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Episode 133: Carrie's KILLAH

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Alley’s eyes scanned the paper. She folds it and places the document in her purse.

Dr. Harnlo:

Hopefully it was the outcome you wanted?

Alley:

This definitely will change things.

Dr. Harnlo:

If you need counseling on how you can say it to the father, I’m always available.

Alley’s cell phone rings. She looks at the caller ID.

Alley:

Excuse me.

Alley gets up out of her chair to go outside of Dr. Harnlo’s office for some privacy.

Alley:

Hello John. What’s up?

John:

I was hoping you would be able to tell me.

Alley:

When you’re vague, then I have no idea why the heck you called me in the first place.

John:

Tell me why you rushed out of the courtroom.

Alley:

That’s none of your business.

John:

You were out so fast we weren’t able to have one of our many awkward converstations.

Alley:

And like this isn’t one now? I had something important to attend to.

John:

Something dealing with the baby?

Alley:

Yes.

John:

Since I could be that baby’s father, I think I have a right to know.

Alley:

Fine. I rushed out of there so I can see my gyno.

John:

Is everything alright with…our-

(corrects himself)

the baby?

Alley:

Yes the baby’s fine.

There is a pause between the two of them.

Alley:

I’m surprised you haven’t deleted my number.

John:

Can’t say that it hasn’t crossed my mind more then once. Especially when I think you of and the Point Palace Prince.

Alley:

Nice to talking to you too. We’ll be in touch.

Alley hangs up with John and returns to Dr. Harnlo’s office.

Dr. Harnlo:

Everything alright?

Alley:

Yeah. Just fine. And about that counseling. I don’t think I’m going to need it. I’ll let the father know when I think the time is right and Blake is going to be a wonderful father.

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Episode 133:

Carrie’s KILLAH

Series Creator & Head Writer:

Matthew Politylo

Logo Designer:

Mary Zimmerman

Guest Starring:

Kamar De Los Reyes as Dr. Hemlaz

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C.C.’s hands were shook while she holds a knife close to Jenny’s throat. Jenny was scared. Thinking that it could end right now.

Carlos:

Put the knife down C.C. You don’t want to do this.

C.C.:

I don’t? And why not? Why not end the person who took everything I’ve ever wanted?

Carlos:

Because you’ll have it on your conscience. I know you have one of those.

C.C.:

You think that I’m trash. Don’t change your story to save your girlfriend.

Jenny:

Just let me go!

C.C.

You be quiet or I’ll slice out your larynx so that you can’t speak at all.

Jenny:

Don’t…don’t kill me.

Dr. Hemlaz:

I’ll tell security that you had a miscarriage and need some more attention.

C.C.:

In return for what?

Dr. Hemlaz:

Let the girl go and set us free.

C.C.:

Nope. For once this is way too good. I have control. I have power.

Dr. Hemlaz looks outside and locks eyes with a nurse who saw what was going on. He motions for her to get help. She quickly runs.

Jenny:

Tell her you love her Carlos.

Carlos:

What?

Jenny:

I know it’s what she wants to hear so tell her.

C.C.:

Yeah Carlos! With conviction. I want you to say that you love me.

Carlos is silent.

C.C.:

(screaming)

SAY IT OR JENNY DIES!

Carlos:

Fine. I…

Before he could get the words out security busted into the hospital room with armed weapons. One security guard fires a shot to scare C.C. and it works. C.C. let go of Jenny. The gun shot startled her. Jenny ran towards Carlos as C.C. went to grab her.

C.C.:

NOOOO!

The security guards got to C.C. first. They wrestled her to the ground. And places her under arrest.

Carlos:

(comforting Jenny)

You’re okay chica. You’ll be okay. It’s over with her.

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The next day, Ava knocks on The Anderson’s door. Maieve answers with a smile on her face.

Maieve:

Hello there Ava. Bobbie’s out back in the yard.

Ava:

Thanks Maieve. Has she been okay?

Maieve:

She’s been very quiet lately. I tried finding out what was bothering her but she won’t budge. I’m sure she’ll open up to you.

Ava:

I’ll do my best.

Ava opens up the backdoor to Maieve’s cozy backyard. Bobbie was sitting on a swing couch looking out at the beautiful scenery.

Ava:

It’s a little chilly out here.

Bobbie:

Yep.

Ava:

I like that sweater you’re wearing.

Bobbie:

Cool.

Ava:

Bobbie I’m trying to break the ice here. You can at least say more then one word.

Bobbie:

Fine. Why don’t you start be dropping the conversation crap and admit why you’re really here.

Ava:

Excuse me?

