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  1. Pretty jam packed episode. I liked how happy Jesse was to learn that he is having a grand child. A nice happy scene with he and Brot. I liked it. There must be something in the pine valley water as Amanda is pregnant too! Good for her and Jake. JR and Scott getting a little tense. I wonder if that will lead to something explosive. Hmm Stuart growing a backbone is good. I do wonder if he can keep it up. Really looking forward to him and Marian. And then we have the awful news about Opal. I dont want her to die so I hope Angie & company can save her life.
  2. Incredible episode. Idk if I can express exactly what I thought but Ill try. You just really do a fantastic job of these families. You can just feel the connections. Its really wonderful. Whether its happiness or sadness it all comes through and each of your families feel like home. I loved that whole back and forth first half. Carl with Matt and Rachel with amanda. A cool way for you to do that and them both find out what is going on simultaneously. Nice touch Cute scenes with Cass and Frankie. Happiness coming through here. They both seem natural together. Two different text messages though at the end. Wonder what each will lead to. I really liked seeing the softer side of Iris and all of the history there brought up. Im glad Iris and Rachel got to share a moment. And here we are. The big arrival of Devin. It seems like a big one and I am quite looking forward to what you do with this character...
  3. Cut to Miranda at home. She is listening to her headphones as she is going over some homework. There is a knock at her door but she doesn’t hear it at first with her headphones on. The knocking slightly increases and she hears it and turns off her music. Miranda opens the door to see JJ. JJ: Hi…neighbor. MIRANDA: Hey… JJ: I hope this isn’t awkward. MIRANDA: Why would it be awkward? JJ: You know…the other night. I was doing some bad unneighborly stupidness with some loud music. MIRANDA: Yeah that got a little frustrating to say the least. JJ: Well I came over here to apologize for that night…hope you can give me some neighborly forgiveness. -- Lucas and Emily are at the coffee shop. Hunter takes their orders. EMILY: I hope this coffee is strong. I really need it. HUNTER: Coming right up nice and strong. Lucas and Emily take a seat. LUCAS: You alright? You seem uneasy to me. EMILY: Didn’t sleep well. LUCAS: If you wanted to meet because of that I am the wrong person to ask for sleeping advice. EMILY: That is not why we are meeting. You just want to cut right to the chase don’t you... LUCAS: For some reason you intrigue me. At a business level of course. EMILY: This is good. LUCAS: No. I don’t like it. EMILY: Don’t say that. You know I should probably be at my husband’s opening, but here I am with you. LUCAS: Your husbands company is opening today and you are not there?! EMILY: He won’t miss me. I think. LUCAS: I…I don’t get you. -- Cut to BRO: It is officially up and running! Paul walks up to Barbara. PAUL: Mom I hope you have the designs ready to go into production. BARBARA: I do. I think they came out wonderful. Barbara hands Paul a folder. Katsu walks over and takes the folder. KATSU: I want to see these too. BARBARA: Aren’t you just involved with the business side of this company and not the creative? KATSU: I savor in making sure my money goes into good product. Katsu looks over some of the designs with Paul. PAUL: What do you think? KATSU: We’ll see how the finished products come out. He gives the file to Paul and walks. BARBARA: I still don’t like him at all! Eliza glides up to them. She hugs Barbara. BARBARA: (her frown turns to a smile) Hey sweetie! PAUL: I’m proud that you are on time. ELIZA: Of course I am. I am here to be your very productive secretary, dad! PAUL: Happy to hear it…not happy about one thing though. ELIZA: What is wrong? PAUL: I see that Emily nor Henry are here to support us today. Barbara looks on -- Marcino and Greg are out by a pond. MARCINO: This place is beautiful. GREG: I have never taken anyone else here before. MARCINO: It is personal to you? GREG: Very. The only place I get my peace from the last five years or more. I’ve lost track. MARCINO: Your family has been going through a rough patch for that long? GREG: We don’t go through rough patches. We are the rough patch. MARCINO: I don’t like to see you this stressed out all the time, GREG: When you get no peace at home every day, it will short circuit a persons nerves. MARCINO: I can imagine. Always puts my minuscule problems into perspective. GREG: I don’t mean to belittle your problems. MARCINO: You don’t. GREG: I just truly hate my life. Greg skips a rock into the pond. -- Jesse shows up to see Steve and Terrance. JESSE: Hi agents STEVE: You already come bearing gifts, dude? JESSE: I do. I have the warrant you want. TERRANCE: That was fast. JESSE: I want to help you guys as much as I can. I may need the favor returned soon. STEVE: Works for me. TERRANCE: Let’s go to this house. I want to see what we can uncover there. STEVE: I just hope it is something that leads to Bo. The 3 men head off https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LnwwnaIcRSU Cut to JJ and Miranda: JJ: I just don’t do well when partying. Something always happens. MIRANDA: You sure seemed to be having fun. JJ: I get carried away. The loud music was not my idea. Though that is not an excuse. MIRANDA: Oh so then the strip poker was your idea? JJ: Ha! Well no, actually that wasn’t either. None of it was to be honest. MIRANDA: hmm…okay. I am sorry if I interrupted you and your girlfriend from having fun. JJ looks on uncomfortably. JJ: She…Eliza is not my girlfriend. MIRANDA: Well then sorry for interrupting your friend with strip poker benefits (chuckles) JJ: You didn’t interrupt anything. MIRANDA: (gives him a doubting look) Okay. Whatever you say. I am glad we came to these understandings. JJ: Me too. Awkward silence ensues.. -- At the coffee shop HUNTER: Here are your extra strong coffees EMILY: Thank you very much. LUCAS: So can we get to why you called and wanted a breakfast meeting. EMILY: I just want to know what you thought of my resume. LUCAS: It is in my possibility bank. EMILY: What the hell is a possibility bank? LUCAS: The maybe I will hire the maybe I won’t hire folder. A man walks in looking strange.. EMILY: Don’t play hardball with me Lucas Roberts. I have experience for you... and your company. LUCAS: You do and I am considering hiring you, but— The strange guy walks up to their table. STRANGE GUY: Do I know you… LUCAS: Me? I don’t think so. STRANGE GUY: I’m reasonably sure that I know you from somewhere. LUCAS: No…no I think you have the wrong guy… -- AT BRO: Katsu is with Barbara KATSU: You know I was just giving you a hard time about your designs right? BARBARA: With your opinion or without your opinion I know my designs are fabulous. KATSU: Aren’t you the confident one. BARBARA: When you have done something most of your life you know a few things. Don’t you forget that I know a few things. Could probably even teach you a thing or two (smirks) She Walks off. Meanwhile, Paul comes out of his office and goes to Eliza at her desk. PAUL: You put your first call in! Great job! ELIZA: Thank you! PAUL: It is day 1 though and I have a lot of people who will be calling and making appointments with me and your grandma so if it gets to be too much let me know. ELIZA: I’ll be fine. PAUL: Cool He walks back to his office. The phone rings. ELIZA: Paul Ryans office…yes…sure I will put you through. She puts the call through to her dad. Another line rings. ELIZA: Paul Ryans office…a meeting…yes…let me look through his appointments today…. Line 3 and 4 start to rings as well. ELIZA: Hold please….