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Another great episode! You are really hitting it out of the park!!!!!!!!!!!! Jill/Phillip/Nina/Chance: Very well written opener. I could see that everyone wanted something, but basically the same goal. They all want to know what the hell Cane was thinking. Good job! Abby/Hillary/Devon/Olivia/Lily/Paul: I enjoy that you are letting us live the drama. I feel bad for everyone involved with Moses and Malcolm. I just don't know if everything is going to end up good. I can't wait to see what Devon does to Nate. This is gonna be good! Keep with this dramatic stuff ML. This is your writing at its best. Hats off to you! Lauren/Sister P: Even in the high drama you still manage to get some comedy with Sister P! The whole third eye thing was just LOL comedy. I hope Lauren can find something new after the flames kind of die down. Good work! Verdon Lou: Avery blind is going to be good. I can't wait to see that unfold. I am soooo happy that Dru survived. But, where is everyone else? I am worried about them. Where is Sharon? I know Dru said she won the battle. BUT..., is Sheila Carter actually dead for the 100th time LOL. Can't wait to see what happens next in this story! KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Another good episode! I liked the exchange between Carly and Hope. I felt like I was watching DAYS. It was very good. But, can they put this behind to help save Bo? I continue to love this whole JJ/Miranda thing. Miranda really handed it to JJ. Maybe JJ will get Miranda someday. But, I don't think that is anytime soon. I think Vin will save the day. I think he will swoop in and be the hero. But, you could always have a soapy twist. You have been pulling those out LOL Stefano won't get away with what he is doing. I hope that Hope can convince everyone that Bo is alive. She will get after Stefano. That is gonna be good! I'm glad you are doing this shelter story. This is very classic soap opera. I can't wait to see these girls fully come out of their shells and see them go after life. This story is gonna be huge, if written correctly. And, I think you are the correct man for the job. Can't wait to see it develop! Good luck! I think Paul is going to hard on Eliza. She is trying, I think. But, I wonder what that whole thing with Paul rubbing is head was. AND..., BO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Who is that person who came downstairs to greet him? Why is he chained up? Several questions on this story. Wonder where it will go next. HIGHLY INTERESTING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

All My Children - Episode 19 Created By: Agnes Nixon Written By: Casey Hutchison Creative Consultant: Days22 INT. DAVID'S PENTHOUSE - NIGHT Cara walks down the hall. She stops at David's door. CARA: Cara..., you have to do this. You have to knock on this door. You have to just speak with. David. I have a lot to catch up on with him. (Sighs) Here goes nothing. Cara knocks on the door. --- INT. CALEB'S HOME - NIGHT Asher stands. ASHER: You don't want me staying here? CALEB: I don't. ASHER: Why not? CALEB: I don't want you caught up in my drama. You have enough going on. You shouldn't be wanting to handle my mistakes. It isn't right for a father to do that to his son. ASHER: Like it or not..., I am here to stay. --- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qby37xuo9mU --- INT. ZACK AND KENDALL'S HOME - NIGHT Erica is fluffing her pillow in the living room. It is apparent she is staying at the house. Kendall comes down the stairs with a blanket. She hands it to Erica. ERICA: Thank you, sweetheart. KENDALL: I know how cold it gets down here. ERICA: Thank you for letting me stay here. KENDALL: Of course. Erica puts the blanket on the couch. KENDALL: Mom... ERICA: Yes. KENDALL: You never did tell me why you wanted to stay here tonight. It is fine and all. But, I am craving an explanation. So, why are you staying here? --- INT. KRYSTAL'S - NIGHT Bianca and Marisa sit down. BIANCA: I am so happy that we are getting this night out. It really makes me excited! MARISA: Me too. Oh! BIANCA: What? MARISA: I meant to tell you that the babysitter called. She said that she can keep the girls overnight. That means dessert may be in order. Bianca laughs, as the two kiss. BIANCA: Dessert is always good. MARISA: Yes, it is. Then, Bianca's phone rings. Bianca checks it. MARISA: What is it? BIANCA: Work. --- INT. CALEB'S HOME - NIGHT Caleb stands and finishes off a bottle of scotch. ASHER: Look, dad, you need my help. You need me to stay here. CALEB: No, I don't. ASHER: If you didn't, then you wouldn't have finished that bottle of scotch. CALEB: You helped. ASHER: You started before I got here. CALEB: Good point. ASHER: (Sighs) Dad..., I love you. I want nothing but the best for you. We worked hard for a father/son relationship. So, will you please let me stay here? So, we don't crumble that relationship. --- INT. ZACK AND KENDALL'S HOME - NIGHT Erica and Kendall sit down on the couch together. ERICA: I was running out of options. I needed someone tonight. And, I thought, well Kendall might work. KENDALL: Why did you need someone? Why couldn't you stay with Bianca? ERICA: I couldn't stay with Bianca, because Jackson is staying there, until his new apartment is finished. KENDALL: We have one question answered. What about the other one? ERICA: It might shock you if I answer the other one. KENDALL: What is it, mom? ERICA: Honey..., I was accused of taking a drink. Kendall is shocked to know that her mother might have taken a drink. --- INT. FUSION OFFICES - NIGHT Bianca is working hard. Her phone rings. She answers. BIANCA: Bianca Montgomery. MARISA: (OVER PHONE) Hey, Binx, I'm just going to get the girls and head home. BIANCA: That is probably for the best. MARISA: What? BIANCA: I thought that I could make it back, but Kendall left too much work. I love you. MARISA: I love you too. Bianca hangs up the phone. She keeps working. --- INT. KRYSTAL'S - NIGHT Marisa is at her table. She leaves a tip. She grabs her purse. As she stands, she wipes a tear from her face. She is very sad that Bianca couldn't make it back. --- INT. DAVID'S PENTHOUSE - NIGHT Cara is still knocking on the door. CARA: (Sighs) Where the hell is he? Come on! Answer the door, David. You know what? Whatever. As Cara is about to walk away, David answers. DAVID: Cara... Cara turns around. She is shocked to see that David is there. ***FADE OUT*** ***END OF EPISODE 19***

