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Episode 74: Jack Rallies his Troops!


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At GC Memorial., In Phyllis’s room

Daniel holding Lucy is looking at Avery and his mother.

imagesCAO4ZLZUsoapoprah.jpgDaniel: I don’t have time for this. Lucy is hungry.” He leaves.

b0066faf.jpgAvery: Phyllis this is uncalled for.

phyills.jpgPhyllis: Oh is it? I’m blind. I can’t see so you think this is the perfect time to make my life living hell don’t you Avery!?

Avery: No I came to see how my sister was doing.

Phyllis: I don’t want to hear that bull. It’s garbage. Go get Ronan in here. I know it’s you stalking me and trying to kill me.

Avery: I really can’t believe you think I would do something like this.

Phyllis: Well you slept with Nick didn’t you?

Avery: You’re still on that? Really?

Phyllis: Yes I am. I have a child with Nick and my sister had sex with my baby‘s father. That makes you a whore. A trashy whore!

Avery: You got it all wrong Phyllis. Nick and I aren’t even seeing each other any more.

Phyllis: Well good for you. I’m serious Avery when I see Ronan I am telling him it’s you.

Avery: Go to hell Phyllis!

Phyllis: I’ll meet you there. GET OUT!!

Avery leaves

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Episode 74: Jack rallies his troops

Written by ML Cooks

scottythree.jpgScotty goes back to the gay bar Hungry Hearts. He sits at the bar and gets a beer. As he drinks it he spins around in his bar stool and looks at the men in the bar. He sees they are looking at him and some are winking and smiling. Scotty likes the attention and spins back around in his bar stool and continues to sip on his beer. Then Rafe walks in and sees Scotty. He grabs a seat next to him Scotty looks at Rafe and smiles.thumbnailCA8MGVE2.jpg

Scotty: So we meet again.

Rafe: We do Ted.” he says as Rafe caresses his thigh. Scotty looks down at Rafe’s hands and then at his face. “Ted” does not know what to make of the gesture.

At Leslie’s apartment. Les is in the kitchen making a late morning breakfast for her and Malcolm. Malcolm gets out the shower and wraps a towel around him and walks into the kitchen

malcolm.jpgMalcolm: Damn it smells good in here girl.

Les: I can get down in the kitchen.

Malcolm: I like that. We will have to do this more often.

Les: Do what bae?

Malcolm: Good love making then you make a good ass breakfast afterwards. Was daddy that good to you baby?

Les: That’s funny.

She walks over to him and hugs him as he sits on the kitchen counter. She begins to set the table.

Malcolm: Baby Sophia swung by here the other day.

Leslie: Your ex wife Sophia? What did she want and why are you just now telling me?

At the Abbott House. Jack has called on Keemo, Ashley, Billy, and Traci to join him at the house.

Billy: Alright Jack what is this all about.

Jack looks at his family. His face begins to turn red as he begins to get emotional and turns away from them.

thumbnail2-1.jpgKeemo: Dad what’s the matter? Are you ok?

Traci gets up and walks over to her brother and embraces him.

“Jackie what’s the matter?”

Jack turns back around water eyed.

“I’m sorry. Never mind me. Just seeing all of us together. With my son Keemo here. Dad would be proud. I just had this overwhelming feeling come over me when I saw my family together like this. We are here in the same City. How long ago has this happened?

Billy: You’re right Jack.

Ashley: Sure are. Is this why you called us here?

Jack: No. I have a plan. And it involves the mustache.

Ashley rolls here eyes as Traci looks unpleasant. But the men Keemo and Billy look at each other then at Jack and look interested as if they know they are about to have a chance to compete against one another.

Hungry Hearts.

Rafe: Did I make you feel uncomfortable Ted?

Ted: No not at all. I was just caught off guard. I’m not really used to PA.

Rafe: PA?

Ted: Public Affection.

Rafe looks around: I’m sure no one is going to mind. This is a gay bar.

Ted: Well I’m not so open.

Rafe: I see. Then what brought you here Ted?

Ted: You ask a lot of questions.” Scotty storms off. Rafe is a bit confused and wonders what he did wrong.

Back at GC Memorial. Ronan walks into Phyllis’s room

Ronan: I understand you wanted to see me?

Phyllis: Yes I have a new lead in my case.

Meanwhile The Mystery Woman wearing her nurse costume she stole to break into Olivia’s office is eaves dropping outside of Phyllis’ room. She listens in as they talk.Screen5.jpg

Ronan: You have a new lead?

Phyllis: I know who is stalking me.

Ronan: You do?

Phyllis: Uh yea. That’s what I said. It’s my sister. Avery Bailey Clark.

The Mystery Woman smiles as Nate Hastings looks at the odd looking nurse. He knows it some one he has never seen before. He begins to walk over to her.nate.jpg

At Leslie’s. Leslie looks at Malcolm

Leslie: What did big momma want?

Malcolm: Nothing like that. You have nothing to worry about. She was just telling me that she and Neil are having problems and more or less she wanted me back.

Leslie: And what did you tell her?

Malcolm: I told her that I love you and she should leave me alone.

Leslie, walking over to him: Good answer daddy.” She kisses him.

“I’m going to have to let her know you are mine.” He smiles at her. She undoes his towel while he is still sitting on the counter. She begins to kiss his chest and keeps working her way down to his lower abs and his navel and then even lower as Malcolm closes his eyes and leans back against the cabinet.

Back at the Abbot house.

Traci: Really Jackie. Victor is already in jail and after we all testify he will be there forever I am sure.

Ashley: Traci’s right Jack.

Keemo: No. I agree with my dad. From what I understand Victor has systematically try to destroy this family. From Patti to kidnapping Billy.

Billy: Keemo is right. Victor being in jail is not enough. I say we take out everything.

Keemo looks at Billy.

Billy: Is there a problem?

Keemo: Aren’t you married to a Newman?

Billy: What are you trying to say?

Keemo: I just said it.

Billy: Ok wise guy.

Jack: Boys, boys. Save that energy for Victor. By the time we are done with him Victor will be cleaning bathrooms at Jabot.

Keemo: Dad, I’m game. I need something really juicy to sink my teeth into.

Billy: Well Jack you know I don’t have anything to prove so I’m there bro.” Billy looks at Keemo and smiles. Keemo is not feeling Billy. Jack can sense the tension between his brother and son and wonders if this alliance will crumble before victory is achieved.

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GOOD EPISODE...I can visualize every single scene in my head...LOVE YOUR DIALOGUE. I like this format that you're using...

WInk wink at the Malcolm/Leslie scenes...I can definitely see Malcolm saying what you write...

And good "near miss" with Nate and the MW

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