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Episode 84: Confessed Too Late


Matt P.

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Previously on Point Palace:

- Sky senses that Ava's in danger so she breaks into her room after Ava doesn't answer her phone. She finds Ava almost

drowning in the bath tub so she saves her.

- Alley and John try apologizing to Dylan and they find that Carrie is awake but not so mentally stable.

- Carlos watched his acceptance speech for winning outstanding newcomer in a drama. He actually taped it to bring back to Jenny, however C.C. called Henry to make sure she could borrow a video camera for her website. He was weary but agreed to it.

- Alexia talks one on one with Owen about why she keeps things from people. He demands to know everything that she has been

keeping from him because he knows something is up. She then tells him that their mother has breast cancer.

- Outside of Owen's room, Ginny tortures herself on wheather or not she should see Owen. Before she leaves she runs into

Tanisha. The two exchange words and then a cat fight happens that is broken up by Alexia and a nurse.

- Before the press conference that Blake has set up to talk about the aftermath of the explosion, Bryan pays a reporter to grill him on everything including, Nan Sheridan and how Blake was a main suspect. Things begin to get heated when the young journalist does it, only Will walks up to the podium to discuss Lenvy. It only makes Blake look better as he sympathy sizes with Will.

- When Ginny calms down while working at the Cafe, she meets Nate. He can tell that something is on her mind but she is kind

of smug with him. The two strike up a nice conversation and Nate asks her out to have more fun.

- At an after party at a hot night club, Carlos calls it a night after drinking just a little too much so C.C. takes him back to his hotel room and puts on a red wig to pretend like she's Jenny. The two sleep together and C.C. records it.

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Episode 85:

Confessed Too Late

Executive Story Consultant & Creator:

Matt Politylo

Logo Designer:

Mary Zimmerman

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(Carlos wakes up. His head is pounding him. It was one of those feelings where he thought the previous night was a dream, but it

definitely was not. C.C. then walks in with a cup of tea for him. She is dressed in a lily flowered short robe.)

C.C:

Morning sunshine.

Carlos:

(Groggy)

What are you doing in here?

C.C:

You're looking at me like I'm pointing a gun at you. Which I'm not.

Carlos:

I just want to know why you're in my room!

C.C:

Can't a girl walk in with a cup of tea for a friend? It's the neighbourly thing to do.

Carlos:

Thank you.

C.C:

No problem. I practically took care of you last night. You must have the worst headache.

Carlos:

Thanks. I don't even remember drinking that much. It just all of a sudden hit me. I do remember having a good dream though. I dreamt that Jenny was in my room. And we were making-

(Carlos pauses and realizes that he was going in to too much detail.)

Carlos:

Never mind.

C.C:

Dreams are good. Maybe I shouldn't tell you about mine.

(joking)

A lot of them involve you.

Carlos:

We already went over that.

(Carlos gets out of bed to see that he is unexposed. He places his hands over his crotch and hops back in bed. C.C. smiles in delight.)

Carlos:

Why am I naked?

C.C:

Just in case you were going to throw up I took your clothes off.

Carlos:

You took my clothes off? What else did you do?

C.C:

You could only imagine what was going through my head when I saw yours, but I'm not a vile person. I respected you. I just made sure you were awake and alive. You had so much that it was scary.

Carlos:

That's very sweet. If I wasn't going out with Jenny, you would for sure be on my number one list.

C.C:

You probably say that to all the girls.

(Carlos smiles. He then wraps himself up with the covers to go over to his closet to grab some clothes.)

C.C:

By the way. Jenny is very lucky. You really are the complete package. And then some.

(C.C. looks over at the tape that had sealed their fate. She begins to think of what would be on it. C.C. and Carlos not

acting out a love scene. It was for real. Sort of.)

C.C:

(To Carlos)

Carlos before we leave to go back to Cody, don't forget that tape you made for Jenny. She's going to be so happy to see it!

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(At The Palace Café, Ginny serves Ava a steaming hot cup of coffee.)

Ginny:

There you go. Have a good day Ava.

Ava:

(Sarcastic)

Like that will happen.

(Grateful)

Thank you Ginny.

(Ginny smiles and exits. Sky comes in and sits down across from her.)

Sky:

It's nice to see you up and out of bed. Let's see...you almost drowned in a tub, probably almost had your stomach pumped, and you may be ignoring me for some odd reason.

Ava:

Yes. Yes. And hell no.

Sky:

You seriously had me worried. It's not like me to break into a room, but I thought that I had good reason to. I could sense the danger you were in.

Ava:

Thank you. Seriously I owe so much for what you did.

(Ava's cell phone rings.)

