J.R. What was David thinking? What is wrong with him? He still views J.R. as an enemy for almost shooting Marissa that night. (Sighs) David Hayward, I will give you props for holding (Laughs) a grudge. Cheers to that. --- INT. CHANDLER MANSION - AFTERNOON Liza stands up straight, ready to go after Adam, about David. LIZA: Did you like that whole thing I just told you? I know you did! You are COMPLETELY intrigued by what I just said to you. Tell me Adam, do you really want to kill David? Were you serious about that? ADAM: I don't think anyone would blame me for that. Liza, David is a terrible man. I'm a terrible man. But, at the moment I really don't want David Hayward to die. Not at this very moment. He is more valuable to me alive. LIZA: More valuable? What in the world are you talking about? ADAM: Word on the street is that David is deciding to continue his whole Orpheus deal. This would go on without the police knowledge. Anyways, I want to make a friend out of David. I have a few people that I can think of that have been missed. If I can make a friend out of David, than he can bring those people back to me. Now, you are probably wondering how I am going to get him as a friend. Well, I am going to fund Orpheus. So, what do you think? LIZA: I think you are a clever S.O.B. --- INT. GREENLEE AND RYAN'S APARTMENT - AFTERNOON Ryan puts his hands on Greenlee. RYAN: Are you okay? GREENLEE: (Sobs) I'm fine. RYAN: What is going on? GREENLEE: I'm afraid to tell you what my dream was about. RYAN: Greenlee, you can tell me anything. What was your dream about? GREENLEE: Ryan you are so right. Let's sit down. Please. RYAN: You've got it. Greenlee and Ryan sit down. RYAN: So...? GREENLEE: Ryan, I'm pregnant. And, I was afraid that Annie was going to break out of Oak Haven, and steal my baby. --- CLOSING CREDITS: http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=GTd9JsUvOWE ---
  14. All My Children - Episode #1 Created By: Agnes Nixon Written By: Casey Hutchison --- INT. DAVID'S APARTMENT - MORNING David walks into the livingroom with a towel wrapped around his waist. There is a knock at the door. He goes to answer. David: Krystal. Krystal: Hello David. David: What are you doing here? Krystal: I thought I would be the first one to welcome you back to Pine Valley. --- INT. CHANDLER MANSION - MORNING Adam is reading the newspaper, and talking on his cell phone. He is also sitting on the couch. Adam: Yes, I just saw the paper. David is out of jail for that whole Orpheus project. It has been four years. We kept him in jail this long. Guess we couldn't anymore. Listen, I have to go. I love you Brooke. Bye. As he hangs up, Stuart enters. Stuart: Good morning brother! Adam goes to his brother. Adam: Stuart, how are you? Or, should I even ask? Stuart: I'm great. Adam: Aren't you always? Stuart: Great is how I always feel, because I know life should never be taken for granted. Adam: Are you going to visit Marian today? Stuart: Oh, yes. Adam: Tell her I said "hi." Stuart: You could just come with me. Adam: I would rather not. Stuart: And, why is that? --- INT. CONFUSION - MORNING Liza walks in, and goes to the reservation desk. Liza: Hello, I'm Liza Colby. I'm here to meet Brooke English Chandler for breakfast. Has she arrived? Man: Yes she has, Miss. Liza: Excellent. Man: You can go right to her. Liza: Thank you. Liza walks up to Brooke. She sits down. Brooke: Good morning, Liza. Liza: Hi, Brooke. Good to see you. So, why'd you call me over here this morning? Brooke: I need to talk to you about Adam. --- OPENING CREDITS: http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=LRLdUq-A79I --- INT. PINE VALLEY HOSPITAL - MORNING Cara and Griffin are walking down a hall. Griffin is holding a patience chart. Griffin: How was your sugery this morning? Cara: (Sighs) It was so tiring. Removing that tumor was a lot of work. Griffin: I bet. Since you came in at 3:30 this morning, I highly doubt you had time for breakfast. Do you want to grab a bite? Cara: Griff, you know I appreciate the offer. But, you also know that I'm to busy to even think about breakfast. They stop walking. Griffin: Cara, you've gotta keep your strength up. I don't want you handling something big, and have an empty stomach at the same time. Cara: Something big? Like what? Like bumping into David Hayward? --- INT. OPAL'S HOME - MORNING Opal comes down her staircase, as she is tying her robe. The doorbell is rung. She answers the door. Opal: Dixie! How are you? Come in! Dixie enters. Opal shuts the door. Dixie: I'm great Opal. Opal: What brings you by on this pea-picking-morning? Dixie: Tad said that you sewed up a tear in his suit jacket. I just wanted to know if you were done with that? Opal: Well, of course I am! Let's go into the living room. And I'll get that jacket. Dixie: Perfect. They walk into the living room. Dixie: Oh, and Opal? Opal: Yes? Dixie: Can I get one more thing? Opal: What? Dixie: (Sighs) I would love a reading. Opal: Well, then you have got one Missy! Real quick. Is this for fun, or for real life situations? Dixie: (Sighs) Just for fun. --- INT. DAVID'S APARTMENT - MORNING Krystal is sitting on the couch. David enters, but this time he is fully dressed. Krystal stands. David: I'm truly happy