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ANOTHER WORLD 213 Carl gets some mysterious information from Lorna




Carlblogentry-14971-0-24371400-1434503111_th gets some mysterious information from Lorna

Written By:  C. Nathaniel Richardson

Consultants:  ML Cooks and A. Washington Beeby



John Hudson is in his office and Brianna Jameson walks in.

Brianna:  Hi Dr. Hudson?

John:  Yeah come on in.  

Brianna:  HR sent me.

John:  Right.  I like to meet all the candidates, well, as many as I can.

Brianna:  Right.

John:  So I went over your resume, and you did your clinicals at Mass. General?

Brianna:  Yes.  It was a great experience.  I learned a great deal.

John:  So what brings you from Boston to Bay City?

Brianna:  Boston is a such a big city.  I’m a small town kinda gal you know?

John:  Bay City General though?

Brianna:  Yeah I...heard a lot about this hospital.  Never a dull moment.  I think you were treated here for malaria.

John:  By a guy who shouldn’t have been practicing.

Brianna:  Yeah I uh...heard about Fax Newman, too.  

John:  I see you’ve done your research.

Brianna:  Yes sir I did.  

John:  And since you’ve done your homework, you know that we never have enough good nurses.  

Brianna:  Very hard to come by in this field.

John:  You’re exactly right.  There’s been some turnover here and we need somebody who’s gonna stick around.

Brianna:  Hopefully Bay City will be a place that I’d like to stay in.  A good job could factor into that.

John:  A job I hope that you can start today.

Brianna:  Today?  Does this mean I….?

John:  That’s if you want it.

Brianna:  I’ll take it!  Thank you. I will make my presence felt here.   I promise you that.



OUTSIDE OF JOHN’S OFFICE...Brianna makes a phone call…

Brianna:  Mama.  It’s me.  Yeah I got the job.



Amanda and Rachel walk into Matt’s office.  Matt is sitting at his desk.

Matt:  Hey mom.

Rachel:  Hi honey.

Matt:  Amanda how was the board meeting?

Amanda walks slowly Matt’s desk and puts papers on it.

Amanda:  It was...interesting to say the least.

Matt:  What is this?

Amanda:  The contract.

Matt:  For the merger?

Amanda:  Yes.

Matt:  Are sure you can trust Iris?

Rachel:  I sure wouldn’t.

Amanda:  That’s why this contract was drawn up.  She has to agree to be the co-CEO of the new company.

Rachel:  You’d be having to watch your back so she doesn’t stab you in it.

Amanda:  She said she’d think about it, but my offer has an expiration date.  

Rachel:  You’ve done well Amanda.

Amanda:  She needs the connections that we have to grow her brand.

Matt:  What are you gonna do when Iris tries to betray you?

Rachel:  Carl and I have come up with a plan.  Iris won’t betray you.

Matt:  What about Paulina and Sandy?

Amanda:  My sister and my other brother are okay with it.   I’ve gotten their written agreements.  I need yours now.  

Matt:  Well you know you’re also going to need the board to sign off on it, too.

Amanda:  That’s the problem.  One of the board members retired effective immediately.  

Matt:  So we can’t execute the deal until we have all seven board members’ signatures.

Amanda:  First we gotta find another board member.

Matt gets up and and blinks his eyes.

Amanda:  Matt what’s wrong?

Matt:  Nothing I just feel a little...hungry.

Matt tries to walk and stumbles.

Rachel:  Something’s wrong with you.  We need to get you to the hospital.

Matt:  Mom.

Amanda:  Mom’s right.  You need to get checked out.



Carl opens the front door and Lorna walks in with an envelope.

Lorna:  I got it.

Lorna gives him the envelope and Carl reads its contents.

Carl:  This is exactly what I was hoping for.   Thank you.

Lorna:  Are you...ready for your party?

Carl:  As ready as I’ll ever be.  How’s Devin Lucas adjusting?

Lorna:  I don’t think he’s having any problems whatsoever getting acclimated to Bay City.





Devin Lucas opens the door and Iris walks in.

Devin Lucas:  Sorry I haven’t been in touch with you.  I went to see my dad.

Iris:  Really?  About?

Devin Lucas:  Just...just some family stuff.

Iris:  I’m really really sorry about Carl.

Devin Lucas:  Is that right?  I thought you’d be jumping for joy being that you tried to shoot him at his wedding.