(answers line 3)…materials? Yes we will need materials in today I am sure…I don’t know…I will have to ask She is starting to panic as the work builds up… -- At the pond: Marcino and Greg are sitting on a bench Marcino sighs MARCINO: You are killin’ me bro. GREG: I am sorry for being a depressive twit. MARCINO: No Don’t say that. I can just tell you need a hug. Greg puts his arms out for a hug GREG: Well… Marcino hugs him. GREG: I just need to get away from my father. When I turn 18 soon I will and when I do I will be feeling better. A better man. I know it is no excuse but this stress makes me choose poor choices. MARCINO: Oh no…what did you do now? Greg puts his hand on Marcinos knee.. GREG: Don’t judge me but I— MARCINO: --Wait…sorry for interrupting but what is that? Marcino points in the distance to tons of trees GREG: Oh sh*t -- Steve, Jesse and Terrance arrive at the house the ISA drones took pictures of. They go inside….to find it completely empty with just a bookshelf with no books and a refrigerator in the kitchen. TERRANCE: This cannot be! They just took these pictures 2 days ago and now it is empty. STEVE: This does not make any sense. Roman told me as soon as he could about these. JESSE: How would anyone not in the ISA know these pictures were taken? STEVE: Nobody should have known about that. TERRANCE: It must have just been emptied out yesterday or today. JESSE: Looks like it was cleaned up good too. I will see if I can get forensics just in case. STEVE: Please do that. TERRANCE: Someone is one step ahead of us and I am sick of it. STEVE: Me too. It is starting to be beyond frustrating and just plain infuriating. TERRANCE: Could it be an inside job at the ISA? STEVE: I’ve had an odd feeling about that for a while now. TERRANCE: Who at the ISA was originally in charge of Bo’s mission? STEVE: I have not been able to find that info out, but I will now. Something is off and we need to figure out what. -- Cut to JJ and Miranda: JJ: Glad we had this talk. I’ll, uh, leave now. MIRANDA: Thank you for stopping by. You didn’t have to apologize but its really cool that you did. JJ: It won’t happen again either way. JJ exits and goes back to his apartment and closes the door. He sinks against his door and thumps his head against the door. JJ: I so have blown it with Miranda… -- At the coffee shop: Hunter sees the strange guy at Lucas and Emilys table STRANGE GUY: I have to know you from something… LUCAS: I don’t think so man HUNTER: Jeremy, you have to let our customers eat in peace. STRANGE GUY/JEREMY: Sorry. HUNTER: Do you want your usual donut? JEREMY: No, I have somewhere to be now. Jeremy exits quickly. EMILY: What was that about? LUCAS: I have no clue who that was. I’m sure he didn’t know me. HUNTER: His name is Jeremy. He comes in here a lot. The guy does seem to have some mental issues… -- AT BRO: Barbara is in her office going over her designs. BARBARA: I have my baby back. These are wonderful. Just wait till they come to fruition. Meanwhile, Katsu is at Eliza's desk. KATSU: You alright? ELIZA: Was a stressful ten minutes. So many calls at once. KATSU: You’ll get use to it. ELIZA: I was confident at first, but now I am worried. KATSU: You will get the hang of it. Don’t sweat it. ELIZA: I’ll try KATSU: Really though, you are already sweating. Katsu wipes some sweat from her eye brow. He looks into her eyes and smiles before walking into Paul’s office. “The eyeland” from the Lost sound track starts to play https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZbsiB5zndtk [:00] In Pauls office PAUL: Hello Katsu KATSU: How is your first morning here at BRO? PAUL: So far so good, I’d say. KATSU: Me too. PAUL: I didn’t think you would stick around. KATSU: Hey, I am part of the family now. PAUL: I do want to thank you for all your help. KATSU: Always glad to be of service. I just cannot wait for the money to start coming through. PAUL: Oh, believe me, I will be elated when we make a profit. KATSU: We all will. Katsu and Paul shake hands. [:27] A frustrated Steve arrives home. He gets out of his car and slams the car door shut. He starts to walk towards his house when he hears something. He stands still for a moment… Someone is walking up behind him… He slowly starts to reach for his gun… Steve turns around quickly to see Carly Manning standing there! [:46] Steve: Woah be careful with the sneaking! CARLY: Sorry…I had to track you down. I can’t shake the feeling that something is wrong with Bo. Steve looks on uneasy [:56] Cut to Greg and Marcino at the pond. GREG: We have to go see what happened over there… MARCINO: I suppose… Marcino is nervous as the two start to walk through the trees closer to whatever it is they see. [1:08] They start to walk slower… A large dark object can barely be seen through more trees in the distance. MARCINO: This looks bad... GREG: Yeah. Something dire happened. They continue to get closer through the trees. [1:20] The two young men finally get to the object. Greg puts his hand across Marcino and looks around. GREG: I don’t think anyone is near. MARCINO: We’re going to have to call the police… [1:30] Cut to a mostly burnt up and charred car! GREG: I hope nobody was inside MARCINO: Can you tell? GREG: I don’t want to try and find out. The car is basically all burnt up. Busted up windows. Charred in the inside and out. Greg and Marcino get closer to it. The license plate however has managed to stay mostly okay. Zoom in on the license plate: It reads: “BO4HOPE” FADE TO BLACK Credits roll I do not own any non original characters nor any pics*
  4. A very well rounded episode. A lot of stories overlapping and I dig that a lot. I enjoyed the Gabi and Hope exchange. Im glad youve made Gabi so likable and her and Hope working together is pretty great. Nice little friendship scenes with Nicole and Chloe. Funny dialogue relating to Victor. Also an almost sweet little moment with Nicole and Eric. I wonder how Eric will deal with the stresses life is throwing at him. Brady waking up to one of the ladies from Oz. Im intrigued a lot and really do wonder where it will go. That leaves us to Sami and EJ and Nick and Percy. I really like the characterization you do with Percy who was a small character but you give him a personality that comes through. I cant help but hope that this blows up in Sami and EJs face. Nick does seem to be steps ahead anyway. I love that this story like another story on the show forces one to choose sides. Vic vs ej and sami vs Nick. So far Im team Nick.
  5. Malik is at home He is looking over some of his modeling pictures from the modeling contest. MALIK: I am shocked that they chose me. I look straight up goofy! He hears some arguing going on from the other room. MALIK: Every time those two come home they bicker…not today! Malik gets up and enters his parents bedroom. Morris and Eartha stop arguing and look at him MALIK: Look I know you have never liked us in your room, but— MORRIS: --Oh it is not OUR room anymore. Your mother has practically moved into the guest room! MALIK: Exactly and I would love to know WHY? EARTHA: It’s a long story. MALIK: I have all day. I don’t start my job for a few days. MORRIS: I do not want to drag you kids into this. MALIK: I am far from a kid anymore. Tell me what has gone so wrong the last two years between you two? It has been hell in this house. EARTHA: I am sorry we have been so hellish to live with. MORRIS: All I have to say is blame your mother. EARTHA: He is only blaming me because he cannot handle his own issues. I will tell you all about them, son! -- Outside of the house, Sam and Trinity are talking. TRINITY: Please get me out of here? SAM: Everything okay? TRINITY: Sure other than the fact that my family is so annoying. SAM: I am glad you want to go somewhere…because I do have a surprise for you. (grins) Trinity cuts her eyes at Sam suspiciously SAM: You will be happy! TRINITY: Fine. I will come with you. Besides, I need to get out of this wind. Messing up my curls. I so need to get a relaxer. SAM: A what? TRINITY: Nothing white boy let’s just go.. They get into the car. -- At union creek high: Zack runs into Mandy in the halls. MANDY: Only you would volunteer to come to this school in the summer. Nerd. ZACK: And what are you doing here? MANDY: Just had a cheerleading meeting. I’ll leave you to your nerdiness now. ZACK: Whatever motor mouth Mandy! Go tell the town you saw me here. Zack walks into Miss Morgans classroom. MISS MORGAN: Thanks for volunteering to help tutor math. ZACK: It is no problem. I like to help people with this subject. MISS MORGAN: Will your new friend Sam be coming? I told him he should. ZACK: I doubt it. For some reason he is happy with his C’s. -- At Holden and Lilys house: HOLDEN: I see you grinning over there. LILY: Twas a good night. HOLDEN: It sure was. He sees the mail from the Colorado government on the table. HOLDEN: I didn’t get to tell you something last night Kisses her neck HOLDEN: When you… Kisses her shoulder HOLDEN: …Walked on over… Runs his hands down her back HOLDEN: …Pushed me down on the bed… He gazes into her eyes HOLDEN: ….And seduced me, Mrs Snyder He kisses her on her lips LILY: Keep this up and we are ending right back on the bed, but what did you not get to tell me? HOLDEN: I got mail about a job offer at some new local government program LILY: Government? HOLDEN: Yeah I was surprised too.. -- At the hospital: A nurse is in with Jack NURSE: You get out tomorrow. Do you know where you are going to go yet? JACK: I gain back my independence on Independence Day. How ironic is that? Now of course ill be living that independence in some back alley I am sure but who cares. Not this hospital! NURSE: That is not true. Reva and Josh enter JOSH: Are you two talking about where Jack is going when he is released? NURSE: We were JACK: You two again… REVA: Yes us two and you don’t have to worry about where you are going. You are moving in with us! Jack looks at them both and side eyes them. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x75BmwP7bhg Zack and Miss Morgan are going over some lesson plans. MISS MORGAN: I will go over the examples and then you can help some of the students individually. Anne walks in ZACK: Perfect. MISS MORGAN: Thanks again. Zack seems excited now that Anne has arrived, Miss Morgan starts handing out papers. ZACK: The real reason I am doing this. Zack waves to Anne and she waves back -- Sam has taken Trinity to the Union Creek Chronicle. They are parked outside. TRINITY: Doesn’t your dad own this place. SAM: He does and I have gotten us a summer job here! TRINITY: For real? SAM: I am not playin’ TRINITY: That is awesome! Thank you so much! SAM: Well lets go in. They get out and walk inside. Luke Snyder greets them. LUKE: Todd is out right now, but he wanted me to show you both around. TRINITY: Are we actually going to get to write and all that? LUKE: Todd says you both will have two student articles each this summer. TRINITY: This is dope! SAM: I am excited that you are excited. TRINITY: You don’t even know. Gary comes out and spots them. GARY: Hello new co workers LUKE: This is Trinity and Sam TRINITY: Hi. GARY: Hello…Sam, Todds son right? (smirks) SAM: That’s me Gary shakes his hand.. -- Cut to Lily and Holden Holden hands Lily the letter he got in the mail. LILY: This seems strange to me. Did you apply for a government job? HOLDEN: I sure didn’t LILY: You should call one of these numbers. HOLDEN: I would rather just go to the interview. LILY: I hope it is not some kind of scam. She looks over the letter -- In Jacks hospital room: JACK: What do you mean I am moving in with you? I thought you guys didn’t know me from my…my past life or whatever.. JOSH: We don’t REVA: We just thought it was a good idea. JOSH: Well, she thought it was a good idea. I find it kind of weird, myself. REVA: You will enjoy our ranch. You will have a room to yourself. JACK: A ranch…will there be animals? JOSH: We have a few. JACK: I don’t know about this. REVA: Sure beats living in some back alley don’t you think? JACK: Look guys I may not remember my life, but I still have the feeling that I do not do good with animals. REVA: You won’t even see them. JOSH: I am sure he just needs time to think about it, Reva. REVA: Think long and hard. -- At the Davis house: EARTHA: Are you sure you really want to know what is up, Malik? MALIK: Yes, I do mom. EARTHA: Your father here has many issues. He cannot handle life and deals with it through outbursts with himself. MORRIS: Do you want to know why I cannot handle life? Because your mother has made it a living hell. She is the one who has this house on fire. EARTHA: What has happened to you Morris? You have gotten weak. MORRIS: I don’t even know you anymore so you are one to talk! Or did I ever know you? (yells) Huh?! Did I?! EARTHA: We better leave the room Malik. I am sure he is about to turn to his precious alcohol. MORRIS: Leave Eartha! It is about time since we have been living a lie for twenty years! Malik sighs -- Cut to Miss Morgans classroom MISS MORGAN: I want to welcome you all to summer algebra tutoring! Most of the class groans MISS MORGAN: I promise it will not be so bad and it will help your grades for this coming year and beyond. Miss Morgan is about to close the door, but Cory walks in late. MISS MORGAN: You are late Cory CORY: I know. I am sorry Miss Morgan but I had a prior engagement. MISS MORGAN: It is okay. Just Find a seat. Zack looks up to see Cory sit next to Anne His smile quickly turns to a frown. -- Gary and Luke are giving Sam and Trinity a tour around the Chronicle building. LUKE: I think we covered everything. GARY: We have SAM: So when do we get to start? LUKE: You will have to ask your dad that. TRINITY: This is thrilling. LUKE: I like this passion. Show that in your articles. Choose something you are passionate about. TRINITY: Oh I will. GARY: We need to get back to work now. LUKE: Okay, Okay Gary. See you both next time. TRINITY: Thank you so much for this! Trinity hugs Sam in all her excitement -- Back to Holden and Lily: LILY: Will you please call one of these numbers first before meeting with them. HOLDEN: I checked the numbers and they do belong to some local government offices. LILY: Hm, this is intriguing. HOLDEN: Sure is. I just wonder why they chose me and are reaching out to me. LILY: I am sure they have good reason. If this is on the up and up I am thrilled for you! I felt bad that you moved here just for me. HOLDEN: I have to admit I am pretty exhilarated by this prospect. -- Back in Jacks hospital room: REVA: So did you think it over? JACK: Oh yes You have given me all of two minutes to think about moving in with strangers. REVA: Not to be rude, but to you everyone is a stranger right now JOSH: Go easy on him! REVA: I just want to help the man out. JACK: I do appreciate it. REVA: So you will stop being stubborn and move to the ranch? JACK: Do I have a choice? REVA: No. JACK: I can see that. Then sure. I will try it out. Josh looks on still uneasy -- The Davis house: MORRIS: Your mother married me for her career and that is all. EARTHA: I am sick of you saying that! MALIK: I think I made a mistake coming in here. MORRIS: It is true Eartha and You know it! EARTHA: Sick of this and sick of you! Eartha exits the room. MALIK: So this a bad time to ask if tomorrows July 4th Barbecue is still on? MORRIS: Very funny. MALIK: Wish I could lighten this mood, but no chance of that. MORRIS: I’m sorry you had to hear that. MALIK: I am a grown man now I can handle it, but some advice dad. You two need to figure your sh*t out. Malik pats Morris on the back and exits as well. Morris closes the bedroom door. He takes out a bottle of cognac from a dresser drawer. He sits on the bed and starts to drink straight from the bottle… FADE OUT Credits roll *I do not own any non original characters nor any pics
  6. Well [!@#$%^&*]! Idk where to start LOL This was a huge one. Jammed all the way up. I have to say im glad Malcolm got to reenact some revenge on Nate for really setting a lot of this off! I still feel bad for Neil though and hope he is okay. Malcolm has just freakin lost all them marbles. Taking out Avery too for her car! He is in crazed mode. And Moses has got to be scarred for life from all these events. He is gonna need some therapy. Face lift Roman Brady needs to call Dr Marlena Evans to town Nice backstory with Dru and Sharon. Love when Dru told Sharon 'B*tch shut up! This my story! I will tell it." lmao Adam is the mystery man. Not my favorite character. We'll have to see where that goes. Nice fight scenes with Dru and Sheila! Soaps need a good fight scene once in awhile there are not enough. And I have been waiting for Cane to set this explosion in order for awhile now! Just who will make it out alive... eek Another intense one man! Looking forward to this aftermath
  7. I'm surprised that Stuart has made this deal with Adam. Should be a fun turn of events when Marian gets out though. Annie cracks me up. It would be her to do the insane thing of kidnapping Emmas friends family whoa re suppose to be away to make it look like Emma really is away. I quite like this story. My favorite atm. Hmmm the mystery with Kendalls stalker continues. I do wonder who it could be and why.. Marian telling all to Ryan and Greenlee. Greenlee sure getting feisty at the end. I cant help but want to root for Annie in this though. The stories are starting to get quite interesting
  8. Good episode! Im glad to see Kirkland. His scene confronting Christy was pretty great. He is developing a deadly tongue in these confrontations. Christy seems to have a lot of plots up her sleep. I do wonder what she plans with Felicia and how dire it may be. Im glad Grant is frustrated with Jack and Paulinas boinking. Good to see him squirm. Cute little scene with John and Sharlene. Also glad that they seem to be on the right track to working things out but I cant help but think the quad isnt over quite yet. I feel bad for both Lindsay and Gregory. I dont know why she is taking this out on him though. Hopefully he will just continue to try and be there for her. And thank you for the shout out at the end!!
