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another good one!! Devin should really back off his old man but at the same time this show down needed to be had. Devn takes charge and I like that. I like Joys scenes. We got to know her a bit more. Steven is taken by her but she has a dirty secret. Felicia still messing around with that drink, I wonder if ts room temperture yet. Vicky is proably right to be hesitant on this Joy and Steven union.

I bet Miss Jesse know all about feeling like a Queen honey. He didnt feed Agnie strawberries he feed her ass grapes LMAO!!!!! Nick you kill me. Angie caught Down low Jesse thinkin about men Another good episode. I like how u really showcased the Ali/Vin story these last three shows. I want to know about Vin. WHy is he the way he is. I hope ALi is not dumb and does to meet him. I loved the flash back scene. reat detail as I could see it plang out in my mind. Very suspenseful and almost kinda scary movie ish. Esp at seeing the aent in the car. Your show is gettign darker and I just love that. I wonder if Jeremy is Bart's son and not only that he made an ugly couple with CHarlotte. They both ugly. It seems Kayla is smarter than her brothers and husband LOL!! Now I wonder who was dirty in the ISA... Jeremy is SICK Love all the shout outs to the soap great villians. Ty for that. Nick your show is exciting every week and I never know what to expect. Great job bro!! Keep it up. You are rocking it. THis truly is a breath of fresh air..

Wow this was intense. I feel like so many people are at cross roads. Vin finding ALi I am so mad damn it I hope she stays strong. Bo chained up still and now trying to fight his way out. And Bart lmao. YOu had him down very good. My only questions is , Why does Stefano have Bo? Greg oh man how I really feel for him. Will he punish his dad? Milk and ketchup? Oh man. lol. Just Wow. Nick great job on Gregs story this week. Emily and Paul. Damn. They went in on each other. You can def tell they need some blowing going on. Love the wording. Billy is a bum. Plain and simple. What a fantastic episode. You sre setting your own style and settimg your show apart. I look fwd every time I binge read. in fact urs is always first. Great job at pacing bt the acton and stories are def picking up and Im so thrilled about t. Your dialog is great too. Your words jump out the screen to me and that's always a plus. Also nice opening. Music is much better. The other sounds like a tune from Sims 3.

A lot going on. SO Everyone is made to believe that Bo is dead but he is not He's chained up to a wall. LOL U been reading Steam? Wonder What Stefano's role is in this. I also really loved that you went there with Carly and Hope. I was hoping you would and you did. I'm just mad Hope didnt cal Carly a crack head. I love Carly. Vin a man on a mission. He is going to eat Ali's ass when he finds her. I wonder what makes him so mad. Miss Jesse arrived on the Brady scene to deliver bad knews. He knew deep down he needed an excuse to see Roman's. Eliza beer get her chit striaght. She fukking up the money. ANd I really enjoy JJ's story with Meranda. SHe was so cold towards him and him being frtstrated. Just like JJ. Im glad swamp girl being smart. Another good show

GC Memorial Neil is in emergency surgery. He has nurses and doctors to his right and left trying to save his life. The doctor on his left cuts open Neil’s body. The incision goes from right below his nipple down to just above his waist line. The surgeon has to locate the bullet. The surgeon uses his surgical tool to move raw and bloody body parts around. They can see Neil’s lungs getting bigger and smaller with each breath he takes off his ventilator. The surgeon continues to move body organs around to try and locate the bullet. The nurse on Neil’s right is keeping constant vigil on Neil’s vital signs checking them every 30 seconds. Nurse: Heart rate slowing as well as breathing. Surgeon: I still can’t find this bullet. I don’t know where it is. Nurse: But there was no exit wound? Surgeon: No I did not see one. So it’s still inside him somewhere. The surgeon begins to get in deeper in Neil’s body and moves closer to his spinal chord to see maybe if the bullet is there. Episode 170: Drucilla Winters vs Sheila Carter and Dru WINS!! Written by ML Cooks Creative Consults: Martin Saenz, Cary Richardson and Alex Washington with Wade Meredith In the ER. Olivia faints as Leslie drops her bottled water at seeing Dru. Abby, Lily and Devon all stand in silenced shock. Dru pushes Leslie out of her way and kneels down next to Olivia. She hold her in her arms. Dru: It’s me Liv! It’s me… Dru! Wake up! Lily and Devon look at each other. Devon: This has to be a joke. Dru rocks Olivia back and forth in her arms. Dru: I know you must all be shocked as hell. Lily: That’s an understatement since I saw with my own two eyes you falling over that cliff at the photo shoot with Phyllis. Dru: Your eyes didn’t deceive you Lily Bell. Lily is taken aback as Dru calls her Lily Bell, the name her mother and father called her growing up. Lily covers her mouth in shock as Devon holds her. Lily: Could it be really you? Dru: Yes girl, I am your mother. And when I get my hands on Phyllis Newman, I am going to ring her neck for pushing me, no I didn’t fall, that Bitch pushed me over. Olivia slowly begins to wake up. She is confused looking at her sister Drucilla. Olivia: Am I dreaming? Dru: No girl it’s me Drucilla… It’s really me. Olivia caresses her face and smiles. Dru: I’m back. I didn’t die being pushed over that cliff. Phyllis pushed me! And I survived. I’m a survivor! I even beat Sheila Cray Cray Carter! Dru looks up at her children Devon and Lily Dru: I fought like hell to get back to my family and it’s a blessing that I am here. Dru stands Olivia up and then walks over to Lily. Dru: Your face baby girl, what happened? Lily: I had to get plastic surgery. Dru has tears in her eyes and embraces her in a tight bear hug. Dru: You look absolutely stunning. I’m so sorry I couldn’t be hear for any of that. But mama is here now and I ain’t going nowhere. As Dru holds Lily, Lily does not hold her back still a little bit dazed from the drama. Leslie: So we are supposed to believe you are the late Drucilla Winters because you say so? Dru stops hugging Lily and looks at Leslie. Dru looks Leslie up and down. Dru: And who are you? I’ve never seen you around here? “An ugly stripper” Dru frowns and turns around to see who said that. It’s none other than Sister Patterson. Sister Patterson engulfs Dru in a hug. Sister Patterson: Welcome back home my child. My third eye tells me you are who you say you are. Dru shrugs out of the Sister’s hug. Dru: Hold on now! Who are you? Sister Patterson: I am an agent of God. I do the Lord’s work. Dru: Well where were you when I needed help beating Sheila Carter’s ass? Sister Patterson: Sheila Carter is the devil incarnate. I’ve heard all about her and I wondered why I sensed a dark force around Genoa City. Dru: Well it was Sheila Crazy Ass Carter. Sister Patterson: Watch your mouth talking around an angel. Dru gives her a weird look. “Clear the way we got another Verdon Lou victim!” Everyone hears from the ER entrance way. Dru: Don’t let it be Sheila. Don’t let it be Sheila!... Sharon. Please be Sharon! Dru stands behind Sister Patterson. Dru: If its Sheila attack her! Pray it’s Sharon! Abby, Devon and Lily look at each other. Abby: Sharon?... Sheila Carter? Devon: This is getting weird, Sheila Carter and now Sharon Newman? Olivia: Sheila Carter is alive? Leslie: Who is Sheila Carter? They all just look at her. Then everyone looks in the entrance way anticipating who the next survivor from Verdon Lou is. Rafe’s Apt Rafe is finishing up washing his dishes when he hears a knock at the door. He dries his hand and walks over to the door and opens it. He sees Scotty. Rafe: That was fast? Scotty: I don’t like to mess around when I want something. Scotty walks inside Rafe’s apt. and Rafe closes the door behind him. Rafe: So about this text of yours. Scotty: I wanna get stretched. Scotty walks over to Rafe and plants a kiss on him but Rafe pulls back. Rafe: Sex! That’s all it is with you! Every time I see you we have sex. We don’t go on dates, we don’t hang out, we don’t do any of that. You also lied to me about your real name…. Ted. Scotty: Don’t be on that Rafe. You make it sound like this is a relationship. Rafe: Is it not? Scotty: No…. just sex. Two sexy guys who come together and get off. Rafe: No Scotty I want more than that! I don’t have sex just to “get off”. Or do you prefer Ted? He says using air quotations. Scotty: I never gave you any indication that this was more then sex. We met on an online hook up site. The key word hook up. Rafe: My profile said I’m looking for a relationship. I’m ready to settle down. I want love, maybe even a husband. You said your name was Ted when we first met only to find out that was a lie. Scotty: I’m not ready for all of that. That’s way too much. And I told you why I lied about my name. I don’t want my mother to know I sleep with men. I don’t know how she would take it. I just don’t want to go through that. Rafe: I hardly know anything about you. Scotty: Rafe, this is just sex. There is no need to know much about me. Rafe: So I’m only good enough for sex with you? Scotty: Well it is good. Rafe shakes his head and turns away from Scotty. Rafe: You are hiding something Scotty. That’s why we can’t be more serious. You’re hiding something. At the Glo Worm reopening ball you told me your real name then your little brother took a picture of us kissing. There has to be more than that. You only talk to me a few times a week. It’s more than not wanting to let your mother know. I’m a lawyer you can’t get over on me. So tell me the truth Scotty. Scotty is caught off guard as he thinks about his girlfriend Vandalynn aka Mary Carter. Back at the Hospital As the Paramedics give way to the nurses the identity of the next survivor is revealed to be Avery. Avery: I can’t see! Everything is dark! Help ME!! Medic to the Nurse: Caught outside of the explosion. Apparent blindness. The nurse rush Avery into ER no.3 Dru walks over to the medic. Dru: Excuse me sir. Did you say that woman who was just brought in a Verdon Lou Survivor? Medic: Yes we found her unconscious outside. Dru looks over in the direction of Avery’s room. Dru: What was Phyllis’s sister doing outside of Sheila’s cabin? Abby looks at Devon. Abby: This is getting weirder by the moment. First Dru and Avery was at this Verdon Lou place and seems to be blind? I’m going to call my brother Nick and tell him what is going on. Dru mentioned Sharon too and she’s been missing for months. Devon: Good idea. Nick should be here. Abby: Will you be ok for a little bit? Devon: Yes thank you. They hug and then Abby walks away to call Nick. In Surgery The surgeon finally finds the bullet, though, lodged in Neil’s spinal column. Surgeon: All hands on deck. I located the bullet in the spinal column. Need to be ever so delicate as to not make this man paralyzed. Nurse: Blood pressure still dropping. Need to expedite this and close the patient back up. Surgeon: I will do everything I can. The surgeon uses his surgical tool to ever so delicately remove the bullet from Neil’s spinal cord. Surgeon: The bullet did massive damage to some of his other organs. Starting with the lungs. Nurse: Well the oxygen levels continue to decrease. Doctor we are losing him. Spencer along with Hillary arrive in the ER. They walk over to Leslie. Spencer hugs Leslie. Leslie: So nice to see a familiar face. Spencer: I saw on TV what happened. Is there any news on Neil or Nate? Leslie: No not yet. Neil is in surgery and I am not too sure about Nate. Leslie looks over Spencer’s shoulder to see who the woman is standing behind Spencer. Spencer notices this and stands out the way of Leslie’s line of vision to reveal Hillary. Spencer: Les, this is my daughter, Hillary. Leslie is stunned but extends her hand out to shake, Hillary half heartily smiles and extends her hand. Spencer: Hillary, this is Roxanne’s mother Leslie. Hillary quickly snatches her hand away from Leslie. Leslie frowns. Leslie: Is something the matter? Hillary: It’s your daughter. Spencer: Les, Hillary and Roxanne don’t get along. Then Roxanne walks into the ER. She spots Spencer and Hillary talking with Leslie and walks over to them. Olivia walks over to Dru and looks at her. Olivia has tears in her eyes. Olivia: Is it really you? Dru also begins to have tears in her eyes. Dru: Yes it’s really me. I’m here Liv. I’m Dru. And it was hell getting back here. Olivia: You mentioned Sheila Carter. I thought she was dead. Dru: Hell naw girl. Crazy Bitch was alive all this time and held me and Sharon captive and a few other people. Olivia: Other people? This is outrageous. Dru: No, Sheila Carter was outrageous. I hope that Bitch died in the explosion. She shot me in the back Olivia. In the back! A punk move. A nurse walks over to Dru. Nurse: We should get you checked out Mrs. Winters. Dru smiles and then looks at Olivia. Dru: Did you hear that? She called me Mrs. Winters. Where is my husband anyway? Nurse: Ma’am we should really get you checked out. Dru: No No I’m not trying to hear all of that. I’m claustrophobic these days being tied up in a room for so damn long. And I can’t leave my family. I’ve waited years for this. Olivia: Dru let them check you out. You said you were shot and you’re not looking healthy at all. Dru: Just tell me where is Neil? In surgery, Neil’s blood pressure and oxygen levels in his blood stream drop drastically. Nurse: Doctor we are losing him! Surgeon: No damn it! I almost got the bullet out. Yes there we go… GOT IT! As the surgeon pulls the bullet from Neil’s spinal column, Neil’s heart stops, he flat lines…

