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Episode 105: My Pregnant Mind


Matt P.

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Blake looks at Nan with the most hated eyes he could ever give anyone in his whole entire life. She doesn’t back down, instead she puts her hands on her hips and smirks.

Blake:

You…I can’t believe that you have the gull to show your face in this town.

Nan:

It was bound to happen sooner or later.

Blake:

After everything you did, you’re-

Nan:

Alive!

Blake:

Ridiculous. Vile. Inhumane.

Nan:

What else do you have for me big boy? It’s not like I haven’t heard it all from you or your little punk ass sidekicks before. Besides, you can go and tell whoever you want that I’m alive. It’s always he said, she said with you and me. That’s the way it would be and of course I would win. Just like I used to.

Blake:

No you won’t! Do you know how much damage you caused? You ruined so many people’s lives. Parents don’t have their children because of you. Lovers don’t have their significant others! This school is still picking up the pieces because of everything that you caused.

Nan:

Nan Sheridan’s dead for the moment but don’t worry, I’ll pop up alive with some sort of reasonable explanation. I always do.

Blake:

The hell you will.

(forcefully grabs her arm)

You’re getting arrested.

Nan pulls her arm back.

Nan:

Get your hands off of me, unless you want me to scream rape again.

Blake:

What’s worst of all is that you tried making me think that London was alive.

Nan:

It’s always about you isn’t it? How you feel or what you want!

(mocking)

Oh my daddy buys me the school and everyone has to listen to what I say or else.

(snickers)

And I’m the selfish one.

Blake:

When you got involved with London and my school, that’s when you crossed the line.

Nan:

Just like when you made me think you were in love with me so that you can try to humiliate me for your own benefit? That’s some line of bullshit you got there.

Blake:

You won’t get away with this.

Nan:

(taunting)

I’m so scared Blake.

(tempting)

It was fun to kiss you again. To feel the passion that you had with your wife. Excuse me, your dead wife.

Nan had obviously hit a nerve from her last comment.

Blake:

What did you say?

Nan:

(talking like London)

Blake I love you so much. I truly do, I-

With all of the anger and rage inside of him, Blake charges for her throat and begins to strangle her. He is so forceful with his attack that Nan falls to the ground as he begins to bash her head off of the ground.

Blake:

(screaming)

YOU TAKE IT BACK!

Ginny comes rushing outside and pulls Blake off of Nan.

Blake:

You’re done psycho! You hear me? You’re done. If I see you again I’ll make sure you’re deported.

Blake exits in a huff. From a few tables back, Bryan takes the last picture of Blake’s rage with his digital camera. Nan coughs and tries to look like a victim. Luckily no one knew who she was when she put her sunglasses on her face. She then looks at Bryan who smiles back at her with his camera in hand.

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Episode 105:

My Pregnant Mind

Executive Story Consultant & Creator:

Matt Politylo

Logo Designer:

Mary Zimmerman

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Dylan gets a call on his cell phone from Blake who is pacing back and forth in his office. After sleeping alone, Dylan gives his best friend his full attention.

Blake:

And you won’t believe who I ran into today? Nan freakin’ Sheridan! The bitch is ridiculous and after impersonating London she’s back to wreak more havoc on this school.

Dylan:

Damn. That girl has more lives than Jason Voorhees. Just calm down and we’ll handle it. We’re a team, okay?

Blake:

Thanks man. I’ll talk to you later.

Blake hangs up with Dylan who gets dressed. He then gets another phone call.

Dylan:

Hello?

Rebecca:

Dylan it’s Rebecca.

Dylan:

Thank you for calling me back.

Rebecca:

I wanted to make an appointment for you as soon as possible.

Dylan:

That sounds good. How does later today sound?

Rebecca:

I can pen you in. I’ll let the secretary at the clinic know right away.

From outside of his bedroom, Carrie feels bad for the way she reacted the other day, so she surprises him with some breakfast in bed. She makes her way into his room with the key he gave her but stops when she hears him talking in his bedroom.

Rebecca:

What exactly seems to be wrong?

Dylan:

I…I don’t know. I just started to have shooting pains near my stomach and that region-

Rebecca:

Say no more. We’ll take a look at it when you come in and see me, okay?

Dylan:

Sure thing.

Dylan hangs up with Rebecca and opens up his bedroom door to find Carrie with a smile on her face.

Dylan:

Hey, I didn’t expect to see you.

Carrie:

I know. I wanted to surprise you.

Dylan:

With breakfast. That’s so sweet but I’m not hungry.

Carrie:

That’s okay. You can just eat it later. Look I’m sorry about what happened the other day.

