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Rufus sits at her table looking at all the men of Pasadena having a good time at the bar tonight. She looks at Bryan, DC, Mike, and Santino to see if any one of them gives her an inclination that they might beher secret lover. She gets no such luck. She then sees Kiko walking over towards Karim by the bar. Rufus remembers the encounter with DC and Kiko theother day. She remembers DC saying something to the effect that Kiko gets down with men. Rufus "I'vealways heard he was gay and I have never seen him with another woman. Maybe itis him. He's so gorgeous with those seductive eyes, and he's loaded, he's a doctor. Could Kiko be my secret lover?" Kiko orders a drink at the bar as he sits next to Karim.Kiko watches Karim drink his third beer. Kiko "Don't you think you've had enough of those?" Karim "And youare?" Kiko "Some one that cares." Karim "Look man,I don't know if you've noticed but I have no interest in men." Kiko "Never said I did. What makes you say something like that? Why does every think I am gay?" Karim "Look at you. You dress extra sweet. What straight man wears the things you wear? I'venever heard you with a woman either. Rumors about you being gay have been surrounding since you got to Pasadena. And not only that, look at how you approached me? You care about me? What man says that to another man?" Rufus "Ohh you can say it to me." Rufus says walking behind them. Karim "Excuse me?" Rufus, looking at Kiko "Is it you my love? Is it you hitting me up on adam4adam?" Kiko "I beg your pardon." Rufus "Come on sexy, I know it's you." She says caressing his cheek. Kiko "I am not gay. Plain and simple. Just because I m not shacked up like the rest of the men here doesn't mean I am gay. I have self-respect and class. I don't need a woman to validate who the hell I am. Unlike our father. Now I am not a violent man but I will beat that gay out of you if you don't get out my face." Rufus walks away with her head down. Karim "Who?" Kiko "DC. DC ismy dad too." Karim "Don is your dad. He's my dad too. So this means…" Kiko "Yes, weare half brothers. Don cheated on my mother Lynn with your mother, Sister Patterson." Karim "Oh my wow.We share the same loser for a father." Kiko "Indeed. So that's why I was concerned with you drinking. You have been drinking a lot. I am concerned considering that you have filed petition for Lauren's baby. He's my family too you know. All I see is you drinking. How can you raise your nephew if you're always drunken?" Karim "Look, just like I told your whack ass father, I am a grown ass man. I am my own man. I will do what I please in this life. You and Don can take this family thing and put it where the sun doesn't shine." Kiko "That'sreally rude. I did nothing to you in this mess! Why shut me out? I am a victim just like you." Karim "Ok victim,did your brother kill himself?" Kiko "I am really sorry about that. But I did not cause that. I want a family. I never hadone growing up. We share the same blood. You are my half brother." Karim "I only have one brother and that was Kevin. Your father and my mother took him away from me. I will never forgive anyone related to DC. I have lost my best friend,my hero, and my mentor. Kevin was a good man and I am dealing with it the bestway I know how. SO If I want to drink then that's my business." Kiko "It becomes my business when my nephew is at the center of this." Karim "Look dude,Lauren's son is no family of yours. I want nothing to do with you. Don't interfere with this custody battle." Kiko "Or what? What are you going to do to me?" Karim "Ill find something." Kiko "Well since we are passing out threats here's one for you, you don't stop this drinking, I am going to take matters into my own hands." Karim "Where do you get off threatening me? Just like DC now you are too." Kiko "It's because DC sees the same thing I do. You're a drunk. You're drinking your lifeaway." Karim suddenly sucker punches Kiko. The bar becomes silent. Karim "What's up pretty boy? I messed that pretty face up of yours." Kiko wiping blood from his mouth charges Karim and they fal lonto a table, flipping over chairs and tables. They begin punching each other.The men of Pasadena try to break them up but they just get knocked out. Karim and Kiko are messing up the bar pretty good as they continue to fight. DC rushes over and gets in between them to break up the fight. DC " I willnot have my sons fighting!" Pasadenians are stunned to learn that Kiko and Karim are brothers. Rufus " Look at those Williams men Kiko, Karim and even DC. I heard Ria once say big dicks do run in that family. I have to find out. Lord please let Karim or Kiko be my secret lover." Rufus rushes over to Kiko and tries to wipe the blood up from his face. Kiko is so tired from fighting he doesn't even resist the tranny's help. Rufus is elated that she thinks she found her secret lover. Kiko Whitfield!? Episode 135 pt2: Who is Miss Rue's Down Low Lover? Written By: ML Cooks and Tara Smith with Belinda Quinton Creative Consult: Monique Cooks Downtown Pasadena,High Klass Hair Sharon is giving a client a manicure when she looks up out her shop window and sees a few white horses and a carriage pull up in front ofher shop. All the patrons gather round to see what is going on. Sharon step outside her shop and sees Daniel dressed in a tuxedo and a top hat approachher. Sharon Daniel,what is this?" Daniel "I came to pick u the woman I love from work." She smiles and hugs him. The crowd that has gathered around her begins to clap and cheer for the couple. Sharon "Let me lock up my shop." Sharon runs inside to grab her purse and locks up her shop.She meets back with Daniel and he helps her onto the carriage. They pull off asthe crowd claps at the scene of romance. Sharon "This is a nice surprise Daniel. I love you." They kiss. Daniel "I love you to Sharon. I wanted to show you that. We need this. We need some us time. We have been through so much I think we deserve some happiness." Sharon "I do too.This is so romantic" She says as they stroll through downtown. He looks into her eyes. She looks into his. Sharon "Is something wrong?" Daniel "Well, I searched far and wide for a present worthy of you. A present that would help you to understand how much you mean to me. I didn't find anything...so tonight I give you the only thing I own worthy of our love....tonight I give you my heart." Sharon sheds a tear. They kiss passionately as they arrive at their destination, The Blue Note. Daniel steps down out ofthe carriage and helps Sharon down as well. They walk into The Blue Note. Theysee the upscale bar is a mess from the fight that just took place between the Williams brothers. Daniel "Wow this is not what I had in mind." Sharon "Maybe we should go over and see what's going?" Daniel "No.Tonight it's just about my lady and me. I have other plans. Let's grab a table over the pond." They walk into the other dining area that sits over a lit up pond. Sharon sees a table set u for them complete with Champagne and a dozen red roses. Sharon sits down and takes in the little live musical quartet that begins to play classical music. Sharon "I am really impressed. You set all this up?" Daniel "Of course."' Sharon "You really know how to sweep a woman off her feet." Daniel "I have something I want to say to you." He kneels down one knee. Sharon gasps and covers her mouth "Ohmy God Daniel no." Daniel, smiling at her "Just listen. I've been working on something. I find it refreshing when I put mythoughts on paper. And I wrote something about you. I hope you love it. The night skytwinkles above The stars mirror the light in your eyes They fill with the look of love And with the bond that ties The eyes are the window to the soul Open to expose the heart's real need What is the payment of the toll? A spark that is planted like a seed This spark is a fire burning within A desire to expand the glow To some, it's simply a sin To others, the heart will know The eyes show the love you feel The heart is open wide My soul has to close the deal Then you walk with me by my side Love is a gift I give to you My heart for you to hold If you feel the love I feel too Our hearts will warm and block out the cold" He pulls out a velvet box and opens it to flash a diamond ring at Sharon. Before Daniel can go any further with his romantic proposal, he feels a splash coming from his hat. He looks up and Daniel and Sharon are both stunned when they see Lauren pouring a mug of beer all over Daniel. Laruen "Am Iinterrupting?" She says with a smile. Later that Afternoon,……. PasadenaCity Courthouse The sun sits high in the Pasadena Sky; Sabryn stands inside a courtroom with Lisa Ray at her side. Today is a long awaited day for her; it's her trial. Jack is on the prosecution side of the courtroom,and Sabryn is talking with Lisa at the defense table. Sabryn "Lisa, you have toget me out of this. I can't go to prison; not now." Lisa "I'll try my best,but it won't be easy. You shot Ashley seven times. But I got you out of this once and I can do it again." Sabryn "I hope so. Alexis is going to be out for blood but I can't let her stop me now." Mike, coming up from behind and putting a hand on Sabryn's shoulder "Hey." Sabryn, turning around "Mike, what are youdoing here??" Mike, smiling "I wanted to be here for you." Sabryn "You didn't have todo that." Mike "I couldn't just leave you hanging. You poured your heart out to me the other day and I understand; I want to be there for you." Sabryn "You're the chief ofpolice and this is Pasadena. Surely you have somewhere else to be." Mike "You need a friend,Sabryn. I'm going to be that friend." Sabryn, smiling "Thank you, Mike.You're one of the few I've had during my time in jail. I'm really grateful." Mike "How're you feeling?" Sabryn "Nervous but determined. I have to get out of jail; I know I killed a woman, but I have toget out of here as soon as possible. Natalia is taking over everything; shewants to destroy me and I'm not having it. She thinks she is going to raise myson, well she has another thing coming." Alexis enters the courtroom, and she looks at Sabryn and scowls. She walks over to Jack. Alexis "Hello, I am Alexis Jones, the sister of Ashley. I sure hope you have a good plan to get Sabryn sent to the electric chair or prison for life today; I've waited long enough and my sister deserves justice. I refuse to let this woman walk the streets." Jack "Do not worry, Miss Jones; I'm a strong DA. I don't plan to let Sabryn get away with anything; she shot your sister seven times in front of the police. How can anyone get away with that?" Alexis "Mona kidnapped and killed and raped all sorts of people and all they did to her was send her to a mental hospital. That better not fly this time." Alexis feels a hand on her shoulder, and she turns around to see Karim there. Alexis "Karim, baby, what're you doing here?" Karim "I want to be here to support you; I know we've had a lot of madness lately, and I still don't know what to think of all of this, but you're pregnant with my child and this trial won't be easy for you. I want to be here for you." Alexis, touched "Thank you so much,Karim. I love you and am so glad that we're back together." LaDonna walks in, and sees the two together, "Not for long,Alexis. I know you're hiding something and I won't let you get by with it this time." Karim, turning to see LaDonna there "Donna, what're you doing here?" LaDonna "I heard about this trial and I figured you'd be here. I had to come, Karim. I can't let Alexis sink her claws into you like this." Karim sighs and leaves it be, deciding not to causemore havoc between Alexis and LaDonna today. Next, Bryan and Natalia arrive inside the courtroom, and Natalia smirks. Natalia "Seems like a great day to watch Sabryn go to prison." Bryan "That's the mother ofmy son, Natalia." Natalia "Well I'm going to behis mother now; Sabryn's insulted you and mocked you since the day she went to jail. How can you defend her now?" Bryan "I don't want to defend Sabryn, and I refuse to let her take my son away from me, but I'm nothappy about all of this either." Natalia "Well if she gets out, you're screwed, so you better hope that she goes to prison today. Or maybe even get the death penalty." Sabryn looks at both Alexis and Natalia. She then looks at Lisa. "Lisa, Alexis and Natalia are both out to get me. They want to see me fall today; I can't let that happen." Lisa "Don't worry. I havean ace up my sleeve." Baliff "All rise! Honorable Judge Hatchett presiding!" Everyone stands, and Judge Hatchett enters the courtroom. She motions for everyone to sit, and she looks at the people there. JudgeHatchett "Today we are gathered to deliver a verdict in the matter of People of Pasadena v. Sabryn Genet. Sabryn Genet is accused of murder in the first degree, after shooting Ashley Jones seven times, killing her. Miss Genet, how do you plead?" Lisa "My client pleads not guilty, your honor." Alexis, to herself "My ass. If I have my way, Sabryn will be fried by the end of the year." Natalia "Come on, judge, lock Sabryn up and throw away the key. Then I can take her family and her business for good. She's not stopping me this time." Sabryn,thinking to herself "I'm getting released today,and then I'm going to take everything back that's rightfully mine."