Ava:

Please excuse me.

Sky:

Go right ahead.

(Ava answers her cell phone.)

Dean:

Miss Cecileneli, it's Dean Halt.

Ava:

Mister Halt, thank you for calling me back so soon.

Dean:

Just wanted to confirm a time in which you will be in your dorm room so that I could fix the lock.

Ava:

What is your schedule like in the next hour?

Dean:

Looking good.

Ava:

Then I'll see you then. Thank you Mister Halt.

(Ava hangs up her cell phone and turns her attention back to Sky.)

Ava:

Sorry about that. So, where were we? You were about to ask me a bunch of questions.

Sky:

Yes. I mean no. Look…I want to pay for your door. It was my fault that I broke the lock so I'll pay for it. I know who Dean Halt is.

Ava:

You really don't have to. I just don't understand why you're doing all of this for me! I'm some sort of complete stranger but you end up saving my life. That makes me indebted to you but we just met.

Sky:

It sounds like we're going out and that you're telling me to slow things down. Which is why I want to know why you're ignoring me.

Is it because I'm a lesbian? I have lost friends over it. Except for guy friends, who are either also gay or just think that it's hot.

Ava:

You seriously are the best friend to me in the world right now. I just want to be left alone. That doesn’t mean that I’m ignoring you so I hope you don’t take it as that. See you later Sky.

(Ava stands up to leave. Sky grabs her wrist.)

Sky:

Before you go, there's one thing that I want to know.

Ava:

Depends upon what it is.

Sky:

What in the hell would make you drink as much as you did? You told me that you used to be alcoholic. Then you go and almost kill yourself. Why? Why would you give in?

(Ava lets her hand go. She doesn't respond and just shakes hear head in frustration. Ava exits leaving Sky with an uneasy feeling.)

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(In Owen's hospital room, Alexia comes in with a vase full of flowers. She puts it on the table next to him.)

Alexia:

You're probably not happy to see me.

Owen:

Why would you say that? I love having a liar for a sister.

Alexia:

How does me not telling you something label me as a liar? I finally told you a family secret and the reason why I didn’t tell you was because I was worried about your reaction.

Owen:

Yeah, that would give me a reason to be pretty pissed off and not happy to see you.

Alexia:

Then you have every right to feel that way towards me.

Owen:

This has to stop Lexi. I'm not the only person that you hide things from. You hide things from our own mother, who you say is now suffering from breast cancer!

Alexia:

Have you talked to her lately?

Owen:

No I haven't had the time. I've been locked up in this box of a hell hole for god knows how long.

Alexia: (mumbling)

She doesn't know that you're in here.

Owen:

(outraged)

What? Mom doesn't know that I'm in the hospital?!

Alexia:

I couldn't tell her because she has enough problems as it is.

Owen:

Lexi you're the one with a problem.

Alexia:

I can tell that you're hearing is getting better.

Owen:

It's not. I've been practicing reading lips and relying on the ear piece.

Alexia:

Read my lips. You can hate me but I'm family!

(Tanisha walks in with a smile on her face which quickly dissolves when she notices the tense scene that she walked in on.)

Owen:

And you!

Tanisha:

What did I do?

Owen:

Why were you fighting with Ginny?

Tanisha:

That bitch has no right to be here.

Owen:

Well that bitch happens to be my friend.

Tanisha:

The past can very much come up again! She needs to realize that you two are over and done with.

Owen:

Why do you act so heartless when it comes to her?

Tanisha:

So looking out for you makes me heartless? The both of you have strong feelings for one another. She had to be told what's up

and that's exactly what I did.

(Alexia stands up.)

Alexia:

I'll leave you two be.

Owen:

NO! I can't believe that the two girls who I love most in my life have been deceiving me!

(Both girls are shocked by what he said.)

Owen:

And when in the hell am I ever going to get out of here?!

Tanisha:

The doctors said soon. Very soon.

Owen:

Those words have been said so many times that I should have it tattooed on my ass!

Alexia:

(scolding)

Owen. Everyone is trying to help you. Stop being such a jerk.

Owen:

Helping? Yeah well you both have weird ways of showing it.

(to Alexia)

You hold valuable information from me.

(to Tanisha)

And you want to get an assault charge! It’s ridiculous!

(Owen takes Alexia's vase full of flowers and throws it against the wall. It smashes into tiny shards of glass.)

Owen:

I want you both to leave my room. Get a nurse to come in here to sweep this mess up. Just leave.

Tanisha:

But-

Owen:

No buts! GO!

(Tanisha exits with a confused and disappointed look on her face. Alexia begins to leave but then turns around to scream at him.)