Another good episode in my eyes! Rafe/Jordan: Jordan better be careful not to reveal too much, if she wants to keep some more things private from Rafe. Can't wait to see where this whole Jerome Grant thing goes. Nicole/Eric: I LOVE what you did for Eric. We say more of his layers that we don't get on television. He is very well written. And, Nicole and his exchange was so like them. Billie/Daniel: Billie and Daniel are going to skate on thin ice with this plan. They better be careful if they want it all to work out. Laura/JJ: These were probably your best scenes in the episode where mystery is concerned. I don't think it will be long before Laura discovers the truth. But, she better be careful not to PHYSCO again from all the stress. JJ better watch out for her stress level. I'm getting super excited for the future of your show! KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.

Very good episode! This episode was very character driven and VERY DAYS like. Gabi/Hope: I enjoyed the little conversation between the two. I am worried that Gabi is just way over her head with this whole bring down Nick plot. But, it is my favorite story because it involves so many characters, and it is well written. Sonny/Will: I enjoy what Will is doing with Sonny. It is time for a change in this relationship, and this is a good change. Eric/Nicole: This was very interesting to hear. I loved both sides of the story. Nicole's perspective was very well needed in Eric's life. He needs to know that there is a whole different life for him outside St. Lukes. I like that Eric was getting his feelings out. You didn't just make that unknown. You let us know that it isn't easy for Eric to get out of the church life. GREAT EPISODE!!! You are finally finding your footing with DAYS and making it your own, but still having that DAYS feel. Good for you! KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

LOL WITH THAT STRIP CLUB PHOTO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I with ML on that one. I don't think BO is dead either. It just seems to convenient that they come this far and that's what is left for them. I know some one else is behind this. This story line is FAR FROM OVER! Jesse getting involved officially now should be good. It will be interesting to see where that really goes. Interesting with Marcino and Greg. Looks like we have a little more of a future story going on. I did like that they were watching the fireworks together. Something just kind of clicked on my end that, that was the right time to do the hand thing. I LOVE HOW YOU WRITE JJ. I'm telling you he is officially the best written character in my opinion. You stay true to how he is written but you add a part that we want to see with him. Hats off to you on that one. Terrence and Natalia. Okay. I can see this. We'll see where it goes. I do love me some Carly Manning. Keep her in PLEASE!!! I love the way you end your shows too. You have a way with it. You leave people wanting SOOOO MUCH MORE! Very good show. You know how to write some DAMN good soap opera. KEEP THIS UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! The great work that is LOL