  9. Steve is getting home taking his bags out of his car. He hears a voice say “Long trip?” He turns around to see Roman Brady. STEVE: Roman, what are you doing here? ROMAN: The ISA sent me out to talk to you. STEVE: Is this about the operation to find Bo? ROMAN: I have some good news… Steve is intrigued -- At the hospital, Angie is pushing Natalia around in a wheel chair. NATALIA: I probably could walk you know? ANGIE: Leave that to the physical therapist. I just want to talk. NATALIA: About my recovery? ANGIE: Well, yeah. Your recovery will probably progress slowly. NATALIA: I already feel much better than when I first woke up. ANGIE: Maybe you will be super woman through this recovery then. NATALIA: I like to think I will be. ANGIE: I also wanted to talk about your father. NATALIA: Was he a wreck after I was shot? ANGIE: Yes. Which was to be expected. He’s elated now though. I am very happy that you two are so close. NATALIA: I think we keep each other grounded. Especially on the job. -- Greg is home. He takes out a wad of cash. He flashes back to last night robbery: Vin, Chavo and himself had to run off on foot and they all went separate ways. GREG: I cannot believe those idiots pulled off a robbery. He stashes the money in his underwear drawer. GREG: I cant stash this here for long. God knows I cannot keep it in this house. He closes the drawer. GREG: I don’t even want it anyway. I feel very uncomfortable about what went down. He sits on his bed and shakes his head.. -- Meanwhile Vin and Chavo are together. CHAVO: What a rush last night, holmes! VIN: It sure was. It gets silent and Chavo looks at Vin stare in the distance. CHAVO: Um, I thought you of all people would be thrilled about what went down. VIN: I am. We made a good chunk of cash. We almost have a thousand dollars each. CHAVO: Then why do you seem unhappy? VIN: It is that stupid girl! CHAVO: Ali? VIN: Yes, she seems to have disappeared. I cannot get a hold of her and have no clue where she is. I want to try and make things up to her. She always forgives me and with this cash I know I can buy her something special. CHAVO: I am sure she will come around. She could not have just up and disappeared. VIN: She likes jewelry. I will get her some jewelry. CHAVO: Maybe throw in some flowers too. VIN: Good idea Chavo. That’s why I keep you around. Vin takes out a picture from his wallet of he and Ali. VIN: I wish she would just answer her phone! He calls her and it goes straight to voice mail. VIN: But she wont! He crumbles the picture of the two of them in frustration. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LnwwnaIcRSU Roman and Steve are inside the Johnson house: STEVE: Please go into detail of this good news, dude. ROMAN: The ISA sent a drone to check out some places around this city and on the outskirts of this city. STEVE: It found Bo? ROMAN: That would have been best case scenario, but what the drone was able to find is a house on the outskirts of town that seems newly built. The drone took pictures of the inside and it seems to be occupied, but nobody was seen around neither day nor night the two days the drone came around it. STEVE: You really think this could be connected to Bo? Roman hands Steve some pictures ROMAN: Yes because the very last time I spoke with Bo he had mentioned a house he was hoping to find more information on. Steve looks over the pictures His eyes go wide. STEVE: I think you have something here! I just have that feeling you know? ROMAN: I do hope this will lead us to my brother. STEVE: We have to get in there quick and look around. ROMAN: Me too, but we do have to get a warrant first. -- Cut to Vin and Chavo CHAVO: I think I am going to go spend some of this money. Vin puts on his shades VIN: I have to go too, Chavo. CHAVO: Where are you off to? To buy that jewelry? VIN: No, I am going to track down one of Alis friends. She will have to know where Ali is. CHAVO: Good luck, ese. -- Ali meanwhile is with Miss Cho at the womens shelter. MISS CHO: How are you holding up, Ali? ALI: I am trying to get adjusted to being here. MISS CHO: You are adjusting well. ALI: You think so? MISS CHO: Yes. First two days you wanted to just stay in your room alone, but today you ate breakfast with some of the other girls. ALI: I was hungry. MISS CHO: Regardless, I think it is a great first step. ALI: I feel isolated here. MISS CHO: In a way this is isolation, but you can make some life long friends here you just have to let them in. ALI: I am going to try. MISS CHO: Take your time. I just want you to be comfortable. -- Greg is in his room. He is laying on his bed staring at the ceiling. He then hears his father yelling at his little brother “You never listen to me! Are you stupid, kid? Start to listen to me!” Greg sighs. “The damn people in this house! Never listen. I should kick you all out!” GREG: I wish he would. “Dammit Cole, Just go to your room before I kick you all the way to it!” GREG: I am sick of that man… -- Jesse arrives at the hospital. He goes to the room to see Angie there with Natalia. JESSE: Angie ANGIE: Hi baby Jesse and Angie kiss. Angie: You okay from your long night last night? JESSE: I got a little bit of sleep. NATALIA: What went down last night? JESSE: There was a robbery but I don’t want you worrying about that right now. NATALIA: I am still a cop. JESSE: For now. NATALIA: How long until I can get back on the force? JESSE: I hope you are joking and not in a hurry for that. NATALIA: What do you think, Angie, how long until I am recovered enough for that? ANGIE: That is hard to say and really up to the force. JESSE: I am sorry Natalia, but you will not be continuing on as an officer. Her smile fades fast. -- Kayla arrives home and is happy to see Roman. KAYLA: Roman! Kayla and Roman hug. ROMAN: Good to see you sis. KAYLA: What are you doing here? ROMAN: Just here on business. KAYLA: Don’t like the sound of that. STEVE: I need a favor Kayla. I need to talk to your co workers husband. The cop. KAYLA: Okay…about what? STEVE: About business. We need a warrant. Investigating a house. Kayla looks at them both suspiciously. KAYLA: Something is going on. STEVE: I will hopefully be able to tell you more soon. I just need to get a warrant. ROMAN: I better go. KAYLA: I don’t like this. ROMAN: I’ll be in touch Kayla. KAYLA: When you do, speak more please. Roman exits and Kayla gives Steve a look of what is really up. Outside of the house Roman goes to the window. He gazes back in on Steve and Kayla… -- Back at the shelter: MISS CHO: Would you like to be in todays painting session. Could be good for your mind to get some peace. ALI: How many girls will be there? MISS CHO: Most of them. ALI: I think Ill pass today. MISS CHO: You cannot avoid all the girls forever. ALI: I know I just need time. I am not use to having many friends because of Vin. MISS CHO: He kept you away from them? ALI: He tried to. I had a few but I didn’t see them often. Usually just talked on the phone. MISS CHO: I understand, Ali. I just hope you will come around. Miss Cho hugs Ali. -- Vin Meanwhile has tracked down one of Ali’s friends. VIN: Talk to me Willow. WILLOW: I don’t know what you want me to say. VIN: I want you to tell me where Ali is! WILLOW: I told you I do not know. Vin takes a step closer to her. WILLOW: You are kind of scaring me. VIN: I don’t want to scare you I just want to get ahold of Ali. WILLOW: I’m sure you do want to get AHOLD of her, but I have not heard from her in a few days, like you. VIN: Where would she go? WILLOW: I do not know, but she was going to the hospital a lot. VIN: The hospital? For what? WILLOW: She was talking to some doctor there? VIN: About what? WILLOW: You’ll have to ask her. I have to go now. She walks off quickly. VIN: What the hell is Ali up to? He clenches his fist.. -- Greg hears his father go into his little brother Coles room. FATHER: I need you to dump the trash before you sit in your room being lazy like your deadbeat brother! Greg seems to of had enough and gets off the bed and heads into the hall. GREG: Quiet down dad! FATHER: You are really going to get in my face like this and raise your voice? GREG: Who are you calling deadbeat? You are here bitching while mom is at work. FATHER: How dare you? You will not disrespect me like this! GREG: You gonna hit me? What else is new. Always taking your aggression out on this family. Well I am sick of it! FATHER: What are you going to do about it? They have a staredown. FATHER: Nothing. He shoves Greg into the wall and walks downstairs. -- At the hospital: NATALIA: You cannot keep me off of the force, dad? JESSE: You need a lot of time to recover. Not only physically, but mentally. NATALIA: I will be able to do that soon enough. ANGIE: Don’t start an argument guys. NATALIA: I just want my dad to know that I can make my own decisions. JESSE: I am not trying to make the decision for you. I am looking out for you. NATALIA: Whenever it is that I recover I plan on staying on the force no matter what! Jesse is obviously upset to hear this. FADE TO BLACK Credits roll *I do not own any non original character nor any pics