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Thats what that dumb ass get. Her diet has affected a patients life. Dub hoe. I don't even feel sorry for her no more. SHes just being dumb right now. I would like to reach in this pc screen and slap the sit out of her. DOnt that dumb ho know that repeated vomitting will mess up her teeth all that damn acid I loved Coop and Rocky's scenes. I didn't think coop would be so blunt about the HIV thing. But still nothing is confriemd. Rocky could still have it and not know it. Now we got to find out who it really is. SOme one knows and is taking pills for it. I wonder of this person is having sex wit someone. This Dinah and Belinda plot is starting to intrest me alot. I also liked Kevin's street boy scenes. Good job Jay u r keeping things going.
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Pasadena Jail House Mikewalks up to Sabryn's jail cell. "Hey you." Sabryn"Hey yourself" Mike "How are you feeling today? Sabryn "Tired. Tired of being in here. I am so helpless. Do you know thatNatalia came here to see me with my son?" Mike "How did she get your son?" Sabryn "She's with Bryan. They are playing house with my son." Mike "Bryan? Wow. I didn't think he would do something like that to you." Sabryn "I know. He really has crossed the line. I can't believe he would do thisto me knowing how much I despise that Bitch. I am going to get him for this. Iam going to get them both. I promise that. I will get my son back." Mike "You sound like your old self again. That's the Sabryn I know. That fire,that passion that lies within you. That's what I love about you." After he saysthat there is an odd silence. They stare at each other. To hurry and end theoddness and to try and cover up what he just said he changes the topic "I have some good news for you" Sabryn "What's that?" Mike "Your trial starts today!" Sabryn "TODAY!?" Mike "Today Sabryn" Sabryn "Oh my gosh, I am going to prove my innocence and be free. Free todestroy Bryan and Natalia.' She says with a smile on her face. "I'll be able tobe with my son." She says wiping tears from her eyes. Episode135: Part 1 Writtenby ML Cooks CreativeConsult: Monique Cooks Divine Design, Alexis's office Alexisand Rufus are in each other's faces. Rufus "So what's it going to be slut ass? You give me a stake in this companyor I tell your hot man the truth about how evil you really are at Sabryn'strial today." Alexis "You won't get away with this Rufus Taylor!" Rufus "It' Miss Rue to you boo boo." Alexis "No one gets the best of me." Rufus "I just did so I guess there's a first time for everything. I'll takethese pathetic statements that your decision is to grant me my own line." Alexis "Yes you tranny freak!" Rufus "How wonderful. Now I can live my dream by making the worlds firstofficial tranny queen line." Alexis "Oh my God my fashion will collapse." Rufus "Probably not. I think I'll take this office." Alexis "Are you out of your d!ck sucking mind?" Rufus "How about I suck your man's d!ck after I expose you?" Alexis "Anything you want queen." Rufus "Sounds good." The scene is interrupted when Santino walks in. There isan odd silence in the air. Rufus thinks back on his chat with On The DL. Hewonders if Santino is her secret lover. Then she remembers talking with LaDonnaand finding out Santino may have gotten Alexis pregnant. She hopesit's not him because she doesn't want to deal with the drama especially withAlexis. Rufus "I am sure you two have a lot to talk about. Alexis I'll be here in themorning so this office better be cleared out by then or you'll have to answerto me." She storms out leaving a defeated Alexis feeling embarrassed. The Blue Note walks over to the bar and sees his son Karim already there, drinking as usual.He grabs a seat next to him. DC orders a beer from Pierre. He looks at Karim "Hello son." Karimlooks at him "You are never to approach me like that again." DC "You're my son." Karim "I'm too good to be your son. Your scum DC." Don "What about your mother? Do you hate her just like you hate me? She isthe one that lied to us all. I didn't have an affair by myself. Your motherpartook in it as well. She knew good hell well what she was doing. I am sick ofall of this. We all make mistakes damn it. You act like you're God aroundhere." Karim "Compared to you I am. I never cheated or lied to any one ever in my lifelike you have." DC "Ok good for you. You want a noble prize or something." Karim "I can't believe you are really talking to me like this." DC "I am just sick and tired of all the anger and attitudes. I don't knowabout you but I am trying to move forward. I refuse to let the past hold meback. It takes more energy being mad and holding grudges. If you choose to stayin the past that's on you. But it's going to cost you." Karim "Cost me?" DC "Look at how you been drinking lately. Every time I turn around you aredrinking alcohol. I have never seen you like this." Karim "Look at what you and my mother did to me. You two literally took myfamily away from me. We use to be a close unit. Every time you saw Kevin yousaw Karim. Whenever people saw me they always saw Kevin. We had each other'sback. My homeboy, my brother, I love him and miss him. He killed himselfover the things you and Pat set into motion. You're affair had a chain reactionthat led to all this madness. I will NEVER EVER forgive you two for takingKevin away from me. I am empty. I am lonely. I don't know what else to do butdrink." DC "Karim, I am here. Let me be here for you. You can't deal with thisalone." Karim "I can and I will. I am my own man now Don. I am told for all of this. Ideal with things my way. And if that means drinking than so be it. Why do yougive a damn?" DC "Because you're my fu(cking son. I care about you I don't like what Isee. You won't let me to help you so what the hell is an old man like mesupposed to do. So what I was a pimp and I like fried chicken. I retired thatlife. People change. You have to give people a chance. I gave you my blood whenyou needed it after that car accident. I saved your life. I am just trying tobe there for you and you do nothing but treat me like I don't exist. I am theonly family you have right now." Karim "Not by choice." DC "I have tried and tried and tried and I am tired. I can't do this anymore Karim. I am tired of being the nice guy." Karim Meaning what?" DC "I'm going to have to take matters in my own hand. Show you what I amreally about. I will not be disrespected no longer. " Karim "Oh yea and what are you going to do?" DC "Keep acting the way you acting and I'll start at this custody trial. Iheard about you trying to get Lauren's baby." Karim "My nephew!" DC "All the same. I might have to let the court know about your drinkingproblem. And like I said that would only be the beginning." Karim "You fat bastard! My own father blackmailing me and threating me?" DC "Oh now you want to call me father? I thought so. I warned you son. Keepliving in the past and see what happens. Nothing will come good of it. I'm a boss." He grabs his drink and walks out on to the patio that sits over apond. Karim is stunned that his newfound father just threatened him. He ordersanother drink. Westwood Park Riagets a knock on her door. Ria who was lying on the couch gets up to answer it.She opens the door and her eyes are wide when she sees Kiko, with a silk robeon and his manhood is saying hello. Ria "What the hell?" Kiko "I am trying to let you know I am serious Ria." Ria "About what?" Hesteps in the house and closes the door behind him while pushing Ria back. Ria "Boy you better go home and put some clothes on. Mess around and catch acold." Heunties his robe and lets it fall off his body. Karim is fully naked as hesmiles, looking at Ria unable to take her eyes of his d!ck. Ria "My oh my. It's nice. I thought it would be small sine you were so prettyand all. I guess big D!cks do run in your family." Kiko chuckles "Touch it. I know you want to. Better yet, taste it." Ria "No Kiko. I don't want you. This is nothing but pity. I don't want youlike this. Besides, I already slept with two of your brothers and your father.What would it look like if I slept with you too? The only one left is Mona andI am strictly dickly." Kikowalks up to her and olds her, pressing his naked body against hers. "I don't care about none of that. Ria. I want you." He kisses herpassionately. He then kisses her on her neck, she moans as she takes her handand begins to stroke his dick. The feel of his dick in her hands gets Riaexcited. She moans even louder. Kiko meets with Rica's lips again andbegins to kiss her once more. She then knees him in the crotch. He hollers outin pain. He hunches over. "I really can't believe you. First you that I was a sexual predator, thenyou wouldn't test me for breast cancer, now you coming on to me out of pity.That let's me know how little you think of me. I'm not so easy after all am I?You better get your ass out of here before I call the cops. You are takingadvantage of my breast cancer and I will never forgive you for that" She opensher door and pushes him out. She slams the door and leans up against it. Shebreaks into a flurry of tears as she sinks to the ground. Ria "I'll be lonely forever." Back at Divine Design Alexiswalks over to her desk and takes a seat. She exhales Santino "Wow, what was that between you two?" Alexis "Rufus? Oh Santino. Things are not good for me right now. I have so muchgoing on." Tino "Oh I heard." Alexis "You heard? What does that mean?" Santino "Ladonna and I had an interesting conversation the other day." Alexis "That dumb Bitch. So I guess you know? Tino "Pregnant?" Alexis "Yes." She pauses and they look at each other. They don't say anything. "This is Karim's baby. He knows about our trip to Miami. He knows I wasjust trying to find my mother. But I think it would be best if we went ourseparate ways. I am reading on thin ice right now. Karim wants me to proveto him this is his baby and not yours. Which is it so he's going to bewith me. But with Ladonna breathing down my neck. She is trying everything shecan to take Karim away from me." Tino "Isn't that what you wanted to do your self? You two are equals." Alexis "I think not. I'm a winner. She's a loser. I won my man. She lost hers. Iam having his baby. " Tino "Well good luck to you on all that. I want no drama." Alexis "Won't get any from me It was nice knowing you but after today, on somereal sh!t deuces Santino. I love Karim and I am not trying to jeopardize thatfor anything or body. We are about to be a family." Tino "Alright cool. I can respect that. This is it." Justthen, Ladonna and Jenn walk into the office. Everybody looks at each other. Ladonna "Well what do we have here? You two making baby plans?" Jenn "Baby plans? Alexis is having Santino's child?" Alexis "Oh God just what I needed. Here we go again." Laterthat evening, as the edge of night approaches, Rufus steps into The Blue Note Rufuswalks inside looking very beautiful tonight. "Tonight is the night my new lover is going to approach me. She stepsinside further and is stunned to see what seems to be all the men of Pasadenaat the Blue Note. As Rufus looks at each man she has thoughts about each one of them, Mike "He's strong and got a nice body. He's sexxy too. He's a real man" Bryan "I always heard Bryan has a big dick. He owns the Jump Off so he got some type of money but he got kids" Karim "Karim is so fine and with some good looking lips. He got a nice body too. But ALexis has her claws in him and supposedly having his baby." DC "He's not too bad looking but he's a grandpa now. He's got nothing going. He is a Williams and Ria says all the Williams mend got big d!cks to." Santino, "Tino is sexy. He's so mysterious. I could see him being my latin lover. But again he's saddled with Alexis" Kiko"Kiko has the whole package. He's the sexxiest man in Pasadena. I get lost just looking in his eyes. He's a doctor too so I know his pockets are phat. And He's a Williams. He got the total package." and Daniel" Daniel is sexxy too and got a nice body. He's been through a lot. I heard he was once a crack head so I don't know. He may have mental issues after what Mona did to him." all there. "Wow. So many good-looking men. Who could it be? Who is my secret lover?"She watches all the men to see if she can detect any signs from the seeminglystraight men. She grabs a seat and waits, just like her DL lover told her too. "He told me to wait and he would approach me. Rufus gets one final lookof the men and wonders who it could be. "Tonight my dream are going to come true. Come on lover identifyyourself. Show me who you are. Who is my DL lover?" This episode has been brought to you by my Mac Book Pro Stay Tuned for Part 2