WOW The article Triny wrote and Smas reaction was stunning. Did you write that. Thank you for being social consiouces and keeping it real with the teens. Just wow Nick. Morris had more flash back this time of them in College SO much history here and it still keeps on coming. Morris i feel is about to come to a cross roads. I love the bonding Sam and Trinity are doing and it was also VERY nice seeing Blair and the Synders kicking it. I love the comments each one made about the other Reva and Blair. Still dont know much abot Holden's job but I know soemthing is up ANd Jack is being watched. Wonder who it is. Each show gets better and better. I\

They way u end ur episodes are always kinda neat and this one snuck up on me. You really have a knack for mystery and story detail. Ie been able to follow everything from episode one and u have not missed a beat. The flash back scenes an castings were great. I bet it took a lot of time. It was so NICE to them two in love at one point but on naother point it went wrong. Jack is active and about town. Todd is not going to take this document thing serious. I bet it bites him in the end. Marah has eyes for Malik. SHe want the choco stick. I think Danielle might have eyes for him too. Ben coming on strong again. Something is def up with him. ANd Yes Holden Id be worried too about this whole job thingy. Another great one Nick!

Wow another great episode The teens are def growing on me. I like Sam smoking the greenery. Love it. Your soap is so youthful and modern and I just love that about it. THe Davis had a fight again. I thought Morris was going to make a scene I kinda feel bad for him esp when no one wanted his big funky but siting by him. Some one gong to snap in that house hold. They should just get a divorce. I would have rather be at the Davis's then Revas. her party was hella boring. But it was a nice scene and now Marah being watched. ANd what Todd did was very nice and it was just overall romatic of him to do for Blair that was nice.m

So much going on I loved it. Eartha and Morris Anger nuts. Ive been waiting for u to go in on this. I love the dynamic of these characters as I love both actors. You gave us some clues regarding their realtionship and how Malik is so tired of it. This is surely a broken home. I want to see more I loved Trinity and Sam. It was refreshing and just diff. Your dialog is improving.."White Boy" lol Why is Reva so admanat that Jack stays with her? Is there something there? I was also able to follow along with Zak too. Great Job Nick. Off to the next one