All My Children - Episode 18 Created By: Agnes Nixon Written By: Casey Hutchison -------------------------------- EXT. KRYSTAL'S - AFTERNOON Liza is exiting Krystal's. Liza is on her phone. She has her purse on her arm, and a suitcase in hand. Liza: (On Phone) I need you to cancel all my appointments for two weeks. Yes, Trudy, I know that I was supposed to meet with Mr. Carlton today, but I can't. Alright, thanks. Bye. As she hangs up, she bumps into Erica. They stare deeply into one another. --- EXT. PINE VALLEY PARK - AFTERNOON Adam walks up to a bench and sits. Adam: Where are you? The camera points down to black stilettos walking. Woman: I'm here, now. Sorry I'm late. --- INT. OAK HAVEN LOBBY - AFTERNOON Stuart enters the mental facility. Stuart: I'm here. Marian turns around. Marian: (Sobs) Hi, my love. Marian runs up to Stuart and kisses him. --- INT. CALEB'S HOME - AFTERNOON Caleb is finishing off a glass of scotch. There is a knock at the door. Caleb: Coming! He answers the door. Asher: Dad... Caleb hugs his son. We can tell that Caleb has waited a long time to see his son. --- --- INT. PINE VALLEY HOSPITAL - AFTERNOON Dixie is sitting down reading a magazine. When Tad enters, she stands, and goes to him. Dixie: How is she? Tad: She says "fine". Dixie: What do you say? Tad: Not, fine. She's pale, and she is laying in that bed. Dixie: Tad..., everything will work out. She will make it through. Tad: How can you be so sure. Dixie: (Sighs) Can I give you a piece of advice? Tad: Sure. Dixie and Tad walk over to the chairs. They sit. Dixie: Tad, bad things happen to good people. But, it is only the good people who decide to rise up and fight. Opal will be fighting. She will kick this tumors ass. She will survive this. There is one thing I know for sure. Tad: What? Dixie: We haven't seen the last of Opal Cortland yet. Tad: Do your promise me that? Dixie: Of course I do. Tad: Because, I can't lose her. Dixie: And, you won't. Now, come here, honey. Dixie takes Tad in her arms. --- INT. CHANDLER MANSION - AFTERNOON Stuart and Marian enter the mansion. Marian stops in the front room. Marian: (Sighs) Stuart: Are you okay? Marian: (Sighs) Its just..., I haven't been in this house in a very long time. I never forgot what it looked like, though. Marian goes to the stairs. Marian: I'll never forget these stairs. Marian goes to a table of flowers. Marian: I'll never forget these flowers. Marian goes to the double doors that lead into the living room. Marian: And, I'll never forget these doors. Beyond these doors, is the living room. So many tragic things have happened in that room. I thought that you were dead, J.R. went crazy, so many fights, and don't forget, both tornadoes ripped through this home. Stuart: I know. Are you going to be okay staying here? Marian: I have no where else to go. I have to be okay with staying here. Stuart: Do you feel safe? Marian hugs Stuart. Marian: With you..., I always feel safe. --- INT. CALEB'S HOME - AFTERNOON Asher is sharing a drink with his father. Caleb: I'm glad that we are doing this. Asher: I am too, dad. Caleb: How has college been? Asher: Good. I only have one more semester. Caleb: Really? Asher: Yeah. Caleb: That's good. Asher: It is. Caleb: So, what brings you by, today? Asher: I actually wanted to talk to you about school. Caleb: What about it? Asher: I've been doing my research. I found out that all my credits and courses can transfer to PVU. I can go here. I already have an apartment picked out. I'm doing this for you. Caleb: For me? Asher: I've seen what has happened with you. Caleb: So, that's why you want to go here? To take care of me? Asher: Yes. Caleb: Well, pack your bags now. Asher: What? Caleb: You won't be staying in Pine Valley to take care of me. Not by a long shot. --- EXT. PINE VALLEY PARK - AFTERNOON Adam hands the woman an envelope of money. They both stand. Adam: Thank you for deciding to help David and I. Woman: Of course, Adam. I always love doing bad things once in awhile. Adam: Don't we all? Woman: (Laughs) Now, I have to get back to the hotel. My daughter and the babysitter are waiting for me. Adam: Have a good day. Woman: You two. The camera zooms in to reveal the woman's face. It is Skye Chandler Quartermaine. --- EXT. KRYSTAL'S - AFTERNOON Liza breaks the silence. Liza: We are so not doing this now. Erica: Didn't plan on it. I just came here to get a chicken salad, for lunch. Liza: Enjoy that salad. As Liza walks away, Erica stops her. Erica: Liza. Liza: Thought we were not doing this. Erica: (Sighs) Can I ask what the suitcase is for? Liza: I am leaving. I am taking a little two week vacation. Erica: I hope you enjoy yourself. Erica stops Liza again, as she is walking away. Erica: Liza. Liza: Erica! What do you want?! Erica: I have to say this before you go. Liza: What? Erica: I'm sorry for all the pain I've caused you. I never meant to hurt you at all. I never meant to lock lips with your boyfriend. I never meant to blow things out of proportion. Listen, I really do hope you enjoy your trip. I hope that you get time to reflect. I hope that you get time to figure stuff out. I want the best for you in your future. Again, sorry. Liza: Erica..., thanks. That apology meant a lot. Enjoy your salad. Erica: Thank you. I will. Bye, Liza. Liza: Bye, Erica. Liza walks off. Both the women are smiling. --- NEW CLOSING: ---