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I really cant wait to see how it al comes down. I like ur theme to. If STEAM had one it would be "The Big Pay Back" lol
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I would have never guessed it didn't come with ease for you. It seems like it does. You do a great job at keeping it modern and traditional. What I like to call a no bull [!@#$%^&*] ass show.
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I really admire your series you show me you dont have to use cuss words and over the top plots to tell a good and entetaining story.
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I do love the storyon here and the episode flowed so nicely. Only me and you will know who wrote which scenes. Thats how good it flowed. I can't wait to see all the reactions and who the mole is. Also I got one question if The McGrergor estate is in such dire straits how can Anna and Andrew afford the big life across the ocean. I hope we dont have to wait for a month of Sundays before the next ep is posted. If u need help writing let me know. Novi is my fav blog. I can never get enough it
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Very good episode. i am really following the stories more. FTL has really become modernized lately. It's getting sassy. I just loved J's attitude toward Michelle at first. I was like yes, give her the cold shoulder. But all she wanted want some dick. And of course he had to give in. I hope she really means what she says when she is done being afraid. I hope she dont hurt J. Lot's of horny hearts in this town latley I so loved Jude and Robbie's scenes. And I am so glad Robbie stood up to Emma. I am very curious to see where all this goes. Jason I can never imagine being with a woman. He is to gay for that. Being a gay man myself I can say that. Also shouldnt he refer to himself as bisxual and not gay? I also loved Aubrey scene with Rafe. so dark a nd I could see the whole thing taking place in my head I wonder what Aubrey is really after and it seems Rafe will have no chocie but get sucked into what ever she has up her sleave. I am not feeling the Cyrus and Mallet and Dinah scenes. But other than that a good episode. Your stories are progressing very well
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Miss Rue is a Bad Bitch too! Ep 134
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LOL, Welcome back Redd I was going to shoot you an email to ask what was up with you. You should already know I am going to ask about Varied Lives aka Novi? I missing it man sh'mone with it. Jay yes this is exactly how I am writing this Ria storyline Ria is a strong woman and this will have an effect on her. This is very hard for her she doesnt want to show she is weak and scared. And what Kiko doing to her is a slap in the Face. I really wish I had more time with this story but with the series coming to an end I dont. I kinda had to speed things up and you will see that but I will do it respectully. just a little disappointed that I waited so long to give Ria such heavy material. I told you Miss Rue will have a lot going on. SHe is going to become more pivtoal as episodes go by. It's going to be a total shock at who her DL lover is. Pay careful attetion. I have been dropping hints and clues all over the place. Jay I am so glad you are enjoying this Lauren plotline. You really motivate me when I write it. And I agree with how some shows gloss over it. For times sake I really wanted to but I couldn't do my readers like that. Besides it gives Lauren something to do. She is plugged into many plots right now and I wanted to show case that. Keep your eye on lauren. Things for her will continue to get worse. If STEAM had a season 4th I had a big story for her. Too bad though... I really enjoyed the Blue note scenes myself. We got to see some folks we haven't been seeing for a while. We got to see Jenn and Lauren become friends again and Nat declaring war on Jenn over something from season two. Jay you have really been a big inspriation for me lately and I really aprreciate that. I am so glad u r enjoying the series and like the flow. I have really fallen in love with it all over again. I feel like I have my mojo back once more. I have been working so hard and writing so much lately. It really breaks my heart that it's all coming to an end just when things were and are getting good. You know what they say all good things come to an end. -
Wonder what Annie is going to tell RJ I love Michelle and J and I do where both points a view I wonder how this is going to work out That song Maureen sang, is that an orginal? I am so glad Ash used mouth wash after she vomitted I was worried about that. Its sad to see her go through this again I wish I answered the door when Rafe came to the door naked So Robbie and Jude are best friends? I see a triangle brweing. I just love spencer. She is so dark and mysterious. Good p I under stod everything. Ur stories are good right now
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The sun rises on a new day in Pasadena We begin on Lavender Hill, Karim's Mansion Karim is at the breakfast nook sipping on a cup of coffee reading the morning news. Alexis walks in to the kitchen and plants a kiss on Karim. "How are you this morning baby?" Karim "So so. I didn't get a whole lot of sleep last night. I have so much on my mind." Alexis "Well if it has anything to do with the paternity of this child I am carrying. I can assure you, you have nothing to worry about. This child is yours Karim. Santino and I are just friends and nothing happened between us in Miami." Karim "Good. I'll hold you to that. I am only with you to be a family for my child. As you can see I have no family so I don't want my child to know how that feels." Karim pours some vodka in his coffee. Alexis "Don't you think it's a little early to be drinking? Don't you have to go to the office?" Karim "No I don't. Actually I am going to file for sole custody of Lauren's baby." Alexis "Wow. Were you going to discuss this with me or you already made your mind up?" Karim "What's to discuss? That baby is my family. My nephew. The seed of my brother." Alexis "Well Lauren is my sister." Karim "Ok so what does that mean?" Alexis "It means the same as your brother Kevin. Lauren's my sister and Kevin is your brother." Karim "Lauren has proven herself to be an unfit mother. She faked her death in order to set Ty up. She didn't put this child first. She put her vendetta against Ty first. Now because of that my nephew is sick. He will be sick for the rest of his life. He has fetal alcohol syndrome. Why? Because she was drinking heavily in her pregnancy." Alexis "She didn't know she was pregnant at the time." Karim "It really doesn't matter. History speaks for it self. She let a man rape her and beat up on her. Lauren has proven time and time again she can't take care of herself. Or let alone a child. My nephew at that. Ain't no way in hell I am going to let Lauren raise my nephew. You two better be lucky my mother is locked in a nut house. There is no telling what she will do when she finds out she has a grandchild by Kevin and it's mother is Lauren. I am not discussing this with you no more. I am going to get my nephew. So just stand back." He downs his coffee, grabs his laptop bag and suit case and leaves. Alexis "Just like that your going to walk out on me? We can't even talk about this?" Karim ignores her and walks out the door. Alexis "I can't let him do this to Lauren. She's my sister and I have to stick up for her." She grabs her purse and keys and heads out the door. "I can't take much more of this. I am supposed to be happy. I got my man back, I am having his baby. It's like 99 problems." Episode 134: Miss Rue is a Bad Bitch too! Written by ML Cooks Creative Consult: Monique Cooks The Blue Note Jenn grabs a seat at the bar and orders a drink from Pierre. Jenn looks up at the big screen TV. She hears a woman's voice say "Here you go" Jenn, thinking the voice sounds familiar turns around to face the woman and sure enough it' Lauren "Oh my God. What is going on here?" Lauren "What do you mean? I do own the joint." Jenn "I went to your funeral. I watch them bury you. I saw you in that casket." Lauren "I know. It was hard to lay there and pretend to be dead. Especially when Sister Patterson came up. I just knew her third eye would sense that something was off." Jenn "So you were really alive in that coffin?" Lauren "I sure was" Jenn "Why? Why would you so something like that to the people who care about you?" Lauren "Oh you care? Last I remember We weren't on good terms. In fact we fell out over your boyfriend Ty." Jenn "A mistake. My bad. I was blinded by his money. That's all it was really about. I wanted to live the good life. Mike couldn't give me that. But he was a damn good man." Lauren "So what are you saying? It's over with you and Ty?" Jenn "Yes it is. He's in jail where he belongs for the many crimes he's committed. But Karl has kicked me out the mansion so I am home less" Lauren "That's why I faked my death. To set him up. Dre came to me and told me he had a hit out on me so Dre and I cooked up this plan to fake my death to bring Ty to justice. " Jenn "Well it seems he brought himself to justice at Mona's trial. So all is good now. I am so glad to have you back. I have really missed you and really took our friendship for granted. I really hope you can find it in your heart to forgive me." Lauren "Of course. I know first hand love can make you do stupid things." Jenn "So how are you? Where's Daniel? Are things back to normal?" Lauren "Far from it. My life is mess. I think now faking my death was a huge mistake. They are trying to take my baby away and" Jenn, cutting her off "Did you say baby? What a dog or cat or something?" She says taking a sip of her drink Lauren "I had a baby. I had Kevin's baby." Jenn spits