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This was another good episode! It was very soapy. You slowed down. You examined stories and characters. It was good to see that from you. It shows us that you have plenty of range left to give us after 173 episodes. Interrogation Room: I loved how you built the Rox and Les conversation before Rafe entered the room. It was very smart dialogue, and showed us who these two characters have become. I like how you showcased their history that you've built. Good job! Hospital Waiting Room: I soooo feel bad for Noah. I can't imagine ever losing your mom at that young of a age. I am glad that Noah has strapped on some big boy pants and has started a search for his mother. But, I hope Nick helps him. We'll see what happens. Hospital Room: I feel so bad for Avery. This blindness is going to be a new step for her. It is going to be good to see what you have in store for her. I wonder how she is going to reveal everything to Nick, if anything. This is totally keeping me on the edge of my seat!!! Prison: I LOVED THESE CONVOS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This was probably the best part of the episode. You had classic Victor, part of the original Michael emerge. You have a story coming up with Phyllis and Dru that might be your biggest one yet. SOOOOO many questions about this story. CANNOT WAIT TO SEE WHERE IT GOES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Interrogation #2: Wonder where this is going. Drucilla has a ton of explaining to do as this interrogation with Paul moves forward into the next episode. I wonder how it will be written! SOOOO MANY QUESTION! SO MANY INTERESTING THINGS GOING ON!!!! Good for you, for know how to hook us all in these lavish stories. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Wow! What a great show! It was very soap opera. I was waiting for that from you. You also have a lot of story to build on for years to come. 2 Mommy's: We have to mothers coming into the Genoa City fold. We've got one who knows the daddy and a paternity story line. This is going to be some damn good drama. I commend you for keeping up with your stories in terms of having high drama. Mary Carter?: I LOVED the scenes with Lauren barging in. How you wrote Lauren was kind of like old Lauren. I LOVED OLD LAUREN! The Lauren that got business done and kicked ass! Good job! Sharon Dead?: I loved your delivery on this. Nick punching Paul in the face was off guard, but it was a damn good reaction. I also enjoyed Noah's reaction. A lot for him to deal with. Good way to keep him in the show. Sadness For Mommy's: I fell soooooo bad for Lily. I cannot imagine getting that news, when you have just returned home not that long ago. I also feel bad for Olivia. These poor ladies. But, they are survivors and strong, keep that up. ML you are shining!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! KEEP UP THE AMAZING WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I have to agree with ML, what an ending! We've been waiting for that story line to take full throttle, and it did! The final scene in the episode was very well written, and very well put together. I liked the conversation with the two. It was very real. I like how slow you are moving with your romances. It lets us really enjoy them. Kind of reminds me of when soaps did great romance back in the day. You've taken the classic Jarlena and you've modernized them. I love it. Good job! I love Terrence and Natalia. Good idea to piece those two together. I hope that Chavo stops Vin from killing Greg. I am really scared for Greg. I wonder what is going to happen. Will someone get shot and die? Will anyone survive? Will no one get shot? I have sooooo many questions leading up into this story. I can wait to see what happens! I like where you are taking the Paul and Emily story. I like that you are throwing normal marital problems in to the mix. Plus, these are problems they had are the actual ATWT. before Barbara dissolved her partnership with Paul in the series finale. Good Job! You know I love this shelter story line. But my god! Ali! Stop being soooo stupid. I can't wait until all these women take some revenge. I know it is only a matter of time. This story is very well written. Nice job capturing all the main girls together. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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WOW WHAT AN EPISODE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Van: LOL Now we go over the countless times she has had sex LOL. I wonder what is going to happen now that Van has survived. There is still a whole other layer of story telling to get through. I am interested to see if all the boys who have had sex with her will connect in some way. Paul/Ronan: They had a lot of work to do. I think it was up to 3 arrest. LOL. Everyone gets a jail cell! Dru/Phyllis: FINALLY SOMETHING WE HAVE ALL BEEN WAITING FOR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It was a show down for the soap opera history books. I liked the you let us know that this is just the start of it. We still have a lot more to get through. I wonder what Drucilla and Phyllis will get themselves into next LOL. Nate: I'm worried for his fate. WHAT WILL IT BE???? I thought there was one thing that this episode was missing. And that was history. Phyllis defeated Sheila, as well. AND, Scotty dated Sheila. That is how she came back one time. Scotty didn't know what she looked like, so Sheila tricked him, so she could have a free ride back into town. ANYWAYS, still a very good episode. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

You continue to deliver solid episodes week after week. Good for you! Jess/Chief: I am glad that Jess is working some stuff out for the town. I imagine some stuff will go down there. Parties are the PERFECT time to have some high drama going on. #OfficiallyInterested. Emily/Lucas: I love how you write Emily. You write her very true to the character. I wonder where this whole thing is going with Emily's job. I wonder if Lucas and Emily will slip into an affair, because her marriage is on the rocks. Greg/Chavo/Marcino/Ali/Vin: Everything is going well for your younger set. You have some damn good stories for them. I AM IN LOVE WITH ALI'S STORYLINE!!!!!!!!!! She is one of my favorite characters. I wonder if Vin will be out for blood. I wonder what will go on with Greg and Marcino. I wonder if Chavo will protect Ali and Greg. GOSH I HAVE SOOOO MANY QUESTIONS!!!!!!!!!!!!! That makes for good soap, though. Kayla/Greta/Carly/Hope/Steve: Greta is back. Interesting choice to throw her into the mix. I wonder if they can trust her though. People turn on others in the heat of the moment. I love that you have brought everyone who cares about Bo in a big way. I feel like your whole show is based on Bo's story. And DAMN it is good!!!!!!!!! Daniel/Stefano: This continues to surprise and shock me. There are truly no words to describe how I feel about this story. It is interesting. I have actually wondered if Stefano brainwashed Dan like he did to sooooo many others in the past. Interesting. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Another pretty solid and overall great episode! Rox/Spence/Les/Hillary: How you showcase the blacks is like no other. This sister story continues to be my favorite one. You keep revealing layer after layer and nice job putting the reminder that Spence was Les' pimp. Scotty/Lauren: Nice job having them getting a chance to showcase there love for the city they live in. They rushed to the hospital. I think Scotty's secret is going to come out soon!!! Daisy/Rafe: I wonder if these two will start a little friendship???? Daniel/Phyllis: I love how you stay true to the way that Phyllis acts. You write her very well. I see she wants to protect Daniel, but he really is not going to listen to it. Interesting. Dru: The rollar costar ride continues for Dru. And Mary bein the next Verdon Lou survivor just fuels the fire LOL KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Nice episode. I did enjoy it! Cass/Frankie: I love how you continue to write them. It remains very true to their TV versions that were establsihed. I liked the shoutout to Kathleen. I remember watching that on YouTube when she was revealed on the talkshow. Rachel/Amanda/Iris: These were probably my FAVE scenes of the whole episode. I LOVED the way you had Rachel tell Amanda. It was very sincere. I also love how well written Iris and Rachel were. You had history drama and emotion in every line. You captured soooo much. GOOD JOB! Matt/Carl: You had some good set up on these scenes. I enjoyed this heart to heart. Lorna/Devin Lucas: FINALLY!!!! Devin has arrived! Cannot wait to see what u have in store for him!!! And I love that you have sent Lorna right along with him. Lorna is one of the best AW characters EVER in my opinion. This is getting good! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Another good episode!!! Sami/Nick: I like that it was two bad asses in one scene together. But, Nick, has to know that Sami can be way badder. She was switching paternity test results before he was even alive LOL. I know Sami will find a way to trap Nick. Question is..., how??? That will be interesting to see. Jordan/Rafe/Sheryl/Jerome: I wonder how Jerome being in Salem will affect Jordan's relationship with Rafe in the long run. I wonder what Sheryl has planned to do with these two. That will be interesting, as well. I wonder how Rafe will feel when the truth of how Jordan and Jerome know one another comes out. The Board Meeting: This was good. Probably my favorite part of the episode. I am so excited to see what plays out with Kayla. I love that you brought the last Grant family member back. I wonder if you will bring up Valerie and Abe's relationship together. I can't wait to see what you do Valerie! Maybe her and Abe will get back together??? It has been 33 years since she was last shown in Salem. Can't wait to see what you do with her. Good job choosing for that character and that family to come back into the fold. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

What another great episode! Barbara/Paul: We all know that Emily and Barbara haven't been one another's biggest fans through the years. I wonder if Barbara is trying to start something. Her lines sounded that way to me. Like she doesn't want Paul with Emily. Terrence/Steve/Donnelly: I had a feeling those logs were going to be deleted. Good way to keep the story going and still being interesting. I wonder if they will ever get their hands on those logs that were written by Bo. And, is Steve right? Could Agent D. be a slimy one? And, does Steve really want to go? JJ/Eliza: I had a feeling that JJ would get kind of jealous at the sight of Miranda and Hunter. This is a very good teen set love quad. Good job! You have a great setup with it. I commend you for that. So many of them are done horribly wrong (coughs) THE BOLD AND THE BEAUTIFUL LOL! Derrick/Katsu: I wonder what they are up to. Daniel/Stefano/Bart: I was totally and completely STUNNED! I didn't expect you to go down that route with Daniel. I couldn't believe it. AMAZING job explaining that all, so we would know what is up. I wonder what Stefano and Bart are going to do about Bo. And, where are you taking Daniel??? HIGHLY Interested! KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Agree with ML. Another great one. Christy: Love her! She continues to be one of your best written characters. I like that Kirkland is taking on his own investigation stuff. I just want him to be very careful. Christy can be a very dangerous woman. If she can hurt Cass and Frankie, she can hurt anyone. I think Grant doesn't fully understand what he has done. I just hope he does soon. Christy has a way of not following directions and going her own way. It will be interesting to see what she does. John/Sharlene: I love these two. I am sooooo happy that you are going to let things work out for them "HOPEFULLY!" I love that you brought Maggie back into the fold. Nice choice in casting. Also, it is nice to see her more mature these days. I watched some old episodes. I know of her shenanigans. Lindsay/Gregory: I liked how you haven't shoved Lindsay's story line to the back burner. You let the emotions take full throttle. I am interested to see where her life where go now. I hope she lets Gregory help her. I think he really can. Poor Lindsay, though. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Another great episode. Cory/Elizabeth: I liked that Elizabeth was trying to warn Cory of Bridget's actions. It will be interesting to see if he listens to her. Michele/Jake: I enjoyed these scenes. They were probably my favorite in the episode. Michele found out a little bit of who her father was in the past. I liked that Michele got a lot of feelings out. Good job with the emotion and drama. That scene was very character driven. Wonderful! Carl: My heart ached. That was a really sad ending. I felt sorry for every one involved. You described everything very well. You didn't miss a beat. Good job! I wonder how the dinner party is going to go down. That will be interesting. I also wondered if Carl is going to try and push Russ and Rachel back together. But then again, Rachel kept so many things from Russ in their marriage. Maybe that won't happen. But, it could. Highly interested in what you have planned next. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Another great episode! I enjoyed the whole backstory. Jesse/Angie/Natalia: I like that you keep them in this whole romantic path. I like that Natalia is doing alright. I'm glad that things didn't take a turn for the worse. But, will she come back to the force in full??? Vin/Ali: I'm worried that he will hurt Ali. You are scaring me. I hope that Charlotte can save her if anything goes wrong. Jeremy: Nice shout out to the past and present soap opera bad asses. I wonder where Jeremy and Bart will go. Good set up to a future story. This will be good, I bet. Bo: I liked that you gave the story some depth that we haven't seen before. Good job. Kaya/Steve/Hope/Roman/Terrence: They don't realize that they can be really close to getting the whole figured out, if they would just see how Kayla sees it. I like that Hope still believes in Bo. Nice job! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Your episodes get better and better! Brittany/Billy/Ashley: I like how you do Britt and Billy. It is very Y&R dialogue. I like that we heard from Ashley. I wonder what direction you are going to take Billy now. Is Ash coming to town??? Interesting. Ali: I don't think it is a good idea for her to see Vin. I like the dynamic you have established with Charlotte and her. Very well done. I guess we will just have to wait and see if things go bad for her. I HOPE NOT!!!!!!!!!!!! Greg/His Mom: I like how you write Greg. The lines were very well written. I like how you explained what really goes on in his family. Very well done on your part to deliver that emotion. Emily/Paul: This was probably my favorite part of the whole episode. I enjoyed the fight. I could see that playing out on ATWT if the show was on today. I also liked her comment about the blowing LOL. Very well put together scenes. Bo: The struggles for him continue. I wonder if he will get free. And now, we have Bart and Stefano doing this whole thing with working together. This is story line is a gold mine! Keep it up. I LOVE THOSE MONTAGES! They really bring the show together. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

What a great episode! Nick/Nicole/Sami: I liked that scene between Nicole and Nick. I enjoy their story line. It is what DAYS should have done all along! I wonder what Nicole is going to use against Victor. I wonder what Nick is going to say to Sami. This is going to be good. Can't wait to see this scene. Will/Alex: I see this Alex guy being a good fit for a love triangle. I like how detailed the scene was, because we could see that Will might move onto some one else. Some one who can compete with Sonny LOL. Maxine: I hope that Maxine can get something out of Laura. Brady/Anita: I continue to fall in love with Anita. She's been around for 2-3 episodes and she is established well. I wonder if Brady can peel back and reveal something. The Hospital Meeting: I think this is one of your biggest cliffhangers. I wonder where you are taking Kayla. I am SUUUUPER interested. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ML, this is the writing I've been waiting for from you! This episode was a Y&R episode. Good job! Drucila: Dru is back in full form! I loved the scenes she shared with everyone. The emotions were well played and well thought out. Great job! Rafe/Scotty: I am glad you added more layers to the story line. This story isn't bland or to over the top it is just right. I loved that they got their emotions out. Rafe let Scotty know what he has been feeling. That was very well written. I think Scotty has this whole like wall up thing going on. Hopefully those walls will come down. Avery: I like where you are taking her character. I wonder what is going to happen. Leslie/Spencer/Hillary/Rox: GOD I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!! Anything with these characters have been my favorite. You really know how to let them shine. Neil: Finally the man that has it all going on in the story department. I am worried. I agree with Al. I don't think you will kill him off, but their might be some complications. ML, you are going to rock this, if you keep this format up! KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