  10. Danielle closes her door. Sam has arrived. DANIELLE: Hello Lil bro. SAM: Hey big sis. DANIELLE: It is good that you finally came and visit me. A welcome visit compared to some of the others. SAM: My mom and Todd meant no harm. DANIELLE: Anyway… how have you been? SAM: I am doing good. School is out for the summer. Probably going to get a summer job. DANIELLE: Good for you. I just got a new job myself. A modeling job. SAM: You a model? Do they know it’s all make up… DANIELLE: Ha ha very funny. SAM: Nah I am happy for you sis. They hug. -- Todd is walking towards the Union Creek chronicle building. TODD: Why did I have to forget something? …I know that damn Gary is going to still be here and pop up and want to talk. Todd walks in the building and looks around… TODD: Phew. Coast is clear. He starts to make his way to his office, but Gary comes out of his cubicle and spots Todd. GARY: Todd you are back! TODD: (groans) You are getting predictable. GARY: We should talk in your office. TODD: Should we though? Should we really? GARY: Yes, my almost boss. They walk inside his office and Todd closes the door. TODD: I already know what you are going to say…we must find the document, blah blah blah. So you can own the paper, blah, blah, blah. GARY: Took the words right out of my mouth. Don’t you want to own this place? It was part of the contract. You seem to forget that you have to do this. TODD: Yes, I know this by now. GARY: So did you go over those papers I gave you. TODD: Yes. Yes I did. GARY: What did you think? TODD: Well um, I thought it was…interesting. GARY: And so what did you do with that info? TODD:…A lot. GARY: You didn’t even go over them did you? TODD: I have been working on a big story! We do news, remember? GARY: You need to buckle down. Do you realize that you are running out of time to own this place? Because you are. Time is ticking down. -- At Marah’s place: Lily, Holden, Reva and Josh are all there. MARAH: Thank you all for coming. LILY: Thank you for having this here. HOLDEN: A celebration to the opening of Chic Spirit, I like it. MARAH: We had to do something. REVA: You are starting to take after me. MARAH: Dad, tell her not to say that (laughs) JOSH: You are though. Doing big things. REVA: And enjoying big bashes. LILY: Well Holden and I brought some champagne. So we are going to do this right. MARAH: Thank you so much! HOLDEN: Let me pop it open! Holden pops the cork… -- At Bens place: Ben pushes Luke down onto the bed. LUKE: You’re wild. Luke tries to resist and stand up but Ben pushes him back onto the bed. BEN: Do not resist. I know the attraction is mutual. (Whispers in Luke’s ear) Why fight it? Ben takes off his shirt and gets on top of Luke. Ben then takes off Lukes shirt.. Luke gives in and the two start to make out. Ben turns Luke over face down onto the bed… Ben kisses on the side of Lukes neck. LUKE: You are so hot. BEN: So are you. And don’t you forget it. Ben reaches around and unbuttons Luke's pants. He unzips them and starts to pull them down. He gives Luke a smack on the ass. BEN: Now go ahead. Take off mine. Luke turns around and faces Ben. Luke seems nervous.. He unbuttons Bens jeans and starts to pull them down… https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x75BmwP7bhg Marah, Reva, Josh, Holden and Lily sip on some champagne. REVA: This was a good buy. HOLDEN: I know a lil something. JOSH: I want to make a toast. They all raise their glasses JOSH: To my hard working daughter and her magnificent partner, Lily! Chic Fashions is about to kick off! To its success! LILY: Yes sir! They all take a drink. MARAH: I am so excited for this. It is what I have been working towards my entire adult life. LILY: I am happy to be a part of this. We are going to kick butt! -- At Bens: Ben turns Luke back over. He starts to rub down Lukes back. He is about to take down Lukes underwear, but Luke turns around and stands up. BEN:…Problem? LUKE: I’m sorry. I’m sorry. BEN: What is wrong? LUKE: I am just not ready for this Ben.. BEN: It was going so well. Are you really going to be a tease? LUKE: I don’t mean to be a tease. I really don’t. I'm just... I am not use to something developing this fast. BEN: I must have come on too strong. LUKE: It is certainly something that doesn’t happen to me often. BEN: I like to get to the point. LUKE: And I appreciate it. I have just learned that something that develops fast ends badly. BEN: I respect how you feel. LUKE: Thank you for being understanding. They both start to get dressed. -- At the Union Creek Chronicle: TODD: Gary, I am tired of this mystery document nonsense. GARY: You haven’t even done anything for this investigation though! Hell the only thing you have done so far is finally learn my name...And that took weeks! TODD: That is progress….Gary, this whole thing is just vague and quite frankly getting sketchy. What kind of document am I looking for? GARY: YOU have been looking for nothing. I am looking for a document that the ex owner wants us to find. TODD: Well I am getting ready to just sue the ex owner at this point for one ridiculous contract! GARY: A contract that you signed…Listen I have been doing the brunt work on this. For you by the way. TODD: Well you are doing well. I guess you don’t need me after all. GARY: However! …I am going to need your help when more is known. TODD: Sure. Whatever. I’ll be happy to help (fake smiles) -- At Danielles place DANI: So did you do good at this new school? SAM: I probably could have done better but I didn’t do bad. DANI: That doesn’t sound all that well. SAM: I am a B student. DANI: Stop half a**ing your work. SAM: Enough about me. I want to talk about you…and Todd. DANI: no! no! SAM: But I— DANI: --No Todd talk. SAM: Can you at least hear me out, sis? DANI: I am sick of everyone wanting to talk to me about Todd Manning! -- A fully dressed Luke and Ben are now in Bens front room. LUKE: I am sorry for ending that so abruptly in there. BEN: You have apologized enough. LUKE: I just hope I didn’t make things awkward between us, because I do not want to do that. BEN: I promise it is all good. Do not worry about me. I am a big boy. LUKE: Yes…that you are.. LUKE: I…I guess I should go. BEN: Will you be in touch? LUKE: Yes. I promise. BEN: Good. Luke starts to leave BEN: Oh and…next time we are alone together….be prepared because you are not getting out of here this easily again. I am going to be hard on you (smirks) LUKE: Noted. Luke exits and goes to his car. He sits there for a bit. He wipes some sweat from his brow and turns on the air conditioning before driving off. -- Holden and Lily arrive home. LILY: That was so cool of Marah. HOLDEN: I think you have yourself a good partner. LILY: We really get along. HOLDEN: What every partnership needs most in my opinion. Holden grabs the mail before they head inside. LILY: I am excited for this opening! Lily hugs Holden. HOLDEN: Happy for you Lily. Holden and Lily kiss. LILY: I do need to get out of these shoes though. She walks off. Something in the mail intrigues Holden. Mail with his name on it from the Colorado Government.. HOLDEN: What could this be? Holden opens it. HOLDEN: What? A job offer? He is looks on at the letter. -- Reva and Josh are in their car. Josh is driving. Reva is laughing. REVA: I think those people are great! JOSH: Yeah the Snyder family are good people. REVA: Well yeah, them too. JOSH: What people are you talking about? REVA: The people that made that champagne! (laughs) JOSH: Yeah you did like that. I think you had one glass too many. REVA: (gets a serious face) Maybe so Joshua. Maybe so. (laughs) They arrive home and park the car. JOSH: Need help in? REVA: I can walk! They get out and go inside. Meanwhile a car arrives and parks a little bit away from the ranch house… The person inside is not shown. There is a pair of binoculars on the passenger’s seat… -- At Danielle's place: SAM: Do not get annoyed so easily. DANI: Sorry If I got snappy. SAM: Just hear me out please…I have had a rough relationship with Todd growing up. You and I do share the same man as our father. DANI: Yup. Victor will forever be our father. SAM: Yes he will, but the thing is I felt the same way as you but I was just younger and I lived with Todd and I had time to get use to the guy. Sure my mom helped a lot. DANI: Blair is a saint for staying with him. SAM: He is not a bad guy, Dani. Just takes some getting use to. Rough around the edges and all that. So I think that you should not completely shut him out. I will leave now though I do not want to piss you off. DANI: You are not pissing me off. I really do appreciate your visit. Come over more often. SAM: I will. The siblings hug before he leaves -- At the Union Creek Chronicle: Gary is alone at his cubicle He makes a phone call GARY: Hello…yeah. I am still having a hard time with Todd. Yes I know…I know that we need Todd in charge of this case, because if there is any trouble. Todd can take the fall.. Gary looks on… Meanwhile in Todds office: Todd takes a look at the paper and the article on Jack. TODD: Good work like this is what keeps me interested in this job. Pan up the wall to a hole in that wall… Inside that hole there is a camera… -- Cut to someone’s hand ending a call on a cell phone. That someone is watching a monitor and on that monitor is Todd on camera in his office… FADE TO BLACK Credits roll *I do not own any non original characters nor any pics.