All My Children - Episode #17 Created By: Agnes Nixon Written By: Casey Hutchison -------------------------------- INT. HOSPITAL CAFETERIA - MORNING Jake and Amanda are having breakfast. Jake: So, did you get that fight that Trevor had with that kid at school, under control? Amanda: Yeah, it was no problem. The principal completely understood that things like this happen. Trevor and the other child just got a detention. Jake: Have you taken away his video games yet? Amanda: First time I heard about the fight. Jake: Good. So, how is everything with you? Amanda: Well... Jake: What? Amanda: I have some news to share with you. --- INT. STUART'S BEDROOM - MORNING Stuart is tying his tie. Adam enters, and shuts the door. Stuart turns to Adam. Adam: Looking nice for Marian? Stuart: I'm going to pick her up. We already agreed on that. Adam: Yes, yes we have. Stuart: Anyways, thanks for coming up here to see me, but I have to finish getting ready. Adam: Stuart, can I ask you a question? Stuart: Sure. Adam: What happen to you? Stuart: What do you mean? Adam: Why the dark turn brother? Why the change? --- INT. CHANDLER MANSION - MORNING Downstairs, J.R. rings the doorbell. Scott goes to answer it. Scott: What the hell are you doing here, J.R. J.R.: I think you know. Scott: No, no I do not. J.R.: I'm here to see my son. --- --- INT. HOSPITAL WAITING ROOM - MORNING Tad and Dixie are pacing around the hospital waiting room. Angie enters. Tad: Angie, there you are. What is it? How's my mother? Angie: Tad, this is very hard to tell you. Tad: Angie... Angie: Tad... Tad: What is it? Angie: It is bad news. --- INT. JESSE'S OFFICE - MORNING Jesse and Brot enter Jesse's office. They are laughing and having a good time. Jesse: What's the news, Brot? Brot: Oh, it is time to tell you? Jesse: We had breakfast. We did some outside patrolling. What is it? Brot: (Laughs) Jesse: Since, 6 AM you have said that you have great news. What is it? Brot: You are going to be a grandpa, Jesse. --- INT. HOSPITAL CAFETERIA - MORNING Jake takes a drink of his orange juice. Jake: What is it? Amanda: I am actually very happy to share this with you. Jake: What? Amanda: Jake, this news is good for both of us. Jake: What is it? You are keeping me in suspense. Amanda: I-I-I Jake: (Laughs) WHAT?! Amanda: I'm pregnant. We are going to have another baby. Jake and Amanda stand up. They are laughing, hugging, and kissing. Jake: I'm gonna have another baby! (Laughs) --- INT. JESSE'S OFFICE - MORNING Jesse sits down. Jesse: I'm going to be a grandpa? Brot: Yeah, Natalia is pregnant. Jesse: How long? Brot: Ten weeks. Jesse: That long? Jesse stands. Brot: Yeah. Jesse: How come you waited this long? Brot: We just wanted to make sure that nothing bad happened to the baby. Jesse: Good idea. Come here. Jesse shakes Brot's hand. It turns to a hug. Jesse: You, Brot Monroe, have given me one of the best gifts, I have ever received. Brot: I'm glad I could do that for you. Jesse: (Laughs) Same here. The camera zooms in on Jesse's face. --- INT. CHANDLER MANSION - MORNING J.R. enters. Scott shuts the door. J.R.: So, where is he? Scott: Seriously? J.R.: What? Scott: J.R., it is ten thirty in the morning. He is obviously at elementary school. J.R.: Oh, yeah. Sorry. Scott: He gets off at three. J.R.: I forgot. Scott: Of course you did. J.R.: What is that supposed to mean? Scott: It means, that you haven't been in Little A's life. He probably has forgotten all about you. J.R., he is eight years old now. He is different. He probably doesn't even remember you. J.R.: Watch your step. Scott: (Laughs) Are you threatening me? J.R.: Take it how you want it. Scott: I guess I will. J.R.: Listen, I will be back here by three. Scott: J.R., I'm not letting you see him. J.R.: Why the hell not?! Scott: Because, he doesn't need you. Madison and I are raising A.J. just fine. J.R.: You and Madison? Scott: Damn right. J.R.: Are you telling me, that, that crazy bitch is taking care of my son. Scott: Watch your step J.R. J.R.: You gonna hit me? Scott: Don't tempt me. J.R.: (Laughs) Scott: I think you should just stop laughing, and leave. I will call the police. J.R.: You may have kept me away from my son this time, but don't count on a next time. Scott: There won't be a next time. J.R.: Oh, there will be. Have a nice day. Scott: Not sure I'm going to say the same to you. J.R.: Didn't plan on it. J.R. exits. Scott: Don't worry A.J. He won't come anywhere near you. --- INT. STUART'S BEDROOM - MORNING Stuart checks his watch. Stuart: I don't have time to tell you the changing of my life. Adam: You will. Stuart: Do you really want to come after me? Adam: I am Adam Chandler. Just because I did something wrong, doesn't mean that I won't come after you. No matter what you have on me, things don't change. Stuart: They have Adam. Things have changed. Adam: Anyways, answer my question. Stuart: Fine, I will. Adam I am tired. Adam: What do you mean? Stuart: I am tired of you stomping on me. It is time for things to change. Not only in this mansion, but in Pine Valley. I am going to step up. I am going to claim my place in this town. Adam: Well brother, good luck to you. Stuart: Thank you. Now, I really do have to go pick up Marian. Adam: Go right ahead. Stuart exits. As this happens, Adam gets out his phone. He dials, and puts it to his ear. Adam: Hi, we have a problem. A big one. Meet me in the park. ASAP. --- INT. HOSPITAL WAITING ROOM - MORNING Dixie face tells us that she is deeply worried. Dixie: Angie, what is it? What's wrong with Opal? Angie: (Sighs) It is very serious. Tad: Is it the tumor. Angie: Yes. Dixie: What's wrong with the tumor now? Angie: It has enlarged. Greatly. Dixie: What does that mean? Angie: It means, that it might be too late to save Opal's life. Dixie: Oh my god. Tad, are you alright? Tad: No, of course not. Dixie puts her arms around Tad. The camera zooms in on Tad's face. A tear falls. --- FADE OUT --- Liza: I need to leave. * Greenlee: Jesse, we need your help. * Dixie: She will make it through. Tad: How can you be so sure? * Stuart: I'm here. * Asher: Dad... * Frankie: What is it? * --- ---

NOW THIS WAS A GOOD SHOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I was instantly intrigued by your episode title. I LOVE THAT YOU BROUGHT CARLY IN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Carly has always been one of my favorite DAYS characters. I think that Barbara is going to crash and burn. I just have this feeling that she can't really ever get her life together. But, who knows? Maybe she will get some sort of miracle. Interesting ending. I wonder where you are going to go with this whole license plate thing. I am interested to see the future in this story line. I LOVE KATSU! He is one of my favorite characters. He is so interesting and you write him very well. I liked the whole JJ thing at the beginning. I wonder where you are going to go with his future story. He is defiantly one of your most interesting characters on the show. I also don't think that he has fully blown it with Miranda. It will be really a treat to see how that whole Miranda JJ thing turns out. I wonder who he will turn too. KEEP UP THE AWESOME WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Things are really starting to form themselves!

I accidentally read backwards LOL! Anyways: Olivia: NOW I KNOW WHAT LIV WAS UP TOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Interesting to see what's really going on with this storyline. I am intrigued by this one, for some reason. Matthew/Noah: I feel bad for Matthew. Him being gay has not been an easy ride so far. That makes me sad for him. But, you are showing that gay isn't always a walk in the park. I LOVE THAT! Karen/Nora: I LOVED THIS SCENE!!!! Two older women going at it LOL. Very well executed. Mystery: Wonder who the person is.