Bobbie:

I know why you want to talk to me.

Ava:

Oh. Go ahead.

Bobbie:

James obviously told you about our conversation at the diner. Well I’m not sorry for it. I don’t want to be fake! That’s exactly how I was being in front of everyone.

Ava:

All I ask is for you to give James a second chance. Don’t be fake with him or me or anyone. Be you but be open.

Bobbie:

Look I…

Bobbie stands up and begins to stumble.

Ava:

Are you okay?

Bobbie:

Yeah I’m fine.

Bobbie places her hands in front of her to gain composure.

Ava:

You don’t look okay. Why don’t you sit down and relax. I’ll have Maieve get you some water.

Bobbie:

NO! I’m fine okay!

Bobbie’s dizzy spell worsens as she passes out to the ground. Ava gets on the ground with her.

Ava:

Bobbie!

(hollering)

Maieve call an ambulance. Quick!

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The Palace Café was calming down after the rush hour crowd left. Ginny was going over the books in the back office when Agatha knocks on the door to let herself in.

Agatha:

Hey partner. Feel like talking about that great idea you had?

Ginny:

How busy is it out there?

Agatha:

Let’s just say we did great this morning. It’s kind of dead on the floor. Everyone’s in class.

Ginny:

Nice to know. But yeah if you have a few I-

Agatha:

I’m just pulling your leg. Owen’s here to see you. Maybe you can hold that thought.

Ginny:

He’s out there? Now?

Agatha:

You look fine. Go talk to him.

Ginny:

Thanks Ag. We will for sure chat.

Ginny walks out past the counter. She smiles when she sees Owen waiting for her.

Owen:

I was hoping I could get some coffee.

Ginny:

If we were dating it would be on the house everyday.

Owen:

Oh well then my girlfriend wouldn’t like that.

Ginny:

That’s right. You two are still an item. What can I help you with? I’m sure you didn’t come here to chat about espressos or roasted beans.

Owen:

I wanted to talk to you about the kiss we shared.

Ginny:

(embarrassed)

It was impulsive. And I’m sorry.

Owen:

No don’t be. Don’t tell Tanisha this but I liked it.

Ginny:

Really?

Owen:

Yeah.

Ginny:

There’s something you should know about your girlfriend.

Owen:

She’s stupid. She doesn’t deserve me. She’s a liar. She’s a bitch. She’s…

Ginny:

She’s blackmailing you through me.

Owen:

What?!

Ginny:

Yeah. We had a little run in and she told me that she plans on going to the police about you shooting Blake, if I don’t leave town.

Owen:

She said that? She would actually go through with that?

Ginny:

Of course she said it would have been anonymous and somehow my fault. Because since I’m here, still going after you, I could’ve saved you. That’s what she would’ve spun.

Owen:

Ginny I don’t believe this.

Ginny:

Of course you don’t. You are such a nice person that you want to see the good in everyone. I get it.

Owen:

I’m sorry but she’s my girlfriend. She’s crazy about me. I don’t see her doing this.

Ginny:

And you think I would make this up?

Owen:

No...I-

(stopping himself)

I just think that this feud you two have over me is silly. Maybe a little annoying.

Ginny:

I’ve wanted to put an end to this since the day I met that witch. She’s the one who won’t stop. She never does. Believe me on this one okay? I have a way to prove it if you trust me.

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Nate walks in the lobby of The Palace Plaza. He is about to walk out the door until someone catches his eye.

Nate:

James. Funny running into you here.

James:

Why? Do you own the hotel?

Nate:

No I live here.

James:

Point Palace does have some really nice apartments from what I remember.

Nate:

Why the hell haven’t you left town yet?

James:

Go right for the jugular why don’t you.

Nate:

We were interrupted yesterday. You met your daughter, you had a reunion with Ava…time’s up. Bye.

James:

I’m not going anywhere and you’re not going to stop me!

Nate:

Want a bet?

Nate moves in closer to James to stands up to face him.

James:

You really are annoying. You know that? Why can’t you just go back to losing your memory? Usually amnesia makes a person appreciate what they’ve lost.

Nate:

And you’ve lost Ava. Move on.

James:

You’re the one who lost her. I’ll admit that maybe feelings have been brought back but she just doesn’t want to see you.

Nate shoves James.

Nate:

Take that back!

James:

How about I do that with my fist?

Before raising his fist towards Nate’s face, James’s phone went off.

James:

I have to take this call. Hey Ava. What’s up?

Ava:

You have to come to the hospital.

James:

Why? What happened?

Ava:

Bobbie fainted. Her condition has worsened. Get here soon!