  11. This was a fantastic episode. Great writing. I like that it started with Vic still thinking Brady is not dead. Goes well with the way it ended. This JJ and Liam thing has quickly became very interesting to me. I wanna see how this is going to play out. Hope and Aiden....wheres Bo? lol EJJ calling chad about Titan TV. Hmmm. Also interesting. Sonny and Will had one intense convo. Will is doing one great job of standing up for himself and basically getting Sonny to back down immensely. I like this turn in Wills character. Making him stronger. And so it looks like Brady is alive. Hmmm but where is he? What I am really impressed with in this episode are some of the small stuff: The descriptions with Liams look towards JJ. Chilling. The non alcoholic drinks at Bradys funeral The descriptions with Sonny and Wills argument Daniel "naturally" by Maggies side lmao Great episode man. A lot going on and all of these stories are getting verrrry intriguing.
  12. This episode felt longer which is a good thing imo. Liza and Colby are one of my favorite things about this AMC. I think these are the two you write the most interesting. Their talks always have an edge to em. You have Liza down well and I like that there is always some history lesson in her dialogue. So Erica didnt drink..or so she thinks. Glad to see Stuart confronting his brother. I wonder what Adams excuse will be. Cute scene with Brot and Natalia they seem really happy. Ryan and Greenlee gonna get the truth out of Marian and it looks like Annie be up to a lot of mayhem even spiking Ericas drink with alcohol. Yikes. Lots going on in this episode and it was a good one. Had a lil bit of everything.
  13. Ooooo where to begin. Elizabeth and Cory had a great chat. Elizabeth made her opinion heard strongly. Cory stubborn and in love. I always enjoy Vicky and Michele interactions and I am glad that Jake had some alone time with his daughter. I know Jake is speaking with concern and logic but I cant help but still not want to agree with him. I think Michele is deserved to feel the way she feels. Gotta let her feel. Thats the beauty of this story though. It is complicated. The characters are very layered so it is set up so different people will probably take different sides. But as you know #teammichele. Love that ending man. Nice touch. Carl coming home. The kids realizing. Heavy stuff happening.
  14. Intense. Intense. Intense. What a freakin intense episode Imma start at the cabin and Coke Cane. I hope he never changes lol. Which I guess I shouldn't wish for someone to be a drug addict but at least Cane is interesting for the first time ever. I cant believe Sheila wants to fight Dru lol. Maybe all the "b*tches" are getting to her after all. I do hope Dru rings her bell, but maybe Sheila has something up her sleeve. And then the party. I feel for Lily. What a welcome home party :/ And then everything else coming out in public. That's the classic kind of soap reveal there. Nate looking like the scumbag he is. And then how bout Sister Patterson. Lmao! I laughed out loud so hard at work picturing this in my mind. Her jumping on his back with the bible. That was perfect. Loved it. I can feel Malcolm's pain through his dialogue. All the hurt and anger has built up and needed a way to get out. Sad that this was that way. Neil right in the chest. Damn. I do hope he pulls through. Especially with Dru on the brink of kicking arse and taking names and getting out. That was a great ep. Awesome work man! You should be proud. You captured Malcolm's pain greatly. What an event. And I almost forgot to mention poor little moses. Jam packed. That's gonna haunt the kid.
  15. At the casino: Brittany is bartending. The bar is kind of bare tonight. She becomes much happier when Billy sits at the bar. BRITTANY: Hey you! BILLY: Thought I would stop by tonight. BRITTANY: The usual beer? BILLY: Yes the usual root beer. BRITTANY: I really am glad you showed u. It is kind of dead tonight. BILLY: A dead casino. Sounds depressing to me. BRITTANY: This city relies on its vacationers. Without travelers you get nights like this. Meanwhile, Derrick is nearby at the slot machines. He gets a call from Katsu. DERRICK: What is up Kat? What why? No I am not at the club right now….Katsu I think you can handle this one. Sorry. I am busy. He hangs up. Derrick grins as he goes back to playing the slots. -- Cut to Vin, Chavo and Greg. VIN: Tonight it is finally going down! GREG: Are we sure about this? VIN: You are not chickening out of this one. CHAVO: We need to get pumped first. VIN: Well let all the money we are going to have pump you up! Greg sits down in the corner. CHAVO: Got your gun ready? VIN: Of course. I am prepared for this. I am more than ready for this. CHAVO: I got us some masks. VIN: Get your mind right Greg. Are you ready? GREG: As ready as I am going to be. Ill be the getaway car. VIN: Fine. Works for me. Vin sets his gun in the band of his pants. VIN: Lets roll. Greg looks on… -- Jesse is at the coffee shop. He looks at his watch. The barista, Hunter, brings him his coffee. HUNTER: A late meeting Commander Hubbard? JESSE: Yes, but an important one. HUNTER: Good luck Kayla Johnson walks in. KAYLA: You are Angies husband right? JESSE: That is me. Hello Kayla Johnson. Great to meet you. KAYLA: Sorry I was late. Hospital stuff goes long sometimes. JESSE: Yeah, I know. It keeps Angie busy KAYLA: Yeah that’s right. Angie did tell me all about your plans for a fundraiser for the city. JESSE: The community is lucky to have you. I am thrilled that you want to help with it. -- Jennifer Horton is at her new place. She is still doing some unpacking. Daniel Jonas arrives with his suitcases. JENNIFER: Daniel! You didn’t tell me you were coming already. DANIEL: Surprised? JENNIFER: Definitely. He sets his suitcases down and the two embrace -- At JJs apartment: Eliza bends over and starts to take off her pants ever so slowly… JJ watches and bites his lip.. ELIZA: Got me in my bra and panties… JJ: This is more fun than I thought it was going to be. Meanwhile, Miranda is next door frustrated. The music is still loud. MIRANDA: This is ridiculous. Shouldn’t JJ be doing homework too. She closes her book. Miranda exits her apartment and goes next door and knocks on JJs apartment. Eliza opens the door in her bra and panties… Miranda is caught off guard. ELIZA: Uhhh..is there a problem? MIRANDA: This music is really loud. I am next door trying to work. ELIZA: Oh. I guess that is my fault. MIRANDA: Where is JJ? Shirtless JJ walks up to see who it is. He is surprised and slightly embarrassed. JJ: Miranda… https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LnwwnaIcRSU At the casino: Derrick goes to the bar. DERRICK: I’ll take a shot of crown. BRITTANY: Coming right up. BILLY: Any luck out there tonight? DERRICK: No winning for me. BILLY: That sucks bro. Brittany hands him his shot of whiskey and Derrick takes it. DERRICK: That helps. Now Ill have a beer. BRITTANY: I haven’t seen you here before? DERRICK: I come once in awhile. Usually I drink elsewhere though. BRITTANY: Oh. Gotta come here more often. DERRICK: I think I do too. BRITTANY: Now this guy (points to Billy) This guy is becoming a regular. DERRICK: To drink... root beer? BILLY: No No. I come here to see this young lady. DERRICK: Oh. You two an item? BRITTANY: We are old friends. BILLY: Something Like that. DERRICK: I see Derrick seems to have a glimmer of shadiness in his eye… -- Greg parks the car with he, Chavo and Vin near the gas station. GREG: Get in and out quickly guys. VIN: And you get ready to haul a*s out of here and dispose of this car. The three all put on masks. CHAVO: Lets get this done! Chavo and Vin exit the car and head into the gas station. Vin pulls out his gun and points it at the guy at the register. VIN: All of your money now! Every last bit. Back in the car, Greg is nervous. He is tapping his foot and tapping his hand on the steering wheel. His phone starts to ring and he looks at it. It is a call from Marcino. GREG: I so wish I could answer right now Marcino, but this is a bad time. He looks back towards the gas station. GREG: Come on guys. Hurry. -- At the coffee shop KAYLA: Little late for coffee for me, but a nice hot tea sounds great. HUNTER: I think you are