Dru calls out Sharon’s name amongst the charred debris of the cabin. A paramedic rushes over to her and begins to check her out. They lay her down on a stretcher. Dru: There are more people that was here. You got to find Sharon. And Shelia Carter. She’s alive and she did all of this! She crazy. Crazy Carter! Cray for short. Cop: Ma’am we will do all we can to find any survivors or bodies. Paramedics rush over to Avery’s body which is unconscious on the ground. The medic takes a set of vitals as another medic comes over with a gurney. They lift Avery’s body unto the gurney and puts her into an ambulance. As Dru’s Ambulance drives off she can see the charred remains of the cabin out the back windows of the ambulance. She begins to cry. Dru: Thank God. I made it. I can see my family. My husband Neil, Devon, Lily, Olivia, Nate. I’m coming home. Genoa City Dru is back. I survived Sheila’s torture chamber. “ She looks up at the roof and mouths: Thank you God!” Meanwhile as firefighters begin to search the rubble they hear another cough and a moan. They begin to search and move the debris from the place of the sound. Created by William J Bell and Lee Phillip Bell Episode 169: Malcolm kidnaps Moses, shoots Neil and mows down Nate! Written by ML Cooks Creative Consults: Martin Saenz, Cary Richard son and Alex Washington Neil is rushed into GC Memorial. Doctors immediately rush over to him as the paramedics give the nurse and update and their assessment of Neil’s condition. Medic: Massive amount of blood lost, and he’s lost consciousness. Gunshot wound straight to the chest, breathing problems and oxygen levels in his blood dropping. Nurse: Thank you. Leslie, Lily, Devon and Abby arrive in the E.R... Lily is erratic with tears as Devon holds her. Leslie walks up to a nurse. Leslie: Excuse me ma’am, we are here on behalf of the Winters family, Neil Winters. Nurse: He was just brought in we’ll need some time to at least stabilize him. It will be some time yet. Leslie: Thank you. Leslie walks over back to the group. Leslie: Neil was just brought in. They need some time. Lily: How could this happen? My children Devon where are my kids? Please call Cane. I need my kids. I need my dad. This is so terrible to come back to all of this. Lily sobs as Devon holds her. Devon: I’m so sorry Lily. Leslie has a tear in her eye as well. Then they all hear loud screaming. They look over at the entrance and see Nate being brought in with an erratic Olivia right behind him. Olivia: MY SON!! MY GOD MY SON! Leslie and Abby rush over to Olivia and try to walk her over to a seat. Olivia: What the hell happened tonight? My son and Neil. Leslie: It’s ok Olivia. We just need to pray now. They both will make it through. “What in the hell do you know about praying you ugly stripper?” Olivia wipes her tears and looks up and sees Sister Patterson. Leslie: Why? Leslie turns around and sees a scorning Sister Patterson. She stands up and faces her. Leslie: DO we really need this right now? I’m getting really sick and tired of you coming for me. Now I’m trying to respect my elders but you’re starting to push it old lady. Sister Patterson slaps Leslie across the face. Abby rushes over and grabs Leslie. Sister Patterson: Have you no shame demon? How in the hell dare ya? I am Sister Patterson and no one will speak to me like that. I’m an agent of God. God shall strike you down right here and now. I can’t believe this ratchet ass stripper tried to get in my face. Sister Patterson blows on her nails. Sister Patterson: I am here to offer hope and prayers to the victims of tonight’s tragedy. My third eye tells me there will be more heart break tonight. Olivia stands up. Olivia: Not my son. Please no! Nate has to make it. Sister Patterson wraps her arms around Olivia. She hands her some tissue. Sister Patterson: Wipe your nose honey. Olivia gives Sister Patterson a look. Sister Patterson points to her nose. Abby and Leslie walk away over to Devon. Leslie: I can’t believe that old bat hit me. Abby: Sister Patterson is off her rockers. Maybe you should file assault charges. Leslie: Assault charges… hmm. In leaving the hospital Chance has to go through the ER due to where his car is parked. He spots Lily standing with Leslie, Devon and Abby. He walks over to them. Chance: Uhm excuse me Lily. Wow! You look beautiful. Lily: Chance, Hey. Chance: Are you just getting back in town? Lily: I am. Chance: Have you seen or heard from Cane? Lily: Actually no we are looking for him. Why are you asking? What are you doing here? Chance: It’s my dad. Devon: Phillip? Chance what happened? Chance: When I find your husband Lily I am going to kill him! Lily: Wait what? What are you talking about what is going on? DO you know where my twins are? Chance: Unbelievable… Your precious Cane has been snorting Coke. He got my dad high at hostage point and shot him in the hand. Lily screams out in horror as she looks at Devon. Lily: No no no there must be some mistake. Devon: There is no way Cane did this. I’m going to talk to my cousin and find out what is going on. Lily pulls out her cell phone and begins to dials Cane’s number repeatedly. Lily: This cannot be true. Abby put her arms around Lily. Leslie: Can things get any worse? I’ll make some calls as well to see if I can locate Cane. I still have a few of my judicial friends from my lawyer days. Leslie pulls out her phone. Lauren opens her door and sees Scotty sitting in the living room playing a video game. Scotty: Mom, where have you been? I seen a news report on TV that there was a shooting and an accident at The Colonnade Room. What happened? He walks over and gives her a hug. Lauren: Scotty pour me a drink. A lot happened tonight. Where is your brother Fen? Scotty: At one of his buddies for the night. There is a baseball game in the am. Lauren: Good I don’t want him to hear any of this. Scotty: Tell me mom what happened? Lauren: Well everything was going just fine. With Lily returning home from Japan. Scotty: I never did get why she went to Japan in the first place. What happened? Lauren: Lily’s face was burned at Sharon’s coming from jail party. She required extensive plastic surgery hence why she wanted to throw this surprise party so everyone can see her. But Malcolm came in and took the party hostage. He said that Moses was his son and he played a recording of Nathan Hastings admitting it to a Roxanne who I might add were having an affair. Scotty: Damn that’s deep. Lauren: SO Malcolm in a rage shot Neil point blank when he refused to hand over his son. Then Nathan tried to stop him and Malcolm ran over Nate and that’s all I know. Scotty: Mom I’m so glad you are ok. I didn’t know Malcolm very well but man I didn’t know he was capable of all of that. Lauren: He was at his last ends. His limit. Deeply hurt and felt betrayed by his family. Any way enough about that. I’m going to soak in the tub for awhile and then head over to the hospital. Scotty: Ok mom, I’m just going to keep on trying to get a hold of my girlfriend. I haven’t talked to her in days. Lauren: Odd but ok. Good luck honey. Lauren gets up and kisses her son on the forehead and leaves for the bathroom. Scotty tries to call Vandalynn again. Scotty: Damn it voice mail. Where are you? It’s been days. I need some action. Well if you’re not going to give it up, Rafe will. “ He thinks to himself. Scotty sends a text to Rafe: I wanna get stretched… Spencer’s Apt. Spencer who was watching the news turns it off as he has a knock on his door. He ties his robe up and answers the door. He sees Hillary in tears. He embraces her. Hillary: Oh dad I really messed up. Spencer pulls her into the apartment and closes the door. He escorts her to the couch. Spencer: What’s the matter pretty girl? Hillary: I set a chain of events in motion and I may lose the man I love. Spencer: Does this have something to do with the Colonnade room? It’s all over the news. Neil, Nathan and Malcolm. Wow. What did you have to do with any of this? Hillary: I was able to tape a conversation between Roxanne and Nathan about their feelings for one another and the fact that he switched Moses paternity test. Spencer: How were you able to do that? Hillary looks away as she has a flash back of breaking into Roxanne’s apt and then hiding in her closet when Roxanne came home. She was able to tape their conversation on her cell phone when Nate came over to meet with Roxanne. Hillary looks back at her dad. Hillary: That’s not something I’m ready to deal with. But I seen Malcolm at the bar one night. And he was a mess and I felt so bad. I really felt Malcolm had a right to know the truth. I wanted to give him hope. His son. Spencer: Wow Hillary that’s a bold move. So it led to Malcolm shooting Neil and running over Malcolm? Hillary: Yes... She says with tears rolling down her face…And now Moses is with Malcolm and they are on the run. Hillary sobs. Spencer shakes his head knowing this situation is not good. Spencer holds her. Spencer: I must admit pretty girl you made a mess of things. You should have left things well enough alone. Now Neil and Nate may die and Malcolm is on the run with Moses. I do know Malcolm to be unstable. He was always so hostile when I was around Leslie. I pray young Moses is ok. Hillary: Do you mind if I soak in the tub for a little while? I need to relax and I need time to myself. Spencer: Oh I don’t have any womanly products here. Hillary: It’s ok dad I always come prepared. She walks into the bathroom fighting back tears until she can reach the bathroom and let loose. Spencer shakes his head again. “What have you done Hillary?” He says to himself. The tub is filling up and steam is becoming in the room as Hillary just sinks to the ground crying. Letting out that was stored up from watching Malcolm’s events live and the role she played. Hillary: I’m so sorry Nate. Back at the Hospital. Devon walks into his cousin Phillip’s room. He sees him sitting up and twitching a little. He walks over to him and gently calls his name. Phillips jumps. Devon: I’m sorry. I didn’t mean to scare you. I saw your son and I had to come and see you. Phillip: Why? Devon: Well we are family remember? Phillip: Oh yea. You are Tucker’s son. Devon: It’s unfortunate. Phillip: I just feel funny Devon. Coke Cane caused all of this. He took me hostage and forced me to do coke. A needle. I’ll have to get an aids test or something. Devon: Cane was smoking coke? Phillip: He had an insatiable drug habit when he was back in Australia working with his dad Colin and the underworld. I thought he was done with that. Devon: Phillip do you have any idea where Cane and Lily’s twins are? Phillip looks at Devon with guilt. Phillip: Devon it’s not good. Cane sold those kids for drugs. Devon is speechless. “Thank You Jesus! Amen! I beat you CRAZY ass CARTER!” People begin to hear from the Ambulance entrance. “I win. You Lose. I beat you Sheila Cray Cray Carter! I’m free!! Dru is rolled into the ER sitting up on her gurney kissing her muscles on both her arms. “I told you bitch I’m the HBIC round here.” The ER comes to halt, as Lily, Abby, Leslie, dropping her water, and Olivia are all stunned at seeing Drucilla Winters rolled into he ER. Lily screams out as Olivia faints. Abby: Dru? Dru: Yes. It’s me. Drucilla Winters and I’m home. And I beat Sheila Carters ass! She did all of this. Crazy Bitch!