James:

Did the doctor’s tell you anything?

Ava:

No one knows anything yet.

James:

I’m on my way.

James hangs up with Ava.

Nate:

What happened? Is Ava in the hospital? Is she okay?

James:

I’m not sure what’s going on. Bobbie fainted and they took her in.

Nate:

My car’s out front. I’ll take you.

James and Nate exit to rush off to see Bobbie and Ava.

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Alicia calls tabloid reporter Mik Lanlo. He answers his cell phone while sipping a latte and walking to his car in the parking lot.

Mik:

This is Mik. Talk to me.

Alicia:

Hi Mik my name is Alicia Amberson. I’m calling-

Mik:

How’s your recovery been?

Alicia:

I’ve recovered fine. Thanks for asking.

Mik:

We wrote a story on Jace going to jail and you being shot. Made for an increase in readers. Especially with the whole Will Pazner fiasco.

Alicia:

I don’t know how to respond to that. Thanks I guess?

Mik:

What can I help you with? Need a copy?

Alicia:

No. I have a story for you.

Mik:

As good as the one you produced for me on your own?

Alicia:

Maybe even better.

Mik:

Just maybe?

Alicia:

Can we meet tomorrow at Azario’s. Say three p.m.?

Mik:

I’ll be there. I hope the story’s good.

Alicia:

Oh it is. Good’ay.

Alicia hangs up with Mik. She turns opens her door and sees a large bouquet of red roses blocking her view.

Kellan:

May I come in?

Alicia:

These must’ve cost you a fortune.

Kellan:

You’re worth it.

Alicia takes the flowers and places them on her coffee table.

Alicia:

I’ll have to find a home for these. How long can you stay for?

Kellan:

Not that long. I’m due for surgery soon.

Alicia:

Oh that’s right you’re a busy doctor. I can’t forget how you saved my life.

Kellan:

Just doing my job. Falling for you was an extra perk.

Alicia:

I like when you say things like that.

Kellan:

I was hoping you’d say yes to dinner, drinks, and a romantic night of sex.

Alicia:

Yes. Yes. And hell yes.

Kellan:

Is that a yes?

Alicia:

So is this.

Alicia rests her arms over his shoulder and kisses him tenderly.

Kellan:

I’ll let you know when we can do that trifecta night of fun.

Alicia:

Definitely. Thanks for the flowers. If I’m ever having a bad day, I can just look at these.

Kellan leaves Alicia’s room and walks back to his car with a disgusted look on his face.

Kellan:

And soon you’ll find out that you killed my brother! And how you have to pay for that!

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In Rena’s room, Will appears through the wall and finds Lenvy with Rena.

Lenvy:

What did you find out?

Will:

Things aren’t good for Alicia. She’s in cahoots with Yvonne to go to the press about you being able to talk to us.

Rena:

My mom convinced Alicia to go to the press?

Will:

Yep. She was on the phone with Mik Lanlo.

Rena:

Great. I’ll be the laughing stock of Point Palace. I’ve never wanted this to happen.

Lenvy:

What do you think we should do? She needs to be stopped or at best needs to understand your powers Rena.

Rena:

She won’t talk to me. She hates me after everything that happened with Will and Jace.

Will:

It’s time you stand up to her. Talk to her before it’s too late.

Rena:

Yeah you’re right. I have to. Thanks you too.

Rena rushes out of her room to find Alicia. Will is alone with Lenvy who looks at him awkwardly.

Will:

I was always able to read your mind.

Lenvy:

Then tell me what I’m thinking right now.

Will:

You want a resolution about my feelings with Rena.

Lenvy:

Nope. I was thinking that if you’re trying to get past those pearly gates…you’re going to have to do a lot better then having Alicia not go to the press over Rena. You did kill a person.

Lenvy vanished in thin air leaving Will to think of what else there was to do.

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Marli disguised again as Nina walks down the hallway into the office of Point Palace. She stops in front of Myra’s desk to get her attention.

Myra:

May I help you?

Marli:

(in Russian accent)

I’m looking for Blake Hammerton.

Myra:

He doesn’t work here anymore.

Marli:

Surely you have his address. Or phone number. Anything?

Myra:

We’re not allowed to give out that information. Besides I don’t know if you’ve read the news lately but Mister Hammerton’s house was recently damaged from a fire.

Marli:

I did not. But I have important package for him. I must see him immediately.

Myra:

Well you’re not going to find him here. Sorry.

Marli:

Thank you.

Marli walks away from Myra’s desk and walks down the hallway. She overhears Benjamin and Lanoi in a heated discussion.