going to love it. Hunter hands the drink to Kayla. KAYLA: Thank you. Hunter walks back to his counter. KAYLA: Never been to this place yet but I like it. JESSE: This is my gasoline that keeps me running. KAYLA: So what would you like me to do for this fundraiser? JESSE: Just volunteer to help out while its going on. Maybe you and Angie could get some folks from the hospital to donate. KAYLA: Will this be taking place soon? JESSE: Hopefully sometime this summer. I have to work things out with the chief first. KAYLA: I promise that whatever you need me for I will help with. JESSE: Thank you so much. This community needs more people like you for sure. -- Cut to Daniel and Jennifer JENNIFER: So do you like this place? I know you didn’t get a chance to pick it out with me. DAN: It is really great. You did well. JENNIFER: I try. DAN: Our first house together. JENNIFER: Yes. I like you putting it that way. They kiss.. DAN: I have wanted this all along. JENNIFER: A house together? DAN: Well to get away together. To be away from Salem. Just you and me. JENNIFER: Will take some getting used to, but at least JJ is still near me. I like that. DAN: Yeah… Daniels smile fades… -- At JJ’s apartment: JJ turns the music off. JJ: I am sorry the music got so loud, Miranda. MIRANDA: I feel like I am interrupting something. JJ: Well we were just— ELIZA: --Just having a sexy game of strip poker. JJ: I guess it got out of hand. MIRANDA: I will leave you both to that. I am sorry. She starts to leave. JJ: Wait! Miranda turns back around. JJ: Don’t be sorry. MIRANDA: Okay… Things get awkward as they both go silent. Eliza looks on at them both and rolls her eyes. JJ: I promise the music will stay off tonight and not get so loud ever again. MIRANDA: Cool. See you later.. She walks off. JJ closes the door. -- AT the Casino: DERRICK: I better head out. Duty calls. BRITTANY: Hope you come back and gamble and more importantly, drink soon. DERRICK: I am sure I will. “Dragonfly” by Shamans Harvest starts to play. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rWmxIGeiGaQ [:00] Derrick walks away from the bar, but he turns back around and looks back at Billy and Brittany at the bar. He takes out his phone and takes a picture of them both… DERRICK: Hopefully one day…because I would love to bang both of them… He walks off. [:17] At Jennifer’s house: JENNIFER: I need some water and a break from unpacking. She exits into the kitchen. Daniel looks on unhappy. Daniel: JJ better not bother us. It would be in his best interest to stay away. [:33] At JJ’s apartment. JJ seems disappointed. ELIZA: Please do not let the killjoy from next door ruin the night. JJ: I think it is best we call it a night. JJ puts on his shirt. ELIZA: But that was so much fun! I know you were having a blast. Saw it with my own two eyes Jack Jr! JJ: It was fun, but it is time to call it a night and I said when we met to please just call me JJ. ELIZA: Okay…your mood changed quickly, but if you insist. Eliza starts to put on her clothes. [1:05] At the coffee shop: Jesse and Kayla shake hands and Kayla exits. Hunter comes to the table to pick up Kaylas cup. HUNTER: Hey Commander Hubbard, I just wanted to tell you real quick that I know cops take a lot of flak. Especially these days, but I respect you all and what you do. JESSE: Thank you Hunter. That means a lot. Jesse shakes his hand. Jesse’s radio then goes off to a robbery that has just been alerted. JESSE: Looks like I am heading out! HUNTER: Good luck sir. Be safe. Jesse exits. [1:30] Masked Vin and Chavo come running out of the gas station and across the street to the car. VIN: Hit it Greg lets get out of here! Greg peels out and takes off quickly. CHAVO: We have to get somewhere to dispose of this old ass vehicle. Where did you get this anyway, holmes? VIN: Stole it of course…man that was such a rush! I loved it. CHAVO: Faster Greg! Greg makes a sharp turn as he speeds up. Greg doesn’t say word he just looks on towards the road very nervously. VIN: Hurry to the river! Greg goes down a hill to the river and stops. VIN: We’ll leave it here. Let’s get going. There can be sirens heard in the distance! CHAVO: They can’t know were down here. VIN: I don’t know but let’s take off. The three take off on foot quickly. Vin carrying the bag of cash. The camera zooms out on the car… [2:17] Credits roll *I do not own any non original characters nor any pics.
  16. Luke is at the union Creek chronicle. He is walking out of the building when he gets a call on his cell. He looks at his phone and its an incoming call from Ben. LUKE: Hello BEN: Luke…I am glad you answered. I was afraid you were busy at work or something. LUKE: I was just about to take a late lunch break actually. BEN: Perfect. You should come and eat here. LUKE: Um…and where is that? BEN: At my new place in town. LUKE: You moved in already? BEN: Yup and I would love to show it off. LUKE: Okay. Sounds good to me. As long as there is something to eat. I am starved. BEN: Oh don’t worry. I have plenty for you to eat.. -- At the hospital: Eartha and Morris are at the nurses station. NURSE: You two need some coffee before you head home? EARTHA: You know my man always needs his coffee. MORRIS: I do have a tad bit of an addiction. Eartha kisses him on the cheek. NURSE: You two are just too cute. Always making us long for a relationship like yours. MORRIS: I guess that is just what we do. EARTHA: (Chuckles) Yeah. Guess so. NURSE: I better get back. She exits. Morris sighs. MORRIS: And the emmy goes to…Eartha Davis. Morris walks out of the room with his coffee. Eartha sighs. -- At Union Creek High: Sam and Zack high 5 in the halls. ZACK: Last day of school! SAM: Summer time. ZACK: My favorite. SAM: I am glad I came to this school so late in the year. Made it feel like the school year went by quickly. ZACK: How did your math final go. SAM: That is neither here nor there. ZACK: Well did you pass at least? SAM: C minus is passing right. ZACK: That’s true. SAM: I’m just happy its summer. I am looking forward to summer break in a new town. -- Tea is at her daughter Danielle’s place. DANI: Mom I didn’t know you were going to be in town! TEA: I like to be a surprise once in awhile. DANI: This is a pleasant surprise. Mother and daughter hug. TEA: How is life here in Colorado? DANI: Things are looking up! TEA: Oh yeah? A new boy? DANI: No Mom. No relationship. TEA: I am happy to hear that life can look up without a boy. DANI: Definitely. I am embarking on a new job. Tea is intrigued -- Todd and Blair are at the café. TODD: I did it Blair. I found my hit story. BLAIR: The guy in town with amnesia? TODD: Yes. This is huge. This town is not use to something so crazy like this. BLAIR: I don’t know this town has a hint of crazy I think, Todd. TODD: Well that is because we moved here. BLAIR: Touche. BLAIR: You are hyper today are you sure you need more coffee? TODD: I am just so pleased with this. The Jack Doe story will make everyone see that I will be a great owner of the Union Creek Chronicle. This story has to go national. BLAIR: Didn’t you say he didn’t want to take a picture though. That is going to hinder this story. TODD: It will Still— BLAIR: --Oh no Todd. TODD: (Agitated) I was talking. What Blair? Blair points. Reva and Josh are there. Reva and Josh come face to face with Todd and Blair. REVA: Isn’t this interesting. We see each other at the café again. BLAIR: Todd, this is the b*tch that assaulted me. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x75BmwP7bhg Luke is at Bens place. LUKE: Looks great from the outside. BEN: I cant wait to show you around the inside…but first. We eat! LUKE: I hope you didn’t make a big meal or anything. BEN: Nothing special. Just a little chicken salad. LUKE: I feel bad. I should have brought a house warming gift. BEN: I gave you short notice and besides you are gift enough. LUKE: You like to flatter me don’t you. BEN: It is because you seem like you are not one who likes to be in the spotlight. LUKE: Not a lot these days. Is it that obvious? BEN: I just consider myself good at reading people. LUKE: You impress me more and more. BEN: But why so shy? LUKE: It has just been awhile since I have gotten attention is all.. -- Eartha and Morris get home. Silence ensues as they walk around the house setting their bags down. Neither is saying a word to the other. Morris sits and starts to take off his shoes. Eartha sits down on a chair on the opposite side of the room. Morris glares at her. He takes a deep breath. MORRIS: Would you like something to drink? I am going to make myself a drink. EARTHA: No. MORRIS: Are you sure? EARTHA: I just want to be alone, okay. Morris gets frustrated and pounds his hand down on the table! MORRIS: Why the hell do we even still do this!? Morris and Eartha glare at each other… -- At Danielles place: TEA: Would it be okay if I brought up Todd? DANI: That would be ill advised. TEA: Okay. I respect your wishes. DANI: Thank you. Can we go back and talk about my job prospect? TEA: Yes. Tell me all about it. DANI: Well so far it was just a contest. A modeling contest. TEA: Modeling? I am surprised you want to do that? DANI: Trust me I didn’t at first, but when I actually started posing for pictures…it became fun. TEA: I am glad you enjoyed the contest but what about the actual job? DANI: I should find out today. I felt confident doing it though. I think I can really enjoy this. TEA: It is so terrific to hear to talk like this. My girl has her groove back. -- At the café: JOSH: I wish you would stop trying to push my wifes buttons. BLAIR: Did you see what she did to me awhile back? She threw coffee on me! JOSH: We both know that was an accident. TODD: I don’t want a cat fight happening in here. That is bad for my public image. BLAIR: Do you even care what she did, Todd? TODD: If my wife says she assaulted her , she probably assaulted her then. REVA: You were not even there! How would know? TODD: I take her word for it. BLAIR: It doesn’t matter what these two think. I know what happened and I am still trying to press charges. REVA: You have to be kidding me with that. BLAIR: Justice deserves to prevail. JOSH: This is ridiculous! Just when you think this town is peaceful. TODD: Can we be honest here for a second. Had that coffee that was thrown on my wife been hot and not iced it would have caused a lot of damage. REVA: First off it was not thrown. TODD: Okay. Tossed. REVA: It was an accident. We physically ran into each other! JOSH: Either way she doesn’t have a case! This is just plain stupid! TODD: Hey! Hey! Do not raise your voice at my wife. Todd gets in Josh’s face. -- Back to the Davis Household. EARTHA: That is a really good question. Why do we still do this? Oh that is right. The kids. MORRIS: I don’t know Eartha. I really wondered why we ever did this? Why did we even marry. EARTHA: Don’t even go there. Do not start and act like a victim! MORRIS: Dammit Eartha! I am serious. I often wonder if you ever even loved me. EARTHA: So absurd. MORRIS: I am sure that you only married me to help with your own career. EARTHA: Do you even hear yourself? We have been together for over twenty years. To think there was no love is asinine. MORRIS: I know I am right. EARTHA: The truth is and this truth might hurt Morris. I did love you. Very much so, but you have made it so hard to love over the years because I know now what I did not know then. You are one very disturbed man! Eartha angrily walks into another room. Morris is frustrated again and picks up a vase of flowers and throws them at the wall! -- The Bell rings at school! Students clear into the hall. Some are shouting that school is out for the summer! Sam gets to his locker. Trinity is also at her locker which is next to his. SAM: You should look more happy that it is summer time! TRINITY: Trust me I am thrilled. SAM: I thought I was the one with the poker face. TRINITY: I am just always focused on something. SAM: What are you focused on now? TRINITY: Finding a summer job. SAM: Ah the dreaded summer job. TRINITY: Yeah. Kinda sucks, but the money wont! SAM: I actually think I can help you with finding a summer job. TRINITY: Are you serious? (smiles) SAM: I wouldn’t lie to you. -- Dani meanwhile gets a phone call. DANI: Hello…Hi Mrs Snyder….are you serious? How exciting! Yes I cannot wait to start there soon. Dani hangs up. TEA: That sounded like good news. DANI: it was. I got the job! TEA: Congratulations baby! Teah hugs her daughter. DANI: I didn’t think I would be this happy about a modeling job, but I am. -- At the café JOSH: Are you really getting in my face? TODD: I am just stating that you two should not keep harassing my wife. Todd backs away. BLAIR: Thank you, honey. JOSH: This has got to be a joke. Are we getting punk’d Reva? REVA: I don’t know what this is Joshua, but it is ridiculous. BLAIR: Reva, you will be sorry. If you keep messing with me. REVA: Blair, honey, was that a threat? Joshua I should probably press charges. Reva smirks as she walks off. JOSH: This needs to stop. Josh walks off with her. TODD: Those two are a piece of work. BLAIR: She is a piece of something alright. -- Meanwhile, Luke is giving Ben a tour of his house. LUKE: You struck gold with this place. Do you make a lot of money in skiing competition? BEN: I make enough. LUKE: I can see that. BEN: Now to the most important place of the house. Ben opens a door and guides Luke into the bedroom. LUKE: I like it. It’s spacious. BEN: What do you think about the bed? It is brand new too. LUKE: Looks comfy. Luke presses his hand into the bed. LUKE: Nice Luke turns back around and is met by a kiss from Ben! Luke is caught off guard. LUKE: Wasn’t expecting that. BEN: Loosen up and expect the unexpected Ben pushes Luke down onto the bed. LUKE: You’re wild. Luke tries to resist and stand up but Ben pushes him back onto the bed. BEN: Do not resist. I know the attraction is mutual. (Whispers in Luke’s ear) Why fight it? Ben takes off his shirt and gets on top of Luke. Ben then takes off Lukes shirt.. Luke gives in and the two start to make out. Ben then turns Luke over face down onto the bed… FADE TO BLACK Credits roll *I do not own any non original characters nor any pictures.
  17. three patrons. lmao! Shady. I really like the vic and Chloe scenes. Very in character and I do love Vics rants that he goes on. Glad John played peace keeper. I also like the history of Sami feeling uncomfortable with Marlena. JJ needs to learn how to get to the point better lolol. Of course Jennifer thinks the worst of him and while she does have reason I wish she would shut up and listen, but looks like that is too late. I wonder what Liam will do in reaction to this and I do want to see what. Could be fun with both JJ and Jenn in trouble. Good confrontation with Will and Sonny. I can feel Will getting all riled up over this. Good character driven story. It was actually a very character driven episode altogether. You know the characters very well and that is great.
  18. Yeah so Malcolm sure went mad alright but Ill get back to that. First off Devon sure must throw a damn good punch cuz Nate be fukked up! I like that Lily is most concerned about the twins as she should be. Then Malcolm getting drunk to James Brown as his anger builds and builds as well as his drunkeness. Nice touch. Avery meanwhile is on a crash course. The cabin has to be on the edge of something huge happening. I like that Dru stays true to her attitude throughout all of this and I like that Mary softened up even though I like her for being the bad hussy that she is. Then there is sister patterson the vampire slayer and her tools of a bible and holy water. I hope she has a stake in there somewhere. Not to mention her, Lauren and the thrid eye lmao oh boy. I like the messiness of this whole build and how Hilary is guilty in pushing this event forward just like dumb ass Nate. Me thinks at least 1 person is gonna die at each the colonnade room and the cabin. Just hopefully nobody I like! hahaha Good stuff. This next episode should be monumental!
  19. Man, you got me at the end. Tugging at my heart strings and [!@#$%^&*] lol. I felt it. Those last couple of lines. The emotions are coming. As always nice history coming through in the dialogue. This is going to shatter a lot of the canvas. This whole story has been set up beautifully. It is going to have one big emotional imprint on the readers i can already tell. never was a avid AW viewer but I felt it in this episode and leading up to those final lines. Beautiful.
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