Nick no Lorna isnt pregnant, shes referring to Devin LOL OMG what a great show. DEVIN LUCAS came in like a storm and is lare and in charge. I love it. Hes in cohoots with Iris. Just wow. He is going to be a force to be recokend with. He is his own man and about action. Its going to be neat to see Frankie and Devin bond. This is a very good story. I loved Matt and Amanda's scenes. Will they or wont they merger. The Tops scenes were brilliantly done. The convo the argument the would she is she then the come on. Then she finally did. Just great low intsinty and indirect edge of ur seat stuff. it was so natural. Outstanding. Great work as always!!!

YES LOVED THIS EPISODE> Refreshing to see KC and ERIC and a few others. I love Christy. I wonder what the hell she is up to. Nice lead up to that twist. Krikland i thought over reacted a bit. He didnt really give Eric a chance to explain but then I can see why as Christ y is her mother. It was nice seeing Allen and Amanda I almost forgot they were a couple. SO now they may merger. I dk how i feel about this it would be interesting to say the least. Iris has showed she is now sweating Amanda's new fire power. And Felicia. Just love her. GREAT SHOW!!

Very good show. The scenes with Matt and Carl were perfect. ALl that history and pretty much the whole show. Iris and Rachel had a moment. Wow. I do think Iris was being truly sincere but damn she can't wait to ttell some one right after Rachel asked her not too. And The arrival of Devin. ANd Lorna of course. Just a great episode..

You are the new king of mystery and suspense here at SON. ANOTHER GREAT SHOW. I LOVED the moment with Dani and Sam. Gave readers lots of background info, ANd it was nice to see them bond. Great work. Also another nice scene for Le Chic and nice the Lewis's and Snynder came together. Nicew of them to interact. Todd is in some [!@#$%^&*]. I already know it. He is being watched and Gary is working against him, I cant ait to see where this goes. I did enjoy Luke and Ben. Ben did come on strong but Im glad Luke kept his reserve. Something is up with Ben. I can feel it. GREAT SHOW NICK!!!!

GC Memorial Phillip suddenly sits up and hollers out Cane’s name. Nina, Jill and Chance who were all sleeping wake up in disarray. Chance: Dad what about Chance, did he do this to you? Phillip looks around at his family feeling dazed and confused. Phillip: What happened? He feels pain in his hand and looks at it. He sees it is bandaged up. He remembers Cane shooting him. Phillip: It was Cane. It was CANE! Where is he,… we have to stop him! Phillip says trying to get out of bed. Chance sits down on the bed with him and holds Phillip down. Jill: Son calm down. Please! Just calm down and we can talk about this and figure it out. Nina: I’ll go get a doctor. Chance: Dad relax. Its ok, you are safe now. Cane is not going to hurt you. Phillip begins to relax a bit feeling comfort seeing his family but still feels mentally unbalanced. He feels something is off. Phillip: I feel funny. Jill: Honey they found cocaine in your system. What happened? Why do you keep saying Cane’s name? Phillip: Cane did this to me! Chance stands up. He is very angry. Chance: I told you grandma. I knew Cane did this. I am going to kill him! Phillip: No son!.... Cane needs help. His twins are missing. Cane is in serious trouble. Jill: Maddie and Charlie? Phillip what happened to those twins? Phillip: We have to find Cane. He’s lost control! Chance: I will find Cane. Chance storms out the room. Jill calls after him. Jill: Oh my God what is happening here? Chance: Mom, I think Cane sold his twins for drugs. Jill nearly faints at the news. Created by William J Bell and Lee Philip Bell Episode 168: Climax Aftermath! (Crack Kills) Pt.1 Written by ML Cooks Creative Consults: Martin Saenz, Cary Richardson and Alex Washington Verdon Lou, Avery is lying on the ground as she slowly wakes up and feels incredible pain in her head. She moans out. She can hear the wood still crackling from the cabin fire and can also smell the smoke but she cannot see anything. She slowly sits up. She reaches out with her hands and puts them in front of her face. She blinks her eyes a few times but things are still dark for her. She sees nothing but darkness. Avery: My hands, Oh my gosh, I can’t see! I CAN’T SEE!! Help Me! Avery’s other four senses begin to kick into overdrive. The smell of the smoke again hits her nose which sends a signal to her brain that triggers a memory. Avery: I remember,… the cabin blew up. And Malcolm. MALCOLM! She hollers out and then pauses. She doesn’t hear anything. She then tries calling out for Moses. There is still no answer. Avery: HELP!! Avery can then hear sirens getting louder and closer in the distance. Avery: Thank God finally some relief. Avery then begins to feel dizzy and passes out on to the ground. Inside the Cabin, A woman coughs. The fire is burning out since the initial blaze wore off and all the wood has burned up, charred debris is what remains. A piece of it moves as a woman coughs again. The woman tries to move. She begins to moan out. She coughs again. Who is it? Back in GC, The Colonnade Room. Hillary is overwhelmed by all the sobbing over Neil as he just lays on the ground, blank stare on his face still gurgling. She realizes she has set all of this in motion by sending Malcolm the audio recording of Nate’s confession. She has a need to finally break down and rushes outside. She is only stopped when she see Nate’s jumbled body lying on the ground. Hillary screams out in horror and then runs over to him kneeling down next to him. She doesn’t know whether to touch him or not as he is so distorted. Nate has his eyes closed. Hillary reaches down and checks for a pulse. Paramedics arrive on the scene along with Chief of Police Paul Williams. Hillary hollers out for a paramedic to check on Nate. The paramedic asks Hillary to step aside as they look at the severity of Nate’s condition. Hillary just looks on with tears in her eyes. They increase in intensity. Hillary: What have I done? Back inside Devon is standing watching Lily, Leslie and Olivia cry over Neil. He stares at Neil, noticing the blank stare in his eyes and the gurgling noises Neil is making. He feels a touch from behind. He turns around and sees its Abby. He hugs her. Abby: I am so sorry Devon. Devon: Me too. He says voice crackling as he tries to hold everything in. Devon: I don’t see Moses. Devon walks outside and Abby follows. They are stunned to see Nate on the ground with paramedics surrounding him. Abby screams out. Devon: Oh my God. Devon walks back inside and over to Olivia. Devon: Aunt Olivia there is something I need to tell you. Olivia looks up at Devon, makeup running down her face from her crying and even her nose is running a bit. Devon looks at Olivia’s face of despair and almost loses it. Devon: It’s,… Nathan. Lily too looks up at Devon. Olivia: Nate. What about my son! Devon: Something happened to him. He’s outside. He says but finally cracking and bursting into tears. Olivia stands up as paramedics now rush over to Neil and ask Lily and Leslie to step aside. Olivia: Devon tell me what happened to Nate? Is my son ok? Devon: He’s outside. Olivia wipes her tears and runs outside. She is devastated to see Nate being lifted unto a stretcher. She falls to her knees and cries out. Olivia: God NO! Not my son!! Paul rushes over to Olivia and tries to comfort her. Olivia: Paul, not my son. Please tell me,… not my son! Paul: It’s ok Olivia. He says putting his arm around her trying to console her. Hillary looks on at the scene and decides she can’t take it anymore. She leaves feeling very uneasy. Back inside Sister Patterson comes to and sees Lauren fanning her. Lauren: Sister Patterson, thank God you are ok. I don’t think we could have handled any more mayhem. Sister Patterson: Sister Lauren, I have no faith in you. When it was time to act you failed. You are not a very good solider. When the battle call came from the Lord, you just stood there with your mouth open. I thought you were waiting for a bird to land in it. My mother always told me to close my mouth before a bird lands in there and takes a poo. Shame on you Lauren. Sister Patterson sits up. She sees paramedics lift Neil’s body onto a stretcher as Lily and Leslie still are in tears. They carry Neil outside and put him into an ambulance. Sister Patterson: My heavenly father, why did you let this happen? Sister Patterson begins to stand up as Lauren tries to help her. Sister Patterson brushes Lauren’s hands away. Sister Patterson: This is all so terrible. This is no work of the Lord. Lauren: Yes I know, I can’t believe Malcolm shot his own brother. And point blank for that matter. Sister Patterson: I’m not talking about that chile’. My third eye. My third eye saw none of this coming. Lauren: There’s that third eye again. I sure would like to know where it is. Sister Patterson looks at Lauren with piercing eyes. Sister Patterson: I don’t want anything to do with you! You are no solider of the Lord. Now get out my way I got prayers to deliver. And where the hell is that black ass Malcolm? Sister Patterson walks off and then Lauren does too. Verdon Lou. The woman coughs again and begins to move around. Suddenly she feels water being splashed on her. The woman immediately jumps into action and comes out her dazed state. She kicks the ruble off herself and stands up. Woman: Yall better stop spraying all that damn water on me! It’s cold! A bitch will catch a cold! Firefighters: Woah. We got one! Turn off the hoses. Paramedics rushes over to the woman who is none other than Drucilla. Dru looks at the paramedics approaching. She realizes she is free. Sheila’s reign of terror is over and Dru is free. Dru: Thank you Jesus! I beat you Crazy Carter! I whooped that ass bitch. You hear that! Drucilla won bitch! Dru vs Sheila crazy ass Carter and I won! Dru smiles. She looks around and realizes how much of a disaster the cabin is. Dru: Sharon… Sharon girl where are you?