out her drink all over Lauren "I'm sorry what!?" Lauren "That was really rude you know" She says grabbing a towel and cleaning herself up. Jenn "I said I was sorry. You shocked me. You had Kevin's baby? When did this happen?" Lauren "Kevin and I got drunk one night and had a one night stand." Jenn "Wow. They say once you go black you never go back. Is that true?" Lauren "Jenn please get a grip. This is about my son." Jenn "Well how is he now, what's his name?" Lauren "I haven't decided on a name yet. He's baby Kevin for now. And Children Service Board has him. They have deem me an unfit mother thanks to Kiko." Jenn "Kiko?" Lauren "Yes, he called CSB on me. So they took my baby and Karim found out and he's not too happy about it." Jenn "Wow one hell of a mess. " Lauren "You're telling me. And to make it worse Daniel hates me. He's moved on with Sharon " Santino then sits at the bar and orders a drink "Laruen is that you?" Lauren "It is. I had to fake my death to bring your boss to justice." Santino "Well he is in jail now so everything is good." Jenn "Speak for yourself." Santino "Don't start your bull sh!t tonight Jennifer. I'm not in the mood for it. I came here for a good time." Jenn "Where are you staying at these days Tino?" Tino "What's it to you?" Jenn "Because I'm homeless. Karl's old dusted ass put me out the mansion yesterday." Tino "Well where did you sleep last night?" Jenn "In my car." Tino "Sounds good to me" Jenn "And where do you stay at? Alexis's penthouse at TC Hotel." Tino, chuckling "That's none of your business. We are over. Don't worry bout me." Jenn "That's how you going to do me? After everything we been through? Risking our lives to be together behind Ty's back? Now I mean nothing to you?" Tino "Sounds about right." Jenn throws her drink on Santino "Why? What did I do that was so wrong?" Santino "Jenn your old. You have no values or morals. I can't be with a woman who cheats. You're going to do the same with me as soon as the going gets tough. I don't want a lady like that. Besides, some one has my eye." Jenn "That Alexis character? Isn't she with Karim?" Santino "Don't worry about it Bitch." he throws his drink on her and then walks out. Jenn "FU(K YOU Santino! Your D!ck Stinks how about that?" He looks back at her and laughs "That's not what you said when you had it down your throat. In fact you couldn't get enough of my long boy." Jenn gives him the finger as Natalia walks in. She begins laughing as she walks over to Jenn. She orders a drink. She sees Lauren "Is that you Laruen?" Lauren "It is. Look I faked my death to bring Ty to justice and I had Kevin's baby. I am tired of repeating that. I am going to have to put up flyers or something. What can I get you?" Natalia "I'll have a glass of wine." Natalia slams her purse on the counter and looks at Jenn. Jenn wiping herself up looks at Natalia "What the hell is your problem?" Natalia "I would advise you not to speak to me in that manor or you'll be wearing my drink too." Jenn "What is the matter with you?" Natalia "I forget nothing. You see I remember a time when you ruined my fashion show not once but twice." Jenn "Your point?" Natalia "It's not good to make me your enemy." Jenn "Well Jodie was my enemy. You see what I did to her? You were collateral damage. It's so old so get over it." Natalia "Never Bitch. You put your nose where it didn't belong and I want you to be fair warned, you are going to pay for that." Jenn "Get out my face Natalia with your bad breath." Jenn reaches in her purse and throws a piece of gum at Nat. Natalia "You think this is a game. You better ask Dahlia. Oh wait she's dead. Just a prime example of what I do to my foes." Jenn "And Jodie is dead to is she not?" Natalia "You will pay for what you did to me Bitch. That's a promise." Jenn "Next please." Natalia "Of Course." Natalia throws her drink in Jenn's face and then she leaves. Laruen "Damn. It is hate on Jenn day." Jenn "Can you believe this? Two drinks on me by two different people. I'm a total loser." Lauren "No you're not. Look, we can be losers together. Move into my place." Jenn "Oh thank you Lauren. That means so much to me." They hug. Downtown Pasadena. Karim pulls up on his Benz in the parking lot of Children Service Board. He takes a swig of his bottle of vodka, pulls out a piece of gum, and pops it in his mouth and heads inside to the office area. Inside he approaches a secretary "Can I help you?" "I'm Karim Williams and I want to file a petition for sole custody of my nephew. His mother is unfit to raise him." "What is the mother's name?" Karim "Lauren Romoan." "Give me a second, let me look it up on the computer." She types some things in her computer and then Lauren's name comes up. "Ah yes here we are. Yes we do have her baby in our care. He's still in the hospital. Fill out this paper work. Once you do that than we can find a calendar date to have this custody hearing take place." Karim "Thank you maam." Karim takes the clipboard with the papers and grabs a seat and begins to fill out the papers. He thinks to himself "Lauren will never raise this baby. I will see to it." Divine Design Rufus walks into Alexis's office and grabs a seat at her desk and turns on her computer. She logs into her Adam4Adam account and see if she has any messages. She sure does from her online friend On the DL. She also sees he is online and clicks instant message. Rufus "Hey you. What happened to you the other night?" OntheDL "My apologies. I was there but there were so many people there that night, I was to noid to make my move." Rufus "Wow. So what happens now? I don't like being stood up. This is not a game. I am too old for this." On theDL "I do apologize I am putting you through this. I do want to say you looked very beautiful that night when I was there." Rufus "Wait, you were there?" On theDL "I was." Rufus thinks back on her times at The Blue Note. She remembers she had encounters with Kiko, DC, and Santino. Rufus wonders if any one of the three could be her DL Lover. Rufus "Oh my." DL "What does that mean?" Rufus "Well I did see a few mens there the nights I went. I really liked two of them. Is this Santino or Kiko?" DL "LOL, It's not time for that yet?" Rufus "Why are you playing games?" DL "It not games. I am just not out. Simple as that. I don't want no one to know." Rufus "Are you ashamed?" DL "No. I just don't like labels. It doesn't have to be everybody's business what I do. What we do is what we do. It remains between us. Word?" Rufus "I can live with that. Can I at least get a clue or something. You seem to know a lot about me but I know nothing about you." DL "I promise you very soon. You won't be disappointed that's for sure." Rufus "SO when can I meet you?" DL "Let's try again tomorrow night at the Blue note." Rufus "TIME??!!" DL "Just be there. I'll be looking for you. If everything is cool, I'll approach you." Rufus "This guessing game has got me going crazy. Though I don't like it has been a thrill for me. I'll see you then and this time, make your self known or this will be the last chance to meet me." DL "Understood." Rufus signs off with a smile on her face as she thinks of what it would be like making love to either Kiko or Santino. Her smile disappears when Alexis slams her office door shut, storming into the office. Alexis "What the hell are you doing here?" Rufus "Damn bitch! It's nice to see you too." Alexis "State your business or get the hell out. I don't have time to associate with some one by the likes of you." Rufus chuckles and gets up from the desk and approaches Alexis. "You better watch how you talk to me. I can destroy you Alexis. I could take everything from you. Now play with it. I dare you too." They square each other up. Westwood Park Ria gets a knock on her door. She gets up off the couch, wearing pajamas, and a wave cap, gets up and opens her door. She sees a person with a dozen roses blocking there face, Ria "Cute." She grabs the roses to see who it is. It's Kiko "What do you want?" Kiko "Look I know I am probably the last person you want to see Ria, but please I need to make things right. You will never know how sorry I am." Ria "For what? Killing me? That's just about what you did." Kiko "Come on Ria, let's go grab lunch or something. It's a beautiful day, let's enjoy the day together." Ria "You're funny. A few days ago you were talking about getting a restraining order on me, now you want to take me out? A good ol pity party huh?" She looks into his eyes and looks him up and down. She admires his beautiful blue eyes. "Damn you look so good. But It's sad it took me to get cancer for you to show me any kind of attention. So you want to take me on a pity date?" Kiko "No. No pity at all. I want to get to know you better. Ria I have saw a side to you that I didn't think existed. When I saw you cry in my office it broke my heart. It hurts me to see you hurt and I want to make things right." She continues to look at him. She has tears streaming down her face as she thinks how she's always wanted Kiko. But not like this. Not under these circumstances. "Kiko you have no idea how I feel about you. I've wanted you from the first day I saw you. But I don't want you like this. I want you to want me because I want you. Not because I have breast cancer or that you feel bad for me. I'm sorry as much as I would want too go out, I am just in the mood. Take your flowers and shove them up your sweet ass hole. She throws the flowers at him and begins to slam her door shut. But he stops her and opens the door back. He steps up to her, grabs her and kisses her passionately. She is overwhelmed and kisses him back. They grab each other. As he steps in her house she pushes him back and then punches him in the face. She grabs the flowers and begins to beat him with it. "Get your fake ass out of here. I need no ones pity you fruit basket. Go find Rufus or something. Kiko has had enough abuse for one day and decides to call it quits and leave's Ria's house. She slams the door shut and she plops back on her couch. She looks at her breast and begins to let tears fall from her eyes. Back at Divine Design Alexis "Play with it? The only thing I will be playing is called throwing your gay ass out of here dot com." Rufus "You know Bitch. I've heard it all before. Gay this. Fruit basket that. And Tranny all in between. Well guess what? I know! I am not a dummy. Tell me something I don't know. It's all old and tired. You people of Pasadena are boring. In fact beneath me. Lame and tired. Everyone in this city need to take a damn nap." Alexis "What are you smoking? What the hell are you talking about? Better yet what right do you think you have being here?" Rufus "It's time to take you to school girlfriend" Alexis "I beg your pardon." Rufus "I said school Bitch. It's time to teach you a lesson." Alexis "I doubt that." Rufus "We'll you see, I have a lot on you sweet cheeks. I now have power." Alexis "And what is it that you think you know? It's not good to make me an enemy." Rufus "You see it's time for the big payback. Everyone in Pasadena will know about me. Miss Rue. That's what they'll call me. It's like this, I know you are pregnant, and you claim it's Karim' baby. But you and I both know better. It's Santino's baby. You went on that trip to Miami with him." Alexis "My my you know a lot." Rufus "I also know that Sabryn's trial is coming up. I know that you knew the whole time that your insane sister was alive the whole time she was stalking Sabryn and Natalia. And you helped her in her plans to attack her enemies. I know that you assisted Ashley in kidnapping me and because of that, she sawed off my penis because the crazy bitch thought she was Jason Voorhees and sh!t." Alexi "It's Michael Meyers you dumb hoe. And besides, you should be thankful. You wanted to be a woman did you not?" Rufus slaps Alexis. Alexis "I would advise you to never to that again." Rufus "You have two choices. Either you give me a line here at Divine Design, or if you don't, I'll go to Sabryn's trial and tell Karim that you helped his sister plot against Pasadena. I am sure he won't be pleased with that. Then maybe He will lean on me. Wouldn't that be great?" Alexis "Wow. I can't believe this. You got me in a corner. You're one powerful tranny you know that?" Rufus "I know right?" He says blowing on her extra long fake nails. "So what's it's going to be? I out did you Alexis. I told you soon you would know me. I can get down just the like the rest of you bitches here in Pasadena. What's your choice? My own fashion line? Or I tell the world the truth about you?" Alexis, just stands there, looking dumb not knowing what to do. Give up her man, or her empire, which is it, what it will come to since Miss Rue has never demonstrated one iota of fashion sense. Alexis thinks of what should she do. Her man or her Fashion House Empire. Which will it be? How much does she really love Karim