Alexia:

(hollering)

I hope that you hear this loud and clear! If you want mom to know that you're in the hospital, go ahead and tell her. Don't come crawling back to me after she has a stroke and dies!

(Alexia leaves Owen's hospital room, slamming the door behind her.)

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(During the same evening, Nick stands behind Jenny as she uses her keys to open her room. She walks into it with such relief.)

Nick:

That smile suggests that you're happy to be home.

Jenny:

It sure is. By the way my mother called the hospital and I made sure that she knew I was back and okay. To think that I have my

return all because of you.

Nick:

Well, I didn't do that much. Just saved your life practically.

(Nick smiles at Jenny. He shuts the door behind him. Jenny puts her arms around his neck and hugs him. She looks deeply into his

eyes and kisses him.)

Jenny:

That's what I told her.

Nick:

Now that you're home, what do you want to do first? Eat something? Watch TV?

Jenny:

More like take a long hot shower. You don't mind do you?

Nick:

Not at all babe.

(Jenny exits the living room to go into her bathroom. Nick begins to look around.)

Nick:

Too bad Carlos. Your little dream job helps me win. Jenny's mine.

(Nick notices a tape that is hanging out in one of her shelf's. It is marked ‘Jenny, watch this episode of Blue Crystal...Love

Carlos.' Nick pops in the tape into the VCR, turns on the T.V., lowers the volume and watches.)

Nick:

Boring!

(Nick fast forwards towards the end of the tape when he notices Carlos. It makes him cringe to see his worst enemy on television.)

Carlos:

Melanie you can't stop me.

C.C.:

Is there anything that I can do to make you change your mind?

Carlos:

No. I have to leave Greenwich.

C.C.:

But you have me! Miegel you have our love! Please don't go.

(A tear falls from C.C.'s eye. Carlos hides back a tear. He then walks up to C.C.'s character and kisses her passionately.

He then turns around and walks out the door. The dramatic music plays as Carlos's character exits out the door.)

C.C.:

(screaming)

MIEGEL!!!

(Jenny walks into the living room with a robe on.)

Jenny:

What are you watching?

(Nick quickly turns off the television and ejects the tape.)

Jenny:

What do you got there?

Nick:

Nothing. Just was watching an episode of a show that you once were on.

Jenny:

You were telling me about that.

Nick:

It made you happy but in a way it didn't.

Jenny:

Was I a good actress?

Nick:

Of course you were.

Jenny:

I was wondering if you wanted to join me in the shower. We could make it extra steamy.

Nick:

I'll be in later.

Jenny:

Okay.

(Jenny exits again. Nick ejects the tape and glares at it.)

Nick:

We couldn't let you leak out the fact that Carlos did something nice for his...well I should say...my girl friend. This tape

probably has some sort of sentimental meaning to it. Too bad

Jenny will never find out what that is.

(Nick listens in and hears the shower running. Surely enough Jenny couldn't hear a thing he thinks to himself. With all the raging strength he had in him, Nick destroys the tape by smashing it against the wall, kicking it, and making sure that it could never be watched.)

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(Ginny takes a deep breath before she knocks on Nate's hotel room door. She nervously fixes her hair. He answers with a smile on

his face.)

Nate:

Why Miss Coy, I never expected to hear from you again.

Ginny:

Then why did you go to all that trouble to give me your number? And a little hint to where you're staying.

Nate:

Guess it's all in the chase.

(Ginny smiles and walks in. Everything was neat and tidy. She looks around.)

Ginny:

So do you live here?

Nate:

Yeah. I own the hotel.

Ginny:

Get out of here!

Nate:

Just kidding. This has been my home away from home for the past month or so.

Ginny:

Why not get an apartment on campus. The dorm rooms are very nice.

Nate:

I really don't know if I will be staying in Cody for much longer.

Ginny:

Then why did you come to this town? Was it to pick up girls?

Nate:

No. It was much more than that. A good friend of mine got a promotion and I want to make a living so I have to weigh my options.

Ginny:

You dropped everything to see a wealthy friend? Wow. That takes guts.

Nate:

I'm a risk taker. It's what I did when I saw you.

(Nate moves in and places his hands over her waist. It catches Ginny off guard.)

Nate:

You still seem to have something or someone on your mind.

Ginny:

Yeah. I do.

Nate:

You're still letting me hold on to you.

Ginny:

Yeah. I am.

Nate:

Let me make you forget all about whoever he is.

Ginny:

You can. You really can.

(Nate leans in and tenderly kisses her. Instead of feeling uncomfortable or confused, it felt right for her, so she kisses him back.)

Ginny:

I hope that you don't leave soon.