that you were the first to stop by. It was kind of shocking. Krystal: Were you expecting some one else? David: No, not at all. Krystal: David, I know I'm in the minority here, but I believe you were doing a fantastic job, four years ago. You were bringing us back people, this town thought we would never see again. You did that. No one else. David: Thank you, Krystal. That means so much to me. You have no idea. Krystal: I also came over here with a demand. David: (Laughs) That's nothing new! So, what is this demand, you are making? Krystal: I demand that you continue the project. Pick it up from what where you left off. David: Why do you want me to continue? Krystal: Because, I don't want you to stop until you bring Babe back to us. What do you say, David? Will you pick the project back up? --- INT. CHANDLER MANSION - MORNING Adam pours himself some coffee. Adam: I just don't feel like being around the injudicious patients of Oak Haven. Stuart: Marian is not injudicious. Adam: That woman makes more bad judgment calls, than that Miley Cyrus. Stuart: Adam, please come with me. Marian is trying to change. She really is. Adam: Should I remind you about the night of the party? She freaked out when Erica Kane was shot. More than any of us. Stuart: You can't hold that against her. Every one did. Including you, Jackson, Bianca, Kendall. The list goes on and on, Adam. Adam: Will it make you shut up if I come? Stuart: (Laughs) Yes! Adam: Alright, then. Let's go. Stuart: Wonderful! Stuart hugs Adam. Adam seems un-easy about the hug. --- INT. CONFUSION - MORNING Liza and Brooke have glasses of orange juice on their table. Liza: You want to talk to me about Adam? Why is that? Is your marriage to him not going as planned? Brooke: (Sighs) Liza, I think Adam might do something not good. To David Hayward, that is. Liza: Brooke, what exactly are you implying? Brooke: I need you to tell David to watch his back. Make him aware of Adam. Liza: Why would I do that? Brooke: Liza, you are one of the few people who know David better than anyone. Liza: You've got me there. Brooke: Will you do it? Liza: (Sighs) Okay. I'll do it. I will warn David. Brooke: Thank you. Liza: Now, you have to promise me something. Brooke: What? Liza: That you will keep your husband in check. Brooke: It's a done deal. Liza: By the way, I can't really blame him for hating David. And I'm not so sure you can either. But we still have a deal. Brooke and Liza shake hands. --- INT. PINE VALLEY HOSPITAL - MORNING Cara and Griffin sit down on a bench. Cara: When the time comes for me to see David, I won't be on edge, like you think. Griffin: I'm just saying. Cara, you're my sister. I love you to death. I just don't want to see you get hurt. Cara: Griff, I love you for that. But, I'm a grown woman now. I can take care of myself. Griffin: Okay. Cara gets her pager from her right side. Cara and Griffin stand. Cara: Its Joe. He wants me to check on the tumor guy. Griffin: Okay. Griffin hugs Cara. Griffin: I love you, sis. Cara: I love you too. --- EXT. STATESVILLE PRISON - MORNING The gate beeps. Guard: Good luck to you. Man: Thank you. The man steps out. J.R.: I'm back, Pine Valley. --- CLOSING CREDITS: http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=GTd9JsUvOWE ---
  15. DAISY/DANIEL/PHYLLIS/NATE: I was LOVING this scene as the opener. Viewers can tell that Daisy will once again, probably lose her cool. Of course this will be due when she finds out the truth about Mary. I liked how you kept Phyllis with those snarky remarks!!! Because, that is Phyllis at her best. Now if she could be smart, and dig the truth out of her son. CANE/PHILLIP I am always loving the drug story line with Cane. You are paying tribute to some real emotions. He has officialy not become Cane, anymore. It is about time this story takes some well needed action, and you have done that BEAUTIFULLY. Cannot wait to see what happens next with this story. ROX/SPENCER/HILLARY ML, you know this is one of my favorite stories. This involves sooooo many good elements. You have bitch and bitch and good/evil guy. This would definenetly be a soap story. SHEILA All I can say is that she has gotten into some deep stuff LOL!!! NEIL/LES They were the first to be invited to the party. Who's next, and how it will unfold?! By the way, I love how you keep the classic Malcolm/Neil relationship!!!! KEEP UP THE FANTASTIC WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
  16. What a fantastic episode!!! This episode was very interesting. I cannot believe you only have 10 more to go before your 200th! So, let's get started dissecting this episode. Cass/Frankie/Charlie were very good family scenes. It held up who they truly are, and how the characters operate. I can't wait until Charlie finds out about Kirk!!! I LOVED Christy in this episode!!! Her character his kick ass. And how she eavesdropped on Kirk/Grant was classic. Kirk tries to figure his father out, but it always seems to blow up in his face. Jake/Vicky/Donna/Michael had a reasonable discussion. They dissected what is really going on in the whole family at the moment. Finally, Lindsay/Michele/Gregory/Vicky/Jake/Donna/Michael scenes were very well done! And I wonder what Bridget is going to do to Michele.