Dylan:

I am too. I didn’t mean to freak out on you like the way I did. It’s just- I’ve been going through some stuff back home and to tell you the truth I’m not over the whole DiMarco fiasco.

Carrie:

That’s exactly how I feel but you can always talk to me. We’re a team and I’m going to be here for you regardless. In speaking of Juliana, she keeps calling me, wanting to start a family.

Dylan:

If she wants that then tell her to move here.

Carrie:

That’s an idea.

Dylan:

That conniving bit-

Carrie:

(offended)

That’s my mother you’re talking about!

Dylan:

Yeah well some mother she is.

Carrie:

Whoa where did that come from?

Dylan:

Someone should’ve told you about this before it came out the way it did. If Juliana didn’t like you hanging out with Victor, maybe she should’ve brought up that you were going out with your uncle!

Carrie:

We’ll deal with her in our own way. Just calm down.

Dylan:

Thanks for the breakfast, it was a very nice gesture.

Dylan kisses her on her cheek.

Carrie:

So who were you talking to on the phone?

Dylan:

(caught off guard)

What?

Carrie:

I heard you talking to someone on the phone. Who was it?

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In the afternoon, Alley hangs out in John’s room while he is in class. She is sitting on his couch, working on some homework. Marissa walks in to the front door and smiles at her.

Marissa:

Is my brother around?

Alley:

No. He’s in class and then I think he’s going to go to his internship.

Marissa:

That’s wonderful that he’s doing that. I was the one who got him that internship after all.

Alley:

You never really told me what you do for a living.

Marissa:

I’m in charge of booking photo shoots for a major marketing firm.

Alley:

Then that would just fit perfectly with John and his dreams.

Marissa:

It sure will. If you’ll excuse me I’m-

Alley:

Hey I was wondering if I could ask you something.

Marissa:

It’s a free country hun so shoot.

Alley:

What did you mean by your comment the other day about L.J.?

Marissa:

Annie you shouldn’t look too much into it.

Alley:

(correcting her)

My name is Alley. Okay? And I sort of felt offended by what you said.

Marissa:

Well, it just seems like you haven’t made any effort with that little girl. Believe me, I’m a keen observer of things that come to my family, and first impressions are everything. That’s what I got from you. That you don’t care about baby L.J.

Alley stands up from the couch to get in her face.

Alley:

How dare you!

Marissa:

Listen I’m only calling it as I see it. Since I’ve been here, you haven’t even picked her up once.

Alley:

I beg your pardon.

John comes back from his class and the girls look at him.

John:

Hey what are you two up to.

Marissa:

We were just getting to know each other a little better. Isn’t that right Alley?

Alley:

Yes we were.

Marissa:

I’m off to tend to my beautiful niece. Take care you too and take some advice from me, if you’re planning on spending some alone time, try not to make another baby.

(joking)

I can’t take care of two kids or my rates as a babysitter might go up.

Alley shakes her head as she exits.

John:

You two seem to be getting along just fine.

Alley:

Really? She insults me behind your back.

John:

You just have to take her with a grain of salt. Marissa can be very opinionated.

Alley:

Oh you don’t say. I don’t like her John and I want her gone!

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Bryan makes his way to The Point Palace Inquiry. He finds Leon’s desk and taps on his door to get his attention.

Leon:

What can I do for you?

Bryan:

It’s not so much what you can do for me but what I can do for you.

Leon:

Oh yeah? Funny I thought you were accused of assistance to arson.

Bryan:

That was all cleared up.

Leon:

Please continue.

Bryan pulls out his memory stick and hands it to Leon.

Bryan:

I have some very interesting pictures to show you.

Leon plugs the memory stick into his computer and pulls up the pictures of Blake attacking Nan.

Bryan:

Our school’s president seems to have a bit of a temper.

Leon:

Wait! Isn’t that-

Bryan:

Yep it’s Nan Sheridan.

Leon:

But I thought she was dead.

Bryan:

She’s very much alive.

Leon:

I can’t print these pictures.

Bryan:

Why because they’re too damaging to Blake or is it because you two are too good of friends? I was hoping that this newspaper was fair and balanced. Now unfortunately you have a really good story on your hands. I’ll tell you everything you need to know about Nan showing up alive.

Leon:

In exchange for what?

Bryan:

For printing these pictures as front page news! Do we have ourselves a deal?

Leon pauses for a moment and knew that he couldn’t pass up on an amazing story.

Leon:

Unfortunately but I will be getting Blake’s statement.

Bryan:

As you should.