Nate:

With a girl like you...the thought would never cross my mind. You should stay the night.

Ginny:

We don't even know each other.

Nate:

Then we can get to know each other more than we already do. If you really want to forget about the idiot who you're thinking of,

then you should sleep with me.

Ginny:

That's not really who I am. I usually don't sleep on the first date. It's un-

(Nate kisses Ginny again.)

Ginny:

On one condition.

Nate:

Anything.

Ginny:

This will mark a relationship between us. That's the deal. An honest relationship is all I’m asking for.

(Nate knows in the back of his mind that what he was doing is sort of wrong but he was about to get laid. That was all that

mattered to him.)

Nate:

Of course Ginny. What a way to start a nice relationship.

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(Carrie is moving around fine in her hospital room. Dylan sits in a chair next to her. It's as if he's waiting for something...or someone.)

Carrie:

Can I go outside to play? It's such a nice day outside.

Dylan:

No. You have to stay in here until the doctors come.

Carrie:

I want to play!

Dylan:

Too bad.

(There is a knock on Carrie's hospital door.)

Carrie:

(excited)

Ooohh! Can I answer it? Can I? Please? Can I?

Dylan:

Just calm down.

(Dylan opens the door. Dr. Quarr walks in with an older, slim waited, sandy blond haired lady named Dr. Elizabeth Reed by his side.)

Dylan:

Thank you for coming doctor. Or should I say, doctors.

Nick:

Do you have any questions for me Dylan?

Dylan:

Can Carrie be released soon?

Nick:

She seems to have been recovering. Her minor cuts and scrapes will heal, with hopefully no scars, and the back of her head has been elevated with ice packets for when she was in deep sleep. Carrie will be released shortly.

Dylan:

Thank you doctor.

Elizabeth:

Doctor Quarr, you wouldn't mind if I had some alone time with my patient, would you?

Nick:

Not at all.

(Nick smiles at the both of them as he exits.)

Dylan:

Thank you for coming.

Elizabeth:

You're paying me so why wouldn't I? We can't get paid if we don't get up in the morning and go to our employers.

Dylan:

Nice way to think of it.

Elizabeth:

Plus, Doctor Mary Ralma said you were in dire need of a psychologist. How is your mother doing by the way?

Dylan:

It's been a while since I talked to her.

Elizabeth:

Maybe Mary would know. She just switched back to the hospital to where your mother Lee is working at.

(Dr. Reed walks over to Carrie. The talk must have bored Carrie to death because she was resting.)

Elizabeth:

She's a very cute girl. How did this happen?

Dylan:

The gala explosion.

Elizabeth:

Then where do I come into play?

(Carrie turns her attention to Elizabeth and Dylan. She is sort of scared as everyone looks at her.)

Carrie:

Where's my mommy and daddy?

Dylan:

(to Dr. Reed)

She thinks that she's ten years old.

Carrie:

You again! You're so weird. And creepy.

Elizabeth:

(to Dylan)

It seems as if I'll have a lot of work to do then.

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(Alley and John spend time in Alley's room. They watch a news story about Point Palace.)

Reporter:

The press conference that was to be looked at as a good thing for President Hammerton, turned out to be in his favor after

lending a helping hand to a grieving student. It is still unclear how the fire was started, but officials believe that it was arson, and that Hammerton had nothing to do with it.

(John turns off the television.)

Alley:

I was watching that.

John:

Blake saves the day yet again. Good for him. Line up his ass so that we all can kiss it.

Alley:

It's good to see that he's getting the proper recognition that he deserves. To think that someone would want to try and frame him

would be the likes of-

John:

Nan Sheridan. The greatest bitch that ever lived.

Alley:

Yeah. She's supposedly dead by the way. However, I don't believe it. Somehow I can imagine her sitting on a beach, with a cell phone in her hand, calling all the shots to try and ruin Blake's life.

John:

Can we get off the subject of the Nan and Blake saga. It’s like opening the door to three years ago.

Alley:

Oh so you want to talk about London?

John:

That’s the same door. So no. I don't want to talk about anyone but us.

Alley:

What about us? We just moved back into the swing of kissing. Believe me, that's a huge step.

(John smiles. He puts his hand in her face to cup her cheek.)

Alley:

I forgot how nice it is to have you hold me.

John:

And I forgot how sweet it is to know that I can protect you from all evil.

Alley:

Like how you defended me to Dylan and Carrie. You could have pulled your back on me. I probably would of if I were you.

(John kisses Alley's forehead.)

John:

Those two brought us back together. There's no way that I would turn my back on you. What did I tell you before? Let's only think of you and me!

Alley:

Of course.