VERY QUICK SCENES! I think you need to make these shows longer. Let us understand more. HOWEVER, not a bad show. Vicki/Blair: I like that Vicki is going to help Blair out. It shows you that family means everything to Vicki. Good job, staying true to the roots of Vicki's character. Matthew: POOR MATTHEW!!!!!!!!!!!! I felt soooo sorry for him. Almost made me cry. Noah: I wonder what you have in store for him. Karen: We now see what she is really up too. That bitch! I knew she wasn't just going to let a return to this town go to waste. This is interesting. Can't wait for more on her! Olivia: I wonder what is truly going on here. GREAT EPISODE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

What a very good show! It was very well rounded like @Days22 said. Hope/Gabi: I enjoyed them. Hope is probably going to get hot on Gabi's trail soon. She better watch out. I can kind of see through the dialogue that Gabi is starting to slip a little bit. That could spell trouble for her. Sami/EJ: I like how you write these two. You have them down well. EJ is trying to win DiMera power back. I can tell that. But, her better watch where he steps with Sami. She is becoming a little fragile. Nick/Percy: These two continue to crack me up!!! I can't wait to see where Percy's spying is going to go. Nicole/Eric/Chloe: I loved those little friendship lines between Nicole and Chloe. Two VERY important women in Brady's life, comforting one another a bit. I like Nicole and Eric's exchange. I know that you will write them much better than TV. You always do. Brady/Anita: I think Brady shouldn't trust this new woman on the canvas. This story is going to be good though. I am already highly intrigued by what you have set up for this story. And, Anita seem mysterious. I LOVE IT!!! BTW, I continue to love these pictures. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This is defiantly your best episode yet! You had everything in here for an excellent future set up. It was SUPER intense for a start of the show. Malcolm has Moses! GREAT! Now we got him to deal with more LOL! BUT, we don't know who survived that cabin explosion. We will see. I LOVED SHARON AND DRU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That stuff was just blowing me away with how awesome it was written. I can tell that some of your best work in this episode defiantly went into the scenes they were. I loved that it was Adam. And you picked the current TV Adam. Nice way to modernize the cast. Just like we talked about!!!! I agree with Beebs. This was one for the books. This was just amazing. You did your best work yet! You let us all know what was happening without missing a beat! What an absolute breathtaking episode! And... a very nice one for the readers who have been reading a loooong time. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS ALIIIIIIIIIIVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is probably your biggest cliffhanger yet! Good job! I also LOVED that closing pic at the end. Very cool! Will/Sonny: Wow! What a spat that was LOL. It kind of escalated pass a point I wasn't expecting. I enjoyed that. It just goes to show that marriage is not always perfect. Things get in the way. Jennifer/JJ/Liam: I liked the description in this scene. Especially how you defined Liam looking at JJ. I wonder if JJ will dig too far. He better watch out. I just hope Jennifer realizes who Liam really is. Hopefully, they do it, before it's too late. John: I feel sooo bad for him and the rest of Salem. They don't know about Brady. I wonder how this will play out in the future. For now, John has to grieve. I really, truly do feel bad for him. Your show is FINALLY getting to its best yet IMO! KEEP UP THE AMAZING WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PS: All caught up LOL

Loved this episode! Another good one! Sami: I like that she is trying to move on a little bit. She does not understand, that her world will never be the same with E.J. Maybe she will... soon LOL! Chloe/John: I kind of enjoyed when John jumped in. But, when it happened, I was missing Victor's lines LOL. He just cracks me up with the things that he says to Chloe every time she visits. However, it is true. Jennifer/Liam/JJ: I think Jennifer needs to listen. She never wants too. Then, when she is hurt, she cries all over the place. But, when she picks back up with someone who is mysterious, she doesn't want to listen. #ANNOYING Sonny/Will: Sonny needs to know that he is in the wrong. Will is actually trying to tell Sonny. But, he won't get off his high horse. BUT! I think Will needs to climb off of his too, and realize that Sonny is trying to get him away from Victor sucking him in. GREAT WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I like the length of your shows. They aren't too short, and not too long. This was another good episode. I don't know how you do it, but you have got great continuity. I enjoy that. I like that Natalia has the drive to say in the force. You are showcasing good backbone for women. I like the character of Vin. He is very interesting to get into. I liked the Greg/Father encounter. This will be good for future set up. I thought the dialogue was very well done, leading up to the shove against the wall. I wonder where you are taking this story. Can't wait! The Roman and Steve story continues to be my favorite out of the whole show. You really spend time watching over this story line carefully. I like the excellent choice of crafting the story. You are doing very well with it! I like when soap operas bring in shelter stories. It gives everyone a break from the RICH and showcases a whole other part of the world. Shelter story lines usually get very real, very quickly. I hope you do the same. KEEP UP THE AWESOME WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

LOVED THIS EPISODE!!! Really well written and fast moving. JJ/Jennifer: I liked that JJ pulled away. Jennifer needs to know who Liam is, before she does anything serious. I just hope that Jenn can get on his trail, before he comes back to interrupt. Laura/Sami: I do love how you write Sami with a true back bone. She spent some of her years with out one. But, you are letting us see a different side to her, that I am enjoying. KEEP THIS UP PLEASE!!! Sonny/Will: I love what you are doing with these two. You are finally giving them a story that means something. Unlike, how the TV version does. You are having Sonny accountable, instead of Will becoming Sami 2.0. I like this route muccccchhhhh better! Brady's Memorial: I loved how you kicked things off. Seeing Chloe back was great! I liked how you let us know where she left off, and what she was doing. Usually DAYS just sweeps her 1 week returns under the rugs LOL. Can't wait to see how the Brady story line impacts Salem in the future. You are doing a really good job with this. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