  17. Welcome back... again LOL! This was a great sjow, but there were some SERIOUS gramatical errors. Anyways let's get started! So, Rox/Hillary/Spencer will be interesting for your show. This familial relation ties are going to take some time and effort. I'm interested to see how you plan on playing that card. Neil/Les are one of your hottest couples. You spice them up!!! I wonder what Neil received. Vic/Rafe scenes that I wrote turned out well. And I can see you added some stuff which made them EVEN BETTER!!!! I do like where Victoria's character is headed. Her story is very Y&R. Finally, Mary/James/Daisy. They are some messed up people. James had a bomb on him. That is some scary stuff. What exactly is he planning? How does Mary really fit in to it all? And how will Daisy feel about the Mary/Daniel sex truth? I'm looking forward to what you have in store! Keep up the good work!
  18. Loved DAYS in 2014! Been here since Episode 1! Can't wait to see what lies for us fans in 2015!!!
  19. Wow!!! What a powerful episode! So, much is being set up. I enjoyed the Frankie/Sharlene scenes. When you write them as scene partners you stay true to their characters. I LOVED how Felicia stood her ground in this episode. Felicia is such a jammed pack character. She stood her ground with Michael, Cory Productions, and especially Iris. Iris trying to reel in Felicia was great. It shows that this bitch will never win!!! The Rachel/Matt/Cory scenes were nice. I like how you capture the family aspect of the soap. It really keeps the show at this whole normal aspect. Everytime you play a family or a friendship card it shows that these people are at least as human as it can get. Fianlly, Carl. I can't believe you are beginning to spell the end for this character. It is gonna be so hard to see him go. I even started to cry when blood came on the napkin. I knew that scene was going to truly start it all. But, then the whole Russ thing. Good re-introduction to a fan favorite. I'm happy to see you are going to do this goodbye Carl storyline in true ANOTHER WORLD fashion! Keep up the good work Cary! Can't wait to see more!!!!
  20. WOW! What an OUTSTANDING episode!!!! I LOVED EVERY BIT OF IT!!!!!!!!!! So, let's get started. Sheryl/Nick storyline builds up everytime. I just know it is going to explode. But, who is Sheryl really? I feel that there are sooo many layers we have yet to pull back about her. J.J./Jennifer was interesting. J.J. has to make a choice. Does he tell his mom the truth? Or does he protect his sister? I can't wait to see what he chooses. Gabi is skating on the most thin sheet of ice ever made. But, I do kinda respect Gabi. She wants Nick out of her life. He is creepy, and she wants to protect her friends and her child. But at what lengths is she really to go, besides lying to Hope? Finally, the Marlena/John scenes were absolutely ELECTRIC!!! Those are scenes I have waited years to see. Those scenes were true to who the characters are, and how the couple have stayed alive. But, is this REALLY the end for Jarlena? Guess we will find out soon!!!! Keep up the great work Al!
  21. Good episode in terms of character building. The slow pace this episode went at was a smart thing to do! It set up new things for these characters. So, I thought the most interesting thing was by far Lindsay. What is going on with her??? Is she pregnant? Michele is bout ready to get more shocks if someone tells her that her and Lindsay are related. I loved the Felecia/Christy/Frankie scenes. By far the easiest women to make some funny history jokes out of. I also enjoyed the Vicky/Jake/Donna/Michael scenes. They were nice and family related. Great job! Keep up the good work!
  22. This episode was a great episode for readers to get to know the character goals! I loved the what you are setting up for Will. He is really getting a fresh start. I liked the Gabi/E.J. scenes. They both have the same goal. But, I have a feeling they will both go down in flames. This will not end well. Kate and Billie are going to be interesting all over again. Billie is going to try and cover this up. I already know she is LOL! This Titan TV station is going to be a big game changer as it progresses. I love that you are showing that long missed buisness side of the soap opera. Finally, John and Marlena. The scenes in this episode for them were small but big. There chemistry and relations with one another are changing with time. I am interested to see where it goes foe them. Keep up the good work!!!
  23. Wonderful episode! In this episode your work really started to move along. So, let's get started. John and Marlena have become something to look forward to again. You are vcooking something good up, I just know it! Gosh, Kate is gonna love who Billie is with... NOT. I am ready to see how long term this plays out. Stefano's habits never die. He is brewing something up for E.J. (I think.) It will be interesting to see what the pheniox does next. Nick and Gabi have gotten complicated in a good way. Their story is going to have some good consquences for Gabi. Nick is clearly messing with the wrong woman. Finally, I am interested to see if Anne is going to confront Abigail. You did a great job! Cannot wait for more! Keep up the good work.
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