(Alley and John kiss each other intensely. It felt so right between them. It felt as if nothing had changed. It was almost as if they hadn't broken up over London getting pregnant and Alley having her affair with Dylan. They were back together. Alley stops kissing John.)

John:

You stopped. What's wrong?

Alley:

Should we really be moving so fast?

John:

Yes. Let's make love. Just like the way we used to. Right here. Right now. No regrets what so ever.

(Alley grabs onto John's shirt. She lifts it up as the two continue to kiss. John smacks Alley's bottom and then picks her up in his arms. He kisses her neck a bit as she takes off her shirt. The two then make their way into the bedroom to continue.)

Alley:

By the way, don’t ever say making love again. I prefer the other four letter word.

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(The next morning, London begins to follow Blake across campus. He is walking like he is on a mission.)

London:

You didn't tell me anything. The only words you said were follow me. Where in the hell are we going?

Blake:

You'll know in a few minutes.

(Blake doesn't stop walking when he pulls out his cell phone and calls a very annoyed Bryan.)

Blake:

Good morning. I hope that I didn't wake you and if I did, well I'm not sorry.

Bryan:

(groggy)

What do you want?

Blake:

I want you to explain something to me.

Bryan:

What?

Blake:

If you were the one who said that Nan is dead, then why did I get a call from the head of the morgue to identify a body of someone

that looks like Nan Sheridan.

Bryan:

I don't know! Maybe it's because he wants you to tell him that it's her and that she really is dead.

Blake:

Or maybe it's you two trying to play sick games with my head.

Bryan:

Maybe. Look, she's gone. I don't know what else to tell you. If you really want to bring her back then go take up voodoo or something. Okay? Goodbye.

(Bryan hangs up with Blake. Blake stops when he gets to Nan's

room.)

London:

This is Nan's room!

Blake:

Yep.

London:

Why are we at Nan's room?

Blake:

To see if she really is dead or if she's just screwing around.

London:

Blake this is insane. She's gone and out of our lives. What are you planning on doing, bring her back?

Blake:

No, but I need to prove that she's faking her death. Hell she did it before when she made everyone think that she was killed

from her little boat explosion accident that almost made you miscarriage!

London:

Then what would stop her from this explosion.

Blake:

Exactly.

London:

This is breaking and entering.

Blake:

No it's not. We have rightful purpose. Besides, I'm the president. In a way, if I sense that anything's wrong, I'm

allowed to investigate.

(Blake opens the door. It wasn't locked. Blake and London quickly go inside. It looked as if it had not been touched.)

London:

There's no one here. Are you happy? Let's go.

Blake:

Wait.

(Blake begins to walk around. London was scared that someone was

going to walk in, someone like Nan.)

Blake:

There's something here. I can sense it.

London:

There's nothing here.

(Blake opens the door to Nan’s bedroom and his eyes light up.)

Blake:

Jackpot!

London:

What is it Blake? What did you find?

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Again wow, A smile is on my face as I read those final lines. Lord have Mercy could it be.?

AGAIN Matt another crispy episode. So VERY well put together and the dialog was was Crispy too. You know me so let me begin

I LOVED the Alexia/Owen/Tanisha scenes. So much was happening. I could feel everyone's point of view and feelings. I am anxiously waiting to see where O/T go from here. And GINNY NO!!. It's like I feel her, you know wanting to get it on with a hunk esp being rejected by T/ and O kinda but He is going to play her and I hate to see her get hurt. ( I care about her) LOL. BUT I got a feeling she is not to be messed with. I feel like she got this hidden inner rage or maybe I am just tripping. I love the character Of Nate BTW.

You are setting the C/N/J triangle up nicely. I was already a big fan of Nick and so glad he is front and center. I cannot wait until Carlos comes back and sees what Nick has done.

I LOVED HOW DYLAN WAS TALKING TO CARRIE AND THE THINGS SHE WAS SAYING BACK TO HIM. It's great and funny for me. And I am bit surprised at how, I don't know what I would call it, Elizabeth's aggressive tone so far. At least that's what I got from her esp when she said the comment about the money.

I am SO GLAD Alley/and Jon had that love scene. That was long over do and did wonders for them as a couple. I really like them together.

Again Matt I love PP and I was worried about how season 4 was going to play out( you know, all my favs were leaving) but I no longer worry. I see your direction and I love it. Though I still miss my Trella and Lenvy, and PP is still good if not better with these new characters. Your story lines are really good this season too. Keep the episodes coming.

Hey something to throw at you, Ever think about a Elizabeth, and Blake's parent's in a triangle. Imgaine all the dynamics between all those stars.

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