All My Children - Episode #16 Created By: Agnes Nixon Written By: Casey Hutchison --------------------------------------------- INT. CHANDLER MANSION - NIGHT Adam: What? Stuart: (Laughs) Adam, I know you are working with him. Adam: What is that supposed to mean? Stuart: I know that you are working with David Hayward. Adam: Listen here! Stuart: Don't you talk to me like that. You haven't heard what I am going to say, yet. Adam: What is that supposed to mean? --- INT. CRAFT ROOM - AFTERNOON Greenlee and Ryan enter. Marian is looking out the window. Ryan: Marian. Greenlee: Hello? She turns around. Marian: I know why you are here. Greenlee: You do? Marian: Yes. Please sit. They all sit. Ryan: So, you know what happened with Annie? Marian: I do. But, I need something first. Greenlee: Anything. Marian: You have to promise to believe me. Ryan: Why wouldn't we? Marian: Because, what I am about to tell you, might seem odd. Greenlee and Ryan are wondering what could seem so odd about Annie. --- --- INT. ANNIE'S HOTEL ROOM - NIGHT Emma is sleeping on the bed. Annie goes into the bathroom. Woman: Please let us go. My daughter and I won't speak a word. Annie: You don't get it. Do you? Woman: What do you mean? Annie: You are the mom of my daughter's best friend. Greenlee and Ryan think that Emma is spending a whole week with you guys. That buys me some time. Just think of yourself as an insurance policy. Woman: Lady... Annie: Who knows? I might let you go. Annie shuts the door. --- INT. ZACK AND KENDALL'S HOME - NIGHT Zack and Kendall are on the couch. Kendall: I am shocked that the boys fell asleep that fast. After taking them to see Jurassic World, let's just say that ice cream took their sugar high to a whole new level. It's amazing how fast it can happen. Zack: Yes it is. Kendall's phone rings. Zack: Do you really have to answer that? Kendall: I do. It might be Jackson or Binx, with an update on my mom. Zack: (Sighs) True. Kendall answers her phone. Kendall: Hello? Hello? Hello? (Static on the phone) Listen here, the police are after you. So, whoever this is, I've already taken care of you as an issue. Do you understand me? Kendall hangs up. They both stand. Zack: Dammit! Kendall: I can't take this. I don't have time for this. Zack: I know. Kendall: So, what are we going to do? Zack: We will go to Jesse. Kendall: Okay. I have to call Rosie. See if she can babysit. Zack: Okay. Kendall: Be sure to grab my purse. --- INT. CHANDLER MANSION - NIGHT Adam eats a bowl of bar nuts. Adam: You still haven't said what you need to. Stuart: I thought you would have figured something out by now. Adam: No, I haven't. Stuart: Adam, I'll keep your secret. On one condition. Adam: I'm listening. Stuart: Marian is getting released soon. Adam: Really? Stuart: Yes. Adam: What does my secret have to do with her? Stuart: You are going to keep her here. Let her live at the Chandler Mansion, and your secret is not blown sky high. So, what is it going to be? Will you let me keep your secret, as you keep Marian here? Adam: I'll take you up on that brother. Stuart: Let's shake on it. After all, that's how you do real deals. The two shake hands. --- INT. JESSE'S OFFICE - NIGHT Kendall, Zack, and Jesse enter. They sit down. Jesse: So, the stalker didn't say anything? Kendall: Exactly. Zack: He or she just keeps sending these static, weird calls. Jesse: So, no text? Threatening voice mails or emails? Kendall: Nope. Jesse, it is really starting to worry me. Jesse: Kendall, that's normal. Zack: (Sighs) Jesse: Kendall, hand me your phone. Kendall: Okay. Kendall hands over the phone. Zack: What are you doing? Jesse is taking out chips and wires. Jesse: The things I am taking out can be used to track. I am going to see if the same thing can happen with tracking the stalker. It is unlikely, but it just might work. Do you mind if I keep this stuff? Kendall: No problem. I can pick up a burner. Not a problem. Zack: Thanks Jesse. Jesse: Of course. --- INT. PINE VALLEY HOSPITAL - NIGHT Angie is at the front desk. She is looking Opal's chart. She can't help but worry for Opal. Is one of Pine Valley's best really dying? She is worried, but knows she can't stop doing her work. THEN... Angie: What is this? She sees something odd in the chart. Angie: Oh my goodness. Angie gets a phone. Angie: Tad, this is Angie. Get Opal to the hospital, now! --- INT. CRAFT ROOM - NIGHT Greenlee and Ryan are intrigued. Marian: Annie, was released about six months ago. She wanted to revamp her life. I said that I know of this motel on Cryer street. It isn't much. But, it is cheap. So, she thought about it. She would call me. She checked up on the comings and goings of Oak Haven. One day, she told me about her plan to redeem herself, and take what is rightfully hers. But, I..., I..., I, think she has gotten out of control. Greenlee: What do you mean? Marian: She talked about taking Emma. Ryan: What!? Ryan stands with Greenlee. Marian: I hope that I didn't upset you. Greenlee: It is fine Marian. Thank you. Marian: Of course dear. Bye. Greenlee and Ryan go out to the hall. Ryan: We have to go to that hotel room. Greenlee: We can't. Ryan: What do you mean? Greenlee: We have to get the police with us. Ryan: You're right. You're right. Greenlee: We'll get Emma back. And, I'll kill this bitch. I promise you that. Greenlee and Ryan hold hands, and walk down the hall. --- Announcer: On The Next "All My Children" Angie: It is bad news. * Stuart: I'm going to pick her up. * Jesse: What's the news, Brot? * J.R.: I'm here to see my son. * Amanda: I have some news to share with you. --- ---

