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Episode 72


JAYJAY

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Kendall OR Greenlee...  

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  1. 1. Which Character Do You Prefer?

    • Kendall
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Some serious conversations in Springfield..........


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Cheer Camp:

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Maureen is stretchiing.
Vi walks over, "Hi Maureen."
She smiles, "Hi. I didn't know you were a cheerleader."
Vi nods, "Oh yes. I did at my old school. I'm hoping to be head cheerleader."
Maureen grins, "Oh so am I! Good luck."
Maureen goes to get her stuff.
Vi whispers to herself, "Yep. You too."
Then she follows her.


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Spaulding Mansion:

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Marah is sitting in the study.
Edmund walks in, "Are you waiting to see you Aunt?"
Marah stands up, "Hello Edmund. I was wondering if you could help me with something?"
He nods, "Sure why not? It's the least I could do considering that soon you and your family will be out of business."
Marah scoffs, "Okay. Whatever. I'm doing some research on clothing styles of the early 80's. I was wondering if you had any old pictures of you from back then."
He pulls out a photo album and tosses it to her, "There. You can keep that crap. I have no use for it."
She opens the book. She sees a picture of Edmund. She pulls out another picture then looks at him in shock.


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Towers:

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Ava approaches Danny Santos, "Hi Danny. I'm Ava Lewis."
Danny shakes her hand, "Oh right. Your married to Bill."
She nods, "So, I have a business proposition for you."
He is confused, "Um, what did you have in mind?"
She suggest that they sit.
They grab a table.
Ava pulls out some papers, "I believe you owned a club called Millenium?"
He nods, "Yes, I closed it down."
She grins, "Well I'd like to open it back up."
Danny is confused.


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Beacon:

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Bill enters Olivia's Suite.
Olivia walks over, "Hello."
Emma comes over, "Hey Dad!"
Bill smiles, "Hey Honey."
Olivia holds her daughters hand, "Emma, your Dad and I need to talk to you."
The three sit down.
Emma looks up, "What is this about?"
Bill sighs, "Honey now this is serious but we don't want you to worry."
Olivia looks at her daughter, "Emma we need to talk about your father."
Emma looks to Bill but he shakes his head, "Not me Baby."
Emma realizes, "Oh you mean, Phillip. My Biological Father."
Olivia nods, "Yes."
Emma is confused, "What about him?"
Olivia holds her daughters hand, "He isn't dead honey. Phillip is alive."
Emma is in shock.


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Cedars:

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Dinah and Mallet walk into a room.
They have there pregnancy classes.
Dinah smiles, "I'm so excited."
Mallet looks around, "I'm nervous. I mean what are they going to tell us that we don't already know. I mean we know how it got there and how it's coming out."
Dinah shoves him.
The two hear their names being called out.
They look over to see Natalia sitting with Gus, "Dinah! Over here."
The two walk over.
Gus smiles, "Isn't this fun Mallet?"
Mallet laughs, "Oh yeah. A real blast."
Dinah sits by Natalia, "I'm so glad that I know someone here."
The four get ready.
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Company:

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Rocky walks in.
He approaches Coop, "Hey."
Coop puts down the plates he's carrying and hugs his brother, "I'm so sorry Rocky."
Rocky smiles, "It's okay."
Coop shakes his head, "No it's not, I've been the worst brother in the entire world."
Rocky reassures him, "You are the best brother that a guy could ask for. I've missed you."
Coop nods, "I've missed you too. Where have you been?"
Rocky sits, "We've been staying with Reva."
Coop sits with him, "We? You and Shayne?"
Rocky nods, "Is that okay with you?"
Coop sighs, "It's none of my business. I love you no matter what."
The two hug again.

PART TWO:

Cheer Camp:
The girls are getting together for a pyramid.
A girl stands in front, "Okay who should go on top?"
Maureen raises her hand, "What about Vi? She could do it."
Vi gets excited but is quickly angered by the sound of people dismissing the idea.
A girl shouts from the crowd, "You go Maureen!"
Eventually it is decided for Maureen to go on top.
Vi is right below her.
Maureen stands at the top and raises her hands up.
Vi's anger erupts as she pulls her hands from Maureen who goes flying to ground making a very rough sound as she hits the ground.

Cedars:
Everyone is breaking from the group to eat.
Dinah questions Natalia, "So how bad does it really hurt?"
Natalia sighs, "Well imagine the worst cramps you've ever had."
Dinah nods, "Oh."
Natalia looks at her, "Now multiply that by a thousand. And imagine someone ripping you open during it."
Dinah whimpers at the thought.
Mallet and Gus are looking at the fake babies.
Mallet is holding one, "Wow they really go into detail. I mean it even has a..."
Gus shakes his head, "Well I'm more concerned with the actual kid."
Mallet puts it down, "Yeah me too. This is great I mean the doctors told me I might never be able to have children."
Gus nods, "Me too."
Mallet looks over, "So you got Natalia pregnant without even trying? Wow that is a miracle."
Gus smiles, "Yep our little miracle baby."