All My Children - Episode #21 Created By: Agnes Nixon Written By: Casey Hutchison & Piper Miller (Krystal's Diner) Cara and Oliver are eating breakfast. Cara: Finish your breakfast. Your daddy will be here soon. Oliver: I can't wait, mommy. Cara: I know baby. David enters. He looks at Cara and Oliver. He smiles. David: I'm here, Oliver. --- (Jesse's Office) Jesse puts a file in a cabinet. Greenlee and Ryan enter. Jesse: (Closing Cabinet) Hello, you two. Greenlee: Hi, Jesse. Ryan: So, do you have anything yet? Jesse: I do. Greenlee: Really? Jesse: We have a big lead. Ryan: Well, tell us. What is it? What's the lead? --- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qby37xuo9mU --- (Opal's Hospital Room) Opal sits up, as Joe enters. Opal: Morning, Joe. Joe: Morning, Opal. Opal: Did you get Tad and Dixie to go home and get some rest? Joe: I managed to. Opal: Wonderful. The good Lord knows that they some resting. So, what the news for today? Joe: It is actually good news. Opal: Really? Joe: Yes. You are going to love this. I know you will. --- (Chandler Mansion) Brooke comes down the stairs. She is talking on the phone. Brooke: Now, if we can get those warehouse employees to take the two percent pay cut, then we will be in business. (Pouring a cup of tea) I know it will be hard. Harold, if anyone can make this deal happen, then it is you. (Knocking On Door) Listen, there is someone at the door, so I've gotta go. Call me when you reach the deal. Bye. Brooke hangs up the phone. She goes to answer the door. Skye: Hello. Brooke: What the hell are you doing here? --- (Krystal's Diner) Cara and Oliver stand, as David walks to them. David: Hello. Oliver: Hi daddy. David: (Laughs) Hi. Cara hands David a backpack. Cara: In there is all of his stuff. He has a pillow and a blanket. He has pajamas, and then a change of clothes for the next day. He also packed some puzzles for you guys to do. He does love to do puzzles before he goes to bed. David: Okay. Anything else? Cara: Yeah. David: What? Cara: Don't bring this Orpheus business around him. David: I'm not doing that anymore. Cara: Everyone knows that you still are. Cara bends down to give Oliver a kiss and a hug. Cara: Be really good for daddy, okay? Oliver: I will. Cara: (Standing) I love you, honey. Oliver: I love you too. Cara: Bye, guys. David: Bye. David and Oliver walk out. Cara: (Sighs) I hope I am doing the right thing. --- (Chandler Mansion) Brooke steps outside with Skye. Brooke: I would invite you in, but you might steal some of the silver. Skye: Of course you would say stuff like that. Brooke: Or maybe you will make Adam adopt you again. Skye: Look, I'm not here for that. Brooke: Then, what are you here for? Skye: I came to see Stuart. Brooke: Him and Marian are off having breakfast. Skye: Then I guess you will have to do. Brooke: What do you mean? Skye: I apologize. Brooke: W-w-what? Skye: You seem caught off guard. Brooke: Well, apologizing is a Skye Chandler Quartermaine first. Skye: Very funny. Listen, I wreaked havoc back when I was first in Pine Valley. Brooke: You did. Skye: My drinking got the best of me in those days. Brooke: You bet it did. Skye: But, that was the old me. This is the new me. Brooke checks her watch. Brooke: Listen, I have to go. I have business to do. (Opening Door) By the way Skye, I'll believe you are a new person when hell freezes over. Brooke walks back in the house. Skye: (Sighs) Don't say I didn't try. --- (Jesse's Office) Jesse, Greenlee, and Ryan sit down. Jesse: I've decided to combine cases. Greenlee: Combine? Ryan: What does that mean? Jesse: Two cases have matched up, lately. I think Annie might be doing both of them. Greenlee: She can do anything she wants, apparently. Jesse: Listen, the other case involves Kendall. She has been receiving some odd calls. Ryan: Really? Jesse: Yes, now, we are going to find Annie. I promise you that. Emma will be sage. But, you two need to promise me, not to get in the way. Greenlee: When it comes to that bitch, I don't know if I can do that. Now, I have a doctor's appointment to go to with Amanda and Natalia. We all want to have like a pregnant girls day. Plus, I think I need it. (Standing) Find Emma, Jesse. Find her. Ryan: He will. Jesse: I will. Greenlee: (Kissing Ryan) Bye. Ryan: Bye. Greenlee walks out, as Jesse and Ryan sigh. --- (Opal's Hospital Room) Joe pulls up a chair to Opal. Opal: So, what is the news? Joe: Angie and I have been working day and night to find something that will help. We found this new drug on the market called Kinsered. It is supposed to shrink the tumor, to make it easier to move. So, we want to know if you want to do a trial run? Opal: Joe! I will do anything! I want to save my life. Joe: Then, it is settled then. We will get you started on this drug. Opal: Thank you Joe! Thank you for saving my life! Opal gives Joe a big hug. But, he is worried if this could save Opal's life. ***FADE OUT*** ***END OF EPISODE 21***