Bryan begins to exit until he turns around with a smile on his face.

Bryan:

Just a suggestion but maybe the title could read in big letters ‘President Hammers Dead Girl.’

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At The Palace Café, Ginny wipes off the counter and hears the chatter of the customers talking about the scene that took place earlier. She then bumps into Sky.

Ginny:

Sorry.

Sky:

By all means that’s quite alright.

Ginny:

Can I get you anything?

Sky:

I was wondering if you could get me an application.

Ginny:

You want to work here because that would be great?

Sky:

Actually I wanted to work on you!

Ginny smiles at her comment but hands her an application anyway.

Ginny:

I thought you were taken.

Sky:

A girl like you must obviously have a very open mind.

Ginny:

(shy)

I do.

Sky:

The other ship has sunk.

Ava walks into the café and looks at both of the girls before walking away.

Sky:

Speak of the devil.

Ava takes her seat but is then joined by who she thinks is Sky.

Ava:

After yesterday, I don’t want to talk to you!

Ava turns around to find Nate with Marli.

Ava:

Oh it’s you.

Nate:

Geez what happened yesterday?

Ava:

It’s nothing.

Nate:

This is my friend Marli Calloway.

Ava:

Nice to meet you.

Marli:

You too. I really dig this place.

Ava:

Yeah it’s our number one hangout.

Marli:

I definitely could see myself spending a lot of time here. I’m going to go get a drink. It was nice meeting you.

Nate:

(to Marli)

Can I get you anything?

Marli:

No I’m good. You’ve already done so much for me.

(to Ava)

He makes an excellent tour guide.

Marli exits to the front counter.

Ava:

She’s cute. Not my type but she is definitely yours.

Nate:

She’s actually a past fling.

Ava:

Then you better watch out because our exes who seem to despise you could ruin your chances with her.

Nate:

I’ve actually already had her and the barista.

Ava:

Figures. Girls do talk.

Nate:

I’m not worried about them. I want to settle down and have something I never had before.

Ava:

Like what?

Nate:

Like a relationship.

Ava:

I’m sure that girl’s single. Maybe you two could strike up more than just moving body parts.

Nate:

Marli’s just a friend. She’s not my type.

Silence comes between them. Ava looks behind him at Marli who just overheard what he said. He then notices her and bites his lip.

Marli:

Not your type for what?

Nate:

For taking you to the stupid places around campus. I wouldn’t do that to you.

Marli:

I think I’m going to go.

Nate:

Wait!

Marli:

No I’m good. By the way, those girls up there wanted me to flick you off and the one with the glasses said she still wants to scald your balls. You must’ve done a number on them.

Ava:

He does have a way with the ladies.

Marli:

Yep. He sure does. Bye.

Marli exits. Nate sighs with disbelief.

Ava:

If you were smart you’d go after her.

Nate:

Only because I’m turning into such a good guy will I do that but I want you to know something. You’re the one that I want!

Nate exits to go after Marli while Sky blows a kiss at Ava.

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Later that evening, Will sits down on the couch of the common area in the apartment. He wasn’t happy because a house meeting was called by Jace. The other neighbors weren’t amused either.

Jace:

Now I would like everyone to know how pissed off I am about what happened last night. Was there a fire last night?

Everyone is silent.

Jace:

The only fire that was burning was the one between me and my girlfriend!

Will:

Which we all heard.

Jace:

Wait. What did you say?

The others look at Will because they couldn’t believe what he just said, which was what was on their mind.

Will:

I live below you. You two weren’t exactly being the quietest.

Jace:

I apologize about that.

Will:

Hey it’s cool. You’re loud during sex, it’s understandable.

Jace:

Yeah I guess it is but I want to know which one of you pricks pulled the fire alarm.

Will looks around as the other smirk at Jace’s comment.

Neighbor:

You’re paranoid dude!

Jace:

(responding to him)

And you’re a pot head. Did you forget to put out your blunt or something?

Neighbor:

Dude no way. I finish that to the end.

Neighbor #2:

Yeah he has the burns on his lips to prove it.

Both of the neighbors begin to laugh.

Jace:

I’m not paranoid, it’s just this is very inconvenient for some of us who are busy!

Will roles his eyes. Alicia walks into the doors and notices all of the guys talking.

Alicia:

Hey boys. What’s shaking?

Without thinking Will stands up and begins to walk towards her. Jace and everyone else notice his impulsive move.

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After a long deep sleep Jenny wakes up in her bed in her comfortable pajamas. Carlos walks into her bedroom and feels her head.

Carlos:

How do you feel chica?