Company:
Coop is talking with Rocky, "So when did you know?"
Rocky smiles, "Well I realized it when I was in middle school. But looking back on my childhood, I realize that I always was. I didn't admit it until I met Shayne. We fell in love. I lost my virginity to him."
Coop nods, "Well that's nice. So how do you know?"
Rocky laughs, "I love this one! Uh... well let's just say that naked men have the same effect on me as naked women do on you."
Coop sits back embarrassingly, "Oh."
Rocky giggles, "Seriously, it's so much more with Shayne. He gets me and what we have is real. I can't imagine spending my life with anyone else."
Coop smiles, "That's how I feel about Ashlee. I'm happy for you."
The two hug.
Rocky sighs, "Is Marina okay?"
Coop nods, "Yeah. She is with Danny Santos again. Which I'm not happy about. But you know she might still be uncomfortable. Shayne was her ex."
Rocky knows that his relationship will never be what it used to be.

Towers:
Ava shows Danny her ideas, "I've had a lot of time to plan. I've been on bed rest."
Danny nods, "Are you supposed to still be on bed rest?"
She sighs, "What are you Bill? I know my body and my baby better than any doctor."
Danny laughs, "Okay. Fine. Well your plans look great but I'm curious as to why you want to go into business with me."
She looks at him, "Well I had my own club, called Ava's, but my mother closed it. She said it go with the theme of her hotel. But that's not the real reason."
Danny gets curious, "Okay what's the real reason?"
She rolls her eyes, "She is jealous that I have Bill and she doesn't. Now enough about me. Do we have a deal?"
Danny reluctantly puts out his hand and she shakes it.

Beacon:
Emma stands up, "What are you guys talking about?"
Bill sighs, "Baby, we need you to be aware that he is here, that he's in Springfield."
Olivia holds her daughters hand, "Emma. Listen to me. I understand that he is a part of you but you can't not contact him. We will get a restraining order and he will not be allowed to be near you. Okay?"
Emma gets nervous, "What does he want from me?"
Bill shakes his head, "Nothing. He just wants to be a part of your life."
Emma is confused, "Is that such a bad thing?"
Olivia holds her daughter, "Phillip is sick. He did very bad things to us when he was in town. You need to stay away from him. Understand?"
Emma nods.
The three share a hug.

Spaulding Mansion:
Marah walks over to Edmund, "Oh my God! You! You were at the party at the Embassy! You were there with Jeffrey and Olivia."
Edmund's face turns pale, "Marah I want you out now!"
She is in shock, "This makes so much sense! You found Jeffrey passed out by Olivia! You told her that he took advantage of her. Why? If he didn't do it then who did?"
Edmund shouts, "Nobody okay! Is that what you wanted to hear Marah huh?!?"
Marah keeps questioning him, "Then how did she get pregnant?"
Edmund calls, "Security!!!"
Marah grabs him, "How Edmund? If you don't tell me then I'll go to Olivia myself!"
He stares at her, "Olivia and I were friends as teenagers. I had a crush on her. I told her that she was hurt by some guy so she would lean on me and later we....."
Marah shakes her head, "What?"
Edmund looks at her, "We made love."
Marah gasp, "So it's true? Jeffrey isn't Ava's Father is he Edmund? You are!!!"

PREVIEWS:
Shayne goes to see his Dad
Vi gets her wish
Natalia and Dinah bond
Ashlee has a great opportunity
Olivia attempts to push Bill away
Marah breaks the news to Jeffrey!

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WOW - "MARAH DREW" waist no time to uncover the truth; and man confronted the host of the secrets was pure Gold....

Shyne and Coop shared a great moment, wish Jana was here to have see that, and I am sure she is looking back at them right now... and stand proud of her sons.

Very good episode man.... Love it!

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Marah is certantly digging up a lot of secrets!!!

This news could be tough for everyone involved.

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Hey ML!

Once the school year for students starts up we'll start to see more of Vi and Maureen.

The Natalia/Gus and Dinah/Mallet scenes were fun to write. I always want something light and fun to balance things out.

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Hey guy I really love your seires but sometimes I really feel that u should go deeper into some stories. Like Ashlee and her buliam i would hae like to see that go farhter and shayne's sexuality still should have been bigger and more in depth allof a sudden josh is cool with it. It would have been nice to u go deeper into ti but it's rolly cuz the cast is too big and dont have time which i do understand. just writer to writer comments but i will say ur scenes r getting so much better and they are more deeper. great job. I would not even mind writing a scne or two for this series which i love very much

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I agree. This summer really has been complicated. Which is why I have my cast cuts. Also I have some more happening this fall.

I'm gonna work on going deeper.

You may have noticed I made my episodes longer. So now I will be able to use more characters in episodes. And as I said, a lot will change in the fall. :) I have a lot of ideas. Such as having stories involve more characters. That way more characters get more air time and there aren't as many stories floating around.

Thank you for your offer to help write. I have an idea that I'd like you to think about. Okay so I post episodes on Monday's and Friday's and those two episodes always take place on the same day. Now I've been considering that every now and then I'll post a special episode on Wednesday. A shorter episode base on a certain storyline. It could help me go more in depth and get a closer look at characters and couples. Let me know what you think because I'd love to have you help me with them.

BTW just keep in mind that I write my episodes a month in advanced. So right now I'm working on September episodes. ;)

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Sweet Jay, i wish i could keep my seires written that far in advance. I plan to for season 3 though. Yes I have noticed you scesns have gotten a lot longer and it s great. I love the Wed idea as well. I think it would be sweet actually.

Sounds like u got a good plan and i can't wait to see how it all evolves

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