Loved this episode! It was very built up type stuff. Which is good. Jennifer/Liam/JJ: Liam is still way more interesting on your version than he ever was on television. You are revealing true layers about this character. The call was very good and completely unexpected for JJ to find out. Good Work! Sami/Laura: This scene was riveting. It reveals way more to Sami. The descriptions were spot on. Sami is going to have alot to play on as this plot comes back from the year of 2007. Victor/Sonny: I LOVED THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It was very raw. It was very DAYS. This scene was magic. I love where you take Victor and how you use him. We finally see Victor Kiriakis in his true colors again. Hope/Aiden: I thought this was so funny and cute. It kinda put a smile on my face. I liked how it was written. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

What a drama filled show! I love it!!! Sheryl/Jordan: They keep getting more interesting. Jerome Grant is a great way to keep them moving on up in the whole story line mode. I love how you continue to write them in the way that you do. Sonny/Victor: Sonny..., this could spell trouble for you and Will. I don't like where this is going for them. If Sonny lays on to much, then Victor might want to go after more where Will is concerned. Victor has never wanted to feel defeated no matter if family gets in the way or not. John/Kayla: This was probably the most interesting part of the episode. What did John mean? Will Kayla do this??? Interesting plot twist and some damn good mystery. I can't wait to see this story unfold. Kim/Billie/Daniel: OH BILLIE!!!!!!!!!!! I loved her line in the elevator. I see maybe a catfight coming LOL. Nick/Kate: Kate better watch out! Something might be coming her way that she doesn't want. And that thing is Nick. If Kate digs to deep, then Nick might have something for her, that she can't handle. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I LOVED THAT THIS EPISODE WAS LONGER!!!!!!!!!! You got some things cleared up by it being longer. Jennifer/Sami: I loved this talk. It was good that Jenn and Sami might be looking out for one another. Until Sami finds out the truth LOL. I loved how you wrote EJ's little exit in the scene. It was just like him LOL. Kate/Victor: Victor better start to watch out. Several people are against him now. JUST LIKE OLD TIMES! LOL. Sheryl/Jordan: Oh Sheryl. She has not really discovered what she is getting into. I like how you write these two. They are far more interesting on this version. They have actual story going on, that means something. Billie/Daniel/Kim: I like the whole Billie/Daniel thing. It has potential to be longer lasting. I think Kim is going above and beyond to do something, that really doesn't need to be done. But, I like the whole Mama Bear act. Roman/Kayla: I feel so bad for Roman. His memory loss seems a lot more severe than Caroline's. I hope that Kayla can be one of his hero. He needs to find one. Kayla has the resources to help him. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Episodes just keep getting better, as I am back to reading! So, let's begin: Marlena/Caroline/Eric: Wow, what a shocker to know that Salem is going ahead with the whole memorial for Brady thing. I feel so bad for Roman. However, this does give him something to do. I love the character, and can't wait to see where you take him. I wonder how Caroline will do with the news. Hope/Nicole/Nick: I was really scared for Hope LOL. But, you showed us that Fancy Face still got it! I loved the whole Nicole/Nick exchange. They do awesome in the scenes. I love the storyline you have for them. And, I loved Nicole's comment to Hope LOL. It is Nicole at her best. The Board Meeting: WOW! What a shocker for John's vote. But, I had the feeling he would say no for the continuation. And Kate..., she is quite the woman after all these decades LOL. I loved her and Victor's encounter in the conference room. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

WOW WHAT A GREAT EPISODE!!! Jen/EJ: FINALLY! Jennifer has some back bone. It is about time she goes after her beliefs again. I feel like Jen may find out soon... the truth. It will be interesting to see how EJ decides to cover some things up in the future. Will/Sonny/Gabi: I loved the whole Will/Sonny spat. It was very real and well written. Plus, you have those characters down pat. I LOVE THAT! I loved what Gabi said about the whole our lives will be good thingy. Obviously she was talking about Nick. But, what does she have planned next for him? Nick/Gabi is by far my favorite story line at the moment. It is full of drama and mystery. The Board Meeting: It keeps building and building. I agree with ML. I for sure thought that John was going to give us a vote in this episode LOL! But, guess I will have to wait on that one LOL. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I agree with Days22. This episode was SUPER INTENSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVED how you did the party. It was focusing on central plot lines. Things were clearing up. It was defiantly some of your best work yet. It was very hard to read for me. Because, I felt bad for so many people. Especially Lily, this really sucks for her. All she wants to do is come back and get her Genoa City life back. And, I do feel bad for Malcolm. This shouldn't happen to anyone. But, it happened to him. It is also a great way to keep the whole Neil/Malcolm stuff going. I know that your writing is going to shine in the future even more than it already is. And, it is going to shine because of stories like this. I keep telling you how great Sister P. is. She continues to make me have tears, because I laugh so hard. I am happy that you continue to write for her. I think she might actually get more screen time than she already has. And, if she does, then that makes me happy!!!!!!!!!!! The Verdon Lou story continues to be a powerhouse. It continues to be interesting, more than ever now! I also continue to wonder who that damn patient is!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I think that is the most interesting part about the Lou story. Because, it will be a HUGE game changer. ALSO, Cane. There is not enough words to describe him LOL! He is defiantly one of your best characters at the moment. You let him shine through all this dialogue. He is finally getting a real story. Only if he was like this on television LOL. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE DELIVER MORE LIKE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