Jenny:

Groggy but better.

Carlos:

You just needed some well deserved sleep. I made you some chicken noodle soup. It’s warming up in the kitchen.

Jenny:

That would be nice.

Carlos:

You’re lucky someone found you in the bathroom. I was so scared for you.

Jenny:

I just wasn’t feeling well. I guess-

Carlos:

What?

Jenny:

There’s really something that I need to tell you.

Carlos:

Okay. I don’t like where this going.

Jenny:

When I was in prison, I was…late.

Carlos:

(realizing what she’s getting at)

You’re not saying what I think you’re saying. Are you? Oh my god this is like really bad de’ja vu of a scene I filmed for Blue Crystal.

Jenny:

It kind of all makes sense. This whole vomiting and fainting thing. I think I could be pregnant.

Carlos stands up from the bed with a shocked look on his face.

Carlos:

Then I’m happy for you. I mean we could share a baby. This is great news. If you are that is but how will you know?

Jenny:

I bought a pregnancy test just to make sure, it was one of the items I was allowed to get from the prison gift shop. Surprisingly they have tons of items for that extra special conjugal visit. Oh and by the way, don’t think I was trying to hide this from you, I just didn’t want you to find out this way.

Jenny goes into the bathroom to use the stick. She talks to Carlos through the door.

Jenny:

At least this didn’t happen when I was in jail. Could you think of how I could explain that one?

Carlos:

We were so careful though. We were protected!

Jenny:

Sometimes things happen you know.

Carlos:

Yeah but...let’s just…take it one step at a time. Okay Chica?

Jenny:

Totally agree.

Carlos:

Is it ready?

Jenny opens the door and looks at Carlos before looking at the stick. She takes a deep breath and examines it.

Jenny:

Yep. It’s ready. Are you?

Carlos:

So what does it say? Are you preggers or not?

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This episode had such a strong start. Loved the showdown between Nan and Blake. The dialog was so crisp and dramatic.

Wassup my blunt smokers? I loved the black lip comment? How you know about that Matt?

Not surprised if Jenny will be come preggers?

Very surprised with Sky flirting with Ginny, I liked it.

And poor Nate, never catches a break. It seems his tool has been in a lot of garages. I don't know If I could tolerate them two together. I have a soft spot in my heart for Ava. I don't want her with Nate.

Loved how Bryan was right there to snap those photos. Can't believe Blake lost his cool like that. But I feel him but come Blake, your the pres you should have Nan is going to get you for choking the spit out of her. I'd like to see Nan get down and dirty with Bitch on her level. Like CC or something.

Loved the episode Matt. Everything is flowing nicely and it seems to have slowed down some what ( or is it just me) and I like that too. Your dialog has become much more hip and sassy

AND I can't forget my girl Marissa. I love her. Thanks for the good read.

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wow... Another Great Episode - Thanks for keeping the drama, and the viewer on the edge of their seat on what's going with Dylan... I have a lot of crazy id going on, on my head - Very GOODDDDDD!!!! - I am sure whatever it is will be very surprising, and well delivery.

Marissa Snaldry.... is my girl... I am familiar with some of the cast, not all - but casting Lesli Kay in that role was a great move, I envisage her on the scene, and reminded me, when she was in ATWT... Love Miss Kay, Thank you....

POOR Blake.... I starting feeling sorry for him, can't wait to see the ARTICLE....

FIVE STARS!!!!!

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You guys! Thank you so much for the comments. They are truly inspirational. I'm feeling that this is such a good streak for Season 5. I think PP was missing numerous villains in Season 4. There was only two, boarderline three. Now we have like 5 of them running around town.

I'm so happy that I made Will bad again. It's always been in his genes so now that he's been heartbroken twice, we'll see him slip into his evil ways over Alicia and Jace. And yes ML, I've been to college so that's how I know about burn blunt lips. (Enought said on that issue, lol)

Oh no about Nate and Ava getting together. Well hopefully you'll see why they should be together. They're both longing for something. Ava wants to know if she's straight and Nate wants a relationship but of course is that ever possible in Point Palace?

The cast is very mixed because a lot of them were used from the first Season when a demo to the pilot was shot. I loved them so much that everytime I wrote PP, I envisioned them in the character roles. The ones who were chosen are really talented but I do have to agree that I like Lesli Kay as Marissa. Marissa is a bitch, not a psycho bitch, but just a bitch. She says what she wants and doesn't care who she offends so that's kind of why I wanted to see LK in the role.

Season 5 will just get better and I will have to say that there are a few story plots that no soap opera has ever dealt with before.

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