Very good episode. A lot is going and ur show is picking up the pace some what and I do enjoy that. SO Gabi gonna have to work harder for her plan. I enjoyed her scenes with Hope. Hope sure is a bitch these days. Billie is at war and Im glad she is not gonna take this. BUt the questions is what can or will she do. I really enjoyed Erics Crises of faith. It gives balance to Will and Sony. Like on the real show everyone was so happy giddy for them. Yea right. Its also very topical too so good going for that.

Great one SO Gabi almost gave her self away. Dummy. But Hope didnt find anything. I do wonder what happend to them pills. SO at first I thought Brady dreamt the whole thing including the accident. But he didnt ans was saved. I wonder how that old pretty woman saved him. Nick is going for the goods as is nick. I think Nick and EJ are headed for a showdown and that would be good!! I wonder if Brady has memory loss.

STFU. It was a dream. I am at a total loss. I dont even know what to say. Man, Really? LOL Wow Simply speech less I def got to read the next one

Another solid episode and so much going on it was all exciting. Lets begin. Marcino and Gregs scenes more natural in this ep. I wonder if this a first thing for either one of them I love how you end some of your episodes. just a very different flavor from the rest. I dont think BO is dead it's just some one trying to throw everyone off their game. I cannot by Terrence and Nat. he looks so fem. It was also nice seeing a little background with Terrece though and that his father is in UC> Nice connection. I love how the scene was set p too. Pulling out to reveal he was in the hosp. I loved the grocery store scene. its very natural and people really do meet up in stores. LOL I just loved the barbs traded between Lucas and Daniel LOL GREAT!!! They both had some good one liners. Lucas was a little petty grabbing the ribs though. I was LOL!!! and then what he said after LOL SOunds just like him!!!!! Jesse got his eye on Officer Ramos he sure does get around for an old man. Oh and Derrick and this strange ass alien at the club. What is up with that. Then Derrick going to bang some guts. So contemporary. I love it. nick I really enjoy your show. You give so much in each up yet leave us with even more questions. THe show is so focused!!

WOW WOW WOW This BO mystery is really getting good and great music esp for the last scene. CArly is back and I am glad. Man what happened to Bo?? Just when u think we get one step closer we take a step back and then bam another step fwd yet many questions remain. Sch a great set up. Hmm Greg and Marcino. Idk it felt a tiny bit forced esp with the offering of the hug. A knee brush or them bumping up against each other than one putting his arm around the other that to me wolda been more natural. Now whats up with Greg's dialog. "Dire" WOuld he really say that is that how he speaks. Gregs dialog really stands out to me. Bt again it was nice seeing what his family is about and what he's dealing with. Marcino being there for him. Marcino also robbing the cradle. It was also cool how now these two are involved in the elvoling BO mystery.. I loved the way you wrote Eliza's office scene. She got over whelmed quick. Great work there. Emily was so aggresive to a potiential empolyer. This story started out good but its getting weird on me. Maybe this is part of the story and I just have to stay tuned. That guy who walked up to him looked like an Alien wtf. LOL Seriously WTF!!? ANd he claim to know Lucas even freekier. Id like to see where this is going. I love Katsu bless you. He commands any scene he is in. I want to learn more about him. SO BRo is open good, I know there will be drama to follow. Another good show. I love the tighness of it all!!

Loved it. Every scene and story had me interested Where do I begin? Vin is really trying to find his girl. Im really watching this story to see where it goes and to see who's pov its gonna be told through. You are really defining a lot of Vin. Lets get the same with Ali so we can feel bad for her even more. Im a few shows behind but Im sure u already did this. Miss Jesse dont want his daughter on the force any more kuz he trying to creep with a few of these boys in blue. Naw but I do get his point and Nat seems very strong minded so I bet they are headed for a clash. Poor Greg comes from a broken home. Nice casting choice. It was cool to get a lil back story on Greg and see what his home life is like. ANd the Drone and the house I can't wait to see where this is going. A very focused show. You gave us so much in this ep!!!

Another great episode. I feel bad for Lindsay. Her dialog was great in her scene. I hope in time she will realize although she cant have children but shell still be ok. Greg said hell be there for her. He's loves her. CHIRSTY I love her. SHe kept her cool through Grant and Kirk and I wonder if Grant has met his match in Christy. I wonder what woman she has up her sleeve or her plan now that it seems that Krik provoked her into doing soemthing. loved how she stood up to Kirk and didnt flinch. SHE HAS THE BEST LINES on this show. I love it!!!!

A very powerful song as they told the kids. Man I am so heart broken. TO learn they are going to lose their dad. Just so sad. I lost my own dad so this hits home for me. I love how you set this all up. I could picture the scene in my head. Esp with Lizzie crying. Very nice scene with Jake and Michelle. Reliving the past and Jake opening up to her about who he was. Something I dont think he has really done. They are all worried for Micheele and it just makes me wonder where this fued is going. And Lizzie setting Cory right. Cory be wise to listen to his sister. She said herself she'd be mad. Hello? Great show Cary!