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Ok so i finally did the do and checked this out. It seems there's a lot of mystery here. and boy the fisrt scene, when old dude was going back over history and letting him know what was going all I kept thinking about was Jaems E Rielly and Days of our Lives for some reason i also loved when kirk asked Eden i think it was could he drive and she said yes behind her in his own car. very funny I loved the cocaine scene. it had some very urban moments in it. Something I was not expecting at all. And a much better job in that scene going over the history in the one. The first one had me very confused but the second go round didnt. I must say I m very impressed. It seems a big mystery adventrue story going. You didn't jave a ton of characters in this ep and it was eay to get into and follow adn I look forward to the next. Good job
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Damn poor Kevin. I really feel for him. A very good episode. i understood everything that was happening. SO Marti isnt going to speak up about the rape? Where is gavin in NY? I also want to stress my concern for this HIV storyline and the sate ments that were made in Coop and Ashlee's scene which I found very offensive. Gay men are not the leading cause or with HIV or Aids. It's straight men and woman. When I told my HIV story on STEAM i made sure it was a straight woman to beat the sterotype. Now I am really hoping it's not Kevin or Rocky just beacsue of what was said in Coop and Ash's scene. As a gay man I do take issue with what was said. Aubrey is some freak aint she? Was she playing with her self when she was on the bed? the bitch even gave Liz a kiss. WOW I cant wait to see what she does. And once again FTL showed it's sexy side to us in the form of good ol Gus and Harley. And Leah looks like she could be some ones momma How old is she? Good ep Jay. I liked how Coop asked Eden was she ok.
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Huntington Memorial Hospital Sharan, Karim, Daniel, and Lauren all look at Alexis in shock. Lauren "Sisters?" Alexis "Indeed. My mother Apple told me. She gave you up for adoption." Lauren "This is impossible. I can't deal with this joke right now." Alexis "This is no joke. Let's take DNA test." Lauren "I don't have time to entertain this charade right now. I just lost my son." Sharan "Where is he? I want to see little Kevin." Karim "Why in the hell are you just now saying something about Kevin's son? Don't you know he killed himself because he was so depressed? Had you told him sooner, he might have had something to live for." Lauren "Tyler was trying to kill me." Karim "My brother is dead but that's supposed to be ok?" Alexis "Baby, come on, lay off. I am sure Lauren is going through a lot. She just lost her son." Karim "I lost my brother. If Kevin would have known that he was having a son it might have gave him the courage after he was done so wrong by so many people to live." He says looking at Sharan. Sharan and Daniela are both stunned that he is calling Sharan out. Sharan "Oh come on now Karim. I never set out to hurt Kevin. We were torn apart by your sister. Mona is her name in case you forgot. I could not be with Kevin after what your sister did to me. Raped me, kidnapped me, made me shoot your uncle. It's was horrible. I had to server the link." Daniel "That's enough. You don't have to explain yourself to him. We have been through enough baby. Let's go." Karim "Where the hell did you come from Daniel? From Kevin to Dre to Mona now Daniel. Did you really love my brother? Sounds like you're a tramp to me." Sharan slaps Karim "Don't you ever talk to me like that again!" Karim, Lauren and Alexis are all stunned as Daniel and Sharan walk away. Alexis "Karim, let's go it's been a long day. We can deal with this tomorrow." Karim "You're right. My life has literally been turned upside down today." He looks back at Lauren "This is not over Lauren. You will be hearing from me very soon and you won't like what I have to say." Alexis pulls Karim away. Lauren just sits there, realizing faking her death wasn't such a great idea as her problems and dilemmas continue to grow by the minute. Episode 132: Mind Invasion Written by ML Cooks Creative Consults: Monique Cooks and Ian Hefts In Ria's room , Patti and Jasmine are sitting by Ria's side as she is still sleep from having tried to overdose on pills. Dr. Kiko Whitfield walks in the room. Patti "Please tell Miss Patti my baby will be ok." Kiko "She will be for now. Test confirm she tried to overdose on sleeping pills." Jasmine "Why would she do something like this?" Ria slowly begins to come to, "What's happened? " Her vision is blurry but begins to get clearer. She sees Kiko and her family. "What the hell is y'all doing here? I tried to get rid of you all and everything." Patti "Darling what? What is going on? Tell Miss Patti what's happening with you. You tried to kill yourself. What would make you do such a thing." Ria looks at Kiko with tears in her eyes. Kiko sits on the bed next to Ria and takes her hand. He looks into her eyes. "Tell them Ria. They have to know." Jasmine "Know what?" Ria, looking at Kiko "Who the hell are you? I didn't ask you to be here? Since when do you care about me huh Kiko? How dare you tell me on what I should do. You made it very clear to me you didn't give a fu(ck about me when you wouldn't test me for breast cancer when I first asked you too. You thought it was a game to take your underwear off. Well now seed it wasn't. I'm dying now thanks to you. " Patti and Jasmine look at each other stunned. Ria, wiping tears from her eyes "Oh yes, in case you couldn't add two and two to get four, I have breast cancer. And the good doctor here refused to catch it in time." Patti slaps Kiko. Kiko "I deserve that. Ria, you'll never know how sorry I will be." Jasmine "I am going to report you to the nursing board." Kiko "I deserve it." Kiko says with his head down. He looks into Ria's eyes. "Ria, I truly am sorry." She slaps him. "Go to hell faggot!" She spits out at him. Tired of the abuse, Kiko gets up and leave the room. Patti sits on the bed and holds her daughter as the two cry in each other's arms. "Momma, I'm going to die. I got cancer momma. What am I going to do?" Jasmine with tears in her eyes, joins in on the hug. "We are going to get through this Ria. I promise." Downtown Pasadena, Jail Natalia walks up to Sabryn with a two seater baby stroller with of course both Bryan Jr's. Sabryn "What the hell is this? I know that is not my son you have?" Natalia "You must have been in here to long my dear. You forget what your own son looks like. What a shame." Sabryn "This is not funny Bitch. Why do you have my son? Where is Bryan?" Natalia "Oh, I guess you and Bryan must not be talking neither. You see, Bryan and I are going to be a family. We are going to raise your son since you are going to rot in here." Sabryn "You are so lucky you brought my son here or I would reach my hands through these bars and ring your little neck. Give me a real good reason for them to lock me up. And rest assured I won't be in here much longer. Once that jury see what Ashley did to me they are going to let me go. And when that happens, Natalia, your ass is grass. I have never liked you and now you have given me a good reason to crush you." Natalia "Big dreams jail bird. There's not a damn thing you can do to me behind bars. You shot Ashley like six or seven times in front of police none the less. There is no way you are getting out of this. You just accept the fact that I win Bitch. I got your son, I got you man, I got you life. Oh and I am on the verge on bankrupting S&G if it isn't bankrupt already. I have a new line coming out very soon that will be sure to put you out to pasture. I win. Against the Almighty Sabryn." Natalia wanting to taunt Sabryn even more picks up her son and holds him. "It's ok little one. Your new mother is here. I'm gonna be your new momma. You see that jail bird right there" She says turning BJ's head so he can look at Sabryn, "You see that ugly woman right there? She's a loser. She's going to be in jail for the rest of her life. So she can't be a mommy to you. Besides, you don't need that loser any way. I'm here now. I'm the new Queen of Pasadena." Natalia puts BJ back in the stroller. Sabryn "Natalia, when I get out of here, you're a dead woman." Natalia "Uhm,,,yea ,,,,ok. Deuces Sabryn. It was nice knowing ya. Oh and by the way, your man sure got some good di(k don't he? He knows how to lay that pipe right." She says coolly walking off. "I'm going to make that Bitch pay." Sabryn says to herself. On lavender Hill, The Hutchins Mansion J enn is sitting in a lawn chair wearing big sunglasses getting her tan on. She is suddenly splashed by water form the pool. She opens her eyes and sees her suitcases with her clothes being thrown into the pool. "What the hell!?". She stands up and turns around and sees a gleaming Karl. Karl "Sorry to ruin your precious tan. But it's time for you to go." Jenn "Excuse me?" Karl "You heard what I said. What's the matter you got to much cum in you ears from your Latin lover Santino?" Jenn "You're a real jack ass Karl. I am not going to entertain the words that come out of your mouth. I'm not going to stoop to your childish argument and argue with you." Karl "Suit your self. As long as you entertain the fact that it's over for you Jennifer. Get the hell out of my house. You don't deserve to be here." Jenn "This is Ty's house. He hasn't put me out." Karl "Correction. I own this house now. My son is in jail and everything is left to me. And I want you out now. You cheated on my son with Santino. You're lucky you're not dead