Benjamin:

Where in the hell is he then? It’s like he just disappeared.

Lanoi:

I have no idea Ben. He hasn’t responded to any of our e-mails or my text messages. He probably used his big salary to take an undeserved vacation. We both know how selfish he is.

Benjamin:

It’s times like this I wish Blake was still president. He never would have abandoned ship. Never!

Lanoi:

We can’t fire him. Howard would have to do that and Howard wants him in.

Marli ran out of the administration building to her car. She pulls out of her cell phone and calls the office where Bryan was captive. After a fake message pick up, she leaves her message.

Marli:

Hope you’re having fun by yourself. I know you can hear me. Just wanted to let you know that I overheard Benjamin and Lanoi talking about you. They’re very disappointed by your absence. They want Blake back so bad. Once I find Blake. It will happen.

She hangs up her phone. Bryan was hard at work in his escape. With his shoe he pounds on the door which has since become dented.

Bryan:

Hammerhead couldn’t possess half the power I have!

Bryan pounds his shoe against the door.

Bryan:

He has too much heart.

Pound.

Bryan:

I rule with an iron fist.

Each pound became more and more forceful.

Bryan:

I’m going to get out of here. And I’m going to get my company back. Point Palace belongs to me. You’ll be arrested Marli.

His anger seeping from his soul into his clenched fist. He pounds the wall again but this time he makes a large dent in the door.

Bryan:

I’m escaping!

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Outside of the courtroom Carlos walks up to Jenny to check up on her.

Carlos:

How are you doing?

Jenny:

I’d be a lot better if we didn’t talk about what happened.

Carlos:

Believe me I want to forget about C.C. as much as you do.

Jenny:

Good.

Carlos:

What I can’t believe is what you just said. I know when you’re mad about something and I know when you’re mad at me. So spill it. What’s wrong?

Jenny:

Not now. I’m focused on one thing and only one thing. That’s taking Nan down.

Carlos wanted to answer but knew it was best if he didn’t. He was cut off by Hayley.

Hayley:

We’re being called in.

Jenny:

Make sure apply pressure to her. Anna Lee will crack. I just know it.

Hayley:

Will do.

They walk into the courtroom and take their seats. Nan looks at Anna Lee and quietly has her own private side bar with her sister.

Nan:

I don’t care what the hell you have to do. Think of clowns. Stare off in space. Act like you have tourettes. It doesn’t matter to me. But do not crack under pressure!

Anna Lee:

Of course Nan.

Nan:

You’re my only hope sis. I explained to you why we did what we did. If you admit to anything they’ll send you to jail. You won’t survive! So don’t mess up!

Judge Valencia:

Court is now in session. I’m choosing the witness. Miss Anna Lee Sheridan. Approach the bench please.

Anna Lee:

Yes your honor.

Anna Lee approaches the bench and is sworn in by the guard. Her hands were already shaking.

Judge Valencia:

Mister Cranston you may examine your witness.

Bryant:

Thank you. Anna Lee you live with your parents Lorrister and Felicia correct?

Anna Lee:

I do. But I moved in briefly with Nan.

Bryant:

Why did you come to Point Palace?

Anna Lee:

Because both of my sisters came here. I wanted to see them.

Bryant:

That’s when you found out about your sister Tracie?

Anna Lee is silent. She looks down and was fighting tears.

Anna Lee:

(soft)

Yes. Tracie.

Bryant:

Their sister Tracie died in an accident your honor.

Hayley:

Objection. Irrelevant to the case.

Judge Valencia:

Sustained. Please stay on track Mister Cranston.

Bryant:

Yes your honor. When you stayed with your sister what did you notice or observe? Was she the same?

Anna Lee:

She was the same person…just…sad. I can tell that the people here have really done a number on her. That’s what I noticed.

Bryant:

I rest my case.

Hayley stands up to cross examine Anna Lee.

Hayley:

Anna Lee Nan didn’t want you to come to Point Palace did she?

Anna Lee:

She didn’t want these people to hurt me. She was only looking out for me.

Hayley:

How did you meet Jenny?

Anna Lee:

She informed me about my sister.

Hayley:

So you’re saying that my client came to you, not even knowing you, and told you information about your sister?

Bryant:

Objection. We’re back to what was just deemed irrelevant.

Judge Valencia:

Agreed. No more word about Tracie for the time being.

Hayley:

Yes your honor. Anna Lee did you help your sister kidnap Jenny?

Anna Lee:

What?

Hayley:

I repeat. Did you help your sister kidnap Jenny? Did she convince you to take Jenny hostage so that she could complete whatever evil misdoings with my client? Did She?