Malcolm shoots his own brother point blank in the chest! Everyone is horrified as Lily, Leslie, Lauren, and Olivia all cry out in agony. Hillary is also crying but it’s more like tears of silence trying not to draw attention to herself, keeping her head on the ground. As Neil stumbles, he continues to keep his gaze right into Malcolm’s eyes. Malcolm grabs Moses and runs out the ball room with him. Neil feels an incredible impact has been bestowed upon him. He is reeling as his legs begins to give out from beneath him and everything seems to move in slow motion. No one seems to realize that Malcolm has taken Moses. Neil grabs his chest and then collapses onto the ground. Lily, and Olivia run over to him. Olivia tears a piece of her sleeve off from her dress to apply pressure to bullet the wound and stop the bleeding. Lily: Dad. Please dad! Neil’s eyes are open but with a blank stare on his face. Neil begins to make a gurgling sound. Lily grabs Neil’s hand as Olivia pulls out her phone and calls for an ambulance. Lily: Stay with us DAD PLEASE! Devon looks at Nate. Devon: You set all this in motion. Meanwhile Malcolm puts Moses’ seatbelt on and then gets in on the driver side. He tries to start the car up but it won’t turn over. Moses is still crying. It adds to Malcolm’s frustration and he hollers at his son. “Shut it up boy! It’s time for you to be a man! Neil got you acting like a punk! We have to man up.” Moses: You shot my dad. Malcolm: Naw young one. Neil the bad man. I’m yo dad. Moses: You’re a bad man too. Malcolm is caught off guard by the comment and becomes a bit defensive. Malcolm: Watch yo mouth boy! I’ma have to teach you some manners. I’m yo dad now! Neil lied to you! He kept you from me and I’m going to make things right! We are a family! You’re all I got and I’m all you have. We gone change that whack ass name too. While I drive you think of something you want to be called. Moses: I like my name. Malcolm: Shut yo punk ass up and do what I tells’ you to do before I knock you out! Moses: Yes sir. Malcolm: Yea. Yes sir. Malcolm tries to start his EL Camino but it still won’t turn over. Back inside. Nate: This is not a good time to rub it in my face Devon! Devon: Look around you Nate! Malcolm just shot my dad. Why? Because you switched his son’s paternity test. He’s an angry man and I think I would be too. Do something about it Nate! Make this right! Nate pushes Devon out of his way and looks around for Malcolm after not seeing Moses. Nate runs out side and sees Malcolm revving up his car, which is now started. Nate: Malcolm! Let Moses go. You are in no condition to drive. You are putting his life in danger. Nate says approaching the car but slowly since he is not sure of what Malcolm will do next. Malcolm: Yea boy. It’s just me and you now. I told you your time would come. Nate: Malcolm, your making this very hard on yourself. Things are bad for you bruh. Stop now while you are kinda ahead. Malcolm: I told you to shut that sh!t up! You shouldn’t have kept my son from me! I helped raised you Nathan! I was a good man to your mother in her darkest hour. Nate: I remember all of that and I am grateful but you have changed over the years. Malcolm: Naw man! I aint changed! You all just did me dirty. Now Nate I will run yo punk ass over. Nate puts his hands on the hood of the car to act as a deterrent from Malcolm speeding off with Moses. Moses: Please don’t hurt him! Malcolm: Lay yo head down son and take a nap. We’ll be on our way soon. Nate: Malcolm you are not leaving with Moses. Just let him go! Malcolm puts the pedal to the medal and runs over Nate. Moses screams out as the car thumps and bumps running over Nate’s body. As Malcolm speeds off Nate’s body rolls on the ground a few times from the intensity of Malcolm’s power stroke from Malcolm’s EL Camino. Created by William J Bell and Lee Philip Bell Episode 167: Verdon Lou and Malcolm’s Madness Climaxes! Written by ML Cooks with Wade Meredith Creative Consults: Martin Saenz, Cary Richardson with Alex Washington Verdon Lou. Sheila is in the patient room with the mystery patient. She takes a blood pressure reading and the patient’s temperature. Sheila: You are my insurance policy. In case anything goes bad I still have you. I nursed you back to health myself after your plane crash. You and your family will owe me. Once again I’m in control I have all the power. Sheila stands back and smiles at her mystery patient. Sheila: The Newman’s will be forever indebted to me, isn’t that right Mr. Adam Newman? Sheila’s mystery patient is none other than Adam Newman who hasn’t been heard from since Sharon’s coming home from jail party. Adam lays in the bed in a coma. In the front room, where the hostages are. Mary: How did you two end up being my mother’s hostages? Sharon: Well I just know one night Dru showed up on my doorstep very distraught about Sophia’s death and- Dru: Bitch shut up! This my story. I will tell it. Sharon: Gosh I was only trying to help. Dru: Help me whoop Sheila’s ass can you do that? If not then be quiet. Dru has flashbacks of arriving in Genoa City wanting revenge on Phyllis who pushed her off the cliff at a photo shot. Dru became the mystery woman stalking Phyllis and black mailing the people of GC in order to carry out her revenge on Phyllis. The black mail lead to Sophia’s death caused by Dru pushing a crippled and blinded Phyllis, crippled via Dru, down a hill and Sophia swerved to avoid hitting Phyllis and hit a street pole instead and then killing her. Dru: I came back to town to get revenge on Phyllis. So I was sneaking around town trying to hurt her. I bashed her knee caps, in then which she couldn’t walk. That was fun, then I tried kill her by setting her apartment on fire, that didn’t work but the bitch did become blinded. So I messed with her head and slapped her a few times and harassed her until I pushed that broad down that hill in her wheelchair. Poor Sophia may she rest in peace. Mary: I’m still confused how did it involve my mother? Sharon: Well at one point in time we all thought Sheila had Phyllis’ face. Well Sheila says it wasn’t her it was her sister. Mary: My aunt Sarah. Sharon: So after Sophia’s death Dru showed up and that’s when Sheila showed up right after. Dru: I was stalking Phyllis but what I didn’t know was Sheila was stalking me at the same time. Crazy bitch was mad because she thinks I lead everyone to believe it was Sheila stalking Phyllis. Sheila enters the room Sheila: And it wasn’t! My plans are always full proof. You killed Sophia! You are responsible for that Dru. You have blood on your hands so you are no better than me at this point. You see Mary, Dru had to pay for allowing folks to think it was me who was stalking Phyllis. I can’t have that in my name. Dru: So that’s how we ended up here Mary, Your mother had a hissy fit and took Sharon and I at gun point. Then she shot me in the back which paralyzed me. But I got my strength back because what Sheila doesn’t know is I been doing exercise at night with my legs. And I’m bout to whoop yo momma’s ass Mary. I’m so sorry you have to see this but it is what it is. Mary: Wow. Sheila: Ok Drucilla sour mouthed Winters. Are you ready for our battle? Dru: More than you will ever know. Untie me Bitch so I can have my way with you! Mary: Mom please don’t do this. Sharon: Dru, oh Dru please be careful. Dru: Shut up scary bitch. Sheila: Don’t let Dru’s big mouth scare you. She’s nothing but mouth. Sheila walks over to Dru and looks at her. She smiles. Dru: I told you you was crazy. Sheila begins to untie Dru’s hands! Mary and Sharon both get nervous. Mary: Mom wait, what about Cane… won’t he hear the wrestling match down stairs? Cane is sitting on the floor next to an unconscious James. Cane: It really is boring around here mate. Cane gives James a good look. He notices James’s bulky jacket. He reaches over and flips it open. Cane is shocked to see James’s bomb laced vest. Cane: Damn crack is better than cocaine. I must be high out my mind. Cane looks over at the pipes he taped up with grey duct tape. Cane: I think I hear something. Cane is so high he sees this Cane: I think the gas leak is back.That gas is getting me higher. I'm seeing sh!t I’ll go over and use more tape on it and then you are going to wake up, hit this rock with me and then we are going to talk about what you are doing down here mister. Cane gets up, grabbing the grey duct tape and sits down next to the gas leak that is hissing once again. Malcolm is speeding out of Genoa City heading north. Moses is still crying. Shooting Neil and running over Nate continues to replay in Malcolm’s mind. He drives faster not realizing he is doing about 25 over the speed limit. He grabs his bottle of Hennessy and takes swig. Moses: I’m scared. I wanna go home. Malcolm: We are going home son. We are going to our new home. Malcolm speeds up leaving GC city limits. Avery finally pulls into the driveway of Sheila’s Cabin in Verdon Lou. She sees Cane’s car. Avery: What in the hell is Cane doing in a place like this? Avery gets out of her car and is alarmed by the condition of the cabin. It looks like it’s one termite bite away from caving in. Avery: I bet Cane is in there getting high with some hillbillies. Well I drove all this way he could at least share with me. I need a hit again. Avery is nervous to approach the door. Avery: Hello! Inside the cabin. Sheila unties Dru. Dru sit up and stretches her body. Dru: Damn that feels good. Dru slowly stands up as Sheila back up. Dru: Yea bitch you better back the hell up! Sheila: I’m just giving you room to catch your breath. You haven’t stood up in months and I want this to be a good fight. Sharon: Oh Dru please be careful. Dru continues to stretch and do a few exercises. Dru then suddenly charges at Sheila grabbing her hair and then getting her in a head lock. Dru begins to pound on Sheila’s cranium with her fist. Dru speaks to Sheila between each blow to the head. “Now see bitch! (pound) I done told you! (pound, pound) I’m the hbic! (pound) I told you! (pound) I (pound) would beat the hell outta you! (pound pound pound). Sheila screams out and uses her body weight to slam Dru into a wall leaving a big hole after Dru crashes into it. Avery hears this commotion from the inside on the outside. Avery: What was that? It sounds like the house is about to collapse. Avery pulls out her cell phone to try and dial Cane again verses going inside the creepy looking cabin. Back inside. Sharon: Come on Drucilla you can do it! Mary: Go mom! Dru has the wind knocked out of her and is panting as she climbs out the hole in the wall. Sheila: That was fun. Dru: Wait bitch! That was a lot for me. Sheila punches Dru in the jaw. Dru nearly loses her balance. Sheila dives down like a football player ready to tackle another player on the field but she tackles Dru instead. They crash into a wooden beam this time. Malcolm notices his car his riding funny. He slows down and comes to a stop, in front of a cabin that’s in Verdon Lou. He put his El Camino in park and gets out to see he has a flat tire. Malcolm: DAMN! “Malcolm is that you?” He hears from behind. He is stunned to see Avery. Avery sees Moses crying in the car. Malcolm: Avery. What the hell are you doing out here? Avery: I’m looking for Cane. And you? Why is Moses crying is he ok? Malcolm: Yes he is just a lil fukked up by the flat tire and how the car was riding. Avery: Malcolm have you been drinking? I can smell it on your breath... Something is not right here. Then Moses gets out the car and screams out “Malcolm shot my dad!” Avery looks at Malcolm. Malcolm pulls his gun out on Avery. Avery: Malcolm what the hell are you doing? Malcolm: My son and I will be needing your car. Back inside Sheila and Dru are choking each other. Sheila’s face is turning red. Dru musters up enough spit in her mouth and then spits in Sheila’s face to interrupt her concentration. Sheila then kicks Dru in her legs and tries to push her back onto the ground. Dru gives it her all trying to stand up to Sheila’s incredible force. Sharon: Come on Dru, you can take her out! Mary: Mom please stop this, you’re bout to kill each other! Back in the basement. Cane is done retapping the gas pipe leak. He can hear the commotion of the brawl coming from upstairs. Cane: Sounds like the floor is going to fall down in on me. I better find out what the hell is going on. But before I do just one last hit of my last bit of stash. Cane pulls out his glass pipe and puts a rock in it. He sits back and flicks his lighter to take another hit. As the lighter is lit the house explodes. Then the cabin explodes again from James’s bombs sending burning debris into the air. The cabin just burns as Dru, Mary, Cane, Sheila, James, Sharon and Adam Newman are all inside. Outside only Avery is lying on the ground being hit by burning debris. Malcolm now in Avery’s car drives off from the scene as the cabin burns in his rear view mirror. Moses still continues to cry being emotionally scarred from the horrific chain of events. For other great reads check out my friend's blogs, Another World, Just Paradise, Union Creek or Days of our Lives. Written by real writers. Drama lives here