I like your recast and new characters lately. Good choices! Nick/Nicole: Good scenes. Very good revealing motives. I like how Nicole once again gets the upper hand and then doesn't have it anymore. I like that you reveal more layers to Nick. It makes him more likable in story choices. Nice reference to the physic friends network, in terms of Dionne. Will/Tyler/Alex: I wonder what you have in store for business with Tyler and Will. And this Alex guy. I wonder if this will bring in a love triangle for Sonny/Will/Alex. If it does, I know it will be faaaar more interesting than Paul Narita. Marlena/Noelle: It is about time you bring a character from the past LOL. I wonder what you have in store for Noelle, considering she was last seen in 1988. It will be interesting to see if Marlena can dig up why she is really back. Can't wait to see what you have in store fore Noelle! Good job! KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Great episode! Good way to work in the Will Horton recast. Sami/EJ: What good scenes these were. I see that Sami is really trying to get things out in the open with EJ, with the therapy suggestion. He needs to understand her feelings of the night he raped her. I hope when Sami finds out about the affair, that she will dump that EJ faster then the ending of Kim and Chris' marriage. I love how you write Sami's emotions. Good job! Laura/Jennifer: I can't wait to see what you have in store for Laura. I wonder if she will find out about the affair. She seems like she is getting very close. But, we will have to see what she thinks. Good job with staying true to how Jenn and Laura act around one another. Will/Sonny: I wonder what you have in store for this Will recast. It will be interesting to see how that works out. Judging on the look he reminds me of Chandler Massey. I see that Sonny is trying to just hurry up and be done with this issue. He doesn't realize what he really did. He has to let Will handle his professional life. Wonder where their life is headed. Will business be mixed with pleasure? Interesting. Can't wait to see what happens next! KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

WOW! You are still rolling out big money episodes. Avery: I wonder if you are going to kill of Avery. I can't wait to see what you are going to do. GC Hospital PT.1: Some pretty damn dramatic scenes. I love Sister P. She cracked me up with that slap to Leslie. I am so horrified of what you have in store for Neil. I don't think that you will kill him off, but this is still scary. That gunshot wound seemed pretty severe. I loved that you kind of did recap when it came down to Lily learning what has been going on. I also wonder if there will be a Chance/Lily romance??? Lauren/Scotty: I enjoyed this scene. It was a good way for Lauren to communicate to her son. I wonder when she will find out about the gay storyline. Spencer/Hillary: Good job in this scene. I felt what you were trying to communicate. You did very well. This was very well written. I love the way you write Hillary. She's one of my faves. GC Hospital PT.2: These hospital scenes got even better. I liked that the truth of Cane's addiction has finally come out. BUT, is Cane still alive??? FINALLY DRU IS HOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait to see how you do this story. This is going to be some of your best written stuff. I JUST KNOW IT IS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You are firing on all cylinders! KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

All My Children - Episode 20 Time of Day: Night Created By: Agnes Nixon Written By: Casey Hutchison Creative Consultant: Days22 (Pine Valley Hospital) Frankie is steps off the elevator. He throws latex gloves into a waste basket. He walks to the front desk, where he puts a patients chart down on the table. He looks through it. Griffin walks up to him. Griffin: Hey, Frankie. Frankie: Griff, hey. What's up? Griffin: I was wondering if you've seen Cara, anywhere? Frankie: She got off, not too long ago. Griffin: Really? Frankie: Yeah. Griffin: (To Himself) Where the hell is she? --- (David's Penthouse) Cara enters, as David shuts the door. David: What brought you all the way out here? Cara: We need to talk, David. David: About what? Cara: It is no secret we have some unresolved issues. I'm here to lay them down. --- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qby37xuo9mU --- (Kendall and Zack's Home) Kendall and Erica are getting comfortable on the couch. Kendall: You were accused of taking a drink? Erica: (Sighs) Yes, I was. Kendall: Mom... Erica: What, honey? Kendall: Did you do it? Did you take a drink? --- (Annie's Hotel Room) Annie tucks Emma in. Annie: (Sighs) She goes over to the window. Annie: Annie, you did the right thing by letting that lady and her little girl go. At least I hope I did. Anyways, you have your daughter. You have put alcohol in Erica's food and drink. And, you've sent those phone calls to Kendall. All is well. My last person to go after, before I leave this town, is Bianca. --- (Pine Valley Hospital) Frankie and Griffin sit down. Frankie: So, you think that Cara went to go see David? Griffin: It is the only explanation I can come up with. Frankie: Why are you so quick to say that she is with David? I mean Cara has been hurt so many times by him. She wouldn't put herself in that again. Griffin: They have a lot of things to still work out. Frankie: True. Griffin: I don't put it past Frankie to go there, and have a confrontation with him. Frankie: I see. Do you want to go and get her? Griffin: No, I'm going to let her settle this on her own. Frankie: That is probably for the best. Griffin: Probably. --- (Kendall and Zack's Home) Erica stands up. Erica: No, I didn't. Kendall takes a big sigh and stands up, as well. Kendall: Mom, you can tell me the truth. I know that you have been under a ton of stress, lately. I can understand why you would have drink or two. You can tell me. Nothing will leave this room. Erica: Honey, I didn't. Drinking is in my past. I went through a lot with that. Kendall: The intervention. (FLASHBACK) http://www.tubechop.com/watch/6458290 (END OF FLASHBACK) Erica: Honey, I really don't want to talk about this anymore, alright. Kendall: I understand. I love you so much, mom. Erica: I love you, too. Kendall: Good night. Erica: Good night. Kendall exits. Erica: (Sighs) --- (David's Penthouse) Cara lays her purse down on the couch. Cara: (Sighs) This is harder than I thought it would be. David: What do you mean? Cara: (Sighs) Here we are. Doing this whole thing. Doing this whole get together and talk about the things we have to hash out. There isn't as much as I thought there would be. David: Cara..., how's Oliver? Cara: I thought that you would ask that. David: How is he? Cara: He's good. He is doing really good. David: Where is he? Cara: He is with the babysitter. He is doing fine with her. But, I am not only here to just hash our past out. I am also here to talk about Oliver's future, where you are concerned. David: What do you mean? Cara: I've decided to give you joint custody. David: Excuse me? Cara: Oliver shouldn't be without his father. David: I think you made a wise choice. Cara: I think I did too. You should be happy that I did this. But, it does come with a contingency. David: What does that mean? Cara: If you make one wrong, villain move, you won't ever see him again. David: Don't you think that is a little harsh? Cara: I don't. Take it or leave it. David thinks about his Kevin (J.R. Doppelganger) plot. He thinks about Adam's funding for Orpheus, along with Skye. David: I'll take it. Cara: Alright. Cara hands David papers. Cara: All you have to do is sign these. David: No problem. David signs the papers. Cara grabs them. Cara: He will see you tomorrow morning. Krystal's Diner..., nine AM. David: See you then. Cara: Yes, you will. --- (Annie's Hotel Room) Annie is working in a corner. Annie: This is almost done. All I have to do is plant this, and then Emma and I leave. Annie laughs as the camera zooms in on what she is working on. ***FADE OUT*** ***END OF EPISODE 20***

I enjoyed the title of the episode. It let you know what you were going for. Tea/Victor/Blair/Olivia/Bo: Interesting where this whole story is going. I am totally interested to see who murdered Todd Manning. Tea better watch what she says. That was odd. Did Tea murder Todd? Matthew/Aubrey: I liked how you kept the whole Aubrey joke thing going. She is a character that cracks those one liners from time to time. Good job staying true to her. I do like the Matthew being gay story. Can't wait to see more layers on it. PJ/Dani: PJ is a good character. I see what you are going for in him, but let's see a little more of who he truly is. Don't move too fast on his story. But, good job! Katrina/Karen/Connie: I can't wait to see what you have in store now! LOL! Katrina Karr. That is a name I haven't thought about in a long time, can't wait to see what you do with her. And, why is Karen really in Llainview??? Jack: Poor Jack. I feel so bad for him. GREAT CLIFFHANGER!!! KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!