All My Children - Episode #15 Created By: Agnes Nixon Written By: Casey Hutchison --------------------------------------------- INT. ERICA'S HOSPITAL ROOM - AFTERNOON Erica sits up in bed. Erica: How dare you. Jackson: Erica, it is a valid question. Erica: I'll answer it then. I did not drink. Now, get that through your damn head! --- INT. LIZA AND CALEB'S HOME - AFTERNOON Liza throws her hands up. Liza: I don't know. I just don't know. Caleb: Liza, do you really want to feud and feud? Liza: Maybe. Caleb: What do you mean, maybe? Liza: Maybe I want to continue this feud, so you feel the pain I do. Caleb: Pain? What pain? --- INT. OAK HAVEN MENTAL HOSPITAL - AFTERNOON Greenlee and Ryan enter Oak Haven. They proceed to the front desk. Receptionist: Can I help you two? Greenlee: Yes. We are here for visiting hours. Receptionist: Who are you here to see? Ryan: Marian Colby. --- --- INT. CHANDLER MANSION - AFTERNOON Stuart enters. Stuart: (Sighs) Adam enters. Stuart: Adam. I am happy that you are here. Adam: (Whispers) Of course you are. Stuart: What was that? Adam: Oh nothing. What's up? Stuart: We need to talk. Adam: About what? Stuart: David Hayward. --- INT. KRYSTAL'S DINER - AFTERNOON Brot and Natalia sit at a table. Brot: I am glad that the doctor said you were doing good. Natalia: Me too. Our little baby is growing big and strong. Brot: Yes he is. Natalia: (Laughs) And, what makes you think that this baby is a he? Brot: (Laughs) I have that feeling. Either way our baby will be a Cubs fan. Natalia: Yeah, we'll see. There is a short silence between the two. Brot: What? Natalia: I'm so happy. Brot: Me too. He kisses her. Natalia: Thank you for always being by my side. Brot: Of course. I'll love you forever. Natalia: The same goes for me. Brot: Now, get over here. Natalia: (Laughs) They kiss again. --- INT. LIZA AND CALEB'S HOME - AFTERNOON Liza sits down. Liza: I've been through so much in the relationship department. I've been married four times. All to Adam. I've been with Tad. I kissed Gil Barrett. I was with Jake, Jonathan Kinder, Ryan. I've had two one night stands. One with Zack. The other with Damon Miller. And now..., I came to this. Me and you. (SHE STANDS) You were going to propose. I might have said yes. But, then, I come home, and you are right here; in this very room, locking lips with "the" Erica Kane. I see that you want her. From the first time you laid eyes on her, you wanted to be with her. It's fine. Go. I'll get out of your hair. Caleb: It was one time Liza. And, you seem to not want to know the truth. Liza: What truth? Caleb: Liza, Erica never wanted me. She gave me that kiss to make Jackson jealous. Liza: What? Caleb: (Sighs) Erica came here. She was upset. Very upset. Apparently, her and Jackson got into a fight at Bianca and Marisa's. I just tried to comfort her, without the kiss. As soon as we started talking, she kissed me. Liza: And, I'm supposed to believe that? Caleb: Believe whatever you want. But, this is the truth. Liza checks her watch. Liza: I need to go. I have a deposition to go to. Caleb: Will you think about what I said? Liza: Sure. I'll give it some thought. Caleb: Thank you. Liza: Don't mention it. Seriously, don't. Liza walks out. Caleb: (Sighs) --- INT. CHANDLER MANSION - AFTERNOON Adam pours himself a scotch. Adam: We don't need to worry about David Hayward. Stuart: Actually, we do. Adam: Why is that. Stuart: Oh my lord! Adam: What? Stuart: (Laughs) Adam, I know you are working with him. Adam: Excuse me? Stuart: You didn't think I would notice the two million dollars taken from the bank. Now, tell me brother, why would you work with such an evil person? And, I know you are lying to Brooke. So, tell me. Why would you do this? --- INT. ERICA'S HOSPITAL ROOM - AFTERNOON Jackson is out of the room. Erica is laying in her bed. Erica: I know I didn't take a drink. --- INT. CRAFT ROOM - AFTERNOON Greenlee and Ryan enter. Marian is looking out the window. Ryan: Marian. Greenlee: Hello? She turns around. Marian: I know why you are here. Greenlee: You do? Ryan: Really? Marian: Yes, you want to know everything about Annie. Ryan: Yes, yes we do. Marian: Where do I even begin? --- INT. ANNIE'S HOTEL ROOM - AFTERNOON Annie sits on the bed. Annie: I've kidnapped my daughter. I've kidnapped a mother and a daughter. I've sent mysterious phone calls to Kendall. And, I poisoned Erica's drink and dinner with alcohol. Oh, Annie, you get better at this all the time. --- Announcer: On The Next "All My Children" Marian: You have to promise to believe me. Adam: Listen here! Annie: I might let you go. Angie: What is this? Zack: Dammit! --- ---