Malcolm, feeling hopeless and wanting revenge takes his own family hostage. Cane tries to fix the gas leak in Sheila’s cabin in Verdon Lou as Sheila tends to her mystery patient as her hostages, Dru and Sharon try to plea with Sheila’s daughter Mary once again for their freedom. Drama continues at the Colonnade Room Malcolm has taken Lily’s home coming party hostage. Everyone including, Olivia, Nate, Neil, Leslie, Lily, Moses, Devon, and Abby are on the ground as Malcolm has commanded. Hillary too is on the ground but keeps her head down so Malcolm doesn’t see her and tells everyone it was here who let Malcolm know about his son Moses. Malcolm: Tonight is my night! I’m taking what is mine and then my son and I are leaving this dreadful place called Genoa City. Neil: Malcolm your drunk out of your mind! Moses is not your son he is mine! You’re confused! There is no way in hell I’m going to let you walk out of here with my son! Malcolm: I got the gun dummy! This my party now and things will happened as I want them too… Look at you the good noble brother trying to play super hero and stand up to me. You play that part so well. Neil: Malcolm this is between you and I let these people go. Let’s do this one on one. There is no need to be doing this especially in front of Moses. Malcolm: Naw Neil you can’t handle that bro. I hate you so much dude I could kill you with my bear hands. And once I tell my son Moses what you did to me he will understand I had to do what I had to do. You did this Neil! Lily: Malcolm please don’t do this! Let’s talk! I can help you. Malcolm looks at Lily on the ground. He has tears in his eyes feeling guilty and cornered with no other options. Malcolm: My beautiful baby girl. I’m sorry I have to do this. I’m sorry you have to see me like this. Until your uncle Neil took you from me like he did with Moses. Let the facts be clear. Neil is your uncle Lily. I’m your father……You know what… Lily get up. You don’t deserve to be on the ground. Go over and grab a seat by the fountain. Lily slowly gets up. Lily: Can I take Moses with me? Malcolm: Naw baby girl. Moses and I got other plans. I’m really sorry Lily. I had no idea this was your party but the lies and backstabbing stops now! Neil: What are you talking about Malcolm? Malcolm takes a sip of his Hennessy and then grabs his phone. He plays the recording of Nate’s confession. The Colonnade room hears this: Nate: She’s an old flame from college. We were in love but she had to leave to take care of her mother who was sick. Roxanne: Oh and Hillary is here and lives across the hall from me. Nate: I had nothing to do with that. Roxanne: Nate I am so damned hurt. Nate: I never meant to hurt you. But I’m not willing to be your man only when you’re lonely. You claim you love me then why don’t you leave Devon and be with me? You can’t have it both ways Rox. You not being fair. Roxanne knows deep down he is right but is not willing to let him know that he is. She turns from him again. Nate: And besides things are too deep now they have changed. Roxanne: Because Miss Hillary is here? Nate: Yes. She knows about my secret. Roxanne: That you switched Moses paternity test results from Malcolm to Neil? Nate: Yes. Roxanne: Nosey Bitch! Nate: To protect everybody we need to end this. Roxanne I’m truly sorry for hurting you Nate lays his head on the ground in shame. Neil and Olivia look at each other then both at Nate. Olivia: Nate please tell me you did not do this? You could not possibly do this. And you were seeing Devon’s girlfriend behind his back? Nate what has happened to you what kind of man are you? I didn’t raise you to be this way! Neil: Nate tell your mother and Malcolm these are lies. Tell them Moses is my SON!! Neil says now hollering very angry with tears forming in his eyes as he begins to accept that Malcolm s possibly telling the truth now that the recording has been played. Malcolm aims the gun at Nate. Nate looks up at Malcolm. Oddly Nate smiles. He can see something no one else can from behind Malcolm. Sister Patterson from behind Malcolm with a bible in her hand runs up on him and jumps on his back. Once Sister Patterson clings to his back she takes one hand and begins to hit Malcolm in the head with the bible. Sister Patterson: I will knock some sense into you! This is no work of the lord! How dare ya!? I want to know right here and right now how dare ya? How dare you come in here devil and break this good vibe in this place. I’ve blessed this place and you’re making a fool out of me and no one does that to the Almighty Sister Patterson! Where is your mother we need to have a chat. Don’t you know no good boy? I told these God fearing people nothing will happen and damn it devil you will not win. Repent thy sins now you gun toting demon. I told yall from day one I’m a solider for the lord and tonight I will prove it. Don’t test it. Don’t test me or my powers….. Lauren where you at? Sister Lauren, comrade this is your cue. You gotta run up with that bible I gave you and beat the hell out this black ass devil. Help me Sister. We at war this is the battlefield. Attack this demon with the weapons of mass holiness. Lauren stands back with her own bible and vial of holy water and simply can’t believe her eyes and the fact Sister Patterson was true to her word, she really is a solider of the Lord. She finally snaps out of her daze and as she is about to run up on Malcolm with her bible, she realizes Malcolm is waving the gun around. Malcolm struggles to keep his balance as Sister Patterson is a thick woman. Malcolm: Get off me you hippo ass!! Malcolm begins to fire his gun into the air randomly hoping it will scare Sister Patterson so much she will give up her crusade. Moses begins to cry as Neil grabs him and moves him closer to him to protect him. Created by William J Bell and Lee Phillip Bell Episode166: Malcolm takes his family Hostage! Written by ML Cooks Creative Consults: Cary Richardson, Martin Saenz, and Alex Washington Verdon Lou In the basement is Cane looking at the ruptured gas pipe. He takes out his grey duct tape from his jacket and begins to tape up the leak. He wraps the tape round and round the leak until it stops or at least the hissing isn’t as loud. He tears the tape with his teeth. Cane: There. All fixed up. If its one thing I’ve learned being in America is that grey duct tape fixes everything. Even a ruptured gas pipe. Cane is a little out of breath and sits back for a minute. He looks around the basement and notices it’s kind of weird. The walls are made of stone and they are damp. He sees a pair of legs around a corner. He walks over to these legs and sees James’ unconscious body. Cane: Holy hell. I’m seeing stuff. Cane sits next to James. Cane: I need a hit. It’s been a while. Cane reaches into his pocket and pulls out a little coke. He readies it on his hand and then snorts it. Cane: Ah yes. It’s always good to have a little reserve for times like these. What do you say big guy? Cane looks at James waiting for an answer. Cane: Oh well Mate. Fixing that gas leak was hard work huh? Tired ya out huh old man. I’ll just smoke for the both of us. When you wake up we can talk about it. Meanwhile upstairs in the hostage room. Sheila is holding the gun at Dru and Sharon. Sheila: I’m going to check on the patient. Dru: Who is it? Who you got back there? You been keeping the mystery patient a secret for months. Sheila: You only need to know that whom ever I have back there will certainly change Genoa City forever. So don’t worry about who it is for now. You don’t need to know. Just save your strength for our showdown. You’re going to need it. Dru: So that means you’re going to untie me so I can whoop that ass? Sheila: I am Drucilla. We are going to duke it out and if you win guess what, you have your freedom. Sharon: Freedom. My god that sounds wonderful. Dru: Bitch I’m the one doing hard work. I gotta whoop that ass while you just sit there be a pretty blonde. Sharon: Dru I don’t know how to fight. Dru: Sissy ass Bitch. Your freedom is on the line and all’s you can say is Dru I’m sorry I can’t fight. Sheila just hurry yo crazy ass up so I can give you these hands and be done with it. I’m tired of messing with you… Bitch. Sheila: Yea we’re going to see who the bitch really is. Dru: Bitch I am. HBIC. Sheila: And what is that? Dru: Bitch! It means I’m the