already." Jenn "I don't need this place no how. I was in the process of moving out." Karl "Good, So I expect when I get home this evening you will be gone." Jenn "Have a good day Karl. Oh and another thing, I don't take to kindly to threats. I know how to kill to." Karl "Is that right?" Jenn "Indeed. I had a plan ready to put in action to take you out. You and Ty at the same time. How about that one?" Karl is impressed and doesn't say anything as Jenn leaves "Wow, She was going to kill me. I'm impressed." Back at the Hospital Natalia walks into Ria's room with the Jr's She sees the Labelle Girls in a family embrace. Ria "Natti, girl what are you doing here?" Jasmine "I called her. I figured you need your best right now." Ria smiles at Nat. Nat walks over and gives her a big hug. Ria "I'm so glad you're here girl?" Nat "I'm not." Ria "What do you mean?" Natalia turns back and locks at Jasmine and Patti "Can you two give us a minute? I am going to get Ria together. She'll be ok after I am done talking to her." Patti "I think that would be best." Jasmine Follows Patti out the door. Ria "Nat, girl you are tripping? You talking kind of crazy. You know I am not going to let you sit here and let you have your way with me. Girl you know I don't play that. Just like when we fell out that last time over the fashion show. Nat you my girl but you don't it doesn't go down like that." Natalia Slaps Ria. She slaps her again the then gets up and steps away from Ria. Ria "Aw naw hell naw. Bitch what is the matter with you?" Nat "No it's more like what's the matter with you? What did you try to kill your self. Why didn't you come to me? I am your girl right? Ria what is going on? I love you are like my sister? It hurts to know that you thought you had to kill yourself because you could not come to me." Ria just sits there in silence and looks at the wall. Tears are streaming down her face. Natalia walks over to Ria and takes a seat next to her. She holds her. Ria holds her back. "Nat, girl I'm scared. I have never been so scared in my life." Natalia "Ria I am here for you. Whatever it is we will fight this. Nothing can beat us." Ria "I don't know. I feel like I am being punished for something. I know I am not the greatest person in the world. People think I am a hoe and this and that." Natalia "Who cares? You are a great person. Just misunderstood." Ria "Is it my fault I like Dick and I'm not ashamed to say it? Men do it all the time. It's ok for them to talk about pu$$y and fu(king hoes. I'm just real with mine. I like sex as much as the next person . I'm just open about mine." Natalia "Now that's the Ria I know. Full of fire and not afraid to say what's on her mind. You're already fighting Ria. What is it? What drove you to want to kill yourself?" Ria "I have breast cancer." Natalia "Oh my gosh I am so sorry to hear that." Ria "And Kiko's faggety ass thought it was an attempt to seduce him and now because of that it may be to late to treat this cancer thanks to his punk ass." Natalia "It's doesn't matter. We are going to fight this. It's not to late?" Ria "Yes it is Natalia. Chemo is going to make me bald headed. I am a Bitch but I don't want to be a bald headed Bitch." Natalia chuckles "They have wigs." Ria "I don't do wigs boo. What if they have to cut my tits off? I wouldn't be a woman no more. No man will find me attractive. I'll be alone for the rest of my life.. I don't want to be alone." She looks at the Jr's and then back at Natalia "I want a family believe it or not Nat. I am tired of being alone. I,…I" She wipes tears from her face. "I just want a life of happiness. Why can't I have that?" Natalia "We will. Just as soon a we fight this cancer. And we are going to do this together." They hug. Ria "Thank you for being there for me." She pulls back and then punches Natalia in the face "Bitch don't you ever in your white ass life put your hands on me again. I said it once and have no issue saying it once more. I am the baddest Bitch here in Pasadena and don't ever forget it. You better never ever put your hands on me again girl, don't get it twisted, I will beat that ass, one or no tits." Natalia, rubbing her face "You're a bitch you know that. But I love you. But look any way I have to get the boys home it's time to feed them. Life as a mother is not all what it's cracked up to be. I never have time for myself." Ria "Where the hell is Bryan?" Natalia "At work as always." Ria "Uhm hmm. It couldn't be me. As much as he charges for his whack ass drink at his club, he need to be hiring you a nanny." Natalia "That is a great idea. How can I make my own money if I am always tied down to these kids which I might add only one is mine. I am working on a new line for Divine Design. So we gotta hurry up and get you better so you can model for us again." Ria "I won't have tits. They'll call me young and breastless. I can see the headline now." Natalia "Hush girl. I'll come see you tomorrow." Natalia gets up and pushes her stroller out the room as she leaves. In the Nursery, an agent from CSB approaches Kiko who has just stepped out of Baby Kevin's room. Agent "Dr. what is the condition on the baby?" Kiko "It's sad. He's dehydrated and is suffering from fetal alcohol syndrome and malnourishment." Agent "Thanks to the mother. She will never have custody of this child." The agent pulls out her pen and pad and takes some notes. Kiko "I think that is best. I have other patients to attend to" Kiko walks off. The agent looks at the baby through the glass window. The Blue Note Kiko enter the upscale bar and restaurant and sees his new found father DC. Kiko takes a seat next to him. He orders a drink. DC " Even the good town doctor has to let lose every now and again." Kiko looks at DC, looking at the facial features and realizing they they share some of the same Williams family trademarks. DC turns around and looks at Kiko looking at him. DC "Hold on shawty. I don't get down like that. I like women." Rufus walks into the Blue note and walks past DC and Kiko and takes a seat next to Kiko Kiko "It's nothing like that." DC "I just wanted to be clear youngen. It's been those rumors going round you boy." Kiko "Rumors?" DC "Yea boy. That you one of them fruits." Rufus over hears that last comment and smiles, she wonders to her self if the good doctor, Kiko could be her Down Low lover. She thinks that he is very sexy and is rich. Rufus "Oh my god could it be?" Kiko "Nothing like that is happening over here. I think you might like to know that your wife, Lynn Whitfield is here in Pasadena." DC "Lynn? How do you know Lynn?" Kiko "Take a closer look at me and then you tell me?" DC "It's can't be. Son?" Kiko "That's right" DC "You changed your name. Why?" DC "Because you named me. I certainly didn't want to be a Don Jr." Don "My lord. You about to give your old man a heart attack. My own son has been here this whole time I have. Why didn't you come to me?" Kiko "I have been so busy with the hospital and Dondre, I really haven't had time. Plus I didn't know for sure it was you. I couldn't believe my father left his family to become a pimp. It was embarrassing." DC "Well son I am sorry you feel like that." Kiko "Don't be sorry. I am thankful you left us. Look at what you did to Mona and Kevin. One is half crazy and the other killed himself. See what kind of effect you have on people? You destroyed two families and ruined so many lives. How does that make you feel?" DC "Look I am tired of going through this with everyone.. I am not perfect and yes I made some dumb ass mistakes. I am human. But I have changed. I didn't even know Sister Patterson had three of my kids. She never told me." Kiko "What if she did tell you? Would you have gone to go play house with them? You certainly left us high and dry. Do you know how bad your hurt mother? She had a nervous break down because of what you did to her. Having an affair with Patterson. " DC "I know what I did was wrong and alls I can say is I'm sorry. But I am trying to move forward. Put all this negativity behind us." Kiko "Why because it suits you now?" DC "Look son, I am trying to mend our family back together. We have been through so much, we need to heal. I can't take this pain no more. I love my children. All of them" Kiko "Love? Then why did you run out on me and Dre? That's not what a real man does. Dre and I had to raise ourselves and look at where it got Dre. Locked up for a very long time. I couldn't save him but as his father it was you who was supposed to guide him the right way. Set an example for him. But you were a coward and selfish as hell and ran out." DC "I know I know I know. I heard all this before. I am not going to wallow in all of this. I am past it all." Kiko "I'm not. You left me. To fend for myself! You were supposed to be my father. You created me and then you abandoned me. So you can take your family dreams and shove them up your ass! It's too late for all of that. I'm too old. The damage has been done." Kiko then walks out of the club. DC drinks his drink thinking about the mistakes he's made and the consequences they had on the people he loves. Rufus takes a seat next to DC "I just saw the scene with the good looking doctor. Are you ok? I can help you feel better?" DC looks at Rufus "What in the hell can you do for me?" Rufus "We could go to the bathroom and I could suck you off. DC laughs and then throws his drink in Rufus's face and then walks off. Rufus, hollering at him "Sloppy bastard! One day, I will find a man to love me. I wish that guy from the internet would stop playing games and come and get me. I'm horny damn it. I haven't had and action since Mark was in town and Dahlia walked in on the world's greatest blow job" On the Edge of Night, For The Birds mental Rehabilitation Centre Sister Patterson takes her reading glasses off and sits her bible on her night stand She looks up to the ceiling to talk to God. "Something is not right my Lord. I can feel a very evil presence here. Why are you doing this to me? I don't want to see the devil. Please lord I am scared." Patterson lays down on her bed and shuts her night light out. As Pat's eyes are closed, the lights in the facility begin to flicker once more. In Lynn's Room She is sitting in her bed with her knees to her chest watching the lights flicker on and off. "She's at it again. The witch is at it again. What is she going to do this time? The last time the lights flickered 3 people ended up dead here. Please spare me." In Dottie's Room The flickering lights awakens Dottie. She sits up and looks around. She walks into the hallway way and it is completely empty. But one thing she notices is that the hallway seems unending. The desk and wall the ended the hallway is no longer there. "It's like I'm not even in the same place. Is this some sort of dream?" She turns around suddenly "Did you Hear that? …….No I'm not mutherfu(cker. ………Fu(k you to you whore." In Mona and Apple's room Mona "It's happening again. What's happening here? How did you make the lights flicker?" Apple "Oh my love, its time that I tell you. You see I have special powers. I posses the powers of evilness. And tonight I am going to show you." Apple grabs Mona's hand and pulls her unto the floor. They both sit Indian style as Apple lights some incense and black candles." Mona "What is this? Some type of