Iris:  I’ve done my time for that.  It was a learning experience.

Devin Lucas:  And exactly what did you take from it?  How to be a better shot?

Iris:  I saw the pain on Rachel’s face when I heard her say he had a brain tumor, and she’s already had so much loss in her life, as have I...so yes I’m sorry that your father’s dying.  My father died, too.

Devin Lucas:  It’s tough, but I didn’t call you over here to give your fake condolences for Carl.

Iris:  Well excuse me for being concerned.

Devin Lucas:  What did you decide about Amanda’s merger proposal?




Amanda waits with Matt.

Matt:  Come on Amanda I’m not three you and mom don’t have to wait here with me.

Amanda:  Will you let me be concerned about you?  I am your sister.

Matt:  I’m fine okay.  I don’t even know why I agreed to come here.

Amanda:  Because mom and I weren’t gonna give up until you did.

A nurse walks in with a chart.

Nurse:  This is...Matthew Cory?

Matt:  Yep.

Nurse:  Is this your…

Matt:  Sister.

Nurse:  Well sister…

Amanda:  Name’s Amanda.

Nurse:  Amanda I’ll need you to wait outside.  I need to examine your brother.

Amanda:  I’ll be right out here.

Amanda leaves the room as the nurse retrieves a blood pressure strap.

Matt:  Before you poke and prod me, can I get your name?

Brianna:  Oh sorry.  Brianna.



Amanda talks to Rachel.

Rachel:  How’s Matthew?

Amanda:  Stubborn as always.  Anything on Iris yet?


Iris:  I haven’t decided yet.

Devin Lucas:  Well you need to make some type of decision because I’m sure Amanda’s offer’s not gonna stay on the table.

Iris:  If I accept this offer, KBAY could become a powerful company.

Devin Lucas:  But you and I were supposed to take over the company and make it powerful.

Iris:  You have to trust me on this.  I have a place for you in the company.

Devin Lucas:  Doesn’t it make you wonder why Amanda proposed a merger to you?  Out of the blue?

Iris:  I’m considering everything here.  

Devin Lucas:  Sounds like you’re double crossing me.

Iris:  No.  No that’s not it at all.  You have to trust me on this.  I know exactly what I intend to do.

Devin Lucas:  Which is?

Iris:  You’ll have to wait and see won’t you?

Iris leaves and Devin Lucas makes a phone call.

Devin Lucas:  Hi it’s me.

The person on the other end is Carl.

Carl:  So what happened?


Devin Lucas:  She did exactly as you said she would.


Carl:  You can’t trust her, especially when it comes to Cory Productions.   Don’t worry son, I’ll see to it that Iris will be neutralized.


Devin Lucas:  Are you at home?


Carl:  Yes...with your mother.



Carl hangs up and walks back into the living room where Lorna awaits.

Lorna:  What do you plan on doing with what I gave you?

Carl:  Don’t worry your pretty little head about it.

Lorna:  So you’re not gonna let me in on this plan?

Carl:  Not completely, but I will tell you that what’s in this envelope has been twenty years in the making.  It’s time I finally stick it to Grant Harrison.









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oooo a twist within a twist. I like it.


Brianna is sure gettin on workin fast. Wonder what has Matt getting sick. Is Brianna there to kiss it all better?


Idk if Amanda should be trusting of this deal with Iris, but I guess we will find out, but then throw in Devin who is in cahoots with Iris, but no wait, he and Carl are conspiring. I like this conglomerate of sides. Makes it very intriguing how it will all play out and who will come out on top. A very good way to tell a business story.

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Brilliant twist! Carl and Rachel getting the drop on Iris is a masterstroke. I can't wait to read how this goes down. Devin is really gonna be a major player and it's brilliant. I love this story.

Amanda, thankfully, is being protected from Iris, I wonder if she's in on it all as well. It wouldn't surprise me.

Brianna's already snuck her way into BCGH. Danger! I can't wait to see how this goes down, and see what havoc she'll wreak. So much good stuff starting to take shape here. I'm impressed, Cary.

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Great episode. I like how Devin can kinda check Iris and keep her in line. I wonder what is this big secret. I thought it was about Iris but no its about Grant. I really wonder.


I hope Matt is ok. Wasnt Iris flirting with one of these young boys out here in BC??


THe dialog was great esp in the nurse scenes. 

DId Brianna take her drug test? lol for this job?

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