head bitch in charge. I‘m the Queen bee and once you untie me I’m going to show you that. Sheila hands the gun to Mary. Sheila: Mary no funny business. I got all the power here. I’m in control. Mary: Are you really going to duke it with Dru? Sheila: Are you going to help momma bear? Mary: Dru looks like she’s out my league. Sheila: You really are not a Carter. I should have raised you myself, Not my sister. It seems blondes are weak. Dru: You know crazy bitch, I can agree to that. The first lick of sense you’ve had since we been here. Sheila walks into the patient room as Mary holds the gun at Sharon and Dru, hands still a little shaky. Mary: How did you two become my mom’s hostages anyway? Dru and Sharon look at each other. Back at the Colonnade Room Malcolm and Sister Patterson are still struggling. Malcolm is finally able to wrestle Sister Patterson of his back and then grabs her by the neck holding her from behind and aims the gun right at her head. Sister Patterson is now Malcolm’s hostage. Malcolm: Anyone else have any surprises and I will shoot this crazy broad! Sister Patterson: My God won’t let you do that! Malcolm: Shut that sh!t up old lady. Lily (crying): Malcolm please don’t. Malcolm: Don’t what? Nate should have been told don’t But he did. He took my son from me. Olivia: Nathan is this true? Did you switch Moses’ paternity results? Nate looks at his mother with tear drops forming. He knows he is about to deeply disappoint her. Nate: Yes... Yes I did. Mom I’m so very sorry. Neil: Nathan! Why? Why would you do something like this? Nate: Malcolm doesn’t know how to be a father. Look at him! He doesn’t deserve Moses. He’s a bum, a loser and a drunk. Malcolm: Damn ! That’s how you really feel? You could have just came to me nephew and told me, not take my son away from me! You don’t get to do that! He’s my son and I’ve waste all this time without him! I don’t even like his name and that’s the first thing I’m changing. You took all of that from me and then Neil thinks he’s mightier than thou parading him in my face. With my ex Leslie. Dirty ass mutha fukkas!! Sister Patterson: Don’t forget, she’s was a stripper. Leslie was an ugly stripper with an even uglier body. Leslie took her clothes off for money. God don’t like ugly. Leslie shakes her head in disbelief in this high stakes hour, Sister Patterson finds the time to insult her even when facing death. From all of what Sister Patterson has said this is what sense Malcolm has made of it in his drunken stupor. Malcolm: Yea …that's right… a hoe! Leslie left me for my brother. My brother took her away from me like he took Lily and Moses. I’m tired of people taking sh!t from me and judging me! Neil took Sophia, my Moses mother may she rest in peace. Now he wants to continue keeping my son Moses. Neil: Malcolm you are in no condition to raise a child! I’m not going to let you do this! Malcolm: I got the gun Neil! Nate: Malcolm please don’t do this, we can work something out. Malcolm: Shut yo lying ass up talking to me Nate! You aint got sh!t to say to me! Olivia with tears rolling down her face. Olivia: Son how could you do this? Then betraying Devon with Roxanne. Devon just shakes his head at the situation at hand. Malcolm throws Sister Patterson to the ground. She passes out. Malcolm grabs his bottle of Hennessy and take a gulp. Neil: See what I mean? You’re a drunk! Is this how you want to be in front of Moses? You claim you want him well act like a man then! What father holds his child at gun point? What kind of example are you setting? He’s going to remember this! Malcolm: Remember these nuts Neil! Are you admitting you have my son then? Neil: Hell no! You will never get your hands on Moses. He’s my son!! I love him like he is my own! Malcolm: It’s my time to be a father Neil! You already took my first chance when you took Lily from me! Neil: That chance would have never presented itself if you hadn’t slept with my wife Dru. You seem to forget that whole part of the story. Malcolm: Dru knew all those years the possibility was there that Lily was my little girl. And never said anything. Or maybe she did, to you and you two agreed to keep quiet about it Lily: Malcolm don’t do this! Just let Moses go! Malcolm: You hear that Neil? My daughter calls me by my first name. She doesn’t call me dad, she calls you dad! Sophia, Lily, Moses and Leslie. This is going to stop! He walks closer towards Neil and Moses taking another swig of his liquor. Malcolm: Stand up Neil. Stand up with my son! Neil: No Malcolm. Nate: Malcolm I did this come get me! Malcolm: I will bro. Your time is coming. Olivia: Malcolm please don’t hurt my son. Malcolm: That’s real easy for you to say Liv. I was once a father figure to Nate. When you and I were together, after Nate SR died. I was there and then he does this to me? I’m not trying to hear that Liv. What about my pain? Doesn’t anyone care about my pain. It’s never about me. Now Neil either stand up with my son or I’m going to start shooting mutha fukkas in here! Lily: Dad just do it! Malcolm please don’t hurt them! Malcolm looks at Lily. Malcolm: I love you baby girl. He looks back at Neil who is now standing with Moses. Moses look at both Neil and Malcolm. Moses: Who is my dad? Neil and Malcolm: I am. Neil and Malcolm look at each other. Neil: Malcolm, don’t do anything stupid. Put the gun down and we can get you some help. Malcolm: You think I need help! I do. Because you have everything. Ever since we were boys. You got everything. The smart one, the handsome one. Who was I? The one who got all your hand me downs. Our ma and pops never wanted me. I was a mistake. So I became a loner. Never felt loved my mom and pops. You outshined me in everything. Even to this day you take what’s mine. My women, my children. I tried to find my own way in life but you get in my way everytime. I had happiness but you stole that from me brother. I never did you dirty. EVER! Neil you gotta be stopped! Now hand over my son so no one will get hurt. Neil: I’m sorry Malcolm. I’m not going to do that. I love this little boy. You are not fit to be his father. Malcolm points the gun at Neil’s chest and walks up on him so the tip of the barrel is touching Neil’s chest. Lily, and Olivia cry out frantically. Moses begins to cry too. Moses: Who is my dad? Lily: Dad please don’t do this! Give Moses to Malcolm. Nate: Malcolm don’t do this in front of your son. Olivia: Think of your son Malcolm! Malcolm: I am. That’s exactly what I’m doing. Malcolm looks into Neil’s eyes. Their eyes speak to one another. A language that no one but them can see. Malcolm’s eyes are filled with fire and Neil’s represent pity and sadness. Neil: Brother, please don’t do this. I love you and we can work this out and get you some help. I had no idea you were harboring so much anger and hate. Neil holds Moses hand tighter as he begins to choke back tears. Moses: Dad you’re hurting my hand! In slow motion, Malcolm looks at Moses, and it really hurts him that he call’s his brother dad just like with his daughter Lily. Moses: Please don’t hurt my dad Malcolm. Malcolm looks at Moses again even more devastated this time, listening to his son’s plea although still calling his brother dad. Malcolm feels like he must take things into his own hands. He must control this outcome. It’s been too many years that all this has been building up and he is determined not to let Neil take Moses from him. Malcolm looks Neil back in his eyes and smiles. Malcolm: Moses is my son Neil and I will not let you take him from me. I hate you Neil Winters!! Malcolm then shoots Neil point blank in the chest. Everyone screams out in astonishment and Moses begins to cry having just witnessed his “dad being shot by his other “dad” Neil stumbles back not taking his eyes off of Malcolm. Malcolm grabs Moses as Neil collapses to the ground. Malcolm leaves the party with Moses in tow. Everyone gathers round Neil as Olivia calls 911. Malcolm puts Moses in the front seat and straps him with the seat belt. Malcolm gets in the driver side and tries to start up his El Camino. It won’t turn over. Moses: Why did you shoot my dad? Malcolm pauses and looks at his son. Malcolm: Neil is the bad man. I’m your father. Moses: You’re a bad man too. You shot my dad. Malcolm is angered that Moses is still calling Neil his dad and now his son thinks he’s a bad man.