voodoo?" Apple "You're getting close my darling." Apple leans over and plants a kiss on Mona. Mona pulls back. "Tonight you will see the true power that I have. But I need your help." Mona "I'm not a witch I don't have special powers." Apple "It's simple. All I need you to do is think. Think hard. Make your mind sharp and strong. We are going to reach Slutty Patterson. Think of your mother, Sister Patterson. We are going to invade her mind. She is going to know I am here. She is going to learn just what her battle will be. Tonight." Apple closes her eyes and holds Mona's hand. They think hard about Sister Patterson. In a deep voice Apple begins to chant "Sister Patterson, See me. I am here. The battle begins. Evil is here." Apple says that over and over again. In Sister Patterson's room Sister Patterson wakes up in a sweat. She hears a demonic voice say "Sister Patterson it's me. I am here. The battle begins. Evil is here." She gets up off the bed. She puts her glasses on. "Devil, I hear you but you won't win. I am armed and dangerous. She grabs her bible and her holy water. She sprinkles some on her self. She slowly walks out into the hallway which is now full of smoke. She looks closely and sees a dark figure walks out from one of the rooms of the never ending hallway. It's Apple, with red eyes. Sister Patterson holds her cross up and tries to throw holy water on the demonic figure. Apple "You fool. Look behind you. I got a little surprise for you." Sister Patterson slowly turn around and is horrified to see her Husband Abe, burnt up and scared with his body wrapped in chains. Sister Patterson lets out a scream. "Abraham no! What has the devil down to you? Is this what they do to you in hell? Because that's where you should be. In hell for what you did to my daughter. WHY!!!? Why did you do it?" Sister Patterson collapses to the ground. She begins to hear a voice in her head that says "You're going to die. Devil is going to win." Sister Patterson hollers out "HELP ME!! I'm losing my mind!!" Apple laughs at Sister Patterson and walks in her room. Suddenly the lights come back on in the facility and she sees orderlies surrounding her. One immediately drugs her and the other puts a straight jacket on her and cart her off to her room. "You have to listen to me. The devil is here! Didn't yens see the lights flickering? Evilness resides here and I have to stop it. Nurse Maxine "This sure is one crazy old lady" They put Sister pat in the room Patterson Please don't leave me in here! The devil is gonna get me!!!" Maxine "No devil tonight honey. We gave you a strong sedative. You'll be knocked out soon." Maxine shut the light out and walks out the room and locks it as Sister Patterson screams. She tries to wrestle out the straight jacket in the complete darkness of her room. "Lord have mercy what just happened? Was it real what I saw/?Or was it a dream? My poor Abe." Sister Patterson keeps trying to wrestle out of the straight jacket. She then hears a demonic voice say "It's no use. Patterson. I am here. I am real and you're going to die!!" Sister Patterson then sees a pair of red glowing evil eyes gleaming at her through the darkness "You're going to die oh Saintly one." Sister Patterson scream for her dear life.
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Lavender Hill Bryan is awoken by a pounding at the door. Bryan Jr. the 1st begins to cry. He picks him up out his crib and holds him "I'm sorry little guy. I'll get rid of who's ever ignorant ass that is for waking us up ok baby boy.' Bryan holds him as he opens the door and is disappointed to see Natalia. Bryan "Natalia what the hell is the matter with you? You woke up my son." Natalia "Today is the day big daddy." Bryan "The day?" Natalia steps aside to reveal Bryan Jr. the 2nd behind her and a moving van out front. Bryan "Oh God you're moving in today?" Natalia "Why not? We can begin to a be family starting now. We have to move fast, Sabryn's trial will be here any day now. We have to make this happen if you want to gain sole custody of your son with Sabryn. She is coming straight to get her son when she gets out." Bryan "I know Nat. Just kill all the noise. Hurry your ass up, I got to go in the club and this would be a good time for my sons to get to know one another." Natalia "SO I have to baby sit?" Bryan "Uh yea.... You don't have a job as I last recall and someone has to pay for this nice house I just got here on the hill." Natalia "I do have a job thank you very much. I am working on a new line at Divine Design." Bryan "Yea ok. We all know what happened at your last fashion show." Natalia "I didn't ask Jennifer to black mail Jodie with her HIV status. You know that reminds me. I do have a bone to pick with her." Bryan "I don't think you will be doing that. You are a mother now. A mother to my children. It's time to be an adult and leave the bull [!@#$%^&*] alone. No more games Natalia. Don't make any more enemies. Believe me Sabryn will be enough for you. I've known her a long time and I know she is a fighter. We will have a fight on our hands." Natalia "Bryan, I'm a bad girl. I know how to handle my own. Look at how far I've came. I'm doing quite well. I got my dream job, I live in a nice house and I got a good man with a big di(k." Bryan "You better watch your mouth talking like that in front of my children. Natalia "Well how about we put our sons in the play room and then you and I can have a little four play or something." Bryan "In your dreams Natalia. Let me be clear. We won't be having sex all like that." Natalia "I'll just be a bitch until I get it then. Simple as that." Bryan shoves BJ the 1st into Nat's arms and Bryan walks off. "I have needs damn it Bryan. You will be giving it to me. Night and day. "She hollers after him. The baby begins to cry and then throws up on Natalia. "Sabryn's son would do this to me. " She puts the boy down in his crib so she can clean herself up. The Blue Note Ladonna walks in to grab a drink to ease some of her stress from dealing with Alexis and Karim. She sits at the bar next to Santino. Bartender "What can I get you lady?" Donna "Double shot of gin." Santino "Wow, it's like that?" Donna "I'm glad you're here Santino." Tino "I hear gin makes you sin. You plan on sinning with me? IS that why you are glad I am here?" Rufus then enters the blue note and grabs a bar stool on the other side of Santino. Tino is stunned that Rufus is sitting next to him. The bartender walks over to Rufus. "We don't serve your kind in here" Rufus "Excuse me? My kind? What is that supposed to mean? I am a paying a customer like everyone else in this dusted place." Bartender "You're kind. Now get your tranny ass out of here before I call the cops." Donna "Hey sir, don't be mean. You have no right to talk to her like that." Santino "Yea man it's really rude. Show some respect." Bartender, huffing "What can I get you?" Rufus "Now that' more like it. Was that so hard? I'll take a sex on the beach." Bartender "Coming right up." Rufus rubbing her arm against Santino's back "Thank you guys for sticking up for me." Ladonna "No problem. He has no right to treat you like that." Tino "No problem man." Rufus "No honey love, Address me as a woman." Tino "Sure no problem." Rufus gets her drink and sips on it. Santino looks back at Donna. "That was weird." Donna "Yes it was. But I have some news that might interest you." Santino "We barely know each other so I highly doubt that." Ladonna "We don't know each other well but I think we will." Rufus "I want to get to know you papi." Santino and Ladonna both look at Rufus and laugh. Santino "Ok I'll bite. What do you got?" Ladonna "How would you feel if I told you that Alexis is pregnant?" Rufus "I'll have your baby." Santino "That's enough out of you alright. You're being extra right now. You doing way too much. Butt out and drink you sweet ass drink sweet cheeks." Rufus "You rotten bastard." Donna "Please don't be rude." Santino "Why do you feel I need to know that Alexis is pregnant?" Donna "Well you two did go on a trip with each other to Miami if I'm not mistaking right?" Santino "Yes we were looking for her mother. She learned some deep dark secret or something from her dead sister Ashley." Ladonna "That' right the diary. I knew she was hiding something in there. I have to find it." Tino "Look I don't know what's going on between you and Alexis but I don't want any drama. I don't know why you even told me she's pregnant." Ladonna "So you two didn't have sex?" Santino "I never kiss and tell Ladonna." Santino finishes up his beer and leaves. Rufus looks at LaDonna. "I think he did sleep with Alexis." Ladonna "I think he did too. She claims to be pregnant with Karim's child. How convenient is all this just as Karim and I got together." Rufus "You got to watch out for Alexis. She's as evil as her crazy sister Ashley." Ladonna "What makes you say that?" Rufus "Alexis knew the whole time that her sister was really alive. She was helping her to. She stood by and let Ashley kidnapped me. Ashley chain sawed off my penis because of Alexis. I hope you stick it good to that Bitch Alexis. In fact I ought to pay her a visit myself. She owes me. A lot and I plan to collect." Ladonna "Yes you do that. I wonder if Karim know how evil Alexis really is. Would he still want to be with her? I have to find that diary. I knew from day one there is something in there she doesn't want anyone to know. I have to get it." Ladonna gets her purse and leaves the Blue note, headed for Alexis pent house suite at TC hotel. Back at the Hospital Karim rolls Alexis out in a wheel chair out of her room. They see Lauren on the floor crying as Sharan and Daniel and walks over to her. Alexis remember her mother Apple telling her that Lauren is her sister. Alexis "She's really alive. My sister is alive." Karim "What? Sister? Lauren?" Alexis "Yes. That's why Santino and I went to Miami. Ashley left a diary and I learned that she knew that my mother gave her first born child up for adoption and it's Lauren." Karim "Wow. It always seems out of now where people are just related. Look at me and DC. Mona. And to top it off she's not dead after all. Alexis "Wheel me over their baby; I want to see what's going on." Karim walks over to the scene unfolding by Lauren. Sharan "My my. In the flesh. Lauren Romoan. Back from the dead." Daniel "She faked her death." Laruen, looking at the crowd gathering around her "Well it doesn't matter now does it? I lost my son." Karim "Son?" Sharan "Oh Karim. You must not know yet." Alexis "Know what?" Daniel "Lauren had Kevin's baby?" Karim is overcome with emotion. He feels weak at the knees and he is about to collapse as Daniel catches him. Karim takes a seat. "Oh my god." He says with tears in his eyes. "My brother lives on." He cries. He wails as he buries his hands in his face. "Oh my god my brother lives. It's a miracle. My dear brother lives on. "He continues to cry as Alexis holds him. Sharan also has tears in her eyes as Daniel holds her. Daniel "Are you ok?" Sharan "It's really nice to know that Kevin still lives on." Karim continues to cry. "First Alexis learns that Lauren is her sister and her sister gave birth to my nephew. Little Kevin." Daniel "Wait, what?" Sharan "Yes what?" Alexis "Yes its true Laruen and I are sisters." Lauren is stunned.