Bryant:

Objection! Leading the witness.

Judge Valencia:

Overruled. Answer the question.

Anna Lee:

I…we…Um.

Judge Valencia:

You’re under oath.

Anna Lee looked at Jenny whose face was sympathetic. She then looked at Nan whose stern face told her to lie.

Judge Valencia:

Time’s ticking.

Anna Lee’s mouth was open. She had to speak. She had to say something.

Anna Lee:

No. I nor my sister are kidnappers. Jenny made that part up!

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Blake walks into The Palace Café and before going to the counter he stops when he notices London alone.

Blake:

Fancy running into you here.

London:

Hey. How are you?

Blake:

I’m fine. Where’s John? Is he in the john?

London:

Cute. No he’s at home with L.J.

Blake:

You said home. I guess you really have become acclimated with John’s apartment. And the family life.

London:

I’m sorry about what happened to our home. Did the police ever find out anything?

Blake:

They suspect arson. If that’s true then I’m pretty sure there’s a long list of suspects.

London:

Whoever it is will definitely gets what’s coming to them.

Blake:

Let’s hope. So…how is L.J.? I miss her you know.

London:

She’s growing up. I’m just happy that I get to be a part of her life.

Blake:

Who knows? I might have a kid myself.

London:

With Alley. Yeah I kind of don’t want to think about that.

Blake:

The feeling’s mutual about you and John.

(beat)

Do you ever think about us?

London:

Sure. All of the time.

Blake takes London’s hand into his.

London:

Blake don’t.

Blake:

Why? It feels like nothing’s changed.

London:

But we both know that everything has. We’re with two people who-

Blake:

At one point deserved to be together.

London:

Like us.

Blake:

Yeah. Like us.

They both look into each other’s eyes. At the same time, they kiss. Little did they know that John walked in and witnessed it.

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Later that night, Dylan was alone in his room. He kept staring at his computer screen. There was another message from CarrieKILLAH. He accepts the invite to start a voice chat with them.

CarrieKILLAH:

You’re in luck Dylan.

Dylan:

Not really. My fiancée is almost dead because of you. I don’t consider that luck.

CarrieKILLAH:

I decided not to kill her.

Dylan:

Great. I did what you said. I didn’t go to the police. I’m starting to think that you’re not going to come through for me. I don’t think you’re real. I think this a hoax.

CarrieKILLAH:

Don’t push me!

Dylan:

Then prove it! Show me who you are.

CarrieKILLAH:

I’m outside.

The voice chat ended. The power in his room shut off. He was alone in the dark. Dylan quickly ran for a flash light. He turns it on and looks for his phone. A rock is thrown through the window and almost hits him. He ducks to the ground. Then he heard the lock on the door open.

Dylan:

Is that you? Have you come to finish me off?

Silence.

Dylan:

I’m right here! Forget Carrie. Come kill me. You’ve wanted to get back at me and make me crazy. Good job.

He heard footsteps.

Dylan:

I still don’t think you’re real! I think you’re a fluke.

Dylan swung his flashlight around and saw CarrieKILLAH dressed in a cloak with their white mask. He put the flashlight in their face.

Dylan:

Take the mask off!

CarrieKILLAH pulls out a knife.

Dylan:

What’s that? The knife you used to stab Carrie with?

CarrieKILLAH shakes their head yes.

Dylan:

If you want to kill me. I think I at least deserve to know who you are and why you did it!

(screaming)

SHOW ME YOUR FACE!

CarrieKILLAH takes their mask off. It falls to the ground. Dylan was shocked to see who was standing before him. His shock turned into confusion.

Dylan:

Nan?

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Ooh so is Blake really the after or is she just saying that?

Damn the stuff with CC was crazy.

Uh-oh worried about Bobbie.

I liked the little scene between London and Blake.

WOW great reveal at the end. :)

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I felt the cliffhanger endings where you had to wait for the next episode was become redundant that I wanted the reveal to be a double cliffhanger. This way there's two (possibly three if you include Tracie) that could be CarrieKILLAH. This plot was something that I came up with five years ago. I always wanted to do it.

C.C.'s stunt reminded me of Edge of Night. She was so desperate like Emily Michaels was back in 1981. Only C.C. got a little more violent.

All I know is with three episodes left there seems to be more drama building up!

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Wow I am truly shocked its nan. Well I dont think its her if shes in court. I am really looking forward to see how u tie everything up. A good shock indeed. I can wait to see how this plays out

Agnes nixon always said make em wait one more day.

I really wondred what Anna Lee was going to do on the stand. I had to laugh when Nan told her tothink of flowers and pink skies.

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