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Thanks jay Really inspiring words. esp the character comment as I never really thought of it that way. Like I said this new way forces to intensify each scene and it's been great. We got some powerful stuff coming up.(I always got something good cooking)
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Thanks jay. This two parter thing is new for me and like i said I am really enjoying it and it seems that you like it too so for now I think i will continue that. The two parter tthings forces me to make each scene stronger kuz I kan no longer hide weaker scenes within the contenxt of a big episode. These two parters are easier to write it doesn't seem so stresssful. Ria does have some big stuff coming up dealing with her breast cancer. I really enjoyed writing opening scenes of my eps. It's my fav pasrt of the ep and also so is the last scene.. I also try to write my opening scenes so it will suck you right in with big drama. Stay tuned for part 20 very soon. And you will be happy to know Miss Rue got some big stuff coming up. She will play a more pivtoal role in the series. I have necglcted alot of things on STEAM and in the coming weeks you will see a lot of stuff be addressed and dealt with, like Lauren a nd what she did and the effect it will have on her and the people around her. Also we will see the fact dealt with that Alexis and lauren are sisters and how it ties into lauren's child. That's going to be an interesting angle. And we still have yet to see DC knowing about his sons Kiko and Dre and that is coming up as well. The focus is going to pull away from Sister patterson and feature my other stories. Esp Sabryn and her rivalry with natalia. Again jay thanks for reading
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Every episode should be like this so much drama so many twist
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o waot it might not be Kevin ol girl said some one. OM my i wonder who
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OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG IS ALL I CAN SAY WOW WOWOWOOWOWOWOWO Out standing episode and what a [!@#$%^&*] cliffhanger and total shock. OMG POOR KEVIN. It brings back so many sad memories for JODIE on steam. WoW I am so tripping right now. You've really brought ur A game these last few eps. FTL is been really edgy latley and I love it. I love how you did the follow up with Edmund and Marah. love how you set that up. Always love to see my Annie. I just know she got a master plan. How old is leah? She look like she could be some ones momma. Now what's going on with Aubrey where has she been and why is she in the closet. Love how you are showing Liz get a little tried of this show and how its affecting her life in all aspeccts. Best epsiode ive seen u write so far. Outstanding jay, Please take a bow. Cant wait to see what is next I am such a big fan of urs
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Very interesting. I just love this small cast My eyes are already on Ellah and Breck. Cant wait to see all the stories play out
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Huntington Memorial Hospital Karim walks into Alexis’s room. Alexis “Karim, surprised to see you here. I thought you were with Donna now?” Karim “I wanted to see if you were ok.” Alexis “Ladonna attacked me. She and that wild dog Ria attacked me. “Alexis forces herself to cry to gain sympathy from Karim. Karim “I’m really sorry that happen to you. I can believe Ria would do something like this but LaDonna?” Alexis “Oh Karim it was so horrible. And not only that, there is something else I must tell you.” Ladonna then walks into the room. Karim doesn’t hear come in but Alexis sees her and tries really hard to keep from giving Donna a smirking smile. Karim “What do you want to tell me?” Ladonna “That she’s pregnant.” Karim is shocked as well as Alexis. Alexis “You know?” Ladonna “I most certainly do. Ria told me.” Karim “Ria?! I don’t believe this. Pregnant? I am going to be a father.” Ladonna “Not so fast. Didn’t she go out of town recently to Miami with Santino?” Alexis “Don’t even go there Bitch. Nothing happened between Tino and I. Case closed. Don’t try to make something out of nothing Donna. You’re desperate ploy to hold on to Karim. Well I’m having his baby now Bitch. What are you going to do about it? Attack me again?” Karim “Enough. Just stop this fighting. It makes no sense. Ladonna I am going to have to kindly ask you to leave.” Ladonna, tears in her eyes “Karim, no. Please don’t” Karim “I’m sorry just give Alexis and I a few moments.” Alexis gives a glaring smile to Donna and even blows her a kiss and then waves good bye to her. Ladonna “Karim just know that I love you and we can work through this.” Alexis “Bye Bitch! He said bye are you deaf and dumb or what?” Ladonna “Alexis, as for you, I don’t know what’s about to happen, but I hate you bitch! I just want you to know that and this is not over.” Alexis “Yea ok. You’re irrelevant at this point. Ta Ta trash.” Ladonna storms out the room. Karim turns and looks at Alexis. “You know Donna was right. You did go out of town with Santino. I’m going to ask you once; did you have sex with him? Is there a possibility that this baby could be his?” Alexis “I promise. I’m willing to prove it.” Karim “Then that’s what we’ll do. If this baby is mine I am going to do the right thing and we are going to be a family for this baby.” Alexis smile from ear to ear. What Karim said to her is just like music to her ears. “I love you Karim.” Karim ignores her and walks out the room. Ladonna walks up to him. He looks into her eyes. She can already tell this is it for them. Karim “I’m sorry.” Ladonna slaps Karim. “She’s fooling you Karim. This baby is not yours. Can’t you see that? She’s trying to keep us apart. It’s a game to her. And you’re playing it just like she wants you to. I can’t believe I loved someone so dumb.” She slaps him again and then walks away. Episode: 132: Love Triangle Written by: ML Cooks High Klass Hair Sharan is styling one of her customers hair as Daniel walk over to her. He gives her a kiss and sits next to a chair next to her. Sharan look in the mirror and sees something is wrong with Daniel. Sharan instructs her assistant to take over pressing the woman’s hair. Sharan grabs her hand and walks Daniel into the break room. She gives him a kiss. Sharan “What’s the matter Dan?” Dan “I don’t know how it happened or why it’s happening but you are not going to believe what I am going to tell you.” Sharan We both share the unpleasurable privilege of experiencing Mona’s unholy wrath. I can believe anything you throw my way.’ He smiles at her. “Lauren is alive. Not only is she alive, she has Kevin’s baby?” Sharan “Whoa. “ Daniel “Right” Sharan “Kevin’s baby?” Daniel “Yes.” Sharan “She’s alive, what happened? How did all this come about?” Daniel “Something about Ty had a hit out on her and she faked her death and when she learned Ty had been arrested at Mona’s trial she decided it was ok to come out of hiding.” Sharan Wow. I want to see the baby.” Daniel “You do?” Sharan “Yes. It’s Kevin’s child. I want to see what it looks like. I wonder what Sister Patterson will say. She is not going to be happy.” Daniel “Then maybe it’s a good thing she is locked up in a nut house.” Sharan grabs her keys and they head to the hospital. Westwood Park Patti walks into Ria’s apt. She sees the lights are still out and the house has not been cleaned up since yesterday. Patti “Victoria, are you here or what? It’s a mess in here. Why aren’t these dishes done, have this kitchen looking nasty? Vicki answer me.” Patti continues into Ria’s apartment. She looks at her watch and sees it’s eleven am. Pattie thinks to herself Ria should have been up by now. She walks into Ria’s bed room and sees Ria passed out on the ground with an empty bottle of pills surrounding her. She also sees a bottle of liquor. Patti “Oh my lord no! Ria. RIA!!” Patti kneels down and shakes her as she breaks into a panic and screams out her daughter to awake Patti Help me. Someone help her.” Jasmine then comes running Jasmine Mama? What happening here?’ Patti “Chile call the 911’s. My baby tried to kill herself. “ Patti tries to wake Ria up. Ria why? What is going on with you for you to do this? I love you baby girl. Please don’t do this to us. Please God protect my daughter Don’t take her from us so soon.” Jasmine wipes tears from her eyes. Wondering what in the world could cause her sister to do this to herself. Tough as nails never let anything bother her tried to take her own life. The scene is too much for her and she has to leave the room as the Paramedics finally arrive and take Ria to the hospital. Stay tuned for part 2 of this episode
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For the Birds Ep.131 pt2 (Special Episode)
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The picture at the end represents death. Lynn and Mona wants sister patterson dead. Will they suceed?